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Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)

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Pagno
175 posts
Joined September 2012
Pagno
Hello! From your queue~

~ Mod here ~
[General]
-I think you could add hitsounds at the first half of the map, the non-kiai part, by using hitwhistle at every note which matches the vocals
-The end of the spinners in all the difficulties should have Soft as sampleset and have a volume around 5%~10% since the music fades out a lot

[Easy]
Tickrate 1

Just a suggestion, in your next maps put the slider velocity at lower values for easier difficulties, it's quite hard for beginners to follow fast sliders

00:08:612 (3,1) - Add a hitcircle between those two

00:11:945 (4) - Put a slider long 2 beats with a reverse arrow


00:20:695 (4) - New Combo

00:28:195 (2,1) - Add hitcircle
01:14:029 (3,1) - ^

[Normal]
Tickrate 1

00:12:779 (7) - Convert this into a slider long 1 beat and place a hitcircle on the long white tick (and pheraps make it NewCombo)


00:15:279 (4,1) - Add a hitcircle between those two

00:18:612 (4) - Add a reverse arrow

00:43:612 (5,1) - Add two hitcircles between those two notes or place a single slider long 1 beat

01:10:904 (6) - Remove this hitcircle


[Hard]
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - In my opinion it would be nice if you placed those three beats as a shape, such as a triangle

00:25:279 (7) - I am quite sure that this slider should end on the red tick, not on the blue tick

00:48:612 (6,1) - Between those two notes, I think you should place a hitcircle on the white tick, or maybe make a pattern like this



00:51:945 (8,1,2) - Maybe remove all those sliders and remap this part using only jumpy hitcircles

01:26:320 (1) - Reduce hitsounds' volume at 5%~10%

Nice mapset! Good luck with ranking! o/
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust
SPOILER

Moway wrote:

Hi there.

[General]

Sounds like you have double BPM here. Change your BPM to 72, and be sure to double your SV so that your slider lengths are correct. In the mod I will try to avoid using terms like 1/1 to avoid confusion. Also, try offset 285. Your current one seems a bit early to me. EDIT: On further instruction from Moway, I went ahead and change bpm.

Some tag additions: 夏雪ランデブー, opening, summer, show Will add!


[Easy]

00:02:362 (1) - remove NC done
00:04:029 (3) - NC done
00:05:279 (1) - remove NC, this will make this section more consistent with the rest of this diff, and your other diffs for that matter. done
00:10:695 (2,3) - I think you can have (3) blanket (2) here, looks cleaner to me. done
00:11:945 (4) - leaving just the circle here and not mapping afterward leaves this section feeling really empty. This is how I would map this part: http://puu.sh/5b83C.jpg. This incorporates the piano parts and emphasizes the strongest points while at the same time being simple to play. was not thinking about doing this at first to keep with the difficulty spread overall, but i changed my mind after finishing the rest of your mod ^^
00:18:612 - you can use that same pattern here as well. not feeling it but I will consider
00:20:695 (4) - NC here for consistency with 00:14:029 (1). done
00:24:029 (2) - make this a copy of 00:23:195 (1) so that they fit together better. Would look just a bit cleaner this way. tried my best
00:33:612 (1,2,3) - consider making these blanket. I think it would look a bit nicer, and it seems like it wouldn't affect the flow of the section too much. http://puu.sh/5b7PJ.jpg done
00:48:612 - I think a slider fits here well http://puu.sh/5b8UX.jpg done
00:53:612 (1,2) - have (1) blanket (2), looks nice. done
00:56:945 (5,1) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat.
00:59:862 (1,2) - ^
01:02:779 (1,2) - ^ all done
01:08:195 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing. done
01:09:862 (1,2) - switch NCs here done
01:12:362 (5,1) - blanket is a bit off here fixed
01:21:945 (1) - remove NC for consistency. done



[Normal]

00:05:279 (4,5,6) - This blanket is a bit off fixed
00:07:362 (1,2) - These can be reshaped a bit to look a bit better. Make (1) more curved so that it blankets 00:06:945 (6) more effectively. Then make (2) less curved so that it blankets (1). http://puu.sh/5b8ps.jpg done
00:12:779 (7) - I'd like this to be a 1/1 slider, then a circle a beat afterward. This is your Normal diff, so don't be afraid to map it out a bit more. done, i like it!
00:16:112 - add a circle here, the piano part is too strong to ignore IMO oh yeah definitely added
00:19:862 - object here and
00:20:279 - an object here, either use a slider or 2 circles for these. Again, these are very strong sounds in the music so you shouldn't be afraid to map them in, especially when this is not your easiest diff (I also suggested for you to map these even on the Easy) done
00:22:779 - I think you could use a circle here for that piano added
00:28:195 (2,3) - I think this is a stronger way to map this part. It matches the vocal better, and further distinguishes this from the Easy difficulty. http://puu.sh/5b8z1.jpg tried it :D
00:30:695 (2) - If you use a red point in this slider, you can have it match up with 00:29:862 (1) - better, which looks better to me. http://puu.sh/5b8Cz.jpg done
00:32:570 - add a slider here like so: http://puu.sh/5b8EN.jpg. Matches the piano pretty well. done
00:36:529 - add a circle here. added
00:39:862 - and here. This part is kind of building to the kiai, and since this is your middle diff you should map more of it. These spots have fairly strong musical ideas corresponding to them so I think it is a good idea to map those out. mapped
00:45:695 (1) - this suggestion will be to add an object before this, as well as changing this slider. Add a repeat slider at 00:44:862, then change 00:45:695 (1) to a longer non-repeating slider. Doing so will map that little guitar riff and fill that empty space. The longer slider will match the vocal better. http://puu.sh/5b8Ne.jpg tried it
00:48:404 - add two sliders here like this : http://puu.sh/5b8QG.jpg. This will match the guitar, and give the player more to play. added
00:51:112 (3) - For this, it would be nice for you to make it a copy of 00:51:945 (4) so that they interlock properly. It'll look nicer that way. http://puu.sh/5b8SO.jpg done
00:52:987 - a short slider here matches that drum really well, so I suggest adding that. http://puu.sh/5b8WO.jpg added
01:06:529 (1,2) - switching the NCs here would move the NC to the downbeat. done
01:09:862 (5) - NC here
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC
01:13:195 (3) - NC, seems like you got a bit off your pattern here. done those three

[Hard]
00:01:945 (5,1) - decrease spacing here, 3+ spacing is much too big here, especially since this part of the song isn't particularly strong or crazy. oh yeah changed
00:02:362 (1) - remove NC here done
00:03:612 (3) - add NC here, just fixing some inconsistency done
00:04:862 (1,2,3) - I'd say either make these all the same slope, or do some things to make them more unique, like make the angles more different or add some curves. Right now it looks a bit sloppy. Either make them all line up perfectly like http://puu.sh/5b98h.jpg or do some more creative things with these to make each slider unique. done
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - I'd say make these into some sort of shape. A straight line of circles isn't that interesting. You could do something nice and simple like an equilateral triangle and that would be nicer I think. tried
00:21:529 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing done
00:36:112 (4,5) - I don't think a stack fits the music super well here. You could try a sort of zig-zag shape here which I like, or whatever you come up with. http://puu.sh/5b9i6.jpg tried your zig zag ^^
00:37:570 (2,3,4) - tidy up this blanket a bit tidied
00:39:445 (1) - remove NC done
00:40:279 (3) - NC here for the downbeat and start of new vocal idea done
00:39:862 (2,3,4) - reshape these so that (2,3) form a blanket around (4). It'll look neat and cool. http://puu.sh/5b9o5.jpg done!
00:41:737 (1) - remove the NC here done
00:43:612 (6) - NC here done
00:43:612 (6) - Angle this out a bit to the left so that it is more visible. Most of the slider is obscured here by 00:42:779 (4). done
00:44:029 (1) - remove NC here, just more consistency things. done
00:44:341 (3) - delete this circle, a triplet here feels overmapped IMO. done
00:45:695 (1,2) - fix up this blanket fixed
00:48:195 (5,6) - I don't think I quite understand what is being mapped here. I'd say at this part try mapping along with the guitar in the background. The rhythm I hear is this (starting at 00:48:195) - http://puu.sh/5b9uf.jpg done
00:49:758 (2) - delete this circle, same thing as the triplet before. This feels a bit forced, and just having the two circles feels a lot more natural with the vocal. done
00:50:279 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think it would be nice if you could make it so this formation was centered. That way you could get some nice symmetry here. Even if you don't take this suggestion, then
00:51:945 (9) - move this over so that it has the same x-value as 00:51:529 (8). made it look nicer
00:53:404 - I like a circle here, or a short slider to match with those strings leading into the kiai. I think it gives the player a bit more momentum going into the most exciting part of the map. tried circle
00:59:654 - add a circle here. I think it matches the music well, and it keeps the flow you have going. added
00:59:862 (1,2) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat. done
01:01:945 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing done
01:02:570 (2,3) - This would look better as a blanket I think done
01:04:029 (2) - bit of a nazi thing, but this overlap is a bit sloppy looking. I know you can only see it for a very brief amount of time, but it's still worth fixing for some more polish. Moving it over to the left to blanket the slider end of 01:03:612 (1) is actually pretty nice also.
01:05:070 (5) - move this to the left I think. It would lead to a nicer flow to 01:05:279 (6) since it would be in line more with the path of the slider. ehh donehttp://puu.sh/5b9YS.jpg
01:05:279 (6) - While we're on this part, I think this would look nice as a blanket. http://puu.sh/5b9ZT.jpg done
01:05:904 (1) - remove this NC done
01:06:945 (4) - NC here done
01:08:195 (1) - remove NC done
01:08:195 (1,2,3) - I think you should make the spacing here uniform in one way or another. Having that 0.1x spacing increase looks a bit odd done
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC done
01:13:612 (6) - NC done
01:14:445 (1) - remove NC done
01:12:779 (4) - I would prefer for this to be a slider to keep up the momentum and flow here. I think it would match the music pretty well also. done
01:16:112 (1,2,3) - I think these would look nice as a blanket pattern: http://puu.sh/5b9Ic.jpg agreed!
01:16:945 (3) - NC done
01:17:570 (4,5,6) - move these up so that they are more above 01:16:945 (3). This would then flow better because the flow from 01:16:945 (3), is more upward, so starting these circles more up will make the angle less sharp and lead to better flow. done
01:18:404 (1) - remove NC
01:22:362 (1) - remove NC
01:23:195 (2) - I guess NC here
01:25:695 (1) - remove NC done!


