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Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)

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MirinH
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MirinH
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August 7, 2015 at 12:50:55 AM

Artist: Tada Aoi
Title: Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)
Source: Charlotte
Tags: 麻枝准 シャーロット ANANT-GRADE EYES Bravely You Maeda Jun P.A.WORKS Key IamKwaN Alex_Li
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15162kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.71 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Insane (3.39 stars, 273 notes)
  3. KwaN's Easy (1.34 stars, 83 notes)
  4. Normal (1.72 stars, 105 notes)
Download: Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)
Download: Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size) (no video)
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5TH MAPSET

TVアニメ「Charlotte(シャーロット)」ED
OP by Enjoy ED2 by Rizia

Map set


by IamKwaN

by me

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Try TT Mouse's awesome diff here
Last edited by MirinH , edited 36 times in total.
Rizia
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Rizia
hi
MirinH
726 posts
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MirinH

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

hi
this wkyik
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zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
Li grandpa owo
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
waaaaaaaaaa
zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
water!

[Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390621

[Hard]

00:15:238 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 節奏上有點怪怪的
00:15:238 (7) - 可以改折返，然後把00:15:584 (8) - delete
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390581 排列大概是這樣的(我排的排版就不要管了 太懶截圖w
00:17:546 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390587
00:52:161 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390593 :3 ?
01:02:546 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390612
01:30:930 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390614

[Insane]
00:33:007 (2,4) - 4跟2碰到了, 分開點:<?
01:17:546 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390640

加油爺爺ˊ3ˋ
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

Enjoy wrote:

water!

[Normal]
01:06:007 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390621 我覺得現在這樣還好吧

[Hard]

00:15:238 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 節奏上有點怪怪的 跟的鋼琴
00:15:238 (7) - 可以改折返，然後把00:15:584 (8) - delete這裡不是三連
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390581 排列大概是這樣的(我排的排版就不要管了 太懶截圖w節奏不對 b(￣▽￣)d
00:17:546 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390587 節奏不對
00:52:161 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390593 :3 ? k
01:02:546 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390612k
01:30:930 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390614節奏不對

[Insane]
00:33:007 (2,4) - 4跟2碰到了, 分開點:<?no
01:17:546 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3390640k

加油爺爺ˊ3ˋ
thx
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
tv size怎么没视频
[Insane]
00:04:853 (2,2) - 这两个删了，或者都跟其他难度一样放1个note。两个感觉怪怪的
00:16:853 (6,1) - 平行。现在的6歪了一点
00:35:084 (3,1) - 这个Blanket很明显歪了
01:23:776 (1) - 这个长白线不要略过比较好吧

[Hard]
01:02:776 clap?

[Normal]
01:28:161 (4) - 弯一下？


神图摸个毛啊
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
From qq群 request^^
[General]
  1. 深藍色的那個combo建議弄淺點，和BG太像了

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:315 (2,3) - 弄彎
    SPOILER
    00:26:776 (1,3) - 疊的不夠正，3應該要再放左一點
    00:32:084 - 這個vocal最好不要漏掉，和前面3組成一個滑條也行
    01:27:007 (2) - 順著放會好點？
    SPOILER
    01:30:930 (3) - 弄成微彎
    SPOILER

[Hard]
  1. 00:16:046 (2,3,4,5) - 這種我覺得有點難看，把3弄彎然後和5 blanket的話會好看點
    SPOILER
    00:30:469 (1,2) - 滑條1的尾部疊到2的中間去
    SPOILER

    00:59:546 (6) - 這個同方向滑條切了flow，因此強調了vocal，但這裡沒有強調vocal的必要，因為你後面也沒有，所以建議ctrl+G吧
    01:19:623 (2) - 弄彎
    01:20:084 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
    01:21:699 (6,1) - ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket？
    00:38:546 (2,1) - 2疊到1的中間去，像上面難度說的那些
    00:45:238 (1) - 這個位置沒有強調的需要，會顯得有點生硬，所以還是順flow吧，另外滑條6的方向也要向上，像這樣
    SPOILER
    00:48:930 (1) - 弄彎
    01:13:853 (6,7) - blanket？
    01:23:084 (5,6) - 這裡也沒有強調的需要，切flow顯得不太好，所以試試這樣？
    SPOILER

