Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size) · forum

MirinH

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MirinH 2015-07-12T00:37:20+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August 7, 2015 at 12:50:55 AM

Artist: Tada Aoi
Title: Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)
Source: Charlotte
Tags: 麻枝准シャーロット ANANT-GRADE EYES Bravely You Maeda Jun P.A.WORKS Key IamKwaN Alex_Li
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15162kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2.71 stars, 191 notes)
Insane (3.39 stars, 273 notes)
KwaN's Easy (1.34 stars, 83 notes)
Normal (1.72 stars, 105 notes)

Download: Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)
Download: Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5TH MAPSET

TVアニメ「Charlotte(シャーロット)」EDOP by Enjoy ED2 by Rizia

Map set

by IamKwaN

by me

Try TT Mouse's awesome diff here

Last edited by MirinH 2015-08-07T07:51:27+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Rizia

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Rizia 2015-07-13T06:25:10+00:00

hi

MirinH

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Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-13T06:28:03+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
hi

this wkyik

Last edited by MirinH 2015-07-15T05:29:33+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

zyoi

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zyoi 2015-07-13T06:40:26+00:00

Li grandpa owo

Hakurei Yoru

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Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2015-07-14T09:45:46+00:00

waaaaaaaaaa

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2015-07-15T05:02:56+00:00

water!

[Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390621

[Hard]

00:15:238 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 節奏上有點怪怪的
00:15:238 (7) - 可以改折返，然後把00:15:584 (8) - delete
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390581 排列大概是這樣的(我排的排版就不要管了太懶截圖w
00:17:546 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390587
00:52:161 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390593 :3 ?
01:02:546 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390612
01:30:930 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390614

[Insane]
00:33:007 (2,4) - 4跟2碰到了, 分開點:<?
01:17:546 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390640

加油爺爺ˊ3ˋ

MirinH

726 posts

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Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-15T05:05:32+00:00

Enjoy wrote:
water!

[Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390621 我覺得現在這樣還好吧

[Hard]

00:15:238 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 節奏上有點怪怪的跟的鋼琴
00:15:238 (7) - 可以改折返，然後把00:15:584 (8) - delete這裡不是三連
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390581 排列大概是這樣的(我排的排版就不要管了太懶截圖w節奏不對 b(￣▽￣)d
00:17:546 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390587 節奏不對
00:52:161 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390593 :3 ? k
01:02:546 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390612k
01:30:930 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390614節奏不對

[Insane]
00:33:007 (2,4) - 4跟2碰到了, 分開點:<?no
01:17:546 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390640k

加油爺爺ˊ3ˋ

thx

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2015-07-15T06:44:30+00:00

tv size怎么没视频
[Insane]
00:04:853 (2,2) - 这两个删了，或者都跟其他难度一样放1个note。两个感觉怪怪的
00:16:853 (6,1) - 平行。现在的6歪了一点
00:35:084 (3,1) - 这个Blanket很明显歪了
01:23:776 (1) - 这个长白线不要略过比较好吧

[Hard]
01:02:776 clap?

[Normal]
01:28:161 (4) - 弯一下？

神图摸个毛啊

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-15T07:04:16+00:00

From qq群 request^^

[General]

深藍色的那個combo建議弄淺點，和BG太像了

[Normal]

00:20:315 (2,3) - 弄彎
SPOILER
00:26:776 (1,3) - 疊的不夠正，3應該要再放左一點
00:32:084 - 這個vocal最好不要漏掉，和前面3組成一個滑條也行
01:27:007 (2) - 順著放會好點？
SPOILER
01:30:930 (3) - 弄成微彎
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:16:046 (2,3,4,5) - 這種我覺得有點難看，把3弄彎然後和5 blanket的話會好看點
SPOILER
00:30:469 (1,2) - 滑條1的尾部疊到2的中間去
SPOILER

00:59:546 (6) - 這個同方向滑條切了flow，因此強調了vocal，但這裡沒有強調vocal的必要，因為你後面也沒有，所以建議ctrl+G吧
01:19:623 (2) - 弄彎
01:20:084 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
01:21:699 (6,1) - ^

[Insane]

