Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera-TV size ver.- [Taiko|Osu] · forum

lnyphoenix

Joined June 2010

lnyphoenix 2014-04-20T14:30:09+00:00

抱歉看不懂easy

00:00:681 (1,2) - 1、2顺序对调，和后面统一
00:01:817 (3,4) - ds 3.82，你的insane都没出现这么大的跳跃……可以和00:03:181 (2)重叠放
00:38:862 (1) - 改成00:38:635 - 00:39:090，和00:40:226 (3)相应

Melt's hard

也是不敢摸，妹儿水太深

Insane

~~AR=8，这bpm和这难度都感觉不需要9~~原来已经改了
00:57:044 (1,2) - 这个滑条接往返滑条节奏没听出来，改成往返滑条接滑条可能会比较好
01:21:817 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
01:23:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+g，ctrl+h 这里4组多边形全是顺时针，可以加一点变化
01:27:726 (1) - 转圈之后这个note的位置很不顺手，建议放在正中
整体来说节奏上空档不少，ds也比较保守（我只看到一处3.2超过了3，超过2的都是屈指可数），也没有什么遮挡或者别的难点，难度名建议改成hard

我是萌萌的新人酱，如果摸的不好请好好调教教导我 DA☆ZE

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Akemi_Homura 2014-04-22T14:58:04+00:00

Hi~ from your request in game~!

[General]

BG is 1055x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Add audioLeadin 1500~2000ms
Uncheck 'Letterbox during breaks'
Click
Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Insane] : Combo1 : 243,167,167 Combo2 : 255,196,255 Combo3 : 255,255,193 Combo4 : 187,243,153
- [Melt's Hard] : Combo1 : 206,167,254 Combo2 : 239,223,75 Combo3 : 81,225,251 Combo4 : 233,90,90

[Easy]

HP +1 , OD +1
00:41:362 (1) - move this 00:41:135 and end is 00:41:817
Click
00:43:862 - add note~?
01:03:408 (3) - I think This is more fit to music.
Click
01:07:953 (3) - same as 01:03:408
01:11:590 (5) - same~!

01:16:590 (1,2,3) - You can make this triangle shape.

Click

***Here is code~

288,248,76590,6,0,P|344:224|368:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,77499,2,0,P|383:103|333:111,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,163,78408,2,0,P|243:111|252:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]

HP +2 , OD +1
00:51:362 (1) - delete reverse.just one slider is more follow vocal.
01:15:226 (1) - This slider is well follow vocal.but awkward I think.So try this.
Click

[Melt's Hard]

AR -1
Slider Velocity 1.54 -> 1.60
00:05:226 - add note~?
01:04:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump is too hard I think..(just suggestion)

[Insane]

00:05:226 - add note~?(I think it's more comfortable)
01:17:271 (2) - x:256, y:192
01:18:862 (1) - //
01:26:021 (1) - I think this spin end is 01:29:090 and delete 01:27:726 (1) this note.like other diffs.

Nice Map and song~! ><
GL to Rank~!

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,372 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-23T04:39:24+00:00

微博上群众hhhhh
占位~Sorry for so long waiting!
新手modder见谅！

==================================
[General]
1. Remove letterbox during breaks because you don't have break times in this mapset.(EZ NM HD)
2. Wide Screen Support option conflict in Insane diff.
[Easy]
Rhythm issues：
00:38:408 (4,1) - 这之间为啥空了？QwQ
01:20:453 (1) - 把前面的vocal补一下，在这里开始转盘
Layout issues:
00:07:044 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/8lmxe.jpg
类似的还有一些，譬如 00:15:681 (2,3) - 00:12:499 (4,5) - 做blanket的时候可以用AR圈检查一下~~
00:27:044 (2,4) - 用坐标确保2的尾部和4的头部叠放整齐
00:45:681 (4,6) - 做成一样的，对称美观
01:05:226 (4,1,2) - 他们做成一样的，并且让他们的尾巴连起来是一个正三角形，美观的pattern
01:10:226 (2,5) - 把5和2放隔开一些
Hitsound issues：
觉得kiai用osu自带的clap不太好听
00:03:635 (2) - 用whistle或者是其他的强调一下这个
00:04:317 (3) - 这个大白线finish多好
00:22:044 (3) - 尾巴加finish
[Normal]
3.5星以上了，NM最好做成3.5以下的
CS4好吓人
Rhythm issues：
00:51:362 (1) - 这个不对节奏，跟vocal也感觉怪怪的，建议改一下
00:07:044 (2) - 这个NM最好不要弄，折返太快了
00:28:862 (5) - 这个折返不太对得上音乐 00:29:771 这里加一个note
Layout issues:
00:13:408 (1,2) - 弄成平滑的
00:22:953 (2,3) - 没有blanket好，像这样稍微调一下http://puu.sh/8mv1c.jpg
00:24:771 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8mv3Y.jpg同样是blanket问题
00:30:226 (1,2) - 这样包一下：http://puu.sh/8mv7a.jpg
00:16:590 (1) - 检查一下坐标，没有叠好
00:35:681 (1,2) - 这样的stack还是不要弄比较好
01:06:135 (1,2) - 试试这样：http://puu.sh/8mvk4.jpg
Overlap很不美观比如：00:02:726 (1,2) - 00:21:135 (1,2) -
DS调成1.1就不会overlap啦 :3~
[Melt's Hard]
:3
Very nice！
[Insane]

新人不太会Insane，简单看看吧w
00:04:317 (1) - 头加finish
00:05:908 (3) - ^
00:18:862 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8p9ro.jpg 形状弄好一点，最好包好
00:21:590 (5,6,7,8,9) - 跟着鼓声可以加上clap
00:55:226 (1,2) - 包好 http://puu.sh/8p9B2.jpg
00:56:362 (3,5) - 5的尾巴没有完全叠好哦！
00:58:862 (1,2) - 挪开一些，重叠的太近了
01:09:317 (5,7) - 没有完全叠好，检查一下坐标
01:11:590 (1,3) - ^
01:20:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得在 01:21:362 (4) - 01:22:271 (3) - 01:23:181 (3) - 01:24:090 (3) - 01:24:771 (3) - 下whistle好一些。

========================END==================================================
If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in-game!
Good luck!

Last edited by Mafumafu 2014-04-27T05:04:19+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-23T15:08:22+00:00

Akemi_Homura wrote:
Hi~ from your request in game~!

[General]
BG is 1055x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.-fixed
Add audioLeadin 1500~2000ms-fixed
Uncheck 'Letterbox during breaks'-fixed
Click
Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Insane] : Combo1 : 243,167,167 Combo2 : 255,196,255 Combo3 : 255,255,193 Combo4 : 187,243,153
- [Melt's Hard] : Combo1 : 206,167,254 Combo2 : 239,223,75 Combo3 : 81,225,251 Combo4 : 233,90,90
[Easy]
HP +1 , OD +1-fixed
00:41:362 (1) - move this 00:41:135 and end is 00:41:817
Click
-fixed
00:43:862 - add note~?-add
01:03:408 (3) - I think This is more fit to music.
Click
-I kept it and think of some time(ˊ・ω・ˋ
01:07:953 (3) - same as 01:03:408-^
01:11:590 (5) - same~!-^
01:16:590 (1,2,3) - You can make this triangle shape.-good! thank you!
Click
***Here is code~
288,248,76590,6,0,P|344:224|368:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,77499,2,0,P|383:103|333:111,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,163,78408,2,0,P|243:111|252:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Normal]
HP +2 , OD +1-fixed
00:51:362 (1) - delete reverse.just one slider is more follow vocal.-fixed
01:15:226 (1) - This slider is well follow vocal.but awkward I think.So try this.-fixed
Click

[Melt's Hard]
AR -1
Slider Velocity 1.54 -> 1.60
00:05:226 - add note~?
01:04:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump is too hard I think..(just suggestion)

[Insane]
00:05:226 - add note~?(I think it's more comfortable)-sounds uncomfortable……
01:17:271 (2) - x:256, y:192-fixed
01:18:862 (1) - //-fixed
01:26:021 (1) - I think this spin end is 01:29:090 and delete 01:27:726 (1) this note.like other diffs.-fixed

Nice Map and song~! ><
GL to Rank~!

Thank you for modding~

Toycat_old

Toycat_old 2014-04-24T10:35:32+00:00

良い :3

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-24T14:02:06+00:00

gxytcgxytc wrote:
[general]
ai mod says
妹儿的hard preview time 和其他的不一致-fixed
tag countdown (321go) 不一致 (最好加mapper ID -fixed

Insane和melt hard的artist 中间有个空格窝不知道应该有还是没有=A=至少统一一下然后问个霓虹人怎么搞-fixed
[Easy]
摸不出来
[Normal]
00:01:817 (3) - 少whistle么-fixed
01:01:362 (2) - DS奇特 move to 56,256-fixed
[hard]
不会摸;_;
[Insane]
ar-1
00:04:317 (1) - 貌似失去了什么 head加个finish应该不错w
00:00:681 (1,2,3,4) - 这是正方型吧没错吧..
01:05:226 (3,4,5,6) - 整体左移点
可以不看/.\
果然clap还是违和=-= 按你喜好来吧 00:10:226 (2,5) - 00:15:681 (2,3) - 01:27:726 (1) -
remap惹，谢谢白雪:D
Edit do some irc 其实是因为上面看着太寒酸勒QAQ
IIRRCC
20:52 gxytcgxytc: =A=
20:53 OblivioN: ;w;
20:53 OblivioN: 怎么啦？
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 00:08:181 (2,3) - 这种滑条个人来讲是不推荐大量使用
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 偶尔一个没啥
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 最好是重音在滑条头
20:53 OblivioN: normal里的?
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 在看I
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 这个啦啦之前看我图也总说我
20:54 OblivioN: soga
20:54 OblivioN: 发个po吧;w;
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 还有感觉你把I难度看的太重;w;
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 不自然
20:55 OblivioN: soga……
20:55 gxytcgxytc: 刚做的话大概都是这样?= =梗太多根本停不下来什么的
20:55 OblivioN: 好吧/w\
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 132 ar9丧失大怪兽
20:56 OblivioN: /w\
20:56 OblivioN: 其实是因为ar8 这个我打不好;w;
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 美丽
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 我摸图经验不多也不会提啥节奏上的修改
20:57 OblivioN: 00:27:953 (1,2,3) -
20:57 OblivioN: 这种的可以吧？0.0
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 没事啊..
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 然后就是这种nazi00:30:794 (3,4,5,6) -
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 00:00:681 (1,2,3,4) -
20:59 gxytcgxytc: po里说过
20:59 gxytcgxytc: 00:26:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - 然后这类连打间距强烈建议要一致
20:59 OblivioN: OK
20:59 gxytcgxytc: 本串肯定要一致的除非你做梗
21:00 OblivioN: 猴
21:00 gxytcgxytc: 其他串也最好统一一下速度变了什么的可以适量增加或者减少
21:00 OblivioN: 嗯呐
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 比如"平常串都是0.5 然后想表现一下高潮感觉的可以0.8甚至1.0
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 这些就随心了
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 要怂
21:01 OblivioN: 好的ww
21:02 OblivioN: 怂的意思？
21:02 OblivioN: 规规矩矩作图？;w;
21:02 gxytcgxytc: 追随内心._.
21:02 gxytcgxytc: @贾斯丁比伯
21:02 OblivioN: ;w;
恩果然摸不出来啥..

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-24T14:05:48+00:00

lnyphoenix wrote:
Easy
抱歉看不懂easy
Normal
00:00:681 (1,2) - 1、2顺序对调，和后面统一
00:01:817 (3,4) - ds 3.82，你的insane都没出现这么大的跳跃……可以和00:03:181 (2)重叠放-fixed
00:38:862 (1) - 改成00:38:635 - 00:39:090，和00:40:226 (3)相应-好像改了:3
Melt's hard
也是不敢摸，妹儿水太深
Insane
~~AR=8，这bpm和这难度都感觉不需要9~~原来已经改了
00:57:044 (1,2) - 这个滑条接往返滑条节奏没听出来，改成往返滑条接滑条可能会比较好改哩
01:21:817 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g-get
01:23:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+g，ctrl+h 这里4组多边形全是顺时针，可以加一点变化-get√
01:27:726 (1) - 转圈之后这个note的位置很不顺手，建议放在正中-del
整体来说节奏上空档不少，ds也比较保守（我只看到一处3.2超过了3，超过2的都是屈指可数），也没有什么遮挡或者别的难点，难度名建议改成hard已经remap
我是萌萌的新人酱，如果摸的不好请好好调教教导我 DA☆ZE

感谢绯红桑:D

WinglessAsura

29 posts

Joined April 2014

WinglessAsura 2014-04-26T14:53:14+00:00

[list]here's my mod

General

first, i want to say. your map is almost perfect for ranked. no need for more object modding.
just, your hitsound is should be increase slightly. at some point, your hitsound goes silent while song playing it beats.
as for hard and above, it will be more challenging if you adding some jumps to the map or maybe there's a jump on your map but its too few, try to increase more jumps. usually hard/insane diff player likes jumps

hope my mod will be useful for you. i'm sorry if there's any inconvenience in my words

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-26T16:41:39+00:00

WinglessAsura wrote:
[list]here's my mod

General

first, i want to say. your map is almost perfect for ranked. no need for more object modding.
just, your hitsound is should be increase slightly. at some point, your hitsound goes silent while song playing it beats.
as for hard and above, it will be more challenging if you adding some jumps to the map or maybe there's a jump on your map but its too few, try to increase more jumps. usually hard/insane diff player likes jumps

hope my mod will be useful for you. i'm sorry if there's any inconvenience in my words

Thank you！Changed hitsound

I love you

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-04-26T18:01:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Pururut

490 posts

Joined March 2012

Pururut 2014-04-26T17:20:03+00:00

irc

2014-04-27 00:45 Pururut: 先来EZ
2014-04-27 00:45 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:45 Pururut: 00:12:953 (5) - blanket 修一下
2014-04-27 00:45 Pururut: 00:13:862 (1) -
2014-04-27 00:45 Pururut: ^
2014-04-27 00:45 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:46 Pururut: 可以用上一个note的approach circle检查
2014-04-27 00:46 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-04-27 00:47 OblivioN: 话说刚刚你agree什么啊:3
2014-04-27 00:47 Pururut: 00:29:090 (4) - 把GS关了然后和00:27:044 (2) - 尾巴叠好
2014-04-27 00:47 Pururut: 什么agree
2014-04-27 00:47 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:48 OblivioN: 看群;w;
2014-04-27 00:49 Pururut: 01:11:590 (5) - nc
2014-04-27 00:49 Pururut: 01:13:408 (2) - 删掉nc
2014-04-27 00:49 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 00:49 Pururut: 01:15:226 (5) - nc
2014-04-27 00:50 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:50 Pururut: 啊你这个好多滑条尾巴都压着长白线了啊
2014-04-27 00:50 Pururut: 这样就不好NC了
2014-04-27 00:50 OblivioN: 【是的】
2014-04-27 00:51 Pururut: 倒数第二个转盘啊
2014-04-27 00:52 OblivioN: 怎么改？
2014-04-27 00:52 Pururut: 01:19:544 (4) -
2014-04-27 00:52 Pururut: 01:19:999 (5) -
2014-04-27 00:52 Pururut: 放两个note
2014-04-27 00:53 Pururut: 01:20:453 (6) - 然后这里一个滑条
2014-04-27 00:53 Pururut: 可以画个桃心
2014-04-27 00:53 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:53 Pururut: 01:20:453 (6) - 滑条到这结束
2014-04-27 00:54 OblivioN: 咦,两个是同一个时间点;w;
2014-04-27 00:54 Pururut: 01:22:271
2014-04-27 00:54 Pururut: 这
2014-04-27 00:54 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 00:54 Pururut: 01:22:271 (6) -
2014-04-27 00:55 Pururut: 然后我觉得后面那个转盘就可以删了
2014-04-27 00:55 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 00:56 Pururut: ez就这样了
2014-04-27 00:57 Pururut: 桃心滑条你自己研究一下吧
2014-04-27 00:57 Pururut: 也不一定要桃心啦
2014-04-27 00:57 OblivioN: 猴~
2014-04-27 00:57 Pururut: 转盘删了的话记得后面的绿线也删掉
2014-04-27 00:57 OblivioN: 好的
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: 00:30:681 (2,3) -
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: normal的
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: 这里那个3滑条
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: flow不是很好
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: 建议3的话可以下去一点
2014-04-27 01:00 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-04-27 01:00 Pururut: 00:52:953 (3,4) - 这里同理
2014-04-27 01:00 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:01 Pururut: 01:05:681 (3,1) - 这里也是
2014-04-27 01:01 Pururut: 不过都是一改就都要休整
2014-04-27 01:01 Pururut: 也是麻烦
2014-04-27 01:01 Pururut: easy normal就这点最烦人了
2014-04-27 01:01 OblivioN: 是的;w;
2014-04-27 01:02 Pururut: 01:25:453 (1) - 这个转盘啊
2014-04-27 01:02 Pururut: 01:26:135 (1) - 从这开始
2014-04-27 01:03 Pururut: 01:29:090 (1) - 到这结束
2014-04-27 01:03 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:03 Pururut: 不对
2014-04-27 01:03 Pururut: 01:25:908 (1) - 从这开始
2014-04-27 01:03 OblivioN: 咦？
2014-04-27 01:03 Pururut: 前面那根红线
2014-04-27 01:04 Pururut: 你再补两个note就行了
2014-04-27 01:04 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:04 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 01:04 Pururut: 妹儿的跳过了
2014-04-27 01:04 Pururut: irc摸不了GD
2014-04-27 01:04 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:05 Pururut: 请AR8
2014-04-27 01:05 OblivioN: 好的:3只是自己试图的时候是ar9【。】
2014-04-27 01:05 Pururut: 00:00:681 (1,2,3,4) - 这里你是要摆四方吗
2014-04-27 01:05 Pururut: 你这个好像歪了
2014-04-27 01:05 OblivioN: 好像是的【。】
2014-04-27 01:06 OblivioN: 我一会修一下
2014-04-27 01:06 Pururut: 上面菜单
2014-04-27 01:06 Pururut: compose
2014-04-27 01:06 Pururut: 有个多边形工具
2014-04-27 01:06 Pururut: 第4个
2014-04-27 01:06 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 01:07 OblivioN: 会用
2014-04-27 01:07 OblivioN: 之前这里忘了用【。】
2014-04-27 01:07 Pururut: 00:04:317 (5) - 减速滑条NC
2014-04-27 01:07 Pururut: 而且我感觉这里好像没必要减速.
2014-04-27 01:07 OblivioN: soga
2014-04-27 01:07 Pururut: 算了
2014-04-27 01:07 Pururut: NC一下
2014-04-27 01:07 OblivioN: 感觉是一个长音
2014-04-27 01:07 Pururut: 让别人来摸吧
2014-04-27 01:07 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 01:08 Pururut: 其实哇
2014-04-27 01:08 Pururut: 我觉得
2014-04-27 01:08 Pururut: 你红线位置错了
2014-04-27 01:09 OblivioN: 嗯？
2014-04-27 01:09 Pururut: 你没发现很多重音都在红线上吗....
2014-04-27 01:09 Pururut: 本来应该实在长白线和白线上的
2014-04-27 01:09 OblivioN: 没有诶【。】
2014-04-27 01:09 Pururut: 不管啦
2014-04-27 01:09 OblivioN: 感觉在白线上的哇【。】
2014-04-27 01:10 Pururut: 00:20:226 (3,4) -
2014-04-27 01:10 Pururut: 这个跳太突然辣
2014-04-27 01:11 Pururut: 00:17:499 (2) - 没叠好
2014-04-27 01:11 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:12 Pururut: 00:33:408 (1) - finish
2014-04-27 01:12 OblivioN: 00:20:453 (4,1) - 这两个换个位置怎么样？
2014-04-27 01:12 Pururut: 00:29:771 (1) - ^
2014-04-27 01:12 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:12 Pururut: 不用换
2014-04-27 01:12 OblivioN: 可是那样太跳了哇……
2014-04-27 01:13 Pururut: 哦可以换
2014-04-27 01:13 Pururut: 2 和4再换一下
2014-04-27 01:13 Pururut: 就可以了
2014-04-27 01:13 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:14 Pururut: 00:56:362 (3) - 没叠好
2014-04-27 01:14 OblivioN: 说起来我也觉得红线的位置不对;w;
2014-04-27 01:15 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:16 OblivioN: 对又不对#￥%@&……&%不知道啦
2014-04-27 01:16 Pururut: 对了
2014-04-27 01:16 Pururut: 我看错了
2014-04-27 01:16 Pururut: 01:19:316
2014-04-27 01:16 OblivioN: 囧
2014-04-27 01:16 Pururut: 这个break没必要
2014-04-27 01:16 Pururut: 删掉
2014-04-27 01:16 OblivioN: 猴
2014-04-27 01:17 Pururut: 应该会要改一波NC
2014-04-27 01:17 Pururut: 我也不太清楚NC的标准
2014-04-27 01:17 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-04-27 01:17 OblivioN: 据说是长白线nc
2014-04-27 01:17 Pururut: 没别的问题了
2014-04-27 01:18 OblivioN: 但是insane我也不懂【。】
2014-04-27 01:18 OblivioN: 好的
2014-04-27 01:18 Pururut: 我是除了辅助读图都是长白NC
2014-04-27 01:18 OblivioN: 感谢p总www
2014-04-27 01:18 Pururut: 我po上去了
2014-04-27 01:18 OblivioN: 读图的话【。】我比较奇葩
2014-04-27 01:18 OblivioN: 猴

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-28T00:22:01+00:00

4anke wrote:
normal
00:21:135 (1,2) - 这两个开头叠起来的滑条对新手来说不好读图
00:30:681 (2,3) -
00:32:953 (1,2) -
00:51:362 (1,2) -
01:00:226 (4,1) -
01:05:681 (3,1) - 理由同上好像EZNM滑条不允许叠
all done
hard
01:20:567 (1,1) - 转盘之后出现note有点突然，中间又不是break，中间建议加点note
insane
00:30:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这串东西不好，后面的串不在节奏上，而且也不应该放串在这
01:27:726 (1) - 转盘后的note放中间比较好吧
remap哩

感谢modding！

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-04-29T02:56:24+00:00

Regraz wrote:
微博上群众hhhhh
占位~Sorry for so long waiting!
新手modder见谅！

==================================
[General]
1. Remove letterbox during breaks because you don't have break times in this mapset.(EZ NM HD)删掉啦
2. Wide Screen Support option conflict in Insane diff.
[Easy]
Rhythm issues：
00:38:408 (4,1) - 这之间为啥空了？QwQ-感觉可以空，~~不然ez就3星以上了~~
01:20:453 (1) - 把前面的vocal补一下，在这里开始转盘-好
Layout issues:
00:07:044 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/8lmxe.jpg
类似的还有一些，譬如 00:15:681 (2,3) - 00:12:499 (4,5) - 做blanket的时候可以用AR圈检查一下~~-改好啦
00:27:044 (2,4) - 用坐标确保2的尾部和4的头部叠放整齐-改好啦
00:45:681 (4,6) - 做成一样的，对称美观-改好啦
01:05:226 (4,1,2) - 他们做成一样的，并且让他们的尾巴连起来是一个正三角形，美观的pattern-改好啦
01:10:226 (2,5) - 把5和2放隔开一些-好
Hitsound issues：
觉得kiai用osu自带的clap不太好听
00:03:635 (2) - 用whistle或者是其他的强调一下这个-改好啦
00:04:317 (3) - 这个大白线finish多好-猴
00:22:044 (3) - 尾巴加finish-猴
[Normal]
3.5星以上了，NM最好做成3.5以下的
CS4好吓人
Rhythm issues：
00:51:362 (1) - 这个不对节奏，跟vocal也感觉怪怪的，建议改一下-改回原来的折返惹
00:07:044 (2) - 这个NM最好不要弄，折返太快了-再留一下;w;
00:28:862 (5) - 这个折返不太对得上音乐 00:29:771 这里加一个note-猴
Layout issues:
00:13:408 (1,2) - 弄成平滑的-还不造怎么改……
00:22:953 (2,3) - 没有blanket好，像这样稍微调一下http://puu.sh/8mv1c.jpg-猴
00:24:771 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8mv3Y.jpg同样是blanket问题-修啦
00:30:226 (1,2) - 这样包一下：http://puu.sh/8mv7a.jpg-猴
00:16:590 (1) - 检查一下坐标，没有叠好-修好啦
00:35:681 (1,2) - 这样的stack还是不要弄比较好-再看看
01:06:135 (1,2) - 试试这样：http://puu.sh/8mvk4.jpg-棒！
Overlap很不美观比如：00:02:726 (1,2) - 00:21:135 (1,2) -
DS调成1.1就不会overlap啦 :3~;w;先不改啦……不然要remap……orz
[Melt's Hard]
:3
Very nice！
[Insane]

新人不太会Insane，简单看看吧w
00:04:317 (1) - 头加finish
00:05:908 (3) - ^
00:18:862 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8p9ro.jpg 形状弄好一点，最好包好
00:21:590 (5,6,7,8,9) - 跟着鼓声可以加上clap
00:55:226 (1,2) - 包好 http://puu.sh/8p9B2.jpg
00:56:362 (3,5) - 5的尾巴没有完全叠好哦！
00:58:862 (1,2) - 挪开一些，重叠的太近了
01:09:317 (5,7) - 没有完全叠好，检查一下坐标
01:11:590 (1,3) - ^
01:20:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得在 01:21:362 (4) - 01:22:271 (3) - 01:23:181 (3) - 01:24:090 (3) - 01:24:771 (3) - 下whistle好一些。
-全改啦！
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If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in-game!
Good luck!

