1. Chen (5,08 stars, 873 notes)
2. DavidEd's Insane (4,38 stars, 712 notes)
3. Easy (1,41 stars, 186 notes)
4. Hard (3,09 stars, 563 notes)
5. Normal (2,03 stars, 298 notes)

#1 Ranked map

jonathanlfj
Pereira006
Thank you!

ClickNoise wrote:

DavidEd's Insane
●02:09:847 (2) - Move to X408 Y256 to make it look nicer c: nah, but i only changed the angle a little
●02:12:847 (2,3) - Maybe perfect stack? fix

ClickNoise wrote:

Easy
●00:34:972 (1) - Move to X232 Y185 to make it look nicer c: the blanket looks good, but the spacing would be ruined and I couldn't stack it with 1 x.x
●01:15:472 (1) - Move to X316 Y151 to improve blanket fixed
●01:20:347 (3) - Move to X217 Y188 for perfect stack with 01:21:472 (1) - fixed
●01:28:972 (1) - Try to let it look like this this would make it overlap or ruin the spacing to make the stack work, I can try to change it if I find a nice alternative
●Then move 01:28:222 (4) - to X93 Y325 for a perfect Stack didn't change because didn't change above

Normal
●00:10:222 (3,4,5) - Overlap.When you see them please change them because it would be very Irritating it's more of a following pattern than an overlap, since it keeps the flow going, it doesn't however follow the 1x spacing, and I'll change it as soon as I get another "complaint" about it xd
●01:30:472 (1,2) - Try to make a perfect blanket. done
●02:08:347 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change that please. same as above, it might look messy, but it's a simple way to keep the rhythm


Hard
●01:42:472 (1) - Move to X276 Y219 to make a perfect stack with 01:41:628 (8) - fixed
●02:48:527 (4,1) - Try to make a perfect stack fixed
●02:48:971 (1,3) - ^ ^
●02:49:416 (2,4) - ^ ^

DavidEd wrote:

Ty for mod ^^

update

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Boobs wrote:

Chen (5,25 stars, 905 notes) Quick Mod

00:11:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ugly stream. replace it with something else Done so, it wasn't that bad though :b

00:18:097 (7,8,9,10,1) - Curve this stream to the right. fixed, also changed the previous note to keep flow

00:32:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing. Use Distance Snap correctly. All kicksliders are using 2x DS, the different directions they're in might make it seem like they aren't though

00:34:409 (5) - Place this closer to 00:34:034 (4). Maybe like x: 167 y: 171 I don't like to stack these patterns >.< makes them boring

00:36:472 (1) - Place further away from 00:36:097 (9,10) fixed, had to keep the 2x DS but reduced the overlap

00:37:034 (4) - Ugly place to put the jump. I find it fun to play like this, it's patternized aswell, changed the direction a tiny bit

00:37:409 (5) - This should like a little closer to 00:37:034 (4) changed it a little, still not stacking though

00:38:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too rigid of a pattern. Also the direction these sliders are facing are ugly. it's a favorite of the people who play the map, it's more of a reading challenge since it doesn't have big jumps, there's no major overlap that would ruin it

00:39:847 (3,4) - Bad pattern. Easy to misread. Re-do this pls. that's the point xD but I'll change it as soon as I find a nice alternative, couldn't find a best position rn

01:22:222 (4,5,6) - Too linear of a pattern. agreed, changed

01:30:097 (4) - Make the slider velocity slower because the speed it is hitting at doesn't fit the music. I did that actually, but the slider becomes so small that it gets blocked by the triple, and becomes close to unreadable, only option is to make it faster

01:46:034 (2,3,4) - Don't stack it with 01:45:472 (1). oke

01:48:472 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

02:01:034 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

02:11:534 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Don't do this stream. it's pretty easy to do when you get the hang of it, it's actually one of the few I never miss when playing the map


[General]

Your jumps are inconsistent and not pleasant to look at. Examples: 01:55:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 01:57:097 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6), and 02:22:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9). it's an extra, I have to go over that edge and not follow the same DS on every pattern, all jumps are following DS however, just not the same distance.

Use Distance Snap more often.

1. 00:03:472 (1,1) - In Easy and Normal, the gap between the note after a spinner must be 4 beats, because they are unrankable.. I suggest that you can reduce the spinner to 00:04:972 here and remove 00:05:722 (1).
2. 00:06:472 (1,2) - You can try to blanket (1)'s head with (2) so that it creates a better flow, like this :
   
3. 00:09:472 (5) - NC here and 00:10:972 (1) - Remove NC here.
4. 00:12:847 (4) - If applying the things above, NC here.
5. 00:10:972 (3) - For this slider, you can use a different slider shape in order to improve the looks, and for a blanket, something like this :
   