00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket？
00:38:546 (2,1) - 2疊到1的中間去，像上面難度說的那些
00:45:238 (1) - 這個位置沒有強調的需要，會顯得有點生硬，所以還是順flow吧，另外滑條6的方向也要向上，像這樣
SPOILER
00:48:930 (1) - 弄彎
01:13:853 (6,7) - blanket？
01:23:084 (5,6) - 這裡也沒有強調的需要，切flow顯得不太好，所以試試這樣？
SPOILER

做的非常好，祝順利起飛~

MirinH

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Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-15T07:18:07+00:00

sodarose wrote:
tv size怎么没视频我是看下個ep，因為這個ep的視頻跟音頻都是漸入的
[Insane]
00:04:853 (2,2) - 这两个删了，或者都跟其他难度一样放1个note。两个感觉怪怪的說的也是
00:16:853 (6,1) - 平行。现在的6歪了一点爺爺這麼nazi你都挑的出來
00:35:084 (3,1) - 这个Blanket很明显歪了你們太厲害
01:23:776 (1) - 这个长白线不要略过比较好吧跟ins

[Hard]
01:02:776 clap? 吵

[Normal]
01:28:161 (4) - 弯一下？i like straight

神图摸个毛啊

Kencho wrote:
From qq群 request^^
[General]
深藍色的那個combo建議弄淺點，和BG太像了噫

[Normal]
00:20:315 (2,3) - 弄彎我喜歡現在這種
SPOILER
00:26:776 (1,3) - 疊的不夠正，3應該要再放左一點怎麼這麼nazi
00:32:084 - 這個vocal最好不要漏掉，和前面3組成一個滑條也行我這裡準備換軌了，於是漏一個音提醒，但是如果後面有人說就改
01:27:007 (2) - 順著放會好點？我喜歡反向flow
SPOILER
01:30:930 (3) - 弄成微彎還好
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:16:046 (2,3,4,5) - 這種我覺得有點難看，把3弄彎然後和5 blanket的話會好看點我覺得還行啊
SPOILER
00:30:469 (1,2) - 滑條1的尾部疊到2的中間去算了我再懶得修nazi
SPOILER

00:59:546 (6) - 這個同方向滑條切了flow，因此強調了vocal，但這裡沒有強調vocal的必要，因為你後面也沒有，所以建議ctrl+G吧好像不錯
01:19:623 (2) - 弄彎噫
01:20:084 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
01:21:699 (6,1) - ^ 不blanket

[Insane]
00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket？看不出
00:38:546 (2,1) - 2疊到1的中間去，像上面難度說的那些爺爺
00:45:238 (1) - 這個位置沒有強調的需要，會顯得有點生硬，所以還是順flow吧，另外滑條6的方向也要向上，像這樣不好看
SPOILER
00:48:930 (1) - 弄彎噫
01:13:853 (6,7) - blanket？no
01:23:084 (5,6) - 這裡也沒有強調的需要，切flow顯得不太好，所以試試這樣？我覺得蠻好
SPOILER

做的非常好，祝順利起飛~

thx

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-07-15T08:09:32+00:00

神图只能水摸

[G]
我感觉这个preview point offset不对

[I]
连打音效最好下满点

00:27:699 (3,4,5) - 不等距么，5再远点也正好可以不被那个蛋疼的(1)遮
00:33:007 (2,4) - 半碰不碰的最不好看
00:44:776 (6,1) - ^
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音效下满点，否则overmap嫌疑, 因为那些实际有的音实在太轻
01:15:699 (4) - ctrl+g? 好像flow更自然点

[H]
00:44:084 (3,4,1) - 似乎有点挤
01:08:084 (2) - 详见AIMOD

[N]
00:22:161 (4,1) - 你懂

-Hatano Kokoro-

70 posts

Joined March 2014

-Hatano Kokoro- 2015-07-15T08:30:29+00:00

楼主好，我来求M4M的https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329330，以下是我的摸
[Timing（所有难度）]

Kiai音效感觉很违和，建议换成轻柔的音效，比如原音效
Kiai时间短于15秒，不需要放中间那间隙：01:03:238 到 01:03:699 与 01:18:007 到 01:18:469。