感谢modding！XD 帮大忙啦！

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-05-01T12:59:09+00:00

irc

2014-05-01 22:22 Jemmmmy: 00:01:817 (5) - nc
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 要走rank是不是比较没戏【。】 ;w;
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 改改还是可以
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 噢噢！ww
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 00:01:817 (1) - 这里改了
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 不对
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里//
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: orz
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 你等等
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:317 (5,1) - 好了这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) - 这两个间距小了, 误以为是隔着半拍
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: soga
2014-05-01 22:26 Jemmmmy: 00:07:840 - 这里可以加个note
2014-05-01 22:26 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 00:10:226 - http://puu.sh/8uHrV.jpg
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: OK~
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 节奏贴歌声
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 00:18:862 (1,2) - 这些不要贴紧在一起
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 留些缝隙
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 像00:17:726 (3,5) -
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:29 Jemmmmy: 00:22:499 (1,2) - 分开点？
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 00:24:544 (2,3,4) - 这里三连不怎么贴节奏
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 但是00:25:908 (9,10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 这种就可以用用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 00:24:771 (4,5) - 这两个地方的音拉成slider？
2014-05-01 22:31 Jemmmmy: 00:26:817 (2,4) - 这种重叠最好不要用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 噢！好
2014-05-01 22:32 Jemmmmy: 可以拉成滑条
2014-05-01 22:32 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:34 Jemmmmy: 00:34:999 - 这里节奏http://puu.sh/8uHQ8.jpg
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 折返滑条没用的必要
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 00:38:862 (1) - note
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 做了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 错了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 00:37:271 - 这里 note 因为你后面都是跟乐器
2014-05-01 22:36 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 交换nc00:51:362 (10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271这里是加一个吗？
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 Jemmmmy: 00:57:953 (7,1,2) - 这里太挤了高潮送很多都行
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 就是分开放吧？
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 差不多
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 重新组合一下
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 猴w
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:00:681 (7) - nc
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:05:226 (7,8,9,10) - 这里没摆好？
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 连打摆成标准弧线
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好像是的;w;
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 01:05:681 (11) - 这可以分为两个短滑条
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好的
2014-05-01 22:43 Jemmmmy: 01:09:544 - 节奏http://puu.sh/8uIjD.jpg
2014-05-01 22:43 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:44 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 - 可以用http://puu.sh/8uIpa.jpg
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 然后再摆的整齐点
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 好w
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 (1) - nc
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: 01:23:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这里用多边形工具来摆
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: ctrl+shift+d
2014-05-01 22:47 OblivioN: 好【是用多边形摆的来着的>< ;w;可能歪了

加油

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-01T13:00:06+00:00

Jemmmmy wrote:
irc
2014-05-01 22:22 Jemmmmy: 00:01:817 (5) - nc
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 要走rank是不是比较没戏【。】 ;w;
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 改改还是可以
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 噢噢！ww
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 00:01:817 (1) - 这里改了
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 不对
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里//
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: orz
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 你等等
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:317 (5,1) - 好了这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) - 这两个间距小了, 误以为是隔着半拍
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: soga
2014-05-01 22:26 Jemmmmy: 00:07:840 - 这里可以加个note
2014-05-01 22:26 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 00:10:226 - http://puu.sh/8uHrV.jpg
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: OK~
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 节奏贴歌声
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 00:18:862 (1,2) - 这些不要贴紧在一起
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 留些缝隙
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 像00:17:726 (3,5) -
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:29 Jemmmmy: 00:22:499 (1,2) - 分开点？
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 00:24:544 (2,3,4) - 这里三连不怎么贴节奏
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 但是00:25:908 (9,10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 这种就可以用用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 00:24:771 (4,5) - 这两个地方的音拉成slider？
2014-05-01 22:31 Jemmmmy: 00:26:817 (2,4) - 这种重叠最好不要用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 噢！好
2014-05-01 22:32 Jemmmmy: 可以拉成滑条
2014-05-01 22:32 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:34 Jemmmmy: 00:34:999 - 这里节奏http://puu.sh/8uHQ8.jpg
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 折返滑条没用的必要
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 00:38:862 (1) - note
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 做了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 错了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 00:37:271 - 这里 note 因为你后面都是跟乐器
2014-05-01 22:36 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 交换nc00:51:362 (10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271这里是加一个吗？
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 Jemmmmy: 00:57:953 (7,1,2) - 这里太挤了高潮送很多都行
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 就是分开放吧？
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 差不多
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 重新组合一下
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 猴w
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:00:681 (7) - nc
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:05:226 (7,8,9,10) - 这里没摆好？
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 连打摆成标准弧线
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好像是的;w;
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 01:05:681 (11) - 这可以分为两个短滑条
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好的
2014-05-01 22:43 Jemmmmy: 01:09:544 - 节奏http://puu.sh/8uIjD.jpg
2014-05-01 22:43 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:44 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 - 可以用http://puu.sh/8uIpa.jpg
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 然后再摆的整齐点
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 好w
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 (1) - nc
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: 01:23:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这里用多边形工具来摆
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: ctrl+shift+d
2014-05-01 22:47 OblivioN: 好【是用多边形摆的来着的>< ;w;可能歪了
加油

感谢黑子:DDDD

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-05-02T06:26:51+00:00

Hmm as your reqs

wait. Please~ tommorw mod~^^

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-03T04:47:37+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hmm as your reqs

wait. Please~ tommorw mod~^^

you are soooooooo kind～Thank you！<3

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-05-03T14:43:46+00:00

~~写了半小时的MOD没了坑爹，只能通过PUUSHH截图找残留了~~
[Insane]
01:05:908 (12) - 建议http://puu.sh/8xqcS.jpg
00:49:544 (7) - 这样感觉更爽http://puu.sh/8xq9b.jpg
00:38:635 (1,2) - 试试这样？ http://puu.sh/8xq4w.jpg
http://puu.sh/8xpZ7.png
00:24:544 (2,3) - 觉得莫名跳这么远
00:25:453 (5,6) - CTRL+G
00:04:317 (1) - 感觉没必要拉到蓝线
00:09:771 (1) - 太远没必要，感觉在00:08:862 (5) - 的尾就好了
00:11:362 (6) - CTRL+G
00:14:090 (7) - http://puu.sh/8xpQa.jpg
00:17:044 (1) - CTRL+g,2记得换位置
00:34:090 (3) - http://puu.sh/8xpZ7.png
01:15:908 (3,4,5) -3到4感觉挺不顺的，建议4CTRL+G 记得5也变
01:25:453 (1) - 建议放中间感觉比较好
原谅我其他DIFF不想重新写了

赔个星
感觉第一个张图做成这样还行，节奏没啥大问题多注意FLOW和图的感觉
祝早日RANK

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-04T03:50:05+00:00

sjoy wrote:
~~写了半小时的MOD没了坑爹，只能通过PUUSHH截图找残留了~~
[Insane]
01:05:908 (12) - 建议http://puu.sh/8xqcS.jpg
00:49:544 (7) - 这样感觉更爽http://puu.sh/8xq9b.jpg
00:38:635 (1,2) - 试试这样？ http://puu.sh/8xq4w.jpg
http://puu.sh/8xpZ7.png
00:24:544 (2,3) - 觉得莫名跳这么远
00:25:453 (5,6) - CTRL+G
00:04:317 (1) - 感觉没必要拉到蓝线
00:09:771 (1) - 太远没必要，感觉在00:08:862 (5) - 的尾就好了
00:11:362 (6) - CTRL+G
00:14:090 (7) - http://puu.sh/8xpQa.jpg
00:17:044 (1) - CTRL+g,2记得换位置
00:34:090 (3) - http://puu.sh/8xpZ7.png
01:15:908 (3,4,5) -3到4感觉挺不顺的，建议4CTRL+G 记得5也变
01:25:453 (1) - 建议放中间感觉比较好
原谅我其他DIFF不想重新写了赔个星
感觉第一个张图做成这样还行，节奏没啥大问题多注意FLOW和图的感觉
祝早日RANK

All fixed
谢谢sjoy的mod和star~

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-05-04T07:20:05+00:00

請問接Taiko diff麼? 我會和climbb一起collab

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-04T12:02:24+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
請問接Taiko diff麼? 我會和climbb一起collab

好好好～谢谢～～～

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-05-04T12:28:20+00:00

4anke

01:20:567 (1,1) - 转盘之后出现note有点突然，中间又不是break，中间建议加点note 感觉这么远没什么问题的样子 o.o

Akemi_Homura

Hi~ from your request in game~!

[Melt's Hard]

AR -1 ar8 is fine for me
Slider Velocity 1.54 -> 1.60
00:05:226 - add note~?
01:04:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump is too hard I think..(just suggestion)reduced the distance here

GL to Rank~!

code

osu file format v12

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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[Metadata]
Title:Niji no Kakera
TitleUnicode:虹のかけら
Artist:Kon Natsumi
ArtistUnicode:昆夏美
Creator:OblivioN
Version:Melt's Hard
Source:Isshuukan friends.
Tags:一週間フレンズ。 Melt
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OverallDifficulty:6
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256,272,85453,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,352,85681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,352,85908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86021,12,0,89090,0:0:0:0:

thanks for modding :3

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

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kanpakyin 2014-05-04T19:56:21+00:00

OFFSET should be 672

captin1

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2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-05-04T20:14:07+00:00

hi

[General]

Inconsistent combo colors, your lower two diffs don't have custom colors set

[Easy]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

00:00:681 (1,2) - I think this is tricky for a beginner, especially for a calm song like this. I would do this instead
SPOILER
00:02:726 (1) - Remove NC?
00:04:317 (3,1) - Swap NC?
I think you made a mistake on your NC pattern, it should be every two large white ticks from 00:07:953 - , correct? So remove the NC from 00:10:226 (1) - and put it on 00:11:590 (3) - instead, and then fix from there. (If you would like help with this, ask me sometime)
00:22:044 (4) - I think this rhythm could be better, since the strong beat on 00:22:499 - does not have a click. Try this instead
SPOILER
00:33:862 (1,2) - Try this rhythm, so that you can map the finish on 00:34:090 -
SPOILER
00:41:135 (1,2) - I think this looks odd, try placing like this instead
SPOILER
00:52:953 (3) - Try this rhythm, so that the strong beat on 00:53:408 - has a click
SPOILER
00:58:408 (1,2) - Swap NC?
01:01:135 (5,1) - This might be confusing, since 1 is very close to the head of 5. I would move 1 up so that it is clearer
01:03:408 (3,4) - Blanket could be improved
SPOILER
01:11:590 (1,2) - Swap NC?
01:13:862 (3) - I think x168 y324 would be better placement for this note
01:17:499 (2,4) - Try to avoid this overlap
01:20:453 (6) - Move the red point to the right two grids, will help make the shape more neat

Hitsounding

00:01:817 (2,3) - Whistles on end of both sliders?
00:58:408 (1) - Finish on end of slider?
01:06:135 (1) - Finish on start of slider?
01:27:044 - green lines not needed in this diff

[Normal]
I think you should use 1.1x DS for this map, it will help fix many of your messy overlaps. Like 00:22:953 (2,3) - could look like this http://puu.sh/8ywaW.jpg
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

00:04:317 (4,1) - Swap NC?
00:19:317 (1) - try to make this slider curve more even, like this
SPOILER
00:29:771 (6,1) - Swap NC?
00:51:362 (1) - Try this rhythm, so that the start of the kiai has a click
SPOILER
00:54:090 (5,1) - Try this rhythm, I think it follows the music better
SPOILER
01:25:453 (1) - Try starting spinner at 01:25:908 - instead, since the last guitar note is here

Hitsounding

00:24:771 (4) - Clap should be on start and end, not repeat
00:56:590 (3,4) - Both missing clap on head

[Melt's Hard]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

00:20:908 (2,4) - I think you should move these two closer to 00:20:681 (1,3) - , so that the jumps aren't quite so large, and the 00:21:135 (3,4,5) - spacing isn't as uneven
SPOILER
00:52:044 (2,3,4,5) - Might be confusing to read, consider unstacking a little more like this
SPOILER
01:10:226 (2,3,4,5) - same as ^
01:13:181 (4,5,1) - Make sure these are in a straight line like your other streams

Hitsounding

00:17:726 (3) - Whistle on start?
01:15:681 (3) - Finish on end?

don't want to mess with your style too much, but definitely tricky jumps on this map

[Insane]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

00:12:499 (1) - It seems like this note is placed so far just to increase difficulty, I don't think that is a good choice though. I think x44 y64 will be a nicer placement
00:23:181 (2,3) - I think this rhythm feels and sounds odd, I think a triple here like this would fit better
SPOILER
00:39:544 (2,3,4) - seems odd, with the beats in the music on the ends of sliders. Try using circles here instead.
00:49:544 (7) - NC would fit here

Hitsounding

00:25:453 (5,6) - Clap on 6, not 5
00:28:408 (3,4) - Clap on 3, not 4

good luck!

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-05T09:37:36+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
OFFSET should be 672

改好啦~

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-05T09:47:16+00:00

captin1 wrote:
hi

[General]
Inconsistent combo colors, your lower two diffs don't have custom colors set-oh, I'm sorry forgot it. Fixed./w\
[Easy]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
00:00:681 (1,2) - I think this is tricky for a beginner, especially for a calm song like this. I would do this instead
SPOILER
00:02:726 (1) - Remove NC?
00:04:317 (3,1) - Swap NC?
I think you made a mistake on your NC pattern, it should be every two large white ticks from 00:07:953 - , correct? So remove the NC from 00:10:226 (1) - and put it on 00:11:590 (3) - instead, and then fix from there. (If you would like help with this, ask me sometime)
00:22:044 (4) - I think this rhythm could be better, since the strong beat on 00:22:499 - does not have a click. Try this instead
SPOILER
00:33:862 (1,2) - Try this rhythm, so that you can map the finish on 00:34:090 -
SPOILER
00:41:135 (1,2) - I think this looks odd, try placing like this instead
SPOILER
00:52:953 (3) - Try this rhythm, so that the strong beat on 00:53:408 - has a click
SPOILER
00:58:408 (1,2) - Swap NC?
01:01:135 (5,1) - This might be confusing, since 1 is very close to the head of 5. I would move 1 up so that it is clearer
01:03:408 (3,4) - Blanket could be improved
SPOILER
01:11:590 (1,2) - Swap NC?
01:13:862 (3) - I think x168 y324 would be better placement for this note
01:17:499 (2,4) - Try to avoid this overlap
01:20:453 (6) - Move the red point to the right two grids, will help make the shape more neat

Hitsounding
00:01:817 (2,3) - Whistles on end of both sliders?
00:58:408 (1) - Finish on end of slider?
01:06:135 (1) - Finish on start of slider?
01:27:044 - green lines not needed in this diff
[Normal]
I think you should use 1.1x DS for this map, it will help fix many of your messy overlaps. Like 00:22:953 (2,3) - could look like this http://puu.sh/8ywaW.jpg
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
00:04:317 (4,1) - Swap NC?
00:19:317 (1) - try to make this slider curve more even, like this
SPOILER
00:29:771 (6,1) - Swap NC?
00:51:362 (1) - Try this rhythm, so that the start of the kiai has a click
SPOILER
00:54:090 (5,1) - Try this rhythm, I think it follows the music better
SPOILER
01:25:453 (1) - Try starting spinner at 01:25:908 - instead, since the last guitar note is here
Hitsounding
00:24:771 (4) - Clap should be on start and end, not repeat
00:56:590 (3,4) - Both missing clap on head
[Insane]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
00:12:499 (1) - It seems like this note is placed so far just to increase difficulty, I don't think that is a good choice though. I think x44 y64 will be a nicer placement
00:23:181 (2,3) - I think this rhythm feels and sounds odd, I think a triple here like this would fit better
SPOILER
00:39:544 (2,3,4) - seems odd, with the beats in the music on the ends of sliders. Try using circles here instead.
00:49:544 (7) - NC would fit here
Hitsounding
00:25:453 (5,6) - Clap on 6, not 5
00:28:408 (3,4) - Clap on 3, not 4
good luck!

suggestions for my diffs all had done！
Thank you~captin~

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-05-05T13:39:33+00:00

M4M form in-game reqs >w<

[General]

怎么感觉Normal更空一些而Easy基本放满了= =.

[Easy]

AR+1?

00:07:035 (4,5) - 建议吧后面的1复制过来blanket

00:23:399 (3) - 拉走中心旋转 -30°大致样子

SPOILER

00:27:035 (5,2) - 可以完全重叠

00:34:081 (4) - 从00:33:853开始滑

00:38:399 (4) - 有点空= = 试试这节奏

SPOILER

00:52:944 (3,1) - easy就没必要叠了新手会233的

01:19:535 (1,2,3) - 试试

SPOILER

其实01:19:156有音 1/3拍

[Normal]

00:05:217 (2) - 有点奇怪试试拉到00:05:444

00:16:126 (3) - 直滑条

00:34:990 (5) - 试试

SPOILER

00:38:853 (1) - 折返

00:45:217 (4) - 卖萌吗= =放到(116,312)试试

00:54:308 (6,2) - 挨着了分开点

01:13:853 (3,4,1) - blanket

01:19:194 加note

01:25:444 加滑条

[妹儿贴]

00:20:899 (1,2,3,4) - DS有点远了

00:33:853 note

00:40:672 (1) - 反方向弯会更好 ctrl+j那种样子

00:55:217 (1) - 直滑条吧

01:04:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow不好也不是正多边形

01:09:762 (1) - 直滑条

[Insane]

00:11:126 (5) - 放3上面

00:16:581 (5,6) - ctrl+g

00:25:444 (5,6) - ^

00:38:626 加note放5上面

00:38:853 (1) - 折返

00:43:853 (5,6,1,2,3) - 试试用一笔画五角星的flow顺序

00:53:853 (2) - ctrl+g会顺flow

00:59:762 (3,5) - ctrl+g

01:05:331 (8,10) - 删

01:08:626 (3) - 试试

SPOILER

01:09:762 (1,2,3) - 叠好，还有我是觉得这种形状更顺点因为4号滑条的角度。。

SPOILER

01:15:672 (3) - 放在6尾巴更好

01:18:967 开始转盘 01:20:217这结束，或者难一点01:20:444这结束

01:23:626 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 试试这么摆

SPOILER

good luck

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-06T05:09:52+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M form in-game reqs >w<

[General]

怎么感觉Normal更空一些而Easy基本放满了= =.

[Easy]

AR+1?-好

00:07:035 (4,5) - 建议吧后面的1复制过来blanket-感觉没必要，不改了

00:23:399 (3) - 拉走中心旋转 -30°大致样子-好
SPOILER

00:27:035 (5,2) - 可以完全重叠-好

00:34:081 (4) - 从00:33:853开始滑好

00:38:399 (4) - 有点空= = 试试这节奏-不了，故意空的
SPOILER

00:52:944 (3,1) - easy就没必要叠了新手会233的-好

01:19:535 (1,2,3) - 试试-好
SPOILER

其实01:19:156有音 1/3拍-觉得ez没必要1/3了这里……

[Normal]

00:05:217 (2) - 有点奇怪试试拉到00:05:444-看看后面有没有人说

00:16:126 (3) - 直滑条-不了，blanket的

00:34:990 (5) - 试试-好
SPOILER

00:38:853 (1) - 折返-好

00:45:217 (4) - 卖萌吗= =放到(116,312)试试-和后面的2重叠了就不了

00:54:308 (6,2) - 挨着了分开点-好

01:13:853 (3,4,1) - blanket-好

01:19:194 加note-没必要啊……

01:25:444 加滑条-好

[妹儿贴]

00:20:899 (1,2,3,4) - DS有点远了

00:33:853 note

00:40:672 (1) - 反方向弯会更好 ctrl+j那种样子

00:55:217 (1) - 直滑条吧

01:04:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow不好也不是正多边形

01:09:762 (1) - 直滑条

[Insane]

00:11:126 (5) - 放3上面-不了

00:16:581 (5,6) - ctrl+g-好

00:25:444 (5,6) - ^-好

00:38:626 加note放5上面-没必要吧……

00:38:853 (1) - 折返-好

00:43:853 (5,6,1,2,3) - 试试用一笔画五角星的flow顺序-换了另一个flow虽然不是五角星

00:53:853 (2) - ctrl+g会顺flow-好

00:59:762 (3,5) - ctrl+g-好

01:05:331 (8,10) - 删-这个……为啥

01:08:626 (3) - 试试-好
SPOILER

01:09:762 (1,2,3) - 叠好，还有我是觉得这种形状更顺点因为4号滑条的角度。。-叠好了，形状没改
SPOILER

01:15:672 (3) - 放在6尾巴更好-这个……我觉得在start不错……

01:18:967 开始转盘 01:20:217这结束，或者难一点01:20:444这结束-没必要转盘啦……

01:23:626 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 试试这么摆-后面挺平静的……所以没必要再跳了
SPOILER

good luck

谢谢www

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

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kanpakyin 2014-05-08T13:09:59+00:00

http://puu.sh/8E2ls

We've done!

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-08T17:04:23+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
http://puu.sh/8E2ls

We've done!

谢谢www已经update
我爱你们> <

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-05-09T08:43:31+00:00

tags里连opening都不写 creator's words也没有我看到还得思考一下这是个啥

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-09T09:30:59+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
tags里连opening都不写 creator's words也没有我看到还得思考一下这是个啥

Added.Thank you

Kagami Yuki

272 posts

Joined January 2012

Kagami Yuki 2014-05-09T11:49:05+00:00

Mod as you requested.
Just a quickly check >.<

[General]

I recommend you change your offset to 682,this one may be a correct one.
I would prefer N-70% for this song. <volume set>

Follow my mod after change your offset.

[Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni]

00:03:636 (11,12,13,14) - there use d k k D would be better.
00:19:545 (77,78,79) - how about kkk?for a high-pitch feel
00:52:727 (7,8,9,10,11) - ddkdk?take a try
01:24:318 (6) - k for a high sound.

[Muzukashii]

00:38:636 (7) - del.
00:55:000 (70) - ^
01:25:909 (76) - add a finisher?
其实可以在必要的地方断开来增强段落感，不过这样也可以啦

Good luck~

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-05-10T09:28:50+00:00

[Insane]

00:02:717 (1,4) - 拉开点比较好吧...
00:10:444 (3,4) - 不合适的节奏，(3)换成1/1那种就好
00:09:762 (1) - 这一小部分的大白线都可以换成Normal的底音，很简单。选中大白线部分切成Normal-sampleset就好(shift+W)
00:30:444 (2,3,4) - 折返以后连打打起来很卡手的
00:52:717 (6) - 换红线3连打接滑条，然后把00:53:399 (1) - 拉长到1/1
00:53:853 (2) - 这跟的是啥？
00:55:217 (1) - 结束在蓝线更好
01:09:762 (1) - 太扭曲了

---------------------
图不行...全程几乎都在随机跳而且节奏抓得很莫名...

当然我的意思不是说不能放随机跳，只是现在看来你对随机跳并不理解，胡乱的放跳是无法表现出音乐的感觉的...
缓和的时候在跳，有张力的时候也在跳，而且这个不同时候的都在跳...那打起来还有区别吗?这又怎样表现音乐呢?...
所以我希望你可以根据音乐的氛围来控制物件之间的间距，这样表现出来才更出色...
就比如说这里01:16:581 (6,1) - 这是一个阶段结束然后送进下一个更有张力的阶段...但你却用了低间距...
反而缓和部分的间距却上面的间距还要大（00:15:672 (2,3,4,5,6) -）你觉得这样好吗?...

节奏抓不到重点，无论是跟人声还是跟鼓点都很混乱。
在下节奏前先确认你要跟的音轨，然后找到音轨里的重音。分清楚哪些音要打下去，哪些音起来不好得带过去。
反例是这个00:31:808 (6) - ，滑条尾巴的音打下去会比带过去的感觉更好，但你却选择了带过去...等等等等

[Melt's Hard]

00:05:331 (3,4) - 在hard里还是缩小点间距比较好
00:08:627 (4) - 这里作为vocal的开始，最好从这里换成新梗来表现出音乐的变化
00:11:581 (5) - 同insane，这一小部分的大白线都可以换成Normal-sampleset。另外我觉得自带clap不太适合这曲子
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跳？没啥理由啊？我觉得不太好
00:38:626 (1) - 这部分的这种要加finish的地方，用Normal-sampleset Soft-Additions然后加Finish的效果比较好
00:42:944 (3) - 换成note接滑条不是更好
00:47:490 (4) - 这个换成1/1滑条推送到大白线，然后接两个note。效果更佳
01:18:463 - 加note？有点空，这里可以跟下鼓点
01:19:081 (3) - Another style → http://puu.sh/8GqxZ.jpg

[Normal]

AR我觉得得+1...但加了就爆了
SV太高，造成了松散的感觉。下次还是选低点
00:12:490 (5) - 头跟的什么音轨？
00:16:126 (3) - 这应该是个长音
00:16:581 (1) - 换note接1/1滑条，然后把00:17:490 (2) - 往后拉1/2
00:18:399 (3) - 换note接1/1滑条
00:21:126 (1,2) - 这两物件快碰到一起了...拉开点？
00:22:490 (1) - 这部分怎么突然这么奔放狂跟鼓点不跟人声
00:34:081 (3,5) - 加finish
00:51:581 (2,3) - 太怪异了这跟得...大白线那应该是一个1/1滑条然后接红线1/1滑条
00:55:217 (1) - 嗯..然后你又跟鼓点了？...切来切去太混乱了
01:15:217 (1) - 仔细听仔细听仔细听

[Easy]

HP-1
AR-1
00:22:490 (1) - 这应该是个1/1长音
00:29:081 (2) - 换note,然后在00:29:535 - 加一个1/2滑条
00:33:853 (4) - 怎么可以漏掉00:34:081 - 里的重音
00:36:581 (1) - 这部分....你可以空出来。然后再在00:38:853 - 和00:39:081 - 加两个note，然后继续空。
00:40:899 - 加note
01:01:126 (2) - 间距,尾巴加finish
01:20:444 (3) - wow，不过我觉得easy里这么放不太好。其实你放到高难度里去会比较好。

[At last]

虽然我不知道你做这图的时候花了多少心思...不过我觉得这图还是挺随便的...
很多地方明明一听就知道节奏有问题却没有修改...
不过呢，还是再接再厉。加油

Genkishi

566 posts

Joined September 2010

Genkishi 2014-05-11T02:53:58+00:00

Hi sorry for the delay

Anyways

[General]
-I think your BG should be 1366x768 when it comes to size, I am not sure about this one though
-Put the preview point in this place? 00:51:353
-Put a timing point on this place 01:05:217 without kiai then put another timing point here with kiai time, apply this for all diffs imo

[Easy]

00:06:581 (3) - How about a new combo here?
00:22:490 (1) - Add a finish on this note
00:51:581 (1) - Add finish here as well
01:15:217 (1) - Remove new combo here then add the new combo here 01:16:581 (3), much better
01:17:717 (x) - I don't see what's the use of this timing point so i guess remove it instead?
01:20:444 (3) - Move the red dot of this slider 1 grid to the right

[Normal]

00:05:217 (2) - This slider sounds off imo, try moving it on the blue tick then adjust it's size like this, http://puu.sh/8HveK.jpg
00:12:262 (4) - How about removing this note and put the slider 00:12:490 (5) on this place instead then make it longer like this, http://puu.sh/8Hvtn.jpg sounds better for me
00:35:672 (1) - Remove new combo then add one on this slider 00:37:035 (2)
01:07:035 (2) - Move the last dot of this slider 1 grid to the left so it aligns with slider (3)
01:19:535 (1) - Add whistle on this spinner

[Melt's Hard]

00:07:490 (5) - Remove clap so the drum part can be heard
00:33:399 (1) - Add new combo here?
00:33:853 (x) - Add a note on this place right here? http://puu.sh/8Hw85.jpg It feels empty though without a note there for me

[Insane]

00:40:672 (7) - Add new combo
00:40:672 (7) - Stack this note properly to slider (9)
00:45:217 (5) - Not stacked properly to circle (4)
01:15:444 (2) - Not stacked properly to slider (3)
01:17:035 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's better if you make the pattern of the sliders and note like this? http://puu.sh/8HwEN.jpg http://puu.sh/8HwH3.jpg

That's all i can see

GoodLuck

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2014-05-11T15:27:59+00:00

Nice map.
Just few suggestions here.

