1. Milk Tea (3,77 stars, 327 notes)
2. Platter (2,46 stars, 225 notes)
3. Salad (1,78 stars, 157 notes)

Absolute Zero wrote:

I'm sorry I took so long ;-;

Salad
I like it a lot!
00:18:290 (1) - Don't do the direction change? Might be confusing right before the spinner. Flip to the other side of (4)? ok, ctlr+h and move it more to left
00:26:651 (4) - Flip this to the side on its right so that it makes a better flow?i skew it slightly
00:41:405 (4) - Make this a hitcircle instead? keep this, cuz it's fine for me also for consistent with other part
00:42:881 (4,5) - A little dense here. Make this 1/1 slider + hitcircle? it fit the song so why not?
01:03:536 (1) - Make this a 3/2 slider? quite awkward with this, so i'll keep for now
01:15:340 (1,2,3) - Make these back and forth but evenly angled sliders? i just want to make a variant, back and forth is too mainstream i guess, if you have other suggestion about this, i'll consider it

Platter
I like it a lot, but sometimes personally I find that some of these 1/8 are hitting unnecessary. Overall a little too dense in places.
00:17:307 (2,1) - Make this a hyper to accent the beat? it's fine w/o hyper
00:26:405 (2,3) - Make these 1/2 sliders instead to smooth out the number of hitcircles? idk why, just triplet is better here.. keep for now
00:31:446 (5,6) - Don't make these in the same place? give distance between each other
00:44:971 (5,6) - Hyper here? no, not enough space
00:46:200 (2) - Hitcircle delete, I don't hear the sound? there is a sound, i follow the lyrics, (2) is follow the "no" on the lyrics, so keep this
00:55:667 (1,2,3) - Make these all horizontal sliders? (Use 01:15:340 (1,2,3) as an example) im just bored with that pattern, so i put it with other variant in any diff
01:03:045 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider to smooth it? not change for now, i think its good to make a little challange for a platter player, but i'll consider it more
01:18:045 (3,4) - Make these so that (4) is x=200. This gives movement. tbh i dont like any pattern like that, though give a little movement, but im average player and im not fan of that pattern, keep it for now until other modder ask bout it

Milk Tea
I really like this map. It plays nicely to me; I don't really have much to say.
00:21:979 (7) - Ctrl+G for a little more challenge. i know this is EZ rain, only 3,76 stars probably some ppl thinking this map need more challange or sth else, but i dont care bout stars, i just made playable diff
00:36:856 (1) - ^ ^
00:47:799 (1) - Move to x=0 for a hyper to accent the beat? it's a weak beat, more weak than previous beat, so it doesnt need a hyper
00:56:651 (3) - Make this two hitcircles 1/2 apart with a hyper? a bit not understand bout this, but i think its already good
01:14:725 (2) - Move this away from the end of the slider?ok, i'll try

1. 00:04:028 (3,1) - reduce distance a bit, just looking at the other jumps after these, this is the only one where you use the dash.
2. 00:14:356 (1) - honestly, i would avoid having vertical sliders at this beginning part of the song. it was probobly made on purpose? just to make this diff easy, but i think vertical sliders a little boring, especially for a salad.

1. 00:23:454 - you could fill this empty space
2. 00:26:036 (6,1,2) - this jump is weird how you need to do a fast zig zag from 6 to 1 and then try to hit the 2, the distance could be reduced a little bit or not make this jump so awkward.
3. 00:29:110 (2,3) - reduce distance
4. 00:34:028 (1) - no NC?
5. 00:49:766 (2,3,4,5,6) - could make something more interesting other than constant triples.
   

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From my queue!

Salad

[General]
Nothing!
[Modding Itself]
00:15:094 (2,3) - Make these two spaced out from the 1. They have to be dashy like earlier patterns. the sound is more weak than previous, so i dont put a little movement there, i'll keep it until some ppl pointed this again
01:15:340 (1,2,3) - Where did these repeat sliders come from. i put 1/3 slider for fiting the song.

Platter

[General]
Nothing!
[Modding Itself]
00:06:487 (1,2,3) - Don't use every grid like that i dont put these sliders with consistent distance for giving a little movement, if u means i need to consistent with the distance, i'll consider it more
00:22:717 (2,3) - Add a circle in between. i dont follow vocal in this section
01:15:340 (1,2,3) - Don't use repeat sliders like that over and over again. but it's fit with the song, also this is characteristic of this song
01:22:225 (5) - NC here. it's not the time to put NC i guess, and i want to consistent with previous NC pattern

That's all! Good luck getting this ranked!

klonoa wrote:

Greetings from my queue.

[Salad]

1. 00:04:028 (3,1) - reduce distance a bit, just looking at the other jumps after these, this is the only one where you use the dash. this note have different distance w/ next section cuz this note have more loud beat than other, so it have more distance
2. 00:14:356 (1) - honestly, i would avoid having vertical sliders at this beginning part of the song. it was probobly made on purpose? just to make this diff easy, but i think vertical sliders a little boring, especially for a salad. so i need to makes a horizontal sliders?! it's more boring i guess

[Platter]
Reduce slider tick rate to 1? considering salad and rain is at 1 too.

1. 00:23:454 - you could fill this empty space ok, since previous mod by Dyl pointed about this, i'll consider it more, im not sure too add a note there, cuz im not follow the vocal
2. 00:26:036 (6,1,2) - this jump is weird how you need to do a fast zig zag from 6 to 1 and then try to hit the 2, the distance could be reduced a little bit or not make this jump so awkward. i'll thinking another pattern for this section, if i reduce the distance it would be remove the HDash
3. 00:29:110 (2,3) - reduce distance ok, reduce it until 3.5x distance
4. 00:34:028 (1) - no NC? nope, prefer put NC there
5. 00:49:766 (2,3,4,5,6) - could make something more interesting other than constant triples. ik its quite bored, im in purpose makes a playable diff, that isn't too much dash or Hdash, but i think its ok, so i'll keep this til i find new pattern

[Rain]
00:34:520 (9) - i would turn this into a normal stream instead and have it as a curve to it. would make it look more interesting.
Other than that, i like this diff!! curve or normal stream is too common, i want makes a variant here

that's it for me, good luck!

pieguyn wrote:

suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
unrankable

[Milk Tea]
00:21:979 (7) - ctrl+G and adjust spacing? imo alternating right-left pattern makes more sense to fit with the instrument in the background. ok ctrl+g'd n adjust the distance to keep hdash
00:52:102 (2,3,4) - this played weird for me bc the jump at (2) was large, but 00:52:102 (2,3) were close. imo move (2) to x152 flows more smooth. its fine for me, im in purpose putting a large distance for hdash at there
00:55:667 (1,2) - when i first heard of this rhythm i thought a pattern like this could be fitting... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4160299 don't know how well it fits ur style though, it's just an idea. i just want to use a simple rythme, its a playable diff, i makes it like that so it would not be too over
01:05:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this would be more fitting with bigger jumps imo. the current way is very playable, but imo there is not enough emphasis to fit with the strong instrument here. i'll consider it more, i dont give a large distance cuz i want a little break , u know we are thinking it still easy, but for average intermediate player that want to play a rain diff, they would be a little bit tired after facing first kiai with some hdashes
01:11:774 (2,3) - same idea as 00:52:102 (2,3,4) . meh, seems it was intentional yea, ofc i putting a hdash to catch (2), i can say it was intentional, k im repair the pattern so it would be a little more catchable
01:25:176 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same idea as 01:05:504 . is that still less, im intentionaly made a playable diff, so it could not too hard, its played pretty well i guess

[Platter]
01:12:389 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm felt too fast imo. what do you think about this ... http://puu.sh/m0Z7Q/84a773ee27.jpg instead? i dont change the rythme, just repaire the pattern, hope its better now

it's totally DT'able. ~

[Salad]
fine

so cute song =w=
map is very solid and fun to play, i don't see anything wrong here. good luck ~

1. I saw that many hitsounds between the difficulties varied around +1/-1ms due to wrongly snapped objects. For example: In your Salad 00:05:503 (2) - needs to be snapped to 00:05:504 - . Anyway, I cannot point out all of them. Just go through all your difficulties again and snap the notes in the timeline to make sure everything is snapped properly.

1. 00:07:471 (2) - Slider tail needs to be emphasized with a hitsound or it feels empty, do Normal Sampleset and add a Clap to it then. (Make sure you do that on the other difficulties, too. I will only mention this on your Salad.)
2. 00:09:438 (2) - ^ (Make sure you do that on the other difficulties, too. I will only mention this on your Salad.)
3. 00:09:438 (2,1) - Ensure that (1) is only reachable with a dash due to the strong stanza change.
4. 00:14:356 (1) - , 00:16:323 (1) - The beats on the repeats are not very outstanding. Please consider skip them at least in the Salad and use normal 1/1 sliders.
5. 00:18:290 (1,1) - Very low distance between spinner and note for a Salad. The spinner can easily start at 00:18:782 - .
6. 00:22:717 (4) - This slider should be lopsided more to the left, why just vertical? Keep that kind of stuff for a Cup, not a Salad:
   
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7. Since this slider has a very own rhythm, you maybe wanna consider giving it its very own NC. Same for 00:26:651 (4) -
8. 00:26:651 (4) - Make this one a little more lopsided to the right, please. It lacks of movement.
9. 00:32:061 (4) - Clearly this needs to be NC'd because otherwise the ryuuta plate is getting too full before the spinner.
10. 00:39:684 (5,1) - Dash is badly required between these notes. Fits the music perfect.
11. 00:43:372 (5,1) - ^
12. 00:45:340 (4,1) - ^
13. 00:46:815 (3) - NC again to ensure there are a bit less notes on the plate before the spinner.
14. 00:47:553 (5,1) - Very short distance between note and spinner again, at least for a Salad. The spinner is also very short and this might be a little tricky for a newbie. You should even consider replacing this spinner with a long slider:
    
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15. 00:55:667 (1,2) - Just for aesthetics do something like this:
    
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16. 01:13:372 (1,2) - , 01:14:356 (4) - These both should be consistent. The rhythm is the same two consecutive times. Please decide in favour of one of the both patterns whereby I prefer the first one. Weirdly enough, you did it correct at 01:21:241 (1,2,3,4,5) -, so why not before?

