1. Bakari's Easy (1,63 stars, 192 notes)
2. Hard (4,54 stars, 344 notes)
3. Normal (3,06 stars, 284 notes)

Boathappy555 wrote:

Hey Guys , Now I come to mod your map SORRY FOR MY ENG
Goodluck

[General]
Unable Coundown all diff

[Normal]
00:20:016 (3) - Delete?
01:00:949 - to 01:00:949 - Insert Break Time edited
01:52:559 (2,3) - Change to Pic?

ScreenShot

01:55:610 (6) - Delete?
02:30:440 (1,1) - The Spiners , Chang to pic? edited

ScreenShot

02:38:067 - Add Hit circle 1 hit edited
02:40:356 (4,4) - Delete?
02:52:813 (1,2,3) - Change?

ScreenShot

[box=]http://puu.sh/7ILFg.jpg

02:52:813 (1) - Remove Whistle hit sound edited

[Hard]
00:08:830 (2,1) - Um.. , Pic

ScreenShot

01:02:983 - 01:04:508 - Add Spiner
01:57:644 (4) - Change Grid to Tiny (G) and Move a bit left edited

Before

After

OK,Now I finish mod your map ^^

Goodluck ><

Thanks ^^

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[General]

Add 'Thomas Salter' the co-writer and 'Epic' the record label to the tags in all diffs.edited

[Normal]

01:29:423 (1,2) - I felt that the blanket between these sliders could look a little more even like so (http://puu.sh/7KfgP.jpg).

01:41:627 (1,2) - I suggest neatening this blanket as it is a little off centre with the succeeding note. Try this (http://puu.sh/7Kfy6.jpg).edited

01:44:169 (2,4) - I recommend moving these notes up by two squares on grid level four to create a more soulful curve for these three notes surrounding the note above them (http://puu.sh/7KkKB.jpg).

02:00:440 (1,2,3) - I altered the shape of this triple to make them a little more cohesive with the next note, plus it looks a little more pretty when it blankets like this (http://puu.sh/7KliS.jpg). edited

02:40:356 (5) - I recommend moving this note so that the triple curve is symmetrical and continuous with the one before it. I felt that by making it too straight, it seemed a little out of place.edited

03:00:949 (3) - New combo here for the next section of lyrics within this phrase, just as you have with the 5 single tap note combo you have after this where it starts on the word 'trouble'.edited


[Hard]

01:38:067 (2,3) - I suggest evening up this blanket a little as it is a little out on the left hand side (http://puu.sh/7Kmx7.jpg).edited

Seriously, I have nothing bad to say about this, I'd even go as far as to say i'd be the last mod you need before ranking. Good luck!

Thanks!

UnderminE wrote:

