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Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Kuro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 1, 2016 at 1:57:26 PM

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: Black + White (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sō Desu yo?
Tags: opening Saten-san nattap Moway Yanlu
BPM: 96
Filesize: 18003kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.71 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Moway's Insane (5 stars, 290 notes)
  3. nattap's Hard (3.88 stars, 189 notes)
  4. Saten (5.31 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Taiko Muzukashii (3.34 stars, 389 notes)
  6. Taiko Oni (4.65 stars, 565 notes)
  7. yanlu's Normal (2.02 stars, 133 notes)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Beatmap

Taiko Oni: 100%
Taiko Muzukashii: 100%
Easy: 100%
yanlu's Normal: 100% | Last Updated on: 5/24/2013
nattap's Hard: 100% | Last Updated on: 5/26/2013
Moway's Insane: 100% | Last Updated on: 1/14/2015
Saten: 100% | Last Updated on: 6/3/2013


Moved to pending: 2/13/13
Pending for over 3 years

BATs
Roddie orioncomet

Now then... It's time to hunt~
Return of the changelog
  1. 7/12/14 - Changed BG in all difficulties
  2. 7/12/14 - Adjusted what I believe is the video offset by 500 ms in all diffs... o.o
  3. 7/13/14 - Adjusted kiai time in easy difficulty by 2 ms. For some reason it was off by a little and I never noticed.
Saten
Hello~

just a few words

This is a TV Size, please add (TV Size)

Tags: op is too short (it won't be included when searching), change it to opening instead

Non-Romanised Artist is 野水いおり
Non-Romanised Title is Black † White

The .mp3 is way too low, and it is also 320kbps. Here's one I fixed for you http://puu.sh/1VbNg
The video is quite big for being a 320p video imo. Also, you forgot to remove the audio from it. Here's another video http://puu.sh/1VbOw

The second offset should be snapped on 00:11:795 - (11795). Don't forget to re-snap all objects and the other green timing lines (You can move every green line 32ms ahead)

I'm starting with the diff once this is updated~
This way, it'll be easier for me to keep it consistent.
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

Hello~

just a few words

This is a TV Size, please add (TV Size) Hmmm? Already fixed that yesterday.

Tags: op is too short (it won't be included when searching), change it to opening instead Fixed

Non-Romanised Artist is 野水いおり Fixed
Non-Romanised Title is Black † White Fixed

The .mp3 is way too low, and it is also 320kbps. Here's one I fixed for you http://puu.sh/1VbNg Fixed
The video is quite big for being a 320p video imo. Also, you forgot to remove the audio from it. Here's another video http://puu.sh/1VbOw I didn't realize the MPEG audio layer was still in it (baka baka kuro for not double checking) so instead of replacing the entire video I just removed the audio.

The second offset should be snapped on 00:11:795 - (11795). Don't forget to re-snap all objects and the other green timing lines (You can move every green line 32ms ahead) Fixed



I'm starting with the diff once this is updated~
This way, it'll be easier for me to keep it consistent.
That's understandable and I can see your reasoning.

Anyway it's been updated (>_o)b

Offtopic: What made you think it was 320p? Mine is actually in 720p. ffffff I might have reduced the quality a bit too much.. Does it really look like 320p? :o
Saten
oh sorry, it said 640x360. That's still not 720p though :P (at least on the uploaded one before when I checked)
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

oh sorry, it said 640x360. That's still not 720p though :P (at least on the uploaded one before when I checked)
Double checking... lol, It really does say 640x360!? I wonder wh-
Nevermind, I just remembered its data is similar to one of my failed experiments but I wonder why it transferred to the original :?
The current video is the original that was reduced from 1080p(x264) to 720p(XVID) and I'm 100% certain it's 720p.
Oh well, I can easily remove that data but i'm fine with it for now... :|
Saten
So I'm done~

http://puu.sh/1YjLQ
Don't forget to add Saten-san to the tags

also
Consider adding a preview at 01:03:045 -

also, the Hard looks a bit messed up :(
nattap_old

Saten wrote:

So I'm done~

http://puu.sh/1YjLQ
Don't forget to add Saten-san to the tags

also
Consider adding a preview at 01:03:045 -

also, the Hard looks a bit messed up :(
http://puu.sh/1YOFd

I tried to fix some of that but I need more help :?
Saten
Much better :oops:

But please increase the AR to 8
Cancel
You still need a normal in order to get it ranked you know.
Topic Starter
Kuro

Cancel wrote:

You still need a normal in order to get it ranked you know.
I've got someone else doing the normal and I'm doing the easy
Tari
When this is pending, send me PM please.

I want to mod this.
Moway
http://puu.sh/218Kd

Here's my difficulty, hope you like it.
Saten
http://puu.sh/21ad6

Here's an update~

I'm really starting to love this song
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

http://puu.sh/21ad6

Here's an update~

I'm really starting to love this song
Updated~ :D
yanlu
Done~! hope you like it :)
trying something new in hitsounds ><

don't forget change source and tag~
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Topic Starter
Kuro

yanlu wrote:

