Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme · forum

desudesud

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-01-07T22:33:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 02, 2014 at 8:18:46 PM

Artist: Nicole & Brynne Price
Title: Sailor Moon Theme
Source: Sailor Moon
Tags: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BPM: 140.2
Filesize: 11929kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.44 stars, 69 notes)
Hard (2.61 stars, 168 notes)
Lanturn's Normal (1.69 stars, 115 notes)

Download: Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme
Download: Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Map ever going for Ranked! (jeez this is old)

Sailor Moon Theme Song
Easy by xVirtualNinjax
Normal by Lanturn
Hard by xVirtualNinjax

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Last edited by desudesud 2014-09-03T01:19:29+00:00, edited 65 times in total.

Winek

888 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-01-18T20:10:16+00:00

Hey, Mod.
sorry, Know i maybe know why peeps don't want to mod your map.

[General]
Offest Should be 9791
Kiai should be from 00:40:584 to 00:54:270.
Remove letterbox during breaks.
Try to find the real name of the song. Not Sailor Moon Theme song. I researched and I think it's Moonlight Densetsu, not sure.

[Venusl]
You're following too much the vocals, and not respecting DS. Avoid using red & blue tick.
00:16:634 (5) - New Combo
00:50:849 (5) - New combo
00:57:371 (4,5,6,7) - Don't use blue tick.
00:59:510 (5,6,7) - Not timed correctly. Also for 5 you should NC.

[Mars]
Difficulty are too high. CS sould be 3, AR 4-5 and HP, OD 3-5. Also follow DS.
Too much overlapping like these for a Normal difficulty. 1 or 2 two is fine, but not the entire song. 00:55:981 (3,4)
00:41:867 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:289 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:175 (2) - Not timed correctly!
00:57:371 (5) - Not timed correctly
01:04:641 (5,6) - Both not timed currently and add NC for the 5

[Moon]
I think it's your best diff. You can skip DS.
Some note are not timed correctly. Try finding them out yourself.

You're probably a new mapper, and yay

, I'd like to make a map. You won't mind if I make a diff?
If yes, please tell me which diff.

Hopes I helped you

Good luck!

BigWilly

214 posts

Joined October 2013

BigWilly 2014-01-19T17:59:23+00:00

[Venus]

00:16:634 (1) - overlaps with slider 00:18:345 (4) -
00:16:634 (1,2,3) - put 2 and 3 on the same y axis
00:20:697 (2,3,4) - Timing

SPOILER

00:26:685 (2) - Change all red Points in the Slider to Grey Points (Do this by right Clicking)
Try to make it look something like this

SPOILER

00:41:868 (1) - Place closer to the end of 00:40:585 (2) - The jump is pretty hard atm
00:57:477 (4) - Make this a Long Sweeping curve.
01:01:113 (4) - Make symmterical. Sort out end. remove Red Point

[Mars]

00:11:073 (4,5,6) - Make sure the Overlapped Circles are accurate
00:13:211 (1,2) - ^
00:23:048 (2,3) - ^
00:26:683 (3) - Remove Red Point in Slider
00:29:678 (1) - Make Slider Neater

Good Luck

Raisa12

330 posts

Joined January 2013

Raisa12 2014-01-20T02:23:05+00:00

Hi! this is my mod

diff Venus

had to write so much better xD do this: open file and select open. osu one Notepad

Hence paste this: http://puu.sh/6r8GZ

diff Mars

00:09:897 (2) - move this circle 00:10:004 also in that circle and add remove Clap whistle
00:12:143 (5) - add whistle
00:24:973 (6) - add finish
00:27:967 (4,5) - try this http://puu.sh/6r9Nm.jpg
00:33:527 - add circle
00:33:741 - ^
00:56:622 - ^
00:56:836 - ^

diff Moon

00:37:483 (5) - move this circle 00:37:697
I find not more problems on This diff

luck with your map ~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-01-20T03:12:12+00:00

Easy/Venus

Use 1/2 beat divisor for easy, or don't use blue ticks. You also need consistent distance snapping. The timing is very, very confusing otherwise. Try 0.6x to 0.8x distance spacing. For easy/normal diffs, try to stick to the beat instead of the vocals. This retains flow in the song and makes it overall easier to play. Some variation is good, however.
I'm having much better timing with 140.25 BPM and 13,160 offset.

00:13:854 (2) - Push this over to the next white tick. Alternatively, if you still want this to land on the red tick, make 00:13:212 (1) - a slider
that lands on the red tick.
00:16:621 (1) - Move so it's not overlapping the previous slider
00:18:332 (4) - Overlap, also reconsider slider shape
00:20:685 (2) - Might want to make this a curved slider. imo completely straight vertical/horizontal sliders are ugly in a lot of cases, only sometimes they can look good.
00:21:655 (3) - Push over to white tick.
00:26:461 (2) - Push back to the white tick, consider making this a symmetrical slider. The shape looks off.
00:30:097 (4) - Might want to make this a curved slider, or making it a wave slider.
00:51:701 (3) - Make this slider end on the red tick before it.
00:54:268 (1) - Make this slider end on the white tick after it.
00:57:477 (4) - Reconsider shape. Try using only three points and making it symmetrical.
01:11:380 (5,6) - Separate these and make the first slider end on the red tick. Make NC at 5.
01:12:664 (7) - Push this back to the white tick.
01:29:562 (1) - You could probably remove this and save it for harder diffs.

I didn't cover every single fine detail with this, try to identify similar problems to the ones above with other parts of the song.

Normal/Mars

Use 9309 offset for this one. The entire map is a mess of improper distance spacing. Please reposition everything with around 0.8x distance spacing.

00:09:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Redo this entire part with proper distance spacing and with the new offset.
00:13:159 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest spacing these apart, along with the ones coming after it. This kind of style can be saved for a harder difficulty.
00:26:635 (3) - Try not to use crazy slider points like this

Consider reshaping.
00:29:630 (1) - Also consider reshaping.
00:33:053 (1,2,3) - Add something in the middle of these to keep rhythm.
01:11:341 (6) - New combo, and also make this land on the red tick.

Moon

Use offset 9309.
Change CS to 4.
00:00:060 (1) - Get rid of this spinner, or make it start later. That's an awful long time to be spinning at the start of the song.

In my honest opinion, I would remap this difficulty with the new offset + BPM.

Good luck! Hope I provided good insight, I tried not to be too critical

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 2014-01-20T07:08:53+00:00

Hi ~

I beginner of modding.

You can ignore my suggestion.

<Common>

1. Distance is not correct.

2. View > Grid Level > 4

3. The timing is not correct.

Easy(Venus)

00:20:697 (2) - Slider 00:21:338 - Here ends.
00:26:257 (1) - Circle 00:26:470 - Move here.
00:26:684 (2) - Slider 00:26:898 - ^
00:29:679 (3,4,5,6) - ^
↓

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00:48:068 (2) - Circle 00:48:282 - Move here.
00:50:208 (3) - Circle 00:50:420 - ^
00:54:271 (1) - Slider 00:55:553 - Here ands.
00:57:477 (4) - Slider 00:57:691 - Here start , 00:58:974 - Here ands.
00:59:723 (1) - Circle 00:59:829 - Move here.
01:01:113 (4) - Slider 01:02:396 - Here ands.
01:08:704 (2) - Circle 01:08:811 - Move here.
01:11:378 (5) - Slider 01:11:805 - Here ands.
01:11:913 (6) - Slider 01:12:232 - Here start , 01:12:660 - Here ands.
01:13:088 - Circle placement.
01:13:622 (7) - Slider 01:13:515 - Here start , 01:13:943 - Here ands.
01:15:440 (2) - Slider 01:15:654 - ^ , 01:16:082 - ^

Mars

00:09:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm ( 2 combo Deletion )
↓

collapesd text

00:20:696 (3) - Slider 00:20:910 - Here start , 00:21:338 - Here ands.
00:24:973 (6) - Circle 00:25:187 - Move Here.
00:25:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm.
↓

collapsed text

00:53:735 (1,2,3) - this rhythm.
↓

collapsed text

Moon

Overall, the timing is not correct.

Because it omits too many enemies crossed out.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-03-11T00:16:45+00:00

Random info mod here because I <3 Sailor Moon

When you get all this fixed and such, and feel confident your map is ready to go. Give me another shout and I'll come mod it. I would also be happy to do a GD (Normal I guess since you have an Easy/Hard and I hate Insanes) as well if you want.

[General]

Mp3 File: The mp3 file you use is extremely low quality. Try using the direct rip from the offical CD instead of from a youtube rip. -> http://puu.sh/7qIxn.mp3
Try about a 207 offset. I haven't tested it but it should be pretty close to correct.

Video File: Your video file is a wmv (avi or flv is required) and has sound. Please use this one: http://puu.sh/7qKDk.avi
I'm not sure of the offset for this since I haven't tested, but it shouldn't be hard to figure out.

Title: Sailor Moon Theme <-- This is honestly the name of the song. Moonlight Densetsu is the Japanese version this song is based off of but it isn't called it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Sa ... _TV_Series

Tags:
Tetsuya Komoro (Composer, and a very important person to all of the English Sailor Moon soundtrack) | http://puu.sh/7qJCq.jpg
Bob Summers (He mixed this song, basically the arranger and also preformed it.) | see screenshot above.
Opening (Opening to the Anime)
Songs from the Hit TV Series (Album name)

Consider adding stuff like Bishoujo Senshi and Moonlight Densetsu to the tags as well since this show is originally from Japan.

