Hello!
[General]
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Some hitsounds are delayed(3ms nearly)It is not unrankable issue(5ms), but better to fix in case.
"LR_Drum Rpd x2.wav"
"LR_Tom Hit.wav"Fixed ▽
http://puu.sh/so8nS/e050205ce7.wavhttp://puu.sh/so8nv/1c82a9b423.wav[Normal]
02:55:043 - 02:55:389 - 02:55:736 - Add a note.
There is a drum roll. This gives me a feeling of 2snap for Normal diffs. All up to you anyway.
※ Hitsound 01:06:141 (66141|1) - 01:17:240 (77240|2) - 02:14:118 (134118|1) - 03:06:835 (186835|0) - If I was wrong, It seems missing.
Add a Hitsound "LR_Hatsynth". I saw the same of sturucture with 02:03:020 (123020|2) -
02:19:667 (139667|3,139667|0) - If you can add some hitsound here(like cymbal), It will better.
If you applied this, you also must be fixed on All the difficulties.
[Hard]
00:31:633 (31633|0) - Reduce the LN till 00:31:980 - It different with Easy diff.
If you can make same with "Easy", It will be consitency as intention. make sure for vocal LN.
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http://puu.sh/so6mI/0582bbfd21.jpg00:37:182 (37182|0) - Same with above.
00:42:731 (42731|1) - Same with above.
01:39:610 (99610|1) - Same with above.
01:03:107 - 01:03:280 - You did not put a note here, because of LN.
but This drum is important for the rhythm than your thinking. It makes me weird when I played the song.
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http://puu.sh/so6yU/65ab80ec60.jpg01:14:205 - 01:14:378 - Same with above.
01:59:812 - 02:00:159 - Same with above.
02:11:083 - 02:11:257 - Same with above.
03:03:800 - 03:03:973 - Same with above.
01:27:297 - There is a guitar chord. If you did not bundle it as one LN only, It needs to express.
01:26:257 - ~ 01:27:644 - Feedback ::
http://puu.sh/so6V0/09095e4430.jpg00:19:321 - I forgot to mention about it. Same with above.
02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - End of LN should be snapped here 02:18:280 -
If you did not use the "shiled LN", It's better to hold on next chord section for readable.
don't worry. It will not be make hard to play.
02:18:916 (138916|0) - It is 4snap. here 02:18:887 -
looks delayed a bit, but It still that structure of 4snap surely.
03:02:413 - Add a note for drum. Just a suggestion. but I recommend it.
03:20:881 - ~ 03:21:748 - There is a big gap with pony difficulties.
And It does not have a gap with easy difficulties. You can make some notes for that.
Feedback ::
http://puu.sh/so7pG/e16b44a455.jpg[Pony]
00:19:321 - There is a guitar.... blahblah same mod with Normal.
01:27:297 - Same with above.
00:53:656 - Add a note. If you can add a note here, That's good for vocal rhythm.
01:50:534 - Same with above.
01:06:141 (66141|3,66141|1,66228|2) - hmm, Seems something missing on hitsound.
I feel not good about them. It can be improved at least.
01:17:240 (77240|2,77240|3,77326|1,77326|0) - Same with above.
02:14:118 (134118|0,134118|1,134205|2,134205|3) - Same with above.
03:06:835 (186835|0,186835|2,186921|1) - Same with above.
01:10:303 - You can add a note. There is a snare And Highlight Synth. like 03:10:996 -
It depends on you.
01:34:754 - Add a note(col3). Hard diff used 2note here.
02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - end of LN... blahblah. Same mod with Normal.
Feedback ::
http://puu.sh/so7Yt/5661fcb243.jpg02:18:916 (138916|1,138916|0) - It is 4snap. Same with Normal 02:18:887 -
03:21:921 - Add a LN(col3) Let's highlight for endling.
Good luck!