DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi

General

1. Plis choose combo colors i dont get this
2. add tags

done

Not Alone

1. Reduce OD . OD 9 is way too high for this . OD 8 is fine fixed
2. HP should be a bit lower since its a marathon map ~ u dont want people to fail at the final 5 seconds. it would be kinda sad ~ maybe set HP to 6 for now fixed
3. 00:22:696 (6) - is not exactly in middle of 00:21:284 (4,5) - fixed
4. 00:29:225 - u dont need an object here ~ start a 1/2 slider from big white tick fixed
5. 00:34:696 (2,3) - u could make these shapes more consistent by moving the red anchor point to middle fixed
6. 00:49:696 (8) - overmapped . remove it ~ its unnecessary fixed
7. 00:58:696 (2) - start nc from here done
8. 00:58:519 (1,2) - why are they so close tho? they dont want to be left Alone..fixed
9. 01:18:990 (6) - 01:19:696 (2) - 01:20:401 (2) - 01:21:107 (3) - 01:21:813 (3) - 01:22:519 (3) - 01:23:225 (3) - 01:23:931 (3) - 01:24:637 (3) - its actually pretty annoying how all these sliders end on the downbeat which is a big factor ... do something about these ... make the downbeats clickable for better feeling during gameplay ure ofc right and fixed ty
10. 02:01:166 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
11. 02:15:637 (2,3,4) - same spacing between 1/2 and 1/1 .. its confusing and can be unplayable ~ do something about it fixed
12. 03:27:284 (7,8) - space them more fixed
13. 05:11:754 (2) - here ~ sound is getting lower and u suddenly increased SV lol , its not needed

well overall . i would say u still need more experience in mapping ~ dont give up .. GL!~

Alveryn wrote:

[General]

1. 
   why two backgrounds? 2.jpg is not used. im lazy to delete but done
2. Add some tags, like "dubstep" done
3. Set some combo colors

they r set i still dont get this

[Not Alone]

1. The two timing points 00:11:402 - (red timing, and green inherited) used different volumes. Even if green overlaps it, they should be the same.
2. 00:11:402 (1,2) - put these in the center done
3. 00:21:284 (4) - NC done
4. 00:22:872 - Put this green tick at 00:23:401 - here

ty it help

Trynna wrote:

from irc

2016-06-19 18:12 Trynna: idk if point the color is really important, but consider it 
2016-06-19 18:13 Trynna: there's a thing that I learn recently about nc 
2016-06-19 18:13 Lilyanna: what is that
2016-06-19 18:13 Trynna: a good place to put a nc 
2016-06-19 18:14 Trynna: is in the big white ticks 
2016-06-19 18:14 Trynna: not all times, there's some exceptions 
2016-06-19 18:14 Lilyanna: ye  i know D:
2016-06-19 18:15 Lilyanna: and i also learned when sliders speed changes that can start with nc
2016-06-19 18:15 Lilyanna: so u wont confuse the player
2016-06-19 18:16 Trynna: yeah, sometimes it's acceptable 
2016-06-19 18:16 Trynna: but sometimes isn't obligatory 
2016-06-19 18:17 Trynna: since you can see the slider with more mini white circle idk what name it have tbh 
2016-06-19 18:17 Trynna: or less
2016-06-19 18:17 Lilyanna: xD
2016-06-19 18:18 Trynna: but is really important consider the white ticks ignoring the vocal sometimes 
2016-06-19 18:18 Lilyanna: yes :)
2016-06-19 18:18 Lilyanna: its ok if u couldnt find something to mod
2016-06-19 18:18 Trynna: when you asked me what is the colors that I point 
2016-06-19 18:19 Trynna: combo colors ofc
2016-06-19 18:19 Lilyanna: yes 2 modders told me that
2016-06-19 18:19 Lilyanna: but they r set oO
2016-06-19 18:19 Lilyanna: idk why the keep saying set combo colors
2016-06-19 18:19 Lilyanna: i see colors in every combo
2016-06-19 18:19 Lilyanna: is it because of my skin? or something
2016-06-19 18:20 Trynna: maybe idk 
2016-06-19 18:20 Lilyanna: :s
2016-06-19 18:20 Trynna: default colors here 
2016-06-19 18:22 Trynna: 00:26:578 (2,3) - i don't think stack notes here is a nice thing 
2016-06-19 18:23 Trynna: 00:38:225 (3,4,5) - flow looks a bit odd 
2016-06-19 18:24 Trynna: the third note is really far from the second 
2016-06-19 18:24 Trynna: and really near to the next one 
2016-06-19 18:24 Lilyanna: oh yea ill fix those
2016-06-19 18:25 Trynna: 00:39:460 (6) - this slider needs to be far from 00:38:931 (5) - 
2016-06-19 18:26 Trynna: something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5429286
2016-06-19 18:26 Lilyanna: ye i think ill change the revers slider to 1/2 and add note before 6 slider
2016-06-19 18:26 Lilyanna: ye just to fix the flow
2016-06-19 18:26 Lilyanna: and ill space it
2016-06-19 18:26 Lilyanna: :D
2016-06-19 18:27 Trynna: 00:41:401 (4) - spacing issue here too 
2016-06-19 18:27 Trynna: something like this could help http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5429291
2016-06-19 18:29 Lilyanna: fixed
2016-06-19 18:29 Trynna: 00:51:813 (2) - spacing 
2016-06-19 18:31 Trynna: 00:53:754 (1) - slider near to 00:53:578 (4) - when it's a strong beat :c 
2016-06-19 18:33 Trynna: 01:28:342 (1) - 
2016-06-19 18:33 Trynna: nc
2016-06-19 18:33 Trynna: 01:29:049 (1) - no need to be so close
2016-06-19 18:34 Trynna: 01:30:460 (1) - so close 
2016-06-19 18:35 Lilyanna: i dont get this wasnt first note about nc in the stream
2016-06-19 18:35 Lilyanna: but can i know why?
2016-06-19 18:35 Trynna: combo get too long 
2016-06-19 18:36 Lilyanna: yes but the beat didnt change
2016-06-19 18:36 Lilyanna: and aimod doesnt say
2016-06-19 18:36 Lilyanna: too long
2016-06-19 18:36 Trynna: when your combo get close to 15
2016-06-19 18:36 Trynna: you may cut the stream combo 
2016-06-19 18:37 Lilyanna: i think i leave it xd idk
2016-06-19 18:38 Trynna: when you're playing, nc boost your hp 
2016-06-19 18:39 Trynna: just leave a giant combo isn't a nice thing to do 
2016-06-19 18:39 Trynna: but idk, your choice 
2016-06-19 18:41 Lilyanna: i know that well ok
2016-06-19 18:46 Lilyanna: i changed nc ^^
2016-06-19 18:49 Trynna: the first red line and the first green line conflicts about volume 
2016-06-19 18:52 Trynna: i think i can't point more issues for now 
2016-06-19 18:53 Lilyanna: ok thx alot post this on my thread every little thing helps

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. Set combo colors. i still dont get this
2. 2.jpg unused, please delete.

i thought i did :s

[Not Alone]

1. 00:11:402 - The two timing point(red and green) should be same volume level. Fixed
   
   
2. 00:27:284 (5) - Ctrl+G the flow will be better. Done
3. 00:30:990 (6) - Try this will be more suitable. done i loved it ty
   
   SPOILER

   
   
4. 00:50:225 (2) - I think follow the downbeat(00:50:401 - and 00:50:754 - ) will be better. Fixed
5. 01:02:225 - 01:05:049 - A same reason above. Fixed
6. 01:48:813 (1,2) - Try this. i liked D: changed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:16:343 (6,7) - Please note about the spacing, it too close.
8. 03:13:872 (1) - Wrong NC? Fixed
9. 03:39:990 (1,2) - Blanket carefully. looks okay but fixed more xd
10. 03:45:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part you can use step-by-step change about the SV, it will be more interesting. okay
11. 04:12:107 (1) - Using more faster SV.
    
    
    Still a good map, but try to use more bigger difference SV.

MeinGauche wrote:

Nice map. I couldn't find many mistakes.

Mod

03:15:284 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern just didn't seem fitting for me. Use more 'jumpy' pattern like before and after this. Looks fine to me ^^
03:21:990 (1) - I like this more http://imgur.com/g7pQwjH gonna keep this
04:27:990 (6,7) - omg dat hole is good

xd thx

Sorry for this very short and probably bad mod. This is all I could find because all the basic mistakes has been pointed out by others :^)

Aaozora wrote:

nice map! i couldn't find much to say about it it's already quite nice

01:04:166 (3,4,5) - maybe put switch 4 and 5 for a back-and-forth pattern? and then move the following note and slider closer i just changed the position of note number 3 so its kinda loooks better
01:10:343 (5,6) - maybe put the slider at 01:10:343 first and then a note at 01:10:872? seems to flow better this way imo looks fine to me :s
01:29:049 (1) - seems a little close to the previous note Fixed
02:16:872 - possibly add a note here? sounds good done
02:17:754 (10) - suggestion for another pattern: remove rebounding in this slider, and insert a long slider which starts at 02:18:107 and ends at 02:18:460 seems good done
02:23:401 (5) - i like this :3 ty :3
02:32:401 (4) - move this closer to the following slider so that it's more symmetrical done
05:09:990 (5) - overlapped a little strangely? nah

good map and song

diraimur wrote:

ok first of all you need to hitsound your map. you can see the basic hitsounding here though by no means you have to follow everything consistently all the time, you should do whatever fits the song. Oh yea i know i was trying to do them alone which am not good at but now its fixed till i get help to do them better ^^

some parts of the map were pretty bald, such as 01:07:872 - to 01:19:166 - you just placed notes randomly just for sake of protecting ds without any different slider shapes else than straight ones.I dont think it matter that just my mapping style but ill think about it try to increase spacing on strong sounds such as 01:13:872 - and 01:14:578 - and 01:15:990 - etc and try to reduce distance on notes that are not strong such as 01:14:049 (3) - 01:14:754 (6) - 01:15:460 (3) - 01:16:872 (2) - . ok took me long to do that done
and please try to make strong sounds clickable (you don't have to do it always, but *usually* you want them clickable, such as 01:12:460 - and 01:12:990 - and 01:13:166 - . this should help you okay
please try to use curve sliders or one-red-point sliders a little more on that section, its so bald and boring. i did some curves ty

flows at some parts couldve been better, such as 01:19:696 (3,4,5) - 01:35:401 (2,3) - 01:35:754 (3,1) - 01:49:519 (3,4) - 04:25:166 (8,9) - , im not going to show every flow issues as i think you get the idea. if you havent i suggest you to check https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 and t/86329, however you don't have to be flowy ALL THE TIME, just try to make it flowy when you think it fits the song and dont when you think it doesnt.and i think its fine :p

01:21:284 - why did you start to slow down sliders starting from this point? if anything you shouldve increased it. because u can feel the beat is about to drop i guess
01:25:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i personally dont hear any 1/4 here. just stick with 1/2 sliders. looks fine to me
01:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - increase stream spacing over time instead of stable ds. No looks fine
01:29:049 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps do something like this. nice done

spacings on some parts couldve been better. for example at 01:32:401 (6,7,8,9,10) - the least powerful note is 01:32:754 (8) - yet its the most spaced one. you probably got the idea of what i mean. Fixed

some sliders are looking messy such as 01:45:284 (3) - and 02:23:401 (5) - and 04:12:107 (1) - . check this useful guide i just fixed the 1st one the other too look perfect to me :s

thats all for now, i didnt mention everything because some issues just repeats, i hope you can fix the ones ive mentioned and the other things tho. good luck with this map.

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi, from my queue~
Just wanna say for starters Au5 and Fractl songs are some of my fav so, thanks for letting my know this exists
Second off looking at what diraimur said, you NEEEEEEEEED to hitsound this, if anything just hitsound the kick and snare Yes im working on it xd

If you want to hitsound individual slider ends / parts of a slider just double click on it, it should highlight red

Like so

I know that ty ^^

And you can choose from soft hitsounds, drums or normal. It really helps the player to follow where they are and just sounds a lot better.

