1. Normal (1.87 stars, 290 notes)
2. One More Night (3.01 stars, 389 notes)

• Modders <3

  Katyusha
  Mir
  HyrdoCannon13
  Samcircus
  Nexikhu
  ColdTooth
  Nherantelon
  Net0
  The Ash Raichu
  WooWooWoo
  _orange
  Bubblun
  Renumi
  SignOfAge
  Neoskylove
  CuteFunnyCat
  dark_assassin16
  Chocobo
  Doj
  Mako Sakata
  iLaskee
  Jyris
  Alphabet
  F1r3tar
  TwillghtSparkle
  PolkaMocha
  P i n
  CharmCaster
  Dammond

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!~

Hard

Hard

1. 00:16:164 (1,2) – First notes already blanket problems. These aren’t the only blanket problems I saw when I played this. Recheck your map for blanket issues. It will save me time modding, and will encourage you to double check all blankets. You might even find one that’s bad that I didn’t catch, you never know.
   
2. Also, a lot of your sliders seem a little too curved. It’s personal preference really, but I think it makes the map look cluttered.
   
3. 00:48:550 (2,4) – Overlap.
   
4. 00:56:522 (1,2) – Stack is off.
   
5. 01:56:064 (1,2) – This is why I recommend a blanket check.
   
6. 02:01:296 (4,2) – Overlap here too.
   
7. 02:03:040 (3,4) – Intentional?
   
8. 02:03:289 (4,3) – Stack with end is off.
   
9. 02:11:759 (1,2) – Intentional? Try this: https://puu.sh/rCXMP/bc4b03b69d.png

Nice song I guess, and the map isn't too bad, just needs polishing.

HydroCannon13 wrote:

m4m

[ Normal]

1. 00:26:129 (3) - why here do you switch into mapping to the vocals though for 00:24:136 (1,2) you mapped the thing in the background? should be consistent Fixed
2. 00:35:347 (4) - try to make the slider beginning and end the same distance from the slider head of (3) for aesthetics unnecessary
3. 00:45:685 (1) - should start it on the red tick, when she starts holding "get" in forget it fixed
4. 01:04:495 (2,3) - 1/2 slider? imo no reason to make these parts more intense If more people agree I'll change for now unfixed
5. 01:09:477 (2,3) - ^ ^
6. 01:16:951 (5) - nc and remove nc on following object Fixed
7. 01:23:927 (5) - ^ ^
8. 01:18:944 (1) - remove nc and nc following object ^
9. 01:33:643 (2) - why have the strong vocal sound be a slider end that player doesnt click on? Good idea, fixed
10. 01:53:324 (3) - ^ ^
11. 02:15:247 (3) - unsure about this. maybe just have 2 circles 1/2 beat apart? Unchanged
12. 02:25:212 (5) - spacing is off to this object Fixed
13. 03:25:501 (1,1) - why break? no significant change in music for this to be justified imo Think i forgot to map that tbh, lol fixed

[ Hard]

1. 00:26:129 (1,2,3,4) - another instance here where you start mapping vocals out of nowhere :/ Fixed
2. 00:49:547 (4) - slider end on prominent vocal, imo should be clicked Agreed, fixed
3. 00:52:287 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:53:324 (4) - ^^
5. 01:30:902 (5) - maybe have something on the white tick this slider runs over? Think it's fine, unchanged
6. 03:22:511 (4) - ^ ^
7. 01:33:767 (1) - start it on the white tick, thats where the "one more time" starts Fixed
8. 02:22:845 (1) - better to start the reverse slider on the previous white, and to not change the spacing of the stream Good idea
9. 02:34:181 (2) - watch the overlap with previous slider fix
10. 03:16:532 (3) - ^ Fix
11. 03:20:518 (2) - ^ another one
12. 03:15:038 (2,1,2) - feels so random to start mapping 1/2 here. should be 1/2 from when the break ends Good idea, fixed

Thats all, very nice map and ty for m4ming Thanks for modding my map

good luck ranking!

1. 01:04:744 (3) - move up to form a triangle: https://puu.sh/rK1nw/48fa5ecb3e.PNG
2. 01:06:488 (3) - similarly: https://puu.sh/rK1wt/551750fb27.PNG
3. 01:15:954 (1) - curve should be like this in relation to 01:14:958 (1): https://puu.sh/rK1Bw/f66175b169.PNG
4. 01:18:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - strange shape of stream
5. 01:56:064 (1,2,3) - better like this: https://puu.sh/rK1MI/9c240c6654.PNG
6. 02:23:717 (2) - It's hard to see, hidden under the repeating slider. I like this better (notice the numbering changes): https://puu.sh/rK0KF/04f6577a49.PNG
7. 02:47:634 - This seems like a good place to introduce some single taps, since the break is a little too long IMO.

samcircus wrote:

[Hard]
All in all, I enjoyed the map, but the geometry has room for improvement. For example, jumps could form more eye-pleasing patterns, and the curvature of some streams and sliders could be more subtle. It's not easy to explain, but I would suggest studying the shapes in something like this monstrata map.

1. 01:04:744 (3) - move up to form a triangle: https://puu.sh/rK1nw/48fa5ecb3e.PNG Just an Isosceles triangle
2. 01:06:488 (3) - similarly: https://puu.sh/rK1wt/551750fb27.PNG ^
3. 01:15:954 (1) - curve should be like this in relation to 01:14:958 (1): https://puu.sh/rK1Bw/f66175b169.PNG Fixed good find
4. 01:18:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - strange shape of stream Will wait for 2nd opinion
5. 01:56:064 (1,2,3) - better like this: https://puu.sh/rK1MI/9c240c6654.PNG ^
6. 02:23:717 (2) - It's hard to see, hidden under the repeating slider. I like this better (notice the numbering changes): The approach circle should be enough to see ithttps://puu.sh/rK0KF/04f6577a49.PNG
7. 02:47:634 - This seems like a good place to introduce some single taps, since the break is a little too long IMO.

Katyusha wrote:

Hey!
M4M request from my Q!

Normal:
00:16:164 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket: http://i.imgur.com/KvByHCr.png

00:18:655 (4,1) - we can improve the look of this by doing:

00:18:655 (4) - first of all, move to x:204 y:180 then
00:19:651 (5) - X:140 y:328
and last:
00:20:150 (1) - x:228 and y:264, the second anchor to x:292 y:240 and third anchor (red one) x:292 y:168, that way you get a good blanket with 00:18:655 (4) - and looks a bit better.

00:28:122 (6) - Add NC
00:29:367 (1) - Remove NC (you has been NC'ing this way for this part, dunno why you change this one)

00:28:122 (6,1) - I would blanket this

00:35:347 (4) - This is a very sharp angle you're following http://i.imgur.com/E80iRUd.png , try something more subtle like: http://i.imgur.com/iyNGrTC.png (also I edited 00:35:347 (1) - to have a blanket with 00:34:101 (3) - )

00:48:550 (1,2) - Blanket

00:51:042 (5,1) - Same here

00:52:038 (1,2,3) - try: http://i.imgur.com/HBp60XX.png

00:59:014 (5,1) - blanket http://i.imgur.com/3CRjBsN.png

01:11:968 (1,2,3) - This feel really messy and kinda awkward to play because everything is so close together and the big overlap of 01:11:470 (2,3,1) - with 01:12:965 (3) - , also the changes changes weird at 01:12:716 (2,3) - , try a more "circular" approach like: http://i.imgur.com/SSA2ABB.png

01:13:961 (1) - Thry a 1/1 slider from 01:13:961 - to 01:14:460 - and a note 01:14:709 - (I say this because right now is kinda... underwhelming with 2 big sliders, I feel it could be a bit more dynamic )
01:53:822 (4,1) - These 2 should be the other way around, first the slider, and THEN the note, to follow the voice better, you could stack 01:54:569 (2) - so you don't have to much too many

01:58:306 (1,2) - try: http://i.imgur.com/GSscQCa.png

02:14:500 (2) - Try to make these slider more "smoth" to the way you want the player to move by making a more open curve like http://i.imgur.com/5XjdN8s.png , not only it will improve the overall look of the map by making it look cleaner, but is also better to play, and will avoid the "crowded" look some normal maps suffer from.