some irc mod

SPOILER

16:49 UnderminE: Sniqht: gel şurdan iki dk hizli mod yapalim, öncelikle arkadaki o taktak sesleri için Normal hitnormal kullanabilirsin, güzel olur bence kullan yani :D
16:49 UnderminE: atiyorum şurasi 00:19:254 (6) - rastgele geldi de anlamişsindir
16:49 zigizigiefe: vay ibne Arda Sniqht .D
16:50 Sniqht: geldim bi dakika
16:50 UnderminE: 01:18:745 (2) -  şu pek hoş durmuyo ya çok alakasi olmuş o patterne
16:51 Sniqht: öncekini anlamadım .s
16:53 UnderminE: ya arkada bildiğin tak diye ses var hani bateri gibi mi desem ne desem, onlar için soldaki sampleset'i normal yapabilirsin belki
16:53 Sniqht: ha
16:53 UnderminE: sonra 02:07:050 -  şu slider'i burada bitirip, 02:07:559 -  buraya da bi tekli koyabilirsin
16:53 Sniqht: Priti bunu kullan demişti ona yönelmiştim asda
16:53 UnderminE: nakarat kisminda bi şey yok ya o clapler güzel
16:54 UnderminE: kiai harici kisimlari diyorum sadece whistle çok sessiz kalmiş arkada taktak ritim var halbuki
16:54 UnderminE: 02:18:237 -  burda bi anda clapler gelmiş hayirdir mapin gerisinde nerdeydiniz :D
16:54 Sniqht: onada kitaideki gibi yapayımmı
16:54 Sniqht: ya ;D
16:54 UnderminE: dur bekle ben deniycem bi şeyler mapi bi inceliyim
16:55 Sniqht: ordaki klapleri kaldırayımmı
16:55 UnderminE: kaldirma ama sesini biraz kis çok yüksek, bide 03:07:050 (1) -  şurasi için de önce söyldiğim şeyi yapabilirsn
16:56 kead: arkadaslar ben su spinde zorlanıyom her nedense fareyi götürmede hiçbir sıkıntı olmuyo lunaticlerde ama su spilerde sıcıyom yaw
16:56 Sniqht: yaptım
16:57 Sniqht: kıstım
16:58 UnderminE: ben bi sesleri normal yapayim sonra sana farkli diff olarak atarim silersin işin bitince
16:58 Sniqht: tmm
16:59 Sniqht: 01:41:627 (1,2) -  kötümü olmuş bura yaw
17:00 UnderminE: olmamiş da o 2'deki jump çok alakasi
17:00 Sniqht: oraya blanket felan diyince .s
17:00 Digital Love: selam
17:00 Digital Love: XD
17:01 UnderminE: selaam
17:01 Sniqht: düzelttim orayı
17:01 Sniqht: as
17:02 Digital Love: ya youtube u da kapattılar
17:02 Digital Love: iyice sapıttı bunlar XD
17:02 Sniqht: açılmıyo wat
17:02 Digital Love: malesef kapattılar XD
17:03 Sniqht: sapıttılar iyice
17:04 UnderminE: 00:51:288 (2) -  şuna ctrl g yap Sniqht
17:04 Sniqht: edited
17:04 SaintTurk: s.a
17:04 UnderminE: as
17:07 UnderminE: rankim 911 süper la ambulans gibi
17:07 Sniqht: ambulans :(
17:11 UnderminE: f güzel oldu da çok uğraştiriyo bu
17:11 UnderminE: hiç gerek yok şimdilik böyle uğraşmaya, sen biraz daha mod almaya bak
17:14 Qescen: ssa
17:18 UnderminE: as
17:19 UnderminE: sniqht aklinin bi köşesinde bulunsun eğer dediğim şeyi yapmak istersen osu default skin'den normal-hitnormal'i bulup
17:19 Sniqht: evet
17:19 UnderminE: soft-hitclap olarak ismini değiştir, mapinde F6'da tüm S leri S:C1 olarak kaydet, whistle'lari clap yap olur 
17:19 UnderminE: ama biraz sesi kisik olmasi lazim, ama şimdi yapma bi şey eğer hitsounda laf eden olursa yap
17:19 Sniqht: ama onlar whistle 
17:20 Sniqht: tmm
17:20 Sniqht: sağol
17:20 UnderminE: ya whistlelari clap yaptğinda hitnormal çalcak demek istediğim o ama garip geliyo kulağa
17:20 UnderminE: aklinin bi ucunda bulunsun sadece :D
17:20 Sniqht: sağol ;D
17:20 UnderminE: 00:08:067 -  şurdan itibaren ani
17:20 UnderminE: öncekiler whistle olmali çünkü arkada BATERİ YOK
17:21 UnderminE: 00:08:067 -  şuranin da kafasina tikla, sol tarafta sampleset'i drum yap
17:23 Sniqht: nerede bitsin drum
17:23 UnderminE: drum sadece kafasinda ya
17:23 UnderminE: timing section ekleme ona, sol taraftaki şeyden yap
17:24 UnderminE: şu http://puu.sh/7Lvk6.jpg
17:24 Sniqht: sağol
17:24 Sniqht: gördüm
17:24 UnderminE: o dediğim hitnormal şeyini sen elle yapma, eğer biri laf ederse hitsounda ben sana direk diff'i bitmiş halde atarim onu kullanirsin
17:25 UnderminE: bide normal diffe bakayim
17:25 Sniqht: tamağm
17:25 Sniqht: normal kötü biraz :(
17:25 UnderminE: distance snap'la çok oynamişsin bi yerde 1,20 bi yerde 1,30 bence onu düzeltmen lazim her yerde 1,20 olsun
17:29 UnderminE: 00:14:169 (3) - x: 256 y: 348, 00:14:677 (4) - x: 152 y: 288, 00:15:186 (5) -  bunu da şöyle döndür ve x:156 y:168'e koy http://puu.sh/7Lvyf.jpg, 00:16:711 (1) - x:268 y:124
17:30 UnderminE: oy dediğime göre 4 çok uzakta olmuş, onlari yakinlaştir işte elle halledersin sen sniqht :D
17:32 UnderminE: of of normalin çok fazla moda ihtiyaci var bubble'a daha yolun uzun sniqht  ><
17:32 Sniqht: :(
17:33 UnderminE: şarki bu kadar uzun olmasa ben guest diff yapardim da uzun şarkilari map yapamiyorum içim bayiliyo benim :D helldawn buralarda olsaydi o yapardi ah ah

pkmnyab wrote:

From M4M~

Nice song

[Normal]

• 
  
  Spacing seems to be a bit inconsistent, it ranges from mostly about 1.1x to 1.4x distance snap. For example, 00:07:050 (4) - is spaced 1.38x from the last note and 02:40:356 (5) - is spaced 0.88x from the last note. This might have been caused by you using a large grid size, I would suggest going through the map again with distance snap on a small grid size so your spacing is consistent.Yes, I know it. I must readjustment.