6. 00:27:472 (1,1) - Again, the gap. Reduce spinner's length to 00:28:972.
7. 00:47:347 (3) - I don't really like to overlap notes that remains after it has passed, even in the editor in easier difficulties. Maybe you could rotate this by 48 degrees clockwise selection centre and place it so that it blankets the previous slider's tail?
8. 00:48:472 (1,3) - Notice that (1) is overlapping (3)? This really confuses beginners, so try to avoid overlap by doing the similar thing like I did above. (Rotate and place so that it won't overlap.)
9. 01:31:222 (2) - Damn this has tons of repeats :/ I think it is better to just use a long slider instead of a slider with so many repeats, this can really confuse players, much more than 2 repeats.
10. 01:34:222 (2) - ^^
11. 01:37:222 (2) - ^^
12. 01:39:472 (1,1) - The gap again. I suggest to remove the circle, and extend the spinner's length up to 01:42:472. Make sure to add a finish!
13. 01:49:972 (1,1) - ^^ Reduce the spinner's length to 01:51:472.
14. 02:44:305 (1,2,3) - The instruments in the background can be expressed well using a long slider. I think placing circles for this can possibly lead to a miss for beginners, they can't be really adapted to red tick circles yet :/
15. 02:52:527 (2,3) - Blanket definitely can be improved.
16. 02:57:860 (4) - NC here.

1. 00:03:472 (1,1) - Once again, the gap. Until Normal the rule applies, soo... I rather do the same thing like what I said in Easy, in the exact same part.
2. 00:10:222 (3,4,5) - No need for reducing DS here, in Normal and Easy keeping the same DS(for 1/2 which has small spacings until approach circles gets blocked, increasing by .1 or .2 is allowed) is essential, so increase the DS between these.
3. 00:15:472 (5,6) - The first one I can understand... That is your style after all. But the second one, following the drum beat, you can try this :
   
4. 00:27:472 (1) - Curve this slider so that it can create a smoother flow towards (2).
5. 00:43:972 (3,4,5) - Same point like 00:10:222 (3,4,5).
6. 00:46:972 (3,4,5) - ^^
7. 00:54:472 (1,2,3) - ^^
8. 00:56:722 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^^
9. 00:56:347 (4) - NC here, the combo from here is getting quite long.
10. 01:02:347 (6) - NC here then 01:03:472 (1) - Remove NC here.
11. 01:06:472 (1) - DS again, should be constant.
12. 01:09:847 (2,3,4) - ^^
13. 01:21:847 (2,3,4) - ^^
14. 01:30:472 (1,2) - I don't like this overlap. You can try to curve (2) and blanket to (1)'s tail.
15. 01:42:472 (4) - Why don't you NC here like you did for others?
16. 01:49:972 (1,1) - Spinner gap. Reduce the spinner's length to 01:51:472.
17. 01:55:972 (3,4,5) - DS consistency again.
18. 01:58:972 (3,4,5) - ^^
19. 02:06:472 (1,2,3) - ^^
20. 02:08:722 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^^
21. 02:08:347 (4) - NC here like the last part, the combo is getting too big.
22. 02:21:416 (4,5,1) - DS again
23. 02:30:305 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
24. 02:34:749 (3,4,5) - ^^
25. 02:53:416 (2,3,1) - ^^
26. 02:58:971 (2,3,1) - ^^
27. 03:00:749 (2,3,1) - ^^ and so on. This is because the approach circle gets blocked, which will confuse beginners or possibly novice players too.
28. 03:10:305 (4) - NC here
29. DS in this difficulty needs some refinement.

1. 00:36:472 (1,2,3,4) - Circles in similar parts seems really overused, consider to change these as sliders.
2. 00:37:409 (5,6,7,8) - I don't know about this... Going back and forth seems really Hard...
3. 00:39:472 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to change these as sliders.
4. 01:08:722 (4,5) - Blanket can be really improved.
5. 01:31:222 (5) - NC here to notify there is some 'odd' endings for the incoming sliders.
6. 01:34:222 (5) - ^^
7. 01:37:222 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ok this is really confusing. I suggest you use some sliders with repeats for this. (Don't use too much repeats on 1 slider though)
8. 01:37:222 (3) - NC here
9. 02:04:972 (7) - NC here
10. 02:22:305 (1,2) - Blanket can be slightly improved.
11. 02:28:527 (4,5) - I don't really see relevancy of pitch here for a stack... I think it should be better for (5) to stack on (6).
12. 03:01:194 (7,8,1) - Stacking triplets makes the map look better. Besides, since the BPM is slower here than the previous parts, I think it is fine for a stacked triplet.