1. 00:18:290 (1,1) - This is 100% unrankable. 1/4 distance between note and spinner? Just nope, it is impossible to catch the spinner the way it should be caught. Maintain at least a 1/2 distance, preferably higher though!
2. 00:34:028 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:47:799 (1,1) - ^
4. 01:25:176 (1,1) - ^
5. The whole difficulty is spammed with 1/4 Hypers and feels exaggerated in compare to the previous Salad. 1/4 Hypers can work in a Platter but not by just creating a spam festival of 1/4 Hypers as you did. Mainly I suggest in this mod I suggest where you should erase 1/4 Hypers again and create some 1/2 Hypers instead to maintain a proper spread. So here we go...
6. 00:09:930 (5) - Just one repeat is enough! Then do the following instead:
   
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7. 00:12:143 (5) - Single note at 00:12:143 - is enough, after that move the note to x112 or something, a 1/2 Hyper isn't that necessary here yet.
8. 00:26:036 (6,1) - Just too forced. Erase 00:26:036 (6) - and then select 00:25:176 (4,5) - and move them together to x80.
9. 00:29:602 (3) - Let this slider end at 00:29:848 - already and leave 00:29:971 - empty. After that I reworked the patterning completely, to something like this for example:
   
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10. 00:39:684 (7,1) - Just a single note at 00:39:684 (7) - is enough, leave 00:39:807 - open. What can be done here? How about this:
    
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11. 00:42:635 (4) - Single not at 00:42:635 - is enough, a Hyper isn't really that necessary at this point.
12. 00:43:618 (7) - Single note at 00:43:618 - . Then try the following: Move 00:43:618 (7) - to x472 and select 00:43:864 (1,2,3) - and CTRL+H the whole pattern. It should look like this:
    
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13. 00:46:569 (4,5) - Just erase the Hyper, it's not so important here. If you really want a Hyper at this pattern it should be at 00:47:553 (7,1) - but then you need to erase the spinner as well and map it differently since Hypers before spinners aren't very likely seen in a Platter.
14. 00:49:766 (2,3,4) - Select this pattern and CTRL+H it completely and move it to x40 or something, to create a Hyper between 00:49:274 (1,2) - , this fits the music well and is a great interlude for the Kiai. For reference use this screenshot:
    
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15. 00:52:594 - This beat isn't necessarily strong enough to be mapped, so wipe it out and create just some 1/2 Hyper instead.
16. You used a lot of vertical sliders in your Kiai, as 00:58:372 (4,5) - , 00:55:667 (1,2,3) - , and so on. This is pretty boring for a Platter, especially in the Kiai. Go through the Kiai again and see if you can make them all a bit more lopsided to provide more movement.
17. 00:57:512 - Same as mentioned at 00:52:594 -
18. Meh I kinda went tired on explaining all the other 1/4 Hypers, I hope you see my point. Please go through the rest of this map and see if you can change the following Hypers to 1/2 Hypers as well: 01:00:340 (4,5) - , 01:12:143 (4,1) - , 01:13:004 (3,1) - , 01:17:061 (5,1) - ,
19. 01:09:192 (6,1) - Please make these two another Hyper, goes well as Kiai interlude.

1. Well, the style of this difficulty is fine. What I really dislike is that you mostly mapped 1/4 ticks throughout the whole song except some rare situations where you needed to skip them. You just didn't emphasize the song very well and the difficulty feels extremely monotonous because of that. Maybe you want to decrease the density a bit at least and make use of more tricky 1/2 or even 1/2 patterns as well! I cannot go with you through the whole difficulty again but it pretty much affects the whole difficulty.
2. Same as Platter. The 1/4 note/spinner distances are awkward to play. 1/2 distances for a Rain are fair enough.
3. 00:09:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The stream you mapped here is mapped on a rhythm that actually starts at 00:09:930 - . 00:09:745 (2,3,4) - follow nothing at all, you should erase them completely. Only leave a note at 00:09:766 - , the rest needs to stay empty. The timeline should look like this:
   
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4. 00:18:045 (4,1) - Please no Hyper just before a spinner, it is very awkward to play.
5. 00:24:192 (1,2,3) - Create some Hypers between these sliders, it is really fun to play. Like this:
   
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6. 00:25:176 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda overmapped, too. You should map on vocals here. Talked with Kurokami about it, he agreed it should be wiped out completely. Try this timeline instead:
   
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7. 00:28:126 (1,2,3) - Make this consistent with 00:24:192 (1,2,3) -
8. 00:34:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I am pretty sure that QATs will disqualify because of this stream. It does't follow the music very well, most notes don't follow anything, I consider this really overmapped. Either use a spinner or map it on actual ticks (not less than 1/4 )
9. After you applied the previous point make sure there is some HDash leading to 00:35:012 (1) - because it fits the music perfectly.
10. First and second Kiai are really nice actually, you didn't exaggerate on the timeline here, everything seems to follow a certain rhythm here. Good job on these ones. I don't think I need to point out anything here. But why did you so strongly exaggerate with the timeline before the Kiai starts? I don't understand why you made use of SO MANY 1/4 ticks... Please revise this difficulty again before the Kiais!
11. 01:23:208 (1,2,3,4) - Ugh... with these drawn-out vocals a pattern like this is too extreme. Go with a more simple timeline that emphasizes the music better, for example:
    
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Sey wrote:

Hi, dunno why but I felt like modding this set.

[General]

1. I saw that many hitsounds between the difficulties varied around +1/-1ms due to wrongly snapped objects. For example: In your Salad 00:05:503 (2) - needs to be snapped to 00:05:504 - . Anyway, I cannot point out all of them. Just go through all your difficulties again and snap the notes in the timeline to make sure everything is snapped properly. k fixed this

[Salad]

1. 00:07:471 (2) - Slider tail needs to be emphasized with a hitsound or it feels empty, do Normal Sampleset and add a Clap to it then. (Make sure you do that on the other difficulties, too. I will only mention this on your Salad.) hum, change to normal sampleset and added clap to it
2. 00:14:356 (1) - , 00:16:323 (1) - The beats on the repeats are not very outstanding. Please consider skip them at least in the Salad and use normal 1/1 sliders. changed to 1/1 sliders
3. 00:22:717 (4) - This slider should be lopsided more to the left, why just vertical? Keep that kind of stuff for a Cup, not a Salad: fix this
   
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4. Since this slider has a very own rhythm, you maybe wanna consider giving it its very own NC. Same for 00:26:651 (4) - nc'd at 00:22:225 (1) - instead, for consistent with stanza
5. 00:32:061 (4) - Clearly this needs to be NC'd because otherwise the ryuuta plate is getting too full before the spinner. umm.. my mistake, NC'd
6. 00:39:684 (5,1) - Dash is badly required between these notes. Fits the music perfect. add more distance
7. 00:46:815 (3) - NC again to ensure there are a bit less notes on the plate before the spinner. nc'd
8. 00:47:553 (5,1) - Very short distance between note and spinner again, at least for a Salad. The spinner is also very short and this might be a little tricky for a newbie. You should even consider replacing this spinner with a long slider: i'll consider it more, keep for now
   
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9. 00:55:667 (1,2) - Just for aesthetics do something like this: i keep 00:56:159 (2) - vertically, and i makes 00:55:667 (1) - more lopsided but in other side for better flow
   
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10. 01:13:372 (1,2) - , 01:14:356 (4) - These both should be consistent. The rhythm is the same two consecutive times. Please decide in favour of one of the both patterns whereby I prefer the first one. Weirdly enough, you did it correct at 01:21:241 (1,2,3,4,5) -, so why not before? lol, idk why, but well change 01:14:356 (4) - for consistent

[Platter]

1. 00:18:290 (1,1) - This is 100% unrankable. 1/4 distance between note and spinner? Just nope, it is impossible to catch the spinner the way it should be caught. Maintain at least a 1/2 distance, preferably higher though! uhh.. my mistake fix all spinner problem
2. The whole difficulty is spammed with 1/4 Hypers and feels exaggerated in compare to the previous Salad. 1/4 Hypers can work in a Platter but not by just creating a spam festival of 1/4 Hypers as you did. Mainly I suggest in this mod I suggest where you should erase 1/4 Hypers again and create some 1/2 Hypers instead to maintain a proper spread. ckckck, this is request from some player, that i need to add more hdashes at platter, and unfortunately is quite hard to create 1/2 hdash in 122bpm song So here we go... yee.. let's gow..
3. 00:09:930 (5) - Just one repeat is enough! Then do the following instead: i do it with different way for better flow, and only uses one reverse for 1/2 hdash
   
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4. 00:26:036 (6,1) - Just too forced. Erase 00:26:036 (6) - and then select 00:25:176 (4,5) - and move them together to x80. x120 instead
5. 00:29:602 (3) - Let this slider end at 00:29:848 - already and leave 00:29:971 - empty. After that I reworked the patterning completely, to something like this for example: do it with a little difference
   
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6. 00:43:618 (7) - Single note at 00:43:618 - . Then try the following: Move 00:43:618 (7) - to x472 and select 00:43:864 (1,2,3) - and CTRL+H the whole pattern. It should look like this: ctrl+h and move it more to right a bit, the distance is over i guess
   
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7. 00:46:569 (4,5) - Just erase the Hyper, it's not so important here. If you really want a Hyper at this pattern it should be at 00:47:553 (7,1) - but then you need to erase the spinner as well and map it differently since Hypers before spinners aren't very likely seen in a Platter. remove hdash and repairing next note
8. 00:49:766 (2,3,4) - Select this pattern and CTRL+H it completely and move it to x40 or something, to create a Hyper between 00:49:274 (1,2) - , this fits the music well and is a great interlude for the Kiai. For reference use this screenshot: added hyper with a little difference placing
   
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9. You used a lot of vertical sliders in your Kiai, as 00:58:372 (4,5) - , 00:55:667 (1,2,3) - , and so on. This is pretty boring for a Platter, especially in the Kiai. Go through the Kiai again and see if you can make them all a bit more lopsided to provide more movement. i'm in purpose to not give a lot of movement, ik this is felt boring but at least u can add DT to play dis, i'll consider to makes some slider more lopsided
10. Meh I kinda went tired on explaining all the other 1/4 Hypers, I hope you see my point. Please go through the rest of this map and see if you can change the following Hypers to 1/2 Hypers as well: 01:00:340 (4,5) - , 01:12:143 (4,1) - , 01:13:004 (3,1) - , 01:17:061 (5,1) - , k repair this section

[Milk Tea]

1. Well, the style of this difficulty is fine. What I really dislike is that you mostly mapped 1/4 ticks throughout the whole song except some rare situations where you needed to skip them. You just didn't emphasize the song very well and the difficulty feels extremely monotonous because of that. Maybe you want to decrease the density a bit at least and make use of more tricky 1/2 or even 1/2 patterns as well! I cannot go with you through the whole difficulty again but it pretty much affects the whole difficulty.
2. Same as Platter. The 1/4 note/spinner distances are awkward to play. 1/2 distances for a Rain are fair enough.
3. 00:09:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The stream you mapped here is mapped on a rhythm that actually starts at 00:09:930 - . 00:09:745 (2,3,4) - follow nothing at all, you should erase them completely. Only leave a note at 00:09:766 - , the rest needs to stay empty. The timeline should look like this:
   
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4. 00:18:045 (4,1) - Please no Hyper just before a spinner, it is very awkward to play. i think its fine, it plays well
5. 00:24:192 (1,2,3) - Create some Hypers between these sliders, it is really fun to play. Like this: quite slow part also its play well w/o hypers, so i think its ok don't add hypers
   
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6. 00:25:176 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda overmapped, too. You should map on vocals here. Talked with Kurokami about it, he agreed it should be wiped out completely. Try this timeline instead: im not sure with this, since this would be inconsistent with previous, but ok, uses 1/2 slider with 1 circle instead of 1/2 slider reverse
   
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7. 00:28:126 (1,2,3) - Make this consistent with 00:24:192 (1,2,3) - distance? pattern? i'm a little bit not understand, its play well for me so keep for now
8. 00:34:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I am pretty sure that QATs will disqualify because of this stream. It does't follow the music very well, most notes don't follow anything, I consider this really overmapped. Either use a spinner or map it on actual ticks (not less than 1/4 ) k removes note at 1/8 ticks
9. After you applied the previous point make sure there is some HDash leading to 00:35:012 (1) - because it fits the music perfectly.
10. First and second Kiai are really nice actually, you didn't exaggerate on the timeline here, everything seems to follow a certain rhythm here. Good job on these ones. I don't think I need to point out anything here. But why did you so strongly exaggerate with the timeline before the Kiai starts? I don't understand why you made use of SO MANY 1/4 ticks... Please revise this difficulty again before the Kiais!i dont see the problem here, is that wrong? please explain where the specific section that i need to repair, ik this is selfish but at least u can pointing one or two example so i can improve this map further by my self

Good luck!

