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Ashley Eriksson - Island Song [Osu|Taiko]

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sheela
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on January 3, 2015 at 1:38:01 AM

Artist: Ashley Eriksson
Title: Island Song
Source: Adventure Time
Tags: finn the human jake the dog ending fiona cake princess bubblegum marceline cartoon network
BPM: 120
Filesize: 3241kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.35 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (2.65 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.06 stars, 274 notes)
  4. Normal (1.69 stars, 136 notes)
  5. Oni (2.54 stars, 382 notes)
Download: Ashley Eriksson - Island Song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Adventure Time!
It's time to get this RANK!
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Re-download the mapset if you downloaded before 2014-08-07. Thanks to Neku okazaki for the timing (actually Charles445) and for the new mp3 file.

Get Kioshixs's Oni: http://puu.sh/c0eGE/3ec96c50d7.osu
Loooctav
Timing Check
BPM: 120,000
Offset: 3086


Good Luck C:
Topic Starter
sheela
Thanks for the timing check! :D
Kyouren
can i make diff?
Topic Starter
sheela

gokugohan12468 wrote:

can i make diff?
Sure! :D
Kyouren
My Diff : Easy + BG


This is BG:


Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
sheela
Thx for the and BG! :D
Kyouren
well,i make normal diff (may)????
Topic Starter
sheela

gokugohan12468 wrote:

well,i make normal diff (may)????
You can do it but you need put the circles, sliders and spinners at the right time. Do your best and I'll try to see if some changes is need to be edit. :?
Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...
Kyouren

sheela901 wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

well,i make normal diff (may)????
You can do it but you need put the circles, sliders and spinners at the right time. Do your best and I'll try to see if some changes is neef to be edit. :?
Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...
Trust Me :D :D
Kyouren
Here Normal Diff

I lazying for Mapping :o :o
Topic Starter
sheela

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Here Normal Diff

I lazying for Mapping :o :o
You need time to focus in your beatmap.
rezoons
Salut :),

Mod de ma queue:

Toutes tes diffs ont les mêmes défauts:
Beaucoup trop de spinners et d'endroits "vide" qui cassent le rythme. Je te conseille d'enlever une bonne partie des spinners et de mapper à la place ainsi que de combler une partie de ses trous dans la chanson.
Tes maps deviendront beaucoup plus agréables à jouer par la suite.

[Général]
  1. Tu as beaucoup trop de kiai time, c'est unrankable. Sur les trois, le premier me semble complètement inutile. Je te conseille de l'enlever et tout sera bon.
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4) - Mauvais distance snapping, il doit être constant en Easy.
  2. 00:11:084 (1,2,3) - Mal alignés.
  3. 00:13:084 (4) - NC.
  4. 00:14:084 (6,1) - Mauvais distance snapping.
  5. 00:17:084 (3,4) - ^
  6. 00:19:584 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.... Je vais pas tous les pointer mais tu as énormément d'erreurs comme celle-là. Je te conseille de tout vérifier et corriger tout ceux qui ne vont pas.
  8. 00:23:084 (4) - NC.
  9. 00:27:584 (2) - x=400 y=120 pour un parallélogramme parfait.
  10. 01:20:084 (4) - NC.
  11. 01:35:084 (1,1,1,1) - Ce genre de NC n'est accepté que dans de rare ca. Et là ce n'est pas le cas. Enlève-les.
[Normal]
  1. Toujours les mêmes problèmes de distance snapping qui doit être constant en Normal.
  2. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Mal alignés
  3. 00:11:334 (2) - x=176 y=148 rends mieux.
  4. 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Presque symétrique mais ça ne l'est pas.
[Hard]
  1. Il y a beaucoup de streams qui n'ont pas l'air de suivre la chanson. On a parfois l'impression que les notes sont mises aléatoirement. Je te conseille de rechecker un peu tout ça.
Topic Starter
sheela
Merci rezoons pour le mod. Je vais essayer de refaire les difficulties.
Leader
Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[General]
  1. Kiai is not the same in all diffs
  2. Hard has different tags
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:084 (5,6,7) - They touch the slider before, it makes that very bad to see and to play, move it to another place?
  2. 00:30:584 (4,5) - Same thing
  3. 00:53:084 (1,2) - ^ Change sliders' shape
  4. 00:20:084 (2) - A symmetrical slider will be better
  5. 00:21:584 (3) - Also, making this the opposite will make a nice pattern. Try that:
  6. 00:39:084 (5,6) - There's a good pattern in here, but these two beats ruin that, try something like this:
  7. 00:42:084 (2) - Copy (1) and rearrange that, so they will be similar!
  8. 00:46:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right
  9. 00:57:084 (1) - Hidden by the slider, not good to see in an Easy
  10. 01:07:084 - Kiai should end here
  11. 01:40:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right (remember to fix spacing)
  12. 01:45:084 - I'd end kiai here and then add another little kiai time just for that note
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Make them vertically linear
  2. 00:18:584 (6) - Fix spacing
  3. 00:19:084 (7) - NC here instead of 00:19:584 (1) -
  4. 00:20:084 (2) - Fix spacing
  5. 00:23:084 (5,6,7) - Not well spaced :\
  6. 00:45:084 (1,2,4,5,) - Not really appropriate for a Normal
  7. 00:47:584 (6) - ^
  8. 01:02:084 (4) - Little spacing issue
  9. 01:13:084 (5) - ^
  10. 01:25:584 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue that could be much confusing for noob players
[Hard]

  • What rezoons said, I found it overmapped, too many streams. Even if it's a "Hard" diff, it doesn't mean it has to be really hard! Song is quite slow so make it calm and enjoyable but quite challenging at the same time, better recheck it.
Good luck, hope it was helpful
Topic Starter
sheela
Thx Leader!
Angelic Force
Hi, M4M from my queue!

Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.

General
  1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80%
Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight.
  2. 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird.
  3. 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7)
  4. 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part.

Hard
SPOILER
  1. 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible.
  2. Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
  3. If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference.

Hope it helped, good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
sheela

Angelic Force wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue!

Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.

General
  1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80% OK
Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight. Fixed.
  2. 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird. Change it to a weird shape.
  3. 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7) Fixed
  4. 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part. Fixed

Hard
SPOILER
  1. 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible. Fixed
  2. Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
  3. If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference. OK

Hope it helped, good luck with the map!
Thanks Angelic Force!
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-

General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difs

Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difs
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finish
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it better
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic player
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finish

Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balance
00:53:834 (3) - distince
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other line
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlap

Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard dif
00:08:834 (4) - distince
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlap
00:39:084 (7) - not overlap
01:37:084 (2) - distince


Good Luck
Topic Starter
sheela

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-

General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difsFixed

Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difsOk
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finishOk
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084Ok
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it betterChange it to a weird slider but ok
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584 Ok
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic playerOk
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finishOk

Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balanceOk
00:53:834 (3) - distinceOk
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other lineOk
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlapOk

Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard difI'll check it.
00:08:834 (4) - distinceOk
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlapOk
00:39:084 (7) - not overlapOk
01:37:084 (2) - distinceOk


Good Luck
Thx Lucy_Heartfilia!
jyu
Hi~ m4m because i want a ticket :3

nice skin :D


[General]

  • 1.Your bg should be 1024x768, the current one is unrankable

    2. There's a slight typo in Tags, lol it should be 'human' not 'humain'

    3. AiMod says your Hard diff has different Tags. Tags in Hard diff has some words with capital letter, and easy diff and normal diff don't. you should check it and make it consistent.

    4. since you have no storyboard, uncheck Letterbox during Breaks

    5. the current hitsound is too loud, imo, maybe you can lower it to 70%-80%?

    6. it's only suggestion, but how about muting the normal sliderslide?

[Easy]

  • AR4 for a song with BPM 120 is too fast, i suggest AR3
    OD-1? Since there are short spinners

    00:03:084 (1,2) - i'm not really good at this, butif you're going to make a shape like Finn's head, but you could try like this
    sorry i don't know how to put codes ;_;
    00:07:084 (3) - new combo
    00:12:084 (3) - add clap for consistency with 00:14:084 (6) -
    00:14:084 (6) - remove finish and add it at 00:13:584 (5) - for consistency with 00:11:584 (2) -
    00:17:084 (3) - remove finish and claps, but add claps only at slider's reverse arrow for consistency with 00:15:084 (1) -
    00:19:084 (5) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:19:584 (1) -
    00:23:084 (4) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) -
    00:30:584 (4,5) - they are kinda hidden behind previous slider. i suggest to change their position
    00:41:084 (1) - distance error with previous circle
    00:38:584 (4) - add clap?
    00:39:084 (5) - move down one grid so it'll stack better with 00:37:584 (2) -
    00:43:584 (4) - i suggest to move it somewhere else, since it's hidden by 00:42:084 (2) -
    00:59:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
    01:13:584 (4) - add clap for consistency with 01:11:084 (1) -
    01:17:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
    01:23:084 (1) - distance error with previous slider
    01:30:584 (5,1) - try not to stack in easiest diff

    kinda weird when the prologue has more hitsounds than the kiai times

[Normal]

  • OD-1?
    HP-1?

    00:13:084 (6) - nc
    00:15:084 (1) - distance error
    00:17:084 (5) - i suggest to remove finish at slider's tail and reverse arrow
    00:23:084 (7) - nc, then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) - , add nc 00:25:084 (3) -
    00:31:584 (1) - add finish
    00:52:584 (1,2) - stack them properly
    01:05:084 (1) - add finish
    01:38:084 (1) - remove nc, add nc at 01:39:084 (2) - (long white tick)
    00:52:584 (1,2) - why not add flash kiai like easy diff?

    you still need to improve the flow, but that'll came through experience

[Hard]

  • it's kinda weird when Hard and Normal have the same slider velocity, imo

    i suggest to add some notes between 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for better rhythm flow
    i suggest to add some notes between 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for better rhythm flow
    aaand there are still more gaps between two patterns that i suggest you to fill with notes
    00:13:084 (7,8,9) - stack them properly
    00:19:084 (1) - well you can make them symmetry like the picture in easy diff
    00:38:834 (6,7,8) - i suggest you to change their position since the current one is really confusing
    00:53:209 - lol kiai should start 00:53:084 -
    01:07:084 (1) - add finish

    imo, i suggest you to make a consistent pattern (rhythm and hitsound) since most of them are irregular. you mostly add sliders and circles to accompany the vocal, much like 2010's style. you can check other people's mapping style
maybe that's all. still need more works, but i wish you a good luck :)
Topic Starter
sheela
Thx AlcapatCokelat!
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