Yusadesu - Now Loading!!!! · forum

realy0_

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realy0_ 2017-10-23T16:21:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 15 mars 2018 at 18:34:05

Artist: Yusadesu
Title: Now Loading!!!!
Source: NEW GAME!
Tags: fourfolium ed Dubturt FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz pacsu Toruchii
BPM: 193
Filesize: 5516kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

Cuc's Advanced! (2,85 stars, 201 notes)
Dubturt's Light Insane! (4,09 stars, 312 notes)
Dyl's Normal!!!! (2,29 stars, 24 notes)
Easy! (1,59 stars, 110 notes)
Fruity's Extra! (5,51 stars, 416 notes)
Hard! (3,67 stars, 279 notes)
hitsounds (3,31 stars, 545 notes)
pacsu's Beginner! (1,22 stars, 69 notes)
tohooz's Insane! (4,88 stars, 383 notes)
Toruchii's Play NOW!!!! (5,86 stars, 378 notes)

Download: Yusadesu - Now Loading!!!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Song/Metadata taken from Emilia's version

GD list :
Beginner : pacsu
Easy : Me
Normal : Dyl-Byl
Advanced : CucumberCuc
Hard : Me
Light Insane : Dubturt
Insane : tohooz
Extra : FruityEnLoops
Play NOW!!! : Toruchii

Hitsounds :
Clap by LordRaika
SameSkinButNoRingHitCirclesWeirdNamev2 skin for every others hitsounds

sorry but i'm gonna give up on last diff

old play now!!!!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54404
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3342,13290,16709,23160,33186,48108,55570,56502,75544,85414,90388
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.300005

[Metadata]
Title:Now Loading!!!!
TitleUnicode:Now Loading!!!!
Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
Creator:realy0_
Version:Play NOW!!!!
Source:NEW GAME!
Tags:fourfolium ed July-San Dubturt FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz pacsu Toruchii
BeatmapID:1505723
BeatmapSetID:685360

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.5
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9.6
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Jonis221

290 posts

Joined October 2013

Jonis221 2017-10-31T19:12:12+00:00

[Easy]

AR 5 is a bit too much on easy difficulties.
Distance inconsistensies, some objects are snaped on 1.2x, some on 1.1x. Distance snap between objects must be consistent.
Don't manipulate with SV on easy difficulties, just make all green line on 1.0x.
00:15:466 (4,1) - Lot's of 1/1 objects are overlaping each other a bit.
00:19:196 (2) - Make all slider outline visible, so new players will not get confused.
00:23:549 (2,4) - Again make slider shapes more simplistic. Here's some examples https://imgur.com/a/zYMso
00:15:466 (4) - 00:16:088 (1) - 00:27:901 (8) - ^
00:08:316 (1,2) - It looks like slider bodies are too close each other.
00:37:538 (7) - Slider overlaps too much with 00:36:761 (6) -
00:48:108 (1,2,3) - How about to make symmetrical design here?
00:55:880 (2) - This slider is pretty cool, but you could make this more symmetrical.
00:58:057 (1) - ^ same, improve this a bit.
01:09:248 (3,2) - Slider is overlapped.
01:08:005 (1,3) - You can improve these sliderwave shapes.

[Normal]
You could keep SV 1.0x, but on kiai you can slightly increase it. (up to 1.05 or 1.10)
00:00:699 (1) - You can begin spinner on the white tick and also you could probably finish it on 00:02:720 - because this will allow to place object on 00:03:342 -
00:13:29 - It looks a bit odd that on normal difficulty this part is not mapped, but on easy diff it does.
00:26:968 (8) - For easier reading you can place this circle somewhere else to not overlap with 00:26:347 (6) -
00:31:943 (3) - 00:50:285 (6,1) - 01:03:652 (3) - 01:09:248 (8) - You can replace this double repeat slider into something else, because double repeat would be harder to read for newer players.
01:17:642 (4,5,6) - 01:29:766 (1,2) - 1/2 rhythm is rarely used in this difficulty, so you can change into something different for consistensy.
00:55:259 - recovery time for spinners should be at least 2 bars on normal difficulties.

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-10-31T19:44:53+00:00

Making a quick pass through ~

General, I find the normal-hitnormal, and the normal-hitfinish don't have any relation to the music (since they are pingpong sounds) thus they are unsuitable custom hitsounds for this map.
Also you might want to look into reading up on hitsounding guides. Right now hitsounds seem a bit random and the samples you are using (listed above) are inappropriate to the music. In general hitsounding should be more about emphasizing the music, and a large part of that is representing the music strong beats For example, in places like 00:13:290 (1) - there is a large crash cymbal in the music, this would go really well with a default soft-hitfinish or default normal-hitfinish. There are many places in the music lacking hitsounds like that one so I recommend taking a second look through. Here is a guide on hitsounding you might find useful: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/306177
Also if you are going to theme some difficulty names you should theme them all, what I mean is right now July's normal says "July's Normal!" where as the Easy and Hard are missing the "!"
Another this is the artist name should be ゆさです and the Romanised Artist should be Yusadesu (so just change the unicode one)
In your tags you must indicate the usernames of the people who made GDs.

Easy
first there is a general issue, if you press ctrl+a it becomes more apparent, but the map is too cramped. This is an issue because the player is only actively playing in a rather small portion of the screen.

00:04:430 (3,4) - This is an issue because of how easy players play, basically an easy players tries to follow sliders as closely as possible so they will follow (3) until the end, reverse their movement to reach (4), and then reverse that movement to play (4). All of this reversing movement is really uncomfortable for newer players. This applies in a few other places in your map such as 00:06:917 (3,4) - 00:36:761 (6,7,1) - 00:45:621 (3,4) - 01:03:031 (1,2) -
00:05:829 (1,2) - this is the same rhythm in the music as 00:03:342 (1,2) - but you mapped them with different rhythm. You should make them the same rhythm.
00:08:316 (1) - since your rhythm more accurately is following the guitar sounds as shown by the previous two combos, I would suggest also more accurately following the guitar here as well. Basically this rhythm is skipping sounds on 00:08:782 - and 00:08:937 - so to help compensate for that (since you can't have 1/2 rhythms) you should make this slider a 2/1 slider with a 1/1 circle after it (the 1/1 circle will represent 00:09:404 - .) This also applies to 00:09:559 (2) - and the rhythm should end up looking like this when you are done: https://bor.s-ul.eu/TFJYT6GK.png
00:19:196 (2) - This slider shape turns on it self and looks really cramped which can be really confusing for easy players, I realized you had the bounces for the rhythm in the vocals (intentionally or not) but you can still keep those and uncramp the slider. Also this might tie into how you can use more of the screen, you could have the slider look more like this: https://bor.s-ul.eu/6y6YUjXQ.png (also to get the bumps as accurate as possible, you can notice in the picture I changed the tickrate to 2 to line up the red points with the slider ticks where the rhythm is.
00:23:238 - Notice in this section you start to New Combo (NC) every fourth measure, but in the section before it at 00:13:290 - you were only NCing every two measures. At 00:23:238 -the song is really close to identical to at 00:13:290 - but it adds in some other instrument making it the more intense section. Because of that, you NCs don't seem to reflect that well and you should either make them the same (per section here) or reverse them. I personally would prefer if you reversed them to where 00:13:290 - you only NC'd on 00:13:290 - and 00:18:575 - these two beats, then for 00:23:238 - you NC'd on 00:23:238 - 00:25:725 (1) - 00:29:145 - and 00:30:699 - .
00:25:725 (5,6) - I not really sure what you are going for in this section rhythm wise since you compliment the vocals in some places and ignore them in others, this is one of the places you chose to ignore the vocals where as 00:23:238 (1,2) - was you complimenting them. You should stick to 1 main instrument to follow in this section since it won't bring up much rhythmic ambiguity. I suggest changing (5,6) to something like this instead to match the vocals more: https://bor.s-ul.eu/S8I6m24M.png
00:29:145 (1,2) - you should unstack these notes and move 2 the appropriate distance away because this will be fairly difficult for newer players to read (which you should avoid) The reason it will be difficult for newer players to read is because 00:13:290 (1,2) - , here you have a stack that is 1/1, and it tells the newer players that something that is stack will be a 1/1 gap. Because the rhythm you have isn't drastically different in the first example, newer players will click it like it is a 1/1 gap. This is applicable to 00:46:399 (4,5) -
00:33:186 - NC's work here don't change these
01:13:290 (5) - You should NC this because for this section you have been doing 2 measure new combos and without this NC it would be a 4 measure new combo.
01:17:642 (1,2) - You should do something called swapping NCs here. That's where you remove the NC from 01:17:642 (1) - and then add an NC on 01:17:951 - . I suggest this because 01:17:953 - is the downbeat and you have been NCing based on downbeats so you should make that consistent.
01:20:440 (1) - This rhythm is really long but it doesn't really accurately reflect anything in the music because the instruments you were following before this (the guitar) still has beats on 01:20:906 - 01:21:062 - 01:21:373 - 01:21:839 -and 01:21:994 - so to match a previous suggestion I made you should make the rhythm like https://bor.s-ul.eu/HFV8g1Jl.png.
01:25:414 - This is kind of lame because spinners don't really reflect any rhythm well until they are finished and a strong beat is right here. You should make a circle happen here for the large crash in the music and then move the spinner a bit afterwards to accomodate for the circle.

July's Normal
Rhythm is a general issue in this difficulty, For example 00:08:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - this section rhythm seems really randomized, because for the combo prior, you followed the guitar roughly, but this completely ignores it. The guitar hits are on 00:08:782 - 00:08:937 - 00:09:404 - 00:09:559 - 00:10:025 - 00:10:181 - but only two of these points are clickable and only 3 (including the two) are even mapped. If you are going to make most of the strong white tick beats clickable, you should make them all clickable for consistency. (00:09:559 - this would be clickable then) Then there is a part like 00:28:212 (1,2,3,4) - where if you pressed ctrl+g the rhythm would make more sense.
This difficulty suffers from being cramped much more than the Easy difficulty, read what I wrote up there for explanation. Also there are other points in I listed in about the other difficulty you will probably find useful so check it out.

00:00:699 (1,1) - The usage of this spinner is inappropriate because you end up skipping 00:03:342 - this first measure, which is in the same musical phrase as the next measure. Because in Normal difficulties you can have a 2/1 gap between a slider end and the next object just end the spinner on 00:02:720 - and map the following measure
00:06:139 (4,5) - This is a problem because to play this, the normal player has to invert their movement after hitting (4) to hit the head of (5) and then invert their movement again to play (5). This is bad because this inversion of movement is difficult for newer players. This also applies to 00:06:450 (5,6) - 00:08:005 (7,1) - 00:08:316 (1,2) - 00:26:347 (6,7,8) - 00:37:538 (5,6) - 00:48:730 (3,4) - 00:59:922 (2,3) - 01:02:409 (1,2,3) - 01:06:761 (3,4) - 01:14:533 (2,3) -
00:10:803 - not mapping this measure does not make any sense because its still the same phrase as before but even more intense.
00:31:943 (3) -
00:53:082 (1,1) - This is considered unrankable because the end of the spinner is 1/1 gap away from the next object when in a normal difficulty it must be at least 2/1
01:17:642 (4,5,6) - because you haven't used a single 1/2 rhythm before this, this is unfitting. Same with 01:29:766 (1,2) -

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-10-31T23:19:34+00:00

EggsGone wrote:
[Easy]
AR 5 is a bit too much on easy difficulties.
reduced to 4
Distance inconsistensies, some objects are snaped on 1.2x, some on 1.1x. Distance snap between objects must be consistent.
it's fine when there is a small distance snap change, from the ranking criteria.
Don't manipulate with SV on easy difficulties, just make all green line on 1.0x.
00:15:466 (4,1) - Lot's of 1/1 objects are overlaping each other a bit.
fixed with the DS increase and the SV increase
00:19:196 (2) - Make all slider outline visible, so new players will not get confused.
pattern changed
00:23:549 (2,4) - Again make slider shapes more simplistic. Here's some examples https://imgur.com/a/zYMso
00:15:466 (4) - 00:16:088 (1) - 00:27:901 (8) - ^
simplifed some of them, these sliders shapes justify the sync with the vocals
00:08:316 (1,2) - It looks like slider bodies are too close each other.
fixed
00:37:538 (7) - Slider overlaps too much with 00:36:761 (6) -
fixed with the SV changes
00:48:108 (1,2,3) - How about to make symmetrical design here?
they are already symmetrical
00:55:880 (2) - This slider is pretty cool, but you could make this more symmetrical.
there is actually a pattern on it.
00:58:057 (1) - ^ same, improve this a bit.
?
01:09:248 (3,2) - Slider is overlapped.
idk how to fix that without making the flow weird
01:08:005 (1,3) - You can improve these sliderwave shapes.
tried to improve them

_83 wrote:
Making a quick pass through ~

General, I find the normal-hitnormal, and the normal-hitfinish don't have any relation to the music (since they are pingpong sounds) thus they are unsuitable custom hitsounds for this map.
Also you might want to look into reading up on hitsounding guides. Right now hitsounds seem a bit random and the samples you are using (listed above) are inappropriate to the music. In general hitsounding should be more about emphasizing the music, and a large part of that is representing the music strong beats For example, in places like 00:13:290 (1) - there is a large crash cymbal in the music, this would go really well with a default soft-hitfinish or default normal-hitfinish. There are many places in the music lacking hitsounds like that one so I recommend taking a second look through. Here is a guide on hitsounding you might find useful: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/306177 i'll see
Also if you are going to theme some difficulty names you should theme them all, what I mean is right now July's normal says "July's Normal!" where as the Easy and Hard are missing the "!" k
Another this is the artist name should be ゆさです and the Romanised Artist should be Yusadesu (so just change the unicode one)
In your tags you must indicate the usernames of the people who made GDs. fixed

Easy
first there is a general issue, if you press ctrl+a it becomes more apparent, but the map is too cramped. This is an issue because the player is only actively playing in a rather small portion of the screen. when you map easy-normals difficulties, you avoid mapping in the corner to prevent overlapping like this 01:09:248 (3,1,2) - which for me is hardly fixable without making a weird flow/pattern.