Razor Sharp wrote:

• GENERAL
  
  Seems alright here.
  
  Milk Tea

1. Slider Tick Rate: Would suggest you make it "2". This will make it a little harder to FC. And since the Platter is 2, Rain should also be. k since previous mod seems pointed this tho, change to 2 tick rate
   
2. 00:03:782 (5,6,7) - Make these 3 into a single slider with a repeat on instead, with the repeat on the left side. I will make a nice curve, and will look much nicer. it looks fine for me, im enjoyed this flow
3. 00:09:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe try to curve this in a different way? Currently, you have to tap to get this right, wich should not be on a rain diff. So i would suggest you redo this stream. i just think that its fine, although this is rain diff, the stream played well for me, indeed needed tap for catch it, but its only a challange, its reasonable. maybe i'll consider it to make the stream more easier, for now only repair some distance
4. 00:22:717 (2,3,4) - This distance change is a little awkward to play, due to the distance between (2) and (3). Increase it a little, but keep same distance between (3) and (4). i've thinking about this since long time ago, that this part quite awkward indeed, but the problem isn't "lack of distance", but "excess distance" instead, so i makes 00:22:717 (2,3) - more closer each other
5. 00:33:782 (9,1) - The flow is very nice, untill this rough direction change. Would suggest to make it a little different, and not so rough. maybe 00:33:536 (7,8,9) - makes this vertically is fix the problem
6. 01:07:840 (2,3) - This change lacks in flow. Make the gap beween them smaller, or tilt (2) more vertical. makes it a little bit more vertically
   
   This is very good mapped!
   
   Platter
   
7. 00:11:651 (4) - Tilt this one a little, to make it a little more accuracy dependant. ok
8. 00:26:405 (2,3) - Try to make these sliders into 6 notes instead. Slider 1 should be 3 notes moving left, and slider 2 should be 3 notes moving right. This will make it more interesting, and give it a better flow. i'll try
9. 00:30:586 (3) - This one is tilted to the wrong side >.< Flowbreaker. huft ._. i change it by myself for a little challanging, since sey also gimme suggest about it tho, i'll fix this
10. 00:37:348 (5) - Try this at x140. Makes a much better flow. ok also for consistent with next part
11. 01:06:487 (2,1) - This distance is a little too big i feel. Suggest to decrease it a little. nah, its fineh but i'll thinking bout it more if somebody pointed about this again
    
    The diff is very nice, just the repeat sliders that you dont move in annoys me. just add DT or HR
    
    Salad
    
    Can't really find anything here. Just a few dashes, and there should be more. i'll try, but dont expect too much, cuz i want makes playable map

Good luck!

- Magic Girl - wrote:

I think I'm late. Sorry ;w; its ok mgeeh

Mod Request from Ausu!CtB Modding Queue ASUNA PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR NOT FINISHING THE SALAD I AM CRYING WHILE MODDING THIS no prob, map 122bpm song is quite hard indeed

[Salad that I failed to map]
Ok I can't really find anything specific here, but only some distancing issues with some notes. i'll try to improve it by my self

[Platter]
I'm kidding I can't mod plattersl
00:03:536 (2,2) - Try tilting these a bit? I feel it'll be more comfortable to play if rather then having to come to sudden stop from a completely vertical slider. its ok for me, but i curve those though doesnt give a lot movement, at least avoid sudden stop
00:43:864 (1) - Try making the hyper here a bit weaker? The sound there isn't that strong imo. humm, ok move to x:168
01:09:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Consider spacing these out a little, they seems to have almost no movement. To me anyway. ok, increase distance for movement
01:16:323 (3) - This feels a lot like a timing/pixel jump, reduce distance or hyper? rduce distance instead, for consistent w/ previous

[Milk Tea]
I actually can't find anything wrong here ;w;...

Sorry for bad mod >.< I tried ;w; I'll try to re-mod if I can D: its ok mgeeh, im fix anything that make my map get improved

raianshimuzu wrote:

karena gw malas nunggu IRC mod jadinya gw post aja wkwk

+ cuman beberapa poin doang di teh susu

Teh Susu

1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - yang gw bingung kenapa ga lu bikin lurus aja slidernya. kan lumayan dapat movement :'v sebenernya kgk beda jauh, dan gk begitu ngaruh banyak, tpi karna gw baek jdi gw benerin biar enk diliat
2. 00:04:520 (1,2) - ^ ^
3. 00:09:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - coba yang 6+ di geserin lagi biar ada dash. udh ckup, emng sengaja based on flow, jadi flownya kgk mau keliatan maksa
4. 00:11:405 (1) - lurusin melingtang gw tau maksudnya, tpi kalo gtu malah keliatan gk konsistenya, jadi gw tambah distancenya dikit aja tq
5. 00:12:758 (2) - entah ini cuman gw atau rada maksa kalau disitu. coba di geser ke ekor slider (1) biar ga ada kesan dash paksa ahh prasaan situ aja, ini diff emng dasarnya gampang, jadi liat yang agak susah keliatannya beda
6. 00:16:200 (4) - geserin lagi ke kiri cocok nih wkwk hhmm gw pertimbangin dulu soalnya keliatan ryuutanya agak gmna gtu pas balik kekanan, tpi untuk sementara gw geser dulu deh
7. 00:16:692 (2) - kasus yang sama dengan 00:12:758 (2) - brrti jawabannya sama `3`
8. 00:17:676 (2) - ^ single slider disamping udh cocok buat kasih jump lebih, soale kalo dibikin konsisten malah tambah canggung, yha tak pikirin lagi deh, tapi tetep kgk diubah
9. 00:24:192 (1,2,3) - tbh posisinya rada awkward buat gw. coba yang (1) & (2) di geserin ke kiri kira-kira sampe ujung playfield kalo maksudnya biar sekalian ada hypernya, gw kira kagak deh buat sekarang, ya sih punya potensi tpi gw emphasis pake hitsound aja, malah ini gw lebih deketin lagi sama slider selanjutnya klo emng agak maksa jump'a
10. 00:27:635 (9) - melintang kiri bagus nih hmmm sebernya malah kerasa lebih jauh hypernya tpi gpplah
11. 00:28:126 (1,2,3) - same case with 00:24:192 (1,2,3) - sama ky tdi juga, malah 00:29:110 (4) - yang lebih dideketin biar gmpng catchnya
12. 00:31:077 (1) - bisa lu geserin ke x 188 biar movementnya bagus no hdash tq
13. 00:33:290 (5) - perlu di NC kali yak doesnt need i guess :`3
14. 00:33:536 (7,8) - coba dijadiin slider dengan ekornya hadep ke kiri nope, its fine
15. 00:34:520 (5,6,7,8) - gw harap lu bisa bikin dash dimana? sama gitu nadanya gk ada perbedaan, nnti kalo gw kasih dngan alasan "its fit the song" lngsung turun mod kgk bakal ada motivasi gw XD
16. 00:35:012 (1,2,3) - Jaraknya Ditambahin :^) susah payah gw sesuain, masa gw remake lagi, dasar proo player
17. 00:36:364 (3) - geserin ke x 216 jijik gw sama pola kek gtu Orz
18. 00:38:331 (2) - ^ (x 148) mksa bos, nnti random miss kek ta!
19. 00:38:823 (4) - ^ (x 356) already finehh

itu aja yang bisa gw sebutin. udah males buat ngelanjutin wkwkwk y? ;w; but yee, thanks b4!

xi-False wrote:

「M4M」

Salad

-Move this note 00:17:061 (2) - to x:208 makes the transition a little smoother
unless you want to create a dash there then keep as it is yes, wanted to add jump, but its too close, i can even catch w/o dash, probably i'll increase the distance

-you should add notes here 00:23:454 - 00:23:700 - 00:23:946 -
and good placements would be 00:23:454 (3) - x:304 00:23:700 (4) - x:368 and 00:23:946 (5) - x:432 kinda distracted the rhythm, i dont follow vocal anyways

-try to give this slider 00:55:667 (1) - more movement, you can do that by moving the end of the slider to x:368 hmm, ok
and you can also Move the end of this slider 00:56:159 (2) - to x:192 leave it like this
and if you make that change make sure to select all these 00:56:651 (3,4,5) - notes and Ctrl+G to make flow better

Platter

-I feel like this slider should have more movement 00:22:717 (2) - Move the end of it to x:348 i know wat u mean

-similar to the salad, you should add notes here 00:23:454 - 00:23:700 - 00:23:946 - same reason, im in purpose to leave it blank
and good placements would be 00:23:454 (3) - x:288 00:23:700 (4) - x:112 and 00:23:946 (5) - x:224

-This jump is almost frame perfect 01:06:487 (2,1) -
Nerf the jump by moving this 01:07:471 (1) - to x:304 or creat a H-Dash by moving it to x:400 x:324

Milk Tea

-The jumps on these notes 00:03:536 (4,2) - are really sudden and people might shit miss here a lot Bring them closer to the center! this map is quite playable diff, a little challenge i think its fine, also i think this is common in a rain diff, but i'll consider about it more, for now i want keep it like this
~00:03:536 (4) - x:448
~00:07:471 (2) - x:56
This coordinates would be nice

- This note 00:17:676 (2) - would be better if it was centered between the notes i've give a reason in previous mod i guess, its like already fits with a little jump, if i consistent with the distance, its feels kinda awkward
Move to x:232

- another pretty hard jump to land 00:56:651 (3,4) - , people will most likely shit miss here too i think its fine
Move 00:57:143 (4) - to x:292

Assunnaaa Saaaannn!!
Good luck getting it ranked! yes i'll do my best

RoseusJaeger wrote:

*Sees a bunch of mods and is mildly intimidated.*

Here from my lazy modding queue.
Well, I'll test play it and see what I find. I probably won't deserve any kudos for this mod the map looks and plays pretty good to me.
General

Not gonna lie, I dont see much I can judge. All I really have is commentary.

