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Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)

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Lust
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smallboat

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Lust,in-game req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.


[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:39:451 (3) - Why not add whistle(add slider head) in this here? (Others have added white line) nah
00:47:785 (3) - No need add whistle in red line,remove it? nah
00:54:451 (2) - I feel the slider end a bit close the (3),pattern not good,try it?
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) changed!
00:56:535 (4) - DS error. Move a bit? fixed
00:57:368 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. eh fixed
01:12:785 (5) - Blanket crooked off. ^
01:20:701 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. ^

[Normal]

00:06:535 (5) - A bit loud. not really
00:15:285 (4) - Slider head add whistle. done
00:21:535 (2) - Slider head remove whistle,add whistle in the middle. mm nah i think it is good
00:28:410 (3) - Slider end blanket (2). not sure what you want me to do here
01:04:451 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) ooo nice im using
01:21:535 (3) - Slider head remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done

[Hard]

00:09:451 (5) - add whistle? added
00:23:618 (2) - (148|100).
00:31:535 (5) - (64|292).
00:42:785 (7) - (272|184).
00:43:201 (8) - (368|344). did all of the above position changes
00:45:284 (4) - Add note stack the 00:44:035 (2) and add whistle. done
00:47:993 (4,5) - Recommended Ctrl+g , better flow. done
00:49:035 (7) - (316|112). done
00:50:076 (3) - (100|152). ^
00:55:701 (6,7) - Slider end too close. fixed
01:22:368 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (6) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

thank you very much for mod!
Kytoxid
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Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)

The light yellow approach circles don't show up very well on the white background; I would pick a different combo colour there.

[Easy]

00:06:118 (5,6) - Since the audio fades out kinda gradually, I would recommend fading the hitsounds out a bit more gradually as well.
00:11:951 (4,5,1,2) - This back-and-forth pattern will be pretty confusing for beginners.
01:20:701 (2) - The slider-slides are quite loud and noticeable here. I'd silence them.

Not much to say here, but this diff seemed really boring. :( It's basically a constant 1/2 slider pattern. I was introducing a friend to the game earlier today and he actually had a lot of trouble with this kind of map, compared to the "old" note-heavy style Easy maps.

Meh, it's a stylistic difference, I guess, but I wish some of the rhythms were more interesting.

[Normal]

00:11:743 (6) - Doesn't look very nice, imo.
00:30:701 (2,3,4) - You followed the vocals pretty tightly in the previous combo, might as well continue here.
01:20:284 (1,2) - I hated this pattern when I was playing at a Normal/Hard level, lol.

The first half was a bit boring here, like Easy, but the kiai time patterns were pretty fun to play.

[Tari]

00:12:576 (5) - This jump was a bit unintuitive, given that this and the last combo generally followed the vocals, not the piano.
00:21:951 (5) - Blanket nazi; tail can be moved 2 grids right for a better blanket.
00:25:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - More naziing! 3 and 6 aren't perfectly symmetrical (use Ctrl-H).
00:28:409 - Missing the "su" here feels a bit weird, but it's not too bad. I'd move 00:28:618 (3) to be 1/4 earlier though. (and respace, of course)
00:45:701 (6) - This could be better-blanketed too.
01:21:118 (3) - The claps here stood out a bit; I was expecting claps at 01:22:784 (3) too, but they didn't occur.
01:26:534 (7) - A bit loud.

Nice. A lot of tiny things, but overall this diff played well.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D
Lust
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Kytoxid wrote:

Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) changed!

The light yellow approach circles don't show up very well on the white background; I would pick a different combo colour there. changed!

[Easy]

00:06:118 (5,6) - Since the audio fades out kinda gradually, I would recommend fading the hitsounds out a bit more gradually as well. changed
00:11:951 (4,5,1,2) - This back-and-forth pattern will be pretty confusing for beginners. changed
01:20:701 (2) - The slider-slides are quite loud and noticeable here. I'd silence them. i think they are fine

Not much to say here, but this diff seemed really boring. :( It's basically a constant 1/2 slider pattern. I was introducing a friend to the game earlier today and he actually had a lot of trouble with this kind of map, compared to the "old" note-heavy style Easy maps.

Meh, it's a stylistic difference, I guess, but I wish some of the rhythms were more interesting.