00:04:430 (3,4) - This is an issue because of how easy players play, basically an easy players tries to follow sliders as closely as possible so they will follow (3) until the end, reverse their movement to reach (4), and then reverse that movement to play (4). All of this reversing movement is really uncomfortable for newer players. This applies in a few other places in your map such as 00:06:917 (3,4) - 00:36:761 (6,7,1) - 00:45:621 (3,4) - 01:03:031 (1,2) -
all fixed exept the third one because the flow here was intended
00:05:829 (1,2) - this is the same rhythm in the music as 00:03:342 (1,2) - but you mapped them with different rhythm. You should make them the same rhythm. they sound slightly different if you listen closely
00:08:316 (1) - since your rhythm more accurately is following the guitar sounds as shown by the previous two combos, I would suggest also more accurately following the guitar here as well. Basically this rhythm is skipping sounds on 00:08:782 - and 00:08:937 - so to help compensate for that (since you can't have 1/2 rhythms) you should make this slider a 2/1 slider with a 1/1 circle after it (the 1/1 circle will represent 00:09:404 - .) This also applies to 00:09:559 (2) - and the rhythm should end up looking like this when you are done: https://bor.s-ul.eu/TFJYT6GK.png
fixed
00:19:196 (2) - This slider shape turns on it self and looks really cramped which can be really confusing for easy players, I realized you had the bounces for the rhythm in the vocals (intentionally or not) but you can still keep those and uncramp the slider. Also this might tie into how you can use more of the screen, you could have the slider look more like this: https://bor.s-ul.eu/6y6YUjXQ.png (also to get the bumps as accurate as possible, you can notice in the picture I changed the tickrate to 2 to line up the red points with the slider ticks where the rhythm is.
i changed the pattern
00:23:238 - Notice in this section you start to New Combo (NC) every fourth measure, but in the section before it at 00:13:290 - you were only NCing every two measures. At 00:23:238 -the song is really close to identical to at 00:13:290 - but it adds in some other instrument making it the more intense section. Because of that, you NCs don't seem to reflect that well and you should either make them the same (per section here) or reverse them. I personally would prefer if you reversed them to where 00:13:290 - you only NC'd on 00:13:290 - and 00:18:575 - these two beats, then for 00:23:238 - you NC'd on 00:23:238 - 00:25:725 (1) - 00:29:145 - and 00:30:699 - . There was a NC errors in both parts (combo up to 6-7), fixed to have a constant 3-4 combo
00:25:725 (5,6) - I not really sure what you are going for in this section rhythm wise since you compliment the vocals in some places and ignore them in others, this is one of the places you chose to ignore the vocals where as 00:23:238 (1,2) - was you complimenting them. You should stick to 1 main instrument to follow in this section since it won't bring up much rhythmic ambiguity. I suggest changing (5,6) to something like this instead to match the vocals more: https://bor.s-ul.eu/S8I6m24M.pngdidn't read the whole issue here but i tried to fix the rhythm here.
00:29:145 (1,2) - you should unstack these notes and move 2 the appropriate distance away because this will be fairly difficult for newer players to read (which you should avoid) The reason it will be difficult for newer players to read is because 00:13:290 (1,2) - , here you have a stack that is 1/1, and it tells the newer players that something that is stack will be a 1/1 gap. Because the rhythm you have isn't drastically different in the first example, newer players will click it like it is a 1/1 gap. This is applicable to 00:46:399 (4,5) - fixed with above
00:33:186 - NC's work here don't change these
01:13:290 (5) - You should NC this because for this section you have been doing 2 measure new combos and without this NC it would be a 4 measure new combo.fixed
01:17:642 (1,2) - You should do something called swapping NCs here. That's where you remove the NC from 01:17:642 (1) - and then add an NC on 01:17:951 - . I suggest this because 01:17:953 - is the downbeat and you have been NCing based on downbeats so you should make that consistent.
fixed
01:20:440 (1) - This rhythm is really long but it doesn't really accurately reflect anything in the music because the instruments you were following before this (the guitar) still has beats on 01:20:906 - 01:21:062 - 01:21:373 - 01:21:839 -and 01:21:994 - so to match a previous suggestion I made you should make the rhythm like https://bor.s-ul.eu/HFV8g1Jl.png.
it's a rhythm simplification here, the guitar play a note every 1/2 ticks here
01:25:414 - This is kind of lame because spinners don't really reflect any rhythm well until they are finished and a strong beat is right here. You should make a circle happen here for the large crash in the music and then move the spinner a bit afterwards to accomodate for the circle.
fixed i guess Whoah, wall of text, next time plz use bold for titles/diffs

Thanks for mod !

YoWuzUp

47 posts

Joined August 2016

YoWuzUp 2017-11-04T21:07:18+00:00

You can have this diff, if you choose to accept it that is (and i'm okay with any minor changes you want to make, if any.)

Wuz's Beginner!

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Oh, and also a mod, cause why not?

mod

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Easy!

00:16:088 (1) - This is a very weird slider, consider making it simpler.
00:33:808 (2) - Have a feeling that this is too high... But i don't know...
01:25:414 (6,1) - Having the circle a half-beat before the spinner starts doesn't seem very good. I'd either start the spinner on the circle, or remove the spinner alltogether.

Other than that, not bad. There's a few more weird slider shapes, but I guess they're good enough.
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July's Normal!

00:12:046 (7) - This slider should be changed. I don't know how'd you want to change it, but I'd make the slider start on the next red tick, and end where does already, with no reverses.
00:28:212 - I think there should be something here.
00:34:741 - I'd also map this sound.
00:43:756 (2) - :thinking:
00:45:932 (5) - Just a suggestion, I'd blanket this with 4.
00:49:041 - The way the 5 and 3 overlaps here doesn't look very good.
00:49:507 - Also here with 4 and 6.
00:50:595 - This sounds like a strong sound that should be mapped. I'd start the slider on this sound and put a circle when the slider currently starts, and make sure the slider still ends where it ends.
01:11:269 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471888 - The circle needs to be equally distant from the slider before it and the slider after it, here, it's a bit too close to the slider after it.
01:24:171 (1) - Just a suggestion, this slider should also just be 1 whole slider instead of a shorter reverse slider.

Alright, moving on.
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Cuc's Advanced!

00:05:051 (7) - Looks weird next to the circle, I'd put a curve on it, to the right side of course. Then I guess you can move it down a bit so it actually kinda blankets the circle.
00:35:984 (4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit weird, might be hard to read for some players...
00:57:279 (6,1) - Hmm, that's a bit low, but i don't know...

Hmm, I found this difficulty overall kinda weird, despite not very many notes. Consider combing through it and touching it up or something.
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Hard!

00:06:917 (5,7,9) - This all looks weird, either move apart from each other, or stack on top of each other.
00:14:222 (3,5) - Another weird overlay here.
00:25:570 (2,4) - Not stacked, can you actually stack these?
00:40:128 - Hmm, that arrangement is kinda weird, can you change that?
01:04:274 (1,2,3,4) - oh my...
01:24:326 (4) - Personally would've made this a slider that extends to here: 01:25:103

Okay, I question more arrangement than I let on, but yeah, anyway...
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Fruity's Extra!

First and foremost, why the different picture? This is the only diff with this picture... I'd either put the picture on more diffs, or make this diff the normal picture... but that's just me, if you wanna leave, then whatever.

As you tend to go up on the difficulty scale, a lot more things are "allowed," or "okay," as far as mapping conventions go. Seriously though, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty, it was really good.

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Play NOW!!!!

(Mostly Observations this time.)
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - Wow, that extremely spaced stream...
00:20:440 (1,2,3) - again...
00:23:238 (1) - I don't know, I personally would've made this slider a 3-note stream... If you don't want to, that's fine, at least stack it with 00:22:772 (1) though.
00:32:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - that's a very interesting stream...
01:11:658 (8) - I'd delete this circle.
01:12:279 (3) - This one too.
01:25:103 (4,5,6) - Would personally replace with a 5-note stream.

Well that's that! This one was actually overall really good!
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Okay, there you go! That's my mod, and my Difficulty if you want it, if not, it's okay.
Bye!

Dokatu

39 posts

Joined November 2016

Dokatu 2017-11-04T22:09:08+00:00

M4M
His mod - MOD

HARD

00:01:321 (4) - Make a blanket.
00:01:787 (1) - ^
00:10:803 (1) - Finish the slider on 00: 11: 114 .
00:10:803 (1) - This slider is ugly & Finish the slider on 00:11:580 .
00:11:735 (3,4,1,2) - Try This. V
00:45:000 (5) - Copy/paste Slider (3) and CTRL + J
00:45:932 (2) - Ugly.
00:54:171 (3,4) - If you wanted to make a blanket then do the same.
00:57:746 (1,6) - Ugly.
01:14:222 (5,6) - ^ -.-
01:15:388 - Try This V
Photo
01:22:305 (6,7) - Ugly. Do not try to make beautiful 1/2 sliders with CS 3.

Fruity's Extra!

It is better to replace the photo.

Play NOW!!!!

00:15:621 (1,2,3) - OMG. What is it? Do less spacing!
01:11:580 (7,8,1) - ^
01:12:202 (2,3,4) - ^
01:12:668 (6,7,1) - ^
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:911 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
If you want to make the level difficult, make CS on 4.5!

Easy!

01:25:414 (6) - Delete this.
In Easy DS and the speed of the sliders should not change! (The speed of the sliders is x1.00)

Good Luck!

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-04T23:04:42+00:00

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:
You can have this diff, if you choose to accept it that is (and i'm okay with any minor changes you want to make, if any.)
Wuz's Beginner!
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sorry, i didn't added it cuz the breaks seems just randoms, it have a lot repetitive loops which i don't really like and objects placement isn't
really uniform (ctrl+a to see it)
Oh, and also a mod, cause why not?okay lol

mod
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Easy!

00:16:088 (1) - This is a very weird slider, consider making it simpler.
simplier
00:33:808 (2) - Have a feeling that this is too high... But i don't know...
nah, it's fine when it doesn't touch the HP bar.
01:25:414 (6,1) - Having the circle a half-beat before the spinner starts doesn't seem very good. I'd either start the spinner on the circle, or remove the spinner alltogether.
removed from a precedent mod
Other than that, not bad. There's a few more weird slider shapes, but I guess they're good enough.

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Hard!

00:06:917 (5,7,9) - This all looks weird, either move apart from each other, or stack on top of each other.
good idea
00:14:222 (3,5) - Another weird overlay here.
intended
00:25:570 (2,4) - Not stacked, can you actually stack these?
how did you find this
00:40:128 - Hmm, that arrangement is kinda weird, can you change that?
fixed, idc about D-Snap
01:04:274 (1,2,3,4) - oh my...
nah i actually like this pattern with the flow here
01:24:326 (4) - Personally would've made this a slider that extends to here: 01:25:103
nah, it would unfit the cross pattern

Okay, I question more arrangement than I let on, but yeah, anyway...
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Play NOW!!!!

