1. Bodom's Platter (2.48 stars, 86 notes)
2. Cup (0.91 stars, 34 notes)
3. Salad (1.7 stars, 62 notes)

Underforest wrote:

.-.

Animereaper609 wrote:

Best Beatmap ever!!

1. 00:11:187 (1) - could move this slider more to the left so it leaves a reasonable distance to catch (2)
2. 00:16:183 (2,3) - too close together
3. 00:21:179 (1,2) - move those 2 more to the right, while keeping a good distance between 00:22:178 (2,3) -
4. 00:29:207 (1) - this long slider doesn't really fit with the singing and all. could be replaced by single notes maybe.
5. 00:32:672 (2,1,2) - all too close

1. 00:13:685 (1,2,3) - could use a reverse slider instead. plus, these notes feel a little too far from eachother.
2. 00:19:181 (1) - remove long boring slider. you could map something different there.
3. 00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - move those a little closer to 00:22:678 (2) -
4. 00:24:194 (1) - avoid vertical sliders.
5. 00:26:442 (1,1,2,3,4) - stream there feels unecessary.
6. 00:39:065 (1,2,3) - those don't really make sense and don't follow the flute. you could think of something that follows better

klonoa wrote:

from my queue.

[General]
Badly cropped photo with COMIC SANS text, really??? really un-appealing. you should make something that's way better looking. K. I'll fix.
And what are these tags?? They are really not necessary. The tags represent the names of the voice actors.
A Rain diff wouldn't fit with a song like this, only add a platter. I'm still looking for a Platter GD. I would probably ask MB because he maps them nice and yes, I just realised I don't need a rain.

[Cup]
Recommended settings for a Cup: CS:2 AR:5 OD:5 HP:3 Ok.
Diff is alright, the spacing of the notes here feels really close throughout the whole song (really, 0.86 stars is way too low). Try to put the star rating closer to 1.1 or 1.2 I'll tra ma best fren.

1. 00:11:187 (1) - could move this slider more to the left so it leaves a reasonable distance to catch (2) KK.
2. 00:16:183 (2,3) - too close together KK.
3. 00:21:179 (1,2) - move those 2 more to the right, while keeping a good distance between 00:22:178 (2,3) - Fixed.
4. 00:29:207 (1) - this long slider doesn't really fit with the singing and all. could be replaced by single notes maybe. Made it shorter + added a circle.
5. 00:32:672 (2,1,2) - all too close Put them further.

[Salad]
Recommended settings for a Salad: CS:3 AR:6 or 5 OD:6 or 5 HP:4 KK

1. 00:13:685 (1,2,3) - could use a reverse slider instead. plus, these notes feel a little too far from eachother. What about it fren?
2. 00:19:181 (1) - remove long boring slider. you could map something different there. Fixed.
3. 00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - move those a little closer to 00:22:678 (2) - Done.
4. 00:24:194 (1) - avoid vertical sliders. Fixed.
5. 00:26:442 (1,1,2,3,4) - stream there feels unecessary. What about it fren?
6. 00:39:065 (1,2,3) - those don't really make sense and don't follow the flute. you could think of something that follows better Fixed!

Dyl-Byl wrote:

klonoa wrote:

from my queue.

And what are these tags?? They are really not necessary. The tags represent the names of the voice actors.

[*]00:26:442 (1,1,2,3,4) - stream there feels unecessary. What about it fren?

klonoa wrote:

klonoa wrote:

from my queue.

And what are these tags?? They are really not necessary. The tags represent the names of the voice actors.

[*]00:26:442 (1,1,2,3,4) - stream there feels unecessary. What about it fren?

On the ranked version, there's no tags of all the voice actors, so i feel like it's really unecessary to put them all. Ok.

For the other point, i feel like you can't just add a random stream there, it doesn't make a lot of sense and doesn't follow the music. you could map something a little different there. Fixed!