Now onto the mods

Mods

I would make this AR9, OD7.6, HP7
00:14:225 (1) - spinner here doesn't really make sense i will change it /map it
00:21:284 (1,2) - these 2 sliders do not flow well, they sound okay
00:27:637 (6,7) - it just doesn't sound good going into the next slider with the repeating one, try this for example Looks fine to me
00:30:990 (7,1,2) - move 2 over, overlap doesn't look good not big deal
00:49:166 (8) - extend this slider to the next red tick fixed
01:04:166 (3,4,5) - very odd jump here... Looks fine to me
01:29:225 (1,2,3) - overlap between 1 and 3 doesn't look good i stacked them well
01:49:519 (3) - overlapppp its not a big deal2
01:58:166 (3,4) - blanket 3 and 4 done
02:57:284 (5) - replace this with this they look fine to me
03:32:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps here are way to intense for this part of the song they look fine to me2
04:07:166 (1,2) - if you're going to have these spaced like that, then have 2 be where 1 ends i think they are fine
04:13:519 (4,5) - blanket its fine
04:39:284 (4,5) - fix spacing between these 2 ^
05:13:166 (4,1) - move spinner up to the tick after 4

done

i REALLLLY like this song, can't wait to see how it turns out, good luck!

thank you for mod

1. Combo Color is Default now, please change fit to BG and Song.

1. 02:24:637 (6,2) - (x:256 y:192) seems nice. and try 02:23:401 (5,1,3) - use center and symmetry. more seems good.
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:38:225 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 03:00:813 (1) - ^
4. 03:12:107 - (1) - ^
5. 03:23:401 (1) - ^
6. 03:30:460 (8,9,1,4,1) - move (x:204 y:120)
7. 03:41:754 (5) - move (x:202 y:175)

P o M u T a wrote:

[General]

1. Combo Color is Default now, please change fit to BG and Song.

will do

[Not Alone]

1. 02:24:637 (6,2) - (x:256 y:192) seems nice. and try 02:23:401 (5,1,3) - use center and symmetry. more seems good.
   SPOILER

   Fixed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:38:225 (1) - add finish slider head. done
3. 03:00:813 (1) - ^ ^
4. 03:12:107 - (1) - ^ ^
5. 03:23:401 (1) - ^ ^
6. 03:30:460 (8,9,1,4,1) - move (x:204 y:120) done
7. 03:41:754 (5) - move (x:202 y:175)

Thank you aloott for the mod

Kisses wrote:

reminder for me to mod

Singularity]

1. 00:28:166 - The vocals start on the red tick and you even mapped the red ticks on all the other measures after it. How come its different here?
2. 00:33:990 (9) - Move the NC to here.
3. 00:32:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this ryhthm is actually really exhausting. there are so many clickable objects with moderate spacing for a very clam part of the song
4. 01:24:813 (1) - No need for an SV change imho
5. 01:29:049 (9) - move NC here
6. 01:30:460 (1) - for this kiai i personally would like to see some more SV changes to match the music better. for example, 01:35:401 (2) should have a faster SV than 01:34:696 (1,3) -
7. 01:36:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is the SV between (1), (2) and (3) so small when tall 5 objects have the same intensity?
8. 01:43:872 (4,5) - do this http://puu.sh/pDVNl/d72dadc418.jpg
9. 01:45:284 (3) - make the SV here slower than 01:44:578 (1) -
10. 02:59:754 (2,3,4) - NC all these sliders to signify the sv changes. Also a higher SV on the (4) would play really well
11. 03:54:813 (2,4) - NC these 2 sliders but dont NC (3) http://puu.sh/pDW7W/e8bf8ca382.jpg
12. 03:56:578 (7) - Try x 0.5 sv

1. 00:35:225 (3) - feels out of place; a simple curved slider would be nice
2. 00:53:401 (4) - placing this at 448|128 feels better
3. 00:54:813 (2,3,4,5,1) - make the pattern look more rigid; it has a kind-off awkward feel as it is
4. 01:29:049 (1) - from here to 01:30:107 (4) - ,it's better to use this rhythm imo http://puu.sh/pDWhh/7ecddb5355.jpg
5. 01:31:166 (1,2) - why not stack (2) on (1)? It can be the other way 'round; your choice
6. 01:32:401 (5,6,7,8,9) - polish this pattern; it looks quite random as it is
7. 01:40:343 (1,2) - stack on the slider-end?
8. 01:45:284 (2) - try making nicer slider-art? just an aesthetical thing xd
9. 02:57:284 (5) - I know you were trying to follow the vocals here, but this part just feels awkward
10. 03:00:460 (2) - sv here should be increased
11. 03:11:226 (4) - straight sliders with an awkward angle are not very appealing
12. 03:23:049 (1,2) - exchange NCs
13. 03:24:460 (5) - NC then remove NC here 03:25:343 (1) -
14. 03:26:225 (4) - NC
15. 03:27:284 (7) - ^
16. 03:28:519 (1) - remove NC
17. 03:29:578 (3) - NC
18. 03:29:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the pattern look more symmetrical
19. 03:46:696 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why not NC all these? xD
20. 03:55:872 (5) - NC

flawful wrote:

[Not Alone]

1. 00:35:225 (3) - feels out of place; a simple curved slider would be nice Looks fine to me
2. 00:53:401 (4) - placing this at 448|128 feels better okay done
3. 00:54:813 (2,3,4,5,1) - make the pattern look more rigid; it has a kind-off awkward feel as it is changed to 1/2 sliders
4. 01:29:049 (1) - from here to 01:30:107 (4) - ,it's better to use this rhythm imo http://puu.sh/pDWhh/7ecddb5355.jpg sounds fine to me both works btw but ill keep it ^^
5. 01:31:166 (1,2) - why not stack (2) on (1)? It can be the other way 'round; your choice stacked
6. 01:32:401 (5,6,7,8,9) - polish this pattern; it looks quite random as it is Fixed
7. 01:40:343 (1,2) - stack on the slider-end? i blanket it xd
8. 01:45:284 (2) - try making nicer slider-art? just an aesthetical thing xd i changed that slider shape 10 times fixed again i guess xd
9. 02:57:284 (5) - I know you were trying to follow the vocals here, but this part just feels awkward remapped that part
10. 03:00:460 (2) - sv here should be increased Looks fine to me
11. 03:11:226 (4) - straight sliders with an awkward angle are not very appealing i dont get this
12. 03:23:049 (1,2) - exchange NCs fixed
13. 03:24:460 (5) - NC then remove NC here 03:25:343 (1) - no
14. 03:26:225 (4) - NC fixed
15. 03:27:284 (7) - ^fixed
16. 03:28:519 (1) - remove NC done
17. 03:29:578 (3) - NC done
18. 03:29:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the pattern look more symmetrical done
19. 03:46:696 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why not NC all these? xD i think its ok
20. 03:55:872 (5) - NC i think its ok

Sorry for the short mod cuz this is all I had timefor ;_;
Goodluck with the map
I love this song btw <3

Kisses wrote:

Kisses wrote:

reminder for me to mod

Singularity]

1. 00:28:166 - The vocals start on the red tick and you even mapped the red ticks on all the other measures after it. How come its different here? Fixed
2. 00:33:990 (9) - Move the NC to here. done
3. 00:32:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this ryhthm is actually really exhausting. there are so many clickable objects with moderate spacing for a very clam part of the song remapped fixed
4. 01:24:813 (1) - No need for an SV change imho Fixed
5. 01:29:049 (9) - move NC here done
6. 01:30:460 (1) - for this kiai i personally would like to see some more SV changes to match the music better. for example, 01:35:401 (2) should have a faster SV than 01:34:696 (1,3) - ill work on it ok
7. 01:36:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is the SV DS between (1), (2) and (3) so small when tall 5 objects have the same intensity? fixed
8. 01:43:872 (4,5) - do this http://puu.sh/pDVNl/d72dadc418.jpg done
9. 01:45:284 (3) - make the SV here slower than 01:44:578 (1) - fixed
10. 02:59:754 (2,3,4) - NC all these sliders to signify the sv changes. Also a higher SV on the (4) would play really well done
11. 03:54:813 (2,4) - NC these 2 sliders but dont NC (3) http://puu.sh/pDW7W/e8bf8ca382.jpg done
12. 03:56:578 (7) - Try x 0.5 sv

[]

A song like this requires a lot of SV changes on the different sounds imho. Try experimenting a bit, GL! Ill work on it

THX for mod kisses :*

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there Lilyanna,

this is a modding post from my modding queue:

[Not Alone]
00:29:754 (3,4,5) - I can see a difference between these three sliders, so make the 4 and 5 a mirror of 3. i think its fine
01:21:990 (1) - make this slider a mirror of 01:21:284 (4). okay fixed
01:44:225 (5) - If you want, you can turn this slider 180 degrees. i keep it
02:33:637 (8) - If you want, you can turn this slider 180 degrees.^

[]

Well, I looked over the whole map, and I couldn't see anymore problems, so well done!

Thanks,

paydayz

TY for mod

1. NC stuff going on here
2. hitsounds
3. blanket errors
4. the strange things i found are the sliders aren't NCd due to a slider speed change :/
5. 00:30:990 (7,1) - not a proper blanket
6. 00:33:107 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:45:284 (4) - finish + NC for its downbeat. should be a good start
8. 00:46:872 (7) - NC, 00:47:401 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:48:107 (4) - NC
10. 00:51:637 (3) - the beat is loud, so i suggest u to make the spacing more further
11. 00:57:637 (6,7) - blanket
12. 01:07:872 (1) - finish
13. 01:24:813 (1) - remove NC
14. 01:29:049 (1) - not even an equal DS from 01:28:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . if u want sth neater, use Ctrl + Shift + F on a slider to make it as a stream
15. 01:30:460 (1) - finish
16. 01:35:754 (2) - NC due to a slider speed change
17. 01:40:343 (1,2) - blanket
18. 01:57:107 (8,1) - why is this distance so close?
19. 01:58:166 (3,4,5) - blanket
20. 02:01:166 (1,1) - ^
21. 02:26:931 (1,3) - kinda boring if u do a copy paste here. try sth different
22. 02:50:754 (4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/pEaL5/8f5b951d50.jpg
23. 02:56:931 (4,5) - make the distance away pls
24. 03:00:460 (1) - clap
25. 03:21:990 (1,2) - dis blanket
26. 03:43:696 - 03:44:401 - 03:45:107 - would be the best to set a note here for a rhythm feeling
27. 03:45:990 (1) - finish
28. 03:48:813 (6,8) - first, blanket. second, the overlap is kinda rly bad. try liek http://puu.sh/pEb0G/486b68f687.jpg (nahh no need to think about the tail touching (6)'s slider)
29. 03:50:225 (8,9) - blanket
30. 03:51:637 (1,2,3,4) - why the spacing is larger than 03:53:049 (1,2,3,4) - ?
31. 04:07:166 (1,2) - try to make the blanket neater here
32. 05:13:166 (4) - you're going to ruin the song feelings if u set a finish here. it's just a calm part

lit120 wrote:

hmm

[yes, u're still alone]

1. NC stuff going on here
2. hitsounds im rly bad with hitsounds
3. blanket errors
4. the strange things i found are the sliders aren't NCd due to a slider speed change :/ i thought i did
5. 00:30:990 (7,1) - not a proper blanket looks fine but fixed more
6. 00:33:107 (4,5) - ^ fixed
7. 00:45:284 (4) - finish + NC for its downbeat. should be a good start done
8. 00:46:872 (7) - NC, 00:47:401 (1) - remove NC done
9. 00:48:107 (4) - NC done
10. 00:51:637 (3) - the beat is loud, so i suggest u to make the spacing more further done
11. 00:57:637 (6,7) - blanket fixed
12. 01:07:872 (1) - finish done
13. 01:24:813 (1) - remove NC done
14. 01:29:049 (1) - not even an equal DS from 01:28:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . if u want sth neater, use Ctrl + Shift + F on a slider to make it as a stream thats what i did before but remapped fixed ^^
15. 01:30:460 (1) - finish done
16. 01:35:754 (2) - NC due to a slider speed change done
17. 01:40:343 (1,2) - blanket fixed
18. 01:57:107 (8,1) - why is this distance so close? because they dont want to be left alone 8 loves 1 c: Fixed
19. 01:58:166 (3,4,5) - blanket fixed
20. 02:01:166 (1,1) - ^ .^
21. 02:26:931 (1,3) - kinda boring if u do a copy paste here. try sth different i like it
22. 02:50:754 (4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/pEaL5/8f5b951d50.jpg ok changed
23. 02:56:931 (4,5) - make the distance away pls done away
24. 03:00:460 (1) - clap done
25. 03:21:990 (1,2) - dis blanket dis is fixed
26. 03:43:696 - 03:44:401 - 03:45:107 - would be the best to set a note here for a rhythm feeling ill see about that
27. 03:45:990 (1) - finish done
28. 03:48:813 (6,8) - first, blanket. second, the overlap is kinda rly bad. try liek http://puu.sh/pEb0G/486b68f687.jpg (nahh no need to think about the tail touching (6)'s slider) fixed
29. 03:50:225 (8,9) - blanket
30. 03:51:637 (1,2,3,4) - why the spacing is larger than 03:53:049 (1,2,3,4) - ? :s will fix
31. 04:07:166 (1,2) - try to make the blanket neater here done
32. 05:13:166 (4) - you're going to ruin the song feelings if u set a finish here. it's just a calm part

i thought finish for finish -.- xD

there are many things that i wanted to point it out, but i guess u can do a "self-mod" by urself yes i can iv been doing that everyday i guess it never ends

GL!

DJ Sona wrote:

Hello, this is my first modding, hehe:
And...

01:19:872 (4,4,4,4) - I think it will be better if there will be hitsound (for example standart soft-hitfinish.wav) because there is a complex rhythm. yes im working on getting hitsounds
01:24:637 (6) - From here start >a slider< such as in the picture: done

Slider?

i changed the pattern but i kept the mapping style
01:24:990 (7) - From there starts not a stream but you can do sliders like if i do that it will go off rhythm but thx

Slider>Revers>Revers

01:29:931 (4) - Just create a timing point with 0.75x changed to 0.70x
01:30:460 (1) - What do you think about some spacing streams? i dont hear streams there i guess i keep it

Spacing Streeeam

01:53:049 (1) - And I think there must be the end of the slider and after: ill keep it

Streeeam

^But it is not just here and if you want to complicate the map just add spacing streams.