(Mostly Observations this time.)
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - Wow, that extremely spaced stream...
it's extremely spaced cuz i wanted to keep the DS here and 00:16:088 (1) 's placement is fine
00:20:440 (1,2,3) - again...
reduced
00:23:238 (1) - I don't know, I personally would've made this slider a 3-note stream... If you don't want to, that's fine, at least stack it with 00:22:772 (1) though.
it's fine and it's already stacked
00:32:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - that's a very interesting stream... thanks, i find that stream really bad visually lol
01:11:658 (8) - I'd delete this circle.
01:12:279 (3) - This one too.
these notes accentuate the now loading vocals
01:25:103 (4,5,6) - Would personally replace with a 5-note stream.
just no

Well that's that! This one was actually overall really good! wtf, i find it really really bad
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Okay, there you go! That's my mod, and my Difficulty if you want it, if not, it's okay.
Bye!

XFroceS wrote:
M4M
His mod - MOD

HARD
00:01:321 (4) - Make a blanket.
00:01:787 (1) - ^
fixed
00:10:803 (1) - Finish the slider on 00: 11: 114 .
00:10:803 (1) - This slider is ugly & Finish the slider on 00:11:580 .
to prepare to click 00:11:269 (2) -
00:11:735 (3,4,1,2) - Try This. V

the pattern is actually good for now
00:45:000 (5) - Copy/paste Slider (3) and CTRL + J
it's actually the same lol
00:45:932 (2) - Ugly.
:thinking:
00:54:171 (3,4) - If you wanted to make a blanket then do the same.

tried to fix
00:57:746 (1,6) - Ugly.
to know where to go
01:14:222 (5,6) - ^ -.-
:thinkingagain:
01:15:388 - Try This V
Photo

???
01:22:305 (6,7) - Ugly. Do not try to make beautiful 1/2 sliders with CS 3.
unjustified

Play NOW!!!!
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - OMG. What is it? Do less spacing!
justification on the mod above
01:11:580 (7,8,1) - ^
01:12:202 (2,3,4) - ^
idk how to make it better
01:12:668 (6,7,1) - ^
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:911 (1,2,3) - ^
intended
01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
idk how to make it better without making visual weird
If you want to make the level difficult, make CS on 4.5!
too small
Easy!
01:25:414 (6) - Delete this. fixed
In Easy DS and the speed of the sliders should not change! (The speed of the sliders is x1.00)
idk where people read this on the ranking criteria
Good Luck!
instead of saying ugly, say why and try to justify it and how it can be inproved.

thanks for mod !

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-11-05T00:41:51+00:00

no for the picture, it's my favorite endcard from new game. plus you can have multiple backgrounds, just that other gders and realy0_ doesn't want multiple background. i do

and thanks, i'd really didn't think it would be that good to do not get mods after 2 modders

YoWuzUp

47 posts

Joined August 2016

YoWuzUp 2017-11-05T01:30:01+00:00

realy0_ wrote:
YO_WUZ_UP wrote:
Play NOW!!!!

00:23:238 (1) - I don't know, I personally would've made this slider a 3-note stream... If you don't want to, that's fine, at least stack it with 00:22:772 (1) though.
it's fine and it's already stacked

What you have (Not Stacked):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9473929

What I mean (Where the game snaps it to):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9473937

Just for clarification...

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-05T08:53:07+00:00

What you have (Not Stacked):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9473929

What I mean (Where the game snaps it to):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9473937

Just for clarification...

for real, it's fixed

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-11-05T14:18:55+00:00

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:
Cuc's Advanced!

00:05:051 (7) - Looks weird next to the circle, I'd put a curve on it, to the right side of course. Then I guess you can move it down a bit so it actually kinda blankets the circle. i'm do slightly another
00:35:984 (4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit weird, might be hard to read for some players... maybe, but I don't think so, because at 00:33:808 (1,2,3) I made it clear what exactly will be the reduction of distance between objects and I do not see this point it is difficult to read for players ( and a similar thing with this is, at 00:15:777 (1,2,3,4,5) )
00:57:279 (6,1) - Hmm, that's a bit low, but i don't know... they are on the same level

Hmm, I found this difficulty overall kinda weird, despite not very many notes. Consider combing through it and touching it up or something. To be honest, I have almost no experience with advanced difficulties, so I hope that other people will say that I have exactly is wrong with her
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update

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July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-11-07T18:56:35+00:00

YO_WUZ_UP
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July's Normal!

00:12:046 (7) - This slider should be changed. I don't know how'd you want to change it, but I'd make the slider start on the next red tick, and end where does already, with no reverses. fix
00:28:212 - I think there should be something here.
00:34:741 - I'd also map this sound. fix
00:43:756 (2) - :thinking: mmmm
00:45:932 (5) - Just a suggestion, I'd blanket this with 4. I did not understand
00:49:041 - The way the 5 and 3 overlaps here doesn't look very good. fix, i gueess
00:49:507 - Also here with 4 and 6.
00:50:595 - This sounds like a strong sound that should be mapped. I'd start the slider on this sound and put a circle when the slider currently starts, and make sure the slider still ends where it ends.fix
01:11:269 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471888 - The circle needs to be equally distant from the slider before it and the slider after it, here, it's a bit too close to the slider after it. fix i gueess
01:24:171 (1) - Just a suggestion, this slider should also just be 1 whole slider instead of a shorter reverse slider. fix

Alright, moving on.
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Thanks, and sorry if I did not understand some things :c I do not speak fluent English

but, thanks for your mod !

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YoWuzUp

47 posts

Joined August 2016

YoWuzUp 2017-11-10T15:44:48+00:00

July - San wrote:
YO_WUZ_UP
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July's Normal!

00:45:932 (5) - Just a suggestion, I'd blanket this with 4. I did not understand
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Thanks, and sorry if I did not understand some things :c I do not speak fluent English

but, thanks for your mod !

Allow me to clarify then.

Change This: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509702 to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509699

I would also recommend after doing that, do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509705

(Don't forget to adjust the circle after moving the slider in any case)

July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-11-11T17:29:45+00:00

YO_WUZ_UP wrote:
July - San wrote:
YO_WUZ_UP
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July's Normal!

00:45:932 (5) - Just a suggestion, I'd blanket this with 4. I did not understand
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Thanks, and sorry if I did not understand some things :c I do not speak fluent English

but, thanks for your mod !

Allow me to clarify then.

Change This: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509702 to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509699

I would also recommend after doing that, do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509705

(Don't forget to adjust the circle after moving the slider in any case)

oh thank you very much, I'll update the diff

Tralen

350 posts

Joined October 2015

Tralen 2017-11-16T22:07:09+00:00

Hello

Easy!

Check this https://imgur.com/a/EDL1f

Here go the problem.... i saw the previus mods

The problem i am talking is the diff "PLAY NOW!!!!"

First of all, did u played the ranked versions of this song?

there is a some 6* near 6* in tv sizes

but i will talk about the problems and why they are a problems

00:02:798 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Jumps in streams

they are uncomfortable

00:22:150 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -

why jumping in the start of the song, calm down also that part shoud be diferent

00:25:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has no sense

I know u are emphasizing the 00:26:036 (4) - and another (4) but in gameplay is really uncomfortable

CALM DOWN with the jumps plz

00:32:875 (1,2,3,4) - i think this also is uncomfortable and unfair in the gameplay u cant predict those jumps

00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - why those has different ds

and those 00:49:196 (2,1,2,3,4) -

well and the whole map need a hard change, there to many notes with ds with any sense

01:11:580 (7,8) -
01:12:202 (2,3,4) -

and more

u can pm ingame if u want to talk about this

check the Ranked versions, THEY HELP SO MUCH

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1028954

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091903

Its that a baby singing?

Gl with the map

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-16T22:48:14+00:00

Tralen wrote:
Hello

Easy!
Check this https://imgur.com/a/EDL1f
probably a bug oh sorry, i'll maybe ask someone to do a even easier diff
Here go the problem.... i saw the previus mods

The problem i am talking is the diff "PLAY NOW!!!!"

First of all, did u played the ranked versions of this song?

there is a some 6* near 6* in tv sizes

but i will talk about the problems and why they are a problems

00:02:798 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Jumps in streams
nerfed

they are uncomfortable

00:22:150 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
that's because i mapped the guitar then the drum here and not the vocal which is not really intense here

why jumping in the start of the song, calm down also that part shoud be diferent

00:25:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has no sense
nerfed
I know u are emphasizing the 00:26:036 (4) - and another (4) but in gameplay is really uncomfortable
i find really cool to play that part, idk
CALM DOWN with the jumps plz

00:32:875 (1,2,3,4) - i think this also is uncomfortable and unfair in the gameplay u cant predict those jumps
changed a bit the placement
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - why those has different ds
^
and those 00:49:196 (2,1,2,3,4) -
different ds cuz it make that cross pattern visually weird
well and the whole map need a hard change, there to many notes with ds with any sense

01:11:580 (7,8) -
01:12:202 (2,3,4) -
changed slightly the pattern here
and more

u can pm ingame if u want to talk about this

check the Ranked versions, THEY HELP SO MUCH

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1028954

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091903
i did take inspiration for these map lol, even a third one that you didn't mentionned. i just tried to make it on my own taste
Its that a baby singing?
a cringe 8-year old dude lol

bruhhh let's try to buff the overall diff, gonna to be a hard work for me
Gl with the map

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,091 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2017-11-19T12:46:14+00:00

hello there!

mindmaster107

734 posts

Joined August 2016

mindmaster107 2017-11-22T10:31:39+00:00

Here from my queue.
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/688504

If my modding feels more like a paragraph, it means your map has more general issues than specific (large or minor), so using stuff like time stamps would be redundant.

[Play NOW!!!]
This will never get ranked. Visuals and flow are complete nonsense for a majority of the map, with hardly any or no strong visual connection in patterns, and between them. The map is a mess of ideas, if there even were any, and I would try and copy the other difficuulties for ideas, as they have a better grasp on how to make a coherent map.

That sounds a bit too harsh, but lemme explain in better detail why I believe this is true.

There is an easy trick to organizing a map, no matter what concept you are using.
1 - Decide on a clear idea. This could be conventional mapping (eg. jumps and streams in an easy to play structure.), or it could be one with a gimmick (like complex flow ideas). No matter what it is, please stay consistent with your idea, unless the song changes massivly, which on this map I would argue is not enough. An example of big change would be stuff like completely new instruments being used.
2 - Remember you are creating a map which matches the song. The easy way to manage this is to match rhythm and spacing to intense instruments. Maybe only use streams for drum rolls, and 1/4 sliders for other 1/4 beats. Maybe space everything with low spacing, but space drum beats with large spacing, and cymbals with even larger spacing.
3 - Hitsounding is meant to be complimenting, not overriding. If you think it isn't you may not be on default sound samples.

Really, watch any pishifat video, but I think explaining the easy way to map anything, and you trying to build from there would help best for you.

Example of 1 - 00:15:000 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistent between snappings.
Example of 2 - 00:02:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you spacing it this wide for the beginning? Keep in mind, spaced streams are supposed to be for massive intensities, and are normally found in 6 star maps due to their difficulty to play.
Example of 2 - 00:35:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I can vaugly tell you are following vocals, but remember how rhythm works. The instrument (yes vocals are an instrument) is the one you wanna activly map, while less important sounds should be covered with low spacing, or slidertails. Slidertails are alot weaker than sliderheads, which makes me wonder why you used a slider like 00:36:450 (4) .
Example of 1 - 00:44:922 (6,7) - Please never use 1/4 jumps. They are a gimmick which need to be properly introduced to players, and way above the ability for a beginner to map properly. Just stack the stack on 00:45:000 (7) .
Example of 1 - 01:10:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you were to keep the map consistently badly flowing, it would make sense. If you used bad flow in a section where you used conventional spacing before ( 01:08:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ), and not much musical difference, it just feels likerandomly placed objects than one matching a song.

A rule of thumb to arguments, is that "can you make a valid argument against it"? If you can't then ur probs wrong. If there are ideas in here that I am contradicting, then explain why. If I can;t see a concept you are using, please make them clearer by being more consistent.

You can ask for a re-check if you remap it in PM.

[Fruity's extra]
Overall, not bad. Apart from the hitsounding, and jumps not being propperly spaced, you are on the right track.

The goal of hitsounding is to match a song. If the hitsounds begin to overpower the song, you are doing something wrong. Remember, map hitsounds to default hitsounds, or put the hitsounds you are using in your skin into the map's folder if you are not using default (you may be hearing it wrong, from skin related sounds).