No kudosu. ty

Electoz wrote:

Salad feels like Cup because I don't even have to dash in that diffffffff

From my queue

Jusenkyo wrote:

From my queue

[General]
If you don't have a SB, uncheck "Widescreen Support" on Design How did I forget?
Add more combo Colours I don't know any.
Add more tags ^

[Cup]
AR/OD: 5-6
HP: 3-4
CS: 2-3 No to all three.
00:39:065 (1) - 1/6 slider repeat, like this:
You're not supposed to use 1/6 in easy modes..
00:40:016 (2) - Delete this No.

[Salad]
AR/OD: 6-7
HP: 4-5
CS: 2-3 No to all three.

00:13:685 (1,2,3) - Make the "stream" like this No.
00:15:683 (1) - Ctrl+G Ok
00:16:183 (1,2,3,4) - Like this No.
00:18:931 (3) - Delete the slider , and add a circle No.
00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - Delete this No.
00:22:927 (1) - 1/4 Slider 00:23:444 (2) - Circle Still no buddy. No.
00:26:692 (1,2) - Delete this No.
00:34:318 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:34:703 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:34:703 (1) - Add a circle ^
00:35:131 (1) - 1/6 slider star here I'm using 1/4
00:37:039 (2) - Delete this note No
00:39:065 (1) - 1/6 repeat slider a example: Changed.


It's all, GL with them! ^^

lidahapi wrote:

As requested :3

oh my, the spongebob squarepants. I used to watch them in indonesian :3 Nice job!

Salad

-00:27:936 (2) - Just drag this close to beginning of slider 00:28:190 (1) :3
Moved it to the other side.

Fun Picture

Rendyindo wrote:

omg Spongebob Squarepants <3

just a little bit :3

General
Add this on tag: BoberOfDarkness Thank you!! How did I forget?

Cup
00:34:703 (2) - move to 00:34:575. it's more confident No, just no.

Kagari wrote:

irc mod requested via PM

le chat

2016-02-07 00:37 Dyl-Byl: Hi Kagari
2016-02-07 00:37 Kagari: heyo
2016-02-07 00:38 Dyl-Byl: I'm a new CtB mapper. Is it ok if I ask for a mod?
2016-02-07 00:38 Kagari: link map?
2016-02-07 00:38 Dyl-Byl: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/870614 Painty the Pirate & Kids - Spongebob Squarepants Theme]
2016-02-07 00:39 Dyl-Byl: I would probably go for an IRC since the website isn't working well
2016-02-07 00:39 Kagari: lemme do a quick testplay
2016-02-07 00:40 Dyl-Byl: ok
2016-02-07 00:40 Dyl-Byl: Thank you
2016-02-07 00:43 Kagari: hmm
2016-02-07 00:44 Kagari: no dash appeared in salad
2016-02-07 00:44 Dyl-Byl: Oh
2016-02-07 00:44 Kagari: should have one if referring to ranking cretia
2016-02-07 00:44 Kagari: *criteria
2016-02-07 00:44 Dyl-Byl: Ok
2016-02-07 00:44 Dyl-Byl: Adding some
2016-02-07 00:47 Dyl-Byl: Done adding the dashes
2016-02-07 00:48 Kagari: that's all i can find atm
2016-02-07 00:48 Kagari: not much of a help tho
2016-02-07 00:48 Dyl-Byl: ok
2016-02-07 00:49 Dyl-Byl: Thanks
2016-02-07 00:49 Kagari: gl on ranking
2016-02-07 00:49 Dyl-Byl: Just first ./savelog and post in the thread pls
2016-02-07 00:49 Kagari: my logs are autosaved :v
2016-02-07 00:50 Dyl-Byl: ok
2016-02-07 00:50 Kagari: later I post this on the thread :D
2016-02-07 00:50 Dyl-Byl: ok

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Moddinge Queue

[notice][ Cup]

1. CS+0.5 (2.5) Yes Changed! Not going to change it ever back again!
2. 00:20:180 (2,3) - Can move this to x:360 [(2) - x:360 , (3) - x:276]Done!
3. 00:39:065 (1,2) - Change to this ? Exam No tanka you.
4. nice Cup

Tanka you.