Also consider changing your preview point to where "Fighting Evil by Moonlight" is as it makes more sense in the preview to start there.

One final thing. You will probably have to change your difficulty names to something easier to understand. Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Moon. All these diffs can be arranged in any order so it won't pass because people won't be able to understand at a glance what is the hardest difficulty. Simple Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane will be your best bet unless you can come up with a theme that can be understood easily what the easiest and hardest difficulties will be.

desudesud

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-11T21:32:04+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
le snip

Thanks! I won't be able to change it right now atm, but I'm definitely gonna take all of your suggestions.

desudesud

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-11T22:10:34+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Random info mod here because I <3 Sailor Moon

When you get all this fixed and such, and feel confident your map is ready to go. Give me another shout and I'll come mod it. I would also be happy to do a GD (Normal I guess since you have an Easy/Hard and I hate Insanes) as well if you want.

[General]

Mp3 File: The mp3 file you use is extremely low quality. Try using the direct rip from the offical CD instead of from a youtube rip. -> http://puu.sh/7qIxn.mp3 Should be fixed/color]
Try about a 207 offset. I haven't tested it but it should be pretty close to correct.

Video File: Your video file is a wmv (avi or flv is required) and has sound. Please use this one: http://puu.sh/7qKDk.avi [color=#00FF00Should be fixed[/color]
I'm not sure of the offset for this since I haven't tested, but it shouldn't be hard to figure out.

Title: Sailor Moon Theme <-- This is honestly the name of the song. Moonlight Densetsu is the Japanese version this song is based off of but it isn't called it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Sa ... _TV_Series Changed

Tags:
Tetsuya Komoro (Composer, and a very important person to all of the English Sailor Moon soundtrack) | http://puu.sh/7qJCq.jpg
Bob Summers (He mixed this song, basically the arranger and also preformed it.) | see screenshot above.
Opening (Opening to the Anime)
Songs from the Hit TV Series (Album name)

Consider adding stuff like Bishoujo Senshi and Moonlight Densetsu to the tags as well since this show is originally from Japan.
Added

Also consider changing your preview point to where "Fighting Evil by Moonlight" is as it makes more sense in the preview to start there.Changed

One final thing. You will probably have to change your difficulty names to something easier to understand. Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Moon. All these diffs can be arranged in any order so it won't pass because people won't be able to understand at a glance what is the hardest difficulty. Simple Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane will be your best bet unless you can come up with a theme that can be understood easily what the easiest and hardest difficulties will be.Changed

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-03-12T21:55:19+00:00

I did a bit more testing. Mostly while making my diff. The BPM is actually 140.20. You can tell because it starts getting off sync pretty badly near the end.

My diff is about 70% done so sometime tomorrow it'll be good to go. Or should be at least.

AstralPhnx

302 posts

Joined April 2012

AstralPhnx 2014-03-12T22:16:02+00:00

Right, so for easy I see a few things

Firstly, Some of the circle placement looks kind of odd. E.g 00:22:464 and how its placed a little to the right of the slider. I have never seen that done before and it just looks a little weird. It may not me major though.

Secondly, the circle at 00:31:662 was one I didn't even see when playing through the map the first time. It could catch a newbe off guard.
Thirdly and most importantly the timing. I notice that the song is timed so most if not all of your beats are placed on a blue tick. This again is odd. It may be a better idea to retime the song so that most beats start on white ticks instead of blue ones.
Also the sliders at 00:41:340 could be replaced by a slider with less repeats. Its not major though so its your choice.

Hard mode.

First thing to note, slider at 00:12:196. Its hidden under another slider. That is a massive no no. You just don't do that in mapping. If a slider is hidden under another slider directly then the map probably won't be ranked.
That repeat slider at 00:28:025 sounds misstimed and doesn't go with the music. Its also not very practical. You could get the same effect with stacked hit circles.
Unessisary new combo at 00:32:089
The sliders and circles from 00:37:223 to 00:37:864 are oddly placed and really confusing. Don't be afraid to spread out your circles and sliders a bit
00:41:715 Another slider hidden under a slider. Like I said thats a big no no. That should never be done when designing beatmaps.
Slider at 00:58:185 overlaps the previous slider. Again bit no no.
Combo at 01:14:656 is unnessisarily long.
Another slider hidden under a slider from 01:21:715 to 01:22:142
Slider at 01:30:271 is unessisary. If you just end the song after the spinner it would work fine.

Overall easy looks fine but hard needs a lot of work. I suggest you go look at hard mode and compare it to other current hard mode maps that have been ranked.
I also reccomend you check out the ranking criteria article on the osu wiki as it will tell you all the do's and don'ts when it comes to beatmapping

I wish you the best of luck

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-03-13T18:47:27+00:00

Alright let's fix this a bit.

For now, Adjust the offset to 230 so all your notes get set properly to white and red ticks instead of blue.

In your Tags, Delete them all, and use the following: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn | Do not put commas to seperate them and a few other things such as the Artist/Title/Source shouldn't be in the tags as they're duplicates. Anime/English which is what the song will be classified as, shouldn't be in it as well. So just copy/paste the bold, and you're set

My difficulty can be found here. Right click from this page, save as, and save it into the song's folder.

My difficulty should be mostly ready. Stuff like the Kiai time can be sorted out after.

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-13T22:58:18+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Alright let's fix this a bit.

For now, Adjust the offset to 230 so all your notes get set properly to white and red ticks instead of blue.

In your Tags, Delete them all, and use the following: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn | Do not put commas to seperate them and a few other things such as the Artist/Title/Source shouldn't be in the tags as they're duplicates. Anime/English which is what the song will be classified as, shouldn't be in it as well. So just copy/paste the bold, and you're set

My difficulty can be found here. Right click from this page, save as, and save it into the song's folder.

My difficulty should be mostly ready. Stuff like the Kiai time can be sorted out after.

Fixed offset, tags, and added your diff (seems pretty good to me, I can talk to u l8r about where we can put the Kiai)

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2014-03-15T22:05:45+00:00

Hi there o/ Modding this because you modded mine :> I'm still a new modder so I might not spot much.

General

No problems found

Easy

00:22:482 (3,4) - Move to x:192 y:336
00:23:446 (1) - I really don't think this spinner is necessary, since you can still hear the vocals.
00:30:829 (4) - Move to x:144 y:152
00:37:248 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:960 (1) - and shorten it to 00:40:458 (1) -
00:41:314 (2) - Beginners might not know when to let go of this slider.
00:58:219 (4) - Move to 00:58:432 (4) -
01:01:429 (2) - ew reposition this so it's not right in front of the slider track.

Lanturn's Normal

00:19:916 (3) - Move to x:398 y:71

That's all I could find in this diff lol

Hard

00:20:344 (1) - Move this further
00:32:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Turning this into a stream would be much better,
00:44:310 (1) - Move this further away from 00:43:025 (5) - because the overlap is very ugly
01:09:345 (2) - Consider turning this into a nice looking pattern rather than just a stack of sliders
01:14:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn this into stream?

Well that's it. Good luck with getting this ranked and have fun~

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-03-15T22:41:28+00:00

Here from my modding queue.

[General]

Disable widescreen support on the Insane and Easy difficulties since you don't have a storyboard.

[Easy]

I can't really mod this difficulty as it is now. You need to have constant DS throughout this difficulty.

[Normal]

00:43:026 (2) - make this a shorter slider that ends on the white tick and make it repeating to follow what you did previously.
00:44:309 (1,2,3) - I think you should avoid using stacks like this in a normal.
00:47:305 - add a circle here?

[Hard]

00:10:073 (1) - end this slider on the white tick.
00:27:405 (6) - ^
00:32:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this streams too long for a hard. you could use a repeating slider instead?
00:34:466 (3) - make this a slider that extends to the white tick?
00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking these on top of each other, you should space them out to make it more enjoyable to play and more attractive
00:40:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:46:021 (5,6,7) - 00:46:021
00:48:161 (1,2,3) - you could use blankets for better flow and to make it look nicer.
screenshot
00:50:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much stacking, hard to read. Spread them out.
00:56:720 (6) - End slider on the white tick
00:58:218 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this
screenshot
01:08:703 (1,2) - this isn't really good flow. Too much stacking. Use curved sliders more.
01:12:127 (1) - remove nc?
01:14:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really hear a stream here. You should replace with sliders.
01:21:542 (6) - remove NC and start it at 01:21:756 (1)?
01:22:184 (2) - move this a little so its not touching (1)?
01:24:538 (6,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard to read and play, spread them out.

Good luck

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-15T23:34:36+00:00

Fluttershy03 wrote:
Hi there o/ Modding this because you modded mine :> I'm still a new modder so I might not spot much. Wow, thanks for the mod, I didn't even ask for one in return!

General

No problems found awesome

Easy

00:22:482 (3,4) - Move to x:192 y:336 Moved x to 192, but moved y to 340 instead. For the easy diff, I want the beginner to know that there is more circles after the slider, and a stack may make it too hard for them to notice
00:23:446 (1) - I really don't think this spinner is necessary, since you can still hear the vocals. I think it fits as is.
00:30:829 (4) - Move to x:144 y:152 Fixed
00:37:248 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:960 (1) - and shorten it to 00:40:458 (1) I think it's fine how it is atm
00:41:314 (2) - Beginners might not know when to let go of this slider. Fixed it in a way that's hard to put in words
00:58:219 (4) - Move to 00:58:432 (4) -
01:01:429 (2) - ew reposition this so it's not right in front of the slider track. Fixed

Hard

00:20:344 (1) - Move this further Fixed
00:32:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Turning this into a stream would be much better, Went with Knott's idea of a repeating slider
00:44:310 (1) - Move this further away from 00:43:025 (5) - because the overlap is very ugly Fixed
01:09:345 (2) - Consider turning this into a nice looking pattern rather than just a stack of sliders Fixed
01:14:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn this into stream? Went with Knott's idea again

Well that's it. Good luck with getting this ranked and have fun~ Thanks! Good luck to you, too!