Salad

00:56:979 (5,6) - Felt a little hard to catch while I was playing but I think it was mostly because I wasn't expecting the pattern before it. i just thinking about it, and its kinda hard for beginner, yea i'll try to makes it a bit easier

Platter

Personally, I'm not liking the CS 4 going on, but there's nothing wrong with it. Since, I'm not used to that CS it made it hard for me to play. I noticed Salad is 3 and Milk Tea is 4, so why not make this one 3.5? it seems good with cs 3.5, but in a case its make some hypers off, so i need to repairing the distance to keep the hypers, i'll keep it for now till can repair da distance

Milk Tea
I don't see anything wrong with it. The CS 4 fits this diff but I'm not so sure about platter.

I tried. Good luck with your map.

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue XD.

[Milk Tea]

1. 00:09:438 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think on this the sound should 1/3 on 00:09:438 (2,3,1) - and Delete 00:09:807 (2,3) -. sure nais, also i repair da stream due flow and shape
2. 00:35:504 (4,1) - between this it should have Hdash i think. hhmmm, im not sure about this, but yeaah, added hdash here
3. 00:52:102 (2) - move to x:84 i know your mean :^), so i move it but onto x:88 due fiting da distance
4. 01:11:774 (2) - move to x:76 ^^
5. Love this diff <3 Pretty flow

[Platter]

1. 00:58:004 (2,3) - move to x:396 idk, i just dont like sth like this :`(

Very Very Short TT. look overall is fine for me. Shoot Star :v

Hibari wrote:

request from my Modding Queue

Rain

1. 01:17:553 (2,3) - you can create interesting movement with this, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308530 sure, i make sth like this, also do minor change to the distance
2. 01:07:840 (2) - little weird, maybe try to rotate like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308179 Done. also repair ruined distance
3. 01:16:323 (5,6,7) - you should reduce a bit the distance with each fruit, try 01:16:323 (5) - in x:420 and 01:16:651 (6) - in x:312 its removing the Hdash, and its kinda more hard to catch, anyways its play well for me, i makes the distance consistent with previous note

Platter

1. 00:22:717 (2) - more good flows if you rotate this like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308388 i just make a variant here, there is 1/1 little break so changing flow path is fine i guess
2. 00:43:618 (7) - i don't thinks the Hyper Dash is realy justified by the music, try 00:43:618 (7) - in x:288 its loud enough to be a HDash, also i put a hyper at 00:39:438 (6,1) - that make it more reasonable to keep the Hdash
3. 00:54:192 (3,4,5) - really long jump, you can create Hyper Dash with 00:54:438 (4) - in x:68 not adding hyper due for consistent with previous part, and for the next part in 01:13:004 (3,1) - i adding hyper cuz the vocal seems emphasized
4. 00:58:864 (5) - more comfortable if you rotate like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308436 mmm.. okay change the flow path
5. 01:14:110 (4,5) - i thinks this spacing is really big for a platter, you should reduce the distance same reason like before, keep it due distance consistently, if it looks so hard i'll consider it more to reduce the distance, also at another part, but still i'll keep it for now
6. 01:23:946 (2,3) - for the ending of the song maybe this spacing is a bit long, you should reduce a bit the distance this still catchable, i indeed want to add little jump here

Quit user wrote:

just a random mod, if you want don't take this.

Rain looks fine.

Platter

00:56:159 (2,3) - you can try this, it gives a little more movement and goes with the rhythm, also i noticed that you did this on the last kiai but still, it seems little better. if you mean to gives it a little movement, i tilt it a bit more

Salad looks fine.

good luck!

1. 00:17:307 (3) - Flip the tail to the left? Seems to flow better with 00:18:045 (4) this way.
2. 00:56:159 (2) - Doesn't flow well as vertical here, I would rotate the tail to the left because that way will require more movement which might suit this part of the song better due to a dense rhythm.
3. 00:56:159 (2,3) - If possible I prefer a dash or a bigger spacing than 00:55:667 (1,2) because that way will give a better emphasis to vocal.
4. 01:15:831 (2) - Same as 00:56:159 (2) but this time I recommend putting the tail on the right instead.

1. 00:46:569 (4,5) - Just my preference but a hyperdash can be added here because the rhythm is building up from this point.
2. 01:02:307 (3,4) - Use the same rhythm as 01:01:323 (6,1,2) ? In my opinion 01:02:922 shouldn't be ignored.

Cera- wrote:

Jejak

Good Luck
hope this ranked

Electoz wrote:

Here goes~

[Salad]

1. 00:17:307 (3) - Flip the tail to the left? Seems to flow better with 00:18:045 (4) this way. i think its flowed well already
2. 00:56:159 (2) - Doesn't flow well as vertical here, I would rotate the tail to the left because that way will require more movement which might suit this part of the song better due to a dense rhythm. sure, i tilt it a bit to left
3. 00:56:159 (2,3) - If possible I prefer a dash or a bigger spacing than 00:55:667 (1,2) because that way will give a better emphasis to vocal. gives difference of distance between those seems wasnt so affect, since this still a salad i think keeping this its ok
4. 01:15:831 (2) - Same as 00:56:159 (2) but this time I recommend putting the tail on the right instead. ok

[Platter]

1. 00:46:569 (4,5) - Just my preference but a hyperdash can be added here because the rhythm is building up from this point. sure, added Hdash
2. 01:02:307 (3,4) - Use the same rhythm as 01:01:323 (6,1,2) ? In my opinion 01:02:922 shouldn't be ignored. i just want to made a melody by leaving it, so that heard a bit more dynamic, but i'll consider more about this due some reason tho

Didn't find anything else so yeah sorry for a short mod, good luck~ its fine

1. 00:45:340 (4,1) - wowow, too hard for a salad! considering increasing the distance for a HD or decreasing it.

1. 00:25:176 (4,5,1) - seems pretty hard, since after catching 4 you need immediately to turn left for catching 5 and then you need to turn right again to catch 1! Please, remove this HD or make 00:25:176 (4,5) a little bit easier
2. 00:29:110 (2,3,1) - well nvm this is more harder than ^!!
3. 01:05:135 (5,1) - hard to fc. tilt 5 a little bit right, or this can be a problem for ranking
4. 01:15:340 (1,2) - just a suggestion, you can increase the distance for making a HD, try it

1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - why not a HD?
2. 00:14:602 (2) - I think you can move this left for a HD to 3
3. 01:25:176 (1,2) - pls, increase a distance here for a hd or decrease to remove this almost pixeljump
4. 01:26:159 (1,2) - same as ^

Myle wrote:

hi, mod is coming from my Queue
[Salad]

1. 00:45:340 (4,1) - wowow, too hard for a salad! considering increasing the distance for a HD or decreasing it. since hyper isnt allowed in salad, i makes this more catchable by reducing the distance slightly

[Platter]

1. 00:25:176 (4,5,1) - seems pretty hard, since after catching 4 you need immediately to turn left for catching 5 and then you need to turn right again to catch 1! Please, remove this HD or make 00:25:176 (4,5) a little bit easier i change (5) into 2 circles, flow path also changed
2. 00:29:110 (2,3,1) - well nvm this is more harder than ^!! actually it isnt that hard, but since i want to make this map is more playable, every suggestion will be appreciated and considered, and i change (3) to circles so the distance isnt riveted by slider body (1.0x SV)
3. 01:05:135 (5,1) - hard to fc. tilt 5 a little bit right, or this can be a problem for ranking ok, i indeed want to make a playable diff map, but if the problem is only "hard to fc", i think it isnt the exact reason, also its will be problem for ranking? why? any reason other than "hard to fc"? there are lot of ctb map that hard to fc, and why its got ranked?. OK, i dont want make a drama, i'll reply about this mod. I think its fine, i made it catchable as can as possible, gives difference distance for jump also emphasizing beat stanza, about the pattern i think its fine, i still can catch it properly before catch next note
4. 01:15:340 (1,2) - just a suggestion, you can increase the distance for making a HD, try it i think i'll keep this, for consistent and i dont really want to add hyper dash in it, though its play nice or watever, current still enjoyable for me

[Milk Tea]

1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - why not a HD? cuz weak beat, and it isnt an overdose, also i dont want overusing HD
2. 00:14:602 (2) - I think you can move this left for a HD to 3 keep for consistent also i think it hasnt potential for HD
3. 01:25:176 (1,2) - pls, increase a distance here for a hd or decrease to remove this almost pixeljump its still catchable, but yeah reduce the distance slighty is more better i guess
4. 01:26:159 (1,2) - same as ^ ^

not a big mod, I think it's ready for ranking already

Calibus wrote:

A mod from my modding queue

[Milk Tea]
First of all I want to say that this difficulty is really fun to play and I really enjoyed it! I went more into detail on this one because everything seemed alright in the first place.

1. 00:04:889 (2) - As you can hear, the sound switches to a higher pitched sound, but the slider is still vertical, I would move the slider to x:352 and tilt the slider end to x:384 y:280 like this, whereas at 00:02:553 (1) - the sound is more monotone so you just have the slider vertical.(Idk if I explained this well, you can pm me if you don't understand it). its like that before, i change it cuz a mod, but i can return it for some reason tho, i also adjust the distance
2. 00:07:717 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would make this a zigzag pattern instead of a > pattern, because if you listen closely to the music, you hear the pitch change every two notes, so that fits a zigzag more and it flows better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5573169 + https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5573175idk, i just dont like the flow path, i makes it curved naturaly instead *pict
3. 00:09:438 (2,3) - I would change these two notes to something else, because it just doesn't seem like a good flow to keep those two in place, I can't seem to find a solution for it, but I think those two notes there don't really flow that well. its not a big problem, though its hold the movement, it still flowed well, but i'll consider it more till other ppl pointed about this
4. 00:09:766 (1) - Don't start NC here, start it at 00:09:930 (2) - instead. My mistake, i change the stream rhythm and forgot to repair NC stanza
5. 00:35:012 (1,3) - I don't see a reason why (1) should be at a different position than (3), because it might break the flow because they (3) is just a bit further. gives difference so these played more dynamic, if i place it same with (3), it makes no difference with 1/3 slider reverse. In some case consistent distance is make the objects left behind when you want to catch, so miss. one reason that's why i place it with 3 inconsistent circles instead of 1/3 slider reverse. idk if i explain it properly, but there are reason for keeping this
6. 00:36:241 (2) - Move this to x:200, plays better in my opinion. umm, its look good, but idk. i just dont like how it be in-game, i know its a rain, but i'd prefer to wait the next note come and then go to the next objects, btw i move 00:36:241 (2) - to x:160 and 00:36:364 (3) - to x:172 instead
7. 00:37:963 (1,2) - Why don't you just mimick this pattern to the one at 00:38:454 (3,4) - ? Something like this cuz this one is more catchable and playable, i dont want make the real hard rain, i want make a playable map
8. 00:42:266 (2,4) - Move (2) to x:416 and (4) to x:200 to create the same flow as 00:43:864 (1,2,3,4) - make a variance is a good idea i guess
9. 00:50:995 (2,3,4) - Your flow in the beatmap isn't always that consistent, I would move (2) to x:372, (3) to x:240 and (4) to x:252 like this to create that same pattern as 00:51:733 (1,2) - we dont need to always consistent with pattern. of yes, i just do ctrl+c and ctrl+v in a whole map for it. i think this pattern is fine, difference distance looks fine i still consistent with the jump stuff, the objects could be catched properly and its not lack of movement, isnt it?
10. 00:55:667 (1,2,3) - This section seems like a good buildup with those repeat sliders, but you seem to be building the movement down there, especially at (3) where the slider is turning vertical, I would make (3) more horizontal OR you should just make all of the sliders the same. made (3) slide more vertically for some reason, one of which is the vocal ended at (3), so the music will be heard more loud, isnt it? so i make it more vertically for mark that the tone is changed. by reducing the movement for prepare to the next jump without hyper which different with previous object. i hope i explain it correctly, there are other reason about this, but i think these is the main reason
    
    Now I won't go into more further detail, there are alot of things in this that you can apply to more sections, but some are not entirely necessary.
    Hope I helped you out and good luck!