A lot of work on combo consistency, and some other things. I was starting to get a bit sloppy so apologies for things I missed or if I wasn't clear on some things. Call me back for a recheck sometime. Good luck! Much appreciated for this mod! This was very helpful, probably best mod I ever got o.o

And I will call you back after some more mods, thanks!

As for the rest of the mods, I incorporated some of the suggestions along with Moway's. Thank you everybody!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Uncheck the Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
Combo color 2 and 4 is alike, so you should change one of them.
Add hit sound more positively to follow the music like this map.
Inconsistene end of KIAI TIME.
[Easy]
Slider velocity is same as Normal, so it looks hard for newbie. According to osu wiki,
◾Slider velocity: According to the BPM, can be from 0.8x on faster song or even 1.6x on slower songs.
So it needs remapped if you aim to Ranked, now I don't mod this diff but if you remap this diff and need modding, I'll mod so call me back.
Hit Sonud
Same as Hard and general.
[Normal]
Use Distant Snap always, there are so randomly spacing so it will be confused for newbie.
Placement
00:01:951(3,4,1) Make a same spacing in blanket, it would be more nice. e.g.)
SPOILER
00:09:451(2) Spacing is narrow, set ×0.8.
00:12:784(7) To be nice flow, you can change this slider like this.
SPOILER
00:18:618(4,5) Make a better blanket.
00:23:201(1) Spacing error, use distant snap.
00:49:868(1)^
00:51:951(4)^
01:01:118(2) Bent this slider a bit, and this flow looks fine.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
Same as Hard and general.
[Hard]
Placement
00:04:868(1) Delete NC here it looks so fast compared previous part.
00:08:201(3) Move to 272:188, and it looks nice flow.
00:11:534(1) Bent it a bit better, it is good for play.
SPOILER
00:15:701(4) CTRL+G and move this and next note like this?
SPOILER
00:16:534(1,2) Current looks odd and it's not good for playing, you can place these notes more naturally. e.g.)
SPOILER
00:24:868(5) So closer, you should prepare for proper distance.
00:37:784(3) I suppose CTRLG looks more nice flow.
00:42:368(6,7,8,1) Too crowded in this part, and I found so many similar slider shape. Try to make different one?
00:48:201(7) Move at 364:368 better for flow.
00:49:304(9) ^ 360:108
01:02:576(2,3) Make a nice blanket like this.
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:17:368(3,4) It sounds a bit weird for me, the vocal has emphasized at 00:17:576 so you should begin a slider from this.
SPOILER
00:22:576 Delete this note better since there is no vocal and so weak music.
Hit Sonud
00:00:285~ You can add soft-whistle in this part to follow the piano, and add finish at downbeat.

Need more work, but not bad. Good Luck.
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
Hi ~ c:
mod from your request, hope it's helpful..!

[Easy]
Overall this diff looks really nice, there are just some aesthetic things I'd change up a bit.
  1. 00:00:285 (1,2) - if you take a close look u'll notice that the shape of 2 doesn't match with 1 100%, it's off a bit on the end.
    screen
    see the difference? imo it looks better if you pay attention to these tiny differences, even if it's just a pixel you move one anchor, it might look so much better sometimes!
    same thing here:
    00:10:701 (2,3) and 00:11:951 (4,5)
    00:20:701 (1,2)
    00:34:451 (2,3)
    00:42:785 (2,3)
    00:45:701 (1,2,3)
    00:48:618 (4,1) - those two look especially weird. I know you can't hide 1's end below 4, cause of the reverse, but you might want to change the shape differently.. >: (you could curve it around 00:51:118 (2) for example, you just had to place it somewhere else..)
    suggestion
    00:58:618 (4,5)
    01:03:618 (1,2)
    01:12:368 (4,1)
    01:20:285 (1,2)
    I think I've missed a few.. but since most ppl don't care about, you don't have to change anything anyway.. so that's up to you. c:
  2. 00:03:201 (5,1,2,3) - looks like they were meant to be placed symmetrical, so you should move 1 further down so it's at y:170 (same as 5), if the grid doesn't let you, disable it or change it manually in the upper right corner.
    but actually I'd prefer a different pattern here..
    suggestion
    matches better with the rest of the map, cause I can't find any similar patterns like the one you use now, which is why it feels bit 'out of place'
  3. 00:16:118 (4) - follow the direction of 00:14:868 (3) and move 4 above 3, kinda parallel to 00:14:035 (2) ~ around 8|60
  4. 00:21:951 (3,1) - the movement is kinda weird here. .o.
    suggestion
    (start of 1 is placed where 00:21:118 (2) ends) and that way you could form a nice triangle pattern with 00:23:201 (1,2,3) btw!
    screen
  5. 00:31:535 (3) - shape doesn't go well with the rest, imo. may look nicer if you curve it a little?
    screen
  6. 00:35:285 (3,1) - they overlap.. :C
  7. 00:53:618 (1) - doesn't work well with 00:51:951 (4), movement-wise. imo it'd feel better if you place 1 somewhere above 4, cause that's the direction indicated by 4.
  8. 01:00:285 (1,2) - make sure the edge is in the middle of the slider, in 1 the slider ball hits the corner too late, in 2 too early.
  9. 01:07:368 (2,3,4) - form a straight line with all of them or not at all, cause only 3 and 4 looks off.. D: (imo)
[Normal]
hmmh, I kinda have the feeling that this diff is less structured than Easy.
(I'm not saying it's bad or anything, that's just my feeling and I can't say (yet) where that comes from, but it might be helpful at some point. >: ..)
  1. AIMod's sayin that at 00:51:743 there is an object too far from the previous one. '-'
    even though I don't trust AIMod these days (cause I have weird bugs.. ò.ó) it's right in this case - no jumps in Normals. Never. It's not readable for beginners. x:
    00:49:868 (1) - same here, btw. even though, AIMod keeps silent about that..
  2. and as in Easy, there are some slidershapes you could refine a bit to match them perfectly with other objects
    00:00:285 (1) and 00:03:618 (1), 00:01:951 (3,4), 00:05:285 (4,5,6)
    00:18:618 (4,5)
    00:32:576 (4,1)
    00:36:951 (1,2)
    00:40:285 (1,2)
    00:45:701 (1,2,3)
    00:53:618 (1,2)
    and well, there are more, but I'm getting lazy, so check for yourself! c:
    I can ofc point each and everything out,.. but I won't atm. xD just pm me, if you want me to.
  3. 00:09:868 (4) - same as in Easy as well, make sure the sliderball hits the corner in the middle!
    (move the red anchor to 424|232)
    same here - 00:16:951 (2) and 01:02:785 (5)
  4. 00:11:118 (5,6) - try to use the exact same .. uhm, steepness(?) sorry, my english sucks. x: .. for both of them. the way they are now the red anchor of 6 is placed a grid too high (I think, maybe it's two grids..)
  5. 00:30:701 (2) - why is the second part of the slider curved? it looks out of place, cause there is no other slider like this (or maybe I'm just blind. xD), so it might be better to use a different shape or use more of these sliders.
  6. 00:41:951 (3,4) - flow's not nice here. x: (I can't think of a better shape atm, sorry. >< but I'm sure you can think of one!)
[Hard]
Thsi diff looks pretty good already, but imo it misses some structure. I'm not sure, but it does look a bit random, overall. like 'use this here and that there and .. I really don't know how to say it. Dx
example: 00:29:868 (1,2,3,4) - what with the shapes? 2 and 3 look nice.. but the others? there is no connection at all. >: (I know 4 is also part of the next pattern, but it looks like it is part of both. maybe you can reduce this effect by using the same angle as for 00:29:035 (5) for 1..
and basically I'd say the same as kaijiyatta. (just read the mod. :D) and the same as in Easy and Normal with some slider shapes. so I won't point all of this out now, since most parts are written there..