[ Salad]

1. 00:13:685 (1,2,3) - move (1,3) to x:400 , (2) to x:452 Nope.
2. 00:16:183 (1,2) - ctrl+g Done!
3. 00:16:558 (3,4) - ctrl+g Done!
4. 00:23:319 (4) - Delete , It's dispensable Ok!

Good luck

Surono wrote:

for avoid ruined chillhood, shoot star~ nice maps!

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Moddinge Queue

[ BobbyPlatty]

1. 00:11:687 (2,3,4,5) - Hdash between (2,3) and (4,5) can change it ? done
2. 00:23:569 - Add note sure
3. Great Platter I love you <3

[/notice]

Good luck

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Moddinge Queue

[ BobbyPlatty]

1. 00:11:687 (2,3,4,5) - Hdash between (2,3) and (4,5) can change it ? done
2. 00:23:569 - Add note sure
3. Great Platter I love you <3

[/notice]

Good luck

Thanks

http://puu.sh/n0rTB/31975ae9c7.osu update

http://puu.sh/n0s0q/8d7ad55db0.rar add this hitsounds to mapset pls

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Updated. I just can't figure out how to add the hitsound.

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Updated. I just can't figure out how to add the hitsound.

just add to song folder

can you stop deleting the last spinner? thanks

1. Re-size BG.jpg to 1366x768.

1. In Cup, you use only 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor only.
2. 00:39:065 (1,2) - Make this into slider.
3. 00:39:065 (1,2) - Start the spinner here until 00:43:349 - here.

1. 00:13:685 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H & back to origin place.
2. 00:13:935 (3,1) - Make these closer.
3. 00:22:678 (2,1,2,3) - Make these closer.
4. 00:39:065 (1,2) - Start the spinner here until 00:43:349 - here.

1. AR & OD: 7.
2. The pattern is okay, but please reduce some distance on larger space notes. You can make hyperdashes with another way beside make the space become larger.

SYAHME wrote:

From my modding queue.
Placeholder, I hope you can wait until this weekend.

alienflybot wrote:

Hello!

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

• 
  Song Name

1. According to the *ranked mapset, I think the song name should be Spongebob SquarePants Theme. (With a capitalized P) Changed!
   
   Source
2. Same as above, the source with capitalized P. ^
   
   Tags
3. You may add 'Bodom', it is the abbreviation of BoberOfDarkness, and it has been shown in some ranked mapsets so it is perfectly fine to add so. Someone may find his maps or contributed difficulties by searching the short term. Done
   
   Background Image
4. While it is perfectly okay if you desire to go for resolution of 800x600, it is still the most recommendable one with 1366x768. So I suggest changing the image to 1366x768 resolution. I don't really know how to use BGs. I stole that BG from the ranked mapset.
   
   Gameplay
5. 00:41:920 (1) - It feels really long to start the spinner, which is quite weird here. What about starting the spinner a bit earlier and end at the same place? I think at 00:41:206 - would do. Added!

[ Cup]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:17:182 (1) - This is not consistent with the rhythm as you didn't include any 2/1 sliders in the intro (before the chorus). Hence I suggest mapping this with some 1/1 patterns. I added some.
2. 00:35:214 (1,1) - The timeline distance between the spinner and the next note may be too small (1/1), as this is a Cup and it is designated for beginner players, they may not be ready to catch the next notes after the spinner if the ready time is way too small. I suggest shortening the spinner, preferably at 00:38:134 - . Ok!
   
   New Combos
3. 00:23:177 (3,1) - You should NC at 00:23:177 (3) - instead of the current one. It has no point to delay the NC start. Changed!

[ Salad]

• 
  After testplaying, I found that the gap between Cup and Salad is very big, where in Cup you can only find maximum 1/1 spaced patterns, but in Salad, you can find a lot of 1/4 streams (which are a bit unnecessary I deem). I will mention it below.
  
