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Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme

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desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 02, 2014 at 8:18:46 PM

Artist: Nicole & Brynne Price
Title: Sailor Moon Theme
Source: Sailor Moon
Tags: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn
BPM: 140.2
Filesize: 11929kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Hard (2.61 stars, 168 notes)
  3. Lanturn's Normal (1.69 stars, 115 notes)
Download: Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme
Download: Nicole & Brynne Price - Sailor Moon Theme (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Map ever going for Ranked! (jeez this is old)

Sailor Moon Theme Song
Easy by xVirtualNinjax
Normal by Lanturn
Hard by xVirtualNinjax
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Last edited by desudesud , edited 65 times in total.
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Hey, Mod.
sorry, Know i maybe know why peeps don't want to mod your map. :o

[General]
Offest Should be 9791
Kiai should be from 00:40:584 to 00:54:270.
Remove letterbox during breaks.
Try to find the real name of the song. Not Sailor Moon Theme song. I researched and I think it's Moonlight Densetsu, not sure.

[Venusl]
You're following too much the vocals, and not respecting DS. Avoid using red & blue tick.
00:16:634 (5) - New Combo
00:50:849 (5) - New combo
00:57:371 (4,5,6,7) - Don't use blue tick.
00:59:510 (5,6,7) - Not timed correctly. Also for 5 you should NC.

[Mars]
Difficulty are too high. CS sould be 3, AR 4-5 and HP, OD 3-5. Also follow DS.
Too much overlapping like these for a Normal difficulty. 1 or 2 two is fine, but not the entire song. 00:55:981 (3,4)
00:41:867 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:289 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:175 (2) - Not timed correctly!
00:57:371 (5) - Not timed correctly
01:04:641 (5,6) - Both not timed currently and add NC for the 5

[Moon]
I think it's your best diff. You can skip DS.
Some note are not timed correctly. Try finding them out yourself.

You're probably a new mapper, and yay :P , I'd like to make a map. You won't mind if I make a diff?
If yes, please tell me which diff. :oops:

Hopes I helped you :D Good luck!
BigWilly
214 posts
Joined October 2013
BigWilly
[Venus]

00:16:634 (1) - overlaps with slider 00:18:345 (4) -
00:16:634 (1,2,3) - put 2 and 3 on the same y axis
00:20:697 (2,3,4) - Timing
SPOILER
00:26:685 (2) - Change all red Points in the Slider to Grey Points (Do this by right Clicking)
Try to make it look something like this
SPOILER
00:41:868 (1) - Place closer to the end of 00:40:585 (2) - The jump is pretty hard atm
00:57:477 (4) - Make this a Long Sweeping curve.
01:01:113 (4) - Make symmterical. Sort out end. remove Red Point

[Mars]

00:11:073 (4,5,6) - Make sure the Overlapped Circles are accurate
00:13:211 (1,2) - ^
00:23:048 (2,3) - ^
00:26:683 (3) - Remove Red Point in Slider
00:29:678 (1) - Make Slider Neater

Good Luck
Raisa12
330 posts
Joined January 2013
Raisa12
Hi! this is my mod
diff Venus
had to write so much better xD do this: open file and select open. osu one Notepad

Hence paste this: http://puu.sh/6r8GZ
diff Mars
00:09:897 (2) - move this circle 00:10:004 also in that circle and add remove Clap whistle
00:12:143 (5) - add whistle
00:24:973 (6) - add finish
00:27:967 (4,5) - try this http://puu.sh/6r9Nm.jpg
00:33:527 - add circle
00:33:741 - ^
00:56:622 - ^
00:56:836 - ^
diff Moon
00:37:483 (5) - move this circle 00:37:697
I find not more problems on This diff
luck with your map ~ :)
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz
Easy/Venus
Use 1/2 beat divisor for easy, or don't use blue ticks. You also need consistent distance snapping. The timing is very, very confusing otherwise. Try 0.6x to 0.8x distance spacing. For easy/normal diffs, try to stick to the beat instead of the vocals. This retains flow in the song and makes it overall easier to play. Some variation is good, however.
I'm having much better timing with 140.25 BPM and 13,160 offset.