1. 00:18:237 (1) - you can remove NC here, since according to your NC logic this 00:14:169 (3) - would also be a NC (but you didn't make it NC). Basically I think NC at 00:18:237 (1) - is unnecessary and it also makes a really short combo of only two notes.edited
   
2. 00:23:322 (6) - might flow better if you ctrl+g. Of course you will have to rearrange the other notes that come after to match the direction of the repeat slider if you choose to make this change.
   
3. 00:46:711 (1) - maybe move this down a bit so that 00:46:203 (3,4,1) - is like a curved line. Sort of like this
   SPOILER

   edited
   I think this looks better and also flows better since before the (3) and (4) was in a straight line and this clashed with the curved slider.
   
4. 00:52:813 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion: 4 hitcircles in a row might feel repetitive to some people, instead you can try having the first two hitcircles as one slider instead (or something like that), I think it's more fun to play this way. You can also mix it up by having the first one as the first two notes as a slider, then the second one as the third and fourth notes as slider, this is what I mean:edited
   Here is another similar part 01:47:728 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   
5. 01:23:830 (4,5) - maybe turn this into a slider instead to match vocaledited
   
6. 01:42:644 (2) - might flow better if you ctrl+g
   
7. 01:55:864 (1) - this touches the HP bar a bit, I'm not sure if this is a problem but if you want you can move
   
8. 01:55:610 (6,1) - down a bitedited
   
9. 02:34:635 (1) - in the hard difficulty I think you placed spinner on white tick, so did you put spinner here on blue tick by accident
   edited
   
10. 02:46:711 (1) - I think you can remove clap here since you mostly have clap on white ticks
    
    [Hard]
    
11. 00:11:118 (3) - , 00:11:627 (4) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+g'd both of these edited
    
12. 00:15:186 (8) - you can add NC here to break up the combo and also match the vocal singing "go-o-o"edited
    
13. 00:24:847 (2,3) - you can rearrange this for better flow
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:35:525 (6) - , 00:36:033 (7) - ctrl+g each of these as well. (7) should end up pointing away from 00:36:542 (1) - which creates a nice flow motion since the player will have to go bottom-right when on slider (7), then go up towards the left when going for 00:36:542 (1) - . I strongly recommend this change~Remapped here
    
15. 00:37:305 (2,3) - since there is a jump here, it also makes sense to have a jump between here 00:38:322 (4,5) - . Just move 00:38:322 (4) - up a bit, or move 00:38:576 (5) - farther away from (4).Remapped here
    
16. 01:43:661 (1,2,3) - good flow here
    
17. 01:48:745 (5) - this touches HP bar a little, not sure if it's a problem
    
18. 02:58:915 (1) - move middle point (the red one) to x 228 y 164 and move the second point to x 208 y 196, I think this is a better blanket.

Nice song, keep up the good work~ Have fun mapping!

Thanks ^^

1. 00:17:983 (3) - add a note here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465567 because the note at 00:18:237 (4) - sounds lonely
2. 00:36:033 (7) - change to this direction osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465570, it fits the music's feeling
3. 00:38:576 (5) - this note goes too far to the right, i think this makes 00:40:101 (8) - not look good, try like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465576 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465578
4. 01:41:627 (1) - move 1 grid right ww
5. 01:49:762 (1,2) - i suggest this way ww https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465590
6. 02:03:746 (6) - this jump of 6-1-2 feels a little uncomfortable to me, i think it's better to put this note to x:504 y:104 and 02:04:254 (2,3) - ctrl+G
7. 02:07:559 (2) - move this note to x:154 y:250
8. 02:53:575 (4,5,6) - replace this with a slider? doesn't feel so much rhythm here
9. 03:22:813 (5,6) - what about ctrl+g www

1. 00:49:762 (6) - this is not blanketed well
2. 02:46:711 (1) - just use the same pattern as before

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hihi~


Hard

1. 00:17:983 (3) - add a note here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465567 because the note at 00:18:237 (4) - sounds lonely
2. 00:36:033 (7) - change to this direction osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465570, it fits the music's feeling
3. 00:38:576 (5) - this note goes too far to the right, i think this makes 00:40:101 (8) - not look good, try like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465576 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465578remapped here
4. 01:41:627 (1) - move 1 grid right wwedited
5. 01:49:762 (1,2) - i suggest this way ww https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465590edited
6. 02:03:746 (6) - this jump of 6-1-2 feels a little uncomfortable to me, i think it's better to put this note to x:504 y:104 and 02:04:254 (2,3) - ctrl+G
7. 02:07:559 (2) - move this note to x:154 y:250edited
8. 02:53:575 (4,5,6) - replace this with a slider? doesn't feel so much rhythm here
9. 03:22:813 (5,6) - what about ctrl+g www