Good luck with this! c:
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
[General]
Every map has to have hitsounds. Try to follow this pattern:
SPOILER
The x represent the claps. Add claps to the first small white tick, and another to the third small white tick.
00:00:285 - You can remove the green line here, you can change the volume in the timing point.
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:04:868 (3) - Move it to one grid lower.
00:05:285 (4) - Move it to two grid lower.
00:08:618 (3) - Make it less curvy. E.g.: Move the little square on the body of it to x:48 y:216, and the little square on the tail to x:96 y:280.
00:11:951 (4) - Move the little square on the tail to x:180 y:292.
00:18:618 (3) - Add a repeat at 00:19:451 , and extend the slider to 00:20:284 to catch the vocal.
SPOILER
00:27:368 (1) - Move it to x:28 y:220.
00:40:285 (1) - Move it to x:356 y:340.
01:16:118 (2) - Move it to x:248 y:180.
01:16:951 (3) - Move it to x:440 y:108, and it straight.

[Normal]
00:00:701 (2) - Replace it by copying 00:01:951 (3) , do Ctrl+H, and Edit-->Rotate by..., select Selection Centre, and make it rotate by -60, and place it to x:172 y:140.
00:19:868 (5) - Rotate this by selecting Selection Centre to 9 degrees.
00:34:451 (2) - Move it to x:432 y:144.
01:04:451 (2) - Move it to one grid lower.

[Hard]
The kiai time is inconsistent to other difficulty. End it to 01:20:284 .
00:17:785 (4) - Move it to x:328 y:28.
00:22:576 (8) - Move it to x:392 y:212, and 00:22:785 (9) to x:288 y:224.
00:24:868 (5) - Distance spacing is inconsistent. Move it far like x:188 y:172.
01:19:868 (1,3) - The new combo should be add to 01:20:285 (3) , and the new combo should be remove to 01:19:868 (1) .

Good Luck.
theramdans
1,251 posts
Joined September 2012
theramdans
Hi m4m xD

[General]
Add audio lead-in because the map starts suddenly. You can do this by opening the .osu file and fill in the "AudioLeadIn" value with 1500~2000 , that should do it

Use slider tick 2 on normal and hard

Easy
Hmm I think the SV used here is already too fast compared to bpm, I suggest changing sv to around 1.4~1.6 and remap, If you do remap, contact me to mod it

Normal
AR -1 because the slow bpm
00:06:534 (5,6) - [348||200]
00:09:451 (3) - [440||76]
00:11:118 (5) - tail point [304||72]
00:23:201 (1) - [76||180]
00:33:201 (4,1) - why sudden big spacing here, fix it
00:49:659 (6,1) - same^
00:51:534 (3,4) - same^
01:01:118 (2) - [276||336]
01:10:909 (2) - [148||120]
01:11:118 (3) - [128||164]

No hitsounds? Your map is too calm

Hard
The Kiai time is not same with normal. All kiai times must be same in all difficulties (Ranking Criteria)
I think the 1/4 sliders (and repeats) sliders are too much here. Replace some with circles or 1/2 sliders (or repeats)
No hitsounds? Your map is too calm

Hope these help! :D
Sayuki Fujimi
146 posts
Joined June 2013
Sayuki Fujimi
Your easy difficulty is but isn't supposed to be ?
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

Dusicyon wrote:

Your easy difficulty is but isn't supposed to be ?
I have no idea how that actually works

And thank you for your mods everybody, I applied mostly all of your suggestions, especially the blanketing ones from Squirrel.
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam
[General]

I like this kind of slow and calm music, hoping more song like this ranked :3
But where's the hitsound.. Oh well, I'll skip hitsound modding firstly then


[Easy]

00:18:618 (3) Blanket perfectly. Move tail point to x:288 y:116 (and I prefer make it reverse slider and add circle at 00:20:284)
00:24:034 (2) Move middle point to x:404 y:228 and tail pont to x:432 y: 172
00:27:368 (1) Move head point 2 grid higher to make perfect blanket
00:28:201 (2) The space is too close to the previous slider
00:29:451 I don't know if you follow the vocal or music, but both indicates.. better add circle here
00:33:618 I prefer circles and slider combination here

00:38:201 (2,3) I prefer this pattern because fitting more to both vocal and music

00:42:784 (2,3) Creating blanket seems more comfortable
00:43:618 One short and long slider sounds nicer for me

00:54:451 (2,3) This kind of overlap doesn't look nice imo
01:06:534 (4) My suggestion, create blanket with (3) like http://puu.sh/5fstG.jpg, then at 01:07:368 create something like this http://puu.sh/5fsv1.jpg
01:14:451 Assuming you follow the music, add circle here
01:18:618 (1) Putting it on x:240 y: 108 (or wherever fits) might be better than just a straight line pattern


[Normal]

00:04:451 (2) Different spacing
00:11:118 (5,6) Make more variative shape than just a straight line?
00:30:701 (2) Make it smoother
00:40:284 (1,2) Blanket perfectly, move (1) head point to x:368 y:172
00:47:368 (3) Move head point one grid to the left
00:50:284 (2,3) Still seems different in direction to me
00:52:993 (5) Why not put this near the (4)'s head?
01:14:868 (1) Move head point to x:440 y:164
01:18:201 (2) Move middle point to x:172 y:340 and tail point to x:232 y:336


[Hard]

00:00:285 Just wondering, why the space from (1,2) with (2,3) are the same
00:10:701 NC here to repel confusion
00:11:534 Remove NC, add NC at 00:11:951
00:11:951 (2) Recheck the spacing (except you do that intentionally)
00:20:493 (2,3,4,5) This kind of pattern is hard to see imo
00:54:034 (2) Make it curve opposing with (1) maybe?
01:05:284 NC here
01:16:951 (1) The curve seems different with the previous (1) and (2)
01:18:409 (5,6,7) You can make a shape with these 3 sliders, don't just randomly put it
01:20:284 Remove NC, add NC at 01:20:701


This is a nice map, but it's still lacks shape
Consider making a shape everytime it seems possible :3
Lust
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Topic Starter
Lust
El SolarBeam
SPOILER

El SolarBeam wrote:

[General]

I like this kind of slow and calm music, hoping more song like this ranked :3
But where's the hitsound.. Oh well, I'll skip hitsound modding firstly then hitsounded!


[Easy]

00:18:618 (3) Blanket perfectly. Move tail point to x:288 y:116 (and I prefer make it reverse slider and add circle at 00:20:284) done
00:24:034 (2) Move middle point to x:404 y:228 and tail pont to x:432 y: 172 done
00:27:368 (1) Move head point 2 grid higher to make perfect blanket mmm okay
00:28:201 (2) The space is too close to the previous slider fixed
00:29:451 I don't know if you follow the vocal or music, but both indicates.. better add circle here added
00:33:618 I prefer circles and slider combination here ehhh ill think about it

00:38:201 (2,3) I prefer this pattern because fitting more to both vocal and music done

00:42:784 (2,3) Creating blanket seems more comfortable done
00:43:618 One short and long slider sounds nicer for me not to me

00:54:451 (2,3) This kind of overlap doesn't look nice imo not kept
01:06:534 (4) My suggestion, create blanket with (3) like http://puu.sh/5fstG.jpg, then at 01:07:368 create something like this http://puu.sh/5fsv1.jpg i like!
01:14:451 Assuming you follow the music, add circle here added
01:18:618 (1) Putting it on x:240 y: 108 (or wherever fits) might be better than just a straight line pattern done


[Normal]

00:04:451 (2) Different spacing fixed
00:11:118 (5,6) Make more variative shape than just a straight line? nah
00:30:701 (2) Make it smoother smoothened
00:40:284 (1,2) Blanket perfectly, move (1) head point to x:368 y:172 done
00:47:368 (3) Move head point one grid to the left done
00:50:284 (2,3) Still seems different in direction to me idk
00:52:993 (5) Why not put this near the (4)'s head? tried
01:14:868 (1) Move head point to x:440 y:164 okay
01:18:201 (2) Move middle point to x:172 y:340 and tail point to x:232 y:336 done


[Hard]

00:00:285 Just wondering, why the space from (1,2) with (2,3) are the same plays better
00:10:701 NC here to repel confusion nope
00:11:534 Remove NC, add NC at 00:11:951 nope (note i say these because to keep with my combo patterns of before
00:11:951 (2) Recheck the spacing (except you do that intentionally) it is intentional
00:20:493 (2,3,4,5) This kind of pattern is hard to see imo i dont think so
00:54:034 (2) Make it curve opposing with (1) maybe? done
01:05:284 NC here done
01:16:951 (1) The curve seems different with the previous (1) and (2) fixed
01:18:409 (5,6,7) You can make a shape with these 3 sliders, don't just randomly put it nah i like it like this
01:20:284 Remove NC, add NC at 01:20:701 done


This is a nice map, but it's still lacks shape thanks and trying my best
Consider making a shape everytime it seems possible :3

Thanks for mod!
Zero__wind
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Hi, m4m from your queue

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
You should check Ai mod, there're some basic issues remaining, about letterbox and lead-iin
I suggest that you add a muted normal-sliderslide, the sliders in kiai currently really apply big noise

