Hanatan - Attakain Dakara [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Stjpa

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-10T00:30:20+00:00

No answer = fixed

Vell wrote:
[Insane]
00:14:904 (7) - shortening this slider by 2 ticks like u did with this one 00:16:316 (5) - so the player has to start to stream at the strong beat again feels alot smoother and consistent (I have seen u already rejected that idea, but I will still mention it because I think it does play weird how you have it right now) I changed the first one but kept the second one due the special melody and to emphasize the kickslider a little bit harder.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - this angle looks kinda weird, make it straight so it flows better into the edged slider
SPOILER
00:49:492 (1) - maybe space it in line and with the same spacing as the other 2 sliders I honestly don't understand this point, you gotta explain it to me ;_;
SPOILER
01:11:728 (3) - making this into a 1/2 slider + circle for better emphasize on the the vocal? I'm going for the full word rather than that syllable. I want the ending to be smooth.
[Hard]
00:25:316 (7,8) - 2 circles? would feel better being able to click the last note before the break I'd agree with it if the downbeat here was clickable, but this way the slider is mapped to the drums. I silenced the sliderend for the reason I mentioned.
01:10:140 (2) - im not sure with what the second repeat slider is supposed to go here, a circle + slider would play more with the song and wont ignore the strong cymbal sound
Sorry, couldnt find anything in Easy and Advanced.

_IxApplePie_

246 posts

Joined November 2013

_IxApplePie_ 2016-07-19T13:53:25+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue.

my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175

Shiawase!

00:42:434 (2) - NC
00:52:669 / 00:54:081 / 00:55:493 / 00:55:846 / 00:56:199 / 00:56:375 - note? Just a suggestion only. Ignore if you want
00:58:669 (2,3,4) - equal spacing? quite weird imo
I think you can delete the last 4 green timing lines since it's the same.

Insane

yup. (this is also in Adv and Normal)
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you're following the music then maybe lesser distance as there's no heavy beat to emphasis
00:41:551 (2) - ee, don't so close to 00:41:728 (3), futher a bit.
00:47:375 (3) - ctrl g? so that you can flow downwards to 00:47:904 (4,1)
00:49:140 (2,1) - suggestion for the orange (1)
01:02:199 (7,1) - blanket or nay?
01:13:846 - note? since your previous kiai has it. (Your normal is until here though)

Hard

01:13:846 - note?

Advanced

00:22:669 (1,2) - align then like 00:32:551 (1,2) - ? looks much better imo
same as the problem in Hard

Normal

Nazi blanket for this, soz! I only catch the obvious ones,
00:10:669 (2,3,4)
00:27:610 (2,3)
00:48:434 (4,5)
01:03:963 (3,4)

Sorry for the nazi blanket in Normal!!

Hoped the mod helps!

GL~

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-19T19:48:42+00:00

No answer = fixed

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue.

my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175

Insane
00:36:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you're following the music then maybe lesser distance as there's no heavy beat to emphasis Vocals are getting stronger.
00:41:551 (2) - ee, don't so close to 00:41:728 (3), futher a bit. Actually there's no way to solve it properly, but I moved the circle away (and basically broke the DS consistency here, but little inconsistencies like here aren't noticable).
00:47:375 (3) - ctrl g? so that you can flow downwards to 00:47:904 (4,1) Doesn't fit into my spacing concept.
00:49:140 (2,1) - suggestion for the orange (1) Wanna keep the triangle.
01:02:199 (7,1) - blanket or nay?
01:13:846 - note? since your previous kiai has it. (Your normal is until here though) First kiai has it because there's a sound unlike here. In Easy diff I even silenced the sliderend since there's nothing audible on it.

Hard
01:13:846 - note? As in Insane.

Normal
Nazi blanket for this, soz! I only catch the obvious ones,
00:10:669 (2,3,4)
00:27:610 (2,3)
00:48:434 (4,5)
01:03:963 (3,4)

Sorry for the nazi blanket in Normal!!

Hoped the mod helps!

GL~

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-19T22:36:14+00:00

Advanced

00:22:669 (1,2) - align then like 00:32:551 (1,2) - ? looks much better imo aaa but then 2 would make an ugly overlap with the end of 3
same as the problem in Hard it's fine as it is!

nothing changed, thanks for the mod though

HootOwlStar

765 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2016-07-20T15:32:28+00:00

lolz saw your queue if you couldnt tell btw *hea vy breathing*

[ez]

00:09:257 (5) - yehj a consider to make it flat, knda racist of me but actually against of curves which intended but dont make a perfect circular flow
00:12:081 (4) - mayb remove the reverse and extend the slider to 00:12:610 - it will be fine tbh since it doesnt really add too much difficulty and it will represent the rhythm more accurately
00:25:140 (4,1) - so prob here is that the distance-time concept is messed up here, you should increase the distance in between. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650666
00:43:845 (1,2) - pro tip ways to lengthen mods include providing tons of suggestions an d URL's https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650695 sodium hydride its just i cnt stand two sliders with same orientations but not similar appearing at the same time yea

[advanced]

could have named as normal. it does fit the difficulty gap between ez and hard + it is within the sr range
00:06:963 (4) - it brings the negative effect here since it is the odd one out + emphasizing the vocals is actually complete and precise enough. consider to change the note placement in 00:06:787 (3,4,1,2) - into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650772 (view the timeline bar)
00:41:022 (4) - missed nc

[hard]

00:12:610 (7) - circle is ald ok since for the current one slider end doesnt end in any music notes. same case in insane
00:45:257 (1,2,3) - yah im racist and also the rhythm doesnt quite fit imo since 00:45:963 - shouldnt be emphasized much idk. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650833
01:08:199 (1,2,3) - actually just want to fix between 01:07:493 (3) - and 01:08:199 (1) - but yeah https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650868 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650882

[shiawase]

00:02:728 (6) - consider move to the left side of (5) which is around x:12 since imo it provides a funner flow as of 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4) - . same suggestion goes to 00:43:668 (7) -
00:42:434 (2) - consider nc since sv change + new bar
01:13:846 (1,1) - both move to centre seem better

skipped insane bcos it seems fine. mapse t is quite nice tbh
yeh good luck btw

Halfslashed

Global Moderator

438 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2016-07-20T19:17:43+00:00

M4M - My mapset: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/477763

[Shiawase!]
00:05:022 (3) - Move down and rotate to make a better pattern (something like this: http://puu.sh/q8oZw/a116e9da30.png)
00:35:375 (1) -
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern itself plays fine, but you should separate 00:36:787 (1,2,1) from the rest to give the vocals more emphasis, and make the spacing on 00:36:963 (2,1) consistent with itself.
00:37:845 (1) - Offscreen note
00:38:198 (1,2) - These should use similar shapes for consistency (similar to previous sliders in the map). Maybe curve 00:39:257 (5) instead?
00:51:258 (1) - I hear what you're emphasizing in the music, but this isn't being emphasizes. You should either remove it or map more of the break section.
01:02:199 (7,8) - Angle felt off in play, move 8 down.
01:02:905 (2,3) - You should make these circles into a slider similar to this: 00:42:081 (1). The impact of the vocals is similar and the player will already expect another one.
01:13:140 (1,1,1,1) - You should probably be consistent with the pattern at 00:48:787 (1,2,1,2,1). Musically they sound similar, and both of them play well (my favorite part of the map too).
[Insane]
00:03:610 (3,4) - Move up for better flow.
00:06:963 (6,7,1) - I think something like this would flow better: http://puu.sh/q8pSU/2e9ef8b588.png
00:10:845 (3,4,5) - Linear flow would work better here.
00:16:140 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Inconsistent with 00:18:963 (3,4,5,6,7,1) and musically similar.
00:27:257 (2,3,4) - Rotate down for better flow, try not to go for linearity between 4 and 5.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - Try to make it flow better from the jump, similar to 00:06:963 (6,7,1)
01:04:316 (2,3,4) - Less flow here. Intentional?
[Hard]
00:24:257 (2,3,4) - Change to kickslider for pattern consistency.
00:40:492 (3) - Move to right for better flow.
00:42:787 (2) - Down and to the left for better flow (Linear works here).
[Advanced]
00:18:434 (1,2) - Match angles for consistency, something like this (also make sure to fix DS): http://puu.sh/q8qUH/7499302e7f.png
[Easy]
Couldn't find anything.

Good mapset, I hope I helped.

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-20T23:53:14+00:00

no answer = changed

HootOwlStar wrote:
lolz saw your queue if you couldnt tell btw *hea vy breathing*

[ez]
00:09:257 (5) - yehj a consider to make it flat, knda racist of me but actually against of curves which intended but dont make a perfect circular flow
00:12:081 (4) - mayb remove the reverse and extend the slider to 00:12:610 - it will be fine tbh since it doesnt really add too much difficulty and it will represent the rhythm more accurately Feels so wrong without having the sliderend on the downbeat. I thought about it quite long but it's just too weird with your suggestion.
00:25:140 (4,1) - so prob here is that the distance-time concept is messed up here, you should increase the distance in between. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650666 Fixed it differently.
00:43:845 (1,2) - pro tip ways to lengthen mods include providing tons of suggestions an d URL's https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650695 sodium hydride its just i cnt stand two sliders with same orientations but not similar appearing at the same time yea
[hard]
00:12:610 (7) - circle is ald ok since for the current one slider end doesnt end in any music notes. same case in insane But the vocals fam.
00:45:257 (1,2,3) - yah im racist and also the rhythm doesnt quite fit imo since 00:45:963 - shouldnt be emphasized much idk. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650833 Fixed it differently.
01:08:199 (1,2,3) - actually just want to fix between 01:07:493 (3) - and 01:08:199 (1) - but yeah https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650868 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5650882
skipped insane bcos it seems fine. mapse t is quite nice tbh
yeh good luck btw

Halfslashed wrote:
M4M - My mapset: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/477763
[Insane]
00:03:610 (3,4) - Move up for better flow. I like it how it is.
00:06:963 (6,7,1) - I think something like this would flow better: http://puu.sh/q8pSU/2e9ef8b588.png
00:10:845 (3,4,5) - Linear flow would work better here. It's already linear tho. :v
00:16:140 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Inconsistent with 00:18:963 (3,4,5,6,7,1) and musically similar. Variation.
00:27:257 (2,3,4) - Rotate down for better flow, try not to go for linearity between 4 and 5. Tbh it looks fine to me. Used this flow so often if I'm not mistaken rn.
00:48:610 (3,4,1) - Try to make it flow better from the jump, similar to 00:06:963 (6,7,1) The one in the beginning has an emphasis because of downbeat, this one doesn't.
01:04:316 (2,3,4) - Less flow here. Intentional? Yes.
[Hard]
00:24:257 (2,3,4) - Change to kickslider for pattern consistency. The kickslider is mapped to a special sound in this part, so it's consistent atm.
00:40:492 (3) - Move to right for better flow.
00:42:787 (2) - Down and to the left for better flow (Linear works here). I really like the flow here. ;o

Good mapset, I hope I helped.

Will mod HOS' map now, the other one tomorrow.

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-21T01:17:36+00:00

vell

Vell wrote:
00:09:787 (2,3,1) - I dont really like the spacing of those. it seems to be the only time where they are spaced like this so maybe go for the same as 00:06:963 (6,7,1) - will keep them because they're fine for me
00:42:434 (1) - nc not necessarily because of sv change but more so that the faster sv on 00:42:081 (1) - will be more clear so its easier to sightread ooops yeah
thank youu

applepie

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
00:42:434 (2) - NC ok
00:52:669 / 00:54:081 / 00:55:493 / 00:55:846 / 00:56:199 / 00:56:375 - note? Just a suggestion only. Ignore if you want nah ill keep it
00:58:669 (2,3,4) - equal spacing? quite weird imo changed and fixed now ^^
I think you can delete the last 4 green timing lines since it's the same. ooops it wasnt supposed to be the same :d
thanks a lot

hotowl

HootOwlStar wrote:
00:02:728 (6) - consider move to the left side of (5) which is around x:12 since imo it provides a funner flow as of 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4) - . same suggestion goes to 00:43:668 (7) - aye
00:42:434 (2) - consider nc since sv change + new bar yep
01:13:846 (1,1) - both move to centre seem better kinda changed them but last one is still at center

thank yoooououuuou

halfs

Halfslashed wrote:
00:05:022 (3) - Move down and rotate to make a better pattern (something like this: http://puu.sh/q8oZw/a116e9da30.png) ok
00:35:375 (1) - no
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern itself plays fine, but you should separate 00:36:787 (1,2,1) from the rest to give the vocals more emphasis, and make the spacing on 00:36:963 (2,1) consistent with itself. did something
00:37:845 (1) - Offscreen note ooops
00:38:198 (1,2) - These should use similar shapes for consistency (similar to previous sliders in the map). Maybe curve 00:39:257 (5) instead? ye
00:51:258 (1) - I hear what you're emphasizing in the music, but this isn't being emphasizes. You should either remove it or map more of the break section. na na will keep it
01:02:199 (7,8) - Angle felt off in play, move 8 down. not sure why but ok
01:02:905 (2,3) - You should make these circles into a slider similar to this: 00:42:081 (1). The impact of the vocals is similar and the player will already expect another one. pls look at 2 and 5
01:13:140 (1,1,1,1) - You should probably be consistent with the pattern at 00:48:787 (1,2,1,2,1). Musically they sound similar, and both of them play well (my favorite part of the map too). yeah changed them

thanks a buch

.osu

hey stjpa

toybot

1,067 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2016-07-24T02:52:13+00:00

for m4m

[Pati]
00:39:610 (1) - isn't it supposed to be just clap with auto additions
00:44:551 (3,4,5,6) - this jump pattern is so large compared to all of the other jump patterns in this section, consider nerfing a bit
00:49:492 - uh, this break section isn't really needed, since it releases all the tension built up too early
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right now, the distance between each object hovers around 2.00x. to reflect the music more, you can increase the spacing as the pattern builds up
01:13:846 (1) - maybe you could try moving this to above (4), to create a sharp angle in (3,4,1) so you emphasize the drums more

[Thievly]
00:06:963 (4) - maybe the 1/4 slider is a bit too much for this diff, since the map is dominantly 1/1 and 1/2, and you only use 1/4 here
00:19:845 (1,2) - this is kind of an oddball in this section, wouldn't it be better to use just two 1/2 sliders so you don't miss 00:20:198 - ?
00:41:022 (4) - nc plz
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - arranging them in a line (aka moving (1) to x364 y230) looks cleaner

i think thats it, nice mapset

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-24T13:09:19+00:00

meep

osu file format v14

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Will try to mod other diffs some time next week.

