1. Lemons (2.81 stars, 234 notes)
2. Normal (1.42 stars, 124 notes)

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Hai , hai

1. Resize the BG to 1024x768 properly D: (Rules~u.u)
2. Standard feels a bit hard for beginner players. Consider adding a easier diff maybe
3. 01:50:426 Probably some BAT will tell you that you should add some timing point for here, since music rhythm changes here (Ask someone about the timing)

1. 00:02:077 (lemon.png) Maybe you could move it a bit more down to center it better

1. Consider adding some break time , since this is the easier diff and beginner players will be too tired u.u
2. 00:12:853 (2,3) Stacked objects could be a bit hard to read for beginner players since this is the easier diff of the mapset!. Try to unstack them
3. 00:17:513 (4,5) (^)
4. 00:16:057 (3) New Combo here to don't break your combo pattern (Each two downbeats)
5. 00:24:212 (3) This tail from this slider doesn't flow very good with (1). Maybe you could try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:950 (2,3,4) This pattern feels a bit confuse for beginners in my opinion. You can fix it moving the tail from 00:34:115 (4) to a more readable place that doesn't touch (2)
7. 00:55:669 (1) Maybe you could move this circle to x:216 y:260 to imrove the flow!. Is not necessary to center it
8. 01:18:678 (4,1) Probably you should unstack it
9. 01:30:620 (1) Remove the Clap from this circle , sounds really bad in my opinion

1. 00:09:649 (2,3,4) This triplet simply feels very bad. *Totally bad*. You could remove 00:09:794 (3) to improve it
2. 00:17:368 (2) (^)
3. 00:18:387 (5) A NC here makes good sense. Consider adding one here
4. 00:23:629 (2,3) |Nazi| Maybe you could improve the blanket between these two objects (?
5. 00:29:455 (6,1) Bad spacing , you should fix it!
6. 00:52:173 (5) You should add a NC here , since you've made a big jump here

1. Some problems I mentioned are repeated in other parts of the map, so you should fix it on there too

Great SB , I loved it . You deserve a star <3
Good luck!

Garven wrote:

Had some QQ modding since we needed some machine translation to help things along.

SPOILER

pandorawindy 9:36:29 PM
i really love this song .. i decide to map it
Garven 9:36:43 PM
I'll retype my old messages so hopefully the translation software can make it more understandable
I recommend you use tick rate 2 since the general pace of the song would fit it best. If you listen to the bass line and the percussion, it creates that steady beat that the ticks would fill in during sliders. yeah..i have changed
Garven 9:37:51 PM
You should use a longer, echoy sound for the first note. It would have a lot better impact. changed
An example would be something like this:
21:38:29
File sent successfully: "normal-hitfinish2.wav"(52.00KB).

Open file Open the folder
Garven 9:38:37 PM
In Standard, 00:16:057 (3) - New combo fixed
00:46:348 (3) - New combo here too fixed
pandorawindy 9:39:53 PM
fixed
Garven 9:40:43 PM
I think for the sake of your pattern, I'd remove the new combo at 01:00:329 (1) - and 01:04:989 (1) - fixed
It would fit the slowdown feel of the music too
See if you can clean up these black spots in your storyboard images.

You can see them easily when the images are moving cleaned
Garven 9:42:23 PM
01:10:814 (3) - Having this as a repeat slider kind o fbreaks your new combo flow since the end of it is on the downbeat (tall white tick) fixed
You might want to consider removing the repeat and mapping something else through that part.
and applying a new combo of course
You should have the man and woman touch lips right here 01:14:310 -
Garven 9:43:23 PM
Instead of continuing moving until 01:14:892 -
It will accent the heart growing and the cymbal crash fixed
Garven 9:44:28 PM
01:28:290 (3) - New combo fixed
pandorawindy 9:44:31 PM
[Auto Reply]您好，我现在有事不在，一会再和您联系。 Don't show this again.
Garven 9:45:47 PM
During the chorus, decide whether you want to use new combos every tall which tick or every two.
I prefer two ticks since that covers more musical phrasing.
It also makes the chorus feel a little more special. oh i see
pandorawindy 9:48:38 PM
ok i see i ll have a try to fix them
Garven 9:49:37 PM
In Lemons:
pandorawindy 9:49:39 PM
[Auto Reply]您好，我现在有事不在，一会再和您联系。 Don't show this again.
Garven 9:50:18 PM
00:38:193 (10,11) - I'm not too happy with the rhythm here. Not sure why you're mapping extra beats, but if you're going to do that, I recommend moving 11 to 00:38:630 - pattern has been changed
It sounds much more natural
If you do that, add a circle at 00:39:067 -
pandorawindy 9:51:47 PM
move to 38630? it s not very fit i guess
Garven 9:52:04 PM
That's my opinion on it, anyway.
Personally, I wouldn't have 1/4 rhythms there at all.
But if you really want them there, I think they sound much better where I recommended.
pandorawindy 9:52:39 PM
how about 1/2 slider?

how about this
Garven 9:53:16 PM

Having the gap between each phrase fits better if you're doing straight 1/2 rhythms
That way there's a stronger delineation between each pattern
pandorawindy 9:54:50 PM
you have removed 00:39:358?
Garven 9:54:57 PM
Yes
I would only add if you had the 1/4 rhythms
Otherwise all 1/2 gets tedious
Garven 9:56:11 PM
01:25:960 (1,2,3) - You can't have completely silent notes like this, sorry.
It also makes 01:29:455 (3,4) - confusing since the end of the slider really feels like it should have a sound when you have a stack on the end.okay fixed
Garven 9:57:21 PM
01:34:115 (10,11) - Same comment as what we're discussing with the 1/4 vs 1/2 fixed
pandorawindy 9:57:26 PM
dont worry garven i am looking and translating
Garven 9:57:54 PM
Make the spacing even please. 01:39:357 (6,7,8,9,1) - fixed
pandorawindy 10:02:51 PM
ok i adjusted this spacing..so anyerrors else?
Garven 10:03:00 PM
I think the rest is fine
I'm trying to get timing for the ending
pandorawindy 10:05:27 PM
this end timing is so weird
i have no better idea to put the notes
so i missed o lot of the drum beats
Garven 10:06:29 PM
Try this
22:06:37
File sent successfully: "Chris Rice - Lemonade (pandorawindy) [Timing].osu"(12.00KB).

Open file Open the folder
Garven 10:06:48 PM
The last note is weird since the band starts before the drum does
pandorawindy 10:09:28 PM
wow..so many redline..
Garven 10:09:38 PM
Ritardandos do that, unfortunately. q:
Anyway, get a few other mods on this and call me back. I like this set! thank you garven

XinCrin wrote:

Hai , hai

General

1. Resize the BG to 1024x768 properly D: (Rules~u.u) ok fixed
2. Standard feels a bit hard for beginner players. Consider adding a easier diff maybe hmm..maybe..i plan to do it if more moders wanna me do.
3. 01:50:426 Probably some BAT will tell you that you should add some timing point for here, since music rhythm changes here (Ask someone about the timing) ok fixed

Storyboard

1. 00:02:077 (lemon.png) Maybe you could move it a bit more down to center it better no no..if you test it or play. you ll see it is at the center point.. edit interface is not same..