Normal

1. 00:49:762 (6) - this is not blanketed wellThis is not blanket o.O
2. 02:46:711 (1) - just use the same pattern as before

gl~

Thanks ^^

UnderminE wrote:

Mod'da neleri düzelttin neleri düzeltmedin belirtsen iyi olur

Sieg wrote:

hi

General:
hitsounds plain a bit, you should examine for more finishes or alternate some claps or get some advices (I don't really like to mod them cus my point of view on hitsounds is quite arguable)

Hard:
OD 6 is kinda low for hardest difficulty and with AR8, try set OD to 7 done
00:15:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try more rounded pattern here? http://puu.sh/87lKf.jpg done
00:22:050 (4) - move to something like 248:208 to make better flow http://puu.sh/87lPT.jpg done
00:33:491 (3) - variety is a good thing (: my suggestion is to make 00:34:508 (4) - similar, that will improve pattern a bit imo http://puu.sh/87m1A.jpg done
00:54:593 (6) - jump to 00:54:847 (1) - great here, but placement of 6 is kinda offgrid\offscrfeen try to move done
01:49:762 (1) - why not? http://puu.sh/87mlB.jpg imo better for flow, nothing bad in your variant tho done
01:54:593 (2) - seems that one is too offgrid
02:02:983 (5,6,1) - make this consistent with 00:53:830 (5,6,1) - I mean jumping pattern from 6 to 1 done
02:30:440 (1,1) - I don't really like this 2 spinners, you can delete 1st spinner and map part from 02:22:305 (4) - with slow rhythm to 02:35:016 (1) - and start spinner here.
02:54:338 (7,1) - blanket here? What? Already blanket
sweet

Normal:
HP and OD -1 done
00:08:067 (1) - don't really like end on 00:08:830 - maybe try http://puu.sh/87nbW.jpg if you not afraid of 4 circles in a row done
02:21:796 (5) - same for this part as on hard
02:46:711 (1,2) - this should be http://puu.sh/87nr8.jpg done
03:21:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehm not sure about 6 in a row for normal, maybe remove 03:22:559 (4) - done
fine

GL Thanks ^^

1. Try using more fitting colors. Yours are too bright, so they may become a bit annoying when BG is dimmed.
   
   try this instead!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 180,197,112
   Combo2 : 168,199,200
   Combo3 : 166,185,151
   Combo4 : 104,113,172

2. Add indie kripac to the tags. Indie is because genre of the song is Indie pop and kripac is because her full name is Lenka Kripac.
3. For this kind of BGs, it's better to disable letterboxes. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterboxes. Since they hurt your awesome BG.
4. Also, disable the Widescreen Support since it's for widescreen storyboards only!
5. You'd better use BG with recommended resolution. I've found this one or you can keep yours but with recommended resolution.
6. You may want to add an Easy diff to mmake your mapset playable for everyone, from beginners to top-players. Nor,al may be a bit hard for beginners, so making an Easy diff could be a good idea!

1. First of all, your comboing feels kinda choppy and inconsistent. Try placing NCs every downbeat (big white line), so your combos will have approximately the same lenghth and will be intuitively understandable for players.
   Note: if you feel like combos are being too short, try to place NCs every second big white line, it also works pretty nice.
2. 00:08:067 (1) - the overlap is pretty confusing. It looks messy and may stress players. Try to avoid this overlap. Doesn't look good, huh?
   Note: 00:14:169 (3) - same happens here and a few more times. Try to see such patterns yourself.
3. 00:08:830 (2,3,4,5) - so many 1/2 beats in a row may be a bit too hard for the easiest diff. Try to get rid of some 1/2 beats in order to make diff a bit friendlier for beginners!
   Note: ignore this if you want to make an Easy.
4. 00:56:881 (1) - I would break it into two objects. The first one is 2/1 slider which will fit vocals, and the other one is a circle. example
   Npte: yup, the same applies to 02:06:033 (1) - 02:50:779 (1) - but I think you already know it.
5. 01:51:796 (1) - try replacing it with an 1/2 slider.So, you'll get some kind of polarity, which will give ou consistent and playable rhythm. try it!
   Note: 02:52:813 (1) - the same here. Please either apply the suggestion for all similar patterns or reject it for all similar patterns.
6. 02:30:440 (1,1) - the second spinner appears too fast and is totally nexpected. Consider mapping it instead. Some simple patterns will fit here.try it!
   Note: or you can just remove the first spinner and make the break longer.
   Note2: yup, the same problem 03:07:050 (1,1) - with.
   
   The diff is pretty simple. Apart from comboing issues and some minor rhythm mistakes it's actually pretty nice, though.