[Normal]

00:11:743 (6) - Doesn't look very nice, imo. changed
00:30:701 (2,3,4) - You followed the vocals pretty tightly in the previous combo, might as well continue here. i think it is fine the way it is
01:20:284 (1,2) - I hated this pattern when I was playing at a Normal/Hard level, lol. i will keep for now, if more mods mention it then i will change

The first half was a bit boring here, like Easy, but the kiai time patterns were pretty fun to play.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D will do!
thank you very much!
Tari
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Tari

Kytoxid wrote:

Heya, here's your mod, as promised. :D



[Tari]

00:12:576 (5) - This jump was a bit unintuitive, given that this and the last combo generally followed the vocals, not the piano. Not really, that strong piano sound makes this jump feel great.
00:21:951 (5) - Blanket nazi; tail can be moved 2 grids right for a better blanket.
00:25:284 (3,4,5,6,7) - More naziing! 3 and 6 aren't perfectly symmetrical (use Ctrl-H).
00:28:409 - Missing the "su" here feels a bit weird, but it's not too bad. I'd move 00:28:618 (3) to be 1/4 earlier though. (and respace, of course)
00:45:701 (6) - This could be better-blanketed too.
01:21:118 (3) - The claps here stood out a bit; I was expecting claps at 01:22:784 (3) too, but they didn't occur.
01:26:534 (7) - A bit loud.

Nice. A lot of tiny things, but overall this diff played well.

I think there are still some tweaks that can be made here and there (mostly with the rhythms on the lower diffs and a couple of the blankets/placements), but otherwise the map is pretty solid. Send me a message after it gets 2-3 more mods. :D
Rest fixed!


http://puu.sh/5r0AS.osu
Accel World
Accel World
[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc
00:07:368-(1) remove nc

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@

[Tari]

01:11:543-(3) This slider...O.O
01:11:951-(4) So the distance snap of this one...?
01:28:201-Maybe this green line should be moved to 01:26:951? or there is a missing spinner?

I love this song:D
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank!
Vita-VVA
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[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :)

00:56:535 (4) - cut half

[Tari]
00:15:284 (4) - add a note
add a note

00:16:951 (1) - forget the hit sound or on purpose?:) If the later,may add hit sound at

and
00:19:868 (7) - and remove 00:20:284 (1) - 's

00:44:243 (2) - may add a note between 2 and 3

01:06:326 (6) - change it into ?

01:26:534 (7) - may add a green line to light the hit sound just like the follow

and
using clap

hope to be helpful!
Lust
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Accel World wrote:

[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc nope
00:07:368-(1) remove nc and nope

my reasoning behind those two colors is change in hitsounds, not to follow the downbeat

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180 why not
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it nah
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316 done
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@ its fine

I love this song:D haha me too
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank! trying my best lol

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion not to me

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :) not feeling it

00:56:535 (4) - cut half fine how it is

no change ;~;

hope to be helpful! thanks anyways!
thanks for the mods! i will get to your maps shortly
Tari
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remapped the end of kiai and fixed the green line thanks for the mod guys!
Kytoxid
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Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

[Tari]

00:26:118 (7) - Something about this pentagon still looks a bit weird; move 7 up a bit? Maybe it's just my eyes getting tired.
00:31:534 (3,4,5,6,7) - This could be a neater pentagon too, if you're going for that effect.
01:25:284 (5,6) - Not the best place (musically) for a mini-jump; is there a way to rearrange this to be distance snapped?

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look!
Tari
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Tari
Changed everything, except the last suggestion given in my diff, if I were to change that mini jump, then I would have to change 00:05:909 (6) -

which I don't want.

http://puu.sh/5wqSH.osu
Lust
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Kyto

Kytoxid wrote:

Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

fixed everything!

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

fixed everything!

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look! will do ^^

thanks! I fixed everything
Kytoxid
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Alrighty then. :D
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Lust
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Kytoxid wrote:

Alrighty then. :D
thank you for the bubble!

fiaejgoiwjgo such excitement
Irreversible
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ah, i will take care of that map :P my post will appear here tomorrow ^_^~
Moway
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Moway
Kind of sad that you abandoned your Hard. I would have liked to see you try to improve it more instead of just removing it.
Silver Crow
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Silver Crow
Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P?

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes?

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group

that's all~

Nomal

00:42:785 (4) - why dont just go into straight ?

that's all~

easy

Nothing bad!Nice easy <3


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!
Lust
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its bubbled already, thanks though. i will keep your suggestions just in case
Aurele
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"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
Lust
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Gabe wrote:

"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
its the official title for the song

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)
Last edited by Lust , edited 2 times in total.
Konei
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[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody.


