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Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 1, 2016 at 1:57:26 PM

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: Black + White (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sō Desu yo?
Tags: opening Saten-san nattap Moway Yanlu
BPM: 96
Filesize: 18003kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.71 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Moway's Insane (5 stars, 290 notes)
  3. nattap's Hard (3.88 stars, 189 notes)
  4. Saten (5.31 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Taiko Muzukashii (3.34 stars, 389 notes)
  6. Taiko Oni (4.65 stars, 565 notes)
  7. yanlu's Normal (2.02 stars, 133 notes)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Beatmap

Taiko Oni: 100%
Taiko Muzukashii: 100%
Easy: 100%
yanlu's Normal: 100% | Last Updated on: 5/24/2013
nattap's Hard: 100% | Last Updated on: 5/26/2013
Moway's Insane: 100% | Last Updated on: 1/14/2015
Saten: 100% | Last Updated on: 6/3/2013

Moved to pending: 2/13/13
Pending for over 3 years

BATs
Roddie orioncomet

Now then... It's time to hunt~
Return of the changelog
  1. 7/12/14 - Changed BG in all difficulties
  2. 7/12/14 - Adjusted what I believe is the video offset by 500 ms in all diffs... o.o
  3. 7/13/14 - Adjusted kiai time in easy difficulty by 2 ms. For some reason it was off by a little and I never noticed.
Last edited by Kuro , edited 118 times in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Hello~

just a few words

This is a TV Size, please add (TV Size)

Tags: op is too short (it won't be included when searching), change it to opening instead

Non-Romanised Artist is 野水いおり
Non-Romanised Title is Black † White

The .mp3 is way too low, and it is also 320kbps. Here's one I fixed for you http://puu.sh/1VbNg
The video is quite big for being a 320p video imo. Also, you forgot to remove the audio from it. Here's another video http://puu.sh/1VbOw

The second offset should be snapped on 00:11:795 - (11795). Don't forget to re-snap all objects and the other green timing lines (You can move every green line 32ms ahead)

I'm starting with the diff once this is updated~
This way, it'll be easier for me to keep it consistent.
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

Hello~

just a few words

This is a TV Size, please add (TV Size) Hmmm? Already fixed that yesterday.

Tags: op is too short (it won't be included when searching), change it to opening instead Fixed

Non-Romanised Artist is 野水いおり Fixed
Non-Romanised Title is Black † White Fixed

The .mp3 is way too low, and it is also 320kbps. Here's one I fixed for you http://puu.sh/1VbNg Fixed
The video is quite big for being a 320p video imo. Also, you forgot to remove the audio from it. Here's another video http://puu.sh/1VbOw I didn't realize the MPEG audio layer was still in it (baka baka kuro for not double checking) so instead of replacing the entire video I just removed the audio.

The second offset should be snapped on 00:11:795 - (11795). Don't forget to re-snap all objects and the other green timing lines (You can move every green line 32ms ahead) Fixed



I'm starting with the diff once this is updated~
This way, it'll be easier for me to keep it consistent.
That's understandable and I can see your reasoning.

Anyway it's been updated (>_o)b

Offtopic: What made you think it was 320p? Mine is actually in 720p. ffffff I might have reduced the quality a bit too much.. Does it really look like 320p? :o
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
oh sorry, it said 640x360. That's still not 720p though :P (at least on the uploaded one before when I checked)
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

oh sorry, it said 640x360. That's still not 720p though :P (at least on the uploaded one before when I checked)
Double checking... lol, It really does say 640x360!? I wonder wh-
Nevermind, I just remembered its data is similar to one of my failed experiments but I wonder why it transferred to the original :?
The current video is the original that was reduced from 1080p(x264) to 720p(XVID) and I'm 100% certain it's 720p.
Oh well, I can easily remove that data but i'm fine with it for now... :|
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
So I'm done~

http://puu.sh/1YjLQ
Don't forget to add Saten-san to the tags

also
Consider adding a preview at 01:03:045 -

also, the Hard looks a bit messed up :(
nattap_old
121 posts
Joined April 2012
nattap_old

Saten wrote:

So I'm done~

http://puu.sh/1YjLQ
Don't forget to add Saten-san to the tags

also
Consider adding a preview at 01:03:045 -

also, the Hard looks a bit messed up :(
http://puu.sh/1YOFd

I tried to fix some of that but I need more help :?
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Much better :oops:

But please increase the AR to 8
Cancel
956 posts
Joined August 2012
Cancel
You still need a normal in order to get it ranked you know.
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

Cancel wrote:

You still need a normal in order to get it ranked you know.
I've got someone else doing the normal and I'm doing the easy
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
When this is pending, send me PM please.

