1. Shoutouts to Tari and Moway for ridiculously helpful modding and advice
2. Kytoxid and Andrea for the bubbles
3. Irreversible for the rank <3

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello First mod!

[Easy]
00:12:362 - 00:13:612 Think you can add a long slider here, to match the vocals long hold on the 'ta' in 'katta' i dont feel this fits in easy difficulty
00:40:279 (4) - NC done
00:53:612 (1) - Double-click on the head, and add the finish hitsound. done
01:06:945 (2) - Add finish done
01:21:945 (4) - NC done
01:21:945 (4,1) - Not a pretty overlap, players will easily get confused by this. Please re-map this part. Ew haha yeah I don't even know how that happened
01:26:529 (1) - Should have a quiet end at the tail. Create a green timing point before or on the tail of this spinner, with a vol of 5% done

A few bad blankets, and certain part of the rhythm is questionable. if you say so

[Normal]
00:24:029 (3) - Move to 288/160 so it blankets 00:23:612 (2) - better. done
00:31:529 (3) - Please move it down, so that it isn't overlapped by 00:29:862 (1) - done
00:53:612 (1) - This time you'll need to double-click the head on the timeline to add the finish, like this:
done
01:06:945 (2) - ^ ^
01:26:529 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy diff. done

Umm the blankets don't look very well made, so I suggest you re-check your sliders You may want to re-model them a bit. rechecked

[Hard]
00:04:862 (5) - NC done
00:06:529 (1) - Remove NC fonr
00:11:529 (6) - NC done
00:21:529 (5) - ^^
00:29:862 (6) - ^ ^
00:31:112 (1) - Remove NCdone
00:36:945 (6) - NC done
00:41:112 (5,1) - Move a part. done
00:47:154 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm doesn't sound quite right here. Try out this rhythm instead:
tried something similar
00:53:612 (1) - Add finish on the head. done
01:06:945 (4) - ^ done

...You've overused those half-sliders quite a bit in this diff i noticed

Good luck~! thanks!

Dusicyon wrote:

Normal:

00:25:279 - You should change it like that -> agreed
00:49:862 (1) - This hitcircle don't fit with the timing, you should change it like that -> eh dont know how i feel about that ill think about it
00:56:529 (4) - Little sliders are difficult for an normal difficulty, you should change it like that -> fixed
01:20:695 (1) - You should change it like that -> ill pass
There's some hitobjects a bit out of the grid, my screen is a 4:3 size,
those hitobject overlap my screen border.
Exemple: this one -> 01:02:779 (5) - oh yeah fixed

Nice map! i'll mod the whole mapset later
I believe in you, that will be ranked soon! thanks to you! I appreciate

Moway wrote:

Hi there.

[General]

Sounds like you have double BPM here. Change your BPM to 72, and be sure to double your SV so that your slider lengths are correct. In the mod I will try to avoid using terms like 1/1 to avoid confusion. Also, try offset 285. Your current one seems a bit early to me. EDIT: On further instruction from Moway, I went ahead and change bpm.

Some tag additions: 夏雪ランデブー, opening, summer, show Will add!


[Easy]

