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Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Shoujotachi

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kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月16日 at 10:56:31

Artist: Nagarekawa Girls
Title: Mirai Shoujotachi
Source: 普通の女子校生が【ろこどる】やってみた
Tags: fycho 三澤 紗千香 Misawa Sachika 宇佐美奈々子 伊藤 美来 Ito Miku 小日向縁 futsuu no joshikousei ga [locodol] yattemita ending みさわ さちか いとう みく Mio Aoyama 松浦勇气 宮崎誠
BPM: 168
Filesize: 11774kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.56 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Fycho's Hard (3.51 stars, 233 notes)
  3. Locodol (4.83 stars, 355 notes)
  4. Normal (2.26 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Shoujotachi
Download: Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Shoujotachi (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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thanks for BG help truonant >.<
also thanks for mp3 help captin1 :D
change log
add video at 24-07-2014
change source and tags at 25-07-2014
change video at 28-07-14
change tittle and artist at 01-08-14
change mp3 file by captin at 29-08-14
Last edited by kamisamaaa , edited 24 times in total.
YamiN0Tenshi
4 posts
Joined February 2014
YamiN0Tenshi
I like this song. I realy like this Anime. And I like this Beatmap.

But... if it's possible...
Can you make a hard map?
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

KuroTenshi2013 wrote:

I like this song. I realy like this Anime. And I like this Beatmap.

But... if it's possible...
Can you make a hard map?
actually I'm waiting for fycho's hard >.<
YamiN0Tenshi
4 posts
Joined February 2014
YamiN0Tenshi

kamisamaaa wrote:

KuroTenshi2013 wrote:

I like this song. I realy like this Anime. And I like this Beatmap.

But... if it's possible...
Can you make a hard map?
actually I'm waiting for fycho's hard >.<
than I have to wait ^^
Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon
Hi hi, from my queue~
[Easy]
00:09:273 (1,2,3) - generally easys don't have notes on red ticks cause they're supposed to be really easy
00:27:488 (2) - I also wouldn't do a slider like this on an easy
00:35:345 (2,3) - 00:38:202 (2,3) - ^
01:23:559 (4) - putting a note so close to a spinner on an easy might also not be a good idea since spinner's are usually the hardest part for a lot of people
[Normal]
00:34:988 (1,2) - I'd change this overlap so that it looks better
00:25:345 (4,5,6) - you could probably make this more triangley
00:26:416 (1) - could blanket 00:26:952 (2) -
00:49:273 (1) - you could blanket this better
Not much I could really find wrong with this
[Locodol]
You could probably use a higher DS so that it's more insane like
00:04:988 (1) - I'd move this where 00:04:273 (4) - is
00:35:523 (3) - blanket this around the the follow circle of the previous slider
00:41:416 (3) - blanket this around the 4
00:47:131 (1,2) - this is misleading and could confuse people
01:14:988 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look very nice :c
That's all I could see, good luck getting your map ranked~ <3
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Xellie wrote:

Hi hi, from my queue~
[Easy]
00:09:273 (1,2,3) - generally easys don't have notes on red ticks cause they're supposed to be really easy
00:27:488 (2) - I also wouldn't do a slider like this on an easy
00:35:345 (2,3) - 00:38:202 (2,3) - ^
01:23:559 (4) - putting a note so close to a spinner on an easy might also not be a good idea since spinner's are usually the hardest part for a lot of people
[Normal]
00:34:988 (1,2) - I'd change this overlap so that it looks better
00:25:345 (4,5,6) - you could probably make this more triangley
00:26:416 (1) - could blanket 00:26:952 (2) -
00:49:273 (1) - you could blanket this better
Not much I could really find wrong with this
[Locodol]
You could probably use a higher DS so that it's more insane like
00:04:988 (1) - I'd move this where 00:04:273 (4) - is
00:35:523 (3) - blanket this around the the follow circle of the previous slider
00:41:416 (3) - blanket this around the 4
00:47:131 (1,2) - this is misleading and could confuse people
01:14:988 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look very nice :c
That's all I could see, good luck getting your map ranked~ <3
change some >.<
thanks for mod
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Appear because in game request