Hard
00:01:118 (3) - better add some soft whistles for points like this to fit the music
00:03:201 (7,2) - better avoid the small overlap
00:06:951 (7) - better use soft sample? maybe also for 00:06:534 (6) - and soft whistles may fit
00:07:784 - better add one whistle each white tick for this part to fit the music? like 00:08:618 - and so on
00:09:451 (1) - better move the NC to 2, you should add NC consistently, for every phrase of vocal, or for every big white tick(downbeat)
00:09:868 (2) - split into 2 circles may form a better rhythm which matches with the vocal
00:11:951 - and 00:13:201 (3,5) - need whistles. plz add more whistles for the soft part. the piano really calls for them
00:17:368 (3,4) - what are you mapping to? As I suppose the head of 00:17:784 (4) - lands on nothing. If you're trying to follow the vocal you should start the long slider from 00:17:576 - , try the rhythm below ↓
SPOILER
00:20:493 (2) - this note is really unexpected, there's actually nothing, at 00:20:493 - , better simply leave it blank
00:27:785 (2,3) - maybe make them symmetric with each other
00:30:701 (3) - again rhythm problem, spamming 1/4 sliders doen't fit the music at all, plz try the rhythm below ↓
SPOILER
00:35:701 - the finish is unneccessary and a bit awkward as I suppose
00:36:535 (5) - I don't get the meaning for it to have such difference in distance between its former and latter notes
00:44:451 (4) - I think you messed up vocal and background music again, plz know the long vocal starts at 00:44:243 - , and if you wanna map to the piano, you have a beat at 00:45:076 - whle you currently don't. So plz make a decision whether to follow vocal or piano, at what part of the map, just plz don't them up, as it would be pretty unintuitive and confusing
00:47:576 (3,4,5) - unfitting too intense rhythm
00:47:576 (3,6) - they could be aligned better
00:51:535 (7) - better split it up into 2 circles to apply a better rhythm
00:51:951 (8) - and plz you should move the latter NC here, it divides two different parts of the music
00:52:368 (1) - not a good rhythm arranged, plz try something like the below ↓
SPOILER
00:52:576 - you really need a finish here to emphasise
00:53:410 (5) - on the contrary, this finish is not needed
00:54:868 (4,5) - similar rhythm issue, they should be replaced by a circle and a 1/2 slider plz, plz learn to solve other problems like 01:05:076 (5,6) - by yourself
00:55:285 (5,6,7) - better avoid the overlap
01:10:701 (3) - 's reverse arrow is overlapped by 01:09:868 (1) - 's hitburst and this is unrankable you could try to solve it like the below ↓
SPOILER
01:14:868 (8,1) - better exchange NC
01:16:118 (1) - plz know that the vocal starts from 01:15:909 -
01:17:576 (2,3,4) - and for these, I don't get what they're mapped to, I don't get so many hits from the music
01:23:201 (1) - don't you think the NC is unreasonable? It's apparently coherent with 01:22:368 (3) - , better move it to 01:24:035 (3) -
01:27:993 - move this green line to 01:28:201 - or the spinning sound would be weird, also for other diffs

Normal
00:03:201 (4) - normal whistles really don't fit this song =.= try soft ones plz, also for the latter ones
00:20:701 (1) - may try to adjust it like the below ↓ to avoid the overlap between 00:20:701 (1,2) -
SPOILER
00:25:910 (5) - oops, how sudden a clap here, plz remove it
00:28:201 (2) - ^
00:36:118 - it's ok that you add finishes like this, just be aware to make them consistent, and why don't you do the same in Hard
00:58:201 (2,4) - the overlap is avoidable
01:01:951 (3) - this rhythm is not precise, the vocal starts from 01:01:743 - .It's acceptable though, as it's in Normal and you made your rhythm consistent with 01:03:618 (1,2,3,4) -
01:11:951 (2) - again unrankable, reverse arrow overlappeed by hitburst just rotate it clockwise and put it back would be ok
01:20:284 (4,1) - exchange NC. the downbeat at 01:20:284 - divides two parts of music
01:24:035 (1,3) - avoid the overlap and they would look more satisfying
01:26:535 (1) - it's ok to start it from 01:26:326 - , in a Normal diff

Easy
I must say the sv is too high to be at 2.4 . Why is it the same with that in Normal? This is not like a Easy, plz make it lower at rearrange the diff
00:18:618 (3,1) - stuffs like this should be avoided. It's too confusing for new players, to see the approaching circle apearing on a slider
01:04:451 (2,3) - sliders like these should be further polished
Set less intense notes and use more long sliders, 1/1 ones ore even longer, to make the diff actually like a Easy

That's all
Good luck
Come[Back]Home
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Come[Back]Home

Hay there o/ =3 I hope this mod will help you

General:
How about a nice whistle for normal hitsounds?
http://puu.sh/5k4zW.wav

Easy
00:18:618 (3) Move the 2. sliderpoint to x:280 y:164
00:20:284 (1,2) Because of the ar you can see those circles in the slider, and that doesnt look so nice.
01:04:243 (2) Ok, this overlap is ugly, delete this slider or put some HC in instead.

Normal
OD 4 AR 3 HP 4
00:16:743 Add HC maybe?

Hard
00:00:701 (2) ctrl+g
00:35:701 (4) add clap
00:39:451 (6) ^
00:42:784 (7) ^
00:46:118 ^
Add some Hitsounds in Kiai Time


Thats all, i like the map :3
And now i have a new anime to watch ty :)
Lust
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Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust
Thank you for the mods!

Zero__Wind

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
You should check Ai mod, there're some basic issues remaining, about letterbox and lead-iin
I suggest that you add a muted normal-sliderslide, the sliders in kiai currently really apply big noise

Hard
00:01:118 (3) - better add some soft whistles for points like this to fit the music
00:03:201 (7,2) - better avoid the small overlap
00:06:951 (7) - better use soft sample? maybe also for 00:06:534 (6) - and soft whistles may fit
00:07:784 - better add one whistle each white tick for this part to fit the music? like 00:08:618 - and so on
00:09:451 (1) - better move the NC to 2, you should add NC consistently, for every phrase of vocal, or for every big white tick(downbeat)
00:09:868 (2) - split into 2 circles may form a better rhythm which matches with the vocal
00:11:951 - and 00:13:201 (3,5) - need whistles. plz add more whistles for the soft part. the piano really calls for them
00:17:368 (3,4) - what are you mapping to? As I suppose the head of 00:17:784 (4) - lands on nothing. If you're trying to follow the vocal you should start the long slider from 00:17:576 - , try the rhythm below ↓
SPOILER
00:20:493 (2) - this note is really unexpected, there's actually nothing, at 00:20:493 - , better simply leave it blank
00:27:785 (2,3) - maybe make them symmetric with each other
00:30:701 (3) - again rhythm problem, spamming 1/4 sliders doen't fit the music at all, plz try the rhythm below ↓
SPOILER
00:35:701 - the finish is unneccessary and a bit awkward as I suppose
00:36:535 (5) - I don't get the meaning for it to have such difference in distance between its former and latter notes
00:44:451 (4) - I think you messed up vocal and background music again, plz know the long vocal starts at 00:44:243 - , and if you wanna map to the piano, you have a beat at 00:45:076 - whle you currently don't. So plz make a decision whether to follow vocal or piano, at what part of the map, just plz don't them up, as it would be pretty unintuitive and confusing
00:47:576 (3,4,5) - unfitting too intense rhythm
00:47:576 (3,6) - they could be aligned better
00:51:535 (7) - better split it up into 2 circles to apply a better rhythm
00:51:951 (8) - and plz you should move the latter NC here, it divides two different parts of the music
00:52:368 (1) - not a good rhythm arranged, plz try something like the below ↓
SPOILER
00:52:576 - you really need a finish here to emphasise
00:53:410 (5) - on the contrary, this finish is not needed
00:54:868 (4,5) - similar rhythm issue, they should be replaced by a circle and a 1/2 slider plz, plz learn to solve other problems like 01:05:076 (5,6) - by yourself
00:55:285 (5,6,7) - better avoid the overlap
01:10:701 (3) - 's reverse arrow is overlapped by 01:09:868 (1) - 's hitburst and this is unrankable you could try to solve it like the below ↓
SPOILER
01:14:868 (8,1) - better exchange NC
01:16:118 (1) - plz know that the vocal starts from 01:15:909 -
01:17:576 (2,3,4) - and for these, I don't get what they're mapped to, I don't get so many hits from the music
01:23:201 (1) - don't you think the NC is unreasonable? It's apparently coherent with 01:22:368 (3) - , better move it to 01:24:035 (3) -
01:27:993 - move this green line to 01:28:201 - or the spinning sound would be weird, also for other diffs

Normal
00:03:201 (4) - normal whistles really don't fit this song =.= try soft ones plz, also for the latter ones
00:20:701 (1) - may try to adjust it like the below ↓ to avoid the overlap between 00:20:701 (1,2) -
SPOILER
00:25:910 (5) - oops, how sudden a clap here, plz remove it
00:28:201 (2) - ^
00:36:118 - it's ok that you add finishes like this, just be aware to make them consistent, and why don't you do the same in Hard
00:58:201 (2,4) - the overlap is avoidable
01:01:951 (3) - this rhythm is not precise, the vocal starts from 01:01:743 - .It's acceptable though, as it's in Normal and you made your rhythm consistent with 01:03:618 (1,2,3,4) -
01:11:951 (2) - again unrankable, reverse arrow overlappeed by hitburst just rotate it clockwise and put it back would be ok
01:20:284 (4,1) - exchange NC. the downbeat at 01:20:284 - divides two parts of music
01:24:035 (1,3) - avoid the overlap and they would look more satisfying
01:26:535 (1) - it's ok to start it from 01:26:326 - , in a Normal diff

Easy
I must say the sv is too high to be at 2.4 . Why is it the same with that in Normal? This is not like a Easy, plz make it lower at rearrange the diff
00:18:618 (3,1) - stuffs like this should be avoided. It's too confusing for new players, to see the approaching circle apearing on a slider
01:04:451 (2,3) - sliders like these should be further polished
Set less intense notes and use more long sliders, 1/1 ones ore even longer, to make the diff actually like a Easy

That's all
Good luck
I took all of your suggestions, except for the slider velocity on easy. I feel it fits.