00:02:362 (1) - remove NC done
00:04:029 (3) - NC done
00:05:279 (1) - remove NC, this will make this section more consistent with the rest of this diff, and your other diffs for that matter. done
00:10:695 (2,3) - I think you can have (3) blanket (2) here, looks cleaner to me. done
00:11:945 (4) - leaving just the circle here and not mapping afterward leaves this section feeling really empty. This is how I would map this part: http://puu.sh/5b83C.jpg. This incorporates the piano parts and emphasizes the strongest points while at the same time being simple to play. was not thinking about doing this at first to keep with the difficulty spread overall, but i changed my mind after finishing the rest of your mod ^^
00:18:612 - you can use that same pattern here as well. not feeling it but I will consider
00:20:695 (4) - NC here for consistency with 00:14:029 (1). done
00:24:029 (2) - make this a copy of 00:23:195 (1) so that they fit together better. Would look just a bit cleaner this way. tried my best
00:33:612 (1,2,3) - consider making these blanket. I think it would look a bit nicer, and it seems like it wouldn't affect the flow of the section too much. http://puu.sh/5b7PJ.jpg done
00:48:612 - I think a slider fits here well http://puu.sh/5b8UX.jpg done
00:53:612 (1,2) - have (1) blanket (2), looks nice. done
00:56:945 (5,1) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat.
00:59:862 (1,2) - ^
01:02:779 (1,2) - ^ all done
01:08:195 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing. done
01:09:862 (1,2) - switch NCs here done
01:12:362 (5,1) - blanket is a bit off here fixed
01:21:945 (1) - remove NC for consistency. done



[Normal]

00:05:279 (4,5,6) - This blanket is a bit off fixed
00:07:362 (1,2) - These can be reshaped a bit to look a bit better. Make (1) more curved so that it blankets 00:06:945 (6) more effectively. Then make (2) less curved so that it blankets (1). http://puu.sh/5b8ps.jpg done
00:12:779 (7) - I'd like this to be a 1/1 slider, then a circle a beat afterward. This is your Normal diff, so don't be afraid to map it out a bit more. done, i like it!
00:16:112 - add a circle here, the piano part is too strong to ignore IMO oh yeah definitely added
00:19:862 - object here and
00:20:279 - an object here, either use a slider or 2 circles for these. Again, these are very strong sounds in the music so you shouldn't be afraid to map them in, especially when this is not your easiest diff (I also suggested for you to map these even on the Easy) done
00:22:779 - I think you could use a circle here for that piano added
00:28:195 (2,3) - I think this is a stronger way to map this part. It matches the vocal better, and further distinguishes this from the Easy difficulty. http://puu.sh/5b8z1.jpg tried it
00:30:695 (2) - If you use a red point in this slider, you can have it match up with 00:29:862 (1) - better, which looks better to me. http://puu.sh/5b8Cz.jpg done
00:32:570 - add a slider here like so: http://puu.sh/5b8EN.jpg. Matches the piano pretty well. done
00:36:529 - add a circle here. added
00:39:862 - and here. This part is kind of building to the kiai, and since this is your middle diff you should map more of it. These spots have fairly strong musical ideas corresponding to them so I think it is a good idea to map those out. mapped
00:45:695 (1) - this suggestion will be to add an object before this, as well as changing this slider. Add a repeat slider at 00:44:862, then change 00:45:695 (1) to a longer non-repeating slider. Doing so will map that little guitar riff and fill that empty space. The longer slider will match the vocal better. http://puu.sh/5b8Ne.jpg tried it
00:48:404 - add two sliders here like this : http://puu.sh/5b8QG.jpg. This will match the guitar, and give the player more to play. added
00:51:112 (3) - For this, it would be nice for you to make it a copy of 00:51:945 (4) so that they interlock properly. It'll look nicer that way. http://puu.sh/5b8SO.jpg done
00:52:987 - a short slider here matches that drum really well, so I suggest adding that. http://puu.sh/5b8WO.jpg added
01:06:529 (1,2) - switching the NCs here would move the NC to the downbeat. done
01:09:862 (5) - NC here
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC
01:13:195 (3) - NC, seems like you got a bit off your pattern here. done those three