Done~! hope you like it :)
trying something new in hitsounds ><

don't forget change source and tag~
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256,192,8670,12,0,11170,1:0:0
92,196,11795,6,0,P|108:184|108:184|116:164|128:152,1,55,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,128,12107,2,0,P|256:84|356:128,1,220,8|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0
420,188,13045,2,0,P|404:200|404:200|396:220|384:232,1,55
352,256,13357,2,0,P|256:300|156:256,1,220,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,188,14295,6,0,P|164:160|112:172,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,204,14763,2,0,P|66:252|17:278,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,312,15232,2,0,P|204:276|356:344,1,330.000012588501,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,292,16795,6,0,P|460:248,1,55,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,204,17107,2,0,P|452:132|368:148|372:72,1,165,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,40,17732,1,8,1:0:0
256,28,18045,2,0,P|208:56,1,55
172,76,18357,2,0,P|175:149|91:133|83:205,1,165,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,248,18982,1,8,0:0:0
156,316,19295,6,0,P|200:304|228:268,1,93.500001783371,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,19763,2,0,P|280:276|316:296,1,93.500001783371,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,316,20232,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,20545,12,4,22732,0:0:0
256,104,23357,5,2,1:2:0
340,132,23670,1,0,0:0:0
408,188,23982,2,0,P|424:240,1,55,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0
428,284,24295,2,0,P|408:328|408:328|344:296|296:328,2,165,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0
352,236,25545,5,0,0:0:0
276,188,25858,1,2,1:2:0
188,192,26170,2,0,P|140:220|108:264,1,110,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0
56,188,26795,1,0,0:0:0
0,260,27107,2,0,P|44:356|148:368,1,220,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0
204,300,28045,5,0,0:0:0
256,228,28357,1,2,1:2:0
308,300,28670,1,0,0:0:0
380,352,28982,2,0,P|436:352|480:324,1,110,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0
452,240,29607,1,2,1:2:0
472,200,29763,2,0,P|496:124|464:48,1,165,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0
384,84,30545,6,0,P|276:116|384:216|268:248,1,220,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,328,31482,2,0,P|121:296|229:196|121:164,1,220,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0
84,244,32420,1,0,0:0:0
108,328,32732,1,8,1:2:0
196,344,33045,6,0,P|236:328|256:292|256:292|276:328|320:344,2,165,0|0|2,1:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0
176,260,34295,2,0,P|212:216|212:164,1,110,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0
300,164,34920,2,0,P|300:216|336:260,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,204,35545,6,0,P|400:248|440:272|440:272|400:296|384:332,2,165,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0
492,200,36795,2,0,P|480:140|440:116,1,110,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0
352,108,37420,2,0,P|364:168|404:192,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,280,38045,6,2,P|344:276|300:232|300:232|256:208|208:232|208:232|164:276|104:280,1,330,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:2:0
24,304,39295,2,0,P|20:252|56:208,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,184,39920,1,0,0:0:0
192,112,40232,1,8,1:0:0
256,52,40545,6,0,P|284:100|272:152,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
248,188,41013,2,0,P|212:232|216:284,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,312,41482,2,0,P|308:332|356:272|356:272|396:352|508:312|480:228,1,330,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0
468,140,42732,1,8,1:0:0
468,140,43045,6,0,P|444:124|428:100|428:100|398:100|376:96,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
288,84,43670,1,0,0:0:0
324,164,43982,2,0,P|301:168|272:168|272:168|256:192|232:208,2,110,8|0|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
404,200,44920,1,0,0:0:0
332,248,45232,6,0,P|320:260|328:276|328:276|368:320|368:344,2,110,8|0|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
256,200,46170,2,0,P|256:184|256:144,2,55,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
180,248,46795,2,0,P|192:260|184:276|184:276|144:320|144:344,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,192,47732,1,8,1:0:0
40,144,48045,6,0,P|80:112|136:112,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
172,136,48513,2,0,P|228:124|260:84,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,48,48982,1,8,1:0:0
372,52,49295,1,0,0:0:0
444,104,49607,1,8,1:0:0
432,192,49920,2,0,P|380:176,2,55,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
504,240,50545,6,0,P|464:272|408:272,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
368,252,51013,2,0,P|312:264|280:304,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,344,51482,1,2,1:2:0
172,332,51795,1,0,0:0:0
100,280,52107,1,8,1:0:0
84,192,52420,2,0,P|136:176,2,55,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
88,104,53045,6,0,P|140:88,2,55,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
52,80,53513,2,0,P|68:28,2,55,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,124,53982,2,0,P|4:176|20:272,1,165,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,300,54607,1,8,1:0:0
136,272,54920,1,0,0:0:0
208,324,55232,1,8,1:0:0
256,248,55545,6,0,P|240:200|280:160,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
320,160,56013,1,0,0:0:0
360,176,56170,2,0,P|376:224|336:264,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
372,344,56795,2,0,P|424:320|452:276,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
468,192,57420,2,0,P|456:140|416:100,1,110,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0
336,64,58045,6,0,P|276:84|256:136|256:136|236:84|180:60,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,36,58982,1,2,0:2:0
124,120,59295,2,0,P|64:120|20:148,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0
20,232,59920,2,0,P|62:258|122:258,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,340,60545,6,0,P|152:336|196:304,1,110,12|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0
256,240,61170,1,2,0:0:0
313,305,61482,2,0,P|356:336|412:340,2,110,8|0|8,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0
388,256,62420,2,0,P|444:260|486:290,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0
256,192,63045,12,0,63982,0:0:0
312,272,64295,6,0,P|256:264,1,55,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,252,64607,2,0,P|172:236|136:252|136:252|120:256|104:252,1,110,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
28,220,65232,2,0,P|16:192|20:168,1,55,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,128,65545,1,0,0:0:0
128,144,65857,1,8,1:0:0
196,88,66170,1,0,0:0:0
256,152,66482,2,0,P|256:208,1,55,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,240,66795,6,0,P|180:212,2,55,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
272,252,67263,2,0,P|352:288|424:268,1,165,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
380,192,68045,1,0,0:0:0
456,148,68357,1,8,1:0:0
380,104,68670,1,0,0:0:0
304,148,68982,2,0,P|288:200,1,55,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,244,69295,6,0,P|236:288|164:264|148:196|148:196|132:264|60:288|28:248,1,330,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
68,172,70545,6,0,P|68:124|196:124|220:44|144:-4|72:44|100:124|232:124|232:172,1,330,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
316,144,71795,6,0,P|336:220|268:252,2,165,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
284,112,72888,5,0,0:0:0
228,180,73201,1,2,0:0:0
140,180,73513,1,0,0:0:0
72,124,73826,2,0,P|40:168,1,55,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
16,204,74138,1,0,0:0:0
48,236,74295,6,0,P|92:268|116:316,1,110,4|8,1:2|1:0,0:0:0
208,320,74920,2,0,P|232:272|276:240,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
364,256,75545,1,0,0:0:0
424,192,75857,1,8,1:0:0
364,128,76170,1,0,0:0:0
276,136,76482,2,0,P|216:136|220:136,1,55,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,136,76795,6,0,P|136:152|100:144|100:144|84:176,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
72,216,77263,1,4,0:0:0
92,300,77576,2,0,P|148:300,2,55,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,296,78045,2,0,P|-4:240|12:156,1,165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,132,78670,1,2,0:0:0
120,84,78982,1,8,1:0:0
140,172,79295,6,0,P|164:192|164:192|176:232|212:252,1,110,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
300,252,79920,2,0,P|336:232|348:192|348:192|372:172,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
452,212,80545,2,0,P|420:224|408:248|408:248|396:276|376:292,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
456,332,81170,2,0,P|404:364|356:368,1,110,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
292,308,81795,6,0,P|244:336|188:344,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,304,82263,2,0,P|96:312|24:272,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,196,83045,1,0,1:0:0
152,216,83357,2,0,P|204:200|256:216,2,110,2|0|2,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0
256,192,84295,12,0,86482,0:0:0
Thanks \:D/