02:21:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the DS in this part, it varies from 0.9 to 0.8 back to 1.0 for no reason-

Hard:

00:35:347 (4) - CTR G

00:40:080 (1,2) - While not as important as in the normal (where the look of things is very important based on how together things are) I would still try to make good blankets, for some, this is the difference between an experienced mapper's map and one that's not, and while I'm not saying "you should blanket EVERYTHING!", is still a good way to make things look better http://i.imgur.com/jG0TN3b.png

Especially on parts like 00:54:529 (2,3) - or 00:58:515 (1,2) -

00:57:519 (3,4) - Stack these

01:01:505 (3) - fully stack the tail with 01:00:508 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/FbasG1Q.png

01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of music, this part is similar to 01:04:245 (1,2,3,4) - , but in 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - you decided to put a jump, why?

01:11:719 (2,3) - try http://i.imgur.com/yzkVfzo.png

01:15:954 (1) - Remember what I said about sliders being a more open and smooth? well this

01:22:432 (2,3,4) - move 3 to be more in ine with 2, curve 2 a bit more, and then move 4 http://i.imgur.com/Jv5ho1n.png

01:51:829 (1,2,3) - The thing about flow is that, while there's no set rules on how to do them (some like sharp angles, others oval, etc etc) you still need to search for a natural feeling, you accomplish this by thinking "How do I want the player to move while keeping it natural?" , take a look at your current flow http://i.imgur.com/wqMjgEF.png there's 1 big change of direction in 01:53:075 (3,4) - , a very crude one, now, this can be used? yes, but the question is, is there something happening in the song that makes you have this movement, try making the player have a constant movement like http://i.imgur.com/T13Qwu1.png on parts where the song is constant, change flow when the song calls for it, change on music section, voice intensity, etc etc.

Your diff is actually nice, but it can be improved in :

-How it looks (blankets, curves, etc etc)
-Some flow changes

Try to apply what I did in that last example in some parts where you feel it could be use, there's no need to remap, because again, the diff in terms of what you're mapping and the direction is very, VERY GOOD, just that some curved sliders could be improve so the change direction is not as hars as in some parts.


Gonna stop here, as there's nothing too wrong in the rest of the map, most would be me repeating what I said, search me in game if you need more tips


Good Luck with the map <3

THANK YOU FOR THE MOD

Nexikhu wrote:

I can't find anything to change in the Normal difficulty. Sorry!

Hard:

02:38:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make the stream a little bit more of a zig-zag pattern, or a tighter curve like the first one?

03:26:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same deal with this one. Yeah these streams were a little exSTREAM....sorry


I hope that helps a little, I see a lot of other tweaks have already been made.

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey there! From my queue of mintyness.

[General]

Nothing to see here.

[Normal]

I found some rather odd new combo inconsistencies. For example, 00:54:529 (1) - this shouldn't be NC, while 00:56:024 (2) - this would be. Another example would be at 01:59:801 (3) - , this should be a NC, while 02:01:296 (1) - this wouldn't.

00:45:810 (1) - Have spinner end at 00:47:305 - . This way, you can place a note atleast on 00:48:052 - .

01:13:961 (1) - This slider shape here doesn't match the curve on 01:14:958 (3) - 's slider. Polish 01:13:961 (1) - so the two together could look like a circle.

01:22:930 (3) - Put the 2nd sliderpoint at x92 y160. Flows a little better as it faces 01:23:677 (4) -

01:31:899 (4) - Make the curve a little less curvy, right now it looks pretty rigid.

01:58:306 (1,2,3,4) - I'unno, the beginning of this combo seems very weird. Consider making 01:59:054 (2) - a circle, and move 01:59:801 (3) - this back by one whole beat. Then you can make 02:00:299 - a 1/2 slider.

02:15:247 (3) - I think making this into a 1/1 slider would be much smoother.

02:23:717 (3) - Make this into a new combo, and curve it a little bit more.

02:31:440 (4) - Same as 02:15:247 (3) -

03:22:013 (2) - Curve this slider to flow with 03:22:511 (3) -

[Hard]

00:19:402 (3) - Suggestion: Curve this slider to 00:18:157 (1) -

00:32:108 (3) - NC?

01:57:310 (3) - Blanket 01:58:306 (1) - better

02:07:773 (1) - Blanket 02:07:275 (4) - better

02:10:763 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here isn't all the best. Consider making a jagged line with them, like this

02:19:233 (4) - Have this slider curve so it fits the semi-circle shape like 02:19:731 (1) -

02:27:703 (4) - Move the 2nd sliderpoint down a few notches down to blanket 02:27:454 (3) -

03:22:511 (4) - Move the 2nd sliderpoint just a tad to the left for a cleaner shape.


Overall, nice map

Net0 wrote:

New mapper mod from my queue

[General]

1. Tags It’s always interesting to add in the tags the musical genrer of your song. Putting the album name is correct, but song genrer is always important. Usually when you check the wikipedia of the artist you can always see check that out. Here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marina_and_the_Diamonds
   You actually add then to the tags indie pop new wave
2. About the song name and artist. Metadata it’s a important information on the game and in order to move your maps foward into the ranking system you’ll need a reliable source that gives the song name and artist properly. The best way to get those is from an official artist website; which in this case is this one:
   http://www.marinaandthediamonds.com/
   There you can see as well as here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDr7aTfBffU
   That the name of the song is Capitalized, so the song name should be “BLUE” not “Blue”
3. Now if you go into Song Setup/Design you will see a lot of options. Mostly, if you’re not getting a storyboard in your map, you have to disable the option that says “Widescreen support”. This is a guideline that almost everyone follows and it’s mention in a lot of mods.
4. This is what your playfield looks like in normal diff if you select all objects
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6413766
   And this is hard diff
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6413937
   A really good advice I can tell you is that whenever you’re mapping always consider using more and more of the playfield. Try to explore all of it not just the center.
5. About the visual aspect of your map that you asked some advice. I believe a lot of modders are telling you about overlaps and blanket issues. So I’ll just an example of what you should avoid in the normal:
   00:16:164 (1,3) – this objects are in the same combo and really near in the timeline, overlapping here is a bad idea. However if objects are really far from each other you should be ok 00:29:367 (1,3) – and 00:34:101 (3,2) - like this, but objects that are close not 00:36:094 (1,3) -
6. About your map combo structure;
   Whenever you’re mapping full version of music you need to prepare your mapping to fit into the song structure; let’s take a look at the lyrics;
   
   Lyrics

   BLUE
   Verse1
   We’ve broken up and now I regret it
   I said goodbye when I shouldn’t have said it
   I even cried but I never meant it
   And I don’t know why but I can’t forget it
   Pre-chorus
   Gimme love, gimme dreams, gimme a good self esteem
   Gimme good and pure, what you waiting for?
   Gimme everything, all your heart can bring
   Something good and true
   I don’t wanna feel Blue anymore (Blue)
   I don’t wanna feel blue anymore (Blue)
   Gimme, gimme…
   CHORUS
   Gimme one more night
   One last goodbye
   Let’s do it one last time
   Let’s do it one last time
   One more time
   Verse2
   No, I don’t love you
   No, I don’t care
   I just want to be held when I’m scared
   And all I want is one night with you
   Just cause I’m selfish
   I know it’s true
   Pre-chorusGimme love, gimme dreams, gimme a good self esteem
   Gimme good and pure, what you waiting for?
   Gimme everything, all your heart can bring
   Something good and true
   I don’t wanna feel Blue anymore (Blue)
   I don’t wanna feel blue anymore (Blue)
   Gimme, gimme…
   CHORUS
   Gimme one more night
   One last goodbye
   Let’s do it one last time
   Let’s do it one last time
   One more time
   Bridge
   I’m sick of looking after you
   I need a man to hold on to
   I’m bored of everything we do
   But I just keep coming back to you
   I’m sick of looking after you
   I need a man to hold on to
   I’m bored of everything we do
   But I just keep coming back to you
   CHORUS
   For one more night
   One last goodbye
   Let’s do it one last time
   Let’s do it one last time
   One more time
   OUTRO
   Gimme love, gimme dreams
   Gimme a good self esteem
   Gimme good and pure, what you waiting for?
   Gimme everything, all your heart can bring
   Something good and true
   I don’t wanna feel blue anymore (Blue)
   I don’t wanna feel blue anymore (Blue)
   Gimme, gimme, gimme anything
   But blue, blue, blue, royal Blue
   I just wanna know who I’m looking for (Blue)
   Gimme, gimme, gimme anything but blue, blue, blue…
   
   The song is structure by using Verses/Pre-Chorus/Chorus/Bridge/Outro
   In each of this sections you need to make some sort of consitent identity, it could be visual, but I recommend mostly that the rhythm and combos are similar in every verse/chorus. For example, let’s compare in normal how you have started both of your chorus;
   First Chorus
   01:19:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – two combos of 4 following the main downbeat
   Second Chorus
   02:23:717 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) – half a combo and another one.
   