General

I will say SV 1.6
Volume of hitsound is a bit too high.
both diffs: some notes aren't snapped

Oni

00:22:885 (2) - As we can hear the bass drum is here, so it's better to do don.
00:26:872 (1,2) - No finisher to support here, I will suggest you to remove finish.
00:30:290 (1) - ^ same reason, yeah i know it doesn't much matter, but finish here sounds useless.
00:47:948 (18) - k d d d sounds like a don spam, better to delete this note.
01:18:897 - missed a don here.

Muzukashii looks good

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-05-14T16:30:20+00:00

Basically fixed all.

http://puu.sh/8M6xQ

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-15T15:34:10+00:00

最近submit无能orz

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-24T02:52:46+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Insane]
00:02:717 (1,4) - 拉开点比较好吧...
00:10:444 (3,4) - 不合适的节奏，(3)换成1/1那种就好
00:09:762 (1) - 这一小部分的大白线都可以换成Normal的底音，很简单。选中大白线部分切成Normal-sampleset就好(shift+W)
00:30:444 (2,3,4) - 折返以后连打打起来很卡手的
00:52:717 (6) - 换红线3连打接滑条，然后把00:53:399 (1) - 拉长到1/1
00:53:853 (2) - 这跟的是啥？
00:55:217 (1) - 结束在蓝线更好
01:09:762 (1) - 太扭曲了

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图不行...全程几乎都在随机跳而且节奏抓得很莫名...

当然我的意思不是说不能放随机跳，只是现在看来你对随机跳并不理解，胡乱的放跳是无法表现出音乐的感觉的...
缓和的时候在跳，有张力的时候也在跳，而且这个不同时候的都在跳...那打起来还有区别吗?这又怎样表现音乐呢?...
所以我希望你可以根据音乐的氛围来控制物件之间的间距，这样表现出来才更出色...
就比如说这里01:16:581 (6,1) - 这是一个阶段结束然后送进下一个更有张力的阶段...但你却用了低间距...
反而缓和部分的间距却上面的间距还要大（00:15:672 (2,3,4,5,6) -）你觉得这样好吗?...

节奏抓不到重点，无论是跟人声还是跟鼓点都很混乱。
在下节奏前先确认你要跟的音轨，然后找到音轨里的重音。分清楚哪些音要打下去，哪些音起来不好得带过去。
反例是这个00:31:808 (6) - ，滑条尾巴的音打下去会比带过去的感觉更好，但你却选择了带过去...等等等等
[Melt's Hard]
00:05:331 (3,4) - 在hard里还是缩小点间距比较好
00:08:627 (4) - 这里作为vocal的开始，最好从这里换成新梗来表现出音乐的变化
00:11:581 (5) - 同insane，这一小部分的大白线都可以换成Normal-sampleset。另外我觉得自带clap不太适合这曲子
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跳？没啥理由啊？我觉得不太好
00:38:626 (1) - 这部分的这种要加finish的地方，用Normal-sampleset Soft-Additions然后加Finish的效果比较好
00:42:944 (3) - 换成note接滑条不是更好
00:47:490 (4) - 这个换成1/1滑条推送到大白线，然后接两个note。效果更佳
01:18:463 - 加note？有点空，这里可以跟下鼓点
01:19:081 (3) - Another style → http://puu.sh/8GqxZ.jpg
[Normal]
AR我觉得得+1...但加了就爆了
SV太高，造成了松散的感觉。下次还是选低点
00:12:490 (5) - 头跟的什么音轨？
00:16:126 (3) - 这应该是个长音
00:16:581 (1) - 换note接1/1滑条，然后把00:17:490 (2) - 往后拉1/2
00:18:399 (3) - 换note接1/1滑条
00:21:126 (1,2) - 这两物件快碰到一起了...拉开点？
00:22:490 (1) - 这部分怎么突然这么奔放狂跟鼓点不跟人声
00:34:081 (3,5) - 加finish
00:51:581 (2,3) - 太怪异了这跟得...大白线那应该是一个1/1滑条然后接红线1/1滑条
00:55:217 (1) - 嗯..然后你又跟鼓点了？...切来切去太混乱了
01:15:217 (1) - 仔细听仔细听仔细听
[Easy]
HP-1
AR-1
00:22:490 (1) - 这应该是个1/1长音
00:29:081 (2) - 换note,然后在00:29:535 - 加一个1/2滑条
00:33:853 (4) - 怎么可以漏掉00:34:081 - 里的重音
00:36:581 (1) - 这部分....你可以空出来。然后再在00:38:853 - 和00:39:081 - 加两个note，然后继续空。
00:40:899 - 加note
01:01:126 (2) - 间距,尾巴加finish
01:20:444 (3) - wow，不过我觉得easy里这么放不太好。其实你放到高难度里去会比较好。
全部改好啦

[At last]
虽然我不知道你做这图的时候花了多少心思...不过我觉得这图还是挺随便的...
很多地方明明一听就知道节奏有问题却没有修改...
不过呢，还是再接再厉。加油

谢谢拉可修的mod和指导

涨了不少姿势
insane remap哩，normal diff感觉太蛋疼于是删了……希望能过吧

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-05-24T04:21:50+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-24T02:56:34+00:00

Genkishi wrote:
Hi sorry for the delay

Anyways

[General]
-I think your BG should be 1366x768 when it comes to size, I am not sure about this one though
-Put the preview point in this place? 00:51:353
-Put a timing point on this place 01:05:217 without kiai then put another timing point here with kiai time, apply this for all diffs imo

[Easy]

00:06:581 (3) - How about a new combo here?-OK
00:22:490 (1) - Add a finish on this note-done
00:51:581 (1) - Add finish here as well-OK
01:15:217 (1) - Remove new combo here then add the new combo here 01:16:581 (3), much better-done
01:17:717 (x) - I don't see what's the use of this timing point so i guess remove it instead?-OK
01:20:444 (3) - Move the red dot of this slider 1 grid to the right -OK

[Normal]

00:05:217 (2) - This slider sounds off imo, try moving it on the blue tick then adjust it's size like this, http://puu.sh/8HveK.jpg
00:12:262 (4) - How about removing this note and put the slider 00:12:490 (5) on this place instead then make it longer like this, http://puu.sh/8Hvtn.jpg sounds better for me
00:35:672 (1) - Remove new combo then add one on this slider 00:37:035 (2)
01:07:035 (2) - Move the last dot of this slider 1 grid to the left so it aligns with slider (3)
01:19:535 (1) - Add whistle on this spinner

-I decided delete the diff
[Melt's Hard]

00:07:490 (5) - Remove clap so the drum part can be heard
00:33:399 (1) - Add new combo here?
00:33:853 (x) - Add a note on this place right here? http://puu.sh/8Hw85.jpg It feels empty though without a note there for me

[Insane]

00:40:672 (7) - Add new combo
00:40:672 (7) - Stack this note properly to slider (9)
00:45:217 (5) - Not stacked properly to circle (4)
01:15:444 (2) - Not stacked properly to slider (3)
01:17:035 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's better if you make the pattern of the sliders and note like this? http://puu.sh/8HwEN.jpg http://puu.sh/8HwH3.jpg
I'd remap /w\

That's all i can see

GoodLuck

Thank you ！

Nymph

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Nymph 2014-05-29T04:42:44+00:00

[General]
把你normal和Insane的KIAI统一一下？

Insane的Video丢了

[Insane]
00:22:490 (1) - 这里开始伴奏声音变大了按理说hitsound声音应该也变大才对而不应该是变小的

00:33:853 这里有鼓点的建议加个note

00:37:035 (1) - 其实从这开始这一小段我建议不要摆这么满的跟着鼓稍微留一点节奏缝隙会更舒服一些虽然现在这样也没什么错比方说删了00:37:490 (2) 00:41:126 (2) - 然后 00:38:853 (1) - 这个删转折这样就感觉跟音乐更联系了起来也不会太单调

（其实我还想建议那2个串间距再小一点更人性化一点因为其他梗真的都非常简单）

[Hard]
00:05:217 有点建议加note 跟后面节奏同步也更好打一点

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-30T02:58:01+00:00

Nymph wrote:
[General]
把你normal和Insane的KIAI统一一下？-统一好啦~

Insane的Video丢了-orz记得第一个放的就是insane来着，结果居然美丽，现在又加上了

[Insane]
00:22:490 (1) - 这里开始伴奏声音变大了按理说hitsound声音应该也变大才对而不应该是变小的-改成渐大啦

00:33:853 这里有鼓点的建议加个note-added~

00:37:035 (1) - 其实从这开始这一小段我建议不要摆这么满的跟着鼓稍微留一点节奏缝隙会更舒服一些虽然现在这样也没什么错比方说删了00:37:490 (2) 00:41:126 (2) - 然后 00:38:853 (1) - 这个删转折这样就感觉跟音乐更联系了起来也不会太单调 -照这样改啦，节奏很棒www

（其实我还想建议那2个串间距再小一点更人性化一点因为其他梗真的都非常简单）

[Hard]
00:05:217 有点建议加note 跟后面节奏同步也更好打一点

谢谢妮妮的mod ！> <

KuroSenpai112

114 posts

Joined December 2013

KuroSenpai112 2014-05-30T23:16:46+00:00

Hi from modding queue!

[Normal]
00:13:853 (4) - Shorten this repeater, and add a note so it looks like this: http://gyazo.com/51123c3b8a3a1df60b7fd767fd66be50 , it sounds more accurate to the music.

[Melt's Hard]
Seems ok.

[Insane]
00:35:672 (6) - NC
00:50:444 (1) - I don't think you need a NC here.

Charlotte

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Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-05-31T04:38:38+00:00

Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Muzukashii

00:04:990 (9) - change k
00:24:081 (58,59) - ctrl + g (be better?)
00:34:081 (97) - change d
00:42:262 (21) - change d
00:46:126 (36) - change D
00:47:944 (43) - change D
01:22:944 (65) - change d
01:23:399 (67) - delete
01:23:626 - add d

Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni

00:04:990 (15) - change d
00:08:967 (32) - delete
00:09:204 - add k
00:15:096 - add d

It is a great overall

Good luck

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-05-31T07:25:30+00:00

TheForgotten5 wrote:
Hi from modding queue!

[Normal]
00:13:853 (4) - Shorten this repeater, and add a note so it looks like this: http://gyazo.com/51123c3b8a3a1df60b7fd767fd66be50 , it sounds more accurate to the music.-OK~good idea

[Melt's Hard]
Seems ok.

[Insane]
00:35:672 (6) - NC-fixed
00:50:444 (1) - I don't think you need a NC here.-deleted NC

Thank you for mod！

Neku Okazaki

Neku Okazaki 2014-05-31T07:59:05+00:00

[Oni]
00:03:626 (11) - d
00:20:444 (81) - k
00:32:717 (55,56) - delete, less is more
01:20:899 - d
01:21:126 - d
01:21:808 - d
01:22:035 - d
01:22:717 - d
01:22:944 - d
01:23:172 - k
01:23:399 (11) - delete
01:23:626 - d

[Muzukashii]
00:00:672 (1) - d
00:01:808 - d
00:02:717 - d
00:30:217 (81) - delete
00:31:126 (84) - delete
00:38:399 (6) - delete
00:45:444 (32) - delete
00:47:262 (38) - delete
00:57:490 (79) - d Unrankeable
00:57:717 (80) - k
01:09:762 (17) - k Unrankeable
01:14:762 (35) - d Unrankeable
01:17:944 (48,49) - delete

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-06-01T06:21:54+00:00

Hi. As you requested~

[General]
No problem 除了音效需要加强

Insane & Normal的IRC MOD:

SPOILER

12:48 OblivioN: yf哇
12:49 yf_bmp: a
12:49 yf_bmp: 你带会有时间哇
12:49 yf_bmp: 我现在在改bat的mod
12:49 OblivioN: 猴哇
13:02 yf_bmp: 好了...
13:02 OblivioN: 恩恩
13:02 *OblivioN is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424192 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Insane]]
13:04 *yf_bmp is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424192 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
13:04 yf_bmp: test
13:07 yf_bmp: 总体挺好啊
13:07 OblivioN: soga ;w;
13:07 *yf_bmp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424192 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Insane]]
13:08 OblivioN: 跳的地方，不太能把握
13:08 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/99YdT/26618780f6.png
13:08 yf_bmp: t你懂的
13:08 OblivioN: 咦
13:08 OblivioN: 我记得我fix了的
13:09 yf_bmp: ..
13:09 yf_bmp: 我没更新
13:09 OblivioN: orz
13:09 yf_bmp: 回来更新了一下ok
13:10 yf_bmp: 00:05:899 (7) - nc
13:10 OblivioN: 好
13:11 yf_bmp: 00:05:899 (7,1) - 我觉得这两个有点近了或者说可以再近一点
13:12 OblivioN: ok
13:12 yf_bmp: 后者的提议因为这是一种梗一般用在空拍上
13:12 yf_bmp: 跟重叠差不多
13:12 yf_bmp: 前者就是更DS有关啦
13:13 OblivioN: soga，这样啊
13:13 yf_bmp: 00:13:399 (1,2) - 有点近
13:14 OblivioN: 嗯……的确
13:14 yf_bmp: 00:14:990 (6,1) - 这两个做成跳的感觉或许会更好
13:14 OblivioN: 猴
13:14 yf_bmp: 00:14:762 (5,6) - 可以尝试这俩ctrl+g
13:15 yf_bmp: 不影响flow 而且可以成跳
13:15 OblivioN: 好的
13:15 OblivioN: 那00:15:672 (2) - 的开头和00:14:990 (6) - stack可以不？
13:16 OblivioN: 就是说ctrl g以后
13:17 yf_bmp: 这样flow不太好 imo
13:17 OblivioN: soga……
13:17 yf_bmp: 和后面的 00:16:126 (3) -
13:17 yf_bmp: 不过从另一种角度看
13:17 yf_bmp: 这个梗不需要考虑啥flow
13:17 OblivioN: 唔;w;
13:18 OblivioN: 感觉还是一会test看看
13:19 yf_bmp: 00:21:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - orz
13:19 yf_bmp: 距离缩短点会好看些吧应该
13:19 yf_bmp: 00:22:490 (1) - 最后这个头没有达到整体弧形
13:19 OblivioN: soga，那我一会修一下~
13:19 yf_bmp: 往左3格
13:19 OblivioN: 猴
13:20 yf_bmp: 00:23:172 (2,3,4) - 修了的话别忘了这里blanket
13:20 OblivioN: 好，修了
13:21 yf_bmp: 00:26:126 (1,3) - 这里的blanket太近了
13:21 yf_bmp: 00:24:762 (3,5) - 保持这种距离差不多
13:21 OblivioN: 好
13:22 yf_bmp: 00:31:581 (1,2,3) - flow不太好感觉
13:22 OblivioN: 唔……
13:23 yf_bmp: 00:30:217 (3,4,5) - 这个也有点不顺感觉
13:23 yf_bmp: 00:30:672 (5) - 朝右弯的感觉差不多
13:23 OblivioN: 00:32:035 (2) - 放到512 92 和00:32:262 (3) - blanket？
13:23 OblivioN: 猴
13:24 yf_bmp: 可以
13:24 OblivioN: 嗯
13:24 yf_bmp: 00:31:581 (1) - 但是这个尾更加朝下会更好
13:24 yf_bmp: 如果你那么改
13:24 OblivioN: 好的
13:25 yf_bmp: 00:33:285 - 有音考虑加上好了
13:25 OblivioN: 好
13:25 yf_bmp: 鼓点*
13:25 yf_bmp: 00:40:899 (2) - 这个圈出现的有点突兀..
13:26 OblivioN: 唔
13:26 yf_bmp: 00:39:308 - 因为
13:26 yf_bmp: 这里你没加
13:26 yf_bmp: 00:37:490 - 这里也没加
13:26 OblivioN: 那就空着？
13:26 yf_bmp: 所以后面那个最好也不加
13:26 OblivioN: 嗯
13:28 yf_bmp: 00:42:262 (6,7) - 我建议这俩弄成一个slider
13:28 yf_bmp: 这个3/4不太适合
13:28 OblivioN: 这个……我再想想w
13:29 OblivioN: 搞成slider有点不知道怎么放
13:29 yf_bmp: 00:43:172 (9,10) - 这个也是这种感觉
13:29 OblivioN: 嗯，有一些
13:29 yf_bmp: 00:44:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里音量渐强试试
13:29 OblivioN: 好的
13:30 yf_bmp: 00:51:581 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这些距离都太普通啦对于insane和kiai来说
13:30 OblivioN: 再丧尸一点么？;w;
13:31 yf_bmp: 不是丧尸
13:31 yf_bmp: 要合理的难度却要表达出更好的感觉
13:31 OblivioN: ds再大一些?
13:32 yf_bmp: 00:51:581 (3) - 可以延长到3/4
13:32 yf_bmp: 00:55:217 (1) - 这个你是3/4的
13:32 OblivioN: 啊,可以
13:32 yf_bmp: 嗯节奏改了的话也会好一些
13:32 OblivioN: 嗯
13:33 yf_bmp: 01:02:262 (5,1) - 可以做成跳
13:33 OblivioN: 好的
13:35 OblivioN: ;
13:37 OblivioN: 你刚刚掉了;w;
13:37 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/99ZIJ/2d845e84d3.png
13:37 yf_bmp: 哦哦
13:37 yf_bmp: 我忘记savelog了..
13:37 yf_bmp: 待会最后求帮忙一下~~
13:38 OblivioN: 猴w
13:38 yf_bmp: 01:11:126 (5) - 这个ctrl+g试试
13:38 OblivioN: 好
13:38 yf_bmp: flow会和前面的更好
13:39 OblivioN: 好的
13:41 yf_bmp: 别的没啥了
13:41 OblivioN: 好的,谢谢modding www
13:41 yf_bmp: 难度一些小距离的还可以难一些
13:42 OblivioN: 嗯;w;
13:42 OblivioN: 会考虑一下的w
13:42 yf_bmp: 别的难度?
13:42 OblivioN: 别的难度只有nm了，看看？
13:44 yf_bmp: 00:35:217 - why break
13:44 OblivioN: 拉克修建议的【。】
13:44 OblivioN: 还是填上比较好？
13:44 yf_bmp: 不好
13:44 OblivioN: 诶;w;
13:44 yf_bmp: 这里又不算很安静
13:44 yf_bmp: 不过
13:45 yf_bmp: 可以空拍
13:45 OblivioN: soga
13:45 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/9a0br/65e80a6fd3.png可以下这样的节奏
13:46 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/9a0dk/828e1a87a5.png这里就这样空着可以
13:46 OblivioN: 好的
13:47 yf_bmp: 00:42:262 - 这里继续,map上
13:47 OblivioN: 绿色的1是在00:37:035
13:47 OblivioN: ？
13:47 OblivioN: 绿色的1是在00:37:035 ？
13:47 yf_bmp: yes
13:47 OblivioN: 好的
13:49 yf_bmp: 01:15:899 (5,1) - 这读图梗对新手不友好a
13:49 yf_bmp: 01:20:444 (3) - 噗..可以再对称一点的
13:49 OblivioN: 嗯^有些
13:49 OblivioN: 啊;w;还是有些没对称啊
13:50 yf_bmp: 你ctrl+H一下就知道了
13:50 OblivioN: 嗯
13:50 yf_bmp: 这种最好水平对称
13:50 OblivioN: orz
13:50 OblivioN: 挑战强迫症w
13:51 yf_bmp: 不要偏太小的角度要么偏大一点
13:51 OblivioN: 好
13:51 yf_bmp: 没啥了
13:51 OblivioN: 谢谢www
13:51 yf_bmp: 求log 我把hardmod一起发上去...
13:51 OblivioN: 好

[Hard]
说实话这难度我觉得比insane超出一点...

00:10:444 (3) - 这里3/4不好换成1/2你感受一下
00:17:035 (1,2) - ^ 改成1/1感受下
00:20:444 (4,1,2) - 直线跳对于hard有点难了啊建议换梗或顺序
00:31:353 (6) - 不好的节奏 00:31:581 - 这里是有重音的而且这里00:31:808 - 也是有音的 00:31:922 - 这里什么都没有可以改成1/2+note
00:33:853 - 00:34:762 - add notes? 这里是有鼓点的
00:42:262 (1,2) - 同理, 1/1
01:13:172 (4,5,1) - 直着好点..或者向右下弯一点
01:17:944 - 01:18:172 - 渐强的鼓点在这里我建议map上
01:20:558 (1) - 提前1/2结束
01:29:081 - 不静音?

Ok. GL~

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-06-01T07:39:35+00:00

Somewhat late mod

mod from quehuehu

[Oni]

00:03:853 (12,13) - Swap | It follows pitchmap much better here imo, since 13 is higher pitched than 12
00:33:285 (60,61) - I suggest to just remove 60 and make 61 a finish, it follows 00:34:081 (64) - and 00:34:990 (67) - better
00:41:808 (95) - K > k | Don't think this needs to be a finish, making this a normal note emphasizes 00:42:262 (96) - more imo
00:58:740 (44,45) - Remove 44 and add a finish to 45 | There's no vocal on 44, I suggest to just remove it and emphasize 45 due to the strong emphasis in the music

Kiai isn't snapped ww

[Muzu]

00:39:081 (9) - d > k | The music's drums repeats itself on 8 and 9, I suggest to have both of them the same hitsound
01:18:853 (52) - D > K | You might want to have a different hitsound than the build-up created by the dons? owo
01:24:535 (71) - k > d | Quite sure that this piano note here is lower in pitch compared to the neighbour notes owo

Kiai isn't snapped

No other problems, good luck on this

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-06-03T12:43:00+00:00

sorry for the delay

captin1

[Melt's Hard]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

00:20:908 (2,4) - I think you should move these two closer to 00:20:681 (1,3) - , so that the jumps aren't quite so large, and the 00:21:135 (3,4,5) - spacing isn't as uneven fixed
SPOILER
00:52:044 (2,3,4,5) - Might be confusing to read, consider unstacking a little more like this fixed
SPOILER
01:10:226 (2,3,4,5) - same as ^ fixed
01:13:181 (4,5,1) - Make sure these are in a straight line like your other streams fixed

Hitsounding

00:17:726 (3) - Whistle on start? ok
01:15:681 (3) - Finish on end? sure w

don't want to mess with your style too much, but definitely tricky jumps on this map

good luck!

moonlightleaf

M4M form in-game reqs >w<

[妹儿贴]

00:20:899 (1,2,3,4) - DS有点远了改了

00:33:853 note 因为跟的vocal所以暂时不想加

00:40:672 (1) - 反方向弯会更好 ctrl+j那种样子

00:55:217 (1) - 直滑条吧

01:04:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow不好也不是正多边形好换了一下位置随便修了一点形状

01:09:762 (1) - 直滑条

good luck

lkx_Shore

[Melt's Hard]

00:05:331 (3,4) - 在hard里还是缩小点间距比较好好
00:08:627 (4) - 这里作为vocal的开始，最好从这里换成新梗来表现出音乐的变化感觉是有道理，不过其实从4,5,6开始是一个新的flow，在一定程度上也算是一个变化吧，暂时没想到怎么改，所以先留着。
00:11:581 (5) - 同insane，这一小部分的大白线都可以换成Normal-sampleset。另外我觉得自带clap不太适合这曲子
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跳？没啥理由啊？我觉得不太好缩小了一些距离
00:38:626 (1) - 这部分的这种要加finish的地方，用Normal-sampleset Soft-Additions然后加Finish的效果比较好
00:42:944 (3) - 换成note接滑条不是更好其实跟vocal这样是可以，再加上后面有个4方的样子吧，所以留一段空白来缓一下我个人感觉还行。
00:47:490 (4) - 这个换成1/1滑条推送到大白线，然后接两个note。效果更佳
01:18:463 - 加note？有点空，这里可以跟下鼓点阿勒好像时间点是错的orz
01:19:081 (3) - Another style → http://puu.sh/8GqxZ.jpg 稍微改了一下节奏

Genkishi

Hi sorry for the delay

[Melt's Hard]

00:07:490 (5) - Remove clap so the drum part can be heard ok
00:33:399 (1) - Add new combo here? its fine for me maybe
00:33:853 (x) - Add a note on this place right here? http://puu.sh/8Hw85.jpg It feels empty though without a note there for me ok，added

GoodLuck

Nymph

[General]

[Hard]
00:05:217 有点建议加note 跟后面节奏同步也更好打一点好的

yf_bmp

Hi. As you requested~

[Hard]
说实话这难度我觉得比insane超出一点... 也许吧，但是我觉得至少整个diff难度还是挺平均的，不会说突然来一下那样，所以fc难度还是不高

00:10:444 (3) - 这里3/4不好换成1/2你感受一下感觉比较喜欢3/4
00:17:035 (1,2) - ^ 改成1/1感受下确实1/1好 fixed
00:20:444 (4,1,2) - 直线跳对于hard有点难了啊建议换梗或顺序这里减小了一下跳的距离
00:31:353 (6) - 不好的节奏 00:31:581 - 这里是有重音的而且这里00:31:808 - 也是有音的 00:31:922 - 这里什么都没有可以改成1/2+note 大概是因为这一整段跟的vocal比较多，所以下意识就弄成这样了
00:33:853 - 00:34:762 - add notes? 这里是有鼓点的第一个加了
00:42:262 (1,2) - 同理, 1/1
01:13:172 (4,5,1) - 直着好点..或者向右下弯一点 fixed
01:17:944 - 01:18:172 - 渐强的鼓点在这里我建议map上
01:20:558 (1) - 提前1/2结束还能听的样子orz
01:29:081 - 不静音? 改了

Ok. GL~

thanks for modding :3

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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-06-04T14:13:13+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Somewhat late mod

mod from quehuehu

[Oni]

00:03:853 (12,13) - Swap | It follows pitchmap much better here imo, since 13 is higher pitched than 12 //I would like to follow the drum here
00:33:285 (60,61) - I suggest to just remove 60 and make 61 a finish, it follows 00:34:081 (64) - and 00:34:990 (67) - better //but the pattern we have now is to follow the pitch. Would like to keep this now.
00:41:808 (95) - K > k | Don't think this needs to be a finish, making this a normal note emphasizes 00:42:262 (96) - more imo
00:58:740 (44,45) - Remove 44 and add a finish to 45 | There's no vocal on 44, I suggest to just remove it and emphasize 45 due to the strong emphasis in the music // I did think big kat is better.