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-15T23:40:48+00:00

Knotts wrote:
Here from my modding queue.

[General]
Disable widescreen support on the Insane and Easy difficulties since you don't have a storyboard. Fixed
[Easy]
I can't really mod this difficulty as it is now. You need to have constant DS throughout this difficulty. Don't really see what you mean by not having a constant DS here.

[Hard]
00:10:073 (1) - end this slider on the white tick. Fixed
00:27:405 (6) - ^ ^
00:32:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this streams too long for a hard. you could use a repeating slider instead? Yep, fixed
00:34:466 (3) - make this a slider that extends to the white tick? Fixed
00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking these on top of each other, you should space them out to make it more enjoyable to play and more attractive Fixed
00:40:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
00:46:021 (5,6,7) - 00:46:021 00:46:021 indeed? I have no clue what you mean, I'm assuming you didn't finish what you were going to put for 5,6,7
00:48:161 (1,2,3) - you could use blankets for better flow and to make it look nicer. Fixed it essentially the way you did, but made 3 a bit different
screenshot
00:50:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much stacking, hard to read. Spread them out. Fixed
00:56:720 (6) - End slider on the white tick Fixed
00:58:218 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this I think it sounds like it should be fixed, so I did fix it
screenshot
01:08:703 (1,2) - this isn't really good flow. Too much stacking. Use curved sliders more. Fixed
01:12:127 (1) - remove nc? Fine as is
01:14:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really hear a stream here. You should replace with sliders. Fixed
01:21:542 (6) - remove NC and start it at 01:21:756 (1)? Fine as is
01:22:184 (2) - move this a little so its not touching (1)? Fixed
01:24:538 (6,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard to read and play, spread them out.Fixed
Good luck

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-03-16T00:55:45+00:00

For your easy you're constantly changing the distance spacing. An example of this would be at 00:21:628 (2). Here you have 0.23x instead of your usual 0.4x.

I have no idea what I was writing for 00:46:021 (5,6,7), lol sorry about that.

desudesud

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-16T01:59:11+00:00

Knotts wrote:
For your easy you're constantly changing the distance spacing. An example of this would be at 00:21:628 (2). Here you have 0.23x instead of your usual 0.4x.

I have no idea what I was writing for 00:46:021 (5,6,7), lol sorry about that.

Icee (I see)

That should be fixed ASAP. Irreversible also brought that up during his IRC mod

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,535 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-03-16T02:32:26+00:00

Insane

Rename it Hard
AR +1
00:11:785 (4) - NC
00:17:348 (2,3) - blanket? Something like this angle:

SPOILER

00:26:977 (5,6) - don't overlap
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^
00:40:886 (1) - remove NC
00:41:314 (2) - NC
00:43:025 (6) - NC
00:44:310 (1) - remove NC
00:44:738 (2) - NC
00:47:733 (1) - finish
00:51:585 (3) - ^
00:52:441 (5) - finish on both ends
00:53:082 (6) - finish
00:55:437 (3) - clap and continue putting clap for every 2 white lines
01:01:856 (1) - finish
01:08:703 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:15:550 (1) - finish
01:18:760 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:19:830 (4) - finish on both ends
01:20:471 (5) - finish
01:22:184 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:23:896 (5) - finish
01:25:608 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:27:319 (6) - finish
01:30:315 (1) - finish on end of slider

You don't always have to use constant distance spacing, the spacing is already very small as well. Try to use fewer linear flow, it isn't as smooth as it can be, fewer straight 1/2 sliders and all

Normal

00:25:051 (2,3) - add finishes
00:52:655 (3,4) - finish
01:19:830 (2,3) - finish
01:23:896 (4) - finish
01:26:891 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:27:961 (1) - softer audio finish

Good Luck

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-16T03:57:33+00:00

[quote="neonat"]Insane
Will update the post as I start looking through the mod
Rename it Hard It is named hard.

AR +1 Done
00:11:785 (4) - NC I think it's good.
00:17:348 (2,3) - blanket? Something like this angle: Done
00:26:977 (5,6) - don't overlap Fixed
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^ Done
00:40:886 (1) - remove NC Nope
00:41:314 (2) - NC ^
00:43:025 (6) - NC ^
00:44:310 (1) - remove NC ^
00:44:738 (2) - NC ^
00:47:733 (1) - finish Fixed
00:51:585 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:52:441 (5) - finish on both ends Put claps on both ends
00:53:082 (6) - finish Fixed
00:55:437 (3) - clap and continue putting clap for every 2 white lines Fixed
01:01:856 (1) - finish Did a clap instead
01:08:703 (1) - finish on start of slider Fixed
01:15:550 (1) - finish Fixed
01:18:760 (2) - finish on end of slider Fixed
01:19:830 (4) - finish on both ends Claps instead
01:20:471 (5) - finish Fixed
01:22:184 (2) - finish on end of slider Fixed
01:23:896 (5) - finish Fixed
01:25:608 (2) - finish on end of slider Claps instead
01:27:319 (6) - finish Fixed
01:30:315 (1) - finish on end of slider Fixed

You don't always have to use constant distance spacing, the spacing is already very small as well. Try to use fewer linear flow, it isn't as smooth as it can be, fewer straight 1/2 sliders and all Definitely gonna fix this over time as more mods pour in

Last edited by desudesud 2014-03-16T19:21:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,812 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-03-16T07:12:46+00:00

played this map and easily found things that needed fixing so i thought i would give you a free mod

as usual, if you don't want to change something, you don't need to. my mod is just lots of suggestions (many of which will be mentioned by other modders too i think

)

Easy

- the distance spacing would be a lot better if it were larger. 0.7x would be best (or 0.6x if you don't want to change as much). it's nice to have some space between notes that are placed on white spaces, otherwise it feels like you're not even moving your mouse/pen, which is pretty boring. for an easy difficulty, it's highly recommended that you follow the distance spacing teh whole time, so if you do change the multiplier, you'll have to pretty much re-arrange your whole map (sorry)
00:21:628 (2) - start this on 00:21:414 red tick to keep consistency with the previous 2 times something like this played in the song
00:27:405 (2) - ends on an awkward note. it would be better to not have this be a reverse slider and instead do something else. the slider shape itself is also pretty unappealing -- this could help with that: t/37194
00:46:021 (1) - it's also highly recommended that you don't include reverse sliders of 1/2 length which include multiple reverses on easy difficulties. new players have terrible reaction time and can't tell when the note is going to end like this
00:49:445 - include a note here. when the same rhythm played in the song prior there was a note every time
00:53:083 (4) - don't overlap notes like this on easy difficulties (standard stacking excused)
00:58:432 (4) - not a great slider again, although better than the other one
01:00:358 - a note should definitely be here to introduce that part with the guitar. it's too empty otherwise
01:05:279 (1,2) - what i said about the reverse sliders earlier
01:12:127 (1) - i don't think that was meant to end on a blue tick
01:12:769 (2) - would be better if this ended on 01:13:411
01:17:262 (3,4) - blanket these better with 01:16:192 (2) like this. notice how it's the same distance from both ends of the slider and approach circle is sort of wrapping around the slider

nsfw

01:25:180 (1) - thing about reverse sliders again

it may also be good to include the spinner at the end so the difficulties all end at the same time

Normal

00:32:754 (1) - that slider is hot. need new pants
00:37:890 (1) - minor stuff on this - remove teh NC and have the slider end on the exact center so it's lined up with the upcoming spinner

other than that nothing i can really say

Insane

00:10:715 (2,3) - these 2 don't auto-stack very well since slider stuff is stupid. it would work better like this:

in editor

in game

00:21:414 (2) - this also doesn't stack very well automatically so you should change it accordingly yourself
00:26:549 (2,3,4) - these would be better if not on top of (5) since they're each 1/4 apart and (5) is 1/2 apart
00:27:405 (6) - could be blanketted with (5) better like

nsfw

00:32:113 (1) - blanket this with (2) just like above
00:34:252 (2) - doesn't stack very well automatically (it's underneath the slider entirely) so i'd suggest making that stack better manually
00:35:964 - feels like a note is missing here. just add a circle or something
00:47:733 (1) - remove NC. would be consistent with normal that way
00:53:083 (6) - auto-stacks right underneath the slider. would be better if manually stacked
00:57:362 (7) - could blanket better with (6)
00:58:432 (2) - stack the end of this slider with the beginning 00:57:362 (7) like this:

nsfw

01:04:424 (7) - stack this with (4) earlier in the combo
01:08:703 (1,2) - blanket these like you did at 01:12:127 (1,2)
01:11:699 (1) - remove NC (same reasoning as earlier)
01:15:978 (1) - remove NC for not the same reasoning as before
01:23:254 (4) - stack this with (2) earlier in the combo
01:26:891 (4) - add NC since the rest of the difficulties did so for the separating of "she was the one" and "sailor moon" in the song lyrics

-----------------

have fun with all of that. lantern should teach you how to make those sexy sliders

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-03-16T07:22:54+00:00

random bg mod

people who play on 16:9 get a zoomed in, blurry image when the image is 4:3, so I upped x-res to 1366, and added a sort of "improved letterboxing," i.e. not just ugly black bars. People that play at 4:3 aren't affected by this change, since it's cropped off. I also gave the image a smoothing filter to reduce the artifacting from the original image's compression.

improved bg

you obviously don't have to use this if you don't want to, but imo just the smoothing alone is a pretty noticeable improvement

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-03-16T10:22:38+00:00

pishifat

pishifat wrote:
Normal

00:32:754 (1) - that slider is hot. need new pants I think this is probably the only slider I didn't fix when I was randomly placing down notes <3 Glad it is getting love
00:37:890 (1) - minor stuff on this - remove teh NC and have the slider end on the exact center so it's lined up with the upcoming spinner Fixed

other than that nothing i can really say

neonat

neonat wrote:
Normal

00:25:051 (2,3) - add finishes I'm not too fond of using finishes in this section and places similar to this one. I think the normal hit gives more of an impact at this place.
00:52:655 (3,4) - finish ^
01:19:830 (2,3) - finish ^
01:23:896 (4) - finish ^
01:26:891 (2) - finish on end of slider ^
01:27:961 (1) - softer audio finish This is another one I prefer to use the Normal hit on as well since the song ends with it instead of cymbals.