   You can see that the combos are different as well as the objects used to map;
   I) http://puu.sh/rWgaS.jpg
   II) http://puu.sh/rWg8m.jpg
   
   Try to create consistency in your map and you should improve your easy-hard diffs a lot.

Sorry if this is not the mod you expected, if you need further information or a more oriented fixing mod contact me in-game. Good luck o/

Thanks for the mod! I'll try to implement this when I have the time

Chocobo wrote:

Hi, from my queue, NM req;
Sorry a bit late;

Hard

. OD higher? I'll get a second opinion later
. 00:59:014 (2,3) - blanket; fixed
. 01:09:477 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - spacing problem, and the layout can be better;
. 01:10:723 (4,1) - blanket; fixed
. 01:17:947 (1,2) - blanket; fixed
. 01:32:646 (4,1) - ^ ^
. 01:53:822 (5,1) - "give me" should be map a slider, but u separate them; Not enough emphasis to justify this
. 01:56:313 (2) - NC; If more people bug me about this I'll fix it
. 02:24:714 (3,4) - can make a blanket; Fixed
. 02:30:693 (1,3) - clap, for consistency; Good idea
Also, I noticed that the clap in the two kiai section are quite weird, they lack consistency and repeatability, adjustment may be needed;
. 02:55:606 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - can add clap here; Unnecessary and unpleasant imo unfixed
. 02:58:595 - u can make a turning here to emphasize "you";
. 03:12:546 (2,3,1,2) - unclean to me; fixed

A nice song and the map goes well too;
Still need some polishing, the placement of circles are not so good, that's where the map can improve a lot;
Good luck;

_orange wrote:

NM from my queue, sry im a bit late, also might be a short mod

[Hard]

00:22:143 (1) - the angle of this slider should lead to the circle
01:15:207 (2,3) - spacing error here
02:31:440 (1,2,3) - clap, clap, then finish like in before
02:36:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part has lower DS than other parts like it


[Normal]

02:31:440 (4) - 1/4 sliders don't really work well in normal diffs imo and you didn't do it in the previous part


that's it
gl!

Gabe wrote:

hi!

Just letting you know the artist and the title should be: Marina and The Diamonds - Blue

Good luck!

WooWooWoo wrote:

Hi from #modreqs ^^
There are a few things I do not quite understand, and I decided to write about it

Hard
00:46:806 (1) - This circle does not really fit with music. Try to use the long slider instead.
00:48:550 (2) - This slider is not very good, because at its end there is a noticeable sound. Also it does not really fit with the vocals. I propose to use a new slider at 00:49:049 - Same thing ar 01:52:327 (2) -
01:16:453 (3,5) - I suggest somehow to emphasize the vocals. For example, using stack circles
01:55:317 (2,3) - If you replace them with a slider, you'll be much better to follow the vocals. I talk so much about the vocals, because you, as I understand it, focused on it, so it's extremely important for this mapset.
01:56:313 (2,3) - I don't really like these sliders, because that way you're missing the important drum sounds on white ticks. Further in the song there are similar sliders. I'm not going to specify on it, but I suggest to think twice about it. In General, the song repeats itself (For example, a similar idea about emphasize vocals at 02:20:229 - and 02:21:226 - ), so you'll be able to find these places and fix them, if you like it

Normal
00:40:080 (1,2) - I recommend to choose convenient SV and spacing and try to avoid overlapping in this difficulty, especially in these unnecessary cases
01:16:951 (1) - This slider did not fit with the music. I talked about this in Hard. Do you really think this is the best option? Try something like this ( cursor at 01:16:453 - ) So much better for me.
02:01:296 (1) - I really don't understand why you're missing downbeat. After all, if you split it up into two sliders, it will turn out much better. All in all, what I said above about Hard applicable for this difficulty, so I don't want to repeat

I think that is enough. Have a good day. Good luck~

SignOfAge wrote:

Sorry for the long and not response, i admit im a fan of Modding, but not too much :3 I mod if i want to... im a bit Cruel at modding ;-;

SignOfAge wrote:

Here is my Mod

SignOfAge wrote:

Sorry for the long and not response, i admit im a fan of Modding, but not too much :3 I mod if i want to... im a bit Cruel at modding ;-;

Hard

1. Try making the Circle Size 3.6 Don't think it's necessary

00:50:045 (1) : Move this circle a little bit up Fixed, improved blanket
01:01:505 (3) : Move this Slider a bit too far but not that quite so far... not necessary
01:20:190 (2) : Set this as a New Combo Don't need it
03:15:038 (3) : Try moving this at the top of 03:14:789 (2) and move a little bit to the West ^

For Real, the Map is good.. I think there's nothing to Mod in it...

Thx for the mod <3 you've been added to the modders list

dark_assassin16 wrote:

Inc shit modding from queue!

[Hard]
* The spacing seems too strange for this. The DS changes throughout the map does not follow the intensity of the map, so I recommend putting DS changes where the song chnages in intesity. Didn't even notice those, thanks
00:25:880 - Maybe put a circle here to match the vocals. Trying to follow the music over the vocals, Unfixed
00:27:873 - ^ ^
00:33:104 - ^ ^
00:35:097 - ^ (Sad for a modder. I know.) ^
00:57:519 (3,4) - I think this looks better when stacked. I don't think it's necessary
01:09:975 (1,2) - Is there a point to this sudden DS change, because I don't seem to get it. Fixed
01:18:944 (1,2) - These can have a clap hitsound, not that it matters too much. Constant 1/4 claps are pretty obnoxiosu, unfixed
01:26:916 (5) - Why does this slider end on a blue tick? The sound clearly goes to a white tick. Didn't notice that thx
01:51:829 (1) - I think you should start this part with the same DS at the start, as the music is not louser, quicker, or more intense. Fixed
02:08:770 (1,2) - These overlap each other, which if often not used in Hard, but this actually looks nice. I would recommend changing the shape of the first slider to make it look something like this. Thanks for the compliment, Didn't change the slider bc I think it isn't needed
02:22:721 (1,2) - This is really not recommended, as you can't see the circle stacked under the slider very easily, You could just extend the slider by one tick and add the hitsound at the end instead. Fixed
02:29:447 (4,1) - Random DS change. ^
02:34:679 (3,5) - Remove the middle anchor on the second slider and shift it's direction a little bit to make it look nicer. ^
02:35:675 (5,1) - Random DS change.^
03:11:550 - This should be kiai'ed. Unfixed
From the end you can just map until the fade out, and you can just put a spinner there. I'll see what i can do

[Normal]
*This diff is a too much like an Easy diff in terms of spacing. You can make the spacing between the circles larger since this is Normal diff.
01:03:996 (1,2,3,4) - 01:03:996 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a little hard for beginners to read. Maybe separate the circles to make it playable for beginners.I don't think stacks are hard to read even for beginners
01:08:979 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:10:972 (1,2,3,1) - ^ ^
01:16:453 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
01:16:453 (4) - You can NC this. ok
01:16:951 (1) - Remove NC. ^
02:02:292 (2,3,4,5) - Patterns show up a lot. ^ as mentioned above
02:06:278 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:24:714 (4,5,6,1) - Basically just change these patterns. These take a bit of time to list here, so just look for them yourself and fix them. :p ^
03:11:550 - Kiai here. As mentioned in hard
03:27:619 - Same as Hard diff. Try to map to the fade. I'll try owo