00:04:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jumps like this give almost no contratst to the music. I would space them decreasing in spacing throughout the pattern to show the song's immediate changes.

00:05:206 (2,3,4) - Keep spacing consistent. There is not much in the song justifying that this should be spaced so differently.

How to use spacing for emphasis 101:
00:06:606 (1,2,1,2) - This is weaker than 00:07:228 (1,2,1,2) - , so should be spaced less.

00:08:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you using such a low intensity rhythm, when you used consecutive jumps earlier. Please keep intensity of objects and gameplay simular to the song. (eg, song intense, map intense, and never shall the twain cross)

00:15:621 (2) - sounds distinct from 00:16:243 (2,2) - , so why is it also mapped with a slider? If the song changes, change your mapping.

00:17:798 (3) - Why is this spaced so low for a cymbal?

00:21:683 (1,2) - Same with this ^

00:40:336 (5,6,1) - I would space 5 to 6 small, and 6 to 1 larger, as 1 is the downbeat (big white tick).

00:41:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Intensity doesn't increase by this much. I would use sliders, as to not make the jumps in the kiai or elsewhere feel meaningless.

If you space like 00:49:197 (6,1) - for this sound, why didn't you continue spacing like that for 00:49:818 (3,4) ? Intensity changes should be gradual, while instrumental emphisis should be prominant object to object.

00:52:927 (8,1,2,3) - Stack properly for aesthetics

00:58:989 (6,1) - Spacing in the kiai feels random, as you seem to just space whenever you want. This is an example of a sound you space say here 00:57:901 (6,1) , and yet you space with blanket here. The easy way to space objects, is to choose an instrument to space to (like say large spacing for drums, and normal spacing for everything else). If you can do this, the map may actually reach rank standard :thinking:

01:11:114 (4,5) - I would try and keep my map consistent. If you change ideas with no appreciation to the changes in the song, it defeats the point of mapping in a rhythm game (don't look at haitai). Choose some ideas you find best in the map, and keep it the same when the music is about the same (eg low and high intensity).

01:29:611 (1,2,3,1,1,1) - As you have never used NCs like this anywhewre else in the map, I instinctivly played it in 1/3 (as there was no telling what else it could be). This is clearly not your intention, which is why I would ask you to keep this a regular combo.

[toohooz's insane]
Wow, a decent map.

(I will name parts parted by your bookmarks. 7 is kiai)
I would personally use higher contrast between intensities. Lower spacing in part 3, as it just feels way too intense. If you nerf the calm part, it will make the normal sections stand out more, and reflect the music better.

Also the kiai doesn't have the energy it needs to be a kiai.

I personally don't believe flow is much of an issue, so don't take this comment with urgancy, but it is here if u wanna improve.
00:58:057 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps like this, while not much of a pain to play, and bad on it's own, is inconsistent with jumps elsewhere in the kiai like 00:55:880 (2,3,4,5,6) . Keep flow generally the same. I personally will just not use flow emphasis until you know entierly what you are doing (eg few ranked maps). You can try changing flow from section to section, but don't go for object-object emphasis like spacing.

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-11-22T12:53:26+00:00

mindmaster107 wrote:
[Fruity's extra]
Overall, not bad. Apart from the hitsounding, and jumps not being propperly spaced, you are on the right track. ty

The goal of hitsounding is to match a song. If the hitsounds begin to overpower the song, you are doing something wrong. Remember, map hitsounds to default hitsounds, or put the hitsounds you are using in your skin into the map's folder if you are not using default (you may be hearing it wrong, from skin related sounds). I just copied hitsounding lmao will modify things also I use default skin to hitsound just so you know

00:04:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jumps like this give almost no contratst to the music. I would space them decreasing in spacing throughout the pattern to show the song's immediate changes. it gives no contrast to the music as the guitar does the same chords lol

00:05:206 (2,3,4) - Keep spacing consistent. There is not much in the song justifying that this should be spaced so differently. ???

How to use spacing for emphasis 101:
00:06:606 (1,2,1,2) - This is weaker than 00:07:228 (1,2,1,2) - , so should be spaced less. it's not my way of emphasizing

00:08:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you using such a low intensity rhythm, when you used consecutive jumps earlier. Please keep intensity of objects and gameplay simular to the song. (eg, song intense, map intense, and never shall the twain cross) 1/4 chords = jumps and 1/2 chords = sliders

00:15:621 (2) - sounds distinct from 00:16:243 (2,2) - , so why is it also mapped with a slider? If the song changes, change your mapping.

00:17:798 (3) - Why is this spaced so low for a cymbal? just not my way on emphasizing things

00:21:683 (1,2) - Same with this ^

00:40:336 (5,6,1) - I would space 5 to 6 small, and 6 to 1 larger, as 1 is the downbeat (big white tick). y

00:41:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Intensity doesn't increase by this much. I would use sliders, as to not make the jumps in the kiai or elsewhere feel meaningless. drums take the lead here and I emphasize jumps with the drums in the kiai and pretty much anywere in the map except for other jumps where I emphasize 1/4 guitar chords

If you space like 00:49:197 (6,1) - for this sound, why didn't you continue spacing like that for 00:49:818 (3,4) ? Intensity changes should be gradual, while instrumental emphisis should be prominant object to object. ok

00:52:927 (8,1,2,3) - Stack properly for aesthetics oops

00:58:989 (6,1) - Spacing in the kiai feels random, as you seem to just space whenever you want. This is an example of a sound you space say here 00:57:901 (6,1) , and yet you space with blanket here. The easy way to space objects, is to choose an instrument to space to (like say large spacing for drums, and normal spacing for everything else). If you can do this, the map may actually reach rank standard :thinking: just not my way of seeing things, I like how spacing is in the kiai.

01:11:114 (4,5) - I would try and keep my map consistent. If you change ideas with no appreciation to the changes in the song, it defeats the point of mapping in a rhythm game (don't look at haitai). Choose some ideas you find best in the map, and keep it the same when the music is about the same (eg low and high intensity). did you just compare my diff to haitai

01:29:611 (1,2,3,1,1,1) - As you have never used NCs like this anywhewre else in the map, I instinctivly played it in 1/3 (as there was no telling what else it could be). This is clearly not your intention, which is why I would ask you to keep this a regular combo. just felt like it looked good, but ok

update :

fruity's extra

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realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-22T16:54:31+00:00

mindmaster107 wrote:
Here from my queue.
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/688504

If my modding feels more like a paragraph, it means your map has more general issues than specific (large or minor), so using stuff like time stamps would be redundant.

[Play NOW!!!]
This will never get ranked. Visuals and flow are complete nonsense for a majority of the map, with hardly any or no strong visual connection in patterns, and between them. The map is a mess of ideas, if there even were any, and I would try and copy the other difficuulties for ideas, as they have a better grasp on how to make a coherent map. i'm trash at mapping high difficulties

That sounds a bit too harsh, but lemme explain in better detail why I believe this is true.

There is an easy trick to organizing a map, no matter what concept you are using.
1 - Decide on a clear idea. This could be conventional mapping (eg. jumps and streams in an easy to play structure.), or it could be one with a gimmick (like complex flow ideas). No matter what it is, please stay consistent with your idea, unless the song changes massivly, which on this map I would argue is not enough. An example of big change would be stuff like completely new instruments being used.
2 - Remember you are creating a map which matches the song. The easy way to manage this is to match rhythm and spacing to intense instruments. Maybe only use streams for drum rolls, and 1/4 sliders for other 1/4 beats. Maybe space everything with low spacing, but space drum beats with large spacing, and cymbals with even larger spacing.
3 - Hitsounding is meant to be complimenting, not overriding. If you think it isn't you may not be on default sound samples.

Really, watch any pishifat video, but I think explaining the easy way to map anything, and you trying to build from there would help best for you.
i did watched this channel, it doesn't really help me mapping high difficulties.

Example of 1 - 00:15:000 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistent between snappings.
emphasizing the drum here, represented by a spacing increase
Example of 2 - 00:02:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you spacing it this wide for the beginning? Keep in mind, spaced streams are supposed to be for massive intensities, and are normally found in 6 star maps due to their difficulty to play.
it's supposed to be a 6*+ map in the first place not a 5,5* one. the high spacing in the beginning prove it.i changed a bit the spacing for a reason that you didn't mention about emphazing.
Example of 2 - 00:35:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I can vaugly tell you are following vocals, but remember how rhythm works. The instrument (yes vocals are an instrument) is the one you wanna activly map, while less important sounds should be covered with low spacing, or slidertails. Slidertails are alot weaker than sliderheads, which makes me wonder why you used a slider like 00:36:450 (4) .
the slider that you mentionned (4) start on a weak sound and end on a equal sound and follow the extended vocal here so it's ok. the reason why i placed a slider here is to impose a small loop flow.
Example of 1 - 00:44:922 (6,7) - Please never use 1/4 jumps. They are a gimmick which need to be properly introduced to players, and way above the ability for a beginner to map properly. Just stack the stack on 00:45:000 (7) .
changed a bit the placement, but need suggestions about this one.
Example of 1 - 01:10:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you were to keep the map consistently badly flowing, it would make sense. If you used bad flow in a section where you used conventional spacing before ( 01:08:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ), and not much musical difference, it just feels likerandomly placed objects than one matching a song.the pattern 00:55:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:58:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) for example are supposed to represent the same pattern music here, the reason why the pattern you did mentionned is different that because the part building up for the now loading vocals unlike the one that you mentionned 01:08:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) so it's normal to represent it with a different pattern here. Also do you mean this part having a bad flow ? 01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) the part that you did mention seems to flow correctly for me.

A rule of thumb to arguments, is that "can you make a valid argument against it"? If you can't then ur probs wrong. If there are ideas in here that I am contradicting, then explain why. If I can;t see a concept you are using, please make them clearer by being more consistent.

You can ask for a re-check if you remap it in PM.

thanks for mod !

FiddleBlue

287 posts

Joined February 2016

FiddleBlue 2017-11-22T22:25:28+00:00

Hi! This is my difficulty! Hope you like it

OwO

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My difficulty includes hitsounds, so if you wish to copy it to any diff, I'm ok with it.
Personally, I think the normal-hitnormal.wav should be removed but whatever.

I'm also using a custom bg
~~https://initiate.alphacoders.com/images/715/cropped-1366-768-715850.png?9446~~ Cuc already took it

New BG: https://initiate.alphacoders.com/images ... 5.png?9012

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,091 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2017-11-25T02:09:48+00:00

sorry for late

M4M
Easy!
00:01:787 (2,3) - bad follow
00:06:917 (3,4) - blanket?
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - this is a special rythem suggestion change to slider for new player
00:23:549 (2,3) - don't lap
00:25:414 (4,3) - ^
00:29:456 (1,2) - unrankable in Easy
00:46:399 (4,1) - ^
01:01:787 (4,2) - don't lap
01:08:005 (1) - ^
01:09:248 (3,2,3) - ^ this is unvisible for new player
01:24:326 (5,1) - add some note between those object
cute easy diff imo,but still need notice some part

July's Normal!
00:04:585 (1) - listen music careful,thay are same part,remove NC
00:05:829 (3) - this is different part,NC
00:10:803 (6) - NC
00:12:046 (7) - why you blanket this part...and 00:12:046 (7) - ~00:13:290 need some note
00:25:414 (5) - NC
00:28:523 (1) - remove NC
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - bad follow
00:59:922 (2,3) - don't lap
01:24:171 (1) - remove NC

Cuc's Advanced!
00:04:896 (6,7) - blanket?
00:19:507 (4,5) - stack

Hard!
00:07:538 (7,9) - don't lap
00:12:513 (1) - remove NC
00:15:466 (6,1) - don't lap on slider arrow that's unrankable
00:22:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad follow
00:56:813 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
00:59:300 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:274 (1,2,3,4) - bad lap
01:06:761 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:24:326 (4,1) - add some note

tohooz's Insane!
no hitsound?and I think volume can be higher
nice diff

Fruity's Extra!
00:05:206 (2,3) - put more far
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jump too random,not pretty good
DS need more improve,your DS is irregular

Play NOW!!!!
00:02:953 (4,1) - WTF
00:10:336 (2,1) - DS too short
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - overmap...
00:20:673 (2,3) - ^
01:10:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a counterclockwise,but 01:11:735 (1) - is a clockwise,that's pretty uncomfortable

GL

Last edited by Plus4j 2017-11-25T05:35:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2017-11-25T02:45:01+00:00

Hello from queue!
Most of my mod will be personal opinion,

General

Double check your aimod
Having variate BG for each diffs might be nice, but the overall BGs size is rather big for a map that doesn't have a video. So my sugestion you should compress or change the extension of the BGs from .png into .jpg as it can reduce the size of the .osz

Beginner

00:00:855 (1) - That slider can be stop on 00:02:720 - to make it fit with the drum
00:03:342 (2) - and 00:05:829 (5) - New combo as it have diffrent music on that part
00:04:430 (3,4,5,1,2) - Imo, your rhythm choice on that part is rather too hard for a beginner. I think you can try to follow the main drum instead the guitar since it should be played easier than the Easy diff
00:36:295 (4,2) - Unnecesary overlap imo, maybe you can try to rearrange the notes or something to make it neater
00:40:647 (4) - Touching the HP bar while testing, you can try to move it somewhere else I guess
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music

Easy

00:09:559 (3,1,2,3,4) - The placement too crowded I guess, also the overlap between 00:09:559 (3,3) - make the gameplay not intuituve or hard for an Easy
00:23:549 (2,3) - Could be neater if the slider border not touching each other
00:29:456 (1,2) - Stacking under a slider isn't recomended for an Easy, furthermore there's a similiar stacking like this one 00:46:399 (4,1) - which have diffrent time-distance. I think most new players will get confused when playing this diff
00:48:108 (2,4) - The shape could be paralel to make it neater https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616770
01:19:663 (4,1) - Try to fix the blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616781
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music

Normal

00:28:212 (1,1,2) - Broken new combo
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - The placement not comfortable to play imo, it's like the movement on 00:33:186 (5,1) - just happen to be too sharp without a reason
00:37:849 (7) - The reverse almost hidden by the previous slider, it makes the gameplay not intuitive for a Normal diff
00:47:798 (1,2) - You can try to ctrl+g that two to produce a better rhythm, since the big tick here 00:48:108 - should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616829
00:59:300 (1,2,3) - Could be a blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616839
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music

Good luck on further process!

