1. My First Love (5.06 stars, 1311 notes)

Anxient wrote:

UE

21:27 SnowNiNo_: anxienty modu my map >w<
21:27 Anxient: which one des
21:27 *SnowNiNo_ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1017991 Halozy - Three Magic (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE Remix)]
21:27 SnowNiNo_: dis plz
21:27 Anxient: ill see
21:28 SnowNiNo_: btw i need some opinion about the ar
21:28 SnowNiNo_: cuz i cant read on ar9 so i used 9.5
21:28 SnowNiNo_: is pretty fine to me but
21:28 SnowNiNo_: idk what other think lol
21:31 *Anxient is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1017991 Halozy - Three Magic (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE Remix) [My First Love]]
21:31 Anxient: wanna IRC?
21:31 Anxient: change AR to 9,2
21:32 SnowNiNo_:
21:32 SnowNiNo_: oky ill see if ar9.2 is good to read
21:32 Anxient: change stack leniency to 4
21:32 Anxient: so its easier to read 3/4 gaps
21:33 Anxient: 00:16:616 - like this one
21:33 SnowNiNo_: oky
21:33 SnowNiNo_: done
21:33 Anxient: ok
21:33 Anxient: 00:18:330 (7) - why not NC?
21:33 Anxient: applies for everything else thats similar
21:33 Anxient: 00:20:045 (5) - so this one as well
21:34 SnowNiNo_: ok ill do that
21:34 Anxient: ok
21:34 Anxient: 00:31:187 (1) - try to avoid overlap. this note isnt related to the accel stream anymore
21:34 Anxient: do sth like this? http://puu.sh/pPXO1/bbf64b940d.jpg
21:35 SnowNiNo_: ill just separate them, i want to keep the spacing small
21:35 SnowNiNo_: cuz yea
21:35 SnowNiNo_: is 1/8 here =w=
21:36 Anxient: its 140 bpm
21:36 Anxient: eh ok
21:36 Anxient: next
21:37 Anxient: fix all emphasis issues that arise after fixing mk
21:37 SnowNiNo_: ?
21:37 Anxient: if you fix somehti glike this http://puu.sh/pPXWH/649351b5b0.jpg
21:37 Anxient: fix the emphasis by making the DS the same
21:37 Anxient: repair
21:38 SnowNiNo_: you mean the similar thing?
21:38 Anxient: ee nvm lol
21:38 SnowNiNo_: =w=
21:38 Anxient: just fix the spacing if it becomes broken after fixing lol
21:39 SnowNiNo_: ok
21:39 Anxient: 01:10:616 (1) - this one looks boring lool
21:39 SnowNiNo_: lol
21:39 SnowNiNo_: then what should i make
21:40 SnowNiNo_: oh i tihnk i got one
21:40 Anxient: mm
21:40 Anxient: this?
21:40 Anxient: PUUSH
21:40 Anxient: http://puu.sh/pPY4P/0641781bad.jpg
21:40 Anxient: 01:13:616 (2) - fix stack
21:40 SnowNiNo_: kool
21:40 SnowNiNo_: oky
21:41 Anxient: show me =w=
21:41 SnowNiNo_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5536798
21:41 SnowNiNo_: this one?
21:42 Anxient: ok
21:42 Anxient: good enuf
21:42 Anxient: next
21:42 Anxient: 01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the song doesnt change harshly enough for this imo ;w;
21:43 SnowNiNo_: so i should used kick either?
21:43 SnowNiNo_: i think both would work tho
21:43 Anxient: try doing this
21:43 Anxient: http://puu.sh/pPYgH/095a18705b.jpg
21:43 SnowNiNo_: or i can change the kick to stream
21:44 SnowNiNo_: oh you mean the stream shape
21:44 SnowNiNo_: fk
21:44 Anxient: LOL
21:45 Anxient: 01:34:188 (8,10) - NC
21:45 SnowNiNo_: done
21:45 Anxient: 01:41:045 (8,10) - same
21:45 SnowNiNo_: ok
21:45 Anxient: repeat
21:45 SnowNiNo_: oky do all the similar stuff
21:45 Anxient: yaya
21:45 Anxient: tell me when done
21:46 SnowNiNo_: done
21:46 SnowNiNo_:
21:46 SnowNiNo_: done
21:46 SnowNiNo_: DONE!
21:46 Anxient: AA
21:46 Anxient: OK
21:47 Anxient: 01:59:259 (4) - ctrl g?
21:47 Anxient: plays better imo
21:47 Anxient: 02:02:366 (3) - NC to help seperate the weird beat
21:47 Anxient: 02:05:473 (1,2) - woah sudden spacing spike
21:49 SnowNiNo_: 01:59:259 (4) - i want this to be the same with 01:59:045 (3) -
21:49 Anxient: try placing 1 in x206 y288
21:49 SnowNiNo_: and NC on 02:02:366 (3) -
21:49 Anxient: ok then
21:49 Anxient: okk
21:49 Anxient: btw try placing 1 in the coordinates
21:49 SnowNiNo_: ill just make 02:05:687 (2) - stack with 02:05:045 (8) - sliderend