Okay I'm done

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1. Make sure you don't have slider ends on big white ticks.
2. Go back and fix up your blankets

1. Couldn't really find much on this diff

Doj wrote:

M4M from your queue t/505480/start=90

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00:16:164 (1,2,3) - I like the pattern you have here. So why map 00:18:157 (1,2,3) - this one?
00:18:157 (1) - I see you really like this slider shape XD. You should try to put in more shapes.
00:34:101 (1,2,3) - I also like this pattern. Maybe you should switch up some of the patterns since the beat is the same from 00:16:164 - to 00:46:059 - . Things like 00:28:122 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:34:101 (1,2,3) - are good.
00:48:550 (2) - I think you should end this slider on the red tick 00:48:799 - here. If you do that, you can add a circle 00:49:049 - here. It feels good to hit a note here along with the drum and vocal.
00:50:045 (5,1,2) - Make this into 2 sliders? I think it would play better along with the vocals if were like this

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00:52:536 (2,3) - Maybe changing this pattern to the one below would work better. Again, being able to physically click a note on the vocal plays better imo

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01:20:439 (2) - I think you should make this a slider since it's on a snare. The same way you have 01:21:435 (5) - and 01:22:432 (2) - .
01:53:822 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern to ..

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This is the same was what i mentioned at 00:50:045 (5,1,2)

02:02:043 (1,2,3) - You should change pattern to this ..

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I think it'll play better.

03:06:816 - Why have a break here? I think you should map it. At tleast up to 03:09:557 - here
03:13:294 (2) - Having slider-ends on big white ticks are not good. You should change 03:12:546 (2,3,1,2) - this whole pattern to ..

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03:33:722 (3,4,5) - Change this pattern to ..

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whew. ok.

1. Make sure you don't have slider ends on big white ticks.
2. Go back and fix up your blankets

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00:16:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you start 00:20:150 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern here? The notes you have aren't following any rhythm from what I can see
03:06:816 - I think you should map this break at least up to 03:09:557 - here

1. Couldn't really find much on this diff

Side Note: Why don't you have any hitsounds? I think you should add some !

Thanks! I'll have your mod up some time this week, lets say by Wednesday

1. Your both diff lack of hitsound, well you already put some clap but that rather a random placement lol and imo it still doesn't represent the music very well
2. Your background could be optimized by using a 1366x768 or 1920x1200, it could prevent unecesarry pixelated on widescreen play
3. Due to music, the first kiai should be start on here 01:19:940 - and the second kiai should be begin here 02:23:717 -
4. Why no kiai on this one 03:11:550 - until 03:27:494 - ? the music itself literally same as the other two kiais
5. You can delete marina and the diamonds on tags, its already on the artist name

1. 01:11:470 (2,3) - Shouldn't that stacked perfectly?
2. 01:10:972 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Somehow the placement looks too corwded lol
3. 01:22:930 (3) - Could be flipped ctrl+j imo to have a better flow on this one 01:22:930 (3,1) -
4. 01:31:899 (4,1,2,3) - Try testplay that part, the overlapping not looking so good for lower diff imo, maybe you should avoid that by using a new patterning on 01:33:393 (1,2,3,4,1) -
5. 01:55:815 (1,2,3) - Your placement too forced imo, it makes the cursor movement on that part uncomfortable. Something like this http://puu.sh/srbph/caac3b9e3a.jpg well play better
6. 01:51:829 - until 02:23:717 - On that part you have a rather very dense rhythm by using so many 1/2 rhythm compared to both kiais (especially first kiai). I think that doesn't make sense since most people will mapped kiai part with a denser rhythm than any other part, this should be consider to fix imo
7. 02:21:226 (3,1,2) - Again the overlapping looks bad on that one and the placement seems too forced
8. 03:19:024 - Could be add a circle there imo, the rhythm here 03:18:775 (3,1) - somewhat odd to follow
   
   Imo the main problem is you have a rather small distance snap on this diff, so you will tend to have some corweded patterning and unnecesarry overlapping when you map (I think I already mention some). I think you have the basic, I believe you will improve through time :p

1. 00:52:287 (1) - Imo there is nothing to follow there, the vocal itself should be on here 00:52:536 - so consider to delete to have more consistent rhythmical with 00:54:529 (2,1,1) - ?
2. 01:11:968 (3) - and 01:23:927 (1) - Not really sure why you decide to end that slider on weak beat while you have a strong drum on white beat here 01:12:467 -
3. 01:28:909 (2) - and 01:30:902 (5) - Also same, if try to follow the long vocal, then the slider should be end on here 01:29:407 - instaed
   
   Pretty solid, but I have concern with some of the extended slider usement here, it's not bad but rather questionable in term of rhythmical

iLaskee wrote:

Hello!

General
Nothing I can see.

Hard

Random Absent Notes?

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What you should try:

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I feel as at those points there isn't much to justify a note there, thanks for the suggestion though

Normal
Nothing I can see

That's about it for me Bye!

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  Uncheck widescreen support.
  Orange combo colour would compliment the buildings on the bg well.

• AR 4 plays better.
  00:22:890 (5,6,1) - A tad confusing. I would move (1) further away from (5) so players can tell more easily that (6) comes next.
  00:24:136 (1) - 1/2 repeat slider should be used to catch that piano.
  [list:1337]00:32:108 (4) - ^
  00:40:080 (4) - ^

• 02:05:780 (1,2) - ^
  03:30:484 (4,5) - ^
  03:34:470 (3,1) -

• 03:04:574 (2,3) - ^
  03:15:536 (4,5) - ^
  03:33:473 (2,3) - ^

• Nice to see something that's not 200 bpm anime. Gl gl.

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1. Disable widescreen support on Normal.
   
2. More tags regarding genre would be nice. Also remove Marina as it's already in the title.
   
3. I'm not sure what a love song has to do with a Medieval Carnival picture but okay.
   
4. Your CCs choices don't match the BG. Pastell CCs would fit better. Mostly sky blue, petal pink, rusty orange from the walls and maybe green. Any others wouldn't match, like the purple, red or purplely blue that you currently have.
   
5. You barely used hitsounds. Claps now and again isn't hitsounding and a lack of hitsound will leave this unrankable. The volume doesn't match the intensity of the song either. You also didn't adjust the volume to the sections of the song. For example, until here 00:48:052 - it's rather calm but at this point the beat kicks in and that's where the song gets more intense which means the hitsound volume should too. 30% soft sampleset hitsound is too low. 45% for the KIAI is also too low. You will have to raise the volumes and add more hitsounds in order for the hitsounds to be rankable. Regarding hitsounding, I recommend claps on every second beat which is 01:20:439 (3) - 01:21:435 - 01:22:432 - etc as these are the important beats that repesent claps. You can do that in every section of the song except the first until 00:48:052 - which is rather calm so it wouldn't fit. Don't forget some whistles too. The song has a pretty simple structure so this shouldn't be a problem.

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  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:48:052 (1,2) - 03:30:484 (3,4) - 03:34:470 (3,1) - etc That's really bad flow there due to the curve of the slider. http://puu.sh/sAPLS/58cd6f3615.jpg Something like this http://puu.sh/sAPOy/cc72480db2.jpg would make flow a lot better.
   
2. Aesthetics and flow are mostly good but could be improved a bit more overall. Try to follow what I wrote in the Hard mod. Generally speaking try to avoid such placement like 01:18:944 (3,1) - 01:25:920 (4,5) - etc as I stated above. The strong curve makes transition and flow pretty bad.
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
3. You wanted to map to the vocal, clearly, but you failed at that rhythmically. It's impossible to follow the vocal 100% in anything easier than Hard so you need to map to the instruments, especially drums, on this song. This rhythm for example 00:52:038 (1,2,3) - 00:56:772 (2,4) - follows nothing. Not the instruments, nor the vocals and this is extremeply hard for beginners. This mix of drums and vocals and trying to bridge vocals with random sliders that represent nothing in the music is not good.
   