  Gameplay

1. 00:13:685 (1,2,3) - Oh snap this is way too difficult and surprising to see. Please fix it! Moved it!
2. 00:16:183 (1,2,3,4) - It feels unnecessary to add such clusters, though they are actually matching the song well here. However I think it is too early to add such patterns in a low-end Salad (considering that the song is very short), so why not just keep it easy and place a 1/2 reversed slider or 2 circles? Make it simple. Changed!
3. 00:23:319 (4) - This note is overmapped. Please remove it, it is not emphasizing any sounds in the audio. Okee dokee!
4. 00:26:941 (2,1) - See if you are able to add a dash here, as (1) is the start of the chorus and it is much recommended to do so. Added!
5. 00:30:701 (2,1) - Add dash here too, as you did before at 00:28:699 (2,1) - which means you are going to add dash for emphasizing Finishes every 4 white ticks. Done!
6. 00:33:163 (1,2) - Oh, try to avoid using sliders ending at blue ticks, it is way too early to approach in a Salad, it is also difficult for beginners to grasp the pattern usage. Done!
7. 00:34:318 (3,4,1,2,3) - I honestly don't think it is a good option to add triplets here, the rhythm doesn't even sound necessary to apply these triplets here. I think it is already great if you just keep 1/2 patterns here. It is much cleaner too. Done!
8. 00:34:960 (3,1) - You may add a dash here after the changes. Nope.
9. 00:39:065 (1,2) - This can be difficult as it involves 1/3 patterning, which is also new to beginners (considering that they play other Salads). What about replacing 00:39:065 (1) - with a 1/1 slider? It fits more here and also the rhythm is less-dense.
   
   New Combos
10. 00:11:687 (1) - I don't think it is a wise idea to add NC for a triplet like this. What about removing this NC? Done!
11. 00:13:685 (1) - ^ ^
12. 00:15:683 (1) - ^ ^
13. 00:22:927 (1) - Remove the NC here and add one at 00:23:177 (3) - , just like 00:18:931 (3,1) - . ^
14. 00:23:694 (1) - You can remove the NC here. It is just like the note at 00:15:683 - . ^
15. 00:25:193 (1,1,1,2) - Group them into a combo please, the one now is too messy with too many cuts in a combo. ^
16. 00:32:426 (2) - You can NC here as you did at 00:30:203 (1) - . ^
17. 00:34:703 (1) - Remove the NC here. ^

Good luck!

AFB

alienflybot wrote:

Hello!

Tags
[*]You may add 'Bodom', it is the abbreviation of BoberOfDarkness, and it has been shown in some ranked mapsets so it is perfectly fine to add so. Someone may find his maps or contributed difficulties by searching the short term. Yea that good idea

[ BobbyPlatty]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:11:687 (2,3) - I don't understand why a HDash is placed here, (3) is not even a notably strong sound so why not just remove the HDash? I reworked totally that pattern
2. 00:28:190 (3,4) - The distance here is a bit big, please shorten it. In fact it is really easy to miss here as (4) comes being hard to be noticed. Fixed
3. 00:29:207 (1,2,3) - Oh crap. Please fix the distances, they are holy-cow big. I am not sure about this, I like how it flows and they doesn't feel big spaced, I ctrl+g (2) to rid off some anti-flow
4. 00:33:676 (4) - Why the slider have to be with that high SV? I don't understand. Why not just keep it simple? I like this slider, and higher SV is cause long strong vocal line and the fact the BPM is lower here
5. 00:34:575 (3,4) - Distance is way too big here, it is easy to miss. Please fix.
6. 00:35:088 (7,1) - I wonder if 1/4 HDash is allowed? To avoid potential disqualify, what about keeping it a dash only? Even 1/4 hyperdash in platters skeptics says that 1/4 hypers are fine on BPM lower than 140, our Nightwish mapset have one 1/4hyper and bpm is 138 there
   
   New Combos
7. 00:16:183 (1) - Remove the NC? I think you are trying to NC every 4 white ticks, such as 00:11:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - .
8. 00:24:194 (1) - ^
9. 00:38:134 (1) - Maybe you can remove the NC here? It is still in the same stanza as 00:37:161 (1,2) - .