做的非常好，祝順利起飛~
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

sodarose wrote:

tv size怎么没视频 我是看下個ep，因為這個ep的視頻跟音頻都是漸入的
[Insane]
00:04:853 (2,2) - 这两个删了，或者都跟其他难度一样放1个note。两个感觉怪怪的 說的也是
00:16:853 (6,1) - 平行。现在的6歪了一点 爺爺這麼nazi你都挑的出來
00:35:084 (3,1) - 这个Blanket很明显歪了 你們太厲害
01:23:776 (1) - 这个长白线不要略过比较好吧 跟ins

[Hard]
01:02:776 clap? 吵

[Normal]
01:28:161 (4) - 弯一下？i like straight


神图摸个毛啊

Kencho wrote:

From qq群 request^^
[General]
  1. 深藍色的那個combo建議弄淺點，和BG太像了噫

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:315 (2,3) - 弄彎 我喜歡現在這種
    SPOILER
    00:26:776 (1,3) - 疊的不夠正，3應該要再放左一點 怎麼這麼nazi
    00:32:084 - 這個vocal最好不要漏掉，和前面3組成一個滑條也行 我這裡準備換軌了，於是漏一個音提醒，但是如果後面有人說就改
    01:27:007 (2) - 順著放會好點？ 我喜歡反向flow
    SPOILER
    01:30:930 (3) - 弄成微彎 還好
    SPOILER

[Hard]
  1. 00:16:046 (2,3,4,5) - 這種我覺得有點難看，把3弄彎然後和5 blanket的話會好看點 我覺得還行啊
    SPOILER
    00:30:469 (1,2) - 滑條1的尾部疊到2的中間去 算了我再懶得修nazi
    SPOILER

    00:59:546 (6) - 這個同方向滑條切了flow，因此強調了vocal，但這裡沒有強調vocal的必要，因為你後面也沒有，所以建議ctrl+G吧 好像不錯
    01:19:623 (2) - 弄彎 噫
    01:20:084 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
    01:21:699 (6,1) - ^ 不blanket

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket？看不出
    00:38:546 (2,1) - 2疊到1的中間去，像上面難度說的那些 爺爺
    00:45:238 (1) - 這個位置沒有強調的需要，會顯得有點生硬，所以還是順flow吧，另外滑條6的方向也要向上，像這樣 不好看
    SPOILER
    00:48:930 (1) - 弄彎 噫
    01:13:853 (6,7) - blanket？no
    01:23:084 (5,6) - 這裡也沒有強調的需要，切flow顯得不太好，所以試試這樣？我覺得蠻好
    SPOILER

做的非常好，祝順利起飛~
thx
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,631 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
神图只能水摸

[G]
我感觉这个preview point offset不对


[I]
连打音效最好下满点

00:27:699 (3,4,5) - 不等距么，5再远点也正好可以不被那个蛋疼的(1)遮
00:33:007 (2,4) - 半碰不碰的最不好看
00:44:776 (6,1) - ^
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音效下满点，否则overmap嫌疑, 因为那些实际有的音实在太轻
01:15:699 (4) - ctrl+g? 好像flow更自然点

[H]
00:44:084 (3,4,1) - 似乎有点挤
01:08:084 (2) - 详见AIMOD

[N]
00:22:161 (4,1) - 你懂
-Hatano Kokoro-
70 posts
Joined March 2014
-Hatano Kokoro-
楼主好，我来求M4M的https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329330，以下是我的摸
[Timing（所有难度）]
  1. Kiai音效感觉很违和，建议换成轻柔的音效，比如原音效
  2. Kiai时间短于15秒，不需要放中间那间隙：01:03:238 到 01:03:699 与 01:18:007 到 01:18:469。
[Normal]
  1. 01:30:930 (3) - 滑条后端放错音效了，按hard和insane的做法应该放finish
  2. 00:48:007 与 00:48:469 漏两音，不想放单点就放滑条吧
  3. 00:35:315 (3) - 建议滑条换为单点
  4. 00:04:623 (1,1) - 没听见鼓点，可以去掉这两个
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:315 此处建议放单点与00:17:430 (6,1) 形成三连打
  2. 00:31:853 (3,1) - 建议改为：00:31:853 单点。00:32:084到00:32:315 滑条。00:32:546 单点。00:32:776 到00:32:892 滑条。
    00:33:123到00:33:238 滑条。可以不用nc。摆法...看你心情摆。这样歌词和鼓点都能跟上。
[*]00:46:161 (3) - 滑条尾部不建议放音效
[*]01:18:007 (6) - 同上
[*]01:29:084 (6) - 同上