1. There's no reason to keep HP Drain so low, increase it by one tick to make diff a bit more interesting and challenging!
2. 00:04:000 (1,2) - try improving the transition and using something more natural here. Read more about flow to make sure that you understand what I'm talking about! So yeah, try this and tell me if it works better or not!
3. 00:16:203 (5) - nazi - ahh, a little overlap with HP Bar doesn't look neat here. If you can avoid it - do it, plaease! It's not a big deal, anyway.
   Note: 01:15:694 (2,3) - the same here. Just a friendly suggestion that may improve your flow. Try me!
4. 01:45:694 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the way how copypasta is used here. Itfits really good and plays pretty nice, too. Good job!
5. 02:30:440 (1,1) - depends on what you've done on Normal, you should do the same here in order to keep consistency through the mapset!
6. 03:02:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seriously, man, I love this pattern so much. It is used to represent the same lines in lyrics, so it is used properly and plays good. Once again, well done!
   
   Simple diff, light song. Everything fits with the song pretty nice. So, yeah, that's a solid diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Sieg is so cruel, modding Lenka and doesn't letting me know about it

Yo, you are mapping my favourite artist, so random mod. ♥

[General]

1. Try using more fitting colors. Yours are too bright, so they may become a bit annoying when BG is dimmed. edited for new background
   
   try this instead!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 180,197,112
   Combo2 : 168,199,200
   Combo3 : 166,185,151
   Combo4 : 104,113,172

2. Add indie kripac to the tags. Indie is because genre of the song is Indie pop and kripac is because her full name is Lenka Kripac. done
3. For this kind of BGs, it's better to disable letterboxes. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterboxes. Since they hurt your awesome BG. done
4. Also, disable the Widescreen Support since it's for widescreen storyboards only!
5. You'd better use BG with recommended resolution. I've found this one or you can keep yours but with recommended resolution. done
6. You may want to add an Easy diff to mmake your mapset playable for everyone, from beginners to top-players. Nor,al may be a bit hard for beginners, so making an Easy diff could be a good idea!

I'm lazy

[Normal]

1. First of all, your comboing feels kinda choppy and inconsistent. Try placing NCs every downbeat (big white line), so your combos will have approximately the same lenghth and will be intuitively understandable for players. done (some)
   Note: if you feel like combos are being too short, try to place NCs every second big white line, it also works pretty nice.
2. 00:08:067 (1) - the overlap is pretty confusing. It looks messy and may stress players. Try to avoid this overlap. Doesn't look good, huh?
   Note: 00:14:169 (3) - same happens here and a few more times. Try to see such patterns yourself. done
3. 00:08:830 (2,3,4,5) - so many 1/2 beats in a row may be a bit too hard for the easiest diff. Try to get rid of some 1/2 beats in order to make diff a bit friendlier for beginners!done
   Note: ignore this if you want to make an Easy.
4. 00:56:881 (1) - I would break it into two objects. The first one is 2/1 slider which will fit vocals, and the other one is a circle
   exampledone
   Npte: yup, the same applies to 02:06:033 (1) - 02:50:779 (1) - but I think you already know it. done
5. 01:51:796 (1) - try replacing it with an 1/2 slider.So, you'll get some kind of polarity, which will give ou consistent and playable rhythm. try it!
   Note: 02:52:813 (1) - the same here. Please either apply the suggestion for all similar patterns or reject it for all similar patterns.
6. 02:30:440 (1,1) - the second spinner appears too fast and is totally nexpected. Consider mapping it instead. Some simple patterns will fit here.try it!done
   Note: or you can just remove the first spinner and make the break longer.
   Note2: yup, the same problem 03:07:050 (1,1) - with.done
   
   The diff is pretty simple. Apart from comboing issues and some minor rhythm mistakes it's actually pretty nice, though.

[Hard]

1. There's no reason to keep HP Drain so low, increase it by one tick to make diff a bit more interesting and challenging!done
2. 00:04:000 (1,2) - try improving the transition and using something more natural here. Read more about flow to make sure that you understand what I'm talking about! So yeah, try this and tell me if it works better or not!done
3. 00:16:203 (5) - nazi - ahh, a little overlap with HP Bar doesn't look neat here. If you can avoid it - do it, plaease! It's not a big deal, anyway. done
   Note: 01:15:694 (2,3) - the same here. Just a friendly suggestion that may improve your flow. Try me!done
4. 01:45:694 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the way how copypasta is used here. Itfits really good and plays pretty nice, too. Good job!Thanks
5. 02:30:440 (1,1) - depends on what you've done on Normal, you should do the same here in order to keep consistency through the mapset!done
6. 03:02:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seriously, man, I love this pattern so much. It is used to represent the same lines in lyrics, so it is used properly and plays good. Once again, well done!Thanks again ^^
   
   Simple diff, light song. Everything fits with the song pretty nice. So, yeah, that's a solid diff.

