PureCreamy wrote:

owo nice skin <3 I love that spinner <333

PolkaMocha wrote:

Mod was requested through my modding queue! Yay!

Since this beatmap is over 3 minutes long... I will just mod hard mode. Okay!!!

00:02:422 I recommend you space (6) and (7) out. Nope, sorry... I prefer stack over there

00:03:089 I think you should use the same slider and just reverse it like this. It looks neater.

Two modders suggest me for this, so fixed!!!

00:04:422 I think you should change the curve of the slider so it fits (1) and the angle (1) to fit the curve of (3). It looks a bit more appealing than when (1) is flat.

Okay! Fixed!

If you go through with that ^ Here's how you ould possibly change the rest to fit. But of course, it's my opinion, and you can find a different pattern. I slowed the AR so you could see it.

Sorry.... I just wanna to flip it horizontally

00:08:922 I think I can tell what you're aiming for. Was it more of the lines of this shape? Also, maybe switch around the middle one for some fun loopdy loop? Completely optional.

Fixed!! Nice suggestion

00:27:089 Get (1) to blanket (2/3) It will look neater and give that curve some purpose :3

Nope, sorry... I don't wanna to move it since the slider at 00:27:089 (1) make a stack with the slider's end at 00:26:756 (5)

00:45:756 You might want to spread this out a bit. It looks a little unsymmetrical. But I could be wrong.

Um.... Nope, I wanna keep that triangle-shaped flow

00:48:422 No need for a new combo That's right! Okay! Fixed!!

00:52:089 (4) being placed like that next to (1) would cause a combo break for some people thinking (4) is aligned to a white tick and (1) on the blue tick directly after. Either stack (4) on (1) or put (4) at x: 232 y: 144 That's right! Okay! I'll remove the combo colour so it won't confuse the players

00:54:756 ^ Same thing. Either stack (4) or put it so (1) will blanket it. I'll do the same thing as above

00:56:089 (3) to (4) is spaced differently than from (2) to (3) Try this? Remember to space out the next note from it.

Okay! I'll move it closer

00:59:422 Again with this spacing. It's awkward and might cause a mess up. because people will hit the next note a bit early due to said spacing. Fixed!

01:00:756 Again^ Fixed!!

01:02:089 Again^ Fixed!!

01:06:589 Again^ Fixed!!

01:10:756 Again^ Fixed!!

01:13:422 Again^ This time, I think it's alright

01:20:756 (1) (2) (3) and (4) are put too close together. I like the idea of the SV increasing with each one, but space them accordingly. Not too close I think, so no change

01:44:256 You might want to tilt this triplet in the direction of the slider. Like this. Better flow

Nice one! Okay! Fixed!!

01:49:256 This spacing might confuse people to hit the circle too early. Well.... It's Hard diff. After all

01:49:756 Maybe make this blanket (2)? It might look nicer. Well... I don't plan on making it into blanket with that note, but with the slider at 01:50:756 (3)

01:52:422 (1) (2) and (3) are spaced funny and might cause them to be hit too early. Space these out. Maybe make the SV go up with each one like last time? I don't plan on changing SV over there, so I wanna keep it

01:58:756 Put (4) at x:264 y:88 Fixed!!

02:01:589 Your blanket it is off from (3) and (4) just by a bit Fixed!!

02:06:089 This spacing might mess people up. They might hit (2) early because it is so close to one. Fixed!!

02:07:422 Again^ Fixed!!

02:08:756 Again^ Fixed!!

02:09:756 That's really cool! T-Thanks!!! (>////<)

02:13:256 Again with the same spacing issue ;w; Fixed!!

02:20:089 Again^ Fixed!!

02:23:839 I like the idea of having the triplet repeater be at the same angle as the slider before it but reversed. Like this,

Nice! But I wanna to keep it. Sorry...

02:27:422 (1) (2) (3) and (4) need to be spaced out more. LOVE the SV change with each one though <3 Fixed!!

02:41:756 CTRL+G on (3) to help with the flow. Sure!! Fixed!!

02:45:756 I would confuse this for a stream. Maybe make the spacing change a bit more gradual/obvious? I think no change for that

02:49:756 I would also confuse this for a stream. Maybe it's just me? Also, no change for that

03:00:089 I think it would be better if you did this with the slider? It's just an option. I drew lyrics on the sliders so you know why I recommend this.

I map singer's vocal over there, so I think the right beginning for that slider is at the red tick

TOO LAZY FOR SCREEN SHOTS AFTER THIS, SORRY! It's alright! You're already helped me a lot (> w <)

03:13:756 (1) (2) This is really awesome T-Thanks!! (>////<)

03:29:756 (5) doesn't blanket (6) perfectly. I think that blanket is nice enough (^ w ^)

03:30:756 The close together spacing issue again >_> Fixed!!

03:38:089 Again^ Fixed!!

03:39:422 Again^ Fixed!!

03:40:756 Again^ Fixed!!

03:43:922 Again^ Fixed!!

03:45:256 Again^ Fixed!!

03:47:089 I like this a lot! Yay!

03:52:089 Early spacing issue Fixed!!

03:53:756 (4) doesn't blanket (5) well. Fixed!!

03:54:756 Early spacing issue Fixed!!

04:00:922 Reverse (4) so it slides the other way. This will help add flow. Ummm.... No change for that

04:04:756 Again, love this. But they should be spaced out. Fixed!!

04:08:339 Being on a blue tick, that's a hard hit. Try a spinner from there to 04:13:089 instead. Okay! I changed it into something else

The spacing thing I found a lot can gradually become expected. But for the first chorus or so, it's hard to grasp. If you go about changing it towards the beginning, you would have to change it throughout the whole thing. But that's not hard. Just move it. Okay!!

Great mapping overall! Lovely blankets, cool skin, I hope this gets ranked.

-Nya- wrote:

NC means new combo, lol.
Sorry, I probably should have said that. I just assumed you knew

llm12345 wrote:

i like this skin,come on

llm12345 wrote:

very good,i like it

1. I feel that the kiai time exceeding 1/3 of the map could be less identifiable if perhaps the 03:48:422-outro were normal. That or removing the kiai before to let this be a kiai on it's own. In a 4 minute song where the chorus repeats 3 times, then bridges like this it could be a bit daunting. Even though it doesn't affect "that" much, such a consideration could improve the overall balanced feel of your mapset. Think about it again is all I can offer.
2. Really great job on being so thorough and intricate with the SV's and hitsounding. I can feel passion emanating from the song.
   
   [Easy]
   1. Couldn't find anything unrankable or worth tending to in this difficulty to be improved, nice job!
   [Normal]
   1. 01:30:089 (2) - It's moved over for seemingly no reason other than to slide the following combo to the left or give it a swing feel but it's minimal. I think it'd do better on x:256
   2. 01:59:089 (6,1) - Damn that's a clean blanket. I'm nearly salivating o wo/
   3. 02:24:089 (5,1) - I feel like reversing the order or the single and slider would carry the lyric better. While showing a nice alternation after 02:22:422 (2,3,4)
   4. 03:48:422 (1,2) - I'll assume this is preference due to it being a copy, but I still think this one could be improved by placing directly under or approximating the blanket you're going for.
      
   [Hard]
   1. 00:31:756 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice job making that red tick an okay starting point.
   2. 01:20:756 (1,2,3,4) - Suuuper creative and I love it. I'm not sure if this is rankable because there's no noticable change in the actual speed or rhythm of the song. Despite it being a repeated beat in the track, it builds up into a fancy slider with a seemingly random velocity.
      ~Compare this to the insane of Saiya - Remote Control 01:19:591 (1,2,3,4); a change in pitch and length of the note both change to merit the SV changes.
   3. 01:52:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this combo could use some more..."unf". Have you experimented with spacing these out a tiny bit to make small directional jumps? (4) and (5) both have that snare bang feeling to it, but I feel like I just hit a button and a snare went off. Y'know. p:
   4. 02:27:422 (1,2,3,4) - These feel better <3
   5. 03:20:422 (2) - This shape feels over-emphasized, or too fast for the outstanding lyric. Especially in comparison to the shape of the previous one. Reconsider? o:
      
   6. 03:32:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - I highly recommend letting (1,2) be (7,8) because it helps shape the following pattern colours.
   7. 03:35:089 (3) - ^After the above, making this a new combo - making symmetrical shapes within the same combo
   8. 03:36:422 (1,2,3) - ^^Make it your (7,8,9)
   9. 03:37:756 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^^Finally, making this a succession of 1,2,3 - 1,2,3 - 1,2,3 will match the lyrics perfectly while fitting your repeaters at 03:37:256 in their combo so it's not improperly combo'd with your lyrics that start at 03:37:756 (4).
3. 04:08:422 (6) - Love these kinda notes, so glad this happened. p: Works as a (6) or a (1); preference. Flip a coin on it or something.

Kamidachi wrote:

Wow, very solid map as far as I can tell halfway through this mod. xD Pretty skin, clean BG, thorough hitsounding and SVing. Blankets tidy all around, along with consistent spacing and rhythm throughout the maps. Pretty close to rankable, I'd say. Thanks!!


General

Image
I feel that the kiai time exceeding 1/3 of the map could be less identifiable if perhaps the 03:48:422-outro were normal. That or removing the kiai before to let this be a kiai on it's own. In a 4 minute song where the chorus repeats 3 times, then bridges like this it could be a bit daunting. Even though it doesn't affect "that" much, such a consideration could improve the overall balanced feel of your mapset. Think about it again is all I can offer. It's alright I think. Many ranked maps do the same
Really great job on being so thorough and intricate with the SV's and hitsounding. I can feel passion emanating from the song. Thanks!!


Easy
Couldn't find anything unrankable or worth tending to in this difficulty to be improved, nice job! Yay!!


Normal
01:30:089 (2) - It's moved over for seemingly no reason other than to slide the following combo to the left or give it a swing feel but it's minimal. I think it'd do better on x:256 Sorry... No change. I prefer put it over there
01:59:089 (6,1) - Damn that's a clean blanket. I'm nearly salivating o wo/ Umm.... Thanks!! (>////<)
02:24:089 (5,1) - I feel like reversing the order or the single and slider would carry the lyric better. While showing a nice alternation after 02:22:422 (2,3,4) Sorry..... I prefer my star-shaped flow
03:48:422 (1,2) - I'll assume this is preference due to it being a copy, but I still think this one could be improved by placing directly under or approximating the blanket you're going for.
Image Ummm...... I'll keep that


Hard
00:31:756 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice job making that red tick an okay starting point. Thanks!!
01:20:756 (1,2,3,4) - Suuuper creative and I love it. I'm not sure if this is rankable because there's no noticable change in the actual speed or rhythm of the song. Despite it being a repeated beat in the track, it builds up into a fancy slider with a seemingly random velocity. Thanks!!
(> w <) it's still rankable I guess . The players can guess the SV change based from the drum & bass from the song
~Compare this to the insane of Saiya - Remote Control 01:19:591 (1,2,3,4); a change in pitch and length of the note both change to merit the SV changes. True that is
01:52:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this combo could use some more..."unf". Have you experimented with spacing these out a tiny bit to make small directional jumps? (4) and (5) both have that snare bang feeling to it, but I feel like I just hit a button and a snare went off. Y'know. p: Ummm.... That's right. But I wanna to keep that
02:27:422 (1,2,3,4) - These feel better <3 (>/////<)
03:20:422 (2) - This shape feels over-emphasized, or too fast for the outstanding lyric. Especially in comparison to the shape of the previous one. Reconsider? o: Umm..... Nope (^ w ^)
03:32:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - I highly recommend letting (1,2) be (7,8) because it helps shape the following pattern colours. Ummm... Nope. I gonna keep it because the high pitch from the music starts at 03:32:422 so it would be nice to add combo colour there
03:35:089 (3) - ^After the above, making this a new combo - making symmetrical shapes within the same combo And the same reason as above. So, I'm gonna keep it
03:36:422 (1,2,3) - ^^Make it your (7,8,9) And same as above again, so I wanna keep it
03:37:756 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^^Finally, making this a succession of 1,2,3 - 1,2,3 - 1,2,3 will match the lyrics perfectly while fitting your repeaters at 03:37:256 in their combo so it's not improperly combo'd with your lyrics that start at 03:37:756 (4). Ummm... That's right too.... But I'll wait for another modders opinion

04:08:422 (6) - Love these kinda notes, so glad this happened. p: Works as a (6) or a (1); preference. Flip a coin on it or something.
(> w <)

Very enjoyable map, and the background change for the [Hard] was a plus. I approve. I expect to see this bubbled soon, great job once again. Good luck on doing so, and feel free to ask any questions about anything I've critiqued~ Thanks!!!!

Good luck, and happy mapping! :3
Thanks for the mod!!! (^ w ^)

1. Add audioleadin 1500 for preperation before the first notes
2. Green lines di beberapa spinner ada yang kurang cocok, ada yang suara spinnernya gede gede bgt, ada yang kecil kecil bgt
3. Kak minta timing cek ke yang lain? aku main yang hard kayanya sedikit aneh, double or triple timing check would be better XD
4. Kak, fail-background sama pause-overlay baiknya dimensinya 1366x768 supaya bisa menutupi layar secara keseluruhan pas pause atau fail

1. 00:03:089 (5) - Kak tambah finish di bagian awal sama akhir slider? kayanya kalo ngikutin suara lead gitar kaya bagian awal slider ini 00:00:423 (1) - lebih cocok, jadi biar selaras ditambahin aja
2. 00:05:089 (6,1) - Sebaiknya sebelum spinner ada jeda waktu kak antara satu atau dua white tick, jadi baiknya spinnernya mulai di sini 00:06:422 -
3. 00:31:089 (3) - Bagian reverse, kayanya lebih baik pake sample set S:C2 deh kak, buat sesuain sama suara drumnya hampir sama kaya ini yang bagian akhir slider 00:29:756 (1) -
4. 00:41:756 (2,3) - Flownya lebih enak kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/dT24V/ad17331be0.jpg mengikuti bentuk slider (2) kan belok ke bawah tuh, jadi daripada naro (3) di bagian atas flownya jadi agak patah gitu kak jadinya, jadi bagusnya ini 00:42:756 (3) - di taro di x:380 y:364 sekitar situ
5. 00:51:089 (4) - Ritmenya mending diganti kak pake 1/1 slider, karena pas bagian ini 00:51:422 - suara vokalnya lumayan kuat, jadi ritmenya diganti aja mungkin kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT2Ar/6a796fd74f.jpg
6. 01:01:756 (3,4) - Spacingnya lumayan jauh beda 0.7
7. 01:06:756 (4,1) - Kasusnya sama kak kaya 00:05:089 (6,1) - mungkin (4) bisa didelete, biar cukup waktu sebelum spinner
8. 01:12:422 (3) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 01:12:756 - Cukup kuat dan mapable
9. 01:22:589 (1) - Agak ganjil kak pas dimainin, harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 01:22:422 - nadanya juga serupa kaya 01:21:422 (4,5) - jadi lebih baik ngikutin suara drumnya aja yg ada di white tick drpd ngikutin suara vokal yang ada di red tick http://puu.sh/dT3aD/fdbb026224.jpg
10. 01:24:172 - Tarik maju break time yang itu sampe sini kak 01:24:256 - kalo ngikutin suara orkestra lebih baik breaknya mulainya di red tick
11. 02:03:089 (4,5) - Spacing, keep stick on 1,3x, ya kurang lebihnya dua atau tiga, kalo udah lebih dari 0.5 bedanya cukup lebar kak
12. 02:17:589 (1) - Ganjil banget pas dimanin kak, iya aku tau itu ngikutin suara vokalnya, tapi buat easy agak canggung dan kurang enak dimainin, mungkin lebih baik kalo slider itu mulainya pas white big tick aja kak
13. 02:29:256 (5) - Sama kasusnya kaya ini 01:22:589 (1) - mending slider (5) itu mulainya dr sini 02:29:089 -
14. 02:31:089 - Tarik mundur break time yang itu ke sini kak 02:30:922 - lebih cocok kalo ngikutin suara vokal di red tick itu
15. 02:49:422 (4) - Kenapa ada drum finish di sana kak? kayanya lebih cocok pake clap
16. 02:49:756 (5) - Yang itu juga pas bagian akhir slider kok ada suara drum clap? kayanya lebih cocok pake finish biasa
17. 03:00:089 (2,3) - Kak kayanya bakal lebih bagus kalo (2) dibuat curve terus disusun kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT4Ez/438e5d0dd4.jpg
18. 03:16:422 (3,4) - Bgmn kalo Ctrl+G (3) terus tambah reverse dan delete (4) biar flownya lebih enak kak, kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT58b/5b0a87a13e.jpg
19. 03:40:422 (1) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 03:40:756 - lumayan kuat dan mapable
20. 03:45:422 (5,1) - Yang ini mirip kaya ini kak 00:05:089 (6,1) -
21. 03:49:589 (1) - Ganjil banget pas dimanin kak, iya aku tau itu ngikutin suara vokalnya, tapi buat easy agak canggung dan kurang enak dimainin, mungkin lebih baik kalo slider itu mulainya pas white big tick aja kak
22. 03:51:089 (3) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 03:51:422 - lumayan kuat buat dimap
23. 04:01:756 (4,1) - Swap NC