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start.
Andrea
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~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.
~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead.
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.
~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read.
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty.
Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.
Lust
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Silver Crow

Silver Crow wrote:

Nomal done

GOOD LUCK!
just one change, thanks!

Konei

Konei wrote:

[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody. done


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start. done

thank you konei!

Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better. changed bgs
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully. fixed all combo colors in my diffs
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map. done
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
eh i think it is fine the way it is, the spinner sort of does the job

~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.
done

~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead. done
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.
adjusted, Ctrl+G and then readjust blanket

Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled. done ^^

Thanks to you all!
Tari
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Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly. k, but I want to keep the spacing from 1 to 2 the same here.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read. Increased spacing of note 1, but I don't want to decrease spacing at note 7 because It needs to be consistent to 00:33:201 (8) -
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully. Just Reversed the slider.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty. k, but didn't give me the positions, so I did what I thought best and decided to silence the end.
Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.

Fixed everything here! Thanks Andrea

SilverCrow

Silver Crow wrote:

Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P? Its a matter of preference and I like slider better here.

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes? They're fine, I can't really make a pattern out of them, and I want it to look similar to 01:05:284 (3,4,5) - so no change

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group Not true, the strong vocal and the downbeats start there, so my comboing is fine

that's all~


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!

No changes, read inside for more info


Update http://puu.sh/5BhLd.osu
Andrea
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Everything is better but since you've got three mods actually after the bubble I'm not confident in ranking this, sorry!

Re-Bubbled~
Lust
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Andrea wrote:

Everything is better but since you've got three mods actually after the bubble I'm not confident in ranking this, sorry!

Re-Bubbled~
Thank you for the rebubble!
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parabéns lust-chann
Lust
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ALust wrote:

parabéns lust-chann
obrigado alustoso
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Well, I was about to check your map now, why is it still bubbled? Please update..
Lust
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Irreversible wrote:

Well, I was about to check your map now, why is it still bubbled? Please update..
I'm at school now, I'll do so when I get home.
Irreversible
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Some IRC mod Happening~

IRC
22:45 *Lust is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)]
22:46 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Easy]]
22:46 Irreversible: 00:04:034 (1,2,3) - move down for a better transition
22:47 Irreversible: 00:06:118 (5,1) - i suggest a slight curve on the other side, lemme show you: http://puu.sh/5EghT.jpg ugly example, just to give you the idea
22:48 Irreversible: 00:11:118 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - i guess this pattern works, but it goes down, and then up again, and that's what gets weird imo to play
22:48 Lust: alright
22:48 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5Egnl.jpg take some ideas
22:48 Irreversible: (THE MARKED ONE I4 )
22:48 Irreversible: HUH
22:49 Irreversible: ops caps
22:49 Irreversible: (the marked one is 4)
22:49 Irreversible: 00:23:201 (1,2) - try to blanket this a little better
22:49 Irreversible: 00:28:201 (2) - this doesn't flow at all, i suggest a simple straight slider to the right here.
22:50 Irreversible: 00:41:951 (1) - no NC
22:50 Irreversible: 00:43:618 (3) - NC?
22:50 Irreversible: 00:51:118 (2) - this should be on the right side of the slider end of 1, because it points towards there
22:51 Irreversible: the rest works for me :3
22:51 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321933 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Normal]]
22:51 Irreversible: 00:15:285 (4,5,1) -
22:51 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5Egzj.jpg something like this for better flow transition?
22:52 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5EgBM.jpg 00:25:285 (3,4,5) -
22:52 Irreversible: 00:23:201 (4) - jumps aren't really allowed in normal, so i would suggest to space it properly
22:53 Irreversible: 00:28:410 (3) - blanket of 3 is not that nice
22:54 Irreversible: 01:04:451 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5EgJc.jpg something like this for a cool flowchange?
22:54 Irreversible: 01:21:535 (3) - remove that clap i guess :3
22:54 Irreversible: or make it more silent
22:56 Lust: ill remove it
22:56 Irreversible: okay
22:56 Irreversible: hard is cool, could you just make a better blanket00:08:201 (2) - ? i don't think tari will kill you for that xD
22:56 Irreversible: tell me when you're ready :) rest is fine!
22:57 Lust: im just about done yeah
22:57 Lust: let me submiteueueueu
22:57 Irreversible: sorry that i've been mean
22:57 Irreversible: ._.
22:57 Lust: no no no its okay ^^
23:00 Lust: okay it should be good now
23:01 Irreversible: k let's see
23:03 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Easy]]
23:03 Irreversible: 00:07:368 (1,2,3) - click on the whole and move to 331 60 or something
23:04 Irreversible: 00:24:034 (2) - snap properly
23:04 Irreversible: 00:33:618 (1) - hitsounds missing
23:06 Irreversible: k update again and then let's go :3
23:07 Lust: done~
23:08 Irreversible: first rank? :D
23:08 Lust: it will be :D
23:08 Irreversible: :)
23:08 Lust: thank you so much irre <3
23:09 Irreversible: <3