source and tags were fixed and it's been added to the set 8-)
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.

[Moway's Insane]
  1. 00:22:420 (1,2) - Sounds a lot better to make the hit-end of each of these sliders soft sample set.
  2. 00:23:045 (1) - Sounds better without the finish. There is nothing in the song that makes it necessary to have a Finish here anyway.
  3. 00:33:045 (1) - Same as above.
  4. 00:48:045 - Add a finish.
  5. 00:58:513 (3,4,5,6) - Such a spacing change doesn't fit this part of the song at all.
  6. 00:58:982 - Add a finish.
  7. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%.
  8. 01:10:232 (8) - A better way could be: (then you will be consistent with 01:11:795 (1,2,3) - as well)
  9. 01:12:576 (6) - Better as a stream of three notes (there is a sound at 01:12:654 - )
  10. 01:16:795 - Add a finish.
  11. 01:24:920 - Make it normal sample set. 01:25:232 (1) - Remove the normal sample set. 01:25:388 - Make it normal sample set.

[Saten]
  1. Maybe -1 Health Drain cause of the amount of new combos used...
  2. 00:50:232 (5) - Why not make this slider 00:49:920 (4) - copy, paste and flip ctrl+h. It's what I think is better.
  3. 00:57:576 (5,6,7) - Make these normal sample set too.
  4. 00:58:513 (1,1) - These new combos don't suit well to the rest of your map.
  5. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%.
  6. 01:08:357 (1,1) - If you remove these two new combos, the combo colour will match to the songs lyrics!
  7. 01:08:982 - Add normal sample set here.
  8. 01:12:576 (1,2,3,4) - Make these normal sample set.
  9. 01:18:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+J these two notes location is better for playing and design.
  10. 01:21:482 - Make this normal sample set.
  11. 01:25:232 (6) - This soft hit finish is pretty random, better to remove it.

[nattap's Hard]
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - Add finish makes it sound a little better.
  2. 00:23:045 (3) - Add new combo, 00:23:357 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 00:25:545 (1,2,1) - ^
  4. 00:30:545 - 00:31:013 - 00:31:482 - Add finish to these places.
  5. 00:40:232 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:29:763 (5,1) -
  6. 00:41:013 - Add finish to match with song.

[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body.
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal.
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish.

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:545 (1) - End this at 00:22:420 - instead.
  2. 01:01:795 (1,1) - Way too close for an Easy. You would want a a space of about 1-2 seconds between a spinner and an object for an Easy difficulty.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kuro

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.fixed


[Easy]
  1. 00:20:545 (1) - End this at 00:22:420 - instead. fixed
  2. 01:01:795 (1,1) - Way too close for an Easy. You would want a a space of about 1-2 seconds between a spinner and an object for an Easy difficulty.fixed

Good luck~ Thanks for mod, I'll notify other mappers
yanlu

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~
[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body. :arrow: i think it's good x_x
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal. :arrow: i test it...and it's okay orz
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish. :arrow: okay add~

Good luck~
thank you forr modding :3

Kuro >plz help me add that finish~
Topic Starter
Kuro

yanlu wrote:

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~
[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 (1) - Maybe try a different shape... Looks kind of ugly... Also, remove whistle from it's slider body. :arrow: i think it's good x_x
  2. 01:03:045 (1,1) - Too close for a Normal. :arrow: i test it...and it's okay orz
  3. 01:12:888 (1) - Add finish. :arrow: okay add~

Good luck~
thank you forr modding :3

Kuro >plz help me add that finish~
added finish and submitted beatmap /o/
Saten

Kiiwa wrote:

[Saten]
  1. Maybe -1 Health Drain cause of the amount of new combos used... It won't really help much, and the star rating would be messed up so it's not worth it
  2. 00:50:232 (5) - Why not make this slider 00:49:920 (4) - copy, paste and flip ctrl+h. It's what I think is better. The jump would be too big imo
  3. 00:57:576 (5,6,7) - Make these normal sample set too. added on (5,6)
  4. 00:58:513 (1,1) - These new combos don't suit well to the rest of your map. it's consistent
  5. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%. done
  6. 01:08:357 (1,1) - If you remove these two new combos, the combo colour will match to the songs lyrics! sure ok
  7. 01:08:982 - Add normal sample set here. There already is o.o
  8. 01:12:576 (1,2,3,4) - Make these normal sample set. done
  9. 01:18:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+J these two notes location is better for playing and design. I don't like things going in square patterns too much
  10. 01:21:482 - Make this normal sample set. I see no connection here
  11. 01:25:232 (6) - This soft hit finish is pretty random, better to remove it. not so random to me
Thanks

http://puu.sh/21V62
Topic Starter
Kuro

Saten wrote:

Kiiwa wrote:

[Saten]
  1. Maybe -1 Health Drain cause of the amount of new combos used... It won't really help much, and the star rating would be messed up so it's not worth it
  2. 00:50:232 (5) - Why not make this slider 00:49:920 (4) - copy, paste and flip ctrl+h. It's what I think is better. The jump would be too big imo
  3. 00:57:576 (5,6,7) - Make these normal sample set too. added on (5,6)
  4. 00:58:513 (1,1) - These new combos don't suit well to the rest of your map. it's consistent
  5. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%. done
  6. 01:08:357 (1,1) - If you remove these two new combos, the combo colour will match to the songs lyrics! sure ok
  7. 01:08:982 - Add normal sample set here. There already is o.o
  8. 01:12:576 (1,2,3,4) - Make these normal sample set. done
  9. 01:18:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+J these two notes location is better for playing and design. I don't like things going in square patterns too much
  10. 01:21:482 - Make this normal sample set. I see no connection here
  11. 01:25:232 (6) - This soft hit finish is pretty random, better to remove it. not so random to me
Thanks

http://puu.sh/21V62
Updated~
nattap_old

Kiiwa wrote:

[nattap's Hard]
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - Add finish makes it sound a little better. Fixed
  2. 00:23:045 (3) - Add new combo, 00:23:357 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
  3. 00:25:545 (1,2,1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:30:545 - 00:31:013 - 00:31:482 - Add finish to these places. Just 00:30:545 is good to me
  5. 00:40:232 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:29:763 (5,1) - Fixed
  6. 00:41:013 - Add finish to match with song. Fixed
Thanks :)
and reconsidered some hitsound
http://puu.sh/21Vh2
Topic Starter
Kuro

nattap wrote:

Kiiwa wrote:

[nattap's Hard]
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - Add finish makes it sound a little better. Fixed
  2. 00:23:045 (3) - Add new combo, 00:23:357 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
  3. 00:25:545 (1,2,1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:30:545 - 00:31:013 - 00:31:482 - Add finish to these places. Just 00:30:545 is good to me
  5. 00:40:232 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:29:763 (5,1) - Fixed
  6. 00:41:013 - Add finish to match with song. Fixed
Thanks :)
and reconsidered some hitsound
http://puu.sh/21Vh2
Updated~
Moway

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.

[Moway's Insane]
  1. 00:22:420 (1,2) - Sounds a lot better to make the hit-end of each of these sliders soft sample set. fixed
  2. 00:23:045 (1) - Sounds better without the finish. There is nothing in the song that makes it necessary to have a Finish here anyway. fixed
  3. 00:33:045 (1) - Same as above. fixed
  4. 00:48:045 - Add a finish. fixed
  5. 00:58:513 (3,4,5,6) - Such a spacing change doesn't fit this part of the song at all. I disagree on this one, but i adjusted the spacing change so it is spread over a consistent spread ofnotes
  6. 00:58:982 - Add a finish. fixed
  7. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%. fixed
  8. 01:10:232 (8) - A better way could be: (then you will be consistent with 01:11:795 (1,2,3) - as well)
    fixed
  9. 01:12:576 (6) - Better as a stream of three notes (there is a sound at 01:12:654 - ) fixed
  10. 01:16:795 - Add a finish. I don't hear a finish here
  11. 01:24:920 - Make it normal sample set. 01:25:232 (1) - Remove the normal sample set. 01:25:388 - Make it normal sample set. fixed
Good luck~
Thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/21Znu
Topic Starter
Kuro

Moway wrote:

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Audio lead in times are inconsistent. Please make them consistent. Set all to 0 seconds.

[Moway's Insane]
  1. 00:22:420 (1,2) - Sounds a lot better to make the hit-end of each of these sliders soft sample set. fixed
  2. 00:23:045 (1) - Sounds better without the finish. There is nothing in the song that makes it necessary to have a Finish here anyway. fixed
  3. 00:33:045 (1) - Same as above. fixed
  4. 00:48:045 - Add a finish. fixed
  5. 00:58:513 (3,4,5,6) - Such a spacing change doesn't fit this part of the song at all. I disagree on this one, but i adjusted the spacing change so it is spread over a consistent spread ofnotes
  6. 00:58:982 - Add a finish. fixed
  7. 01:04:295 - Suggest you raise the volume of this green line by 10~20%. fixed
  8. 01:10:232 (8) - A better way could be: (then you will be consistent with 01:11:795 (1,2,3) - as well)
    fixed
  9. 01:12:576 (6) - Better as a stream of three notes (there is a sound at 01:12:654 - ) fixed
  10. 01:16:795 - Add a finish. I don't hear a finish here
  11. 01:24:920 - Make it normal sample set. 01:25:232 (1) - Remove the normal sample set. 01:25:388 - Make it normal sample set. fixed
Good luck~
Thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/21Znu
Updated~
---Assault[K]---
[General]
BG Size is 1228x767 ? I think you should resize it.

All difficulties looks fine to me.
Good luck~
Saten
That is 8:5

It should actually be 1229x768 but w/e :p

I think using aspect ratios in-between 4:3 and 16:9 should be fine nowadays with this new wide-screen support.
EmPao
Hi!Kuro

Mod from my queue~

[General]
non-romanised Title : Black † White (TV size)
[Easy]
00:14:295 (1) - add finish? (same as 00:19:295 (1) )
00:40:545 (4) - ^
00:20:232 (2) - spacing
00:23:357 (1,2,3) - ^ (must be 0.8x not 0.7x)
01:23:357 (1,2,3) - these finishes are a bit noise to me >_<
[yanlu's Normal]
yanlu o.o/
00:30:545 (1) - vocal應該只有到 00:31:013 而已,尾巴的whistle顯得有點突兀,
建議是看要把slider縮短還是刪掉後面的whistle?
00:59:295 (3) - 這段hitsound感覺怪怪的...刪clap? clap聲應該是在00:59:451

沒啥大問題
[nattap's Hard]
00:43:045 ~ 01:01:482 - the hitsound here is a bit messed>_<
00:12:732 (1) - remove whistle(tail)
00:17:732 (1) - ^
00:14:138 (1) - add NC & 00:14:763 (4) - remove NC, it is unnecessary (same pattern as 00:19:138 (4) )
00:43:045 (1) - add Finish(head)
01:01:795 (1) - use soft-Finish?
[Moway's Insane]
00:20:232 (1) - suggest you can remove the finish or 00:19:763 (1) - add finish?