1. 00:03:089 (4) - Tambah Finish di awal
2. 00:04:422 (6) - Tambah finish di awal
3. 00:31:756 (4) - Bagian awal slider, kayanya lebih baik pake clap sample set S:C2 deh kak, buat sesuain sama suara drumnya. Terus tambah green line satu lagi di sini 00:32:089 - set pake C:S1
4. 00:49:089 (2,5) - Entah kenapa aku cocok kak sama ritme itu sama kaya Easy, mungkin pake slider 1/1 aja atau ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT2Ar/6a796fd74f.jpg soalnya bagian ini 00:49:422 - atau ini 00:51:422 - lumayan kuat vokalnya, daripada harus pake custom slidertick sound, lebih enak langsung dipencet sendiri pas main, I'm not bring it again assume you already understand, well not big trouble there but still bothering me XD
5. 01:04:422 (1) - Almost out of screen, consider to fix that
6. 00:57:756 (3,4,1) - Something like this maybe http://puu.sh/dT6T7/3b1a8bc0db.jpg will make the flow better and arrange the notes after
7. 01:05:756 (3) - Ctrl+< that one? and move to x:280 y:116 also will make the flow better http://puu.sh/dT73j/6f7b87dea0.jpg
8. 01:22:422 (6) - Agak ganjil kak pas dimainin, harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 01:22:422 -
9. 01:24:172 - Tarik maju break time yang itu sampe sini kak 01:24:256 - kalo ngikutin suara orkestra lebih baik breaknya mulainya di red tick
10. 01:55:089 (1) - Jadiin curve sedikit aja kak biar bisa blanket sama 01:55:756 (2) -
11. 02:29:256 (3) - Sama kaya 01:22:422 (6) - harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 02:29:089 -
12. 02:30:756 - Tarik maju break time yang itu ke sini kak 02:30:922 - lebih cocok kalo ngikutin suara vokal di red tick itu
13. 02:49:422 (4) - Kenapa ada drum finish di sana kak? kayanya lebih cocok pake clap
14. 02:51:089 (3) - Yang itu juga pas bagian akhir slider kok ada suara drum clap? kayanya lebih cocok pake finish biasa
15. 03:37:756 (1) - Biar sejenis kan slider itu harusnya sama kaya ini agak lancip gitu tengahnya 03:39:089 (2,3) - Sebelum-sebelumnya juga gitu kan
16. 03:58:756 (5,1) - Anti jump, use DS instead might make some new players confused
17. 04:01:256 (3) - Sama kaya 01:22:422 (6) - harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 04:01:089 -

1. The hitsound seems much diffrent, suara drum di bagian intro agak mengganggu
2. Agak aneh pas aku coba mainin, ada bagian sedikit overmap menurut aku, 00:02:589 (6) - 00:04:922 (1) - 00:05:589 (4,5,6) - , kalo memang dari lagunya engga ada nadanya mending ga usah dimasukin daripada masukin nada ritme imajinasi XD
3. 00:29:256 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Bagian itu entah kenapa terasa terlalu maksa engga maksa juga sih, cuma jadi ngebuat kita buru-buru gitu pas main ga ada warningnya, supaya ada jeda waktu mending ini 00:29:589 (7) - dihapus aja, jadi engga berasa buru-buru masuk ke bagian part drum yang ini
4. 00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
5. 00:34:922 (1) - Sedikit over map, mending pake 1/2 slider aja, kalo pake 1/4 kita jd kaya buru-buru gitu buat ngejer nada berikutnya
6. 00:40:422 (3,6) - Kalo aku nilai sih kedua slider itu aneh kak, kenapa engga curve simpel aja atau slider art yang lain
7. 00:41:256 (4,5) - Kalo diubah jadi 1/2 slider aja bgmn kak? rasanya pas main agak ganjil sedikit engga kebaca
8. 00:58:589 (2,3) - Aku ga ngerti bagian itu aneh kak overmap malah bagian (2)nya, antara perpindahan dari (2) ke (3) berasa agak dipaksa, mending slider (2) diganti pake circle ditaro di red tick terus dikasih whistle http://puu.sh/dTdbj/c6cb25376f.jpg terus distack dibagian awal slider (3) http://puu.sh/dTdet/83ea8b21b8.jpg lebih mudah dibaca menurut aku
9. 01:15:089 (2,3,4) - Aku kurang suka kak overlapnya, agak aneh antar (2,4)nya, kenapa engga sesuatu kaya gini aja http://puu.sh/dTe3h/c3a457f5d5.jpg
10. 01:21:756 (3) - New Combo, diffrent SV should be have one at least if the Sv diffrences above 0.20
11. 01:22:256 (4) - Same as above
12. 01:22:256 (4) - Same
13. 02:05:256 (6,7) - Sama kaya ini 00:58:589 (2,3) -
14. 02:09:756 (1,2,3,4) - Kenapa engga sedikit dilebarin kak kaya ini 01:41:756 (1,2,3,4) -
15. 02:27:922 (2,3,4) - NC for each sliders, diffrent SV issue
16. 02:30:922 (7) - Kenapa ga stack di bagian akhir dari slider ini kak 02:29:756 (6) - ? entah kenapa spacingnya buat bingung
17. 02:40:422 - Mulai dari bagian itu kenapa spacingnya turun kak? padahal SV nya tetep sama 1.00, dan berasa aneh pas masuk bagian ini 02:45:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Aku kira itu stream loh kalo diliat dari spacingnya deket deket, sedangkan sebelum bagian ini 02:40:422 - Spacingnya lumayan konsisten 1.40x, gpp sih ya cuma jadi bingung aja buat salah persepsi kalo pas dimainin
18. 03:32:089 (6) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
19. 03:34:089 (6) - Ctrl+G also for better flow
20. 03:37:256 (2,3) - Same issue as 00:58:589 (2,3) -
21. 03:43:756 (6) - Ctrl+g? for better flow and to avoid anti jump
22. 03:59:922 (6,1,2) - NC for each slider, diffrent SV issue
23. 04:05:256 (5,6) - Sebaiknya hindari anti jump kak contohnya yang itu nanti kalo pas dimainin jadi kaya aneh gitu flownya, kalo bisa ya ngikutin DS aja kak kaya gini http://puu.sh/dTgal/86b7067c06.jpg

Alex Li wrote:

m4m

General

y theres no insane diff,lol but thats not a problem if u dont want to add a insane diff Well..... Actually.... I'm not good enough at making Insane diff. (Q A Q)

Easy

ar3 Nope, I'm gonna keep it (^ w ^)
od3 And I wanna to keep that too (^ w ^)

Normal

1. 01:24:172 - i dont suggest a late break here Well.... The reason is, the singer's vocal stops here and high pitch from the music starts here

Hard

1. 00:01:756 (5,6) - u dont want stack those Nope . It's too hard for the players to see a short + reversed slider right after the previous slider ends
2. 00:13:089 (5,6) - ^ Well.... I didn't plan on stacking it
3. 00:18:422 (4,5) - ^ stacking like this dosent flow/look nice It flow nice enough I think. And the players can clearly see the next note after that slider
4. 01:07:256 (1) - there are so many things to map here but u only did put a spinner, I think u can map more here because i personally dont like to putting spinner in kiai Nope. At the first and second kiai time, I just wanna to put a spinner instead of mapping that part so that I could map that part at the third kiai more to make it harder before the song ends
5. 01:23:089 (6) - maybe nc? Umm.... Nope
6. 01:30:089 (1,3) - make 3 more distance than 1 so it can make a triangle Nope. Sorry... I think that place is nice enough
7. 01:32:756 (1) - if u did ^ stack it to 01:31:089 (3) - Well..... Because I didn't change it, so it still stack on the right place
8. 01:39:922 (3) - y smaller ds, ds should be same as 01:39:422 (1,2) - Ok!! Fixed!!
9. 01:44:256 (2,3,4) - dat stream isnt look nice Um... That looks nice for me. But I'll look for other modder's opinion
10. 01:48:089 (1,2) - blanket I already make it blanket
11. 01:49:089 (3,4) - same as 00:18:422 (4,5) - Same reason as before
12. 01:55:089 (1,2) - blanket I already make it blanket
13. 02:52:089 (2,3) - do not stack Nope, I wanna to keep it
14. 03:29:756 (5) - nc No change. Sorry....
15. 03:30:422 (1) - cancel nc No change. Sorry....
16. 03:30:922 (3) - nc No change. Sorry....
17. 03:33:589 (5) - nc No change. Sorry....
18. 03:34:422 (1) - cancel nc No change. Sorry....
19. 03:35:089 (3) - nc No change. Sorry....
20. 03:37:756 (4) - nc Okay!!
21. 03:40:422 (4) - nc,make sure u nc every downbeat,wont tell anymore nc problem so plz fix your self Okay!!
22. 04:08:422 (6) - the rhythm is acctully like this
    

Yup that's true. I wanna to map that part into 1/8 beat but I'm afraid that would be too hard for 180 bpm song

anyways very nice mapset Thanks!!
I hope this will ranked soon Thanks again!!!!
good luck

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello! From my queue~

[> General <]

1. - Well, you don't need to have an .osb file for the skin. So just remove it from your beatmap folder.
2. - The spread between Easy And Normal is kinda big, you should make the Easy diff less than 1.50 stars to make the difficulty spread balanced by making the diff easier.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:03:089 (5) - Add NC here. Okay!!
2. 00:28:756 (3,4,1) - I don't really think this flow is okay when it lead to an empty grid front of it. You might need to make a full blanket here. No change for that. Sorry... I think that flow is okay
3. 00:40:422 (1,2) - Try to make this symmetry perfect, it's not an issue to be fixed. That looks symmetrical enough for me. Since I make it diagonally symmetry and not line up symmetry
4. 01:01:422 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here. That blanket looks good enough for me
5. 01:10:922 (1,2) - ^ Ok!! Fixed!!
6. 01:30:089 (3) - Add NC, music changed and this is completely a new track. Okay!! Fixed!!
7. 01:52:422 (3,1) - Recorrect the blanket, also, the spacing looks too close. No change. Also, that's the result of DS
8. 02:18:756 (2,3,4,5) - You could've made a better triangle here. That triangle looks good enough for me
9. 04:01:756 (4,1) - Swap NC. Okay!! Fixed!!
10. 04:06:422 (7) - Add NC here? not really important for it. Umm.... Nope
11. - There are some blanket issues i've found when here, i've only mentioned a few, so try to fine them. Sure! (^ w ^)

[> Normal <]

1. 00:03:089 (4) - Add NC. Ok!! Fixed!!
2. 00:31:089 (3,4) - Recorrect the blanket here. That blanket looks good enough for me
3. 00:31:756 (4) - I think you should remove the repeat arrow and add a circle next to it. Since it's a normal diff, this part need a click. Sorry.... I wanna keep that reverse part
4. 00:35:089 (3) - Add NC Ok!! Added!!
5. 00:44:422 (4,1) - Same as 00:31:089 (3,4) - Ok!! Fixed!!
6. 01:01:756 (3) - Add NC Umm... I think there's no need....
7. 01:05:756 (3) - Ctrl + G? Nope. I wanna keep that. Sorry.....
8. 01:16:756 (4,5) - Same as 00:31:089 (3,4) - That blanket looks good enough for me
9. - I'm a little annoyed when mentioning all those NCs and blanket issues. I'll focus on the pattern and flow for now, try to find them yourself to avoid huge mods. Okay
10. 01:28:422 (1,2,3) - Using 0.3x spacing is senseless when the next notes from slider (3) is going to get higher. No change for that. Sorry.... I think it's fine as it is
11. 01:55:089 (1) - How about curving this slider for parallax with slider (2)? Nope. I wanna to keep it as a straight slider for variations (not always blanket each other I mean )
12. 02:24:089 (5) - Almost the same reason as 00:31:756 (4) -, i think a two circle here is enough. And might complete the star formation. Sorry..... I stil prefer 1/1 slider (And for variations too)
13. 02:51:089 (3) - I think it'd be better if this hitsound should be soft finish, not drum. Also, swap NC with 02:51:756 (1) - , new track. Sorry.... I prefer clap hitsound with drum sampleset instead. And okay, I added NC! (^ w ^)
14. - Same comment as the previous diff, you might need to make this diff a little harder to make the gap of difficulty spread balanced. At least 1.90 star or 2 stars.

[> Hard <]

1. - Same issue of the NCs and Blankets. But less often. Phew..... Good to hear that (> w <)
2. 00:08:922 (1,2,3) - Try to make this pattern symmetric. by making slider (3) the same position as slider (1). Umm... No change for that
3. 00:31:756 (3) - I prefer this kind of rhythm in this part > http://puu.sh/dT9mr/606ac4abda.png At the beginning of the song, I just wanna to keep it like this. But don't worry... I use that pattern more often after the first kiai time
4. 00:35:422 (3,4,5,6) - Recorrect your diamond formation here. Ok!! Fixed!!
5. 00:49:089 (4,5,6) - The spacing differed here, i wonder why... Whoops..... Sorry about that. Okay then, fixed!!
6. 00:51:089 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok!! Fixed!!
7. 01:03:756 (1) - Remove NC, still in the same track. Ok!! Fixed!!
8. 01:44:256 (2,3,4) - The spacing is likely different each other, try to balance. Ok!! Fixed!!
9. 02:13:089 (5,6) - Big jump there, i don't think it fit the song track or your own track. Ok!! Fixed!!
10. 02:29:756 (6,7) - ^ I think it's fine to put a jump over there
11. 02:41:756 (3,4,1) - ^ I think it's also fine to put a jump over there
12. 02:49:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - ^, i think of it badly, but the song track should be quite intense here. So try to extend this. Umm.... I'll wait for another modder's opinion
13. 03:00:589 (5) - This slider's tail is out of grid. This might be unrankable because of off-screen play. Ok!! Fixed!!
14. 03:16:422 (3) - Make this slider itself symmetric, by moving the second point to x:360|y:196. Sorry.... I wanna keep that
15. - This diff is okay, but some distance spacing is off the track and at for sometime, it breaks a few flow of pattern. But it's not a serious major issue for your need.

You're actually good at making easier diffs, but when it goes to harder difficulty, the mapping gets more issues. But hoping you can improve it.
I guess i'm done here. Good Luck!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hellooo from my queue~ Hello~~~~ (o w o) cepet banget! Hebaat....