01:56:049 (2,3) - Maybe instead of the notes you put one slider? done
03:00:813 (1) - Kiai-time? No? done
03:29:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why these jumps are so hard? D: And other jumps. There are not kiai-time. i think its fine
04:12:107 (1) - It is very cool but so crooked. fixed
04:45:284 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These jumps are very hard for a quiet part of the song.fixed 04:44:578 (4) - Make this slider shorter and after put instead of jumps sliders such as: ill keep it

Sliders

05:13:166 (4) - Spinner? Why? This moment is very quite and spinner is loud :/ will be fixed
But you can put a VERY big slider and it is very cool (05:18:460 - The end of the VERY big slider) ill keep it but nice slider tho

For example

The End__φ(．．;) cute emoji :3

Phew __〆(・∀・)

My Angel RangE wrote:

00:25:343 (7) - ctrl+g done
00:27:637 (6) - reverse slider beat not. i mapped to the vocal so it looks fine to me
00:44:578 (1,2,3) - DS different. fixed all through the map
00:50:754 (5,1) - ▼ i keep it

01:39:637 (4) - blanket error fixed
02:18:107 (7) - nc fixed
02:54:990 (7) - nc ^
03:46:696 (2) - ^ ^
03:48:813 (6) - ^ ^
03:55:166 (2) - ^its not a big diff of sv so i keepit
03:57:990 (2,3) - ^same here
04:37:166 (3) - ^ fixed

i thank remix slider not Gentle ((ex)kiai time) okay

.. good luck

Side wrote:

Hi here's a thing :v

AR9 would be better for this considering the difficulty. changed

[Not Alone]

00:23:225 (1) - Would go better stacked over 00:23:401 (2) - done
On a related note, I recommend moving these notes 00:23:401 (2) - together at x:256 y:310 so the spacing is more even overall. Just a screenshot to give you an idea of what I mean. done

00:25:343 (7,1,2,3) - Highly suggest the following change: Move 00:25:343 (7) - to x:154 y:152. This is for better movement from the previous sliders. Then move 00:26:401 (1) - to x:288 y:50, move 00:26:578 (2) - to x:382 y:74 and 00:26:754 (3) - to x:432 y:156. Why do I suggest this? because currently the jump to (7) is pretty unconfortable considering the shape of that slider and the angle you use to jump to it. Then afterward (1,2,3) are all kinda closer and don't have such good movement as well so by moving these notes to these positions you have better overall movement. changed this make sens D:

00:41:401 (4) - ctrl+g on this would play pretty nice. done

00:55:519 (4,1) - Move this combo up a little bit more so the jump to 00:56:225 (2) - doesn't feel too awkward. changed

01:24:813 (7) - This would be better as a 1/2 slider. okay change back :p its was 1/2

01:30:460 (1) - Add a finish on the slider head. Remove the finish from the slider end. done

02:25:519 (3) - definitely wanna ctrl+g this to better suit the drums. done

02:26:049 (5) - After applying the previous change move this to x:366 y:88. Looks nicer and will work better for the next suggestion. done

02:26:578 (6) - Move this to x:144 y:88. It kind of mirrors 02:24:813 (1,2,3) - and that's what makes this neat. Plus considering the difficulty of the map this is not at all as hard to play as it looks. Something like this. It could maybe look a bit neater but just to show you what I mean. changed its looks a lot nicer i get what u mean

02:26:931 (1,2,3,4) - Youl'll probably get a lot of complaints about this pattern because they overlap and look a bit messy. I don't know how willing you are to change this to another pattern but I think you can get your point across trying something different for these 4 sliders. Here's a few screenshots of a possible change but there can be many possibilities. SS1 SS2 SS3 i did got some complain about it so i guess ill change

02:52:872 - 02:53:049 - 02:53:225 - Feels a bit empty not having anything here even if you are following the vocals. The synthy instrument is pretty loud and ignoring it is a bit weird. Maybe a slider and reverse arrow would work but you might have to move the other notes closer so it's more playable. done

02:57:107 - Highly recommend another note here. The small pause doesn't fit the music even if tries to follow the vocals it's a bit too sudden. If you wanna follow the vocals and keep the momentum going then change 02:56:931 (4) - to a 1/2 slider done

03:55:166 (2) - NC changed

03:55:872 (1) - Also NC.done I'd also say 03:56:049 (2) - would be better stacked over this note because of the short 1/1 movement between the sliders prior and it'd be a good transition that way however I wouldn't suggest this because it would mean changing this pattern 03:56:049 (2,1) - which is kinda nice. okay but if it causes problems ill make new pattern

04:21:813 (5) - Small suggestion but ctrl + h on this slider looks a bit nicer like this changed

04:22:343 (6) - If you applied the suggestion from before I'd also rotate it something like thisdone

04:22:696 (1) - This would be much better to play as a single note and if you applied the previous suggestions it might be somehting like this i dont think it needs to be a single notebut ill think about it

04:40:696 (7) - I highly suggest this change: move this slider in the timeline to 04:40:519 - (the red tick before) and then add a reverse arrow. That way it fills the missing rhythm which better follows the music and also has a nice snap from the previous note and into the next slider. Like this changed

05:13:343 (1) - I'd end the spinner at 05:16:343 - done


I like where you're going with this. It has the potential to be a very nice map with more polished patterns and fixing the movement/flow between some of the sliders.

Didn't point those out because I didn't have a lot of time unfortunately xd so hopefully other mods can help with that.

Anyway hope this helps. Good luck! it does

Thank you for mod this was so useful ill keep working on movement and flow between the sliders now i got the idea thank youuuuu

Blizs wrote:

Hi~
mod as requested sorry to keep you waiting

Together

1. remove file "soft-hitnormal3.wav, soft-hitwhistle3.wav, soft-sliderslider3.wav, soft-sliderslide4.wav". Unused hitsounds. done
2. 
   Since there's nothing different on them, the last 3 green lines wasn't necessary. remove them and leave the first one. done
3. From 00:23:225 - to 01:00:990 - I think 20% audio seems a bit quiet here. I can't hear the hitsound T.T . I suggest to use 40% start from 00:22:696 - and 55% start from 00:45:284 - . done
4. 00:52:696 (2,3,4) - The clicks seems a bit weird. you put the slider start on 00:52:872 - that looks have nothing in the song and doesn't give any clicks for the snare on 00:53:049 - . I suggest to replace them with two 1/2 slider and give the clicks for the vocal only. ex => http://puu.sh/pF7De/00a3b02e45.jpg done
5. 01:01:872 (3) - The note seems nothing in the song that deserve a click. And I think 01:02:225 - deserve a click for its emphasis. How about use this pattern for 01:01:519 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? fixed
6. 01:25:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's a bit too much to use 1/4 here since the song have nothing on the blue ticks. use 1/2 sliders or singletapping instead will work better here.done
7. 01:45:990 (2) - I think the note should be snapped on 01:46:166 - because there was the sound in the music exactly started. change the pattern into this instead ? same goes on (02:08:578 (3) - , 02:08:578 (3) - , 04:35:401 (8) - ) fixed sounds better
8. 02:15:460 (4) - Since the sound in the song seems complicated, I think put a circle here doesn't look like a good idea. I suggest to remove it and make 02:15:107 (3) - longer to 02:15:460 - . done
9. 02:15:637 - I think the kiai should be ended here since this point have the special effect in the song ended. fixed
10. 02:38:225 - a volume problem like I said before. I suggest to use 40% volume start from 02:38:225 - and 55% start from 02:49:519 - . done
11. 02:41:931 (1,2) - I'd prefer to put the circle before the slider here because 02:42:107 - has a clear vocal that deserve a click. fixed
12. 03:37:166 (1) - I would prefer to ctrl+g this slider to give a better transition both from the previous note and to the next note. (same goes on 03:38:578 (1) - ) done
13. 03:48:107 (3) - The head seems a bit unreadable. the slider head was full covered by the previous slider's slide and feels a bit hard to realize.I'd prefer to put the slider's head in front of the previous slider's tail like the other sliders before (Something like this).Fixed :s
14. 04:39:813 (5) - I think this slider should be ended on 04:40:166 - . I hear a kickdrum there. fixed
15. 04:57:990 (6,7) - How about switch their position to give a better transition to 04:58:696 (8) - ? done
16. 05:15:990 - add a 5% volume green line ? the song seems quiet here.

done

Okay that's all from me
oh... and good luck with hitsounding you can poke me anytime if you need some help with it :3 . I'll try my best to help you <3
Good luck ~~~

thank you alot for mod this helps alot

Arusamour wrote:

Not Alone (4,86 stars, 855 notes)

• 
  00:20:401 - 00:22:607 - i think a spinner would be better suited. 00:21:284 (1,2) - has to be deleted. it'll look something like this:
  
  00:24:990 (6) - what is the point of having .75x sv? 00:22:696 (1) and 00:25:343 (7) are .8x sv. kinda weird fixed all one 0.75x sv now
  00:28:166 (7,8) - i don think circle on 00:28:166 (7) - fits vocals. it's fine to do on 00:30:813 (6,7) - because in that moment, he says "with you". so i would move 00:28:343 (8) - to 00:28:166. also, i don't understand why you use .70x sv on 00:28:343 (8) -. done
  00:30:990 (7) - stack with 00:30:813 (6) - its stacked D:
  00:41:754 (5) - i'd prefer it if you turned it into non-reversed, 3/4 slider. like so:ill keep it
  
  01:10:519 (1) - move this to 01:10:696 (1) - because it fits your incoming patterns and goes with to music. done
  01:29:754 (3) - i think it'll make a cooler pattern if you stacked this note to 01:29:048 (1) - it was like that before ok done
  02:12:460 (1) - you don't need 1.2x sv change. i think keeping it 0.8x is fine. i wanted to do that the music changed went faster so changing sv would make it flow better
  02:29:049 (4) - move this to x:377 y:341 because it overlaps the sliderball and i think it's prettier : 3 done
  02:36:637 (7) - same here ^ x:188 y:182. and then stack 02:37:166 (1) - on head.ok changed
  02:57:813 (6) - i think it fits music better if you replace with circle and move spinner to 02:57:990 done
  
  03:39:990 (1) - don't need to change slider velocity well iv been getting lot of advices to change lot of sv through the map to make it flow i hope im not doing that in wrong way cuz it look fine to me
  03:54:460 (1,1,1,1) - i think you need to change slider velocities to decrease consistently. like 1.40x -> 1.20x -> 1.00x -> .80x did that and looks fine it is decreasing i wanted a big change of sv just with the music small difference wont flow imo
  03:55:166 (1) - not snapped fixed
  04:11:401 (4) - place farther because the synth is much louder here looks fine
  04:16:696 (3) - shorten to 6/5 note and place 1/1 on 04:17:225. basically looks like this:Ok done
  
  
  c o o l stfufff keep up &good stuff and keep up good work bcuz 1 dey u willl get really mmmmmmgood and then ytes gj. cool.
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ezek wrote:

No Kudos
Let's see once more~

1. 00:18:990 (2) - Seems more fun to play this way Changed!
2. 00:22:696 (3) - I see you're trying to do a blanket with this note, but I think it would be better if you move the note to x:400 y:204 to make a jump instead to emphasize the strong sound there~ I see what you're saying, but it's still the intro to the map and a slower part. Plus it will make the distance to the next circle (which is two 1/2 ticks away) a little bit too close.
3. 00:27:637 (6) - Remove the repeat and end it on the blue tick at 00:27:901 - To match the vocals, since they're pretty strong there ;w; Sounds better
4. 00:30:460 (5) - Extend to the next blue tick for same reason as above and delete the next circle since there is nothing remarkable on that beat~ Fixed
5. 00:38:931 (5,6) - Similar issue, you should be aware of these now, so I don't feel the need to repeat them again~ Fixed as well! and some others
6. 00:45:284 (1) - You should move this slider away from the previous one to make a jump so that strong sound is emphasized~ Good find, fixed!
7. 01:10:696 (1,2) - This big jump doesn't make sense, please reduce it~
8. 01:35:401 (1) - Why placing NC here? fixed
9. 01:41:754 (4) - This slider shape doesn't flow well when you move from the previous one imo, try this, it should feel better~ this works too~ I will let Lily decide what to do with this
10. 01:43:166 (2) - You should stack this properly or move it from there since it gives the illusion that it's coming earlier ok
11. 02:15:107 (3,1) - Make a jump to emphasize strong sound on (1) Fixed...maybe?
12. 02:17:049 (4) - Add NC here and remove it from 02:18:107 (1) - (because the beat gets noticeable earlier) ok
13. 02:21:813 (2) - The beat that falls in the repeat of this slider should be clickable either as a circle or the beginning of a slider because is a pretty strong sound in between those quiet ones~ fixed both!
    