Moway's Insane & Saten are actually good diffs
sorry for my poor mod o.o

Good Luck
---Assault[K]---

Saten wrote:

That is 8:5

It should actually be 1229x768 but w/e :p
This is something new to me ><
Topic Starter
Kuro

EmPao wrote:

Hi!Kuro

Mod from my queue~ That was fast :D

[General]
non-romanised Title : Black † White (TV size) Non-romanised isn't supposed to have TV Size at the end of it.
[Easy]
00:14:295 (1) - add finish? (same as 00:19:295 (1) ) Ok
00:40:545 (4) - ^ Ok
00:20:232 (2) - spacing Fixed
00:23:357 (1,2,3) - ^ (must be 0.8x not 0.7x) Fixed
01:23:357 (1,2,3) - these finishes are a bit noise to me >_< Sorry, something happened and there were hitsounds in places I didn't add them to. I removed those finishes.

Good Luck Thanks for mod! :)
Moway

EmPao wrote:

Hi!Kuro

Mod from my queue~

[Moway's Insane]
00:20:232 (1) - suggest you can remove the finish or 00:19:763 (1) - add finish? fixed

Moway's Insane & Saten are actually good diffs
sorry for my poor mod o.o

Good Luck
Thanks for the mod.

http://puu.sh/237Me
nattap_old

EmPao wrote:

[nattap's Hard]
00:43:045 ~ 01:01:482 - the hitsound here is a bit messed>_< I fixed some of that >_<
00:12:732 (1) - remove whistle(tail)
00:17:732 (1) - ^
00:14:138 (1) - add NC & 00:14:763 (4) - remove NC, it is unnecessary (same pattern as 00:19:138 (4) )
00:43:045 (1) - add Finish(head)
01:01:795 (1) - use soft-Finish?
All of them looks nice :) I applied it and thanks
http://puu.sh/23n7y
yanlu

EmPao wrote:

[yanlu's Normal]
yanlu o.o/ :arrow: Hi Pao xD/
00:30:545 (1) - vocal應該只有到 00:31:013 而已,尾巴的whistle顯得有點突兀,
建議是看要把slider縮短還是刪掉後面的whistle? :arrow: 刪掉whistle好了
00:59:295 (3) - 這段hitsound感覺怪怪的...刪clap? clap聲應該是在00:59:451 :arrow: okay 後面也稍微修了下~

沒啥大問題

Good Luck
謝謝Mod~ :3/

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Decipher
hi again :3/ please mutual with me! :'D /kicked

Muzukashii

remove speed-ups and stay at the same SV?

00:15:076 (1,1) - reverse
00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263 - (Not sure if I was half deaf or something) I can barely hear the beginning ;-;
maybe need some variations on the dkdkdkdkdk parts (but the current one is also okay)
01:11:170 - d, the pitch of i on yosougai no is same with 01:11:013
01:12:420 - d, same reason as above
01:14:295 - remove finish

Oni

00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263 - same as muzu
00:48:045 - K (or just add finish), because cymbal
00:52:888 - k?
00:58:982 - add finish, because cymbal again
01:18:045 - remove finish?

good luck~
0gre_old
[MOD QUEUE REQUEST (Taiko only)]
SIGNs
d = don
k = katsu
D = big done
K = big katsu
add
delete
/ = exchange to

[Taiko Oni]
MOD information
00:13:357 (1,1,2,3,1) - / kkd k
try to care having less notes at some part
which is not necessary

00:16:248 (2,2,2,2)
can delete them and you may can chage
00:16:482 it to d

00:16:795
this sounds like finish~

00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263
you can swap with slider ~
then delete
00:22:341

00:39:060 (1,3)
I think you can delete them and add d at
00:39:529

00:40:310 (2,2)
also there are not too important
should not follow vocal too much to adding notes sometimes
and leave some spece before and after of finish
it is not osu standard taiko map

00:44:295 ~ 00:51:795
can add bit more notes here
dont make too much different with the next part before kiai

00:54:295 ~ 01:01:482
can delete most of notes here please have a look

01:15:545 ~ 01:16:326
It is not really sounds like it have some change

01:19:216
delete all this kind of notes ~

01:24:295
do not change the speed oftenly
you may can delete this either kiai speed
sorry to repeat but
try to not follow vocal too much
however try to seperate finish with small notes

[Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
00:16:795 (2)
this sounds like katsu

00:21:873 (6,9)
it is may be not too necessary or change to slider as well

00:23:826 ~ 00:30:545
oh why not change something here
like by following vocal ,etc
and similar for next part as well

00:43:045 ~ 00:52:107
It is seems to be same as Oni
make it easier and delete all 5-combs or change them to 3-combs
for example k k k or kkk k

00:53:045 ~ 01:01:482
too hard.

01:04:295
take all the changing spead from here
it is too hard for Muzukashii difficulty
and may add a little at last finishes part
I thought Kiai part is nicely done~
but previous parts are bit too hard I think
compare to other song's Muzukashii


[Result]
It is nice to see using ddk kkd combos oftenly which sounds good
and it is clear to see with two different colours seperated in mod
but need to take few notes in some part ~
Thanks for seeing :)
Kokatsu
Hi.

General


Use another bg? This one seems a bit..too nude to me.
First redline needs to be 4/4 aswell, 3/4 is stupid.
00:21:170 - The vol-increase here is unnecessary/too harsh. Remove it or use 5% steps and start with 30~35%
01:24:295 - Use SV x1,0 here, x1,75 is brutal for Taikos. If you want, you can keep the same SV as in Kiai.

Muzukashii


HP +1

Don't use SV changes here at all, the speedup isn't readable for newer players. Stick to a constant x1,0.