   You definitely need to remap this part 00:52:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:038 (1,2,3) - If you want to represent vocals 100% http://puu.sh/sAQcl/24d345763d.jpg / http://puu.sh/sAQeD/6815a2662e.jpg to represent drums and vocals together. The latter is the kind of mix that one would expect in this difficulty level as it is easier to follow and more obvious rhythm. http://puu.sh/sAQiU/f4f02b986a.jpg for 00:52:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - is a lot better to play than the current rhythm.
   
4. The rhythm of the mapping is almost all the time 2 1/1 sliders and a circle. That gets bland pretty fast. In the beginning, try to spice it up like you did here 00:24:136 (1) - You can also replace some of the first 1/1 slider of each new bar with a 1/2 and a circle like so http://puu.sh/sAPJi/d972e54ea4.jpg Makes it a lot more interesting to play.
   
   As for the rest, the rhythm is also pretty much the same through the song but only because it's a Normal, doesn't mean it has to be boring. I recommend that you use 1/1 elements to represent the drums and ONLY map to the vocals when they are obvious like here 01:29:906 (4,5,6) - This could be transformed into vocal mapping instead of drums to make the whole thing more interesting. You're also limited by the amount of elements you should place in this level so you need to consider that as well. If I would mod this thoroughly I would probably not get done. Try to implement what I told you as best as you can.
   
5. 00:52:786 (2) - Doesn't follow the instruments nor the vocals. Replace with 1/2 elements like so for example http://puu.sh/sAPTz/a4df02a2bc.jpg
   
   Combo Pattern:
6. As for the CP, try to follow what I wrote in the Hard mod.

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  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. You need to work on your pattern arrangement. It's widely random and not intertwining how it should be. You use a lot of different slidershapes to create one pattern and then follow with something different that doesn't follow the previous one. This breaks the flow massively. It's even more noticeable because of the calm song. It's not fluent at all. 00:42:073 (1,2,3,4) - compared to the rest of your pattern arrangement and flow, is a hundred times better than this for example 02:07:773 (1,1,2) - 02:55:606 (1,2,3) - 3 different slider shapes that don't connect with each other at all. It's cringy and needs to be improved across the mapset. Individually they are pretty but so many different ones together in a row is not good.
   
   00:26:129 (1,2,3,1) - for example, the first pattern is intertwining but the next one is not, it's placed completely random. http://puu.sh/sAMEv/030cea4339.jpg Follow the direction of the slider before 00:27:374 (3) - that leads to the corner. That's where 00:28:122 (1) - should be and will work a lot better flow wise too.
   
   00:30:115 (1,2) - Placing the 1/2 slider next to the long slider that direct upward creates weird flow too. Same here 00:32:108 (3,4) - try to follow the slider direction http://puu.sh/sAMQz/b60a61ec59.jpg . You could also try to reverse 00:33:354 (4) - .
   
   00:17:409 (3,1) - do this http://puu.sh/sAMXx/6b52f3064b.jpg instead of this http://puu.sh/sAMZI/8957ae3e05.jpg Fluency and aesthetics will benefit from this change.
   
   00:22:143 (1,2,3) - similar. 00:22:143 (1,3) - are too clustered and should be spaced apart a bit more http://puu.sh/sAN48/f2ff9b1019.jpg Also consider that 00:23:388 (3,1) - this movement from 3 to 1 is bad to play due to flow breakage. http://puu.sh/sAN8S/c96cfa4398.jpg Consider both when fixing this.
   
   00:53:533 (3,4) - Flow is unnatural since the 1/1 slider directs to the top and makes moving to 00:54:529 (4) - rather harsh. http://puu.sh/sAOIB/e92dfab6db.jpg would work out a lot nicer flow wise. It doesn't fit to the rest of the mapping but it will give you an idea of how the flow should work.
   
   Arrangement like 01:53:324 (4,1,2) - also don't look very pretty. Try http://puu.sh/sANKA/7d3f7cec84.jpg
   
   02:06:278 (2,3,4) - Aesthetics are missing here. 3 different slidershapes that don't fit each other. Consider making them the same shape.
   
   03:04:574 (2,3) - Due to the strong curve of 2, moving to 3 is breaking the flow. http://puu.sh/sAP0f/90fadf9e10.jpg Try to adjust that with what I told you so far.
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
2. You mostly mapped to vocal but also mixed instrumental mapping into it sometimes which makes following the rhythm that you mapped to rather difficult. Try to avoid this in future mapping and clearly differ the two. You can mix them of course but do it more obvious.
   
3. 01:26:916 (5) - I'm surprised that you used a 1/1 here when you follow the vocals. It should be a 1/2 slider and a circle instead to match that.
   
4. 02:02:043 (1,2,3) - Rhythm of pattern should be reversed to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/sANQl/f4a758ff84.jpg Same 03:33:722 (3,4,5) -
   
5. 03:26:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 03:42:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream is too long for a Hard. That's unrankable. Replace a few with a 1/4 reversed slider like you did on the other streams like 02:21:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) -
   
6. 02:13:752 (1) - This 3/2 slider is literally following nothing. You started it on the new bar and beat but ended it somewhere. Either replace with 1/1 and add a circle at 02:14:500 - or replace the whole thing with 2 1/2 sliders that would actually match vocals, beats or both.
   
7. ^ Same here 02:27:703 (4) - 03:22:511 (6) - you tried to follow vocal so you started it on the new bar but ended it somewhere that doesn't fit the start. End it at 02:28:202 - and add a circle at 02:28:451 -
   
   Spacing:
8. 01:30:902 (6,1) - Spacing is way too small here compared to normal DS from 01:30:404 (5,6) -
   
   Combo Pattern:
9. You need to replace your NCs. The CP is completely wrong. You mostly follow the vocals so the CPs should too. As for the rest, go with a 4 beat CP. "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You've done that pretty good at the start but then you used them wrong and started mixing and adding them randomly. Since you mapped to vocals, most slider ends fall onto the first bars (the big white ticks) which makes this harder. Follow everything below and it should be fine.
   
10. 00:32:108 (3) - 00:54:529 (4) - 01:29:906 (4) - 03:21:764 (4) - 03:25:501 (6) - 03:33:722 (3) - Add NC to follow your other CP and for consistency.
    
11. 01:14:958 (1) - 01:28:411 (1) - 01:32:895 (1) - 01:56:064 (1) - 02:08:770 (1) - 02:15:247 (1) - 02:20:728 (1) - 02:23:966 (1) - 02:28:700 (1) - 02:30:693 (1) - 02:31:440 (1) - 02:32:188 (1) - 02:38:665 (1) - 03:20:020 (1) - 03:26:498 (1) - 03:27:743 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
    
12. 01:06:986 (1,3) - 01:10:972 (1,3) - 01:27:663 (1,3) - 01:55:068 (1,4) - 02:21:724 (5,1) - 02:26:707 (1,4) - 02:35:675 (5,1) - 03:13:792 (6,1) - 03:19:273 (1,3) - 03:29:736 (5,1) - 03:31:729 (4,1) - 03:34:968 (1,2) - 03:41:694 (5,1) - NC swap to match the first bars as the beats are more dominant so a 4 beat CP will fit better.
    

1. I don't like the flow and pattern arrangement of your Hard at all. It's so random and it just makes me cringe Normal needs more rhythmical improvement, partially so does Hard. Both difficulties need their CP redone. With so many mods received so far I thought this mapset would be perfect by now but with closer observation, apparently not. Not trying to be mean but this really needs a lot more work. I also hope that you take this mod and advice to heart. I expect that you apply most of it as best as you can and most importantly, reply to my mod. Quoting mods isn't replying. I wish you good luck.