14. 02:26:049 (5) - Same here^
15. 05:00:813 (8) - The strong beat is here, so you should put NC here and remove it from 05:01:519 (1) - ok
16. 05:12:813 (3) - The blanket looks nice but you should do a stack or a semi-stack like you did before because placing it there might trick the players to click it earlier, idk ;w; Stacked on the slider stack! I get your point

I would like to give you more advice n stuff but I'm not very experienced with insanes, but you've made a good progress here! \:D/
Keep fighting!
Good Luck Lily ♥

Ora wrote:

Lily is sick LAZY ノ(ಠ_ಠノ) fixed xD ty :*so she's taking a day off ^_^ So I decided to make the changes...Thanks for everything, this was very helpful!

ezek wrote:

1. 01:10:696 (1,2) - This big jump doesn't make sense, please reduce it~fixed
2. 01:41:754 (4) - This slider shape doesn't flow well when you move from the previous one imo, try this, it should feel better~ this works too~fixed

I would like to give you more advice n stuff but I'm not very experienced with insanes, but you've made a good progress here! \:D/
Keep fighting!
Good Luck Lily ♥

Pentori wrote:

hihi. from my queue

[General]
hm you could do some cleaning up with the maps files:
normal-hitclap.wav
soft-hitclap.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav
all of these aren't in use ok
also, some of your timing points are useless. eg.
00:22:696 - 00:30:813 - 00:30:990 - are all doing the same thing so you don't need them. ok

[Not Alone]
00:21:284 (1,2) - i can't really tell what you're mapping here. there's change in music here. tbh it would be better to just remove these two sliders and have a spinner starting at 00:20:313 - for the entrance done
00:53:754 (6) - nc done
00:54:460 (1) - remove nc ^
00:55:166 (3,1) - swap ncs ^
00:56:578 (3) - nc. hm it seems the nc's need a little work and i don't want to point them all out D: basically you want to keep a basic and consistent structure where every big white tick lands on a new combo as it is kinda the "next section" sorta thing. for situations where a slider goes over the big white tick like 00:57:637 (6) - you can either nc the slider or the note after it, thats for you to decide im mapping to the vocals so i did nc to evertime he start singing lol
00:59:049 (2,3) - this distance should be more than 00:59:401 (3,4) - so that the drum on 00:59:401 (3) - is emphasised. also 00:59:401 (3) - needs an nc but i'll stop mentioning these now yes
01:07:872 (1) - tbh from a modding point of view i dont really understand why there is so much movement here. SV is higher than the previous section and notes seem to be more spaced than the previous section. this is the build up in the music and shouldn't be more difficult than melodic sections with vocals. i reckon you could really improve this map by increasing difficulty when the music picks up and decreasing it when the music is calmer. somewhere like 01:24:813 (1) - would be a good place to start increasing difficulty i think its fine for me it goes well with the music its not big change of sv the music started to go intens there so i just mapped how i thought it need to be and it looks fine to ill see if other modders complaine about it then maybe ill fix it
01:28:343 (9,1) - swap ncs done
01:27:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream is probably too difficult for some with 4.86 stars. i recommend using a lower distance snap because this is quite largely spaced and probably belongs to one of those 6 star stream maps lul easy ill see about it
chorus is really nice
02:23:401 (6) - as cool as this looks you're missing a key drum beat which i really think you shouldn't ignore since its looks cool i keep it for now
03:56:578 (3) - should nc this because of the big sv changedone
04:01:519 (5,7) - blanket this nicer around the sliderend of 5? Looks fine
04:12:107 (1,4) - stack done
04:21:284 (4,5) - blanket done

ok thats all i got. gl!

1. "Backgrounds size should be either 1366x768 for 16:9 ratio or 1024x768 for 4:3
   Please resize the bgs correctly"

1. 00:58:519 (8) - move a little bit higher
2. 01:40:343 (1) - I prefer end this slider on red tick
3. 03:50:225 (4) - improve blanket
4. 04:21:813 (5) - improve blanket with this slider 04:21:284 (4) -
5. 04:27:990 (6) - nc
6. 04:29:754 (1) - remove nc
7. 04:31:166 (5) - nc
8. 04:55:166 (7) - nc
9. 05:09:990 (5,1,2,3) - change possition (I prefer x:208 y:224)

ekafjr wrote:

[Not Alone]
00:18:460 (1,2) -try blanket this looks fine
00:26:931 (4,5) - i thing this will look better if you simetris this ? i think its fine for better flow
00:29:578 (2,3) - really wired pattern move this to X 160 Y 280 u should tell me which note to move :3
00:37:519 (8,1) - no need emphasize at here fixed
00:44:578 (1,2) - wired rhytem i recomended to change this to slider fixed
00:50:931 (1,2) - please keep ds, bpm low at here fixed
00:54:813 (4,5) - this slider doesnt emphasize anything its to keep the flow of the music going icant just remove it
01:03:990 (2,3,4) - rhytem sugest http://puu.sh/pMB0A.PNG its not necessary
01:49:343 (2,3) - ah please dont overlap :V looks fine
02:19:872 (3,4) - fix blanket fixed
02:37:519 (2,3) - I would prefer to ctrl+g for cirle to give a better transition but then the jump from 02:37:166 (1,2) - will be small because i want note 2 to be emphasized so i keep it
03:58:696 (3,4) - fix blanket looks fine but fixed more

hope this helps. Good luck!

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, M4M from your modding Q :3
Thank you for the mod before -w-

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Not Alone]

SPOILER

1. Why circle so small *^* ah and, reduce your OD to 7 since this is only 4.8*, even harder maps don't use OD 8 It's a little late to change CS....and OD8 is perfectly fine for this difficulty. You start seeing OD8.5 in lower 5* maps and OD8 fits the song because the beat is easily distinguished
   
2. Combo colors 1 and 3 somehow seem too bright for this song... (for the background actually xD) maybe try to change it to something darker like dark purple and some shade of gray http://puu.sh/pNAA5/023c3ca8bb.png Not a very big deal, we will consider changing
   
3. I think your position of preview point is kinda.... Random? .-. I think you're trying to capture the lead up to chorus, but actually if you want to "show-off" the chorus part, the lead up is way too long, you better place it around here 01:29:048 - (sure you should place it earlier than that), but otherwise, if you want to actually capture that part, it's alright. We will consider different options than what we have, thank you
   
4. 00:11:402 (1,2) - Why don't just place them right at the middle http://puu.sh/pNAMX/57e032c140.jpg and if you do so, somehow more balanced symmetry like http://puu.sh/pNAOI/f97bc601e9.jpg would be more fitting... Centered, but still going to keep the pattern for now. The one we currently have flows a little better than the one you suggested
   
5. 00:13:519 (1) - There's no really sound at 00:13:519 where it's currently started and 00:16:343 where it's end so why don't extend it longer like starting here 00:13:166 and maybe ending it here 00:18:107 to cover the long sound better and to avoid empty part while there's still tiny sound. The sound is following the previous slider, but you're right it should start earlier. But I think we will end it at 00:17:049 - for now since that's where the sound completely fades away
   
6. 00:27:637 (6,7) - Try to watch this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws As you can see, this part would cause a polarity problem that's not really comfortable to play, so I suggest to get rid of it. The simplest way is doing it like this http://puu.sh/pNB0A/4e6891b036.jpg but if you don't want to lose that long vocal moment, you could try this more advanced rhythm http://puu.sh/pNB2Y/067d8846f9.jpg but well, this wouldn't be really fitting for quiet part tho so somehow I more suggest the first rhythm. This would apply to all those similar rhythm you have in this map. I like your first suggestion and changed it to than ^_^ fixed
   
7. 00:28:166 (7) - btw, either you apply that ^ or not, if you're following vocal here, you better end it here 00:28:872 because the vocal also ends there.
   
8. 00:30:990 (6) - This one is similar, it doesn't end until around here 00:32:578 but I think you want to follow other sound starting here 00:32:225 (1) - so you better don't give a break at all and just end this slider here 00:32:049 Ending it at white tick feels like cutting the vocal...
   
9. 00:34:696 (2,3) - Why not something symmetric like this http://puu.sh/pNBdo/d98155acfb.jpg fixed!
   
10. 00:42:813 (1) - This spinner feels kinda late because the increasing sound started before it started. Maybe just delete this slider 00:42:284 (6) - or just change it into a circle if you wanted to add hitsound and just merge the long vocal sound and the increasing sound in one spinner. http://puu.sh/pNBj9/1fc11727b3.jpg it would fit much better, really... fixed!
    
11. 01:02:225 (5,6) - Their tails are almost touching and it really bugs me xD move them further away from each other. changed a little
    
12. 01:02:931 (7,2) - Just stack maybe. fixed!
    
13. 01:11:049 isn't it supposed to be normal sampleset here? I'll ask our hitsounder, I'm not too sure D:
    
14. 01:36:813 (1) - Somehow making this straight would looks better... http://puu.sh/pNBuW/89532c7bc3.jpg fixed!
    
15. 01:41:578 the sound here is pretty big tho, maybe you can make it emphasized better by making it clickable with rhythm similar to this 01:40:343 (1,2) - like ya http://puu.sh/pNBz4/29d569ac75.jpg I think this might be fine the way it is, will change if more people complain
    
16. 01:51:990 (3,4) - There should be more jump really, maybe you can complete the zig zag pattern the previous notes make http://puu.sh/pNBDC/e8784172e9.jpg yasshh they feel even better unstacked because (5) is pretty big sound and would emphasize better with jump. You just need to adjust that pattern a little so the distance would be equal.
    
17. 02:23:754 this sound should be clickable, really. I mean, REALLY. Rip awesome slider ;-; Lol nope, just select the slider and press ctrl+shift+S then adjust the size until it's only 2/1 slider then add a 1/2 slider before it. You can adjust it with exciting blanket pattern like this http://puu.sh/pNBQv/2316889e92.jpg (P.S : I moved (5) a bit upward so the pattern would fit, the next note shouldn't be problem, don't worry http://puu.sh/pNBSf/5ceb23c16c.jpg still looks damn good :3) Yeah, indeed the slider would be kinda ruined, but it better than ignoring a very big sound. mehhh I will see what other people think about the slider/rhythm at this part, you could be right
    
18. 02:26:225 (6) - This should really be two circles, because of the big sound at red tick and it should be clickable. Furthermore, it has similar "vocal" sound as 02:25:872 (4,5) - so two circles should be really fitting. fixed!
    
19. 02:28:343 (3,4) - Lol, u sure? :v yes.............? I think so
    
20. 02:40:872 (8) - I don't really like these long sliders tho because you can feel the song get more intense than the previous part and these sliders kinda ruin the "intenseness". You can hear those tiny sound at background so you could actually map those instead, but well, since you do this every time, I guess you won't change :/ Well if people have better options then we will listen
    
21. 02:43:343 (6,7) - Maybe you can do this more like this http://puu.sh/pNC6j/4751ed7b57.jpg for neatness purpose. Nice catch ^^
    
22. 02:46:519 (7,9) - ^ ya, this too http://puu.sh/pNC8T/552125e2da.jpg and if you decided to apply, would be better if you balance (7) more, this one looks kinda unbalanced. good!
    
23. 02:49:519 (7) - something like this really do better tho http://puu.sh/pNCbY/2aea82410c.jpg Fixed
    
24. 02:54:990 (1) - remove NC since you don't NC here 02:52:166 (8) - or NC both, anyway to be consistent. Fixed
    
25. 03:16:696 (2,1,2) - stack pls Fixed, nice find
    
26. 03:24:813 ignored.... so sad ;-; yeeeeeeeah vocals
    
27. 03:32:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe make this into a star shape... Use ctrl+shift+D in case you don't know (before that, change the beat snap divisor to 1/2) Fixed
    
28. 03:34:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ this too, use hexagonal shape then adjust the position. Fixed, much nicer :p
    
29. 03:37:166 (1,1) - These really ruin the built up.... Previously you used intense 1/2 jumps then even more lately to the song where the rhythm should've got more intense, you used these boring long slider instead.... Really? keep using 1/2 jump pattern here. Personally I disagree with this, but if more people see the same I guess it can be remapped
    
30. 03:39:990 this part until here 03:45:813 and so on should get more intense, better fill up those empty part so it would be solid 1/2 pattern, follow the background music at 1/2. No because the music really changes at 03:45:990 - . It's not the same as before. I think it's fine
    
31. 03:41:049 (3,5) - Just stack Fixed
    
32. 03:59:225 (4,1) - ^ was already stacked 8)
    
33. 04:17:225 (4) - This somehow need to be emphasized more with this kind of rhythm http://puu.sh/pNCW9/ea181c63ae.jpg really, the song somehow implies to do that .-. nice find ^^
    
34. 04:18:460 (8,9) - Maybe you can use four circles here instead to differentiate it from other rhythm since this one actually have 1/2 sound Fixed, may need to readjust for better flow !
    
35. 04:27:990 (6,7) - Lol, this looks funny good job (^-^)b I made this!! ^_^
    
36. Yeah I think the rest are fine, just try to maintain those "intenseness" as I tell you, especially at part where there are vocal since you seem to stick way too much on vocal, try to map the background sound more. Overall, it's a good map~

Good luck ^^

edittt : I forgot to mention sometime you also ignore some big sound in order to follow vocal too, it's not a good thing okay, try to determine which sound is bigger and map that sound first instead of vocal or main sound. The drums play big role in this song tho~

Good luck again~

edit2 : oohh this is actually a collab? .-. really, you better make SB to show which part is whose, if you can't you can req someone who can (no, I can't) :3 WE ARE LOOKING EVERYWHERE so hard to find people, but we also want to learn on our own. That would be cool

Good luck (3)

Hantsuki wrote:

[General]

1. "Backgrounds size should be either 1366x768 for 16:9 ratio or 1024x768 for 4:3
   Please resize the bgs correctly" ok will do

[Not Alone]

1. 00:58:519 (8) - move a little bit higher looks fine
2. 01:40:343 (1) - I prefer end this slider on red tick gonna keep it
3. 03:50:225 (4) - improve blanket fixed
4. 04:21:813 (5) - improve blanket with this slider 04:21:284 (4) - looks fine but fixed more
5. 04:27:990 (6) - nc fixed
6. 04:29:754 (1) - remove nc fixed
7. 04:31:166 (5) - nc fixed
8. 04:55:166 (7) - nc fixed
9. 05:09:990 (5,1,2,3) - change possition (I prefer x:208 y:224) looks fine

I cannot see anything else. I know it's very little mod, sorry

TY for mod

Ametrin wrote:

M4M

mod

[General]

- 5min without rest D: yeah....but come on, at least there are some slow parts. We need 5min drain time D:
- tooooo many different sv in your map, makes it sometimes confusing. I recommend use no more than 5 sv in a part. Of course, the slider - you really want to emphasize can have the sv you want, but can't too often. really the only part that has a lot is the sliders that build up and the part with reverse sliders. I think they are needed.
- make a SB to show who made which part :3 That's the plan
- just personal opinion, you can focus more on flow. Some slider can be adjusted to a better direction. I agree, and I see it improving after every mod we get ^^
- check and fix green line like 01:25:078 fixed ! will look for more
- ctrl+a the whole map and you will see you haven't made the full use of the area (not a big problem tho) Yeah, it's tempting to stay away from the edges of the map

[nazi]

00:13:519(1) unnecessary spin, just blanket Fixed blanket (I think?)!
00:35:049(3,4) too close Fixed in last mod ^^
00:54:460(3,4) ^ Fixed
01:02:225(5,6) ^ Fixed
01:15:990(5,6) ctrl+g? Nice catch ^^ flows better now
01:29:931(1) no NC Fixed
02:12:460(1) sv change too sudden (i think) Fixed
02:15:637(1) two note here will better than a slider to follow the beat I don't hear 2 notes, I will ask Lily
02:22:166(3) not a good clap Nice find!
03:09:284 - keep kiai Only if more people think this way...otherwise it's fine as it is
04:41:754(9) NC to emphasizeok I will try it

cool song. GL! Thanks! ^^ your mod is appreciated

• 1. 00:23:931 (3) - The slope of the slide try little bend. it looks more natural flow lovable.
     
     example

     
  2. 00:26:401 (1,2,3) - This place looks messy in my view in general, this arrangement not natural the flow of the next note. what about this place? Although not perfect, but better.
     