1. Hey there again
2. Pattern wise I have nothing to say, I am still not good at modding Insane :/
3. 00:28:222 (10) - NC here to prevent the combo going too long maybe.
4. 00:30:097 (9) - ^^
5. 01:31:222 (6,1) - NC at (6) and remove NC at (1) to notify players a SV change is going to happen at (6).
6. 01:34:222 (7,1) - ^^ NC at (7) and remove NC at (1).
7. 01:37:222 (6,1) - ^^
8. 02:42:971 (4,5,6,7) - Hmmmm... 1/6 stream in Insane seems really hard, consider changing this to a 1/6 kick slider.
9. 02:53:638 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
10. 03:07:860 (6,7,8,9) - ^^

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello, nice song. ikr

Wide screen support is open on easy, normal, hard but not opened on other diffs fix them. fixed

I suggest you to use 1366x768 background instead of 1228x767 was going to do this and forgot.. thx for the notice

Hard :

• 
  
  01:41:722 (9) - Use a slider. made a little change to this part
  
  01:35:722 (8,9,10) - try this but it is maybe too hard for hard diff but i think it's ok for your diff it's a bit too confusing for a hard with 3 stars, I hate to miss the snare but if I put a note there, it becomes too quick for this diff
  
  00:37:409 (5,6,7,8,1) - Some flow problems change to this : http://puu.sh/iTWbm/f9bb0dc9f1.jpg or something similar. good one, fixed
  
  00:41:722 (3,4) - ^ : http://puu.sh/iTWdK/93f7e14e55.jpg this one is more doable though
  
  01:03:472 (1,2,3) - ^ 01:04:034 (2) - rotate this : http://puu.sh/iTWi7/68b3b8c6b1.jpg here I prefer the way it is now
  
  02:16:972 (1) - Use CTRL + H and 02:16:972 (1,2) - try to blanket maybe I tried this and the flow with the previous pattern got worse, and for me flow > blankets
  
  02:49:638 (3) - 02:49:860 (4) - Those might be hard to read because you hide 2 circles in the same pattern so thats why. if this becomes a rankability issue, I'll change it, for a hard though, I think it's ok
  
  I find this diff decent and nice.

Chen :

• 
  
  The difficulty name should be something about the song if it is please explain it on song's information spot. Chen is the character in the BG and the gif I placed in the description, she's the Touhou boss in which this song is related to through the game Touhou Youyoumu ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom, everything is in the tags though ^^
  
  01:42:472 (9) - Break time yeah I'm still a noob mapper lol, fixed
  
  00:32:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found those parts doesn't really fit. they're following the guitar, even though it's one of the few parts that don't follow the drums

Normal :

• 
  
  00:10:222 (3,4,5) - 00:43:972 (3,4,5) - Distance problem they are too close with the DS you used. There are more. ok, I shall chnage these :c
  
  01:00:847 (2,5) - Better not make this pattern on normal difficulty There's a lot of time between these notes, so they don't really stack in game
  
  02:13:222 (3,7) - ^ ^
  
  01:06:097 (4,1) - Distance I have no idea how that got there, fixed
  
  01:30:472 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. changed
  
  02:44:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stacking on normal difficulty is not good idea because the newbies cannot read them and dont kno how to react to stacks so maybe use slider instead. agreed and changed

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

[DavidEd's Insane]

1. Hey there again o/
2. 00:28:222 (10) - NC here to prevent the combo going too long maybe. fix
3. 00:30:097 (9) - ^^ fix
4. 01:31:222 (6,1) - NC at (6) and remove NC at (1) to notify players a SV change is going to happen at (6). fix
5. 01:34:222 (7,1) - ^^ NC at (7) and remove NC at (1). fix
6. 01:37:222 (6,1) - ^^ fix
7. 02:42:971 (4,5,6,7) - Hmmmm... 1/6 stream in Insane seems really hard, consider changing this to a 1/6 kick slider. fix
8. 02:53:638 (4,5,6,7) - ^^ ill keep it the way it is now
9. 03:07:860 (6,7,8,9) - ^^ ^

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello again Here for another M4M~

[Easy]

1. 00:03:472 (1,1) - In Easy and Normal, the gap between the note after a spinner must be 4 beats, because they are unrankable.. I suggest that you can reduce the spinner to 00:04:972 here and remove 00:05:722 (1). fixed it, I still think that 4 beats is huge though ._.
2. 00:06:472 (1,2) - You can try to blanket (1)'s head with (2) so that it creates a better flow, like this : I don't feel this is necessary as it would ruin the flow / spacing of the following pattern
3. 00:09:472 (5) - NC here and 00:10:972 (1) - Remove NC here. hai hai
4. 00:12:847 (4) - If applying the things above, NC here. hai hai 2
5. 00:10:972 (3) - For this slider, you can use a different slider shape in order to improve the looks, and for a blanket, something like this : yap, good point
6. 00:27:472 (1,1) - Again, the gap. Reduce spinner's length to 00:28:972. fixed
7. 00:47:347 (3) - I don't really like to overlap notes that remains after it has passed, even in the editor in easier difficulties. Maybe you could rotate this by 48 degrees clockwise selection centre and place it so that it blankets the previous slider's tail? the previous note is already gone in game when the new one shows up, it's kind of a waste of effort to change the whole pattern for that xd
8. 00:48:472 (1,3) - Notice that (1) is overlapping (3)? This really confuses beginners, so try to avoid overlap by doing the similar thing like I did above. (Rotate and place so that it won't overlap.) same as above
9. 01:31:222 (2) - Damn this has tons of repeats :/ I think it is better to just use a long slider instead of a slider with so many repeats, this can really confuse players, much more than 2 repeats. I kind of agree, changed
10. 01:34:222 (2) - ^^ ^^
11. 01:37:222 (2) - ^^ ^^
12. 01:39:472 (1,1) - The gap again. I suggest to remove the circle, and extend the spinner's length up to 01:42:472. Make sure to add a finish! mhmhm
13. 01:49:972 (1,1) - ^^ Reduce the spinner's length to 01:51:472. hmhmh
14. 02:44:305 (1,2,3) - The instruments in the background can be expressed well using a long slider. I think placing circles for this can possibly lead to a miss for beginners, they can't be really adapted to red tick circles yet :/ they better have taken their guitar lessons
15. 02:52:527 (2,3) - Blanket definitely can be improved. blanket was definately improved
16. 02:57:860 (4) - NC here.hai hai 3