21:49 SnowNiNo_: oh
21:49 Anxient: should still keep your spacing without making it too wide
21:50 Anxient: 02:08:045 (9) - NC
21:50 SnowNiNo_: ok ill but 1 on 206 288
21:50 SnowNiNo_: lol oky
21:50 SnowNiNo_: i NC it b4
21:50 SnowNiNo_: but it didnt nc somehow
21:50 SnowNiNo_:
21:51 Anxient: LOL
21:51 Anxient: magic'
21:51 Anxient: 02:09:545 (4) - ctrl g. it plays weirdly
21:51 Anxient: 02:10:402 (8) - this too. it emphasizes 1 awkwardly imo
21:51 SnowNiNo_: oh about this
21:52 Anxient: like it kinda moves too fast
21:52 SnowNiNo_: i ctrl +g 02:09:545 (4) - b4
21:52 Anxient: really?
21:52 Anxient: why change?
21:52 SnowNiNo_: but i want to express the high synth sound
21:52 SnowNiNo_: you hear
21:52 Anxient: i hear it
21:52 Anxient: but i dont think this is the right way
21:52 SnowNiNo_: 02:09:330 - 02:09:973 -
21:52 SnowNiNo_: and
21:53 SnowNiNo_: 02:11:045 - 02:11:687 -
21:53 Anxient: http://puu.sh/pPYHN/ad27163b5e.jpg try this
21:53 SnowNiNo_: i used spacing to separate ttho
21:53 Anxient: it plays weirdly lol
21:53 Anxient: whats why i mentioned it
21:53 SnowNiNo_: oh that works
21:53 SnowNiNo_: but the structure will br inconsistent tho
21:54 SnowNiNo_: be*
21:54 SnowNiNo_: =w=
21:54 Anxient: 02:10:402 (8) - then fix this one lol
21:54 Anxient: http://puu.sh/pPYLy/c3d75e5cec.jpg
21:54 Anxient: with this, its like flipped from the prev pattern
21:54 SnowNiNo_: nah ill just fix 02:09:759 (5) -
21:54 Anxient: lolk
21:54 SnowNiNo_: hold on lemme se
21:55 SnowNiNo_: well i mainly dont want to break the structure tho ;w;
21:55 SnowNiNo_: ill just move 5 to the flow is better
21:55 SnowNiNo_: so*
21:55 Anxient: ok
21:55 Anxient: 02:10:402 (8) - how about this doe
21:56 SnowNiNo_: yea keep the structure either
21:56 Anxient: ok
21:56 SnowNiNo_: this part are all sth ctrl + h
21:56 SnowNiNo_: sso yea
21:57 SnowNiNo_: copy-paste and ctrl + h
21:57 SnowNiNo_: lol
21:57 SnowNiNo_: anyway ill move 5
21:57 Anxient: 03:07:187 (1) - touchiiiing
21:57 Anxient: ;w;
21:57 SnowNiNo_: lolol
21:58 SnowNiNo_: done
21:59 Anxient: k
21:59 Anxient: 03:27:545 (8) - NC
22:00 Anxient: 03:28:187 (4,5,6) - make distance equal
22:00 Anxient: like uhh this? http://puu.sh/pPZ3q/bcb4c0f888.jpg
22:01 SnowNiNo_: nah i want to keep 6 in the middle of 4 and 5
22:01 SnowNiNo_: http://puu.sh/pPZ6a/090df9a31a.jpg
22:01 SnowNiNo_: like this
22:02 Anxient: it IS tho
22:02 Anxient: im talking about the slider border being waaaaay too close to (4) sliderend
22:02 Anxient: well if you dont wanna fix it, at leats make it less extreme
22:02 Anxient: 03:30:330 (5,6,7) -
22:02 Anxient: like this
22:03 Anxient: 03:53:259 (9) - ctrl g :l
22:03 SnowNiNo_: ok
22:03 Anxient: for ctb :LLDDD
22:03 Anxient: jk
22:04 SnowNiNo_: lmao
22:04 Anxient: 03:59:473 (5) - ctrl g for flow
22:04 Anxient: 03:59:687 (6) - ctrl g so it wont be death to play if you apply the above
22:04 SnowNiNo_: cool
22:04 Anxient: 03:59:902 (7) - ctrl g for meh
22:04 SnowNiNo_: nah keep 03:59:687 (6) -
22:05 SnowNiNo_: just vtrl + g on 5
22:05 SnowNiNo_: is cool like this XD
22:05 SnowNiNo_: i mean in game play
22:05 Anxient: http://puu.sh/pPZjE/20dbdce3ae.jpg eee.?
22:05 SnowNiNo_: yap
22:05 Anxient: 04:02:902 (5,8) - oya i forgot to mention this on the previous kiais
22:05 Anxient: NC these
22:06 SnowNiNo_: oh
22:06 Anxient: coz those are some emphasized parts lol
22:06 SnowNiNo_: ic
22:06 SnowNiNo_: oky
22:06 Anxient: and similar parts
22:06 SnowNiNo_: ofc
22:06 Anxient: 04:24:545 (2,3) - 10/10 blanket
22:06 SnowNiNo_: =w=
22:09 Anxient: 04:44:473 (8,9,1) - make object distance equal
22:09 Anxient: imo this look sweird
22:10 SnowNiNo_: lol
22:10 SnowNiNo_: done
22:13 Anxient: 04:53:259 (8,9) - lol?
22:13 Anxient: 04:59:259 (4,5) - lol?
22:14 SnowNiNo_: ;D
22:14 SnowNiNo_: tricky part
22:14 SnowNiNo_: :3
22:14 Anxient: :3
22:14 Anxient: im done then
22:15 SnowNiNo_: oky
22:15 SnowNiNo_: thanks moexient >w<
22:15 Anxient: w=-