[General]

1. Add audioleadin 1500 for preperation before the first notes I'll wait for another modder's opinion for this
2. Green lines di beberapa spinner ada yang kurang cocok, ada yang suara spinnernya gede gede bgt, ada yang kecil kecil bgt Sama ^
3. Kak minta timing cek ke yang lain? aku main yang hard kayanya sedikit aneh, double or triple timing check would be better XD Oke!
4. Kak, fail-background sama pause-overlay baiknya dimensinya 1366x768 supaya bisa menutupi layar secara keseluruhan pas pause atau fail Umm..... Bisa aja sih.... Tapi kata modder yang lain skin buat fail-background sama pause-overlay itu kalau 1366 x 768 itu kebesaran. Katanya juga nambah sizenya mapset kalo didownload. Ukuran yang bener katanya 1028x768. Soalnya dulu aku pernah buat yang ukurannya 1366x768 buat fail-background sama pause-overlay. ...... Trus....... Ummmm....... Langsung dimarahin....... (Q A Q)
   Uwaaa.... Pertama kalinya dipanggil 'kak' sama modder..... (>/////<) *bluushh*

[Easy]

1. 00:03:089 (5) - Kak tambah finish di bagian awal sama akhir slider? kayanya kalo ngikutin suara lead gitar kaya bagian awal slider ini 00:00:423 (1) - lebih cocok, jadi biar selaras ditambahin aja Oke sip
2. 00:05:089 (6,1) - Sebaiknya sebelum spinner ada jeda waktu kak antara satu atau dua white tick, jadi baiknya spinnernya mulai di sini 00:06:422 - Oke sip
3. 00:31:089 (3) - Bagian reverse, kayanya lebih baik pake sample set S:C2 deh kak, buat sesuain sama suara drumnya hampir sama kaya ini yang bagian akhir slider 00:29:756 (1) - Maap. Mau tetap pakai SC1
4. 00:41:756 (2,3) - Flownya lebih enak kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/dT24V/ad17331be0.jpg mengikuti bentuk slider (2) kan belok ke bawah tuh, jadi daripada naro (3) di bagian atas flownya jadi agak patah gitu kak jadinya, jadi bagusnya ini 00:42:756 (3) - di taro di x:380 y:364 sekitar situ Oke sip
5. 00:51:089 (4) - Ritmenya mending diganti kak pake 1/1 slider, karena pas bagian ini 00:51:422 - suara vokalnya lumayan kuat, jadi ritmenya diganti aja mungkin kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT2Ar/6a796fd74f.jpg Maap. Masih mau tetap
6. 01:01:756 (3,4) - Spacingnya lumayan jauh beda 0.7 Nggak kok. Itu masih berdasarkan DS. Jadi nggak apa-apa
7. 01:06:756 (4,1) - Kasusnya sama kak kaya 00:05:089 (6,1) - mungkin (4) bisa didelete, biar cukup waktu sebelum spinner Ummm..... Oke, mau nunggu pendapat modder yang lain
8. 01:12:422 (3) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 01:12:756 - Cukup kuat dan mapable Ummm..... Oke, mau nunggu pendapat modder yang lain juga
9. 01:22:589 (1) - Agak ganjil kak pas dimainin, harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 01:22:422 - nadanya juga serupa kaya 01:21:422 (4,5) - jadi lebih baik ngikutin suara drumnya aja yg ada di white tick drpd ngikutin suara vokal yang ada di red tick http://puu.sh/dT3aD/fdbb026224.jpg Maap. Bagian itu memang mau ngemap suara vokalnya
10. 01:24:172 - Tarik maju break time yang itu sampe sini kak 01:24:256 - kalo ngikutin suara orkestra lebih baik breaknya mulainya di red tick Oke sip
11. 02:03:089 (4,5) - Spacing, keep stick on 1,3x, ya kurang lebihnya dua atau tiga, kalo udah lebih dari 0.5 bedanya cukup lebar kak Kayaknya nggak apa-apa kok. Itu bener-bener dari DSnya
12. 02:17:589 (1) - Ganjil banget pas dimanin kak, iya aku tau itu ngikutin suara vokalnya, tapi buat easy agak canggung dan kurang enak dimainin, mungkin lebih baik kalo slider itu mulainya pas white big tick aja kak Mau nunggu pendapat modder lainnya dulu
13. 02:29:256 (5) - Sama kasusnya kaya ini 01:22:589 (1) - mending slider (5) itu mulainya dr sini 02:29:089 - Di sini juga sama kok. Memang mau ngemap vokalnya
14. 02:31:089 - Tarik mundur break time yang itu ke sini kak 02:30:922 - lebih cocok kalo ngikutin suara vokal di red tick itu Oke sip
15. 02:49:422 (4) - Kenapa ada drum finish di sana kak? kayanya lebih cocok pake clap Ummmm.... Cuma feeling aja kok kalo lebih cocok pakai drum
16. 02:49:756 (5) - Yang itu juga pas bagian akhir slider kok ada suara drum clap? kayanya lebih cocok pake finish biasa Di sini juga feeling kok. Rasanya entah kenapa cocok. Mau nunggu pendapat modder lainnya dulu
17. 03:00:089 (2,3) - Kak kayanya bakal lebih bagus kalo (2) dibuat curve terus disusun kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT4Ez/438e5d0dd4.jpg Oke sip!! Nice suggestion
18. 03:16:422 (3,4) - Bgmn kalo Ctrl+G (3) terus tambah reverse dan delete (4) biar flownya lebih enak kak, kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT58b/5b0a87a13e.jpg Maap. Mau tetap aja dulu
19. 03:40:422 (1) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 03:40:756 - lumayan kuat dan mapable Ummm..... Oke, mau nunggu pendapat modder yang lain
20. 03:45:422 (5,1) - Yang ini mirip kaya ini kak 00:05:089 (6,1) - Ummm.... bagian itu mau tetap dulu aja
21. 03:49:589 (1) - Ganjil banget pas dimanin kak, iya aku tau itu ngikutin suara vokalnya, tapi buat easy agak canggung dan kurang enak dimainin, mungkin lebih baik kalo slider itu mulainya pas white big tick aja kak Yang itu memang mau ngemap vokal kok
22. 03:51:089 (3) - Mirip kaya ini kak 00:51:089 (4) - vokal bagian ini 03:51:422 - lumayan kuat buat dimap Umm..... alasannya sama
23. 04:01:756 (4,1) - Swap NC Oke sip!!!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:089 (4) - Tambah Finish di awal Oke sip!!
2. 00:04:422 (6) - Tambah finish di awal Oke sip!!
3. 00:31:756 (4) - Bagian awal slider, kayanya lebih baik pake clap sample set S:C2 deh kak, buat sesuain sama suara drumnya. Terus tambah green line satu lagi di sini 00:32:089 - set pake C:S1 Maap. Untuk sementara mau pakai SC1 dulu
4. 00:49:089 (2,5) - Entah kenapa aku cocok kak sama ritme itu sama kaya Easy, mungkin pake slider 1/1 aja atau ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/dT2Ar/6a796fd74f.jpg soalnya bagian ini 00:49:422 - atau ini 00:51:422 - lumayan kuat vokalnya, daripada harus pake custom slidertick sound, lebih enak langsung dipencet sendiri pas main, I'm not bring it again assume you already understand, well not big trouble there but still bothering me XD till no change I think . I'll gather another modder's opinion to make it sure
5. 01:04:422 (1) - Almost out of screen, consider to fix that Okay then, fixed!!
6. 00:57:756 (3,4,1) - Something like this maybe http://puu.sh/dT6T7/3b1a8bc0db.jpg will make the flow better and arrange the notes after Umm.... No change for that. Sorry.....
7. 01:05:756 (3) - Ctrl+< that one? and move to x:280 y:116 also will make the flow better http://puu.sh/dT73j/6f7b87dea0.jpg Okay! Fixed!!
8. 01:22:422 (6) - Agak ganjil kak pas dimainin, harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 01:22:422 - Sama. Yang itu juga ngemap vokalnya
9. 01:24:172 - Tarik maju break time yang itu sampe sini kak 01:24:256 - kalo ngikutin suara orkestra lebih baik breaknya mulainya di red tick Oke sip
10. 01:55:089 (1) - Jadiin curve sedikit aja kak biar bisa blanket sama 01:55:756 (2) - Maap. Yang itu sengaja dibuat straight buat variasi (biar nggak selalu blanket )
11. 02:29:256 (3) - Sama kaya 01:22:422 (6) - harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 02:29:089 - Yang itu juga memang sengaja ngemap vokalnya
12. 02:30:756 - Tarik maju break time yang itu ke sini kak 02:30:922 - lebih cocok kalo ngikutin suara vokal di red tick itu Oke sip!!
13. 02:49:422 (4) - Kenapa ada drum finish di sana kak? kayanya lebih cocok pake clap Buat ngasih variasi ritme biar nggak selalu clap - whistle - clap - whistle
14. 02:51:089 (3) - Yang itu juga pas bagian akhir slider kok ada suara drum clap? kayanya lebih cocok pake finish biasa Sama. Buat ngasih variasi ritme biar nggak selalu clap - whistle - clap - whistle
15. 03:37:756 (1) - Biar sejenis kan slider itu harusnya sama kaya ini agak lancip gitu tengahnya 03:39:089 (2,3) - Sebelum-sebelumnya juga gitu kan Buat variasi slider. Soalnya lagunya 4 menitan. Biar playernya nggak bored jadi saat-saat mau habis lagunya, bentuk slidernya dikasih variasi dikit
16. 03:58:756 (5,1) - Anti jump, use DS instead might make some new players confused OMG that's right! Okay! Fixed!!
17. 04:01:256 (3) - Sama kaya 01:22:422 (6) - harusnya kan slider itu mulai dari sini 04:01:089 - Yang itu juga memang sengaja ngemap musiknya kok

[Hard]

1. The hitsound seems much diffrent, suara drum di bagian intro agak mengganggu Oke. Mau nunggu pendapat modder yang lain dulu
2. Agak aneh pas aku coba mainin, ada bagian sedikit overmap menurut aku, 00:02:589 (6) - 00:04:922 (1) - 00:05:589 (4,5,6) - , kalo memang dari lagunya engga ada nadanya mending ga usah dimasukin daripada masukin nada ritme imajinasi XD Ini juga mau dengar pendapat modder yang lainnya dulu
3. 00:29:256 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Bagian itu entah kenapa terasa terlalu maksa engga maksa juga sih, cuma jadi ngebuat kita buru-buru gitu pas main ga ada warningnya, supaya ada jeda waktu mending ini 00:29:589 (7) - dihapus aja, jadi engga berasa buru-buru masuk ke bagian part drum yang ini Di bagian itu dari musiknya ada suara drum rendahnya. Jadi aku map juga pakai hitsound clap + drum additions
4. 00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:34:922 (1) - Sedikit over map, mending pake 1/2 slider aja, kalo pake 1/4 kita jd kaya buru-buru gitu buat ngejer nada berikutnya Maap. Mau tetap dulu
6. 00:40:422 (3,6) - Kalo aku nilai sih kedua slider itu aneh kak, kenapa engga curve simpel aja atau slider art yang lain Umm..... Buat variasi
7. 00:41:256 (4,5) - Kalo diubah jadi 1/2 slider aja bgmn kak? rasanya pas main agak ganjil sedikit engga kebaca Maap. Mau keep 2 note itu dulu
8. 00:58:589 (2,3) - Aku ga ngerti bagian itu aneh kak overmap malah bagian (2)nya, antara perpindahan dari (2) ke (3) berasa agak dipaksa, mending slider (2) diganti pake circle ditaro di red tick terus dikasih whistle http://puu.sh/dTdbj/c6cb25376f.jpg terus distack dibagian awal slider (3) http://puu.sh/dTdet/83ea8b21b8.jpg lebih mudah dibaca menurut aku Oke. Tapi aku fix pakai cara yang lain ya
9. 01:15:089 (2,3,4) - Aku kurang suka kak overlapnya, agak aneh antar (2,4)nya, kenapa engga sesuatu kaya gini aja http://puu.sh/dTe3h/c3a457f5d5.jpg Maap. Mau tetap seperti itu saja
10. 01:21:756 (3) - New Combo, diffrent SV should be have one at least if the Sv diffrences above 0.20 Sure!! Fixed!!!
11. 01:22:256 (4) - Same as above Umm..... No change for that part
12. 01:22:256 (4) - Same No change for that part too
13. 02:05:256 (6,7) - Sama kaya ini 00:58:589 (2,3) - Ok! Nanti aku fix pakai cara yang lain
14. 02:09:756 (1,2,3,4) - Kenapa engga sedikit dilebarin kak kaya ini 01:41:756 (1,2,3,4) - Itu memang sudah berdasarkan DS kok
15. 02:27:922 (2,3,4) - NC for each sliders, diffrent SV issue Ummm.... I'll wait for another modder's opinion
16. 02:30:922 (7) - Kenapa ga stack di bagian akhir dari slider ini kak 02:29:756 (6) - ? entah kenapa spacingnya buat bingung Di bagian itu emang sengaja dibuat jump kok
17. 02:40:422 - Mulai dari bagian itu kenapa spacingnya turun kak? padahal SV nya tetep sama 1.00, dan berasa aneh pas masuk bagian ini 02:45:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Aku kira itu stream loh kalo diliat dari spacingnya deket deket, sedangkan sebelum bagian ini 02:40:422 - Spacingnya lumayan konsisten 1.40x, gpp sih ya cuma jadi bingung aja buat salah persepsi kalo pas dimainin Oke. Mau nunggu pendapat modder yang lain dulu
18. 03:32:089 (6) - Ctrl+G for better flow? Ok! Fixed!!!
19. 03:34:089 (6) - Ctrl+G also for better flow Ok! Fixed!!!
20. 03:37:256 (2,3) - Same issue as 00:58:589 (2,3) - Ok! Fixed!!!
21. 03:43:756 (6) - Ctrl+g? for better flow and to avoid anti jump Ok! Fixed!!!
22. 03:59:922 (6,1,2) - NC for each slider, diffrent SV issue I'll wait for another modder's opinion
23. 04:05:256 (5,6) - Sebaiknya hindari anti jump kak contohnya yang itu nanti kalo pas dimainin jadi kaya aneh gitu flownya, kalo bisa ya ngikutin DS aja kak kaya gini http://puu.sh/dTgal/86b7067c06.jpg Ok! Fixed!!!

[]
Maaf kak bahasanya campur campur XD Nggak apa-apa. Aku juga jawabnya campur (>////<)
Good luck~

• Easy
  
  Try to reduce the star rating under 1.5 so it's listed as an easy map. - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
  
  02:20:422 (5) - Could you move this slider a little bit to the right, because it's almost touching with - 02:19:089 (3)
  
  Awesome difficulty, just a little hard for an easy difficulty.

• Normal
  
  03:00:756 (3) - move to X472 Y304 so it's curvier around - 03:00:089 (2)
  
  Pretty neat mapset!

• Hard
  
  I found nothing to criticze! Take this! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ ~`☆

1. I recommend to fix spinner-circle.png file to correctly.
2. Why custom skin uses normal colours??
3. Why dont you use Grip Level: 4 (tiny)?

1. 00:01:756 (5,6,7) - Distant is done funny here. Rhythm does't fit with distant. So I'll give suggestion how you would fix it, so it fits to rhythm:
   00:02:589 (6) - Move to x:472 y:168
   00:02:922 (7) - Move to x:472 y:265
   00:03:089 (1) - Move to x:472 y:265
   00:03:589 (2) - Move to x:320 y:352
   00:03:756 (3) - Move to x:192 y:304, eh is this original cordinats? don't remember :d
2. I suggest to Move 00:04:256 (4) - to x:344 y:208
3. 00:28:756 (4) - Move first dot to x:208 y:280
4. 01:49:089 (5,6) - I suggest to move these; slider to x:208 y:88 and circle to x:120 y:88
5. 01:56:756 (6) - This circle's DS is, and it look like that it's closer than others I suggest to move it to x:316 y:236
6. If you accepted that, at suggest on this, move 01:56:922 (7) - to x:276 y:160
7. 02:08:256 (3,1) - Check blanket
8. 02:52:589 (3,4) - This part, is hard to read, because #4 circle is so close to #3 circle. I consider to replace them with slider.
9. 03:32:422 (1) - Check blanket
10. 04:08:422 (1) - Move to 04:08:339 - timing is wrong, and so move timing point to same place!!

1. It's not really important and you heard it before, but try to make your 'easy' map easier.
2. idk why you have so many inherited points. it's making me dizzy -,-
   variation and stuff is good, but you shouldn't overdo it. it can get complicated cause of that.