00:13:854 (2) - Push this over to the next white tick. Alternatively, if you still want this to land on the red tick, make 00:13:212 (1) - a slider
that lands on the red tick.
00:16:621 (1) - Move so it's not overlapping the previous slider
00:18:332 (4) - Overlap, also reconsider slider shape
00:20:685 (2) - Might want to make this a curved slider. imo completely straight vertical/horizontal sliders are ugly in a lot of cases, only sometimes they can look good.
00:21:655 (3) - Push over to white tick.
00:26:461 (2) - Push back to the white tick, consider making this a symmetrical slider. The shape looks off.
00:30:097 (4) - Might want to make this a curved slider, or making it a wave slider.
00:51:701 (3) - Make this slider end on the red tick before it.
00:54:268 (1) - Make this slider end on the white tick after it.
00:57:477 (4) - Reconsider shape. Try using only three points and making it symmetrical.
01:11:380 (5,6) - Separate these and make the first slider end on the red tick. Make NC at 5.
01:12:664 (7) - Push this back to the white tick.
01:29:562 (1) - You could probably remove this and save it for harder diffs.

I didn't cover every single fine detail with this, try to identify similar problems to the ones above with other parts of the song.

Normal/Mars
Use 9309 offset for this one. The entire map is a mess of improper distance spacing. Please reposition everything with around 0.8x distance spacing.

00:09:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Redo this entire part with proper distance spacing and with the new offset.
00:13:159 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest spacing these apart, along with the ones coming after it. This kind of style can be saved for a harder difficulty.
00:26:635 (3) - Try not to use crazy slider points like this :P Consider reshaping.
00:29:630 (1) - Also consider reshaping.
00:33:053 (1,2,3) - Add something in the middle of these to keep rhythm.
01:11:341 (6) - New combo, and also make this land on the red tick.

Moon
Use offset 9309.
Change CS to 4.
00:00:060 (1) - Get rid of this spinner, or make it start later. That's an awful long time to be spinning at the start of the song.

In my honest opinion, I would remap this difficulty with the new offset + BPM.

Good luck! Hope I provided good insight, I tried not to be too critical :P
TAIN
168 posts
Joined January 2012
TAIN
Hi ~

I beginner of modding. :)

You can ignore my suggestion. :D


<Common>

1. Distance is not correct.

2. View > Grid Level > 4

3. The timing is not correct.


Easy(Venus)

00:20:697 (2) - Slider 00:21:338 - Here ends.
00:26:257 (1) - Circle 00:26:470 - Move here.
00:26:684 (2) - Slider 00:26:898 - ^
00:29:679 (3,4,5,6) - ^
↓
collapsed text

00:48:068 (2) - Circle 00:48:282 - Move here.
00:50:208 (3) - Circle 00:50:420 - ^
00:54:271 (1) - Slider 00:55:553 - Here ands.
00:57:477 (4) - Slider 00:57:691 - Here start , 00:58:974 - Here ands.
00:59:723 (1) - Circle 00:59:829 - Move here.
01:01:113 (4) - Slider 01:02:396 - Here ands.
01:08:704 (2) - Circle 01:08:811 - Move here.
01:11:378 (5) - Slider 01:11:805 - Here ands.
01:11:913 (6) - Slider 01:12:232 - Here start , 01:12:660 - Here ands.
01:13:088 - Circle placement.
01:13:622 (7) - Slider 01:13:515 - Here start , 01:13:943 - Here ands.
01:15:440 (2) - Slider 01:15:654 - ^ , 01:16:082 - ^


Mars

00:09:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm ( 2 combo Deletion )
↓
collapesd text

00:20:696 (3) - Slider 00:20:910 - Here start , 00:21:338 - Here ands.
00:24:973 (6) - Circle 00:25:187 - Move Here.
00:25:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm.
↓
collapsed text

00:53:735 (1,2,3) - this rhythm.
↓
collapsed text


Moon


Overall, the timing is not correct.