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-24T15:52:44+00:00

Halfslashed

[Advanced]
00:18:434 (1,2) - Match angles for consistency, something like this (also make sure to fix DS): http://puu.sh/q8qUH/7499302e7f.png i think it's fine as it is but thanks for the heads up about ds wew

toyboy

[Thievly] ow
00:06:963 (4) - maybe the 1/4 slider is a bit too much for this diff, since the map is dominantly 1/1 and 1/2, and you only use 1/4 here okay a lot of people have pointed this out now so i suppose i should change it, made it a 1/2 slider + a circle!
00:19:845 (1,2) - this is kind of an oddball in this section, wouldn't it be better to use just two 1/2 sliders so you don't miss 00:20:198 - ? i wanted a bit of variation from all the 1/2 sliders, also it highlights the snare drum nicely imo
00:41:022 (4) - nc plz lol whoops
00:48:787 (2,3,1) - arranging them in a line (aka moving (1) to x364 y230) looks cleaner a lot of people have suggested this already so i guess it wouldn't hurt to change it a

thanks for the mods!

update aay

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DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-07-25T09:55:31+00:00

From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions.

General

Check AiMod, you have conflicting tags. Make sure “jbhyperion” is in the the tags of all diffs since he has a GD.
Check AiMod, fix the title and artist name in Pati's Shiawase! since it didn't process the Japanese text right during the process on receiving the GD.
Uncheck “Widescreen Support” on Hyperion's Platter and Piku's Rain

Hyperion's Platter

00:12:081 (1,2,3,4) – It feels like (2) isn't properly spaced to me for pattern. I'd put (2) on X=304 so it feels a little more natural, at least from my perspective.
00:48:434 (1,2) – Feels a bit hard to catch because not much emphasis can be heard here, make it 1.80x spacing by putting (2) on X=96 then moving 00:48:787 (3,4,5) to X=336.

Piku's Rain

Your patterns and spacing look fine but I do have a spread concern with the AR being 9.2 since most Rains are 9 and under. Unless you have a specific reason for the AR being 9.2, I'd just make it 9 because it doesn't appear to affect flow at 9.

Good luck!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-25T12:06:03+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions.

Hyperion's Platter

00:12:081 (1,2,3,4) – It feels like (2) isn't properly spaced to me for pattern. I'd put (2) on X=304 so it feels a little more natural, at least from my perspective. Sure, makes this a little easier so the following hdash is less jarring
00:48:434 (1,2) – Feels a bit hard to catch because not much emphasis can be heard here, make it 1.80x spacing by putting (2) on X=96 then moving 00:48:787 (3,4,5) to X=336. Done

Good luck!

Thanks for the suggestions!

Platter

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Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-25T16:51:29+00:00

toy

toybot wrote:
00:39:610 (1) - isn't it supposed to be just clap with auto additions oh yeah
00:44:551 (3,4,5,6) - this jump pattern is so large compared to all of the other jump patterns in this section, consider nerfing a bit dont really wanna nerf it cause its not that hard when you compare it to other jumps so i just increased distance of some other jumps
00:49:492 - uh, this break section isn't really needed, since it releases all the tension built up too early oh okay
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right now, the distance between each object hovers around 2.00x. to reflect the music more, you can increase the spacing as the pattern builds up nice idea
01:13:846 (1) - maybe you could try moving this to above (4), to create a sharp angle in (3,4,1) so you emphasize the drums more okay

thank you

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-26T14:58:39+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From my lazy ctb modding queue. I was asked to look at Rain but couldn't find much to comment on so I just modded what I could. i could have been sniped on a few suggestions. | lul hello there JBH's Platter

General

Check AiMod, you have conflicting tags. Make sure “jbhyperion” is in the the tags of all diffs since he has a GD. | Stjpa fixed it for me
~~Check AiMod, fix the title and artist name in Pati's Shiawase! since it didn't process the Japanese text right during the process on receiving the GD.~~
Uncheck “Widescreen Support” on Hyperion's Platter and Piku's Rain | Turned off widescreen support

Piku's Rain

Your patterns and spacing look fine but I do have a spread concern with the AR being 9.2 since most Rains are 9 and under. Unless you have a specific reason for the AR being 9.2, I'd just make it 9 because it doesn't appear to affect flow at 9. | Changed to AR 9

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Fixed some hitsounds and a spacing inconsistency along with this. Also throwing a star o/*

Update

osu file format v14

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RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2016-07-27T09:36:58+00:00

I'm not dead, sorry for the delay :')

Pati's Shiawase!

00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this can be edited a bit in order to make a perfect star? Looks a bit random currently
00:45:081 (6) - Move to 57|204 so you have a perfect star again?
00:48:787 (1,1) - This is quite a pointess suggestion, feel free to ignore it, but it feels like these two sliders are a bit too close, you could make a better triangle with 00:49:022 (2) - maybe
00:51:258 (1) - What if you delete this note and start the break here instead? (like insane diff)
01:13:846 (1) - You should really delete this note, since there's no sound on this beat and other diffs have no note on this beat!

Insane

00:20:022 (2) - Feels a bit out of place, since it's the only 1/4 kickslider in the whole pattern, turn it into notes? Or just into a repeat slider like 00:22:845 (2) -
00:37:140 (3,6) - Stack these?
01:00:787 (4,3) - This overlap is a bit weird, honestly
01:02:022 (6) - Move to 115|334?

Hard

00:35:375 (1,2,3) - Uhm, maybe you could move this whole pattern to the left so it's symmetrical to the center?
00:43:316 (4,1) - Pls stack xd

Thievley's Advanced

Should be Thievley's Normal, it's not really an Advanced
00:05:022 (2,3) - Please ctrl+g, flows muuuuuch better
00:27:610 (2,1) - Blanked could be better (super nazi, sorry)
00:43:845 (1,2) - Looks much better if you copy-paste the first slider, since it can be noticed that their shape is different
00:48:787 (2,3) - I don't recommend using 1/3 sliders in a Normal diff, but I'm not sure, so maybe just ask a BN (01:13:140 (2,3) - same here)

Easy

01:13:140 (4) - This slider should end on 01:13:728 - since in the other diffs you didn't put any notes on 01:13:846 - and this feels weird! It would be a 5/3 slider but it's not a problem at all.

This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star!

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-27T14:27:07+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Insane

00:20:022 (2) - Feels a bit out of place, since it's the only 1/4 kickslider in the whole pattern, turn it into notes? Or just into a repeat slider like 00:22:845 (2) - I feel kinda sick of answering that over and over xD. There's a higher pitched drum or whatever which makes the kickslider fit really well. People never had a problem playing it properly either. But if JBH says something to it I'll change it.
00:37:140 (3,6) - Stack these? It's a constant build-up so it would kinda ruin the system. :<
01:00:787 (4,3) - This overlap is a bit weird, honestly Fixed.
01:02:022 (6) - Move to 115|334? Fits pretty well to the vocals, sure.
Hard
00:35:375 (1,2,3) - Uhm, maybe you could move this whole pattern to the left so it's symmetrical to the center? Done.
00:43:316 (4,1) - Pls stack xd Oops.

Easy

01:13:140 (4) - This slider should end on 01:13:728 - since in the other diffs you didn't put any notes on 01:13:846 - and this feels weird! It would be a 5/3 slider but it's not a problem at all. Ok.
This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star! Thanks for the star. c: I don't think I should look for BNs already, but let's see what JBH says. Going to mod your map tonight!

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-07-27T15:03:53+00:00

rikih

RikiH_ wrote:
00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this can be edited a bit in order to make a perfect star? Looks a bit random currently i tried
00:45:081 (6) - Move to 57|204 so you have a perfect star again? done
00:48:787 (1,1) - This is quite a pointess suggestion, feel free to ignore it, but it feels like these two sliders are a bit too close, you could make a better triangle with 00:49:022 (2) - maybe uh okay
00:51:258 (1) - What if you delete this note and start the break here instead? (like insane diff) what if say im not like the other what if say i mapped that part naw
01:13:846 (1) - You should really delete this note, since there's no sound on this beat and other diffs have no note on this beat! okok

This set is incredibly good, you should look for a BN, it's 100% ready for rank. Take a star!

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-28T18:36:08+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Thievley's Advanced
Should be Thievley's Normal, it's not really an Advanced sort of agree with this.. but i think it's fine as advanced
00:05:022 (2,3) - Please ctrl+g, flows muuuuuch better oki
00:27:610 (2,1) - Blanked could be better (super nazi, sorry) yup yup
00:43:845 (1,2) - Looks much better if you copy-paste the first slider, since it can be noticed that their shape is different alright!
00:48:787 (2,3) - I don't recommend using 1/3 sliders in a Normal diff, but I'm not sure, so maybe just ask a BN (01:13:140 (2,3) - same here) might consider changing this, but i think it's fine for now yep, will ask^

thanks for the mod~

click this stjpa!

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-29T08:33:07+00:00

hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8(

Hyperion :
- CS 3,6 or 3,7 maybe? i feel a bit strange to see big fruits lol
- 00:11:287 - why not map this too if you 00:10:492 (3) - mapped this? that drum is stong
- 00:17:022 (1) - feel weird to see consistent spacing on new beat aka cymbal here, try spacing like 00:25:140 (5) - ?
- 00:29:728 (1) - try a bit further for emphasis vocal? imo x:364
- 00:34:492 (3) - x:88 for emphasis vocal?
- 00:43:845 (1) - remove finish, no cymbal D:
- 00:49:492 (5) - i hear weak cymbal here, how about make this note catch with dash like x:348?
- 01:01:140 - strong beat, also drum start in here which continue until 01:02:375 - so imo this should be mapped
- 01:13:845 (5) - imo current spacing is so low, x:288 instead?
- 01:15:434 (1) - if you arent going to lower volumes then why there are greenlines in here :^)

Piku :
- 00:20:287 - 00:20:640 - 00:20:816 - 00:20:992 - why not keep map them? they are strong enough and feel weird if one of them is skipped
- 00:22:051 - 00:22:228 - ^
- 00:40:845 (4) - x:304? imo hdash fits better for 00:41:022 (1) - due the vocal strength :C (also consistency with 01:06:610 (4) - )
- 00:43:845 (1) - no hdash for cymbal here but for 00:43:669 (5) - ? i cry
- 00:56:905 (2) - finish for cymbal
- 01:13:846 - map it i guess? there is still a music there even not drum (consistency with jbh /run)
- 01:15:345 (1) - same as platter

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8(

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-07-29T11:22:44+00:00

Xinely wrote:
hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8( Couldn't find any confirmation post in the other ranked mapsets, so will see what Stjpa has to say here

Hyperion :
- CS 3,6 or 3,7 maybe? i feel a bit strange to see big fruits lol Wai u h8 big fruits ;w; Seriously though I wanted this diff to be quite different from the Rain so I went for a lower CS than usual. I've never really been a fan of high CS Platters personally
- 00:11:287 - why not map this too if you 00:10:492 (3) - mapped this? that drum is stong Fair point, added a note here
- 00:17:022 (1) - feel weird to see consistent spacing on new beat aka cymbal here, try spacing like 00:25:140 (5) - ? I'd have to make a 1/4 dash and it plays really awkwardly for me. I would prefer to emphasize this more too, but that means leaving 00:16:934 unmapped and I'd prefer not to do that
- 00:29:728 (1) - try a bit further for emphasis vocal? imo x:364 Sure
- 00:34:492 (3) - x:88 for emphasis vocal? Yeah I like a hyper here, done
- 00:43:845 (1) - remove finish, no cymbal D: Copied hitsounds because lazy orz
- 00:49:492 (5) - i hear weak cymbal here, how about make this note catch with dash like x:348? Done, and added a better drum finish hitsound
- 01:01:140 - strong beat, also drum start in here which continue until 01:02:375 - so imo this should be mapped I prefer to only focus on vocals here since they are much stronger, mapping a repeat here breaks the smooth vocal line
- 01:13:845 (5) - imo current spacing is so low, x:288 instead? Done
- 01:15:434 (1) - if you arent going to lower volumes then why there are greenlines in here :^) I'm an idiot

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8( ayyy

Thanks for the mod!