Kiai isn't snapped ww

[Muzu]

00:39:081 (9) - d > k | The music's drums repeats itself on 8 and 9, I suggest to have both of them the same hitsound //why? I would like to follow the drum here.
01:18:853 (52) - D > K | You might want to have a different hitsound than the build-up created by the dons? owo
01:24:535 (71) - k > d | Quite sure that this piano note here is lower in pitch compared to the neighbour notes owo

Kiai isn't snapped

No other problems, good luck on this

@Neku okazaki, Charlotte
I've checked your mod but simply, you both don't understand how we map. And what I see is just you've put your thoughts on our diff with consideration and thinking.

@Neku okazaki
The unrankable things you've pointed out is actually not unrankable. You should clearly recognise what is meant by 'unrankable'

http://puu.sh/9eGMi

OblivioN

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OblivioN 2014-06-05T09:49:03+00:00

update

KanaRin

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KanaRin 2014-06-09T13:01:21+00:00

Resnap the Kiai and let's go

Edit: Taiko'd

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-06-09T13:02:59+00:00

Fixed an error in muzukashii

diff here

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:虹のかけら
Artist:Kon Natsumi
ArtistUnicode:昆夏美
Creator:OblivioN
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Source:Isshuukan friends.
Tags:一週間フレンズ。 Melt kanpakyin climbb65588 opening
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OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-06-09T13:14:01+00:00

KanaRin wrote:
Resnap the Kiai and let's go

Edit: Taiko'd

谢谢KanaRin！！

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-06-09T15:52:01+00:00

Gratz
加油～

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-06-09T16:18:28+00:00

ircmod

2014-06-09 23:18 Atrue: 哪个难度？
2014-06-09 23:19 OblivioN: nm和insane
2014-06-09 23:20 Atrue: 00:12:262 (1) - 比如这里的nc啊 insane
2014-06-09 23:20 Atrue: 看看前边的combo是不是很短
2014-06-09 23:21 OblivioN: 好，这里是不是就要删掉nc啊？
2014-06-09 23:21 Atrue: 我看看
2014-06-09 23:21 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-06-09 23:22 Atrue: 嗯，去nc
2014-06-09 23:22 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:23 Atrue: 00:21:581 (1) - 像这种引起比较大的节奏变化的地方可以打破那种长白线nc定律
2014-06-09 23:23 OblivioN: soga
2014-06-09 23:23 Atrue: 但是我觉得没必要用两组，这里可以用一组
2014-06-09 23:23 OblivioN: 好的
2014-06-09 23:23 Atrue: 00:22:035 (1) - remove nc
2014-06-09 23:24 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:24 OblivioN: 00:22:490 (1) - 那这里是不是也不要了？
2014-06-09 23:24 Atrue: 这里当然要啊~
2014-06-09 23:24 OblivioN: combo有点多哦，还是要着好了;w;
2014-06-09 23:24 OblivioN: 嗯嗯w
2014-06-09 23:25 Atrue: 00:34:081 - 记住类似这样的音（不是说这图）
2014-06-09 23:25 OblivioN: 嗯0 0
2014-06-09 23:26 Atrue: 这种比较强的，有特色的音，如果你做出梗了
2014-06-09 23:26 Atrue: 那么就往上加nc强调也是可以的
2014-06-09 23:26 Atrue: 但是这张图没有做出来那种感觉>w<
2014-06-09 23:26 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-09 23:26 OblivioN: 记住了/~
2014-06-09 23:27 Atrue: 00:34:990 - 这里要是你出梗了也是能加，但是这图的话这里还是不要加~
2014-06-09 23:27 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-06-09 23:28 Atrue: 00:44:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个梗比较无聊了就（顺带一说
2014-06-09 23:28 Atrue: 我觉得你要跳一跳还好，这么平铺还是太无聊，毕竟insane
2014-06-09 23:28 OblivioN: 的确;w;
2014-06-09 23:28 OblivioN: 但是想不出好的orz
2014-06-09 23:28 OblivioN: 我尝试一下;w;
2014-06-09 23:28 Atrue: 想想好的跳梗
2014-06-09 23:28 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-09 23:28 Atrue: 另外这图还有出梗的地方
2014-06-09 23:29 Atrue: 00:37:035 (1) - 类似这样的音
2014-06-09 23:29 Atrue: 你有什么想法么
2014-06-09 23:30 OblivioN: 不知道有没有书对
2014-06-09 23:30 OblivioN: 想做一个给人顿时停住 的感觉的;w;
2014-06-09 23:30 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-06-09 23:30 Atrue: 这样，要是你能掌握好，给个加速，然后不完全在下面stack后边的note，试试这个感觉
2014-06-09 23:30 OblivioN: 好的【笔记】一会试一下
2014-06-09 23:31 Atrue: ww
2014-06-09 23:31 Atrue: 个人意见，你有想法尽管可以试~
2014-06-09 23:32 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-09 23:32 OblivioN: 00:38:853 这里也是同理咯？w
2014-06-09 23:32 Atrue: 00:40:672 - 还有这
2014-06-09 23:33 OblivioN:  噢噢w
2014-06-09 23:33 Atrue: ww
2014-06-09 23:34 Atrue: 00:49:535 (7) - 给个nc吧
2014-06-09 23:34 OblivioN: 话说，不完全在下面stack后面的note，这句话有些没理解
2014-06-09 23:34 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:34 Atrue: 比如
2014-06-09 23:36 Atrue: http://puu.sh/9lWvw/d29158f7bb.jpg
2014-06-09 23:36 Atrue: 1,2之间的关系
2014-06-09 23:36 OblivioN: 哦哦，懂了w
2014-06-09 23:37 OblivioN: 会尝试的w
2014-06-09 23:38 Atrue: 00:51:581 (1) - 这里我也有点拿不准，反正我觉得加个nc好点
2014-06-09 23:38 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:38 Atrue: 哦kiai应该起在这里
2014-06-09 23:38 OblivioN: 就是这里kiai？
2014-06-09 23:38 Atrue: 对，前边的两个note是弱起
2014-06-09 23:39 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-06-09 23:39 OblivioN:   kiai设置在这里00:51:581 然后00:51:581 (3) -  nc 对吧？
2014-06-09 23:39 Atrue: 是的
2014-06-09 23:40 OblivioN: 好的
2014-06-09 23:40 Atrue: 然后你kiai里面的第一个combo组里面的节奏我觉得不是很好，虽然可以说是还行
2014-06-09 23:40 Atrue: 但是不觉得没啥特点么？
2014-06-09 23:40 Atrue: 233
2014-06-09 23:40 OblivioN: 的确;w;
2014-06-09 23:40 Atrue: 嗯。。看看有没有更能够表达vocal特点的下法
2014-06-09 23:41 OblivioN: 嗯……我会试试看的w
2014-06-09 23:41 Atrue: 01:04:308 - 这里应该给个nc啊~
2014-06-09 23:42 OblivioN: 噢，对的w
2014-06-09 23:42 OblivioN: 忘记了orz
2014-06-09 23:42 Atrue: 01:04:762 (1) - 这里的nc应该取消掉233
2014-06-09 23:42 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-06-09 23:42 Atrue: 这一组串里面没必要来三组nc啦
2014-06-09 23:42 OblivioN: 嗯嗯;w;
2014-06-09 23:44 Atrue: 嗯，关于nc的东西说完了~ 然后看看normal
2014-06-09 23:44 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-09 23:44 Atrue: （我感觉应该有个kd可以骗233
2014-06-09 23:44 OblivioN: 好啊www迫不及待给你233
2014-06-09 23:45 Atrue: ww
2014-06-09 23:47 Atrue: 00:20:672 (1) - 这里我拿不大准，不过感觉上不应该是这里加nc
2014-06-09 23:47 Atrue: 而是
2014-06-09 23:47 Atrue: 00:22:490 - 这里
2014-06-09 23:48 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:50 Atrue: 00:24:308 - 那么这里也是不用加了
2014-06-09 23:50 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:50 Atrue: 00:40:672 (2) - 这里应该是nc的
2014-06-09 23:51 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:51 OblivioN: 这是时间间隔比较远的缘故？
2014-06-09 23:51 Atrue: 00:42:262 (1) - 还有这里
2014-06-09 23:51 Atrue: 因为，你在
2014-06-09 23:51 Atrue: 00:38:853 (1) - 这里加了
2014-06-09 23:51 Atrue: 我觉得而且需要几个节点补血233
2014-06-09 23:52 OblivioN: soga ，明白了w
2014-06-09 23:52 OblivioN: 嗯嗯w
2014-06-09 23:52 Atrue: 不然drain 会死人的`
2014-06-09 23:52 OblivioN: 对的;w;差点忘了
2014-06-09 23:53 Atrue: 00:32:944 (3) - 这里尾巴上有个重音建议给个hit
2014-06-09 23:54 Atrue: 也就是放个1/2大概不会死人2333
2014-06-09 23:54 Atrue: 然后这里给个nc补补血
2014-06-09 23:54 Atrue: 不然这个combo会有点长
2014-06-09 23:54 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:54 OblivioN: 的确有些长，对nm来说orz
2014-06-09 23:55 Atrue: 00:43:172 (2) - 这玩意延长半拍吧,你结束这个滑条的地方没有明显的音
2014-06-09 23:56 OblivioN: 好的
2014-06-09 23:56 OblivioN: 和00:43:853 (3) - 接着没关系？
2014-06-09 23:56 Atrue: 没关系,只是1/2
2014-06-09 23:57 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:57 Atrue: 00:45:672 (4) - 节奏上我觉得还是长白线拥有打击感好一点2333
2014-06-09 23:57 OblivioN: 的确是
2014-06-09 23:58 Atrue: 具体我觉得这里你要动的话得动大刀子233，看你自己怎么安排了
2014-06-09 23:58 OblivioN: 研究一下怎么改;w;
2014-06-09 23:58 Atrue: 嗯
2014-06-09 23:58 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-09 23:59 Atrue: 00:51:581 - 别忘了统一kiai的位置在这几个diff里面~ 
2014-06-09 23:59 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-06-09 23:59 OblivioN: taiko也是要统一的吧？
2014-06-09 23:59 Atrue: 00:53:399 (1) - kiai里面我觉得每两根长白线来一个nc就好
2014-06-09 23:59 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-09 23:59 Atrue: taiko我就不知道啦
2014-06-10 00:00 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-06-10 00:00 Atrue: 应该是不用~ 看taikomod怎么说的咯~
2014-06-10 00:00 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-10 00:00 Atrue: 你要是taiko也放在那里的话，我觉得会有人让你改的
2014-06-10 00:00 Atrue: 要是有别的想法那么另算
2014-06-10 00:00 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-06-10 00:00 Atrue: 00:53:399 - 所以这里不要nc
2014-06-10 00:00 Atrue: 00:55:217 (1) - 这里要
2014-06-10 00:01 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-10 00:01 Atrue: 00:57:035 (1) - 这里又不要233.。怎么感觉正好错开了
2014-06-10 00:01 OblivioN: 是的;w;
2014-06-10 00:01 Atrue: 00:58:853 - 这里给个note放nc吧，滑条拆两个单点的感觉
2014-06-10 00:02 OblivioN: 好的
2014-06-10 00:03 Atrue: 01:02:490 - nc
2014-06-10 00:03 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-10 00:03 Atrue: 01:00:672 (1) - 这里就取消
2014-06-10 00:03 OblivioN: 好
2014-06-10 00:04 Atrue: 后边那段也最好map一下，我觉得这里有偷懒哦~
2014-06-10 00:04 Atrue: 跟insane一致起来
2014-06-10 00:04 OblivioN: 好的
2014-06-10 00:04 Atrue: 然后你看其实后边的nc是一致了的
2014-06-10 00:04 OblivioN: 倒不是偷懒吧，被说了那里可以拉一个桃心，然后就不知道怎么做了【。】
2014-06-10 00:05 Atrue: 对，你的长滑条拉得有点早233
2014-06-10 00:05 OblivioN: 天呐^真是一致了^
2014-06-10 00:06 OblivioN: 我发誓我作图没偷懒过 【unrank除外】 
2014-06-10 00:06 Atrue: 没有啦，玩笑话
2014-06-10 00:06 OblivioN: 知道啦ww
2014-06-10 00:06 Atrue: 大概可以想见你拉过桃心之后感觉后边有点囧的样子~
2014-06-10 00:06 Atrue: 我看看有没有啥过渡措施
2014-06-10 00:06 OblivioN: 是的233
2014-06-10 00:06 OblivioN: 嗯w
2014-06-10 00:08 Atrue: 学学妹贴爷？
2014-06-10 00:08 OblivioN: 是的;w;
2014-06-10 00:08 OblivioN: 哦哦
2014-06-10 00:08 OblivioN: 懂了！
2014-06-10 00:08 Atrue: 01:25:899 - 你的桃心可以在这里开始啊~
2014-06-10 00:09 OblivioN: good idea！
2014-06-10 00:10 Atrue: ww大概就是这样。。 别的地方还是有很多东西可以吐槽的~ 质量我也建议还是再多加强一下~ 好好想想如何跟曲子更配合~
2014-06-10 00:10 Atrue: 然后加油~
2014-06-10 00:10 OblivioN: 求多吐槽w【我是抖m】
2014-06-10 00:11 OblivioN: 话说我大改以后能再找你帮忙看看么？;w;
2014-06-10 00:11 OblivioN: 当然是等你有空的时候
2014-06-10 00:11 Atrue: ww 看看别的modder怎么说啦~ 嗯，如果觉得就这样了，我做到最好了，然后图里面没有自己觉得不好的地方了
2014-06-10 00:11 Atrue: 就来试试，看看能不能搞起233
2014-06-10 00:12 OblivioN: 好w
2014-06-10 00:12 OblivioN: 谢谢啦XD
2014-06-10 00:12 Atrue: 那么我就post骗kd啦~
2014-06-10 00:12 Atrue: 1111
2014-06-10 00:12 OblivioN: 好好好XD

As mapper's request, mainly focused on NCs, (especially the basic way of NC,) and mentioned some obvious issues in Normal and Insane,
Still need some improvement~

Good luck! Ganbare!

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-06-11T03:50:29+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
Gratz
加油～

yf小天使w

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2014-06-14T08:34:00+00:00

加油!!

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-06-14T08:53:41+00:00

AliomLoung wrote:
加油!!

谢谢谢谢w

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-06-16T14:35:02+00:00

We fixed some little patterns/placement, change servel rhythms, and readded all the hitsound.
IRC LOG:

SPOILER

21:36 OblivioN: hi~
21:36 *OblivioN is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/405588 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
21:36 OblivioN: 这张;w;
21:37 Fycho: 好多人做这个..
21:37 OblivioN: 是的;w;
21:37 OblivioN: 以为会是冷门……结果
21:39 Fycho: 哪个diff
21:40 OblivioN: 主要看看insane吧;w;
21:41 OblivioN: nm不知道有没有问题;w;
21:41 Fycho: 我先打打
21:43 OblivioN: 好
21:46 Fycho: 串子恶俗啊
21:46 OblivioN: ;w;
21:46 OblivioN: 间距要缩小吗？
21:47 Fycho: 01:04:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
21:47 Fycho: overmap
21:47 OblivioN: 嗯……
21:49 Fycho: 00:04:990 (2) -
21:49 Fycho: 这重音啊
21:49 Fycho: 间距摆摆大
21:49 OblivioN: 好
21:50 Fycho: 00:05:899 (1) - 滑条尾巴shift+E，再加whistle
21:50 OblivioN: 好的
21:50 Fycho: 00:03:626 (4) - 滑条头shift+R,加whistle
21:51 Fycho: 00:04:308 (1) - 头上加个soft的finish
21:51 OblivioN: 好
21:51 Fycho: 先ctrl+E
21:51 OblivioN: 好
21:52 Fycho: 00:10:217 (2,3) -
21:52 Fycho: 这排列有点难看啊
21:52 OblivioN: 唔;w;
21:52 Fycho: 2和3组合看不好看
21:52 OblivioN: 有些……
21:52 Fycho: blanket啊
21:53 Fycho: 2的滑条尾在3的中点
21:53 Fycho: 之类的
21:53 OblivioN: 好的，我试试
21:54 Fycho: 00:14:762 (5,6) - 间距大点？00:13:853 (2,3) - 和这一样？
21:54 OblivioN: 好
21:54 Fycho: 00:21:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不要overmap。。。
21:55 OblivioN: 嗯……
21:55 Fycho: 音乐里没鼓点，听不到的地方打到会不自然的
21:55 OblivioN: 嗯……好
21:55 Fycho: 除非你有很强的编曲能力，才能使自己的节奏做的自然
21:56 Fycho: 不然就follow music
21:56 OblivioN: 嗯，好的w
21:56 Fycho: 00:21:922 - 这里空拍
21:56 Fycho: 另外把后面的五连和前面的三连缩小全局
21:56 OblivioN: 好，删掉了
21:56 Fycho: 缩小间距
21:56 OblivioN: 好
21:57 Fycho: 这曲子适合这么大间距跳么;w;?
21:57 OblivioN: ;w;好像不合适
21:57 Fycho: 00:22:490 (1,2,3,4) - 没包好
21:57 Fycho: 而且三连overmap
21:57 OblivioN: ok
21:57 Fycho: 00:25:899 (7,1) - stack打起来不好
21:57 OblivioN: 好的;w;
21:57 Fycho: 00:26:126 - 大白线音比较重
21:58 Fycho: stack没什么打击感
21:58 OblivioN: 嗯……的确是
21:58 Fycho: 你要自创三连的话,00:25:217 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里就太空了..
21:58 Fycho: 前面那一小节都是三连
21:58 OblivioN: 00:25:672 (6,7) - ctrl g可不可以？
21:59 OblivioN: 我还是不自创了把;w;
21:59 Fycho: 00:30:672 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这个打起来不好
21:59 Fycho: 节奏卡手
21:59 OblivioN: 唔……
21:59 Fycho: 00:31:012 (6) - 这个要去掉
21:59 OblivioN: 好
22:00 Fycho: 00:34:081 (3,4,5) - 这些间距都可以大点
22:01 Fycho: 都容易读成3/4滑条了..
22:01 OblivioN: 好
22:03 Fycho: 00:42:717 (6) - 加个drum的clap？
22:03 OblivioN: 好的
22:03 Fycho: 00:42:262 (5) - 加NC
22:03 OblivioN: 好
22:04 OblivioN: 这里nc是什么规则呀？
22:04 Fycho: 00:46:808 (4,5,6,7,8) - flow卡手
22:04 Fycho: NC每根大白线加一次
22:04 OblivioN: 这里的确卡手;w;
22:04 OblivioN: 想不到好的排列……;w;
22:05 Fycho: 这些跳
22:05 Fycho: 两个两个一组
22:05 Fycho: 会好打许多
22:05 Fycho: 比如一上一下
22:05 OblivioN: 懂了w
22:05 Fycho: 然后角度依次转
22:05 OblivioN: 好w
22:06 Fycho: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1721165
22:06 Fycho: 例如这样
22:06 Fycho: 我只是举个例子，要改成我这样的话，00:47:944 (1) - 的角度也要改
22:06 OblivioN: 好的
22:07 Fycho: 00:51:581 (1) - NC去掉啊
22:07 Fycho: 你前面刚加了
22:07 Fycho: 3连上不要加两个NC
22:07 OblivioN: soga，因为黄书说kiai开始要nc ;w;
22:08 Fycho: 00:51:581 (1,2,3) - 你跟人声的时候要注意
22:08 Fycho: 别让2,4白线被滑条盖住
22:08 Fycho: 2,4白线是军鼓位，是关键节奏点
22:08 Fycho: 没特殊处理都不要盖掉...
22:09 OblivioN: 唔……
22:09 OblivioN: soga
22:09 Fycho: 别唔了我看到这个字很烦
22:09 Fycho: 被zzh惹的。。
22:09 OblivioN: 好
22:09 OblivioN: 好吧
22:09 Fycho: 特殊处理就是要兼顾统一性啊之类的
22:09 Fycho: 类似的地方都这样处理
22:10 Fycho: 00:52:831 (5) - 去掉
22:10 OblivioN: 好
22:10 Fycho: 节奏密度太大了啊又overmap
22:10 OblivioN: ;w;
22:11 Fycho: KIAI别加速。。
22:11 Fycho: 1.0速度可以了
22:11 OblivioN: 好……
22:11 Fycho: 1.2看着长滑条你没拉的好
22:11 OblivioN: 是的
22:11 Fycho: 滑条越长需要处理的细节越多，越难拉美观
22:11 Fycho: 00:57:035 (1,2,3) -
22:11 Fycho: 这长滑条看着好难看
22:12 OblivioN: 是的
22:12 Fycho: 00:59:535 (3,4,5) - 而且间距不合那场坏套
22:12 Fycho: 滑条
22:12 Fycho: 01:04:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这个就不说了吧
22:12 OblivioN: 嗯，懂了
22:12 Fycho: 本身这样曲率半斤很大的串子就难打
22:13 Fycho: 突然来一堆1/4节奏也够无聊
22:13 OblivioN: ;w;
22:13 Fycho: 多利用三连五连组合什么的
22:13 OblivioN: 好，我试试
22:13 Fycho: 01:06:808 (3,4) - ctrl+g吧，人声从01:06:808 - 开始的
22:14 OblivioN: 好
22:14 Fycho: 01:11:126 (5,1) - 滑条组合难看
22:14 OblivioN: 嗯
22:14 OblivioN: 的确难看，还在想办法
22:15 Fycho: 01:03:853 (5,1) -
22:15 Fycho: 这里节奏还有问题
22:15 Fycho: 你仔细听01:04:081 - 这是重音
22:16 Fycho: 01:04:308 - 这里是没音的
22:16 OblivioN: 嗯……
22:16 Fycho: 这是重音提前半拍的小节
22:16 OblivioN: soga
22:18 Fycho: 哦不用管这个
22:18 Fycho: 你这里可以的
22:18 Fycho: 你跟人声的话
22:18 Fycho: 不用变
22:18 OblivioN: 好;w;
22:18 Fycho: 01:04:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里串子不行，可换成3个1/4滑条
22:18 Fycho: 短滑条
22:18 OblivioN: 好
22:18 Fycho: 01:05:217 (1,2,3,4) - 缩小间距，缩小曲率半斤或者变成直线
22:18 Fycho: 01:05:899 (6,1) - 分开摆
22:19 OblivioN: 好的
22:19 Fycho: 一般前面你分开了每人后面合起来摆吧
22:19 Fycho: 01:13:399 (6) - nc
22:19 OblivioN: 是的……
22:19 Fycho: 01:13:172 (4) - 或者加这
22:19 OblivioN: 好
22:19 Fycho: 随便
22:19 OblivioN: 好
22:20 Fycho: 01:22:717 (1,2,3) - 用工具摆正三角形。。。
22:20 OblivioN: 好w
22:20 Fycho: 这摆的太不正了吧
22:20 Fycho: 可能是我看错了...
22:20 OblivioN: 旋转了【。】
22:21 Fycho: 01:24:308 (1,2,3,4) - 这个我觉的，往右边去flow更顺啊
22:21 Fycho: 毕竟是新的一小节
22:21 Fycho: flow反过来绕，顺时针
22:21 OblivioN: 好的，
22:21 Fycho: 最后的转盘尾巴
22:21 Fycho: 静音到5%
22:21 OblivioN: 好
22:22 Fycho: 好了节奏排列就说这么多下面最重要的问题最大的是营销
22:22 Fycho: 音效
22:22 OblivioN: 嗯;w;
22:23 Fycho: 你的kiai音效需要全去了重加，现在毫无系统..
22:23 Fycho: 有原则性的鼓搞错了。。
22:23 OblivioN: soga……
22:23 Fycho: soft系列的音效就可以了
22:24 Fycho: 不用normal系列的。。。
22:24 OblivioN: 好
22:24 Fycho: soft系列的，然后把normal-hitnormal音作为clap，当军鼓用
22:24 Fycho: 然后把你现在的normal的clap放到soft的whistle里
22:24 OblivioN: 好的
22:24 Fycho: 当贝司鼓
22:25 OblivioN: 【天啊……原来还有不同的区分】;w;
22:25 Fycho: 你现在这加的音效，你把贝司鼓加到2,4白线当军鼓了，完全反了..
22:25 Fycho: 鼓别随便乱用
22:25 OblivioN: soga……
22:25 OblivioN: 明白了
22:25 Fycho: 你那个normal 的clap明显是合着1,3白线的
22:25 OblivioN: 原来如此;w;
22:26 *Fycho is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/402718 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera (TV Size) [yf's Insane]]
22:26 Fycho: 你仿照这个
22:26 Fycho: 虽然clap不一样
22:26 OblivioN: 好;w;
22:26 Fycho: 但是贝司鼓是一样的
22:26 Fycho: 看他就把贝司鼓加在1,3白线上
22:27 Fycho: 别用normal系列的音效，这歌不合适
22:27 Fycho: 安静的歌。。
22:27 OblivioN: 嗯……