Because it omits too many enemies crossed out.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Random info mod here because I <3 Sailor Moon

When you get all this fixed and such, and feel confident your map is ready to go. Give me another shout and I'll come mod it. I would also be happy to do a GD (Normal I guess since you have an Easy/Hard and I hate Insanes) as well if you want.

[General]

Mp3 File: The mp3 file you use is extremely low quality. Try using the direct rip from the offical CD instead of from a youtube rip. -> http://puu.sh/7qIxn.mp3
Try about a 207 offset. I haven't tested it but it should be pretty close to correct.

Video File: Your video file is a wmv (avi or flv is required) and has sound. Please use this one: http://puu.sh/7qKDk.avi
I'm not sure of the offset for this since I haven't tested, but it shouldn't be hard to figure out.

Title: Sailor Moon Theme <-- This is honestly the name of the song. Moonlight Densetsu is the Japanese version this song is based off of but it isn't called it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Sa ... _TV_Series

Tags:
Tetsuya Komoro (Composer, and a very important person to all of the English Sailor Moon soundtrack) | http://puu.sh/7qJCq.jpg
Bob Summers (He mixed this song, basically the arranger and also preformed it.) | see screenshot above.
Opening (Opening to the Anime)
Songs from the Hit TV Series (Album name)

Consider adding stuff like Bishoujo Senshi and Moonlight Densetsu to the tags as well since this show is originally from Japan.

Also consider changing your preview point to where "Fighting Evil by Moonlight" is as it makes more sense in the preview to start there.

One final thing. You will probably have to change your difficulty names to something easier to understand. Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Moon. All these diffs can be arranged in any order so it won't pass because people won't be able to understand at a glance what is the hardest difficulty. Simple Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane will be your best bet unless you can come up with a theme that can be understood easily what the easiest and hardest difficulties will be.
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Lanturn wrote:

le snip
Thanks! I won't be able to change it right now atm, but I'm definitely gonna take all of your suggestions.
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Lanturn wrote:

Random info mod here because I <3 Sailor Moon

When you get all this fixed and such, and feel confident your map is ready to go. Give me another shout and I'll come mod it. I would also be happy to do a GD (Normal I guess since you have an Easy/Hard and I hate Insanes) as well if you want.

[General]

Mp3 File: The mp3 file you use is extremely low quality. Try using the direct rip from the offical CD instead of from a youtube rip. -> http://puu.sh/7qIxn.mp3 Should be fixed/color]
Try about a 207 offset. I haven't tested it but it should be pretty close to correct.

Video File: Your video file is a wmv (avi or flv is required) and has sound. Please use this one: http://puu.sh/7qKDk.avi [color=#00FF00Should be fixed[/color]
I'm not sure of the offset for this since I haven't tested, but it shouldn't be hard to figure out.

Title: Sailor Moon Theme <-- This is honestly the name of the song. Moonlight Densetsu is the Japanese version this song is based off of but it isn't called it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Sa ... _TV_Series Changed

Tags:
Tetsuya Komoro (Composer, and a very important person to all of the English Sailor Moon soundtrack) | http://puu.sh/7qJCq.jpg
Bob Summers (He mixed this song, basically the arranger and also preformed it.) | see screenshot above.
Opening (Opening to the Anime)
Songs from the Hit TV Series (Album name)

Consider adding stuff like Bishoujo Senshi and Moonlight Densetsu to the tags as well since this show is originally from Japan.
Added

Also consider changing your preview point to where "Fighting Evil by Moonlight" is as it makes more sense in the preview to start there.Changed

One final thing. You will probably have to change your difficulty names to something easier to understand. Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Moon. All these diffs can be arranged in any order so it won't pass because people won't be able to understand at a glance what is the hardest difficulty. Simple Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane will be your best bet unless you can come up with a theme that can be understood easily what the easiest and hardest difficulties will be.Changed
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
I did a bit more testing. Mostly while making my diff. The BPM is actually 140.20. You can tell because it starts getting off sync pretty badly near the end.

My diff is about 70% done so sometime tomorrow it'll be good to go. Or should be at least.
AstralPhnx
302 posts
Joined April 2012
AstralPhnx
Right, so for easy I see a few things

Firstly, Some of the circle placement looks kind of odd. E.g 00:22:464 and how its placed a little to the right of the slider. I have never seen that done before and it just looks a little weird. It may not me major though.