Generally, I thought it was a bit dense for a Muzu. Alot of 1/4 and big's.

00:16:170 (1,1,1) - I see why you've placed the first kat, however it breaks the consistency with prev. patterns. I would have two possible fixes: Either use d d k here, this will keep it consistent but will let out the guitar, or you delete the don inbetween the kats, so you would have k k, this emphasizes the guitar even more and you don't need to worry about pattern consistency.
00:17:420 (1,1,1) - Here I see no reason for the first kat, so d d k.
00:18:045 (2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - This totally breaks consistency. What about a simple k d d d d d k here?
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for a Muzukashii, to keep the pattern simple, use a small don for (4) instead.
00:32:888 (1) - don?
00:42:732 (1) - If you changed above, change this aswell.
00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use a Slider instead?
00:47:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:49:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:55:545 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - A bit too much IMO, why not d d k d d k ddd k?
00:56:951 (1) - delete?
00:57:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - Slider?
00:59:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Oni


OD +1

00:16:170 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - kkkkddddk fits better here.
00:18:982 (3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern should be more like the one before, so try this:

00:22:341 (16,1) - Gnaa. It's allowed but I would really recommend you to delete (16) to get (1) out of the stream.
00:38:826 (5,6,1,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Inconsistent in itself, use ddkdddkdd
00:40:466 (2,1) - Same as above.
00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider?
00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider?
00:55:076 (1,1,1) - With the previous triplets, you break the flow here, alternative pattern that would fit would be: ddk, dkd or dkk.
01:02:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - (4,1) is the same problem as above, moreover, I would like to see the whole stream (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) as kats.

All I can say for now, good luck with rank. :)
Melt
Hi :3
request from queue
replace Hsiao-Chai to mod this map,sorry for late

[Easy]
  1. this diff maybe a little hard as a easy diff
  2. 00:14:295(1)one gird right
  3. 00:20:545(1)i think this spin can end in 00:22:732
  4. 00:59:920(1)end in 01:00:232
  5. 01:23:982(3)one gird left
[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:30:545(1)spin end in 00:31:013
  2. 00:41:482(3)finish?
  3. 00:56:013(2)delete the circle
  4. 01:00:857(1)remove clap
[nattap's Hard]
  1. AR-1?
  2. 00:23:357(3)whistle
  3. 00:23:982(4)^
  4. 00:24:607(5)^
  5. 00:25:076(7)^
    and 00:25:545 - 00:27:732 can use the same hitsound as above(just suggestion
  6. 00:25:076(7)x:344 y:104
[Moway's Insane]
  1. 01:10:701(1,2,3)x:416 y80 :P
[Saten]
  1. 00:36:795(1)off-screen
That's all
Good luck :3
hibarirailwayz
Hi!
via my mod queue
These are my opinions; you should not accept all my suggestion, but if you skip my suggestion, I want you tell me the reason!

The Marks I use.
SPOILER
Standard
  1. ^= same contents as upward
  2. NC=New Combo
Taiko
  1. d=don(none)
  2. k=kat(whistle or clap)
  3. D=big don(finish)
  4. K=big kat(whistle/clap and finish)


[Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 01:04:295 and 01:24:295 - these speed change is too difficult for beginners. They can't recognize the notes correctly for such speed. And overall this diff may be called "Oni" rather than "Muzukashii".
  2. 00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Considering this map is "Muzukashii" and 192 BPM, I think you shouldn't use 5 constant hit without Kiai Time and after that. Suggestion "kkkkk"→"k "
  3. 00:47:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"kkk d"
  4. 00:49:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^.
  5. 00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"k ddd"
  6. 00:57:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"kkk d"
  7. 00:59:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^. Suggestion: "kkkkk k"→"kkk d d"
  8. I think when you remove spead changes, this map will be ciertainly boring. If you consider a balance of this map, you must remake 00:11:795 ~01:04:295.
    I like this diff as Oni!
[Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:58:045 ~01:01:482 - This dense notes is not good for this parts of sound. You should reduce, I think.
  2. 01:15:545 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This catching sound is not fit for the sound of voice. Ciertainly, when I consider drum sound, It's correctly. However, in this part, voice stand out more. Suggestion:"kdk dkd kdk"→"kdd k kddkd"
  3. nice map!
sorry for such this short mod.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Kuro

Light Usagi wrote:

hi again :3/ please mutual with me! :'D /kicked Hi Light o/ Added as friend! \:D/

Muzukashii

remove speed-ups and stay at the same SV? Oops, I forgot to remove those SV changes xD

00:15:076 (1,1) - reverse Ok
00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263 - (Not sure if I was half deaf or something) I can barely hear the beginning ;-; lol, it's a crescendo so the beginning is soft I changed it a bit though
maybe need some variations on the dkdkdkdkdk parts (but the current one is also okay)
01:11:170 - d, the pitch of i on yosougai no is same with 01:11:013 Ok, I fixed it
01:12:420 - d, same reason as above Ok, I fixed it
01:14:295 - remove finish Ok, I remove it

Oni

00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263 - same as muzu Hmm, I actually think this one is fine for for an even increase and distribution
00:48:045 - K (or just add finish), because cymbal Ok, changed it to finish
00:52:888 - k? Sorry, no then I would have to remove the finish because it wouldn't be a simple stream anymore
00:58:982 - add finish, because cymbal again lol, changed this one too
01:18:045 - remove finish? I like this finish a lot because its right on "Bang!" so no change.

good luck~ Thanks for modding my taiko :D
Topic Starter
Kuro

0gre wrote:

[MOD QUEUE REQUEST (Taiko only)]
SIGNs
d = don
k = katsu
D = big done
K = big katsu
add
delete
/ = exchange to

[Taiko Oni]
MOD information
00:13:357 (1,1,2,3,1) - / kkd k
try to care having less notes at some part
which is not necessary There is a break at 00:20:232 so I think it's fine for now

00:16:248 (2,2,2,2)
can delete them and you may can chage
00:16:482 it to d No change then I would have to delete the finish because of the constellation

00:16:795
this sounds like finish~ There's a finish here

00:21:170 ~ 00:22:263
you can swap with slider ~ I don't like sliders and I avoid using them in taiko, no change
then delete
00:22:341

00:39:060 (1,3)
I think you can delete them and add d at Did a variation on this
00:39:529

00:40:310 (2,2)
also there are not too important
should not follow vocal too much to adding notes sometimes
and leave some spece before and after of finish
it is not osu standard taiko map I think the vocals are a very important aspect of my mapping style I tend to incorporate everything into it while keeping a pattern.