Platter

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-29T11:27:46+00:00

Xinely wrote:
hello from jbh req

any metadata confirmation? im worrying with romanized of あったかいんだらかぁ♪ due かぁ iirc pronounced as "kaa" , if no confirm yet then go ask metadata master to confirm it 8( | Utaite.wikia - Attakain Dakara~♪ (あったかいんだからぁ♪) (Because It's Warm~♪)

Piku :
- 00:20:287 - 00:20:640 - 00:20:816 - 00:20:992 - why not keep map them? they are strong enough and feel weird if one of them is skipped | Ok done :c
- 00:22:051 - 00:22:228 - ^ | ^
- 00:40:845 (4) - x:304? imo hdash fits better for 00:41:022 (1) - due the vocal strength :C (also consistency with 01:06:610 (4) - ) | Yep, fits much better
- 00:43:845 (1) - no hdash for cymbal here but for 00:43:669 (5) - ? i cry | Don't cry :c Fixed
- 00:56:905 (2) - finish for cymbal | Oops, looks like I've missed that
- 01:13:846 - map it i guess? there is still a music there even not drum (consistency with jbh /run) | Yeah I guess
- 01:15:345 (1) - same as platter | Done

dammit just got 1 mod so far but i want to give apple icon 8( | :c

Thanks for the mod!

Update

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Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Stjpa
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Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm thievley pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
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Last edited by P i k u 2016-07-29T14:39:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-29T13:40:18+00:00

so title is should be "あったかいんだからぁ♪"

when current map's title is "あったかいんだらかぁ♪"

Edit : btw its for all diffs

Last edited by Xinely 2016-07-30T03:04:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-07-29T13:42:50+00:00

Oh I didn't notice I made a typo when typing it, sorry xd

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2016-07-29T21:14:24+00:00

hi u requested a shitmod?

here we fookin go!!1
(I'm just bringin suggestions!)

[General]

Fine map overall
The Easy diff isn't currently fittin' for an "Easy" diff at the moment imo since you follow almost every important sound with a looooooooot of 1/1 sliders! Also the fact that you don't really use 2/1 sliders (there are some but not many) is kinda weird and doesn't really fit for an Easy diff (1.6 sr op). I'd suggest ya to rename that diff into "Normal" knowing that there will be two normal diffs in that mapset but it's not that bad~ (some mapsets have that)
ALSO , a spread is usually made like that Easy→Normal→Advanced→Hard and not Easy→Advanced→Hard so you know...
Since almost combo colour look similar (3 orange-ish) , I'd suggest ya to get one brown , it'd be nice with the bg!

[Easy]

00:14:198 (1) - Even if there's a little break there you could space a lil bit the note since it has a .85 spacin' instead if a 1.00 one!
00:19:845 (1) - You can polish that blanket~
00:26:904 (1) - .72 spacin' here aswell and I don't know if it's easily fixable tbh

[Thievley's Advanced]

00:26:904 (1) - You could maybe move that slider a lil bit to the left so the transition with 00:27:610 (2) - will be smoother :
00:18:787 (2) - Really nazi but it's 0.9 ds instead of 1.0.

[Hard]

00:12:610 (7) - Why don't you keep a consistency with sliders like 00:11:375 (1) - ? I know you originally wanted to set something progressive with SV but reducing the curve here would give a better aspect of the whole pattern ( 00:11:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) imo.
01:11:022 (1,2,3) - Felt like you could better align these objects!It's up to you
Big fan of that diff lo

[Insane]

00:09:345 - I know what you wanted to map with the two different triples but in my opinion , that sound should not be ignored! (See how 00:14:904 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - is FLAWLESS :D )
00:36:610 (4) - Felt like you could increase the spacin' on that circle since there's a big kick c:
00:49:492 (1) - Maybe put it at 252|176 in order to make a sweet triangle with 00:48:787 (1,2) - since I noticed you like aesthetics in general!
00:56:552 - When I listened to that sound first, I thought you'd add a slow slider who could cover it but well , it's not too late
01:08:552 (2) - you could maybe align it with 01:08:199 (1) - ?(nazi)
01:11:022 (1,2,3) - I don't know about these since you ignored 01:11:199 - and 01:11:905 - and they feel important imo since you followed 01:12:522 - with 01:12:434 (1) - !

[Pati's Shiwase]

00:08:198 (5) - The spacin' could have been much higher here instead at 00:08:375 (6) - since you have a louder sound.
00:16:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm sure someone already pointed it but it'd be better to make that better to read since you did it very well at 00:14:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - for example!
00:36:610 (6) - Once again , the spacin' could have been much higher for the same reaosn mentionned above!

As I said it's a cool mapset you have there~

Good luck for rankin!

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-07-30T12:45:29+00:00

Fixed everything except .72 spacing in Easy (now Normal) and combo colours because the shade always switches between strong - soft so I don't see a problem at all there. Thank you for your mod! c:

Edit: And that suggestion for the 1/3 pattern because it's already a triangle but with a more appropriate spacing if you take a look on the spacing between both 1/3 sliders.

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-31T16:47:36+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
[Thievley's Advanced]

00:26:904 (1) - You could maybe move that slider a lil bit to the left so the transition with 00:27:610 (2) - will be smoother : okay
00:18:787 (2) - Really nazi but it's 0.9 ds instead of 1.0. yeah xd

thanks!

opaosjpiajsf

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-08-04T17:53:04+00:00

Quick mod on some of the other diffs as promised:

General Comments:

Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: No issues
Metadata: No issues
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: 00:51:258 (1) - Stacked red and green lines at the same point with different volume and sampleset in Pati's diff is unrankable - please fix this
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Normal

00:21:610 (4,1) - I'd unblanket this to make a square formation with 00:20:551 (2,3,4,1) - since there is a noticeable overlap between 00:20:551 (2,1) - which looks kinda ugly to me
00:25:140 (4) - Two circles would make both of these beats clickable and provide more emphasis to the start of the string instrument on the downbeat
00:33:257 (2,1) - Same suggestion as for 00:21:610 (4,1)
00:41:022 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off here, (2) is much closer to the head of (1) than the tail, and additionally 00:40:669 (4,2) is unstacked slightly. Put (4) at [298,252] and curve (1,2) slightly less for cleaner aesthetic and more space
00:48:434 (4,5) - Slidertail to ~ [260,48] for a better blanket, uneven on the tail at present
01:06:787 (3) - Perhaps make this a little less curved for better flow into 01:07:846 (4) -
01:08:199 (1,2) - Off-blanket, (2) is much too shallow a curve atm - middle anchor to [228,14]? Make sure to adjust 01:10:669 (4) accordingly due to the stack

Thievley's Advanced
What was the justification behind this being a Normal? It's considerably more dense than the Normal with frequent 1/2 usage, stacked doubles, overlapping sliders, etc. Considering the original Easy is now a Normal, I don't see why this can't be called advanced

00:21:963 (3,2) - Watch out for off-stack on the tail
00:24:787 (3,4,1) - Spacing varies a tiny bit here which affects the aesthetics, you can fix by moving (4) to [397,68]
00:27:610 (2,1) - I find this blanket shape kind of odd, perhaps the tail on (1) can come right a little so the whole sliderbody is following (2)?
00:33:787 (3,1) - I'd try to move these up a little, so the overlap with 00:32:198 (3) -'s tail is similar to the one with 00:32:551 (1)
00:36:081 (2,3) - Order should be reversed here if possible to give slider then circle, since 00:36:610 is easily the strongest sound here and deserves to be clickable for added emphasis going in to short pause. You might want to unstack if you do this to ensure readability
01:09:963 (1,2,3,1) - Similar situation, your rhythm choice throws the player off slightly because of the two strong cymbal sounds, one is clickable and the other is not. I'd recommend the following timeline for better playing experience:
SPOILER

Hard

00:24:963 (6,7) - Strong string instrument sounds are on the white ticks here, so circle + 1/2 slider + circle would be more fitting to give proper emphasis
00:36:081 (3) - At the expense of your nice symmetry, consider making this a 1/2 repeat slider to catch that strong vocal sound on the red tick
00:59:728 (1) - Very close to overlapping with the HP bar, might be worth trying to move it down a little if possible to avoid overlap with some custom skins
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find the flow really unintuitive and confusing to read here given what you did at 00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - for this kind of pattern in a Hard diff, you want to be making the transitions as simple as possible without too much variance in spacing (fine) or direction (not fine). As a compromise that is both more easily readable but still interesting, how about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5768378 - You'll need to tweak 01:02:552 (1) and following if you do this, but it's just one option you might want to consider

Piku's Rain

00:09:610 (7,8,9,1) - Two strong hdash here are linked by a delicate movement (8,9), so it's very easy to overshoot and miss either (9) or the return hyper to (1). Try moving (8,9) to around x-360 to make this more comfortable
00:11:904 (4,5,6) - Could potentially be a bit tricky considering the upcoming hdash pattern. Maybe reduce these a tiny bit by bringing (5) a few pixels to the left to make this less harsh
00:37:140 (2,3) - The slight increase in spacing here is quite unexpected, and players who walk this will often miss it. You could move (2) to x-256 so these distances are more balanced
01:02:199 (7,8,9,1) - Distance between (7,8) is quite low meaning that players need to speed up as they approach the hdash which could result in a miss/overshoot. Try moving (8,9) a little more to the right, and space them out slightly more to provide better flow. (8) at x-256 and (9) at x-320 works much better
01:03:257 (3,4) - Hdash from (3) is quite weak, so it's easy for players to release too early and miss the tail of (4) to catch the sharp return hyper, Rotating the tail of (4) 30 degrees or so reduces the distanced necessary to travel and makes the (4,1) hyper a bit more manageable

What I modded looked in pretty good state, only some minor cosmetic issues and the odd questionable rhythm. Hope these suggestions help and let's go for rank! (:

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-08-04T21:42:37+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Thievley's Advanced
What was the justification behind this being a Normal? It's considerably more dense than the Normal with frequent 1/2 usage, stacked doubles, overlapping sliders, etc. Considering the original Easy is now a Normal, I don't see why this can't be called advanced to be fair, most harder normals are mapped this way, so i guess that was the reasoning behind wanting to change the name. I agree with you though, also when compared to the other difficulties in the set, it can very well be an advanced. But i feel your average advanced would use more 1/4 patterns, much like the hard diff but more watered down. Sooooooo, I guess i'll (or stjpa already renamed idk) this back to advanced woo
00:21:963 (3,2) - Watch out for off-stack on the tail oki
00:24:787 (3,4,1) - Spacing varies a tiny bit here which affects the aesthetics, you can fix by moving (4) to [397,68] alright
00:27:610 (2,1) - I find this blanket shape kind of odd, perhaps the tail on (1) can come right a little so the whole sliderbody is following (2)? i think i fixed this a different way but it doesn't look that bad imo
00:33:787 (3,1) - I'd try to move these up a little, so the overlap with 00:32:198 (3) -'s tail is similar to the one with 00:32:551 (1) yup
00:36:081 (2,3) - Order should be reversed here if possible to give slider then circle, since 00:36:610 is easily the strongest sound here and deserves to be clickable for added emphasis going in to short pause. You might want to unstack if you do this to ensure readability eeh you have a point, but I think it's fine the way it is because i continue to follow vocals here and i feel the hitsounds emphasize it well enough
01:09:963 (1,2,3,1) - Similar situation, your rhythm choice throws the player off slightly because of the two strong cymbal sounds, one is clickable and the other is not. I'd recommend the following timeline for better playing experience: nice suggestion
SPOILER

thanks!

advanceddiff4u

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Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-04T22:16:45+00:00

Everything fixed.

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-08-06T20:10:10+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Quick mod on some of the other diffs as promised:

Piku's Rain
00:09:610 (7,8,9,1) - Two strong hdash here are linked by a delicate movement (8,9), so it's very easy to overshoot and miss either (9) or the return hyper to (1). Try moving (8,9) to around x-360 to make this more comfortable | Aight
00:11:904 (4,5,6) - Could potentially be a bit tricky considering the upcoming hdash pattern. Maybe reduce these a tiny bit by bringing (5) a few pixels to the left to make this less harsh | Okay
00:37:140 (2,3) - The slight increase in spacing here is quite unexpected, and players who walk this will often miss it. You could move (2) to x-256 so these distances are more balanced | Ya
01:02:199 (7,8,9,1) - Distance between (7,8) is quite low meaning that players need to speed up as they approach the hdash which could result in a miss/overshoot. Try moving (8,9) a little more to the right, and space them out slightly more to provide better flow. (8) at x-256 and (9) at x-320 works much better | Sure
01:03:257 (3,4) - Hdash from (3) is quite weak, so it's easy for players to release too early and miss the tail of (4) to catch the sharp return hyper, Rotating the tail of (4) 30 degrees or so reduces the distanced necessary to travel and makes the (4,1) hyper a bit more manageable | Rotated by 30 degrees
What I modded looked in pretty good state, only some minor cosmetic issues and the odd questionable rhythm. Hope these suggestions help and let's go for rank! (:

Sorry for the cold reply, I'm not in a good mood atm.
Thanks a lot

Update

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TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
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Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm thievley pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
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160,256,45257,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,256,45434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,296,45610,1,4,1:3:0:0:
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288,336,46316,1,4,1:3:0:0:
456,336,46492,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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488,272,48081,1,4,0:0:0:0:
296,280,48434,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,224,48610,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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152,72,49492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,264,56552,6,0,P|160:224|208:176,1,144
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328,272,57258,2,0,L|400:335,1,96,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,57610,1,10,0:0:0:0:
232,192,57787,2,0,L|136:192,2,96,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,58316,6,0,L|464:152,1,96,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,80,60610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,80,60787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,136,60963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,224,61140,5,0,1:0:0:0:
336,128,61316,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,152,61493,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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320,264,62463,1,4,1:3:0:0:
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368,88,63081,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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272,136,65199,1,4,0:3:0:0:
328,136,65287,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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280,288,65905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,66610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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440,184,67846,1,4,1:3:0:0:
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376,280,70140,1,4,0:3:0:0:
424,272,70228,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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40,144,72081,1,4,1:3:0:0:
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256,192,75434,12,0,79493,0:0:0:0:

riffy

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riffy 2016-08-13T14:16:56+00:00

Did a few rhythm changes.