My diff can be found below: Just open my difficulty in Notepad, and paste the code below into the file. (Open it like this or just navigate to the folder: http://puu.sh/7xlJk.jpg )

CODE

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sailor Moon Opening (English) -HD-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

[Metadata]
Title:Sailor Moon Theme
TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BeatmapID:385013
BeatmapSetID:140903

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,79,"Sailor Moon Theme.avi"
0,0,"sailor-moon-characters.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
230,427.960057061341,4,2,0,36,1,0
41742,-100,4,2,0,24,0,0
42170,-100,4,2,0,12,0,0
42598,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
45165,-100,4,2,0,24,0,0
45593,-100,4,2,0,12,0,0
46021,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
55008,-100,4,2,0,36,0,1
68703,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 242,24,57
Combo5 : 0,255,0

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Thanks for the mods guys :3

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-16T19:08:45+00:00

pishifat wrote:
played this map and easily found things that needed fixing so i thought i would give you a free mod Thanks!

as usual, if you don't want to change something, you don't need to. my mod is just lots of suggestions (many of which will be mentioned by other modders too i think )

Easy

- the distance spacing would be a lot better if it were larger. 0.7x would be best (or 0.6x if you don't want to change as much). it's nice to have some space between notes that are placed on white spaces, otherwise it feels like you're not even moving your mouse/pen, which is pretty boring. for an easy difficulty, it's highly recommended that you follow the distance spacing teh whole time, so if you do change the multiplier, you'll have to pretty much re-arrange your whole map (sorry) Was planning to dothis anyways
00:21:628 (2) - start this on 00:21:414 red tick to keep consistency with the previous 2 times something like this played in the song Fixed
00:27:405 (2) - ends on an awkward note. it would be better to not have this be a reverse slider and instead do something else. the slider shape itself is also pretty unappealing -- this could help with that: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194 Fixed
00:46:021 (1) - it's also highly recommended that you don't include reverse sliders of 1/2 length which include multiple reverses on easy difficulties. new players have terrible reaction time and can't tell when the note is going to end like this Fixed
00:49:445 - include a note here. when the same rhythm played in the song prior there was a note every time Fixed
00:53:083 (4) - don't overlap notes like this on easy difficulties (standard stacking excused) Fixed
00:58:432 (4) - not a great slider again, although better than the other one Attempted fix
01:00:358 - a note should definitely be here to introduce that part with the guitar. it's too empty otherwise Fixed
01:05:279 (1,2) - what i said about the reverse sliders earlier Replaced with spinner
01:12:127 (1) - i don't think that was meant to end on a blue tick No it was not, fixed
01:12:769 (2) - would be better if this ended on 01:13:411 Sounds much better
01:17:262 (3,4) - blanket these better with 01:16:192 (2) like this. notice how it's the same distance from both ends of the slider and approach circle is sort of wrapping around the slider Should be slightly fixed now, not entirely exact though
nsfw
01:25:180 (1) - thing about reverse sliders again Fixed

it may also be good to include the spinner at the end so the difficulties all end at the same time Maybe will consider later

Insane

00:10:715 (2,3) - these 2 don't auto-stack very well since slider stuff is stupid. it would work better like this: Fixed
00:21:414 (2) - this also doesn't stack very well automatically so you should change it accordingly yourself Fixed
00:26:549 (2,3,4) - these would be better if not on top of (5) since they're each 1/4 apart and (5) is 1/2 apart Fixed
00:27:405 (6) - could be blanketted with (5) better like Actually ended up doing that cause of the fixed mod above. Fixed
00:32:113 (1) - blanket this with (2) just like above Slightly fixed
00:34:252 (2) - doesn't stack very well automatically (it's underneath the slider entirely) so i'd suggest making that stack better manually Fixed
00:35:964 - feels like a note is missing here. just add a circle or something Not really any missing note, and the circle didn't really fit in imo.
00:47:733 (1) - remove NC. would be consistent with normal that way [color=#FF000]I think the NC fits as is. If they need to stay consistent, we could change the NC on Normal[/color]
00:53:083 (6) - auto-stacks right underneath the slider. would be better if manually stacked Fixed
00:57:362 (7) - could blanket better with (6) Fixed
00:58:432 (2) - stack the end of this slider with the beginning 00:57:362 (7) like this Fixed
01:04:424 (7) - stack this with (4) earlier in the combo Fixed
01:08:703 (1,2) - blanket these like you did at 01:12:127 (1,2) Fixed
01:11:699 (1) - remove NC (same reasoning as earlier) That's understandable, fixed.
01:15:978 (1) - remove NC for not the same reasoning as before Fixed
01:23:254 (4) - stack this with (2) earlier in the combo Fixed
01:26:891 (4) - add NC since the rest of the difficulties did so for the separating of "she was the one" and "sailor moon" in the song lyrics Fixed

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have fun with all of that. lantern should teach you how to make those sexy sliders I shall try to learn his magical ways...

desudesud

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Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-16T19:24:37+00:00

Ringating wrote:
random bg mod

people who play on 16:9 get a zoomed in, blurry image when the image is 4:3, so I upped x-res to 1366, and added a sort of "improved letterboxing," i.e. not just ugly black bars. People that play at 4:3 aren't affected by this change, since it's cropped off. I also gave the image a smoothing filter to reduce the artifacting from the original image's compression.

improved bg

you obviously don't have to use this if you don't want to, but imo just the smoothing alone is a pretty noticeable improvement

~~Will probably use this if Lanturn's fine with me using it on his diff. Thanks!~~

Switched to your better bg. Thanks!

Last edited by desudesud 2014-03-16T20:20:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-03-16T20:04:21+00:00

Hullo, mod as requested.

[General]

Your objects seems to be lacking hitsounds. One common way to adding consistent hitsounding is to create a pattern, such as a clap hitsound pattern. Try this one out:

Where all hit objects that lands on the ticks marked with the 'x' will have a clap. Only the objects on the ticks with with the x should have a clap.

[Easy]
00:13:924 (1) - Consider adding a quiet finish here, for the cymbal crash in the music.
00:21:414 (2) - Extend the tail to 00:22:055, so it hits that beat at 00:22:055 in the music and the vocals saying 'from'.
00:22:482 (3) - Add finish here to.
00:27:405 (2) - Move to 00:27:619, the timing difference here is inconsistent because it's too close to 00:26:977 (1) - . The previous note was 1 1/2 beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - , and suddenly having the next object (00:27:619 (2) - ) a beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - sounds odd, and will certainly catch players off guard.
And also add a finish on 00:27:619.
00:41:314 (2) - Double click on the head of the slider on the timeline shown above, and add a finish.
00:51:585 (1) - Add finish
00:53:083 (4) - ^
00:55:009 (1) - The sliders body is really far out of the board, you need to remodel this.
00:58:432 (4) - ^ and New combo.
01:01:856 (4) - NC
01:05:279 (1) - Add finish
01:08:704 (1) - ^
01:15:550 (1) - ^

[Lanturn's Normal]
00:51:585 (1) - Move middle point to 272:192 to make a perfect blanket.
01:27:961 (1) - Tail's at 01:30:315.

Nice diff.

[Hard]
00:13:924 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:28:689 (9,10) - Fix the blanket here, otherwise don't bother trying to make a blanket here at all.
Here's an example of what a good blanket should look like:

00:32:112 (1,2) - ^ Same suggestion as above.
00:41:314 (2) - Add finish on the head.
00:42:598 (5,6) - Fix blanket.
00:55:009 (2) - NC instead of 00:54:473 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear in Kai time. Aslo adda finish here for emphasis.
00:56:720 (6,7) - Fix blanket.
01:01:856 (1) - Add finish
01:08:703 (1,2) - Fix blanket.

Good luck.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-03-16T20:38:55+00:00

Crystalmask

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hullo, mod as requested.

[Lanturn's Normal]
00:51:585 (1) - Move middle point to 272:192 to make a perfect blanket. Fixed. thanks
01:27:961 (1) - Tail's at 01:30:315. I tried before and after, but it ends up playing the best on the 1/8th note here.

Nice diff. ty

Good luck.

Thanks.

