Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

Yousei Teikoku - Zetsubou Plantation

posted
Total Posts
68
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 марта 2015 г. at 16:26:33

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Zetsubou Plantation
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: Yuno Gasai Yukiteru Amano Minene Uryuu Murumuru
BPM: 230
Filesize: 6411kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Deus Ex [Expert] (6,43 stars, 789 notes)
  2. Murumuru [Easy] (1,6 stars, 193 notes)
  3. Tsubaki Kasugano [Normal] (2,35 stars, 313 notes)
  4. Yukiteru Amano [Hard] (2,91 stars, 458 notes)
  5. Yuno Gasai [Insane] (4,28 stars, 595 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Zetsubou Plantation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Ver 2.2
My first map ^_^
Thanks for mods and help!!
Last edited by EneDZakura , edited 216 times in total.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Easy is completed! :)
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Jeiserity is completed!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Beatmap is completed!
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
good map~
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks =)
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Map is updated.
acid
40 posts
Joined July 2013
acid
Easy:
01:26:121 - 01:30:671 You might want to switch between two hitcircles and a small slider.
02:11:075 - 02:11:345 It went too quick on that part, you can put some distance between them to adjust the timing.
Personally, I also think the hitcircles are a little too large.

Normal:
I find no problem with the normal. It's great work.
Hard:
00:35:369 - 00:35:789 The slider velocity is too quick doesn't match with the beat. 00:37:437 - 00:37:817 Has the same problem as the earlier one.
01:18:695 - 01:22:175 It would be a good idea to put in a long spinner there. The time section that I put isn't exact but you can understand what I mean.:P

Jeiserity:
00:49:558 - 00:50:228 That stream is a little too quick a small slider with repeating reverse arrows would be a better choice in my opinion. 01:07:400 -01:07:850 The same problem as earlier. The stream is way too quick to press.
01:55:298 - 01:55:798 The stream is too quick again. :O
The only problem I find in this difficulty are the streams, they are too compressed in small timespans


That's it. :O I love this map. It's great work.
MMCherry
33 posts
Joined July 2010
MMCherry
HI。

[Hard]
I find so many notes‘ and sliders' distance are not consistent and too close or far， that i dont know if it is a intentional setting=A=? or you didn't open the disrance snap mode？？
For exmple
01:02:907 (5) - Too close to the previous note。
From02:53:776 (4) - to 02:54:298 (5) - According to the setting of "distance snap"，these sliders’ distance are too close and not consistent
02:55:342 (6) - Too close to the previous slider
and so on。

Besides，this song is 230BPM， those successive notes of 1/4 beat are too hard and fast ，it is not appropriate to the [hard diff] i think..you can use slider to replace it 。

I‘m a tyro and my english is poor，hope you can understand my reply =A=!!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks all. Done.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Updated offset.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Updated, added two new diffs.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
[General]

  • umm..did you play the Dnjeiserity Diff and insane diff?
    I played and thought they're strange.
    First,some parts are not on the beat,that will be a strange part.
    second,it's a 230bpm song,so some blank parts have to be mapped.
[DnJeiserity]

  • From 00:21:404 (1) - to 00:28:709 (2) - and 00:30:013 (6) - to00:36:796 (8) -
    I think there're varieties of way to set notes and sliders,give it a different try.And sliders of high speed are not suggested to use this radian.
    SPOILER

    00:38:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it should start here,you can take 50%speed and listen it again.

    00:41:231 Here's a white line ,it means a "beat",so don't make it a blank.this may be better.
    SPOILER

    00:43:839 (6) - make it a reverse slider.

    00:44:361 a note too.
    SPOILER

    00:45:013 i suggest to have a note here.and then try this.the previous pattern will make people hard to read what the rythem is.
    SPOILER

    00:53:491 a white line again,i prefer to add note here.

    From 00:58:970 (1) - to 01:00:665 (8) - A good part,It Will Be A Good diff if you do it in the whole diff.

    I suggest a breack time from 01:21:665 to 01:25:318

    01:32:361 umm,a strange break here,try to map it.

    01:42:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A good chance to make jumps with notes and sliders!

