my ticket
00:16:402 (4,1) - actually this was a bit confusing because melody didnt change at all, the sounds 00:16:723 - 00:16:830 - here are actually the same like, for example, on this 00:16:830 - slider.
00:58:616 (5) - nc maybe? cuz its downbeat and sound there is pretty strong
01:05:473 (1,1,1) - actaully i dont understand what those sliders are following. like those sliders 01:00:330 (1,1,1) - are okay, because they are somehow following the vocal, but these 01:05:473 (1,1,1) look really strange, becuase they are littlerally dont follow anything
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream's shape looks really strange.. seems like u wanted to do smth like 01:07:187 (1) - this but i think it doesnt work with the streams :<
01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - isnt spacing between these 2 doubles too big? make the spacing lower, like 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) - here or try to make the distance shorter because now its seems to big very huge distance
01:45:759 (6,8) - guess, they could be more parallel
01:52:616 - maybe another 1/8 slider with repeats here? 01:51:759 (1) - cuz this one seems to be very long
01:53:473 - also i think that this note should be clickable, cuz there are some huge changes in the music
01:53:473 (1) - try to end this spinner here 01:54:973 - cuz the actual sound goes up to 01:55:187 - here and now it jsut seems to be a bit off. or u can silence the end aswell
02:07:402 (3) - 02:07:830 (7) - clap?
02:15:116 (1) - i guess there is no need to NC this one
02:22:616 (5) - again nc maybe?
02:27:759 (1) - this is a pretty strong downbeat, so I guess that the spacing should be a bit bigger.
02:42:330 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess this pattern doesnt work here becuz, as I undestood, u used it to emphasise "oooooh' like 02:40:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here or here 02:38:902 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here 02:42:330 there are no such lyrics :v
02:48:331 (1) - finish?
03:14:902 - 03:15:759 - 03:16:616 - increase on each point the volume like by 5-7% so it will work better with the music
03:20:473 (1,2,3,4) - make it less curved like https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... cwAWuM.jpg here, would look ncier imo
03:27:545 (1,2) - its a bit strange that the distance between these 2 is less than the distance between 03:27:973 (2,3) - those two, even if the 03:27:545 (1,2) - sound here is much more stronger and deserves a bit more emphasise
03:31:509 (2,3) - sorry for being nzi, but this blanket can be imrpoved a bit
03:42:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit strange flow.. maybe a wave? https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... T6l-9U.jpg
03:51:759 (1) - again an emphasise issue because spacing here should be bigger due to the strong beat 03:51:759 - here
04:14:045 (1) - maybe again another kickslider here 04:14:902 - ?
04:40:616 - and again ^ xd u also should end the spinner 04:41:473 (1) - here 04:42:973 -
05:08:045 - ^ :v
okay, thats it
00:16:402 (4,1) - actually this was a bit confusing because melody didnt change at all, the sounds 00:16:723 - 00:16:830 - here are actually the same like, for example, on this 00:16:830 - slider.
00:58:616 (5) - nc maybe? cuz its downbeat and sound there is pretty strong
01:05:473 (1,1,1) - actaully i dont understand what those sliders are following. like those sliders 01:00:330 (1,1,1) - are okay, because they are somehow following the vocal, but these 01:05:473 (1,1,1) look really strange, becuase they are littlerally dont follow anything
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream's shape looks really strange.. seems like u wanted to do smth like 01:07:187 (1) - this but i think it doesnt work with the streams :<
01:34:188 (1,2,1,2) - isnt spacing between these 2 doubles too big? make the spacing lower, like 01:41:045 (1,2,1,2) - here or try to make the distance shorter because now its seems to big very huge distance
01:45:759 (6,8) - guess, they could be more parallel
01:52:616 - maybe another 1/8 slider with repeats here? 01:51:759 (1) - cuz this one seems to be very long
01:53:473 - also i think that this note should be clickable, cuz there are some huge changes in the music
01:53:473 (1) - try to end this spinner here 01:54:973 - cuz the actual sound goes up to 01:55:187 - here and now it jsut seems to be a bit off. or u can silence the end aswell
02:07:402 (3) - 02:07:830 (7) - clap?
02:15:116 (1) - i guess there is no need to NC this one
02:22:616 (5) - again nc maybe?
02:27:759 (1) - this is a pretty strong downbeat, so I guess that the spacing should be a bit bigger.
02:42:330 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess this pattern doesnt work here becuz, as I undestood, u used it to emphasise "oooooh' like 02:40:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here or here 02:38:902 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here 02:42:330 there are no such lyrics :v
02:48:331 (1) - finish?
03:14:902 - 03:15:759 - 03:16:616 - increase on each point the volume like by 5-7% so it will work better with the music
03:20:473 (1,2,3,4) - make it less curved like https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... cwAWuM.jpg here, would look ncier imo
03:27:545 (1,2) - its a bit strange that the distance between these 2 is less than the distance between 03:27:973 (2,3) - those two, even if the 03:27:545 (1,2) - sound here is much more stronger and deserves a bit more emphasise
03:31:509 (2,3) - sorry for being nzi, but this blanket can be imrpoved a bit
03:42:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit strange flow.. maybe a wave? https://pp.vk.me/c633920/v633920809/3e6 ... T6l-9U.jpg
03:51:759 (1) - again an emphasise issue because spacing here should be bigger due to the strong beat 03:51:759 - here
04:14:045 (1) - maybe again another kickslider here 04:14:902 - ?
04:40:616 - and again ^ xd u also should end the spinner 04:41:473 (1) - here 04:42:973 -
05:08:045 - ^ :v
okay, thats it
cool map, good luck!