IRC mod Easy,Normal and Insane
17:00 kamisamaaa: hi xinely
17:00 Xinely: kamisamaaaaaa
17:00 Xinely: ~
17:00 kamisamaaa: ~
17:00 Xinely: <3
17:00 kamisamaaa: do you accept mod req?
17:00 kamisamaaa: >.<
17:00 Xinely: np the song?
17:00 Xinely: i will mod if i like the song ww
17:01 *kamisamaaa is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463427 Misawa Sachika & Ito Miku - Mirai shojo tachi]
17:03 kamisamaaa: do you like this song?
17:04 Xinely: dlin
17:04 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:12 *Xinely is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/462355 Misawa Sachika & Ito Miku - Mirai shojo tachi]
17:12 Xinely: moe o.o
17:13 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:14 *kamisamaaa sent a fycho as gift (Xinely's Edit : yay! i had been focus to prepare mod until didn't realized this lol)
17:14 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/462355 Misawa Sachika & Ito Miku - Mirai shojo tachi [Locodol]]
17:14 Xinely: just checking
17:14 Xinely: 00:30:613 (4) - wtf is this LOL
17:14 Xinely: hard to catch while music calm too
17:15 kamisamaaa: 0.0 because I feel use 1/2 is a little bored when I playing
17:15 Xinely: lol
17:15 kamisamaaa: yes this is overmapped >.<
17:15 Xinely: at least reduce the spacing
17:15 kamisamaaa: okay
17:15 Xinely: overmapped imo is fine as long playable nicely
17:15 Xinely: hmm
17:15 Xinely: irc mod or forum?
17:15 kamisamaaa: both is okay
17:16 kamisamaaa: actually that spacing is easy to play lol
17:16 kamisamaaa: I ask many textplay >.<
17:16 Xinely: yeah i saw it.. well let's try with irc mod easy normal and locodol?
17:16 kamisamaaa: sure
17:16 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463427 Misawa Sachika & Ito Miku - Mirai shojo tachi [Easy]]
17:17 Xinely: AR feel too fast for newbie here when SV is slow.. i would suggest to use AR 3
17:17 Xinely: or AR 3,3 is nice too
17:17 kamisamaaa: okay
17:17 kamisamaaa: change to ar3
17:18 kamisamaaa: yes lower ar feel better
17:18 Xinely: omg general : remove countdown. widescreensupport and letterbox lol
17:18 kamisamaaa: why is AR3.3 ?
17:18 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:18 Xinely: AR 3,3 is nice too. but AR 3 the best actually for Easy ww
17:18 kamisamaaa: omg forgot to remove them
17:19 Xinely: is locodol name of GD-er on insane?
17:19 kamisamaaa: no
17:19 kamisamaaa: insane diff mapped by myself
17:19 kamisamaaa: locodol is the anime name
17:20 Xinely: oh i see.. because i saw [locodol] on tags, i thought it was GD-er ll
17:20 Xinely: *lol
17:20 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:20 Xinely: okay done to check general 
17:20 Xinely: let's go to Easy
17:21 Xinely: well it's just my taste but CS2 feel too big (maybe because i never mapped with CS2 www) , but try use CS 2,5?
17:22 kamisamaaa: easy-cs2 normal-cs3 and insane-cs4
17:22 kamisamaaa: >.<
17:23 kamisamaaa: ohh I foundcs 2.5 look good too
17:23 Xinely: lol fine.. 00:07:131 (3) - i wonder this is overmap or not since i can't hear any sound here. i just hear 00:06:952 - vocal on here. so from 00:06:416 - do http://puu.sh/ayEUs/d5cfbf0d67.jpg this slider to follow vocal instead (to avoid might of overmap lol)
17:24 kamisamaaa: yes you are right
17:24 kamisamaaa: dix
17:25 kamisamaaa: fixed
17:25 Xinely: 00:11:952 (1) - finish on head. the crash cymbal appear here.. 
17:25 Xinely: 00:11:952 (1,2) - also for these sliders, imo the design, curving can improved a lot here. try do something blanket example like http://puu.sh/ayF18/e4ed9b9085.jpg
17:26 Xinely: yeah for next objects, you need to replacement a little bit ww (if i try my blanket on SS, it needed to replacement the next objects)
17:28 Xinely: 00:14:273 (5,1) - the flow on these sliders can improved too, hmm maybe like http://puu.sh/ayF8M/7b2d5e2a81.jpg
17:29 Xinely: hmm if want to be honest, i feel the difficulty on curve can improved a lot here. maybe you can't make it because grid snap large.. you should click "G" and use grid snap tiny.. with that you can do more curve on sliders to make its shape better and good looking
17:29 kamisamaaa: am
17:29 kamisamaaa: I want to keep my way
17:29 Xinely: i guess this is too many. i will waiting first ><
17:30 kamisamaaa: because I dont want to use too many "line" flow
17:30 kamisamaaa: I think it will be a little bored
17:30 Xinely: line?
17:31 kamisamaaa: something like your picture
17:31 Xinely: 00:17:845 (1) - change whistle here with finish since the music is cymbal.. also whistle with 1/1 gap kinda noisy for me ww
17:31 kamisamaaa: slider make a circle
17:31 Xinely: o.o
17:31 kamisamaaa: 00:14:273 (5,1) -  I like some flow like this >.<
17:31 Xinely: well okay, that's mapper style
17:31 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:32 kamisamaaa: and yes I use too many whistle.
17:32 kamisamaaa: I will reduce them after.
17:32 Xinely: 00:18:202 (2) - imo since the tail of slider a little bit close with 00:19:273 (3) - so i feel the design can improved here. try move tail's node to 112,16?
17:34 Xinely: 00:20:345 (4) - for this, maybe you whistle this because hear piano sound but piano sound on 00:20:166 - and i only hear drum at this time. perhaps remove whistle?
17:34 kamisamaaa: okay
17:34 kamisamaaa: fixed
17:34 kamisamaaa: I will readded all whistle after.
17:34 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:35 Xinely: okay
17:35 kamisamaaa: both in easy and normal diff
17:35 kamisamaaa: I use whistle in a baka way.
17:35 kamisamaaa: 0.0
17:36 Xinely: 00:22:131 (3,4) - if you follow drum, please ignore this. i just suggest if you follow piano , since there is piano at 00:22:666 - and imo piano need to mapped especially on calm part which piano becoming main sound here. try to follow piano here? if follow piano, rhythm should be http://puu.sh/ayFtA/c3e663f480.jpg
17:36 Xinely: ahaha whistle not a big deal here since the sound so calm so not really noisy at this part
17:38 kamisamaaa: I follow the drum because I add hitsound based on drum
17:38 kamisamaaa: if I follow the piano my hitsound will hard to added as a system
17:38 Xinely: 00:24:809 - oh my, you should map this time since the music is really loud here. same goes for vocal.. so change 00:23:559 (1,2,3) - this rhythm become like http://puu.sh/ayFER/f251ff4904.jpg
17:38 Xinely: i see, that's style too ww
17:39 Xinely: 00:27:488 (2) - finish on tail. cymbal appear :<
17:39 kamisamaaa: okay
17:40 kamisamaaa: finish added
17:40 kamisamaaa: miss so many finish 0.0
17:40 Xinely: 00:32:131 (1) - the music just drum and guitar. since no cymbal here. finish feels too loud.. remove it ww
17:40 Xinely: don't worry i will mention all times which need finish
17:41 kamisamaaa: I think this finish sound good >.<
17:41 kamisamaaa: let me consider this
17:41 kamisamaaa: okay I decided to remove this finish
17:42 Xinely: 00:35:345 (2,3) - hmm since this Easy uses low SV, imo 1/2 slider is kinda hard to read for newbie actually. i would suggest don't use it except it can't mapped again without 1/2 slider. i saw rhtyhm which can mapped both finishes on red ticks w/o 1/2 slider. it should like http://puu.sh/ayFMt/b660feea38.jpg
17:42 Xinely: (note : 2nd slider start on 00:36:238 - )
17:43 Xinely: 00:38:202 (2,3) - same explanation as above. fix its if you fixed above
17:44 Xinely: 00:40:702 (1) - finish on head. cymbal here
17:44 kamisamaaa: frist slider is sound okay but socend soud strange
17:44 Xinely: i guess kinda need time thought that 3 mods so i will waiting
17:44 kamisamaaa: 00:36:059 
17:45 kamisamaaa: here is really empty
17:45 Xinely: yeah it's drum.. well cymbal louder than drum one ><
17:46 kamisamaaa: 00:36:059 vocal here really strong and I dont want to miss this >.<
17:47 kamisamaaa: 00:36:059 
17:47 Xinely: well i don't force you ww
17:47 kamisamaaa: >.<
17:47 kamisamaaa: I see. just compare two ways
17:49 Xinely: 00:49:273 (1,2) - well i can't stop my body to suggest here. actually flow like that imo can improved. well it just prefer http://puu.sh/ayG6k/4a5d050d43.jpg but it just a taste
17:49 Xinely: you can ignore it w/o hesitation
17:50 kamisamaaa: haha I think your idea is cool here
17:50 kamisamaaa: I will fixed this lol
17:52 Xinely: 00:52:131 (1,2) - since i saw the circles following drum sounds here. but drum sounds from 00:52:131 - 00:53:202 - have same powers that mean not really emphasized all. rather than follow drums here. i prefer to follow vocals with http://puu.sh/ayGeK/30fc713a0d.jpg this slider
17:54 kamisamaaa: sure
17:54 Xinely: 00:54:273 (4,1) - sadly but inconsistent spacing isn't allowed on Easy.. you should make it consistent. as i tried, i found this way to keep the consistent http://puu.sh/ayGkU/376301cca2.jpg
17:54 kamisamaaa: sounds better
17:55 Xinely: note : (4)slider ctrl+G and make symmetric with (3) slider
17:56 kamisamaaa: I have change this because I change the rhythm above
17:56 Xinely: 01:04:988 (2) - inconsistent spacing again (i mean the 1,29x) lol , move the slider to 176,48 to keep the consistent (it should be 1,24x there)
17:57 kamisamaaa: 1.29X is not allowed?
17:57 kamisamaaa: so sad
17:57 kamisamaaa: .
17:58 Xinely: yeah
17:58 kamisamaaa: ...
17:58 Xinely: you used 1,20x here so only allowed to use 1,15x until 1,25x lol
17:59 kamisamaaa: kuku
17:59 Xinely: xinku le