    01:51:144 (1,2) - note a very good idea to put notes on lyrics in the highest difficulty

    01:55:318 (1) - nice part from here to 02:02:883 (2) - . then i think put two same sliders here like this.02:03:144 (3,4) -


    02:22:448 (1) - really nice part from here to 02:25:448 (8) - .

    02:31:318 also don't make blanks like this.map it.
[Hard]

  • Also some blanks should be mapped in my opinion.
    01:28:187 (1,2) - strange,,,try to start from white line to white line.
    01:39:144 (7,8,9,10) - i suggest to put them apart like this
    SPOILER
And I also saw insane diff,many problems like Dej diff so....
I strongly suggest you to look at Saten-san's Yousei Teikoku map.
Yousei Teikoku's songs are very very nice to map,because it has strong beat and fast speed.Try to think what i mean...
I don't mean to blame or something,just see more maps and then come back to your own map, then you'll see new ideas and get new feelings.

If you still need mod,I'll do it then, just send me messages.Good luck.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks, N E K O !!!
Thanks for the star!
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Always Mirai Nikki ;_; by the way I love Yousei Teikoku.
I hope mod this later.~
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Always Mirai Nikki ;_; by the way I love Yousei Teikoku.
I hope mod this later.~
Thanks ^_^
I love too!
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
hello random mods by me

[General]
change BG, im scared
try reduce kiai time
Delete tags DnJeiser Yousei Teikoku Zetsubou Plantation Mirai Nikki. < tags just for user GD or anything related with your maps
are you follow instrument sound or follow vocal sound? your map is little bit confusing

[Begin]
i think just use 1/1 beat in this map
add some Hitsounds for better map

00:29:752 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - - CTRL+ H or CTRL +J seems legit or i think resnap this
00:29:752 (3) - NC
00:33:926 (6) - NC
00:38:231 (1) - why 1/2 beat in here?
00:43:448 (4) - 1/2 beat, resnap the slider

[Easy]
i think this diff is Normal, so Change Easy diff to Normal and change Song Difficulty to Normal

01:02:100 (6) - New combo
01:02:622 (1) - release NC
01:04:709 (3) - new combo
02:10:709 - add circle
02:33:926 (3) - NC
02:36:535 (5) - NC
02:44:883 (6) - NC
02:46:187 (1) - why you NC this?
02:56:883 (6) - NC

[Normal]
change diff name to Normal+

02:31:839 (5) - NC
03:32:883 - add circle
03:33:144 - add circle


[Hard]

00:36:535 (6) - shorter slider to 00:36:796
00:37:187 (7) - resnap slider to 00:37:057
00:54:144 - Add circle
01:36:796 (9) - NC
01:37:187 (1) - release NC
01:37:709 (2,3,4) - stack this, jumps too hard to read
01:45:926 (1,2) - NC in 2
01:49:057 (6,1) - NC in 6
01:51:144 (4) - NC
01:56:883 (4,5,6) - i think this stream is extreme for 230 bpm simply it to1/2 beat
02:50:361 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:18:013 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Insane]

AR+1
OD-1 or -2

just Place notes each beat, is insane diff remember
Try Reduce overmap streaming in this map
try New combo new notes pattern

[DnJeiserity]
HP -1 or -2
OD -1

Im surrender!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thank you so much!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Map is general updated!
Please download again :3
Thanks ^_^
DeletedUser_2010275
DeletedUser_2010275
Hihi ~ :3


[Easy]
  • 00:44:622 (5) - NC
    between 01:13:578 (1) - and 01:17:752 (1) - so bored :( add something !
    01:30:274 (5) - NC
    01:33:404 (1) - remove NC
    01:38:883 (4) - same slider shape 01:36:796 (3) -
    02:08:883 - add circle ?
    between 02:09:404 (4) - and 02:14:100 (1) - add something
    02:51:665 (3,4) - jump ?
    02:57:926 (6,1) - change NC
    03:20:883 (2) - same slider shape 03:16:970 (1) -


    [Normal]
    • 00:24:535 (1,4) - change NC
      00:29:752 - add circle
      01:00:796 (5) - +1 return or add circle
      01:09:926 - add circle
      01:11:491 (4) - same slider shape 01:10:709 (2) -
      01:27:665 (6) - ^ 01:26:622 (3) -
      01:34:578 (4,1) - change NC
      between 02:06:796 - and 02:09:404 (1) - add something
      02:23:491 (3) - change shape
      02:47:491 - add spinner at 02:49:057 -
      02:49:578 (9) - remove NC
      03:16:709 (5,1) - change NC