Standard

1. Consider adding some break time , since this is the easier diff and beginner players will be too tired u.u hmm....it s a little hard for me to choose the breaktime..
2. 00:12:853 (2,3) Stacked objects could be a bit hard to read for beginner players since this is the easier diff of the mapset!. Try to unstack themhmm,,i think its very reasonable appeared in normal diff..
3. 00:17:513 (4,5) (^)
4. 00:16:057 (3) New Combo here to don't break your combo pattern (Each two downbeats) fixed
5. 00:24:212 (3) This tail from this slider doesn't flow very good with (1). Maybe you could try something like this: but.. it ll break the 2 - 3 s flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:950 (2,3,4) This pattern feels a bit confuse for beginners in my opinion. You can fix it moving the tail from 00:34:115 (4) to a more readable place that doesn't touch hmm..i ll change it when i have better idea(2)
7. 00:55:669 (1) Maybe you could move this circle to x:216 y:260 to imrove the flow!. Is not necessary to center it ok
8. 01:18:678 (4,1) Probably you should unstack it ok pattern has been changed.
9. 01:30:620 (1) Remove the Clap from this circle , sounds really bad in my opinion fixed

Lemons

1. 00:09:649 (2,3,4) This triplet simply feels very bad. *Totally bad*. You could remove 00:09:794 (3) to improve itfixed
2. 00:17:368 (2) (^) fixed
3. 00:18:387 (5) A NC here makes good sense. Consider adding one here fixed
4. 00:23:629 (2,3) |Nazi| Maybe you could improve the blanket between these two objects (? no. there are symmetric pattern and blanket.
5. 00:29:455 (6,1) Bad spacing , you should fix it! ok
6. 00:52:173 (5) You should add a NC here , since you've made a big jump here ok

1. Some problems I mentioned are repeated in other parts of the map, so you should fix it on there too ok

Great SB , I loved it . You deserve a star <3
Good luck! wow thanks a lot xin..

dkun wrote:

This map is just the cutest! (Thanks Garven for pointing me here!)

I haven't seen a map from a person with no ranked maps that's impressed me this well in a very long time! Have a few stars for the great map and the extremely creative, yet simple storyboard!

^o^..thank you dkun,i m so fortunate that you can catch sight of my map..I like map not only follow the rhythm but also follow the lyric.I like to catch the songs' feeling and artistic conception before i map it. and then express them use some sliders' shape or some patterns.
I trust there are so many mappers r more gifted than me in the pending and without ranked maps. I just more lucky than them..
thank you again dkun. your stars are so big encourage for me!

I plan to get more mod from others and improve some effect of my sb. so .. could i call you back and test my map if i think the map is okay?

fm4a93au04 wrote:

能用中文 mod 实在是一大乐事 ( 终于不用边mod边查google字典了 ......LOL...我的英文也超烂的哦..
) . 之前麻烦你那麽多 , 若是能尽绵薄之力 , 本人自当在所不辞 , 绝对不是为了偷梗才来的喔 XD .

Standard

00:29:457 (4,1,2,1) - 这边我觉得那两个滑条不好看 , 所以自己编辑了一下 , 做成两对 Blanket . 不知道你觉得怎麽样 0.0" ? 如此更改之后后面也不会受到太大的影响 , 我自己有弄过一遍了 . 如果喜欢的话 , 就试看看吧 ~ ~ . 纯粹主观意见 ...... .



弯弯的滑条我也有看过 , 记得是这张图的 Hard . 仔细比较过后 , 我觉得是因为滑条太胖以及滑得不够快让它们看起来不美观 , 看起来像两陀圆形而不是绕两个圈 ( 但如果这就是你想达成的效果 , 就无视吧拜託 ><" ) .
早就想改了，挺好的
00:35:282 (2) - 我觉得它可以改成中间有一个红点的滑条对应 Vocal .那种滑条单独出现不太美观.

00:39:360 (1,2) - 1 遮到了 2 的尾巴 , 总觉得极度不协调 ...... 如果是遮到滑条中间感觉会好一点 ( 或乾脆弄成 Blanket ) .好的

00:49:263 (2) - 我把这个滑条改造了 , 感觉这样比较美观 . 这之后再把后面的物件都往下移就行了 .ok



00:58:001 - 这两个对称感觉可以把音量渐减 , 效果不错 .我做了音效处理，消除了slidertick和sliderslide音效。

督-吧-吧 (60%) 督-吧-吧 (50%) 督-吧 (40%) -吧~~~(30%) ( 然后尾巴弄成5%消音 )

超赞的 .


01:35:282 (1,2) - 这个遮挡就很不错喔 . 用同样的作法複製到 00:39:360 吧 , 00:39:360 这一组感觉遮的太多了 .好的

Lemons

00:09:360 (2) - 移到 (x,y) - (446,250) 取得一个移动的效果 . 因为前面的梗都是两次移动后接一个滑条 , 这样感觉可以呼应前面 .开头重做了哦

00:14:312 (2,3) - 移至 (356,180) 感觉比较好 . 距离变成 x1.27 , 但说真的玩起来没有差很多 . 暂时没什么好主意，以后还会改

00:20:719 - 这裡我改成这样 . 不知道会不会比较好 . 挺好的，接受了



00:25:379 - 黄色 combo2 移到可以被黄色 combo3 Blanckt 的位置 , 然后黄色 combo4 移到可以被粉色 combo1 Blanckt 的位置 . 这样既不会遮到也可以 Blanket 而且flow好像也还不错 .之前改过了，只是没有更新谱面，挺好的建议

00:33:535 (2,3,4,5) - 这个交插实在有一点不好看 ... 我会把这一串移到 (365,99) . 后面开着 Distance snap 移动黄色 Combo1 即可 .已经做了改动

00:43:583(6,7,8,1) - 这裡可以渐减音量 , 60% 50% 40% 最后拉回来 70% finish . 之前处理过消音问题

00:47:515 (3,4) - 这两个倒过来然后都上 hitclap 听起来感觉很好 , 一来对 Vocal 二来也有结尾的效果 . 如果你喜欢的话 , 试着做更好的编排吧 .我之前是跟的人声，但是如果这两个替换的话，00:47:950 - 这里会空一个clap。

00:58:001 - 同 Standard .

01:39:360 - 同 00:43:583 .

01:41:108(4,5,6) - 感觉可以小调整一下让它们排在一条线上 .这一段有比较大的改动

01:43:438 - 同 00:47:515 , 感觉还是对一下 Vocal 比较好 .同前

01:50:455 - 这裡的 BPM 变速换成滑条会不会比较好呢 ? 找了一下本机的图 , 这首歌的 Mintong 最后有一段是用滑条变速的 , 感觉还不错 .如果换滑条确实降低了很多难度，但是好像不太容易摆出合曲又很美观的形状O_o

我是觉得 , 这几个 Circle 对高手来说是一种惊喜 , 但对大众实力的人来说有点措手不及 ( 或许是我实力不佳啦= = ) . 用滑条既能达到变速效果也不会太难 . 或者改 NC , 感觉也是可行之道 .这里是garven给我测得timing points，如果我改了,他会不会吃醋，不给我rank >_>(haha )

灵光乍现

突然想到有一首歌的一个音效好像蛮合这曲子 : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/67870 这张图的 N:C1 whistle , 试试看吧.hmm..好像没有什么地方可以用到这个小镲声唉.. 不过挺好的

希望能帮到你喔 ~~~ 祝好运 .谢谢mod！！

pandorawindy wrote:

I plan to get more mod from others and improve some effect of my sb. so .. could i call you back and test my map if i think the map is okay?

Krisom wrote:

I'm suprised. Thanks Graven for directing me here.