Nelly wrote:

Random mod because I can

♦ Salad

00:53:700 (1,2,3) - You could move 2nd note something like this or a little bit close and far mm, the distance is consistent with previous, but i think its quite awkward, so i fix it in my way to keep the consistent distance

♦ Platter

Everything is fine but you could add more hyperdashes at some places idk, but i've put hdash in all place that has potential to be hdash (1/4s isnt included), maybe some suggestion will be considered

♦ Milk Tea

00:03:782 (5,6,7) - you could move the notes too far a little bit seems fine, still reasonable
00:26:405 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - same ^ ^
I'd like to add more but it's not gotta change anyway, instead i'll show my testplay (image) wow nice

Everything else it's fine and it's ready for ranking you can help me either (first map, be warned) ohh is this m4m D: i thought its random mod, but ok i'll try to mod your map later

Good luck!

Jusenkyo wrote:

M4M as requested

General

1. Only one problem, turn off "Widescreen Support" option as they do not have a SB (for now)

Salad

1. 00:06:487 (1,2) - Why here is more distance if the same sound from 00:02:553 (1,2) - here. If you want to keep consistencies, I suggest increasing distance in the previous patterns. emphasize reason, actually i want switch 00:02:553 (1,2) - and 00:06:487 (1,2) - since the first one has stronger sound, but i still wait for people respone, anyway i dont want make it consistent
2. 00:08:454 (1,2) - Same ^. ^
3. Missing drum 00:10:831 - here 00:12:799 - here, 00:14:766 - here 00:16:733 and here. yes, cuz there arent object to be hitsounded, it reasonable for an salad diff leaving some beat i guess?
4. 00:09:438 (2,1) - Increase distance, needs a dash. its already has a dash i guess? we can catch it without dashes bcuz we have experienced, but i think beginner will read it as a jump, so they will do dash at here
5. Consider putting two notes, one 00:49:274 - here and 00:49:520 - here, so you can emphasize a dash to (1) (announcing that began kiai time) i think it doesnt need an announcement or emphasize'r. Since i dont have cup diff, salad could be a little bit more easier
6. It is the kiai time, try to increase distances, I will give some examples: 00:50:504 (3,4) - 00:57:389 (7,1) - 00:58:864 (3,4) - 00:59:110 (4,1) - 01:03:045 (4,1) - Well, since they are the same sounds, identify and put it away for consistency. From 01:09:438 (1) - here. i put all of the spacing at reasonable limits, they have different reason to have more or less distance with other section
7. 00:57:143 (6) - I lost movement. its still a salad, waiting is best thing for 'normal' difficulty level, cuz it make a preparation for the jump to the next object
8. 01:05:504 (1) - I wish you to do this part, but hey, I guess so keep consistency with the spinner of the end. yes, actually i want to make salad diff easier than the usual, since this is low bpm song, and i want to make salad has less SR as well, so i dont need a cup and for better spread reason tho
9. Nice diff I like it.

Platter

1. 00:07:471 - Dash missing, 00:09:438 - here too. i dont really catch the problem x.x
2. 00:14:110 (5,1) - Reduce the distance or make h-dash. no 1/4 hdash since this still a platter, move (1) a little bit to left instead
3. 00:12:143 (5,1) - I forgot this, h-dash could fit.
4. 00:16:077 (4,1) - ^, too.
5. 00:17:307 (2,1) - ^, too.
6. 00:21:733 (5,1) - Needs a h-dash, as you did 00:25:913 (6,1) - here. i make a variant here, but i think i can consider about it
7. 00:33:782 (3,1) - h-dash could fit.
8. 00:45:340 (6,1) - ^.
9. 00:47:553 (3,1) - ^.
10. 00:49:766 (1,2,3) - Very difficult to catch. I'll let an alternative:done, sth like that
    :)

    
11. 00:55:422 (4,1) - h-dash can help.
12. 00:59:602 (1,2,3) - Do something similar as i said above. i think this one seems fine for me
13. You can replace 01:03:045 (5) - this slider, for a stream to make a h-dash with the following note.
14. 01:04:274 (2,1) - Reduce distance. its already has less spacing than what you mention on beginning mod o.o
15. 01:05:135 (3,1) - h-dash seems fine, but i suggest you to Ctrl+G 01:05:504 (1) - this slider and move a bit to the right.
16. 01:06:487 (2,1) - Do something similar ^.
17. 01:09:438 (1,2,3) - The same as I mentioned. k for this one
18. 01:15:094 (4,1) - h-dash.
19. 01:25:176 (1) - In Salad, you made an exception, but do not consider here. no, i want keep the spin
20. Nice diff too.

no reply = no change, well i only dont reply about h-dash mod, since RC said that platters should serve as an introduction to hyperdashing, and i know similar problem on xinely map which the platter have lot of hyperdashes and it affect the ranking, well i think i could consider to add some hdashes at few section without overusing it

Milk Tea

1. 00:03:290 (3,4) - h-dash for maintain consistency 00:05:258 (3,4) - here. they had different sound, you could hear it if you use headphone, that's why i put 1/4 slider for 00:05:258 (3) -
2. 00:06:241 (7,1) - Hard dash, change to h-dash. i still can catch it properly, i think 00:06:487 (1) - doesnt need more effort to get caught, so its not that hard imo
3. 00:08:331 (8,1) - ^. this also seems not that hard imo
4. 00:09:602 (3) - Lost movement. intended to stack those, the flow will stopped for a moment, but i think it still flowed well, but i'll consider if there is suggestion about better placement
5. 00:47:553 (3,1) - h-dash :3. the sound that i follow ish down slowly, assuming that it has weaker tone than previous objects
6. Not much to say here, I feel like this with a little overmap, but still good. im actually really want to improve this map, i dont really think that this is overmapped, but there is someone else said that this quite overmapped on non-kiais part, probably some suggestion about nerfing some section could help me out from this "forever pending"

If i help you, please tell me, I appreciate it.
GOOD LUCK!

16:56 BoberOfDarkness: np those maps
16:57 -[ Asuna ]-: np
16:57 *-[ Asuna ]- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059762 Hanazawa Kana - Meiwaku Spectacle (TV Size)]
16:57 *-[ Asuna ]- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/794243 petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea]
16:58 -[ Asuna ]-: i have free time
16:58 -[ Asuna ]-: we can do irc for spectacle
16:59 BoberOfDarkness: I would irc this
16:59 *BoberOfDarkness is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/794243 petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea]
17:00 BoberOfDarkness: so irc?
17:01 -[ Asuna ]-: lets gu
17:01 BoberOfDarkness: 00:06:487 (1) - 00:08:454 (1) - both feels undermapped at it is rain diff
17:02 -[ Asuna ]-: milk tea?
17:02 BoberOfDarkness: I would prefer 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + note
17:02 *BoberOfDarkness is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/794243 petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea [Milk Tea]]
17:02 BoberOfDarkness: yup
17:02 -[ Asuna ]-: its k i guess
17:03 -[ Asuna ]-: since there are so much of 1/4s
17:03 BoberOfDarkness: but yea, thats rain
17:03 BoberOfDarkness: so its fine
17:03 -[ Asuna ]-: feels kinda overmapped, so i wanted to add some 3/4 reverse
17:05 -[ Asuna ]-: it also have lower tone compared with 00:02:553 (1,2,3) -
17:05 BoberOfDarkness: actually this feels like 1/4 spam
17:05 BoberOfDarkness: 00:20:995 (3,1,2,3,4) - 
17:05 -[ Asuna ]-: *has
17:05 BoberOfDarkness: yea a bit
17:06 -[ Asuna ]-: thats what i mean about it feels kinda overmapped
17:06 BoberOfDarkness: but to pattern at 00:20:995 - there is too much
17:06 BoberOfDarkness: 1/4
17:06 -[ Asuna ]-: yes
17:07 -[ Asuna ]-: i think i have reason, but well
17:07 BoberOfDarkness: maybe try [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7911855 this]
17:07 -[ Asuna ]-: idk how 2fix
17:07 -[ Asuna ]-: ;'c
17:07 -[ Asuna ]-: idk how 2fix
17:07 -[ Asuna ]-: ;'c
17:07 BoberOfDarkness: so try my timeline xd
17:08 -[ Asuna ]-: where
17:08 BoberOfDarkness: 00:20:995 - 
17:08 BoberOfDarkness: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7911867
17:11 -[ Asuna ]-: wait, find placemtn
17:11 BoberOfDarkness: for 00:30:586 (3,4,5,6) - I would suggest curved stream instead, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7911896
17:11 BoberOfDarkness: ok ok
17:15 -[ Asuna ]-: k
17:15 -[ Asuna ]-: done curved
17:16 -[ Asuna ]-: make 00:31:323 (1,2,3) - curved as well for better flow
17:17 BoberOfDarkness: oh okay
17:18 BoberOfDarkness: flow seems wierd here, 00:36:856 (1,2,3,4,5) - , spacining is too small >.<
17:19 -[ Asuna ]-: seems fineh for me
17:20 BoberOfDarkness: 00:38:331 (2) - should be closer to next note
17:20 -[ Asuna ]-: the sound itself is flat, so i dont put large spacing on it
17:21 -[ Asuna ]-: wait
17:22 BoberOfDarkness: but 00:38:331 -  is stronger than 00:38:454 - 
17:22 -[ Asuna ]-: no the flat sound is for 00:36:856 (1,2,3,4,5) -
17:22 BoberOfDarkness: a oh ok
17:22 BoberOfDarkness: sure
17:23 -[ Asuna ]-: sry for slow respone xd
17:23 BoberOfDarkness: sure sure
17:23 BoberOfDarkness: I have time
17:24 -[ Asuna ]-: i kept 00:38:331 (2,3) - for emphasize
17:25 -[ Asuna ]-: it has clap hitsound aswell to mention that its a jump
17:25 BoberOfDarkness: okay, can I go next?
17:25 -[ Asuna ]-: yes
17:26 -[ Asuna ]-: go
17:26 -[ Asuna ]-: xd
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: since its kiai time it could be harder
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: so
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: I suggest here 00:57:143 - and 00:57:389 - 1/4 sliders
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: in same spots as notes
17:27 -[ Asuna ]-: that i want to make this map is playable
17:27 -[ Asuna ]-: i want to tell you
17:27 BoberOfDarkness: wat?
17:27 -[ Asuna ]-: umm
17:27 -[ Asuna ]-: i dont want to make this hard
17:27 BoberOfDarkness: but this is r a i n :<
17:27 BoberOfDarkness: ok last suggestion
17:27 -[ Asuna ]-: i want to made playable mep
17:28 BoberOfDarkness: 01:27:266 - 01:29:110 - maybe spinner?
17:28 -[ Asuna ]-: its ok being a bit hard
17:28 -[ Asuna ]-: as long as it still playalbe
17:29 -[ Asuna ]-: oki
17:29 BoberOfDarkness: some spacing are underdone in my opinion but still its fine
17:29 BoberOfDarkness: I just suggest stuff
17:29 -[ Asuna ]-: yes
17:29 BoberOfDarkness: I am not forcing anything
17:30 -[ Asuna ]-: i see
17:30 -[ Asuna ]-: this map has lack of spacing
17:31 -[ Asuna ]-: But that was intentional
17:31 -[ Asuna ]-: umm, like i wanted to make this like convert map?
17:33 BoberOfDarkness: k
17:34 BoberOfDarkness: but at platter this pattern would be more interesting 00:55:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if a bit spaced 
17:34 BoberOfDarkness: I would map it this way
17:34 BoberOfDarkness: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7912075
17:37 -[ Asuna ]-: gimme code?
17:37 BoberOfDarkness: sure
17:43 -[ Asuna ]-: changed but i change (4) into circles
17:43 BoberOfDarkness: yea sure
17:43 -[ Asuna ]-: i adjust the placement for flow
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: Okay
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: I guess we are cool now
17:44 -[ Asuna ]-: nays
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: Salad is pretty fine
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: so
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: I guess I will just post log
17:45 -[ Asuna ]-: oki doki
17:45 -[ Asuna ]-: i'll revive and update
17:45 -[ Asuna ]-: it still no grave btw :3
17:46 -[ Asuna ]-: on
17:46 BoberOfDarkness: lol