      [Normal+]
      • between 00:35:361 (8) - and 00:38:231 (1) - insert break time
        00:49:578 (5) - -1 return
        between 00:55:839 - and 00:58:970 (1) - add something
        01:10:970 (3) - move to (232,136)
        01:13:057 (4,1) - change NC
        01:26:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm

        01:29:622 (2,4,6) - place on white tick
        01:35:100 (2) - rhythm error
        01:37:057 (7) - same slider shape 01:36:274 (5) -
        01:42:078 - add circle
        01:42:796 - ^
        01:55:318 (1) - straight line
        01:58:709 (2) - move to (392,224)
        02:09:926 (6) - too bent
        02:37:057 (3) - -1 return and 02:37:839 (1) - move to 02:37:578 - finish at 02:39:144 -
        02:51:404 (5) - +1 return
        02:58:709 (2,3) - distance
        03:26:622 (4) - opposite slider


        [Hard]
        • 00:36:535 (6,7) - rhythm error
          00:38:622 (2) - overlapping 00:38:231 (1) - start
          00:44:491 (3) - remove
          00:45:926 (3,4) - distance ?
          00:49:970 (6) - remove
          01:17:491 (1) - move to 01:17:752 -
          01:36:535 (8,1) - too close. Many players will click earlier than necessary.
          01:37:709 (3,4) -exchange
          01:42:535 (8,1) - too close
          01:45:926 (1) - -1 return
          02:05:491 (5) - it's boring :(
          02:13:839 (1) - move to 02:14:100 - and 02:13:839 - add circle
          02:33:926 (2) - remove NC
          02:57:404 - add circle
          03:16:839 (1) - place on long white tick


          [Insane]
          • 00:22:448 (5) - straight slider
            00:38:231 (1) - place on long white tick
            00:45:796 (3,4) - distance
            00:55:839 (4) - -1 return and 00:56:361 - add circle
            01:13:578 (10) - big sv change，it is too sudden
            01:42:665 (3) - move to long white tick
            01:46:448 (6) - 1 gird up
            01:51:926 - add circle
            01:53:100 (1) - move to 01:53:231 - finish at 01:55:057 -
            02:02:883 (2) - -1 return
            02:07:970 (7,8) - remove
            02:13:839 (1) - move to 02:14:100 - and 02:13:839 - add circle
            02:41:100 (3) - rhythm error..
            02:47:231 (1) - move to 02:47:491 -
            02:55:318 (7) - big sv change
            02:58:448 (5) - move to (320,176)
            03:22:187 (1) - remove and add something


            [DnJeiserity]
            • between 00:36:796 (8) - and 00:38:166 (1) - add something
              00:39:600 (8) - +1 return
              00:44:491 (1,2) - move to white tick
              00:56:426 - add circle
              01:07:318 (5) - NC
              01:38:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not with song
              01:46:970 (4) - NC
              02:03:665 (3) - ^
              02:13:448 (4) - +1 return
              02:20:361 (5) - NC
              02:40:187 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm

              03:07:839 (1) - end at 03:08:100 -
              03:16:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move to long white tick
              03:21:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not with song
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks!
Done.
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Easy]
hmm, some of your objects appear closer then how they really should be :S You should use DS (Distance snapping) to help, especialyl for Easy/Normal modes.
00:24:274 (2) - ?

00:29:752 (1,2,3) - Too close to each other.
00:38:100 (1,2) - ^
00:55:578 (4) - Move to 00:55:839 for better rhythm consistency (so it has the similar spacing from 00:53:752 (2,3) - as 00:50:622 (1) - )
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish to the head. If your unsure how to, simply double click on the head on your timeline like this:

You'll know its been elected once it been highlighted in red. Add the finish and your done! ^^
01:03:144 (5) - NC
01:07:318 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:15:665 (1) - ^
01:34:448 (5) - NC
01:42:796 (9) - ^ And add finish
01:51:144 (2) - Add finish
01:55:318 (1) - ^ on the head
02:03:665 (1) - ^
02:09:404 (5) - NC
02:10:970 (6) - Add finish on the tail (And that is not the reverse sign, its this:
)
02:40:187 (4) - NC
02:49:578 (1) - Add finish
02:49:578 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
02:57:926 (1) - Add finish
03:25:057 (3) - NC
03:33:404 (1) - Add finish