[Normal]

1. 00:03:472 (1,1) - Once again, the gap. Until Normal the rule applies, soo... I rather do the same thing like what I said in Easy, in the exact same part. same as easy and for every other point in this mod
2. 00:10:222 (3,4,5) - No need for reducing DS here, in Normal and Easy keeping the same DS(for 1/2 which has small spacings until approach circles gets blocked, increasing by .1 or .2 is allowed) is essential, so increase the DS between these. this was fixed from the previous mod, still didn't have it updated ^^ sry about that
3. 00:15:472 (5,6) - The first one I can understand... That is your style after all. But the second one, following the drum beat, you can try this it is still following the kick, I'd hate missing it :b
4. 00:27:472 (1) - Curve this slider so that it can create a smoother flow towards (2). oke
5. 00:43:972 (3,4,5) - Same point like 00:10:222 (3,4,5). same as above and for every other in this mod
6. 00:46:972 (3,4,5) - ^^
7. 00:54:472 (1,2,3) - ^^
8. 00:56:722 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^^
9. 00:56:347 (4) - NC here, the combo from here is getting quite long. oke2
10. 01:02:347 (6) - NC here then 01:03:472 (1) - Remove NC here. oke3
11. 01:06:472 (1) - DS again, should be constant.
12. 01:09:847 (2,3,4) - ^^
13. 01:21:847 (2,3,4) - ^^
14. 01:30:472 (1,2) - I don't like this overlap. You can try to curve (2) and blanket to (1)'s tail. yap, changed and the one following too
15. 01:42:472 (4) - Why don't you NC here like you did for others? because I'm dumb
16. 01:49:972 (1,1) - Spinner gap. Reduce the spinner's length to 01:51:472.
17. 01:55:972 (3,4,5) - DS consistency again.
18. 01:58:972 (3,4,5) - ^^
19. 02:06:472 (1,2,3) - ^^
20. 02:08:722 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^^
21. 02:08:347 (4) - NC here like the last part, the combo is getting too big. oke4
22. 02:21:416 (4,5,1) - DS again
23. 02:30:305 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
24. 02:34:749 (3,4,5) - ^^
25. 02:53:416 (2,3,1) - ^^
26. 02:58:971 (2,3,1) - ^^
27. 03:00:749 (2,3,1) - ^^ and so on. This is because the approach circle gets blocked, which will confuse beginners or possibly novice players too.
28. 03:10:305 (4) - NC here oke5
29. DS in this difficulty needs some refinement. and fixed :b

[Hard]

1. 00:36:472 (1,2,3,4) - Circles in similar parts seems really overused, consider to change these as sliders. reorganized them, I'm a genius!
2. 00:37:409 (5,6,7,8) - I don't know about this... Going back and forth seems really Hard... it's a hard diff :^) but in all seriousness, I think it's fine
3. 00:39:472 (1,2,3,4) - Consider to change these as sliders. Did so, except the last one
4. 01:08:722 (4,5) - Blanket can be really improved. Here it's intended, beeing centered is enough
5. 01:31:222 (5) - NC here to notify there is some 'odd' endings for the incoming sliders. oke
6. 01:34:222 (5) - ^^ oke2
7. 01:37:222 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ok this is really confusing. I suggest you use some sliders with repeats for this. (Don't use too much repeats on 1 slider though) mhm I think it isn't too confusing for a hard, it's the rhythm of the song, it's supposed to be mapped
8. 01:37:222 (3) - NC here oke3
9. 02:04:972 (7) - NC here oke4
10. 02:22:305 (1,2) - Blanket can be slightly improved. same as above
11. 02:28:527 (4,5) - I don't really see relevancy of pitch here for a stack... I think it should be better for (5) to stack on (6). changed
12. 03:01:194 (7,8,1) - Stacking triplets makes the map look better. Besides, since the BPM is slower here than the previous parts, I think it is fine for a stacked triplet. I want this one to stand out because it's different from the 4 note burst found in the same chorus

That is all for me. Sorry if the mod felt like bit of wall of nazi comments :/
Call me back anytime for a recheck for easier diffs, I think they can be improved even more.
GL!