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

S o a p 2014-07-03T13:18:17+00:00

IRC

20:38 S o a p: 可以了哦
20:38 OblivioN: 哇
20:38 OblivioN: 刚刷个图你就上来了
20:39 OblivioN: 我凑
20:39 OblivioN: 刷完才发现
20:39 S o a p: 030
20:39 S o a p: np给我
20:39 OblivioN: 这图tmd被unrank一次T T
20:39 *OblivioN is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/418711 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
20:45 OblivioN: 诶？没收到np嘛？
20:48 S o a p: 我收到了！！！！
20:48 S o a p: 别急！！！
20:48 OblivioN: 噢
20:48 OblivioN: 猴
20:53 S o a p: 00:24:762 (3,4) -
20:53 S o a p: 3的尾巴后面是个长音
20:53 OblivioN: 嗯
20:53 S o a p: 接note感觉怪怪的
20:54 OblivioN: 那这里……
20:55 OblivioN: 【感觉一改就要改好多orz
20:55 OblivioN: 其实不知道怎么改=口=
20:56 S o a p: 那先放着～
20:56 OblivioN: 嗯
20:56 S o a p: 等会儿再说～
20:56 S o a p: 【拖延症传染病患者
20:56 OblivioN: /.\
20:57 OblivioN: 要不你直接给我些post？;w;我明天早上要起来学车今天得早点睡orz
20:57 OblivioN: 写
20:57 S o a p: 呜呜呜呜
20:57 S o a p: 那感觉写不了多少啊
20:57 OblivioN: ;w;
20:57 OblivioN: 好吧
20:57 S o a p: 好丢脸【捂
20:57 OblivioN: 我再坚持一下><
20:58 S o a p: ;w;
20:58 S o a p: 才九点
20:58 OblivioN: 主要是hard……irc摸不了hard……我hard的摸又太少……
20:58 OblivioN: 我早上五点起的orz
20:59 S o a p: 00:30:444 (4) - http://puu.sh/9V1og/5e0de0b3cf.jpg试下这种节奏？
20:59 S o a p: 哦哦哦hard
20:59 S o a p: 我看下
21:00 S o a p: 01:00:217 (5,1) - 没包好
21:00 S o a p: 还是insane
21:00 OblivioN: fix
21:01 S o a p: hard挺好呀
21:01 S o a p: 都是DS排的有啥摸得呢。。
21:02 OblivioN: soga
21:03 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/9V1Ba/d48612f5d9.jpg 这样摆可以不？
21:03 S o a p: 00:30:444 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/9V1Dv/6db9c019d0.jpg这种节奏大概好点
21:03 S o a p: http://puu.sh/9V1F8/054cd40a58.png
21:03 S o a p: 。。。
21:04 S o a p: 打不开网页
21:04 OblivioN: 囧
21:04 S o a p: 你能打开吗
21:05 OblivioN: 不能诶……
21:05 OblivioN: orz
21:05 OblivioN: 噢
21:05 OblivioN: 好了
21:05 S o a p: orz
21:05 S o a p: 我这儿还是不行
21:06 OblivioN: orz
21:06 OblivioN: 这个^
21:06 OblivioN: 00:31:581 (1) - 不好处理啊……orz
21:07 S o a p: 好像hard真没啥摸的
21:07 OblivioN: 那就算了;w;
21:07 S o a p: ;3;
21:07 S o a p: 也不用一定要那么多摸嘛
21:07 S o a p: 有sp就够了
21:08 OblivioN: 嗯……
21:08 S o a p: 你有多少啦
21:08 OblivioN: 33
21:08 S o a p: 找BAT啊
21:09 OblivioN: 找到啦
21:09 OblivioN: 黄书啊
21:09 S o a p: 让他泡啊
21:10 OblivioN: 他让我再找几个modder啊
21:10 S o a p: = =
21:10 S o a p: orz
21:10 OblivioN: :3
21:11 OblivioN: 虽然说直接找他req也可以
21:11 OblivioN: 反正就是先提高提高吧
21:11 OblivioN: 然后再找他
21:11 S o a p: 听那么多次这歌你想吐吗
21:11 OblivioN: 我跟你书
21:11 OblivioN: 自从我做了这张图
21:12 OblivioN: 我就再也没去看一周炮友。
21:12 S o a p: 哈哈哈哈
21:12 S o a p: 我也是
21:12 S o a p: 除了猫的报恩和喜羊羊
21:12 S o a p: 每张图做的我都觉得。。。
21:12 OblivioN: 太伤了orz
21:12 S o a p: 想吐
21:12 S o a p: _(:з」∠)_
21:12 OblivioN: 所以我以后就unrank向啦
21:13 S o a p: 我想做图T.T
21:13 OblivioN: 话说发一下irc吧:3
21:13 S o a p: 没好歌
21:13 S o a p: 那个save什么什么的
21:13 S o a p: 是什么啊
21:13 S o a p: /什么来着
21:14 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/9V2dM/774b5054d5.txt
21:14 OblivioN: save log
21:14 OblivioN: savelog

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2014-07-04T18:52:27+00:00

From m4m

nice anime and song <3

Normal

00:15:217 (5) - NC here to follow your pattern of NC every two measures/8 bars (according to your kiai time part anyways). If you NC, make sure to remove NC at 00:17:035 (1) - and add it to 00:18:853 (3) - .
00:21:126 (5) - on the repeat, add addition drum and then add a clap to match the drum sound in the music. You can also do this at 00:22:035 (6) - if you want.
00:26:581 (6) - NC here, remove NC at 00:27:944 (1) - . NC at 00:30:217 (4) - , remove NC at 00:31:581 (1) - . The combos are really weird in this part because you have sliders ending on the downbeat, which is usually where you put the new combo so instead we place it on the note right after the slider since you can't new combo on the tail of a slider. Usually I like to put new combo every 8 bars, or 2 stanzas/measures on the downbeat.
00:42:262 (1) - I would extend this to 00:42:944 - because the gap sounds really weird. By doing this you will also match the long, drawn-out vocal and the string instrument strumming in the music. hooray
00:47:944 (1) - shorten this to 00:47:944 (1) - and add another spinner from 00:47:944 (1) - to 00:47:944 (1) - to match the vocal.
01:25:899 (4) - <3

Melt's Hard

00:01:808 (1,2,3) - since there are four notes at 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) - and only three here, I think having a repeat slider fits better than three hit circles to create a different mood. I think this also makes it more interesting since the rhythm won't be as repetitive (you have lots of hitcircles in the beginning 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - )
00:05:217 - if you listen here at 25% speed and turn your volume up all the way, you can hear a drum sound in the music making a triplet. I strongly suggest you add a note here at this point as it is hard to read the two notes at 00:05:331 (3,4) - since the (3) starts on a blue tick. You can also have repeat slider instead of triplet.
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00:11:581 (5,1) - switch NC so that NC ends up on the note on the downbeat, as well as on the start of the guitar playing.
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would decrease the spacing on the jumps here, it seems a bit too much for a hard difficulty and when you compare it to the rest of this difficulty.
00:07:717 (6) - , 00:21:353 (4,6,7,8) - , 01:15:444 (2) - set additions to drum and add a clap, I think this drum sound fits nicely with the music.
00:46:581 (2) - to improve the flow I suggest you move this to around x 292 y 180. This way the flow at 00:46:581 (2,3) - is improved and you can also blanket the two objects.
00:54:081 (2) - here the flow can also be improved, try moving this to around x 340 y 200. This way you get nice circular movements between 00:53:399 (1,2) - and 00:54:081 (2,3) - .

Insane

00:01:126 (3,4) - I suggest you ctrl+G because I find that it's more fun to play this way. Not only that, but the piano pitch goes from low to high at 00:01:126 (3,4) - , so it makes sense to have (3) lower than (4) on the screen. There will also be a jump from (3) to (4) which emphasizes the last piano note before it turns quiet.

Also as a result, you will have 00:01:353 (4,1) - stacked on top of each other to create an anti jump which suits the music since there is a silence.
00:01:808 (1,2,3) - , 00:02:717 (1,2,3) - personally I'm not a fan of having hit circles in straight lines because I don't find it interesting to play. I would try arranging it in a triangular jump, while having more space between 00:02:035 (2,3) - than 00:01:808 (1,2) - in order to emphasize the piano note at 00:02:262 (3) - . I put an example of how you can arrange it below:
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00:05:672 (6) - I suggest you move this up because the flow at 00:05:672 (6,1) - feels weird. I put a picture below, you can see that (6) is above the triplet and slider. The jump is fine because it will help emphasize the part in the music at 00:05:899 (1) - . I also moved the triplet 00:05:217 (3,4,5) - a bit away from 00:04:990 (2) - because it looked nicer:
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00:07:717 (5,6) - , 00:21:353 (3,2,3,4) - set additions to drum and add clap sound, this will make the drum sound that matches the sound in the music.
00:31:126 (6,7) - this is 1/4 a bar apart, and so is this 00:32:262 (3,4) - but the spacing is significantly larger. I would fix this because it can be a bit hard to read at 00:32:262 (3,4) - .
00:33:172 (5,1) - flow can be better here, I would stack 00:33:172 (5) - on top of 00:32:035 (2) - . I put a before and after picture below to show what I mean. The flow is much smoother~
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00:36:808 (7,1) - , 00:41:580 (3,4) - I don't think this jump is really necessary, try to reduce the DS.
00:38:399 (5,6) - , 00:39:535 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as above, but this jump is way too big. In fact I would try to have similar DS between all notes at 00:37:717 (2,3,4,5,6) - if possible. Try to come up with a new pattern, I put an example below.
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00:42:717 (2,3) - if you really really really want a jump then I suggest placing 00:42:944 (3) - like this:
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This way the flow between 00:42:944 (3,4) - is improved and feels much better to play.
00:50:444 (1) - this is pretty evil (even more evil than me). I don't think anyone would be expecting this SV change. In fact I would just replace it with a hit circle to emphasize the silence that follows.
01:01:126 (2,3,4,5,1) - hm I think you can improve the flow here.
ctrl+g 01:01:353 (3) - and 01:01:808 (4) - , then move 01:02:262 (5) - to x 172 y 196. This creates circular flow and I think this will be more fun to play.
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While you're at it, you can also fix the blanket at 01:01:353 (3,4) - .
01:08:399 (2,3,4) - this flow bothers me a bit. Try moving 01:08:399 (2) - to x 336 y 360, move 01:08:399 (2) - to x 144 y 288 and move 01:08:853 (4) - to x 48 y 336. Mainly it's the horizontal flow at 01:08:399 (2,3) - that bothers me. The changes I suggested will make an up and down flow between 01:08:399 (2,3,4) - instead of horizontal then downward dip.
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01:15:444 (2) - addition drums and add clap (head of slider only)

Overall, most of the issues I found were regarding flow. Rest seems fine.

Good map! Have fun mapping! (^・ω・^ )

Edit: Consider setting the preview time to 00:51:353 - at the chorus of the song instead of at the beginning.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-07-08T12:45:16+00:00

pkmnyab

Melt's Hard

00:01:808 (1,2,3) - since there are four notes at 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) - and only three here, I think having a repeat slider fits better than three hit circles to create a different mood. I think this also makes it more interesting since the rhythm won't be as repetitive (you have lots of hitcircles in the beginning 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - )i thinks use circle here are fine cause its a hard diff.
00:05:217 - if you listen here at 25% speed and turn your volume up all the way, you can hear a drum sound in the music making a triplet. I strongly suggest you add a note here at this point as it is hard to read the two notes at 00:05:331 (3,4) - since the (3) starts on a blue tick. You can also have repeat slider instead of triplet. Actually i have added a note at this point in the last post,but it seems oblivion didint updated my diff lol.
SPOILER
00:11:581 (5,1) - switch NC so that NC ends up on the note on the downbeat, as well as on the start of the guitar playing. fixed
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would decrease the spacing on the jumps here, it seems a bit too much for a hard difficulty and when you compare it to the rest of this difficulty. fixed
00:07:717 (6) - , 00:21:353 (4,6,7,8) - , 01:15:444 (2) - set additions to drum and add a clap, I think this drum sound fits nicely with the music.added
00:46:581 (2) - to improve the flow I suggest you move this to around x 292 y 180. This way the flow at 00:46:581 (2,3) - is improved and you can also blanket the two objects.i think this flow is ok ;w;
00:54:081 (2) - here the flow can also be improved, try moving this to around x 340 y 200. This way you get nice circular movements between 00:53:399 (1,2) - and 00:54:081 (2,3) - .^

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Thanks for modding :3

EDIT:打死歪歪，上次我改的你没传

Last edited by Melt 2014-07-10T01:38:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-07-09T12:27:12+00:00

Melt wrote:

pkmnyab

Melt's Hard

00:01:808 (1,2,3) - since there are four notes at 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) - and only three here, I think having a repeat slider fits better than three hit circles to create a different mood. I think this also makes it more interesting since the rhythm won't be as repetitive (you have lots of hitcircles in the beginning 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - )i thinks use circle here are fine cause its a hard diff.
00:05:217 - if you listen here at 25% speed and turn your volume up all the way, you can hear a drum sound in the music making a triplet. I strongly suggest you add a note here at this point as it is hard to read the two notes at 00:05:331 (3,4) - since the (3) starts on a blue tick. You can also have repeat slider instead of triplet. Actually i have added a note at this point in the last post,but i seems oblivion didint updated my diff lol.
SPOILER
00:11:581 (5,1) - switch NC so that NC ends up on the note on the downbeat, as well as on the start of the guitar playing. fixed
00:20:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would decrease the spacing on the jumps here, it seems a bit too much for a hard difficulty and when you compare it to the rest of this difficulty. fixed
00:07:717 (6) - , 00:21:353 (4,6,7,8) - , 01:15:444 (2) - set additions to drum and add a clap, I think this drum sound fits nicely with the music.added
00:46:581 (2) - to improve the flow I suggest you move this to around x 292 y 180. This way the flow at 00:46:581 (2,3) - is improved and you can also blanket the two objects.i think this flow is ok ;w;
00:54:081 (2) - here the flow can also be improved, try moving this to around x 340 y 200. This way you get nice circular movements between 00:53:399 (1,2) - and 00:54:081 (2,3) - .^

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TitleUnicode:虹のかけら
Artist:Kon Natsumi
ArtistUnicode:昆夏美
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Source:Isshuukan friends.
Tags:一週間フレンズ。 Melt kanpakyin climbb65588 opening
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Thanks for modding :3

EDIT:打死歪歪，上次我改的你没传

啊;w;是吗？可能操作失误……update

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-07-09T14:07:50+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
From m4m

nice anime and song <3

Normal
00:15:217 (5) - NC here to follow your pattern of NC every two measures/8 bars (according to your kiai time part anyways). If you NC, make sure to remove NC at 00:17:035 (1) - and add it to 00:18:853 (3) - .
00:21:126 (5) - on the repeat, add addition drum and then add a clap to match the drum sound in the music. You can also do this at 00:22:035 (6) - if you want.
00:26:581 (6) - NC here, remove NC at 00:27:944 (1) - . NC at 00:30:217 (4) - , remove NC at 00:31:581 (1) - . The combos are really weird in this part because you have sliders ending on the downbeat, which is usually where you put the new combo so instead we place it on the note right after the slider since you can't new combo on the tail of a slider. Usually I like to put new combo every 8 bars, or 2 stanzas/measures on the downbeat.

00:42:262 (1) - I would extend this to 00:42:944 - because the gap sounds really weird. By doing this you will also match the long, drawn-out vocal and the string instrument strumming in the music. hooray
00:47:944 (1) - shorten this to 00:47:944 (1) - and add another spinner from 00:47:944 (1) - to 00:47:944 (1) - to match the vocal.

01:25:899 (4) - <3->///<

-all fixed!
Insane
00:01:126 (3,4) - I suggest you ctrl+G because I find that it's more fun to play this way. Not only that, but the piano pitch goes from low to high at 00:01:126 (3,4) - , so it makes sense to have (3) lower than (4) on the screen. There will also be a jump from (3) to (4) which emphasizes the last piano note before it turns quiet.

Also as a result, you will have 00:01:353 (4,1) - stacked on top of each other to create an anti jump which suits the music since there is a silence.
00:01:808 (1,2,3) - , 00:02:717 (1,2,3) - personally I'm not a fan of having hit circles in straight lines because I don't find it interesting to play. I would try arranging it in a triangular jump, while having more space between 00:02:035 (2,3) - than 00:01:808 (1,2) - in order to emphasize the piano note at 00:02:262 (3) - . I put an example of how you can arrange it below:.-I kept here ;w; I perfect this figure now
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00:05:672 (6) - I suggest you move this up because the flow at 00:05:672 (6,1) - feels weird. I put a picture below, you can see that (6) is above the triplet and slider. The jump is fine because it will help emphasize the part in the music at 00:05:899 (1) - . I also moved the triplet 00:05:217 (3,4,5) - a bit away from 00:04:990 (2) - because it looked nicer:-great！fixed！XD
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00:07:717 (5,6) - , 00:21:353 (3,2,3,4) - set additions to drum and add clap sound, this will make the drum sound that matches the sound in the music. -ok
00:31:126 (6,7) - this is 1/4 a bar apart, and so is this 00:32:262 (3,4) - but the spacing is significantly larger. I would fix this because it can be a bit hard to read at 00:32:262 (3,4) - .-ok
00:33:172 (5,1) - flow can be better here, I would stack 00:33:172 (5) - on top of 00:32:035 (2) - . I put a before and after picture below to show what I mean. The flow is much smoother~-wow,good idea&fixed!
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00:36:808 (7,1) - , 00:41:580 (3,4) - I don't think this jump is really necessary, try to reduce the DS.-try reduce the distance
00:38:399 (5,6) - , 00:39:535 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as above, but this jump is way too big. In fact I would try to have similar DS between all notes at 00:37:717 (2,3,4,5,6) - if possible. Try to come up with a new pattern, I put an example below.-^
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00:42:717 (2,3) - if you really really really want a jump then I suggest placing 00:42:944 (3) - like this:-do it！XD
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This way the flow between 00:42:944 (3,4) - is improved and feels much better to play.
00:50:444 (1) - this is pretty evil (even more evil than me). I don't think anyone would be expecting this SV change. In fact I would just replace it with a hit circle to emphasize the silence that follows.-instead by a note here
01:01:126 (2,3,4,5,1) - hm I think you can improve the flow here.
ctrl+g 01:01:353 (3) - and 01:01:808 (4) - , then move 01:02:262 (5) - to x 172 y 196. This creates circular flow and I think this will be more fun to play.
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While you're at it, you can also fix the blanket at 01:01:353 (3,4) - .-nice！
01:08:399 (2,3,4) - this flow bothers me a bit. Try moving 01:08:399 (2) - to x 336 y 360, move 01:08:399 (2) - to x 144 y 288 and move 01:08:853 (4) - to x 48 y 336. Mainly it's the horizontal flow at 01:08:399 (2,3) - that bothers me. The changes I suggested will make an up and down flow between 01:08:399 (2,3,4) - instead of horizontal then downward dip.-fixed!
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01:15:444 (2) - addition drums and add clap (head of slider only)-added!

Overall, most of the issues I found were regarding flow. Rest seems fine.

Good map! Have fun mapping! (^・ω・^ )

Edit: Consider setting the preview time to 00:51:353 - at the chorus of the song instead of at the beginning.-got it！

Your suggestions are very helpful！Thanks a lot ! XD

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-15T18:31:50+00:00

加油啊~

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yf_bmp 2014-07-17T14:11:21+00:00

irc mod with the mapper about the hitsounds

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20:45 *yf_bmp is editing Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [sounds]
20:45 yf_bmp: 这个我觉得可以在有些打击感
20:46 OblivioN: 来来来指导我一下;w;
20:46 yf_bmp: 00:09:535 (7) - 这种normal
20:47 yf_bmp: 放2,4拍会更好
20:47 yf_bmp: 首先跟原曲
20:47 OblivioN: 那就2/4 nm？
20:47 yf_bmp: 原曲哪里有鼓点音效就放哪
20:47 OblivioN: 就是有鼓点的地方用drum？
20:48 yf_bmp: 这里用normal合适些
20:48 OblivioN: soga
20:49 yf_bmp: 00:11:353 (4) - normal放这种红线感觉没啥意思比较原曲也没有特别的音
20:49 yf_bmp: 毕竟**
20:49 OblivioN: soga
20:49 OblivioN: 那就auto咯
20:49 yf_bmp: 嗯
20:50 OblivioN: 00:09:762 (1) - 话说这种叮叮违和不？
20:50 yf_bmp: 少一些放长白线上还好
20:50 yf_bmp: 多了就违和了
20:50 OblivioN: 猴
20:51 yf_bmp: 00:15:217 (1,2) - 比如连续两个这个
20:51 yf_bmp: 就觉得第二个不用加
20:51 OblivioN: soga
20:51 yf_bmp: 啊对了你听一下这一段
20:51 yf_bmp: 有什么乐曲是有明显音高的
20:53 OblivioN: 话说
20:53 *OblivioN is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/374834 Hai Nan - Ai La La]
20:53 OblivioN: 这图你有嘛？;w;
20:53 yf_bmp: 有的
20:53 OblivioN: 00:19:980 (1,2,3,4) -
20:54 OblivioN: 我是看他这里有叮叮 ;w;
20:54 OblivioN: 就像学惹
20:54 OblivioN: 想
20:54 yf_bmp: 。。。
20:54 yf_bmp: 要我的话就不加了
20:54 OblivioN: 还是不要学比较好?
20:54 OblivioN: soga
20:54 yf_bmp: 啊我知道了
20:54 yf_bmp: 这里这样配没违和感
20:55 OblivioN: soga
20:55 yf_bmp: 因为你听一下这首的吉他音
20:55 yf_bmp: 是一拍一高音的
20:55 OblivioN: 那我的就不行了;w;
20:55 yf_bmp: 你的那首并不是这样
20:55 OblivioN: 对哦
20:56 OblivioN: 对哦
20:56 OblivioN: 嗯……
20:56 OblivioN: 那我就去了;w;
20:56 yf_bmp: 对了刚才我问的问题也是关于这个
20:56 yf_bmp: 这一部分的whistle
20:56 OblivioN: 纳尼？
20:56 yf_bmp: 可以随吉他的高音
20:57 OblivioN: 到哪里？
20:57 yf_bmp: 00:07:944 - 00:21:353
20:57 yf_bmp: 这个区间的whistle可以跟高音
20:58 yf_bmp: 虽然可以很有规律的下whistle 不过这个是简单粗暴的方法
20:58 OblivioN: soga
20:58 OblivioN: 就是说不用局限1/3或者2/4
20:58 yf_bmp: 00:08:399 (3) - 比如这个whistle可以放在4上
20:58 OblivioN: 在高音的地方下？
20:58 yf_bmp: 对的
20:59 OblivioN: soga~soga~
20:59 yf_bmp: 如果觉得音效有些空的话还可以挖掘隐藏音效
20:59 OblivioN: 那我这段的2/4还要不要clap？[ ;w;
20:59 yf_bmp: 要的
21:00 OblivioN: 猴
21:00 yf_bmp: 是要随音乐比较好因为音乐的clap是有规律的所以配的时候就也有规律了
21:00 yf_bmp: 我是以音乐本身为基础配的音效。。
21:01 yf_bmp: 这样又不违和又不会被说随便下音效
21:01 OblivioN: 原来如此
21:01 OblivioN: 话说那我2/4 whistle有没有问题？;w;这一段
21:02 yf_bmp: 如果跟高音的话就不要再2.4 whistle了不然会就会形成whistle spam就不好了
21:02 OblivioN: 噢噢~懂了~
21:03 OblivioN: 那我就2/4clap，然后whistle点高音
21:03 OblivioN: 有鼓的时候跟鼓
21:03 yf_bmp: 嗯
21:03 OblivioN: 是这样的规则嘛？;w;
21:03 yf_bmp: 也不是规则
21:03 yf_bmp: 只是我推荐这样
21:03 OblivioN: 猴
21:03 yf_bmp: 个人推荐QwQQQ
21:03 OblivioN: ;w;
21:03 OblivioN: 懂了qwq
21:04 OblivioN: 话说有没有一键去音效的办法【。】
21:04 yf_bmp: 。。没研究过
21:04 OblivioN: 囧
21:04 OblivioN: 感觉音效都加乱了【。】
21:05 yf_bmp: 加太多也不是好事的如果加的简单但是合音乐那也是很好的
21:05 OblivioN: 嗯……
21:06 OblivioN: 我这就有点惨了/~
21:06 yf_bmp: 00:22:490 - 这段之后的
21:07 OblivioN: 嗯
21:07 yf_bmp: 00:28:853 (3) - 尾 00:29:308 (4) - 00:29:535 (5) -
21:07 yf_bmp: 这三个有不同的音效
21:07 yf_bmp: 体会下
21:07 yf_bmp: 音乐里
21:08 yf_bmp: 00:29:762 (1) - 这种适合finish
21:09 OblivioN: 00:28:853 (3) - 的尾巴drum的whistle
21:09 OblivioN: 00:29:308 (4) - drum finish
21:10 OblivioN: 00:29:535 (5) - 这个……不知道;w;
21:10 OblivioN: nm？
21:10 OblivioN: 啊
21:10 OblivioN: 这个finish不错
21:10 yf_bmp: drumfinish
21:10 yf_bmp: 前后配的音效反差不要太大如果是normal
21:10 yf_bmp: 的话那就会违和了
21:10 OblivioN: 那00:29:308 (4) - 呢?;w;
21:10 yf_bmp: 可以说finish也可以是clap
21:11 yf_bmp: 00:28:853 (3) - 不过这个尾巴我还是觉得clap会比较好
21:11 OblivioN: soga
21:11 OblivioN: 猴
21:11 OblivioN: 啊
21:11 OblivioN: 挺好
21:12 OblivioN: 00:30:899 (5) - 这个用whistle点一下?
21:12 yf_bmp: 这个为什么要whistle
21:12 yf_bmp: ..
21:12 OblivioN: 咦,没有高音的感觉吗
21:13 OblivioN: ;w;
21:13 yf_bmp: 哪里有高音nn
21:13 yf_bmp: 如果不是很明显就不用惯了
21:13 yf_bmp: 管*
21:13 OblivioN: ;w;
21:13 yf_bmp: 真后悔下钱语词库
21:13 OblivioN: soga
21:13 OblivioN: 23333
21:14 yf_bmp: 00:31:581 (1) - 这个头去掉normal
21:14 yf_bmp: 用auto的clap
21:14 yf_bmp: 00:32:717 (4) - 头时候drum clap
21:14 yf_bmp: 适合*
21:14 OblivioN: 啊，棒
21:15 yf_bmp: 我局的你这一段音效有些轻了
21:15 OblivioN: 是的
21:15 yf_bmp: 00:34:535 (4) - 这个尾巴改成normal
21:15 yf_bmp: 试试
21:15 OblivioN: 00:33:285忽然发现这里我漏了
21:16 OblivioN: 00:33:285
21:16 yf_bmp: 00:33:853 (2) - normal
21:16 yf_bmp: 嗯.....
21:16 yf_bmp: 能听出来就好
21:16 OblivioN: nm的clap嘛?
21:16 OblivioN: 00:34:535 (4) -
21:16 yf_bmp: 不要clap
21:16 yf_bmp: 光normal就行了
21:16 OblivioN: [那我漏了还要不要加.[.]
21:16 OblivioN: 猴
21:18 yf_bmp: 00:37:944 (3,5) - 这种都适合normal
21:18 yf_bmp: 的
21:18 OblivioN: !
21:18 OblivioN: 比drum好
21:18 OblivioN: ;w;
21:18 OblivioN: 天啊噜，这都要怎么区分，我加的时候怎么觉得都差不多【。】
21:19 yf_bmp: 如果是响亮的啪啪的音效
21:19 yf_bmp: 适合normal这种音
21:20 OblivioN: 哦，normal的啪啪啪
21:20 yf_bmp: 如果是咚咚这种 drum的finish和clap就适合
21:20 OblivioN: 懂了【笔记
21:20 OblivioN: drum clap 咚咚咚
21:20 OblivioN: 【note
21:20 yf_bmp: 多体会下就行了
21:21 OblivioN: 还是作图少了;w;
21:21 yf_bmp: 感觉后面的要说的也差不多
21:21 yf_bmp: 反正重要的是随音乐
21:21 OblivioN: 恩恩w
21:22 yf_bmp: 咚咚啪啪这个也注意下
21:22 OblivioN: 我多体会体会ww
21:22 yf_bmp: 高音下whistle
21:22 OblivioN: 猴~
21:22 yf_bmp: 也就这几点
21:22 OblivioN: 恩恩w记住惹
21:22 yf_bmp: (我逃了
21:22 yf_bmp: 去做sb
21:22 OblivioN: 88~~3Q
21:23 yf_bmp: 八鞋

OblivioN

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OblivioN 2014-07-17T14:33:10+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
加油啊~