You should really fix your DS in this map :(

[Normal]
  1. Approach rate Should be around 5.
  2. Overall difficulty +1
00:23:491 (5) - NC
00:25:057 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.
00:53:752 (1) - Add finish on the tail at 00:54:796.
00:55:057 (1) - Appears to soon after the slider. Try moving it to 00:55:839, and extend its tail to 00:57:926.
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish to the head (look back to what I've previously mentioned in Easy mode, at 00:58:970 (1))
00:58:970 - Why is the audio soft here??? Change it back to normal please!
01:07:318 (1) - Add finish
01:26:100 (1) - ^
01:30:274 (1) - ^
01:42:274 (2) - Add finish to the tail.
01:55:318 (1) - Add finish to the head.
02:03:665 (6) - ^ Also NC should be here, not 02:03:926 (1) - ...
02:10:970 - Rhythm suggestion:
So you can add that concluding finish hitsound at 02:12:013.
02:43:057 (5) - Add finish to the tail.
02:44:883 (6) - NC
02:47:491 (1) - Add finish
02:49:578 (1) - ^ On the head.
02:57:926 (1) - ^
03:08:361 - 03:11:491 You could also add a spinner here, buts that's just imo.
03:21:013 (6) - NC, not 03:22:448 (1) - .

[Normal+]
  1. A mapset can only have 1 of each difficulty.Either this diff or the other is removed/changed.
  2. Slider velocity is too high. The song's BPM is already high enough, so like the last diff,just simply keep it at 1.00
00:25:318 (2) - Add a finish.
00:31:839 (1) - ^ Instead of whistle.
00:46:448 (5) - ^
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:07:318 (1) - ^
01:15:404 (6) - Add finish on the tail.
01:42:796 (6) - ^
01:51:144 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:55:318 (1) - ^
02:03:665 (3) - ^
02:12:013 (4) - Add finish
02:37:578 (1) - ^
02:49:578 (1) - ^
02:57:926 (1) - ^ On the head.
03:03:665 - 03:06:274 Map this part please, to remove awkward break.
03:33:404 (1) - Add finish

[Hard]
00:29:753 (1) - Add finish
00:38:622 (2) - I suggest replacing it with 00:38:231 (1) - here.
00:46:187 (4) - Add finish to the tail.
00:54:796 (7) - Add finish to the head.
00:58:970 (1) - ^
01:07:318 (3) - ^
01:26:100 (1) - ^
01:32:361 (3) - ^
01:42:796 (1) - ^
01:51:144 (1) - ^
01:55:318 - Rhythm suggestion:

02:03:665 (6) - Add finish to the head.
02:07:839 (4) - NC since slider has change of speed.
02:12:013 (1) - Add finish to the head.
02:26:622 (1) - ^ Instead of whistle.
02:36:535 (1) - ^ On the tail.
02:49:578 (1) - ^ On the head.
02:57:926 (4) - ^ On the head.
03:06:274 (7) - ^ On the head.
03:07:318 - Add something here, song's not over till its over >.<

[Insane]
...Can't mod maps beyond this level :( Sorry.

Overall, I'd say this map looks ok, but there's still lots of room for improvement!
Hope this helps~! :)
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks!
Done.
Lyase
10 posts
Joined March 2011
Lyase
title is "絶望plantation"
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

Lyase wrote:

title is "絶望plantation"
Thanks!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Updated!
New titles diff.
CryOfDeath
6 posts
Joined January 2013
CryOfDeath
Hello, I'm sorry to interrupt, but the streams is too fast, do all to the 300 will not be easy) Interested in whether you rated your beatmaps - I do not know, but the stream it noticeably decreased, and overall good.

P.S. I have not tried to do beatmaps , so I can`t judge your stream)
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

CryOfDeath wrote:

Hello, I'm sorry to interrupt, but the streams is too fast, do all to the 300 will not be easy) Interested in whether you rated your beatmaps - I do not know, but the stream it noticeably decreased, and overall good.