Kalibe wrote:

m4m~

General*

- OD 9 for only 5 stars.. kinda too high imo, much better to see OD 8.keep it first
- Pure white combo is never good for maps, so i prefer to darker it or change to other colour.ok

My First Love*

- 00:32:045 (3,4) - Ctrl G rhythm is a better option, since you used sliders here for following vocal.i think both works
- 00:35:473 (3,4) - ^
- 00:45:759 (5) - Maybe nc this circle, because you did it similar with 00:20:045 (1) - ? lol is 2 different section
- 01:57:437 - Would be nice if you map this beat, it's sad to skipping it, cause sounds weird without it :/ well there was a note at first but i think it would be weird since ive put a note at 01:56:580 (7,2) - already, so i think dont put a note at here would be more fun to play
- 01:59:473 (5,6) - same as first suggestions,
- 00:59:045 - Also this should be mapped, to have a consist with next pattern 02:23:045 (6) - tho.lo nice catch!
- 02:35:687 (6,1) - Fix stack.ok
- 03:32:045 (5,8) - Dat overlap bugs me a little :cov erlap is fine, wont effect in game play
- 03:33:545 (4) - NC this, cause anti-flow attack here? xd hmm keep first, not necessary
- 04:08:687 (4,1) - 02:44:687 (4,1) - The flow is kinda awkward imo, i mean, that (1) should me much lower to continue that fast transision. but it pretty fit to me tho =w=
- 04:16:187 (4) - My personal suggestion, just move it a bit to up to have a nice curve shape 04:15:973 (2,3,4) - lol. oki
- Welp, that's all. Sorry for short mod /w\ but this map is nicely done! Good luck! ty XD

Lince Cosmico wrote:

m4m as you wish

My First Love
• 00:24:223 (5,1) - consistent spacing? nah for emphasized
• 00:35:687 (4,1) - should make a blanket yea this is a blanket
• 00:54:330 (5) - move slider end a bit on left xD ok
• 01:16:187 (3,4) - blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552447 nah not what i want tho
• 01:24:330 (1) - move this a bit down (like x:336 y:192) do sth similar
• 01:26:902 (4) - delete? lol why?
• 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) - same spacing than here: 01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - keeping the shape
• 01:47:902 (1,2,1,2) - same
• 01:56:045 (5) - should move to x:164 y:36 (to make this perfect circle kappa http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552487&#41; ok
• 02:02:152 (2) - do kick slider here ... because 02:02:259 - i can hear a sound here and seems perfect to a kick slider lol nice catch
• 02:07:937 (8,1) - feels ugly... why not move the start of the slider a bit (like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552530 ) ok
• 02:27:759 (1,4,5) - stack? nope
• 02:48:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - feels like this is slow compared to all of the kiai... should add more spacing on this stream? add some spacing
• 03:02:687 (4,5) - nazi blanket *this is like a joke* http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552564 not perfect kappa adjust a little
• 03:03:545 (1,2) - this overlap... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552568 (look at my mouse) fix xD ok
• 03:12:759 (2,5) - stack here? wat?
• 03:15:759 - what about space a little more here? seeems like the song is gettiing intense at that point good idea
• 03:16:616 - same here
• 03:21:330 (4,7,8) - blanket? not wat i want here
• 03:23:902 (7,1) - what about stack here?same
• 03:32:473 (8,1) - overlap or 03:32:045 (5,8) - stack xD ^
• 03:34:937 (2,3,6,7) - On 6,7 do same spacing than 2,3 please XD nah
• 03:42:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curved slider seems better than straigh D:both works imo
• 03:44:902 (1) - move this a bit downNAH
• 03:47:687 - and 03:47:902 - are the vocals lol you should follow that imowell im not following the vocal
• 04:06:759 (1,2,3) - move slider end a bit? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552660 nah
• 04:31:616 (4) - to make better blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552683not blanket here
• 04:47:687 (6,8) - fix blanket XD same

GL

Axon wrote:

Hai~

General

Mostly everything looks fine except for the OD, it would be more fitting if it were bumped down to an 8 or 8.5.. but adjust it to your liking.

Mod

00:31:509 - Don't ignore sound here. well there are sound at every blue tick here =w=

01:47:902 (1,2,1,2) - I feel kick-sliders would be more fitting. note is for separate

03:21:116 (2,3,4) - Spacing too far for 5* map imo it wont

03:27:973 (2,3,4) - ^

04:15:973 (2,3,4) - Far spacing again, but here it actually fits imo.


I'm very sorry for short mod, but your map is so great that it's hard to find something wrong with it.

Anyways, good luck!

sahuang wrote:

[My First Love]

1. 00:16:616 (1,2) - inconsistency here 因為這邊的音不一樣
2. 00:23:687 (2,3,4,5,1) - use same ds or it will be quite confusing 用不同間距表達00:24:330 - 的音
3. 00:46:616 (1,2,3) - improve shape for a better flow, imo rotate 00:47:045 (3) - a bit maybe 這flow很好啊..
4. 00:48:330 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - quite messy here. the overlap seems random.
   这边虽然是旋转但是00:48:973 (4,3) - 这种overlap很难受。。consider some improvement:) 可是這並不會影響gmae play 而且效果不錯
5. 00:58:616 - add a break? 00:59:045 - 我這邊加note了 所以break就不用了
6. 01:02:045 (1,1) - strange overlap 這...完全不是問題吧
7. 01:24:330 (1) - too long imo, i suggest that you use 4 reverse sliders instead of 1. 可以
8. 01:51:759 (1) - 02:50:045 (1) - same 這兩個我不會換, 前面會換是因為還有音樂support 不過這2個地方就沒有了
9. 02:02:366 (1) - no need to NC this ok
10. 02:23:045 (6) - NC ok
11. 03:25:080 (4,5,6) - weird flow :w: 不會啊LOL
12. 03:27:545 (1,2) - 03:33:545 (4,5) - make them same ds? i think the former one is the correct ds since you use it afterwards 前面的音樂跟露面比 後面比較弱 所以DS後面要比較小 不應該一樣
13. 00:44:473 (1,2,3,4) - 想牛逼一点这边可以加钢琴电音音效什么的( 你有音效嗎 =w=? 我找無阿
14. 00:58:615 (5) - 类似 00:58:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边soft-whis其实也不是不行 ㄜ
15. 01:00:330 (1) - sliderart都没音效？什么鬼 這邊該放甚麼 其實我也不知 友好建議就提出來吧XD