正在加油qwq

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-07-20T15:02:19+00:00

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2014-07-15 21:58 OblivioN: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/405588 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
2014-07-15 21:58 OblivioN: 这个↑↑
2014-07-15 21:58 Atrue: okay~
2014-07-15 21:59 OblivioN: ww~
2014-07-15 21:59 Atrue: 龟速下载中~
2014-07-15 21:59 OblivioN: ;w;很慢么？
2014-07-15 22:00 Atrue: 恩。。不过得从官网下。。
2014-07-15 22:00 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-15 22:13 Atrue: coming~ （不能test，直接来mod了;w;)
2014-07-15 22:13 OblivioN: 好w
2014-07-15 22:14 Atrue: source 和tag日文和罗马翻译互换一下？
2014-07-15 22:14 Atrue: 毕竟日漫能用原文就原文吧~
2014-07-15 22:14 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-15 22:14 OblivioN: 恩啊
2014-07-15 22:17 OblivioN: 查了一下
2014-07-15 22:18 OblivioN: 和小鱼rank的那个一样
2014-07-15 22:18 OblivioN: 出了mapper的label XD
2014-07-15 22:18 OblivioN: 除了
2014-07-15 22:18 Atrue: 好
2014-07-15 22:18 OblivioN: XP
2014-07-15 22:20 Atrue: 00:10:672 (3) - 这地能挪开一点会好些，叠的不是很好看
2014-07-15 22:21 OblivioN: 好的
2014-07-15 22:21 Atrue: http://puu.sh/acoSN/bcc01fa1ea.jpg
2014-07-15 22:21 Atrue: 虽然也不是很好看但是比局限在一个地方好得多了
2014-07-15 22:22 Atrue: 然后后边的note注意间距
2014-07-15 22:22 OblivioN: got it~
2014-07-15 22:25 Atrue: 恩00:22:376 - 
2014-07-15 22:25 Atrue: 这里开始的一小段明显音量不足
2014-07-15 22:26 Atrue: 我觉得试试70%？
2014-07-15 22:26 OblivioN: soga……
2014-07-15 22:26 OblivioN: 猴w
2014-07-15 22:27 Atrue: 其实我感觉这里明显有弱化处理。。不理解为何要弱化
2014-07-15 22:27 OblivioN: 诶……这里我没注意到呢;w;
2014-07-15 22:28 OblivioN: 啊
2014-07-15 22:28 OblivioN: 的确有呢
2014-07-15 22:28 Atrue: 嘛。。能把hitsound源文件改声音大些最好
2014-07-15 22:28 Atrue: 这个凑合的挺残念的
2014-07-15 22:28 OblivioN: 嗯……我一会试试
2014-07-15 22:30 OblivioN: 话说我能换BG么？;w;
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 音效应该起来的地方没有起来，有点硬伤
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 诶好吧
2014-07-15 22:30 OblivioN: 毕竟不是很懂音效……;w;
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 记得file size 的问题，关于BG
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 提个醒
2014-07-15 22:30 OblivioN: 也不敢乱加……;w;
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 加的不够，很多地方不够强
2014-07-15 22:30 OblivioN: 好的
2014-07-15 22:30 Atrue: 比如
2014-07-15 22:31 Atrue: 00:31:581 - 
2014-07-15 22:31 Atrue: 00:32:262 - 
2014-07-15 22:31 OblivioN: BG 1024x 768的可以吧？
2014-07-15 22:31 Atrue: 可以
2014-07-15 22:31 Atrue: 00:32:717 (4) - 像这个三声鼓全没有。。
2014-07-15 22:31 OblivioN: 的确音效没起来^/.\
2014-07-15 22:33 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-07-15 22:33 Atrue: 00:34:990 - 
2014-07-15 22:33 Atrue: sad
2014-07-15 22:33 Atrue:  ;w;
2014-07-15 22:33 OblivioN: 我也想说sad来着;w;
2014-07-15 22:34 OblivioN: 00:34:990这里shift w 厚不厚哇？
2014-07-15 22:34 Atrue: 我觉得这个音效的话是通不过的。。恩，确实是这样，建议关于这个再找几个音效摸。。 我看看哈，咱们不着急
2014-07-15 22:34 Atrue: 我觉得像finish
2014-07-15 22:35 Atrue: 这种地方该给finish就应该给出来的
2014-07-15 22:35 OblivioN: 话说摸音效的话应该找谁啊;w;我不太清楚
2014-07-15 22:35 Atrue: BMT里面还是有很多人懂音效的
2014-07-15 22:35 Atrue: 至少会比这个要更加有表现力
2014-07-15 22:35 Atrue: ;w;
2014-07-15 22:36 OblivioN: 猴;w;
2014-07-15 22:36 OblivioN: 我一会去试试;w;
2014-07-15 22:36 Atrue: 00:31:808 - 再比如说这种鼓点,也是可以跟上的
2014-07-15 22:36 Atrue: 恩,打个比方,就是应该给finish的地方,你给了hitnormal
2014-07-15 22:37 Atrue: 应该给鼓点强调的地方,你没有给到
2014-07-15 22:37 Atrue: 整个的音效弱了一层的样子
2014-07-15 22:37 Atrue: ww
2014-07-15 22:37 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-15 22:37 Atrue: 应该做些更有表现力的东西
2014-07-15 22:38 OblivioN: 我以为只是2/4clap 1/3 whistle 大白finish就好了/.\
2014-07-15 22:38 OblivioN: 就是音乐有鼓声的地方上上鼓咯？
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 恩是的
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 也是有一定规律的,可以看看rank图的样子ww
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 然后这里
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 00:44:308 - 
2014-07-15 22:38 OblivioN: 猴;w;
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 有个渐强
2014-07-15 22:38 Atrue: 恩你倒是也加了可是还是很弱
2014-07-15 22:39 OblivioN: 就是变化还要再强点？
2014-07-15 22:39 Atrue: 红白线上至少要提高大概20%的音量,我感觉
2014-07-15 22:40 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-15 22:41 Atrue: 00:57:035 (1,3) - 像这里的finish倒是可以去掉,因为音乐没有这样弄finish
2014-07-15 22:41 Atrue: ww
2014-07-15 22:41 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-15 22:44 Atrue: 另外一点就是刚进kiai的时候反而觉得音效变弱了
2014-07-15 22:44 Atrue: 这个需要好好考虑应该怎么搞
2014-07-15 22:44 OblivioN: 嗯;w;……
2014-07-15 22:45 Atrue: 然后类似这样的排列01:21:808 (1,2,3) - 
2014-07-15 22:45 Atrue: 应该放的稍微开一点不要贴边,不是很好看显得很局促
2014-07-15 22:45 OblivioN: 好的
2014-07-15 22:46 Atrue: 恩,别的倒是没有很大的问题了~ 主要是hitsound
2014-07-15 22:46 Atrue: 时间略紧,你还有一个normal没摸..咱们下回分解~ 后天晚上如何?
2014-07-15 22:47 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-07-15 22:48 Atrue: 挺好的,就差一点了,再努把力
2014-07-15 22:48 Atrue: 主要是针对音效哈
2014-07-15 22:48 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-07-15 22:48 Atrue: 实在找不到,咱们后天晚上来找音效
2014-07-15 22:49 OblivioN: qwq感动得哭了出来
2014-07-15 22:49 Atrue: 应该的;w;
2014-07-15 22:49 OblivioN: XD感谢
2014-07-15 22:51 Atrue: hard缺视频
2014-07-15 22:51 OblivioN: 咦！又掉了嘛！
2014-07-15 22:51 OblivioN: 囧
2014-07-15 22:51 OblivioN: 上次妮妮就说掉了
2014-07-15 22:51 Atrue: 没事,加上吧
2014-07-15 22:51 OblivioN: 这次又掉了orz
2014-07-15 22:51 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-07-15 22:51 Atrue: 这种事常有啊~
2014-07-15 22:52 OblivioN: ;w;唉
2014-07-15 22:52 Atrue: 以后上传的时候记得检查下~ww
2014-07-15 22:53 OblivioN: 好qwq

2014-07-17 22:04 OblivioN: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/405588 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
2014-07-17 22:04 Atrue: 然后咱们说下normal~
2014-07-17 22:05 OblivioN: 还是有点惨，我还没update
2014-07-17 22:05 OblivioN: 我qq 传你
2014-07-17 22:05 OblivioN: 好w
2014-07-17 22:05 OblivioN: 先说nm吧~
2014-07-17 22:05 Atrue: 好
2014-07-17 22:05 Atrue: 那这样的话可能我倾向于让你再去找几个音效mod，一两个就行
2014-07-17 22:06 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-17 22:06 OblivioN: 刚刚找yf说了一下;w;
2014-07-17 22:07 Atrue: 问题跟insane一样，还是那个地方开始的音效比较弱
2014-07-17 22:07 Atrue: 其实米桶有个版本你可以借鉴下音效ww
2014-07-17 22:07 OblivioN: 嗯;w;
2014-07-17 22:07 OblivioN: 对哦，他有做这个orz
2014-07-17 22:08 Atrue: 00:57:944 - 你看，insane出现这样的问题，normal也有
2014-07-17 22:08 Atrue: finish是不和谐的~ww
2014-07-17 22:08 OblivioN:  嗯;w;我要给换掉
2014-07-17 22:09 Atrue: 其实有个强调是可行的
2014-07-17 22:09 Atrue: 不过那个finish挺吵
2014-07-17 22:09 Atrue: 01:01:353 - 
2014-07-17 22:09 Atrue: 以及这里
2014-07-17 22:09 OblivioN: 就是finsh还是不要用这种;w;
2014-07-17 22:09 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-07-17 22:09 OblivioN: 这个可以强调吧？
2014-07-17 22:10 Atrue: 恩，强调下是可以的，我个人觉得跟鼓点会好些，就是仿照鼓的音
2014-07-17 22:10 Atrue: 而不是自己用一个觉得很重的音不考虑曲子本身
2014-07-17 22:10 Atrue: 01:01:353 - 
2014-07-17 22:10 Atrue: 还有这里
2014-07-17 22:10 OblivioN: soga，好的
2014-07-17 22:10 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-07-17 22:10 OblivioN: 这是一个地方哦
2014-07-17 22:11 Atrue: 诶没复制成功ww
2014-07-17 22:11 Atrue: 01:18:853 - 
2014-07-17 22:11 OblivioN: hhh
2014-07-17 22:11 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-17 22:12 Atrue: 01:24:308 (1,2,3,4) - 这一小段的clap是可以不加的，因为这里相对很弱了而且没有clap的感觉
2014-07-17 22:12 OblivioN: got it~
2014-07-17 22:12 Atrue: 01:24:308 - 从这开始用30%音量应该就行
2014-07-17 22:13 OblivioN: 好的~
2014-07-17 22:13 Atrue: 然后我在想最后那个滑条的tick是不是应该静音
2014-07-17 22:13 Atrue: 你的滑条slide是静音的么？
2014-07-17 22:13 Atrue: 啊我看看ww
2014-07-17 22:13 OblivioN: 是的
2014-07-17 22:14 Atrue: 其实最后那里倒是可以滑条不静音tick静音，如果能够做出来一个S:C2
2014-07-17 22:14 Atrue: 然后别的都跟S:C1一样，只有sliderslide换成slidertick
2014-07-17 22:14 OblivioN: 好的
2014-07-17 22:14 Atrue: 我觉得会好些ww
2014-07-17 22:14 Atrue: 恩，我看看有没有排版硬伤
2014-07-17 22:14 OblivioN: 嗯qwq我试试看
2014-07-17 22:15 Atrue: 不用着急
2014-07-17 22:15 OblivioN: 嗯;w;
2014-07-17 22:16 Atrue: 00:12:944 (3) - 不是硬伤但是我觉得如果把击打重心放在长白线上会打着更舒服
2014-07-17 22:16 OblivioN: 我想想怎么改……
2014-07-17 22:17 OblivioN: 00:12:490 (2,3) - 2和3的开头弄成slider，然后单独一个4放在长白？
2014-07-17 22:17 Atrue: http://puu.sh/afl02/fa19302218.jpg
2014-07-17 22:17 Atrue: 你那种也行
2014-07-17 22:18 Atrue: 排版应该也不是很难。。把？
2014-07-17 22:18 OblivioN: 噢噢，你的这个棒
2014-07-17 22:18 OblivioN: 不难
2014-07-17 22:19 Atrue: 恩，别的没啥了~
2014-07-17 22:19 Atrue: 我看看文件方面
2014-07-17 22:20 OblivioN: 好w
2014-07-17 22:20 OblivioN: 我给你看看我悲惨的音效【。】
2014-07-17 22:20 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-17 22:21 OblivioN: 发qq了qwq
2014-07-17 22:21 OblivioN: 或者发别的?
2014-07-17 22:21 Atrue: 恩，上传方便吗？或者forum pm
2014-07-17 22:22 OblivioN: 我传个puush ;w;
2014-07-17 22:23 Atrue: w
2014-07-17 22:23 OblivioN: 有点慢，稍等
2014-07-17 22:23 Atrue: 不着急我先检查别的
2014-07-17 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-07-17 22:26 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/aflwa/941926f2c9.osz
2014-07-17 22:26 OblivioN: 传好了w
2014-07-17 22:28 OblivioN: sounds是昨天晚上折腾的，insane是yf给我说了以后我正在改的，才改到00:36:581 这里
2014-07-17 22:28 Atrue: dl也是相当慢;w;
2014-07-17 22:29 OblivioN: 慢慢来;w;
2014-07-17 22:36 OblivioN: 能下么？
2014-07-17 22:42 OblivioN: 有没有把音效全删掉的办法？
2014-07-17 22:42 Atrue: 稍等;w;
2014-07-17 22:42 Atrue: 我这有点小问题。。
2014-07-17 22:42 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-07-17 22:43 Atrue: 全删掉;w;
2014-07-17 22:43 Atrue: 不用吧
2014-07-17 22:43 OblivioN: ;w;刚刚又听了一遍，
2014-07-17 22:43 Atrue: 不过你的新版。。 我觉得前边加的那个叮叮当当的有点规律化了
2014-07-17 22:43 OblivioN: 好难受
2014-07-17 22:44 Atrue: 怎么说呢;w;
2014-07-17 22:44 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-17 22:44 Atrue: 这种点缀性的东西，挺强烈的
2014-07-17 22:44 Atrue: 往往在不经意的地方出现眼前一亮
2014-07-17 22:44 Atrue: 可是如果每个固定的地方都有
2014-07-17 22:44 Atrue: 就觉得挺奇怪的
2014-07-17 22:44 OblivioN: ;w;嗯
2014-07-17 22:45 OblivioN: 前面的这个可以keep？
2014-07-17 22:45 Atrue: 恩，知道你跟的是钢琴，不过这个hitsound太显眼了
2014-07-17 22:45 Atrue: 之前那一版倒是还可以的
2014-07-17 22:45 OblivioN: 那就换hitsound ;w;
2014-07-17 22:46 Atrue: 不要着急，发现你又走向了另一个极端
2014-07-17 22:46 Atrue: 就是从不怎么用音效变成了超级用音效ww
2014-07-17 22:46 OblivioN: orz
2014-07-17 22:46 Atrue: 尽量掌握好这个度
2014-07-17 22:47 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-07-17 22:47 OblivioN: 都赖我是处女座
2014-07-17 22:47 OblivioN: 过度惹
2014-07-17 22:47 Atrue: 没事;w;
2014-07-17 22:50 Atrue: 00:09:762 - 比如这里
2014-07-17 22:50 Atrue: 你看第一次用我觉得这个不错啊~
2014-07-17 22:50 Atrue: 00:11:581 - 然后这里就;w;
2014-07-17 22:50 OblivioN: qwq
2014-07-17 22:50 Atrue: 觉得挺重复的
2014-07-17 22:50 OblivioN: sad
2014-07-17 22:51 OblivioN: 就是周期不要太短？
2014-07-17 22:51 Atrue: 是的
2014-07-17 22:51 Atrue: 保持新鲜感而且不要overuse
2014-07-17 22:51 OblivioN: 明白了
2014-07-17 22:52 OblivioN: 00:15:217 这里大概可以吧？
2014-07-17 22:53 Atrue: hmm差不多~
2014-07-17 22:53 OblivioN: w
2014-07-17 22:53 OblivioN: 有点感觉了
2014-07-17 22:53 Atrue: w
2014-07-17 22:54 OblivioN: 00:06:581-这里的删掉
2014-07-17 22:54 OblivioN: 00:06:581- 
2014-07-17 22:54 OblivioN: 00:06:581
2014-07-17 22:54 OblivioN: 00:06:581 
2014-07-17 22:54 OblivioN: 囧
2014-07-17 22:54 Atrue: = =
2014-07-17 22:54 Atrue: 恩
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 然后我着重看了你那段不够强调的
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 改的挺好的
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 虽然有些不是很有道理
2014-07-17 22:55 OblivioN: 不够强调的？;w;
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 就是00:22:490 - 
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 这里开始的这段
2014-07-17 22:55 Atrue: 我觉得至少听上去有些味道了
2014-07-17 22:56 OblivioN: sigh，这一段很头疼啊
2014-07-17 22:56 OblivioN: qwq

2014-07-20 21:59 OblivioN: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424192 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera]
2014-07-20 22:00 OblivioN: 改了挺多
2014-07-20 22:00 Atrue: redl了~
2014-07-20 22:00 OblivioN: 好~
2014-07-20 22:05 Atrue: 总算dl好了，除了bg改了别的文件层面的东西么？
2014-07-20 22:05 OblivioN: 没有w
2014-07-20 22:06 Atrue: okay~ 那我们继续~
2014-07-20 22:06 OblivioN: 好~
2014-07-20 22:07 Atrue: 00:31:581 - insane
2014-07-20 22:07 Atrue: finish
2014-07-20 22:07 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:08 Atrue: 啊， normalfinish哈不要soft~
2014-07-20 22:09 OblivioN: 哦哦哦，懂的w
2014-07-20 22:09 Atrue: 00:38:172 - 这种地方的drumwhistle去掉吧
2014-07-20 22:09 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:10 Atrue: 00:39:762 - 这里则是鼓点直接错了，drumwhistle违和
2014-07-20 22:10 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-07-20 22:10 Atrue: 00:44:762 (3) - clap加的不对，违和
2014-07-20 22:10 OblivioN: orz
2014-07-20 22:10 Atrue: 这八个音应该用一种音效渐强
2014-07-20 22:11 Atrue: 就普通normal就行
2014-07-20 22:11 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-07-20 22:12 Atrue: 00:47:035 - 这里还是nromalhit比较好
2014-07-20 22:12 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:12 Atrue: 01:00:217 - 这里的whistle很突然;w;
2014-07-20 22:13 OblivioN: ;w;听着好像有个高音就加了
2014-07-20 22:14 Atrue: 音效的系统性是一个问题,就是如果你发现整个part只有一个地方用了某种很特殊的音效,一般是违和的
2014-07-20 22:14 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-07-20 22:14 Atrue: 除非这里十分特殊,而不只是一个高音的问题
2014-07-20 22:14 Atrue: 01:07:490 - 
2014-07-20 22:14 Atrue: 这clap也是违和
2014-07-20 22:14 OblivioN: 因为是2/4所以在犹豫;w;
2014-07-20 22:15 Atrue: 因为之前没有系统clap，所以只有这里也是略显突出不和谐~
2014-07-20 22:15 OblivioN: 01:00:217这里用drum whistle可以么？
2014-07-20 22:15 OblivioN: 01:00:217 
2014-07-20 22:15 OblivioN: 嗯;w;
2014-07-20 22:16 OblivioN: 01:07:490 改成nm？
2014-07-20 22:16 Atrue: 这里的话drumwhistle显得沙哑，我不是很喜欢
2014-07-20 22:16 OblivioN: soga……
2014-07-20 22:17 OblivioN: nm whistle？
2014-07-20 22:17 Atrue: 还是看曲子用的啥样，就找贴合的用，同时注意不要让某种音效特别突出
2014-07-20 22:17 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-20 22:17 Atrue: 方圆10s内没有whistle。。
2014-07-20 22:17 OblivioN:  orz
2014-07-20 22:18 Atrue: 恩，是这样的
2014-07-20 22:18 Atrue: 01:04:308 (1) - 这里我已经给你放过去了，因为是一个part转换点的感觉，你要强调下我觉得无可厚非，不过其实是有点违和
2014-07-20 22:18 OblivioN: 不知道用什么了……
2014-07-20 22:18 Atrue: 普通即可
2014-07-20 22:19 OblivioN: soga ;w;
2014-07-20 22:19 OblivioN: 【还是去掉了
2014-07-20 22:19 Atrue: 01:09:308 (5) - 这里也是多余的drum whis
2014-07-20 22:19 Atrue: 很亮的音，加上了这么沙哑的音;w;
2014-07-20 22:20 Atrue: 01:17:035 (1,2,3,4) - 这八个音是相等的而不是强调四个滑条头
2014-07-20 22:20 Atrue: 除了第一个滑条的话用不着加finish imo
2014-07-20 22:20 OblivioN: ;w;放慢的时候听着感觉像
2014-07-20 22:20 OblivioN: soft whistle好像不错【。】
2014-07-20 22:20 Atrue: where?
2014-07-20 22:21 OblivioN: 01:09:308 (5) - 
2014-07-20 22:21 OblivioN: 好，不加finish
2014-07-20 22:21 Atrue: 你说得对
2014-07-20 22:22 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-07-20 22:22 Atrue: 00:00:672 (1) - 另外这个很安静的弱起part的whistle可以去掉了
2014-07-20 22:22 OblivioN: 4个slider的尾巴我也nm 了;w;
2014-07-20 22:22 Atrue: 恩
2014-07-20 22:22 Atrue: 是的
2014-07-20 22:22 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:23 Atrue: 前边的那种whistle是听着过分强调的
2014-07-20 22:23 OblivioN: ;w;
2014-07-20 22:23 Atrue: 像这种弱的地方,我认为,甚至都可以不加音效纯s走起
2014-07-20 22:23 OblivioN: soga
2014-07-20 22:23 OblivioN: 【笔记
2014-07-20 22:24 Atrue: 当然有s whistle会更好,加的合适即可
2014-07-20 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-07-20 22:24 Atrue: 恩,别的大概应该没啥问题,比第一版要多彩多了~ww
2014-07-20 22:25 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:25 Atrue: normal
2014-07-20 22:25 OblivioN: 怎么说呢，你和yf说得话我是想了又想
2014-07-20 22:26 Atrue: 其实没太大必要，很多东西做多了就懂了
2014-07-20 22:26 OblivioN: 新人开始嘛/w\
2014-07-20 22:26 Atrue: 你看上三四百张图，不愁不会音效，做上十张，就熟了
2014-07-20 22:26 Atrue: 恩
2014-07-20 22:26 Atrue: 需要积累
2014-07-20 22:26 OblivioN: 【数了数没到10张
2014-07-20 22:26 Atrue: 恩normal的问题跟ins差不多，前边那小段的whistile
2014-07-20 22:27 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-07-20 22:28 Atrue: 00:32:262 - 这里没有给到音，finish
2014-07-20 22:28 OblivioN:  好
2014-07-20 22:28 Atrue: 00:29:762 - 统一起见，这里还是搞normal
2014-07-20 22:28 Atrue: normal finish
2014-07-20 22:28 OblivioN: 啊，好
2014-07-20 22:29 Atrue: 00:44:308 - 这小段的clap问题
2014-07-20 22:29 OblivioN: nm？
2014-07-20 22:31 Atrue: 恩
2014-07-20 22:31 Atrue: 对~
2014-07-20 22:31 Atrue: www
2014-07-20 22:32 OblivioN: added ww
2014-07-20 22:32 Atrue: 不不，我说那小段clap是不能要的~
2014-07-20 22:32 Atrue: 00:44:308 - 
2014-07-20 22:33 OblivioN: 恩恩，我没clap
2014-07-20 22:33 OblivioN: clap去掉了
2014-07-20 22:33 Atrue: drumfinish也是觉得有点突兀;w;
2014-07-20 22:33 OblivioN: 纯nm
2014-07-20 22:33 Atrue: haode~
2014-07-20 22:33 OblivioN: 也改了w
2014-07-20 22:33 Atrue: ww
2014-07-20 22:33 Atrue: 01:01:126 - clap改成普通的
2014-07-20 22:33 Atrue: 这里又突出了
2014-07-20 22:34 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:34 OblivioN: 01:16:581 (1) - 
2014-07-20 22:35 Atrue: 01:15:217 - 这里也是
2014-07-20 22:35 OblivioN: 这里我懂的，也要把drum clap去掉
2014-07-20 22:35 Atrue: 恩
2014-07-20 22:35 Atrue: 你说的堆;w;
2014-07-20 22:35 OblivioN: 好
2014-07-20 22:36 OblivioN: 01:16:581 (1,2,3) - 三个都改啦w
2014-07-20 22:36 Atrue: 01:20:444 - 最后的whistle;w;
2014-07-20 22:36 OblivioN: 噢噢，忘记了
2014-07-20 22:36 OblivioN: 去掉啦
2014-07-20 22:36 Atrue: 恩,再传一遍来看看
2014-07-20 22:37 Atrue: 争取今晚能有进展
2014-07-20 22:37 OblivioN: 好w
2014-07-20 22:37 OblivioN: 恩恩w
2014-07-20 22:38 OblivioN: upload~
2014-07-20 22:38 Atrue: 我就直接update啦
2014-07-20 22:39 OblivioN: 好w
2014-07-20 22:39 Atrue: 00:01:126 (3) - insane我是说这几个whistle全美丽
2014-07-20 22:40 Atrue: 当然那个当当响的留着
2014-07-20 22:40 OblivioN: 哦哦哦
2014-07-20 22:41 OblivioN: 改 ;w;
2014-07-20 22:42 Atrue: good,有很大的改观了imo
2014-07-20 22:42 OblivioN: www
2014-07-20 22:43 Atrue: 00:32:262 - 这里应该是normal finish imo
2014-07-20 22:43 Atrue: 00:34:990 (4) - 缺个finish
2014-07-20 22:43 Atrue: 还是normal
2014-07-20 22:44 Atrue: 哦我说的是normaldiff
2014-07-20 22:44 OblivioN: 哦哦
2014-07-20 22:44 Atrue: 00:42:262 - 类似这种音还是没有给到;w;
2014-07-20 22:44 Atrue: 00:43:172 - 这里
2014-07-20 22:45 Atrue: 两处都用normal finish
2014-07-20 22:45 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-07-20 22:46 Atrue: 01:00:672 (4) - 这个间距问题
2014-07-20 22:46 Atrue: 对了以后加音效的时候为了防止不小心移动note
2014-07-20 22:46 Atrue: 可以lock notes
2014-07-20 22:46 OblivioN: 咦，飞了
2014-07-20 22:47 OblivioN: 好;w;
2014-07-20 22:47 Atrue: 右下角有相关功能~
2014-07-20 22:47 OblivioN: 恩恩w看到了
2014-07-20 22:48 Atrue: 其实还是想让你找音效mod去;w; 我个人觉得今天晚上改动还是不小，有些概念层面上的东西，如果就这么给泡可能会被戳
2014-07-20 22:49 Atrue: 其实还有很多可以吐槽的地方，而我也只是把超级突出的地方说了出来，我觉得距离泡，就差这一步了
2014-07-20 22:49 OblivioN: 好w;w;
2014-07-20 22:49 Atrue: 如何把剩下的细碎的东西整理好，是一个很重要的东西，我觉得排列和节奏你可以稍微保守点了
2014-07-20 22:49 OblivioN: 我找Cherry Blossom帮我看然后他昨天跑掉惹:3
2014-07-20 22:49 Atrue: 音效还得有一个彻底的整理，去伪存真的过程~
2014-07-20 22:49 OblivioN: 好的w

Fixed Some patterns, metadata stuff, and mainly focused on hitsound, still need more work imo, waiting to see your improvement.
Call me back after some hitsound mods~

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-07-20T18:44:11+00:00

feel free to pm me if you want a hitsound mod.