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-11-25T04:05:55+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
Cuc's Advanced!
00:04:896 (6,7) - blanket? ~~hm.... but here blanket okay o.o,~~ okay, slightly changed
00:19:507 (4,5) - stack fixed

upd8

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54404
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3342,10803,13290,15777,18264,20440,23238,33186,43756,48108,55570,62720,65518,70181,75466,85414,90388
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Now Loading!!!!
TitleUnicode:Now Loading!!!!
Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
Creator:realy0_
Version:Cuc's Advanced!
Source:NEW GAME!
Tags:fourfolium ed July-San FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz
BeatmapID:1459857
BeatmapSetID:685360

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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hm... interesting situation with BG's, but i like BG on my diff :3

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-25T07:10:17+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
sorry for late

M4M
Easy!
00:01:787 (2,3) - bad follow
00:06:917 (3,4) - blanket?
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - this is a special rythem suggestion change to slider for new player
00:23:549 (2,3) - don't lap
00:25:414 (4,3) - ^
00:29:456 (1,2) - unrankable in Easy
00:46:399 (4,1) - ^
01:01:787 (4,2) - don't lap
01:08:005 (1) - ^
01:09:248 (3,2,3) - ^ this is unvisible for new player
01:24:326 (5,1) - add some note between those object
cute easy diff imo,but still need notice some part

July's Normal!
00:04:585 (1) - listen music careful,thay are same part,remove NC
00:05:829 (3) - this is different part,NC
00:10:803 (6) - NC
00:12:046 (7) - why you blanket this part...and 00:12:046 (7) - ~00:13:290 need some note
00:25:414 (5) - NC
00:28:523 (1) - remove NC
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - bad follow
00:59:922 (2,3) - don't lap
01:24:171 (1) - remove NC

Cuc's Advanced!
00:04:896 (6,7) - blanket?
00:19:507 (4,5) - stack

Hard!
00:07:538 (7,9) - don't lap
00:12:513 (1) - remove NC
00:15:466 (6,1) - don't lap on slider arrow that's unrankable
00:22:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad follow
00:56:813 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
00:59:300 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:274 (1,2,3,4) - bad lap
01:06:761 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:24:326 (4,1) - add some note

tohooz's Insane!
no hitsound?and I think volume can be higher
nice diff

Fruity's Extra!
00:05:206 (2,3) - put more far
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jump too random,not pretty good
DS need more improve,your DS is irregular

Play NOW!!!!
00:02:953 (4,1) - WTF
00:10:336 (2,1) - DS too short
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - overmap...
00:20:673 (2,3) - ^
01:10:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a counterclockwise,but 01:11:735 (1) - is a clockwise,that's pretty uncomfortable

GL

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from queue!
Most of my mod will be personal opinion,

General
Double check your aimod
Having variate BG for each diffs might be nice, but the overall BGs size is rather big for a map that doesn't have a video. So my sugestion you should compress or change the extension of the BGs from .png into .jpg as it can reduce the size of the .osz
Beginner
00:00:855 (1) - That slider can be stop on 00:02:720 - to make it fit with the drum
00:03:342 (2) - and 00:05:829 (5) - New combo as it have diffrent music on that part
00:04:430 (3,4,5,1,2) - Imo, your rhythm choice on that part is rather too hard for a beginner. I think you can try to follow the main drum instead the guitar since it should be played easier than the Easy diff
00:36:295 (4,2) - Unnecesary overlap imo, maybe you can try to rearrange the notes or something to make it neater
00:40:647 (4) - Touching the HP bar while testing, you can try to move it somewhere else I guess
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music
Easy
00:09:559 (3,1,2,3,4) - The placement too crowded I guess, also the overlap between 00:09:559 (3,3) - make the gameplay not intuituve or hard for an Easy
00:23:549 (2,3) - Could be neater if the slider border not touching each other
00:29:456 (1,2) - Stacking under a slider isn't recomended for an Easy, furthermore there's a similiar stacking like this one 00:46:399 (4,1) - which have diffrent time-distance. I think most new players will get confused when playing this diff
00:48:108 (2,4) - The shape could be paralel to make it neater https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616770
01:19:663 (4,1) - Try to fix the blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616781
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music
Normal
00:28:212 (1,1,2) - Broken new combo
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - The placement not comfortable to play imo, it's like the movement on 00:33:186 (5,1) - just happen to be too sharp without a reason
00:37:849 (7) - The reverse almost hidden by the previous slider, it makes the gameplay not intuitive for a Normal diff
00:47:798 (1,2) - You can try to ctrl+g that two to produce a better rhythm, since the big tick here 00:48:108 - should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616829
00:59:300 (1,2,3) - Could be a blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616839
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music
Good luck on further process!

thanks for mod both but sadly i can't update/reply until probably mid-december, also for gds, if you dont really like yours bgs, just post it with the new bg

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blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-11-25T09:22:43+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
Fruity's Extra!
00:05:206 (2,3) - put more far would kill lining pattern
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jump too random,not pretty good flow isn't
DS need more improve,your DS is irregular DS isn't needed for extra diffs, especially when the non ds things are logic
GL

thanks for the mod

pacsu

463 posts

Joined March 2015

pacsu 2017-11-25T13:42:21+00:00

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from queue!
Most of my mod will be personal opinion,

Beginner
00:00:855 (1) - That slider can be stop on 00:02:720 - to make it fit with the drum ok
00:03:342 (2) - and 00:05:829 (5) - New combo as it have diffrent music on that part understand
00:04:430 (3,4,5,1,2) - Imo, your rhythm choice on that part is rather too hard for a beginner. I think you can try to follow the main drum instead the guitar since it should be played easier than the Easy diff too hard for a beginner ? Beginners players are bad xD fixed
00:36:295 (4,2) - Unnecesary overlap imo, maybe you can try to rearrange the notes or something to make it neater i made a stack
00:40:647 (4) - Touching the HP bar while testing, you can try to move it somewhere else I guess fixed
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the musicok
Good luck on further process!

update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54404
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Now Loading!!!!
TitleUnicode:Now Loading!!!!
Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
Creator:realy0_
Version:pacsu's Beginner!
Source:NEW GAME!
Tags:fourfolium ed July-San FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz
BeatmapID:1477930
BeatmapSetID:685360

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CircleSize:2.3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
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THANKS FOR THE MOD

July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-11-29T04:37:14+00:00

ookey

My diff
https://puu.sh/yvDp1/1d29002971.osu

Shiranai

Normal
00:28:212 (1,1,2) - Broken new combo [/color]
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - The placement not comfortable to play imo, it's like the movement on 00:33:186 (5,1) - just happen to be too sharp without a reason I did not understand
00:37:849 (7) - The reverse almost hidden by the previous slider, it makes the gameplay not intuitive for a Normal diff fix i guess
00:47:798 (1,2) - You can try to ctrl+g that two to produce a better rhythm, since the big tick here 00:48:108 - should be clickable [/color] https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616829
00:59:300 (1,2,3) - Could be a blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616839 I did not understand
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music Fix

Hey lululu

July's Normal!
00:04:585 (1) - listen music careful,thay are same part,remove NC [/color]
00:05:829 (3) - this is different part,NC fix
00:10:803 (6) - NC fix
00:12:046 (7) - why you blanket this part...and 00:12:046 (7) - ~00:13:290 need some note fix i guess
00:25:414 (5) - NC fix
00:28:523 (1) - remove NC fix
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - bad follow fix
00:59:922 (2,3) - don't lap fix?
01:24:171 (1) - remove NC fix

Last edited by [deleted user] , edited 2 times in total.

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-29T06:49:44+00:00

spending kudos cuz i have too much kudos

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,091 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2017-11-29T13:22:29+00:00

July - San wrote:
ookey

My diff
https://puu.sh/yvDp1/1d29002971.osu

Shiranai

Normal
00:28:212 (1,1,2) - Broken new combo [/color]
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - The placement not comfortable to play imo, it's like the movement on 00:33:186 (5,1) - just happen to be too sharp without a reason I did not understand
00:37:849 (7) - The reverse almost hidden by the previous slider, it makes the gameplay not intuitive for a Normal diff fix i guess
00:47:798 (1,2) - You can try to ctrl+g that two to produce a better rhythm, since the big tick here 00:48:108 - should be clickable [/color] https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616829
00:59:300 (1,2,3) - Could be a blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616839 I did not understand
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music Fix

Hey lululu

July's Normal!
00:04:585 (1) - listen music careful,thay are same part,remove NC [/color]
00:05:829 (3) - this is different part,NC fix
00:10:803 (6) - NC fix
00:12:046 (7) - why you blank this part...and 00:12:046 (7) - ~00:13:290 need some note fix i guess
00:25:414 (5) - NC fix
00:28:523 (1) - remove NC fix
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - bad follow fix
00:59:922 (2,3) - don't lap fix?
01:24:171 (1) - remove NC fix

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,091 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2017-11-29T13:23:56+00:00

WTF bug

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-11-29T17:13:48+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
sorry for late

M4M
Easy!
00:01:787 (2,3) - bad follow
changed a bit the rhythm
00:06:917 (3,4) - blanket?
oops fixed
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - this is a special rythem suggestion change to slider for new player
idk, the drums seems previsible for me
00:23:549 (2,3) - don't lap
00:25:414 (4,3) - ^
increased the ds since it's not the easiest difficulty anymore
00:29:456 (1,2) - unrankable in Easy
00:46:399 (4,1) - ^
idk where you find that in the ranking criteria but i only changed the first one, the second one have a 2/1 gap beween these 2 objects
01:01:787 (4,2) - don't lap
fixed
01:08:005 (1) - ^
01:09:248 (3,2,3) - ^ this is unvisible for new player
i can't, but normally it's fine
01:24:326 (5,1) - add some note between those object
the guitar doesn't play a note there so no object
cute easy diff imo,but still need notice some part thanks and wut xd

Hard!
00:07:538 (7,9) - don't lap
they are stacked on 00:06:917 (5) -
00:12:513 (1) - remove NC
the guitar stop playing here so that why there is a NC
00:15:466 (6,1) - don't lap on slider arrow that's unrankable
?
00:22:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad follow
moved down a bit
00:56:813 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
00:59:300 (1,2,3,4) - ^
to emphasize these notes, it's definitely playable with HR here
01:04:274 (1,2,3,4) - bad lap
it's a cool pattern :'c
01:06:761 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) - ^
^
01:24:326 (4,1) - add some note
same reason as easy

Play NOW!!!!
00:02:953 (4,1) - WTF
watt da fuu?
00:10:336 (2,1) - DS too short
increased
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - overmap...
00:20:673 (2,3) - ^
the drums emphasize them so ds increase
01:10:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a counterclockwise,but 01:11:735 (1) - is a clockwise,that's pretty uncomfortable
i find that it's really unconfortable with that changes also it would be a bit monotomous to keep the same counterclockwise flow, the vocals (now loading) justify the break of that clock flow

GL

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from queue!
Most of my mod will be personal opinion,

General
Double check your aimod
Having variate BG for each diffs might be nice, but the overall BGs size is rather big for a map that doesn't have a video. So my sugestion you should compress or change the extension of the BGs from .png into .jpg as it can reduce the size of the .osz
i can't do that for now, i will do that later

Easy
00:09:559 (3,1,2,3,4) - The placement too crowded I guess, also the overlap between 00:09:559 (3,3) - make the gameplay not intuituve or hard for an Easy
changed a bit the placement
00:23:549 (2,3) - Could be neater if the slider border not touching each other
fixed by a ds increase
00:29:456 (1,2) - Stacking under a slider isn't recomended for an Easy, furthermore there's a similiar stacking like this one 00:46:399 (4,1) - which have diffrent time-distance. I think most new players will get confused when playing this diff
mentionned already and fixed
00:48:108 (2,4) - The shape could be paralel to make it neater https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616770
aligned
01:19:663 (4,1) - Try to fix the blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616781
fixed
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music
how i did not notice it ????