ComeBackHome

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Hay there o/ =3 I hope this mod will help you

General:
How about a nice whistle for normal hitsounds?
http://puu.sh/5k4zW.wav

Easy
00:18:618 (3) Move the 2. sliderpoint to x:280 y:164 done
00:20:284 (1,2) Because of the ar you can see those circles in the slider, and that doesnt look so nice. fixed
01:04:243 (2) Ok, this overlap is ugly, delete this slider or put some HC in instead.

Normal
OD 4 AR 3 HP 4 nah
00:16:743 Add HC maybe?

Hard
00:00:701 (2) ctrl+g
00:35:701 (4) add clap
00:39:451 (6) ^
00:42:784 (7) ^
00:46:118 ^
Add some Hitsounds in Kiai Time nah


Thats all, i like the map :3
And now i have a new anime to watch ty :)

Again thanks!
Tari
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Tari
http://puu.sh/5kFIX.txt

Gave Lust again, HUGE BIG ADVICE.
Moway
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Joined January 2012
Moway
Alright, did some IRC work with Lust and cleaned up some things, and most notably gave the kiai some hitsounding.

IRC
13:49 Lust: hey moway!
13:49 Moway: hello
13:50 Lust: i am about to ask a BAT to come and take a look at my map, but I know there is further polishing to be needed, do you have the time to recheck my map?
13:50 Moway: sure
13:50 *Lust is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - See You (TV Size)]
13:50 Lust: its that one ^^
13:51 Moway: alright
13:52 Moway: Easy
13:52 Moway: 00:11:951 (4,5) -
13:52 Moway: blanket is a bit off here
13:52 Lust: fixed
13:52 Moway: 00:20:284 (1,2) -
13:53 Moway: better to unstack these for your easy
13:53 Moway: also slight blanket problem there as well
13:54 Lust: alright fixed, but would it be okay if i stacked 00:20:284 (1) on top of 00:21:118 (3) ?
13:54 Lust: err
13:54 Lust: would that be too confusing
13:54 Moway: probably
13:55 Moway: the approach circles on easy make most stacks confusing unless they're really far apart timewise
13:55 Lust: yeah that makes sense
13:55 Moway: 00:34:451 (2,3) - slight blanket problem
13:55 Moway: sorry a lot of this will be really nazi but this is what i pick up my first quick look through before more indepth stuff
13:56 Moway: also 00:35:285 (3,1) -
13:56 Moway: this overlap isn't super great, I think you can avoid it fairly easily
13:56 Moway: just move 1 up and to the left a bit, maybe adjust the angle if it goes too high and hits the score
13:57 Moway: 00:39:451 (3,1) - make these identical so that they interlock together well
13:57 Lust: ill just add another slider point
13:57 Lust: and then just angle it more
13:57 Moway: that'll be fine
13:57 Lust: should (1) be the same as (3) or (3) be the same as (1)?
13:57 Moway: either way will work
13:58 Moway: 00:48:618 (4) -
13:58 Moway: a couple small things with this slider
13:58 Moway: I think it flows better from 00:47:785 (3) - if you move it down
13:59 Lust: instead of that
13:59 Moway: since the vast majority of the flow of 3 is down and to the left, having the slider down a bit more will make the transition flow better
13:59 Lust: can i angle (3) downward so it looks like this
13:59 Lust: http://puu.sh/5ltgs.jpg
13:59 Lust: would that work?
14:00 Lust: actually
14:00 Lust: nevermind
14:00 Lust: LOL
14:00 Moway: i can't see what is happenig
14:00 Moway: :3
14:00 Lust: no no no keep going forget i said anything xD
14:00 Moway: okey
14:01 Moway: also decrease the curve of 4 a bit so that t perfecty blankets 00:49:868 (1) -
14:01 Lust: so like this?
14:02 Lust: http://puu.sh/5ltpv.jpg
14:02 Moway: bring the end point a bit to the left and I think you'll have it
14:03 Lust: endpoint for 1?
14:03 Lust: or for 4?
14:03 Moway: 4
14:03 Moway: let me know when you are done with that
14:04 Lust: just finished
14:04 Moway: alright
14:04 Moway: 00:49:868 (1,2,3,4) -
14:04 Moway: i think you should re arrange this
14:05 Moway: the stack of (1,3) and the overlap with (1,4) should be fixed
14:05 Moway: here's what i came up with
14:05 Moway: http://puu.sh/5ltDj.jpg
14:05 Moway: that forms some nice blankets but feel free to try out things that you like
14:07 Lust: i think i will try that
14:07 Moway: alright
14:07 Moway: make sure you adjust all needed spacing~
14:08 Lust: actually because of that combo you just showed me
14:08 Lust: it helped me fixed the overlap a little later
14:08 Moway: 01:16:118 (2) -
14:09 Moway: move this to around (242,178) or so
14:09 Moway: so that it locks with (1)
14:09 Moway: 01:20:701 (2) - little nazi adjustent here, but move this to (170,264)
14:10 Lust: done and done
14:10 Moway: then just as a preference thing 01:24:035 (1) - maybe decreasee the curve and have it lanket 01:25:285 (2) - a bit more naturally, but this one looks fine to me as it is also
14:11 Lust: changed it a bit
14:11 Lust: i think it will look better as you say
14:12 Moway: alright round 2
14:12 Moway: hitsounding
14:12 Moway: 00:04:451 (2) - add a clap here for consistency, I think it fits the music pretty well
14:13 Lust: alright
14:13 Moway: 00:06:951 (6) - i like a soft hitwhistle here, normal sampleset seems to heavy and the softwhistle would match that piano part nicely
14:14 Lust: done
14:14 Lust: i think so too :D
14:14 Moway: 00:09:868 (1) - maybe delete the whistle on the head of the slider, I kind of like the contrast of no whistle on the head then the whistle on the end where the stronger part happens
14:15 Lust: huh alright
14:15 Moway: 00:16:951 (1) - whistle on the head here
14:15 Lust: not quite sure how the whistle on the head go there xD
14:16 Moway: 00:18:618 (3) - whistle on the end i think
14:16 Moway: 00:20:284 (1) - whistle here for that piano
14:17 Lust: done
14:17 Moway: 00:21:118 (3) - i think a whistle on the slider start fits well here
14:17 Moway: 00:23:201 (1) - whistle on the slider end
14:17 Moway: 00:24:035 (2) - whistle on the repeat
14:17 Moway: 00:25:285 (3) - whistle on the slider head
14:17 Lust: done done and done
14:18 Moway: 00:26:118 (4) - maybe whistle on the slider head, not as sure on this one but I think it mght fit
14:18 Moway: if you need me to explain on any of these let me know
14:18 Lust: well hmm
14:18 Lust: i dont think so
14:18 Lust: because the slider end has a finish
14:18 Lust: would that be too quick to have those two hitsounds?
14:18 Lust: or no
14:19 Moway: up to you on that one
14:19 Moway: i was 50/50 on it so
14:19 Moway: 00:27:368 (1) - whistle on the slider end
14:19 Lust: well ill add it and see what other people will say
14:19 Moway: 00:28:201 (2) - whistle on the repeat
14:20 Moway: 00:29:868 (1) - whistle on the repeat
14:20 Moway: 00:31:535 (3) - whistle on the repeat
14:20 Moway: 00:33:618 (1) - finish ont he slider head
14:20 Moway: 00:34:451 (2) - whistle on the slider head
14:20 Moway: 00:35:285 (3) - whistle on the slider head and end
14:20 Lust: done all
14:21 Moway: oh there's one already on the end, add one to the head anyway
14:21 Lust: yeah
14:21 Moway: 00:36:951 (1) - whistle on the slider head and end for this one also
14:21 Moway: these more constant hitsounds match the vocals and fit well with the build up into the kiai
14:21 Moway: 00:38:201 (2) - whistle on the repeat
14:22 Moway: 00:40:285 (1,2,1,2) -
14:22 Moway: whistle on the slider head of all of these
14:22 Moway: fit well with the guitar+vocal
14:22 Lust: alright i agree and added
14:22 Moway: 00:43:618 (3) - whistles on the head and end, and remove the one on the repeat I think to keep the same pattern
14:23 Lust: alright
14:23 Moway: 00:45:701 (1) - whistle on the slider end here
14:23 Moway: 00:47:785 (3) - whistle on the slider head
14:23 Moway: 00:48:618 (4) - whistle on the slider end
14:23 Moway: 00:49:868 (1) - whistle on the repeat
14:24 Moway: 00:51:118 (2) - whistle
14:24 Lust: done
14:25 Moway: 00:51:951 (4) - for this one, I think either add the normal sampleset to the ends and repeat, or maybe you could try drum hitfinishes as well
14:26 Lust: ill put a drum finish on the end
14:26 Lust: and then for the repeat
14:26 Lust: normal hitnormal?
14:26 Lust: or actually for the end
14:26 Lust: a soft finish
14:26 Moway: yeah that could work
14:27 Lust: yeah thats what i will do
14:27 Moway: just a sec for the kiai
14:27 Moway: i'm trying to figure out a good way to do this
14:28 Lust: i think the kiai is fine the way it is
14:28 Lust: just normal hitsounds
14:29 Moway: well give a couple minutes and i'll try something and i'll see what you think of it
14:30 Lust: alright, you are already helping me a bunch :')
14:30 Lust: ill brb one second
14:40 Moway: alright you there?
14:50 Lust: yes im back
14:50 Lust: sorry
14:50 Moway: alright
14:50 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lvPP.rar
14:50 Moway: see what you think of that
14:51 Moway: i think in the kiai there are strong parts that need to be accentuated with some hitsounding so i did a bit
14:51 Moway: diff should be called test
14:52 Lust: i like it!
14:52 Moway: cool cool
14:52 Moway: it's pretty straighth forward with what you have to do for it
14:52 Lust: could i use the hitsound copier?
14:53 Moway: would get rid of the ones you've done already
14:53 Lust: oh
14:53 Moway: i think
14:53 Moway: it's pretty easy to do it
14:53 Moway: first increase the kiai volume to 50%
14:53 Moway: and change the hitset for the kiai to the drum one
14:53 Moway: sample should be D
14:54 Lust: alright
14:54 Moway: then just add normal hitnormals on every 2nd and 4th count
14:54 Moway: so like 00:54:451 (2) - slider head
14:54 Moway: 00:55:284 (3) - slider end
14:54 Moway: and so on
14:55 Moway: i added in a couple other things in there that i can point out for you as well
14:55 Lust: please do ^^
14:55 Moway: just a couple soft hitfinishes and a drum hit finish
14:55 Moway: 00:53:618 (1) - soft hitfinish on the head
14:56 Moway: 01:06:535 (1) - this slider: drum hitfinish on the head and soft hitfinish on the end
14:56 Moway: 01:20:285 (1) - added a soft hitfinish here too
14:57 Moway: let me know when you're done doing that then we'll continue with the rest of the suggestions for this diff
14:57 Moway: then upload and i'll check to see if everything is good
14:57 Moway: the good thing about this isi that you should be able to hitsound copier this diff to your other ones, and for the most part it'll be okay
14:58 Lust: alright
14:58 Moway: probably will have to add a few but we'll cross thath bridge when we get there.
14:58 Lust: just to reiterate
14:58 Lust: its normal hitnormal on 2nd and 4th?
14:59 Lust: for kiai
14:59 Moway: yes
14:59 Moway: you should hear some pretty strong snare hits on those parts which match up
15:00 Moway: the drum samples should cover those softer drum hits which I think is what you were trying to do before with the lower volume normal hitset
15:04 Lust: alright updated
15:05 Moway: alright cool
15:05 Moway: just a couple fixes
15:05 Moway: 00:57:368 (2) - move the hit normal to the end of this slider instead of the head
15:05 Moway: 00:58:618 (4) - same for this one
15:06 Moway: 01:06:535 (1) - this should be drum hitfnnish on the head and soft on the end ^^
15:06 Moway: 01:14:868 (1) - remove the normal hitnormal from the repeat
15:06 Moway: 01:16:118 (2) - add it to the head of this instead
15:07 Lust: alright
15:07 Moway: 01:19:451 (3) - add a normal hit normal to the slider head here
15:07 Moway: then you're good to go
15:08 Lust: and then hitsound copy?