Rokkea wrote:

yoo
[General]

can you clarify why the last diff is called 'Chen'? it'll be helpful for the rank! Did so, it's now clear on the map description with source material ^^

[Easy]

1. 00:18:472 (1) - remove NC here or here 00:16:972 (1) - . removed on the last note
2. 00:57:472 (4) - imo gap is far enough to warrant itself a NC. yep, and I didn't have it consistent with the equivalent part ahead, changed
3. 00:30:472 (1,2) - somewhat an opinion/not an opinion - it is painful for easy players to start with a circle, hence i recommend this rhythm instead. good point, fixed
4. 01:11:722 (3) - blanket it properly. prob moved it by mistake, fixed
5. 01:54:097 (1) - consider removing this for a similar reason as ^^, if not remove NC at 01:54:472 (1) - . will have to deny this one as the strong note is right after the single. removed NC
6. 02:21:416 (5) - that is pretty high, almost touching the hp bar. bring it down please! it doesn't touch it unless you have a huge HP bar / hitcircle ; ;
7. 02:27:638 (1) - remove NC here for consistency. oke

[Normal]

1. 01:54:472 (1) - remove NC here. forgot to remove it oops, done
2. 02:09:472 (1,2) - i feel that the entire pattern drags on for way too long. maybe changing to this might help. it's fairly easy to do though, I don't think it will confuse players, I'll consider it though

[Hard]

1. 00:31:409 (5) - NC here. Done
2. 00:32:159 (1) - the reverse part of the slider catches no sound at all, hence i suggest this rhythm (i changed (8) as well). also remove NC here. it catches the guitar, and that's what it is following, I don't want to follow different instruments in different diffs, that's the reaosn I'm keeping it
3. 00:34:409 (5) - NC here. here I'm following the main beat and not the pattern, hence why I'm keeping combos this way, basically the NC's start with every big white tick (when you hear the snare)
4. 00:37:409 (5) - NC here.
5. 00:38:159 (1) - same thing as ^
6. 00:40:409 (5) - NC here.
7. 00:59:534 (3) - you should map this part according to drums as it's very noticeable, that means 1/4 streams/sliders. I didn't because I don't want to overmap the hard diff, since I already have a lot of 1/4's in other patterns
8. 01:08:722 (4,5) - blanket them properly so that it looks and plays out cleaner. changed a bit, but I really don't want to curve them a lot more
9. 01:13:597 (5) - for it to look cleaner, it should have the same curviness as (4) and it should also blanket (2). good one, fixed
10. 01:41:628 (8) - imo this should be a circle, and a slider on the blue tick afterwards that stretches out to 01:42:284. it's just an idea though. not a bad idea, but if I used a blue tick there it would either be too close or too far from the last note
11. 01:56:722 (7) - it looks fairly ugly, i suggest curving it such that it blankets (1) like this. it creates a bit of anti flow though, I'll think about it
12. 02:06:472 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i do not understand the rhythm here, it feels like an excuse for this pattern. why not map according to vocals? because if mapping only the vocals sliders would be too big, this way I can map following both things
13. 03:01:194 (7,8,1) - i just feel like they should stack, maybe it's because of the music. I really want to keep this, personal taste sry xd

Good luck!

Rokkea wrote:

[DavidEd's Insane]

1. 00:17:159 (2,3,4) - unrealistically far for a 4.38. please decrease the overall distance. just a tiny bit or it will be awkward to play
2. 00:23:722 (1) - with that distance, i couldn't even tell that it had 1/4 spacing until i went to the editor. that jump needs to be nerfed. fix
3. 00:53:722 (3,4,5,6,7) - i don't understand this needless spacing. maybe bring them to where (2) is. wouldnt play well enough
4. 01:52:597 - 50% volume here. if there's no sound, players might not realise the spinner ended here. ill try this for now
5. 01:53:628 (6) - players undoubtly will think that it's 1/2 rhythm here when it's 1/4. consistent dist. flow please!
6. 02:03:847 (2) - ctrl+g so that players will look up instead of down, where the slider is pointing towards to. fix
7. 02:05:722 (3,4,5,6,7) - it's too far! same as above
8. 02:11:909 (2) - i recommend removing it as i don't think there's sound here... listen to the drums in the song again
9. 02:12:284 (4,5,1) - too far! make it like a normal stream instead. moved it closer