Good luck on further process!

had to double post for this :c

July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-11-29T17:52:16+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
WTF bug

if I tried to fix it but it does not react xd

I hope you understand, if I can not re-post :b

July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-11-29T18:00:19+00:00

ookey

My diff
https://puu.sh/yvDp1/1d29002971.osu

Shiranai

Normal
00:28:212 (1,1,2) - Broken new combo hmm?
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - The placement not comfortable to play imo, it's like the movement on 00:33:186 (5,1) - just happen to be too sharp without a reason I did not understand
00:37:849 (7) - The reverse almost hidden by the previous slider, it makes the gameplay not intuitive for a Normal diff fix i guess
00:47:798 (1,2) - You can try to ctrl+g that two to produce a better rhythm, since the big tick here 00:48:108 - should be clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616829 Yeah! you right
00:59:300 (1,2,3) - Could be a blanket perhaps osu.ppy.sh/ss/9616839 I did not understand
01:25:414 (1) - The spinner should be end here 01:30:233 - due to the music Fix

Hey lululu

July's Normal!
00:04:585 (1) - listen music careful,thay are same part,remove NC fix
00:05:829 (3) - this is different part,NC fix
00:10:803 (6) - NC fix
00:12:046 (7) - why you blanket this part...and 00:12:046 (7) - ~00:13:290 need some note fix i guess
00:25:414 (5) - NC fix
00:28:523 (1) - remove NC fix
00:31:943 (3,4,5,1) - bad follow fix
00:59:922 (2,3) - don't lap fix?
01:24:171 (1) - remove NC fix

(sorry for the re-post, my mouse is not very good and I double click, and when I put the colors I double click and I do not realize xd)

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-11-29T18:27:51+00:00

Please guys, avoid multiple messages and edit/delete incorrect messages.
It spams my gmail like crazy.

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,091 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2017-11-30T05:30:03+00:00

july
00:12:046 (7) - why you blanket this part...
not blanket its blank sorry

Artemis99

86 posts

Joined October 2015

Artemis99 2017-12-03T18:16:33+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
sorry for late

tohooz's Insane!
no hitsound?and I think volume can be higher
nice diff

GL

now there is

update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54404
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3342,13290,23160,33186,48108,55570,75544,85414,90388
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Now Loading!!!!
TitleUnicode:Now Loading!!!!
Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
Creator:realy0_
Version:tohooz's Insane!
Source:NEW GAME!
Tags:fourfolium ed July-San FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz pacsu FiddleBlue
BeatmapID:1469270
BeatmapSetID:685360

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Artemis99

86 posts

Joined October 2015

Artemis99 2017-12-03T18:37:15+00:00

mindmaster107 wrote:
Here from my queue.
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/688504

[toohooz's insane]
Wow, a decent map.

(I will name parts parted by your bookmarks. 7 is kiai)
I would personally use higher contrast between intensities. Lower spacing in part 3, as it just feels way too intense. If you nerf the calm part, it will make the normal sections stand out more, and reflect the music better. I don't think I should lower the spacing in part 3 as it's more intense than part 2. However part 4 had a littlebit too high spacing so I lowered it a little

Also the kiai doesn't have the energy it needs to be a kiai. tried increasing the spacing a little. I can't really increase it too much if i want to keep the sr below 5

I personally don't believe flow is much of an issue, so don't take this comment with urgancy, but it is here if u wanna improve.
00:58:057 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps like this, while not much of a pain to play, and bad on it's own, is inconsistent with jumps elsewhere in the kiai like 00:55:880 (2,3,4,5,6) . Keep flow generally the same. I personally will just not use flow emphasis until you know entierly what you are doing (eg few ranked maps). You can try changing flow from section to section, but don't go for object-object emphasis like spacing.I reversed 2 and 3 and adjusted it a little. I believe that fixes it.

Thanks for the mod!

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Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2017-12-04T07:43:32+00:00

Hi M4M reply mod:

In general, this difficulty is a mashup of different concepts that does not make sense as a whole. Some of the things that you map completely break expectations in a way that doesn't allow the song to buildup properly. You forget to consider rotational flow for many of your objects, causing people to miss unnecessarily. Finally, calm down on the spaced triples.

The flow and spacing issues occur widely throughout all maps in the set.

This is what I have for the top difficulty:

00:00:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this so high spaced? The beginning of the song is way calmer than the rest of the song. There is no contrast between the spacing of the exciting parts of the song and the calmer parts of the song.

00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - We have high spacing, and then a sudden four slow sliders. Increase sv, or replace with some triangles. I would prefer 3 triangles of circles, increasing in size.

00:15:621 (1,2,3) - No. The calmest part of the map, and you're using cross screen triples?

00:18:031 (2) - I don't hear anything in the music that represents this circle. Overmapped.

00:20:751 (3) - The slider shape seems so out of place. You might want to fix it so the map looks more uniform.

00:44:766 (4,5,6) - Why did you put a triangle? I don't see how it represents the music...

00:54:481 (1,2,3) - The two circles are so hidden under the slider, you have to pay real close attention to get those ones. Put them somewhere else.

01:00:233 (5) - The slider tail is on an important beat, why would you do that? I would put a slider head here or a circle.

01:03:031 (4,5,6,7) - Ugg... Terribly uncomfortable flow. Considering the rest of the map is focused around comfortable flow, this is really out of place. Same with 01:04:274 (1,2,3) -

01:07:927 (5) - Someone playing the song would not read that as a triple, and would miss for no reason.

01:11:424 (6,7,1) - Bad flow with switching rotation.

01:30:077 (1,2) - Wayyy too high spacing for the map.

One last thing: unless you're going for loved on this map, you don't need to invest any more kudosus in the map. The strictest Beatmap Nominators only ask for 20, and you have 40 on this.

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-04T16:59:23+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
Hi M4M reply mod:

In general, this difficulty is a mashup of different concepts that does not make sense as a whole. Some of the things that you map completely break expectations in a way that doesn't allow the song to buildup properly. You forget to consider rotational flow for many of your objects, causing people to miss unnecessarily. Finally, calm down on the spaced triples.

The flow and spacing issues occur widely throughout all maps in the set.

This is what I have for the top difficulty:

00:00:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this so high spaced? The beginning of the song is way calmer than the rest of the song. There is no contrast between the spacing of the exciting parts of the song and the calmer parts of the song.
reduced the spacing between 1 and 2

00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - We have high spacing, and then a sudden four slow sliders. Increase sv, or replace with some triangles. I would prefer 3 triangles of circles, increasing in size.
changed a bit the placements for aesthics only, if pp are complaining again for this with a wall of text justification then i'll change.

00:15:621 (1,2,3) - No. The calmest part of the map, and you're using cross screen triples?
reducing the spacing 1000 times cuz people complain about this
00:18:031 (2) - I don't hear anything in the music that represents this circle. Overmapped.
that's true but i don't want to make a triple here cuz it's different from above
00:20:751 (3) - The slider shape seems so out of place. You might want to fix it so the map looks more uniform.
changed a bit the placement
00:44:766 (4,5,6) - Why did you put a triangle? I don't see how it represents the music...
to represent the drums, a triangle is a way to represent it
00:54:481 (1,2,3) - The two circles are so hidden under the slider, you have to pay real close attention to get those ones. Put them somewhere else.
placed somewhere else
01:00:233 (5) - The slider tail is on an important beat, why would you do that? I would put a slider head here or a circle.
good question, that because i wanted to represent the 2 word with only 1 slider with a reversed arrow. reversed arrow cuz the vocals are extended.
01:03:031 (4,5,6,7) - Ugg... Terribly uncomfortable flow. Considering the rest of the map is focused around comfortable flow, this is really out of place. Same with 01:04:274 (1,2,3) -
that's because 01:03:031 (4) and 01:03:652 (7) - are really strong sound, represented by a breaked loop flow. as for 01:04:274 (1,2,3) -
they flow well enough and the vocals are still strong here
01:07:927 (5) - Someone playing the song would not read that as a triple, and would miss for no reason.
fixed
01:11:424 (6,7,1) - Bad flow with switching rotation.
see the justification of the mod above for this
01:30:077 (1,2) - Wayyy too high spacing for the map.
reduced a bit

why people are always complaining on the same thing without modding the rest of the diffs .-.

One last thing: unless you're going for loved on this map, you don't need to invest any more kudosus in the map. The strictest Beatmap Nominators only ask for 20, and you have 40 on this.kudos are useless lul

thanks ! also updated tohooz and july's diff

Last edited by realy0_ 2017-12-04T21:00:14+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Houtarou Oreki

303 posts

Joined March 2014

Houtarou Oreki 2017-12-04T17:19:22+00:00

Hi, mod coming from queue.

July's Normal!

00:13:290 (5) - I would add a circle here, there definitely seems be a need for a finishing beat –
00:35:673 (4,7,8,1,2) - Those notes overlap with each other too much, it makes it look not good (overlapping means that objects are in the same place while being close to each other in time) –
00:40:647 (2,4,5) - Same as above, overlapping –
00:43:445 (1,3) - These are also overlapping –
00:43:445 (1) - Move this one a beat earlier, again missing a finish –
01:00:855 (2,1) - I wont mention more badly looking overlaps.
01:11:424 (2) - This one's weirdly spaced –
01:21:373 (5) - This slider is not looking good. Make it a blanket around 01:20:751 (4) end-point –
If you don't know what a blanket is.
01:24:171 (2) - Somehow change this slider to better follow the music more, or make it into more sliders. I would do 2 sliders, the 2nd one ending one beat before the spinner –

Cuc's Advanced!

00:22:150 (4) - This one's nasty. It feels too close visually for how close it's in music to the previous note –
00:33:808 (1,2,3) - these 3 have a similar visual distance as 00:35:984 (4,5,6,7,8). It makes it hard to read what rhythm they represent. 00:37:849 (1,2,3,4) also seem to the player as having the same visual spacing, what makes them think it's spaced equally in time. I suggest putting more distance between each circle for those circle-groups: 00:33:808 (1,2,3,4) 00:37:849 (1,2,3,4) 00:40:336 (1,2) . Different rhythms of the same density without spacing indication can cause reading issues –
01:30:077 (2,3) - I would stack those, as previously rhythms like that were represented by being stacked –

Hope I helped even a little bit.

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-04T18:31:15+00:00

Houtarou Oreki wrote:
Hi, mod coming from queue.

Cuc's Advanced!
00:22:150 (4) - This one's nasty. It feels too close visually for how close it's in music to the previous note –
00:33:808 (1,2,3) - these 3 have a similar visual distance as 00:35:984 (4,5,6,7,8). It makes it hard to read what rhythm they represent. 00:37:849 (1,2,3,4) also seem to the player as having the same visual spacing, what makes them think it's spaced equally in time. I suggest putting more distance between each circle for those circle-groups: 00:33:808 (1,2,3,4) - 00:37:849 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:336 (1,2) . Different rhythms of the same density without spacing indication can cause reading issues –
01:30:077 (2,3) - I would stack those, as previously rhythms like that were represented by being stacked –
all accepted
Hope I helped even a little bit.

upd8

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242,104,8627,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Sutherland

305 posts

Joined October 2012

Sutherland 2017-12-05T13:41:46+00:00

Hi, here is modding from my queue :3

Play NOW!!!!