IRC log

18:52 Stjpa: hey, do u have some minutes? :v
18:52 Bakari: Hey
18:52 Bakari: Sure
18:53 Stjpa: alright, to make it short: i had to take out the advanced GD from my set and mapped one on my own, but i never mapped advanced so i dont know how it is
18:53 Stjpa: so im trying to get some irc mods as the set itself should be pretty good
18:53 *Stjpa is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1011398 Hanatan - Attakain Dakara]
18:54 Bakari: Let's see
19:00 Bakari: 00:09:963 (1) - could use more circles for better vocals emphasis. probably s;omething like http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/GkV3687N.jpg this
19:01 Bakari: 00:20:551 (2,3,4) - if you want to stress the way drumds get more intense, start with the repeated 1/2 slider, as it is eaier to hit
19:02 Bakari: then use slider+circle afterwards
19:02 Stjpa: hm, would probably use the emphasis thing in the kiais to make them more unique
19:04 Stjpa: oh, true
19:04 Bakari: something like [http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/lMZAQqPP.jpg this] would also give some emphasis, while keeping the kiai more intense
19:04 Bakari: 00:09:963 (1) - that ^ is for this pattern
19:05 Stjpa: alright, gonna use this one c:
19:05 Bakari: 00:25:492 - 00:36:787 - would be better to keep some consistency
19:07 Bakari: break the 1/2 chain and stress the vocals with a circle? 00:42:081 (4) - 
19:07 Stjpa: well its consistent with all the other diffs and i made it like this because the second one is less audible than the first one imo
19:07 Bakari: 00:44:904 (3) - them something similar here to make the downbeat on 00:45:257 - feel more stressed? 
19:08 Stjpa: ok
19:09 Bakari: 01:01:140 (3) - actually, drums get gaster here, so a long slider with repeat that is a lot less movement-requiring than the previous two feels kinda unfitting 
19:10 Stjpa: was kinda unsure about it when mapping, gonna use something with 1/2 then
19:10 Bakari: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5836195
19:10 Bakari: Something like this, I guess
19:10 Bakari: You should be able to pull something better, but in case you feel unsure, take the example above as a basic pattern
19:11 Bakari: I guess that's all we have to consider, pretty neat diff

Looks quite neat.

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Best of luck!

CrimsonClaw

187 posts

Joined September 2012

CrimsonClaw 2016-08-19T16:43:08+00:00

bored

[Shiawase]
00:26:904 (1,2,3) - i dont like the transition ending in a circle, you might wanna place a slider there
01:11:022 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool!

[Insane]
00:19:140 (5) - reduce it by either 1 or 2 reverses and fill the gap with a circle or two
00:36:257 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a fan of this pattern. many overlaps, "bad" flow. i like the idea that you gave 00:36:787 (1,4,7) - more spacing though. please think about something here. if you need any ideas, poke me
00:37:845 (7,2) - they dont touch, yet they are too close too each other
00:39:610 (1,3,5) - i like the choice of the rhythm according to how you placed sliders C:
00:49:140 (2) - rotate this by something like 30° selection centred for a better look

[Hard]
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a clean pattern. rework it by copy pasting (2), (3) and using those
00:14:728 (3) - for this, copy paste (2), place it where (3) is and rotate that by 60° selection centred
00:15:963 (4,5,6) - is this meant to be a triangle boi
00:17:022 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - place them in a straight line?
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4) - not a clean pattern. fix it like before

[Advanced]
00:12:610 (6) - how about deleting this and 00:12:081 (5) - make this one reverse longer (completely optional because nobody gives a f on things like these)
01:13:140 (5,6) - why dont you deal with this kind of rhythm like you did 00:48:787 (4) - here?
really good diff.

Good luck with any further advancements!

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-19T18:50:53+00:00

CrimsonClaw wrote:
bored
[Insane]
00:19:140 (5) - reduce it by either 1 or 2 reverses and fill the gap with a circle or two I wanna give some recovery time here because I have a quite unique rhythm 00:20:022 (2,3) - here so people can calm a bit and concentrate more on everything after that. Imo it's needed because the streaming part is probably the hardest part in the whole map and a break in the middle of it isn't too bad, right?
00:36:257 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a fan of this pattern. many overlaps, "bad" flow. i like the idea that you gave 00:36:787 (1,4,7) - more spacing though. please think about something here. if you need any ideas, poke me The flow 00:36:257 (2,3,4) - here is supposed to be mediocre to emphasize everything afterward better which already has a good flow due all the acute angles I used here, especially (4) -> (1).
00:37:845 (7,2) - they dont touch, yet they are too close too each other Moved it a bit.
00:39:610 (1,3,5) - i like the choice of the rhythm according to how you placed sliders C: C:
00:49:140 (2) - rotate this by something like 30° selection centred for a better look Wanna keep it like it is because it looks cooler. :v

[Hard]
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a clean pattern. rework it by copy pasting (2), (3) and using those But they are copy-pasted kek.
00:14:728 (3) - for this, copy paste (2), place it where (3) is and rotate that by 60° selection centred You mean -60° don't you? A simple "CTRL + J" would do the same job tbh. And with your suggestion the transition to the next object would look a bit weird, so I'm gonna keep it.
00:15:963 (4,5,6) - is this meant to be a triangle boi No.
00:17:022 (1,2,3) - ^ Yes, and it even is a triangle with the third circle of the stack.
00:24:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - place them in a straight line? For what reason? Looks fine to me. :v
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4) - not a clean pattern. fix it like before Moved some objects, but they are copy-pasted too.

[Advanced]
00:12:610 (6) - how about deleting this and 00:12:081 (5) - make this one reverse longer (completely optional because nobody gives a f on things like these) Wouldn't suit the concept of the diff at all.
01:13:140 (5,6) - why dont you deal with this kind of rhythm like you did 00:48:787 (4) - here? Because the one at the end doesn't have a sound on the downbeat that is worth having anything on it.
really good diff.

Good luck with any further advancements! Thank fam.

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-08-23T09:52:58+00:00

=w=/

General

umh... gap between Hard and Advanced is a bit high compared to the others, mostly due to too many triplets on Hard, but I guess it's fine (I'd still try to avoid some triplets tho =3=)

everything else looks fine for me (bg, hitsounds, snaps...)

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Pati's Shiawase

00:05:022 (3,4) - this spacing is shorter than the rest among the combo (and also the nearby patterns). What about moving it to around x175 y49? (basically, keep the shape as it is and make the slider end stack on 00:05:904 (2) - )

00:26:904 (1,2) - I find these objects using a rhythm similar to 00:27:257 (3,4) - so what about using a slider instead, like this?

00:36:787 - I can't really hear this beat at all and it is really awkward even in gameplay (I mean, it's not like it's not there, but spacing is way too big for such a tiny beat that's barely hearable)

00:38:198 (1) - Just aesthetics: what about using a similar slider shape to 00:38:551 (2) - , like this

00:57:258 (2,3) - idk, it looks unpolished seeing a different spacing in the whole combo (00:56:905 (1,2,3,4) - ) (btw, I think barely anyone would notice that visual spacing between 00:56:905 (1,4) - and 00:57:258 (2,3) - is the same, that's why I made this suggestion)

01:13:140 (1,2,3,4) - I'd move this down quite a bit and that's because the short spacing is hindering the 1/3 snaps to flow smoothly. Basically, the fact you have to go faster between 01:12:787 (3,1) - helps the player in catching the spaced 1/3 snaps. Image

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Insane

00:01:493 (1,2) - kinda cramped here. What about this instead?

00:04:669 (2) - just personal flow here, ctrl g?

00:14:198 - the distance between all these streams is a bit short. Keeping a constant DS for everything here makes the part harder

00:31:492 (2) - umh... what about stacking this on 3? The constant DS really gives few emphasis at anything

00:36:787 (1) - as I mentioned for the hardest diff too, such tiny beat doesn't deserve such a big spacing since it's barely readable. If I were you I would have put a break after 00:36:610 (4) - and started mapping from 00:36:963 (2) -

00:37:845 (7) - it may be this is an Insane, but this slider is not necessary imo, since it wastes the beat on its tail. What about something like this?

00:39:610 (1) - again just personal flow, but I'd rather ctrl g this one and make between 00:39:610 (1,2,3) - a similar movement to 00:40:140 (3,4,5) -

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Hard

00:10:316 (2,3,4) - I try to avoid triplets after a slider on these diffs since it's fairly hard to read and consider that it also plays differently: the player has to mentally play the first beat of the triplet (the slider end) and click starting from the blue tick. I'd avoid it if possible

00:12:610 (7) - a simple circle works better here imo

00:31:669 (2,3) - I would have merged them to make a 1/1 slider as 00:31:140 (1) - due to vocals, but it is maybe my interpretation of the song speaking here probably...

01:02:375 (4,1) - uh... kinda weak passage here, due to direction. I'd ctrl h the slider like this (and re-arrange the next objects a little) so it feels more natural

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Advanced

00:12:610 (6) - circle only maybe? I can't hear the slider end beat at all (vocal endings don't count btw)

01:13:140 (5) - missing NC?

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Normal

00:41:022 (1,3) - I know you probably don't have many options, but this overlap is not soo nice to see. By placing it like this you can also ensure a goo reading for the next part, since the repeat is exactly stacked on 00:44:551 (2) - 's tail

01:08:199 (1) - ctrl g? x)

Attakai ocha ni shimashou~

Stjpa

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-23T13:37:20+00:00

no answer = changed

MrSergio wrote:
=w=/ jesus why do you use a lower font size for mods ;I

General

umh... gap between Hard and Advanced is a bit high compared to the others, mostly due to too many triplets on Hard, but I guess it's fine (I'd still try to avoid some triplets tho =3=) I thought so, but the problem is, that the gap between Hard and Insane would be too huge as well if I would nerf the triplets. I already nerfed them once and I don't think I have too many by now. Especially since it's only a single part it should be fine but I can get more opinions about it if you wish.

everything else looks fine for me (bg, hitsounds, snaps...)

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Insane

00:01:493 (1,2) - kinda cramped here. What about this instead?

00:04:669 (2) - just personal flow here, ctrl g? Doesn't really fit into my concept. I'm only emphasizing things on faster vocals (if that's the right term) and on downbeats.

00:14:198 - the distance between all these streams is a bit short. Keeping a constant DS for everything here makes the part harder But wouldn't increasing it make it overall harder and just enlarges the gap between Hard and Insane? Maybe I misunderstood it, if so, just message me in-game. :v

00:31:492 (2) - umh... what about stacking this on 3? The constant DS really gives few emphasis at anything And at the other hand it would be the only stack in the whole diff. :I

00:36:787 (1) - as I mentioned for the hardest diff too, such tiny beat doesn't deserve such a big spacing since it's barely readable. If I were you I would have put a break after 00:36:610 (4) - and started mapping from 00:36:963 (2) - Used a slider with a silenced tail for the fade out and CTRL + G'd some circles.

00:37:845 (7) - it may be this is an Insane, but this slider is not necessary imo, since it wastes the beat on its tail. What about something like this?

00:39:610 (1) - again just personal flow, but I'd rather ctrl g this one and make between 00:39:610 (1,2,3) - a similar movement to 00:40:140 (3,4,5) -

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Hard

00:10:316 (2,3,4) - I try to avoid triplets after a slider on these diffs since it's fairly hard to read and consider that it also plays differently: the player has to mentally play the first beat of the triplet (the slider end) and click starting from the blue tick. I'd avoid it if possible

00:12:610 (7) - a simple circle works better here imo

00:31:669 (2,3) - I would have merged them to make a 1/1 slider as 00:31:140 (1) - due to vocals, but it is maybe my interpretation of the song speaking here probably... Since there's a syllable on (3) I'd like to keep it.

01:02:375 (4,1) - uh... kinda weak passage here, due to direction. I'd ctrl h the slider like this (and re-arrange the next objects a little) so it feels more natural

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Advanced

00:12:610 (6) - circle only maybe? I can't hear the slider end beat at all (vocal endings don't count btw)

01:13:140 (5) - missing NC?

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Normal

00:41:022 (1,3) - I know you probably don't have many options, but this overlap is not soo nice to see. By placing it like this you can also ensure a goo reading for the next part, since the repeat is exactly stacked on 00:44:551 (2) - 's tail

01:08:199 (1) - ctrl g? x) jesus I'm retarded.

