Hi'
pretty good overall, im a bit afraid about the spread on higher difficulties tho.
[Kantan]
- maybe del - 00:57:234 (24) - and - 00:59:850 (30) - ? kinda long for beginners.
applied.- move - 01:03:774 (38) - to - 01:03:120 - as k ? reversed pattern + leave some space before the slider like at - 00:32:384 -.
umm, keeping now. i think kdk-dkd pattern is bit hard.- 01:10:640 (49) - sounds more like D.
K is better imo.- 01:20:123 (55) - maybe move to - 01:20:77 - ? notes in 4/1 then 2/1 then 1/1.
- 01:36:144 (71,72,73) - sounds more like kkD.
i wanted to put K on (73), so keeping now.- remove - 01:43:011 (81) - and add finisher at - 01:43:992 (83) - ? sounds better.
it finishers pattern is bit noisy for me. but i'll reconsider it.[Futsuu]
- 00:42:684 (76) - at least remove this one ? clearly sounds like k k while ddd fits better before. i understand why you prefer to use kkk to fit the previous ddd but think about the incoming slider too é_è.
fixed- remove - 00:48:079 (88,90) - ? they are not needed and to emphasize the piano melody.
I keep these to in order to avoid boredom.- 00:52:330 - 00:54:945 - this part should be much more easier imo, doesn't support the huge ddddd etc, try this :
=> K K D kkd
- 01:08:024 - 01:10:640 - try k d k d kkd kkd K instead of d k d k d kkk d K ? to reverse the previous part.
- 01:19:469 (162) - refer to the muzu.
- 01:47:262 - 01:49:887 - mm too much notes here imo, maybe try this :
Here is climax of song, so little hard pattern can stay.a bit more simple but fits more the song imo.
[Muzukashii]
you should ask some hight placed peoples about the use of 1/3 in some parts, all your 1/3 are justified but maybe too much for a muzu, example : - 01:42:357 - and - 01:48:896 - mostly. Make that kiai pretty hard.
- 00:24:700 (44) - remove ? not needed.
- 00:27:316 (55) -, - 00:29:932 (67) -, - 00:32:548 (78) - ^.
- remove - 00:42:684 (126,128) - ? emphasize piano and give more break.
- remove - 01:45:463 (34) - ? feels more the reversed style.
[Oni]
the difficulty jump from muzu to this diff is kinda big, my last map got disqualified for this reason so i tried to point the "too hard" things i found.
- 00:33:365 (120) - change to k + maybe remove - 00:33:774 (125) - ?
- 00:43:501 - 00:44:155 - kkddk k d instead of k dkddkkd, + also remove - 00:44:319 (202) - ? to make it easier, this pattern is kinda hard and the spread Muzu/Oni can be pointed for such patterns.
- 00:50:041 - i would suggest to use the same as - 00:44:809 - again.
- 01:04:101 - this pattern is kinda big again, i would suggest to remove some notes or find something a bit different.
- remove - 01:30:341 (451) - and - 01:30:668 (455) - ? ^.
- 01:47:589 - kinda long again x_x.
[Inner Oni]
- 00:45:245 - 00:45:572 - these breaks are not needed anymore, - 00:44:700 - 00:46:117 - here is the pattern is use in my own Inner for this map (yeah i mapped it too é_è) :
try something similar if you like it ?
- 00:46:281 - mm this is not 1/3 anymore here imo :c.
- 00:51:512 - ^.
changedmm i don't have much things to say x_x pretty cool to play even so i mapped it differently (the spread Oni/Inner is pretty huge too lol, i hope this is not a problem again).
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Good luck'