I'll post an update to my map later since this was a minor change.

desudesud

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Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-16T20:39:42+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hullo, mod as requested.

[Easy]
00:13:924 (1) - Consider adding a quiet finish here, for the cymbal crash in the music. Done
00:21:414 (2) - Extend the tail to 00:22:055, so it hits that beat at 00:22:055 in the music and the vocals saying 'from'. Sounds much better
00:22:482 (3) - Add finish here to. Fixed
00:27:405 (2) - Move to 00:27:619, the timing difference here is inconsistent because it's too close to 00:26:977 (1) - . The previous note was 1 1/2 beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - , and suddenly having the next object (00:27:619 (2) - ) a beat away from 00:26:977 (1) - sounds odd, and will certainly catch players off guard.Fixed, it's much better now
And also add a finish on 00:27:619. Fixed
00:41:314 (2) - Double click on the head of the slider on the timeline shown above, and add a finish. Fixed, also added claps to the slider
00:51:585 (1) - Add finish Fixed
00:53:083 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:55:009 (1) - The sliders body is really far out of the board, you need to remodel this. Fixed
00:58:432 (4) - ^ and New combo. Fixed
01:01:856 (4) - NC Fixed
01:05:279 (1) - Add finish Fixed
01:08:704 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:15:550 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
00:13:924 (1) - Add finish on the head. Fixed
00:28:689 (9,10) - Fix the blanket here, otherwise don't bother trying to make a blanket here at all. Fixed
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Removed blanket
00:41:314 (2) - Add finish on the head. Fixed
00:42:598 (5,6) - Fix blanket. Fixed
00:55:009 (2) - NC instead of 00:54:473 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear in Kai time. Aslo adda finish here for emphasis.Fixed it
00:56:720 (6,7) - Fix blanket. Should be fixed
01:01:856 (1) - Add finish Fixed
01:08:703 (1,2) - Fix blanket. I think its fine as it is

Good luck. Thanks!

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-03-19T22:54:02+00:00

Updates!

Changed a bit around to match the maps style better. I also changed the BG to match the new one filewise. This should be fully up to date, ready for more mods.

CODE HERE

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sailor Moon Opening (English) -HD-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

[Metadata]
Title:Sailor Moon Theme
TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BeatmapID:385013
BeatmapSetID:140903

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,79,"Sailor Moon Theme.avi"
0,0,"sailor moon bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
230,427.960057061341,4,2,0,36,1,0
41742,-100,4,2,0,24,0,0
42170,-100,4,2,0,12,0,0
42598,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
45165,-100,4,2,0,24,0,0
45593,-100,4,2,0,12,0,0
46021,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
55008,-100,4,2,0,36,0,1
68703,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0


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Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 242,24,57
Combo5 : 0,255,0

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zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2014-03-28T07:10:07+00:00

From queue
[Easy]
Slider Velocity is too fast i recommend using 0.80
00:19:060 (4,5) - that doesn't look presentable do something different
00:23:446 (1) - slider doesn't belong there
00:26:977 (1) - doesn't sound right
00:37:248 (1) - again no slider map out with sliders and circles
00:50:943 (5) - take out
00:55:008 (1) - at least make it straight like aligned properly its all slanted
00:55:008- insert break please
01:12:127 (1,2,3) - see this is good more of this please like map it this style
01:16:192 (2) - end the it here 01:16:834 and turn it the other way ctrl + h is the command to do it
01:18:225 (1) - nope
01:21:757 (1) - ^ mapping it out would be better sounds like a lazy job was done here no offense
I would seriously recommend doing this difficulty over.
[Normal]
Beautiful! Yes this Difficulty is done!
[Hard]
00:32:861 (3) - no sounds bad
01:09:987 (3) - fix the overlap
[Overall]
I feel as if Easy should be revamped completely
Normal is harder than Hard itself

well not harder but it has more note patterns and Hard needs alot of work too.
Best difficulty over all was Normal
Lot of work needs to be Done on this map I wish you good luck!

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-28T12:27:03+00:00

zorefire wrote:
From queue
[Easy]
Slider Velocity is too fast i recommend using 0.80 I think its fine.
00:19:060 (4,5) - that doesn't look presentable do something different Agreed, fixed
00:23:446 (1) - slider doesn't belong thereSpinner*, Fixed
00:26:977 (1) - doesn't sound rightSounds fine
00:37:248 (1) - again no slider map out with sliders and circlesFixed
00:50:943 (5) - take out Fixed
00:55:008 (1) - at least make it straight like aligned properly its all slanted Fixed
00:55:008- insert break please Fixed
01:12:127 (1,2,3) - see this is good more of this please like map it this style
01:16:192 (2) - end the it here 01:16:834 and turn it the other way ctrl + h is the command to do it Fixed
01:18:225 (1) - nope Fixed
01:21:757 (1) - ^ mapping it out would be better sounds like a lazy job was done here no offense Fixed
I would seriously recommend doing this difficulty over.
[Normal]
Beautiful! Yes this Difficulty is done!
[Hard]
00:32:861 (3) - no sounds bad Fixed it in my own way
01:09:987 (3) - fix the overlap Fixed
[Overall]
I feel as if Easy should be revamped completely
Normal is harder than Hard itself well not harder but it has more note patterns and Hard needs alot of work too.
Best difficulty over all was Normal
Lot of work needs to be Done on this map I wish you good luck!

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-03-29T05:27:26+00:00

Hi.

Returning the favor :3

[General]
I think I should address this before going further, the SV in the three diffs doesn't go in a progresive way, there's nothing wrong with it tho. But I suggest to do any of these two ways, making the SV of all diffs 1.40, or going 1.20-1.30 for Easy, keeping Lanturn's at 1.50 and using 1.60 for Hard, this would make the spread somehow better. This is not a must, the spread is fine as it is now.

[Easy]
00:15:637 (4) - *nazi* Move the last point to x:344 y:168, this will improve the blanket considerably.
00:19:916 (5) - Maybe move the points in a way to accentuate the curve as in the previous slider. Alternatively, you could copy previous slider and rotate it around 70° anticlockwise.
00:23:553 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this one or move it to the next white tick, it'd match better the music imo.
00:26:335 (1,1) - These circles are quite tricky as they aren't following the strongest/most catchy rhythm. I suggest to remove both and put a circle in 00:27:191 and maybe one more in 00:26:763.
00:30:401 (3,4) - Although this is following vocals correctly, beginners may be a bit lost when they have to hit the next slider due the irregular rhythm you're using, I suggest you to snap this in the next white tick, so this rhythm stick to the main beats and being more beginner friendly. Also put NC in (3).
00:33:825 (1,2) - I'd suggest to avoid 1/2 patterns like this in an Easy as beginers would likely hurry to hit the next circle and likely miss. Remove the circle and snap the slider in 00:34:038.
00:40:886 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - This part is good rhythm wise, but I have a large suggestion that would be better imo. Why don't you stick to put a combo for each "Sailor ___!" that is in the lyrics, it'd be nice to play :p Like here:

00:49:874 (4) - I'd suggest you to unstack this, due the 3/2 rhythm you're using for the previous objects, this may be a bit trick to hit in time without help of spacing.
00:51:585 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent in this combo :p
01:00:358 (1,2) - Maybe use a slider instead these two circles? It'd play nice along with the guitar.
01:12:127 (1,2) - As I said a bit above, maybe use a rhythm similar as in the previous combo to avoid this 1/2.
01:16:192 (2,3,4) - The spacing D:
01:19:616 (2) - Move this to the next white tick.
01:21:756 (1,2) - Same as in 00:33:825.
01:26:891 (2) - Remove NC, this still belongs to the previous part.
01:27:961 - Put a spinner here as you have in the other difficulties :p

[Lanturn's Normal]
I suggest you to put your combos for vocals, given you mapped mostly on them.
01:25:180 (2) - Maybe this would look better with the reverse pointing down instead up.
I can't nitpick stuff anymore, so this would be all here >.<

[Hard]
Not a bad diff rhythmically, so I'll give a few placement suggestions.
00:10:073 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest to space this properly or at least move (3) away from the stack to improve readability.
00:17:990 (3,4) - I suggest you to stack (4) in the tail of (3) or move it away keeping the spacing consistent.
00:29:117 (10) - Use a blanket for this, like you did in 00:26:977 (5,6), so this looks better.
00:30:829 (2) - Try to accentuate the curve of this more, so it leads better to the next circle, like in the screenie.

SPOILER

00:32:754 (3) - This one feels a bit odd as you're mapping on vocals and then we have this kind of a hold, maybe you should keep mapping on vocals keeping the flow moving.
00:42:598 (5) - Put NC.
00:43:026 (6) - Maybe use a 1/2 slider with one repeat, to follow vocals better, you did it in Easy :p
00:46:021 (5) - Put NC.
00:51:585 (3) - I'd suggest you to move it around x:256 y:264, the spacing will be more intuitive for the next note (the spacing is the same, but not the time) and you'll keep the jumpy feeling.
00:53:938 - Add a triple in 1/4 here, you have mapped this in other spots but not here.
00:54:473 (2) - This should begin in the previous red tick.
00:56:720 (5) - Maybe end this in the previous white tick along with the guitar.
01:19:402 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing here.
01:24:538 (6,1,2,3) - The NC should be in (6) imo.
01:26:890 (1) - Remove NC.
01:30:315 (1) - I suggest you to remove this slider as it doesn't feel good to end the map, as the main music faded out, instead, end the spinner here.