[Normal]

01:30:930 (3) - 滑条后端放错音效了，按hard和insane的做法应该放finish
00:48:007 与 00:48:469 漏两音，不想放单点就放滑条吧
00:35:315 (3) - 建议滑条换为单点
00:04:623 (1,1) - 没听见鼓点，可以去掉这两个

[Hard]

00:17:315 此处建议放单点与00:17:430 (6,1) 形成三连打
00:31:853 (3,1) - 建议改为：00:31:853 单点。00:32:084到00:32:315 滑条。00:32:546 单点。00:32:776 到00:32:892 滑条。
00:33:123到00:33:238 滑条。可以不用nc。摆法...看你心情摆。这样歌词和鼓点都能跟上。

[*]00:46:161 (3) - 滑条尾部不建议放音效
[*]01:18:007 (6) - 同上
[*]01:29:084 (6) - 同上

[Insane]

00:47:546 (2,3) - 建议改为1/4连打
其他做的很好，我没什么好摸的

[other]

摆放很好，祝楼主能早rank

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-15T12:05:38+00:00

摸到一半我就想做GD怎么办(;w;

MirinH

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Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-15T18:56:36+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
摸到一半我就想做GD怎么办(;w;

sry but im not taking any gd

MirinH

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Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-15T20:47:23+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
神图只能水摸

[G]
我感觉这个preview point offset不对 k

[I]
连打音效最好下满点

00:27:699 (3,4,5) - 不等距么，5再远点也正好可以不被那个蛋疼的(1)遮我覺得還好
00:33:007 (2,4) - 半碰不碰的最不好看
00:44:776 (6,1) - ^ 不修nazi
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音效下满点，否则overmap嫌疑, 因为那些实际有的音实在太轻 k
01:15:699 (4) - ctrl+g? 好像flow更自然点還好

[H]
00:44:084 (3,4,1) - 似乎有点挤改了一點
01:08:084 (2) - 详见AIMOD o

[N]
00:22:161 (4,1) - 你懂 nAzImAsTeR

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:
楼主好，我来求M4M的https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329330，以下是我的摸
[Timing（所有难度）]
Kiai音效感觉很违和，建议换成轻柔的音效，比如原音效
Kiai时间短于15秒，不需要放中间那间隙：01:03:238 到 01:03:699 与 01:18:007 到 01:18:469。都還好啊我覺得。。。
[Normal]
01:30:930 (3) - 滑条后端放错音效了，按hard和insane的做法应该放finish finish是後面那個轉盤開始那裡才有的
00:48:007 与 00:48:469 漏两音，不想放单点就放滑条吧轉盤後面要隔一個bar
00:35:315 (3) - 建议滑条换为单点太難
00:04:623 (1,1) - 没听见鼓点，可以去掉这两个之前也在考慮，現在去了
[Hard]
00:17:315 此处建议放单点与00:17:430 (6,1) 形成三连打這裡是二連
00:31:853 (3,1) - 建议改为：00:31:853 单点。00:32:084到00:32:315 滑条。00:32:546 单点。00:32:776 到00:32:892 滑条。打擊感美麗
00:33:123到00:33:238 滑条。可以不用nc。摆法...看你心情摆。这样歌词和鼓点都能跟上。
[*]00:46:161 (3) - 滑条尾部不建议放音效噫，不可以嗎
[*]01:18:007 (6) - 同上
[*]01:29:084 (6) - 同上

[Insane]
00:47:546 (2,3) - 建议改为1/4连打為什麼啊
其他做的很好，我没什么好摸的
[other]
摆放很好，祝楼主能早rank

thx for the mods

meii18

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meii18 2015-07-15T20:54:49+00:00

You can call me for bubble after you'll receive more mods

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-15T21:39:42+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
You can call me for bubble after you'll receive more mods

ahh thx byby chan

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2015-07-15T23:37:19+00:00

M4M from your queue:

Tt'Insane

Fix your hitsound volumes, everything's at 100%, and it's all really loud .-.