P.S. I have not tried to do beatmaps , so I can`t judge your stream)
Thanks!
Smoothie
569 posts
Joined August 2011
Smoothie
Heya~

Your Offset is wrong.
It should be at: 00:21:447

Don't forget to resnap your notes and the green lines after you changed the offset.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~

Your Offset is wrong.
It should be at: 00:21:447

Don't forget to resnap your notes and the green lines after you changed the offset.
Thanks!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Offset is updated!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Updated!
New Wallpapers!
yoshilove
yoshilove
#modreqs ~~
View --> Grid Level
A small grid can be used.
(sorry my English is not good)

[Easy]
00:33:968 (1,2,3) - 2 is not a center. Check~
01:03:186 (1) - A slider is out of a screen.
1
01:45:968 (4) - One return. (Unite with vocal.)


[Average]
00:30:316 (5) - Change 00:30:186
00:59:012 (1) - Since it is near, it may push early.
01:41:533 (2) -
How about seeing in this way? --->

[Hard]
00:36:707 (7) - The check of the rhythm of a slider I think that it is good to carry out like 00:37:360 (8)
01:37:751 (3) - near? Add circle 01:37:620 or A position is changed.

[Insane]
00:21:773 (2,4) - change Red line or 00:22:881 (6,8) change blue line
00:39:055 (5) - Distance Snap
00:40:099 (2,3) - It is too far.... ---> 00:40:229 (3) delete circle
01:41:794 (7) - Add circle??

[DnJeiserity]
00:29:794 (6) - New Combo(NC)
00:30:838 (1) - deleteNC
00:31:881 (9) - NC
00:32:925 (1) - deleteNC
00:33:968 (9) - NC
00:36:055 (5) - NC
00:45:055 (3) - near? Add circle　00:44:925 or A position is changed.
00:56:468 (5) - change 00:56:403
00:57:903 (2) -
--->

01:37:881 (4) - near Add circle 01:37:751 or A position is changed.
03:17:533 (1) - near it may push early.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

yoshilove wrote:

#modreqs ~~
View --> Grid Level
A small grid can be used.
(sorry my English is not good)

[Easy]
00:33:968 (1,2,3) - 2 is not a center. Check~
01:03:186 (1) - A slider is out of a screen.
1
01:45:968 (4) - One return. (Unite with vocal.)


[Average]
00:30:316 (5) - Change 00:30:186
00:59:012 (1) - Since it is near, it may push early.
01:41:533 (2) -
How about seeing in this way? --->

[Hard]
00:36:707 (7) - The check of the rhythm of a slider I think that it is good to carry out like 00:37:360 (8)
01:37:751 (3) - near? Add circle 01:37:620 or A position is changed.

[Insane]
00:21:773 (2,4) - change Red line or 00:22:881 (6,8) change blue line
00:39:055 (5) - Distance Snap
00:40:099 (2,3) - It is too far.... ---> 00:40:229 (3) delete circle
01:41:794 (7) - Add circle??

[DnJeiserity]
00:29:794 (6) - New Combo(NC)
00:30:838 (1) - deleteNC
00:31:881 (9) - NC
00:32:925 (1) - deleteNC
00:33:968 (9) - NC
00:36:055 (5) - NC
00:45:055 (3) - near? Add circle　00:44:925 or A position is changed.
00:56:468 (5) - change 00:56:403
00:57:903 (2) -
--->

01:37:881 (4) - near Add circle 01:37:751 or A position is changed.
03:17:533 (1) - near it may push early.
Thanks
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Knotts
Well this is my second time modding so don't feel like you have to change everything.

[Average]

Overall I feel like there are a lot of oddly placed break times.
01:17:533 (1) - You could probably put in some circles or sliders before the spinner. seems like a long awkward pause for that slider.
02:14:142 (1) - ^
03:27:446 - I think you should add something here to match the rhythm.

[Hard]

I feel like you should experiment more with the slider designs. As of now they all look very similar and bland.
00:57:446 (1) - This spinner seems awkward here. I think you should just replace it with circles/sliders.
01:58:490 (1,2,3) - I feel like you should space these circles out instead of stacking them since you already have so many stacks and the time between them is great.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

Knotts wrote:

Well this is my second time modding so don't feel like you have to change everything.