     SPOILER

     
  3. 00:26:931 (4,5) - The flow awkward no.4,no.5 slide. change the no.4 slide,in this way? It was symmetry two slide.
     
     SPOILER

     
  4. 00:28:343 (7) - This rhythm is awkward. try to beat at the end of the white line.
  5. 00:30:460 (5) - I think this rather than the one slider, the combined slider and a circle. ↓
     
     SPOILER

     
     
  6. 00:44:578 (2) - New combo is better to delete it.this is because the sound is being followed.
  7. 00:50:401 (3) - Ctrl + G?
  8. 00:51:284 (2) - ^
  9. 01:08:578 (4,5,6) - This distance 01:07:872 (1,2,3) Try and equalize the this distance.
  10. 02:49:519 (7) - this slider 02:49:166 (6) what do you think of the slider and will symmetrical?
      
      SPOILER

      
  11. 03:26:578 (2) - Ctrl +G , H try again placed. and Ctrl + G. ↓
      
      SPOILER

      
  12. 03:28:519 (3) - little downwards.better flow.
      
      SPOILER

      
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  good map and star
  
  Good luck !

Nattu wrote:

Hi! M4M by Ora requesthttps://osu.ppy.sh/s/464507

00:27:637 - how about this rhytm? http://puu.sh/pSute/9b33c3d083.jpg, like this 00:30:460 (5,6) - , with a good artslider on this 00:28:166 ofc idont get it
00:38:931 (5,6) - fix blanket fixed
00:39:460 (6,7) - ^fixed
00:38:225 (3,4) - not a same, use copy and rotationfixed
00:41:049 (3,4) - ^fixed
00:50:225 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - bad flow i think, and big jump on the quiet bit 00:51:284 (2) - fixed
01:10:343 (6) - fix that bit (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5551887) 399:167 ehm fixed
01:14:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe pattern on this? not a random its not random
01:37:166 (2,3) - maybe =? they r fine
02:09:637 (6,1) - blanket maybe? good one done
02:11:401 (1) - use "new style" on this slider, delete white point and create good blanket looks fine
02:15:107 (3,1) - maybe =? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5552078 i dont think it will flow will its start of new beat i keep it
02:31:872 (3,5) - maybe =? ok
02:37:696 (3) - 96:180 ok
02:43:696 (7) - how about make this slider longer? end on the white tic i keep it for now
02:57:460 (6) - bad reverse in rhytm I think, or need note on this bit 02:57:990 - its mapped to vocals i think its fine
03:16:696 (2,1,2) - stack? not rly important but ok
03:33:990 (7,3) - not like this overlap >:e fixed
03:59:225 (4,1) - stack? its stacked
04:01:519 (5,7) - fix blanket looks fine
04:21:284 (4,5) - ^ looks fine
04:30:637 (6) - ctrl+g and 04:31:166 (1) - ctrl+g ok
05:07:166 (3) - need vertical symmetry 104:100 done

sorri for mai ingrish ;_; np

nice song and map, good luck! :3

TAIN wrote:

Hello~ from Lilyanna's Q.
My english very bad :<
please understand.

• 1. 00:23:931 (3) - The slope of the slide try little bend. it looks more natural flow lovable. fixed
     
     example

     
  2. 00:26:401 (1,2,3) - This place looks messy in my view in general, this arrangement not natural the flow of the next note. what about this place? Although not perfect, but better. fixed
     
     SPOILER

     
  3. 00:26:931 (4,5) - The flow awkward no.4,no.5 slide. change the no.4 slide,in this way? It was symmetry two slide. fixed
     
     SPOILER

     
  4. 00:28:343 (7) - This rhythm is awkward. try to beat at the end of the white line. fixed
  5. 00:30:460 (5) - I think this rather than the one slider, the combined slider and a circle. ↓ fixed, but put the single circle in the blanket at the bottom of slider
     
     SPOILER

     
     
  6. 00:44:578 (2) - New combo is better to delete it.this is because the sound is being followed. fixed
  7. 00:50:401 (3) - Ctrl + G? fixed
  8. 00:51:284 (2) - ^ I will try this I guess
  9. 01:08:578 (4,5,6) - This distance 01:07:872 (1,2,3) Try and equalize the this distance. fixed
  10. 02:49:519 (7) - this slider 02:49:166 (6) what do you think of the slider and will symmetrical? fixed
      
      SPOILER

      
  11. 03:26:578 (2) - Ctrl +G , H try again placed. and Ctrl + G. ↓ fixed
      
      SPOILER

      
  12. 03:28:519 (3) - little downwards.better flow. fixed
      
      SPOILER

      
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  good map and star
  
  Good luck !

Thank you for mod and star I accepted everything

brdzxh wrote:

very late nm from my queue~

00:47:578 (4) - move to x440 y76 for more consistent spacing fixed ! nice find
00:48:107 (1,2,3,4) - make spacing consistent here - above was only one note; here you can improve the spacing between all of them fixed
00:53:754 (1) - would move the first anchor point a bit up fixed
01:08:931 (5) - move to x68 y272 for better spacingmesses up the rhytm/pattern for this build up part.
01:20:401 (6) - move it a bit to the left ok
02:01:166 (1) - the middle anchor point is out of the grid Not anymore
03:27:990 (2) - end anchor point out of the grid Same ^
There are more spacing issues between some singles in the beginning of the map, but I cant hit address them all, and the rest of the map is fine
So just look through the first part and make sure the spacing is alright and consistent since some looked really awkward I will look but some of the ones like the 4th mod you did are intentional for the more intense/build up part of the song
But all in all, this looks good
Gl with ranking! Thanks for mod!

-Jukke- wrote:

add some more tags
make the map CS4,6
im modding this because i love the song. great choice and great map.


00:11:402 (1) - to 00:19:519 (3) - reduce slider velocity for this part to fit the calm first part better. its already 0.50 i think its fine
00:25:343 (7) - reduce slider velocity for this slider, it fits the singing better
00:28:343 (7) - ^
00:30:990 (7) - ^
00:36:637 (7) - ^
00:39:460 (6) - ^
it was like that tbh but than many recommanded to change it i think its not needed
01:13:519 (1) - to 01:24:637 (6) - the spacing should get higher as the buildup becomes more intense ok fixed some spacing
01:24:637 (6,1) - to 01:24:637 (6,1,3) - you should make the sliders for low frequency wubs slower and higher frequencies sliders go faster not necessary
02:19:872 (3) - make this slider start from where the slider before it ends or close to the end
02:40:872 (8) - reduce slider velocity to fit the singing better like before
02:43:696 (7) - ^
02:46:519 (7) - ^
02:52:166 (8) - ^
02:54:990 (7) - ^
03:24:460 (7) - ^
03:27:284 (1) - ^
ill see about these not sure
03:56:578 (1) - to 04:41:754 (1) - do the same as for the first drop and make low frequency wubs even slower and higher ones even faster its fine
04:58:696 (8) - this slider is a bit weird, maybe you should change it a bit looks fine
05:05:049 (1) - to 05:11:754 (2) - you should decrease slider velocity to make it fit with the calm end better its already 0.50 xd
i know this mod may not be much but i wanted to do this for the song, i know you might not agree with some things but thats okay
EDIT: fixed typos

ty for mod im glad u like the song

-Jukke- wrote:

you can make the slider velocity for those parts even slower by adding a timing point which is not inherited and then decreasing the slider velocity. ill keep for now
also i think you skipped one part in my mod about the CS i think its fine ill think about its not big differance and the tags idk what should i add more but i added what i know :p

VenixPL wrote:

01:51:990 (3) - move to up k
01:52:696 (6) - move to down k
02:31:166 (1) - move to up cant do that its stacked with the previous slider it will ruine it
sick map!

MisterDinner wrote:

Very playable currently, got halfway through despite the highest star song ive done is 4.5*
Most of the problems i saw were with the whole map itself, not specific parts.ok

mod b0ss

First things first, for the really dubsteppy parts, i find the slider speed changes to be un noticeable, they could be made more drastic.
You should also make the dubstep parts look more ornate and harder to read, from my experience a dubstep map should keep you on edge and have you constantly ready for a sudden speed change, it could look like this part 03:45:990 (1) - 03:56:578 (1) - ok
Also i noticed that the second drop is a copy and paste of the first one, imo the second chorus or drop of a map should be a bit harder than the first.
Hitsounding as well, i saw some people complaining. Check out Ice Angel if you dont have it already, ktgster made great use of hitsounds on the map. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/297933ok
If the problem is that the finish sounds like something unimportant in your skin, i suggest getting more distinct hit sounds, you will realize how awful this 03:45:460 (5) - sounds if the finish is an actual cymbal hit, ive done it before when i had barely noticeable finish.i think its fine
00:13:166 (1) - and 00:20:313 (1) - Those spinners feel weird at the start, you could map notes and sliders to the synth in the background instead of a spinner to a barely noticeable noise ill think about it
02:23:401 (6) - try making the middle of that more round, it stood out a lot during gameplay.its fine
03:55:519 (1,1) - these two are landing after the main drum hits by a fraction of a second, listen to them on 25% speed, try adjusting the timing of them so they land earlierthey r fine to me

Phyloukz wrote:

Heyo, random mod here form #modreqs (:

mod

00:18:990 (2,3) - make the sliderhead of (2) as close to (3) as 00:18:460 (1,2) - (2) is with (1) they look fine
00:41:049 (3,4) - blanket them to each other? okay
01:12:107 (1,2,3) - i recommend same spacing between those since same sound ok
01:16:343 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:17:754 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a clean pattern (e.g. this http://puu.sh/q1DLO/e87beb75c4.jpg ) so it looks less random fixed
01:19:166 - to 01:24:813 - i highly recommend to make especially in parts/patterns like this to use same Distance Snap (you also could do an increasing DS but not randomly). with that change this part'd seem more structured and even, smooth it wasnt random at all i did use ds and made once further because the music is getting intens
01:29:225 (2,2) - avoid that overlap -> http://puu.sh/q1E9Y/f55209b5fd.jpg is better imo (you could also consider making ctrl + g on slider (2))its fine for now
01:33:990 (3) - rotate this slider a little bit to create a clean pattern -> http://puu.sh/q1EjJ/82ee8ae18b.jpg ok
01:44:049 (5,1) - this may sound unreasonable but making the slidertail of (5) flow right to the sliderhead of (1) makes it much prettier and pleasanter to play k fixed
01:48:813 (1,2) - blanket looks fine but fixed more
02:10:343 (1,2,3) - make the same shape for all 3 sliders, use ctrl + c/v and flip vertically/horizontal and rotation tool ok done that
02:12:107 (3,1) - this is also a little aesthetic issue which can be fixed easily by copying to look like this -> http://puu.sh/q1EMR/197b5c0f85.jpg (its just cleaner...)the sv in slider 1 changed so normaly it will look different
02:52:872 (8,1) - really unpleasant flow error fixed that ... ihope
02:54:460 (5,6) - ^ ^
03:12:107 (1,4) - overlapi think its fine
03:41:049 (3,6) - maybe NC on these? 03:45:284 (4) - alsonah
04:21:284 (4,5) - make them "hug" stronger, idk how to say that xD http://puu.sh/q1FgB/d4e6905c4e.jpg i think thier fine :p
04:27:990 (1,2) - wtf Oo this looks very strange .strange is good i love that reaction I would make the circle slider having a bigger radius, but its your map c;
04:50:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - interesting pattern, i like it my collab is awesome

hmmm.. maybe you should consider keeping more an eye on distance snap, it would make your map more structured

Interesting map, please keep this map alive I really like it
I hope my mod helps you a bit
Good Luck with your map and happy mapping! (:

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey for M4M!

Offset should be 11404 :p ill make sure :p

00:11:402 (1,2) - you could use single hitcircles, but eh, this is fine as is its fine
00:41:754 (5,6) - blanket better here its fine but fixed more
01:44:049 (5,1) - align
01:45:284 (1) - make this shakier it'd fit the bass more ^^ ill try i like how they are for now
02:07:872 (2) - shake those sliders! ^

I love this map a lot:p for once a dubstep track that doesn't go totally wild in every way possible nice map go for app ^^

THANK you for mod

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  - nice map, some of the jumps are inconsistent in spacing, I pointed out a few of those.
  - Some sliders give the opportunity to blanket, so make sure to use those, especially on a pretty song like this.
  - The jump section is a lot harder than the rest of the map (covered that). Try to make the non-kiai parts have bigger spacing around those kiais so it matches.