NC apllied

Good luck!

AFB

Riari wrote:

I would like to take you to court over the blatant theft of my hard work that took the form of my Platter name.

Absolute Zero wrote:

Overall:
Needs more polishing, especially the harder diffs. The gap between the cup and the salad in difficulty is a little surprising. If anything, you could pull the cup up a bit and the salad down in difficulty. The video fades away before the map ends, leaving a bit of an awkward pause where the background is still there

[Cup]
00:12:186 (2,3) - I might move (2) to somewhere around x=468 and (3) somewhere around x=424? You may have to move (1) of the next combo, too. This makes it flow a little better. Changed
00:13:186 (1,2) - It feels a little strange not to have 2 1/1 sliders or some form of that polarity. Each slider then would take a word in the kids shouting "Spongebob Squarepants!" Changed
00:17:182 (1,2) - ^ Changed
00:17:182 (1) - Curve this slider the opposite direction? While it may be more of a challenge from (3), it flows better to (2) this way, considering the droplets. I already changed it. There's is not curve.
00:23:177 (1,2,3) - I would daresay even increase the distancing more to even 1.3x or 1.35x. Painty hollers here, meaning that the catcher could move a little more. REMEMBER NOT TO CREATE DASHES OR MAKE TOO MUCH OF AN UNCOMFORTABLE MOVEMENT! Changed.
00:23:694 (2) - Move to x=200? Should even out the spacing slightly. Done!
00:29:207 (1) - Curve the slider like such? Done!

00:29:207 (1)

00:31:199 (1,2) - Strange rhythmic pattern here, I would keep with your consistent 2 1/1 sliders, since the phrase is broken into two. Done!
00:33:163 (1) - This is two different notes in the melody, I would make it a hitcircle on 00:33:163 and then a 1/1 slider on 00:33:676. Done!
00:34:703 (2) - Really, the voice hits on 00:34:639 instead of what you have on 00:34:703.

Following the voice, you would have to use 1/8 snap

I know it's an 1/8 snap, but 7/8 seems close enough to 1/1 (and there's no 1/8 gaps), so I think it's fine to implement this if you want. I'm actually not ok with that one. Cup is a diff meant for beginners. Using a 1/7 snap on it wouldn't really go well.
00:40:968 (1) - Strange that this ends with a whistle, I would expect it to fade away since the music has the seagull sounds that die away. I got rid of the whistle.

[Salad]
00:13:685 (2,3,4,5) - This is an uncomfortable reach for a salad player. They overshoot the movement back and dash the wrong way, missing (5). Added.
00:17:182 (1) - Slightly strange polarity, would make this 2 1/1 sliders instead.Changed!
00:19:181 (1,2,3) - This becomes strangely empty compared to the last chorus where this melody occured--I would make this Changed!
00:22:678 (2,3,4,1) - A few things. From (1), it's pretty uncomfortable to reach, considering it requires a left-right-left-right movement. The distancing is also a little strange, as you have the distance from (4,1) small but (2,3) larger than DS. However, the phrase leads back to (1), as you have hitsounded, so I would revamp this pattern to change it so that (2,3,4) are clustered in a U-turn. (1) is in the image for reference, but the pink (1) is the combo I am talking about. Changed!

00:22:678 (2,3,4,1)

00:26:442 (2,3,4) - Awkward movement here with the jump from (3,4) and the sudden turn from (2). Ctrl+G (2) and move (3) to around x=312, and (4) to around x=416? Changed!
00:34:446 (3,4,5) - I don't hear (3) or (5) in the music. Delete the hitcircles? Yes sure!
00:36:187 - End the slider 00:35:214 (1) here instead, since the laugh happens after--that's something different. Changed!
00:39:065 (1) - At this difficulty, I think a salad player is perfectly capable of following the melody 1/3 notes. Change this up a bit to follow the flute instead? Changed too!
00:39:838 (1,2) - By the way, if you're not going to change it, I would at least move (2), since standing still is a little strange with the pitch shifting upwards so much. I did change it!
00:40:968 (1) - Same as cup comment about spinner. Final change
Here, I guess. M4M completed