歌曲重复度很高，所以我一直不想map这种曲子 虽然很好听( 沒辦法啊 長圖嗎=w=
gl

1. 00:44:473 (1,2,3,4) - this is in 1/6
2. 00:56:902 (1) - I would almost use 3 1/8 reverses here. One at 00:57:330 - and then at 00:57:759 -
3. 01:12:330 (1) - Shouldn't this be x211 y192 to be perfectly symmetrical with the middle of the map? Also make sure to adjust 01:13:616 (2) - as needed.
4. 01:51:759 (1) - Same as 56 seconds. This one especially though since it's very long. I suggest splitting it up every measure again. Same with 04:14:045 (1) - and 04:39:759 (1) - while we're on this topic. You do it at the end of the 2nd kiai anyways.
5. 02:08:473 - the 1/6 here is pretty hard to ignore. especially with vocals starting on the first note and such. Maybe change 02:08:366 (2) - to a circle and then do some 1/6 from 02:08:473 - onwards?
6. 02:53:045 - add circle here? for vocals and such
7. 03:27:652 (2) - I would definitely emphasize these a bit more. They're stronger than 03:27:973 (2,3) - which comes up just after this.
8. 03:33:545 (4,5) - same as above. I'm not entirely sure why you prefer anti-jumps here, but it doesn't play the greatest imo.
9. 03:35:795 (6) - watch DS here.
10. 03:44:902 (1) - Same as the other suggestions, splitting these up would be cool.
11. 04:08:687 (4) - I would stack the head of this on the 04:08:259 (2) - 's head so the distance between 04:08:045 (1,2) - and 04:08:473 (3,4) - are more similar
12. 04:16:616 (6) - Try moving the head of this to around x372 y212 Also the tail of 04:16:187 (4) - could flow a bit better into (5) if you wanted to adjust more.
13. 04:34:187 (7) - I suggest control+>+J and then place it back around where it was so it flows nicely into (8). You may want to adjust (6) slightly so that it isn't too too close to the (7)

Atamare wrote:

my ticket

00:16:402 (4,1) - actually this was a bit confusing because melody didnt change at all, the sounds 00:16:723 - 00:16:830 - here are actually the same like, for example, on this 00:16:830 - slider. melody did change here, listen to the music

00:58:616 (5) - nc maybe? cuz its downbeat and sound there is pretty strong not necessary imo

01:05:473 (1,1,1) - actaully i dont understand what those sliders are following. like those sliders 01:00:330 (1,1,1) - are okay, because they are somehow following the vocal, but these 01:05:473 (1,1,1) look really strange, becuase they are littlerally dont follow anything background music

01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream's shape looks really strange.. seems like u wanted to do smth like 01:07:187 (1) - this but i think it doesnt work with the streams :<lol, it fine to me tho

01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - isnt spacing between these 2 doubles too big? make the spacing lower, like 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) - here or try to make the distance shorter because now its seems to big very huge distance keeping the shape

01:45:759 (6,8) - guess, they could be more parallel it is parallel lol

01:52:616 - maybe another 1/8 slider with repeats here? 01:51:759 (1) - cuz this one seems to be very long nah the drum didnt breach and no musci to support

01:53:473 - also i think that this note should be clickable, cuz there are some huge changes in the music there sint a strong beat here, no need to be clickable

01:53:473 (1) - try to end this spinner here 01:54:973 - cuz the actual sound goes up to 01:55:187 - here and now it jsut seems to be a bit off. or u can silence the end aswell

02:07:402 (3) - 02:07:830 (7) - clap?

02:15:116 (1) - i guess there is no need to NC this one for emphasized

02:22:616 (5) - again nc maybe? same

02:27:759 (1) - this is a pretty strong downbeat, so I guess that the spacing should be a bit bigger. mainly keep the shape here

02:42:330 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess this pattern doesnt work here becuz, as I undestood, u used it to emphasise "oooooh' like 02:40:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here or here 02:38:902 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here 02:42:330 there are no such lyrics :v is kust for intentional

02:48:331 (1) - finish? nope

03:14:902 - 03:15:759 - 03:16:616 - increase on each point the volume like by 5-7% so it will work better with the music

03:20:473 (1,2,3,4) - make it less curved like https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... cwAWuM.jpg here, would look ncier imo nah both works

03:27:545 (1,2) - its a bit strange that the distance between these 2 is less than the distance between 03:27:973 (2,3) - those two, even if the 03:27:545 (1,2) - sound here is much more stronger and deserves a bit more emphasise for consistent

03:31:509 (2,3) - sorry for being nzi, but this blanket can be imrpoved a bit lol good enough

03:42:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit strange flow.. maybe a wave? https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... T6l-9U.jpg

03:51:759 (1) - again an emphasise issue because spacing here should be bigger due to the strong beat 03:51:759 - here same

04:14:045 (1) - maybe again another kickslider here 04:14:902 - ? same

04:40:616 - and again ^ xd u also should end the spinner 04:41:473 (1) - here 04:42:973 -

05:08:045 - ^ :v nope

okay, thats it

cool map, good luck!