Secondly, the circle at 00:31:662 was one I didn't even see when playing through the map the first time. It could catch a newbe off guard.
Thirdly and most importantly the timing. I notice that the song is timed so most if not all of your beats are placed on a blue tick. This again is odd. It may be a better idea to retime the song so that most beats start on white ticks instead of blue ones.
Also the sliders at 00:41:340 could be replaced by a slider with less repeats. Its not major though so its your choice.

Hard mode.

First thing to note, slider at 00:12:196. Its hidden under another slider. That is a massive no no. You just don't do that in mapping. If a slider is hidden under another slider directly then the map probably won't be ranked.
That repeat slider at 00:28:025 sounds misstimed and doesn't go with the music. Its also not very practical. You could get the same effect with stacked hit circles.
Unessisary new combo at 00:32:089
The sliders and circles from 00:37:223 to 00:37:864 are oddly placed and really confusing. Don't be afraid to spread out your circles and sliders a bit
00:41:715 Another slider hidden under a slider. Like I said thats a big no no. That should never be done when designing beatmaps.
Slider at 00:58:185 overlaps the previous slider. Again bit no no.
Combo at 01:14:656 is unnessisarily long.
Another slider hidden under a slider from 01:21:715 to 01:22:142
Slider at 01:30:271 is unessisary. If you just end the song after the spinner it would work fine.

Overall easy looks fine but hard needs a lot of work. I suggest you go look at hard mode and compare it to other current hard mode maps that have been ranked.
I also reccomend you check out the ranking criteria article on the osu wiki as it will tell you all the do's and don'ts when it comes to beatmapping

I wish you the best of luck
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Alright let's fix this a bit.

For now, Adjust the offset to 230 so all your notes get set properly to white and red ticks instead of blue.

In your Tags, Delete them all, and use the following: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn | Do not put commas to seperate them and a few other things such as the Artist/Title/Source shouldn't be in the tags as they're duplicates. Anime/English which is what the song will be classified as, shouldn't be in it as well. So just copy/paste the bold, and you're set

My difficulty can be found here. Right click from this page, save as, and save it into the song's folder.

My difficulty should be mostly ready. Stuff like the Kiai time can be sorted out after.
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Lanturn wrote:

Alright let's fix this a bit.

For now, Adjust the offset to 230 so all your notes get set properly to white and red ticks instead of blue.

In your Tags, Delete them all, and use the following: Moonlight Densetsu Bishoujo Senshi Opening Songs from the Hit TV Series Bob Summers Tetsuya Komoro Lanturn | Do not put commas to seperate them and a few other things such as the Artist/Title/Source shouldn't be in the tags as they're duplicates. Anime/English which is what the song will be classified as, shouldn't be in it as well. So just copy/paste the bold, and you're set

My difficulty can be found here. Right click from this page, save as, and save it into the song's folder.

My difficulty should be mostly ready. Stuff like the Kiai time can be sorted out after.
Fixed offset, tags, and added your diff (seems pretty good to me, I can talk to u l8r about where we can put the Kiai)
Phos-
773 posts
Joined December 2012
Phos-
Hi there o/ Modding this because you modded mine :> I'm still a new modder so I might not spot much.

General

No problems found :D

Easy

00:22:482 (3,4) - Move to x:192 y:336
00:23:446 (1) - I really don't think this spinner is necessary, since you can still hear the vocals.
00:30:829 (4) - Move to x:144 y:152
00:37:248 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:960 (1) - and shorten it to 00:40:458 (1) -
00:41:314 (2) - Beginners might not know when to let go of this slider.
00:58:219 (4) - Move to 00:58:432 (4) -
01:01:429 (2) - ew reposition this so it's not right in front of the slider track.

Lanturn's Normal

00:19:916 (3) - Move to x:398 y:71

That's all I could find in this diff lol

Hard

00:20:344 (1) - Move this further
00:32:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Turning this into a stream would be much better,
00:44:310 (1) - Move this further away from 00:43:025 (5) - because the overlap is very ugly
01:09:345 (2) - Consider turning this into a nice looking pattern rather than just a stack of sliders
01:14:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn this into stream?

