HELLO!
GENERAL
You are really good at determining if the jumps need to be big or not, matching the jumps with the tone of the music is 10/10!
It's a very fun map over all, very jumpy, but not too jumpy, I like it!
Reclamation
00:04:397 (3) - add a jumpy pattern here to match the vocals
00:08:033 (1) - add a long slider here instead of the repeating slider to go with the "uuuu" part of miku's voice
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to have a a triangle pattern that slowly extends with the music, or any other pattern
00:12:397 (8) - have this tick as the start of the slider and end on the next white tick to go with the voice
00:29:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as I said earlier, add a pattern instead
00:36:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - instead of single tap spam here add sliders with the vocals
01:11:306 (1,2,3) - again, instead of spam, try adding some 3 or 6 tick long sliders to reduce the overmap and emphasize the vocals
[throughout the whole FIRST kiai, try to find spots to place some long sliders to go with miku's voice to avoid overmapping
01:31:852 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG <3
01:36:489 (4) - this isn't timed correctly, I believe it's on the red tick
01:43:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make these into a pattern (not too big)
01:45:306 (4,5,6) - remove these three notes and add a slider instead
01:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try adding long sliders to emphasize the voice
02:06:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - build up pattern here
02:17:398 (1) - this goes on the white tick
[throughout the whole SECOND kiai, try to change combo every time there's a pause in the song, just to make it easier to read
02:23:307 (7,1) - make these two sliders into jumps instead
02:32:216 (10) - make this slider two large jumps (dont do screenwide jumps)
02:33:489 (2) - another pair of jumps here too if you want
02:50:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - love this <3
03:04:761 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - change the combo every pause, idk makes me feel better LOL
03:16:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is fine imo, but since you have a thing against spaced streams, I assume this wont stay
03:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ayy lmao same here
04:11:670 (2) - new combo
04:23:398 (1,1) - remove these spinners and add long complex sliders instead, looks cooler imo. Like this 04:29:125 (1,2,3,4,5) -
04:46:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should have the "super heavy kick" parts as jumps and the "weaker" parts as sliders, looks less overmapped that way
05:13:852 (4,5) - make these notes into a triangle pattern to make emphasize the kick and snare
05:14:034 (5,1) - remove the kiai here and then bring it back with the music
05:39:579 (1,2,1) - move the slider one tick forward and make the first two notes a triple instead.
FINISHED!