00:17:546 (9) - NC
00:17:776 (1,2) - ... This slider is dumb, the spacing here is uncalled for, and this rhythm choice doesn't match up well with 00:18:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , which is what you're obviously intending. Use this rhythm.

You use the same rhythm from 00:19:392 (1) - to 00:33:930 (7) - , but if you listen closely, a lot of measures don't suggest this rhythm, but instead let their heavier beats land on blue or red ticks. For example, 00:22:046 - holds a heavier beat than 00:22:161 (5) - ; 00:23:776 - and 00:23:892 - are just as relevent as anything surrounding them; 00:25:738 - is really strong; etc. Think more about your rhythm choices throughout this part, because right now they're really arbitrary and unrewarding.

Starting from 00:34:161 (1) - up to about 00:45:007 (4) - , it's almost like a completely different map, with no real 1/4 parts to speak of. I get that the vocals have picked up a bit, so you can't have things be the exact same as before, but right now your map is lacking any real cohesion. Try adding some minor touches, like adding a note at 00:36:815 - , or changing 00:39:007 (4,5) - into a triplet.

01:01:161 (6,7,8,1) - I feel like there are better ways to arrange these notes instead of simple DS stuff, everything was so fluid before with all the 3/4 sliders and stuff, this is kinda boring. Maybe something like this is better?
01:09:238 (1) - Bowing this the other direction would be more enjoyable in my opinion.

Love the kiai, btw :3

---

Insane

00:53:661 (6) - Delete this one, the high pitch of 00:53:546 (5) - makes for a good ending to a stream sound. I also think you should consider adding a note to 00:53:199, I think that matches the instrumental better.
00:55:045 (3) - Delete this one, I don't thing such a long stream is called for here, and it makes more sense to start a stream at the keyboard-type sound of 00:55:160 (4) - .
01:20:084 (1,2,3,4) - Listen to the keyboard here and try to gear your rhythm choices around that. Your missing out on a great deal of the song with this current rhythm. Anything along the lines of this or this would be more appropriate.
01:30:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current 01:30:469 (5,6,1,2) - angle seems pretty steep, maybe something like this would be better?

---

Hard

00:16:853 - You were following the keyboard pretty well up to this point, why not add a note and continue weaving all parts of the instrumental together?
00:41:546 (1) - Maybe try ctrl+g, I think it fits better.
00:48:007 (3,4) - Try .95x SV for a subtle buildup effect? The vocals here are much stronger than before.
01:10:161 (3,4,1) - Things seem the tiniest bit jerky here, I think something of this nature fixes that.
01:25:853 (1,2) - This is an unrewarding use of slider leniency, the music calls for the player to be bouncing over each of 1's sliderends, not cutting corners like this. Structuring your sliders in a manner along these lines would be a better experience overall.

---

Normal

00:26:776 (1,2) - Try to avoid letting repeated sliderends be so close to the next note like this. Right now the player is going to cut away from the final 1 sliderend, which is suboptimal for what the song calls for here. Aim it over here or so.

Good luck! I hope you find an mp3 that doesn't have that annoying dialogue in it ;c

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2015-07-16T02:09:00+00:00

[Normal]

00:18:238 (4) - like this ?

SPOILER

00:22:161 (4,1) - apart little

00:31:161 (2) - slider end at 00:32:084 ?

00:33:007 - add note will be better to play

00:48:930 (1,2,3) - like this ?

SPOILER

00:51:238 (4) - change to note

00:53:315 (2,3) - exchange feel better

01:06:469 (5) - straight slider ?

01:24:469 (5) - put on like (272,316)

SPOILER

01:27:007 (2,4) - change like this

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:13:161 - lost note ?

00:16:969 (5) - end at 00:17:315

00:23:315 - add note be well

00:41:084 (4) - copy the 00:40:161 (2) to it

00:48:930 (1) - (404,236)

00:51:238 (2,3,4) - try

SPOILER

00:53:430 (3) - delete

01:02:315 (2,3,4,5) - try

SPOILER

01:04:507 (3) - delete

01:08:084 (2) - no fit flow

01:24:007 (1) - change like ctrl+h ?