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📖 General 📖
✓ Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
> SR and gameplay gap between difficulties
> Difficulty settings if noticeably wrong chosen
> Difficulty level naming

✫ Map design
> Background (Does the image relate to the song?)
> Combo colours (Do they match the BG?)
> Skin (missing elements and resolution checks)
> SB (if available - osb. files, SB load, coding, epilepsy warning if flashy) or video (NSFW?)

✫ Metadata & Beatmap folder
> Resolution of images (1024x768 / 800x600 pixels for 4:3, 1920x1200 / 1366x768 / 852x480 pixels for 16:9)
> Preview point
> mp3 (length must be min 30 sec drain time, bit rate, quality)
> Hitsounds (wav. format, length min. 100ms, quality,...)
> Multiple files (osb., hitsounds, images,...)
> Source of the song (unless it's a song I can't find anything about)
> Tags

🕗 Timing 🕗
✓ KIAI time and breaks
✓ Timing changes
✓ BPM & Offset

🎧 Sound 🎧
✓ Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
✫ Hitsound patterns
✫ Hitsound volume (Timing points)
✫ Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)

🖰 Object Gameplay 🖰
✓ Reasonable spacing and patterns, spacing inconsistencies, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special patterns, rhythmical supported spacing and jumps
✫ Flow and transition
✓ Overmapping, SV changes
✓ Other Issues
> Interface overlaps
> Hidden objects that are hard to read due to coverage (overlaps)
> Stacking
> Unsnapped objects
> Spinner (4 beats - Easy, 2 beats - Normal)

👀 Visual Gameplay 👀
✫ Combo patterns, new combos for special cases (SV change, jumps that are hard to read)
✓ Readability of objects
✓ Blankets, symmetry
✫ Variety of patterns

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Abbreviation Legend

Difficulty Settings:

HP bar - Health Points bar
CS - Circle Size
AR - Approach Rate
OD - Overall Difficulty
SL - Stack Leniency

SV - Slider Velocity
SM - Slider Multiplier
STR - Slider Tick Rate

DS - Distance Spacing
BSD - Beat Snap Divisor

Design:
CC - Combo Colour (e.g. CC1, CC2, CC3,...)
BG - Background

Other:
ApC - Approach Circle
CP - Combo Pattern
SR - Star Rating

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1. Disable widescreen support on Normal.
   
2. More tags regarding genre would be nice. Also remove Marina as it's already in the title.
   
3. I'm not sure what a love song has to do with a Medieval Carnival picture but okay.
   
4. Your CCs choices don't match the BG. Pastell CCs would fit better. Mostly sky blue, petal pink, rusty orange from the walls and maybe green. Any others wouldn't match, like the purple, red or purplely blue that you currently have.
   
5. You barely used hitsounds. Claps now and again isn't hitsounding and a lack of hitsound will leave this unrankable. The volume doesn't match the intensity of the song either. You also didn't adjust the volume to the sections of the song. For example, until here 00:48:052 - it's rather calm but at this point the beat kicks in and that's where the song gets more intense which means the hitsound volume should too. 30% soft sampleset hitsound is too low. 45% for the KIAI is also too low. You will have to raise the volumes and add more hitsounds in order for the hitsounds to be rankable. Regarding hitsounding, I recommend claps on every second beat which is 01:20:439 (3) - 01:21:435 - 01:22:432 - etc as these are the important beats that repesent claps. You can do that in every section of the song except the first until 00:48:052 - which is rather calm so it wouldn't fit. Don't forget some whistles too. The song has a pretty simple structure so this shouldn't be a problem.applied

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  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:48:052 (1,2) - 03:30:484 (3,4) - 03:34:470 (3,1) - etc That's really bad flow there due to the curve of the slider. http://puu.sh/sAPLS/58cd6f3615.jpg Something like this http://puu.sh/sAPOy/cc72480db2.jpg would make flow a lot better. Applied
   
2. Aesthetics and flow are mostly good but could be improved a bit more overall. Try to follow what I wrote in the Hard mod. Generally speaking try to avoid such placement like 01:18:944 (3,1) - 01:25:920 (4,5) - etc as I stated above. The strong curve makes transition and flow pretty bad. applied in multiple spots
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
3. You wanted to map to the vocal, clearly, but you failed at that rhythmically. It's impossible to follow the vocal 100% in anything easier than Hard so you need to map to the instruments, especially drums, on this song. This rhythm for example 00:52:038 (1,2,3) - 00:56:772 (2,4) - follows nothing. Not the instruments, nor the vocals and this is extremeply hard for beginners. This mix of drums and vocals and trying to bridge vocals with random sliders that represent nothing in the music is not good. made it consistent
   
   You definitely need to remap this part 00:52:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:038 (1,2,3) - If you want to represent vocals 100% http://puu.sh/sAQcl/24d345763d.jpg / http://puu.sh/sAQeD/6815a2662e.jpg to represent drums and vocals together. The latter is the kind of mix that one would expect in this difficulty level as it is easier to follow and more obvious rhythm. http://puu.sh/sAQiU/f4f02b986a.jpg for 00:52:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - is a lot better to play than the current rhythm. done
   
4. The rhythm of the mapping is almost all the time 2 1/1 sliders and a circle. That gets bland pretty fast. In the beginning, try to spice it up like you did here 00:24:136 (1) - You can also replace some of the first 1/1 slider of each new bar with a 1/2 and a circle like so http://puu.sh/sAPJi/d972e54ea4.jpg Makes it a lot more interesting to play. Applied throughtout the map
   
   As for the rest, the rhythm is also pretty much the same through the song but only because it's a Normal, doesn't mean it has to be boring. I recommend that you use 1/1 elements to represent the drums and ONLY map to the vocals when they are obvious like here 01:29:906 (4,5,6) - This could be transformed into vocal mapping instead of drums to make the whole thing more interesting. You're also limited by the amount of elements you should place in this level so you need to consider that as well. If I would mod this thoroughly I would probably not get done. Try to implement what I told you as best as you can. implimented
   
5. 00:52:786 (2) - Doesn't follow the instruments nor the vocals. Replace with 1/2 elements like so for example http://puu.sh/sAPTz/a4df02a2bc.jpg alright
   
   Combo Pattern:
6. As for the CP, try to follow what I wrote in the Hard mod.redid all combos

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  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. You need to work on your pattern arrangement. It's widely random and not intertwining how it should be. You use a lot of different slidershapes to create one pattern and then follow with something different that doesn't follow the previous one. This breaks the flow massively. It's even more noticeable because of the calm song. It's not fluent at all. 00:42:073 (1,2,3,4) - compared to the rest of your pattern arrangement and flow, is a hundred times better than this for example 02:07:773 (1,1,2) - 02:55:606 (1,2,3) - 3 different slider shapes that don't connect with each other at all. It's cringy and needs to be improved across the mapset. Individually they are pretty but so many different ones together in a row is not good. Idk if cringy is the word for it but okay, applied
   
   00:26:129 (1,2,3,1) - for example, the first pattern is intertwining but the next one is not, it's placed completely random. http://puu.sh/sAMEv/030cea4339.jpg Follow the direction of the slider before 00:27:374 (3) - that leads to the corner. That's where 00:28:122 (1) - should be and will work a lot better flow wise too. applied throughout map
   
   00:30:115 (1,2) - Placing the 1/2 slider next to the long slider that direct upward creates weird flow too. Same here 00:32:108 (3,4) - try to follow the slider direction http://puu.sh/sAMQz/b60a61ec59.jpg . You could also try to reverse 00:33:354 (4) - . ok
   
   00:17:409 (3,1) - do this http://puu.sh/sAMXx/6b52f3064b.jpg instead of this http://puu.sh/sAMZI/8957ae3e05.jpg Fluency and aesthetics will benefit from this change. ^
   
   00:22:143 (1,2,3) - similar. 00:22:143 (1,3) - are too clustered and should be spaced apart a bit more http://puu.sh/sAN48/f2ff9b1019.jpg Also consider that 00:23:388 (3,1) - this movement from 3 to 1 is bad to play due to flow breakage. http://puu.sh/sAN8S/c96cfa4398.jpg Consider both when fixing this.
   fixed
   00:53:533 (3,4) - Flow is unnatural since the 1/1 slider directs to the top and makes moving to 00:54:529 (4) - rather harsh. http://puu.sh/sAOIB/e92dfab6db.jpg would work out a lot nicer flow wise. It doesn't fit to the rest of the mapping but it will give you an idea of how the flow should work. applied
   
   Arrangement like 01:53:324 (4,1,2) - also don't look very pretty. Try http://puu.sh/sANKA/7d3f7cec84.jpg I don't think it looks bad and your example doesn't make much of a difference imo
   
   02:06:278 (2,3,4) - Aesthetics are missing here. 3 different slidershapes that don't fit each other. Consider making them the same shape. fixed
   
   03:04:574 (2,3) - Due to the strong curve of 2, moving to 3 is breaking the flow. http://puu.sh/sAP0f/90fadf9e10.jpg Try to adjust that with what I told you so far. fixed
   
   Rhythm & Pattern:
2. You mostly mapped to vocal but also mixed instrumental mapping into it sometimes which makes following the rhythm that you mapped to rather difficult. Try to avoid this in future mapping and clearly differ the two. You can mix them of course but do it more obvious.
   