1. 01:37:422 (5) - NC here?
   01:37:756 (1) - remove NC here then.
2. 01:45:089 (1) - remove NC
   01:45:756 (2) - add NC
3. 01:49:756 (3) - add NC here?
   01:49:089 (1) - remove NC
4. 02:29:256 (5) - add NC
5. 02:43:422 (4) - try moving this to:296|80
   you need to adjust the next notes as well if you follow my advice.
6. 03:32:089 (1,2) - switch NC
7. 04:06:422 (4) - try moving this to:392|232

1. 01:05:756 (3) - try moving this to:280|104
2. 01:17:089 (5) - ^ 428|32
3. 01:22:589 (6) - NC here?
4. 01:45:756 (4) - NC here?
   01:47:089 (1) - remove NC
5. 02:12:756 (3) - i think you should rotate this a bit for a better blanket.
6. 02:29:256 (3) - NC here?
7. 02:56:422 (3) - add NC
   02:57:756 (1) - remove NC

1. 00:00:423 (1,2,3) - you need better DS here. try for 2:208|296 and for 3:272|352
2. 00:01:589 (4) - try moving to: 220|176
3. 00:01:756 (5) - ^
4. 00:03:756 (3) - ctrl+G?
5. 00:10:256 (3,4) - use DC
6. 00:12:756 (4,5) - ^
   00:15:756 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:29:422 (6,7,1,2) - triangle is a bit off. try placing the 6 a bit to the left. (use 4 raster).
8. 00:50:256 (2) - NC here?
   00:50:089 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:20:089 (1,2) - switch NC
10. 01:53:422 (3) - this slider is a bit odd compared to the previous two. try placing this one or all three in a different way
    to mak it look better.
11. 02:01:089 (3) - try placing to:100|204
12. 02:48:422 (1) - from the start of this combo, you are working towards a climax. when you have finished the combo,
    it kind of lacks the climax by slowing down. i think it would be better to make a spinner at the end of that combo,
    so on: 02:49:756 would e ideal for a spinner.
13. 02:58:756 (1,3) - switch NC
14. 03:54:756 (1) - remove NC
15. 04:08:422 (1) - maybe place it on: 04:08:339 (1) -
    
    i hope my mod would be useful, gl with it!

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

Hey~
Here's the mod you requested in my queue.
And like every mod, these are just suggestions, so ignore them or correct me, if you think I'm wrong with something.

• Easy
  
  Try to reduce the star rating under 1.5 so it's listed as an easy map. - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria It's alright I guess
  
  02:20:422 (5) - Could you move this slider a little bit to the right, because it's almost touching with - 02:19:089 (3) It's alright. It isn't touching
  
  Awesome difficulty, just a little hard for an easy difficulty. Thanks!!! (> w <)

• Normal
  
  03:00:756 (3) - move to X472 Y304 so it's curvier around - 03:00:089 (2) Okay!! Fixed!!!
  
  Pretty neat mapset! Thanks!!! (> w <)

• Hard
  
  I found nothing to criticze! Take this! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ ~`☆ (>/////<) Thanks again!!!

Sorry that my mod is so short.
Good luck on ranking it anyways!

smsh150 wrote:

Hi! Hi!

Came from my queue.

I'll mod only Hard, because I don't really like to play easy/normal with long song.
(I hope this mod is useful)

[General]

1. I recommend to fix spinner-circle.png file to correctly.It's alright I guess. I make it with the right resolutions
2. Why custom skin uses normal colours?? Because I want to
3. Why dont you use Grip Level: 4 (tiny)? Becaue I want to do so

[Hard]

1. 00:01:756 (5,6,7) - Distant is done funny here. Rhythm does't fit with distant. So I'll give suggestion how you would fix it, so it fits to rhythm: Okay..... Let's see ..... (^ w ^)
   00:02:589 (6) - Move to x:472 y:168 Okay! Fixed!!
   00:02:922 (7) - Move to x:472 y:265 Okay! Fixed!!
   00:03:089 (1) - Move to x:472 y:265 Okay! Fixed!!
   00:03:589 (2) - Move to x:320 y:352 Okay! Fixed!!
   00:03:756 (3) - Move to x:192 y:304, eh is this original cordinats? don't remember :d lol (o w O)
2. I suggest to Move 00:04:256 (4) - to x:344 y:208 Okay! Fixed!!
3. 00:28:756 (4) - Move first dot to x:208 y:280 No change for that. Sorry......
4. 01:49:089 (5,6) - I suggest to move these; slider to x:208 y:88 and circle to x:120 y:88 No change for that. Sorry......
5. 01:56:756 (6) - This circle's DS is, and it look like that it's closer than others I suggest to move it to x:316 y:236 No change for that. Sorry......
6. If you accepted that, at suggest on this, move 01:56:922 (7) - to x:276 y:160 No change for that. Sorry......
7. 02:08:256 (3,1) - Check blanket Okay! Fixed!!
8. 02:52:589 (3,4) - This part, is hard to read, because #4 circle is so close to #3 circle. I consider to replace them with slider.It's hard diff. Anyway (> w <)
9. 03:32:422 (1) - Check blanket Ummm.... It looks fine for me
10. 04:08:422 (1) - Move to 04:08:339 - timing is wrong, and so move timing point to same place!! I'm afraid that if I put it at the blue tick, it will hard to read for the players

Really good map! Hope it get ranked someday! Thanks (> w <)

tridragon1 wrote:

[HARD]

00:21:756 the slider doesn't really go with the beat, try replacing the slider with 2 circles; 1 at 00:21:756 and 2nd at 00:21:922 This slider is better I guess, so no change

00:22:756 the slider doesn't really go with the beat, try replacing the slider with 2 circles; 1 at 00:22:756 and 2nd at 00:22:922 1/4 reversed slider is good I guess

00:24:422 the slider doesn't really go with the beat, try replacing the slider with 2 circles; 1 at 00:24:422 and 2nd at 00:24:589 Ummm.... No change, sorry....

00:25:422 the slider doesn't really go with the beat, try replacing the slider with 2 circles; 1 at 00:25:442 and 2nd at 00:25:589 1/4 reversed slider is good I guess

(you may want to skip some of these ones and balance it out since it'll get pretty.... repetitive)

01:28:422 to 01:30:089 the pause in between the sliders feels awkward, try adding circles at 01:26:992 and 01:27:256 (experiment with this one if you like) I already added it

01:31:089 to 01:32:756 the pause in between the sliders feels awkward add a slider at 01:32:089 stretching to 01:32:422 I map the music over there. Not the singer's vocal

01:52:422 to 01:53:589 the sliders at 01:52:422(1) and 01:52:922(2) and 01:53:422(3) should be replaced by 2 circles in each respective area as it feels more "in beat" circles should be put in 01:52:422 and 01:52:589 and 01:52:922 and 01:53:089 and 01:53:422 and 01:53:589 Sorry.... No change for that

Pretty small edit but i hope this does help you and most of these edits are of my own opinion so it could be bias in some regards so may be incorrect. If they were incorrect, please tell me in what regard so i can improve in further mods :^)

Also aware of the grammatical mistakes there, just cant find away to split the (number)'s

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: t/267877&start=0
now let's get to it.

General

1. It's not really important and you heard it before, but try to make your 'easy' map easier. It's fine. Even if this diff. have 'N' icon, but in AiMod this diff. still match with Easy diff.
2. idk why you have so many inherited points. it's making me dizzy -,- Well.... It's because I use too many soft custom hitsound??
   (= w =)/
   variation and stuff is good, but you shouldn't overdo it. it can get complicated cause of that. Well..... The music is changing for each part in the song, so it can't be helped (o w O)/

Easy

1. 01:37:422 (5) - NC here? Nope, sorry.... I prefer it at 01:37:756
   01:37:756 (1) - remove NC here then. No change, sorry....
2. 01:45:089 (1) - remove NC W-why?? (o w o)
   01:45:756 (2) - add NC Sorry.... No change
3. 01:49:756 (3) - add NC here? Okay! Added!
   01:49:089 (1) - remove NC Ummm..... Nope, sorry....
4. 02:29:256 (5) - add NC No change, sorry....
5. 02:43:422 (4) - try moving this to:296|80 Nope, sorry..... I prefer it at x:288 y:104
   you need to adjust the next notes as well if you follow my advice. Ummm.... Nope, sorry.....
6. 03:32:089 (1,2) - switch NC (o w O) That's right!! Okay! Fixed!!
7. 04:06:422 (4) - try moving this to:392|232 No change for that. Sorry...

Normal

1. 01:05:756 (3) - try moving this to:280|104 No change for that. Sorry...
2. 01:17:089 (5) - ^ 428|32 No change for that. Sorry...
3. 01:22:589 (6) - NC here? No change for that. Sorry...
4. 01:45:756 (4) - NC here? No change for that. Sorry... Because the high pitch either from the music or singer's vocal starting from 01:47:089
   01:47:089 (1) - remove NC No change for that. Sorry...
5. 02:12:756 (3) - i think you should rotate this a bit for a better blanket. No change for that. Sorry...
6. 02:29:256 (3) - NC here? No change for that. Sorry...
7. 02:56:422 (3) - add NC No change for that. Sorry...
   02:57:756 (1) - remove NC No change for that. Sorry...

Hard

1. 00:00:423 (1,2,3) - you need better DS here. try for 2:208|296 and for 3:272|352 No change for that. Sorry...
2. 00:01:589 (4) - try moving to: 220|176 No change for that. Sorry...
3. 00:01:756 (5) - ^ No change for that. Sorry...
4. 00:03:756 (3) - ctrl+G? Nope. I want to make the flow harder
5. 00:10:256 (3,4) - use DC Nope, sorry... I prefer SC1
6. 00:12:756 (4,5) - ^ Nope, sorry... I prefer SC1
   00:15:756 (4,5) - ^ Nope, sorry... I prefer SC1 and SC2
7. 00:29:422 (6,7,1,2) - triangle is a bit off. try placing the 6 a bit to the left. (use 4 raster). Okay, I'll change it a bit
8. 00:50:256 (2) - NC here? No change for that. Sorry...
   00:50:089 (1) - remove NC No change for that. Sorry...
9. 01:20:089 (1,2) - switch NC Okay! Fixed!
10. 01:53:422 (3) - this slider is a bit odd compared to the previous two. try placing this one or all three in a different way
    to mak it look better. No change for that. Sorry...
11. 02:01:089 (3) - try placing to:100|204 No change for that. Sorry...
12. 02:48:422 (1) - from the start of this combo, you are working towards a climax. when you have finished the combo,
    it kind of lacks the climax by slowing down. i think it would be better to make a spinner at the end of that combo,
    so on: 02:49:756 would e ideal for a spinner. Sorry.... I prefer some sliders and circles instead
13. 02:58:756 (1,3) - switch NC Whoops.... That's right! Okay! Fixed!
14. 03:54:756 (1) - remove NC No change for that. Sorry...
15. 04:08:422 (1) - maybe place it on: 04:08:339 (1) - No change for that. Sorry...
    
    i hope my mod would be useful, gl with it!

tridragon1 wrote:

GL in getting this ranked, 'ave a star :^)

monstrata wrote:

NM from my Modding Queue .

[Hard]
00:12:756 (4,5,6) - Make 00:12:756 (4) - repeat and take out 00:13:089 (5) - No change, sorry...
00:15:756 (4,5) - Same^ No change, sorry...
00:18:422 (4,5) - The next 8 combo's that follow have a pattern of repeats so you should take out 00:18:756 (5) - and make the slider a repeat too. No change, sorry...
00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Potential for better pattern here.
00:55:256 - Start slider here and make 00:54:922 (5) - shorter to compensate. Also shift these so they follow the vocals. 00:55:422 (6,7,8) - And after shifting, make 00:56:089 (8) - (or last slider if you remap) longer. No change, sorry... But I'll wait for another modder opinio
00:58:589 (2) - Make this a circle. 1/8 slider is a bit unnecessary imo. No change, sorry...
01:49:756 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing here. Either evenly spaced. or Make the slider end of 01:49:756 (1) - further away to create a more visible jump. I use 1.4 DS to map that part. So, don't worry
01:53:922 (4,5,6) - Sounds a bit off, the music seems like it's snapped to 1/3 time here, please take another listen at 50% speed. Ummm..... It sounds fine for me
02:05:256 (2) - Make it a circle. No change, sorry...
02:52:089 (2) - Ctrl+G Nope, I want to make the flow harder
03:04:422 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - One combo. Ummm.... Nope
03:20:422 (2) - Start the slider at 03:20:256 - Your previous sliders follow the vocals but this one follows the keyboard in the background so it seems out of place. Nope, sorry.... I think starting it at 03:20:422 is better
03:37:256 (2) - Circle. No change, sorry...
04:02:589 (2,3,4) - Consider remapping this part so the 04:02:589 (2) - isn't overlapped by the slider. It isn't overlapped. It's stacked. And it's allowed at hard diff
04:08:422 (1) - Make this 1/4? Ummm.... Nope

[Normal]

00:48:756 (2,3,4) - Try spacing like this. Ummm.... Like what? (o w o)
02:10:756 (4,1) - You could begin the slider on the last point of the pentagon, but this one is really minor. I'm mapping the vocal, so I add the slider when the singer say 'chi' (> w <)
02:41:089 (2) - Move this to 02:41:256 - and make it a repeat. See if that plays out better. Umm.... No change, sorry....
02:43:422 (1,2,3,4) - The main rhythm is on red ticks here. You can make one of the circles a slider to transition polarity. Um.... Thi is still Normal diff. So the beginner players will also try to play it, so I'll put it at the big white tick instead so it'll easier to read
03:52:422 (2,3,4,5,1) - Star pattern? (Diamonds are lame D:) and you also already have a diamond pattern right before: 03:50:422 (3,4,1) - so it felt just a bit redundant when i played it. Nope, I prefer diamond (^ v ^)b
04:08:422 - 1/4 Slider like the Hard? Nope. To hard for beginners in my opinion

[Easy]

I think I will have to pass on modding the Easy. My suggestions would probably include taking out the circles in a few blanket patterns because your Easy difficulty isn't easy enough imo... And as someone who loves making blanket pattern i just can't suggest something so cruel to blankets.

Example: 00:28:756 (3,4,1,2,3) - Whoopps... (o////o)



Best of luck getting this ranked~ Those were some eye-candy sliders on your Normal and Hard. [color=#00BF00]Ummmm..... eye-candy?
(o v o)7[/color

Near wrote:

Hello cupcake, strong mod incoming. Cupcake? (o////o)

Easy

00:05:089 (2) - Testplaying it I noticed that you can improve the flow a bit by moving this slider somehere near the head of the previous slider (00:03:089 (1) - ), a good place would be near the center of the screen, x232 y212.
Okay! Fixed!! (^ v ^) ..... Wait, you testplayed it?? (o w o)

00:12:422 (3) - Always try to emphasize the strong beat on the beginning of a slider and not at the end of it, like you did with 00:11:089 (1) - , you can't really change now because this part is already made and changing it would completely ruin the flow, but try to remember this the next time c: Okay. Sorry (o v o)

00:15:089 (3) - I REALLY hate modding nazis, but I could notice this blanket is a bit wrong testplaying it, I'd strongly recommend to fix it. Okay, I'll wait for another modeer opinion

00:19:756 (2) - You can improve the flow by rotating this slider a bit, press Ctrl + Shift + R, check Selection Centre and turn it 15º, see if you like it, also if you accept this, don't forget to adjust the 00:21:089 (3) - DS. Sorry..... I wanna to keep it like that for variations

00:31:089 (3) - You can rotate this like I mentioned above, same thing, but this time would be -10º. Sorry.... I want to keep that fan-shaped flow

00:31:089 (3) - Again with the same slider. Do the same thing I've mentioned above about the strong beat, but this is REALLY recommended to be changed since it's a new section of the song. You can delete the repeat and add 2 notes after it, after that you just need to adjust 00:33:089 (2) - and 00:33:756 (3) - spacing. I did an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442555. Okay! Fixed!!