Fii wrote:

igmod

14:07 *Fii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870613 Painty the Pirate & Kids - Spongebob SquarePants Theme [Cup]]
14:07 Fii: do you have time for ingame mod
14:07 Dyl-Byl: ya sure
14:08 Fii: 00:23:694 (2) -
14:08 Fii: move to x204
14:09 Fii: so the distance is equal
14:09 Dyl-Byl: ok
14:09 Fii: equal distances is easier to move when playing cups
14:09 Fii: 00:30:203 (2,3) - how come you used two circles instead of a slider?
14:09 Dyl-Byl: Done
14:10 Dyl-Byl: I need to at least change one pattern
14:10 Fii: alright I guess
14:11 Fii: 00:40:968 (1) - i dont think a spinner at the end works very well
14:11 Fii: it doesn't sound natural to map that wave sound
14:12 Fii: maybe just end with 00:40:016 (2) -
14:12 Dyl-Byl: ok
14:12 Dyl-Byl: Ok
14:13 Fii: 00:13:186 (1,2,3,4) - this is crazy hard for a salad
14:13 Dyl-Byl: What should I do with it
14:14 Fii: maybe ctrl h and move to
14:14 Dyl-Byl: ok
14:14 Fii: x104
14:15 Dyl-Byl: Done
14:16 Fii: 00:18:931 (1) - nc?
14:16 Dyl-Byl: Nope the 3 acts in a combo ender
14:16 Fii: alright
14:16 Dyl-Byl: ishthing
14:17 Fii: 00:39:065 (1,1,2) - during this ending, how come you didn't map the flute?
14:17 Fii: also remember to remove the final spinner for consistency
14:17 Dyl-Byl: AFB told me not to
14:17 Fii: alright
14:18 Fii: i suppose it might be a bit too technical for a salad
14:18 Dyl-Byl: ok
14:18 Dyl-Byl: BobbyPlatty isn't my diff btw
14:18 Fii: that's all for your difficulties
14:18 Fii: I know
14:18 Fii: pretty good job
14:18 Dyl-Byl: ok
14:18 Dyl-Byl: tanka you
14:18 Fii: not a lot of errors
14:18 Fii: yep anytime
14:18 Dyl-Byl: ok

Dyl-Byl wrote:

The last post in this forum was 8 days ago.
I asked for a mod, but was there? No.
So I went into a modding queue that's made for CtB.
No response yet. Nothing to see.

Cup

00:16:183 (2,3,1,2,1) - you frequently mapped on the left-side, so I suggest you move 00:20:180 (2) - at x: 328 and 00:20:679 (3) - at 232 to use some portion of the playfield at right.
00:38:599 (1) - add note here for the flute sound. at x: 100

Salad

00:18:931 (3,1) - add jump here to emphasize the hitsound finish, and also for consistency for the jump here at 00:14:934 (2,1) -
00:26:941 (4,1) - , 00:32:672 (2,1) - , 00:34:703 (3,1) - a jump also here
The last part feels a little bit lame, imo. You could do a better flow/pattern there. Take a look on what I did on this 00:39:838 (1,2,3) - part;

refer

00:39:838 (1) - at x: 488 , 00:40:016 (2) - x: 396 tail at x: 348 , 00:40:492 (3) - x: 164
Consider applying it, flow works well with this.

Platter

00:16:183 - , 00:16:308 - , 00:16:433 - why there's no note here? don't just skip some part because you want to add a jump, map it as possible.

refer

(4) at x: 268 , (5) x: 328 , (6) x: 392 , (7) x: 452 , (8) x: 488

00:39:541 (2) - move this at x: 176, for a jump.
00:39:838 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl-H these.

Paranoid_Goomba wrote:

Are Ya ready for the mod? Aye Yay captain!