3. 01:26:916 (5) - I'm surprised that you used a 1/1 here when you follow the vocals. It should be a 1/2 slider and a circle instead to match that. alright
   
4. 02:02:043 (1,2,3) - Rhythm of pattern should be reversed to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/sANQl/f4a758ff84.jpg Same 03:33:722 (3,4,5) - The first one is fixed but the second did not seem accurate to me
   
5. 03:26:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 03:42:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream is too long for a Hard. That's unrankable. Replace a few with a 1/4 reversed slider like you did on the other streams like 02:21:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - Applied
   
6. 02:13:752 (1) - This 3/2 slider is literally following nothing. You started it on the new bar and beat but ended it somewhere. Either replace with 1/1 and add a circle at 02:14:500 - or replace the whole thing with 2 1/2 sliders that would actually match vocals, beats or both. fixed
   
7. ^ Same here 02:27:703 (4) - 03:22:511 (6) - you tried to follow vocal so you started it on the new bar but ended it somewhere that doesn't fit the start. End it at 02:28:202 - and add a circle at 02:28:451 - all applied
   
   Spacing:
8. 01:30:902 (6,1) - Spacing is way too small here compared to normal DS from 01:30:404 (5,6) - fixed
   
   Combo Pattern:
9. You need to replace your NCs. The CP is completely wrong. You mostly follow the vocals so the CPs should too. As for the rest, go with a 4 beat CP. "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You've done that pretty good at the start but then you used them wrong and started mixing and adding them randomly. Since you mapped to vocals, most slider ends fall onto the first bars (the big white ticks) which makes this harder. Follow everything below and it should be fine.
   
10. 00:32:108 (3) - 00:54:529 (4) - 01:29:906 (4) - 03:21:764 (4) - 03:25:501 (6) - 03:33:722 (3) - Add NC to follow your other CP and for consistency.
    
11. 01:14:958 (1) - 01:28:411 (1) - 01:32:895 (1) - 01:56:064 (1) - 02:08:770 (1) - 02:15:247 (1) - 02:20:728 (1) - 02:23:966 (1) - 02:28:700 (1) - 02:30:693 (1) - 02:31:440 (1) - 02:32:188 (1) - 02:38:665 (1) - 03:20:020 (1) - 03:26:498 (1) - 03:27:743 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
    
12. 01:06:986 (1,3) - 01:10:972 (1,3) - 01:27:663 (1,3) - 01:55:068 (1,4) - 02:21:724 (5,1) - 02:26:707 (1,4) - 02:35:675 (5,1) - 03:13:792 (6,1) - 03:19:273 (1,3) - 03:29:736 (5,1) - 03:31:729 (4,1) - 03:34:968 (1,2) - 03:41:694 (5,1) - NC swap to match the first bars as the beats are more dominant so a 4 beat CP will fit better. redid combos

Overall
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1. I don't like the flow and pattern arrangement of your Hard at all. It's so random and it just makes me cringe Normal needs more rhythmical improvement, partially so does Hard. Both difficulties need their CP redone. With so many mods received so far I thought this mapset would be perfect by now but with closer observation, apparently not. Not trying to be mean but this really needs a lot more work. I also hope that you take this mod and advice to heart. I expect that you apply most of it as best as you can and most importantly, reply to my mod. Quoting mods isn't replying. I wish you good luck.

1. 00:18:157 (1,2) - linear transition from (1)slider to (2) could look much better. The best way to do it move 00:18:157 (1,3) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6743183
2. 00:22:143 (1,2,3) - I would advise you to align this stuff to followpoints https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6743211
3. 00:24:136 (1,2) - 00:26:129 (1,2) - blanket so off
4. 00:28:122 (1) - Imo, there's no sense to make the slider's shape like this. Regular arc or sinusoid (like 00:30:115 (1) idk how to call it xD) just better here
5. 00:29:367 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6743334 this angle is better I think (to continue the direction of followpoints)
6. 00:44:066 (1,2,3) - this looks not very good for me. First of all, stack 00:44:066 (1,3) . May be you wanna hold 1.2 DS, but it's not a big deal to have small inconsistency in some parts. Especially in Hard, especially if result gives better look. And the second - I wanna suggest you to buff 00:44:066 (1,2) shapes, into something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6743415
7. 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - 01:03:996 (4,1,2,3) - different DS, but music intensity is the same in these parts
8. 01:09:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. Some NC problems here, they doesn't follow the music (you did NC's for the better visuals, but they should amphasize downbeats and bars' beginnings):
10. 01:03:996 (4) - NC there, instead of 01:04:245 (1)
11. 01:06:986 (1) - remove NC, 01:07:982 (3) - make NC
12. 01:10:972 (1) - remove NC, 01:11:968 (3) - make NC, 01:12:965 (1) - remove NC, 01:13:961 (4) - add, 01:14:709 (1) - remove
13. 01:17:947 (5) - add NC, 01:18:695 (1) - remove NC
14. 01:33:892 (1) - tbh pointless spinner, doesn't fit the song aswell. Better to map this part
15. 01:54:071 (2) - weird angle. make it 01:54:071 (2,3) - similar
16. 01:55:068 (4,5,6,1,2) - I feel this can be arranged in more fun way. like this 01:03:996 (4,1,2,3) , or 01:14:709 (1,2,3,4,5)
17. 01:56:313 (3) - pointless slider, that doesn't fit the song tbh. you can use slider + circle, or just circles; as you did before
18. 03:06:567 - break after is really weird. Song is continuing with the same intensity until the 03:09:806 . better to map it
19. ^ Same with the very end of the song, you can do stuff until 03:51:410

1. Aesthetics can be improved a lot. Stuff like this 02:56:602 (2,3) - 02:19:731 (1) - has no sense by itself, and you can use shapes, that more harmonically connected with the nearest parts
2. Map has spacing inconsistencies. Both theoretical DS and visual. Some DS parts i already pointed out. I mean, similar parts with similar intensity should have similar DS.
3. Speaking about visual spacing: 03:16:034 (2,3) - 03:18:027 (2,3) - 02:19:731 (1,3) - looks weird (at least for me)