[Hard]
00:01:945 (5,1) - decrease spacing here, 3+ spacing is much too big here, especially since this part of the song isn't particularly strong or crazy. oh yeah changed
00:02:362 (1) - remove NC here done
00:03:612 (3) - add NC here, just fixing some inconsistency done
00:04:862 (1,2,3) - I'd say either make these all the same slope, or do some things to make them more unique, like make the angles more different or add some curves. Right now it looks a bit sloppy. Either make them all line up perfectly like http://puu.sh/5b98h.jpg or do some more creative things with these to make each slider unique. done
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - I'd say make these into some sort of shape. A straight line of circles isn't that interesting. You could do something nice and simple like an equilateral triangle and that would be nicer I think. tried
00:21:529 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing done
00:36:112 (4,5) - I don't think a stack fits the music super well here. You could try a sort of zig-zag shape here which I like, or whatever you come up with. http://puu.sh/5b9i6.jpg tried your zig zag ^^
00:37:570 (2,3,4) - tidy up this blanket a bit tidied
00:39:445 (1) - remove NC done
00:40:279 (3) - NC here for the downbeat and start of new vocal idea done
00:39:862 (2,3,4) - reshape these so that (2,3) form a blanket around (4). It'll look neat and cool. http://puu.sh/5b9o5.jpg done!
00:41:737 (1) - remove the NC here done
00:43:612 (6) - NC here done
00:43:612 (6) - Angle this out a bit to the left so that it is more visible. Most of the slider is obscured here by 00:42:779 (4). done
00:44:029 (1) - remove NC here, just more consistency things. done
00:44:341 (3) - delete this circle, a triplet here feels overmapped IMO. done
00:45:695 (1,2) - fix up this blanket fixed
00:48:195 (5,6) - I don't think I quite understand what is being mapped here. I'd say at this part try mapping along with the guitar in the background. The rhythm I hear is this (starting at 00:48:195) - http://puu.sh/5b9uf.jpg done
00:49:758 (2) - delete this circle, same thing as the triplet before. This feels a bit forced, and just having the two circles feels a lot more natural with the vocal. done
00:50:279 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think it would be nice if you could make it so this formation was centered. That way you could get some nice symmetry here. Even if you don't take this suggestion, then
00:51:945 (9) - move this over so that it has the same x-value as 00:51:529 (8). made it look nicer
00:53:404 - I like a circle here, or a short slider to match with those strings leading into the kiai. I think it gives the player a bit more momentum going into the most exciting part of the map. tried circle
00:59:654 - add a circle here. I think it matches the music well, and it keeps the flow you have going. added
00:59:862 (1,2) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat. done
01:01:945 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing done
01:02:570 (2,3) - This would look better as a blanket I think done
01:04:029 (2) - bit of a nazi thing, but this overlap is a bit sloppy looking. I know you can only see it for a very brief amount of time, but it's still worth fixing for some more polish. Moving it over to the left to blanket the slider end of 01:03:612 (1) is actually pretty nice also.
01:05:070 (5) - move this to the left I think. It would lead to a nicer flow to 01:05:279 (6) since it would be in line more with the path of the slider. ehh donehttp://puu.sh/5b9YS.jpg
01:05:279 (6) - While we're on this part, I think this would look nice as a blanket. http://puu.sh/5b9ZT.jpg done
01:05:904 (1) - remove this NC done
01:06:945 (4) - NC here done
01:08:195 (1) - remove NC done
01:08:195 (1,2,3) - I think you should make the spacing here uniform in one way or another. Having that 0.1x spacing increase looks a bit odd done
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC done
01:13:612 (6) - NC done
01:14:445 (1) - remove NC done
01:12:779 (4) - I would prefer for this to be a slider to keep up the momentum and flow here. I think it would match the music pretty well also. done
01:16:112 (1,2,3) - I think these would look nice as a blanket pattern: http://puu.sh/5b9Ic.jpg agreed!
01:16:945 (3) - NC done
01:17:570 (4,5,6) - move these up so that they are more above 01:16:945 (3). This would then flow better because the flow from 01:16:945 (3), is more upward, so starting these circles more up will make the angle less sharp and lead to better flow. done
01:18:404 (1) - remove NC
01:22:362 (1) - remove NC
01:23:195 (2) - I guess NC here
01:25:695 (1) - remove NC done!