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM
好难,客观摸

My First Love

1. 00:03:759 (1) - 可以加个whistle
2. 00:17:366 (5) - 可以删了这个，更能突出00:17:473 (1) - 这一个节奏，而且打的也顺了 for consistent
3. 00:23:687 (2) - 这个用了1/8分拍，就放远一点，不要贴着连打，不然很容易抢打那串连打 consist the spacing
4. 00:24:330 (1) - 做成这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5564965 都可以吧 LOL
5. 01:28:402 (4,5) - 单独分出来的三连有点难，就好像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5565028 ，你看能不能把第二个圈叠去滑条上，让图好打一些，后面类似的同 01:28:616 (6) - 這邊有重音所以我要分開 你那個就不行了
6. 后面没什么问题了

Flezlin wrote:

m4m from your queue

[My First Love]

00:24:545 (2) - this looks a little hard to read, maybe ctrl+g and move to the left? nope
00:35:473 (3) - imperfect blanket, move to the right a little
00:40:187 (3,4) - why not keep these the same direction like you did before? cuz the vocal
01:26:045 (1,2) - why is this so spaced in comparison to 01:26:366 (2,3) - ? i think is fine tho cuz the spacing is similar
01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - make these the same spacing as 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) - and 01:47:902 (1,2,1,2) - ?
01:57:759 (5) - ctrl+g maybe? nah
02:11:259 (4) - why not ctrl+g like you did with 02:10:187 (7,8) - and 02:11:902 (7,8) - cuz the synth sound is lower here
02:18:116 (4) - ^ same
03:20:902 - such huge spacing here doesn't feel right, it only sounds like a build-up is good to me tho lol
03:42:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - awkward stream curve
04:00:223 (8) - this feels a little weird, maybe move it to x: ~ 465 y: ~ 205 ? nah consist the structure here
04:29:045 (7,8,9) - not this pattern? 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) structure is different here, dont need to use the same pattern
04:35:902 (7,8,9) - ^ same


well, sorry for the short low quality mod, i tried..
map looks so good already

Lanturn wrote:

From my queue!

Halozy - Three Magic

Futur should be Future in tags? I'm not online atm to do any searching. Futur is for lol? any relation xd? nvm i fix it xd

Your hitsounds for the most part blend in way too much with the song. This is not a good thing and can actually be unrankable in some cases. Please turn the overall volume up or consider different hitsounds. hitsounds are meant to provide feedback, not blend. Parts I'm overly worried about are 01:55:187 (1) - onwards. 01:00:384 - the ticks and heads of the sliders. increased 10% of all the volume

1. 00:44:473 (1,2,3,4) - this is in 1/6
2. 00:56:902 (1) - I would almost use 3 1/8 reverses here. One at 00:57:330 - and then at 00:57:759 - the drum didnt breach and no music to support, and for consist of my sturcture
3. 01:12:330 (1) - Shouldn't this be x211 y192 to be perfectly symmetrical with the middle of the map? Also make sure to adjust 01:13:616 (2) - as needed.
4. 01:51:759 (1) - Same as 56 seconds. This one especially though since it's very long. I suggest splitting it up every measure again. Same with 04:14:045 (1) - and 04:39:759 (1) - while we're on this topic. You do it at the end of the 2nd kiai anyways.
5. 02:08:473 - the 1/6 here is pretty hard to ignore. especially with vocals starting on the first note and such. Maybe change 02:08:366 (2) - to a circle and then do some 1/6 from 02:08:473 - onwards?
6. 02:53:045 - add circle here? for vocals and such not necessary, im mainly following the drum
7. 03:27:652 (2) - I would definitely emphasize these a bit more. They're stronger than 03:27:973 (2,3) - which comes up just after this.
8. 03:33:545 (4,5) - same as above. I'm not entirely sure why you prefer anti-jumps here, but it doesn't play the greatest imo.
9. 03:35:795 (6) - watch DS here.lol wat?
10. 03:44:902 (1) - Same as the other suggestions, splitting these up would be cool. nah this is for emphasized
11. 04:08:687 (4) - I would stack the head of this on the 04:08:259 (2) - 's head so the distance between 04:08:045 (1,2) - and 04:08:473 (3,4) - are more similar nope this is for consistent, you can see all the similar part are the same
12. 04:16:616 (6) - Try moving the head of this to around x372 y212 Also the tail of 04:16:187 (4) - could flow a bit better into (5) if you wanted to adjust more.nah consist the sapcing at this part
13. 04:34:187 (7) - I suggest control+>+J and then place it back around where it was so it flows nicely into (8). You may want to adjust (6) slightly so that it isn't too too close to the (7)

Alrighty. That seems like a good amount to work on anyways from me. Good luck o/

StarrStyx wrote:

m4m
我的圖: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/477640 (求重點摸hard,維克的extra跟最高diff；還有除了這三個diff 如果摸其他就要英文了 謝謝！)

[a]
00:47:473 (5,6) - 00:47:687 (7,8) 建議這兩個可以轉1/4，這裡用stream比較單調 這邊用連打而不用kick是因為00:47:902 (1,2) - 這我已經要用kick來follow vocal了 所以要是00:47:473 (5,6,7,8) - 還是用kick的話 對整體結構不是很好
01:49:937 (9) - 把這個往左移動一點，現在比較難aim 這是要stack呢.. 好 往左
01:20:473 (3,4) - 建議這樣對調 http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/asqaeru.jpg 可接受
01:26:366 (2,3,4) - 這個節奏建議nc每一個circle 不太必要八.. 感覺會變nc spam
01:30:652 (7,8) - 我建議這樣改，比較爽http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/zeycvaf.png 恩 不錯
01:31:616 (3) - ctrl g使flow順一點 我覺得會更卡呢.. 3<4 5的flow會卡卡的
02:52:080 (2,3,4) - nc，原因跟上面一樣 恩 一樣
03:48:116 (5,1) - 這個overlap有點難看... http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/glcpawc.png 調了一下
03:52:187 (3) - ctrl g使flow順一點 這可以
03:59:687 (6,7) - ^ 這邊是故意的 可以看 p/5287137
04:09:330 (3) - ^ ok
04:30:759 (7) - ^ 這flow還ok 先keep