Well that's it. Good luck with getting this ranked and have fun~
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Knotts
Here from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support on the Insane and Easy difficulties since you don't have a storyboard.
[Easy]
  1. I can't really mod this difficulty as it is now. You need to have constant DS throughout this difficulty.
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:026 (2) - make this a shorter slider that ends on the white tick and make it repeating to follow what you did previously.
  2. 00:44:309 (1,2,3) - I think you should avoid using stacks like this in a normal.
  3. 00:47:305 - add a circle here?
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:073 (1) - end this slider on the white tick.
  2. 00:27:405 (6) - ^
  3. 00:32:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this streams too long for a hard. you could use a repeating slider instead?
  4. 00:34:466 (3) - make this a slider that extends to the white tick?
  5. 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking these on top of each other, you should space them out to make it more enjoyable to play and more attractive
  6. 00:40:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  7. 00:46:021 (5,6,7) - 00:46:021
  8. 00:48:161 (1,2,3) - you could use blankets for better flow and to make it look nicer.
    screenshot
  9. 00:50:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much stacking, hard to read. Spread them out.
  10. 00:56:720 (6) - End slider on the white tick
  11. 00:58:218 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this
    screenshot
  12. 01:08:703 (1,2) - this isn't really good flow. Too much stacking. Use curved sliders more.
  13. 01:12:127 (1) - remove nc?
  14. 01:14:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really hear a stream here. You should replace with sliders.
  15. 01:21:542 (6) - remove NC and start it at 01:21:756 (1)?
  16. 01:22:184 (2) - move this a little so its not touching (1)?
  17. 01:24:538 (6,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard to read and play, spread them out.
Good luck
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi there o/ Modding this because you modded mine :> I'm still a new modder so I might not spot much. :o Wow, thanks for the mod, I didn't even ask for one in return! :)

General

No problems found :D awesome

Easy

00:22:482 (3,4) - Move to x:192 y:336 Moved x to 192, but moved y to 340 instead. For the easy diff, I want the beginner to know that there is more circles after the slider, and a stack may make it too hard for them to notice
00:23:446 (1) - I really don't think this spinner is necessary, since you can still hear the vocals. I think it fits as is.
00:30:829 (4) - Move to x:144 y:152 Fixed
00:37:248 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:960 (1) - and shorten it to 00:40:458 (1) I think it's fine how it is atm
00:41:314 (2) - Beginners might not know when to let go of this slider. Fixed it in a way that's hard to put in words
00:58:219 (4) - Move to 00:58:432 (4) -
01:01:429 (2) - ew reposition this so it's not right in front of the slider track. Fixed

Hard

00:20:344 (1) - Move this further Fixed
00:32:861 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Turning this into a stream would be much better, Went with Knott's idea of a repeating slider
00:44:310 (1) - Move this further away from 00:43:025 (5) - because the overlap is very ugly Fixed
01:09:345 (2) - Consider turning this into a nice looking pattern rather than just a stack of sliders Fixed
01:14:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn this into stream? Went with Knott's idea again

Well that's it. Good luck with getting this ranked and have fun~ Thanks! Good luck to you, too!
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Knotts wrote:

Here from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support on the Insane and Easy difficulties since you don't have a storyboard. Fixed
[Easy]
  1. I can't really mod this difficulty as it is now. You need to have constant DS throughout this difficulty. Don't really see what you mean by not having a constant DS here.