Btw, in Lemons, you might want to check this:
01:34:117 (10,11) - The spacing it's similar to a 1/4 spacing and there's no musical cue to make it so close together. Might wanna space it out more. fixed

Don't kudosu me please, this was beautiful.
(And I mean it, I have not been impressed by a new mapper in a LONG time, if ever)
yesterday i asked garven who is krisom..he said krisom is a great mapper and bat , wow..pretty cool thank you for your encourage , krisom

Awaken wrote:

m4m
[General]
歌刚开始的时候的柠檬是不是SB?是的话可以把它放到正中间 更好 编辑界面不在中间 但是玩 或者 test 在中间，有位差
[Lemons]
有些地方的overlay用的不错 有些就蛋疼
00:14:311 (2,3,4) - 在我看来 这种图尽量保持整洁最好 no overlay 这种打起来一般 看起来不怎么样 不如搞整洁一点 改了
00:34:990 (2,4,5,6) - ^ 你这个2可以直接跟4stack 不过这样1也要调整下间距 fixed
00:38:778 (4) - ^ ... fixed
01:19:845 (2) - 这个为什么不移到4上面0.0 fixed
00:26:253 (2,4) - 这两个能不能包下一个啊 现在这样flow不怎么样hao de
01:32:952 (8)- NC 跟后面保持一致 hao
01:41:398 (5) - 这个明显移到左边好得多 x36y196 顺便把01:41:689 (6) - 移上一点 同样no overlay gai le
01:46:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 能不能摆开点哦..都挤在一起了 换梗了

[Standard]
不是很理解为什么要用这个难度名 普通的Normal就可以fixed
00:30:040 (1,2) - 有点丑改了
01:11:981 (1) - ^这个暂时留着吧
01:02:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一堆...可能也可以 不过太不好看了
01:20:137 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这连的真是够长的.. 没必要啊 切开了

Good Luck

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

hey~
M4M
听惯了ACG曲风 偶尔听一听米国乡村小调也不错 小清新~一颗KDS送上 谢谢
看到上面英文mod我压力好大Orz

[General]
除了赞找不到别的词了
SB……我的膝盖呢？
出现了一些slider的互相遮挡 姑且提一下 我也不知道这样好不好

[Lemons]
00:24:505 (4,1) - flow弧度有点微微的没对上fixed
00:26:544 (3,4) - 改正这样试试？后面00:27:709 (1) - 同 不过会出界……改了 不过和你所想的不太一样

00:31:786 (6) - 移动到X100 Y44 我觉得00:30:622 (2,4,5,6) - 互相组成等边三角形更好看一些ok
01:00:330 (1) 和01:04:991 (1) - 我觉得应该做成个封闭的心型 封闭? O_o

[Standard]
其实我觉得难度名应该是Normalgai le
00:10:234 (3) - 可以跟00:09:069 (1) - 的头做一个blanket 好的

感觉就像是鸡蛋里挑骨头 渣摸请不要在意 挺好的mod，谢谢

CET 6 wrote:

hi hi ~

小清新呐 SB好萌 ^o^

以下只是一丢丢小建议


Standard

00:25:379 (1) - 个人强迫症 觉得往上移一格比较好X240 Y116（和前连个物件首距离相同 后面也有类似的好的00:39:360 (1) - hao de ··
00:38:195 (3,4) - 这里我觉得用一个滑条比较好也好
01:42:272 (1) - 不知道你是不是要blanket 可是没包好 改了
01:29:457 (3) - 觉得这条也可以用01:25:962 (1) - 的形状恩恩 用了个类似的 o_O


Lemons

00:31:059 (3) - 觉得这里不用whistle比较合原曲 好的 remove
00:37:030 (1) - 是想要和00:36:447 (6,7) - 一起吧 不过flow是很很顺的样子 如果放在00:35:864 (4) - 首的右下角方向呢 虽然距离有点远了 做了修改
01:32:952 (8) - NC 好的


大概就这样啦
GL~ 谢谢6叔..

1. 01:29:455 (3,4) - make these look like 7 and 8 so that they aren't entirely overlapped by that slider end.
2. 01:56:315 - the end of the spinner should have it's volume decreased by like, 10-15%
3. welp. I can't be picky really because the map suits itself. nice job

1. 01:56:315 - same as the Lemons.

Angelo wrote:

Hello pandorawindy !
Here is my mod because of the m4m :

[ General]

1. For the storyboard, I was thinking to replace the "sb1.png" with this one, it looks better because of the opacity and the color

ok i changed

[ Normal]

1. 00:49:261 (2) - Try to redo the 00:49:261 (2) - blanket on 00:48:678 (1) - fixed a little
2. Make 01:51:930 (1) - this spinner finish on 01:56:084 - and add a whistle maybe ? i fixed but i didnt add one whistle
   
   Without that everything is perfect

[ Lemons]

1. 00:28:436 (2) - This circle shouldn't be here imo, when I play this I feel uncomfortable, so please remove it hmm..i think it fits rhythm and i wanna emphasize here..similar to triplets i guess.
2. 00:43:727 (7) - Put this circle at x:256 and y:204 instead of x:256 and y:212 to give it a better rounded shapepretty good idea i love it..
3. 00:45:183 (4) - This circle shouldn't be here to, it does not go with the music so i think you should move it to 00:45:329 - and move it on the 00:45:474 (5) - so weird .. unnatural notes for me..
4. Please don't follow the vocals 01:10:814 (3,4) - here, it's really unpleasant to play, it doesn't have flow at all so I suggest to do something like this in the timeline (add a 01:11:397 - circle with a clap on it)you know .. more varieties is very important. so i wanna keep it..
5. You forgot to add a Finish on 01:44:600 (1) - this circle oh my bad..thx for reminding me
6. Make 01:51:930 (1) - this spinner finish on 01:56:084 - and add a whistle maybe ? (like on the normal)nice idea for me..fixed
   
   That's all for this diff

That was my mod, i hope it will be helpful !

Good luck ! pretty well mod .. i love it.. thanks a lot

+sorry for my bad english :/

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~ from my modding queue. I realized I had skipped you for some reason, but no worries! I am here!

First off........ that storyboard is magnificent. Teach me your ways, I wish I could do that lol. hah ..this is a very simple sb . if you like it .. you can poke me in game and ask me some questions about how to make it.i m glad to help you.

[Lemons]

1. 01:29:455 (3,4) - make these look like 7 and 8 so that they aren't entirely overlapped by that slider end. hmm..unnecessary i think..
2. 01:56:315 - the end of the spinner should have it's volume decreased by like, 10-15% ok..it s a good idea.
3. welp. I can't be picky really because the map suits itself. nice job

[Normal]

1. 01:56:315 - same as the Lemons. ok

sorry for such a short mod. I tend not to be overly picky and end up asking you to change your mapping style or something.thx for modding.

Miramono wrote:

Hi! from modding queue...

MOD

[Normal]

1. 00:40:523 (2) - move x:212 y:360
2. 01:36:445 (2) - move x:360 y:128

[Lemons]

1. 00:38:193 (3) - ctrl + G
2. 01:25:960 (1) - move x:172 y:100
3. 01:46:348 (4) - ctrl + G

most of time i have no plan to break my ds . normal diff specially . i also hate use too many good flow in my hard diff,more varieties , more playable . i think some suggestions about move is helpful to me. anyway thank you for mod

That's all, hope I helped

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~

[Normal]

00:31:203 (1) - Delete NC here. flow is bad now oh thx for reminding me

01:49:261 (1) - add finish? emphasis is good this note ok

[Lemons]

00:20:717 (1) - Ctrl + g Please bad spicing no. i wanna keep it.

00:21:882 (4) - same (^)

00:28:436 (2,3) - swap not please reason is hitsound ok

01:21:008 (6) - move 152:136 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964171 unnecessary i guess , i have no plan to make there notes be one beautiful pattern , i wanna 6 - 1 s spacing keep pace with before

good map~ and hitsounding ~ thx for modding
good Luck~

1. You didn't use end.png in any of the diffs, what means you have additional file which is not required. I don't know if you deleted it from SB by mistake, but either remove the .png file, or simply add it to your storyboard.
2. Add Amusing to the tag, since it is album which contains this song - People will find the map easier.
3. You shouldn't use bright white combo color, expecially when you have bright background and additionally have white background in SB in one part. You should consider darker color, so people don't have to use dim, in my case, I could barely see the approach circles, so I think it's really not the appropriate choice. I think gray color should be fine. For example 140;140;140 worked fine in all parts for me. Definitely a thing to fix.
4. You cannot mute both sliderslide and slidertick. And I have a great solution for this. Firstly, you are only allowed to use this .wav to mute anything: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Secondly, you cannot mute both, so here's the solution - Make a copy of soft-hitnormal2 and rename it to soft-slidertick2. Than check how the normal looks. It exactly fits the hitsounding style you used, I think this is the best possible solution. For hard diff, replace soft-slidertick with soft-hitwhistle which also fits perfectly with your hitsounding style.