最主要的地方都指出來了
如果要說打 其實還是可以的 不過以一個technical的圖來說這個打起來真的比較卡手
建議看下其他technical圖拿一下idea 我已經看了很多圖了lo

gl

Lasse wrote:

put more 1/8 sliderstreams kd pls lol no xd

also touhouwiki is not a valid metadata source, just use the official album page: http://www.halozy.com/discography/hlzy-0013/
also rip combocolors? oh shit i thought ive change already =w=

kwk wrote:

random playthrough opinion

[My First Love]
00:11:045 (3,4,1) - 00:12:759 (3,4,1)- 00:22:187 (5,6,1) - etc , i feel like the angle when you go from the 2nd slider to the last is a bit off since your not following through with the first slider and it gives a sort've abrupt feeling? perhaps something like this would be better where the cursor follows a less sudden direction change?nah i dont like linear, the original flow is g imo, cuz 1 got a sound to emphasized to the "sudden direction change" which youve mention is necessary

SPOILER

01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - etc i quite like these parts, though im confused as to why this only happens in the first kiai section? strange for the hardest part of the song to be here rather than at the end since similar sounds appear there too? 04:08:473 (3,4) - as you can heard, there are vocal to support the kick at the last kiai but first dont, which means i need to follow other sound but not vocal
03:25:509 (7,8) - flow here is a bit awkward because of slider i feel, maybe ctrl+j slider but rip patterning ctrl+j would be weird lol, i mean the slider direction would break the flow of this pattern
03:32:366 (7,8) - ^ maybe straighten out this one? nah curved got a better flow when 8>9

nice map~
02:08:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the actual hardest part in the map

Lasse wrote:

you kick (hitwhistle) seem not that fitting for the song, there are nicer fitting ones
maybe loszen through those: http://puu.sh/q3y3E/efd2bbc4f2.zip lol thanks a lot xd

[x]
00:16:616 (1,2,3) - check with stacking enabled lol i mapped with stack enabled.. dont find a problem here, is perfectly stack lol
00:24:330 (1) - 00:28:830 (1) - whole parts feels like it lacks hitsounding lol cuz idk what to add =w=
00:41:473 (1,2,4) - no idea why those make a pattern but 3 just feels randomly thrown in there. why not http://i.imgur.com/u0p1h4M.jpg or sth just a little tricky part and more variety xd
00:44:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do these really have to be 1/12 sliders? 1/6 notes are perfectly fine, this feels overdone, as much as I love sliderstreams. also might want to colorhax or sth // 02:08:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cuz imo 1/12 kick can express the piano nicer then notes
00:47:366 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is so clumped nah using the same pattern to express the same music tho
00:56:902 (1) - can you buffer (remove last repeat) from this to make transition into the stream better? // 02:20:902 (1) - but there are still sound on the sliderend :\ i dont think remove the last repeat well be a gd idea, i know itll be much better to play but yea =w=
00:58:187 (1,2,3,4,1) - with the high pitch and all more spacing could fit well here (also probably nc on 5) // 02:20:902 (1,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:24:330 (1,2,3,4) - increasinf sv after every slider would fit the buildup well nah for consist with structure
01:26:045 (1,2,3) - how about http://i.imgur.com/ZmaF4cf.jpg still fits the music and emphasized the vocals even better with a less weird rhythm feel unnecessary ==
01:29:473 (1,4,5) - autostacking kills this visually // 01:41:473 (1,4) - and more, just check the whole thing with stacking enabled
can't really comment on kiai with how it is mapped. it just seems a bit strange to me since half of it feels like it's meant to be alternated and the other half is like small 280 bpm jumps it's stack perfectly lol, just like what ive said above i always enabled stacking when mapping, and dont you find this mapping style interesting ;w;?
01:51:759 (1,2,3,4) - lower sv after each one to "fade out" a bit? same
03:14:152 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont understand the spacing since it just gets more and then less and so on. gradually increasing for each combo would fit the music better the spacing 03:14:152 - here and 03:15:759 - is different lol, maybe i should make the spacing more fierce ?
03:17:473 (1) - next slider already has a tiny hitwindow so maybe remove one repeat here to make it less likely to break hitwindow is consist here, is all 1/8
03:27:973 (2,3,4) - even spacing or sharper angle wpuld play so much nicer and be more comfortable to snap to current flow is much better, sharper angle flow isnt gd at here cuz i tried it and it plays suck =w=
04:43:187 (1) - spacing for this part seems rather random, sometimes you put jumps on claps, sometimes on random things and most is distance snapped this is exactly wat i want it xd

most points apply for way more spots

so much copy paste ;c wat only copy past at 2 part :\

gl

jakomo73 wrote:

00:02:045 (1, 2, 3) - Seems awkward to have 3 notes at the beginning and then a break. I don't think these notes are necessary these beat is quite importent
00:16:937 (1, 2, 3) - Difficult to see the hit circles after the first one, should move 2 and 3 or 1 from being stacked due to the beat differences. it wont cuz it's 3/4 here
00:59:045 (1) - Not a huge fan of having the note on the same location, not really an issue with it but if I were playing I would prefer it somewhere else same location would be easier to read, especially there was nc on the next 1/1 notes
01:26:902 (4) - This note seems unnecessary, as the vocals end on 3 clear downbeat in music, delete this note and youll heard clearer
02:15:330 (1, 2) - The end of 1 and beginning of 2 seem off slightly, end of 1 seems a bit early. I would extend 1 and make 2 just a note instead of a slider. mainly follow vocal here
02:23:045 (1) - same as 00:59:045 same
02:35:687 (6) - This slider doesn't really seem necessary, and its kind of weird in terms of the beat. it's necessary to me, if i make a pause here would be rly weird
03:02:045 (1) - same as 00:59:045 same
03:08:902 (2) - This slider ends strangely between the beat, I think it should end on 03:09:759 vocal here
04:01:187 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Think that 3 and 4 should be placed slightly more away from 1 and 2's end i dont want the spacing change so intense
04:02:687 (4) - This slider sounds slightly out of place, would place is later but it doesn't have a good place to go meh..
04:23:259 (4, 5) - Think 4 and 5's locations should be swapped to have a more fluid motion through the notes that would cause linear flow, is defenitly not i want
04:36:437 (1) - The end of this slider sounds out of place, maybe need to extend a tiny bit its pretty g to me..
04:55:830 (4, 5) - same as 04:23:259 same
05:03:545 (8, 9) - would swap 8 and 9's locations for a more fluid motion (like 04:23:259) same