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:073 (1) - end this slider on the white tick. Fixed
  2. 00:27:405 (6) - ^ ^
  3. 00:32:861 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this streams too long for a hard. you could use a repeating slider instead? Yep, fixed
  4. 00:34:466 (3) - make this a slider that extends to the white tick? Fixed
  5. 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking these on top of each other, you should space them out to make it more enjoyable to play and more attractive Fixed
  6. 00:40:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
  7. 00:46:021 (5,6,7) - 00:46:021 00:46:021 indeed? I have no clue what you mean, I'm assuming you didn't finish what you were going to put for 5,6,7
  8. 00:48:161 (1,2,3) - you could use blankets for better flow and to make it look nicer. Fixed it essentially the way you did, but made 3 a bit different
    screenshot
  9. 00:50:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much stacking, hard to read. Spread them out. Fixed
  10. 00:56:720 (6) - End slider on the white tick Fixed
  11. 00:58:218 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this I think it sounds like it should be fixed, so I did fix it
    screenshot
  12. 01:08:703 (1,2) - this isn't really good flow. Too much stacking. Use curved sliders more. Fixed
  13. 01:12:127 (1) - remove nc? Fine as is
  14. 01:14:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really hear a stream here. You should replace with sliders. Fixed
  15. 01:21:542 (6) - remove NC and start it at 01:21:756 (1)? Fine as is
  16. 01:22:184 (2) - move this a little so its not touching (1)? Fixed
  17. 01:24:538 (6,1,2,3,1,2) - Hard to read and play, spread them out.Fixed
Good luck
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Knotts
For your easy you're constantly changing the distance spacing. An example of this would be at 00:21:628 (2). Here you have 0.23x instead of your usual 0.4x.


I have no idea what I was writing for 00:46:021 (5,6,7), lol sorry about that.
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud

Knotts wrote:

For your easy you're constantly changing the distance spacing. An example of this would be at 00:21:628 (2). Here you have 0.23x instead of your usual 0.4x.


I have no idea what I was writing for 00:46:021 (5,6,7), lol sorry about that.
Icee (I see) :P

That should be fixed ASAP. Irreversible also brought that up during his IRC mod
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
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neonat
Insane

Rename it Hard
AR +1
00:11:785 (4) - NC
00:17:348 (2,3) - blanket? Something like this angle:
SPOILER
00:26:977 (5,6) - don't overlap
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^
00:40:886 (1) - remove NC
00:41:314 (2) - NC
00:43:025 (6) - NC
00:44:310 (1) - remove NC
00:44:738 (2) - NC
00:47:733 (1) - finish
00:51:585 (3) - ^
00:52:441 (5) - finish on both ends
00:53:082 (6) - finish
00:55:437 (3) - clap and continue putting clap for every 2 white lines
01:01:856 (1) - finish
01:08:703 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:15:550 (1) - finish
01:18:760 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:19:830 (4) - finish on both ends
01:20:471 (5) - finish
01:22:184 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:23:896 (5) - finish
01:25:608 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:27:319 (6) - finish
01:30:315 (1) - finish on end of slider

You don't always have to use constant distance spacing, the spacing is already very small as well. Try to use fewer linear flow, it isn't as smooth as it can be, fewer straight 1/2 sliders and all

Normal

00:25:051 (2,3) - add finishes
00:52:655 (3,4) - finish
01:19:830 (2,3) - finish
01:23:896 (4) - finish
01:26:891 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:27:961 (1) - softer audio finish

Good Luck
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
desudesud
[quote="neonat"]Insane
Will update the post as I start looking through the mod
Rename it Hard It is named hard.

AR +1 Done
00:11:785 (4) - NC I think it's good.
00:17:348 (2,3) - blanket? Something like this angle: Done
00:26:977 (5,6) - don't overlap Fixed
00:32:112 (1,2) - ^ Done
00:40:886 (1) - remove NC Nope
00:41:314 (2) - NC ^
00:43:025 (6) - NC ^
00:44:310 (1) - remove NC ^
00:44:738 (2) - NC ^
00:47:733 (1) - finish Fixed
00:51:585 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:52:441 (5) - finish on both ends Put claps on both ends
00:53:082 (6) - finish Fixed
00:55:437 (3) - clap and continue putting clap for every 2 white lines Fixed
01:01:856 (1) - finish Did a clap instead
01:08:703 (1) - finish on start of slider Fixed
01:15:550 (1) - finish Fixed
01:18:760 (2) - finish on end of slider Fixed
01:19:830 (4) - finish on both ends Claps instead
01:20:471 (5) - finish Fixed
01:22:184 (2) - finish on end of slider Fixed
01:23:896 (5) - finish Fixed
01:25:608 (2) - finish on end of slider Claps instead
01:27:319 (6) - finish Fixed
01:30:315 (1) - finish on end of slider Fixed