[Average]

Overall I feel like there are a lot of oddly placed break times.
01:17:533 (1) - You could probably put in some circles or sliders before the spinner. seems like a long awkward pause for that slider.
02:14:142 (1) - ^
03:27:446 - I think you should add something here to match the rhythm.

[Hard]

I feel like you should experiment more with the slider designs. As of now they all look very similar and bland.
00:57:446 (1) - This spinner seems awkward here. I think you should just replace it with circles/sliders.
01:58:490 (1,2,3) - I feel like you should space these circles out instead of stacking them since you already have so many stacks and the time between them is great.
Thanks!
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Yes, my main problem is the variety of sliders.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Updated!
Add tegs!
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Привет~
мне не нравится песня поэтому я помодю только выборочные дифы. в которых есть что исправить

[General]

http://puu.sh/4rQ4z.png сделай все БГ одинакового типа. Например -Uryuu-Minene и -Yuno-Gasai- - файлы, а остальные рисунки. должны быть все рисунки. И дай им нормальные имена. BG1 BG2 ... BG6 - например.

Kiai time

первый киаи закончить тут 01:16:751
второй закончить тут 02:13:099
третий тут 03:07:360

[Murumuru [Easy]]

велосити очень большой для изи.

00:27:707 (3) - возврат или добавь тут 00:28:751 ноту
00:42:577 (4) - новое комбо. и этот слайдер нужно убрать дальше от предыдущего 00:40:229 (3). И мне не нравится как звучат эти слайдеры. может лучше сделать что-то типо этого? http://puu.sh/4rQsf.jpg
00:44:664 (2) - этот слайдер тоже как-то безобразно звучит тут. передвинь его сюда 00:44:925 (2) и 00:44:403 поставь сиркл без нк
00:47:012 (х) - добавь сюда сиркл с нк
00:54:838 (5) - новое комбо
00:55:360 (6) - добавь сиркл
00:55:881 (7) - сделай возврат
01:01:099 (3) - он должен закончится на тике. а значит тут 01:01:620
01:03:186 (1) - тоже самое. закончить на тике тут 01:04:229
01:02:664 (5,1) - сделать расстояние по дистанс спейсингу
01:07:360 (1) - тоже закончить на тике тут 01:09:446
01:11:533 (3) - закончить на тике тут 01:12:577
01:15:707 (1,2) - закончить на след. тиках
в общем у тебя все слайдеры такие. исправь это. может быть это было сделано не специально.
01:48:055 тут брейк ни к чему. лучше замапай этот перерыв
02:38:925 этот переыв тоже замапать.
02:54:316 тоже самое не оставляй таких больших пробелов
03:03:707 замапать брейк
03:19:881 ^ и т.д.

[Minene Uryuu [Average]]

00:23:533 (5) - новое комбо и тут 00:24:577 (1) - убрать новое комбо
00:25:620 (3) - новое комбо
00:27:707 (7) - новое комбо и тут 00:28:229 (1) - убрать новое комбо
00:29:794 (4) - нк
00:33:968 (5) - ^ расписывать всё нк я не буду о.о посмотри внимательнее. они везде расставлены не так как хотелось бы. обрати внимание на большие белые тики и на музыку. обычно нк ставятся на белых больших тиках.
01:34:620 (1) - перемести сюда 01:34:490
01:59:533 (4,5) - спейсинг
03:21:968 (1) - брейк весь убрать и замапать

Deus Ex [DnJeiserity] хорошая дифа :)

ну ладно, удачки! если что сможешь найти меня в игре ~
HeShu
194 posts
Joined February 2013
HeShu
In General :

Good mapping, no big problem. It flows right and without big matter.