1. Just a suggestion, but what about using CS 3.5 instead of 3? I think your map really fits this and the difference between Hard and Normal wouln't be that big.
2. 00:13:727 (1,2) - I know the blanket is perfect - you've got almost same distance from both start and end of slider, so it is exactly in the center, but you might see the slider is visually poor for blanket. Try to make a slider more rounded around the note and keep exactly the same DS from center, start and end of slider. Currently it feels imo too straight for a blanket.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:35:280 (1,2) - Try to avoid overlapping the slider circles mainly in easy/normal difficulties. Easy/Normal should be like a puzzle, everything should fit to each other thing and it should be always perfect, if there are more objects overlapping their circles, it looks way as if someone "spit it out". If your really want to overlap it, at least don't overlap the circles, but body of sliders. After a hitburst it will hide the hitcircle under it what might confuse the newbies. If everything is easily visible, and not hidden under stuff, it is always better to read for new players.
4. 01:50:455 (1,2,3) - I know why you did it like this, but trust it or not, many newbies will fail their accuracy here due to BPM change. It is really a challenge to click BPM chaning circles for them, because they don't really know how to. The best solution is using 2 1/2 sliders, one on 01:50:455 and second on 01:51:094. Sliders are much easy to hit for newbies - they don't require that much accuracy as circles, so they won't be affected that much by BPM change, to be honest, this is the only thing that really bothers me in this map.
5. 01:16:640 - You should use the same hitsounding as you did on higher difficulty, firstly for consistency, secondly because of unrankable issue I mentioned above (replacing slidertick), and you use many ticks here, so it would fit and the third reason, they were just freaking cool on Lemons diff, so why should be bad here!

1. I am a bit unsure if one difficulty should name Normal and second Lemons. If you choose custom name, the normal diff should deserve one too, but that requires fantasy. It is always best to use something uplifting, for some songs normal might be Friendship, hard might be Love etc. In your case Normal might maybe be Lemons and this one might be Lemonade, because infact firstly you need the lemons and then you make the lemonade. But that's just my recommendation to make both diff names in relationship.
2. 00:28:436 (2,3) - Oh, yeah, stack bug here, not your wrong, this just happens, in-game it moves the circles stupidly away from the slider's circle, so the stack is totally ruined. Move the slider's end point EXACTLY into the center of the circle, then put the circles exactly on the same coordinates as the end point. 300;234 worked fine for me and didn't bug like that.
3. 00:29:455 (6,1) - Same overlap as you were doing on normal. Here I state it as a suggestion, because players who play hard are mostly able to play such patterns, but still I don't see any creativity in randomly overlapping it. For example here, you did it much more sensible: 00:32:950 (2,3)
4. 00:36:299 (4,5) - Stack bug, same as 00:28:436 (2,3)
5. 01:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These overlaps are really not great, I would make blankets or maybe make a little jump to the sliders. Main reason is that approach circle is invisible and hitburst will cover the slider, so it might be a bit confusing.
6. 01:29:455 (3,4) - Same as 00:28:436 (2,3)
7. 01:35:280 (1,2) - It's not that wrong, but these shapes don't feel really natural. It reminds me of some mappers who just tend to make "epic" sliders, so they are whole spammed by red points, simply, these are not much creative, but lazy. It is always better if the slider has smooth and natural shpae. For example like this screnshot.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:36:881 (4,5) - Same as 00:28:436 (2,3)

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. You didn't use end.png in any of the diffs, what means you have additional file which is not required. I don't know if you deleted it from SB by mistake, but either remove the .png file, or simply add it to your storyboard.
2. Add Amusing to the tag, since it is album which contains this song - People will find the map easier.
3. You shouldn't use bright white combo color, expecially when you have bright background and additionally have white background in SB in one part. You should consider darker color, so people don't have to use dim, in my case, I could barely see the approach circles, so I think it's really not the appropriate choice. I think gray color should be fine. For example 140;140;140 worked fine in all parts for me. Definitely a thing to fix.
4. You cannot mute both sliderslide and slidertick. And I have a great solution for this. Firstly, you are only allowed to use this .wav to mute anything: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Secondly, you cannot mute both, so here's the solution - Make a copy of soft-hitnormal2 and rename it to soft-slidertick2. Than check how the normal looks. It exactly fits the hitsounding style you used, I think this is the best possible solution. For hard diff, replace soft-slidertick with soft-hitwhistle which also fits perfectly with your hitsounding style.

all of suggestions r very helpful to me..
1.yeah.. my bad,i forget delete end.png , but i have one good idea to use it. so i decided keep it finally.I did a little work in my sb,,try to find end.png in my sb. maybe it is a little surprised for you , hah..
2.idk if you want me add this word 'amusing' or some amusing words..anyway i added..
3.yeah.. i did a lot of work about this point after i saw your suggestions. finally, i decided not silent both of them.i keep tick sounds which parts follow instrument. but i silent tick sounds which parts follow vocal.

Normal

1. Just a suggestion, but what about using CS 3.5 instead of 3? I think your map really fits this and the difference between Hard and Normal wouln't be that big. that s really good idea for me .. i think 3.5 cs is awesome.
2. 00:13:727 (1,2) - I know the blanket is perfect - you've got almost same distance from both start and end of slider, so it is exactly in the center, but you might see the slider is visually poor for blanket. Try to make a slider more rounded around the note and keep exactly the same DS from center, start and end of slider. Currently it feels imo too straight for a blanket. i try to make a blanket like yours , but , if i fix it ,, i must decrease spacing here. i m not very like to do this..sry
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:35:280 (1,2) - Try to avoid overlapping the slider circles mainly in easy/normal difficulties. Easy/Normal should be like a puzzle, everything should fit to each other thing and it should be always perfect, if there are more objects overlapping their circles, it looks way as if someone "spit it out". If your really want to overlap it, at least don't overlap the circles, but body of sliders. After a hitburst it will hide the hitcircle under it what might confuse the newbies. If everything is easily visible, and not hidden under stuff, it is always better to read for new players. ok , i fixed a little , i decided not overlap their end.
4. 01:50:455 (1,2,3) - I know why you did it like this, but trust it or not, many newbies will fail their accuracy here due to BPM change. It is really a challenge to click BPM chaning circles for them, because they don't really know how to. The best solution is using 2 1/2 sliders, one on 01:50:455 and second on 01:51:094. Sliders are much easy to hit for newbies - they don't require that much accuracy as circles, so they won't be affected that much by BPM change, to be honest, this is the only thing that really bothers me in this map. oh . i see . this triplets has been changed.
5. 01:16:640 - You should use the same hitsounding as you did on higher difficulty, firstly for consistency, secondly because of unrankable issue I mentioned above (replacing slidertick), and you use many ticks here, so it would fit and the third reason, they were just freaking cool on Lemons diff, so why should be bad here!
   yeah.. i forgot this part..>.< my bad .. i love more varieties in map.. hitsounds r no exception . thx for reminding me

Lemons

1. I am a bit unsure if one difficulty should name Normal and second Lemons. If you choose custom name, the normal diff should deserve one too, but that requires fantasy. It is always best to use something uplifting, for some songs normal might be Friendship, hard might be Love etc. In your case Normal might maybe be Lemons and this one might be Lemonade, because infact firstly you need the lemons and then you make the lemonade. But that's just my recommendation to make both diff names in relationship.
   this is really great idea . but..
   