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-07-21T14:57:03+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
feel free to pm me if you want a hitsound mod.

I love you,cherry

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-07-26T17:49:50+00:00

Hitsounded insane diff by me as requested by the creator.
No kd please.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51353
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.833599

[Metadata]
Title:Niji no Kakera
TitleUnicode:虹のかけら
Artist:Kon Natsumi
ArtistUnicode:昆夏美
Creator:OblivioN
Version:hitsounding
Source:一週間フレンズ。
Tags:一週間フレンズ。 Isshuukan friends. Melt kanpakyin climbb65588 opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:166240

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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91,127,67490,2,0,P|148:116|205:124,1,107.999996704102,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,132,67831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,67944,6,0,P|241:214|254:265,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,360,68399,1,8,1:0:0:0:
144,288,68626,1,2,3:0:0:0:
48,336,68853,2,0,P|34:281|67:220,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,127,69308,1,2,1:0:0:0:
229,25,69535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,53,69649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,79,69762,6,0,P|328:104|412:72,1,161.999995056153,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,64,70217,1,8,1:0:0:0:
464,200,70444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,196,70672,2,0,P|318:188|374:196,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,71126,2,0,P|175:198|190:146,1,107.999996704102,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,109,71581,6,0,P|373:213|423:296,1,215.999993408203,4|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
193,249,72262,1,2,1:0:0:0:
135,162,72490,2,0,B|189:133|242:159|242:159|253:97|291:62,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
193,249,73172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,249,73285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,249,73399,6,0,P|131:266|82:250,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,73853,1,8,1:0:0:0:
256,122,74081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,179,74308,2,0,P|455:127|439:67,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,218,74762,2,0,P|321:282|337:326,1,107.999996704102,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,180,75217,5,4,1:0:0:0:
200,322,75444,2,0,P|152:326|92:302,1,107.999996704102,8|8,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,356,75899,2,0,P|88:256|48:172,1,215.999993408203,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,76581,2,0,B|244:44|256:72|256:72|264:100|248:128,1,107.999996704102,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,196,77035,6,0,L|466:213,1,107.999996704102,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,196,77490,2,0,L|45:213,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
479,294,77944,2,0,L|372:276,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
33,294,78399,2,0,L|139:276,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,78853,5,4,2:0:0:0:
280,292,80672,5,2,0:0:0:0:
358,181,80899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,104,81126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,215,81353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,105,81808,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,40,82036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,40,82263,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,293,82717,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,364,82945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,364,83172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,216,83626,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,124,83853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,84,84081,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,124,84308,5,0,0:0:0:0:
362,215,84535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,289,84762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,289,84990,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,192,85444,6,0,L|257:127,2,62.9999980773926,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86012,12,0,89081,0:0:0:0:

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

buhei 2014-08-27T03:36:39+00:00

from my queue

SPOILER

10:50 buhei: 我不怎么会音效摸啊
10:51 buhei: irc ok？
10:51 OblivioN: ;w;没关系;w;
10:51 OblivioN: 好的w
10:51 *buhei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424192 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Insane]]
10:52 buhei: 00:03:626 (4) - +finish
10:52 OblivioN: 好
10:52 buhei: 00:05:331 (4,5) -
10:52 buhei: 左上角的改成Normal和Soft
10:53 OblivioN: 好
10:53 buhei: 00:04:308 (1,1) - 这两个滑条尾部的clap要不要考虑改成soft
10:53 buhei: 这个没什么要紧
10:53 OblivioN: 好
10:53 OblivioN: 我听听看
10:54 OblivioN: 好像soft好一些
10:54 buhei: 噗
10:54 buhei: 打错了 whistle
10:54 buhei: ;w;
10:54 OblivioN: ;w;
10:54 OblivioN: sad
10:54 buhei: 我蠢
10:54 OblivioN: 嗯嗯，改了w
10:57 buhei: http://puu.sh/b9wpx/5841f10b06.wav
10:57 buhei: 听听怎么样
10:58 OblivioN: 啊啊，不错
10:58 OblivioN: 丢进去？XD
10:58 buhei: sad 你们都打得开puush
10:58 buhei: 就我打不开
10:58 OblivioN: 囧
10:58 buhei: 00:07:944 -
10:58 buhei: 这段开始
10:58 buhei: 00:21:126 - 到这段
10:59 buhei: 感觉可以用我给你的那个cla[
10:59 buhei: clap*
10:59 OblivioN: 好w，我尝试看看w
10:59 buhei: 00:07:490 - 还有这个音也可以用一下那个clap
11:00 buhei: 不过这里把音量要调高
11:00 buhei: 80%到90%好像差不多的样子
11:00 buhei: 这个音
11:00 OblivioN: ok mark
11:00 OblivioN: 好的w
11:02 buhei: 00:34:308 -
11:02 buhei: 这里的clap有点突兀
11:02 OblivioN: 嗯……是的
11:02 buhei: 00:36:353 (5) -
11:03 buhei: +clap，左上角drum auto
11:03 OblivioN: 话说那个clap改成什么好呢？
11:03 buhei: 00:36:581 (6) - 然后这里加上我刚刚给你的那个clap
11:03 OblivioN: ok~
11:03 buhei: 00:34:308 - 这里去掉就好啊
11:04 OblivioN: 猴
11:04 buhei: 或者加个whistle感觉也还好
11:04 OblivioN: ok
11:05 buhei: 00:48:740 (3,4) - 左上角normal soft
11:06 OblivioN: 好的
11:06 buhei: 00:49:081 (5) - 这里whislte去掉左上角normal auto
11:06 buhei: 我都是建议你没必要都听
11:06 OblivioN: 改好啦
11:06 buhei: 这图音效本来就很好了
11:06 OblivioN: ;w;
11:06 OblivioN: 但感觉真的不错
11:06 OblivioN: 改了以后要顺耳一些
11:07 buhei: 00:53:399 - 这里怎么也normal finish啊
11:07 buhei: 00:55:217 - 00:57:035 - 这两个地方又没有了
11:07 OblivioN: ;w;cherry blossom帮我做的音效【runs
11:08 OblivioN: 那后面那两个地方加上finish吗？
11:08 buhei: 唔
11:11 buhei: 都加上吧
11:11 OblivioN: 好w
11:11 buhei: 但是
11:11 buhei: 00:53:399 - 00:55:217 - 00:57:035 -
11:11 buhei: 这三地方finish的时候都减一下音量
11:12 OblivioN: okay

DD
11:12 buhei: 等等
11:12 OblivioN: ;w;
11:12 buhei: 要不然就直接在kiai开头的那个finish那里单独提高一下音量吧
11:13 OblivioN: 明白了！
11:13 buhei: 01:05:672 - 这里左上角drum auto
11:14 buhei: 然后给这个音单独提高一下音量
11:14 buhei: 提高一点点就行
11:14 OblivioN: 挺好w
11:17 buhei: 01:05:672 -
11:17 buhei: 啊错了
11:17 buhei: 01:12:262 (2) -
11:17 buhei: 这里
11:17 buhei: 左上角autoauto
11:18 buhei: 然后这里左上角autonormal
11:18 OblivioN: 这里我想keep诶;w;
11:18 buhei: 01:12:490 -
11:18 buhei: 没事就是变位置
11:18 OblivioN: 噢！
11:18 OblivioN: 好的
11:18 OblivioN: 改啦
11:19 buhei: 01:12:262 (2) - 这里变成普通的whistle，移到后面那个滑条的头上
11:19 OblivioN: 嗯w
11:22 buhei: 接下来的这个改了有风险
11:22 OblivioN: 哪里？qwq
11:22 buhei: 有人可能听得不舒服
11:22 buhei: 你自己看看要不要改
11:22 buhei: 只是个人想法
11:22 OblivioN: 好
11:22 OblivioN: 嗯w
11:23 buhei: 01:21:126 (3,2,2,3) - 补上whistle
11:23 buhei: 01:20:672 (1,4,3,3,2,1,4) - 换成finish
11:24 buhei: 这样的话声音可能就有点大了，这段音量就要减少
11:24 OblivioN: 可以一试;w;
11:24 OblivioN: 嗯……
11:24 buhei: 30%到40%就行
11:25 OblivioN: OK
11:25 OblivioN: 音量小感觉还可以
11:25 buhei: 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
11:25 OblivioN: 看看别的modder的意见好了;w;
11:25 buhei: 前面的这里也按我刚刚的方式改
11:26 buhei: 30%到40% Soft2
11:26 buhei: 然后和后面保持一致的下法
11:26 OblivioN: 好w
11:29 buhei: 还有一个建议
11:29 buhei: 采不采取看你
11:29 OblivioN: 好
11:30 buhei: 00:12:262 (3) - 00:15:899 - 00:19:535 -
11:30 buhei: 这三个地方
11:30 buhei: 加上softfinish2
11:30 buhei: 单独加
11:30 buhei: 音量保持50%就行
11:30 OblivioN: 啊，是可以的样子
11:30 buhei: 加上我个人觉得效果很好
11:30 buhei: 你听听看吧
11:30 OblivioN: 嗯
11:31 buhei: 最后一个
11:32 buhei: 01:25:444 - 这里的绿线音量改成40%
11:32 buhei: 01:25:899 - 左上角auto normal
11:32 buhei: 这样的话听上去柔和不少
11:32 OblivioN: 啊……是这样的
11:33 buhei: 其他难度我就不看了;w; 和这个难度一样的改法
11:33 buhei: 你选择自己觉得恰当的改掉吧
11:33 OblivioN: 好;w;
11:33 OblivioN: 话说
11:33 buhei: ？
11:33 OblivioN: 我那些用soft 2 finish的地方
11:34 OblivioN: 啊……怎么说，是不是把soft 2
11:34 buhei: ;w;?
11:34 OblivioN: 啊……怎么说，是不是把soft 2 finish 放到soft 3 whistle好一些？
11:34 buhei: 怎么弄就看你了
11:34 OblivioN: 好;w;
11:34 buhei: 有一个叮的音效在那就行
11:35 OblivioN: ok
11:35 OblivioN: 感谢摸图XD
11:35 buhei: ;w;不谢

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-31T04:04:55+00:00

post to prevent grave

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-09-01T16:04:48+00:00

Remove 一週間フレンズ。from the tag.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-01T17:57:20+00:00

Hi, new mapper request

General

Take this BG, I have resized it to 1024*768, which is a standard ratio, for you: http://puu.sh/bgRcF/4a974d3b92.jpg
Taiko難度不用Video
Remove the tag '一週間フレンズ。' as it's in the source. Add 'tv size' instead.
Disable Widescreen Support for all diffs as there is no storyboard.
S:C4也加個靜音sliderslide,不加的話前奏的音效有點吵.

Insane

00:05:217 (3) - 因為這鼓點弱的可憐,所以用滑條尾比用圓圈更適合,將00:04:990 (2,3) - 換成滑條
00:05:444 (5) - Drum finish
00:05:672 (6) - Drum clap
00:10:217 (2,3) - 可以大約包一下
00:18:285 (5) - 我感覺這overmap了,沒有吉他的聲音,刪除
00:21:353 (3) - 這個角度好不舒服,嘗試跟00:22:035 (4)堆疊一下
00:21:694 (2) - Drum finish sounds better as it isn't that high pitch or you can even remove it.
00:22:035 (4,6) - 交換音效,(4)finish (6)clap,(6)的鼓點比較響,00:22:148 (5,7) 的whistle能不能去掉
00:23:172 (2,4) - 可以stack更好; 00:54:308 (3,3) - 01:11:126 (5,2,4,5) - 01:14:308 (4,1) - 01:21:126 (3,1) - 01:20:672 (1,1) - 也是
00:26:012 - 可以放3連,背後有吉他聲,但好像整個pattern都會被破壞,所以還是算了吧lol
00:37:035 (1) - 尾巴轉成drum clap,背景音樂沒有cymbal; 00:38:853 (1) - 00:40:672 (1) - 同樣
00:37:717 (2,3,4,5) - DS有點隨機,嘗試按DS放然後用CTRL+G的功能: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991119
00:38:399 (5,5,4) - drum clap instead of normal sampleset?
00:49:535 (1,2) - 交換NC,因為00:49:990 (2)才開始大跳
01:04:308 (1,2,3,4) - DS誤導,01:04:308 (1,2)是1/2,01:04:535 (2,3)是1/4跳,但距離差不多,可以把(1)放遠點
01:04:762 (3) - CTRL+G的話flow會比較好,跟01:05:672 (5,6) 類似: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991155
01:17:944 (3,4) - 兩個滑條在中間比較舒服耶,01:17:490 (2,3)的移動我testplay了幾次都覺得很彆扭,改了的話01:18:853 (1)也是一個跳
01:25:444 (1) - 不用NC? 我看00:03:626 (4)也沒有NC

Melt's Hard

SL用0.3有啥特別的意義嗎? 我感覺比Insane還要小有點好奇
00:04:308 (1) - 尾巴的normal whistle超不合曲,非常違和, soft-whistle please.
00:07:490 (5) - Drum finish.
00:14:990 (1) - 碰到下面的誤差提示條
00:15:899 (2) - Soft whistle.
00:21:353 (4,8) - 不要用drum whistle,clap已經足夠
00:27:944 (1) - 怎麼中間的點出界了
00:27:262 (5) - Remove clap on tail.
00:32:035 (7) - Finish on tail.
00:32:717 (1,2) - Drum claps?
00:46:581 (2) - Missing clap.
00:58:853 (1) - Finish on head.
01:13:399 (1) - ^
01:20:558 (1) - Shorten to 01:22:262 as there's a much louder whistle.
01:24:308 (1) - Whistle.

Normal

kiai跟其他的難度不同
OD5太高啦,畢竟最低難度,4就好了吧
有很多多餘綠線: 00:02:262 - 00:03:172 - 00:05:899 - 00:06:581 - 00:07:944 - 00:37:035 - 00:37:262 - 00:40:672 - 00:40:899 - 00:52:944
00:05:444 (2) - Drum finish.
00:22:035 (4) - Drum clap.
00:37:035 (1,1,1) - 尾巴全部轉成drum clap as Insane.
01:01:126 (5) - DS
01:25:899 (4) - NC這個,這種堆疊方式有點難讀

Call me back!

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-09-03T11:56:03+00:00

等一下我把最新版的Taiko up上來

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-04T01:26:22+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
等一下我把最新版的Taiko up上來

好的w

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-05T03:33:24+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, new mapper request
General
Take this BG, I have resized it to 1024*768, which is a standard ratio, for you: http://puu.sh/bgRcF/4a974d3b92.jpg-猴
Taiko難度不用Video-notepad里删掉了;w;不知道行不行
Remove the tag '一週間フレンズ。' as it's in the source. Add 'tv size' instead.-好，去掉了
Disable Widescreen Support for all diffs as there is no storyboard.-关掉啦
S:C4也加個靜音sliderslide,不加的話前奏的音效有點吵.-added
Insane
00:05:217 (3) - 因為這鼓點弱的可憐,所以用滑條尾比用圓圈更適合,將00:04:990 (2,3) - 換成滑條-好，稍微改了一下排列
00:05:444 (5) - Drum finish-done
00:05:672 (6) - Drum clap-done
00:10:217 (2,3) - 可以大約包一下-包了一下
00:18:285 (5) - 我感覺這overmap了,沒有吉他的聲音,刪除-好，改了一下排列;w;
00:21:353 (3) - 這個角度好不舒服,嘗試跟00:22:035 (4)堆疊一下-叠好啦
00:21:694 (2) - Drum finish sounds better as it isn't that high pitch or you can even remove it.-改成drum finish了
00:22:035 (4,6) - 交換音效,(4)finish (6)clap,(6)的鼓點比較響,00:22:148 (5,7) 的whistle能不能去掉-好，(5,7)的whistle去掉了
00:23:172 (2,4) - 可以stack更好; 00:54:308 (3,3) - 01:11:126 (5,2,4,5) - 01:14:308 (4,1) - 01:21:126 (3,1) - 01:20:672 (1,1) - 也是-fixed
00:26:012 - 可以放3連,背後有吉他聲,但好像整個pattern都會被破壞,所以還是算了吧lol-于是没有放;w;
00:37:035 (1) - 尾巴轉成drum clap,背景音樂沒有cymbal; 00:38:853 (1) - 00:40:672 (1) - 同樣-改好啦
00:37:717 (2,3,4,5) - DS有點隨機,嘗試按DS放然後用CTRL+G的功能: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991119 --好，改了
00:38:399 (5,5,4) - drum clap instead of normal sampleset?-好的w
00:49:535 (1,2) - 交換NC,因為00:49:990 (2)才開始大跳-fixed
01:04:308 (1,2,3,4) - DS誤導,01:04:308 (1,2)是1/2,01:04:535 (2,3)是1/4跳,但距離差不多,可以把(1)放遠點-好的
01:04:762 (3) - CTRL+G的話flow會比較好,跟01:05:672 (5,6) 類似: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991155 -好~
01:17:944 (3,4) - 兩個滑條在中間比較舒服耶,01:17:490 (2,3)的移動我testplay了幾次都覺得很彆扭,改了的話01:18:853 (1)也是一個跳 -稍微改了一下，然后(1)放远了一些
01:25:444 (1) - 不用NC? 我看00:03:626 (4)也沒有NC-NC 删掉了
Melt's Hard
SL用0.3有啥特別的意義嗎? 我感覺比Insane還要小有點好奇-为了避免自动堆叠
00:04:308 (1) - 尾巴的normal whistle超不合曲,非常違和, soft-whistle please.-done
00:07:490 (5) - Drum finish.-done
00:14:990 (1) - 碰到下面的誤差提示條-done
00:15:899 (2) - Soft whistle.-done
00:21:353 (4,8) - 不要用drum whistle,clap已經足夠-done
00:27:944 (1) - 怎麼中間的點出界了-泡泡说过，开EZ不出界就可以
00:27:262 (5) - Remove clap on tail.-done
00:32:035 (7) - Finish on tail.-done
00:32:717 (1,2) - Drum claps?-done
00:46:581 (2) - Missing clap.-done
00:58:853 (1) - Finish on head.-done
01:13:399 (1) - ^ -done
01:20:558 (1) - Shorten to 01:22:262 as there's a much louder whistle.-done and add whistle at 01:22:262
01:24:308 (1) - Whistle.-done
Normal
kiai跟其他的難度不同是kiai结束那里吗？修正了;w;
OD5太高啦,畢竟最低難度,4就好了吧-好
有很多多餘綠線: 00:02:262 - 00:03:172 - 00:05:899 - 00:06:581 - 00:07:944 - 00:37:035 - 00:37:262 - 00:40:672 - 00:40:899 - 00:52:944-删掉惹
00:05:444 (2) - Drum finish.-fixed
00:22:035 (4) - Drum clap.-fixed
00:37:035 (1,1,1) - 尾巴全部轉成drum clap as Insane.-fixed
01:01:126 (5) - DS-好
01:25:899 (4) - NC這個,這種堆疊方式有點難讀-ok，NC
Call me back!

谢谢骏喵;w;Hug

IamKwaN

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3,905 posts

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IamKwaN 2014-09-05T09:18:38+00:00

Did some hitsound adjustments. Looks good now!

Log

12:44 OblivioN: 骏喵w我改好啦
12:44 IamKwaN: 好的
14:01 IamKwaN: o_O
14:01 OblivioN: ;w;
14:01 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (4) - 
14:02 IamKwaN: 現在是soft-finish
14:02 OblivioN: orz
14:02 IamKwaN: lol
14:02 OblivioN: 不知道什么时候开了additions w;w;
14:02 OblivioN: 去掉了;w;
14:02 IamKwaN: haha
14:03 OblivioN: 改晕了……
14:03 IamKwaN: loll
14:03 IamKwaN: 我好像寫得有點長
14:03 OblivioN: qwq
14:03 OblivioN: 是的
14:03 IamKwaN: qwq
14:04 OblivioN: qwq
14:04 IamKwaN: ww
14:04 OblivioN: 明明核对了好几遍最后还是出错orz我也是相当服气我自己
14:05 IamKwaN: www
14:06 OblivioN: go on go on！
14:06 IamKwaN: :3 好的
14:06 OblivioN: w
14:11 IamKwaN: 00:07:262 (3) - 這個clap去掉
14:11 OblivioN: 好
14:12 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (4) - drum finish
14:13 OblivioN: 好
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 去掉whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 中間那條90%可以刪除
14:13 OblivioN: ok
14:13 OblivioN: 好的
14:16 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - drum clap
14:17 OblivioN: 好
14:18 IamKwaN: 00:53:285 (8,1) - 可以跟00:52:944 (7) - 分開一點點
14:18 OblivioN: 好
14:20 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgoe/2b6bf9071f.png
14:20 OblivioN: 这样可以吗？
14:20 IamKwaN: 可以哇
14:20 OblivioN: ok哇
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (5) - drum finish
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:672 (6) - drum clap
14:21 IamKwaN: Hard
14:22 OblivioN: 好
14:25 IamKwaN: 00:27:944 (1) - 這個保險一點放左一點
14:26 OblivioN: 好
14:27 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgFO/de722d3a4d.png
14:28 OblivioN: 弄成这样了
14:28 IamKwaN: haohaohao
14:28 OblivioN: 嗯
14:31 IamKwaN: 01:24:308 (1) - lol 這個不用whistle 我沙皮
14:31 OblivioN: 好
14:31 OblivioN: 你moe w
14:32 IamKwaN: >.<
14:34 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - normal
14:34 IamKwaN: kiai --> 01:20:672 - 
14:34 IamKwaN: end
14:35 IamKwaN: Normal
14:35 OblivioN: 好;w;
14:35 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - 這個kiai end移到01:20:672 - 
14:35 OblivioN: 好
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:00:672 (1) - DS
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:04:308 (1) - ^
14:40 OblivioN: 好
14:41 IamKwaN: 00:46:126 - 這個fnish可去掉
14:41 IamKwaN: insane那個也去掉
14:42 IamKwaN: 背景好像沒cymbal
14:42 OblivioN: 好的
14:43 IamKwaN: 01:20:672 (1) - whistle
14:44 OblivioN: 好
14:44 IamKwaN: 先update
14:45 OblivioN: 嗯w
14:47 OblivioN: 好了
14:47 IamKwaN: 好
14:47 OblivioN: 等下等下
14:47 IamKwaN: lol
14:47 OblivioN: insane？
14:47 OblivioN: 等下
14:47 OblivioN: 看错了
14:48 IamKwaN: lol
14:49 OblivioN: 好了;w;
14:49 IamKwaN: 好233
14:52 IamKwaN: lol 怎麼00:53:285 (8,1) - 
14:52 OblivioN: 卧槽……那两个地方怎么有粘到以求了orz
14:52 OblivioN: 一起去了
14:52 IamKwaN: lolll
14:54 IamKwaN:  00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle o_O
14:54 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 這個whistle不要 Insane O_o
14:54 OblivioN: ;w;我疯了
14:54 OblivioN: 改好了的怎么save上传又成原来的样子了
14:54 IamKwaN: loll
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些改了
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些沒改ww
14:55 OblivioN: ;w;
14:55 OblivioN: mad
14:55 OblivioN: 90的线也给我保存的好好的orzorzorzorz
14:56 IamKwaN: ww
14:56 OblivioN: 我再去确认一遍;w;
14:56 IamKwaN: 恩恩ww
15:04 OblivioN: 这下
15:04 OblivioN: 真的
15:04 OblivioN: 好了
15:04 IamKwaN: 233 好
15:04 OblivioN: ;w;
15:14 IamKwaN: hard耶
15:14 IamKwaN: Macuilxochitl
15:14 IamKwaN: 阿
15:14 IamKwaN: 複製錯了==
15:14 OblivioN: ;w;?
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:37:717 (2) - 尾巴drum finish
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:38:172 (3) - 尾巴drum clap
15:14 OblivioN: 好
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:39:535 (2,3) - 這裡都是
15:15 OblivioN: ok
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:41:353 (2,3) - ^
15:15 OblivioN: 嗯嗯
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:42:944 (3) - 頭drum clap 尾soft finish
15:16 OblivioN: 好
15:18 IamKwaN: 做好了叫我
15:19 OblivioN: 好;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 不用update
15:19 IamKwaN: 一會兒再up
15:19 IamKwaN: insane這個stack好00:16:581 (5,1) - 
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯;w;我先出个门;w; 4学校老师有事找我;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 好w
15:19 OblivioN: 估计不久就回来
15:19 OblivioN: ;w;
15:19 OblivioN: sorrrrrrry
15:19 IamKwaN: 好哇w
15:19 IamKwaN: 沒事o.o
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯嗯w
16:55 OblivioN: 回来啦;w;
16:55 IamKwaN: 終於回來啦!!!
16:55 IamKwaN: 還打算去跑步lol
16:55 IamKwaN: Insane w
16:56 OblivioN: ;w;
16:56 OblivioN: 好w
16:56 IamKwaN: 00:16:581 (5,1) - stack好 美麗
16:57 IamKwaN: 然後我看看normal
16:57 OblivioN: 嗯w
16:57 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (3) - normal這裡drum finish
16:58 OblivioN: 好w
16:58 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - head drum clap
16:59 OblivioN: 好
17:00 IamKwaN: 美麗
17:00 OblivioN: 好，我upload  w
17:00 IamKwaN: wait!!!
17:00 OblivioN: ;w;
17:01 IamKwaN: insane的kiai在01:20:672 - end
17:02 OblivioN: 好
17:04 IamKwaN: update please :D
17:04 OblivioN: 好:D
17:04 IamKwaN: :D
17:11 OblivioN: 我自己check一下w
17:11 IamKwaN: w
17:13 OblivioN: 好了w
17:13 IamKwaN: 好w

Taiko'd: p/3148737

Bubbled! ლ(╹◡╹ლ )

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-05T09:30:59+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:

Did some hitsound adjustments. Looks good now!

