Overall:Needs more polishing, especially the harder diffs. The gap between the cup and the salad in difficulty is a little surprising. If anything, you could pull the cup up a bit and the salad down in difficulty. The video fades away before the map ends, leaving a bit of an awkward pause where the background is still there
[Cup]00:12:186 (2,3) - I might move (2) to somewhere around x=468 and (3) somewhere around x=424? You may have to move (1) of the next combo, too. This makes it flow a little better.
00:13:186 (1,2) - It feels a little strange not to have 2 1/1 sliders or some form of that polarity. Each slider then would take a word in the kids shouting "Spongebob Squarepants!"
00:17:182 (1,2) - ^
00:17:182 (1) - Curve this slider the opposite direction? While it may be more of a challenge from (3), it flows better to (2) this way, considering the droplets.
00:23:177 (1,2,3) - I would daresay even increase the distancing more to even 1.3x or 1.35x. Painty hollers here, meaning that the catcher could move a little more. REMEMBER NOT TO CREATE DASHES OR MAKE TOO MUCH OF AN UNCOMFORTABLE MOVEMENT!
00:23:694 (2) - Move to x=200? Should even out the spacing slightly.
00:29:207 (1) - Curve the slider like such?
00:31:199 (1,2) - Strange rhythmic pattern here, I would keep with your consistent 2 1/1 sliders, since the phrase is broken into two.
00:33:163 (1) - This is two different notes in the melody, I would make it a hitcircle on 00:33:163 and then a 1/1 slider on 00:33:676.
00:34:703 (2) - Really, the voice hits on 00:34:639 instead of what you have on 00:34:703.
I know it's an 1/8 snap, but 7/8 seems close enough to 1/1 (and there's no 1/8 gaps), so I think it's fine to implement this if you want.
00:40:968 (1) - Strange that this ends with a whistle, I would expect it to fade away since the music has the seagull sounds that die away.
[Salad]00:13:685 (2,3,4,5) - This is an uncomfortable reach for a salad player. They overshoot the movement back and dash the wrong way, missing (5).
00:17:182 (1) - Slightly strange polarity, would make this 2 1/1 sliders instead.
00:19:181 (1,2,3) - This becomes strangely empty compared to the last chorus where this melody occured--I would make this
00:22:678 (2,3,4,1) - A few things. From (1), it's pretty uncomfortable to reach, considering it requires a left-right-left-right movement. The distancing is also a little strange, as you have the distance from (4,1) small but (2,3) larger than DS. However, the phrase leads back to (1), as you have hitsounded, so I would revamp this pattern to change it so that (2,3,4) are clustered in a U-turn. (1) is in the image for reference, but the pink (1) is the combo I am talking about.
00:26:442 (2,3,4) - Awkward movement here with the jump from (3,4) and the sudden turn from (2). Ctrl+G (2) and move (3) to around x=312, and (4) to around x=416?
00:34:446 (3,4,5) - I don't hear (3) or (5) in the music. Delete the hitcircles?
00:36:187 - End the slider 00:35:214 (1) here instead, since the laugh happens after--that's something different.
00:39:065 (1) - At this difficulty, I think a salad player is perfectly capable of following the melody 1/3 notes. Change this up a bit to follow the flute instead?
00:39:838 (1,2) - By the way, if you're not going to change it, I would at least move (2), since standing still is a little strange with the pitch shifting upwards so much.
00:40:968 (1) - Same as cup comment about spinner.
[BobbyPatty]00:10:937 (1) - Voice actually sounds on 00:11:021, you'll need a 1/6 snap to put it there.
00:16:183 - This is a really strong beat that you're missing! Please put something, either a slider or a hitcircle here to hit it.
00:17:682 (4,5) - I don't think that the music justifies such a strong hyper here. I would lower the distance to keep this at a dash instead.
00:19:680 (2,3,4) - (3) sounds strange here because I'm not sure if you're trying to hit the voice, which would be better with 00:19:680 (2) being a 1/3 repeat slider.
00:22:178 (4,5,6) - The jump is a little awkward from (4,5) and (5,6)--this may be a little difficult for a platter.
00:24:693 (6) - Curve this the opposite way for a smoother transition to (1)?
00:28:699 (4,5,6) - Rhythm sound strange in the context of the song. I would make it a 1/2 circle instead?
00:34:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These 1/4 sound strange. I would make them 1/2-spaced hitcircles instead? (A good amount of the notes clash with the backbeat).
00:38:134 (3) - If you want to follow the flute-like instrument, it starts on 00:38:053 (1/6 snap), but is still a 1/2 repeat slider.
00:39:065 (1) - Turn this more sideways? The player is caught a little off-guard if there are sudden movements.
Here, I guess. M4M completed