Hi there.
[General]
Sounds like you have double BPM here. Change your BPM to 72, and be sure to double your SV so that your slider lengths are correct. In the mod I will try to avoid using terms like 1/1 to avoid confusion. Also, try offset 285. Your current one seems a bit early to me.
Some tag additions: 夏雪ランデブー, opening, summer, show
[Easy]
00:02:362 (1) - remove NC
00:04:029 (3) - NC
00:05:279 (1) - remove NC, this will make this section more consistent with the rest of this diff, and your other diffs for that matter.
00:10:695 (2,3) - I think you can have (3) blanket (2) here, looks cleaner to me.
00:11:945 (4) - leaving just the circle here and not mapping afterward leaves this section feeling really empty. This is how I would map this part:
http://puu.sh/5b83C.jpg. This incorporates the piano parts and emphasizes the strongest points while at the same time being simple to play.
00:18:612 - you can use that same pattern here as well.
00:20:695 (4) - NC here for consistency with 00:14:029 (1).
00:24:029 (2) - make this a copy of 00:23:195 (1) so that they fit together better. Would look just a bit cleaner this way.
00:33:612 (1,2,3) - consider making these blanket. I think it would look a bit nicer, and it seems like it wouldn't affect the flow of the section too much.
http://puu.sh/5b7PJ.jpg00:48:612 - I think a slider fits here well
http://puu.sh/5b8UX.jpg00:53:612 (1,2) - have (1) blanket (2), looks nice.
00:56:945 (5,1) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat.
00:59:862 (1,2) - ^
01:02:779 (1,2) - ^
01:08:195 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing.
01:09:862 (1,2) - switch NCs here
01:12:362 (5,1) - blanket is a bit off here
01:21:945 (1) - remove NC for consistency.
[Normal]
00:05:279 (4,5,6) - This blanket is a bit off
00:07:362 (1,2) - These can be reshaped a bit to look a bit better. Make (1) more curved so that it blankets 00:06:945 (6) more effectively. Then make (2) less curved so that it blankets (1).
http://puu.sh/5b8ps.jpg00:12:779 (7) - I'd like this to be a 1/1 slider, then a circle a beat afterward. This is your Normal diff, so don't be afraid to map it out a bit more.
00:16:112 - add a circle here, the piano part is too strong to ignore IMO
00:19:862 - object here and
00:20:279 - an object here, either use a slider or 2 circles for these. Again, these are very strong sounds in the music so you shouldn't be afraid to map them in, especially when this is not your easiest diff (I also suggested for you to map these even on the Easy)
00:22:779 - I think you could use a circle here for that piano
00:28:195 (2,3) - I think this is a stronger way to map this part. It matches the vocal better, and further distinguishes this from the Easy difficulty.
http://puu.sh/5b8z1.jpg00:30:695 (2) - If you use a red point in this slider, you can have it match up with 00:29:862 (1) - better, which looks better to me.
http://puu.sh/5b8Cz.jpg00:32:570 - add a slider here like so:
http://puu.sh/5b8EN.jpg. Matches the piano pretty well.
00:36:529 - add a circle here.
00:39:862 - and here. This part is kind of building to the kiai, and since this is your middle diff you should map more of it. These spots have fairly strong musical ideas corresponding to them so I think it is a good idea to map those out.
00:45:695 (1) - this suggestion will be to add an object before this, as well as changing this slider. Add a repeat slider at 00:44:862, then change 00:45:695 (1) to a longer non-repeating slider. Doing so will map that little guitar riff and fill that empty space. The longer slider will match the vocal better.
http://puu.sh/5b8Ne.jpg00:48:404 - add two sliders here like this :
http://puu.sh/5b8QG.jpg. This will match the guitar, and give the player more to play.
00:51:112 (3) - For this, it would be nice for you to make it a copy of 00:51:945 (4) so that they interlock properly. It'll look nicer that way.
http://puu.sh/5b8SO.jpg00:52:987 - a short slider here matches that drum really well, so I suggest adding that.
http://puu.sh/5b8WO.jpg01:06:529 (1,2) - switching the NCs here would move the NC to the downbeat.
01:09:862 (5) - NC here
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC
01:13:195 (3) - NC, seems like you got a bit off your pattern here.
[Hard]
00:01:945 (5,1) - decrease spacing here, 3+ spacing is much too big here, especially since this part of the song isn't particularly strong or crazy.