-Vanilla wrote:

]00:11:402 (1,2) - Blanket? It will match 00:18:460 (1,2,3) these blankets they r fine for now
00:24:460 (4,5) - stack on the same point okay
00:25:343 (7,1,2,3) - Try to do something here with a blanket, It would look better and maybe play better too looks fine at least for now
00:27:637 (6,7) - Change timing to this - i dont get what u mean :s

Click me

00:29:754 (3,4,5) - Do a triangle like this maybe its good idea but i pass for now

click me

00:34:696 (2) - Move red point to the center of the slider i dont think its a big deal because its the copy of the next slider the shape will change
00:35:931 (5,6) - Parallel? they r fixed more
00:36:637 (7,8) - You can blanket this if you want to, it might look prettier okay yes its done
00:41:049 (3,4) - Make sure these sliders look the same (use copy + paste) im sure i used copy past they look the same to me maybe because one of them is rotated but thats fine
00:42:284 (6,1) - turn into long slideri dont think its needed
00:50:225 (2,4) - stack fixed this pattern in another way
00:51:813 (4,5) - Maybe make it look more like its nice one u did there but its fine

Click me

00:58:519 (7,2) - Stack done
01:03:284 (9) - move red point to center of the slider i dont think its needed
01:05:049 (7) - ctrl+h and move it back ok done
01:09:637 (2,3,4,5) - Equal spacing i thought i make it intentionaly like that but ill think about it
01:11:754 (4,3) - Stack if you want to its fine
01:13:519 (1,2,3) - Equal spacingi made it like that to jump and emphasize the note
01:13:519 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These all look different, copy and paste to make them all the same i did copy and past it and rotate them
01:21:990 (1,2,3,4) - Equal spacing same thing as before but if more complained and will make equal or reduce
01:24:107 (4,5,6,1) - Make the jump bigger here, because the song is getting more intense i thought i did
01:24:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ they are fine

About the Kiai

The slider shapes are nice. You can blanket most of the circles in this whole section, I would remap this section so it looks better I guess... ?
You don't have to worry about flow on this section because it is a dubstep portion, it can be random.
Look at the last kiai on this map, and do what happened there, because that part was pretty nice.
01:47:754 (1,2,3) - also equal spacing here :3ty for ur opinion i dont think it needs to be remapped but im thinking about it i rly like its my personal style of mapping but ill think about it

02:18:813 (1,2,3) - stack in the same spot its fine
02:20:578 (4,5) - ^i dont want stack those
02:23:401 (6) - 2012 sliders :3 ... It's fine like this but maybe change it.. It doesn't look right to me :3 i fxed it hey nothing should get old here -.- if it flows it stayes
02:26:225 (6,8) - stack and make the distance 02:26:578 (8,9) bigger i think they r fine
02:35:049 (4,5,6) - Make it look like this its a good one maybe okay ill see with my collab about this one

Click me

03:00:813 (1) - Maybe try to make the part before this kiai have bigger spacing, because this part is a lot harder than the rest of the map.it does have bigger spacing
03:41:049 (3,5) - stack its stacked i make sure
03:46:696 (1,2) - Do this if i do this it will change alooot and rest of that part D; but its good one

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03:47:401 (2,3) - then do this spacing will be awkward then ill see my collab with this

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03:59:225 (4,1,2) - stack done
04:27:990 (1,2) - Fix blanket somehow... thats not blanked thats 2016 sliders trick -by ora
04:34:696 (6,7,8) - When you play this, the 8 doesn't blanket the 6 because of the stacking. Try to move the 8 somewhere else so the blankets are consistent fixed i guess
04:38:225 (1,4) - You could probably blanket this not needed
Overall :

• 
  - nice map, some of the jumps are inconsistent in spacing, I pointed out a few of those.
  - Some sliders give the opportunity to blanket, so make sure to use those, especially on a pretty song like this.
  - The jump section is a lot harder than the rest of the map (covered that). Try to make the non-kiai parts have bigger spacing around those kiais so it matches. thank you for your opinion

Thank you for mod and thank you for starrr

Arphimigon wrote:

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\o\ slap C:

[Map]
00:32:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It feels weird here to have the same spacing and emphasis when there are no vocals, since it is being mapped to the back ground instruments which are way quieter and calmer, I think this and similar parts should be far calmer too to reflect the tone when there are no vocals around however you wish to do so. i think its fine for now
00:50:931 (1,2) - No need for such a snappy, jagged and high spaced part here! No strong sounds or anything to call for it o/ Fixed o/
00:55:872 - Kinda weird to have a strong sound on a slider reverse imo, if anything having a this slider be notes that are either normal or jump spacing would make more sense with the instruments hereidk i think its fine >_< ill make sure ty
01:21:107 (3,4) - *ahem* fix blanket move slider like 2 pixels right blahblah blanket idk how u saw that but fuh fuh fixed
01:24:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Would be cool if these had increasing velocities to work with the buildup happening in the background here tbh, or increasing spacing per sliderure not the first who recommanded that but i think thier fine like that ill think about it
01:53:049 (1) - Could this have like, a lot of wiggles on it because the sound on it is kinda distorted and not smooth? wigle wigle i think it flows fine
03:17:401 (4,1) - Awkwardly low spacing to a strong downbeat sound, make it larger! okay
03:26:225 (1,2,3,1) - After those high/middle spacing sliders, having a stacked slider which is also low spaced kinda ruins the flow, you should unstack it and put it at a place that continues in the general patter direction so it feels like finishing off the pattern, whilst keeping the spacing relatively the same. true fixed
04:04:872 (1) - Ends on much stronger sound I wanna CLICKY that stronger sound ;-;okay true ill let my collab fix that
04:12:107 (1) - PERFECT SLIDER CHOICE I LOVE YOU yaaay

Dunno, I like this so I think this should be enough.
Have fun o/

Thank you for mod Arphi

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM（Fourm req）

Lost

1. 00:45:637 (2,1) - stack？ fix
2. 00:58:519 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5656989 i dont hear triplet here
3. 00:59:401 - NC fixed
4. 01:02:225 (5) - ↑ fixed
5. 01:05:049 (7) - NC and del NC 01:05:578 (1) - fixed
6. 01:06:460 - NC fixed
7. 01:15:990 (2) - hitsound change into auto and whistleok
8. try all→01:16:519 - del hitsound 01:16:696 - add whistle 01:17:049 - del whistle 01:17:401 - add whistle ok I guess
   01:39:637 (6) - NC fixed
9. 01:50:401 (5) - ↑ dont agree
10. 01:54:460 (4) - ↑ fixed
11. 02:04:343 (4) - ↑ 02:05:049 (1) - del NC and NC 02:06:107 (4) - fixed
12. 02:29:401 (5) - NC fixed
13. 02:32:578 (5) - ↑ fixed
14. 02:35:049 (4) - ↑ fixed
15. 03:16:166 (7,2) - stack then 03:16:696 (2,1,2) - stack fixed
16. 03:27:990 (5) - NC fixed
17. 03:32:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - forget add hit sound？ yeah and there might be more place. Hitsounds might need to be redone
18. 03:41:754 (5) - stack then 03:42:460 (6) - stack doesn't stack
19. 03:46:696 (1) - del NC 03:47:401 (3) - NC dont agree with del NC
20. 03:50:225 (4) - NC dont agree
21. 04:05:401 (7) - NC fixed
22. 04:08:578 (4) - ↑ fixed
23. 04:12:107 (1,4) - stack fixed
24. 04:13:872 (5) - NC fixed
25. 04:21:284 (4) - ↑ fixed
26. 04:24:107 (5) - ↑ fixed
27. 04:29:754 (3) - ↑ fixed
28. 04:34:696 (6) - ↑ fixed
29. 04:52:343 (7) - NC and del NC 04:53:049 (1) - ，then NC 04:53:754 (6) - fixed
30. 04:57:990 (6) - NC fixed

good luck！

2016-07-23 19:43 HappyRocket88: Ok!, Let's start. n.n7
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: sad is my best friend
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: wait
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: are u gonna mod? D:
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: Nope
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: just checking! xD
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: I don't have much time to do a full mod. ;w;
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: But I have some few general suggestions
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: >w<
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: yea okay
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: but
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: do you have general time
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: for mod ? xD
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: one day
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: First of all, remove normal-hitclap.wav since it's not used in the mapset.
2016-07-23 19:47 Lilyanna: ok
2016-07-23 19:47 HappyRocket88: I really liked the combo colors! >u<
2016-07-23 19:47 Lilyanna: i did
2016-07-23 19:48 Lilyanna: cool
2016-07-23 19:48 HappyRocket88: But I think you can try out to manage a custom slidertrackoverride
2016-07-23 19:48 HappyRocket88: to differenciate it from the kiai
2016-07-23 19:49 Lilyanna: okay so ^^
2016-07-23 19:49 HappyRocket88: I mean, in the kiai you can use just some specific colors to make it differente from the other sections
2016-07-23 19:49 HappyRocket88: like only purple and pink maybe. o:
2016-07-23 19:49 Lilyanna: i love purple
2016-07-23 19:50 Lilyanna: is it neccesary?
2016-07-23 19:51 HappyRocket88: Oh, not "necessary"
2016-07-23 19:51 HappyRocket88: it's just a suggestion >w<
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: sorrt
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: sorry
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: bad spelling
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: x(
2016-07-23 19:52 HappyRocket88: Maybe you can uncheck widescreen support? o:
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: ohhh
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: i tried to do
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: sb as i said
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: in the discription
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: i forgot it D:
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: tyyy
2016-07-23 19:55 HappyRocket88: Also Lily!
2016-07-23 19:55 HappyRocket88: we have to work out on the New Combos
2016-07-23 19:56 HappyRocket88: they play a bit strange
2016-07-23 19:56 Lilyanna: yea
2016-07-23 19:56 Lilyanna: D:
2016-07-23 19:57 Lilyanna: u will help me now,..?
2016-07-23 19:57 Lilyanna: ill be so happy
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: Sure!
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: 00:24:637 (5) - 
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: NC
2016-07-23 19:58 Lilyanna: done that ;c
2016-07-23 19:58 HappyRocket88: 00:33:813 (1) - remove NC here
2016-07-23 19:58 Lilyanna: i kneww there is nc problems specialy in vocals parts ;x;
2016-07-23 19:59 Lilyanna: 00:52:519 (1) -  remove this and nc next?
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: nuu
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: that one is fine
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: 00:55:166 (5) - add nc here instead
2016-07-23 20:01 Lilyanna: ok cuz seemed on red tick will be wrong
2016-07-23 20:01 Lilyanna: ok
2016-07-23 20:02 HappyRocket88: 01:26:225 (5) - here too
2016-07-23 20:03 Lilyanna: ok done rocket89
2016-07-23 20:03 Lilyanna: :p
2016-07-23 20:04 HappyRocket88: 01:41:754 (4) - add nc here and remove it here 01:42:460 (1) - 
2016-07-23 20:07 Lilyanna: done rocket90
2016-07-23 20:07 Lilyanna: xd
2016-07-23 20:09 HappyRocket88: 02:05:049 (2) - this slider should be extended until here 02:05:931 - :o
2016-07-23 20:09 HappyRocket88: since there's no really prominent sound with the slider (3)
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: 02:18:813 (1) - remove nc and add nc here02:19:166 (2) - 
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: wot im not flowing the beep sound
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: 02:22:696 (5) - nc
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: 02:05:578 -
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: so u can hear
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: here
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: ohh
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: the pause
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: ok!
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: and then other sound
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: Didn't know what you were follwin
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: =w=b
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: 02:23:401 (6) - NICE! :o
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: 02:39:990 (5) - NC
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: that one spend hours
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: fixint the symetry
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: xd
2016-07-23 20:12 HappyRocket88: 02:43:166 (5) - NC :3
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: 02:22:696 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: like if u highlight
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: its beautiful
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: xD
2016-07-23 20:12 HappyRocket88: 02:45:990 (5) - ^
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: omg i feel bad about the nc im sowwyyy
2016-07-23 20:13 Lilyanna: but fixed
2016-07-23 20:14 HappyRocket88: 03:50:225 (4) - 
2016-07-23 20:15 HappyRocket88: And that should be all. :o
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: beside
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: nc
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: any other issues?
2016-07-23 20:18 HappyRocket88: Nothing that have caught my attention. o_
2016-07-23 20:19 HappyRocket88: *o:
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: thats a good thing
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: yay
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: ACTION happy*
2016-07-23 20:20 HappyRocket88: I'll post the log :3/

1. Unused hitsounds among the difficulty.
2. General Combo Color usage
3. Intuitive New Combo use among the difficulty.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