17:59 Xinely: 01:08:916 (4) - imo the drum is weak (not loud) here, and sound of drum clap is really loud so kinda not match imo. how about remove clap so just use drum whistle?
18:00 kamisamaaa: this is a mistake
18:01 kamisamaaa: I just want to add drum clap
18:01 Xinely: 01:11:416 (3) - how about make the curve go to upward instead downward here? since i feel the tail on 01:11:416 (3) - going to up so it should be go to upside than downward, so to make it natural i would say change the slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1875907
18:02 Xinely: 01:18:381 (2) - move to 124,268 to avoid overlap this slider with 01:16:416 (2) - www
18:02 kamisamaaa: this is just my taste >.<
18:03 kamisamaaa: okay
18:03 kamisamaaa: fixed
18:05 Xinely: 01:20:523 - nazi, since the cymbal on here. end kiai on this time too. 01:20:702 - doesn't has any sound so not really matched imo
18:07 Xinely: 01:22:845 (3) - i guess kinda overmap here. since drum sound at 01:22:488 - and i can't hear any sound 01:22:845 - here (oh i would say crystal sound but hard to hear w/o 25%  lol) and there are guitar sounds at 01:22:666 - 01:23:023 - and both are loud here. i guess they are be main sounds here so try map them? http://puu.sh/ayGWN/de034d532f.jpg
18:07 kamisamaaa: kiai end at red line is okay?
18:07 Xinely: ofc fine o.o
18:08 Xinely: that's all for Easy
18:10 kamisamaaa: still feel a little strange in your way
18:10 kamisamaaa: keep this and wait for other's idea >.<
18:10 Xinely: oh almost forgot, imo the default combo is bad and not really matched with the BG, how about use combo colours like http://puu.sh/ayH4Q/39e26109c0.png ? i will give the code when i post this one
18:11 kamisamaaa: I dont know >.< I just use the default color in my skin haha
18:11 Xinely: they will looked like http://puu.sh/ayH9r/81ada61e52.jpg
18:11 Xinely: eee e_e lol 
18:12 kamisamaaa: I decided to use yours'
18:13 kamisamaaa: post the code on forum at the end
18:13 Xinely: okay i will give the code on thread ~
18:13 Xinely: oh you ninja'ed me lol 
18:13 kamisamaaa: thx>.<
18:13 Xinely: okay go to Normal now
18:13 Xinely: 00:02:131 (3,4) - it just my taste, how about this flow http://puu.sh/ayHdF/943cc10aad.jpg ? smoother than previous one. just it lol
18:14 kamisamaaa: sure
18:15 Xinely: 00:04:988 (5,6) - taste again, how about curve the 00:04:988 (5) - slightly? a little bit curve on left could give more circular flow going to next slider http://puu.sh/ayHje/9a5c1df76c.jpg like this
18:16 kamisamaaa: okay
18:16 kamisamaaa: looks better
18:19 Xinely: 00:11:952 (1) - omg altho use 1,4x snapping, it looks as jump because the SV changes. since the SV increase 2x (from 0,5 turned into 1) so spacing 1,4 divided 2 = 0,7x.. snap this slider to 0,7x \:D/ *runs
18:19 Xinely: 00:12:488 (2) - ofc this one changed back to 1,4x lol
18:20 kamisamaaa: yes you are right
18:20 kamisamaaa: really look like a jump
18:20 kamisamaaa: lol
18:20 Xinely: i'm glad you understand.. it just a simple mathematics ww
18:20 Xinely: *mathematic ww
18:22 Xinely: 00:12:845 (3) - maybe just my taste but i feel the design could neater with move the tail to 368,48
18:23 kamisamaaa: already remap this place because the changing above
18:23 Xinely: lol
18:24 Xinely: 00:15:166 (1) - finish for spinner since the sound when spinner ended there is cymbal 
18:24 kamisamaaa: added><
18:26 Xinely: 00:23:559 (1,2) - finishes on these heads feel too loud since the first one are piano and vocal, and for second head is only vocal.. change finishes with whistles instead
18:26 Xinely: wait, i mean just use whistles lol
18:28 Xinely: 00:25:881 - imo since this is normal, the piano here should be mapped :3 , you can use circle, 1/2 slider or anything since so many variations here
18:29 Xinely: 00:32:131 (1) - perhaps remove finish here. i feel finish too loud here. 
18:30 kamisamaaa: okay these two all fixed
18:31 Xinely: 00:36:595 (4,6) - imo the flow can improved here too. perhaps use curve sliders here would be nice, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1875981
18:33 Xinely: 00:40:702 (1) - finish because cymbal n.n
18:34 Xinely: 00:43:916 (2,3) - i feel this one can improved too.. perhaps try like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1875985 (but it just my taste here)
18:34 Xinely: 00:46:416 (1) - finish on head because cymbal again.. 
18:34 kamisamaaa: I alway ignore the cymbal >.<
18:35 Xinely: okay i'm waiting until you done check all ~ , too many on same time kinda make confuse so yeah :3
18:36 kamisamaaa: actually I have all fixed except 00:43:916 (2,3) - 
18:36 Xinely: lol okay
18:40 Xinely: 00:59:273 (3) - how about copy paste from 00:57:845 (1) - to make blanket pattern here. since 00:57:845 (1,2) - is a blanket too ww
18:40 Xinely: http://puu.sh/ayIk7/6604cc8504.jpg it should be like this
18:42 kamisamaaa: it looks good but I want to keep this
18:42 kamisamaaa: 00:59:273 (3) - 
18:42 Xinely: 01:14:631 (5) - nazi, try move to 244,304 to make one diagonal like from 01:14:095 (4) - 's tail 01:14:631 (5) - , and 01:14:988 (1) - 's head
18:43 kamisamaaa: I want to use a straigt slider to express the music
18:44 kamisamaaa: okay
18:44 Xinely: i see ww , 01:17:309 (7) - try move the tail to 368,-16 for more natural flow here? the slider should be like http://puu.sh/ayIBL/41ca9c701c.jpg
18:44 Xinely: oh yeah the kiai ended on red tick as i said on Easy, replied to all diffs if you fixed it
18:45 kamisamaaa: about kiai ed
18:45 kamisamaaa: end
18:45 kamisamaaa: if I change it
18:45 kamisamaaa: 01:20:523-
18:45 kamisamaaa: 01:20:523 
18:46 kamisamaaa: here will become to the 60% volum and I have to add another greenline to control the volum
18:46 Xinely: 01:26:059 (1) - nazi, since the gap between spin and slider is only 1/1 when usually the gap is 2/1 on kinda high bpm like this. ctrl+G this slider so the head located almost on centre. easier to catch
18:46 Xinely: i see, that's good
18:46 Xinely: that's all for Normal
18:47 kamisamaaa: just move the last slider
18:47 kamisamaaa: move the head to the centre intead ctrl+G
18:48 Xinely: Insane now
18:49 kamisamaaa: okay~
18:49 kamisamaaa: :D
18:49 Xinely: 00:02:131 (3) - how about move the circle to 440,200 so it has same flow as 00:00:702 (1,2) - , feel more natural 
18:50 kamisamaaa: that wat is just a line >.< a little sinple for me
18:51 kamisamaaa: this my taste..
18:51 Xinely: ok
18:51 Xinely: 00:04:988 (1) - the vocal is end on 00:05:345 - so end the slider on that time too.. feel overmapped here 
18:52 kamisamaaa:  because I just follow the vocal in this part >.<
18:53 kamisamaaa:  and I use 5% volum at the end so it sounds okay imo~
18:53 Xinely: vocal is ended at 00:05:256 - and 00:05:345 - is a weak music :<
18:54 Xinely: 00:07:845 - since i hear a piano sound here. imo you can do a little jump with circle at this time to emphasize the piano
18:54 Xinely: 00:09:809 (5) - try ctrl+G this slider. the flow ways better
18:55 kamisamaaa: okay change to a note
18:56 kamisamaaa: ctrl+G or not feel almost same for me 0.0
18:57 kamisamaaa: maybe flow will better and I do ctrl+G on it
18:59 Xinely: 00:12:756 (4,5) - since the drums on here are weak.. for (4) remove clap and for 00:12:845 (5) - remove additions drum (since the music fits with custom clap here imo)
18:59 Xinely: 00:17:844 (3) - finish because cymbal :D
19:00 Xinely: 00:17:666 (1) - well since the music isn't change and the spacing on stream not increasing. so remove the NC (that makes kinda confuse)
19:01 kamisamaaa: okay
19:01 kamisamaaa: all fixed
19:02 Xinely: 00:18:559 (2) - the music is calm so a huge jump doesn't fit here.. try reduce it with ctrl+G
19:02 Xinely: 00:23:202 (7) - well just my flow taste, how about move this one to 344,320 and 00:23:381 (8) - 192,184
19:02 kamisamaaa: the music here is same and the same direction is better imo
19:03 kamisamaaa: and slider jump is really easy to play
19:04 Xinely: so that's why need consistent lol
19:04 kamisamaaa: why?
19:04 Xinely: because the power of musics are same
19:04 Xinely: 00:30:613 (4) - oh make sure you reduce this one lol
19:05 kamisamaaa: a little strange when I use your seting
19:05 kamisamaaa: this pattern is not hard as your imagine
19:05 Xinely: 00:40:702 (1) - finish on head lol 
19:05 Xinely: okay >_<
19:06 kamisamaaa: because slider end doesnt need click
19:06 Xinely: 00:46:416 (5) - at least give NC here to marked as 1/4 slider jumps
19:06 kamisamaaa: added
19:06 kamisamaaa: oh yes
19:06 kamisamaaa: I forgot add NC
19:07 Xinely: 00:51:773 (5) - since music on 00:51:952 - 00:52:041 - yeah almost same there. extend the slider to blue tick ~
19:07 Xinely: 1/2 jumps kinda boring right? ww /runs
19:07 Xinely: 00:54:988 (1,1,1,1) - nice <3
19:08 Xinely: 01:06:773 (4) - NC too because 1/4 jumps
19:08 kamisamaaa: extended>.<
19:09 Xinely: 01:17:309 (1,2,3) - wow i like this flow <3
19:09 kamisamaaa: here doesnt need a NC actually
19:09 Xinely: 01:18:738 (4) - well i kinda dislike the overlap here, move to 216,112 instead
19:09 kamisamaaa: because 1/4 jump after a slider not  the stream
19:09 Xinely: 01:06:952 (5) - i read this as 1/2 before lol
19:09 Xinely: after testplayed
19:10 kamisamaaa: 0.0
19:10 Xinely: well i guess this is fine
19:11 Xinely: 01:26:238 (2) - since the music is loud. at least give little jump like move to 416,248 or somewhere XD
19:11 Xinely: that's all for Insane
19:11 kamisamaaa: 01:17:309 (1,2,3) -  I copy this flow from fycho's map 》。《