You don't always have to use constant distance spacing, the spacing is already very small as well. Try to use fewer linear flow, it isn't as smooth as it can be, fewer straight 1/2 sliders and all Definitely gonna fix this over time as more mods pour in
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pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
played this map and easily found things that needed fixing so i thought i would give you a free mod :P

as usual, if you don't want to change something, you don't need to. my mod is just lots of suggestions (many of which will be mentioned by other modders too i think :P)

Easy

- the distance spacing would be a lot better if it were larger. 0.7x would be best (or 0.6x if you don't want to change as much). it's nice to have some space between notes that are placed on white spaces, otherwise it feels like you're not even moving your mouse/pen, which is pretty boring. for an easy difficulty, it's highly recommended that you follow the distance spacing teh whole time, so if you do change the multiplier, you'll have to pretty much re-arrange your whole map (sorry)
00:21:628 (2) - start this on 00:21:414 red tick to keep consistency with the previous 2 times something like this played in the song
00:27:405 (2) - ends on an awkward note. it would be better to not have this be a reverse slider and instead do something else. the slider shape itself is also pretty unappealing -- this could help with that: t/37194
00:46:021 (1) - it's also highly recommended that you don't include reverse sliders of 1/2 length which include multiple reverses on easy difficulties. new players have terrible reaction time and can't tell when the note is going to end like this
00:49:445 - include a note here. when the same rhythm played in the song prior there was a note every time
00:53:083 (4) - don't overlap notes like this on easy difficulties (standard stacking excused)
00:58:432 (4) - not a great slider again, although better than the other one
01:00:358 - a note should definitely be here to introduce that part with the guitar. it's too empty otherwise
01:05:279 (1,2) - what i said about the reverse sliders earlier
01:12:127 (1) - i don't think that was meant to end on a blue tick
01:12:769 (2) - would be better if this ended on 01:13:411
01:17:262 (3,4) - blanket these better with 01:16:192 (2) like this. notice how it's the same distance from both ends of the slider and approach circle is sort of wrapping around the slider
nsfw
01:25:180 (1) - thing about reverse sliders again

it may also be good to include the spinner at the end so the difficulties all end at the same time

Normal

00:32:754 (1) - that slider is hot. need new pants
00:37:890 (1) - minor stuff on this - remove teh NC and have the slider end on the exact center so it's lined up with the upcoming spinner

other than that nothing i can really say :P

Insane

00:10:715 (2,3) - these 2 don't auto-stack very well since slider stuff is stupid. it would work better like this:
in editor
in game
00:21:414 (2) - this also doesn't stack very well automatically so you should change it accordingly yourself
00:26:549 (2,3,4) - these would be better if not on top of (5) since they're each 1/4 apart and (5) is 1/2 apart
00:27:405 (6) - could be blanketted with (5) better like
nsfw
00:32:113 (1) - blanket this with (2) just like above
00:34:252 (2) - doesn't stack very well automatically (it's underneath the slider entirely) so i'd suggest making that stack better manually
00:35:964 - feels like a note is missing here. just add a circle or something
00:47:733 (1) - remove NC. would be consistent with normal that way
00:53:083 (6) - auto-stacks right underneath the slider. would be better if manually stacked
00:57:362 (7) - could blanket better with (6)
00:58:432 (2) - stack the end of this slider with the beginning 00:57:362 (7) like this:
nsfw
01:04:424 (7) - stack this with (4) earlier in the combo
01:08:703 (1,2) - blanket these like you did at 01:12:127 (1,2)
01:11:699 (1) - remove NC (same reasoning as earlier)
01:15:978 (1) - remove NC for not the same reasoning as before
01:23:254 (4) - stack this with (2) earlier in the combo
01:26:891 (4) - add NC since the rest of the difficulties did so for the separating of "she was the one" and "sailor moon" in the song lyrics

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have fun with all of that. lantern should teach you how to make those sexy sliders :P
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