LOGGEZO DESU NE

2016-07-23 19:43 HappyRocket88: Ok!, Let's start. n.n7
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: sad is my best friend
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: wait
2016-07-23 19:43 Lilyanna: are u gonna mod? D:
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: Nope
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: just checking! xD
2016-07-23 19:45 HappyRocket88: I don't have much time to do a full mod. ;w;
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: But I have some few general suggestions
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: >w<
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: yea okay
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: but
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: do you have general time
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: for mod ? xD
2016-07-23 19:46 Lilyanna: one day
2016-07-23 19:46 HappyRocket88: First of all, remove normal-hitclap.wav since it's not used in the mapset.
2016-07-23 19:47 Lilyanna: ok
2016-07-23 19:47 HappyRocket88: I really liked the combo colors! >u<
2016-07-23 19:47 Lilyanna: i did
2016-07-23 19:48 Lilyanna: cool
2016-07-23 19:48 HappyRocket88: But I think you can try out to manage a custom slidertrackoverride
2016-07-23 19:48 HappyRocket88: to differenciate it from the kiai
2016-07-23 19:49 Lilyanna: okay so ^^
2016-07-23 19:49 HappyRocket88: I mean, in the kiai you can use just some specific colors to make it differente from the other sections
2016-07-23 19:49 HappyRocket88: like only purple and pink maybe. o:
2016-07-23 19:49 Lilyanna: i love purple
2016-07-23 19:50 Lilyanna: is it neccesary?
2016-07-23 19:51 HappyRocket88: Oh, not "necessary"
2016-07-23 19:51 HappyRocket88: it's just a suggestion >w<
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: sorrt
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: sorry
2016-07-23 19:51 Lilyanna: bad spelling
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: x(
2016-07-23 19:52 HappyRocket88: Maybe you can uncheck widescreen support? o:
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: ohhh
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: i tried to do
2016-07-23 19:52 Lilyanna: sb as i said
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: in the discription
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: i forgot it D:
2016-07-23 19:53 Lilyanna: tyyy
2016-07-23 19:55 HappyRocket88: Also Lily!
2016-07-23 19:55 HappyRocket88: we have to work out on the New Combos
2016-07-23 19:56 HappyRocket88: they play a bit strange
2016-07-23 19:56 Lilyanna: yea
2016-07-23 19:56 Lilyanna: D:
2016-07-23 19:57 Lilyanna: u will help me now,..?
2016-07-23 19:57 Lilyanna: ill be so happy
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: Sure!
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: 00:24:637 (5) - 
2016-07-23 19:57 HappyRocket88: NC
2016-07-23 19:58 Lilyanna: done that ;c
2016-07-23 19:58 HappyRocket88: 00:33:813 (1) - remove NC here
2016-07-23 19:58 Lilyanna: i kneww there is nc problems specialy in vocals parts ;x;
2016-07-23 19:59 Lilyanna: 00:52:519 (1) -  remove this and nc next?
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: nuu
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: that one is fine
2016-07-23 20:01 HappyRocket88: 00:55:166 (5) - add nc here instead
2016-07-23 20:01 Lilyanna: ok cuz seemed on red tick will be wrong
2016-07-23 20:01 Lilyanna: ok
2016-07-23 20:02 HappyRocket88: 01:26:225 (5) - here too
2016-07-23 20:03 Lilyanna: ok done rocket89
2016-07-23 20:03 Lilyanna: :p
2016-07-23 20:04 HappyRocket88: 01:41:754 (4) - add nc here and remove it here 01:42:460 (1) - 
2016-07-23 20:07 Lilyanna: done rocket90
2016-07-23 20:07 Lilyanna: xd
2016-07-23 20:09 HappyRocket88: 02:05:049 (2) - this slider should be extended until here 02:05:931 - :o
2016-07-23 20:09 HappyRocket88: since there's no really prominent sound with the slider (3)
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: 02:18:813 (1) - remove nc and add nc here02:19:166 (2) - 
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: wot im not flowing the beep sound
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: 02:22:696 (5) - nc
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: 02:05:578 -
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: so u can hear
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: here
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: ohh
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: the pause
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: ok!
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-07-23 20:10 Lilyanna: and then other sound
2016-07-23 20:10 HappyRocket88: Didn't know what you were follwin
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: =w=b
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: 02:23:401 (6) - NICE! :o
2016-07-23 20:11 HappyRocket88: 02:39:990 (5) - NC
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: that one spend hours
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: fixint the symetry
2016-07-23 20:11 Lilyanna: xd
2016-07-23 20:12 HappyRocket88: 02:43:166 (5) - NC :3
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: 02:22:696 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: like if u highlight
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: its beautiful
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: xD
2016-07-23 20:12 HappyRocket88: 02:45:990 (5) - ^
2016-07-23 20:12 Lilyanna: omg i feel bad about the nc im sowwyyy
2016-07-23 20:13 Lilyanna: but fixed
2016-07-23 20:14 HappyRocket88: 03:50:225 (4) - 
2016-07-23 20:15 HappyRocket88: And that should be all. :o
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: beside
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: nc
2016-07-23 20:17 Lilyanna: any other issues?
2016-07-23 20:18 HappyRocket88: Nothing that have caught my attention. o_
2016-07-23 20:19 HappyRocket88: *o:
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: thats a good thing
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: yay
2016-07-23 20:20 Lilyanna: ACTION happy*
2016-07-23 20:20 HappyRocket88: I'll post the log :3/

I have a mini-mod with Lylyanna about this map and we discussed regarding:

1. Unused hitsounds among the difficulty.
2. General Combo Color usage
3. Intuitive New Combo use among the difficulty.

Best success with this map! Have a star! (ノ･ω･)ノ

Thank youu <3

ill try my best with this map to go forward and thx for star

1. 00:35:754 (4) - this slider looks pretty awkward due you skip vocal in 00:35:931 - change to 1 circle 1 slider like http://puu.sh/qcTs6/44ea7d4f92.jpg or something else
2. 00:41:401 (4,5) - flow direction a bit awkward, it is can be okay but i'd suggest you put pattern like this http://puu.sh/qcTC1/fe676da49d.jpg to keep your flow direction flows good
3. 00:45:284 (1) - move to 508|124 or somewhere else to make cymbal effect more powerful
4. 00:49:166 (5,1) - this distance is too high and i think it doesn't deserve distance like this, reducing distance to 1.6x can make this emphasize more better (if you disagree "insert Essay contains good reason here")
5. 00:55:696 (3) - it is okay you map this with a circles if the music needs it, maybe some jump on that pattern can make that part more interesting
6. 01:10:696 (1) - i think this drum finish is really overatted to song, feels random, needs to be removed
7. 01:15:990 (2) - change drum hitfinish to normal sample set
8. 01:22:343 (2,3,4) - this spacing a bit random compared with 01:21:637 (5,6,1) - maybe put symetrical pattern?
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9. 01:31:872 (3) - this clap sounds bad, i don't get why you do this, this slider head deserve drum hitfinish at all
10. now i hear lot of weird hitsounding :/
11. 01:37:166 (2) - and 01:37:519 (3) - remove clap on slider head
12. 01:38:225 (3) - why you didn't put clap on here?
13. 02:12:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess you put wrong interpretation on the map because when the music came slower pitch tone and almost muted with melody you map the distance more bigger and that's really weird at all. I think you should reduce distance at 02:14:049 (1,2) - and after that reduce the distance 02:14:754 (1,2) -, find your way how to fix it
14. 02:23:401 (2) - looks decent for insane diff
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15. 02:32:578 (1) - yeah you put weird clap in slider head, remove it
16. 02:42:813 (4,1) - put normal sampleset on slider head, remove normal hitsample on circle 1
17. 03:26:578 (2,3) - these whistle hitsound really awkward at all
18. 03:32:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - please hitsound this circles
19. 03:34:343 (1,3) - swap NC, in fact that NC looks random on 03:34:343 (1) -, weird NC setting
20. 03:35:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - you put intense jump on here but suddenly you put very long slider in 03:37:166 (1) -, feels so confusing at all, maybe you put random jumps on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7) - when the music came slower, and when the music intensity getting slow, you must map slow too, try to decreasing intensity of notes on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - by putting some 1/2 sliders or 1/1 sliders to make this slow part more comfortable to play
21. the weird hitsounding in kiai continues, but this one is more confident than first one
22. 04:15:637 (1) - this one needs pattern like this 04:17:225 (4,5) - for example
23. 04:21:284 (1,2) - blanket, dad
    
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24. 04:46:696 (1,2,3) - what did you follow on this?, the emphasize feels like zero
25. 04:56:578 (1) - why you put random drum sampleset in here? roll back to auto
26. 05:01:872 (1) - this sv changes looks so retarded when in 05:02:225 - has something that needs to be mapped, and yes llooks like it has zero sense when you came back with same combo on 05:02:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - and mapped this combo part back to intense one again
27. 05:05:049 (1) - good example of SV changes, this is indicated the right combo patterning when it became really slow (Not a Mod)
28. okay

1. check metadata as always
2. recheck blankets at your map, yeah you can fix blankets anytime you want
3. there is double "space" on "Vocals Bass" tags, consider remove it
4. put Drum and Bass as tags i think just only Bass as tags didn't enough
5. and put drumstep too i guess
6. yeah that's it

Fort wrote:

hey, random mod oh hello there *w*

+75 SP in 1 month? ow well i have no life no friends ;w; btw 76 now
kinda sad you don't have any BNs for this i tried to get but all busy ^^
this map looks decent but here we go

1. 00:35:754 (4) - this slider looks pretty awkward due you skip vocal in 00:35:931 - change to 1 circle 1 slider like http://puu.sh/qcTs6/44ea7d4f92.jpg or something else welll it was like that before until i asked a bn opinion and pointed something there and maybe i got him wrong but fixed
2. 00:41:401 (4,5) - flow direction a bit awkward, it is can be okay but i'd suggest you put pattern like this http://puu.sh/qcTC1/fe676da49d.jpg to keep your flow direction flows good oh true changed
3. 00:45:284 (1) - move to 508|124 or somewhere else to make cymbal effect more powerful done
4. 00:49:166 (5,1) - this distance is too high and i think it doesn't deserve distance like this, reducing distance to 1.6x can make this emphasize more better (if you disagree "insert Essay contains good reason here") i agree "no Essay" xD fixed
5. 00:55:696 (3) - it is okay you map this with a circles if the music needs it, maybe some jump on that pattern can make that part more interestingchanged to circles and jumpy
6. 01:10:696 (1) - i think this drum finish is really overatted to song, feels random, needs to be removed oh true done
7. 01:15:990 (2) - change drum hitfinish to normal sample set i dont get this
8. 01:22:343 (2,3,4) - this spacing a bit random compared with 01:21:637 (5,6,1) - maybe put symetrical pattern? fixed
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9. 01:31:872 (3) - this clap sounds bad, i don't get why you do this, this slider head deserve drum hitfinish at all i didnt do the hitsounds btw ;w; btw what u mean with "at all"
10. now i hear lot of weird hitsounding :/ im gonna have to redo hitsounding ;w;w;w;w;
11. 01:37:166 (2) - and 01:37:519 (3) - remove clap on slider head its gone forever
12. 01:38:225 (3) - why you didn't put clap on here? maybe i remaped that part and always forget to hitsound it
13. 02:12:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess you put wrong interpretation on the map because when the music came slower pitch tone and almost muted with melody you map the distance more bigger and that's really weird at all. I think you should reduce distance at 02:14:049 (1,2) - and after that reduce the distance 02:14:754 (1,2) -, find your way how to fix it i tried aloot to fix the pattern i hope its good because im still thinking to change again
14. 02:23:401 (2) - looks decent for insane diff if it flows it looks fine cmon it took me focus to make that xD ill never change it
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15. 02:32:578 (1) - yeah you put weird clap in slider head, remove it done
16. 02:42:813 (4,1) - put normal sampleset on slider head, remove normal hitsample on circle 1 okay
17. 03:26:578 (2,3) - these whistle hitsound really awkward at all i removed them
18. 03:32:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - please hitsound this circles i think ill leave this till i see someone who help with hitsounds because im not rly good with those
19. 03:34:343 (1,3) - swap NC, in fact that NC looks random on 03:34:343 (1) -, weird NC setting okay
20. 03:35:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - you put intense jump on here but suddenly you put very long slider in 03:37:166 (1) -, feels so confusing at all, maybe you put random jumps on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7) - when the music came slower, and when the music intensity getting slow, you must map slow too, try to decreasing intensity of notes on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - by putting some 1/2 sliders or 1/1 sliders to make this slow part more comfortable to play
21. the weird hitsounding in kiai continues, but this one is more confident than first one im gonna remap this whole section
22. 04:15:637 (1) - this one needs pattern like this 04:17:225 (4,5) - for example ok
23. 04:21:284 (1,2) - blanket, dad fixed
    
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24. 04:46:696 (1,2,3) - what did you follow on this?, the emphasize feels like zero remapped
25. 04:56:578 (1) - why you put random drum sampleset in here? roll back to auto fixed
26. 05:01:872 (1) - this sv changes looks so retarded when in 05:02:225 - has something that needs to be mapped, and yes llooks like it has zero sense when you came back with same combo on 05:02:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - and mapped this combo part back to intense one again i kinda disagree here i think it flow well with the music and that what emphasize that clear slow sound more is when i come back with the same combo so its +1
27. 05:05:049 (1) - good example of SV changes, this is indicated the right combo patterning when it became really slow (Not a Mod)
28. okay

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Something that should you do to make sure you're doing right one

1. check metadata as always
2. recheck blankets at your map, yeah you can fix blankets anytime you want
3. there is double "space" on "Vocals Bass" tags, consider remove it
4. put Drum and Bass as tags i think just only Bass as tags didn't enough
5. and put drumstep too i guess
6. yeah that's it

okay ill check these


didn't understand something? ask me in-game pm, gl hf

1. 03:35:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - you put intense jump on here but suddenly you put very long slider in 03:37:166 (1) -, feels so confusing at all, maybe you put random jumps on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7) - when the music came slower, and when the music intensity getting slow, you must map slow too, try to decreasing intensity of notes on 03:34:696 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - by putting some 1/2 sliders or 1/1 sliders to make this slow part more comfortable to play
   the weird hitsounding in kiai continues, but this one is more confident than first one Section is now remapped and will be updated tomorrow !
2. 04:15:637 (1) - this one needs pattern like this 04:17:225 (4,5) - for example Same as above, might still need to re-position some stuff, but the rhythm is there now
3. 04:46:696 (1,2,3) - what did you follow on this?, the emphasize feels like zero Remapped !