[Insane]
  1. 00:47:546 (2,3) - 建议改为1/4连打
  2. 其他做的很好，我没什么好摸的
[other]
  1. 摆放很好，祝楼主能早rank
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
摸到一半我就想做GD怎么办(;w;
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

TT Mouse wrote:

摸到一半我就想做GD怎么办(;w;
sry but im not taking any gd
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

yf_bmp wrote:

神图只能水摸

[G]
我感觉这个preview point offset不对 k


[I]
连打音效最好下满点

00:27:699 (3,4,5) - 不等距么，5再远点也正好可以不被那个蛋疼的(1)遮 我覺得還好
00:33:007 (2,4) - 半碰不碰的最不好看
00:44:776 (6,1) - ^ 不修nazi
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音效下满点，否则overmap嫌疑, 因为那些实际有的音实在太轻 k
01:15:699 (4) - ctrl+g? 好像flow更自然点 還好

[H]
00:44:084 (3,4,1) - 似乎有点挤 改了一點
01:08:084 (2) - 详见AIMOD o

[N]
00:22:161 (4,1) - 你懂 nAzImAsTeR

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:

楼主好，我来求M4M的https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329330，以下是我的摸
[Timing（所有难度）]
  1. Kiai音效感觉很违和，建议换成轻柔的音效，比如原音效
  2. Kiai时间短于15秒，不需要放中间那间隙：01:03:238 到 01:03:699 与 01:18:007 到 01:18:469。都還好啊我覺得。。。
[Normal]
  1. 01:30:930 (3) - 滑条后端放错音效了，按hard和insane的做法应该放finish finish是後面那個轉盤開始那裡才有的
  2. 00:48:007 与 00:48:469 漏两音，不想放单点就放滑条吧 轉盤後面要隔一個bar
  3. 00:35:315 (3) - 建议滑条换为单点 太難
  4. 00:04:623 (1,1) - 没听见鼓点，可以去掉这两个 之前也在考慮，現在去了
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:315 此处建议放单点与00:17:430 (6,1) 形成三连打 這裡是二連
  2. 00:31:853 (3,1) - 建议改为：00:31:853 单点。00:32:084到00:32:315 滑条。00:32:546 单点。00:32:776 到00:32:892 滑条。打擊感美麗
    00:33:123到00:33:238 滑条。可以不用nc。摆法...看你心情摆。这样歌词和鼓点都能跟上。
[*]00:46:161 (3) - 滑条尾部不建议放音效 噫，不可以嗎
[*]01:18:007 (6) - 同上
[*]01:29:084 (6) - 同上

[Insane]
  1. 00:47:546 (2,3) - 建议改为1/4连打 為什麼啊
  2. 其他做的很好，我没什么好摸的
[other]
  1. 摆放很好，祝楼主能早rank
thx for the mods
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
You can call me for bubble after you'll receive more mods
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

You can call me for bubble after you'll receive more mods
ahh thx byby chan :lol:
UndeadCapulet
1,100 posts
Joined April 2013
UndeadCapulet
M4M from your queue:

Tt'Insane

Fix your hitsound volumes, everything's at 100%, and it's all really loud .-.

00:17:546 (9) - NC
00:17:776 (1,2) - ... This slider is dumb, the spacing here is uncalled for, and this rhythm choice doesn't match up well with 00:18:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , which is what you're obviously intending. Use this rhythm.