I liked the mapset and it's Lenka. I just couldn't ignore it, so have a few stars! ~

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Best of luck! Thanks

Don wrote:

Hello! I'm here for mod4mod. Thanks for your mod!

Normal
General impressions
Cool song! Osu! needs more songs like this. I also feel that the map fits the song really well.
However, for a normal difficulty, Distance Snap is almost a prerequisite. You might want to resnap your entire map to something consistent. I'm sorry to say
I'll mod it regardless, though! It felt good while playing. And after modding, I really enjoyed it.

Timing-specific mods
00:06:796 (3) - I feel like this note would have been better positioned somewhere lower http://puu.sh/88gXJ.jpgdone
00:18:237 (1,2) - Consider moving these two notes upwards http://puu.sh/88inw.jpg
00:28:152 (4) - Consider moving this note a little bit up http://puu.sh/88ipZ.jpgdone
00:33:237 (3) - You might want to move a little bit down http://puu.sh/88irP.jpg
00:36:033 (3,4,1) - More round shapes! Woohoo! http://puu.sh/88itF.jpg
00:46:203 (3,4,1) - This would flow better if you made a round shape http://puu.sh/88ivM.jpgdone
00:49:254 (4,5,6) - Same thing here http://puu.sh/88iwx.jpg
01:09:593 (2,3,4) - Perhaps more circular? http://puu.sh/88izC.jpgdone
01:12:898 (2) - You might want to move this note down http://puu.sh/88iBM.jpgdone
01:22:305 (2,3) - What about something like this to make it flow better? http://puu.sh/88iFa.jpg
01:49:762 (1,1) - You might want to fix the blanket.This is not blanket
02:02:220 (2) - Move this note http://puu.sh/88iJD.jpg
02:04:253 (2) - Same as the above http://puu.sh/88iK8.jpg
02:05:524 (4) - Fix the blanket I can't see any problem on this blanket
02:21:033 (3) - Move this note to make the pattern more circular http://puu.sh/88iNb.jpgdone
03:18:745 (4) - Blanket is almost correct but not entirely done

Hard
General impressions
Great map! Feels good from the beginning. Nothing to remark. I love it! thanks

Timing-specific mods
00:12:135 (1) - The anti-flow in this note doesn't really work that well, I don't have any suggestions, but you might want to consider changing it.
00:47:474 (2) - Incorrect blanket why?
02:05:779 (6) - Incorrect blanket done
02:46:711 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels out of place
03:18:237 (3,4) - Consider changing it to http://puu.sh/88AI8.jpg

Priti wrote:

http://puu.sh/89FjF.rar
Finished hitsounding
Remove the whistle sample from the folder since it isn't needed anymore.
Also, I fixed some NC mistakes you made, hope its alright by you.

1. iirc you have to add slider border colour if you use custom hitcircles
   plus, it'd definitely look nice if you choose the same grey as you use for the hitcircleoverlay
   > add

    [Colours]
   ....
   SliderBorder: 185,185,185

   if you want to change slider border colour
   (replace "185,185,185" by the colourcode you want to have)

1. 00:04:000 (1,2) - you could improve movement/flow here if you bend 1 in the opposite direction
   screen

   
2. 00:18:237 (1,2) - they could blanket each other so nicely ;w; (just my personal preferance tho x3)
3. 00:23:322 (6,1,2,3,1) - create square pattern here (> stack 1 below 6) or polygon pattern? looks better, imo
4. 00:35:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better to me if you delete 00:36:288 (5) - and add a cirlce at 00:35:271
5. 01:31:457 (1,2,3,4) - use some kind of pattern here? square/zig-zag?
6. 01:41:627 (1,2) - movement/flow isn't as nice as it could be, maybe try to blanket 01:43:661 (1) - with 01:42:644 (2) - ?
7. 01:51:796 (3,4) - tick change is hard to read, you could replace this with a short slider >
   
   same here - 02:52:813 (1,2) -
8. 02:02:220 (2) - if you move this to 308|292 it looks better with 02:00:440 (2,3,4) - , imo
9. 02:50:779 (1,1) - stack correctly? (leave it as it is if it's intentional)

1. 00:11:118 (3,4) - might look better if you increase the curve a bit?
   comparison

   
   
2. 00:14:169 (6,7) - ^
3. 00:23:322 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:31:457 (7,1) - blanket could be better, middle and last anchor are bit too close to 7
5. 00:32:474 (1,2,3) - movement from 2-3 is really bad imo, try to improve this by placing 3 further up?
6. 00:35:525 (6) - plays nicely if you reverse this
   reverse 00:36:033 (7) - then as well, if you do ^
7. 01:15:186 (1,2) - ^ same as 00:11:118 (3,4) -
8. 02:19:254 (3) - ctrl + g? movement from 2 is better then, imo
9. 02:58:661 (4,1) - could be better blanketed

Squirrel wrote:

hey again. ^__^
mod from my queue ~
nice song choice! .w.