1. 00:06:659 (1,2) - The stack is kinda unreasonable, the second stack note is the strong note and it feels a bit awkward, try stacking 1 on 00:06:097 (5) - instead, will be nicer.
2. 00:07:034 (3) - If you accepted my last suggestion, I highly recommend stacking this on 00:06:847 (2) -
3. 00:07:222 (4,5) - This doesn't flow really well, seems a bit underwhelming too, if I may suggest a pattern if you accepted the last suggestion: http://puu.sh/j36dq/2beb51af16.jpg it emphasizes the stronger beats nicely and flows good too.
4. 00:11:722 (9) - Should be snapped on 1/6 ticks and not 1/8
5. 00:12:097 (3,4,5,6,1) - I recommend making the spacing in this 5 note stream bigger because the notes here are stronger than before.
6. 00:18:097 (7,8,9,10,1) - This is not an ordinary 5 notes stream, you should highlight it by making the spacing here really small or really big.
7. 00:20:253 (4,5) - Try this pattern instead: http://puu.sh/j36x4/bb06eb8042.jpg avoids awkward gap and the strong beat is being pressed by the player, which feels much nicer to play.
8. 00:24:472 (1,2) - They look odd together, try increasing the distance between them so they won't overlap maybe?
9. 00:26:253 (4,5) - Just note that I like this pattern and you shouldn't change it like the one before, since 5 doesn't end on a strong beat and it sounds and plays nice with the spacings and such.
10. 00:32:909 (6,7,8) - Those should be somehow different from 00:32:159 (2,3,4,5) - , they sound different!
11. 00:36:284 (10) - Push it away, something like x20 y72, since the slider before then starts on a strong beat, and it feels kinda necessary to have a jump like before, if you do that, consider moving 00:36:472 (1) - to stack on 9, because it will look nicer and overlaps avoided.
12. 00:38:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like before
13. 00:39:847 (3,4) - Yeah I really don't like that spacing change, also the whole pattern is lined up and it feels weird.
14. 01:01:597 (4,5,1) - How about making a perfect triangle?
15. 01:11:722 (6,7) - A bit random, try making something interesting like I suggested at the beginning.
16. 01:14:722 (5) - Spacing feels underwhelming, distance between 4 and 5 is smaller than 3 and 4, while 5 lands on a strong beat.
17. 01:31:222 (6,7,8,1,2) - Fuck that's cool
18. 01:45:472 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern a bit boring, 5 notes stream to a triplet that together create some shape would be cool.
19. 01:48:472 (1,2,3,4) - ^
20. 01:53:347 (5,6) - Should be one reversed 1/6 slider.
21. 02:37:416 (5,6,7,8,1) - BUT WHY DID YOU LOWER THE DS? It was damn good so far.
22. 03:13:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to change positions so the big jumps will be ONLY on the claps, it will play better.

1. 00:11:722 (7) - Pretty sure that's supposed to be snapped on 1/6
2. 00:16:034 (4,5) - Stack them to be consistent with the pattern, also new placement is recommended, because the current one is too close for both.
3. 00:16:972 (1) - Should be a 1/6 reversed slider
4. 00:17:534 (4) - I suggest changing it to 2 circles, since 00:17:347 (3) - has strong beats but the sliders are literally the same for different stuff.
5. 01:08:534 (3) - y236 to stack properly
6. 01:31:222 (1,2,3) - Would be much cooler if they were the same slider but slightly rotated each time.
7. 01:53:628 (6,1) - Yeah the spacing is too extreme for an Insane difficulty.
8. 02:04:972 (1,2) - Remove one reverse from each, the jumps are insane.
9. 02:31:194 (1) - 1/6
10. 02:31:527 (2,3) - Yeah.. don't please, this would be unreasonable even for an Extra.
11. 02:41:860 (1,2,3) - Equal DS would be nice.
12. 02:53:638 (4,5,6,7) - 1/6 are too difficult for an Insane, please consider making a circle and a slider or just a slider.

Avishay wrote:

Hey, thanks for using my queue, here's my mod!
[DavidEd's Insane]

1. 00:11:722 (7) - Pretty sure that's supposed to be snapped on 1/6 fix
2. 00:16:034 (4,5) - Stack them to be consistent with the pattern, also new placement is recommended, because the current one is too close for both. too long of an explanation. long story short; wouldnt feel right to play (for me at least)
3. 00:16:972 (1) - Should be a 1/6 reversed slider since i'm following the drums here, it wouldnt make sense.
4. 00:17:534 (4) - I suggest changing it to 2 circles, since 00:17:347 (3) - has strong beats but the sliders are literally the same for different stuff. considered, but not changed
5. 01:08:534 (3) - y236 to stack properly fix
6. 01:31:222 (1,2,3) - Would be much cooler if they were the same slider but slightly rotated each time.kinda fixed?
7. 01:53:628 (6,1) - Yeah the spacing is too extreme for an Insane difficulty. fix
8. 02:04:972 (1,2) - Remove one reverse from each, the jumps are insane. reduced spacing
9. 02:31:194 (1) - 1/6 fix
10. 02:31:527 (2,3) - Yeah.. don't please, this would be unreasonable even for an Extra. fix
11. 02:41:860 (1,2,3) - Equal DS would be nice.fix
12. 02:53:638 (4,5,6,7) - 1/6 are too difficult for an Insane, please consider making a circle and a slider or just a slider. fix, ill keep the 2nd one tho.(for now i guess)

Good luck!

Avishay wrote:

Hey, thanks for using my queue, here's my mod!

All my purple answers will be tested at home as I'm mapping on my laptop right now and it's really hard to check Extra diffs properly and don't want to ruin anything.