Cup

Overall : Might just be me but timings a bit off for some of the notes. Notes sound a bit late compared to the song, consider changing offset for some of the points. I stole the timing from some other Spongebob ranked map and ya, if it's ranked, this one could be too.

Salad

00:11:062 : Add a note here to put sound on the "who" It didn't quite sound right.
00:13:810 (3) : Try making this note at x=384 Sure.
00:23:444: Add a note here? No. I would be overmapped for a salad diff. Plus, it doesn't quite "hit" the beat.
Nice salad, fun to play tbh. Tanka you!

newtoniorock8 wrote:

Cup

00:16:183 (2,3,1,2,1) - you frequently mapped on the left-side, so I suggest you move 00:20:180 (2) - at x: 328 and 00:20:679 (3) - at 232 to use some portion of the playfield at right. Done!
00:38:599 (1) - add note here for the flute sound. at x: 100 Added!

Salad

00:18:931 (3,1) - add jump here to emphasize the hitsound finish, and also for consistency for the jump here at 00:14:934 (2,1) - Done!
00:26:941 (4,1) - , 00:32:672 (2,1) - , 00:34:703 (3,1) - a jump also here Done twoo!
The last part feels a little bit lame, imo. You could do a better flow/pattern there. Take a look on what I did on this 00:39:838 (1,2,3) - part;

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00:39:838 (1) - at x: 488 , 00:40:016 (2) - x: 396 tail at x: 348 , 00:40:492 (3) - x: 164
Consider applying it, flow works well with this.

Nice choice of song, now we can get more children here to play on Osu! XD

Merci pour le mod.
Goodluck!

Absolute Zero wrote:

Overall:

[BobbyPlatty]
00:10:937 (1) - Voice actually sounds on 00:11:021, you'll need a 1/6 snap to put it there. fixed
00:16:183 - This is a really strong beat that you're missing! Please put something, either a slider or a hitcircle here to hit it. fixed
00:17:682 (4,5) - I don't think that the music justifies such a strong hyper here. I would lower the distance to keep this at a dash instead. fixed
00:19:680 (2,3,4) - (3) sounds strange here because I'm not sure if you're trying to hit the voice, which would be better with 00:19:680 (2) being a 1/3 repeat slider. fixed but with some more notes
00:22:178 (4,5,6) - The jump is a little awkward from (4,5) and (5,6)--this may be a little difficult for a platter. fixed
00:24:693 (6) - Curve this the opposite way for a smoother transition to (1)? No, it would't flow well
00:28:699 (4,5,6) - Rhythm sound strange in the context of the song. I would make it a 1/2 circle instead? it doesnt sounds strage to me, no change
00:34:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These 1/4 sound strange. I would make them 1/2-spaced hitcircles instead? (A good amount of the notes clash with the backbeat). Maybe it is a bit strange but I don't want to use 1/2, I don't like such undermapping
00:38:134 (3) - If you want to follow the flute-like instrument, it starts on 00:38:053 (1/6 snap), but is still a 1/2 repeat slider. em? I don't see how it could work, btw I won't map slider across Timing Section
00:39:065 (1) - Turn this more sideways? The player is caught a little off-guard if there are sudden movements., its not necessary I think

Riari wrote:

I would like to take you to court over the blatant theft of my hard work that took the form of my Platter name.

newtoniorock8 wrote:

Platter

00:16:183 - , 00:16:308 - , 00:16:433 - why there's no note here? don't just skip some part because you want to add a jump, map it as possible. fixed

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(4) at x: 268 , (5) x: 328 , (6) x: 392 , (7) x: 452 , (8) x: 488

00:39:541 (2) - move this at x: 176, for a jump. sure
00:39:838 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl-H these.moved (3) left a bit

Paranoid_Goomba wrote:

Are Ya ready for the mod? Aye Yay captain!



Only thing i dislike about this map is that 00:16:058 - 00:16:433 feels really awkward and empty since theres nothing here. Fixed

Goodluck!