Attakai ocha ni shimashou~

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-08-23T14:21:10+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
But wouldn't increasing it make it overall harder and just enlarges the gap between Hard and Insane? Maybe I misunderstood it, if so, just message me in-game. :v

actually, it won't really add any extra difficulty to the map itself, since you already have pretty long streams and some decent jumps in the map elsewhere.
It would be like adding a water drop in the sea. (if you don't exaggerate with spacing, that is, lol)

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-08-23T21:46:03+00:00

pipe

Secretpipe wrote:
[Pati's Shiwase]
00:08:198 (5) - The spacin' could have been much higher here instead at 00:08:375 (6) - since you have a louder sound. ok
00:16:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm sure someone already pointed it but it'd be better to make that better to read since you did it very well at 00:14:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - for example! i'll keep it bcuz it looks fine for me
00:36:610 (6) - Once again , the spacin' could have been much higher for the same reaosn mentionned above! ok
i know this took a while a while but i didnt want to apply them at first hope you dont mind thanks

claw

CrimsonClaw wrote:
[Shiawase]

00:26:904 (1,2,3) - i dont like the transition ending in a circle, you might wanna place a slider there ye that would make sense changed them with a slider
01:11:022 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool! u2
thanksss

mr

MrSergio wrote:
Pati's Shiawase

00:05:022 (3,4) - this spacing is shorter than the rest among the combo (and also the nearby patterns). What about moving it to around x175 y49? (basically, keep the shape as it is and make the slider end stack on 00:05:904 (2) - ) even tough the spacing is shorter than others the gap between all sliders should be same so my point is not making an equal spacing

00:26:904 (1,2) - I find these objects using a rhythm similar to 00:27:257 (3,4) - so what about using a slider instead, like this? aye

00:36:787 - I can't really hear this beat at all and it is really awkward even in gameplay (I mean, it's not like it's not there, but spacing is way too big for such a tiny beat that's barely hearable) there's a beat but i dont really want to change the pattern so i just added some volume thingy

00:38:198 (1) - Just aesthetics: what about using a similar slider shape to 00:38:551 (2) - , like this okay

00:57:258 (2,3) - idk, it looks unpolished seeing a different spacing in the whole combo (00:56:905 (1,2,3,4) - ) (btw, I think barely anyone would notice that visual spacing between 00:56:905 (1,4) - and 00:57:258 (2,3) - is the same, that's why I made this suggestion) done

01:13:140 (1,2,3,4) - I'd move this down quite a bit and that's because the short spacing is hindering the 1/3 snaps to flow smoothly. Basically, the fact you have to go faster between 01:12:787 (3,1) - helps the player in catching the spaced 1/3 snaps. Image okkk

thankssss

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Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-23T22:00:17+00:00

Updated everything and also silenced the slidertail of 00:56:552 (1) - in Insane and Shiawase because it's an extended slider. Also added a whistle on the sliders head.

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2016-08-25T18:42:36+00:00

hi lol

Normal

01:10:316 - you added finish here but like in the rest of the diff they are clickable, it's only this one that isn't. maybe making it consistent would be better, like having 01:09:610 (3) - as a single 1/1 slider and adding a new circle

nothing else really triggers me tbh

Advanced

adding a note on 00:14:728 - makes it consistent with 00:16:140 - so I'd do that
00:17:022 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as before
00:17:728 (2) - i think this slider looks a bit out of place but it plays ok so why not
00:21:609 (4) - you could just make it a 1/2 slider since some patterns you mapped before this one already are this sort of dense
00:24:433 (4) - similar to the above, but if you don't want to change don't since it actually makes it a big chain of sliders (if you're ok with it and the above changed your mind do it xd)
00:32:904 (2,3) - how about circle, then slider? follows a similar rhythm song wise but hl's the vocal
01:13:140 (1,2) - mm i have my doubts but ok

Hard

00:06:257 (2,3) - don't think you need a repeater, really. my first thought was this, but if you want to follow the music, I'd add a circle on 00:06:787 - since it both has a sound on the song and vocal
00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi'ing here, you can probably shape this up better since to me 00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6) -'s angle looks awkward

the rest was all aesthetic preferences so I'd rather not cuz well we all know subjective things MATTER x d

Insane

00:36:434 (3,4) - stack these perhaps? same sound and placement wise 00:36:434 (3) - isn't the best imo so that fixes 2 things xd

it's a very standard, simple diff from my pov, but something that popped up is that some objects are mapped like 00:40:140 (3) - where the head highlights the vocal but the rest of the map ignores them in general by lots of 1/2 rhythm. this is again personal preference and I just wanted you to reflect on that :p

pati

very fun diff imo as well and I think it general it's quite fine, but I personally find the start of the stream section (00:14:198 -) quite uninteresting because you have enough room to map more than just circles, like how you did in the end with 00:24:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with the sliders. It also feels repetitive to me since you mapped beats like 00:20:992 (8,9,10) - or 00:22:404 (8,9,10) -. I personally believe that adding notes in this sort of scheme works best and is more catchy. lastly, it sounds very very packed because of the hitsounds you're using.

although I have nothing else to point out please consider this :3

dude nice song

hope it helps o3ob

Stjpa

899 posts

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-25T23:54:20+00:00

Maruyu wrote:
hi lol

[notice]Normal

01:10:316 - you added finish here but like in the rest of the diff they are clickable, it's only this one that isn't. maybe making it consistent would be better, like having 01:09:610 (3) - as a single 1/1 slider and adding a new circle Prefering to follow the vocals. There's just a finish because of the cymbals in the background of the music anyway.

nothing else really triggers me tbh
Advanced
adding a note on 00:14:728 - makes it consistent with 00:16:140 - so I'd do that
00:17:022 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as before
00:17:728 (2) - i think this slider looks a bit out of place but it plays ok so why not
00:21:609 (4) - you could just make it a 1/2 slider since some patterns you mapped before this one already are this sort of dense
00:24:433 (4) - similar to the above, but if you don't want to change don't since it actually makes it a big chain of sliders (if you're ok with it and the above changed your mind do it xd) Regarding all suggestion in the 1/4 section: I'm just using various rhythms to make it sort of more fun. The first half is basically the second half copied since there are bells in the second half. So yeah.
00:32:904 (2,3) - how about circle, then slider? follows a similar rhythm song wise but hl's the vocal But then I would have the drum on the slidertail which would make it weird. I know I'm ignoring the vocals this way, but I want to highlight the instruments as good as possible since they are really different then anywhere else in the music.
01:13:140 (1,2) - mm i have my doubts but ok Should be fine because of NCs. At least that's what I think. :v
Hard

00:06:257 (2,3) - don't think you need a repeater, really. my first thought was this, but if you want to follow the music, I'd add a circle on 00:06:787 - since it both has a sound on the song and vocal Luckily I had inconsistent spacing there so using 1/2 slider + circle was pretty easy.
00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi'ing here, you can probably shape this up better since to me 00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6) -'s angle looks awkward True.

the rest was all aesthetic preferences so I'd rather not cuz well we all know subjective things MATTER x d

Insane

00:36:434 (3,4) - stack these perhaps? same sound and placement wise 00:36:434 (3) - isn't the best imo so that fixes 2 things xd It's not really same sound at all. I'm seperating them to give the drum maximum emphasis.
it's a very standard, simple diff from my pov, but something that popped up is that some objects are mapped like 00:40:140 (3) - where the head highlights the vocal but the rest of the map ignores them in general by lots of 1/2 rhythm. this is again personal preference and I just wanted you to reflect on that :p Most of the time the vocals are on the white ticks. But I changed what you mentioned to a normal rhythm like the one in the second kiai because for some reason I didn't map the same rhythm on the vocals but drums. So now it's consistent.

dude nice song hope it helps o3ob Thanks for the mod. c:

Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-08-26T17:16:18+00:00

hie m4m from your queue
[Normal]
00:02:904 (3,4) - blanket p l s
00:12:610 - tbh i think it should end here like other diffs, cuz it fits the best, since this is normal diff this rhythm should be fine http://puu.sh/qPccU/6f4148c5ee.jpg
00:48:787 (5) - could nc tbh cuz the sound changes a bit here xd

[Advanced]
00:09:610 (6) - maybe use 1/2 slider to map more drums (and vocals)?
00:22:316 (6) - ^ ?
00:48:610 - could also map this cuz theres obviously snare here

[Hard]
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - tbh this looks a bit too tense for hard diff to me, try stack 2,3 so its a bit easier?
00:36:434 (4) - could be 2 circles cuz snare on end is pretyy stronge tbh
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol kinda same as suggestion on 00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:15:257 (1) - tbh you should do this in all diffs :C spinner have a lot better impact like this

[Insane]
00:09:787 (9,10,1) - could make these more spaced or smth to emphasize snares yehaj
00:20:022 (2,3) - this is the only triple that uses this rhythm in verse and it plays a bit weird lol maybe use more rhythm like this or just change this to 3circles
00:36:610 (4,1) - i dont think this should be such spaced like this it should be around 2x ds imo cuz 1->2 is only 1.8
01:12:434 (1,2) - maybe emphasize more? xd

[Pati's Shiawase]
tbh could use smaller cs here so it fits a bit better with cs spread xd maybe cs 4.3 - 4.5?
00:09:434 (8,9,1,2,3,1) - same as insane, these could have higher spacing than the rest to emphasize snares
00:25:140 (5,6,7,8,1) - idk why is this only one with big spacing when all of them in verse almost sounds the same xd
00:42:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd try to follow vocals here, i think it would play nicely after the 1.5x sv slider
00:49:581 - maybe add break?? would be more interesting imo
01:13:493 (3) - maybe nc so its consistent with 00:49:140 (1,2) -

good luck!
edit : my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/468811 lol

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BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2016-08-26T17:30:08+00:00

Hi, m4m from your queue
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/415039 my map

Normal :

What about naming this Easy? Usually when I look at normals they at least have a few complex rythm patterns using 1/2. Right now you use only 1/1 patterns with low sv which is what i would expect from an easy diff

00:09:963 (1,3) - 00:10:669 (2,4) - For having seen beginners play, patterns similar to these where the end of a slider points towards the head of another slider when both are not following each other in the timeline becomes hard to read for them very fast.
This happens at other places where objects point at sliderends or repeats, for example here 00:44:551 (2) - the curve that the slider makes indicates that the player should click on the repeat slider's end when you could probably make it bend downwards so that movement stays intuitive for your lower diff http://puu.sh/qPcW4/da5162836e.jpg
01:00:434 (2,3) - another similar instance woudl be this one

00:36:434 (3) - seeing you use this 1/2 slider here makes me question why you didn't do something similar here 00:12:081 (4) - as there is a very notable snare at the end of the build up that marks a stop and the slider repeat ignores it. Circle on 00:12:081 - and 1/2 slider might express things better

01:15:257 (1) - Probably would not be a bad idea to reduce the sipnner's end volume a bit more as the instruments all go silent - can be applied to all diffs

Advanced :

Same remark as easy for the diffname. Apart from the spacing that is on the higher side of things, this looks alot like a normal to me

00:06:787 (6,1) - for a lower diff, flow seeme kinda harsh since movement doesn't follow 5's curve and then goes straight down. I tweaked things around and ended up with http://puu.sh/qPdGO/b0759c9de0.jpg. That would also allow you to reajust the angles of the two following 1/2 sliders so that it doesn't look as random (this is subjective though)

00:24:434 (4) - while i think that your rythm choices for the whole section could be a bit more consistent, this one sticks out the most to me. The syth does something special here and i think you expressed that very well here 00:18:787 (4) - where you did 3 * 1/2 sliders + whatever comes after so that all the sounds are mapped. In the second instance of this however you do not map the first 1/2 slider would be cool if you changed things up to stay consistent.

00:25:492 (1) - the fact that you make this clickable but almost completely silence it doesn't seem very logic to me. You should give player feedback on what they click at all times

00:27:610 (2) - might be just me but this could be curved a bit more for aesthetical reasons

00:32:551 (1) - Overmapping sliderends like that might not be the best idea for normal level. A 1/1 slider would follow that crash sound in a more accurate way imo

00:34:492 - your rythm follows prominent vocal beats pretty well until now so i think this sounded a bit weird when you decided to ignore it here even though it stands out so much

00:47:551 - here too it seems pretty empty after you've been focusing on vocals so much

01:01:846 (4,5,1) - again flow doesn't seem very great to me for such a diff, the broken back and forth movement needed to clear 01:02:552 (1) - doesn't seem very intuitive

Hard :

Density wise this is high relative to normal and insane (at least in the beginning)

00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - patterns like these where you have tripples in the middle of circle patterns should probably be avoided as hard players are not familiar with neither of those when they transition in that tier of maps

00:28:845 (2) - I don't think offbeat sliders like those are appropriate here as the more prominent soudns int he music land on the slider's end 00:29:022 - (notably a kick, vocals don't exactly have their attack on the white tick) making those clickable will make much more sense to the player as it ensures that rythm stays consistent. This would also reflect your hitsounding a bit better.

Talking about hitsounding, i just realised your claps blend in alot with the music in this seciton 00:29:536 - you porbably wanna be careful about that as they give the baseline for the rythm

00:36:434 (4) - when you have two distinct sounds like these, the best idea would probably be to map two circles

01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - opinions differ on this but circlespam is difficult for hard players, especially when in complex patterns like these

Insane :

00:09:610 (8,9) - you probably should increase spacing by a little to at least match the deathstream part, this feels very low atm

00:12:434 (6,7) - the general movement of the jump pattern goes counter clock wise while the last slider goes clock wise which creates flow issues. If i were you i'd probably remove that slider completely and map a circle because there is nothing in the music there

00:19:140 (5) - why do you break consistency with the 2 previous repeatign sliders by making this repeat two more times? this is super unintuitive. I'd highlt suggest you don't do that.