00:01:321 (3,4) - this circles are too far. just 4 move downward to 3
00:03:031 (1) - this circle is far from previous circle
00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,1) - stream is too hard although sr is only 6. how about decrease stream distance?
00:04:119 (5) - this part doesn't need such slider. i think https://puu.sh/yzQDe/4ea146cb5f.jpg this would be better
00:06:606 (3) - same with above
00:10:492 (1) - remove NC
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - you should change rhythm of slider like this: https://puu.sh/yzQKm/1f025ad571.jpg because rhythm of music doesn't follow your sliders
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - this distance is way to far.
00:15:466 (9,1) - remove overlap. then it will be more neater.
00:17:953 (1,2,3,4,1) - distance is way to far either, and rhythm isn't correct. https://puu.sh/yzQOA/d3c171978a.jpg this might be correct.
00:19:352 (5,6) - it will be better if you change this circles into sliders
00:20:440 (1,2,3) - distance is way to far.
00:22:461 (1) - 00:22:772 (1) - unnecessary NCs. plz remove them.
00:23:860 (4) - too-curved slider is not pretty in many situations. less-curved slider might be fits in that part
00:32:409 - there is missing rhythm here. put a circle on here
00:32:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - distance is way to far.
00:40:336 (8) - same with 00:23:860 (4) -
00:40:570 (9,1) - this circle should curved like the previous slider. it would be better
00:44:766 (4,5,6,7) - hard to read, and this part doesn't need streams.
00:48:730 (1) -,00:49:974 (1) - unnecessary NC
00:55:414 (2,3,4) -00:57:979 (5,1) - distance is way to far.
01:00:233 (5) - copy this slider 00:59:922 (4) -
01:12:901 (6,1) -01:13:523 (2,3) -01:14:145 (2,3) -01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance is way to far
01:16:243 (4) -01:18:730 (3) - same with 00:04:119 (5)
01:18:730 (3) - too close to previous slider.
01:22:927 (3,4,5,6) - same with 00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) -
01:30:077 (1,2) - ctrl+g this pattern.

good luck :3

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-06T16:22:22+00:00

ignore this

Last edited by realy0_ 2017-12-06T16:29:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-06T16:23:14+00:00

-Unlimit- wrote:
Hi, here is modding from my queue :3

Play NOW!!!!
00:01:321 (3,4) - this circles are too far. just 4 move downward to 3
emphazing the uppitch of the guitar note by spacing
00:03:031 (1) - this circle is far from previous circle
that's a jump stream
00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,1) - stream is too hard although sr is only 6. how about decrease stream distance?
i want to buff it cuz i want to raise the sr but everyone say nerfnerfnerf. also they are emphazing the guitar here.
00:04:119 (5) - this part doesn't need such slider. i think https://puu.sh/yzQDe/4ea146cb5f.jpg this would be better
it's to reverse the flow direction
00:06:606 (3) - same with above
^
00:10:492 (1) - remove NC
why not
00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) - you should change rhythm of slider like this: https://puu.sh/yzQKm/1f025ad571.jpg because rhythm of music doesn't follow your sliders
the notes of the guitars are extended so extended slider because there is any strong sound on 1/1 rhythm here.
00:15:621 (1,2,3) - this distance is way to far.
how many times pp want to nerf this
00:15:466 (9,1) - remove overlap. then it will be more neater.
intended
00:17:953 (1,2,3,4,1) - distance is way to far either, and rhythm isn't correct. https://puu.sh/yzQOA/d3c171978a.jpg this might be correct.
i know but i want to represent it in a different way. also reduced spacing a bit to be more coherent with the first stream.
00:19:352 (5,6) - it will be better if you change this circles into sliders
for variety, maybe if someone complains about this, i'll change.
00:20:440 (1,2,3) - distance is way to far.
reduced to be more coherent
00:22:461 (1) - 00:22:772 (1) - unnecessary NCs. plz remove them.
only removed 00:22:461 (3)
00:23:860 (4) - too-curved slider is not pretty in many situations. less-curved slider might be fits in that part
aesthics issue with 00:23:704 (3,6) if i do that
00:32:409 - there is missing rhythm here. put a circle on here
only following the cymbals here
00:32:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - distance is way to far.
nah, seems fine
00:40:336 (8) - same with 00:23:860 (4) -
same justification for this
00:40:570 (9,1) - this circle should curved like the previous slider. it would be better
it's sound dumb, but it's aligned with 00:40:025 (6) -
00:44:766 (4,5,6,7) - hard to read, and this part doesn't need streams.
redo from the precedent mod
00:48:730 (1) -,00:49:974 (1) - unnecessary NC
they are fine
00:55:414 (2,3,4) -00:57:979 (5,1) - distance is way to far.
kiai part so increased spacing, i try to be consistant with spacing here
01:00:233 (5) - copy this slider 00:59:922 (4) -
lol it's the same slider without the red anchor
01:12:901 (6,1) -01:13:523 (2,3) -01:14:145 (2,3) -01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance is way to far
not needed
01:16:243 (4) -01:18:730 (3) - same with 00:04:119 (5)
same justification
01:18:730 (3) - too close to previous slider.
good idea for being consistant with the beginning
01:22:927 (3,4,5,6) - same with 00:10:803 (1,2,3,4) -
same justification
01:30:077 (1,2) - ctrl+g this pattern.
subjective change, i'll keep the current pattern for now
good luck :3

omg plz stop farming kudos for only modding the last diff

thanks for mod

Lafayla

Nomination Assessment Team

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Lafayla 2017-12-07T05:11:39+00:00

Hello :3
mod from my queue

Easy

00:11:735 (3) - stack onto the slider better, off by a few pixels
00:33:186 (1) - this overlap doesn't look good, blanketing it would be much or just placing it anywhere else
00:43:134 - I would get rid of that slider and make this a circle
01:09:248 (3,3) - > 01:10:259 - this overlap is pretty bad, it would be a good idea to clean it up, i recommend fixing 01:08:005 (1) - this object because its the reason you are being forced into the tight corner or do something about 01:09:248 (3) - this object instead
00:55:880 (2,4) - i'm not a fan of these overlaps

July's Normal
00:32:720 - this overlap doesn't look good, you have 2/1 beats to work with so you can definitely make better placement for it
00:37:849 (7) - this overlap can be made into a neat blanket instead
00:43:134 - you have a symbol crash here thats not being mapped, im not sure what you are following at 00:35:673 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - , it seems like you are following guitar but then it seems like you are following vocals...?
01:01:476 - this overlap needs some fixing
01:03:652 (3,1) - this overlap too
01:16:709 (2,3) - blanket this to pretty it up
01:22:305 (6,1) - ^
also theres an it point that shows 1.25 sv, but you aren't using the 1.25 sv for anything

Hard
01:06:761 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing comes out of nowhere, it would be fine imo if you gradually led to this kind of spacing. Either you slowly increase spacing to reach this climax or you slightly reduce spacing of these
01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) - ^

FiddleBlue's Extra
00:35:984 (2) - would nc to distinguish different spacing for 00:36:139 (3) -

Play Now
a few flow issues, 01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - this plays really harshly and yet there is nothing deserving this kind of emphasis
01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - with stacking enabled, you can see how this flower can be fixed to look better

I wish you the best with the mapset!

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-07T07:39:15+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
Hello :3
mod from my queue

Easy
00:11:735 (3) - stack onto the slider better, off by a few pixels
isn't this already stacked ? i tried to restack but it doesn't change anything.
00:33:186 (1) - this overlap doesn't look good, blanketing it would be much or just placing it anywhere else
placed somewhere else
00:43:134 - I would get rid of that slider and make this a circle
not needed
01:09:248 (3,3) - > 01:10:259 - this overlap is pretty bad, it would be a good idea to clean it up, i recommend fixing 01:08:005 (1) - this object because its the reason you are being forced into the tight corner or do something about 01:09:248 (3) - this object instead
tried to change the ds to fix that cuz it overlap in any ways with the same ds.
00:55:880 (2,4) - i'm not a fan of these overlaps
fixed

Hard
01:06:761 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing comes out of nowhere, it would be fine imo if you gradually led to this kind of spacing. Either you slowly increase spacing to reach this climax or you slightly reduce spacing of these
01:09:248 (1,2,3,4) - ^
the vocals are consistant here so consistant spacing. why it's so spaced because it emphasize the vocals here.

Play Now
a few flow issues, 01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - this plays really harshly and yet there is nothing deserving this kind of emphasis
fixed ? my placement are really bad lol
01:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - with stacking enabled, you can see how this flower can be fixed to look better
you're the first one to say that is a flower :3 but idk where isthe enable stacks buttom

I wish you the best with the mapset!

thanks for mod

SenpaiKiseki

120 posts

Joined July 2017

SenpaiKiseki 2017-12-08T13:56:19+00:00

Begginer!
00:32:564 (4) - This note might be too low\
Easy!
00:36:761 (3) - Snap slider end on the next white tick, maybe the slider head too?
01:16:554 (3) - Snap slider on next white tick and maybe add a note on 01:16:399? It flows better and goes with the rythym well
01:19:041 (3,4) - This works better, make things follow the rythym please -> http://prntscr.com/hks0h6
Normal!
00:12:668 (3,4) - This doesn't fit here, maybe add another slider? Also please lower the hitsound volume on some parts
00:31:943 (3,4,5) - Raise this up a bit, it's uncomfortable
Advanced!
00:11:735 (2) - too low maybe
00:56:036 (2,4) - You could do without these, they don't really fit the song
Hard!
00:03:031 (5) - !? A normal slider would fit here right?
01:24:326 (4,1) - Too much space in between, it feels undermapped compared to the rest of the song
Insane!
01:03:497 (3) - Uncomfortably low
Fruity's Extra!
00:41:580 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not really a problem but maybe make the spacing lower to reflect this part of the song being low intensity?
Fiddleblue's Extra!
00:49:041 (4) - You think this is a bit too high?
Some of the spacings in the map are too high, consider making some smaller

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-08T16:00:57+00:00

SenpaiKiseki wrote:
Advanced!
00:11:735 (2) - too low maybe I think this is not really a big problem now, because for Advanced permitted use Normal-Hard moments, but can change later if i wanted
00:56:036 (2,4) - You could do without these, they don't really fit the song ~~probably, but i'm leave as is~~ okay, u right, changed slightly

upd8

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realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-08T16:54:37+00:00

SenpaiKiseki wrote:
Easy!
00:36:761 (3) - Snap slider end on the next white tick, maybe the slider head too?
there is a strong sound (vocals) on that red tick
01:16:554 (3) - Snap slider on next white tick and maybe add a note on 01:16:399? It flows better and goes with the rythym well
it's the same rhythm as 00:03:342 (1,2,3) i just varied the pattern hereand i indirectly fixed a pattern with your suggestion lol
01:19:041 (3,4) - This works better, make things follow the rythym please -> http://prntscr.com/hks0h6
^
Hard!
00:03:031 (5) - !? A normal slider would fit here right?
this slider is supposed to represent a stream, if i keep it normal, it would be undermapped
01:24:326 (4,1) - Too much space in between, it feels undermapped compared to the rest of the song
true cuz it's not a easy diff here, added something here

thanks for mod !
next time, separate the difficultys with spacing/bold etc so mappers doesn't mix up the issues with another difficulties.

gonna wait for gders for reply before i ask a bn

FiddleBlue

287 posts

Joined February 2016

FiddleBlue 2017-12-08T18:07:55+00:00

SenpaiKiseki wrote:
Fiddleblue's Extra!
00:49:041 (4) - You think this is a bit too high? It's the same as 00:48:419 (2) - just rotated 90 degrees. It's quite fine as the song is building up anyway.
Some of the spacings in the map are too high, consider making some smaller If you point them out and give a reason, sure; since the placements aren't that random.

Thx for mod.

updated some stuff

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@realy0_ If you want I can make this map as one of my M4M queue (not like my modding queue is opened, but it will be soon).

realy0_

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realy0_ 2017-12-08T21:41:51+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
@realy0_ If you want I can make this map as one of my M4M queue (not like my modding queue is opened, but it will be soon).

if you want, but it's not necessary
also i'll probably remap play now with a hitsound update cuz everyone complained about it

blobdash

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blobdash 2017-12-10T19:20:45+00:00

SenpaiKiseki wrote:
Fruity's Extra!
00:41:580 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not really a problem but maybe make the spacing lower to reflect this part of the song being low intensity? nah fine imo

for some reason I stopped getting email from all my subscribed thread.
dm moi sur discord si je répond pas après 1j realy

realy0_

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realy0_ 2017-12-12T11:21:43+00:00

readded july's diff, clean and not messy now.