15:08 Moway: yeah, just be sure to change the kiai section of your other diffs to drum sampleset
15:08 Moway: and the volume increase as well
15:09 Lust: alright
15:09 Moway: one final aesthetic thing
15:09 Moway: 01:12:785 (1,2,3,4) -
15:09 Moway: rearange to fix the overlap here
15:09 Moway: here's my suggestion
15:09 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lx8p.jpg
15:11 Lust: oh fixed yeah
15:11 Moway: one more hitsounding suggestion
15:12 Moway: for the part beginning at 00:07:368 - until the kiai, i'd say increase the volume to 30%
15:12 Moway: or maybe 25%
15:12 Moway: just a little bit
15:13 Lust: yeah so it builds up
15:13 Moway: oh right
15:13 Moway: 00:33:618 - increase here by 10% I think
15:14 Moway: 00:51:951 - make this 50% volume
15:14 Moway: 00:45:701 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - move this entire section down a bit
15:15 Moway: right nowo 00:51:951 (4) - and 00:55:285 (3) - touch the hp bar
15:16 Moway: kind of all over the place now
15:16 Moway: 01:12:785 (1,2) -
15:16 Moway: swap NCs here
15:16 Lust: alright
15:16 Lust: yeah
15:18 Moway: I think that's enough for that diff
15:18 Moway: i didn't see anything for rhythm to change so it's good
15:18 Lust: alrighty
15:18 Moway: update the other two diffs with the hitsounds and upload everything again
15:21 Lust: done
15:21 Moway: alight
15:21 Moway: Normal time
15:22 Moway: those settings sho
15:22 Lust: wooo
15:22 Moway: kind of weird :3
15:23 Moway: maybe hp 4 ar 5 od 4
15:23 Moway: ar 4 or 5 I think
15:24 Lust: ill do ar5
15:24 Moway: alright
15:25 Moway: a bit nazi, but i noticed this right away
15:25 Moway: 00:14:035 (1,2,3,4) - check your spacing here
15:26 Moway: if it helps you any turn off grid snapping so that you can get nice 0.80 spacing between all of the objects
15:26 Lust: alright fixed
15:26 Moway: 00:07:368 (1) - fix up this blanket a little bit
15:27 Moway: lower the mid point and the end point a bit and it should look better
15:27 Lust: alright
15:28 Lust: mhmmm
15:28 Moway: 00:18:618 (4) - decrease the curve of this a bit to make a better blanket
15:28 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lyvX.jpg
15:29 Lust: alright done
15:30 Moway: 00:26:118 (6,1) - blanket is off here a bit, move 1 over to the right a bit for a better one
15:30 Moway: 00:30:701 (2) - move the 2nd mid point up and to the right some so that it forms better with (1)
15:31 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lyDv.jpg
15:31 Lust: alright
15:32 Moway: 00:49:868 (1,2) - swap ncs here
15:32 Lust: done
15:33 Moway: 00:50:284 (2,3,4) - for these give them all the same shape, and I think you could do a nice pattern
15:33 Moway: sec for caps
15:34 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lyPc.jpg
15:34 Moway: oops
15:34 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lyOC.jpg
15:34 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lyPc.jpg
15:34 Moway: make sure you get a nice stack with (2,4)
15:36 Lust: alright tried it
15:37 Moway: 00:52:993 (5) - feels a bit too empty here and the placement is kind of weird, so let's try some stuff here
15:37 Moway: here's the rhythm i suggest for this
15:37 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lz02.jpg
15:37 Moway: i think it fits the diff better and the music well
15:38 Moway: now to figure out a way to do this to arrange the objects properly
15:39 Lust: wait
15:39 Lust: so
15:39 Lust: i change 5 to a hit
15:39 Moway: oh yeah sorry
15:39 Lust: and then what follows that a repeat?
15:40 Moway: yeah a repeating 1/4 slider
15:42 Lust: alright
15:42 Lust: so
15:42 Lust: can i stack (5) on top of (4)?
15:42 Lust: or
15:42 Lust: http://puu.sh/5lzhs.jpg
15:42 Lust: will that work
15:43 Moway: yeah that'll work
15:43 Lust: okay
15:43 Moway: oh wait
15:43 Moway: shoot
15:43 Moway: never mind
15:43 Moway: fa
15:43 Lust: :<
15:43 Moway: i'm sorry
15:43 Moway: i forgot that you had a repeat on (4) so i was like wat is this
15:44 Moway: the way you had it before works fine >_<
15:44 Lust: i changed it
15:44 Lust: oh
15:44 Lust: uhhhh
15:44 Moway: well this way wors too if you already made it work
15:44 Moway: works*
15:46 Moway: 01:06:118 (5,6) - this part feels a bit empty, maybe change the circles into 1/4 sliders? could be nice
15:46 Moway: or alternatively, just a single repeatin 1/4 where 5 is also works
15:48 Moway: 01:00:285 (1) - little blanket fix here, moving this to (156,234) is good
15:48 Lust: oh shoot
15:48 Lust: did i have certain hitsounds on there again?
15:48 Lust: those two circles
15:49 Lust: from before
15:49 Moway: normal hitnormal on 5
15:49 Lust: at start?
15:49 Moway: yeah
15:50 Moway: 01:08:618 (3) - add normal hitnormal to the end of this one, not sure why it didn't copy
15:51 Moway: 01:11:535 (1,2) - move these to the right some to make (2) further from 01:09:868 (1,2,3) -
15:52 Moway: 01:14:868 (1,2) - spacing is a bit off here, make sure that it is 0.8 also
15:53 Lust: alright fixed
15:54 Moway: 01:19:451 (3,1,2) - some spacing issues here also, make sure the spacing between (3,1) is good
15:54 Moway: also i think you have to add a bit more curve to (2) so that it is 0.8x spaced from (1) when you stack them
15:55 Lust: fixed
15:55 Lust: i think it should be good now
15:55 Moway: sorry for being all over the place
15:55 Moway: 00:05:285 (4,5,6) - check this spacing here
15:55 Lust: oh no no no you're being a big help
15:56 Lust: fixed
15:56 Moway: alright hitsounding should be pretty good now so i'll just run over a couple rhythm things
15:56 Moway: 00:01:951 (3,4) -
15:57 Moway: for these I would say do the circle first then the slider
15:57 Moway: I think it is more consistent with what you are matching musically
15:57 Lust: just switch them?
15:57 Moway: probaby will have to do some rearranging of objects
15:58 Lust: alright one question
15:58 Lust: oh wait nevermind
15:58 Lust: answered myself xD
15:59 Lust: http://puu.sh/5lAdp.jpg
15:59 Lust: is fine?
16:00 Moway: yeah just make sure you don't get overlap with 00:03:618 (1) -
16:00 Lust: no overlap
16:00 Moway: alright it'll work then
16:02 Moway: 00:39:868 - I think add a circle here to be consistent with 00:36:535 (4) -
16:02 Moway: might have to do some work with 00:38:618 (3) - to make the flow correct though
16:04 Lust: mmm alright i figured something out for that one
16:04 Moway: alright update it
16:04 Moway: then one more run through of it and we'll be done with the normal
16:07 Lust: updated
16:07 Moway: alright
16:08 Moway: 00:02:368 (4) - clap is on the wrong place here, move it to the repeat instead of the slider end
16:08 Moway: 00:06:951 (6) - change this to soft-hitwhistle
16:09 Moway: 00:32:576 (4) - add a whistle to the head of this one
16:09 Lust: alright
16:10 Moway: 00:51:951 (3) - stack is still off on this one, move it to (237,313)
16:10 Moway: adn actually make (3) a copy paste of 00:50:285 (1) - so you get the nice blanket effect
16:12 Moway: 00:09:451 (3,5) - nazi thing here, but fix this stack
16:13 Moway: 00:53:618 (1,2,3) - tidy up this spacing a bit
16:13 Lust: fixed
16:13 Lust: actually fixed it earlier when we were copying pasting before
16:13 Moway: 01:21:535 (3) - remove clap from the repeat
16:13 Moway: 01:22:785 (4) - add a clap to the head
16:14 Moway: 01:23:618 (6) - remove clap
16:14 Moway: 01:24:035 (1) - clap on the repeat
16:14 Moway: just fixing that up a bit
16:14 Moway: then that should be all for onw
16:14 Moway: now
16:16 Lust: sweet
16:16 Lust: and updated
16:16 Moway: alright Hard diff here we go
16:16 Moway: change your first green line to 20%~
16:17 Moway: 00:09:868 (6) - NC here
16:17 Moway: 00:11:535 (1,2) - switch NCs here
16:18 Lust: done
16:18 Moway: 00:28:201 (3,4,5) - maybe make these into a more blanket-y formation
16:18 Moway: at least make (3) blanket (4), then for (5) if you want you can make it curved and have another blanket with (4) if you like it that way
16:19 Moway: 00:31:951 (6) - NC here
16:21 Moway: 00:37:785 (3) - this slider, reshape it so that it is symmetrical so that you maintain equal spacing with 00:37:576 (2,3,4) -
16:21 Moway: also place it so it blankets those two circles
16:22 Lust: alright done
16:22 Moway: then it will look nice and clean
16:24 Moway: 00:43:618 (1) - i think this is better and looks nicer placed a bit higher up, the little jump isn't too crazy and it fits the music well, and it looks better
16:24 Moway: http://puu.sh/5lBxv.jpg
16:24 Moway: adjust spacing afterwar dof course
16:25 Moway: 00:45:701 (1,3) - fix this stack
16:26 Moway: 00:55:076 (5,6) - check this spacing here
16:26 Lust: alright
16:26 Moway: 00:55:701 (6,7,8) - check spacing here, and you can also rearrange these so that they are not overlapping
16:27 Moway: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/5lBGr.jpg
16:27 Moway: 01:02:576 (2,3) - put a bit more curve on 3 and go for a blanket here
16:28 Moway: 01:12:785 (4,5) - i would suggest removing this jump, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense with the music, and I think it'll look cleaner with equal spacing
16:29 Moway: if you want to put a jump here, 01:13:201 (5,6) - makes more sense to me
16:30 Moway: 01:10:701 (3) - add normal hitnormal to the end here
16:30 Moway: 01:18:410 (6) - NC
16:31 Lust: done
16:31 Moway: 01:02:785 (3,2) - fix this slight overlap I think
16:31 Moway: you can move (2) over to blanket the slider end of 01:03:618 (1) - which works well I think
16:32 Moway: 01:16:743 (1,2) - don't really like the stack here because it makes a stop right before 01:17:576 (3,4,5) - which is more flowy. I'd say unstack these so that you can carry the flow from (1) all the way through this little circle part
16:33 Lust: alright done
16:35 Moway: 01:23:826 (5,1) - i'd say switch the NCs here so that the stack is the same color, I think it is a bit more consistent also
16:36 Lust: adone
16:37 Moway: oh
16:37 Moway: you have an unsnapped green line at 00:07:362 -
16:38 Moway: delete that
16:38 Moway: add a green line at 00:33:618 - with 35% volume
16:38 Moway: once you're done with that upload and we'll do another run through
16:42 Lust: alright uploaded
16:43 Moway: =00:14:035 (1) - whistle on the slider end
16:43 Moway: 00:15:285 (3) - whistle on the head
16:44 Moway: 00:46:535 (3) - put this slider at (262,222)
16:45 Moway: 01:02:785 (3) - this one to (382,167)
16:45 Moway: then move 01:03:618 (1,2) - a bit to avoid the overlap
16:46 Moway: 01:05:701 (6,7) - check your spacing here
16:46 Moway: 01:08:201 (1,2,3) - check spacing
16:47 Moway: 01:17:993 (5,1) - spacing
16:47 Moway: 01:22:368 (3) - clap at the end of this slider
16:47 Moway: 01:23:201 (4) - remove clap from the end here
16:48 Moway: then that's all for me
16:49 Lust: whew
16:49 Lust: thank you soooooooooooooo much
16:49 Lust: like
16:49 Moway: np ^^
16:50 Lust: i would never notice any of this stuff
16:50 Lust: do you think i should call a BAT now?
16:50 Moway: you develop it the more you map
16:50 Lust: yeah
16:50 Moway: I"d say get a couple more mods
16:50 Moway: since we did a lot of work today you should get some more to patch up whatever we didn't cover
16:51 Lust: alright, again thanks a bunch
16:51 Lust: took up a couple hours of your time
16:51 Moway: no biggie
16:51 Moway: i suppose i'll post this log
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,Lust,in-game req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.