00:02:362 (1) - remove NC here
00:03:612 (3) - add NC here, just fixing some inconsistency
00:04:862 (1,2,3) - I'd say either make these all the same slope, or do some things to make them more unique, like make the angles more different or add some curves. Right now it looks a bit sloppy. Either make them all line up perfectly like
http://puu.sh/5b98h.jpg or do some more creative things with these to make each slider unique.
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - I'd say make these into some sort of shape. A straight line of circles isn't that interesting. You could do something nice and simple like an equilateral triangle and that would be nicer I think.
00:21:529 (1) - remove this NC, it's inconsistent with the rest of your comboing
00:36:112 (4,5) - I don't think a stack fits the music super well here. You could try a sort of zig-zag shape here which I like, or whatever you come up with.
http://puu.sh/5b9i6.jpg00:37:570 (2,3,4) - tidy up this blanket a bit
00:39:445 (1) - remove NC
00:40:279 (3) - NC here for the downbeat and start of new vocal idea
00:39:862 (2,3,4) - reshape these so that (2,3) form a blanket around (4). It'll look neat and cool.
http://puu.sh/5b9o5.jpg00:41:737 (1) - remove the NC here
00:43:612 (6) - NC here
00:43:612 (6) - Angle this out a bit to the left so that it is more visible. Most of the slider is obscured here by 00:42:779 (4).
00:44:029 (1) - remove NC here, just more consistency things.
00:44:341 (3) - delete this circle, a triplet here feels overmapped IMO.
00:45:695 (1,2) - fix up this blanket
00:48:195 (5,6) - I don't think I quite understand what is being mapped here. I'd say at this part try mapping along with the guitar in the background. The rhythm I hear is this (starting at 00:48:195) -
http://puu.sh/5b9uf.jpg00:49:758 (2) - delete this circle, same thing as the triplet before. This feels a bit forced, and just having the two circles feels a lot more natural with the vocal.
00:50:279 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think it would be nice if you could make it so this formation was centered. That way you could get some nice symmetry here. Even if you don't take this suggestion, then
00:51:945 (9) - move this over so that it has the same x-value as 00:51:529 (8).
00:53:404 - I like a circle here, or a short slider to match with those strings leading into the kiai. I think it gives the player a bit more momentum going into the most exciting part of the map.
00:59:654 - add a circle here. I think it matches the music well, and it keeps the flow you have going.
00:59:862 (1,2) - switch the NCs here to put the NC on the downbeat.
01:01:945 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing
01:02:570 (2,3) - This would look better as a blanket I think
01:04:029 (2) - bit of a nazi thing, but this overlap is a bit sloppy looking. I know you can only see it for a very brief amount of time, but it's still worth fixing for some more polish. Moving it over to the left to blanket the slider end of 01:03:612 (1) is actually pretty nice also.
01:05:070 (5) - move this to the left I think. It would lead to a nicer flow to 01:05:279 (6) since it would be in line more with the path of the slider.
http://puu.sh/5b9YS.jpg01:05:279 (6) - While we're on this part, I think this would look nice as a blanket.
http://puu.sh/5b9ZT.jpg01:05:904 (1) - remove this NC
01:06:945 (4) - NC here
01:08:195 (1) - remove NC
01:08:195 (1,2,3) - I think you should make the spacing here uniform in one way or another. Having that 0.1x spacing increase looks a bit odd
01:11:529 (1) - remove NC
01:13:612 (6) - NC
01:14:445 (1) - remove NC
01:12:779 (4) - I would prefer for this to be a slider to keep up the momentum and flow here. I think it would match the music pretty well also.
01:16:112 (1,2,3) - I think these would look nice as a blanket pattern:
http://puu.sh/5b9Ic.jpg01:16:945 (3) - NC
01:17:570 (4,5,6) - move these up so that they are more above 01:16:945 (3). This would then flow better because the flow from 01:16:945 (3), is more upward, so starting these circles more up will make the angle less sharp and lead to better flow.
01:18:404 (1) - remove NC
01:22:362 (1) - remove NC
01:23:195 (2) - I guess NC here
01:25:695 (1) - remove NC
A lot of work on combo consistency, and some other things. I was starting to get a bit sloppy so apologies for things I missed or if I wasn't clear on some things. Call me back for a recheck sometime. Good luck!
You may want to re-model them a bit.