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FastYoshi wrote:

Heyo again asuna
Here's mod

Salad

00:56:159 (2) - a bit cramped.. I feel like i had did it with horizontal, but why this firetruckin slider skewed vertically, firetruck. Fix anyway
..and that's probably it, nice job me owo

a-b-c-d-e-f-g-h-i-j-k-l-m-n-o-p-q-r-s-t-u-v-w-x-y-z

Platter

00:36:733 (3) - Rotate to horizontal and move it to x:368, it needs a bit longer dash. tilt it, but i move previous note instead to add more spacing
00:39:192 (5) - I would ctrl+g to add a mouvement. Nah, i hate antiflow
00:41:282 (5) - Maybe move this a bit to the left.. Sure.
00:41:897 (1,2,3) - Move to x:364, increase lenght of dash to prevent easy droplet miss. Its oki, it still could be controlled
01:22:225 (1,2,3) - Move to x: 372, ^ ^.^
01:04:889 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7922833 oki doki
01:18:167 (5) - Put it exactly in, between (4) and (1), x:352. woops, missed dsnap xd. x:350 instead
01:19:643 (2) - Move to the right, x:8; create a bit of mouvement.. 'cause i saw of lot of https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7922884 (three drops at same place everywhere -w-) iits intentionally, this is ez mep for 'play ctb diffs like a converted std' experience
01:20:258 (1) - Rotate to horizontal, ^ ok for this one (only for these ones)

Tea Rain

00:42:758 (4) - Move to x:256, makes a good view, imo, instead of two drops at same place its ok, it has less movement for do jump into (1)
00:51:610 (3) - Move to x:240, ^seems fine tho
01:02:922 (2) - x:360, (yea... i really got nothing =m=, but it's just those again) xd
01:07:840 (2) - Rotate this a bit to the left (I can't rotate the slider with 1/2 beat snap divisor and then an error occurs owo then just change beat snap into 1/4 lul. I had did it multiple times and lot ppl wanted to make this vertical, afterward ppl said it should be horizontal,
and i just repeatly did something like that xd, Lets just keep this for once until someone else pointed againhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7922993&#41;

Please put 1/4 -w- there are ton of 1/4 `3`

Note

Didn't find any major pattern or sound-related problems... ... ... ...although a lot of negligible ones -w-' its fineh i just wanted to map something different

Anyways gl -3- thank anyway o7

Absolute Zero wrote:

[Salad]
00:10:422 (1) - 00:12:389 (1) - 00:14:356 (1) - 00:16:323 (1) - I agree with Jusenkyo here, I would make these 3/4 sliders, not 1/1 sliders in the configuration like below. done, i shortened the sliders by 1/4 and add a circles

Alternate solution, ticker is on 00:10:422

00:30:831 (2) - Tilt this slider a little bit more for easier access to 00:31:569 (3). done, skew it a bit more, hope i did it well
00:32:061 (1) - Ctrl+G for a smoother movement to 00:33:045 (2). Better transition. Done, im also adjusting the spacing for consistency
00:45:340 (4) - I would suggest tilting this slightly to the left so that the dash is more apparent. Right now it could be confused for a walk. did it to the right instead for better transition
00:47:553 (3,1) - Unrankable distancing here from hitcircle to spinner. You want something at least 1/1, like at 00:33:045 (2,1). RIP 122bpm XD, removed spinner. Changed into 3/4 slider reverse with acircle
00:50:012 (2) - I don't hear an important beat on 01:09:807. I would just make this a 1/2 slider instead. i'd rather leave the red tick usually, i will keep this this has similar sound like 00:51:733 (1,2) - , it also has a clap hitsound
00:52:225 (2,3,4) - The distance between (3,4) should be slightly increased because (2,3) is a walk and (3,4) could be confused as one as well.
done
00:54:684 (4) - Weird snapping. End the slider on 00:55:05 since there’s no sound on the 1/6 beat. ohh its my fault, fixed
00:57:143 (6,7) - Lack of movement here is strange--I would increase distancing a bit here. i think its fine, since this still a salad, giving little break would make beginner preparing the jump to the next note
0:59:602 (1,2) - Make this like 01:00:586 (4,5). (2) fits better this way. Done.
01:04:766 (2) - Remove the repeat on this repeat slider for the same reason as 00:47:553 (3,1). Done.
01:09:684 (2) - Same as 00:50:012 (2). i mapped it consistent, so i will let it
01:19:766 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:52:225 (2,3,4). Done.
01:21:733 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:52:225 (2,3,4). the sound is more weak than the previous, its like started to faded out. I think its reasonable to decrease the spacing

[Platter]
00:10:422 (1) - I would make this a 1/4 slider with a hit circle 1/4 after the slider ends to follow the music more closely. If you want to even go further, I would suggest doing this, even. Done. with similar timeline

Alternate solution, ticker is on 00:10:422

00:12:389 (1) - Same as 00:10:422 (1). ^ and adjust spacing on 00:13:618 (5,6) -
00:17:307 (2,1) - The strong drumbeat made me expect a hyper here. Increase distancing. Done.
00:27:635 (2) - I think the instruments here aren’t strong enough to justify a repeat 1/2 slider. Make this a 1/1 slider instead. Done.
00:29:848 (4,1) - Kind of a sharp unexpected jump here. I would lower the distance. 2 grid? it almost at the min spacing to be a hyper
00:30:586 (3) - Preferably I would make this a 1/1 slider, but if you’re not, at least flip it around the slider head because it’s uncomfortable to play with antiflow. yesh, i made vertical slider instaead
00:44:971 (5) - I would make this a hit circle starting on 00:45:094 because the sound at 00:44:971 is not particularly strong. Then, in the context of strong sounds, it sounds like it’s hitting nothing. changed to circle
00:45:340 (6) - 1/1 slider here to follow the music more closely. Done.
00:56:159 (1) - No NC here. Move it to 00:56:651 (4). Done.
00:56:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern would work better as 3 “groups” of notes in a < and > (alternating) shape to follow the music more closely. hope i've did it corectly
01:00:340 (4,5) - A particularly large Hdash for not hitting that strong of a sound. Keep it a hyper, but lower the strength of the hyper. it has the minimum spacing to be a hyper, if i moved it only 1 grid the hyper will be lost :c
01:02:307 (3,4,5) - This pattern kind of plays a little strangely because it forces the player to the left side of the screen. Perhaps you don’t want (5) to be a repeat slider but instead a 1/2 slider that hypers to 01:03:536 (1) to accent the voice. Done with hyperxd
01:06:487 (2) - Why is this different than 01:07:471 (1,2,3) even though they follow the same music rhythm? It would be nice to keep them the same thing. For dynamical skae, but changed anyway
01:12:758 (2,3) - Kind of a strange rhythm again—I don’t hear the start of (2). i hear the start of (2) but not (3) xd, changed (3) into circle
01:15:340 (1,2,3) - This is the kind of pattern I mean for 00:56:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)—I like this one much better
I did it previously, but some ppl said that i need to add something different so the diff isnt that boring :c01:20:258 (1) - Repeat slider here is a little strange. I would make this a 1/1 slider instead. done consistently with first kiai

[Milk Tea]
00:02:553 (1,2) - Distancing here is a bit far for a rain. Lower distancing here. done.
00:09:438 (2,3,4) - Strange pattern compared to its context—I would make this a > shape rather than a half of a “Y”. im intended to decrease the movement for a while, somehow it feels more dynamic and plays fun to me

00:11:897 (3,4,1) - This pattern plays kind of weirdly. I would soften the dash at least. seems fine imo
00:14:356 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:11:897 (3,4,1). its a normal back and forth with natural flow
00:37:963 (1,2) - The standstill to (2) is a little awkward in terms of flow. i move (2) a bit to right and adjust the spacing
00:46:815 (1,2) - Make this a hyper so that the jump is more intuitive. i will only increase the distance, the sound is more weak than previous hyper, and it doesnt hve potential to be a hyper imo
01:06:241 (3,4) - Make this a hyper to do the same thing as 01:07:225 (6,1). Omg i need to reconstruct this part
01:20:258 (1,2) - Lack of movement is strange. its fine, i just wanted to make a playable diff like a convert map
01:27:143 (1) - Make this a slider ending on 01:28:126 to hit the sound. i think i will keep it for consistent with other diff