Have you considered using 1/8 beat snapping or a bpm or 280? Some of the sliders and notes are slightly off and I think that would fix it 280 defenitly wouldnt works cuz the drum beat are 140, and im not too sure wat is your slightly off mean, but these are pretty good to play

First time modding, so hopefully I wasn't too bad The beatmap is really nicely done so far though, gj!!

JBHyperion wrote:

Sorry for the delay, M4M

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: Since you chose to use the game as the source rather than the umbrella of "東方Project", don't forget to add that to tags, as well as "Seirensen / Star Lotus Ship / UFO" and "Byakuren Hijiri" okok
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: softhitfinish.wav and softhitfinish2.wav have a large amount of blank audio space at the end of the waveform. To save file space and reduce cross-threading, I trimmed the waveforms down for you - beep thanks !
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

My First Love

1. 00:10:616 - 00:29:259 - Using repetitive rhythms is fine as long as you vary patterns and flow to make it interesting to play. Although you have decent rhythm variety here, the flow is completely clockwise through this whole section, which gets uninteresting pretty quickly. Some flow reversal here would help a lot, such as Ctrl+G 00:12:973 (4) - 00:18:545 (2) - and flip following patterns to the left side / bottom side respectively, Ctrl+H and 90 degrees clockwise rotate on 00:15:759 (1) to go towards the top left in an anticlockwise pattern, Ctrl+H 00:21:759 (1) and following and move to the right side of 00:21:545 (4) for an anticlockwise loop, etc. These are just some suggestions, but hopefully you get the idea yap i know wat you are telling me, i get the point, but imo it would be more smoother when the flows are mostly the same, i know it would be quite uninteresting xd

1. 00:39:330 (7,1) - Flow feels awkward to me here after jump to (7) you go into a sharp direction change with antiflow. Ctrl+J and a rotation would play a little better imo - example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5692128 cool
2. 00:44:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I have doubts about the playability of this, there's a 36ms window for press and release which results in huge sliderbreak potential. Two 1/6 repeat sliders would play much better imo. Same applies for 02:08:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but this plays rly good and fit the piano rly well, you can ignore the sliderend just follow the sliderhead and it would just be a normal 1/6 streams
3. 01:05:473 (1,1,1,1) - Nice sliderart, but I can't help but feel it's very forced and not really following much. Vocals clearly deviate here from the 3/1 rhythm from before, following them (in lieu of any other instrument) would be nice well the main sturcture i want here is 3/1, i would like to stay consistent with the structure instead of follow the vocal
4. 01:12:330 (1,2) - Unstacked, (2) down and right one pixel to fix k
5. 01:20:687 (4,1) - Unnecessarily large jump, the sound you want to emphasise on (1) isn't that strong, especially considering your stream follows an antiflow path. A smaller spacing, e.g. swapping (3,4) would be more reasonable cool, ok
6. 01:40:937 (7,1,2,1,2) - I know you're following the high pitch synth here so you'll probably not want to consider this, but removing 01:41:045 (1,2,2) and only mapping the kick drum here would create variety and add emphasis to 01:41:473 (1) to highlight the mid-point of the kiai. If you make any changes here, try to do similarly to 02:37:616 (3,4) and 04:01:616 (3,4) for consistency rly nice suggestion, but i prefer to stay consistent with my structure
7. 01:44:045 (6,9) - Same as 01:12:330 (1,2) k
8. 01:51:759 - Why not extend the kiai up to 01:53:473 - since that's where the buildup reaches a climax? Feels like you don't want to emphasise that drumroll for some reason, which is odd considering you did that at 02:51:759 (1) which is the same rhythm lol nice xd
9. 02:01:616 (8,1) - On all your previous 1/1 stacks they stack perfectly due to leniency, but here because you then have a 1/4 stack, (1) is pushed out, leaving the resulting pattern looking a bit weird. Might want to unstack (8,1) to avoid this hmm this isnt rly a problem right lol?
10. 02:12:330 (1,1) - One pixel down for perfect stack, don't forget to do the same to 02:13:187 (1) - 02:14:045 (1,5) - since they're all stacked also xD okk
11. 02:19:616 (3,5) - 02:30:759 (7,3) - One pixel down and right k
12. 02:38:687 (4,1,2) - Similar issue to 02:01:616 (8,1) yap same here
13. 03:08:902 (2,1) - One pixel left for perfect stack (how did I even spot this wtf) haha xd
14. 03:21:330 (4,5,6) - Jump would play better between (5,6) imo, since (5) itself is a weak 1/4 beat whereas (6) has a strong sythn sound for consist the structure, ill keep this first
15. 03:34:509 (4,1) - Spacing can be improved here, since these overlap slightly. I'd remake 03:34:187 (1,2,3,4,1) with Ctrl+Shift+D for a more even spacing and cleaner look adjust a little
16. 04:05:902 (3,1,2) - Similar issue to 02:01:616 (8,1) same
17. 04:07:187 (1) - Down and right one pixel for a perfect stack - even after changing this, I feel that the blanket 04:07:187 (1,2) can be improved by rotating (1) clockwise slightly got it
18. 04:47:687 (6,8) - I'd either blanket these properly, or arrange them in a way that indicates they aren't meant to be blanketed, it looks sloppy right now
19. 04:43:616 (3,4,5) - 04:45:759 (5,6,7) - etc. - These seem like they might be a readability concern, what with (5) appearing directly in between (3,4) it's easy to react to that instead of (4), the actual next note. Some like those two aren't too bad, but 04:47:687 (6,7) - 04:53:259 (8,9) - 04:55:830 (4,5) - and similar seem really annoying to me. See what others think I guess. ture, my propose is make this part tricky so yea xd