00:44:295 ~ 00:51:795
can add bit more notes here
dont make too much different with the next part before kiai This part is a small break for players with a few 1/4 spaces in there for a breather

00:54:295 ~ 01:01:482
can delete most of notes here please have a look I followed the vocals here so no change.

01:15:545 ~ 01:16:326
It is not really sounds like it have some change I alternated them for the changing pitch in vocals, no change

01:19:216
delete all this kind of notes ~

01:24:295
do not change the speed oftenly
you may can delete this either kiai speed It would seem boring if I removed the speed changes, imo
sorry to repeat but
try to not follow vocal too much
however try to seperate finish with small notes

[Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
00:16:795 (2)
this sounds like katsu It's a finish because of the cymbal crash in the music

00:21:873 (6,9)
it is may be not too necessary or change to slider as well Reason against, same as Oni

00:23:826 ~ 00:30:545
oh why not change something here I decided to keep the same rhythm patterns to keep consistent with the Oni
like by following vocal ,etc
and similar for next part as well


01:04:295
take all the changing spead from here
it is too hard for Muzukashii difficulty
and may add a little at last finishes part Ok, I removed them
I thought Kiai part is nicely done~
but previous parts are bit too hard I think
compare to other song's Muzukashii


[Result]
It is nice to see using ddk kkd combos oftenly which sounds good
and it is clear to see with two different colours seperated in mod
but need to take few notes in some part ~
Thanks for seeing :) Thanks for mod \o/
Topic Starter
Kuro

Kokatsu wrote:

Hi. Hi Kokatsu /o/

General


Use another bg? This one seems a bit..too nude to me. I love this BG though :P
First redline needs to be 4/4 aswell, 3/4 is stupid. This section is actually in 12/8 but seeing as we can only pick 4/4 and 3/4, I went with 3/4 because it makes more sense
00:21:170 - The vol-increase here is unnecessary/too harsh. Remove it or use 5% steps and start with 30~35% Fixed in Muzukashii No change in Oni
01:24:295 - Use SV x1,0 here, x1,75 is brutal for Taikos. If you want, you can keep the same SV as in Kiai. Fixed in Muzukashii No change in Oni

Muzukashii


HP +1 Ok

Don't use SV changes here at all, the speedup isn't readable for newer players. Stick to a constant x1,0. I removed them

Generally, I thought it was a bit dense for a Muzu. Alot of 1/4 and big's. Is that so...

00:16:170 (1,1,1) - I see why you've placed the first kat, however it breaks the consistency with prev. patterns. I would have two possible fixes: Either use d d k here, this will keep it consistent but will let out the guitar, or you delete the don inbetween the kats, so you would have k k, this emphasizes the guitar even more and you don't need to worry about pattern consistency. I deleted the don inbetween the kats
00:17:420 (1,1,1) - Here I see no reason for the first kat, so d d k. Ok, fixed
00:18:045 (2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - This totally breaks consistency. What about a simple k d d d d d k here? Ok, fixed
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for a Muzukashii, to keep the pattern simple, use a small don for (4) instead. Ok
00:32:888 (1) - don? Mapped to alternating pitch in guitar, No change
00:42:732 (1) - If you changed above, change this aswell. ^
00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use a Slider instead? Ok
00:47:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:49:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:55:545 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - A bit too much IMO, why not d d k d d k ddd k? Ok, fixed
00:56:951 (1) - delete? Nope, nothing solid but the next kat sounds out of place without it
00:57:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - Slider? Ok
00:59:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

Oni


OD +1 Ok

00:16:170 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - kkkkddddk fits better here. I like the current pattern because I mapped it to the changing pitches in the guitar, No change
00:18:982 (3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern should be more like the one before, so try this: This is intentionalit is the reverse of the previous, No change

00:22:341 (16,1) - Gnaa. It's allowed but I would really recommend you to delete (16) to get (1) out of the stream. lol, I think it should be continuous all the way up until the cymbal crash, No change :P
00:38:826 (5,6,1,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Inconsistent in itself, use ddkdddkdd I already fixed this in a previous mod by deleting 00:39:216
00:40:466 (2,1) - Same as above. I think this one is fine, No Change
00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider? I really dislike sliders in Oni, No slider (╯`д´)╯︵ ┻━┻
00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider? ^
00:55:076 (1,1,1) - With the previous triplets, you break the flow here, alternative pattern that would fit would be: ddk, dkd or dkk. I used dkd :D
01:02:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - (4,1) is the same problem as above, moreover, I would like to see the whole stream (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) as kats. I followed the drum in the music, no change

All I can say for now, good luck with rank. :) Thanks for modding :)
Topic Starter
Kuro

Melt wrote:

Hi :3
request from queue
replace Hsiao-Chai to mod this map,sorry for late I thought no one was modding it because nobody liked it? :o

[Easy]
  1. this diff maybe a little hard as a easy diff Is that so...
  2. 00:14:295(1)one gird right Ok, fixed
  3. 00:20:545(1)i think this spin can end in 00:22:732 Ok, fixed
  4. 00:59:920(1)end in 01:00:232 It's supposed to go right into the next slider with a "jazz swing" effect, No Change
  5. 01:23:982(3)one gird left Ok, fixed
That's all
Good luck :3 Thanks for Mod! :D
I'll notify other Guest mappers about mod \o/
Topic Starter
Kuro

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Hi!
via my mod queue
These are my opinions; you should not accept all my suggestion, but if you skip my suggestion, I want you tell me the reason!