1. Looks cool.

1. There's too many dashes for this being the lowest difficulty of the set. Yes there's a concern to the spread between Platter and this difficulty, but if you are going to make this the lowest difficulty, you should take into account that beginners are going to play this difficulty, and that movements needs to be more lenient than your conventional Salad. Not to mention there are tons of ambiguous distances that needs more attention : e.g. like 00:06:487 (1,2) - , 00:08:454 (1,2) - and etc. - those are possible to be caught by walking, but for beginners this isn't clear enough. I'll point out all these under in my mod.
2. 00:04:028 (3,1) - I don't think you want to a close-to-dash movement from the start of the map, it can confuse the players quite a bit. Currently it is possible to catch (1) by walking, and since (1) doesn't seem particularly like a strong sound or anything, I would just reduce the distance so that it is shown to be clearly walkable.
3. 00:06:487 (1,2) - 00:08:454 (1,2) - These are certainly walkable, but they are tap-dashable as well. This can create confusion, especially among beginners. Would also reduce them(but to keep the emphasis try to have a small gap) to make a clearer walking pattern.
4. 00:20:258 (1,2) - This is really hard to walk to, and it is also another dash I don't think I find fitting tbh. This downbeat snare repeats over at other ticks like 00:25:176 - , 00:29:110 - and etc., so if you make dashes on all of those you are surely going to have too many dashes in a section. For these I would just use distance increment - reduce it but keep the emphasis by leaving a small gap that is walkable. Same goes for 00:24:192 (1,2) - , 00:28:126 (1,2) - , and etc..
5. 00:21:241 (2,1) - So after the ambiguous movement above, this could be perceived as a dash, which in musical terms, it works. But however if that's the case this should be consistent amongst others like 00:25:176 (2,1) - , 00:29:110 (2,1) - , and etc., which again, if done in the same section, will create too many dashes. Remember that salad's are only there to introduce players to dashes - and here it matters even more as some players entering this difficulty might not know what the heck is ctb even. Would reduce the distance so that this doesn't get perceived as a dash, and same goes for all the other sets of notes mentioned.
6. 00:22:717 (2,1) - Quite a small distance to walk to, I expected more movement to be made here tbh. Just my preference, but if you agree with me you could space them out a little bit more.
7. 00:27:635 (3,1) - Looking at other similar notes like 00:31:569 (3,1) - , this is the only odd one out with a dash. Would be better to keep their emphasis the same, so I would remove the dash.
8. 00:37:471 (4,1) - This feels more like a dash than a distance increment, and even if it was intended, as I explained above, doing this will make you do this consistently for the whole section, which overflows the section with dashes.
9. 00:38:700 (3,4) - While it is completely possible, I still feel that it is a tad bit too dangerous to keep it this way - pure walking for this pattern requires quite a precision that beginners might not have. Would try to reduce the distance to play it safe.
10. 00:41:405 (4,1) - I don't think this dash is really supported by the music as it didn't contain strong sounds like there was at 00:39:684 (5,1) - . Would remove it.
11. The whole kiai - This is where the dashes get overboard. Almost in every measure there are 2 dashes/ambiguous distances that are close to being a dash, which is gonna strain beginners out quite fast, and they by themselves are also very hard to execute consistently. I suggest you to only make dashes where the sounds are prominent and loud enough, e.g. 00:55:422 (6,1) - , 00:57:389 (7,1) - and 01:03:045 (4,1) - and so on. Others should be removed because they currently are adding too much difficulty 'spike' in the difficulty especially for beginners. Won't be mentioning these as they are quite repetitive and they are quite easy to notice.
12. 01:04:766 (2) - Doesn't really feel right for the slider to start on the red tick as it doesn't follow the vocals too well(it starts on the blue tick, you focused vocals in the kiai more so you should be following this exactly), a simple circle on 01:05:012 - could work better.
13. 01:05:504 (1) - This feels quite lazy imo because there's clearly mappable beats in the spinner, and you are ignoring it. Furthermore this is in middle of the 'chorus synth' so naturally this part of the difficulty should be more difficult than the others, so I don't know why you made a spinner here - it makes things so much more easier, not fitting for this section of the song. Even if there's no vocals to map to, you skipped the vocals at 00:18:782 (1) - with a spinner so making a spinner here makes things inconsistent. Try to map this section out, you can also make a dash towards 01:09:438 (1) - this note afterwards which is a nice contrast to give between the two sections. Same goes for 01:25:176 (1) - .
14. Tbh aside from the movement issues I feel the difficulty is okay, but those require serious fixing.

1. Dashes are better here but some of them could have been made more clearer
2. 00:02:553 (1,2) - Like this one for example. It may be clearly read as a dash but it still can be easily walked somehow. Would try to increase this to 2.7x. Same goes 00:04:274 (3,1) - .
3. 00:11:651 (5,6) - This kind of flow feels weird because the kick slider creates an anti-flow wiggle which doesn't flow into the next note too naturally tbh. Would just make a linear pattern like this. This also applies to all other similar patterns like 00:13:618 (5,6) - , 00:38:700 (4,5) - and etc..
4. 00:12:143 (6,1) - This also can be increased to give a clearer dash, around 2.8x here would work nicely.
5. 00:14:356 (1,2) - There shouldn't be a dash here following the consistency of 00:13:249 (3,4) - and 00:11:282 (3,4) - .
6. 00:16:077 (4,1) - This distance is too low to be even called a dash, and even if it wasn't an intended one it still should be, as the sound's prominent and loud enough. Increase it to somewhere around 2.8x.
7. 00:20:258 (1,2,3) - On the other hand the distance between these notes are too far to be called normal walking distances, they are rather played as dashes, which become inconsistent with the following rhythms after this. Reduce the distance between these 3 notes.
8. 00:24:192 (3,4) - Would be nice to add a dash here to follow consistency with 00:28:126 (1,2) - .
9. 00:26:405 (2) - There's literally nothing landing on the red tick and the blue ticks on these slider, so it feels awkward to play this out. Hell even the percussions aren't landing here so it feels extra weird. Remove this.
10. 00:27:389 (1) - No reason to NC here, it doesn't follow your previous pattern and it's not a strong enough beat to support one.
11. 00:27:635 (2) - On the other hand, you missed out on the prominent hi-hat sound on the blue tick of this slider. This should be a triplet to follow it. Also this shouldn't be a dash to follow the consistency of 00:20:995 (3) - (you literally skipped it here lol) and 00:24:192 (3,4) - .
12. 00:30:586 (3,4) - Like above, this shouldn't be a dash.
13. 00:31:815 (7) - This specific hi-hat sound was ignored prior at 00:27:635 (2) - the tail of this slider, so making a dash here doesn't really make sense to me tbh. Would remove the dash and make it a walk instead.
14. 00:33:782 (3,1) - This should be a hyper like 00:29:848 (4,1) - and similar others.
15. 00:36:241 (2,3) - Since you don't make a dash at 00:40:299 (2,3) - , for consistency I would remove the dash here.
16. 00:45:094 (5,6) - This isn't anything specially strong - it's just a snare, and it doesn't contain anything special like at 00:42:881 (1) - , so a dash here is really off-putting considering all those. Would just make this a walk.
17. 00:52:717 (1) - No need for a NC here as well, it's doesn't signify anything strong in the music nor there are any here.
18. 00:53:454 (2,1) - Dash feels really underwhelming at its current distance. Would increase it to somewhere around 2.8x to make it more clearer.
19. 00:54:438 (4,1) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a dash but if it is, it feels really underwhelming. But considering the next similar parts of the song(at 01:02:307 (3) - (its ignored) and at 01:21:979 (4,1) - (just a distance increment)) being mapped without dashes and only 1 another part being mapped the similar way at 01:14:110 (4,1) - , I would just remove both 'intended dashes' and instead make them distance increment. That being said I would also try to map out 01:02:307 (3) - this to be similar like all the others(slider+two 1/4 circles) and have distance increment on it to give the same level of emphasis.
20. 00:55:422 (4,1) - (1) is a strong sound with downbeat emphasis + the strong vocals so not having a dash here misses the good opportunity for it. I suggest you to add one.
21. 00:57:389 (5,1) - Hyper into anti-flow patterns are unrankable according to the RC. I would fix it by making (1) vertical but the choice is up to you.
22. 00:59:356 (6,1) - Although this is an anti-flow and the distances should look more far, the dash still feels quite underwhelming. Would increase the distance here too, to somewhere around 2.7x.
23. 01:01:323 (2,1) - Like above.
24. 01:05:135 (3,1) - Make a hyper to give contrast between the two sections being quite different, and also to emphasize on the sole strength of (1).
25. 01:11:159 (8,1) - Another underwhelming distance, increase it to give a clearer dash.
26. 01:17:799 (3,4) - Making a dash here is really uncalled for, especially when you didn't do it at 00:58:372 (4) - , 01:10:176 (4,5,6) - and etc.. To keep it consistent with other notes I would remove the dash.
27. 01:19:028 (3,1) - Aaaa make this more clearer as well, it feels ambiguous here.
28. 01:20:012 (4,5) - Another hyper into anti-flow which is unrankable. Make the start of (5) more vertical(around half of the slider could be vertical) to avoid this.
29. 01:22:963 (4,1) - Make this clearer again please, increase the distance.
30. 01:24:192 (3) - The slider feels really weird rhythmically. Yes there's a held sound which does exist during the span of the slider, but a conventional player wouldn't notice it unless they hear really closely to the music, because of how insignificant is it compared to other sounds of the map. Instead, a single circle would be a lot more better to emphasize on the strong finish of the chorus at 01:24:192 - .
31. 01:24:930 (4) - This circle also feels weird because the same vocal instance at 01:24:561 - isn't emphasized. Would just remove it.