01:22:589 (1) - Instead of adding a slider here ending on a strong beat, what do you thing about adding a note, and here 01:23:089 - you add a big slider ending on 01:24:256 - . Here is an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442711. Ummm.... Nope. Sorry....

01:37:756 (1) - Stop starting new sections with ending a slider on a strong beat ;_; Whoops (o////o)

01:44:089 (2) - I know what you tried to do here, but it would be better if you move this note to somewhere near x336 y132. Nope. Sorry...

01:49:422 (2) - Same thing here. You can move it to x500 y204 to stay consistent with the one I meantioned above and improve quite a bit the flow. I want to keep that. Sorry...

01:50:756 (4) - And here you can move to x364 y220 to improve the transition between this note and 01:51:089 (1) - asadadasdadasdasdadsadasd. But this is not that necessary, since the next slider is straight. And I wanna to keep that too. Sorry.....

01:52:089 (2) - Again moving notes to improve the flow, move it to x276 y68. Sorry.... I want to keep it

01:56:756 (3,4) - I noticed this blanket testplaying it too, you should fix it too ;_; Sorry.... I think that blanket still neat enough

01:59:089 (6,1) - This is beautiful \:D/ T-Thanks!!! (o////o)

02:20:422 (5) - You can, instead of ending the slider on 02:21:756 - you can end it on 02:01:422 -, since the vocal ends here and a strong beat starts on 02:21:756 - , that would be MUCH better than the way it's now. See if you like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442795. Okay! Fixed!

02:29:256 (5) - You remember the last kiai I've mentioned you should add a note and then add a big slider? If you did that you should do here too. Umm.... Nope. Sorry.....

02:45:756 (1,2) - You were always adding 1-repeat sliders, I don't know if this is just me, but it's confusing But I still wanna keep that. Sorry....

03:33:422 (3) - Move it a bit to the left to improve the flow a bit, somewhere near x368 y132, and then fix 03:33:756 (4) - DS. Sorry.... I want to keep it

Normal

00:31:756 (4) - Again with the thing of ending on strong beats ;_; and you know, since it's a new section of the song, you should add a note there or a slider, and it could be easily done because you left a big break between this slider and 00:33:089 (1) - . No change. Sorry....

00:36:422 (3) - A bit too much nazi but you can do the thing of rotation here to improve the flow. This time would be 10º. No change. Sorry....

00:43:089 (1) - Try to reverse the slider, would be more beautiful and would improve the flow. See if you like c: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442899. Okay, Fixed!!!

00:45:089 (1) - Ctrl + G to improve the flow, and it wouldn't ruin the DS spacing too much. If you agree with this, just move 00:46:256 (2) - to x132 y284 and 00:46:756 (3) - to x256 y336. Okay, Fixed!!!

01:06:756 (4) - Instead of stacking this note, what do you thing about moving it somewhere near the slider's end like x192 y112 for a better transition? Sorry.... No change for that

01:22:589 (6) - YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO HERE Sorry.... No change

01:59:089 (6) - You can put a curve here, where the slider is straight for aestheticals things, but I guess this is just a preference. Sorry.... No change

02:29:256 (3) - a Sorry.... No change

03:27:089 (1) - You didn't add a cicle on this beat on Easy, you should delete it to keep consistency, or add one on Easy. No change. For variations

Hard

00:13:422 (6) - I'm not sure about this spacing, while testplaying it I thought it was a 3/4 but it's a common 1/2, I suggest you to make a higher spacing and put it not too much closer to 00:13:089 (5) - . Okay! Fixed!!

00:18:756 (5) - Same thing here, this part is more ~intense~ than the previous one. Okay! Fixed!!

00:18:922 - You should add a note here to keep the consistence. Umm... Seems a bit overmapped, so no change. Sorry...

00:21:756 - At this part you should've increased the spacing, since it's a bit more strong, you can't do anything now because it's all made, but remember this next time :c Okay! Fixed!!

00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should REALLY increase the spacing here, this part is strong and the DS is the same as the previous part. Umm.... I'll wait for another modder's opinion

00:58:589 (2) - Not sure if it's just me, but it can confuse the players since you were adding only one slider with 4 repeats, I recommend doing the same here because of consistence and flow. Okay! Fixed!!

01:31:089 (3) - Would be better to move this note near the previous slider's end to improve the transitions plus flow. x232 y80. No change for that. Sorry....

01:49:422 (6) - The spacing is a bit low here, and this part of the song is more strong than the previous part, you should, instead of decreasing, increase the spacing here. Or if you don't want, try a repeat. Okay! Fixed!!

02:05:256 (2) - Same thing I mentioned before about the 1/4 slider. Okay! Fixed!!

02:30:922 (7) - You added a circle here, but you didn't on the previous kiai, you can delete this circle or add one on the other kiai. Okay! I'll add a circle at 01:24:256 to keep the consistency

02:49:756 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure if the players would read this properly because of the 1/4 sliders you added, they show a stream, players can think this is a continuation of the streams and booom, the miss it. You can increase the DS here. Okay then. Two modders gave the same opinion, so I'll consider to change it

03:37:256 (2) - Again, you know what to do here, a. Okay! Fixed!!

04:08:422 (1) - You didn't do this on Easy or Normal, I don't think it's a good idea to add only on Hard :c That's some bonus part for this diff. Anyway, if I do that on Easy and Normal as well, it would be hard for players

That's all, good luck o/

1. normal diff is a bit easy, tbh i can't really differ the rhythms between ur normal and easy so.. thats a bit of a problem. try using more 1/2s in ur normal
2. you need more audio leadin
   
   i got these from aibat soo.
   Skin Dimensions
3. spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 1000x800).
   
   Unused Image Files
4. scorebar-bg1.png

1. 00:01:756 (5,6,7) - whats with this spacing
2. 00:12:422 (3,4,5,6) - you really jump around to alot of different spacings too much.. like if you're going to use one spacing for one section, be consistent. i won't force you to change but just know that this is really inconsistent. if you're going to space it to the 1/1 then do it consistently
   01:48:089 (3,4,5,6) - here too, don't just randomly change spacing like that >_>
3. 00:21:922 - why isn't this mapped out .-.
   00:24:589 - ^
   00:27:256 - ^
   etc
4. 00:29:256 (5) - i suggest an NC here for spacing change
5. 00:48:422 (2) - sorta optional nc cuz this is where the kiai actually starts
6. 00:58:589 (2) - kinda confusing, i would recommend u just use 2 circles and make a triplet
   02:05:256 (2) - ^
   03:37:256 (2) - ^
7. 01:22:506 (6) - perhaps start this on the red tick? 01:22:589 - i think that would be nicer to play
   02:29:172 (5) - ^
   04:01:172 (5) - ^
8. 01:23:089 (7) - nc
   02:29:756 (6) - ^
9. 02:49:422 (4,1) - okay sorry, just no please.
10. 02:45:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why is the spacing so small here, music is pretty strong here
    02:49:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
11. 03:27:089 - hmm how bout this, i think it gives nice build up doesn't have to be a triplet in front, could just be a double
    
    SPOILER

    

1. nice bg
2. 00:21:922 - you don't need to be afraid to use 1/2 for normal, you can map this note out
   00:23:006 - ^
   00:24:589 - ^
   etc
3. 00:52:256 - this should be mapped out too, strong beat like 00:49:589 -
4. 03:27:089 (1,2) - could do something similar as my suggestion to the hard diff
5. this feels like an easy =w=

1. 02:13:756 (1,1) - well. its close but still not quite a full measure yet. idk tho owo
   01:07:089 (1,1) - ^

VINXIS wrote:

insane gd hyp e guise

Knotts wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

insane gd hyp e guise

I'll come back to mod this when the set's complete. PM when this is done.

Knotts wrote:

I'll come back to mod this when the set's complete. PM when this is done.

VINXIS wrote:

Knotts wrote:

I'll come back to mod this when the set's complete. PM when this is done.

fek the priority is real rip

I'll try having it done within these 2 weeks then asdf

Kibbleru wrote:

[General]

1. normal diff is a bit easy, tbh i can't really differ the rhythms between ur normal and easy so.. thats a bit of a problem. try using more 1/2s in ur normal It's alright I think. Since an easy diff. Is 1.59 star and that's not so far from 1.5 star that recommended for easy diff. Anyway at AiMod, this diff. Still match with an easy diff. (^ w ^)
2. you need more audio leadin Ummm..... Okay. I'll wait for another modder's opinion before change the Audio Leadin to 2,000 or 1,500
   
   i got these from aibat soo.
   Skin Dimensions
3. spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 1000x800). Okay! I'll try to resize it (^ w ^)
   
   Unused Image Files
4. scorebar-bg1.png Okay, I'll check it again before removing this

[Hard]

1. 00:01:756 (5,6,7) - whats with this spacing Okay! Fixed!!
2. 00:12:422 (3,4,5,6) - you really jump around to alot of different spacings too much.. like if you're going to use one spacing for one section, be consistent. i won't force you to change but just know that this is really inconsistent. if you're going to space it to the 1/1 then do it consistently Okay! Fixed!!
   01:48:089 (3,4,5,6) - here too, don't just randomly change spacing like that >_> Okay! Fixed!!
3. 00:21:922 - why isn't this mapped out .-. Because 1/1 slider suit the best over there
   00:24:589 - ^ Because 1/1 slider suit the best over there
   00:27:256 - ^ Because 1/1 slider suit the best over there
   etc
4. 00:29:256 (5) - i suggest an NC here for spacing change Nope. Because that note was at the red tick
5. 00:48:422 (2) - sorta optional nc cuz this is where the kiai actually starts Okay! Fixed!!
6. 00:58:589 (2) - kinda confusing, i would recommend u just use 2 circles and make a triplet Sorry... No change for that
   02:05:256 (2) - ^ Sorry... No change for that
   03:37:256 (2) - ^ Sorry... No change for that
7. 01:22:506 (6) - perhaps start this on the red tick? 01:22:589 - i think that would be nicer to play Nope, sorry.... I prefer start it at the blue tick
   02:29:172 (5) - ^ Nope, sorry.... I prefer start it at the blue tick
   04:01:172 (5) - ^ Nope, sorry.... I prefer start it at the blue tick
8. 01:23:089 (7) - nc Okay! Fixed!!!
   02:29:756 (6) - ^ Okay! Fixed!!!
9. 02:49:422 (4,1) - okay sorry, just no please. Okay! Fixed!!!
10. 02:45:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why is the spacing so small here, music is pretty strong here Okay! Fixed!!!
    02:49:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ Okay! Fixed!!!
11. 03:27:089 - hmm how bout this, i think it gives nice build up doesn't have to be a triplet in front, could just be a double
    
    SPOILER

    
    Ummmm..... No change. Sorry.....

[Normal]

1. nice bg T-thanks!!! (>////<) Actually, it took a time for about three days to find that bg (= w =). It's really hard to find a smooth bg like that (''''= w =)7
2. 00:21:922 - you don't need to be afraid to use 1/2 for normal, you can map this note out Sorry.... I prefer 1/1 slider
   00:23:006 - ^ Sorry.... I prefer 1/1 slider
   00:24:589 - ^ Sorry.... I prefer 1/1 slider
   etc
3. 00:52:256 - this should be mapped out too, strong beat like 00:49:589 - Nope sorry... I think 1/1 slider is nice over there
4. 03:27:089 (1,2) - could do something similar as my suggestion to the hard diff Okay! I added a note at 03:26:922
5. this feels like an easy =w= Okay then, I'll make it a little bit harder (> w <)

[Easy]

1. 02:13:756 (1,1) - well. its close but still not quite a full measure yet. idk tho owo Ummm... Not really I think (^ v ^)
   01:07:089 (1,1) - ^ It's fine I think

hard diff needs some work with the spacing and stuff :< easy and normal are fine i guess but normal REALLY can be harder Okay! I'll look for another modder's opinion It's fine I think

Jintai wrote:

Hard difficulty suggestions

00:12:422 (3,6,1) - Offbeat Ummm..... Nope

00:21:756 (1,2,3) - Why not stack double tap instead of slider Sorry.... I prefer slider

00:24:422 (1,2,3) - Same thing, should stack a double tap instead of a slider Sorry.... I prefer slider

01:30:089 (1) - Add a circle or two before this circle Sorry... I map the music. Not the singer's vocal over there

01:54:256 (5,6) - Kinda offbeat Ummm..... Nope

04:08:422 (1) - After this last circle, you should add a slider and a circle right after the slider at the very end. Seems a bit overmapped. So nope, sorry......

Nice job on the hard difficulty of this song, pretty fun, it still needs a bit more work though.

PureCreamy wrote:

omg this mapset is really moe >.<
PM me when the set is complete. I'll mod it <3

ikin5050 wrote:

EASY

Good difficulty but i recommend that you either get curvy sliders or angle-y sliders because now the few of them that are on angles don't feel right.

Normal

Everything i wanted to say has been said

INSANE

Most of the things have been said except for the fact that i feel that starting at around 02:35:089 you could make a stream in the map as well.

I'm really sorry that this is a sort of short mod but honestly, this is already a very good map and i couldn't find anything that hasn't been said really, good luck with getting this ranked!

Btw, have a kudosu! star :3

VINXIS wrote:

BTW MODEM U NEED TO ADD MY NAME TO HTE TAGS PLS

neonat wrote:

General

Add 2000 AudioLeadIn in .osu in Notepad for all difficulties' Fixed!

You should end all the difficulties at a similar place. Insane goes way further, and even Normal and Easy do not follow Hard. Place something at 04:08:422 for Normal and Easy and either move the finish at the end of Insane, or do something about the other difficulties as well

Easy

00:29:422 (4,1) - blanket them better Sorry... I think that's well enough
00:43:089 (1,2) - ^ Sorry... I think that's well enough
00:49:756 (2,3) - it plays more comfortably if you swap their places such that slider comes before the circle Sorry.... No change
00:55:089 (2,3) - ^ Sorry... No change
01:10:922 (1) - do not start on an off-beat at 01:10:922 - especially not in Easy. Start the slider at 01:11:089 and end at 01:11:756 Fixed!!!
01:22:589 (1) - same thing in regards to off-beat. Start the slider at 01:22:422 and repeat at 01:22:756 and end at 01:23:089 - add some finishes at the start and end of the slider to add some effect I map the music over there, so no change. Sorry....
01:57:756 (4,5) - blanket better Sorry... I think that's well enough
02:17:589 (1) - same thing as 01:10:922 (1) Fixed!!!
02:24:422 (6,1) - if you want to curve around each other, make it more even No change, sorry.....
02:29:256 (5) - same thing as 01:22:589 (1) I map the music over there, so no change. Sorry....
02:45:756 (1,2) - don't have more than 1 repeat per slider in Easy Fixed!!!
03:49:589 (1) - same thing as 01:10:922 (1) Fixed!!!
04:04:922 (1,2,3) - use 1 repeat slider for this rhythm Fixed!!!

Normal

01:14:756 (4,1) - unstack them, doesn't like a good place to hold movement or stack in the Normal No change, sorry.....
01:20:422 (4) - NC Whoops.... Fixed!!!
01:24:089 (8) - this ends very abruptly It fits well I think, so no change
01:41:756 (4) - NC here instead of 01:43:089 (1) - then NC at 01:44:422 (3) again Whoops.... Fixed!!!
02:10:756 (4,1) - unstack these, halting doesn't fit here It fits well I think, so no change
02:25:422 (3,4) - ^ It fits well I think, so no change
02:25:756 (4,1) - are they supposed to blanket, because they don't, and it doesn't really look good this way Fixed!!!
02:42:422 (4) - the end of this slider is on a very big important beat at the start of the next phrase, having it be on the end of the slider makes it very weak, reducing effect and as such it is not very well made to play It fits well I think, so no change
02:51:089 (3) - NC here instead of 02:51:756 (1) Fixed!!!
02:56:422 (3) - shouldn't the NC be here Fixed!!!
03:13:756 (1,2) - blanket better Sorry... I think that blanket is well enough
03:42:756 (4,1) - unstack these, halting doesn't fit here It fits well I think, so no change
03:53:422 (5,1) - ^ It fits well I think, so no change

Hard

01:30:089 (1,2,3) - space out their ends evenly The distance looks well enough for me. So, no change, sorry.....
01:41:756 (1,2,3,4) - this is hitsounded differently from 01:39:422 (1,2,3,4) which sounds weird Nope, I add hitsounds based from the rythm, so nothing is weird in my opinion
02:12:089 (3,4,5) - the flow here is not really good, the directions they face do not help with proper flow Fixed!!!
02:58:922 (7,1) - blanket better Fixed!!!
03:13:756 (1,2,3) - according to your combo pattern, each slider would be a NC, 03:17:756 (4) would also NC No change, sorry.....
03:57:422 (3,4) - blanket nicely Fixed!!!
03:58:256 (5,6) - ^ Fixed!!!
04:05:756 (3) - have an indication of the sv change No change, sorry.....