This is all from me. I haven't modded Std in a little while so sorry for the short mod; I hope my suggestions made sense and were helpful to you in some way though.

Good luck! (:

Kibbleru wrote:

hey

00:03:759 - thats a pretty random spot for a break lol considering the music doesnt even change when you decided to start mapping again 00:10:616 - . got lazy? there was a clap sound start at 00:10:616 - so i decided to start mapping here again
00:23:687 (2) - maybe do something similar as 00:29:259 (3,1) - nah 00:23:687 (2,3) - is easier to play, but there was a different sound at 00:29:473 (1) - so i used different usage
00:44:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would REALLY recommend you do something else here, this is so easy to sliderbreak on especially since its very hard to tell this is a 1/6 stream and not 1/4 the spacing can tell the different between 1/6 and 1/4 here, cuz there isnt any small spacing with 1/4 at this map, and it wont cause slider break, you can just follow the sliderhead and ignore the sliderend to play the stream and you can still get 300 on it, so it isnt a problem imo
02:08:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:616 (1,1) - maybe u can blanket these or something lol lol i prefer 01:12:330 (1) - to stay at the middle xd
03:22:509 - how come this is empty? it kinda breaks the flow of rhythm imo. well, at least you were consistent with it i guess cuz is weird to make 03:22:187 (8) - a 3/4 slider lol, and yea is consistent xd
03:34:937 (2,3) - 03:35:795 (6,7) - 03:36:652 (2,3) - just my opinion but imo it would really look better if you spaced these out lol
03:47:473 (2,3) - yo move this up for a better blanket lol =w= oky
02:27:330 (7,8) - i dont really understand why you suddenly decided to follow vocals here, it just really breaks the flow of your hitsounding, plus you didn't do it here either 02:25:616 (8) - well the vocal is more intense at the second measure instead of the first, so imo follow the vocal at second measure is a lot better
03:51:437 (8) - ^


interesting map but not really my cup of tea sry.

1. 00:24:330 - this section really deserves some form of hitsounding
2. 01:21:330 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could improve this loop a lot tbh
3. 02:48:759 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this one a bit too
4. 01:27:759 - volume should be 90% like all the other choruses
5. Why do patterns like 01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - appear only in the first kiai? I'd get rid of them because they're by far the hardest to hit out of everything in the map and you don't really have any set up for it. Pretty much all of your 1/4 patterns excluding these are just 1 jump in the form of circle to slider. The kiais basically play like 280 bpm, so just adding 1 more circle to circle movement seriously increases the difficulty of a pattern.
6. Expanding on the topic of set up, a few other sections of the map seem wayyy too easy compared to the choruses. In sections like 00:44:902 - you have no circle 1/4 jumps, but only slider ones which don't really count with the amount of leniency they have. Basically my point is I think you need to buff a few non kiai sections with some 1/4 circle patterns like 00:44:902 - 01:14:045 - and 02:08:902 -
   
   03:20:902 - 03:34:616 - 04:43:187 - these sections are fine for me though

sukiNathan wrote:

hi

your bg looks stretched horizontally lol, keep the original ratio or find another done

1. 00:24:330 - this section really deserves some form of hitsounding done
2. 01:21:330 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could improve this loop a lot tbh done
3. 02:48:759 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this one a bit too done
4. 01:27:759 - volume should be 90% like all the other choruses done
5. Why do patterns like 01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - appear only in the first kiai? I'd get rid of them because they're by far the hardest to hit out of everything in the map and you don't really have any set up for it. Pretty much all of your 1/4 patterns excluding these are just 1 jump in the form of circle to slider. The kiais basically play like 280 bpm, so just adding 1 more circle to circle movement seriously increases the difficulty of a pattern. the reason why 01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - only appear at first kiai cuz second kiai and the third kiai is different with the first kiai, obviously second kiai and third kiai have vocal but the first does not, so imo it makes no sense to make the same patterns with different part of the song, otherwise would be inconsistent, thats why this patterns only appear at first kiai, and yea is the hardest part of the song, but is not that hard to play, ive give other testplayers play this map, it just played like this map, and imo this pattern express the synth sound rly well
6. Expanding on the topic of set up, a few other sections of the map seem wayyy too easy compared to the choruses. In sections like 00:44:902 - you have no circle 1/4 jumps, but only slider ones which don't really count with the amount of leniency they have. Basically my point is I think you need to buff a few non kiai sections with some 1/4 circle patterns like 00:44:902 - 01:14:045 - and 02:08:902 - i see your point here, im going to buff 00:44:902 - and 02:08:902 - , im not going to buff 01:14:045 - cuz compare to other part this part is calm, so buffing here wouldnt be a good choice
   
   03:20:902 - 03:34:616 - 04:43:187 - these sections are fine for me though

well if you agree and change stuff maybe I'll recheck + icon but otherwise no