[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:39:451 (3) - Why not add whistle(add slider head) in this here? (Others have added white line)
00:47:785 (3) - No need add whistle in red line,remove it?
00:54:451 (2) - I feel the slider end a bit close the (3),pattern not good,try it?
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!)
00:56:535 (4) - DS error. Move a bit?
00:57:368 (2,4) - Can be symmetry.
01:12:785 (5) - Blanket crooked off.
01:20:701 (2,4) - Can be symmetry.

[Normal]

00:06:535 (5) - A bit loud.
00:15:285 (4) - Slider head add whistle.
00:21:535 (2) - Slider head remove whistle,add whistle in the middle.
00:28:410 (3) - Slider end blanket (2).
01:04:451 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!)
01:21:535 (3) - Slider head remove clap,not fit.
01:25:701 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.)

[Hard]

00:09:451 (5) - add whistle?
00:23:618 (2) - (148|100).
00:31:535 (5) - (64|292).
00:42:785 (7) - (272|184).
00:43:201 (8) - (368|344).
00:45:284 (4) - Add note stack the 00:44:035 (2) and add whistle.
00:47:993 (4,5) - Recommended Ctrl+g , better flow.
00:49:035 (7) - (316|112).
00:50:076 (3) - (100|152).
00:55:701 (6,7) - Slider end too close.
01:22:368 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.
01:25:701 (6) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.)

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Lust
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Topic Starter
Lust
smallboat

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Lust,in-game req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.