That'd be all from my part here, good luck :3

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-03-29T08:44:20+00:00

Thanks Zore and Dekaane!

@Dekaane: It does seem like it would be better facing down like you said, but the only problem is that it gets a bit crowded from overlaps and such. I might try to remap this little outro sometime later if more people mention this like you did. About the combos. I prefer to keep them as is for now. The follow-points are key to help players determine how far a note is away on stuff that is 2/1 or further. for example. 00:22:911 (2,3) - the follow point helps more than one could think

Ty guys for the mods. No changes for now but I'll keep the suggestions in mind

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-29T14:57:51+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi.

Returning the favor :3 :3

[General]
I think I should address this before going further, the SV in the three diffs doesn't go in a progresive way, there's nothing wrong with it tho. But I suggest to do any of these two ways, making the SV of all diffs 1.40, or going 1.20-1.30 for Easy, keeping Lanturn's at 1.50 and using 1.60 for Hard, this would make the spread somehow better. This is not a must, the spread is fine as it is now. I think it's fine as is

[Easy]
00:15:637 (4) - *nazi* Move the last point to x:344 y:168, this will improve the blanket considerably. I <3 nazi mods since they are so pessimistic, so it's fine that it's a nazi thing. Fixed
00:19:916 (5) - Maybe move the points in a way to accentuate the curve as in the previous slider. Alternatively, you could copy previous slider and rotate it around 70° anticlockwise. Copypastad previous slider and rotated, fixed
00:23:553 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this one or move it to the next white tick, it'd match better the music imo. Moved it one tick
00:26:335 (1,1) - These circles are quite tricky as they aren't following the strongest/most catchy rhythm. I suggest to remove both and put a circle in 00:27:191 and maybe one more in 00:26:763.
00:30:401 (3,4) - Although this is following vocals correctly, beginners may be a bit lost when they have to hit the next slider due the irregular rhythm you're using, I suggest you to snap this in the next white tick, so this rhythm stick to the main beats and being more beginner friendly. Also put NC in (3). fixed
00:33:825 (1,2) - I'd suggest to avoid 1/2 patterns like this in an Easy as beginers would likely hurry to hit the next circle and likely miss. Remove the ci fixed
01:16:192 (2,3,4) - The spacing D: fixed
01:19:616 (2) - Move this to the next white tick. fixed
01:21:756 (1,2) - Same as in 00:33:825. fixed
01:26:891 (2) - Remove NC, this still belongs to the previous part. fixed
01:27:961 - Put a spinner here as you have in the other difficulties :p fixed

[Lanturn's Normal]
I suggest you to put your combos for vocals, given you mapped mostly on them.
01:25:180 (2) - Maybe this would look better with the reverse pointing down instead up.
I can't nitpick stuff anymore, so this would be all here >.<

[Hard]
Not a bad diff rhythmically, so I'll give a few placement suggestions.
00:10:073 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest to space this properly or at least move (3) away from the stack to improve readability. fixed
00:17:990 (3,4) - I suggest you to stack (4) in the tail of (3) or move it away keeping the spacing consistent. fixed
00:29:117 (10) - Use a blanket for this, like you did in 00:26:977 (5,6), so this looks better. Attempted better blanketing
00:30:829 (2) - Try to accentuate the curve of this more, so it leads better to the next circle, like in the screenie. fixed in own way
SPOILER
00:42:598 (5) - Put NC. Fixed
00:43:026 (6) - Maybe use a 1/2 slider with one repeat, to follow vocals better, you did it in Easy :p I think i'll keep it as is
00:46:021 (5) - Put NC. Fixed
00:51:585 (3) - I'd suggest you to move it around x:256 y:264, the spacing will be more intuitive for the next note (the spacing is the same, but not the time) and you'll keep the jumpy feeling. Fixed
00:53:938 - Add a triple in 1/4 here, you have mapped this in other spots but not here. Fixed
00:54:473 (2) - This should begin in the previous red tick. Fixed
00:56:720 (5) - Maybe end this in the previous white tick along with the guitar.soz, i think its gud as of right now
01:19:402 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing here. adjusted a bit
01:24:538 (6,1,2,3) - The NC should be in (6) imo. Fixed
01:26:890 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed
01:30:315 (1) - I suggest you to remove this slider as it doesn't feel good to end the map, as the main music faded out, instead, end the spinner here. fixed

That'd be all from my part here, good luck :3 u too :3

Erina

114 posts

Joined August 2012

Erina 2014-03-31T02:58:56+00:00

From my voice for mod queue!

[Hard]
00:10:073 (1) - Consider slowing slider velocity on this slider or make it so it moves slower, I think that'd be a nice addition
00:11:785 (4) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - )
00:18:631 (4) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you
00:27:405 (6) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - )
00:27:405 (6,7,9) - Same as 00:18:631
00:33:824 (1) - Move the slider end up to x:121 y:200 so it blankets better with the next slider, looks better imo
00:52:441 (5,6) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you
01:00:359 (5) - Consider adding NC
01:09:345 (2) - Move to x:119 y:117, i think it looks better with previous slider
01:16:192 (3,4) - I don't really like this positioning, looks bad

[Normal]
It's kinda weird how your slider velocity for normal is higher than hard, but I guess that's okay
00:27:619 (2) - Add NC
00:28:475 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:117 (2) - Add NC
Those above three I think make your NCs more consistent
00:43:026 (2) - Slider looks kind of weird, try making it more curved, it still seems kind of sharp when it transitions from straight into curved
01:17:690 (2) - Same with this slider, the curves look too sharp

01:26:891 (2) - Perhaps add a finish at the end of this slider

[Easy]
Slider velocity seems a bit too high for easy

For easy difficulties, I would recommend maybe 1.0x slider velocity and 1.0x distance snap. It's best of the velocity is the same as the spacing because that's easier to play
00:32:326 (3) - Consider moving down by one grid mark
00:37:248 (1,3) - It would be kind of cool if you could blanket the first slider in the curve of the third one
00:44:309 (1) - A clap hitsound work work well at the end of this slider
00:55:008 (1) - This slider isn't exactly symmetrical, it'd be pretty hard to make symmetrical though

Nice map, contact me later so you know when to sing!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-03-31T03:16:58+00:00

Erina wrote:
[Normal]
It's kinda weird how your slider velocity for normal is higher than hard, but I guess that's okay yeah. Mostly my fault I think. I looked at easy's SV and raised it by 0.1 and forgot to check hard XD
00:27:619 (2) - Add NC
00:28:475 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:117 (2) - Add NC not sure what happened here, but fixed.
Those above three I think make your NCs more consistent
00:43:026 (2) - Slider looks kind of weird, try making it more curved, it still seems kind of sharp when it transitions from straight into curved
01:17:690 (2) - Same with this slider, the curves look too sharp stretched it out and angled it a bit.
01:26:891 (2) - Perhaps add a finish at the end of this slider Added a drum samplehit here. and to the note before it. Sound better now.

Have fun singing Ninja, and thanks for the mod :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

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TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-31T08:42:19+00:00

Hi, Sorry for late ;w;

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:19:916 (5) - Add finish at the end slider.
00:52:441 (3) - Finish at the head slider.
00:55:008 (1) - Add finish.
01:01:856 (1) - Looks little ugly, try make it more rounded for example.

SPOILER

01:15:550 (1) - Add finish.
01:17:262 (3,4) - Move to x:224 y:130 for better blanket.
01:21:970 (1) - Finish at the end slider.
01:23:896 (3) - Add finish.
01:25:180 (1) - add finish at the end slider.
01:26:891 (2) - ^.
01:27:533 (1) - Maybe you make spinner like in the normal diff?

[Lanturn's Normal]
00:44:737 (3) - Maybe you make hitsounds like here 00:41:314 (1)?
01:26:891 (2) - Add finish at the end slider.

[Hard]
00:11:784 (4) - Add NC, also add finish at the head slider.
00:12:640 (6) - Finish here.
00:17:990 (3) - Move to x:318 y:24 for better blanket.
00:20:344 (1) - Instead clap add finish.
00:22:483 (6,7) - ^.
00:27:405 (6) - NC
00:29:117 (10) - Move to x:330 y:136.
00:48:803 (2) - Move to x:300 y:270.
00:53:082 (6) - Make perfect stack with end slider.
01:00:359 (5) - NC.
01:27:533 (1) - Same suggestion about spinner as easy.