[General]

1. iirc you have to add slider border colour if you use custom hitcircles
   plus, it'd definitely look nice if you choose the same grey as you use for the hitcircleoverlay
   > add

    [Colours]
   ....
   SliderBorder: 185,185,185

   if you want to change slider border colour
   (replace "185,185,185" by the colourcode you want to have)

I don't know what is it

[Normal]
looks great so far! just some minor suggestions -

1. 00:04:000 (1,2) - you could improve movement/flow here if you bend 1 in the opposite direction done
   screen

   
2. 00:18:237 (1,2) - they could blanket each other so nicely ;w; (just my personal preferance tho x3)
3. 00:23:322 (6,1,2,3,1) - create square pattern here (> stack 1 below 6) or polygon pattern? looks better, imo
4. 00:35:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better to me if you delete 00:36:288 (5) - and add a cirlce at 00:35:271 done
5. 01:31:457 (1,2,3,4) - use some kind of pattern here? square/zig-zag? done
6. 01:41:627 (1,2) - movement/flow isn't as nice as it could be, maybe try to blanket 01:43:661 (1) - with 01:42:644 (2) - ? done
7. 01:51:796 (3,4) - tick change is hard to read, you could replace this with a short slider > done
   
   same here - 02:52:813 (1,2) - done
8. 02:02:220 (2) - if you move this to 308|292 it looks better with 02:00:440 (2,3,4) - , imo
9. 02:50:779 (1,1) - stack correctly? (leave it as it is if it's intentional)

done

[Hard]

1. 00:11:118 (3,4) - might look better if you increase the curve a bit?done
   comparison

   
   
2. 00:14:169 (6,7) - ^ done
3. 00:23:322 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:31:457 (7,1) - blanket could be better, middle and last anchor are bit too close to 7
5. 00:32:474 (1,2,3) - movement from 2-3 is really bad imo, try to improve this by placing 3 further up? done
6. 00:35:525 (6) - plays nicely if you reverse this done
   reverse 00:36:033 (7) - then as well, if you do ^ done
7. 01:15:186 (1,2) - ^ same as 00:11:118 (3,4) -
8. 02:19:254 (3) - ctrl + g? movement from 2 is better then, imo
9. 02:58:661 (4,1) - could be better blanketed

really nice mapset, hope I could help somehow. ;w;
Good luck! Thanks!
*squee* no squee say pawpaw

UnderminE wrote:

Ooo baya iyi gidiyosun SB falan helal inş olcak bakalim

Alarido wrote:

Modding the map on my own (;

[Hard]
♥ There's No problems on Hard diff. It's simply Amazing (:

[Normal]
02:30:059 (1) - this spinner would start on 02:30:440 -- as it does on Hard diff -- so it'll follow the song more accurately and intuitively (: why? this makes bad

[Bakari's Easy]
Could raise 01:19:762 (4) - by 1 grid to make triangle slightly better here (:
01:27:898 (4,1,2) - Move (4) by 1 grid down and move (2) by 1 grid right, for pattern improvement. And don't forget to move 01:31:457 (3) - to x:315 y:243 to keep spacing safe, if you made changes on the pattern.
01:42:135 (2) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down, and also move the last node by 1 grid right, for pattern improvement.
02:03:999 (3) - Move 1 grid right and 1 grid down, for better blanket here.
02:22:305 (1) - You could adjust the blanket Or make it symmetrical on Y axis, but... Truly, I realize this repeating slider don't fits to the song! You could change it to a 3/1 slider, like this image → http://puu.sh/8jA5W.jpg ← so it'll fit better the calmer voice 'aaaaaaa~'
02:49:254 (4) - Move the last node by 1 grid down and 1 grid right, to regularize the pattern. And... remember stacking 02:52:305 (2) and 02:54:847 (1) on it, if it was intentional on previous placement.

Well, good map and... WHAT GOOD SONG ♥ and SB is cool, in truth, SB IS PERFECT for the song <3 it's like a childhood song, osu! needs more childhood songs (and songs that bring such childhood smell to us ♥)
Let's bring more of these songs ♥

Star & wish for ranking

Att.

zigizigiefe wrote:

00:40:483 - 00:42:516 - Şu şekilde sliderları diz. ha



00:42:516 - Spinner ekle. ciddimisin

ciddimisin

Nerd_fare wrote:

Ranked olacağı gün #1 yapmaya çalışacağım CTB modunda.