I want to mod this.
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
http://puu.sh/218Kd

Here's my difficulty, hope you like it.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
http://puu.sh/21ad6

Here's an update~

I'm really starting to love this song
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

http://puu.sh/21ad6

Here's an update~

I'm really starting to love this song
Updated~ :D
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Done~! hope you like it :)
trying something new in hitsounds ><

don't forget change source and tag~
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Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

yanlu wrote:

Done~! hope you like it :)
trying something new in hitsounds ><

don't forget change source and tag~
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Thanks \:D/

source and tags were fixed and it's been added to the set 8-)
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.

[Moway's Insane]
  1. 00:22:420 (1,2) - Sounds a lot better to make the hit-end of each of these sliders soft sample set.
  2. 00:23:045 (1) - Sounds better without the finish. There is nothing in the song that makes it necessary to have a Finish here anyway.
  3. 00:33:045 (1) - Same as above.
  4. 00:48:045 - Add a finish.
  5. 00:58:513 (3,4,5,6) - Such a spacing change doesn't fit this part of the song at all.
  6. 00:58:982 - Add a finish.
  7. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%.
  8. 01:10:232 (8) - A better way could be: (then you will be consistent with 01:11:795 (1,2,3) - as well)
  9. 01:12:576 (6) - Better as a stream of three notes (there is a sound at 01:12:654 - )
  10. 01:16:795 - Add a finish.
  11. 01:24:920 - Make it normal sample set. 01:25:232 (1) - Remove the normal sample set. 01:25:388 - Make it normal sample set.

[Saten]
  1. Maybe -1 Health Drain cause of the amount of new combos used...
  2. 00:50:232 (5) - Why not make this slider 00:49:920 (4) - copy, paste and flip ctrl+h. It's what I think is better.
  3. 00:57:576 (5,6,7) - Make these normal sample set too.
  4. 00:58:513 (1,1) - These new combos don't suit well to the rest of your map.
  5. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%.
  6. 01:08:357 (1,1) - If you remove these two new combos, the combo colour will match to the songs lyrics!
  7. 01:08:982 - Add normal sample set here.
  8. 01:12:576 (1,2,3,4) - Make these normal sample set.
  9. 01:18:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+J these two notes location is better for playing and design.
  10. 01:21:482 - Make this normal sample set.
  11. 01:25:232 (6) - This soft hit finish is pretty random, better to remove it.

[nattap's Hard]
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - Add finish makes it sound a little better.
  2. 00:23:045 (3) - Add new combo, 00:23:357 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 00:25:545 (1,2,1) - ^
  4. 00:30:545 - 00:31:013 - 00:31:482 - Add finish to these places.
  5. 00:40:232 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:29:763 (5,1) -
  6. 00:41:013 - Add finish to match with song.

[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body.
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal.
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish.

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:545 (1) - End this at 00:22:420 - instead.
  2. 01:01:795 (1,1) - Way too close for an Easy. You would want a a space of about 1-2 seconds between a spinner and an object for an Easy difficulty.

Good luck~
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.fixed


[Easy]
  1. 00:20:545 (1) - End this at 00:22:420 - instead. fixed
  2. 01:01:795 (1,1) - Way too close for an Easy. You would want a a space of about 1-2 seconds between a spinner and an object for an Easy difficulty.fixed

Good luck~ Thanks for mod, I'll notify other mappers
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~
[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body. :arrow: i think it's good x_x
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal. :arrow: i test it...and it's okay orz
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish. :arrow: okay add~

Good luck~
thank you forr modding :3

Kuro >plz help me add that finish~
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Kuro

yanlu wrote:

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~
[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body. :arrow: i think it's good x_x
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal. :arrow: i test it...and it's okay orz
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish. :arrow: okay add~

Good luck~
thank you forr modding :3

Kuro >plz help me add that finish~
added finish and submitted beatmap /o/
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