For custom combo colours that we have talked on irc
[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,170,213
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 255,255,26

i will mod Fycho's diff soon


  • Fycho's Hard
  1. 00:05:702 (4,1) - really personal taste here. how about ctrl+g (4) and arrange (1) become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1876133
  2. 00:11:238 (4) - hmm cymbal emphasized with slider's tail isn't really good imo since the music is loud and needed jump, change with this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/azES4/140bc1d25e.jpg (if you feel 50% is too loud for 00:11:773 - you can use 30% instead)
  3. 00:16:952 (1,1) - this overlap (i mean http://puu.sh/azF0V/326cb22ee5.jpg&#41; is kinda bad here altho not really seen when playing. but i prefer to move 00:16:952 (1) - 's tail to 232,136 for neater pattern
  4. 00:26:059 (4) - well i feel kinda uncomfortable with this jump since the vocal and music aren't loud enough. i would suggest to use consistent spacing here with move the circle to 308,76
  5. 00:26:952 - use S:C2 here with whistle.. just normal-hitnormal isn't emphasize it at all for me. i guess adding (default) whistle would be emphasize it more
  6. 00:28:916 (4,5,1) - perhaps these jumps feel too hard with kinda fast bpm here. try 00:28:916 (4) - 340,4 and move 00:29:095 (5) - 240,64
  7. 00:46:773 (2,3) - anti jump doesn't fit here.. use normal spacing maybe. Or if you insist to keep it. at least give 00:46:773 (2) - NC to mark anti jump and 00:47:131 (4) - NC here to mark spacing changed again
  8. 00:48:202 (2) - 00:49:631 (3) - same as above
  9. 00:58:738 (2) - just my taste, i prefer to move this circle to 224,276 since the slider's tail on (1) is looked going to right side
  10. 01:06:416 (1) - so nazi, if you 01:05:702 (3,1) - supposed these to make a blanket, 01:06:416 (1) - move the tail 312,344 for better blanket
  11. 01:11:238 (2) - i feel the jump is too far for Hard diff here. even i heard loud piano here. it kinda hard to catch. i would suggest to reduce the spacing (sadly, need fixing next objects too)
  12. 01:12:131 (1) - remove finish on tail. the music is calm.. maybe you hear some kind of cymbal, i hear too but in 01:12:934 - and the sound kinda faint so finish feels too loud here
  13. 01:13:023 (2,1) - hyper nazi, stack properly /runs
  14. 01:26:059 (1) - add finish here. the music is loud, altho isn't cymbal but really feel empty here

Good Luck
Last edited by Xinely , edited 1 time in total.
- H i N a -
- H i N a -
Hi~ M4M

Easy
  1. 00:46:416 (1) - head add finish
  2. 00:44:273 (2) - tail change additions to normal
  3. 00:49:273 (1) - ^
  4. 00:49:988 (2) - ^
  5. 01:07:666 (3) - i think place note in red line is not good for easy
Normal
  1. 00:21:416 - add whistle
  2. 00:21:773 (2) - remove whistle
  3. 00:24:631 - remove whistle
  4. 00:24:988 - add whistle
  5. 00:49:809 (2) - change sampleset to auto ?
Fycho's Hard
  1. 01:16:416 (1) - head add finish ?
  2. 01:21:416 (3) - head add clap ?
Locodol
  1. 00:21:595 (4) - remove whistle
  2. 00:43:559 (1) - add whistle
  3. 01:08:023 (1) - add finish ?
That's all my suggestions

Good Luck :D
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi~ M4M

Easy
  1. 00:46:416 (1) - head add finish
  2. 00:44:273 (2) - tail change additions to normal good catch~my mistake
  3. 00:49:273 (1) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:49:988 (2) - ^ fixed
  5. 01:07:666 (3) - i think place note in red line is not good for easy
Normal
  1. 00:21:416 - add whistle fixed
  2. 00:21:773 (2) - remove whistle fixed
  3. 00:24:631 - remove whistle fixed
  4. 00:24:988 - add whistle fixed
  5. 00:49:809 (2) - change sampleset to auto ?
Locodol
  1. 00:21:595 (4) - remove whistle fixed
  2. 00:43:559 (1) - add whistle fixed
  3. 01:08:023 (1) - add finish ?
That's all my suggestions

Good Luck :D
thanks for your mod~I will mod your map later ;)
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your request of M4M

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. Unable countdown in all diffs plz.
  2. Fycho's Hard has 1500ms audioleadin and others with 0, maybe you should fix that.