Good luck~

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-31T15:33:59+00:00

Erina wrote:
From my voice for mod queue! Great, now I have to sing. The things I do for mods

[Hard]
00:10:073 (1) - Consider slowing slider velocity on this slider or make it so it moves slower, I think that'd be a nice addition Meh, its fine as it is
00:11:785 (4) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - ) Fixed
00:18:631 (4) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you Osu's a douche, it won't let me auto stack it
00:27:405 (6) - Add NC (consistency with parts like 01:21:543 (6,1) - ) Fixed
00:27:405 (6,7,9) - Same as 00:18:631 Same as 00:18:631
00:33:824 (1) - Move the slider end up to x:121 y:200 so it blankets better with the next slider, looks better imo Should be fixed due to how I moved the two sliders when I bumped SV
00:52:441 (5,6) - I'm pretty sure you could just put this note directly under the previous slider and osu would stack the note for you Same as 00:18:631...
01:00:359 (5) - Consider adding NC Added
01:09:345 (2) - Move to x:119 y:117, i think it looks better with previous slider Should be fixed from when I rearranged stuff
01:16:192 (3,4) - I don't really like this positioning, looks bad Should be fixed

[Normal]
It's kinda weird how your slider velocity for normal is higher than hard, but I guess that's okay I raised Hard's SV to 1.6. No complaining 4 u

[Easy]
Slider velocity seems a bit too high for easy For easy difficulties, I would recommend maybe 1.0x slider velocity and 1.0x distance snap. It's best of the velocity is the same as the spacing because that's easier to play Finally did it
00:32:326 (3) - Consider moving down by one grid mark Fixed
00:37:248 (1,3) - It would be kind of cool if you could blanket the first slider in the curve of the third one Tried to blanket
00:44:309 (1) - A clap hitsound work work well at the end of this slider Fixed
00:55:008 (1) - This slider isn't exactly symmetrical, it'd be pretty hard to make symmetrical though Fixed

Nice map, contact me later so you know when to sing! Shooting a PM right now. Well, at least it's Kin-iro Mosaic

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-03-31T15:47:23+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hi, Sorry for late ;w;

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:19:916 (5) - Add finish at the end slider. Purposely didn't do that.
00:52:441 (3) - Finish at the head slider. Purposely didn't do that.
00:55:008 (1) - Add finish. Doesn't sound too great on default hitsounds with that.
01:01:856 (1) - Looks little ugly, try make it more rounded for example.
SPOILER
Was completely revamped from Erina's mod, soz
01:15:550 (1) - Add finish. nope.avi
01:17:262 (3,4) - Move to x:224 y:130 for better blanket. Ninja'd again
01:21:970 (1) - Finish at the end slider. added
01:23:896 (3) - Add finish.
01:25:180 (1) - add finish at the end slider.
01:26:891 (2) - ^. Added this and the two above
01:27:533 (1) - Maybe you make spinner like in the normal diff? Got ninja'd

[Hard]
00:11:784 (4) - Add NC, also add finish at the head slider. Added NC
00:12:640 (6) - Finish here. Changed to 2 claps
00:17:990 (3) - Move to x:318 y:24 for better blanket. All of these ninjas btw are because of me changing the map because of bumping the SV to 1.6. Soz. Ninjad
00:20:344 (1) - Instead clap add finish. I think its fine
00:22:483 (6,7) - ^. Added finish to 7 but kept claps
00:27:405 (6) - NC Added NC at 5
00:29:117 (10) - Move to x:330 y:136. Ninjad
00:48:803 (2) - Move to x:300 y:270. Ninjad
00:53:082 (6) - Make perfect stack with end slider. Fixed, but next time you could possibly elaborate on a "perfect stack", since it's a bit vague (no offense). I did what I saw was a perfect stack
01:00:359 (5) - NC. Ninjaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa'd
01:27:533 (1) - Same suggestion about spinner as easy. Got ninja'd again

Good luck~

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-03-31T20:53:42+00:00

Thanks Sonico.

The whistles instead of finishes for the one section is intentional. The first one actually has finishes playing in the background while that doesn't, so I used whistles instead.

About the finish at the end of the song. I'm still not sure I want to put that there because a normal hit makes more sense to the music instead.

Thanks for the mod though, no changes atm.

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-04-03T05:19:12+00:00

hi xVirtualNinjax~ M4M as promised
I'm very gald you did this map, it led me back to childhood

[General]

click G key to make your grid meticulous.

[Hard]

some suggestion for your hard diff: you may check drum sound in this song. like 00:19:916 - 00:20:130 -
The map may be played inconsistent when it only map with lyric. so hear it clearly then put objects, your map would be great improved.
00:11:356 - add finish on object at this time point
00:27:405 (2) - hear it clear~it should be end at 00:27:833 - , and suggest add circle at00:28:047 -
try this
00:29:117 (7) - and blanket well~
click
00:29:759 - add circle at this time point, it isn't very hard to hear a drum sound
00:31:899 - need to add circle too
00:32:754 (3) - I know what your mean here, but this background sound last to 00:34:680 - so i suggest not to put a reverse slider here. just ignore them then map this part with lyric
00:35:322 - 00:35:750 -00:37:034 - add circles for this drum sound
00:39:388 - 00:39:495 - loss two drum sounds here
00:43:239 - this lyric sound in the mid of slider, how about reverse or separate into slider+circle
00:40:886 (1) - I finally suggest not to overlap here.(because it is hard to read and it isn't looked very good. so just try this?
try this
00:43:881 - loss a circle
00:47:305 - 00:48:161 (1) - loss two sound, here suggest to do like this
try this
00:50:729 - loss a circle
00:53:511 -00:53:618 - suggest add two circles
00:58:004 - loss a drum sound
01:00:144 - loss a circle
01:00:572 - this part you put a long slider here, but loss a drum in mid of it.
01:01:107 - here also loss a sound here
01:03:995 (6,7) - this two in wrong time point, 01:03:995 (6) - should be at 01:03:889 - ; 01:04:423 (7) - should be at 01:04:210 -
01:04:424 - 01:04:744 - 01:05:065 - loss
01:08:275 - 01:11:271 - 01:18:118 - 01:20:900 - 01:21:007 - 01:21:114 - 01:21:328 - 01:24:324 - 01:24:431 - 01:26:035 - ^

[Lanturn's Normal]

control this map star ratting, normal is also a diff for news, so suggest hp-1 ar-1 od-2
nice mapped~ just put a slidertick sounds like this slider? 00:58:860 - 01:02:284 -
01:00:144 -add a note at these time point? feel it is played more fluent.

[Esay]

00:34:038 (1) - do not do that~ it must be unsuitable. start a slider at 00:33:824 - then end it as you did.
00:35:536 (3) - this circle should not be mapped with lyric, move to 00:35:750 - for player friendly
00:38:746 (3) - redo this slider, this shape is kinda...
00:48:803 - hard to catch imo. try this?
click

that's all, good luck~

Last edited by Selisi 2014-04-03T06:09:02+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-04-03T05:27:16+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[Lanturn's Normal]
control this map star ratting, normal is also a diff for news, so suggest hp-1 ar-1 od-2 I'd have lower difficulty settings than the easy, and that isn't acceptable. Plus 454 is a standard normal setting these days. also most normals are 4 to 4 1/2 stars as well XD The lower bpm helps.
nice mapped~ just put a slidertick sounds like this slider? 00:58:860 - 01:02:284 - I used the standard hitsound set for this, and there are lots of parts I skip the standard clap for. This doesn't take away from the song since I mostly map to the vocals instead of the drums.
01:00:144 -add a note at these time point? feel it is played more fluent. I'm not also fond of a note here as well. I'm following the guitar here with the beat fill on the clap. I think it's actually easier to follow how it currently is.

Thanks for the mod.

Made some changes

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sailor Moon Opening (English) -HD-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

[Metadata]
Title:Sailor Moon Theme
TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BeatmapID:385013
BeatmapSetID:140903

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,79,"Sailor Moon Theme.avi"
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-04-03T15:10:06+00:00

Thx for the mod Sweet!

My internet went down about 95% of the way through your mod, so I can't give you a mod reply. Sorry! I did use some, but didn't use others.

Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2014-04-03T21:13:26+00:00

From queue, ticket!
Only most general things.

[Hard]
00:10:073 (1,2) - Stack (2) correctly with trail of (1)
00:10:930 (3) - This note will sounds great with normal sampleset.
00:13:924 (1,2) - Curve that sliders
00:10:073 (1) - Try to not making sliders that end is ends on bigger than others white lines. It's very important moment in song so don't do it.
00:16:492 - Add note with drums
00:16:706 - ^
00:19:916 - ^
00:20:130 - ^
Please go with drums, not always with vocals.
01:16:192 (3,4,1,2,4,1,2,4,1,2,3) - Unsnapped trails

[Easy]
00:52:013 (2,3) - DS
00:52:441 (3,4) - DS
Please, use distance snap.
AR-
HP--
OD--

It's opening? If yes, add video and (TV Size) to title.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-04-03T21:16:17+00:00

This is the full version of the song, so no TV Size is needed.

And the video should already be there.

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-03T23:38:38+00:00

Hi hi hi ~

[General]

Clean

[Hard]

Check this first:
hue
00:41:742 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:42:170 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:42:598 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:44:310 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:46:021 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:46:449 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:49:445 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:50:943 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:52:441 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:53:938 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:53:938 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:362 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:14:695 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:695 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:695 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:695 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:14:695 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:16:834 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:18:332 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:18:760 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:19:830 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:21:756 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:22:184 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:254 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:180 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:608 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:249 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
AR8 doesn't fit this map, use AR7, since you don't have big jumps or big spacing :l
Also OD7 is too much for a hard diff, go with 6
00:10:073 (1,2) - kinda nazi but stack this properly, actually is abit hard to read with DT , also try to avoid the overlap 00:10:073 (1,2,3) -
00:14:566 (2,3) - you have some more bad stacks like this one, try to fix them
00:18:631 (4,5,6) - use the same distance between them, will be more comfortable to play IMO
00:20:772 (2,3) - there are also some blankets like this one, that can be better
00:24:195 (3,4,5) - also you have a lot of spacing inconsistent :l, I'll like if you take a look in your diff and improve it a bit
00:27:405 (2,3,4) - for example here, the distance from 2 to 3 look like 1/4 but is 1/2
00:32:754 (3,1) - try to use a properly distance here, since the flow and the jump are not suitable for a hard diff IMO
00:35:108 (4,5) - I know you're following the vocals, but ignoring all the dowbeats is not ok for me, try this:
01:00:144 (5,1) - take a look about spacing and blanket here
01:03:567 (5) - missing NC, I suppose
01:03:567 (5,6,7,8) - this should be 1/3 I think, try this:
01:11:271 (6,7) - spacing~
01:14:695 (1) - this sound really overmaped, there is not 1/4 in the music, just 1/2
01:15:979 (2,3,4,5) - spacing~
01:26:890 (4,5,6) - this stacks are kinda bored and doesn't fit the music, since you should add some jumps here, to represent the high vocal pitch