I find it weird that the most difficult part would be the slow softer part which apparently is much more click-heavy with all the circles
Well..... This is my mapping style (^ w ^)/ I use some hitsounded slider ticker rate to make it more lively



Good Luck and please continue to improve the map

LixRei wrote:

Hi there. Came to mod as requested.
Since Insane isn't complete yet, I'll focus on modding the other diffs.

[Overview]

1. Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Spinner circles must have a clearly visible center to make sure players have something to effectively spin around while playing through the map.Okay! Fixed!!

   And I don't think this center is visible enough.

   
   The blue dot is my cursor, btw, since I have enabled the option to always show my skin's cursor. <:
   Now, It have the center to spin (= v =)/
2. I think you use many timing sections to change volume and hitsounds. So many that makes me thing some of them may not be needed, but I don't know since you might use them to do something I can't notice.
   o_O

   
   Well, because there are too many strong beats from the song itself, it would need so many object to map it nicely, so I use some hitsounded slider ticker rate to make it more lively without increasing the diff. Too much
3. You should read this post and check your spinners all across the difficulties, since there seem to be cases of disqualification due to spinner issues. I'm glad my map is safe u.u Okay!
4. The Ranking Criteria has a guideline saying the volumes of slider tick hitsounds should be a little more quieter than hitsounds made from other elements (i. e. circles, sliders' starts and ends, and spinners), so, uh... You should check it. It's fine if it balanced with the hitsound I think
5. And yeah, you need some Audio Lead-In. Based on Offset, I suggest 1577 ms of Audio Lead-In (this gives players like 2000 ms of preparation to start playing, since it seems AiBat suggests that value). Okay, I'll use 2000 ms
6. You should map using Grid Size 4 (or the "Tiny" one) to be able to do a wider variety of patterns and prettier blankets. Just press G until "Grid Size: Tiny" appears. Ummm.... I feel comfortable mapping with this grid size, so no change, sorry....
7. Eh... you should end your diffs in the same spot, and Hard ends after Easy and Normal. And yeah, since 1/4 is too hard to read on Easy and Normal, you should -at least- place a circle at 04:08:422 - to end "at the same spot" as closely as possible. Okay, I'll wait for another modders opinion then

[Easy]

1. Nice diff in terms of rhythm, but I can't help but feel that flow is kinda weird here.
2. Before beginning, some reminder you'll have to keep in mind:
   1. If I suggest to move a note and you follow the suggestion, you should move the other notes to avoid spacing issues.
3. 00:19:756 (2,3) - I think the flow here is incredibly ankward, since slider (2) aims at a different direction than where slider (3) is, making flow weird and creating some imaginary "distance" (what I mean is that you feel like the object is far away than what it should be). My suggestion here is to move slider (3) to the direction slider (2) is aiming for. If not possible, at least aim for a curve trajectory (for example, something like this) to get a smoother flow. Nope, sorry.... Actually I really planning on keep the distance as opposite
4. 00:28:756 (3,4) - I also think flow here is a little weird, and I think it can be solved if you move circle (4) a bit down (to x:256|y:312 aprox.) so that you have the same kind of flow you got on 00:28:089 (2,3) - Nope, sorry... Since I wanna to keep it so it will form a blanket with 00:29:756 (1)
5. 00:40:422 (1,2) - Yeah... I also think flow is weird here, since both sliders aim at very opposite directions. For the flow to be smoother, I would make both sliders' curve the opposite, so that they create some curve kind of flow. And, who knows, you might be able to make a blanket with them.
   
   Here's what I mean

   
   I didn't blanketed, but you can do it if you want. <3
   Nope, sorry.... I wanna to keep that butterfly-shaped flow
6. 01:19:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - Through rhythm is okay here, the way you map it is kinda ankward to play for beginners. You can add a reverse at sliders (1) and (3) to make it easier to play. It will look like this on the timeline, through last circle is still kinda ankward to play since there's a gap of 3/2 beats between it and previous element. Fixed!!
7. 01:23:089 ~ 01:26:922 - I think the break here is unneeded, and it can be easily mapped, since there's some nice and playable rhythm here. Umm.... I'll wait for another modder's opinion
8. 02:25:756 (1,2,3,4) - Clicking 3/2 beat notes is a little ankward for beginners, but I can't think of a better way to map here. Forgive me. It's alright Don't cry (o w o)/ I'll wait for another modders opinion
9. I think next break (02:29:756 - ) should begin like this instead, since downbeat and tempo change are present there. I follow the guitar for the break time over there, and it starts at 02:30:922 (red tick)
10. 02:51:089 ~ 02:55:756 - I don't think the break here is necessary, and this part should be mapped for consistency between diffs (Normal and Hard have it mapped, and most likely Insane will have it mapped, too). Nope, since it's Easy diff I want to add a little break over there so it won't exhausts the begginer players
11. 03:24:422 ~ 03:27:422 - Make this break start normally to have consistency between your diffs. Fixed!!
12. 04:04:922 (1,2,3) - You should replace those three circles as a slider with a reverse, to avoid the most 3/2 clicks possible. Fixed!!

I still love your mapping style, Modem. T-thanks (o////o)

I'll end this mod later. Have to do some IRL things, but from what I could see from a quick check, this map is going perfectly fine. Okay!

Edit: Added another points in "Overview". (o w o) Thanks again!!

[Normal]

1. +1 to nice BG. Happy to hear that you like it (> w <)/ *it really took me for about three days to find smooth bg like that, actually (o////o)
2. 00:59:089 (1,2,3) - Wow, this shape... it's too... I love it! T-thanks!!! (>////<) *bluush* Finally someone liked it (^ w ^)/ *yaaayy!!!!*
3. 01:16:756 (4,5) - Check your blanket. Fixed!!
4. 01:24:089 ~ 01:28:422 - Same as Easy (first break). No change, sorry....
5. 01:34:089 (1,2,3) - I don't know if you wanted to blanket here or not, but you should check it. Whoopss.... I didn't recognize it! (o////o) Okay, Fixed!!!
6. 02:05:756 (1,2,3) - Same pattern again! */me happy* */me blushing
7. 02:56:422 (3,4) - Check blanket here. It looks fine, so no change sorry.....
8. 03:00:089 (2,3) - You should move slider (3) a sightly bit down for better blanket. It looks fine, so no change sorry.....
9. 03:13:756 (1,2) - Blanket here is also a bit imperfect. It looks fine, so no change sorry.....
10. 03:39:089 (2,3) - Wow, no curvy sliders anymore. For consistency sake here, you should make those curvy, since you mapped this kind of pattern like that (and I honestly like it more if it's curvy). Well, that's for variations because the song is almost over (o w o)/
11. 03:56:089 (5,1) - Check blanket. The blanket looks fine for me, so no change sorry.....
12. Diff is pretty great! Nothing more to say. Yay!! \(^ w ^)/

[Hard]

1. First of all, it seems your spacing is just too inconsistent in this diff. I don't even know if you used Distance Snap on this diff, since spacing has a lot of different values. It doesn't play bad, but some modders (including me) suggest to use a constant DS unless you're planning on doing a short jump.
2. 00:13:089 (5,1) - Check your blanket here (if you wanted to blanket here, that is). The blanket looks fine for me, so no change sorry.....
3. 00:29:256 (5,6,7) - This sudden transition from 1/1 rhythm to 1/2 rhythm is kinda hard to read. Even I lost my combo (and believe me, it's pretty hard for me to lose my combo on a Hard). You should make those three circles a 1/2 slider with reverse (like 00:28:089 (3) - ) and then continue with the 1/2 beat circles 00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - as they are. (o w o) You test played it?? Okay, fixed then!!
4. 01:24:256 ~ 01:26:922 - Same as other diffs (first break). No change, sorry.....
5. 01:27:589 (3) - Eh... a wiggle slider. It's okay to use it, I wonder? Honestly, I don't think those wiggles are the best idea (and I don't like how they look like), when you can just go and slow down the slider using a green timing section (and it seems they are kinda restricted nowadays, so it might be mentioned by BATs/QATs). I'll wait for another modders opinion (^ w ^)
6. 01:48:089 (3,4) - Check blanket here. Okay then, I changed it into another flow
7. 01:54:589 (6) - You can make this a triplet instead (just for fun, since it's only a reverse in a 1/4 slider). Nope, I like 1/4 slider more. Sorry....
8. 02:40:422 (1,2,3,4) - You should check your blankets on those sliders. Whoops.... Fixed!
9. 02:44:089 (3,4,5) - ^^ The blanket looks fine for me, so no change sorry.....
10. 03:00:589 (3) - Another wiggle slider... I'll wait for another modders opinion (^ w ^)
11. 03:58:256 (5,6) - I feel like mentioning those two because you can blanket them. Sure! Fixed!!
12. Yeah... Rhythm is good, but the way you place the elements is kinda ankward to play on some places (which are few). Even still, I like the way you use sliders and the shapes you do with them. They're good. Thanks! (o w o)/

Alright, now that's it for real.
Good luck!

Xelasto wrote:

From my modding queue

Normal

00:13:756 (1) - Curve slightly more It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
00:21:756 (1) - Fix blanket It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
00:24:422 (1) - Blanket? Ummm.... Nope, sorry.... I want to keep that flow as variation
00:40:422 (1) - Put end farther away from 4 No change. I like that flow and it plays well enough. Sorry....
00:49:089 (2) - Put end farther away from 1 No change. I like that flow and it plays well enough. Sorry....
00:53:756 (1) - curve less Fixed!
00:59:089 (1,2,3) - Same slider? Nope, sorry.... I want to keep it as fan-shaped flow
01:04:422 (1) - Improve blanket It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
01:17:089 (5) - Fix this blanket a bit Fixed!
01:38:422 (4) - Put end farther away No change. I like that flow and it plays well enough. Sorry....
01:39:756 (3,4,5,6) - Improve square It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
02:05:756 (1,2) - Blanket better? I'm not planning on blanketting it. So no change, sorry.....
02:40:422 (1,2) - Make blankets more even It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
03:15:089 (2) - Put end closer It based from the DS, so it's fine
03:28:756 (5) - Blanket 1 better It looks fine. So no change, sorry....

Very good, just a few problems.

Thanks! (> w <)/

Hard

00:04:422 (5) - Improve blanket Fixed!
01:09:422 - Don't turn off kiai time It's alright. Many ranked maps did this for some flash effect to make the maps get more interesting. And it's not an unrankable problem. So no change about kiai time
01:43:089 (5) - Curve less It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
01:48:089 (3) - Make end closer It plays well, so no change....
02:01:589 (5) - Fix blanket Fixed!
02:09:756 (1,2,3,4) - Try and not touch, looks odd. It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
02:16:089 - Don't turn off kiai time It's alright. Many ranked maps did this for some flash effect to make the maps get more interesting. And it's not an unrankable problem. So no change about kiai time
02:29:756 (1) - Move the top red point up by 1 grid. Fixed!
02:43:422 (2,4) - Make same slider It's already the same
02:44:422 (4) - Fix blanket Fixed!
02:58:256 (5) - Curve more It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
02:59:089 (1) - ^ It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
03:13:756 (1) - Make this blanket 5 better, if you can. The blanket looks fine for me. So no change, sorry....
03:20:422 (2) - Try and blanket 1 better Fixed!
03:27:422 (1,4) - Stack perfectly Fixed!
03:29:756 (5) - Curve less Fixed!
03:30:922 (3) - Blanket 2 better Fixed!
03:32:422 (1) - Put the end farther from 2 It looks fine. So no change, sorry....
03:40:256 (3) - I feel like you should place this below 2 and 1, as it flows better Nope, I prefer that double blanket! (^ w ^)
03:48:089 - Don't turn off kiai time It's alright. Many ranked maps did this for some flash effect to make the maps get more interesting. And it's not an unrankable problem. So no change about kiai time
04:08:339 (1) - Make it a repeat slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2544419 No change, sorry.... It's too hard if I start that slider at the blue tick

Very good map. All of your difficulties are fun to play. Not many things are wrong. Just some things weren't perfectly clean. Other than that great job Oh and sorry for the extremely late mod. I hit a brick wall in terms of interest to Osu for some time.

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:05:089 (2) I dont know about this one, some how it doesnt fit. Make it curvy too? If you dont try to do something like this

SPOILER

Nope. I wanna keep it. Sorry....
00:09:589 (1,2) Improve the blanket here as it is noticeable when you play it. Okay! Fixed!!
00:21:089 (3,1) Blank (3) with one (1). It would look so much better and the flow'd be nice. Nope. I wanna keep it. Sorry....
00:29:422 (4,1) I think you should improve the blank here too, since its noticalbe when you play it Okay! Fixed~!
00:44:422 (3,4) ^ Fixed~!
01:21:422 (4,5) Maybe you should do put a slider here instead. Its an easy diff so a change of rythm could be really confusing for newbies, but a slider would help a lot So many modders gave this opinion. Okay then, fixed!
02:29:089 Try something like this here

SPOILER

Okay! I'll wait for another modders opinion!!
02:45:756 (1,2) I dont like thos repeat sliders. Let them repeat once but not twice. Its just my opinion though because in some way it destroys the flow Okay! Fixed~!!
02:48:422 (3,4,5) The Flow here is akward because of how youve put (5) Move it so that it fits perfectly with (3,4) Sure! I changed it into another pattern ~
02:55:756 (1) Maybe you should delete this one because to me it starts at 02:56:756 (2) Nope, sorry.... Because based from the music, it started at 02:55:756 (1)
03:49:589 (1,2) This blanket can be improved Ummm... I'll change it into another pattern actually
04:04:922 (1,2,3) Put a slider here instead? Sure! Fixed!!

Normal
00:21:089 (3,1) Blank can be improved That blanket looks well enough for me, so no change.....
00:27:089 (1,3,4) Why not curvy ones here? For a change of how the map feels when you play it, with a lot of straight sliders in a row it feels boring (Just my opinion I make so many straight sliders at the beginning of the song because after that, so many curvy sliders incoming
\(^ w ^)/
00:31:089 (3,4) Those two can be blanket better Okay!! Fixed!!
00:46:256 (2,3,4,5) I had something like this in my mapset too, i had to delete it. Maybe you should delete (2,3) and make a slider instead. Keep (4,5) how they are, i think like this ii will be fine I think it's fine since this is Normal diff. And it will make this diff. different from Easy . Anyway, I just put that pattern few seconds before kiai time, so it won't be too many of them. It will be alright
00:59:089 (1,2,3) Why dont you blank them? :3 It looks so nice and fits perfectly since the vocals are not changing. If yes, by blanket i mean something like this

SPOILER

Nope, sorry..... I'm not planning on blanketting them. I want to keep them as fan-shaped flow. So it isn't blanket
01:03:089 (4,5,6) Fix that triangle I make it based on DS, so it would be fine
02:07:089 (2,3) You have blanket those two, so why dont you blank (1,2)? (o w o)/ it isn't blanket. It's fan-shaped flow just as before. And that blanket was just a coincidence (o v o)/
02:29:256 (3) Its just my opinion, but i really hate sliders like this, they look so ugly. Make it curvy or straight Nope, sorry.... I prefer it as 'v'-shaped slider because if I didn't make some slider like that, this map will make the players get bored since it's such a long song
02:51:756 (1,2) This blank can be improved That blanket looks fine for me. So no change, sorry.....