   reason

   
2. 00:28:436 (2,3) - Oh, yeah, stack bug here, not your wrong, this just happens, in-game it moves the circles stupidly away from the slider's circle, so the stack is totally ruined. Move the slider's end point EXACTLY into the center of the circle, then put the circles exactly on the same coordinates as the end point. 300;234 worked fine for me and didn't bug like that.
   hmm.. i dont know if i fixed it according to your demand.i have been adjusted the sliders end s coordinate.
3. 00:29:455 (6,1) - Same overlap as you were doing on normal. Here I state it as a suggestion, because players who play hard are mostly able to play such patterns, but still I don't see any creativity in randomly overlapping it. For example here, you did it much more sensible: 00:32:950 (2,3) pattern has been changed.
4. 00:36:299 (4,5) - Stack bug, same as 00:28:436 (2,3) fixed
5. 01:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These overlaps are really not great, I would make blankets or maybe make a little jump to the sliders. Main reason is that approach circle is invisible and hitburst will cover the slider, so it might be a bit confusing. ok i have been changed this pattern.
6. 01:29:455 (3,4) - Same as 00:28:436 (2,3) fixed
7. 01:35:280 (1,2) - It's not that wrong, but these shapes don't feel really natural. It reminds me of some mappers who just tend to make "epic" sliders, so they are whole spammed by red points, simply, these are not much creative, but lazy. It is always better if the slider has smooth and natural shpae. For example like this screnshot. hmm..sry man,,i m not very like your sliders shape , i just think my sliders shape fitter lyric s tone.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:36:881 (4,5) - Same as 00:28:436 (2,3) fixed

Conclusion: Ready for Rank

I really enjoyed your map. There are almost no issues. As I see you, you are a new mapper, but you really impressed me. Only things bothering me are quite unperfect overlaps, in Lemons diff the sliders at the start of kiai, their shape was really weird. fixed Last thing which really bothered me were the hitsounds (soft-slidertick and soft-slidertick2), firstly, it was unrankable, secondly the map was really calling for hitsounding them, but I suggested pretty simple solution, which will imo make your hitsounds just perfect. Good luck with your map, I'll be really glad to see this map ranked. If you need to help with something, didn't understand something I said, feel free to ask me, I can give you deeper exaplination if you are really not sure of what I said. When I get kudosu and see the map is really improved, I will surely star the map.

thanks a lot for your detail mod..

i really love the responsible person,so..i...

;)

Yuthuil wrote:

From m4m

All are suggestions.


General:

The grey and pink combo colours are a bit random, how about going with different shades of yellow and green since that's the main focus on the bg apart from the table.
sounds good .. i encountered one bug before,this bug cause i cant set custom combo color,but now , i solved and reset them. idk if i have set it as wht you recommended.

Normal:

1. 00:02:077 (1) - suggestion - put this circle right in the middle of the lemon, or make the lemon come down right to the center.dont worry about this point , edit is not same in game. if you test or play it , you ll find this circle is accurate in center.
2. 00:30:038 (1,2) - blanket properly fixed
3. 00:32:950 (2,3,4) - arrangement can be made nicer. all reset..
4. 00:49:261 (2) - make symmetrical. no ,, i love symmetry but i m not a big fan of symmetry
5. 01:09:649 (1,2,3,4,1) - Arrangement can be made much more appealing. reset
6. 01:17:513 (2) - move to x340 y108? reset here.
7. 01:45:766 I think the beat in the background music here shouldn't be ignored. It's quite strong.i didnt miss this beat..you know i use str2 in this map. this is the reason..and i want it consistent with that long slider in first kiai
8. 01:42:270 (1) - I don't know what you think about this, but maybe add a finish on this note? :3 I really like the sound of it being here oh my hitsounds follow the rhythm.. i have never add some overbeats..
9. 01:51:094 (4) - since you put the bpm lower here, the slider's velocity has gone lower too, I think it's too surprising for a normal diff, since there's no indication why it's going slower. so maybe add a timing point and change the sv to 1.25x here? hah..it ll be harder,not easier i guess..dont worry about this point.. it s nature.

Lemons:

1. 00:14:309 (2,3) - take off ds and move these to x312 y192? it looks better imo did some other fix..
2. 00:48:095 (4) - remove ds and move to x280 y28 ok
3. 00:57:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the placement of all these could really use some work, they're all overlapping and all. edit is not same in game , in edit , there has the shadow after you hit circles. but in game , you ll find it is not very hard to read.
4. 01:00:328 (1,1) - and these could use some neatening up unnecessary i guess
5. 01:21:008 (6) - move to x144 y152 ok
6. 01:26:543 (2) - move to x340 y36 ok
7. 01:27:999 (5) - move to x358 y250 and then ds 01:27:708 (4). ok
8. 01:41:396 (5) - move this more onto the slider's body maybe, instead of the tail, or stack with the tail.hmm..it s easy to read and i have many overlap like it..

That's all and good luck~ I hope this mapset gets ranked soon, I really really like the map and SB, I actually think it could be ranked in the state it is now - very good

star :3 thank you , it s a very helpful mod for me

Frostings wrote:

Hellooooo
kinda late sorry I forgot I made a modding queue ;;
no point giving kudosu for this post, just like to mention a couple things i think you helped me a lot..you really deserved one kudosu imo,,

[General]

00:34:698 - recommend audiopreview here. right now it kinda starts mid-verse and is a little weird for me i just think the volume of start preview is gradually increase. so my method has better effect.

[Lemons >w<]
00:31:057 (3,4) - you should make these exactly same DS for better design, also maybe try a better blanket with 00:31:494 (5) - ?
sounds good , but same ds hard to be one beautiful pattern i guess
00:54:504 - I really recommend you add a note here for the loud percussions
fixed
01:09:067 (6,1,2) - try to have a better circular triangle here ok i fixed
(hint: when you set down the first two sliders, you can copy+paste both and rotate them 120 degrees together. One side will stack with a previous slider and the other will form the third side perfectly)


Really nice song + storyboard, it's kind of a shame that there's only two difficulties made for it

I think this set could support one or two more diffs, one very beginner-friendly diff, and one around 3.5 ~ 4 stars
It's your choice though i think two diffs r enough . you know 103bpm song is not suitable to make insane.and i have decreased my normal s difficulty . so every thing ll be okay..anyway.. thx for modding

OscaR CUBE wrote:

Hii..!!
For m4m, from ur q..

NORMAL

1. 00:42:853 (3) - how about move the third point of this slider to x:244 y:120 ?? i ll adjust this slider s shape when i have better idea.
2. 00:49:261 (2) - maybe like this?? i plan to keep it temporarily.you know .. more shapes or patterns mean more varieties.
   image

   
3. 01:02:076 - how about add a hit circle? all of my notes follow the instrument or vocal , i never add over rhythm notes..sry
4. 01:06:737 - ^
5. 01:38:193 (2) - x:124 y:292 ?? And you have to do the rest.. unnecessary..
6. 01:45:183 (2) - same as 00:49:261 (2)
7. 01:51:469 - add a circle?
8. 01:52:161 (1) - i think the sound at the spinner end is just too loud.. .-. ok i accepted.

LEMONS

1. 00:18:096 - why don't add a circle? not very strong beat in here.
2. 00:43:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - i think the distance is just too far.. i think this ds is not very hard for most of players .
3. 00:54:358 (3,4,5) - how about making this like this? no .. sry
   image

   
4. 00:55:377 - add a circle?? no , i have said this reason.
5. 01:14:164 - ^
6. 01:30:329 (7,8,1) - why don't stack this?? Or just make it a 'line'?? unnecessary to changed their arrangement.
7. 01:34:989 - add a note here, and here 01:35:135 - ?? weird..
8. 01:39:357 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as above.. no
9. 01:48:096 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + G ?? no, my arrangement is totally reasonable
10. 01:50:455 (1,2,3,4) - i think u should make the distance more far. players may click it before it should be. hmm..dont worry
11. 01:52:161 (1) - same as the normal diff. accepted

Nice SB! Nice Song! Nice Mapset!
And, sorry if my mod i think this is suggestion ._. don't help you so much..