The Marks I use.
SPOILER
Standard
  1. ^= same contents as upward
  2. NC=New Combo
Taiko
  1. d=don(none)
  2. k=kat(whistle or clap)
  3. D=big don(finish)
  4. K=big kat(whistle/clap and finish)


[Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 01:04:295 and 01:24:295 - these speed change is too difficult for beginners. They can't recognize the notes correctly for such speed. And overall this diff may be called "Oni" rather than "Muzukashii". I removed the speed changes in previous mods
  2. 00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - Considering this map is "Muzukashii" and 192 BPM, I think you shouldn't use 5 constant hit without Kiai Time and after that. Suggestion "kkkkk"→"k " They were changed to sliders in previous mods
  3. 00:47:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"kkk d" ^
  4. 00:49:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^. ^
  5. 00:53:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"k ddd" ^
  6. 00:57:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Suggestion:"kkkkk"→"kkk d" ^
  7. 00:59:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^. Suggestion: "kkkkk k"→"kkk d d" ^
  8. I think when you remove spead changes, this map will be ciertainly boring. If you consider a balance of this map, you must remake 00:11:795 ~01:04:295. I don't think remaking it would be good idea, I'm trying to remain consistent with the oni.
    I like this diff as Oni!
[Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:58:045 ~01:01:482 - This dense notes is not good for this parts of sound. You should reduce, I think. I think it's fine because there is a lot of action going on here right before the climax/kiai time.
  2. 01:15:545 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This catching sound is not fit for the sound of voice. Ciertainly, when I consider drum sound, It's correctly. However, in this part, voice stand out more. Suggestion:"kdk dkd kdk"→"kdd k kddkd" My intentions were to alternate it on "1! 2! 3!" seeing as the pitch varies between the three. No change.
  3. nice map! Thanks :D
sorry for such this short mod. It's ok, thanks for modding! \o/
Good luck!
Moway

Melt wrote:

Hi :3
request from queue
replace Hsiao-Chai to mod this map,sorry for late

[Moway's Insane]
  1. 01:10:701(1,2,3)x:416 y80 :P I moved this, but this point is not the right one, but I fixed the star.
That's all
Good luck :3
thanks!

http://puu.sh/25c41
yanlu

Melt wrote:

Hi :3

[yanlu's Normal]
  1. 00:30:545(1)spin end in 00:31:013 :arrow: no spin here ._.
  2. 00:41:482(3)finish? :arrow: okay
  3. 00:56:013(2)delete the circle :arrow: no,why
  4. 01:00:857(1)remove clap :arrow: okay
thx!

http://puu.sh/25rgP
Saten
Fixes and changes~

http://puu.sh/25f2P
nattap_old

Melt wrote:

[nattap's Hard]
  1. AR-1? Nope, I think It's kind of slow
  2. 00:23:357(3)whistle
  3. 00:23:982(4)^
  4. 00:24:607(5)^
  5. 00:25:076(7)^
    and 00:25:545 - 00:27:732 can use the same hitsound as above(just suggestion
  6. 00:25:076(7)x:344 y:104
All others are fixed
http://puu.sh/25AcA

MAT is coming ? I get nervous . (my first time :o )
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

General


Let all spinners end here, with the music 01:26:013 -

You should choose other colours than Black, its hard to see in some places when playing. Also only because its name is "Black + White" you dont have to use it, maybe make other colours and only in chorus Black and White. The BG and Video are colourful so these two colours only dont fit much.


Easy

00:14:295 (1,2) - Spacing, fix this
00:25:857 (1,2) - , 00:26:170 (2,3,4) - Spacing is broken here, fix this with other Grid level
00:34:607 (2,1) - Well spacing, this shouldnt happen you have to move this so the spacing is normal
00:37:107 (2,1) - ^
00:40:545 (4,1) - ^, move this more right and its fine
00:58:045 - Dont ever slowdown in Easy or Normal unless it really fits, and here it doesnt and breaks the flow, delete it and make normal speed
01:16:795 (1) - This is one repeat too much for new players, i suggest to make two single 1/1 sliders here 01:16:795 - and 01:17:420 -


Normal

00:15:232 - Delete slowdown, not good for Easy or Normal, make normal speed so it also doesnt break the flow
00:19:295 - ^
01:03:045 (1) - Spinner is too short for newbies to finish well, they also need to prepare for next elements and this is not allowed, make a slider or something else but delete this


Hard

00:23:982 (4,5) - Spacing
00:26:482 (4,5) - ^
00:39:295 (4,1) - ^
00:48:045 - Delete the slowdown, doesnt fit one bit and breaks the flow
00:58:045 - ^
01:12:575 (4,1) - Spacing is wrong
01:21:482 (6,1) - ^


1st Insane


00:14:763 (2,3) - Incorrect spacing
00:20:232 (1,1,2) - Stream where is no stream related sound, remove it or give me a good reason why you keep it and i dont accept a "It fits good" because it doesnt
00:24:607 (9,10) - Spacing
00:28:045 (1,2) - ^
01:03:045 (1) - Unrankable, you have to make 1/4 or 1/8 slider repeats, this is not allowed
01:20:857 (2,3) - Spacing
01:24:451 (2,1) - ^


2nd Insane

Remove the combo spam, it is too much

Overall
00:20:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Same as 1st Insane
00:23:591 (5) - Doesnt fit and no beat to it remove it
00:26:091 (5) - ^, and the following too
01:03:045 (1) - Unrankable again


Needs definitely more mods. GL
Saten

BounceBabe wrote:

2nd Insane

Remove the combo spam, it is too much I don't call it spam

Overall
00:20:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Same as 1st Insane imo this is the best way rather than having an awkward pause here
00:23:591 (5) - Doesnt fit and no beat to it remove it I think it fits, and it has a connection
00:26:091 (5) - ^, and the following too as above
01:03:045 (1) - Unrankable again it's not. I don't use either green/red timing sections or red anchors to manipulate it. Anything slower than this doesn't fit imo
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