Hard
00:09:589 (2,3) Blank can be improved Fixed!!
00:13:756 (1,2) Bad flow here, you should put (2) so it goes against the way (1) did (I hope you know what i mean) No change, sorry....
00:16:422 (1,2) Same here Actually, I really planning on making that opposited flow to make the diff. harder
00:58:589 (2,3) Im unsure about this one, maybe you should delete (3) and put a circle on 00:59:089 (1) head instead. Put the circle here 00:58:922 No change, sorry....
01:15:089 (1,3) Im not sure about this overlap here. You should avoid it. It isn't an overlap. It's indirect stack
02:13:089 (5) Make this one curvy so it will fit with 02:13:422 (6) No change, sorry....
02:58:922 (7,1) Blank can be improved Sure! Fixed!!


Ill skip Insane as i can't mod it well, if you still want a mod from me on Insane just ask me
Nice mapset though, i really loved your slider placement haha. Good Luck with ti :3

1. Timing is fine to me, I tested about 3 times.
2. soft-hitclap and slidertick4.wav have some kind of delay, use this instead: http://puu.sh/eXxcn/2972554208.wav
3. Sorry I'm not good at skin checking, you should ask others to check your skin.
4. Delete .osb files since you have no sb in the set. if you cant find it in your folder, download the set from website and del it and re-upload.

1. ar1 is too low, and makes patterns like 01:05:422 (2,3,4) - hard to read to new players. I recommend to raise to 2 or 3.
2. If you decide to raise ar, then raise od to 2.
3. 01:24:256 - i dont think here is necessary to have a break
4. 02:29:256 (5) - add nc, as 01:22:589 (1) -
5. 02:48:422 (5) - nc

1. ar5
2. I agree with wcx that there is a gap between n and h, so try cs3.5?
3. 00:21:089 (3,1) - blanket better?
4. 00:45:922 - add a note?
5. 01:24:422 - i dont think here is necessary to have a break
6. 02:53:756 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is quite doubtful, at first follows the beat but 02:54:922 (3) - follows vocal, it's better to keep mapping on the same track.
7. 03:26:922 (1,2) - the rhythm is not very clear, use slider instead is better

1. hp-1
2. 00:31:089 (5) - nc
3. 00:58:589 (2,3) - may cause misreading, remember it's almost always not a good idea to start something on blue tick, just make like http://puu.sh/eXAlB/71c691c051.jpg
4. 01:21:756 (3) - nc for better reading
5. 01:24:422 - same mentioned in e and n
6. 01:27:589 (3) - looks quite ugly, and hears like missing something at 01:28:589 -
7. 02:05:256 (2,3) - same as above
8. 02:11:089 (1,2) - distance too close, may read as 1/2
9. 02:28:422 (3) - nc
10. 02:40:422 (1,2,3,4) - 02:43:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - since they are 1/1 distance, why put them so close with each other like 1/2?
11. 03:37:256 (2,3) -
12. 04:00:422 (3) - nc
13. 04:05:756 (3) - nc
14. 04:08:422 (1) - the piano actually begins at 04:08:339 - , but I recommend that you can just remove this slider because the paino is snaped on 1/6.

1. 00:04:422 (6) - nc
2. 00:05:339 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - sounds awful and noisy, reduce some volume?
3. 00:05:506 (11) - this note is overmapped.
4. 00:08:422 (1,2) - the jump plays smoother if you put 2 at x:220,y:336 or somewhere around it.
5. 00:09:589 (4) - nc
6. 00:10:672 (7) - remove, this tripet makes no sense.
7. 00:44:422 (7,1) - exchange nc
8. 01:04:422 (1,1) - combine these spin, 2 close spin just makes players hard to deal with
9. 01:14:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not make a regular hexagon...
10. 01:30:089 (3) - 01:32:756 (3) - nc?
11. 01:39:756 (3,4) -
12. 01:49:756 (1,2) - the overlap looks really uncomfortable to me...
13. 02:11:089 (1,1) - 03:43:089 (1,1) - same mentioned above
14. 03:03:089 - to 03:19:089 - if you can slow down the sv here, it will play much better
15. 04:01:172 - add a note?
16. 04:06:172 (3) - remove this note.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

also in insane diff, the rhythm and patterns can be improved, the styles looks really old.
.

VINXIS wrote:

btw modem y dont u respond 2 me on in-game chat? Things would be much easier :')

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here

[General]
the bpm need to be confirmed. it should be a little more than 180, not integer number imo. try to find TicClick or Charles445 Well.... I hope I'll find them
add sliderborder too all diffs please Whoops.... (o////o) Added!

[Easy]
the AR is too low for this diff, 3 would be better Nope, I don't wanna make this diff harder. Sorry....
01:12:422 (4,5) - they can blanket better I think that blanket is nice already. So no change, sorry....
01:39:756 - 01:41:089 - 01:42:422 - 01:43:756 - 01:45:089 - and so on: use whistle and clap at the same time wound sound a bit strange. how about remove all whistles?(if no, please turn the volume down a bit at least) Okay! Fixed!!
03:40:422 (1,2) - they can blanket better Okay! Fixed!!

[Normal]
00:09:256 (1) - the time gap is enough, but the spacing is too large from the spinner, please try to put it more near the center No change, sorry.... I think players have enough time to get to the slider after the spinner ends
00:34:756 (4,1,2,3,4) - this pentagon can be better Okay! Fixed!!
00:46:256 (2,3,4,5) - this stacks is really hard to play, especially in this diff. their difficulty is much higher than the other parts of this diff, I recommend you to use 2 short sliders instead Okay! Fixed!!
01:23:422 (4,5) - maybe you can remove them and start the break at 01:24:089 - . would fit the song better imo Ummm... Nope, sorry...
01:52:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:46:256 (2,3,4,5) - Okay! Fixed!!
02:30:089 (4,5) - same as before Nope, sorry...
03:40:422 (3,1,2,3,4) - this pentagon can be better Okay! Fixed!!

[Hard]
00:12:756 (4,5,6) - this part is moving clockwise but the next slider 00:13:756 (1) - is anticlockwise, this difference breaks the flow. I suggest to do ctrl+g on either 00:12:756 (4,5) - or 00:13:756 (1) - , and then fix the spacing Ummm..... Nope, sorry.... I'm planning to make 00:12:922 (4) an indirect stack with 00:14:422 (1)
00:29:256 - the spacing suddenly changed from here, and the multiple is 2, this is really confusing to read.. I suggest to change the spacing earlier and smoother. for example, spacing up at 00:21:756 - and then at 00:24:422 - , 00:27:089 - Okay! Fixed!!
00:42:756 - why suddenly reduced the spacing here? I don't see the spacing are following the song.. Okay! Fixed!!
00:58:839 (3) - a short repeat slider starting at a blue rhythm line is not recommended unless it really fits the song. in this case, this one should start at 00:58:756 - , or you can make 00:58:589 (2,3) - into a single slider Nope, sorry.... I think it fits the music well . Anyway, I did the one that you suggests before, but so many modders that tell me double repeated sliders should be repeated with the same amount of the reversed part each other so that the player won't get confused. So I changed it like that . But I'll wait for another modder's opinions to make sure about that (Sorry.... I'm not that good at english )
01:09:089 - please turn the volume up here, the song is still intense here, the silenced spinner end doesn't fit the song Nope, sorry.... I think it fits well enough with the music
01:20:756 (1,2,3,4) - better to raise the speed smoothly, like what you did at 02:09:756 (1,2,3,4) - No change, sorry.... I want to make some indirect stack while the SV changes each other
02:05:506 (3) - same as 00:58:839 (3) - Same reason as above
02:15:756 - same as 01:09:089 - Same reason as above
02:52:089 (2) - ctrl+2, 1 gird up Okay!! Fixed!!
02:54:422 (2,3,4) - this spacing is really confusing, their time gaps are the same but the distance is not.. please use same distance for them Okay!! Fixed!!
03:03:089 (1,2,3,4) - use 0.8 spacing to them? make the spacing more regular Okay!! Fixed!!
03:13:756 (1,2) - the blanket can better Okay!! Fixed!!
03:37:506 (3) - same as before Same reason as before
04:08:422 (1) - move it to 04:08:339 - to follow the sound more accurately Okay!! Fixed!!
the overall spacing using in this diff is really bad imo, some of them makes player confused to read, some spacng changing doesn't fit the song. hope you can remap the spacing to the diff Okay!! I'll check it again

the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is too big imo. and the quality of Hard and Insane diffs can be improved
good luck then

Minakami Yuki wrote:

M4M from No_Gu's modding team

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. Timing is fine to me, I tested about 3 times. Wow! Thanks for the Testplay!
2. soft-hitclap and slidertick4.wav have some kind of delay, use this instead: http://puu.sh/eXxcn/2972554208.wav Umm.... Let me think about it
3. Sorry I'm not good at skin checking, you should ask others to check your skin. Okay!!
4. Delete .osb files since you have no sb in the set. if you cant find it in your folder, download the set from website and del it and re-upload. Actually, I'm planning on putting some storyboards like lyrics or something..... So I'll think about it before I deletes it

Easy

1. ar1 is too low, and makes patterns like 01:05:422 (2,3,4) - hard to read to new players. I recommend to raise to 2 or 3. Okay, fixed!!
2. If you decide to raise ar, then raise od to 2. Okay, fixed!!
3. 01:24:256 - i dont think here is necessary to have a break Okay, fixed!!
4. 02:29:256 (5) - add nc, as 01:22:589 (1) - Okay, fixed!!
5. 02:48:422 (5) - nc Whoops.... I forgot. Okay then, Fixed!!

Normal

1. ar5 Okay!
2. I agree with wcx that there is a gap between n and h, so try cs3.5? Nope, sorry..... I think the beginner players will also trying to play this diff. So, CS 3 will be more comfortable for all the players
3. 00:21:089 (3,1) - blanket better? Okay then, fixed!!
4. 00:45:922 - add a note? Umm.... Too hard for Normal diff. So nope, sorry...
5. 01:24:422 - i dont think here is necessary to have a break The time is enough for break. So I think it's necesssary
6. 02:53:756 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is quite doubtful, at first follows the beat but 02:54:922 (3) - follows vocal, it's better to keep mapping on the same track. I think it's fine to map the music at some part
7. 03:26:922 (1,2) - the rhythm is not very clear, use slider instead is better Okay, fixed!!

Hard

1. hp-1 Ummm..... Nope sorry.... If I do that, then hp will be like at Normal diff. state
2. 00:31:089 (5) - nc Okay then, fixed!!
3. 00:58:589 (2,3) - may cause misreading, remember it's almost always not a good idea to start something on blue tick, just make like http://puu.sh/eXAlB/71c691c051.jpg Wow! Nice idea! Okay then, fixed!!
4. 01:21:756 (3) - nc for better reading Okay!! Fixed!!
5. 01:24:422 - same mentioned in e and n Okay!! Fixed!!
6. 01:27:589 (3) - looks quite ugly, and hears like missing something at 01:28:589 - Okay then, I'll add a circle at 01:28:589
7. 02:05:256 (2,3) - same as above Okay!! Fixed!!
8. 02:11:089 (1,2) - distance too close, may read as 1/2 Nope. I think it's the right distance since I still use 1.4 DS over there
9. 02:28:422 (3) - nc Okay!! Fixed!!
10. 02:40:422 (1,2,3,4) - 02:43:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - since they are 1/1 distance, why put them so close with each other like 1/2? Whoops... (o////o) Fixed!!
11. 03:37:256 (2,3) - Okay!! Fixed!!
12. 04:00:422 (3) - nc Okay!! Fixed!!
13. 04:05:756 (3) - nc Okay!! Fixed!!
14. 04:08:422 (1) - the piano actually begins at 04:08:339 - , but I recommend that you can just remove this slider because the paino is snaped on 1/6. Umm.... Okay then, I'll move it to 04:08:339 instead of removing it

did you map the hard in grid snap 3(small)? if yes, i can say that gs3 limits your patterns and flow in hard I think gs3 is comfortable for me .

and why you map kiai time and 03:03:089 - to 03:19:089 - with the same sv? different parts of music show different impressions, and your map should also shows the music. I think I'll leave that part with the same SV, but I'll reduce the distance to show it if that was a slow part

good luck.

1. Put '綾野ましろ' in Artist instead of Tags because https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Metadata
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for hel

2. idk if putting the character's name in Tags is really necessary but i guess it isn't lmao just pointing it out. no need to change if you disagree with me

1. 00:11:089 (1) - i see that you have a good custom-hitsound, so why not add finish at slider's head? the ringing bell kinda adds a good emphasize as a start of this verse
2. 00:18:756 (4,1) - blanket can be improved but idk this isn't really important anyway lmao put the red node at 112|72 and the second node to 52|64 http://puu.sh/femNh/a28adec5c8.jpg
3. 00:45:756 - this part has a strong beat, and making a slider ends here is such a waste. you can accent the strong beat here. would be better if you make something clickable here. i'd remove the reverse arrow and add 1/4 slider which starts here 00:45:756 -
   
4. 01:17:756 (1) - lower this down a bit? for better flow http://puu.sh/fenLp/a07981d19a.jpg
5. 01:23:422 (4,5) - this ending here is kinda idk derp because you're following the continuous instrument here, which is actually good, but then you stopped here for break and it's really weird lol. it seems that the vocal is quite dominant here so i suggest to follow it. my suggestion : http://puu.sh/feo6d/9e50efa58f.jpg stack in normal is ok if you have easy diff wwwww you can change the placement accordingly to your own preference
6. 01:44:422 (1) - nazi shit lol move the last node one grid to the right for better blanket (412|160)
7. 02:29:256 (3,4,5) - same like 01:23:422 (4,5) -
8. 03:59:089 - would be better if you make this part clickable to accent the strong beat
   
   for consistency, you should consider ending this diff at the same time like hard and insane but idk up to you

1. 00:08:922 (1,2,3) - you should make the hitsound a bit louder here
2. 00:13:756 (1) - i'd end this slider 00:14:089 - and make similiar rhythm with 00:11:089 (1,2) - for consistency, since there's a slider end here 00:11:422 - while this part here 00:14:089 - is quiet empty even though they're actually in the same verse. but i guess these 00:16:422 (1,1) - are fine tho, for rhythm variations. dang im sorry if it's kinda irrelevant for you
3. 01:06:756 (6) - finish at slider's tail?
4. 01:20:422 - would be great if you also make this clickable because the beat here is strong
5. 01:24:256 (2,1) - the gap between them is really awkward lmao i suppose there should be a break between them? idk there's no break in my editor
6. 01:26:922 (1) - remove nc. 01:26:756 (1,1,2,3) - are all in the same combo
7. 01:28:589 (4) - nc
8. 01:33:922 (4) - add nc, then remove nc at 01:34:756 (1) - and 01:35:756 (1) - after that add nc 01:36:422 (3) - . better combo-reading, i guess
9. 01:41:089 (7) - this one touches the HP bar a bit. better lower it down
10. 01:48:756 (4) - ^
11. 01:51:256 (4,5) - blanket is a bit off http://puu.sh/ferph/6490d3c0a5.jpg idk im not really good at blanket lmao you can adjust it by your own
12. 01:53:922 (4) - i'd nc this because the music here 01:53:922 (4,5,6) - has a different feeling with 01:52:422 (1,2,3) - so yeah
13. 01:55:089 (1,2) - blanket is a bit off http://puu.sh/ferzP/f2c4720171.jpg
14. 02:13:422 (6) - add finish at slider's tail? because you added finish at this white tick 02:11:089 (1) -
15. 02:29:756 (1,2) - you can improve the blanket here http://puu.sh/fes5D/446a0f1065.jpg
16. 02:53:756 (1,2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since you mapped this part 02:52:089 - but this one 02:54:089 - is empty
    
17. 02:58:922 (7,1) - blanket can also be improved http://puu.sh/fesqh/0f5ab503cc.jpg
18. 03:45:422 (3) - finish at slider's tail? actually really similiar beat with 03:43:089 (1) - big white tick

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VINXIS wrote:

fuk kkwait

FaiVillager

Hi~ NM from my queue~
sorry for late cause these days I've been so busy..

