GeneralI hear some faint whistles in the song now and then usually on big white ticks. Examples: 00:59:011 - , 01:07:359 - , 01:14:533 - and it seems to appear at the other kiai times as well. For these consider adding a whistle hitsound. I'd suggest adding more hitsounds overall to be honest.
Go over the map dozens of many times. Looks for ways to make it look nicer. You don't have to remap everything to do that, just look for ways to stack circles on previous sliders. It really makes a big difference.
[Deus Ex]OD 8?
02:20:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is very tough. IMO too tough and unreasonable because of the jump back to the center. I was able to do it, but it felt way too awkward and out of place.
03:16:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream doesn't match anything in the music. Felt so random.
03:25:099 (1) - From here to the end is the most challenging part. It makes the rest of the map look like an easy diff. Seriously inconsistent. This will make players very angry as most people who can play insanes will reach this part but most will fail this part.
03:34:229 (2) - Move to 03:34:359 - and make it so it only has one reverse to match the music better.
if you do the above suggestion then 03:33:446 (1) - can be longer. Slider can end at 03:34:229 - So it should look like this
http://i.imgur.com/WDRENrB.png Same goes for the other diffs too^
01:57:707 (3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream imo.
02:09:968 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:51:446 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:57:968 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and anything else in this diff like that that doesn't fit the music.
01:58:751 (3,4,5,6) - Make this look nicer. Looks so messy
03:18:055 (3,1) - Make it so (3) start and (1) reverse are on the same spot.
00:17:272 (1) - Spinner can have 5% volume? That might be nice.
01:06:446 (2) - Doesn't fit the music at all.
Overall, this diff is way too much 1/2 and not enough style. Play the map back at 50% speed. Focus on making sure most circles and sliders are there for a purpose to the song. No random reverse sliders and no random streams unless it plays well. Lots of them in this diff just doesn't feel right. Sometimes it works out, but in this case I don't think so.
[Yuno Gasai]The Slider Velocity is very high and feels out of place. Take the suggestions from the last diff as well as lots of it applies here too. Same with the rest of the diffs.
00:13:098 (1,2) - I think it would be better without a reverse. Make slider art
00:30:577 (3) - Try to avoid these circles under the sliders. It's a bit awkward while playing.
03:17:533 (3) - DS makes this entire last section feel like antijumps because the slider velocity is still really high.
[Hard]00:17:272 (5) - Finish
00:21:446 (1) - ^ on slider head
00:31:881 (1) - ^
00:33:969 (1) - ^
00:36:055 (5) - ^
00:38:142 (1) - ^
Replay the map like 10 times and listen for cymbols and consider adding finish whenever you do. Same with the other diffs.
00:59:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This just doesn't fit the music that well. It's like you forgot a circle then added a slider thinking the vocals ended. Doesn't make sense. Consider remapping this section. Plus the DS for the circles is quite high for a hard diff. I would make the circles closer to eachother, remove the reverse on the slider and move it so it finishes at the same spot, and add more circles like this:
http://i.imgur.com/p1skTak.png01:36:576 (4) - Move 1/2 back and add a circle here 01:36:707 - snapped on the slider head of the next slider, so it should look like this:
http://i.imgur.com/t4ckj3W.png01:47:012 (1,2) - Move (2) 1/2 closer to (1). Sounds better.
01:49:099 (5,6) - If you do the above suggestion, perhaps do the same thing with 2 sliders here?
I saw other places you could do the above rhythm but maybe it's just personal preference.
02:40:490 (4,5) - Delete (5) and have the slider end where (5) was.
02:46:229 - Consider adding a long slider. Have it start here and reverse here 02:47:533 -
[Average]AR should be at 6 or maybe even 7.
00:50:664 (1,2,3) - Not sure why you have reverses on these. I'd remove the reverse but make the slider longer so it ends on the same spot.
01:32:403 - Not sure why there is a break here. I think you should map it.
02:28:750 - Consider a spinner that starts here and ends here 02:30:837 -
03:18:838 (1) - I think this part would be better mapped normally without the spinner
Not much to say about
Easy or
Normal. I think Easy should have lower slider velocity for sure, but I guess it's okay. They both still suffer from the general problems the rest of the mapset has.
Patterns, stacking, clean up, etc. is what this mapset needs. The flow is good, and it has basic blanketing so it's not horrible or anything. But players generally want something that looks nice while playing or else it will be boring. Put a bit of effort into symmetrical patterns and whatnot.
Good luck
add something !