A lot of work on combo consistency, and some other things. I was starting to get a bit sloppy so apologies for things I missed or if I wasn't clear on some things. Call me back for a recheck sometime. Good luck! Much appreciated for this mod! This was very helpful, probably best mod I ever got o.o

And I will call you back after some more mods, thanks!

El SolarBeam wrote:

[General]

I like this kind of slow and calm music, hoping more song like this ranked :3
But where's the hitsound.. Oh well, I'll skip hitsound modding firstly then hitsounded!


[Easy]

00:18:618 (3) Blanket perfectly. Move tail point to x:288 y:116 (and I prefer make it reverse slider and add circle at 00:20:284) done
00:24:034 (2) Move middle point to x:404 y:228 and tail pont to x:432 y: 172 done
00:27:368 (1) Move head point 2 grid higher to make perfect blanket mmm okay
00:28:201 (2) The space is too close to the previous slider fixed
00:29:451 I don't know if you follow the vocal or music, but both indicates.. better add circle here added
00:33:618 I prefer circles and slider combination here ehhh ill think about it

00:38:201 (2,3) I prefer this pattern because fitting more to both vocal and music done

00:42:784 (2,3) Creating blanket seems more comfortable done
00:43:618 One short and long slider sounds nicer for me not to me

00:54:451 (2,3) This kind of overlap doesn't look nice imo not kept
01:06:534 (4) My suggestion, create blanket with (3) like http://puu.sh/5fstG.jpg, then at 01:07:368 create something like this http://puu.sh/5fsv1.jpg i like!
01:14:451 Assuming you follow the music, add circle here added
01:18:618 (1) Putting it on x:240 y: 108 (or wherever fits) might be better than just a straight line pattern done


[Normal]

00:04:451 (2) Different spacing fixed
00:11:118 (5,6) Make more variative shape than just a straight line? nah
00:30:701 (2) Make it smoother smoothened
00:40:284 (1,2) Blanket perfectly, move (1) head point to x:368 y:172 done
00:47:368 (3) Move head point one grid to the left done
00:50:284 (2,3) Still seems different in direction to me idk
00:52:993 (5) Why not put this near the (4)'s head? tried
01:14:868 (1) Move head point to x:440 y:164 okay
01:18:201 (2) Move middle point to x:172 y:340 and tail point to x:232 y:336 done


[Hard]

00:00:285 Just wondering, why the space from (1,2) with (2,3) are the same plays better
00:10:701 NC here to repel confusion nope
00:11:534 Remove NC, add NC at 00:11:951 nope (note i say these because to keep with my combo patterns of before
00:11:951 (2) Recheck the spacing (except you do that intentionally) it is intentional
00:20:493 (2,3,4,5) This kind of pattern is hard to see imo i dont think so
00:54:034 (2) Make it curve opposing with (1) maybe? done
01:05:284 NC here done
01:16:951 (1) The curve seems different with the previous (1) and (2) fixed
01:18:409 (5,6,7) You can make a shape with these 3 sliders, don't just randomly put it nah i like it like this
01:20:284 Remove NC, add NC at 01:20:701 done


This is a nice map, but it's still lacks shape thanks and trying my best
Consider making a shape everytime it seems possible :3

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
You should check Ai mod, there're some basic issues remaining, about letterbox and lead-iin
I suggest that you add a muted normal-sliderslide, the sliders in kiai currently really apply big noise

Hard
00:01:118 (3) - better add some soft whistles for points like this to fit the music
00:03:201 (7,2) - better avoid the small overlap
00:06:951 (7) - better use soft sample? maybe also for 00:06:534 (6) - and soft whistles may fit
00:07:784 - better add one whistle each white tick for this part to fit the music? like 00:08:618 - and so on
00:09:451 (1) - better move the NC to 2, you should add NC consistently, for every phrase of vocal, or for every big white tick(downbeat)
00:09:868 (2) - split into 2 circles may form a better rhythm which matches with the vocal
00:11:951 - and 00:13:201 (3,5) - need whistles. plz add more whistles for the soft part. the piano really calls for them
00:17:368 (3,4) - what are you mapping to? As I suppose the head of 00:17:784 (4) - lands on nothing. If you're trying to follow the vocal you should start the long slider from 00:17:576 - , try the rhythm below ↓