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:845 (2,5) - 头上的两个clap感觉加的有点多余，你normal也没下这clap
  2. 00:39:452 (4) - 从00:39:631 - 开始，要么00:36:773 (4) - 从00:36:595 - 开始，节奏尽量少变化比较好
  3. 00:52:131 (4) - NC
  4. 01:19:809 (4,1,2,3,4) - 你这里下的有点怪，改成这样？ http://puu.sh/azCN0/2ca8ad2b4d.jpg

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:845 (3) - 要是跟vocal就应该下在前面红线上，现在这感觉有点不伦不类
  2. 00:54:988 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么莫名从1.4变成1.2了
  3. 00:57:845 (1,2) - 1.56

[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 没啥好说的

[Locodol]
  1. 00:09:273 (4,5) - 这俩弧度不一样看的不爽
  2. 00:38:381 (3) - 移出来吧，这遮挡感觉也不太好看
  3. 00:47:309 (2,3) - ctrl+g?
  4. 00:51:773 (5,1) - blanket
  5. 01:03:023 (1,2,3) - 感觉这1/4没啥必要

还好
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Minakami Yuki wrote:



From your request of M4M

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. Unable countdown in all diffs plz. 好 改了
  2. Fycho's Hard has 1500ms audioleadin and others with 0, maybe you should fix that. 好 改了

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:845 (2,5) - 头上的两个clap感觉加的有点多余，你normal也没下这clap 改啦
  2. 00:39:452 (4) - 从00:39:631 - 开始，要么00:36:773 (4) - 从00:36:595 - 开始，节奏尽量少变化比较好改啦
  3. 00:52:131 (4) - NC改啦
  4. 01:19:809 (4,1,2,3,4) - 你这里下的有点怪，改成这样？ http://puu.sh/azCN0/2ca8ad2b4d.jpg 这个先保留 我听着还好 之后看别人怎么说

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:845 (3) - 要是跟vocal就应该下在前面红线上，现在这感觉有点不伦不类改啦
  2. 00:54:988 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么莫名从1.4变成1.2了改啦
  3. 00:57:845 (1,2) - 1.56 这个故意的。先看看

[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 没啥好说的

[Locodol]
  1. 00:09:273 (4,5) - 这俩弧度不一样看的不爽 我觉得不错啊
  2. 00:38:381 (3) - 移出来吧，这遮挡感觉也不太好看 改啦
  3. 00:47:309 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 感觉没啥区别
  4. 00:51:773 (5,1) - blanket 改啦
  5. 01:03:023 (1,2,3) - 感觉这1/4没啥必要 还好啊 听着也不觉得难受 打起来也挺舒服

还好
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Hi ~ /:3/
The artist should be > Nagarekawa Girls ( 流川ガールズ )
And the title should be > Mirai Shoujotachi ( 未来少女たち)
Well.. it was like these on the official page. So you may consider adding these on the tags :
宇佐美奈々子, 伊藤美来 , 小日向縁, 三澤紗千香
Then delete "nagaregawa girls" from the tags. Also add "ending" tag instead of "ED" since it would be more helpful on in-game search

Good Luck ~
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Momochikun wrote:

Hi ~ /:3/
The artist should be > Nagarekawa Girls ( 流川ガールズ )
And the title should be > Mirai Shoujotachi ( 未来少女たち)
Well.. it was like these on the official page. So you may consider adding these on the tags :
宇佐美奈々子, 伊藤美来 , 小日向縁, 三澤紗千香
Then delete "nagaregawa girls" from the tags. Also add "ending" tag instead of "ED" since it would be more helpful on in-game search

Good Luck ~
really thank you >.<
hehe
1,971 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
m4m~

[LOCODOL]

00:04:988 (1,2) - don't like this rhythm. just end 00:04:988 (1) at white tick?
00:09:273 (4,5) - y don't copy paste and mirror? :)
00:16:952 (4,1) - i think fit :)
SPOILER
00:40:702 (1) - space further away, can blanket better with 00:41:059 (2) -
00:46:773 (3) - this is odd one out... maybe ctrl+g 2 and 4?
01:03:023 (1,2,3) - very ugly, maybe add curve. but i think reverse arrow suit the 3 beat better
01:07:488 (3,4) - ctrl+g, then follow up :)

[HARD]

00:04:988 (3,4) - erm very funny spacing here!! i think it very easy to mistake for 1/2... need to space more or overlap..
00:07:131 (2) - ^
00:08:738 (5,1) - ^
00:20:166 (3,1) - blanket?
00:45:345 (1,2,3) - must must overlap, it repeat 2 time!!
00:54:810 (6) - change to circle, start slider at 00:54:988 - ?
01:23:202 (3) - ctrl+g

the rest is ok! :)

༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ ☆
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,486 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
thanks for modding!
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Locodol01.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57488
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Mirai Shoujotachi
TitleUnicode:未来少女たち
Artist:Nagarekawa Girls
ArtistUnicode:流川ガールズ
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:普通の女子校生が【ろこどる】やってみた
Tags:fycho 三澤 紗千香 Misawa Sachika 宇佐美奈々子 伊藤 美来 Ito Miku 小日向縁 futsuu no joshikousei ga [locodol] yattemita ending みさわ さちか  いとう みく Mio Aoyama 松浦勇气 宮崎誠
BeatmapID:467329
BeatmapSetID:194742

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"03.jpg",0,0
Video,116,"shipin.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,170,213
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 255,255,26

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kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Fycho wrote:

thanks for modding!
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TitleUnicode:未来少女たち
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UPDATED!
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Locodol

  1. 00:09:273 (4,5) - blanket each other
  2. 00:11:595 (4) - change to a fast slider here?
  3. 00:16:952 (4,1,2,3) - change to 3 kick sliders?
  4. 00:36:059 (4) - i prefer ctrl+g this
  5. 01:08:916 (1) - remove nc
  6. 01:18:381 (3,4) - rorate about -15° maybe
  7. composing is not that cleared in organization. choose ur jumps in a more regular way can be a good idea to ur mapping style

Fycho's Hard

  1. nothing to say, gj

Normal

  1. 00:05:523 (6,1) - blanket
  2. 00:26:416 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:34:988 (1,2) - overlap here is not good. overlap more (not recommeded thou) or spread them
  4. 01:09:095 a note should be set here indeed
  5. i think u'r just lack of patterns? 00:46:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - showed me a bit lol
easy diff is fine