[Chen]

1. 00:06:659 (1,2) - The stack is kinda unreasonable, the second stack note is the strong note and it feels a bit awkward, try stacking 1 on 00:06:097 (5) - instead, will be nicer. changed
2. 00:07:034 (3) - If you accepted my last suggestion, I highly recommend stacking this on 00:06:847 (2) - I wanted to keep this the same though
3. 00:07:222 (4,5) - This doesn't flow really well, seems a bit underwhelming too, if I may suggest a pattern if you accepted the last suggestion: http://puu.sh/j36dq/2beb51af16.jpg it emphasizes the stronger beats nicely and flows good too. I'll have to test this better at home, to check flow, but keeping for now
4. 00:11:722 (9) - Should be snapped on 1/6 ticks and not 1/8 HOW DID I NOT NOTICE THIS ; ; changed
5. 00:12:097 (3,4,5,6,1) - I recommend making the spacing in this 5 note stream bigger because the notes here are stronger than before. did so
6. 00:18:097 (7,8,9,10,1) - This is not an ordinary 5 notes stream, you should highlight it by making the spacing here really small or really big. it feels allright in its current state I think
7. 00:20:253 (4,5) - Try this pattern instead: http://puu.sh/j36x4/bb06eb8042.jpg avoids awkward gap and the strong beat is being pressed by the player, which feels much nicer to play. not sure about this, but I'll give it a go on my desktop
8. 00:24:472 (1,2) - They look odd together, try increasing the distance between them so they won't overlap maybe? this is on purpose due to the timing difference between them
9. 00:26:253 (4,5) - Just note that I like this pattern and you shouldn't change it like the one before, since 5 doesn't end on a strong beat and it sounds and plays nice with the spacings and such. ^^
10. 00:32:909 (6,7,8) - Those should be somehow different from 00:32:159 (2,3,4,5) - , they sound different! I wanted to map the guitar here, and that doesn't change, the kicks are still "mapped" in the hitsounds though
11. 00:36:284 (10) - Push it away, something like x20 y72, since the slider before then starts on a strong beat, and it feels kinda necessary to have a jump like before, if you do that, consider moving 00:36:472 (1) - to stack on 9, because it will look nicer and overlaps avoided. I want to keep the same DS between all kicksliders, for consistency
12. 00:38:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like before I like this pattern ; ; but I'll check
13. 00:39:847 (3,4) - Yeah I really don't like that spacing change, also the whole pattern is lined up and it feels weird. I will definately change this, but when I get home xd
14. 01:01:597 (4,5,1) - How about making a perfect triangle? had to rotate the next patern to improve flow, I think it's better like this
15. 01:11:722 (6,7) - A bit random, try making something interesting like I suggested at the beginning. same as the beginning
16. 01:14:722 (5) - Spacing feels underwhelming, distance between 4 and 5 is smaller than 3 and 4, while 5 lands on a strong beat. I'm not going for huge jumps on the snares, just want to keep spacing in the chorus as a whole consistent
17. 01:31:222 (6,7,8,1,2) - Fuck that's cool c:
18. 01:45:472 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern a bit boring, 5 notes stream to a triplet that together create some shape would be cool. nice idea! will change it when I can test it properly ; ;
19. 01:48:472 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
20. 01:53:347 (5,6) - Should be one reversed 1/6 slider. agreed, I'll have to test it though, hard thing to change without ruining pattern
21. 02:37:416 (5,6,7,8,1) - BUT WHY DID YOU LOWER THE DS? It was damn good so far. because it gets boring due to repetition
22. 03:13:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to change positions so the big jumps will be ONLY on the claps, it will play better.will have to test this

Good luck! Thanks!

1. the vocal isn't merami, its Kakichoco so you might add "Kakichoco" and "Kakicho" (her short name used on Nico Nico Douga/utaite) to the tags and delete merami instead
   http://vgmdb.net/album/37029

1. 00:31:972 (3) - : the slider is really awkward since the vocal is on 00:32:347 - , how about make the slider repeat on white tick or use this rhythm? adding a little break for Easy diff isnt that bad~
   
2. 00:37:972 (3) - : ^
3. 01:49:972 (1) - : extend this slider till 01:52:972 - and add clap? current one is really have a big space with next note
4. 02:16:972 (1) - : isn't the rhythm supposed to be like this? this slider should end at the blue tick to follow the vocal. I know it'll be hard for players but making this as slider wouldn't be so hard to catch + it's support the rhythm perfectly
   
5. 02:20:083 - 02:20:972 - 02:21:860 - 02:22:749 - 02:23:638 - etc. : i think it'll be great if you add drum-whistle sound here
6. 02:32:083 (4) - : this slider flows awkward for me, it'll be nice if its curved to above tho.. q-q
   
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7. 02:39:638 (3) - : remove clap, doesn't support anything. the clap sound should be on the head only
8. good diff

1. 00:31:409 (2,3) - : the vocal start on 00:31:972 - so this rhythm would be fit ._. (remove 1 repeat on slider 2 and start slider 3 1/2 before)
   