SPOILER

00:20:493 (2) - this note is really unexpected, there's actually nothing, at 00:20:493 - , better simply leave it blank
00:27:785 (2,3) - maybe make them symmetric with each other
00:30:701 (3) - again rhythm problem, spamming 1/4 sliders doen't fit the music at all, plz try the rhythm below ↓

SPOILER

00:35:701 - the finish is unneccessary and a bit awkward as I suppose
00:36:535 (5) - I don't get the meaning for it to have such difference in distance between its former and latter notes
00:44:451 (4) - I think you messed up vocal and background music again, plz know the long vocal starts at 00:44:243 - , and if you wanna map to the piano, you have a beat at 00:45:076 - whle you currently don't. So plz make a decision whether to follow vocal or piano, at what part of the map, just plz don't them up, as it would be pretty unintuitive and confusing
00:47:576 (3,4,5) - unfitting too intense rhythm
00:47:576 (3,6) - they could be aligned better
00:51:535 (7) - better split it up into 2 circles to apply a better rhythm
00:51:951 (8) - and plz you should move the latter NC here, it divides two different parts of the music
00:52:368 (1) - not a good rhythm arranged, plz try something like the below ↓

SPOILER

00:52:576 - you really need a finish here to emphasise
00:53:410 (5) - on the contrary, this finish is not needed
00:54:868 (4,5) - similar rhythm issue, they should be replaced by a circle and a 1/2 slider plz, plz learn to solve other problems like 01:05:076 (5,6) - by yourself
00:55:285 (5,6,7) - better avoid the overlap
01:10:701 (3) - 's reverse arrow is overlapped by 01:09:868 (1) - 's hitburst and this is unrankable you could try to solve it like the below ↓

SPOILER

01:14:868 (8,1) - better exchange NC
01:16:118 (1) - plz know that the vocal starts from 01:15:909 -
01:17:576 (2,3,4) - and for these, I don't get what they're mapped to, I don't get so many hits from the music
01:23:201 (1) - don't you think the NC is unreasonable? It's apparently coherent with 01:22:368 (3) - , better move it to 01:24:035 (3) -
01:27:993 - move this green line to 01:28:201 - or the spinning sound would be weird, also for other diffs

Normal
00:03:201 (4) - normal whistles really don't fit this song =.= try soft ones plz, also for the latter ones
00:20:701 (1) - may try to adjust it like the below ↓ to avoid the overlap between 00:20:701 (1,2) -

SPOILER

00:25:910 (5) - oops, how sudden a clap here, plz remove it
00:28:201 (2) - ^
00:36:118 - it's ok that you add finishes like this, just be aware to make them consistent, and why don't you do the same in Hard
00:58:201 (2,4) - the overlap is avoidable
01:01:951 (3) - this rhythm is not precise, the vocal starts from 01:01:743 - .It's acceptable though, as it's in Normal and you made your rhythm consistent with 01:03:618 (1,2,3,4) -
01:11:951 (2) - again unrankable, reverse arrow overlappeed by hitburst just rotate it clockwise and put it back would be ok
01:20:284 (4,1) - exchange NC. the downbeat at 01:20:284 - divides two parts of music
01:24:035 (1,3) - avoid the overlap and they would look more satisfying
01:26:535 (1) - it's ok to start it from 01:26:326 - , in a Normal diff