玛德打完才知道可以用中文，真是蠢hhh

good luck
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Locodol

  1. 00:09:273 (4,5) - blanket each other 好吧。。每个人都要吐槽这个不对称。改掉了。。
  2. 00:11:595 (4) - change to a fast slider here? 这个感觉棒！不过我高速滑条感觉拉的很蠢
  3. 00:16:952 (4,1,2,3) - change to 3 kick sliders? 这啥意思没看懂
  4. 00:36:059 (4) - i prefer ctrl+g this 厚厚
  5. 01:08:916 (1) - remove nc 厚
  6. 01:18:381 (3,4) - rorate about -15° maybe 改了
  7. composing is not that cleared in organization. choose ur jumps in a more regular way can be a good idea to ur mapping style
因为我没有特意去用啥梗啦。只是跟着感觉放跳。

Normal

  1. 00:05:523 (6,1) - blanket 我没准备做blanket 你不觉得微微弯曲的滑条和中间一个note看起来很棒么。
  2. 00:26:416 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:34:988 (1,2) - overlap here is not good. overlap more (not recommeded thou) or spread them 懒得改。。感觉应该还好
  4. 01:09:095 a note should be set here indeed 没啊加了感觉怪怪的
  5. i think u'r just lack of patterns? 00:46:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - showed me a bit lol 是么 歌曲感觉就这样啊0.0
easy diff is fine

玛德打完才知道可以用中文，真是蠢hhh 蠢蠢蠢 我看的都累了

good luck
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[ Normal]
00:28:559 (5) - Remove the repeat in this part then

00:29:095 (6) - Move/Start the slider here instead 00:28:916 - it would kinda look like this



01:02:131 (3) - How about shaping it like this . .



01:08:738 (5) - Ctrl + G?

[ Fycho's Hard]
00:07:666 (4) - Curve the slider?

01:09:988 (3) - ^


Great Map . . Didn't mention anything serious XD . . Good Luck~
ac585318
35 posts
Joined February 2013
ac585318
A really enjoyable song / beatmap to play :D
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

ac585318 wrote:

A really enjoyable song / beatmap to play :D
glad to hear this >.<
Verlaren
Verlaren
From Aincrad's modding queue.
Sorry for the delay.

Easy:
00:13:559 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:845 (1) - remove whistle and clap
01:06:416 (1) - remove finish
01:07:666 (3) - remove finish from slider's end

Normal:
00:14:452 (6) - remove clap from slider's start
00:14:988 (7) - remove whistle?
01:26:059 (1) - remove finish from slider's start

Fycho's hard:
no comments, good job

Locodol:
01:26:059 (1) - add whistle, but remove finish

Good map, gl
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Verlaren wrote:

From Aincrad's modding queue.
Sorry for the delay.

Easy:
00:13:559 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:845 (1) - remove whistle and clap
01:06:416 (1) - remove finish
01:07:666 (3) - remove finish from slider's end

Normal:
00:14:452 (6) - remove clap from slider's start
00:14:988 (7) - remove whistle?
01:26:059 (1) - remove finish from slider's start

Fycho's hard:
no comments, good job

Locodol:
01:26:059 (1) - add whistle, but remove finish

Good map, gl
fix some~
thanks for mod :)
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Cool. Just some suggestions before we get this going.

[General]
- Please don't use a negative offset. I don't see harm in setting it at 702.

[Locodol]
- The chorus is really overmapped ;_; I hear 1/4's where there aren't supposed to be 1/4's.
- 00:02:131 (3) - A better flowing pattern would be if you place this near the tail of (2). That way, (2) will flow into (3) which makes the play smoother. Up to you though if you want to follow. (You may have to reposition your next combo though). http://puu.sh/bbpKb/3f2e55fb5d.jpg
- 00:04:988 (1,2) - There's really no music at 00:05:434, yet I can hear faint music at 00:05:345-. It would be better if you ended (1) here at 00:05:345- instead. The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit here.
- 00:06:059 (3) - IMO it would play smoother if you make the previous slider point towards this note.
- 00:08:916 (2) - Just a personal preference, but placing this above (1) and (3) instead of below, complements the fact that it's positioned on the upper side of the playscreen. (Better aesthetic IMO). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976345
- 00:11:595 (1) - Sorry but slider looks ugly ;_;
- 00:30:345 (3,4,1) - This feels kind of sudden IMO on the first play. Move (4) closer to (3) at least, so they it doesn't stack with (1). You can use spacing similar to 00:35:345 (2)-.
- 00:36:059 (4,1) - Position this so that (4) is in the middle of (1). It looks better aesthetically.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976358
- 00:36:952 (3,4,5,6) - I was expecting a perfect triangle here (at least with (3,4,5).)
- 00:38:381 (3) - The overlapping here looks bad IMO. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976367
- 00:38:916 (4,1) - Move (4) just a little bit closer to (1) so that it'll be consistent with your spacing at 00:37:845 (1,2) - .
- 00:48:381 (1) - Why the sudden slider velocity change? Make it more subtle if you really want one, maybe 1.25x?
- 01:04:809 (1,2,3,4,1) - The 1/4 here all have inconsistent spacing! (1,2) have different spacing from (3,4), from (4,5) and (4,1). Pick one spacing and stick with it.
- 01:06:773 (4,5) - Big jump here IMO. Tone it down? http://puu.sh/bbqUW/0e7b43d46c.jpg
- 01:14:184 (3,4) - Space this normally instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976412
- 01:26:059 (1,2) - I was expecting a big jump here :( Hard also had a stack and I was expecting something more difficult.

[Fycho's Hard]
- Perfect!

[Normal]
- 00:02:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - The current combo doesn't really flow nicely from previous slider. May I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976445
- 00:50:702 (4,5,6,7,1) - May I suggest this pattern for better oval flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976458
- 00:59:273 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't that nice. May I suggest this pattern instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976460

[Easy]
- 00:13:916 (4,5) - Adjust (4) upwards a bit for better flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976463

For [Locodol], I would suggest you get an opinion of a QAT first if he thinks it is overmapped. (Just asking for a test play is fine.)
Other than that, other diffs are ready already IMO. (Easy and Normal are in the more difficult spectrum of their respective classifications, but fair enough IMO.)
kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa

NoHitter wrote:

Cool. Just some suggestions before we get this going.