00:34:492 (4,5) - spacing seems rather high considering there is not much happening on the beat you're jumping to

00:36:787 - your other diffs have a break from here on, would make sense to have it here too. 00:36:787 - if you're gonna keep it you can apply the same remark i mentioned before on that slider end

00:47:375 (3) - if you're consistently mapping the vocals you should probably not extend that slider over such a prominent beat

01:02:199 (7,1) - this jump feels very underwhelming compared to 01:02:022 (6,7) -, 01:02:552 (1) - has the strom sound (crash), and your spacing should probably reflect that

01:11:022 (1,3) - using 2 circles would probably be a better choice since you seem to hitcounds that way too

Extra :

00:24:610 (1) - seems a little random considering you mapped streams all the way until here

00:25:492 - volume this low is ridiculous, it gives little to no feedback to players if they are playing with default hitsounds. Raise this by alot.

00:29:728 (1,2,3,4) - i dislike how you use jumps when there is nothing on the music to support them 00:31:845 (3,4) -

01:06:081 (3,4) - why the huge spacing all of a sudden

If you have any questions or comments about anything i said find me ingame.

Good luck!

GugUCorn

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Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2016-08-27T12:59:05+00:00

Last edited by GugUCorn 2016-08-27T23:40:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Stjpa

899 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-08-27T22:26:57+00:00

Deppyforce

Deppyforce wrote:
hie m4m from your queue
[Normal]
00:02:904 (3,4) - blanket p l s Not really visible.
00:12:610 - tbh i think it should end here like other diffs, cuz it fits the best, since this is normal diff this rhythm should be fine http://puu.sh/qPccU/6f4148c5ee.jpg I wanna stick to 1/1 rhythms because else it would be really weird to only have a 1/2 rhythm at the beginning. I just removed the repeat and extended it to the next red tick, shouldn't be a problem because it's the last object.
00:48:787 (5) - could nc tbh cuz the sound changes a bit here xd Not really a valid reason, different usage of NC for emphasis doesn't really work that well in lower diffs.

[Advanced]
00:09:610 (6) - maybe use 1/2 slider to map more drums (and vocals)? Weird reason but yes. Fits quite well because that part isn't r eally dense.
00:22:316 (6) - ^ ? This entire section is really filled with 1/2 so I'd prefer to avoid it, also for the consistency I used here.
00:48:610 - could also map this cuz theres obviously snare here There are just two 1/4 sounds, don't really see a valid reason to just map one of them.

[Hard]
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - tbh this looks a bit too tense for hard diff to me, try stack 2,3 so its a bit easier? Might change it if more people complain about it, but I've seen such pattern more often in Hards already so it shouldn't really be a problem, especially since I'm using triplets anyway that are more suited for some better Hard level players.
00:36:434 (4) - could be 2 circles cuz snare on end is pretyy stronge tbh Changed the direction of the slider for a better emphasis on the snare.
01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol kinda same as suggestion on 00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Same reason as above.
01:15:257 (1) - tbh you should do this in all diffs :C spinner have a lot better impact like this Dunno, I dislike doing that in lower diffs.

[Insane]
00:09:787 (9,10,1) - could make these more spaced or smth to emphasize snares yehaj I agree but considering that I'm following a really strict DS scheme it would make it kinda weird. Other than that, streams right after a slidertail is already hard enough for most people, so doing some fancy spacing there would throw them off.
00:20:022 (2,3) - this is the only triple that uses this rhythm in verse and it plays a bit weird lol maybe use more rhythm like this or just change this to 3circles Mentioned the reason earlier already. 1) because the music in the background changes a bit and 2) some rest as this streampart is really damn long and hard, let alone that I'm using a kickslider later on.
00:36:610 (4,1) - i dont think this should be such spaced like this it should be around 2x ds imo cuz 1->2 is only 1.8 Changed it a bit, follows the pitch (or emphasis) of the vocals properly now.
01:12:434 (1,2) - maybe emphasize more? xd Meh, still the scheme thing like above but I also disagree with this idea.

good luck!
edit : my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/468811 lol

BOUYAAA

BOUYAAA wrote:
Hi, m4m from your queue
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/415039 my map

Normal :

What about naming this Easy? Usually when I look at normals they at least have a few complex rythm patterns using 1/2. Right now you use only 1/1 patterns with low sv which is what i would expect from an easy diff A lot of people have different opinions on this. Some say I should use Easy / Normal, others want Normal / Advanced because the Normal difficulty is basically a 1/1 spam which can be hard for newer players. So I stick to it.

00:09:963 (1,3) - 00:10:669 (2,4) - For having seen beginners play, patterns similar to these where the end of a slider points towards the head of another slider when both are not following each other in the timeline becomes hard to read for them very fast. Re-arranged.
This happens at other places where objects point at sliderends or repeats, for example here 00:44:551 (2) - the curve that the slider makes indicates that the player should click on the repeat slider's end when you could probably make it bend downwards so that movement stays intuitive for your lower diff http://puu.sh/qPcW4/da5162836e.jpg Moved it a bit upwards but not gonna change the pattern itself as it's a common pattern in most diffs of this level.
01:00:434 (2,3) - another similar instance woudl be this one Changed.

00:36:434 (3) - seeing you use this 1/2 slider here makes me question why you didn't do something similar here 00:12:081 (4) - as there is a very notable snare at the end of the build up that marks a stop and the slider repeat ignores it. Circle on 00:12:081 - and 1/2 slider might express things better Nice idea.

01:15:257 (1) - Probably would not be a bad idea to reduce the sipnner's end volume a bit more as the instruments all go silent - can be applied to all diffs The piano sound the spinner end is snapped to is pretty loud imo.

Advanced :

Same remark as easy for the diffname. Apart from the spacing that is on the higher side of things, this looks alot like a normal to me

00:06:787 (6,1) - for a lower diff, flow seeme kinda harsh since movement doesn't follow 5's curve and then goes straight down. I tweaked things around and ended up with http://puu.sh/qPdGO/b0759c9de0.jpg. That would also allow you to reajust the angles of the two following 1/2 sliders so that it doesn't look as random (this is subjective though) You are not wrong but since I'm doing this more often and it's basically a concept for this difficulty it should be fine. And to be honest, it's not that uncommon as well.

00:24:434 (4) - while i think that your rythm choices for the whole section could be a bit more consistent, this one sticks out the most to me. The syth does something special here and i think you expressed that very well here 00:18:787 (4) - where you did 3 * 1/2 sliders + whatever comes after so that all the sounds are mapped. In the second instance of this however you do not map the first 1/2 slider would be cool if you changed things up to stay consistent. I don't see a problem in giving some variation in the whole section by using different rhythms that fit the background sound anyway, but that one pattern you mentioned is fixed now.

00:25:492 (1) - the fact that you make this clickable but almost completely silence it doesn't seem very logic to me. You should give player feedback on what they click at all times Weird that you didn't mentioned it before. Yeah it's not that audible for a clickable object, but since a measure long break follows up it's not a problem at all. Leaving it blank is really weird too, imo.

00:27:610 (2) - might be just me but this could be curved a bit more for aesthetical reasons It's just like the many other sliders though, and I like it how it is too. :v

00:32:551 (1) - Overmapping sliderends like that might not be the best idea for normal level. A 1/1 slider would follow that crash sound in a more accurate way imo I can see your point of view, but using a 1/2 slider is way better to emphasize it imo, even tho the slidertail doesn't have an audible sound. The other ones are just a circle for a little break.

00:34:492 - your rythm follows prominent vocal beats pretty well until now so i think this sounded a bit weird when you decided to ignore it here even though it stands out so much From my interpretation they deserve more emphasis. Other than that, if I'd map the vocals like before I'd need to spam 1/2 or undermap it really hard, which I want to avoid. And for a pre-kiai it fits imo.

00:47:551 - here too it seems pretty empty after you've been focusing on vocals so much 1) The vocals change which can also give the player the idea that everything in that part is different, which definitely justifies the change of density here. 2) To map it properly I'd need to map either two stacked circles or a 1/2 slider on the red tick, and that basically never appears anywhere else (yeah, point 1 would fit here as well, but using constant 1/1 here makes it easier).

01:01:846 (4,5,1) - again flow doesn't seem very great to me for such a diff, the broken back and forth movement needed to clear 01:02:552 (1) - doesn't seem very intuitive Believe it or not, but actually even in low diffs newbies can benefit from flow breaks like this. :p

Hard :

Density wise this is high relative to normal and insane (at least in the beginning) That's why I'm using some 1/1 breaks and a lot of repeat-sliders in this diff. I know it's high, but balancing it is impossible.

00:10:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - patterns like these where you have tripples in the middle of circle patterns should probably be avoided as hard players are not familiar with neither of those when they transition in that tier of maps A 1/4 repeat slider it is!

00:28:845 (2) - I don't think offbeat sliders like those are appropriate here as the more prominent soudns int he music land on the slider's end 00:29:022 - (notably a kick, vocals don't exactly have their attack on the white tick) making those clickable will make much more sense to the player as it ensures that rythm stays consistent. This would also reflect your hitsounding a bit better. Forgot to change them in Hard as well from previous mod. I changed some, the only one I kept is 00:42:787 (2,3) - because it fits more than well it shouldn't throw the player off.

Talking about hitsounding, i just realised your claps blend in alot with the music in this seciton 00:29:536 - you porbably wanna be careful about that as they give the baseline for the rythm Wut. I don't really think so. :v

00:36:434 (4) - when you have two distinct sounds like these, the best idea would probably be to map two circles Yeah but then I would do something I haven't done anywhere else in the map which is something I wanna avoid. I already switched the direction of the slider to give it a little more emphasis.

01:01:140 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - opinions differ on this but circlespam is difficult for hard players, especially when in complex patterns like these Wanna wait for more opinions.

Insane :

00:09:610 (8,9) - you probably should increase spacing by a little to at least match the deathstream part, this feels very low atm I actually wonder why I used 0.4x DS here.

00:12:434 (6,7) - the general movement of the jump pattern goes counter clock wise while the last slider goes clock wise which creates flow issues. If i were you i'd probably remove that slider completely and map a circle because there is nothing in the music there I dunno if it's any better now, had to re-arrange things because of the previous suggestion, but now it's a star pattern (not a perfect star for proper emphasis) that contains break flows where the drum gets audibly stronger.

00:19:140 (5) - why do you break consistency with the 2 previous repeatign sliders by making this repeat two more times? this is super unintuitive. I'd highlt suggest you don't do that. Read previous mod. I have a good reason for that but if BNs want me to change it I'll do that.

00:34:492 (4,5) - spacing seems rather high considering there is not much happening on the beat you're jumping to The idea behind my concept is that I wanna give faster vocals a better emphasis. I'm doing it in combination with sliders here because it's nothing I should emphasize that strong as it's not that close to kiai neither in the kiai. I hope it's understandable lol.

00:36:787 - your other diffs have a break from here on, would make sense to have it here too. 00:36:787 - if you're gonna keep it you can apply the same remark i mentioned before on that slider end Still want it to be a slider (if that's what you meant by the second part of your sentence) and normally a break would be better for consistency in all diffs, but in my previous ones it's hard to give them a good emphasis. Mapping usual objects to them wouldn't be nice at all since they don't have a beat on them a newer player needs.

00:47:375 (3) - if you're consistently mapping the vocals you should probably not extend that slider over such a prominent beat It's not a beat, it's only a syllable that can be ignored like a lot of other vocals B).

01:02:199 (7,1) - this jump feels very underwhelming compared to 01:02:022 (6,7) -, 01:02:552 (1) - has the strom sound (crash), and your spacing should probably reflect that

01:11:022 (1,3) - using 2 circles would probably be a better choice since you seem to hitcounds that way too Can't really do more than just rotating the slider a bit. But considering that the kiai has a quite faster SV (and thus more overall spacing) using a gap that is the same as from the previous circle or similar would be overwhelming as well. So I just rotated it but at least got additional 0.3x.

Good luck!

Gonna answer the next mod when I receive another one.

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-08-29T17:00:20+00:00

maru

Maruyu wrote:
pati

very fun diff imo as well and I think it general it's quite fine, but I personally find the start of the stream section (00:14:198 -) quite uninteresting because you have enough room to map more than just circles, like how you did in the end with 00:24:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with the sliders. It also feels repetitive to me since you mapped beats like 00:20:992 (8,9,10) - or 00:22:404 (8,9,10) -. I personally believe that adding notes in this sort of scheme works best and is more catchy. lastly, it sounds very very packed because of the hitsounds you're using. not gonna wipe all the streams but instead 4th and 8th streams are with slider now

although I have nothing else to point out please consider this :3
thankss

deppy

Deppyforce wrote:
[Pati's Shiawase]
tbh could use smaller cs here so it fits a bit better with cs spread xd maybe cs 4.3 - 4.5? nah i prefer 4
00:09:434 (8,9,1,2,3,1) - same as insane, these could have higher spacing than the rest to emphasize snares ok
00:25:140 (5,6,7,8,1) - idk why is this only one with big spacing when all of them in verse almost sounds the same xd well you should check all the streams.the distance gets bigger and this is the biggest one no change
00:42:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd try to follow vocals here, i think it would play nicely after the 1.5x sv slider i prefer how it is now
00:49:581 - maybe add break?? would be more interesting imo not sure how it makes it more interesting with deleting a part i mapped
01:13:493 (3) - maybe nc so its consistent with 00:49:140 (1,2) - oh yhea

thankss

bouya

BOUYAAA wrote:
Extra :

00:24:610 (1) - seems a little random considering you mapped streams all the way until here changed fourth stream with sliders

00:25:492 - volume this low is ridiculous, it gives little to no feedback to players if they are playing with default hitsounds. Raise this by alot. oh actually its not intended to be here lol

00:29:728 (1,2,3,4) - i dislike how you use jumps when there is nothing on the music to support them 00:31:845 (3,4) - but i like them

01:06:081 (3,4) - why the huge spacing all of a sudden okay did something

thankss

satajapa

sup

Moeruattack

763 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-08-30T15:52:52+00:00

Hi :3
~~#modreqs~~Just stumble upon random beatmap~

Piku's Rain

Disable Widescreen Support.