Edit : the striked mods, because i mod this before i update the mapset. thx for modding

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

1. Disabled Letterbox During Breaks because no breaks in your map

1. 00:32:076 - note here for vocal?
2. 00:40:232 - same as above
3. 01:27:999 - ^
4. 01:36:154 - ^

1. Wonderful hitsounds choice! I like them so much! Star for this

1. 01:18:970 (4) - NC to have consistency

1. Nothing to say

1. Great

1. 01:08:776 (5,6) - Hard难度最好不要用这样的遮挡 比较难读

[Colours]
Combo1 : 231,231,231
Combo2 : 208,208,19
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 16,175,16
Combo5 : 0,255,0
Combo6 : 92,92,92

1. 00:32:950 (2,3,4) - these 1/2s are unnecessary, the song goes slower, I would just use a reverse slider here - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013198
2. 00:51:009 (1,2,3,4) - too much 1/2 again, I know what sound you're following but even for 103 BPM this is a bit too much since there is no easier difficulty, maybe you can try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013202
3. 00:57:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above ^ too much 1/2 try to make it easier please - http://puu.sh/bpSar/7cedf49ce0.jpg - also the sliderticks will follow the "pa-pa" part of the vocals that you followed so it wouldn't be a bad change in my opinion
4. 01:02:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - same ^
5. 01:46:931 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you could simplify this pattern as well since sliderticks will follow the rhythm too - http://puu.sh/bpSoU/ce50ff66df.jpg
6. 01:36:154 (2,3) - please don't place (3) under (2) it's confusing, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2012976
7. 01:46:931 (1) - add finish maybe? I think it would fit since there is a stronger beat there

1. 00:28:581 (3,4,5,6) - these hitsounds are quite messy in my opinion, try this:
   00:28:581 (3,5) - remove clap
   00:29:455 (6) - add clap to slider beginning and remove clap from the sliderend
   I think these will follow your hitsound pattern better
2. 00:30:620 (2,3,4) - I think it would look better if you used the same spacing between the 1/4 notes - http://puu.sh/bpQBF/d896a77a24.jpg
3. 00:39:940 (2,3) - this is quite a personal opinion but I don't like these kind of stacks, they are unappealing so I would rather do something different, but of course it's just my opinion
4. 00:43:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - these sounds overmapped 00:43:581 (6,8) - these are unnecessary, there is nothing that would ask for hit circles at those parts >.< a slider would fit better - http://puu.sh/bpM5g/8fbfa3b622.jpg
5. 00:44:601 (3,4) - I think this would fit better to the vocals - http://puu.sh/bpLQk/e6136fb222.jpg
6. 01:08:776 (5,6) - please don't do such stacks, it's confusing, try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013132 - stack 01:08:483 (4) - with 01:07:319 (1) - and place 01:08:776 (5) - to where (4) was
7. 01:10:231 (2,4) - same opinion as 00:39:940 (2,3) -
8. 01:27:125 (3,5) - I think this will look better - http://puu.sh/bpPQ3/c9eec0820d.jpg
9. 01:35:863 (2,3) - looks like an unnecessary and unappealing half-stack again, though I'm not forcing you to change it or anything, I just think it doesn't look nice xD
10. 01:39:357 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:43:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think some notes are unnecessary so it would be better to remove them 01:39:503 (7,9) -
11. 01:40:523 (3,4) - same as 00:44:601 (3,4) - I think this would fit better to the vocals and might play better too - http://puu.sh/bpQ4W/e539f7982e.jpg
12. 01:44:600 (1,2) - I really don't know why you place these hit circles just right above/under sliders but only a tiny bit, it doesn't look nice in my opinion (not only here) and this time there is also a reverse arrow, and I know that it's not hidden, but it would look better if you replaced 01:44:600 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013159
13. 01:46:348 (4,1) - the same here, you placed it weirdly again X_X
14. 00:50:426 (4,1) - same as above ^
15. 01:37:318 (6,1) - same ^
16. 01:41:396 (5,6) - same ^

Mystyk wrote:

Hi there from my modding queue!

[General]
Please change one of the grey colors, they are too similar and it's hard to differentiate while playing. These colors are easier to differentiate and they don't melt with the background as much as the previous colors! http://puu.sh/bpL2t/fe8814b1c2.png

[Colours]
Combo1 : 231,231,231
Combo2 : 208,208,19
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 16,175,16
Combo5 : 0,255,0
Combo6 : 92,92,92

okay , changed :-D
Quote from Ranking Criteria:
"Also, do not use the same color twice consecutively. Using the same combo colors in a row or using only one combo color makes it impossible for the player to notice and read when a combo starts or ends."

I would also recommend you to ask someone to recheck timing (TicClick, DakeDekaane...etc.) okay, at the beginning of make this map,all the timing points opinion r from Garven . of course , i ll find other bats to check it..
Also could you explain why you added "heart" to the tags? (well it's quite late so I might have overlooked something but I only found things about "Amusing" and not about heart) ok, heart has been removed..it just a sliders 'shape XD

[Normal]

1. 00:32:950 (2,3,4) - these 1/2s are unnecessary, the song goes slower, I would just use a reverse slider here - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013198 okay very friendly to beginners..
2. 00:51:009 (1,2,3,4) - too much 1/2 again, I know what sound you're following but even for 103 BPM this is a bit too much since there is no easier difficulty, maybe you can try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013202 fixed
3. 00:57:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above ^ too much 1/2 try to make it easier please - http://puu.sh/bpSar/7cedf49ce0.jpg - also the sliderticks will follow the "pa-pa" part of the vocals that you followed so it wouldn't be a bad change in my opinion ok
4. 01:02:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - same ^ fixed
5. 01:46:931 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you could simplify this pattern as well since sliderticks will follow the rhythm too - http://puu.sh/bpSoU/ce50ff66df.jpg ok
6. 01:36:154 (2,3) - please don't place (3) under (2) it's confusing, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2012976 fixed
7. 01:46:931 (1) - add finish maybe? I think it would fit since there is a stronger beat there ok, i have fixed that in lemons diff too. and sb effect has been fixed.

[Lemons]

1. 00:28:581 (3,4,5,6) - these hitsounds are quite messy in my opinion, try this:
   00:28:581 (3,5) - remove clap
   00:29:455 (6) - add clap to slider beginning and remove clap from the sliderend
   I think these will follow your hitsound pattern better hmm..about this point..i wanna say.. i put the clap on red lines at this part..i think this is a skill as a drummer. in general drummers has their own opinion and some hitting combo..this feeling just like the improvisation.if i changed it . it could be safe to bubble or rank..but it ll lose the interest imo..so..can i keep it?
2. 00:30:620 (2,3,4) - I think it would look better if you used the same spacing between the 1/4 notes - http://puu.sh/bpQBF/d896a77a24.jpg of course
3. 00:39:940 (2,3) - this is quite a personal opinion but I don't like these kind of stacks, they are unappealing so I would rather do something different, but of course it's just my opinion fixed
4. 00:43:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - these sounds overmapped 00:43:581 (6,8) - these are unnecessary, there is nothing that would ask for hit circles at those parts >.< a slider would fit better - http://puu.sh/bpM5g/8fbfa3b622.jpg hmm..it s one another improvisation here..at the ending of the combo is a finish. it s a prefect drum combo imo. i just dont want people who playing my map forget they r drummers.
5. 00:44:601 (3,4) - I think this would fit better to the vocals - http://puu.sh/bpLQk/e6136fb222.jpg this slider is consistent with 00:47:513 (3) , and this part is softer than before .. so maybe longer sliders r fitter i guess..
6. 01:08:776 (5,6) - please don't do such stacks, it's confusing, try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013132 - stack 01:08:483 (4) - with 01:07:319 (1) - and place 01:08:776 (5) - to where (4) was fixed hmm.. did i fix as you request?
7. 01:10:231 (2,4) - same opinion as 00:39:940 (2,3) - hmm... i plan keep it
8. 01:27:125 (3,5) - I think this will look better - http://puu.sh/bpPQ3/c9eec0820d.jpg okay
9. 01:35:863 (2,3) - looks like an unnecessary and unappealing half-stack again, though I'm not forcing you to change it or anything, I just think it doesn't look nice xD okay fixed
10. 01:39:357 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:43:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think some notes are unnecessary so it would be better to remove them 01:39:503 (7,9) - ~ ~ ~ ~
11. 01:40:523 (3,4) - same as 00:44:601 (3,4) - I think this would fit better to the vocals and might play better too - http://puu.sh/bpQ4W/e539f7982e.jpg ~ ~ ~ ~
12. 01:44:600 (1,2) - I really don't know why you place these hit circles just right above/under sliders but only a tiny bit, it doesn't look nice in my opinion (not only here) and this time there is also a reverse arrow, and I know that it's not hidden, but it would look better if you replaced 01:44:600 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2013159 ok fixed
13. 01:46:348 (4,1) - the same here, you placed it weirdly again X_X ^
14. 00:50:426 (4,1) - same as above ^ ^
15. 01:37:318 (6,1) - same ^ ^
16. 01:41:396 (5,6) - same ^ ^