1. Storyboard is awesome, that's all.
2. If you include a custom hitcircle, you have to include the hitnumbers as well. Some with unmatching default hitnumbers would be bothered... you know what I mean.
3. 02:22:305 - Either unify this part as break on all diff or just map it on all diff.

1. I personally think tick rate 1 is just enough.
2. Everything else is just fine, baka <3

1. 00:07:050 (4,5) - It would be better if you could merge this into a slider instead.
2. 00:11:118 (4,5) - Same here.
3. 00:56:881 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better.
4. 01:44:677 (4,5) - Merge into slider? Would follow music better i guess
5. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket fix?
6. 02:49:761 (3,4) - Merge to slider?
7. 03:01:966 (5,6) - Here too? It'll give smoother flow transition after the circles (-:
8. 03:18:745 (4,1) - Blanket could be done better.

1. 00:31:457 (7,1) - Blanket ;_;
2. 00:39:593 (7,8) - The gap between feels too empty, so I'd suggest you to merge these into a slider.
3. 01:45:694 (1,5) - Yes blanket.
4. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket ;___;
5. 02:54:338 (7,1) - Blanket pls.
6. 03:04:000 (5,5) - Blanket and blanket.

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Some useful links for mapping:
Analyzing flow in beatmaps
Mapping polarity
How to make beautiful sliders
How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
Difficulty naming
Advanced Timing

brought here by dilek

General

1. Storyboard is awesome, that's all.
2. If you include a custom hitcircle, you have to include the hitnumbers as well. Some with unmatching default hitnumbers would be bothered... you know what I mean.
3. 02:22:305 - Either unify this part as break on all diff or just map it on all diff. done

Easy

1. I personally think tick rate 1 is just enough. done

Normal

1. 00:07:050 (4,5) - It would be better if you could merge this into a slider instead. done
2. 00:11:118 (4,5) - Same here. done
3. 00:56:881 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better. done
4. 01:44:677 (4,5) - Merge into slider? Would follow music better i guess done
5. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket fix? done
6. 02:49:761 (3,4) - Merge to slider?
7. 03:01:966 (5,6) - Here too? It'll give smoother flow transition after the circles (-: done
8. 03:18:745 (4,1) - Blanket could be done better. done

Hard

1. 00:31:457 (7,1) - Blanket ;_; done
2. 00:39:593 (7,8) - The gap between feels too empty, so I'd suggest you to merge these into a slider. done
3. 01:45:694 (1,5) - Yes blanket. done
4. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket ;___; done
5. 02:54:338 (7,1) - Blanket pls. done
6. 03:04:000 (5,5) - Blanket and blanket. done

So far this is my shittiest mod ever. This map is already good as it is! Keep it up and good luck!
feel free to not give any kudosu if you don't think this is helpful. im here because dilek anyways
Starred. Good luck. thanks

Andrea wrote:

Just wanna say also, move this to Pending Beatmaps, it's on WIP section right now.

UnderminE wrote:

skin'e numaralari ekledin mi bak ona bi şey yazmamişsin modda

öteki de tick rate'i 1 yap demiş onu da unutma

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ



[Hard]
00:39:593 (7) - move to x:354 y:250 for the flow done
03:00:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - No issue for ranked. High position. done



[Normal]
00:45:694 (2) - High position done
02:06:033 (1) - use blanket perfectly. done

bad image

03:19:254 (1) - ^ done

bad image

[Bakari's Easy]
Nothing to say. baka baka baka >.<

Sorry, I can't mod as well. So I just (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ
GOOD LUCK! thanks

zigizigiefe wrote:

Al sana mod

1. There's a few missing files, I guess you've miswritten some codes. Please check the AIMod once again!
2. Since you've skinned hitcircle set, you have to change slider border color too.
3. For the same reason as ^, you must add "default-0.png" too. lol http://puu.sh/926j3.jpg

Melophobia wrote:

[General]

1. There's a few missing files, I guess you've miswritten some codes. Please check the AIMod once again! done
2. Since you've skinned hitcircle set, you have to change slider border color too. done
3. For the same reason as ^, you must add "default-0.png" too. lol http://puu.sh/926j3.jpg done

Melophobia wrote:

Rechecked and bubbled! Good luck. ^_^

zigizigiefe wrote:

al sana bubble

-Bakari- wrote:

My god, we actually did it. Congrats on the bubble!

UnderminE wrote:

Gençler çok da boş mesajla doldurmayalim başliği, olur zamani gelince acele etmeyin

-Bakari- wrote:

Well, I'm sorry, but we'll have to update the SB.

Please, when you get the bubble popped, remove the old SB folder and .osb file and replace them with these files. I've fixed some code and changed a couple of elements. The changes are really minor, but SB load is significantly rerduced.

Once again, do not pop it on your own since the changes are REALLY minor.