[General]
- Please don't use a negative offset. I don't see harm in setting it at 702. okay fixed! just because I dont know if it can work when red line and green line stack

[Locodol]
- The chorus is really overmapped ;_; I hear 1/4's where there aren't supposed to be 1/4's.
- 00:02:131 (3) - A better flowing pattern would be if you place this near the tail of (2). That way, (2) will flow into (3) which makes the play smoother. Up to you though if you want to follow. (You may have to reposition your next combo though). http://puu.sh/bbpKb/3f2e55fb5d.jpg Amm the current flow is okay imo.(a liittle lazy to change all the pattern after>.<)
- 00:04:988 (1,2) - There's really no music at 00:05:434, yet I can hear faint music at 00:05:345-. It would be better if you ended (1) here at 00:05:345- instead. The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit here. yes here has no music, thats why I use 5% volum. and I use 3/4 slider just to express the "me" sorry I want to keep this >.<
- 00:06:059 (3) - IMO it would play smoother if you make the previous slider point towards this note. sure
- 00:08:916 (2) - Just a personal preference, but placing this above (1) and (3) instead of below, complements the fact that it's positioned on the upper side of the playscreen. (Better aesthetic IMO). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976345 the flow here is something like this .feel better imo when I testplay>.<
- 00:11:595 (1) - Sorry but slider looks ugly ;_; 0.0 let me consider another one
- 00:30:345 (3,4,1) - This feels kind of sudden IMO on the first play. Move (4) closer to (3) at least, so they it doesn't stack with (1). You can use spacing similar to 00:35:345 (2)-. okay~fixed (though I think this appearred normally in recently map :) )
- 00:36:059 (4,1) - Position this so that (4) is in the middle of (1). It looks better aesthetically.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976358 okay fixed
- 00:36:952 (3,4,5,6) - I was expecting a perfect triangle here (at least with (3,4,5).) okay~fixed
- 00:38:381 (3) - The overlapping here looks bad IMO. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976367 I want to keep this, I like this overlapping!
- 00:38:916 (4,1) - Move (4) just a little bit closer to (1) so that it'll be consistent with your spacing at 00:37:845 (1,2) - .
- 00:48:381 (1) - Why the sudden slider velocity change? Make it more subtle if you really want one, maybe 1.25x? just because the music "chu"~1.5x is not hard here
- 01:04:809 (1,2,3,4,1) - The 1/4 here all have inconsistent spacing! (1,2) have different spacing from (3,4), from (4,5) and (4,1). Pick one spacing and stick with it. because same spacing is really boring for insane diff. and I think these 1/4 slider jump is easy to play.
- 01:06:773 (4,5) - Big jump here IMO. Tone it down? http://puu.sh/bbqUW/0e7b43d46c.jpg If turn it down, the next jumo will be hard to play. this slider jump is easier than next note jump and harder than prev. it will be smooth transition
- 01:14:184 (3,4) - Space this normally instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976412 this pattern doesn't fit this music and harder to play imo
- 01:26:059 (1,2) - I was expecting a big jump here :( Hard also had a stack and I was expecting something more difficult. I think most player will relax when spam start. If a big jump here they will miss the last note >.<

[Fycho's Hard]
- Perfect!

[Normal]
- 00:02:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - The current combo doesn't really flow nicely from previous slider. May I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976445
- 00:50:702 (4,5,6,7,1) - May I suggest this pattern for better oval flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976458
- 00:59:273 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't that nice. May I suggest this pattern instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976460

[Easy]
- 00:13:916 (4,5) - Adjust (4) upwards a bit for better flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976463

For [Locodol], I would suggest you get an opinion of a QAT first if he thinks it is overmapped. (Just asking for a test play is fine.)
Other than that, other diffs are ready already IMO. (Easy and Normal are in the more difficult spectrum of their respective classifications, but fair enough IMO.)
easy and normal diff all fixed
sorry for refuse so many suggestion in insane diff :o
about [Locodol]. I have already ask for many players testplay. and they said those overmapped is okay for play.(just like guy's map >,<)
If you think neccessary I will find a QAT :)
really thanks for mod!
captin1
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I'd consider this amount of overmapping fine, didn't bother me personally

recommended some setting changes though
  1. Easy OD -1
  2. Fycho's OD +1 or +.5
  3. Locodol OD +1
The mp3 quality is also an issue, I did some working around and came up with this http://puu.sh/bclst.mp3
Offset should be the same
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kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa

captin1 wrote:

I'd consider this amount of overmapping fine, didn't bother me personally

recommended some setting changes though
  1. Easy OD -1 fixed
  2. Fycho's OD +1 or +.5 fycho said he want to keep this
  3. Locodol OD +1 fixed
The mp3 quality is also an issue, I did some working around and came up with this http://puu.sh/bclst.mp3
Offset should be the same
really thanks for mp3 file >.<
KSHR
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KSHR
A bunch of minor suggestions.