Thanks a lot for the mod Fort ! Neither of us were expecting to open our thread and see a mod from you We still have some questions we might ask within the next few days if you are online. Thanks again! Much appreciated

Whirl wrote:

02:00:107 (3,4,5,6,1) - MAYBE blanket 3 and 1 together ? And blanket 4 and 6 with 1? i think u mean stacked ye i stacked 3 and 1 only other seem fine
02:04:254 - add a note here stacking on 02:04:343 (1) - here? Or at least add a note there... why would i add note there i hear nothing x(
02:25:872 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps seem unnecesarry for here, I know it rises in volume but I think you should at least lower the ds i think they are fine
02:28:343 (3,4) - 4 slightly goes over 3 giving it a weird look, I can see players messing up these sliders in hr, or even nomod no one mentioned this so far so i think its fine
yea I know this is a small pathetic mod, but still it's a mod! ;w; ty for mod





I know your gonna hate me.i donte hate ^.^

jawns wrote:

Don't have much, this is a great map, and I hope it get's ranked. I HOPEE

The only thing I noticed was during the buildup. I think you could emphasize the snare a bit better at times, example: 01:10:696 (1) -
I think it would be better, if the snare was emphasized with a single note or a slider, it doesn't really work with a slider end in my opinion.
An alternative could be something like this (but not exactly this, this could be greatly improved): well ill think about this rly ty

SPOILER

This will also emphasize the kick drum at the same time


Same goes for similar parts, like
01:12:107 (1,2,3) - ^
01:16:343 (1,2,3) - ^
etc...

Also, I think the offset should be -5 or -10, but that's probably a bit nit-picky (though I feel like it's noticeable, especially in the stream). i think its fine ill check more about this

Good luck with ranking this!thx

Bakari wrote:

Dropping my opinion here for the reason you cna see above.

Jumps lack connection with the music, for example01:09:813 (3,4,5,6,7) - iv decided im gonna remap some parts this one of them i guess i got the ideahere, sometimes it's the other way round and strong beats lack jumps or proper emphasis, so players have nothing to click on. Example: 00:52:343 - same here ill use these example and try go through the map and remap thosehere. Apart from that, velocity changes are causing confusion and don't feel very natural, for example 01:53:049 (1,2,3) - hereofc its not natural its intentional for this i think its fine even the shape of the slider can emphasize how slow the slider is plus there is nc there and plus it flow i think its fine. If only we could think of organizing them in a more readable way. Maybe some combo color-coding (red - fast / blue - slow). will do

Also, 04:59:401 - a strong beat is unclickable here. Pointing that out for the sake of pointing it out. [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory]Read more here[/url] thx ill fix btw there are two more unclickable strong beats that i marked them before was gonna fix why u didnt see that for the sake of point out ^^

Now to some more personal stuff, I dislike sliders like 02:29:401 (1,2) - as the curves appear untidy and messy to me. However, this is just my opinion and you are free to disagree. i like

To conclude, I can not say that I liked the map. It's not bad, and you're definitely doing a lot of cool things here, yet, it is far from something that I would consider a high quality map. Overa I have a feeling that jumps are missing or used inappropriately every now and then. Keep improving, good luck!yes i will ill make the "quality" happen

Daykiss wrote:

This is a NM unless you decide to m4m from Ora's queue. This is also my first mod so I will try to be as humble and as objective as possible. I really like this song and I think this map has a lot of potential.
1. The note at 01:41:049 (2) which is located on a snare drum hit was a bit awkward for me to play. I would consider extending the slider at 01:40:343 (1) all the way to the snare drum. It just took me a bit off guard. There are places where you create a similar effect throughout the song (ex. 01:46:696 (4,5)) using sliders, but you've mapped the sliders in a way that is a much more clear indication to me that they are very close in rhythm. Here are all the other places where this occurs: 03:48:637 (4,2,2). 04:24:637 (2). 01:43:872 (5). 04:07:872 (2). 04:16:166 (2). 04:17:578 (6). iplaced those notes after the snars and the synthy sounds to emphasize those beats because there is strong beats that needs to be clickable icant just extend the slider and ignore them
2. The note at 00:59:225 (4) acts as a mediator between patterns 00:58:696 (1,2,3) and 00:59:401 (5,6,...). I would certainly consider working on the spacing so that 00:59:225 (4) feels connected to both patterns. In general this pattern felt a bit too artificial, sorry if that is too vague. i kinda did that intentionaly just to make things intens xd but kinda fixed to equal spacing
3. The stream starting from 01:27:637 (1) might be a little too spaced? I would think about tightening it up as it is pretty difficult when compared to the rest of the song. Or some other work around; maybe I just suck i think its fine but i will think about it u not the first one who mentioned this so
4. 03:45:284 (4) - I like the way this note is placed, it puts a lot of emphasis on the snare drum in a part of the song that I think could use some emphasis, but it seems a little alone. This section of the song starting with 03:40:343 (2) feels a bit sharper and starts to jump around in volume as the song climaxes so maybe consider adding more sharp notes to personify that, or maybe just move the note on 03:45:284 (4) to not jump out of place. Or do nothing i m sorry i kinda dont get ur point here it really seem fine to me
5. I have trouble finishing the slider on 04:22:343 (4), because of the note on 04:22:696 (1). I tend to get a 100. ...
6. 04:39:284 (4,5) - Again a similar case to #1 but this is the only case where it is two sliders and felt a bit forced. i need to make all strong notes clickable to more emphasize the synthy so i kinda have no choice but to do that it it flows pretty well
7. I might make 04:06:990 (4) the beginning of a combo with 04:07:166 (1,2,3), it seems to be a bit visually awkward as is. Here are all the other places where this occurs: 00:24:460 (4). 02:50:049 (3). 02:56:049 (8). 03:09:107 (5).i think its fine its not about visualy its about the start of new rythm and downbeats
I'd like to make a couple of general observations that may prove to be useful. Firstly, this song has a lot of flow and I like that you've mapped clearly with flow heavily in mind (perhaps more so than usual.) Each part of the map that lacks flow is of course emphasized and I think adding "sharper" parts might give the map a more dynamic feel, only in places where the song sharpens up of course. An example of this would be at my favorite part of the map: 01:13:872 (2) all the way to 01:18:990 (6). The song sort of loops in circles and the ovular shapes you make with your hand seem to follow it well. Then at 01:19:166 (1) all the way to 01:27:284 (4) the song gets "sharper,' characterized mainly by the drums slowing down, but you've mapped it in a way where it continues to flow really smoothly. In parts like this I think adding a few unnatural jumps that follow accents of the song might add a lot. well yea the smooth music still there so i kept the same shaping but i kinda changed the patterns to little bit more jumpy to emphasize that background jumps as well as to proov that the music is gettin intense and the beat will drop soon but ty for your explaination maybe ill think about changing some shapes there because iv always had a problem with that particular part xD
The second thing is even more opinionated: this song is like a low 4 star song difficulty-wise throughout most of it (maybe even easier than that), because of the amount of sliders. Then there are a couple sections that get way harder, causing the total difficulty to go up of course. This phenomena occurs pretty often in a lot of maps so it's not a huge deal, but I would start brainstorming ways you can more evenly distribute that difficulty.well those 2 sections are kiai so its normal to have it little bit harder than it should be but if i get more comments about big jumps then ill change since i get lot of feedbacks that that part is most fun part xD
I doubt most of what I've said is very useful but I hope I helped, even if just a bit.
Good luck!

imaikiseta wrote:

I really like playing this beatmap. Hope it gets ranked! Also shot some kudos too; good luck!

6th wrote:

Hello
I'd reduce the AR, it looks really harsh actually... what about 8 ? I know it sounds low, but try it k

00:13:166 (1) - What does this spinner cover ? It's questionable imooaky
00:47:401 (3) - Deserves more emphasize because new sentence, space it further ye
01:03:990 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G rhythm ? oh okay done
01:04:696 (5,6) - Reduce the spacing for the sake of 01:05:049 (1) - 's emphasis think its fine
01:09:813 (3) - Having a direction change here would be nice so it fits with the other patterns like 01:08:401 (3) - or 01:09:107 (6) - ok
01:21:813 (6,1) - That slowdown is very annoying to play. Consider stacking them ok
01:49:343 - Normally, a slider should start here so I advise to stack 01:49:343 (2,3) - not needed to stack and a hear a pause in between so i just shortened the distance
02:06:107 (1) - It would be nice to give this more emphasis. Maybe extend it.ok done that
02:26:578 (8) - This looks untidy compared to the rest. Stack it with (3) ? seems fine
02:29:401 (1) - Its bend doesn't really fit to the song, does it ? i think its fine i hope xd
03:04:872 (7) - Placing it closer from previous note is quite sad tbh my life is sad xd its fine
03:56:578 (1) - Looks a bit ugly... just make it straight ? i think it flowes good with the drop sound :/
04:07:166 (1,2) - This could be easily mistaken with 1/2. The actual AR won't help to read due to the low note density. think its fine
04:15:637 (1) - Just end it on white tick. Silencing its end already shows you know it's overmapped. well its not over mapped since there is nothing on ther white tick and the sound keep going till next note
04:46:343 (7,8) - They shouldn't be as spaced as 04:45:813 (4,5) - ehm k
05:03:990 (5) - You should not stack it with 05:04:343 (1,3) - it's ruining its logic and its intention. It feels redundant. i thing its fine

Cool map, gj.ty

Akali wrote:

Hi, from queue. Reminder a lot of these are just my suggestions, not all of them are crucial

General stuff seems fine.

00:18:460 (1,2,3) - not that important but this could use same spacing between objects for blanketing looks fine ^^

00:26:401 (1,2) - is fine, bust stack would be consistent with how you map these vocals in this section just wanted to make that jump xd

00:28:343 (6) - end it on white tick, unlike in osu!mania in standard you don't have to be precise with fading out long sounds, landing slider end on some sort of beat will usually be better (unless it's very strong), this creates unnecessary 5/4 distance into next object and skips the downbeat 00:29:049 (7) - where a feint soundscape sound exists. okay fixed

00:30:813 (1,2) - nice slider but blanket is visibly off, maybe you use gridsnap? turn it if you do and use ctrl+arrows on (1) for cleaner look 408:253 should work fixed ty btw i dont use the gridsnap for more precised


00:48:107 (1) - ctrl+G for more impactful flow ok done that

00:56:225 (1) - could use distance similar to 00:55:872 (4,5) - for more impact it's sort of close now i think its fine

01:09:637 (2,3,4) - approach angle from 2-3 into 4 is awkward, accents feel messed up to, try starting slider on 01:09:813 (3) - timingi see what u mean fixed

01:25:872 (4,1) - nitpicking but these sliders have visibly different curve, use (4) and copypaste/rotate to make 01:26:225 (1,2,3) - pattern well i know that it was intention each combo with 4 sliders have different shape and each for have same so i had to u to use different shape for nex 4 sliders to creat that symmetry pattern how i explained well xd

01:36:813 (1,2) - synth is strong enough to warrant circles/jumps here, doesn't have to be big but fits better than slider oh ye ill see about it o:

01:59:401 (1,2) - ^

02:00:813 (1) - remove NC but the sv changed

02:19:872 (2) - 2x1/2 sliders for vocal samples changed

02:30:460 (2) - ^ i think this is fine

02:40:872 (4) - feels empty after this slider, with that feint background beat, maybe make it shorter and put 1/2 slider on 02:41:578 (5) - ? i think its fine for now ill see about it

02:43:696 (3) - same, can put something after it 02:44:578 (4,5) - ^

04:03:637 (1,2) - again circles realy think the sliders fits more xd

04:05:049 (1) - remove nc gonna keep because sv change

04:26:225 (1,2) - circles ^

05:12:813 (3) - can NC its fine

GL!tyyy

Kisses wrote:

Is this a collab now?

Idealism wrote:

As I said I would mod this, I am doing it.
Also, yes that was an excuse :p I tend to skip players that aren't 5 digits-1 digit because they often pick some bs map that destroy the whole lobby/is just generally annoying. Sorry. xd I feel offended ;w;w;w;;
Small mod though, I can't really think well at 2am.come back later xD I'm tired! xd (These are all suggestions, you don't need to change anything if you don't want, nor kd this if this doesn't help you)

I think ar8.6 is good for this map. Not too fast, not too slow either. Seems to fit with the map, somewhat calm but not too much. thats realy not a big difference so im stick with 9

00:11:402 (1,2) - I don't get the need of having 2 sliders here. Having a single one that finishes at 00:12:460 - seems to suffice. this is realy good idea thx i did one slider
00:37:519 (8) - Possibly blanket this with the last slider? ye but i want that jump and i kida made those sliders look same so i dont want blanket i may have to rechape and distance will get smaller dont want that
01:29:225 (2) - I guess you could move this a bit closer to the last note of the stream. Not too close though. i see what u mean fixed
01:32:578 (5) - You could turn this upside down and still blanket with the note right before. that will aslo make the distance shorter and i want that jump to emphasize that beat plus i dont want the flow keep going same direction

Overall the map is great, I like the way you structured most of it. Good luck with ranking it! thank you
quick edit right after posting: shooting a star and thank you for star yay