00:21:257 (5) - Add Finish sound here, cuz other similar beats was added Finish.
00:15:257 (9,10,11,12) - I like if the stream pattern a bit curved a bit right than straight stream pattern, might have lesser chance to easy miss in this section.
00:23:816 (1) - Remove combo

I like the map flows really well :3

Hyperion's Platter

00:47:022 (2) - Ctrl+G seems fine too, creating a bit variety pattern.

About Hitsounding, since I think add Finish on start slider 00:19:845 (1), 00:21:257 (1) seems better.

Other seems fine, nice platter :p

good luck for ranking

+1 cookiesu

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-08-30T16:17:51+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Hi :3
~~#modreqs~~Just stumble upon random beatmap~ | Wow a random mod! Appreciated :^)

Piku's Rain
Disable Widescreen Support. | Done

00:21:257 (5) - Add Finish sound here, cuz other similar beats was added Finish. | Oops I missed that one
00:15:257 (9,10,11,12) - I like if the stream pattern a bit curved a bit right than straight stream pattern, might have lesser chance to easy miss in this section. | Idek why it was less curved than everything else xd, fixed
00:23:816 (1) - Remove combo | Removed

I like the map flows really well :3 | Thanks :3

good luck for ranking
+1 cookiesu

Thanks for the mod!
Fixed some slidershapes along with this.

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36787
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14198,19845,26904,38198,51258,56905,62552
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Stjpa
Version:Piku's Rain
Source:
Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
BeatmapID:1022513
BeatmapSetID:464644

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.92
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-08-30T21:43:51+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Hi :3
~~#modreqs~~Just stumble upon random beatmap~

Hyperion's Platter
00:47:022 (2) - Ctrl+G seems fine too, creating a bit variety pattern. Done, and respaced the following patterns a bit

About Hitsounding, since I think add Finish on start slider 00:19:845 (1), 00:21:257 (1) seems better. Added to first since there's a cymbal sound there, but not on the second since that one is just drum

Other seems fine, nice platter :p

good luck for ranking
+1 cookiesu

Thanks for the suggestions!

Platter kek

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36787
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14198,19845,26904,38198,51258,56905,62552
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Stjpa
Version:Hyperion's Platter
Source:
Tags:honeyworks hatsune miku vocaloid because it's warm pati p_i_k_u jbhyperion
BeatmapID:1037151
BeatmapSetID:464644

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Asonate

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Asonate 2016-08-31T20:58:31+00:00

hey, random mod

[Insane]

00:08:022 (4,5,6) - maybe have all of these have same DS to each other? Like this the 4,6 overlap looks somewhat off in perspective to 5. (while i agree that 00:08:551 (1) - should have higher spacing, nicely done!)
00:33:257 (3,4) - blanketnaziing, please dont punch me ;w;
00:37:316 (3) - as stupid as it sounds, maybe Nc this, or make the "restart" in the chorus somehow differentiated to these 00:36:963 (1,2) -
00:48:787 (1,2) - damn, these are parallel, looks awesome
01:01:669 (4,5,6) - while it hits the song pretty well, a singletappattern with low angles like here could cause trouble for less experienced players. not saying you should change it, but maybe get a few testplays from your targetaudience if you havent yet :3
01:14:552 - maybe make that hittable? feels so empty to me

[Hard]

00:12:787 - this timing section isnt needed, right? might as well delete it if its possible for that to become an issue later on
00:23:198 (3,4,5,6,7) - is it intentional for 00:23:375 (5,6) - to be 1.3 DS apart?
00:42:081 - i think that "yes" should definitely be made hittable, it being passive on a sliderend somewhat drowns the jumpy feel it creates
01:14:552 - same as in the insane :3

[Advanced]

Why not "Normal" ? (just wondering, not saying its wrong xD)

[Normal]

Similarly to Adnvanced, why didnt you go with "Easy" here (i have a feeling as to why, just wanna know if im right haha)

[Pati]

00:11:904 (4,5,6,7,8) - its so close to a perfect-sided star, consider making it one
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - speaking from how the vocals are paired, your 2 note NCing would start on 00:36:963 (2) - . I know, weird red tick being the stronger one, but its the song ;3
01:01:669 (4) - similar to the other diffs, you could try to make this stand out from the 3 jumps before to emphasise how the vocals change, a simple nc on this one would achieve that pretty well imo
01:14:552 - again, consider making that hittable, this void is really weird, when i hear the song still going on with something

WOOOO, awesome song, awesome mapset, take a star and good luck!

Sieg

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Sieg 2016-09-06T09:48:41+00:00

Hallo

General
[]

Metadata: Not sure about ♪ in the title, apparently there is no in Hanatan's version? http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26120993
Hitsounding: well, I don't see any complains on this in the thread so take this as personal preference\get targeted opinions on this. Apart from finish sound everything else seems way to weak especially soft clap you used, I ~~don't~~ can barely hear the difference with claps and without.

Hard
[]

00:07:845 (3,4) - You can stress strong beats in the music 00:08:022 () - 00:08:375 () - with strong (clickable) objects here https://puu.sh/r1Huw/b836dfbf71.png I don't any reasons to avoid that. <- also can be done in advanced

Insane
[]

00:08:022 (4,5,6) - jump 00:08:198 (5,6) - can be extended a bit to better stress strong beats https://puu.sh/r1HMj/0ede96170a.png
00:09:610 (8,9) - Spacing is too low, even slider-slider 00:08:551 (1,2) - uses 1.5x While here on strong triplet 00:09:787 (9) - you use 1x You can try something like https://puu.sh/r1HS6/8ab28dd158.png
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pace of DS extend can be greater? the music kind of support for it, tho it mostly personal vision. <- compare intensity with 00:33:963 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:36:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:14:198 (1) - stream part until 00:25:492 (1) - Cool, but you can try to improve this part by spreading it across the playfield more, atm it's quite concentrated in the center https://puu.sh/r1I5P/d195f8da9d.png
00:45:610 (3,4) - since this is noticeable stanza in music it would be better to stress at as separated pattern not as part of previous. For example https://puu.sh/r1Igd/beffc3ed86.png nc is optional
01:11:022 (1,2,3,4) - they can use ds extending structure, since all the starting beats are strong in the music and emphasized with strong hitsounds in difficulty, also this is kind of climax of the song,

Pati's Shiawase!
[]

00:04:316 (1,2,3,4) - nice pattern, but music wise 00:05:375 (4) - shouldn't be such drastically different and thrown away from overall pattern because music's pace it's changed
00:19:670 (7,1) - I don't think that this deserves to be such separated, it's not much stronger then 00:25:404 (8,1) - or other finishers 00:16:934 (10,1) -
00:24:610 (1,2,3) - flow is way too edgy here, also this is the only point with such flow in this part so consider to make it more natural
00:24:963 (4,5) - well again, you throw spots with really higher than overall part's intense difficulty, it makes play experience unbalanced frustrating for weaker players and boring for stronger. you should really try to find median for stream jumps\over all intensive\spacing and reduce all the spikes or increase difficulty in general

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-09-06T17:10:51+00:00

no comment = fixed / changed

Asonate

Asonate wrote:
hey, random mod

[Insane]
00:08:022 (4,5,6) - maybe have all of these have same DS to each other? Like this the 4,6 overlap looks somewhat off in perspective to 5. (while i agree that 00:08:551 (1) - should have higher spacing, nicely done!)
00:33:257 (3,4) - blanketnaziing, please dont punch me ;w;
00:37:316 (3) - as stupid as it sounds, maybe Nc this, or make the "restart" in the chorus somehow differentiated to these 00:36:963 (1,2) - I see your point, but having the NC on the vocal start would just fit the best. Also, how is the chorus not any different. :v
00:48:787 (1,2) - damn, these are parallel, looks awesome
01:01:669 (4,5,6) - while it hits the song pretty well, a singletappattern with low angles like here could cause trouble for less experienced players. not saying you should change it, but maybe get a few testplays from your targetaudience if you havent yet :3 Well it's not that hard even for the target audience. At least they have an acute angle from 6 to 7.
01:14:552 - maybe make that hittable? feels so empty to me
[Hard]
00:12:787 - this timing section isnt needed, right? might as well delete it if its possible for that to become an issue later on
00:23:198 (3,4,5,6,7) - is it intentional for 00:23:375 (5,6) - to be 1.3 DS apart? It's higher because of the stack. Enable stacks in editor to see it.
00:42:081 - i think that "yes" should definitely be made hittable, it being passive on a sliderend somewhat drowns the jumpy feel it creates
01:14:552 - same as in the insane :3
[Advanced]
Why not "Normal" ? (just wondering, not saying its wrong xD) Because the current Normal is not suitable for very new players as 1/1 spam can be hard without any breaks.
[Normal]
Similarly to Adnvanced, why didnt you go with "Easy" here (i have a feeling as to why, just wanna know if im right haha)

WOOOO, awesome song, awesome mapset, take a star and good luck!

Sieg

Sieg wrote:
Hallo Privet

General
[]
Metadata: Not sure about ♪ in the title, apparently there is no in Hanatan's version? http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26120993
Hitsounding: well, I don't see any complains on this in the thread so take this as personal preference\get targeted opinions on this. Apart from finish sound everything else seems way to weak especially soft clap you used, I ~~don't~~ can barely hear the difference with claps and without. Made the current one louder.
Hard
[]
00:07:845 (3,4) - You can stress strong beats in the music 00:08:022 () - 00:08:375 () - with strong (clickable) objects here https://puu.sh/r1Huw/b836dfbf71.png I don't any reasons to avoid that. <- also can be done in advanced Wanna keep the current one in Advanced as the whole part is focused on vocals so changing it would make it difficult for beginners.
Insane
[]
00:08:022 (4,5,6) - jump 00:08:198 (5,6) - can be extended a bit to better stress strong beats https://puu.sh/r1HMj/0ede96170a.png
00:09:610 (8,9) - Spacing is too low, even slider-slider 00:08:551 (1,2) - uses 1.5x While here on strong triplet 00:09:787 (9) - you use 1x You can try something like https://puu.sh/r1HS6/8ab28dd158.png Used 1.5x with a bit different flow.
00:11:728 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pace of DS extend can be greater? the music kind of support for it, tho it mostly personal vision. <- compare intensity with 00:33:963 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:36:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:14:198 (1) - stream part until 00:25:492 (1) - Cool, but you can try to improve this part by spreading it across the playfield more, atm it's quite concentrated in the center https://puu.sh/r1I5P/d195f8da9d.png
00:45:610 (3,4) - since this is noticeable stanza in music it would be better to stress at as separated pattern not as part of previous. For example https://puu.sh/r1Igd/beffc3ed86.png nc is optional
01:11:022 (1,2,3,4) - they can use ds extending structure, since all the starting beats are strong in the music and emphasized with strong hitsounds in difficulty, also this is kind of climax of the song.

I also silenced some extended sliders in Pati's diff.

Xinely

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Xinely 2016-09-08T14:32:21+00:00

kkk

P i k u

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P i k u 2016-09-08T14:34:36+00:00

Hype

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-09-08T15:45:38+00:00

P i k u wrote:
Hype

Thanks Xinely! (:

Pati

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Pati 2016-09-09T01:53:07+00:00

ason

Asonate wrote:
[Pati]
00:11:904 (4,5,6,7,8) - its so close to a perfect-sided star, consider making it one ok
00:36:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - speaking from how the vocals are paired, your 2 note NCing would start on 00:36:963 (2) - . I know, weird red tick being the stronger one, but its the song ;3 its mentioned in the elder mods and 00:36:787 (1) - is just kinda quiet but there's a beat definitely
01:01:669 (4) - similar to the other diffs, you could try to make this stand out from the 3 jumps before to emphasise how the vocals change, a simple nc on this one would achieve that pretty well imo yeah okay that looks good
01:14:552 - again, consider making that hittable, this void is really weird, when i hear the song still going on with something slider now

thank youu

siegg

Sieg wrote:
Pati's Shiawase!
hey that should be a X icon!
00:04:316 (1,2,3,4) - nice pattern, but music wise 00:05:375 (4) - shouldn't be such drastically different and thrown away from overall pattern because music's pace it's changed okay changed (4) with circles now
00:19:670 (7,1) - I don't think that this deserves to be such separated, it's not much stronger then 00:25:404 (8,1) - or other finishers 00:16:934 (10,1) - lemme tell you what i think here. 00:19:670 (7,1) - is a jump but the others are just stream. so rather than comparing it with other finishers just look at the pattern
00:24:610 (1,2,3) - flow is way too edgy here, also this is the only point with such flow in this part so consider to make it more natural done
00:24:963 (4,5) - well again, you throw spots with really higher than overall part's intense difficulty, it makes play experience unbalanced frustrating for weaker players and boring for stronger. you should really try to find median for stream jumps\over all intensive\spacing and reduce all the spikes or increase difficulty in general honestly i dont agree with this because my point in here is to make stream section harder as the time passes so thats why it is hard

thank youu siegg

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-09-09T01:54:09+00:00

& updated!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-09-09T18:02:13+00:00

Well... I mainly did a few fixes in game with Stjpa for the std maps and I wanted just to point out a thing for the Rain:

00:25:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is lacking movement imo. What about something like this, similar to what you did for 00:36:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ?