Easy
I must say the sv is too high to be at 2.4 . Why is it the same with that in Normal? This is not like a Easy, plz make it lower at rearrange the diff
00:18:618 (3,1) - stuffs like this should be avoided. It's too confusing for new players, to see the approaching circle apearing on a slider
01:04:451 (2,3) - sliders like these should be further polished
Set less intense notes and use more long sliders, 1/1 ones ore even longer, to make the diff actually like a Easy

That's all
Good luck

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Hay there o/ =3 I hope this mod will help you

General:
How about a nice whistle for normal hitsounds?
http://puu.sh/5k4zW.wav

Easy
00:18:618 (3) Move the 2. sliderpoint to x:280 y:164 done
00:20:284 (1,2) Because of the ar you can see those circles in the slider, and that doesnt look so nice. fixed
01:04:243 (2) Ok, this overlap is ugly, delete this slider or put some HC in instead.

Normal
OD 4 AR 3 HP 4 nah
00:16:743 Add HC maybe?

Hard
00:00:701 (2) ctrl+g
00:35:701 (4) add clap
00:39:451 (6) ^
00:42:784 (7) ^
00:46:118 ^
Add some Hitsounds in Kiai Time nah


Thats all, i like the map :3
And now i have a new anime to watch ty

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Lust,in-game req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:39:451 (3) - Why not add whistle(add slider head) in this here? (Others have added white line) nah
00:47:785 (3) - No need add whistle in red line,remove it? nah
00:54:451 (2) - I feel the slider end a bit close the (3),pattern not good,try it?

SPOILER

(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) changed!
00:56:535 (4) - DS error. Move a bit? fixed
00:57:368 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. eh fixed
01:12:785 (5) - Blanket crooked off. ^
01:20:701 (2,4) - Can be symmetry. ^

[Normal]

00:06:535 (5) - A bit loud. not really
00:15:285 (4) - Slider head add whistle. done
00:21:535 (2) - Slider head remove whistle,add whistle in the middle. mm nah i think it is good
00:28:410 (3) - Slider end blanket (2). not sure what you want me to do here
01:04:451 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) ooo nice im using
01:21:535 (3) - Slider head remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done

[Hard]

00:09:451 (5) - add whistle? added
00:23:618 (2) - (148|100).
00:31:535 (5) - (64|292).
00:42:785 (7) - (272|184).
00:43:201 (8) - (368|344). did all of the above position changes
00:45:284 (4) - Add note stack the 00:44:035 (2) and add whistle. done
00:47:993 (4,5) - Recommended Ctrl+g , better flow. done
00:49:035 (7) - (316|112). done
00:50:076 (3) - (100|152). ^
00:55:701 (6,7) - Slider end too close. fixed
01:22:368 (3) - Slider end remove clap,not fit. done
01:25:701 (6) - Slider end remove clap,not fit.(Because it is in the end.) done!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Kytoxid wrote:

Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

fixed everything!

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

fixed everything!

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look! will do ^^

Silver Crow wrote:

Nomal done

GOOD LUCK!

Konei wrote:

[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody. done


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start. done

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better. changed bgs
2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully. fixed all combo colors in my diffs
3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map. done
4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.

eh i think it is fine the way it is, the spinner sort of does the job

~Easy~

1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.

done

~Normal~

1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead. done
2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.

adjusted, Ctrl+G and then readjust blanket

Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled. done ^^

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.

~Tari~

1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly. k, but I want to keep the spacing from 1 to 2 the same here.
2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read. Increased spacing of note 1, but I don't want to decrease spacing at note 7 because It needs to be consistent to 00:33:201 (8) -
3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully. Just Reversed the slider.
4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty. k, but didn't give me the positions, so I did what I thought best and decided to silence the end.

Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.

Silver Crow wrote:

Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider ? Its a matter of preference and I like slider better here.

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes? They're fine, I can't really make a pattern out of them, and I want it to look similar to 01:05:284 (3,4,5) - so no change

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group Not true, the strong vocal and the downbeats start there, so my comboing is fine

that's all~


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!