You use the same rhythm from 00:19:392 (1) - to 00:33:930 (7) - , but if you listen closely, a lot of measures don't suggest this rhythm, but instead let their heavier beats land on blue or red ticks. For example, 00:22:046 - holds a heavier beat than 00:22:161 (5) - ; 00:23:776 - and 00:23:892 - are just as relevent as anything surrounding them; 00:25:738 - is really strong; etc. Think more about your rhythm choices throughout this part, because right now they're really arbitrary and unrewarding.

Starting from 00:34:161 (1) - up to about 00:45:007 (4) - , it's almost like a completely different map, with no real 1/4 parts to speak of. I get that the vocals have picked up a bit, so you can't have things be the exact same as before, but right now your map is lacking any real cohesion. Try adding some minor touches, like adding a note at 00:36:815 - , or changing 00:39:007 (4,5) - into a triplet.

01:01:161 (6,7,8,1) - I feel like there are better ways to arrange these notes instead of simple DS stuff, everything was so fluid before with all the 3/4 sliders and stuff, this is kinda boring. Maybe something like this is better?
01:09:238 (1) - Bowing this the other direction would be more enjoyable in my opinion.

Love the kiai, btw :3

---

Insane

00:53:661 (6) - Delete this one, the high pitch of 00:53:546 (5) - makes for a good ending to a stream sound. I also think you should consider adding a note to 00:53:199, I think that matches the instrumental better.
00:55:045 (3) - Delete this one, I don't thing such a long stream is called for here, and it makes more sense to start a stream at the keyboard-type sound of 00:55:160 (4) - .
01:20:084 (1,2,3,4) - Listen to the keyboard here and try to gear your rhythm choices around that. Your missing out on a great deal of the song with this current rhythm. Anything along the lines of this or this would be more appropriate.
01:30:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current 01:30:469 (5,6,1,2) - angle seems pretty steep, maybe something like this would be better?

---

Hard

00:16:853 - You were following the keyboard pretty well up to this point, why not add a note and continue weaving all parts of the instrumental together?
00:41:546 (1) - Maybe try ctrl+g, I think it fits better.
00:48:007 (3,4) - Try .95x SV for a subtle buildup effect? The vocals here are much stronger than before.
01:10:161 (3,4,1) - Things seem the tiniest bit jerky here, I think something of this nature fixes that.
01:25:853 (1,2) - This is an unrewarding use of slider leniency, the music calls for the player to be bouncing over each of 1's sliderends, not cutting corners like this. Structuring your sliders in a manner along these lines would be a better experience overall.

---

Normal

00:26:776 (1,2) - Try to avoid letting repeated sliderends be so close to the next note like this. Right now the player is going to cut away from the final 1 sliderend, which is suboptimal for what the song calls for here. Aim it over here or so.
Good luck! I hope you find an mp3 that doesn't have that annoying dialogue in it ;c
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
[Normal]

00:18:238 (4) - like this ?
SPOILER

00:22:161 (4,1) - apart little

00:31:161 (2) - slider end at 00:32:084 ?

00:33:007 - add note will be better to play

00:48:930 (1,2,3) - like this ?
SPOILER

00:51:238 (4) - change to note

00:53:315 (2,3) - exchange feel better

01:06:469 (5) - straight slider ?

01:24:469 (5) - put on like (272,316)
SPOILER

01:27:007 (2,4) - change like this
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:13:161 - lost note ?

00:16:969 (5) - end at 00:17:315

00:23:315 - add note be well

00:41:084 (4) - copy the 00:40:161 (2) to it

00:48:930 (1) - (404,236)

00:51:238 (2,3,4) - try
SPOILER

00:53:430 (3) - delete

01:02:315 (2,3,4,5) - try
SPOILER

01:04:507 (3) - delete

01:08:084 (2) - no fit flow

01:24:007 (1) - change like ctrl+h ?

01:30:930 (3) - try
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:16:046 (3) - delete

00:23:315 - add note

00:33:007 (2) - (196,188)

00:35:084 (3,1) - blanket ?