01:30:930 (3) - try

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:16:046 (3) - delete

00:23:315 - add note

00:33:007 (2) - (196,188)

00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket ?

00:37:046 (4) - delete

00:40:161 (2,3,4,5) - flow bad

00:46:276 (4) - delete

00:53:430 (4,6) - no sound , delete

01:11:892 (4) - ^

00:56:199 (10) - delete

01:02:892 (6) - delete

01:28:392 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - just try

SPOILER

[Tt'Insane]

00:17:315 (8,9) - try

SPOILER

00:18:007 (2) - a little far...like (128,336) ?

00:32:084 (7,1) - exchange ?

00:36:584 (2) - remove clap

01:02:892 (7) - ^

00:40:276 (2) - ^ same as like those place

00:47:084 (1) - change to note

00:49:623 - hitsound here is bad i think

00:57:007 - ^ same as like those place

01:09:007 (8) - ctrl+g

the Additions at Drum+clap is bad ,maybe change others ...

祝好运...写完发现可以用中文写,我真是....

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2015-07-16T02:27:08+00:00

From pm
水摸;w;

[Insane]
00:26:199 –把00:26:430 (5) –这个音放在这边，因为bpm低所以排列应该不用改也能玩
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –stream掰弯一点
01:02:315 –节奏改成

SPOILER

01:09:815 –delete，相对的，01:09:815 –这边加个音
因为按照前一个乐句你的节奏大概就是这么下的
01:17:892 –这边留空？那串slider怀疑是为难而难的……
这歌放insane感觉要overmap，有没有insane和hard之间的难度啊（

[Hard]
00:15:238 (7,8) –调换顺序，或者把7改成circle 再在00:15:353 –加一个note
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –这里为什么跟另一条音轨了……
00:28:853 (2) –ctrl+g
01:07:392 –到01:10:853 –的节奏请抄01:03:699 –到01:07:161 –，或者反过来两边都只跟vocal不管drum
01:30:930 (3) –直接一个circle，spinner提前到01:31:161 –
Hard的节奏的consistency似乎不够……或者说我又走上了某条不归路吗:3

[Normal]
00:32:315 (4) –提前至00:32:084 -?
其余的摸不动（泣）

上面有人说要给泡啦，果然yeye

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-07-16T03:31:06+00:00

既然你並不在意原曲的音色，那開頭你也可以試試把normal難度的00:12:469 - 00:14:315 - 的samplest 切為drum，還有insane難度的00:14:546 (5,6) - 切samplest 為drum，具體參考 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/425385

[Normal]

00:25:853 (4) - 這個我看過不少次，你不會是故意逗人吐槽的吧

[Hard]

00:16:046 (2,3) - 分開一點好讀一點

00:17:315 - 我覺得三連順手，主要還是討厭不是1/2和1/1但是接圈

01:30:930 (3) - 放連打或者三連或者最後一個放圈？總之我覺得應該要happy end

[Insane]

00:50:546 (1) - 這種遮擋我喜歡放長滑條中間……

01:17:084 (3) - 實際的堆疊效果來看這個和後面的連打是錯開的，可能你不希望這樣……可以人工堆疊把這排連打往左上走

00:54:238 (8) - 你好像是按旋律NC 的，那這個應該放紅線……可能你需要改很多

[T_T Insane]

全程100音量和一堆沒用的線不知道怎麼吐槽 = =

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-16T03:33:55+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Tt'Insane]

00:17:315 (8,9) - try
SPOILER
fixed
00:18:007 (2) - a little far...like (128,336) ?
k
00:32:084 (7,1) - exchange ?
no
00:36:584 (2) - remove clap
have downbeat here,no
01:02:892 (7) - ^

00:40:276 (2) - ^ same as like those place

00:47:084 (1) - change to note
keep
00:49:623 - hitsound here is bad i think

00:57:007 - ^ same as like those place

01:09:007 (8) - ctrl+g

the Additions at Drum+clap is bad ,maybe change others ... 单独拿出来听也还好，先不改

祝好运...写完发现可以用中文写,我真是....