2. 00:37:409 (2,3) - : ^
3. 00:55:222 (3,4) - : the slider repeat should be on blue tick (00:55:503 - ) and slider 4 should be started on 1/2 before (00:56:159 - )
4. 01:17:722 (4,5) - : eeeh don't introduce triplet yet on normal diff ;w; it's hard for beginner orz.. just make this as normal 1/2 sliders
5. 01:18:097 (5,1) - : watch out for the ds
6. 01:49:972 (1) - : same as Easy
7. 02:07:222 (3,4) - : same as 00:55:222 -
8. 02:16:972 (1) - : same as Easy
9. 02:20:083 - 02:20:972 - 02:21:860 - 02:22:749 - 02:23:638 - etc. : i think it'll be great if you add drum-whistle sound here (same as easy)
10. 02:26:305 (4) - : it's break your pattern NC tho, so add NC here?
11. 03:15:416 (1) - : don't use triplet yet on normal diff ;w;

1. 00:22:972 (1) - : I think the blanketing is a bit bad, fix the blanket please?
2. 02:16:972 (1) - : same as easy
3. 02:20:083 - 02:20:972 - 02:21:860 - 02:22:749 - 02:23:638 - etc. : i think it'll be great if you add drum-whistle sound here (same as easy)
4. 02:37:860 (4) - : move this to 260 128 would make good blanket

1. 00:11:722 (7,8) - : reducing the distance would be better since 7 is 1/6 slider, i think it'll be a bit hard to catch the next pattern (except you make 00:12:097 (8,9,10,11) - as slider streams)
2. 00:23:722 (4) - : ctrl+g this slider would make it easy to catch next pattern imo (since the slider end is pointing to next stream)
3. nice

1. 01:42:472 (9) - : add finish? its too bad you ignored this loud cymbal sound
2. 02:16:972 (1) - : same as easy
3. 02:20:083 - 02:20:972 - 02:21:860 - 02:22:749 - 02:23:638 - etc. : i think it'll be great if you add drum-whistle sound here (same as easy)
4. 02:22:194 (5,1) - : mind to reduce the ds? i meant, player miss-read this one tho
5. 02:29:194 (7,8,1) - : ^
6. 02:53:416 (4,5) - : unstack them? i think player can miss-read this one (since there'll be 1/6 so it's better to unstack)

10nya wrote:

from my queue~
[DavidEd's]

1. 00:11:722 (7,8) - : reducing the distance would be better since 7 is 1/6 slider, i think it'll be a bit hard to catch the next pattern (except you make 00:12:097 (8,9,10,11) - as slider streams) moved it up a little without ruining the structure
2. 00:23:722 (4) - : ctrl+g this slider would make it easy to catch next pattern imo (since the slider end is pointing to next stream) fix
3. nice thanks ;v;

10nya wrote:

whoops almost forgot, vgmdb said the title is "Stay by my side" without any capital + the official page said it http://dte.dotera.net/2012/swl.html

1. 00:11:722 (9) - for me, i will stop the reverse on 00:11:909 -
2. 00:16:972 (1,2,3,4) - hitsound on this part kinda weird, you can add clap on 00:16:972 (1) - too
3. 00:26:253 (4) - wrong whistle on sliderslide?
4. 00:29:347 (5) - ^
5. 00:51:472 (1,2,3,4) - straight like 00:51:847 (1,2,3,4) - ?
   
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6. 01:31:222 (6) - nc
7. 01:34:222 (7) - ^
8. 01:37:222 (6) - ^
9. 01:40:222 (7) - ^
10. 02:31:194 (1,1) - rhythm like this? just suggestion
    
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11. 02:37:416 (5) - nc, ds changed like 02:35:638 (1) - , also you can add nc on 02:34:749 (5) - too, if you like

1. 00:11:909 - 00:12:003 - i hear have 1/4 here
2. 01:31:784 (2) - why stop at 1/3? not like 01:31:222 (1,3) - stop at 1/4
3. 01:53:347 (5) - it should be 1/6 on 01:53:409 - 01:53:472 - 01:53:534 -

1. 00:30:472 (1) - not recommend to use too much reverse like this(reverse 2 times), because you have used 00:35:722 (4) - on same map(reverse 1 times), i think it would be easy to confuse player
2. 01:00:847 (2,5) - try don't stack like this in normal
3. 01:17:722 (4,5) - not recommend use 1/4 reverse in normal, use 1/1 is better
4. 01:49:972 (1) - you can stop this spinner on 01:52:972 -

Rizia wrote:

[DavidEd's Insane]

1. 00:11:909 - 00:12:003 - i hear have 1/4 here if you listen to the mp3 alone you can hear the 1/6 roll.
2. 01:31:784 (2) - why stop at 1/3? not like 01:31:222 (1,3) - stop at 1/4 was not intentional, mustve forgotten about it
3. 01:53:347 (5) - it should be 1/6 on 01:53:409 - 01:53:472 - 01:53:534 - fix