This is a very nice mapset, I really like the storyboard as well, feel free to call me back when you checked both OniJAM's and my mod! all mods have been done .. thank you

Thank you Mystyk,hmm..i m a little busy recently..there r so many damn university works i have to do.I ll fix my map and reedit this post when i finish my works.. , i ll tell you in game after i fixed this map

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team
Sorry for the delay

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[General]

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  对不起 回复你这么晚，大学开学的一段时间是在太紧张了，将近大半个月我都没有上osu . 抱歉，抱歉

1. Disabled Letterbox During Breaks because no breaks in your map 这个为什么是灰色不可选的？

[ Normal]
Rhythm

1. 00:32:076 - note here for vocal? 改了
2. 00:40:232 - same as above ^
3. 01:27:999 - ^ ^
4. 01:36:154 - ^ ^

Hitsounds

1. Wonderful hitsounds choice! I like them so much! Star for this

Placement

1. 01:18:970 (4) - NC to have consistency fixed

[ Lemons]
Rhythm

1. Nothing to say

Hitsounds

1. Great

Placement

1. 01:08:776 (5,6) - Hard难度最好不要用这样的遮挡 比较难读 嗯 在考虑怎么改

Nice storyboard too! Star for this
GOGOGORANKKKK 谢谢你

pandorawindy wrote:

1. Disabled Letterbox During Breaks because no breaks in your map 这个为什么是灰色不可选的？//打开.osu文件把LetterboxInBreaks一项改成0

OniJAM wrote:

pandorawindy wrote:

1. Disabled Letterbox During Breaks because no breaks in your map 这个为什么是灰色不可选的？//打开.osu文件把LetterboxInBreaks一项改成0

改好了 谢谢

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi

Timing

I got this for the timing, but you may ask some more people just to be sure.

Also I'd suggest to look a bit more in detail your combo colouring (in both diffs), as I noticed you used the bright colors in the kiai and the less bright in the non kiai, but there are parts like 00:44:018 (1) - 00:48:678 (1), where it looks like that tendency broke.

Same for some parts where you use the two green colours and the two yellow colours in a row (like in 01:09:067 (6,1) or 01:13:727 (5,1)- ), with the green isn't too much of a problem, but the yellow ones are really similar so it's a bit confusing, this is in Hard.

Storyboard is pretty nice and enoyable while playing, good job =w=b

Don't kd this post

i accepted all of the suggestions,thank you

1. actually your map is unrankable, since you are missing a diff labeled as ¨N¨ refer to this post for more info, maybe Increasing the OD and HP in the normal can help

1. 00:18:101 this part sound really empty, add a circle or make a 1/2 slider with the previous object, since this doesn't feel good
2. 00:30:042 (1) - I don't understand why this slider is extended, mainly cuz there is music at 00:30:334 - but there is nothing 00:30:479 -, a 1/2 slider will fit follow the music at it is, there are some similar cases as: 00:32:955 (2) - ( vocals and music stop at 00:33:246 - there is not reason to have the slider ending in the blue tick)
3. 00:44:606 (3) - this one is fine, since there is a vocal at the blue tick
4. 00:43:586 (6,7) - this circles are not following nothing in the song, is not better to remove them? and follow the music as it is? same goes for 01:39:508 (7,9) -
5. 00:31:499 (5,1) - nazi, this is not stacked properly, same here 00:35:868 (4,5,6) -
6. 00:51:013 (1,2,3,4) - not a big thing, but there are some spacing inconsistencys, maybe will be nice if you avoid that, same goes for 00:52:178 (1,2,3,4) -
7. 01:01:499 use 30% volume atleast, actually sounds like the slider tick and sliderslide are silenced at the same time.., same goes for 01:06:159
8. 01:28:295 (1) - this should be 1/2 slider following the music correctly, 01:28:877 (2) - this one is ok, since there is sound in the red and blue tick
9. 01:50:473 (1,2,3,4) - with the timing and the bad spacing at this point, this will be really frustrating to play, at least consider to use a more suitable spacing between the circles
10. nice diff, I probably don't agree with some extended sliders and some beats that are overmapped, but overall nice work

1. 00:20:722 (1,2,3,4) - probably just my personal opinion, but having alot of overlaps like this, is kinda frustrating to play for new players, don't be afraid of big spacing, for example by using 1.10 distance snap you can avoid them, well probably this require so much work.
2. 01:00:334 (4,1) - ugly overlap, and can cause confusion in game, since is really noticeable, maybe you can do something to avoid this?
3. I dont have much to point to this diff, but yeah consider my first point about the overlaps.

GL with this, I'll keep an eye here , also seems like Mystyk want to recheck this

Natsu wrote:

Hello

General:

1. actually your map is unrankable, since you are missing a diff labeled as ¨N¨ refer to this post for more info, maybe Increasing the OD and HP in the normal can help

Garven wrote:

Natsu wrote:

Hello

General:

1. actually your map is unrankable, since you are missing a diff labeled as ¨N¨ refer to this post for more info, maybe Increasing the OD and HP in the normal can help

DO NOT BASE DIFFICULTY SPREAD ON THE WEB ICONS ALONE.

Play the maps and see if there is anything inappropriate amongst the maps themselves along with difficulty progression from map to map.

p3n wrote:

Please stop using the web icons to check rankability of every spread. The SR and therefore the web icons are completely useless in the lower end spectrum and especially for "low BPM" songs. Furthermore, this being a 2-diff set without an "Insane" or higher difficulty, you will have to evaluate the quality and rankability of the spread by yourself anyway.

Further information can be found here.