00:37:046 (4) - delete

00:40:161 (2,3,4,5) - flow bad

00:46:276 (4) - delete

00:53:430 (4,6) - no sound , delete

01:11:892 (4) - ^

00:56:199 (10) - delete

01:02:892 (6) - delete

01:28:392 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - just try
SPOILER

[Tt'Insane]

00:17:315 (8,9) - try
SPOILER

00:18:007 (2) - a little far...like (128,336) ?

00:32:084 (7,1) - exchange ?

00:36:584 (2) - remove clap

01:02:892 (7) - ^

00:40:276 (2) - ^ same as like those place

00:47:084 (1) - change to note

00:49:623 - hitsound here is bad i think

00:57:007 - ^ same as like those place

01:09:007 (8) - ctrl+g

the Additions at Drum+clap is bad ,maybe change others ...

祝好运...写完发现可以用中文写,我真是....
nika mika
397 posts
Joined January 2014
nika mika
From pm
水摸;w;
[Insane]
00:26:199 –把00:26:430 (5) –这个音放在这边，因为bpm低所以排列应该不用改也能玩
00:54:930 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –stream掰弯一点
01:02:315 –节奏改成
SPOILER
01:09:815 –delete，相对的，01:09:815 –这边加个音
因为按照前一个乐句你的节奏大概就是这么下的
01:17:892 –这边留空？那串slider怀疑是为难而难的……
这歌放insane感觉要overmap，有没有insane和hard之间的难度啊（

[Hard]
00:15:238 (7,8) –调换顺序，或者把7改成circle 再在00:15:353 –加一个note
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –这里为什么跟另一条音轨了……
00:28:853 (2) –ctrl+g
01:07:392 –到01:10:853 –的节奏请抄01:03:699 –到01:07:161 –，或者反过来两边都只跟vocal不管drum
01:30:930 (3) –直接一个circle，spinner提前到01:31:161 –
Hard的节奏的consistency似乎不够……或者说我又走上了某条不归路吗:3

[Normal]
00:32:315 (4) –提前至00:32:084 -?
其余的摸不动（泣）
上面有人说要给泡啦，果然yeye
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
既然你並不在意原曲的音色，那開頭你也可以試試把normal難度的00:12:469 - 00:14:315 - 的samplest 切為drum，還有insane難度的00:14:546 (5,6) - 切samplest 為drum，具體參考 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/425385

[Normal]

00:25:853 (4) - 這個我看過不少次，你不會是故意逗人吐槽的吧

[Hard]

00:16:046 (2,3) - 分開一點好讀一點

00:17:315 - 我覺得三連順手，主要還是討厭不是1/2和1/1但是接圈

01:30:930 (3) - 放連打或者三連或者最後一個放圈？總之我覺得應該要happy end

[Insane]

00:50:546 (1) - 這種遮擋我喜歡放長滑條中間……

01:17:084 (3) - 實際的堆疊效果來看這個和後面的連打是錯開的，可能你不希望這樣……可以人工堆疊把這排連打往左上走

00:54:238 (8) - 你好像是按旋律NC 的，那這個應該放紅線……可能你需要改很多

[T_T Insane]

全程100音量和一堆沒用的線不知道怎麼吐槽 = =
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Tt'Insane]

00:17:315 (8,9) - try
SPOILER
fixed
00:18:007 (2) - a little far...like (128,336) ?
k
00:32:084 (7,1) - exchange ?
no
00:36:584 (2) - remove clap
have downbeat here,no
01:02:892 (7) - ^

00:40:276 (2) - ^ same as like those place

00:47:084 (1) - change to note
keep
00:49:623 - hitsound here is bad i think

00:57:007 - ^ same as like those place

01:09:007 (8) - ctrl+g

the Additions at Drum+clap is bad ,maybe change others ... 单独拿出来听也还好，先不改

祝好运...写完发现可以用中文写,我真是....

Tt'Insane
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk

Narcissu wrote:

[T_T Insane]

全程100音量和一堆沒用的線不知道怎麼吐槽 = =

李师傅不知怎么弄得把我音效搞没了.....

edit: plz redwonload the Tt' insane if you mod it. or wait to mackenzie submit it
DreaM117er
1,596 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
晚了，抱歉

[General]
  1. No.