[insane]
00:02:589 (6) - bad flow ??? Semi agree here. The (2)-(345)-(6) angle is a 90 degree turn anticlockwise, then the slider turns out clockwise just a little bit. Move the whole slider 4 grids left or rotate the slider 10 degrees anticlockwise
00:09:589 (1,3) - bad overlap lolk w/e Fixed already
00:16:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - every beat whistle here is a little noisy nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kw/e if more people have problems with it I'm not good at hitsounds. no comment
00:21:422 (4,5,6,7) - make a curve slider to check it i did before, but i moved 1 higher cuz aesthetic Fixed already
00:24:756 (2,3,4) - you can make a stop herenou If you don't want to it's your choice
00:34:922 (4) - vol down is a good idea here but don't make it unhearable dad pls y tho
00:52:256 (1) - blanket dam Fixed
01:12:422 (1) - change a form ??? Don't know what he means either. Maybe he's asking you to make it less curved?
01:14:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - double triangle or a star? or better neither of them? BR0 DIS SASS 2 STRONG 4 ME (keeping it my aesthetic mite b shit but i like my aesthetic) Most people would find that ugly to be honest. Full agreement
01:28:422 (1,2) - just one sound here so better place a slider bby pls i dont like dis idea ;_; This is more due to personal preference, so it's fine the way it is
01:31:089 (1,2) - ^ ^ ^
01:50:089 (2) - bad flow but a good shape. if you want to keep this, cover 01:49:756 (1,2,5) - better i honestly feel u but i can't or else i'll destroy it :') I don't know what you'll destroy, but we all agree the flow's pretty bad, right?
02:02:589 (4) - blanket no CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC: Same problem as above. it's not a proper blanket. Not curved enough
02:03:756 (3) - ^ it is alredy Not curved enough
02:40:756 (2) - ^ dam Fixed already
02:42:256 (4,5,6,7,8) - fix shape br0 wats wrong wit dis m8 No idea br0
02:50:006 (2) - overmap? naaaaaaah it can't be :') idk ill change it if it actually is but i dont think it is (or I'm just deaf w/e) It's partially your preference but he's right. There's no triplet in the music. However a lot of mappers add random triplets EVERYWHERE to make things harder and it makes me annoyed when they do that.
02:51:089 - 02:56:422 bad break u cant tell me wat 2 do m0m well again, your choice. I found it weird as well.
03:08:422 (1) - x232 y308 to fix flow DAM Fixed already
03:55:422 (2,3) - same curvature no B^))))))))))))))))))))))) Can you tell me why no? I think it looks nicer with the same curvature as well. See next spoiler box for img
03:58:756 (6) - blanket but it isssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssis Same as above blankets.
04:00:422 (1,3) - ^^ ^
04:01:756 (1) - clap is no need. sounds strange lolkw/e Fixed already

thx 4 hte mod m8
http://puu.sh/fgBa3/c932813665.osu sik .osu 4 modem

btw modem should i start farming mods for you too or do you want to keep looking for them yourself. I'll do it if ur all g with it C:

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VINXIS wrote:

btw modem should i start farming mods for you too or do you want to keep looking for them yourself. I'll do it if ur all g with it C:

VINXIS wrote:

use dis version pls modem

• yoooooooo
  the drain is really deadly dang
  maybe im just noob

1. 00:02:256 (3,4,5) - only suggestion. adding whistle here fits the song well
2. 00:08:589 (2) - add finish? idk since you added finishes at these red ticks 00:08:922 (3) -
3. 00:08:089 (4) - ctrl+G makes the flow more interesting. well but it's up to you
4. 00:09:922 (2,3) - only suggestion for flow, since the flow between them is kinda awkward for me idk http://puu.sh/fh9ND/e65690a8c9.jpg http://puu.sh/fhaaT/88dbf9d041.jpg
5. 00:11:089 (1) - just like the other diffs, i suggest to add finish (the ringing bell) here, since it's kinda good to emphasize the start of a new verse
6. 00:19:756 (3) - would be better if this slider's end have the same hitsound like this one's 00:19:089 (1) - for hitsound consistency. i'd suggest to remove the whistle at 00:19:089 (1) - 's tail
7. 00:21:922 (2) - add clap? idk kinda fits the song. if you follow this, add clap at these slider's tails 00:22:756 (5) - 00:24:422 (1) - 00:25:422 (6) - etc
8. 00:42:089 (5,8) - i'd make these two a bit farther http://puu.sh/fhaXr/0bec760e60.jpg well it's up to you tho
9. 00:46:922 (6) - only suggestion about slider's shape lmao well everyone have different preferences anyway. i only tweaked few last nodes tho http://puu.sh/fhbub/82c5045bf0.jpg
10. 01:07:089 (1) - add finish at slider's head? for consistency with your previous hitsound pattern
11. 01:14:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - only suggestion for placement. i kinda dragged then downward a bit to create more jump between 01:14:922 (7,1) - so yeah http://puu.sh/fhbOh/81d4b70496.jpg well you can arrange them with your own style anyway
12. 01:33:756 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
13. 01:38:922 (7,1) - gdi the jump here is extremely high compared to the others in the same verse. i suggest to lessen the jump
14. 01:41:422 (4) - stack leniency kinda makes this circle a bit separated from the stream. well i'd suggest to unstack this but yeah up to you. not really a major problem anyway lmao
15. 01:57:756 (1,2) - nazi lol stack is a bit off. you should turn off the Grid-Snap when stacking it
16. 02:03:589 (2,3) - *blanket modders crying in the background*
17. 02:06:756 (3,4) - dang these two kinda touched the HP bar a bit. consider lowering it a bit
18. 02:08:922 (2) - ^ maybe
19. 02:13:756 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
20. 02:28:089 (3,4) - stack is a bit off
21. 02:45:506 (6,7,8) - idk adding claps at these circles like 02:45:422 (5) - can accent the drum better
22. 02:51:089 (1) - adding finish like the one at 02:50:422 (4) - 's head seems nice
23. 02:56:756 (2,3) - lmao you can blanket this better http://puu.sh/fhd3v/8c04e687d3.jpg
24. 03:05:756 (9) - gdi nc this. the combo is too long
25. 03:05:756 (9,10) - kinda weird when these two are close while 03:05:256 (8,9) - are quiet far, even though they have the same rhythm gap. i'd suggest to separate 03:05:756 (9,10) - more
26. 03:10:756 - i know you're following the vocal, but adding a note here can make the rhythm flow better
27. 03:42:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is a bit low, compared to previous jumps. i'd suggest to make the spacing farther. also you should arrange the placement a bit idk maybe like this http://puu.sh/fhdHv/809ffd40a6.jpg im not really good at this tho
28. 03:45:756 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
29. 03:52:256 (1,2,3) - i'd make them a bit spaced out like this, it's neater http://puu.sh/fhdUf/cbe38a3723.jpg also you can make better blanket this way yay
30. 03:54:922 (1) - remove whistle at slider's tail? idk it's kinda random
31. 03:56:422 (1) - idk the rhythm is kinda weird because i thought you're still following the vocal but you weren't. i'd suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/fhecR/139a69a825.jpg
32. 03:57:589 (1,2,4) - dang these placement isn't neat at all. i'd spaced them out more but it's up to you
33. 04:00:922 (3) - add finish at slider's tail? for consistency with your previous hitsound pattern
    
    would be better if this diff ends at the same time like the other diffs but yeah then again up to you. if you still want to keep the last spinner, would be better if you lowered the hitsound gradually since the spinning noise doesnt match the song, especially when it's quiet at this part

Lokovodo wrote:

I was going to mod but this map looks polished up enough, take a star for you and VINXIS's hard work.

goodjob~

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi! thanks for m4m

[General]

1. Put '綾野ましろ' in Artist instead of Tags because https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Metadata
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for hel

   Okay, Fixed~!
   
2. idk if putting the character's name in Tags is really necessary but i guess it isn't lmao just pointing it out. no need to change if you disagree with me Ummm.... No change, then

[Normal]

1. 00:11:089 (1) - i see that you have a good custom-hitsound, so why not add finish at slider's head? the ringing bell kinda adds a good emphasize as a start of this verse (O w o) Sounds really nice <3 Fixed~!
2. 00:18:756 (4,1) - blanket can be improved but idk this isn't really important anyway lmao put the red node at 112|72 and the second node to 52|64 http://puu.sh/femNh/a28adec5c8.jpg Okay~! Fixed~!
3. 00:45:756 - this part has a strong beat, and making a slider ends here is such a waste. you can accent the strong beat here. would be better if you make something clickable here. i'd remove the reverse arrow and add 1/4 slider which starts here 00:45:756 -
   Okay~! Fixed~!
4. 01:17:756 (1) - lower this down a bit? for better flow http://puu.sh/fenLp/a07981d19a.jpg No change, sorry....
5. 01:23:422 (4,5) - this ending here is kinda idk derp because you're following the continuous instrument here, which is actually good, but then you stopped here for break and it's really weird lol. it seems that the vocal is quite dominant here so i suggest to follow it. my suggestion : http://puu.sh/feo6d/9e50efa58f.jpg stack in normal is ok if you have easy diff wwwww you can change the placement accordingly to your own preference Okay! I'll change it into something else
6. 01:44:422 (1) - nazi shit lol move the last node one grid to the right for better blanket (412|160) Lol. Fixed~!
7. 02:29:256 (3,4,5) - same like 01:23:422 (4,5) - Okay! I'll change it into something else
8. 03:59:089 - would be better if you make this part clickable to accent the strong beat Okay~! Fixed~!
   
   for consistency, you should consider ending this diff at the same time like hard and insane but idk up to you

[Hard]

1. 00:08:922 (1,2,3) - you should make the hitsound a bit louder here No change, sorry.... I think it's already loud enough
2. 00:13:756 (1) - i'd end this slider 00:14:089 - and make similiar rhythm with 00:11:089 (1,2) - for consistency, since there's a slider end here 00:11:422 - while this part here 00:14:089 - is quiet empty even though they're actually in the same verse. but i guess these 00:16:422 (1,1) - are fine tho, for rhythm variations. dang im sorry if it's kinda irrelevant for you No change, sorry.... I map the piano here
3. 01:06:756 (6) - finish at slider's tail? Nope. Sorry....
4. 01:20:422 - would be great if you also make this clickable because the beat here is strong Okay~! Fixed~!
5. 01:24:256 (2,1) - the gap between them is really awkward lmao i suppose there should be a break between them? idk there's no break in my editor Okay! Added~!
6. 01:26:922 (1) - remove nc. 01:26:756 (1,1,2,3) - are all in the same combo Nope, sorry.... There is a high pitch from the music
7. 01:28:589 (4) - nc Okay!
8. 01:33:922 (4) - add nc, then remove nc at 01:34:756 (1) - and 01:35:756 (1) - after that add nc 01:36:422 (3) - . better combo-reading, i guess Nope, sorry.....
9. 01:41:089 (7) - this one touches the HP bar a bit. better lower it down Okay! Fixed~!
10. 01:48:756 (4) - ^ Okay! Fixed~!
11. 01:51:256 (4,5) - blanket is a bit off http://puu.sh/ferph/6490d3c0a5.jpg idk im not really good at blanket lmao you can adjust it by your own Okay! Fixed~!
12. 01:53:922 (4) - i'd nc this because the music here 01:53:922 (4,5,6) - has a different feeling with 01:52:422 (1,2,3) - so yeah Sure
13. 01:55:089 (1,2) - blanket is a bit off http://puu.sh/ferzP/f2c4720171.jpg Okay! Fixed~!
14. 02:13:422 (6) - add finish at slider's tail? because you added finish at this white tick 02:11:089 (1) - Nope, sorry.... It's a bit loud I guess
15. 02:29:756 (1,2) - you can improve the blanket here http://puu.sh/fes5D/446a0f1065.jpg Okay! Fixed~! But I'll keep it end at the next big white tick
16. 02:53:756 (1,2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since you mapped this part 02:52:089 - but this one 02:54:089 - is empty
    No change, sorry.... I map the music here
17. 02:58:922 (7,1) - blanket can also be improved http://puu.sh/fesqh/0f5ab503cc.jpg That blanket is nice enough I guess.... So no change, sorry.....
18. 03:45:422 (3) - finish at slider's tail? actually really similiar beat with 03:43:089 (1) - big white tick No change, sorry.....

dang it's getting really late here. i'll mod the insane tomorrow i'm sorry ;_;

FaiVillager wrote:

Hi~ NM from my queue~
sorry for late cause these days I've been so busy.. It's alright. Thank you for modding this map in your free time \(^ w ^)/

[hard]
pay attention more to blanket Okay. I'll try
00:03:089 (1,3) - for me some sliders like these looks stupid It's not I guess
00:10:756 (4,1) - move left to fix the flow Nope, sorry..... I think that placement is right based on the music
00:29:589 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little too many for hard It's alright. This is hard diff. any way
00:41:756 (4) - DS too big, maybe replace 2,3 Nope, sorry.... In my opinion, the time gap is enough to get to the next slider
00:58:589 (2,3,4) - bad hit for hard Umm.... I'll think about it
01:01:756 (1,2) - bad shape, better two curve or two broken line Nope, sorry.... That two sliders forms a sharp blanket
01:10:422 (3) - DS ^ I think it's the right distance since I use 1.4 DS while mapping that part
01:22:256 (2) - change to a circle not a slider Nope, sorry.... I map the music here
01:27:589 (3,4,3) - like insane diff, or if you like use this, please make these two in same form Nope. I guess one long slider like that to map the music is enough
01:35:089 (2,3,1) - bad flow Nope. I'm sure that I make that part flow nicely so the players will play that part comfortably. Well..... I'll wait for another modder's opinion
02:05:256 (2,3,4) - ^ I'll wait for another modder's opinion
02:09:756 (1,2,3,4) - fix shape No change, sorry.....
02:30:922 (2) - unexpectable Well.... I guess the jump is too big. Okay then, changed~!
03:00:089 (2) - vol down at the end Nope, sorry....
03:13:756 (1,2) - good shape. you can use something like these in insane Thanks (>////<) But I'll leave Insane diff. to VINXIS since I'm not really good in making some jumps
03:37:256 (2,3,4) - ^ I'll wait for another modder's opinion
04:07:089 (6) - x400 y76 Okay~! Fixed~~!

No more idea on normal and easy
Good luck ^.^ Thanks! ^.^

• [General]

1. Using Audio :
   Using audio 100% is too loud
   Using audio under 20% not rankable.
2. Are you using 1 timing for all difficult ? i think you should remove unused inherit line ( green )
3. Check AiMod~ : More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this.
4. Idk is using 3 hitsound in 1 place is rankable ?

• [ Easy]

1. 00:10:256 (2,1) - 00:11:089 (1,2) - blanked
2. 00:15:089 (3) - Ctrl+G
3. 01:40:422 (3) - Ctrl+H , and put in same place as before?
4. 02:59:089 (1) - improve the curve lol
5. 03:28:756 (3) - curve slider ? same as 03:27:422 (1) - will be better
6. 03:41:756 (2,3) - blanked

• [ Normal]

1. 01:05:422 (2,3) - blanked
2. 03:37:756 (1) - make same straight slider same as 03:39:089 (2,3)
3. 03:45:756 (1) - add whistle + finish . Same as easy

• [ Hard]

1. Really ? Easy & Normal is 40~45 % Why this 10% ?
   
2. 02:13:089 (5,6) - blanked
3. 02:28:422 (1) - Ctrl+G
4. 03:49:589 (6) - ^
5. 03:59:922 (2) - ^
6. 04:00:422 (1) - ^
7. 04:08:339 (1) - .. Should ask VINXIS about this slider
8. 04:08:589 - add spinner till 04:13:089 - same as Insane

• [ VINXIS's Insane]

1. OD-1
2. 00:43:089 (1) - Ctrl+G
3. 03:58:589 (5,6) - blanked
4. 04:04:089 (6,7) - Ctrl+G
5. 04:08:339 (1) - try to ask about this to Modem. because in hard just 1 repetitions.

Come[Back]Home wrote:

You need a BN for this T_T