1. Overall the mapping style feels very old (~2012) due to random object placement, blanketing issues, and curved sliders. This can be a stylistic choice but it appears that you try to blanket some notes (for example: 01:30:404 (2,3) - 01:56:064 (2,3) - 03:16:532 (3,4) - ) but in some other places it's way off. I think placing notes with more "structure" will modernize the map. For example try using patterns that extend beyind just one measure, or try repeating certain patterns but rotating or flipping them afterwards.
2. As a concrete example, the intro section (00:16:164 (1) - to 00:45:312 (2) - ) uses three 1 bar rhytmns repeated a certain number of times, but the rhythm and slider shapes seem to be randomly chosen from one bar to another. In the 1st 4 bars, only bar 1 uses a different rhythm, and bars 2-4 are the same. But in the second 4 bars, bar 1 - 3 are the same as before but now bar 4 is different? And then the next 4 bars are completely different? The background music is very repetitive in the intro, and I think it should be reflected in the rhythm and pattern choice. I think having the same rhythm repeat twice then switching to as new rhythm would introduce better structure, and it would also having similar slider/note placement would make it feel less "randomly" placed.
3. 00:32:108 (3) - NC here
4. 00:38:087 (3) - NC here
5. 01:03:996 (4) - NC here instead if the following note
6. 01:06:986 (1) - This NC should be at 01:07:982 (3) -
7. 01:10:972 (1) - This NC should be at 01:11:968 (3) -
8. Basically, the NCs should generally only appears on the big white tick
9. 01:09:975 (1) - why does the shift from 1.2 distance spacing to 1.4 happen here? If anything it should happen a bit earlier at 01:03:996 (4) - where the pre-chorus begins
10. 01:56:313 (3) - this long slider is weird in that it ignores several music elements and basically doesn't appear again. Try playing around with the rhythm to better match the music (for example, splitting it into 2 smaller sliders)
11. 01:18:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think having 1.4 spacing for streams is a bit high for Hard. Also, your streaming dist is a bit inconsistent throughout. It's 0.6 in places like (01:27:663 (1,2,3) - , 02:15:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 02:31:440 (1,2,3) - , 03:19:273 (1,2,3) - ) but then it's 1.4 in places like (01:18:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:21:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:38:665 (1,2,3) - ) I'd recommend changing all stream dists to 0.8 as a compromise between the two
12. Speaking of streams: 03:26:498 (3,4) - and 03:42:442 (2,3) - this pattern with the repeating sliders just kind of shows up out of nowhore in the last few seconds. I would recommend replacing them with streams for the sake of consistency

30201102 wrote:

[Hard]

1. Overall the mapping style feels very old (~2012) due to random object placement, blanketing issues, and curved sliders. This can be a stylistic choice but it appears that you try to blanket some notes (for example: 01:30:404 (2,3) - 01:56:064 (2,3) - 03:16:532 (3,4) - ) but in some other places it's way off. I think placing notes with more "structure" will modernize the map. For example try using patterns that extend beyind just one measure, or try repeating certain patterns but rotating or flipping them afterwards.
2. As a concrete example, the intro section (00:16:164 (1) - to 00:45:312 (2) - ) uses three 1 bar rhytmns repeated a certain number of times, but the rhythm and slider shapes seem to be randomly chosen from one bar to another. In the 1st 4 bars, only bar 1 uses a different rhythm, and bars 2-4 are the same. But in the second 4 bars, bar 1 - 3 are the same as before but now bar 4 is different? And then the next 4 bars are completely different? The background music is very repetitive in the intro, and I think it should be reflected in the rhythm and pattern choice. I think having the same rhythm repeat twice then switching to as new rhythm would introduce better structure, and it would also having similar slider/note placement would make it feel less "randomly" placed.
3. 00:32:108 (3) - NC here
4. 00:38:087 (3) - NC here
5. 01:03:996 (4) - NC here instead if the following note
6. 01:06:986 (1) - This NC should be at 01:07:982 (3) -
7. 01:10:972 (1) - This NC should be at 01:11:968 (3) -
8. Basically, the NCs should generally only appears on the big white tick
9. 01:09:975 (1) - why does the shift from 1.2 distance spacing to 1.4 happen here? If anything it should happen a bit earlier at 01:03:996 (4) - where the pre-chorus begins
10. 01:56:313 (3) - this long slider is weird in that it ignores several music elements and basically doesn't appear again. Try playing around with the rhythm to better match the music (for example, splitting it into 2 smaller sliders)
11. 01:18:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think having 1.4 spacing for streams is a bit high for Hard. Also, your streaming dist is a bit inconsistent throughout. It's 0.6 in places like (01:27:663 (1,2,3) - , 02:15:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 02:31:440 (1,2,3) - , 03:19:273 (1,2,3) - ) but then it's 1.4 in places like (01:18:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:21:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 02:38:665 (1,2,3) - ) I'd recommend changing all stream dists to 0.8 as a compromise between the two
12. Speaking of streams: 03:26:498 (3,4) - and 03:42:442 (2,3) - this pattern with the repeating sliders just kind of shows up out of nowhore in the last few seconds. I would recommend replacing them with streams for the sake of consistency

1. 00:17:658 (5) - on this section, why do you use finish hitsound? there is nothing notable on the music. I would recommend you come up with another custom set with whistle/clap or something.

1. 00:28:869 (2,3) - I think you're undermapping this, this pattern in particular is different than others before you but map it the same. I would recommend changing the (2) slider into a 1/2 slider and add a circle on the red tick before (3) slider. Making it more dense to reflect the new sound in the music.
2. 00:35:097 (3,4) - this is just confusing to read and this is the first time it showed up. I suggest you to change this to a 1/2 slider instead. There is nothing notable to make the red tick clickable when you were prioritizing the vocal. 00:43:568 (3,4) - this is fine though
3. 00:47:554 - silence the spinner end
4. 00:58:515 (2,3) - Subjective, but straight sliders with this much angle don't look good imo
5. 01:05:740 - why are you skipping the vocal here? same for 01:13:712 -
6. 01:35:885 - move the break here. (You can delay the break by simply dragging it on the timeline)
7. 02:06:777 (3,4,1,2) - be careful when you use the same shape for sliders too close to each other. It can make them feel off looking. 02:06:777 (3,4) - I would suggest you add curve to these guys instead.
8. 02:39:537 - there is a sound here, add more reverse and move the circle closer
9. 03:27:245 (9,1) - you should spread this two away from each other as the (9) is a kick slider not 1/4 circle. Or you can just covert the slider into 2 1/4 and keep it the same. But current is just weird when you spread 1/4 sliders out like 02:22:721 (8,9) -

1. 01:17:947 (1) - your map is getting heavily limited by the spinner restriction here. 01:19:940 - this here should be mappped. In this case simply remove the spinner and map normally as you would.
2. 01:35:885 - same break thing from above
3. 03:21:515 (1,2,3) - this doesn't look good, I suggest change this slider shape 03:22:511 (3) -

timemon wrote:

mod
General/Modding Assist

1. 00:17:658 (5) - on this section, why do you use finish hitsound? there is nothing notable on the music. I would recommend you come up with another custom set with whistle/clap or something.

One More Night

1. 00:28:869 (2,3) - I think you're undermapping this, this pattern in particular is different than others before you but map it the same. I would recommend changing the (2) slider into a 1/2 slider and add a circle on the red tick before (3) slider. Making it more dense to reflect the new sound in the music. Applied
2. 00:35:097 (3,4) - this is just confusing to read and this is the first time it showed up. I suggest you to change this to a 1/2 slider instead. There is nothing notable to make the red tick clickable when you were prioritizing the vocal. 00:43:568 (3,4) - this is fine though ok
3. 00:47:554 - silence the spinner end
4. 00:58:515 (2,3) - Subjective, but straight sliders with this much angle don't look good imo opinions, I'll see
5. 01:05:740 - why are you skipping the vocal here? same for 01:13:712 - true
6. 01:35:885 - move the break here. (You can delay the break by simply dragging it on the timeline) ok
7. 02:06:777 (3,4,1,2) - be careful when you use the same shape for sliders too close to each other. It can make them feel off looking. 02:06:777 (3,4) - I would suggest you add curve to these guys instead. it looks fine to me
8. 02:39:537 - there is a sound here, add more reverse and move the circle closerkk
9. 03:27:245 (9,1) - you should spread this two away from each other as the (9) is a kick slider not 1/4 circle. Or you can just covert the slider into 2 1/4 and keep it the same. But current is just weird when you spread 1/4 sliders out like 02:22:721 (8,9) - ok

Normal

1. 01:17:947 (1) - your map is getting heavily limited by the spinner restriction here. 01:19:940 - this here should be mappped. In this case simply remove the spinner and map normally as you would. ok
2. 01:35:885 - same break thing from above ok
3. 03:21:515 (1,2,3) - this doesn't look good, I suggest change this slider shape 03:22:511 (3) - opinions

GL