Last edited by realy0_ 2017-12-19T09:19:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CucumberCuc

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Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-12T13:13:53+00:00

I think you need change the name of the difficulties in your mapset as "Play NOW!!!!!" is not the strongest in the mapset

realy0_

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realy0_ 2017-12-12T14:09:39+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
I think you need change the name of the difficulties in your mapset as "Play NOW!!!!!" is not the strongest in the mapset

Im remapping it, im just à bit slow now

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-12-12T15:36:55+00:00

also the update bug can be fixed by removing the diff, renaming the diff, reupdating, then rechanging the game and reupdating

Artemis99

86 posts

Joined October 2015

Artemis99 2017-12-19T08:06:05+00:00

SenpaiKiseki wrote:
Insane!
01:03:497 (3) - Uncomfortably low

It's not offscreen so I have no good reason to change its position. Generally speaking you need to find good reasons for changing object's position and "it's too low" isn't by any means a good reason. Ever heard of good editor space usage?

riptiondesc

29 posts

Joined July 2017

riptiondesc 2017-12-19T13:19:17+00:00

General

I know Hard is challenging but I think mapping a Light Insane would help improve the spread, unless tohooz's diff gets some spacing nerf to it's biggest jump sections (which I don't think it needs really)
please fix countdown inconsistencies

pascu's Beginner

00:10:803 (1,2) - i'd reconsider this rhythm but I don't have a suggestion for you since you don't really want to use 1/2 on a beginner - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9800995 from Doormat's Easy
01:12:979 (2) - what you've done with the gap is probably for the best, just consider a 1/2 repeat slider here, kind of sucks as 01:12:979 would be on a sliderend and you aren't really mapping vocal here but yea

seems like you mostly know what you're doing, probably need someone with more modding experience to pick this apart

Easy

00:50:595 (6,1) - worried about the gap before this spinner, though the spinner is pretty long so it might be ok
01:06:761 (3,4,1) - while I like this pattern, AR 4 makes this cause reading problems https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9801331
01:09:248 (3,1,2,3) - similar reading issue but maybe this one will be ok https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9801356

the AR is going to cause a problem for your Kiai, don't want a reading challenge on an Easy

July-San's Normal

00:12:202 (3) - not sure about this, 00:12:979 stands out a lot
00:15:155 (4) - if you're following the 'gak' vocal I think this should be on red tick 00:15:000, rhythm here is pretty weird

actually this whole diff seems weird rhythmically can you please have pm me when I'm online ingame I can't mod this atm as I don't understand it

Cucu's Advanced

00:35:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think you could rework this object placement
I like that you're consistent in your use of sliderhead stacks but consider where to change object placement when the song changes
Having trouble telling what you're following at the start of the kiai, but might just be my audio - check your rhythm on the first half of the kiai regardless

Hard

00:00:855 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this rhythm is really confusing, I suggest something like this https://i.imgur.com/oJBTQjz.png

going to have to come back to this diff as it goes pretty ham for a Hard but I like it, please just check your rhythm first and I'll give it a proper look

tohooz's Insane

aimod says there's some snapping errors
i like that this diff has jump sections that are actually patterns
00:25:414 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - it's up to you but i'd reduce spacing in this whole section, but different interpretations of the song etc. Your rhythm density is already low in this section so maybe it's fine..
could just be my sound but i can't hear the instruments very well in the kiai and some of your rhythm confuses me. I know this isn't a problem with Doormat's mp3. Hope you could explain what you're following here.

other than this general stuff this diff looks polished, couldnt find any mistakes outside of what aimod picked up

not modding the extras

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-19T18:14:21+00:00

riptiondesc wrote:
General
I know Hard is challenging but I think mapping a Light Insane would help improve the spread, unless tohooz's diff gets some spacing nerf to it's biggest jump sections (which I don't think it needs really)
please fix countdown inconsistencies unnecessary but k
Easy
00:50:595 (6,1) - worried about the gap before this spinner, though the spinner is pretty long so it might be ok
i could place the spinner on (6), but there is a strong beat to click here.
01:06:761 (3,4,1) - while I like this pattern, AR 4 makes this cause reading problems https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9801331
gonna raise the AR for that.i changed the color order so it's easier to read with more contrasted color.
01:09:248 (3,1,2,3) - similar reading issue but maybe this one will be ok https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9801356
it is perfectly fine

the AR is going to cause a problem for your Kiai, don't want a reading challenge on an Easy
raised the AR to 4,5. hope that people doesn't complain a lot on this.
Hard
00:00:855 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this rhythm is really confusing, I suggest something like this https://i.imgur.com/oJBTQjz.png
gonna explain this as notes. 00:00:855 (1,2,3,4) 1,2,3 the notes pitchs raise here so i put circles here. 4 is a slider because there is a note pitch spike, the notes of the guitar went 2,3,4 then 1,6. As for 00:01:787 (1,2,3) it's the same rhythm pattern as 00:00:855 (1,2,3,4) but i represented it in a different way for variety but it's the same rhythm pattern. 00:01:632 (4) doesn't have a circle because there is any clear guitar sound here.
going to have to come back to this diff as it goes pretty ham for a Hard but I like it, please just check your rhythm first and I'll give it a proper look
not modding the extras

Thanks for mod ! i like your clean mod

gonna do a some suggestions for the others gd's

July : raise the AR to 5 ?
Cuc : in the kiai part, when i listen only the hitsound with closed eyes, the similar musical sections of the song is mapped way too differently in note density. (considering that end sliders is 1 circle)
tohooz : considering reducing sv to 0,95 or less on this part 00:33:186 (1) while keeping the same ds (not visually), the song is less intense than the previous part.

Last edited by realy0_ 2017-12-19T22:45:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Artemis99

86 posts

Joined October 2015

Artemis99 2017-12-19T19:08:53+00:00

riptiondesc wrote:
tohooz's Insane
aimod says there's some snapping errors
fixed
i like that this diff has jump sections that are actually patterns
:)
00:25:414 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - it's up to you but i'd reduce spacing in this whole section, but different interpretations of the song etc. Your rhythm density is already low in this section so maybe it's fine..
going to leave it as it is for now. if it turns out to be necessary to lower the spacing I'll do it
could just be my sound but i can't hear the instruments very well in the kiai and some of your rhythm confuses me. I know this isn't a problem with Doormat's mp3. Hope you could explain what you're following here.
so generally i'm following drums but on some sections I follow vocals because if i followed just drums the kiai would be too boring

other than this general stuff this diff looks polished, couldnt find any mistakes outside of what aimod picked up
Well thanks for the mod:)

update

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-20T08:36:06+00:00

riptiondesc wrote:
Cucu's Advanced Nice fault ><
00:35:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think you could rework this object placement hmmm, maybe a bit change placement
I like that you're consistent in your use of sliderhead stacks but consider where to change object placement when the song changes maybe slightly changes
Having trouble telling what you're following at the start of the kiai, but might just be my audio - check your rhythm on the first half of the kiai regardless hmmm...

@realy0_
i think it's okay, but i'm add some sounds on objects

upd8

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Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
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Tags:fourfolium ed July-San FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz pacsu FiddleBlue
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pacsu

463 posts

Joined March 2015

pacsu 2017-12-20T16:53:14+00:00

riptiondesc wrote:
pascu's Beginner
00:10:803 (1,2) - i'd reconsider this rhythm but I don't have a suggestion for you since you don't really want to use 1/2 on a beginner - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9800995 from Doormat's Easy i try something
01:12:979 (2) - what you've done with the gap is probably for the best, just consider a 1/2 repeat slider here, kind of sucks as 01:12:979 would be on a sliderend and you aren't really mapping vocal here but yea better keep the circles for the intensity

seems like you mostly know what you're doing, probably need someone with more modding experience to pick this apart
thanks for the mod

update

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Title:Now Loading!!!!
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Artist:Yusadesu
ArtistUnicode:ゆさです
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Tags:fourfolium ed July-San FruityEnLoops CucumberCuc tohooz pacsu FiddleBlue
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realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-20T17:18:57+00:00

updated all diff & remapped last diff, now harder cuz it's supposed to be ~6,5* xd
(omg plz this is overdone)

Dubturt

508 posts

Joined March 2015

Dubturt 2017-12-21T10:56:30+00:00

requested light insane

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July - San

138 posts

Joined July 2016

July - San 2017-12-22T01:37:26+00:00

Hey
Sorry for the late.

riptiondesc mod

00:12:202 (3) - not sure about this, 00:12:979 stands out a lot
00:15:155 (4) - if you're following the 'gak' vocal I think this should be on red tick 00:15:000, rhythm here is pretty weird

Explain better next time, I have not made changes since I can not understand what you were trying to say to me.

realy0_ mod

July : raise the AR to 5 ? Yeah, Fix
Cuc : in the kiai part, when i listen only the hitsound with closed eyes, the similar musical sections of the song is mapped way too differently in note density. (considering that end sliders is 1 circle) Eliminate the hitsounds in the kiai moment and then, now it's better
tohooz : considering reducing sv to 0,95 or less on this part 00:33:186 (1) while keeping the same ds (not visually), the song is less intense than the previous part. fix i guess

Diff

https://puu.sh/yLtBC/8b1c28f572.osu

riptiondesc

29 posts

Joined July 2017

riptiondesc 2017-12-22T15:24:10+00:00

July - San wrote:
Hey
Sorry for the late.

riptiondesc mod

00:12:202 (3) - not sure about this, 00:12:979 stands out a lot
00:15:155 (4) - if you're following the 'gak' vocal I think this should be on red tick 00:15:000, rhythm here is pretty weird

Explain better next time, I have not made changes since I can not understand what you were trying to say to me.

Hey July San

for the first point,seem to be ignoring a prominent guitar sound (you seem to be following guitar) at 00:12:979
to make the gap 00:11:735 (2,3) - between these objects more readable you could also consider mapping the white tick 00:12:046 but I do recommend not ignoring 00:12:979

In the verse (check a couple of phrases in the verse) I wasn't sure on if you were prioritizing drums or vocals, which is why I pointed out the 'gak' vocal sound at 00:15:000 which currently isn't mapped

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-23T09:57:05+00:00

July - San wrote:
Cuc : in the kiai part, when i listen only the hitsound with closed eyes, the similar musical sections of the song is mapped way too differently in note density. (considering that end sliders is 1 circle) Eliminate the hitsounds in the kiai moment and then, now it's better

currently, I still will not remove hitsounds, without them, imo quite a bit boring

realy0_

1,737 posts

Joined August 2016

Topic Starter

realy0_ 2017-12-23T11:11:37+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
July - San wrote:
Cuc : in the kiai part, when i listen only the hitsound with closed eyes, the similar musical sections of the song is mapped way too differently in note density. (considering that end sliders is 1 circle) Eliminate the hitsounds in the kiai moment and then, now it's better
currently, I still will not remove hitsounds, without them, imo quite a bit boring

Actually july throught that my small mod to tohooz and you also concerned him

FiddleBlue

287 posts

Joined February 2016

FiddleBlue 2017-12-23T15:03:40+00:00

Yikes, I forgot to answer a mod.

Lafayla wrote:
FiddleBlue's Extra
00:35:984 (2) - would nc to distinguish different spacing for 00:36:139 (3) - Nah, it's readable.

Updated the kiai

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CucumberCuc

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CucumberCuc 2017-12-23T15:04:12+00:00

realy0_ wrote:
Actually july throught that my small mod to tohooz and you also concerned him

but it almost sounds like a ban to add hitsounds on objects in a kiai, why I shouldn't add them here if possible and I want to somehow highlight certain points of a song or to diversify some of the new sounds?
I can change it, but you need a more viscous reason, not sounding like a ban on the use (we can talk about it in-game or in PM in order not to flood the forum map)

Murmur twins

73 posts

Joined December 2015

Murmur twins 2017-12-23T16:33:11+00:00

Hi, from my queue, sorry for being late

I checked the diffs above insane level, below are some suggestions. If I didn't mention some diff(s), then this means everything is fine for me.

General

Lots of problem popped up using AiMod (tags, preview time, etc), These problem need to be fixed.

Fruity's Extra

00:12:668 (5,6,7,8) - Prefer enlarge the spacing for the jump;
00:32:409 (3,4,5) - Doesn't feel natural to me;
00:51:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as the first point I mentioned. Why suddenly makes the notes crowded? I think the spacing should be enlarged as well to emphasize the coming of kiai section.

Fiddleblue's Extra

00:48:108 (1) - Make it inclined a bit? Because before this slider there are no completely horizontal or vertical placements of notes or sliders, and it seems mess up;
00:54:637 (4,5,6) - Weird spacing?

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