Log

12:44 OblivioN: 骏喵w我改好啦
12:44 IamKwaN: 好的
14:01 IamKwaN: o_O
14:01 OblivioN: ;w;
14:01 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (4) - 
14:02 IamKwaN: 現在是soft-finish
14:02 OblivioN: orz
14:02 IamKwaN: lol
14:02 OblivioN: 不知道什么时候开了additions w;w;
14:02 OblivioN: 去掉了;w;
14:02 IamKwaN: haha
14:03 OblivioN: 改晕了……
14:03 IamKwaN: loll
14:03 IamKwaN: 我好像寫得有點長
14:03 OblivioN: qwq
14:03 OblivioN: 是的
14:03 IamKwaN: qwq
14:04 OblivioN: qwq
14:04 IamKwaN: ww
14:04 OblivioN: 明明核对了好几遍最后还是出错orz我也是相当服气我自己
14:05 IamKwaN: www
14:06 OblivioN: go on go on！
14:06 IamKwaN: :3 好的
14:06 OblivioN: w
14:11 IamKwaN: 00:07:262 (3) - 這個clap去掉
14:11 OblivioN: 好
14:12 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (4) - drum finish
14:13 OblivioN: 好
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 去掉whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 中間那條90%可以刪除
14:13 OblivioN: ok
14:13 OblivioN: 好的
14:16 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - drum clap
14:17 OblivioN: 好
14:18 IamKwaN: 00:53:285 (8,1) - 可以跟00:52:944 (7) - 分開一點點
14:18 OblivioN: 好
14:20 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgoe/2b6bf9071f.png
14:20 OblivioN: 这样可以吗？
14:20 IamKwaN: 可以哇
14:20 OblivioN: ok哇
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (5) - drum finish
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:672 (6) - drum clap
14:21 IamKwaN: Hard
14:22 OblivioN: 好
14:25 IamKwaN: 00:27:944 (1) - 這個保險一點放左一點
14:26 OblivioN: 好
14:27 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgFO/de722d3a4d.png
14:28 OblivioN: 弄成这样了
14:28 IamKwaN: haohaohao
14:28 OblivioN: 嗯
14:31 IamKwaN: 01:24:308 (1) - lol 這個不用whistle 我沙皮
14:31 OblivioN: 好
14:31 OblivioN: 你moe w
14:32 IamKwaN: >.<
14:34 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - normal
14:34 IamKwaN: kiai --> 01:20:672 - 
14:34 IamKwaN: end
14:35 IamKwaN: Normal
14:35 OblivioN: 好;w;
14:35 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - 這個kiai end移到01:20:672 - 
14:35 OblivioN: 好
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:00:672 (1) - DS
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:04:308 (1) - ^
14:40 OblivioN: 好
14:41 IamKwaN: 00:46:126 - 這個fnish可去掉
14:41 IamKwaN: insane那個也去掉
14:42 IamKwaN: 背景好像沒cymbal
14:42 OblivioN: 好的
14:43 IamKwaN: 01:20:672 (1) - whistle
14:44 OblivioN: 好
14:44 IamKwaN: 先update
14:45 OblivioN: 嗯w
14:47 OblivioN: 好了
14:47 IamKwaN: 好
14:47 OblivioN: 等下等下
14:47 IamKwaN: lol
14:47 OblivioN: insane？
14:47 OblivioN: 等下
14:47 OblivioN: 看错了
14:48 IamKwaN: lol
14:49 OblivioN: 好了;w;
14:49 IamKwaN: 好233
14:52 IamKwaN: lol 怎麼00:53:285 (8,1) - 
14:52 OblivioN: 卧槽……那两个地方怎么有粘到以求了orz
14:52 OblivioN: 一起去了
14:52 IamKwaN: lolll
14:54 IamKwaN:  00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle o_O
14:54 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 這個whistle不要 Insane O_o
14:54 OblivioN: ;w;我疯了
14:54 OblivioN: 改好了的怎么save上传又成原来的样子了
14:54 IamKwaN: loll
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些改了
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些沒改ww
14:55 OblivioN: ;w;
14:55 OblivioN: mad
14:55 OblivioN: 90的线也给我保存的好好的orzorzorzorz
14:56 IamKwaN: ww
14:56 OblivioN: 我再去确认一遍;w;
14:56 IamKwaN: 恩恩ww
15:04 OblivioN: 这下
15:04 OblivioN: 真的
15:04 OblivioN: 好了
15:04 IamKwaN: 233 好
15:04 OblivioN: ;w;
15:14 IamKwaN: hard耶
15:14 IamKwaN: Macuilxochitl
15:14 IamKwaN: 阿
15:14 IamKwaN: 複製錯了==
15:14 OblivioN: ;w;?
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:37:717 (2) - 尾巴drum finish
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:38:172 (3) - 尾巴drum clap
15:14 OblivioN: 好
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:39:535 (2,3) - 這裡都是
15:15 OblivioN: ok
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:41:353 (2,3) - ^
15:15 OblivioN: 嗯嗯
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:42:944 (3) - 頭drum clap 尾soft finish
15:16 OblivioN: 好
15:18 IamKwaN: 做好了叫我
15:19 OblivioN: 好;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 不用update
15:19 IamKwaN: 一會兒再up
15:19 IamKwaN: insane這個stack好00:16:581 (5,1) - 
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯;w;我先出个门;w; 4学校老师有事找我;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 好w
15:19 OblivioN: 估计不久就回来
15:19 OblivioN: ;w;
15:19 OblivioN: sorrrrrrry
15:19 IamKwaN: 好哇w
15:19 IamKwaN: 沒事o.o
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯嗯w
16:55 OblivioN: 回来啦;w;
16:55 IamKwaN: 終於回來啦!!!
16:55 IamKwaN: 還打算去跑步lol
16:55 IamKwaN: Insane w
16:56 OblivioN: ;w;
16:56 OblivioN: 好w
16:56 IamKwaN: 00:16:581 (5,1) - stack好 美麗
16:57 IamKwaN: 然後我看看normal
16:57 OblivioN: 嗯w
16:57 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (3) - normal這裡drum finish
16:58 OblivioN: 好w
16:58 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - head drum clap
16:59 OblivioN: 好
17:00 IamKwaN: 美麗
17:00 OblivioN: 好，我upload  w
17:00 IamKwaN: wait!!!
17:00 OblivioN: ;w;
17:01 IamKwaN: insane的kiai在01:20:672 - end
17:02 OblivioN: 好
17:04 IamKwaN: update please :D
17:04 OblivioN: 好:D
17:04 IamKwaN: :D
17:11 OblivioN: 我自己check一下w
17:11 IamKwaN: w
17:13 OblivioN: 好了w
17:13 IamKwaN: 好w

Taiko'd: p/3148737

Bubbled! ლ(╹◡╹ლ )

ありがとうおおおお！hug

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-09-05T09:38:46+00:00

好

Gratz!!

ikarus1212

5 posts

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ikarus1212 2014-09-05T10:05:59+00:00

fight ↖(^ω^)↗ and graz =D

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-09-05T16:58:56+00:00

http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-05T17:25:46+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

哈哈哈哈怕了Ono?

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-09-05T18:10:21+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
kanpakyin wrote:
http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub
哈哈哈哈怕了Ono?

你說呢

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-05T18:46:37+00:00

LOL

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-06T01:55:35+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

好，update了，tags也改了w

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-06T05:13:54+00:00

wheeeee

Rebubbled.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-06T15:56:38+00:00

Hey wait guys, I have a concern over the Oni diff. Is 1.5 SV rankable? I have no idea at all about Taiko. @kpy

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-09-06T17:10:44+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hey wait guys, I have a concern over the Oni diff. Is 1.5 SV rankable? I have no idea at all about Taiko. @kpy

Rankable

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-07T02:00:06+00:00

Ranked please

Tari

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Tari 2014-09-09T06:01:07+00:00

I have to say something before mod :

The gap between Normal and Hard are HUGE.

I'd think you should rename Normal to Easy and make a Harder Normal.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-09T06:17:23+00:00

Tari wrote:
I have to say something before mod :

The gap between Normal and Hard are HUGE.

I'd think you should rename Normal to Easy and make a Harder Normal.

Imo, the Normal isn't easy enough to be an Easy as there are quite a number of 1/2 reversed sliders and consecutive circles.
My suggestion about reducing the gap is just changing CS to 3.5 / 4 so as to increase the star rating. What's ur perspective on this?

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-10T05:16:39+00:00

Tari wrote:
I have to say something before mod :

The gap between Normal and Hard are HUGE.

I'd think you should rename Normal to Easy and make a Harder Normal.

I'd try it ;w;

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-10T15:42:21+00:00

normal

poooop

23:17 Sellenite: hi，有没有空irc啊
23:17 *Sellenite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497538 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Normal]]
23:17 OblivioN: 好好好w
23:18 Sellenite: 00:04:990 (2,3) - 换个节奏，等我截图，这里漏音了
23:18 OblivioN: 好
23:19 Sellenite: http://puu.sh/btqgP/9c692a8f48.png
23:19 Sellenite: 00:13:399 (4) - NC吧
23:20 OblivioN: 好
23:20 OblivioN: 诶，这里为什么nc呢
23:20 Sellenite: 其实你这里的nc我觉得下得怪怪的
23:20 Sellenite: 连续几个都是
23:20 Sellenite: 你按什么来下的？
23:20 OblivioN: ;w;
23:21 OblivioN: 因为之前听说是隔一个大白线下一个
23:21 Sellenite: 这里NC效果挺好的，重音
23:21 Sellenite: 然后00:15:217 (3) -
23:21 Sellenite: 取消NC
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:21 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:21 Sellenite: 00:17:035 (6) - NC
23:21 OblivioN: 唉，看来nc我还是没搞懂
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:22 Sellenite: 调整了一下重音的NC
23:22 OblivioN: soga
23:22 OblivioN: 重音原来nc哦
23:22 Sellenite: 后面你才是隔一条大白线NC一次
23:22 OblivioN: soga ;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:02:490 (1,2) - 不知道能不能漂亮点ww
23:23 Sellenite: 不过没什么关系
23:23 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:17:035 (1) - 爷爷..你这个
23:23 OblivioN: 其实摆了半天
23:24 Sellenite: ds呀
23:24 OblivioN: ctrl g? ;w;
23:24 Sellenite: 你ctrl+g的话后面的也要改
23:25 OblivioN: 嗯
23:25 OblivioN: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2021150
23:26 OblivioN: 弄成这样了;w;
23:26 Sellenite: 233
23:26 OblivioN: 似乎？;w;可以吗？
23:26 Sellenite: 没问题了
23:27 OblivioN: 吼吼w
23:29 OblivioN: 还有呢还有呢
23:30 Sellenite: 没问题了啊...
23:30 Sellenite: 找不出什么大家伙
23:30 OblivioN: 其实我总觉得
23:30 OblivioN: 01:20:672 (1,2) -
23:30 OblivioN: 这里的声音有点别扭
23:31 Sellenite: 指的是？
23:31 Sellenite: 节奏还是音效
23:31 OblivioN: 感觉比后面的要尖锐……
23:31 Sellenite: 哦对
23:32 Sellenite: 这里其实统一比较好
23:32 OblivioN: soga
23:32 Sellenite: 就是两个物件在时间轴上对调
23:32 OblivioN: 那就都55？
23:32 Sellenite: 不，我指的另一方面..
23:32 OblivioN: 噢~懂了
23:32 Sellenite: 因为你看后面
23:32 OblivioN: note在前面
23:32 Sellenite: 都是叮在折返的后面
23:33 OblivioN: soga
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:672 这里放circle
23:33 OblivioN: 哦哦哦
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899 (1) - 这里放折返
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899
23:33 Sellenite: 注意把音效修正
23:33 OblivioN: 知道了w
23:34 OblivioN: 3Q XD
23:34 Sellenite: 恩，没问题了，我po了
23:34 OblivioN: 好www
23:35 OblivioN: 麻烦啦XD
23:35 Sellenite: 啊等等
23:35 Sellenite: 01:24:081
23:35 Sellenite: 这里
23:35 Sellenite: 不要那个叮的音效
23:35 OblivioN: 好
23:35 Sellenite: ok
23:35 OblivioN: 顺耳多了w
23:36 Sellenite: 恩，那个叮很刺耳
23:36 Sellenite: 睡觉w

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-11T04:07:28+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
normal
poooop
23:17 Sellenite: hi，有没有空irc啊
23:17 *Sellenite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497538 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Normal]]
23:17 OblivioN: 好好好w
23:18 Sellenite: 00:04:990 (2,3) - 换个节奏，等我截图，这里漏音了
23:18 OblivioN: 好
23:19 Sellenite: http://puu.sh/btqgP/9c692a8f48.png
23:19 Sellenite: 00:13:399 (4) - NC吧
23:20 OblivioN: 好
23:20 OblivioN: 诶，这里为什么nc呢
23:20 Sellenite: 其实你这里的nc我觉得下得怪怪的
23:20 Sellenite: 连续几个都是
23:20 Sellenite: 你按什么来下的？
23:20 OblivioN: ;w;
23:21 OblivioN: 因为之前听说是隔一个大白线下一个
23:21 Sellenite: 这里NC效果挺好的，重音
23:21 Sellenite: 然后00:15:217 (3) -
23:21 Sellenite: 取消NC
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:21 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:21 Sellenite: 00:17:035 (6) - NC
23:21 OblivioN: 唉，看来nc我还是没搞懂
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:22 Sellenite: 调整了一下重音的NC
23:22 OblivioN: soga
23:22 OblivioN: 重音原来nc哦
23:22 Sellenite: 后面你才是隔一条大白线NC一次
23:22 OblivioN: soga ;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:02:490 (1,2) - 不知道能不能漂亮点ww
23:23 Sellenite: 不过没什么关系
23:23 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:17:035 (1) - 爷爷..你这个
23:23 OblivioN: 其实摆了半天
23:24 Sellenite: ds呀
23:24 OblivioN: ctrl g? ;w;
23:24 Sellenite: 你ctrl+g的话后面的也要改
23:25 OblivioN: 嗯
23:25 OblivioN: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2021150
23:26 OblivioN: 弄成这样了;w;
23:26 Sellenite: 233
23:26 OblivioN: 似乎？;w;可以吗？
23:26 Sellenite: 没问题了
23:27 OblivioN: 吼吼w
23:29 OblivioN: 还有呢还有呢
23:30 Sellenite: 没问题了啊...
23:30 Sellenite: 找不出什么大家伙
23:30 OblivioN: 其实我总觉得
23:30 OblivioN: 01:20:672 (1,2) -
23:30 OblivioN: 这里的声音有点别扭
23:31 Sellenite: 指的是？
23:31 Sellenite: 节奏还是音效
23:31 OblivioN: 感觉比后面的要尖锐……
23:31 Sellenite: 哦对
23:32 Sellenite: 这里其实统一比较好
23:32 OblivioN: soga
23:32 Sellenite: 就是两个物件在时间轴上对调
23:32 OblivioN: 那就都55？
23:32 Sellenite: 不，我指的另一方面..
23:32 OblivioN: 噢~懂了
23:32 Sellenite: 因为你看后面
23:32 OblivioN: note在前面
23:32 Sellenite: 都是叮在折返的后面
23:33 OblivioN: soga
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:672 这里放circle
23:33 OblivioN: 哦哦哦
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899 (1) - 这里放折返
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899
23:33 Sellenite: 注意把音效修正
23:33 OblivioN: 知道了w
23:34 OblivioN: 3Q XD
23:34 Sellenite: 恩，没问题了，我po了
23:34 OblivioN: 好www
23:35 OblivioN: 麻烦啦XD
23:35 Sellenite: 啊等等
23:35 Sellenite: 01:24:081
23:35 Sellenite: 这里
23:35 Sellenite: 不要那个叮的音效
23:35 OblivioN: 好
23:35 Sellenite: ok
23:35 OblivioN: 顺耳多了w
23:36 Sellenite: 恩，那个叮很刺耳
23:36 Sellenite: 睡觉w

谢谢小仓唯w

fm4a93au04

129 posts

Joined March 2012

fm4a93au04 2014-09-11T12:41:39+00:00

哈囉來摸 ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

不讓我摸 H 是對的 =ㄦ= .

做太好我也摸不出啥 ...

My 摸ding

[Easy]

* N-H = Normal Hit

* N-F = Normal Finish

其他類推 .

00:15:217 (1,2) – 我覺得 Easy 還是別出這種重疊比較好 . 新手有機率GG .

00:22:490 (1,2) – 我覺得連續鈴聲怪怪的 … 把2頭上的鈴聲拿掉比較好 .

00:24:762 (4) . 00:26:581 (1,2) . 比照辦理 =ㄦ= . ( 覺得還好就無視我 )

00:34:990 (3) – 放在 ( x,y ) – ( 212,260 ) 或 ( 208,260 ) . 原先的放置給人沒 Blanket 好的印象 . 也有可能是我的問題 …

00:44:308 (1,2,3,4,5) – 這裡跟 1/2 beat 有點呆板 , 試試 :

圖中的 1,2 也可以合成一個折返 .

00:47:944 (1,1) – 後面的轉盤太短了 ( 其實前面的也有點勉強 ) . 建議合成一個大轉盤 =ㄦ= .

00:51:581 (1,3) – 建議不要讓 N-F 那麼頻繁 , 一個 8 拍一次就好 , 因為它會蓋掉你的 N-H . 我會比較傾向於在這一段突出N-H .

00:58:399 (4) – 這個地方 … 你放了一個鼓聲 ( N:C1-C ) , 可是因為你用了N-H當底聲 , 基本上都被 N-H 蓋掉了 , 聽不出來 ( 要不是開編輯器根本沒感覺 ) … 建議把你的那個鼓聲當底 , N-H 當 C 來用會比較好 . 這樣可以更大程度的突出N-H . 不過要改好像挺麻煩 … 若覺得還好就先放著吧 =ㄦ= .

01:11:581 (4) – 再結尾也加個 N:C1-W 吧 =ㄦ= . 那個音效超讚的 =ㄦ= + .

01:13:853 (2) – 我總覺得把他 Reverse 會比較好 ?

時間軸 :

排列範例 :

01:16:581 (1,2,3,4) – 我會這樣排 :

或 :

我個人不喜歡老是跟 1/2 , 而且在最後面放個簡單卻不同於之前的 Rhythm , 感覺可以當殺必死 = = + . <- 若你覺得是我的錯覺便無視罷

01:25:899 (1) – 這顆心 … 感覺怪怪的 … 自己試著做了 2 顆 :

阿~~~~ (( 閃逃 ~~~~ 做得超爛的 XD

沒有啦 = = . 原先的感覺上面有點空 :

只是希望他的頭尾可以拉近一點 .

[Normal]

00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – 這個沒問題嘛 … 感覺距離一直變 =ㄦ= . 我想到了一個自認頗帥的梗 , 希望能幫上忙@W@ ” :

以下說明是上面圖中的東西 ( 在你的圖裡找不到很正常 =ㄦ= ) :

1. 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) 這組向下平移 .

2. 00:01:808 (4,5,6) 各轉 120 度 .

00:04:308 (1,2,3) – 這組小調整 .

-----------------------------------------------------------------

00:19:535 (2,3,4) – Normal 好像不能這樣疊 ( 之前有人摸我圖的時候對我這麼說 =ㄦ= 我有很多這種梗 , 害我改超久 …… ) … 再觀察看看好了 . 其他人也這麼說的時候再改 .

00:20:672 (4,6) – 擺開一點比較好看 .

00:21:581 (6) – 鍋牛欸 ~ @W@ + ~~~~ !!! <- PUNCH HIM ~~ !

00:45:672 (4) – 既然決定要跟鼓就跟到底吧 . 這裡改成圈比較好 ( 我在這裡預期要要跟鼓結果突然 Vocal 害我有點無力 … ) . 或者 , 把 3 改成短滑條也不錯 ~ 剛好就是一個越來越快漸層效果 ^^ .

最終結果我覺得這樣最好 =ㄦ= 剛好作為此段結尾殺必死 :

然後鼓聲N-H還是放在同樣那 4 個地方 .

以後還是放圖吧 = = … 廢話一堆也不知道自己在幹麻 …

00:47:490 (7) – 鈴聲或 N-F 選一個吧 . 這兩個性質差太多合起來效果不佳 … 一個是高亮短暫性 , 一個是有低音附有延展效果 . 個人覺得合起來效果不佳 , 不如選一個放 , 或乾脆 N-H . 另外 00:44:308 . 00:46:126 . 也可以選擇性加入此鈴聲 .

01:00:217 (4,5) – Blanket 開一點比較好看 imo . <- 中英混血式

01:02:490 (1,2) - ~~~~~~~~~~~ 說好的 Blanket呢 = = ?

01:12:490 (6) – 把頭的鈴聲擺到尾巴去 .

01:13:399 (1,2) – 間距請修正為 x1.2 .

01:16:581 (7) – 改成一個點 , 為接下來的連續短 Slider 做個停頓 .

01:17:035 (1,2,3,4) – 這裡音效略顯粗糙 , 咚咚咚質感不好 . 試著降低音量 , 或者去掉 1,2,3 尾巴的 N-H .

=W= Nice 音效 ~ 給星星 ~

希望它可以被 Ranked ~ <- 英式中文 , Englinese ~~ ( 摸完快滾喇 ~ )

OblivioN

Topic Starter

OblivioN 2014-09-12T05:49:48+00:00

fm4a93au04 wrote:
哈囉來摸 ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

不讓我摸 H 是對的 =ㄦ= .

做太好我也摸不出啥 ...

My 摸ding
[Easy]

* N-H = Normal Hit

* N-F = Normal Finish

其他類推 .

00:15:217 (1,2) – 我覺得 Easy 還是別出這種重疊比較好 . 新手有機率GG .

00:22:490 (1,2) – 我覺得連續鈴聲怪怪的 … 把2頭上的鈴聲拿掉比較好 .

00:24:762 (4) . 00:26:581 (1,2) . 比照辦理 =ㄦ= . ( 覺得還好就無視我 )

00:34:990 (3) – 放在 ( x,y ) – ( 212,260 ) 或 ( 208,260 ) . 原先的放置給人沒 Blanket 好的印象 . 也有可能是我的問題 …

00:44:308 (1,2,3,4,5) – 這裡跟 1/2 beat 有點呆板 , 試試 :

圖中的 1,2 也可以合成一個折返 .

00:47:944 (1,1) – 後面的轉盤太短了 ( 其實前面的也有點勉強 ) . 建議合成一個大轉盤 =ㄦ= .

00:51:581 (1,3) – 建議不要讓 N-F 那麼頻繁 , 一個 8 拍一次就好 , 因為它會蓋掉你的 N-H . 我會比較傾向於在這一段突出N-H .

00:58:399 (4) – 這個地方 … 你放了一個鼓聲 ( N:C1-C ) , 可是因為你用了N-H當底聲 , 基本上都被 N-H 蓋掉了 , 聽不出來 ( 要不是開編輯器根本沒感覺 ) … 建議把你的那個鼓聲當底 , N-H 當 C 來用會比較好 . 這樣可以更大程度的突出N-H . 不過要改好像挺麻煩 … 若覺得還好就先放著吧 =ㄦ= .

01:11:581 (4) – 再結尾也加個 N:C1-W 吧 =ㄦ= . 那個音效超讚的 =ㄦ= + .

01:13:853 (2) – 我總覺得把他 Reverse 會比較好 ?

時間軸 :

排列範例 :

01:16:581 (1,2,3,4) – 我會這樣排 :

或 :

我個人不喜歡老是跟 1/2 , 而且在最後面放個簡單卻不同於之前的 Rhythm , 感覺可以當殺必死 = = + . <- 若你覺得是我的錯覺便無視罷

01:25:899 (1) – 這顆心 … 感覺怪怪的 … 自己試著做了 2 顆 :

阿~~~~ (( 閃逃 ~~~~ 做得超爛的 XD

沒有啦 = = . 原先的感覺上面有點空 :

只是希望他的頭尾可以拉近一點 .

[Normal]

00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – 這個沒問題嘛 … 感覺距離一直變 =ㄦ= . 我想到了一個自認頗帥的梗 , 希望能幫上忙@W@ ” :-啊，这个没有问题的哦，我是按ds排的，你的这个梗也蛮帅气

以下說明是上面圖中的東西 ( 在你的圖裡找不到很正常 =ㄦ= ) :

1. 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) 這組向下平移 .

2. 00:01:808 (4,5,6) 各轉 120 度 .

00:04:308 (1,2,3) – 這組小調整 .

-----------------------------------------------------------------

00:19:535 (2,3,4) – Normal 好像不能這樣疊 ( 之前有人摸我圖的時候對我這麼說 =ㄦ= 我有很多這種梗 , 害我改超久 …… ) … 再觀察看看好了 . 其他人也這麼說的時候再改 .-我之前也有这样叠过;w;在十六夜樱（ranked）里，看看bat怎么说吧

00:20:672 (4,6) – 擺開一點比較好看 .-好，往下移动了一些

00:21:581 (6) – 鍋牛欸 ~ @W@ + ~~~~ !!! <- PUNCH HIM ~~ ! -www

00:45:672 (4) – 既然決定要跟鼓就跟到底吧 . 這裡改成圈比較好 ( 我在這裡預期要要跟鼓結果突然 Vocal 害我有點無力 … ) . 或者 , 把 3 改成短滑條也不錯 ~ 剛好就是一個越來越快漸層效果 ^^ .

最終結果我覺得這樣最好 =ㄦ= 剛好作為此段結尾殺必死 :

然後鼓聲N-H還是放在同樣那 4 個地方 .

以後還是放圖吧 = = … 廢話一堆也不知道自己在幹麻 …

00:47:490 (7) – 鈴聲或 N-F 選一個吧 . 這兩個性質差太多合起來效果不佳 … 一個是高亮短暫性 , 一個是有低音附有延展效果 . 個人覺得合起來效果不佳 , 不如選一個放 , 或乾脆 N-H . 另外 00:44:308 . 00:46:126 . 也可以選擇性加入此鈴聲 .

01:00:217 (4,5) – Blanket 開一點比較好看 imo . <- 中英混血式

01:02:490 (1,2) - ~~~~~~~~~~~ 說好的 Blanket呢 = = ?-这里实在是非常不好弄，上去一点就和01:02:035 (7) - overlap了……

01:12:490 (6) – 把頭的鈴聲擺到尾巴去 .

01:13:399 (1,2) – 間距請修正為 x1.2 .-oh！！好好好

01:16:581 (7) – 改成一個點 , 為接下來的連續短 Slider 做個停頓 .-good idea！

01:17:035 (1,2,3,4) – 這裡音效略顯粗糙 , 咚咚咚質感不好 . 試著降低音量 , 或者去掉 1,2,3 尾巴的 N-H .为了和别的diff统一这里就算了;w;

=W= Nice 音效 ~ 給星星 ~

希望它可以被 Ranked ~ <- 英式中文 , Englinese ~~ ( 摸完快滾喇 ~ )

谢谢星星和mod！;w;

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