Tt'Insane

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-16T04:42:55+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[T_T Insane]

全程100音量和一堆沒用的線不知道怎麼吐槽 = =

李师傅不知怎么弄得把我音效搞没了.....

edit: plz redwonload the Tt' insane if you mod it. or wait to mackenzie submit it

DreaM117er

1,596 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-07-16T08:10:59+00:00

晚了，抱歉

[General]

No.

[Normal]

01:05:084 - 這裡是Clap

[Hard]

00:05:546 - 00:07:392 - 00:09:238 - 00:11:084 - Break刪掉，不會影響。那個紅色箭頭看了就煩
01:09:699 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:29:084 (6) - ^

[Insane]

00:05:546 - 00:07:392 - 00:09:238 - 00:11:084 - 刪掉Break

期他我看是沒問題，自由連打有人喜歡有人不喜歡，我就不多說了

[Tt'Insane]

已經重載過了
00:16:161 (4) - 沒擺好
00:17:546 (9) - NC應該是這裡才對
00:17:776 (1,2) - 這個距離有點誇張，BPM130也要仁慈一些啊大哥
01:17:084 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle太多了，刪掉一些聽起來比較舒服

怎麼才過一天就找這麼多摸...很恐怖

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-16T08:51:43+00:00

嗚嗚我來晚了，你都找了這麼多摸了，不過我覺得這個EZ質量挺好的，沒有地方需要大改的

Kencho's Easy

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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-07-16T13:01:33+00:00

Metadata Proof.

我草??為啥kencho又做EZ?
我明明說了我放完了節奏

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-16T13:16:43+00:00

DreaM117er wrote:
[Tt'Insane]
已經重載過了 麻烦了:3
00:16:161 (4) - 沒擺好 k
00:17:546 (9) - NC應該是這裡才對 k
00:17:776 (1,2) - 這個距離有點誇張，BPM130也要仁慈一些啊大哥为了突出钢琴，实际是对in的距离来说不难
01:17:084 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle太多了，刪掉一些聽起來比較舒服 changed

怎麼才過一天就找這麼多摸...很恐怖

mod thxs!

changed some hitsounds。

puush Tt's Insane edit : changed puush link

PS again,redownload the Tt' insane if you mod it. or wait to mackenzie submit it,thnks!

Last edited by TtmnZk 2015-07-16T14:20:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-16T13:42:29+00:00

我不知道KwaN也接了EZ……那我那個不用了，用KwaN的EZ吧

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2015-07-16T15:36:57+00:00

M4M

Normal

00:04:623 (1,1,1,1) - 不和hard insane统一真的好吗？
00:18:469 (4,1) - 碰到了不好看
真挑不出什么啊

Hard

00:15:584 (8,1) - 开头漏whistle
00:54:930 (2) - 加上一个whistle比较好
01:00:007 (1,2,3,4) - 不blanket？
01:02:546 (4) - 真不建议折返这么多，实在不行建议拉回白线的位置然后再加一个
01:30:930 (3) - ^
01:15:238 (2) - 太近了

Insane

00:37:161 (5) - whistle
然后没什么了，就是00:51:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这种东西太偷懒了，质量不如hard高

Tt'Insane

00:20:315 (5) - 这种clap太吵啦
怎么音量都是100%？？？
00:36:007 (1,2) - 这种节奏有点莫名其妙
00:42:699 (4,5,6) - 间距没变化不好
kiai还好榻榻米啥时候摸我啊

good luck!

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-16T17:39:36+00:00

Wing My Way wrote:
M4M

Tt'Insane

00:20:315 (5) - 这种clap太吵啦
怎么音量都是100%？？？李师傅变魔术把我音效美丽（me run
00:36:007 (1,2) - 这种节奏有点莫名其妙这里节奏跟的鼓，你可以关掉音效光听歌，不会错的
00:42:699 (4,5,6) - 间距没变化不好 keep
kiai还好榻榻米啥时候摸我啊稍等哈
爷爷你怎么不看我上面写的....
good luck!

mod thx

edit: puush

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-17T05:30:20+00:00

I think grave the map is the best way to end all this

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-07-17T06:11:50+00:00

Tell me your final choice on this map.

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-17T06:22:44+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Tell me your final choice on this map.