[Normal]

  • 01:05:084 - 這裡是Clap

[Hard]

  • 00:05:546 - 00:07:392 - 00:09:238 - 00:11:084 - Break刪掉，不會影響。那個紅色箭頭看了就煩
    01:09:699 (2) - Ctrl+G
    01:29:084 (6) - ^

[Insane]

  • 00:05:546 - 00:07:392 - 00:09:238 - 00:11:084 - 刪掉Break
  1. 期他我看是沒問題，自由連打有人喜歡有人不喜歡，我就不多說了

[Tt'Insane]
  1. 已經重載過了
    00:16:161 (4) - 沒擺好
    00:17:546 (9) - NC應該是這裡才對
    00:17:776 (1,2) - 這個距離有點誇張，BPM130也要仁慈一些啊大哥
    01:17:084 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle太多了，刪掉一些聽起來比較舒服

怎麼才過一天就找這麼多摸...很恐怖 :?
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
嗚嗚我來晚了，你都找了這麼多摸了，不過我覺得這個EZ質量挺好的，沒有地方需要大改的
Kencho's Easy
osu file format v14

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IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Metadata Proof.



我草??為啥kencho又做EZ?
我明明說了我放完了節奏
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk

DreaM117er wrote:

[Tt'Insane]
  1. 已經重載過了 麻烦了:3
    00:16:161 (4) - 沒擺好 k
    00:17:546 (9) - NC應該是這裡才對 k
    00:17:776 (1,2) - 這個距離有點誇張，BPM130也要仁慈一些啊大哥 为了突出钢琴，实际是对in的距离来说不难
    01:17:084 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle太多了，刪掉一些聽起來比較舒服 changed

怎麼才過一天就找這麼多摸...很恐怖 :?
mod thxs!

changed some hitsounds。

puush Tt's Insane edit : changed puush link

PS again,redownload the Tt' insane if you mod it. or wait to mackenzie submit it,thnks!
Last edited by TtmnZk , edited 2 times in total.
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
我不知道KwaN也接了EZ……那我那個不用了，用KwaN的EZ吧
Wing My Way
186 posts
Joined September 2013
Wing My Way
M4M

Normal


  • 00:04:623 (1,1,1,1) - 不和hard insane统一真的好吗？
    00:18:469 (4,1) - 碰到了不好看
    真挑不出什么啊

Hard


  • 00:15:584 (8,1) - 开头漏whistle
    00:54:930 (2) - 加上一个whistle比较好
    01:00:007 (1,2,3,4) - 不blanket？
    01:02:546 (4) - 真不建议折返这么多，实在不行建议拉回白线的位置然后再加一个
    01:30:930 (3) - ^
    01:15:238 (2) - 太近了

Insane


  • 00:37:161 (5) - whistle
    然后没什么了，就是00:51:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这种东西太偷懒了，质量不如hard高

Tt'Insane


  • 00:20:315 (5) - 这种clap太吵啦
    怎么音量都是100%？？？
    00:36:007 (1,2) - 这种节奏有点莫名其妙
    00:42:699 (4,5,6) - 间距没变化不好
    kiai还好 榻榻米啥时候摸我啊

good luck!
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk

Wing My Way wrote:

M4M

Tt'Insane


  • 00:20:315 (5) - 这种clap太吵啦
    怎么音量都是100%？？？ 李师傅变魔术把我音效美丽（me run
    00:36:007 (1,2) - 这种节奏有点莫名其妙 这里节奏跟的鼓，你可以关掉音效光听歌，不会错的
    00:42:699 (4,5,6) - 间距没变化不好 keep
    kiai还好 榻榻米啥时候摸我啊 稍等哈
爷爷你怎么不看我上面写的....
good luck!
mod thx

edit: puush
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH
I think grave the map is the best way to end all this
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Tell me your final choice on this map.
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

IamKwaN wrote:

Tell me your final choice on this map.
Deleting all the gds,sorry but I don't want to do anything that enforced by myself anymore,I totally get that being mercy is nothing good and can only recive shit and negative responses
Thanks kwan,you though me a lesson
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH
刪掉所有GD了，說真的，我不想再做我強迫自己做的事了，我覺得太善良根本得不到什麼，除了一堆不好的評價
感謝駿馬罵我，你給我上了一課
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
也有我的错，有点太强迫我现在有点不好意思了，可以的话就放到cw那里吧，抱歉了
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
……都說了刪掉我那個就好了，我最後加入的按理我的優先次序放在最後就好了，我不在意，帶上Kwan的EZ和ttm的in飛，他們都用了這麼多心血弄的，現在說刪就刪了，不就全部人都傷心了嗎
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

Kencho wrote:

……都說了刪掉我那個就好了，我最後加入的按理我的優先次序放在最後就好了，我不在意，帶上Kwan的EZ和ttm的in飛，他們都用了這麼多心血弄的，現在說刪就刪了，不就全部人都傷心了嗎
你可以讓ttm開個set，撞我也沒關係，我的mp3和timing拿去用都沒事，bg也是ttm找的，他開set我就換bg好了
如果他付出了那麼多，那讓他rank一張圖有什麼不好
但是說真的，我從剛開始一接ttm gd的時候我就後悔了，沒想到之後的事情讓我更後悔
我會去送icon的
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
598 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
我可以开full，但也不会开tv，强人所难换谁都不愿意，我也不会因为这个开什么坑撞你，没意义，我只是希望大家都能开心的作图
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho

Mackenzie wrote:

你可以讓ttm開個set，撞我也沒關係，我的mp3和timing拿去用都沒事，bg也是ttm找的，他開set我就換bg好了
如果他付出了那麼多，那讓他rank一張圖有什麼不好
但是說真的，我從剛開始一接ttm gd的時候我就後悔了，沒想到之後的事情讓我更後悔
我會去送icon的
事到如今也不要再吵了，我尊重你的選擇，傷心不傷心都過去了，說到底也只是個set的問題，等ttm開full的時候也可以再做……但是，希望你能回來新人mapper群，你就這樣走了……其他人怎麼辦
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH
fixed some mod,sorry but i didnt fix alot so i didnt really want to reply,if you want a reply pm me and ill pm back with a reply
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
I will check it this night or tomorrow We made some changes via IRC mod forgot to edit it ;-;
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Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
call me after byby check the map :)
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/jbabe/6f61eb876f.rar

EDIT: http://puu.sh/jbQbD/e42e04185d.rar
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello! I'm back (: Just check the easy diff

* asdf - nazi/suggestion
* asdf - important

Kwan's Easy



  1. Missing video
  2. 00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted
  3. 00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider like in this picture
  4. 00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow.For a better flow,you can change like here
  5. 00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)-

That's all from me now for IamKwan.Maybe you will call me for recheck (:
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted Sorry, no. As long as there are beats, I can map it.
00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider adjusted to a symmetric one
00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow. not a fan of kinked sliders now
00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)- alright

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TitleUnicode:灼け落ちない翼 (TV Size)
Artist:Tada Aoi
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Version:KwaN's Easy
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Tags:麻枝准 シャーロット ANANT-GRADE EYES Bravely You Maeda Jun P.A.WORKS Key IamKwaN
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meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Rechecked the mapset. Metadata seems fine http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/

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Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适
  2. NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强……
Hard
  1. 00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？
  2. 00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
  3. 01:21:695 (6,1) - ^
Insane
  1. 00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
  3. 00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  4. 01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适 :arrow: whistle我真的感覺還好啊，算了都說有點吵那就edit音頻吧
  2. NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强…… :arrow: ^
Hard
  1. 00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？ :arrow: 感覺overmap了啊
  2. 00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
  3. 01:21:695 (6,1) - ^ :arrow: 這個還是不了
Insane
  1. 00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g? :arrow: 容易讀成1/4
  2. 00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
  3. 00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  4. 01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
no reply = fixed
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
你別給老娘edit音頻 我打爆你啊
我先前已經說過太吵 不聽也沒辦法
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

IamKwaN wrote:

你別給老娘edit音頻 我打爆你啊
我先前已經說過太吵 不聽也沒辦法
QQ我碰都没碰你的hitsound
我是说我的啊
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