[Normal]

00:15:636 (1,1) - nazi, stack this properly hue
00:17:990 (2,3) - same here, you have more, not sure if is on purpose, anyways I don't think is noticeable in game so up to you
00:30:829 (1,2) - mmm I don't like how this flow, try this:
SPOILER
00:44:309 (1,2,3) - are you sure about the triple stack? I kinda don't agree with this in normal diffs, since is more easy to play if you space them properly
00:47:305 add a circle? to be consistent with 00:47:733 (3) - , also will be more comfortable to play IMO
01:03:568 (1) - about this one I'll prefer a 1/1 slider, the sound at 01:03:996 - is really important IMO

[Easy]

Your diff settings are not suitable for an easy diff, try AR3 OD2 HP2
00:51:585 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:13:924 (1,2) - convert this in a slider? since is more easy to play, due to sliders doesn't require to hit in time to get 300, but circles does, so for this reason is better to start with sliders instead of circles
00:15:208 (3,4) - avoid using stacks on easy diffs, since new players can't read them
00:15:637 (4) - there is not way to know how many repeats this have, remove one and add a circle instead
00:22:482 (3,4) - same as 00:15:208
00:26:763 (1,1) - same here too, also you don't need to spam combos
00:33:824 (4) - missing NC, I suppose
00:38:746 (3) - I preffer a spinner here, like Laturn did

GL

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-04-04T00:47:51+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi hi hi ~

[Normal]
00:15:636 (1,1) - nazi, stack this properly hue This lost its stack when the bpm altered slightly.. I swear! ;_;
00:17:990 (2,3) - same here, you have more, not sure if is on purpose, anyways I don't think is noticeable in game so up to you yeah, fixed this and the other.
00:30:829 (1,2) - mmm I don't like how this flow, try this: I tried something else, but I agree with what you said. that slider replaced something else awhile back and I couldn't figure out how to make it fit
00:44:309 (1,2,3) - are you sure about the triple stack? I kinda don't agree with this in normal diffs, since is more easy to play if you space them properly Totally certain about this one. SAY LOR MARRRRRSS. easy to follow for normal.
00:47:305 add a circle? to be consistent with 00:47:733 (3) - , also will be more comfortable to play IMO Let's see how long this one lasts before people tell me to delete it :3
01:03:568 (1) - about this one I'll prefer a 1/1 slider, the sound at 01:03:996 - is really important IMO I really disagree with this. During this whole section I follow the Guitar and this marks the end of it. the guitar works out perfectly playing in 1/3 and connects well with the next slider. I'm extremely happy with how this is currently

Kaboom

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sailor Moon Opening (English) -HD-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13159
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.536

[Metadata]
Title:Sailor Moon Theme
TitleUnicode:Sailor Moon Theme
Artist:Nicole & Brynne Price
ArtistUnicode:Nicole & Brynne Price
Creator:xVirtualNinjax
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:Sailor Moon
Tags:Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BeatmapID:385013
BeatmapSetID:140903

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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400,252,64424,2,0,P|420:296|476:336,2,100,2|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,172,65279,6,0,L|472:96,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,66135,2,0,L|392:4,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,66777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,168,66991,6,0,L|148:168,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,67419,2,0,L|28:120,1,75,8|12,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
208,36,68275,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,80,68703,6,0,B|384:108|384:108|372:160|412:208,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,236,69345,2,0,B|400:292|400:292|360:272|304:296,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,69987,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,268,70415,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,336,70843,2,0,B|1:236|82:171|82:171|94:95|163:66,1,300,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
201,181,72127,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,232,72555,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,232,72769,2,0,P|386:303|460:220,1,225,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,73839,6,0,P|412:76|312:68,1,150,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,144,74695,2,0,P|154:140|93:97,1,150,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,75550,6,0,B|280:20|280:60|368:40,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
408,28,76192,2,0,P|408:96|460:168,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,76834,2,0,L|420:292,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,292,77262,5,2,0:0:0:0:
289,213,77690,2,0,B|188:184|188:272|67:236,1,225,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,184,78546,2,0,L|48:96,1,75,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,78974,6,0,P|160:80|240:64,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,184,79830,2,0,L|100:184,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,300,80472,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,324,81114,6,0,P|424:348|496:324,2,150,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,82184,1,0,3:0:0:0:
264,236,82398,6,0,P|184:212|112:236,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,332,83254,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,332,83468,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,236,83896,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,148,84538,6,0,P|385:85|314:93,1,150,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,85180,2,0,L|256:-4,2,75,2|4|0,0:0|0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,91,85822,6,0,P|125:85|92:148,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,86891,2,0,L|256:304,2,75,2|2|2,0:0|3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87961,12,0,90369,1:0:0:0:

thank you baka Natsu <3

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2014-04-04T01:09:31+00:00

Hey

[Hard]

00:10:716 (2) - The note isn't stack properly with 00:10:073 (1) - slider-end. Try make it distance 0.00x.
00:14:566 (2) - The finish hitsound at here is unnecessary, whistle will be better imo.
00:15:208 (3) - same as above, try stack properly.
00:17:348 (2,3) - It will be more beautiful if you do something like this:

SPOILER

00:20:772 (2,3) - Blanket properly please.
00:22:055 (4) - stack properly.
00:28:261 (4) - How about blanket with 00:28:047 (3) - this note?
00:29:117 (6) - The clap at slider-end is so weird, I did prefer whistle.
00:56:720 (5) - I think you can blanker properly with 00:57:362 (6) -
01:00:144 (5,1) - ^
01:01:107 - how about add a note at here? it's have a drum sound.
01:16:192 (3) - Slider-end didn't snap properly at red line.

Generally I think your hitsound isn't assign properly, you should look more maps.
and I think the Hard could be more hard imo.

[Lanturn's Normal]

Solid Normal, but I think AR is too slow, how about +1?

[Easy]

00:19:060 (4,5) - The slider is ugly imo...I prefer curve slider than this.
00:26:763 (1,1,2) - Blanket properly.

Nothing wrong at all, just hitsound too.

Good Luck.

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-04-04T06:46:06+00:00

Just look at the hard diff, and I think this map aren't ready for rank, even ready for mods though. In my opinion, the hard diff is a mess. Perhaps you'd try to use the same spacing to place every objects to make it much cleaner. For example, 00:12:854 (4,5) - is 1/1 rhythm, but the distance between them shows like the rhythm is 1/2 (or even shorter). That would confuse the player, they can't even follow the rhythm to click the objects because those objects didn't be placed like "there's a rhythm". It's just something really random and no one will no which time they should beat it. For some more examples about this issue, 00:35:536 (5,6) - the spacing reduced in an awkward way, 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - suddenly the spacing comes bigger and smaller afterwards, 00:54:366 (3,1) - the rhythm is really weird, that (3) just ended at the blue tick.

Hope you'll get something and get your map better.

btw, you should add a new combo at 01:03:567 (5) - because the rhythm changes, so the players will know it.

Good luck on your future map, learn something from other people's map might be a great decision you'd like to go.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-04-04T07:32:10+00:00

AR might seem a bit low, but its probably best to leave it at 5 so it balances the difficulty out. I don't think the normal should be any harder than it already is ;_;

thanks Mintong!

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-04-04T14:22:49+00:00

Hi horrible guesser OwO

EASY

00:15:637 (4) - double repeats aren't recommended in easy diffs

00:25:051 (3,4) - Combine into a slider? (4) is quite hard to hit imo (also, even if you don't, put a finish on 00:25:693 )

00:27:619 (2) - This is much neater

00:33:824 (4) - NC?

01:19:830 (2,3) - Same as above, comb into slider

01:23:254 (2,3) - ^

So this is what sailor moon has been all about......

NORMAL

No problems

HARD

00:10:716 (2) - Stack is not perfect. move right

00:22:055 (4) - ^

00:28:047 (3) - Inconsistent spacing. Very obvious and ugly

00:35:108 (4,5,6) - Spacing between 4 and 5 is more than 5 and 6. should be the other way round

00:54:366 (3) - Extend till 00:54:794

01:03:889 (6,7,8) - Don't find this jump nice

that's all ^^ Hope I helped~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

desudesud 2014-04-04T15:10:04+00:00

Should be updated with everyone's mod.

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-04-04T17:09:56+00:00

[Hard]

from my friend

[Lanturn]

00:32:754 (1) - hmm what about this shape http://puu.sh/7VN6u.jpg so it can blanket well. like you did on 01:10:843 (2)
00:47:305 (3) - hmm is this slider too weird for normal diff? :X 1/4 slider and too short, maybe just note instead?

[Easy]

00:13:924 (1) - add finish on head with about 24% volume.
00:16:920 (4,1) - move them for 1.00x spacing instead?
00:19:916 (5) - ^
00:19:916 (5) - add finish on tail.
hmm change all of note to be 1.00x spacing for make balance in the easiest diff. so the beginner won't confuse to it.

good luck :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-04-04T17:54:56+00:00

oh you pan

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