Deleting all the gds,sorry but I don't want to do anything that enforced by myself anymore,I totally get that being mercy is nothing good and can only recive shit and negative responses
Thanks kwan,you though me a lesson

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-17T06:41:18+00:00

刪掉所有GD了，說真的，我不想再做我強迫自己做的事了，我覺得太善良根本得不到什麼，除了一堆不好的評價
感謝駿馬罵我，你給我上了一課

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-17T06:42:07+00:00

也有我的错，有点太强迫我现在有点不好意思了，可以的话就放到cw那里吧，抱歉了

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-17T06:53:00+00:00

……都說了刪掉我那個就好了，我最後加入的按理我的優先次序放在最後就好了，我不在意，帶上Kwan的EZ和ttm的in飛，他們都用了這麼多心血弄的，現在說刪就刪了，不就全部人都傷心了嗎

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-17T06:58:16+00:00

Kencho wrote:
……都說了刪掉我那個就好了，我最後加入的按理我的優先次序放在最後就好了，我不在意，帶上Kwan的EZ和ttm的in飛，他們都用了這麼多心血弄的，現在說刪就刪了，不就全部人都傷心了嗎

你可以讓ttm開個set，撞我也沒關係，我的mp3和timing拿去用都沒事，bg也是ttm找的，他開set我就換bg好了
如果他付出了那麼多，那讓他rank一張圖有什麼不好
但是說真的，我從剛開始一接ttm gd的時候我就後悔了，沒想到之後的事情讓我更後悔
我會去送icon的

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

598 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-17T07:08:29+00:00

我可以开full，但也不会开tv，强人所难换谁都不愿意，我也不会因为这个开什么坑撞你，没意义，我只是希望大家都能开心的作图

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-17T07:10:48+00:00

Mackenzie wrote:
你可以讓ttm開個set，撞我也沒關係，我的mp3和timing拿去用都沒事，bg也是ttm找的，他開set我就換bg好了
如果他付出了那麼多，那讓他rank一張圖有什麼不好
但是說真的，我從剛開始一接ttm gd的時候我就後悔了，沒想到之後的事情讓我更後悔
我會去送icon的

事到如今也不要再吵了，我尊重你的選擇，傷心不傷心都過去了，說到底也只是個set的問題，等ttm開full的時候也可以再做……但是，希望你能回來新人mapper群，你就這樣走了……其他人怎麼辦

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-07-20T04:24:45+00:00

fixed some mod,sorry but i didnt fix alot so i didnt really want to reply,if you want a reply pm me and ill pm back with a reply

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-07-21T07:07:37+00:00

~~I will check it this night or tomorrow~~ We made some changes via IRC mod forgot to edit it ;-;

Last edited by meii18 2015-07-28T11:41:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-07-23T07:27:39+00:00

call me after byby check the map

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-07-24T14:28:44+00:00

http://puu.sh/jbabe/6f61eb876f.rar

EDIT: http://puu.sh/jbQbD/e42e04185d.rar

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-07-31T22:17:02+00:00

Hello! I'm back (: Just check the easy diff

* asdf - nazi/suggestion
* asdf - important

Kwan's Easy

Missing video
00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted
00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider like in this picture
00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow.For a better flow,you can change like here
00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)-

That's all from me now for IamKwan.Maybe you will call me for recheck (:

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-01T04:21:19+00:00

00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted Sorry, no. As long as there are beats, I can map it.
00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider adjusted to a symmetric one
00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow. not a fan of kinked sliders now
00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)- alright

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-08-01T10:37:38+00:00

Rechecked the mapset. Metadata seems fine http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/

Bubbled

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-08-02T05:25:00+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适
NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强……

Hard

00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？
00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
01:21:695 (6,1) - ^

Insane

00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g?
00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

MirinH 2015-08-03T09:01:06+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适 whistle我真的感覺還好啊，算了都說有點吵那就edit音頻吧
NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强…… ^
Hard
00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？感覺overmap了啊
00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
01:21:695 (6,1) - ^ 這個還是不了
Insane
00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g? 容易讀成1/4
00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

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