[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:39:451 (3) - Why not add whistle(add slider head) in this here? (Others have added white line) nah
00:47:785 (3) - No need add whistle in red line,remove it? nah
00:54:451 (2) - I feel the slider end a bit close the (3),pattern not good,try it?
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) changed!
00:56:535 (4) - DS error. Move a bit? fixed
00:57:368 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. eh fixed
01:12:785 (5) - Blanket crooked off. ^
01:20:701 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. ^

[Normal]

00:06:535 (5) - A bit loud. not really
00:15:285 (4) - Slider head add whistle. done
00:21:535 (2) - Slider head remove whistle,add whistle in the middle. mm nah i think it is good
00:28:410 (3) - Slider end blanket (2). not sure what you want me to do here
01:04:451 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) ooo nice im using
01:21:535 (3) - Slider head remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done

[Hard]

00:09:451 (5) - add whistle? added
00:23:618 (2) - (148|100).
00:31:535 (5) - (64|292).
00:42:785 (7) - (272|184).
00:43:201 (8) - (368|344). did all of the above position changes
00:45:284 (4) - Add note stack the 00:44:035 (2) and add whistle. done
00:47:993 (4,5) - Recommended Ctrl+g , better flow. done
00:49:035 (7) - (316|112). done
00:50:076 (3) - (100|152). ^
00:55:701 (6,7) - Slider end too close. fixed
01:22:368 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (6) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

thank you very much for mod!
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
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Kytoxid
Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)

The light yellow approach circles don't show up very well on the white background; I would pick a different combo colour there.

[Easy]

00:06:118 (5,6) - Since the audio fades out kinda gradually, I would recommend fading the hitsounds out a bit more gradually as well.
00:11:951 (4,5,1,2) - This back-and-forth pattern will be pretty confusing for beginners.
01:20:701 (2) - The slider-slides are quite loud and noticeable here. I'd silence them.

Not much to say here, but this diff seemed really boring. :( It's basically a constant 1/2 slider pattern. I was introducing a friend to the game earlier today and he actually had a lot of trouble with this kind of map, compared to the "old" note-heavy style Easy maps.

Meh, it's a stylistic difference, I guess, but I wish some of the rhythms were more interesting.

[Normal]

00:11:743 (6) - Doesn't look very nice, imo.
00:30:701 (2,3,4) - You followed the vocals pretty tightly in the previous combo, might as well continue here.
01:20:284 (1,2) - I hated this pattern when I was playing at a Normal/Hard level, lol.

The first half was a bit boring here, like Easy, but the kiai time patterns were pretty fun to play.

[Tari]

00:12:576 (5) - This jump was a bit unintuitive, given that this and the last combo generally followed the vocals, not the piano.
00:21:951 (5) - Blanket nazi; tail can be moved 2 grids right for a better blanket.
00:25:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - More naziing! 3 and 6 aren't perfectly symmetrical (use Ctrl-H).
00:28:409 - Missing the "su" here feels a bit weird, but it's not too bad. I'd move 00:28:618 (3) to be 1/4 earlier though. (and respace, of course)
00:45:701 (6) - This could be better-blanketed too.
01:21:118 (3) - The claps here stood out a bit; I was expecting claps at 01:22:784 (3) too, but they didn't occur.
01:26:534 (7) - A bit loud.

Nice. A lot of tiny things, but overall this diff played well.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D
Lust
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2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

Kytoxid wrote:

Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) changed!

The light yellow approach circles don't show up very well on the white background; I would pick a different combo colour there. changed!

[Easy]

00:06:118 (5,6) - Since the audio fades out kinda gradually, I would recommend fading the hitsounds out a bit more gradually as well. changed
00:11:951 (4,5,1,2) - This back-and-forth pattern will be pretty confusing for beginners. changed
01:20:701 (2) - The slider-slides are quite loud and noticeable here. I'd silence them. i think they are fine

Not much to say here, but this diff seemed really boring. :( It's basically a constant 1/2 slider pattern. I was introducing a friend to the game earlier today and he actually had a lot of trouble with this kind of map, compared to the "old" note-heavy style Easy maps.

Meh, it's a stylistic difference, I guess, but I wish some of the rhythms were more interesting.

[Normal]

00:11:743 (6) - Doesn't look very nice, imo. changed
00:30:701 (2,3,4) - You followed the vocals pretty tightly in the previous combo, might as well continue here. i think it is fine the way it is
01:20:284 (1,2) - I hated this pattern when I was playing at a Normal/Hard level, lol. i will keep for now, if more mods mention it then i will change

The first half was a bit boring here, like Easy, but the kiai time patterns were pretty fun to play.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D will do!
thank you very much!
Tari
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1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari

Kytoxid wrote:

Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D



[Tari]

00:12:576 (5) - This jump was a bit unintuitive, given that this and the last combo generally followed the vocals, not the piano. Not really, that strong piano sound makes this jump feel great.
00:21:951 (5) - Blanket nazi; tail can be moved 2 grids right for a better blanket.
00:25:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - More naziing! 3 and 6 aren't perfectly symmetrical (use Ctrl-H).
00:28:409 - Missing the "su" here feels a bit weird, but it's not too bad. I'd move 00:28:618 (3) to be 1/4 earlier though. (and respace, of course)
00:45:701 (6) - This could be better-blanketed too.
01:21:118 (3) - The claps here stood out a bit; I was expecting claps at 01:22:784 (3) too, but they didn't occur.
01:26:534 (7) - A bit loud.

Nice. A lot of tiny things, but overall this diff played well.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D
Rest fixed!


http://puu.sh/5r0AS.osu
Accel World
Accel World
[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc
00:07:368-(1) remove nc

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@

[Tari]

01:11:543-(3) This slider...O.O
01:11:951-(4) So the distance snap of this one...?
01:28:201-Maybe this green line should be moved to 01:26:951? or there is a missing spinner?

I love this song:D
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank!
Vita-VVA
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Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :)

00:56:535 (4) - cut half

[Tari]
00:15:284 (4) - add a note
add a note

00:16:951 (1) - forget the hit sound or on purpose?:) If the later,may add hit sound at

and
00:19:868 (7) - and remove 00:20:284 (1) - 's

00:44:243 (2) - may add a note between 2 and 3

01:06:326 (6) - change it into ?

01:26:534 (7) - may add a green line to light the hit sound just like the follow

and
using clap

hope to be helpful!
Lust
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Lust

Accel World wrote:

[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc nope
00:07:368-(1) remove nc and nope

my reasoning behind those two colors is change in hitsounds, not to follow the downbeat

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180 why not
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it nah
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316 done
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@ its fine

I love this song:D haha me too
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank! trying my best lol

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion not to me

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :) not feeling it

00:56:535 (4) - cut half fine how it is

no change ;~;

hope to be helpful! thanks anyways!
thanks for the mods! i will get to your maps shortly
Tari
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Tari
remapped the end of kiai and fixed the green line thanks for the mod guys!
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

[Tari]

00:26:118 (7) - Something about this pentagon still looks a bit weird; move 7 up a bit? Maybe it's just my eyes getting tired.
00:31:534 (3,4,5,6,7) - This could be a neater pentagon too, if you're going for that effect.
01:25:284 (5,6) - Not the best place (musically) for a mini-jump; is there a way to rearrange this to be distance snapped?

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look!
Tari
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Tari
Changed everything, except the last suggestion given in my diff, if I were to change that mini jump, then I would have to change 00:05:909 (6) -

which I don't want.

http://puu.sh/5wqSH.osu
Lust
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Lust
Kyto

Kytoxid wrote:

Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

fixed everything!

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

fixed everything!

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look! will do ^^

thanks! I fixed everything
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Alrighty then. :D
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Lust
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Lust

Kytoxid wrote:

Alrighty then. :D
thank you for the bubble!

fiaejgoiwjgo such excitement
Irreversible
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Irreversible
ah, i will take care of that map :P my post will appear here tomorrow ^_^~
Moway
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Moway
Kind of sad that you abandoned your Hard. I would have liked to see you try to improve it more instead of just removing it.
Silver Crow
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Silver Crow
Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P?

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes?

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group

that's all~

Nomal

00:42:785 (4) - why dont just go into straight ?

that's all~

easy

Nothing bad!Nice easy <3


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!
Lust
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Lust
its bubbled already, thanks though. i will keep your suggestions just in case
Aurele
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Aurele
"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
Lust
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Lust

Gabe wrote:

"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
its the official title for the song

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)
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Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody.


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start.
Andrea
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Andrea
~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.
~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead.
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.
~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read.
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty.
Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.
Lust
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Topic Starter
Lust
Silver Crow

Silver Crow wrote:

Nomal done

GOOD LUCK!
just one change, thanks!

Konei

Konei wrote:

[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody. done


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start. done

thank you konei!

Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better. changed bgs
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully. fixed all combo colors in my diffs
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map. done
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
eh i think it is fine the way it is, the spinner sort of does the job

~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.
done

~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead. done
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.
adjusted, Ctrl+G and then readjust blanket

Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled. done ^^

Thanks to you all!
Tari
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Tari
Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly. k, but I want to keep the spacing from 1 to 2 the same here.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read. Increased spacing of note 1, but I don't want to decrease spacing at note 7 because It needs to be consistent to 00:33:201 (8) -
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully. Just Reversed the slider.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty. k, but didn't give me the positions, so I did what I thought best and decided to silence the end.
Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.

Fixed everything here! Thanks Andrea

SilverCrow

Silver Crow wrote:

Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P? Its a matter of preference and I like slider better here.

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes? They're fine, I can't really make a pattern out of them, and I want it to look similar to 01:05:284 (3,4,5) - so no change

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group Not true, the strong vocal and the downbeats start there, so my comboing is fine

that's all~


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!

No changes, read inside for more info


Update http://puu.sh/5BhLd.osu
Andrea
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Everything is better but since you've got three mods actually after the bubble I'm not confident in ranking this, sorry!

Re-Bubbled~
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