SPOILER
09:57 KSHR: check Normal diff
09:57 KSHR: you will shout "WTF"
09:58 kamisamaaa: ?
09:58 kamisamaaa: what happened
09:58 KSHR: 00:00:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 
09:59 kamisamaaa: 0.0
09:59 kamisamaaa: a mistake
09:59 kamisamaaa: just add 4ms on frist green line
09:59 KSHR: oh, finally noticed!
10:00 kamisamaaa: because I change the red line yesteday >.< and forget to fix this greenline
10:00 KSHR: 00:18:202 (1) - too soon after a spinner
10:01 KSHR: you can fix this easily by deleting this note imo
10:02 kamisamaaa: others told me 1/1 is okay for a normal diff>.<
10:02 KSHR: nope.
10:02 KSHR: actually I desqualified a map for this reason
10:02 KSHR: I'm sure it's an unrankable issue
10:03 kamisamaaa: okay delete that note
10:03 kamisamaaa: sounds a little strange haha
10:03 KSHR: not really to me :p
10:03 KSHR: Easy and Normal are difficulties for beginners, then there should be enough recovery after each spinner :p
10:04 KSHR: and definitely 1/1 beat in this BPM is not enough
10:05 kamisamaaa: 00:18:916 (2) - maybe I should　　　 also delete this note?
10:06 KSHR: or,
10:07 KSHR: 00:15:166 (1) - move this spinner end to 00:17:130 - , and add an extra note at 00:17:844 - ? This also will work imo
10:07 kamisamaaa: yes! this is better
10:08 KSHR: dont forget to change a hitsound on the spinner end :p
10:09 kamisamaaa: :D
10:09 KSHR: 01:26:059 (1) - Hmmmmmmmmm
10:09 KSHR: lol
10:10 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:11 kamisamaaa: same with above
10:11 kamisamaaa: end spinner 01:24:987
10:11 kamisamaaa: 01:24:987 
10:11 kamisamaaa: and add a note
10:12 KSHR: where will you add at?
10:12 kamisamaaa: 01:25:701 
10:12 kamisamaaa: add a note here
10:12 KSHR: I got another idea
10:13 KSHR: just shorten this spinner by 1/1 beat, and can follow the drum line
10:13 kamisamaaa: good idea
10:14 KSHR: probably I should check Easy as well?
10:14 KSHR: lol
10:14 kamisamaaa: can I also use this in easy?
10:15 kamisamaaa: If you have time >.<
10:15 KSHR: hmmm, 2/1 is a bit short for Easy diffs imo
10:17 KSHR: 00:26:416 (1,2,3) - kidna sounds awkward to me
10:18 KSHR: http://puu.sh/bdsRH/0c73db1dde.jpg
10:18 KSHR: try this once^
10:18 KSHR: dunno if it suits you though
10:18 kamisamaaa: let me try this frist
10:19 KSHR: hmm, mine also sounds..awkward....
10:19 KSHR: why I suggested it lol
10:20 kamisamaaa: \o/
10:20 KSHR: ohhhhh 2nd suggestion http://puu.sh/bdt0P/d6c5bdfcc6.jpg
10:22 kamisamaaa: sounds better
10:22 kamisamaaa: :D
10:23 KSHR: wow there is no note that is too soon after a spinner
10:23 KSHR: nice
10:24 kamisamaaa: because there is no note after a spinner
10:24 kamisamaaa: lol
10:24 KSHR: yeah lol
10:24 KSHR: I have enough time to check the hardest one as well :3
10:25 kamisamaaa: lucky~
10:26 KSHR: yay
10:26 KSHR: 00:04:988 (1) - this should be 1/1 considering the vocal ends at around a white tick?
10:26 KSHR: 00:06:416 (1) - ^
10:27 kamisamaaa: just want to express the long vocal
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862- you can hear this "do" continue to the blue line
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862 
10:28 KSHR: *to
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862-
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862- 
10:29 kamisamaaa: ??
10:29 kamisamaaa: why this time cant become a link...
10:29 KSHR: lol
10:30 KSHR: 00:11:595 (1) - I wonder who can expect this slider change..
10:30 KSHR: considering anti-spacing is used at 00:10:523 (1,2,3) - , this sldier speed also should get toned down?
10:30 kamisamaaa: I cant distinguish 'to' and 'do' in Japanese >.<
10:30 KSHR: the rhythm itself is nice though
10:31 KSHR: you will get used to hear someday ;p
10:32 KSHR: 00:11:594 (4) - personally I think this also can be placed in 0.50x speed
10:32 kamisamaaa: yes
10:32 kamisamaaa: I change to 0.5x slider now
10:32 KSHR: cool
10:33 KSHR: 00:36:059 (4) - this is currently against the flow!
10:34 KSHR: Ctrl+G will work well imo
10:34 kamisamaaa: ctrl+G this because of the HW's mod 
10:34 kamisamaaa: lol
10:34 KSHR: WTF!?
10:34 kamisamaaa: and I testplay it . it's okay for play
10:35 KSHR: 00:46:773 (3) - but this one..!
10:35 kamisamaaa: haha
10:35 KSHR: I guess you wanted  to follow the song?
10:35 kamisamaaa: this is just for fun
10:35 kamisamaaa: yes
10:36 kamisamaaa: 00:46:773 (3,4) - and 00:46:416 (1,2) - 
10:36 kamisamaaa: these two is different group
10:36 KSHR: hmm.. then you can rearrange these slider's directions like ↑↑↓↓
10:36 KSHR: oops *↓↓↑↑
10:37 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:37 KSHR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981651
10:37 KSHR: like this-
10:37 KSHR: ^*
10:38 KSHR: this can also follow the song, right?
10:38 kamisamaaa: yes
10:38 kamisamaaa: you are right
10:41 KSHR: 01:15:345 (2) - this kinda sounds strange to me
10:41 KSHR: maybe 1 note will work much better?
10:41 KSHR: I mean http://puu.sh/bduiQ/e7bf1f5ab6.jpg
10:43 KSHR: 01:26:059 (1,2) - If these notes were placed on the left character's boobs, I would like this difficulty more. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981670
10:43 kamisamaaa: hmmm just because I like this kind of rhythm
10:43 kamisamaaa: vocal is still continue at 01:15:434 
10:43 kamisamaaa: slider head follow the drum and body express the vocal
10:44 KSHR: yeah, it's up to you whether or not to change ;p
10:44 KSHR: I will never force to fix unless it is an unrankable issue
10:44 kamisamaaa: I see. just give you the reason why I keep this
10:45 kamisamaaa: :D
10:45 KSHR: nice :3
10:45 kamisamaaa: 01:26:059 (1,2) -  whats your mean of these notes?
10:46 KSHR: that's just a joke!
10:46 KSHR: read carefully!
10:46 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:46 KSHR: you know what boobs mean?
10:46 kamisamaaa: OH i understood ......
10:46 kamisamaaa: yes
10:46 KSHR: wwwww
10:47 kamisamaaa: wwwww
10:47 KSHR: as I said,
10:47 kamisamaaa: move these notes between two girls mouth~
10:47 KSHR: it's up to you whether or not to change 
10:47 kamisamaaa: http://puu.sh/bduEM/d8bbd6b0ec.jpg
10:47 kamisamaaa: haha
10:48 KSHR: THAT ALSO WOULD BE GREAT
10:48 kamisamaaa: maybe this will be better
10:48 KSHR: well that's all I can point out "for now"
10:49 KSHR: Melophobia poking me so much.. w
10:49 kamisamaaa: really thank you >.<
10:49 KSHR: anytime :3
10:49 kamisamaaa: :D

Good luck
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Fair enough.
kamisamaaa
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

NoHitter wrote:

Fair enough.
thank you NoHitter :D
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
MOM WATCH OUT, YOU'RE GONNA HIT THAT MEME!!

Insane:
00:18:202 (1,2,3) - This flow is kind of weird since I'm forcibly jerking backwards, which is no fun
00:46:416 (1,2,3,4) - N. . . nah.
00:48:381 (1) - FRIEND IT IS OK YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO THIS FAST THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT
00:55:345 (1,1,1) - Not sure you need these NCs
01:15:523 (3) - rip slidertrains no fun

Hard:
00:46:773 (2,3) - now this makes like 0 sense
00:48:202 (2,3) - ^
00:49:631 (3,4) - ^

Normal:
ye

Easy:
00:27:666 (2) - Lower these points so it's more of a ~ shape. Right now its angling way too much upward

It's a pretty ok map and it's a shame that it took this long for someone to come and fix stuff.

Unless there's something I'm missing. Which I hope not.
kamisamaaa
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

CDFA wrote:

MOM WATCH OUT, YOU'RE GONNA HIT THAT MEME!!

Insane:
00:18:202 (1,2,3) - This flow is kind of weird since I'm forcibly jerking backwards, which is no fun okay changed
00:46:416 (1,2,3,4) - N. . . nah.
00:48:381 (1) - FRIEND IT IS OK YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO THIS FAST THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT just want to express the feel on "yo~" in music:D I have tried 1.0X speed but feel1,5X is much better
00:55:345 (1,1,1) - Not sure you need these NCs haha just want to make them a little beautful..because there have finish on every slider..
01:15:523 (3) - rip slidertrains no fun dont know how to set them..and use slidertrains..

Hard:
00:46:773 (2,3) - now this makes like 0 sense
00:48:202 (2,3) - ^
00:49:631 (3,4) - ^

Normal:
ye

Easy:
00:27:666 (2) - Lower these points so it's more of a ~ shape. Right now its angling way too much upward fixed..I'm not good at use slide haha

It's a pretty ok map and it's a shame that it took this long for someone to come and fix stuff.

Unless there's something I'm missing. Which I hope not.
thank you and wait for fycho
Fycho
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Fycho
it's just to make a direction of the two stacked circles, of course it doesn't affect the playing at all, so no change thanks.
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
i bayleaf,

lets be in qualified together <3

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/190237
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
A few things before I decide to rank this

1) The video is missing from Insane and Easy (At least on my end. Which are ironically enough the only diffs that were updated)
2) Maybe try 1.25x for the fast slider instead?

Ye
kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa

CDFA wrote:

A few things before I decide to rank this

1) The video is missing from Insane and Easy (At least on my end. Which are ironically enough the only diffs that were updated) my vedio file is lost and I doesnt noticed...
2) Maybe try 1.25x for the fast slider instead? okay

Ye
:)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
So I re-downloaded the map and it looks like you got the video back.

Let's go ahead and qualify this yay
Time-
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Time-
yay another locodol <3

Congratulation~
Sellenite
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Sellenite
过了那么久，终于rank了
恭喜~
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