What we've fixed:

- Mostly some spacing stuff, and one unsnapped slider

Tell me when it's updated and ready!
Lust
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Lust

Irreversible wrote:

Some IRC mod Happening~

IRC
22:45 *Lust is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)]
22:46 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Easy]]
22:46 Irreversible: 00:04:034 (1,2,3) - move down for a better transition
22:47 Irreversible: 00:06:118 (5,1) - i suggest a slight curve on the other side, lemme show you: http://puu.sh/5EghT.jpg ugly example, just to give you the idea
22:48 Irreversible: 00:11:118 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - i guess this pattern works, but it goes down, and then up again, and that's what gets weird imo to play
22:48 Lust: alright
22:48 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5Egnl.jpg take some ideas
22:48 Irreversible: (THE MARKED ONE I4 )
22:48 Irreversible: HUH
22:49 Irreversible: ops caps
22:49 Irreversible: (the marked one is 4)
22:49 Irreversible: 00:23:201 (1,2) - try to blanket this a little better
22:49 Irreversible: 00:28:201 (2) - this doesn't flow at all, i suggest a simple straight slider to the right here.
22:50 Irreversible: 00:41:951 (1) - no NC
22:50 Irreversible: 00:43:618 (3) - NC?
22:50 Irreversible: 00:51:118 (2) - this should be on the right side of the slider end of 1, because it points towards there
22:51 Irreversible: the rest works for me :3
22:51 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321933 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Normal]]
22:51 Irreversible: 00:15:285 (4,5,1) -
22:51 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5Egzj.jpg something like this for better flow transition?
22:52 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/5EgBM.jpg 00:25:285 (3,4,5) -
22:52 Irreversible: 00:23:201 (4) - jumps aren't really allowed in normal, so i would suggest to space it properly
22:53 Irreversible: 00:28:410 (3) - blanket of 3 is not that nice
22:54 Irreversible: 01:04:451 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5EgJc.jpg something like this for a cool flowchange?
22:54 Irreversible: 01:21:535 (3) - remove that clap i guess :3
22:54 Irreversible: or make it more silent
22:56 Lust: ill remove it
22:56 Irreversible: okay
22:56 Irreversible: hard is cool, could you just make a better blanket00:08:201 (2) - ? i don't think tari will kill you for that xD
22:56 Irreversible: tell me when you're ready :) rest is fine!
22:57 Lust: im just about done yeah
22:57 Lust: let me submiteueueueu
22:57 Irreversible: sorry that i've been mean
22:57 Irreversible: ._.
22:57 Lust: no no no its okay ^^
23:00 Lust: okay it should be good now
23:01 Irreversible: k let's see
23:03 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/321938 Matsushita Yuya - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.) [Easy]]
23:03 Irreversible: 00:07:368 (1,2,3) - click on the whole and move to 331 60 or something
23:04 Irreversible: 00:24:034 (2) - snap properly
23:04 Irreversible: 00:33:618 (1) - hitsounds missing
23:06 Irreversible: k update again and then let's go :3
23:07 Lust: done~
23:08 Irreversible: first rank? :D
23:08 Lust: it will be :D
23:08 Irreversible: :)
23:08 Lust: thank you so much irre <3
23:09 Irreversible: <3

What we've fixed:

- Mostly some spacing stuff, and one unsnapped slider

Tell me when it's updated and ready!
Updated, changed everything. Thank you so much! :D
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Enjoy your first rank!

Ranked!
MouseEasy
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MouseEasy
Aeee Lust-chann!! <3
Stefan
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Stefan
Oh wow, nice! Congratulation for your first rank!
Natsu
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Natsu
congratz
Andrea
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Andrea
Congrats on rank man (:
Unsfamiliar
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Unsfamiliar
Oh first rank, gratz ^-^b and Tari!
mintong89
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mintong89
omg yes <3!
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
Congrats Lust!!
Lust
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thank you everyone~
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