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-09-09T23:31:10+00:00

ok, I rechecked my suggestion on the Rain and it doesn't really change much anyway.
Fixed other few things with Stjpa in-game so it's finally ready.

Pati

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Pati 2016-09-10T00:06:21+00:00

i guess its happening

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-09-10T09:51:18+00:00

quick recheck as requested

pati:
00:21:787 (1,2,3) - could you rotate this or the second part just a little so 00:21:875 (2,4) - becomes a bit easier to read? (reduce the overlap a little so more of the note is visible)
01:03:963 (1) - increasig spacing towards 2 doesn'T make much sense to me since 1 is vocal+drum but 2 is just whatever, sth like http://i.imgur.com/eFcGk9u.jpg maybe?
01:14:640 - 20% volume timing line here so the tick isn't as annoying but still audible enough
01:15:169 - 5% here to silence sliderend since there is nothing at all

insane:
00:36:257 (2,3) - ctrlg on this rhythm woukd make more sense to me cause the red ticks are way stronger here, espececially vocal wise. and since 00:35:375 (1) - seems to follow vocals, doing the same here would be nice
if you wanted to try some reverse emphasis thing here, I don't think it works because of how the emphasis before is + only 1/2 slider

hard:
00:02:728 (4) - any reason to make this the only 1/2 stack in the intro?
00:36:434 (4) - could probably be 2 circles cause red tick is so strong. http://i.imgur.com/KAzMr3B.jpg could work too

adv:
01:15:257 - no note?

normal is fine

poke me for qualify

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-09-10T10:29:44+00:00

Applied everything (also for Pati, as those were just minor things) except for Adv. Imo they are still too new to the game for something like that, at least I think that they wouldn't expect a circle since the song sounds like it's going to end and there's a break that is kind of long. I suck at describing.

For Hard, I also unstacked 01:03:787 (4,1) - as it was pretty much the same

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-09-10T10:39:58+00:00

Feb

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Feb 2016-09-10T10:44:33+00:00

gz Stüpfer and Pati (first ranked map right?)

P i k u

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P i k u 2016-09-10T10:46:49+00:00

Hey congrats everyone \o/

Pati

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Pati 2016-09-10T10:59:04+00:00

Feb wrote:
gz Stüpfer and Pati (first ranked map right?)

yeah thankss

-NanoRIPE-

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-NanoRIPE- 2016-09-10T11:05:56+00:00

grats!! ~

lLinutionHD

lLinutionHD 2016-09-10T11:39:38+00:00

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2016-09-10T11:42:23+00:00

gratz! nice ctb diffs~

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-09-10T11:54:00+00:00

lLinutionHD wrote:

I'd definitely use it but it looks like there's a missing spacebar after "by" :v

lLinutionHD

lLinutionHD 2016-09-10T12:30:03+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
lLinutionHD wrote:
I'd definitely use it but it looks like there's a missing spacebar after "by" :v

I will try to do good waiting......

lLinutionHD

lLinutionHD 2016-09-10T12:37:19+00:00

now what you think..........

Enon

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Enon 2016-09-10T15:30:45+00:00

congratulations! great map

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-09-10T16:41:50+00:00

any reason you omit the ♪ at the end of the unicode title?

probably this? http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26120993

Sieg

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Sieg 2016-09-10T16:43:50+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
any reason you omit the ♪ at the end of the unicode title?

p/5460823

MBomb

MBomb 2016-09-10T16:45:14+00:00

Some concerns with the CtB difficulties.

[Platter]

00:40:140 (2) - Flow into this slider is very strange because a dash is expected from previous movements (And from the strength of this note in general), and then dashing to this will result in an overdash a lot of the time, which feels pretty unfair to the player.
00:42:963 (2) - Because of the way this slider curves, it can end up feeling pretty forced against the wall flow wise, even though it's not really. I feel like it would be more comfortable, especially to a platter player, if this was moved a bit further from the wall, like x:36, considering even I dashed into the wall on this slider once or twice.
01:07:846 (3,4,5,1) - Movement here is a massive flowbreak due to the dash to 3, and then stopping dashing for 4 is pretty sudden, and overdashing here is pretty easy with current flow. Increasing 3,4 to make the decrease in distance more of a curve is recommended.

Additional modding:

01:15:257 (2) - I know this is the last note, so it's not really a big issue, but I really think reducing this to like x:472 is a lot nicer.

Honestly I'm really happy with this difficulty other than these concerns, I just don't want these issues to ruin the otherwise perfect difficulty.

[Rain]

00:06:963 (4,5,1) - From the HDash, the equal distancing between 4,5,1 leads to a pretty awkward quick slowdown, which is pretty bad for flow. I think a kind of curve distancing here would be nicer. Try x:56 on 5.
00:10:581 (3,4) - This HDash is pretty strong compared to the ones around it (00:11:287 (8,1) - Except this one, but that's stronger note), so it ends up feeling strange with the sections around it, because the speed up is a lot more intense. Reducing this HDash strength a bit would be a lot better.

Additional modding:

00:05:728 (1) - Whilst you use these a lot later on, which is fine, this is the only slider in the intro where it's a vertical slider after a HDash, which ends up with it feeling slightly strange with the rest of the map. Try curving it slightly, for more comfortable play, and to feel more consistent?
00:09:434 (5,6,7) - Kinda similar to what I mentioned in the main issues, except this one isn't as bad, however, I still think it could be nice to make it more of a curve too.
00:38:198 (1) - Increasing HDash strength to this and curving it slightly actually makes the flow feel a lot better to me, and would also make a nicer flow to the next note as currently, it's a sudden direction change, but this could ease the player into the direction change.

This difficulty's really good too, I just think these are some quick things that should probably be fixed.

Sorry for requesting DQ, I just feel as though these difficulties could be improved in this way to make them the best they can be. Any questions then pm me like always.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-09-10T16:54:52+00:00

Sieg wrote:
IamKwaN wrote:
any reason you omit the ♪ at the end of the unicode title?
p/5460823

thank you

vipto

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vipto 2016-09-10T20:08:40+00:00

weeb

Stjpa

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Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-09-10T23:01:15+00:00

@Mbomb: I really don't mind post-qualification mods, I even appreciate them, but coming with a mod after JBH and myself asked for a mod like thousand times you suddenly appear now. That's a quite questionable move.
However, Piku won't be there until sunday evening or even monday, so if JBH doesn't want to fix anything please keep it qualified.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-09-10T23:31:18+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
However, Piku won't be there until sunday evening or even monday, so if JBH doesn't want to fix anything please keep it qualified.

You could use this even if he wasn't actually gone. It's not a valid reason to keep something qualified in the slightest. I agree with some (not all) of the points MBomb made, and while I'm not sure if they 100% deserve a DQ, it's recommended to improve the quality of the map of course. Don't blame him for utilizing the properties of the qualified section.

Also fuck's sake don't silence me I'm being civil this time, thanks.

Stjpa

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-09-10T23:43:55+00:00

Sure some things may be valid, but since he can't fix things anyway it's not such a bad idea to keep it qualified to get more attention. And like I said, I don't mind post-q mods, except the modder waited on purpose. :p

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2016-09-10T23:50:05+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
Sure some things may be valid, but since he can't fix things anyway it's not such a bad idea to keep it qualified to get more attention. And like I said, I don't mind post-q mods, except the modder waited on purpose. :p

yeah mbomb is a lazy cuck and it's common in ctb for the saying "the best way to get an mbomb mod is to get your map qualified" :V

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-09-11T00:04:45+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Some concerns with the CtB difficulties.

[Platter]

00:40:140 (2) - Flow into this slider is very strange because a dash is expected from previous movements (And from the strength of this note in general), and then dashing to this will result in an overdash a lot of the time, which feels pretty unfair to the player. I suppose this probably should be a dash considering 00:41:551 (2,3) - is also a dash for an equivalent strength vocal. It's certainly stronger than something like 00:44:904 (5,1)
00:42:963 (2) - Because of the way this slider curves, it can end up feeling pretty forced against the wall flow wise, even though it's not really. I feel like it would be more comfortable, especially to a platter player, if this was moved a bit further from the wall, like x:36, considering even I dashed into the wall on this slider once or twice. I don't really feel this is a problem, no point of the slider is closer than 12px from the border and the dash strength isn't especially strong, though if I fix the above I guess I could make more space for this just as a precaution
01:07:846 (3,4,5,1) - Movement here is a massive flowbreak due to the dash to 3, and then stopping dashing for 4 is pretty sudden, and overdashing here is pretty easy with current flow. Increasing 3,4 to make the decrease in distance more of a curve is recommended. This isn't a flowbreak at all for me, you just release dash after catching (3) and continue to stream left, there's no need to slowdown. At best I would consider changing this for aesthetic purposes, since it's not a perfect straight line

Additional modding:

01:15:257 (2) - I know this is the last note, so it's not really a big issue, but I really think reducing this to like x:472 is a lot nicer. The change in spacing / hyper strength feels pretty minimal for me, I don't see much difference either way

Honestly I'm really happy with this difficulty other than these concerns, I just don't want these issues to ruin the otherwise perfect difficulty.

Sorry for requesting DQ, I just feel as though these difficulties could be improved in this way to make them the best they can be. Any questions then pm me like always. Shame you didn't get a chance to look at it before it was qualified but these things happen. Appreciate your input as always /o/

I guess we should probably DQ so I can fix that jump at the very least. It's certainly not unrankable but it is inconsistent and I'd rather it wasn't. Apologies guys.

Edit: Played around with some stuff, fixed all roughly according to what I mentioned above.

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Battle

2,865 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-09-11T06:10:02+00:00

o ur gona get this rankd (technically requal) soon gjgjgj

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-09-11T12:07:10+00:00

Hello, sorry for not being available this weekend orz. I'll apply MBomb's mod later this day.

P l a c e h o l d e r

oops I created a new reply

Last edited by P i k u 2016-09-11T13:52:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Stjpa

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Topic Starter

Stjpa 2016-09-11T13:36:17+00:00

Updated, there were also minor changes in the last diff;
• 00:56:552 (1) - got ctrl + g'd
• 01:14:552 (1,1) - circle is now in the middle instead of slidertail

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-09-11T13:51:54+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Some concerns with the CtB difficulties.

[Rain]

00:06:963 (4,5,1) - From the HDash, the equal distancing between 4,5,1 leads to a pretty awkward quick slowdown, which is pretty bad for flow. I think a kind of curve distancing here would be nicer. Try x:56 on 5. | Moved to x:56
00:10:581 (3,4) - This HDash is pretty strong compared to the ones around it (00:11:287 (8,1) - Except this one, but that's stronger note), so it ends up feeling strange with the sections around it, because the speed up is a lot more intense. Reducing this HDash strength a bit would be a lot better. | Reduced strength

Additional modding:

00:05:728 (1) - Whilst you use these a lot later on, which is fine, this is the only slider in the intro where it's a vertical slider after a HDash, which ends up with it feeling slightly strange with the rest of the map. Try curving it slightly, for more comfortable play, and to feel more consistent? | Sure thing
00:09:434 (5,6,7) - Kinda similar to what I mentioned in the main issues, except this one isn't as bad, however, I still think it could be nice to make it more of a curve too. | Small curve now
00:38:198 (1) - Increasing HDash strength to this and curving it slightly actually makes the flow feel a lot better to me, and would also make a nicer flow to the next note as currently, it's a sudden direction change, but this could ease the player into the direction change. | Not exactly sure how to change it, but it's stronger and a bit curved now

This difficulty's really good too, I just think these are some quick things that should probably be fixed.

Sorry for requesting DQ, I just feel as though these difficulties could be improved in this way to make them the best they can be. Any questions then pm me like always.

Thank you!

Update

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lLinutionHD

lLinutionHD 2016-09-11T15:58:33+00:00

If you want more banner for their levels somo call Linution
Gladly helped them

Pati

54 posts

Joined June 2013

Pati 2016-09-11T16:13:54+00:00

some little changes on my own diff

pti

00:27:610 (3,4) - moved 3 slightly to right and fixed blanking of 4 with 2
00:43:492 (5,6) - moved these slightly to above
00:56:552 (1) - changed rotation to left
01:15:257 (1) - its right on the middle now

thats all

MBomb

MBomb 2016-09-11T16:28:12+00:00

very quick points, pretty nazi but i just want stuff to feel smoother

[Platter]

00:41:728 (3) - x:128 on this feels more comfortable, overdashing this is very possible as it is right now.

[Rain]

01:02:375 (8,9,1) - I feel as though moving this section to x:240 feels nicer for flow.

Call me back.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-09-11T16:41:12+00:00

add "piku" to tags?

P i k u

189 posts

Joined June 2013

P i k u 2016-09-11T16:55:17+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
very quick points, pretty nazi but i just want stuff to feel smoother

[Rain]

01:02:375 (8,9,1) - I feel as though moving this section to x:240 feels nicer for flow. | Agreed

Call me back.

yaa

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JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-09-11T16:59:56+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
very quick points, pretty nazi but i just want stuff to feel smoother

[Platter]

00:41:728 (3) - x:128 on this feels more comfortable, overdashing this is very possible as it is right now. Can't say I agree, the vocal isn't that strong here so increasing the spacing plays more awkwardly, especially to the next hyperdash. Given (3) is horizontal with natural flow, I don't see how overdashing is an issue here unless you literally hold dash all the way to the object, which is in opposition to the flow I've been using all throughout the map

Call me back.

No change for me, but thanks for the recheck.

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