Natsu wrote:

Hello

General:

1. actually your map is unrankable, since you are missing a diff labeled as ¨N¨ refer to this post for more info, maybe Increasing the OD and HP in the normal can help hmm.. i have seen garven and p3n s replies .. it seems like i neednt worry this thing

Lemons:

1. 00:18:101 this part sound really empty, add a circle or make a 1/2 slider with the previous object, since this doesn't feel good fixed
2. 00:30:042 (1) - I don't understand why this slider is extended, mainly cuz there is music at 00:30:334 - but there is nothing 00:30:479 -, a 1/2 slider will fit follow the music at it is, there are some similar cases as: 00:32:955 (2) - ( vocals and music stop at 00:33:246 - there is not reason to have the slider ending in the blue tick) pattern here has been changed.
3. 00:44:606 (3) - this one is fine, since there is a vocal at the blue tick
4. 00:43:586 (6,7) - this circles are not following nothing in the song, is not better to remove them? and follow the music as it is? same goes for 01:39:508 (7,9) - i have asked Aleks if i could keep this stream. he said no problem and totally fine..
5. 00:31:499 (5,1) - nazi, this is not stacked properly, same here 00:35:868 (4,5,6) - changed
6. 00:51:013 (1,2,3,4) - not a big thing, but there are some spacing inconsistencys, maybe will be nice if you avoid that, same goes for 00:52:178 (1,2,3,4) - ok i did
7. 01:01:499 use 30% volume atleast, actually sounds like the slider tick and sliderslide are silenced at the same time.., same goes for 01:06:159 fixed
8. 01:28:295 (1) - this should be 1/2 slider following the music correctly, 01:28:877 (2) - this one is ok, since there is sound in the red and blue tick fixed
9. 01:50:473 (1,2,3,4) - with the timing and the bad spacing at this point, this will be really frustrating to play, at least consider to use a more suitable spacing between the circles I think different spacing is not a big problem here..i feel this set is interesting and rankable
10. nice diff, I probably don't agree with some extended sliders and some beats that are overmapped, but overall nice work

Normal:

1. 00:20:722 (1,2,3,4) - probably just my personal opinion, but having alot of overlaps like this, is kinda frustrating to play for new players, don't be afraid of big spacing, for example by using 1.10 distance snap you can avoid them, well probably this require so much work. hmm... use 0.8 ds in normal and easy is one of my habits.in general i have no plan to increase more than 0.9
2. 01:00:334 (4,1) - ugly overlap, and can cause confusion in game, since is really noticeable, maybe you can do something to avoid this? fixed
3. I dont have much to point to this diff, but yeah consider my first point about the overlaps.

GL with this, I'll keep an eye here , also seems like Mystyk want to recheck this

and i wanna say sorry about that , too busy before the holiday comes , sorrrrrrrrry..

Xelasto wrote:

Normal

00:07:324 (2) - Space out because the slider makes you go fast. The note is right next to the slider so it makes the player go fast, slow, fast, slow. Too tricky for normal
00:08:489 (4) - ^
00:09:654 (2) - ^
00:12:858 (2,3) - I don't recommend stacking these. Tricky for beginners.
00:21:305 (2) - As said before about spacing
00:22:470 (4) - ^
00:23:635 (2) -
00:27:713 (1) - No NC
00:28:586 (2,3) - Don't stack
00:32:081 (3,1) - Don't stack
00:51:014 (1,2) - Space out
00:54:800 (3,4) - No stack
00:59:751 (3,4) - Combine these two. You should map to only one vocal, which in this case is the man who said "Answer me"
01:04:411 (3,4) - ^
01:08:489 (3) - NC
01:07:907 (2) - Space out
01:09:072 (4) - ^
01:13:732 (3) - ^
01:28:004 (3,1) - No stack
Up one of the choices by one: HP Drain, OD, or AR

Lemons

00:17:518 (2) - Dont hide under the slider.
00:26:547 (3) - ^
00:27:712 (1) - ^
00:28:441 (2,3) - ^
00:43:441 (5) - NC
00:44:023 (1) - No NC, instead on 00:44:314 (2) -
00:43:441 (5,6,7,8,1) - While streams are already hard for this mode, Such a spaced out stream is really hard.
01:39:363 (6) - NC
01:39:945 (1) - As before about No NC
01:39:363 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^
01:51:120 (3) - NC
01:51:933 (5) - NC

Overall both Modes are very good. Just those things made it feel unnatural (lemonade)

1. normal-sliderslide2.wav
2. soft-hitfinish.wav
3. normal-hitclap2.wav
4. normal-hitnormal2.wav
5. normal-hitwhistle2.wav
6. normal-hitfinish2.wav

Mystyk wrote:

According to TicClick's hitsound checker, there are unused files.
I can confirm this, since in the timing panel you use soft hitsounds everywhere.

The following hitsounds are unused:

1. normal-sliderslide2.wav
2. soft-hitfinish.wav
3. normal-hitclap2.wav
4. normal-hitnormal2.wav
5. normal-hitwhistle2.wav
6. normal-hitfinish2.wav

Garven wrote:

Yeah, this should be fine. It's hard to locate since you'd have to click on every object, but as you can see it's using the normal set, so as long as all the listed elements are used in some way in the set, you're good to go.

Mystyk wrote:

Alright, thanks Garven!

Good to go by me, good luck!

OniJAM wrote:

Very nice mapped.
Qualified!

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

Congratulations！

DakeDekaane wrote:

Finally qualified, congratulations!

P o M u T a wrote:

nice pandorawindy

Garven wrote:

I'm glad to see this made it through finally. Congratulations!

Angelo wrote:

Finally qualified ! Congratulations

Mystyk wrote:

Congrats, and you're very welcome! You don't have to thank me that much, thank yourself for reminding me from time to time and for making a nice mapset!

alacat wrote:

Finally Gratz <3

cmn_891127 wrote:

恭喜呀~

1. normal-hitclap2.wav
2. normal-hitwhistle2.wav

Atrue wrote:

2. During 01:50:473 - this part, NCs need to be set to notify about the BPM change. Especially in Lemons diff, 01:50:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - NCs should be set on the notes.

Atrue wrote:

Sorry for inconvenience, but this mapset need to be disqualified due to these problems:

1. The following hitsounds are unused (though you indeed have some settings on N:C2, but these files are not used and should be removed):

1. normal-hitclap2.wav
2. normal-hitwhistle2.wav

I have ever reported this sampleset hitsound bug to garven before this map qualified..And Damnae has been fixed this bug some times ago..yeah , it time to remove those sound files worked before..

1. normal-hitclap2.wav
2. normal-hitwhistle2.wav
3. normal-hitnormal2.wav

removed..

2. During 01:50:473 - this part, NCs need to be set to notify about the BPM change. Especially in Lemons diff, 01:50:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - NCs should be set on the notes.

Little hard to imagine wht other people think of this..I just feel the combo is a little wired after i set NCs.. Plz tell me if i must fix this..

3. Spread is not good. Lemon is way harder than Normal.
Lemon: 00:43:441 (5,6,7,8,1) - in this BPM, this can be really hard to hit. Also here at 01:39:363 (6,7,8,9,1) - .
And this jump is bigger than excepted: 00:53:052 (4,1) - This jump is obviously much bigger than other jumps in this map, which is not accepted in this mild "Hard" diff.

I have ever asked Aleks719 if i can keep this stream.he said this totally fine..Difficult choice to make since people have dissents..Plz tell me if i must do it here.. This big jump has been fixed

BTW nice storyboard, should be a quick fix and feel free find BNs to help you in pushing this mapset forward again.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Atrue wrote:

2. During 01:50:473 - this part, NCs need to be set to notify about the BPM change. Especially in Lemons diff, 01:50:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - NCs should be set on the notes.

This isn't really necessary, the slowdown is already reflected in the spacing going down, and that's enough, imo

I think I can help this getting requalified.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Well, I didn't suggest something, so I agree that post doesn't deserve a kudosu.

[Normal]
01:45:188 (2) - *nazi* The blanket here is a bit off, try moving it a bit to the top, or adjusting the last spot.ok,i moved it to top a little.

[Hard]
00:51:887 (4,1) - I agree this jump is a bit hard to catch and somehow breaks the spread (almost 3x!), could be nice if reduced.pattern has been changed.
01:08:780 (5,6) - This break a bit the consistency you had for 01:07:615 (2,3) - , where the spacing is regular, not a big problem, but could be nice if both spacings were consistent. I know this would ruin your pattern in 01:09:072 (6,1,2) - , so I'll let you decide.This is Mystyk s idea. and i think this is not bad..playable is it:P
01:47:809 (4,1) - Same as the first suggestion.changed

Poke me back.
Should i give you kud this time? little confuse i am