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

Hey there, passing by. hihi

[General]

1. Looks cool. nays

[Salad]

1. There's too many dashes for this being the lowest difficulty of the set. Yes there's a concern to the spread between Platter and this difficulty, but if you are going to make this the lowest difficulty, you should take into account that beginners are going to play this difficulty, and that movements needs to be more lenient than your conventional Salad. Not to mention there are tons of ambiguous distances that needs more attention : e.g. like 00:06:487 (1,2) - , 00:08:454 (1,2) - and etc. - those are possible to be caught by walking, but for beginners this isn't clear enough. I'll point out all these under in my mod. i did it consistent previously, i always turned on distance snap tool when i was mapping, this could be like that mostly by modder suggestion, i dont think its a problem because they think its fine. Fixed anyway
2. 00:04:028 (3,1) - I don't think you want to a close-to-dash movement from the start of the map, it can confuse the players quite a bit. Currently it is possible to catch (1) by walking, and since (1) doesn't seem particularly like a strong sound or anything, I would just reduce the distance so that it is shown to be clearly walkable. adjust the spacing a little bit
3. 00:06:487 (1,2) - 00:08:454 (1,2) - These are certainly walkable, but they are tap-dashable as well. This can create confusion, especially among beginners. Would also reduce them(but to keep the emphasis try to have a small gap) to make a clearer walking pattern. as previous mod,
   i decided to add more spacing on this (for that small gap reason). I believe beginner wouldnt read it as a jump in this spacing
4. 00:20:258 (1,2) - This is really hard to walk to, and it is also another dash I don't think I find fitting tbh. This downbeat snare repeats over at other ticks like 00:25:176 - , 00:29:110 - and etc., so if you make dashes on all of those you are surely going to have too many dashes in a section. For these I would just use distance increment - reduce it but keep the emphasis by leaving a small gap that is walkable. Same goes for 00:24:192 (1,2) - , 00:28:126 (1,2) - , and etc.. Done.
5. 00:21:241 (2,1) - So after the ambiguous movement above, this could be perceived as a dash, which in musical terms, it works. But however if that's the case this should be consistent amongst others like 00:25:176 (2,1) - , 00:29:110 (2,1) - , and etc., which again, if done in the same section, will create too many dashes. Remember that salad's are only there to introduce players to dashes - and here it matters even more as some players entering this difficulty might not know what the heck is ctb even. Would reduce the distance so that this doesn't get perceived as a dash, and same goes for all the other sets of notes mentioned. done decrease spacing on each section
6. 00:22:717 (2,1) - Quite a small distance to walk to, I expected more movement to be made here tbh. Just my preference, but if you agree with me you could space them out a little bit more. I think its ok, since this is a salad, beginner should have more break for preparation
7. 00:27:635 (3,1) - Looking at other similar notes like 00:31:569 (3,1) - , this is the only odd one out with a dash. Would be better to keep their emphasis the same, so I would remove the dash. Done, with 2.0x ds
8. 00:37:471 (4,1) - This feels more like a dash than a distance increment, and even if it was intended, as I explained above, doing this will make you do this consistently for the whole section, which overflows the section with dashes. I will reduce dashes on 00:38:700 (3,4) - etc instead. because every downbeat on this section are kinda strong enough to be emphasized, i've did it consistent anyway
9. 00:38:700 (3,4) - While it is completely possible, I still feel that it is a tad bit too dangerous to keep it this way - pure walking for this pattern requires quite a precision that beginners might not have. Would try to reduce the distance to play it safe. Had done as in above
10. 00:41:405 (4,1) - I don't think this dash is really supported by the music as it didn't contain strong sounds like there was at 00:39:684 (5,1) - . Would remove it. i will make it the same as 00:37:471 (4,1) -
11. The whole kiai - This is where the dashes get overboard. Almost in every measure there are 2 dashes/ambiguous distances that are close to being a dash, which is gonna strain beginners out quite fast, and they by themselves are also very hard to execute consistently. I suggest you to only make dashes where the sounds are prominent and loud enough, e.g. 00:55:422 (6,1) - , 00:57:389 (7,1) - and 01:03:045 (4,1) - and so on. Others should be removed because they currently are adding too much difficulty 'spike' in the difficulty especially for beginners. Won't be mentioning these as they are quite repetitive and they are quite easy to notice. I've done fixing those movement issues on kiais
12. 01:04:766 (2) - Doesn't really feel right for the slider to start on the red tick as it doesn't follow the vocals too well(it starts on the blue tick, you focused vocals in the kiai more so you should be following this exactly), a simple circle on 01:05:012 - could work better. Done.
13. 01:05:504 (1) - This feels quite lazy imo because there's clearly mappable beats in the spinner, and you are ignoring it. Furthermore this is in middle of the 'chorus synth' so naturally this part of the difficulty should be more difficult than the others, so I don't know why you made a spinner here - it makes things so much more easier, not fitting for this section of the song. Even if there's no vocals to map to, you skipped the vocals at 00:18:782 (1) - with a spinner so making a spinner here makes things inconsistent. Try to map this section out, you can also make a dash towards 01:09:438 (1) - this note afterwards which is a nice contrast to give between the two sections. Same goes for 01:25:176 (1) - . I mapped it with spinner for a break, since i mapped first kiai with a bunch of dashes. I might be mapped this section if i was map first kiai as what you said above. Because mostly beginner will follow vocal, they wouldnt complain with this spinner though
14. Tbh aside from the movement issues I feel the difficulty is okay, but those require serious fixing. Done, fixing those issues

[Platter]

1. Dashes are better here but some of them could have been made more clearer
2. 00:02:553 (1,2) - Like this one for example. It may be clearly read as a dash but it still can be easily walked somehow. Would try to increase this to 2.7x. Same goes 00:04:274 (3,1) - . done with 2.7x, doing to 00:04:520 (1,2) - as well
3. 00:11:651 (5,6) - This kind of flow feels weird because the kick slider creates an anti-flow wiggle which doesn't flow into the next note too naturally tbh. Would just make a linear pattern like this. This also applies to all other similar patterns like 00:13:618 (5,6) - , 00:38:700 (4,5) - and etc.. could i just make it like this?
4. 00:12:143 (6,1) - This also can be increased to give a clearer dash, around 2.8x here would work nicely. done.
5. 00:14:356 (1,2) - There shouldn't be a dash here following the consistency of 00:13:249 (3,4) - and 00:11:282 (3,4) - . No it has different rhythm, it started on the new stanza rhythm as well
6. 00:16:077 (4,1) - This distance is too low to be even called a dash, and even if it wasn't an intended one it still should be, as the sound's prominent and loud enough. Increase it to somewhere around 2.8x. Ok. done, im also adjust the spacing with 00:17:307 (2,1) -
7. 00:20:258 (1,2,3) - On the other hand the distance between these notes are too far to be called normal walking distances, they are rather played as dashes, which become inconsistent with the following rhythms after this. Reduce the distance between these 3 notes. done with 1.5x
8. 00:24:192 (3,4) - Would be nice to add a dash here to follow consistency with 00:28:126 (1,2) - . done with similar distance
9. 00:26:405 (2) - There's literally nothing landing on the red tick and the blue ticks on these slider, so it feels awkward to play this out. Hell even the percussions aren't landing here so it feels extra weird. Remove this. try to use headphone, reduce effect volume into 0% and keep the music volume at 100%, play with 25% playback if needed
10. 00:27:389 (1) - No reason to NC here, it doesn't follow your previous pattern and it's not a strong enough beat to support one. My fault,
    its not intend to be NC'd
11. 00:27:635 (2) - On the other hand, you missed out on the prominent hi-hat sound on the blue tick of this slider. This should be a triplet to follow it. Also this shouldn't be a dash to follow the consistency of 00:20:995 (3) - (you literally skipped it here lol) and 00:24:192 (3,4) - . Its totally different with 00:20:995 (3) - , i could agree with 00:20:258 (1) - and 00:24:192 (3) - . But i dont put a dash because 00:20:258 (1) - and 00:24:192 (3) - doesnt have a sounds in the back of it. I leave 00:23:700 blank because i dont follow vocal. I will change 00:27:635 (7) - into triplet, but i will keep the dash for emphasize the downbeat
12. 00:30:586 (3,4) - Like above, this shouldn't be a dash. In this case, the song has Dynamic rhythm, i just follow how the rhythm sounded but fine, done remove the dash
13. 00:31:815 (7) - This specific hi-hat sound was ignored prior at 00:27:635 (2) - the tail of this slider, so making a dash here doesn't really make sense to me tbh. Would remove the dash and make it a walk instead. I'll keep the dash consistent according 00:27:635 (7) -
14. 00:33:782 (3,1) - This should be a hyper like 00:29:848 (4,1) - and similar others. Sure.
15. 00:36:241 (2,3) - Since you don't make a dash at 00:40:299 (2,3) - , for consistency I would remove the dash here. done with similar distance
16. 00:45:094 (5,6) - This isn't anything specially strong - it's just a snare, and it doesn't contain anything special like at 00:42:881 (1) - , so a dash here is really off-putting considering all those. Would just make this a walk. Done.
17. 00:52:717 (1) - No need for a NC here as well, it's doesn't signify anything strong in the music nor there are any here. remove nc
18. 00:53:454 (2,1) - Dash feels really underwhelming at its current distance. Would increase it to somewhere around 2.8x to make it more clearer. done
19. 00:54:438 (4,1) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a dash but if it is, it feels really underwhelming. But considering the next similar parts of the song(at 01:02:307 (3) - (its ignored) and at 01:21:979 (4,1) - (just a distance increment)) being mapped without dashes and only 1 another part being mapped the similar way at 01:14:110 (4,1) - , I would just remove both 'intended dashes' and instead make them distance increment. That being said I would also try to map out 01:02:307 (3) - this to be similar like all the others(slider+two 1/4 circles) and have distance increment on it to give the same level of emphasis. I mapped the rhythm based on music, and put a dash for emphasize based on vocal. regardless of that, i decided to use 2.0x instead
20. 00:55:422 (4,1) - (1) is a strong sound with downbeat emphasis + the strong vocals so not having a dash here misses the good opportunity for it. I suggest you to add one. done
21. 00:57:389 (5,1) - Hyper into anti-flow patterns are unrankable according to the RC. I would fix it by making (1) vertical but the choice is up to you. i think make it vertical should be fine
22. 00:59:356 (6,1) - Although this is an anti-flow and the distances should look more far, the dash still feels quite underwhelming. Would increase the distance here too, to somewhere around 2.7x. done
23. 01:01:323 (2,1) - Like above. a bit not understand with this, i fix it like 00:53:700 (1,2,3,4) -
24. 01:05:135 (3,1) - Make a hyper to give contrast between the two sections being quite different, and also to emphasize on the sole strength of (1). Dont you feel it would be an Anti-flow? .-.
25. 01:11:159 (8,1) - Another underwhelming distance, increase it to give a clearer dash. Done
26. 01:17:799 (3,4) - Making a dash here is really uncalled for, especially when you didn't do it at 00:58:372 (4) - , 01:10:176 (4,5,6) - and etc.. To keep it consistent with other notes I would remove the dash. done
27. 01:19:028 (3,1) - Aaaa make this more clearer as well, it feels ambiguous here. done
28. 01:20:012 (4,5) - Another hyper into anti-flow which is unrankable. Make the start of (5) more vertical(around half of the slider could be vertical) to avoid this.
29. 01:22:963 (4,1) - Make this clearer again please, increase the distance. done
30. 01:24:192 (3) - The slider feels really weird rhythmically. Yes there's a held sound which does exist during the span of the slider, but a conventional player wouldn't notice it unless they hear really closely to the music, because of how insignificant is it compared to other sounds of the map. Instead, a single circle would be a lot more better to emphasize on the strong finish of the chorus at 01:24:192 - . i will change this into 3/4 slider reverse so players would notice it properly
31. 01:24:930 (4) - This circle also feels weird because the same vocal instance at 01:24:561 - isn't emphasized. Would just remove it.

Aaa that's all I could find time for, will return to mod the highest difficulty in the weekends hopefully.
GL!