[Mumuru [Easy]]

00:42:577 and 00:43:620 I have the feeling they're both a little bit late according to vocals.
01:16:490 You could improve this slider form so it would fit the previous one


[yuno Gasai [Insane]]

01:46:490 This beat is not neccesary
03:23:012 Very tricky circle. Remove or replace it

[Deus Ex [DnJeiserity]]

01:15:446 It point to the left... for no real reason imo
01:57:707 to 01:57:968 Hard to guess how much hit to do. Put it in order to make it more clear
02:24:577 to 02:25:490 Impossible pattern to predict. Put it in line or else to make it clear to the player
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks all!
shinjiko-san
55 posts
Joined January 2012
shinjiko-san
break at 03:22:229 - 03:24:968 is pretty unexpected for me :I I think you should add some notes at that part
the Deus Ex diff I mean :I
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura
Thanks! Done!
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
As i said i'll do another mod for you these days :) . Hope it still helps you.
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

N E K O wrote:

As i said i'll do another mod for you these days :) . Hope it still helps you.
Of course, I'll wait for your help! :)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
[General]
I suggest you to map in grid size tiny.
One of the most important thing is that the placement problems.
there're some key words you have to know,blanket,nazi and DS.That makes a map tidy and good to play and look.

[Easy]

  • Easy diff is a kind of regular diff , both the rhythm and the placement of note and sliders
    So I suggest to put them in a more "regular" way...
    Still , watching more other maps'、mappers' easy diff may be a good idea.

    Easy diff have to be mapped in a exactly sertain DS , your DS is 0.8 now.
    So you have to use the function : distance snap
    SPOILER

    And in easy diff , rhythm starts on long white line may be better in most conditions.
    00:47:012 (1) -

    00:55:620 (2) - sound strange here. 00:55:360 - add note and move the slider to 00:55:881 (3) -

    01:36:055 (2) - a note here is suggested.

    01:36:838 (3,4) - and this part sounds a little strange.I suggest to start the slider on the long white line.

    01:38:142 (4) - a note here as i suggested the rhythm .

    01:40:751 (7) - starts from here may be better.

[Normal]

  • Really a nice one , whatever rhythm and placement.

    umm , this kind of slider style is not so good.
    SPOILER

    this may be better.
    SPOILER

    02:17:273 Kiai time should end here.

    02:13:099 map somthing here.

    From 03:14:664 to 03:16:490 map somthing here.

    the last break time should map something to make it an end.
[Hard]

  • There'are some part that the rhythm doesn't feel right.
    Normal diff may be a good example for rhythm.

    01:26:925 (3) - there 's a white line in the middle of the two part
    and a strong beat on it,try to add note. And so does the ohter 7 white lines.

    some break times can be changed.
    such as 03:16:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - here can be deleted,because
    the time before and the time after are all break time,it makes this part a sudden.
[Insane]

  • 00:38:664 (2,3,4) - too near from the sliders.

    00:47:273 - add note

    00:48:316 - add note.

    00:49:360 - ^

    00:51:446 - ^

    00:52:490 - ^

    00:53:533 - ^

    01:00:838 (1) - too near from the tail of 01:00:186 (6) - .

    01:26:925 - add notes. and all the same part...

    01:33:838 (6) - try to hide the head like this.
    SPOILER

    01:51:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kind of strange here.

    02:35:012 (1) - start the spinner here and ends it here 02:36:316.

    02:36:577 (1,2) - not good here.

    02:37:099 (2) - change it to a single note.
    SPOILER

    03:17:533 (1) - not like that...try some other patterns...

    03:20:925 - add 2 notes here
    SPOILER

    map the last break time.
All that were my suggestions this time ,hope it may help you. :)
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

N E K O wrote:

[General]
I suggest you to map in grid size tiny.
One of the most important thing is that the placement problems.
there're some key words you have to know,blanket,nazi and DS.That makes a map tidy and good to play and look.

[Easy]

  • Easy diff is a kind of regular diff , both the rhythm and the placement of note and sliders
    So I suggest to put them in a more "regular" way...
    Still , watching more other maps'、mappers' easy diff may be a good idea.

    Easy diff have to be mapped in a exactly sertain DS , your DS is 0.8 now.
    So you have to use the function : distance snap
    SPOILER

    And in easy diff , rhythm starts on long white line may be better in most conditions.
    00:47:012 (1) -

    00:55:620 (2) - sound strange here. 00:55:360 - add note and move the slider to 00:55:881 (3) -

    01:36:055 (2) - a note here is suggested.

    01:36:838 (3,4) - and this part sounds a little strange.I suggest to start the slider on the long white line.

    01:38:142 (4) - a note here as i suggested the rhythm .

    01:40:751 (7) - starts from here may be better.

[Normal]

  • Really a nice one , whatever rhythm and placement.

    umm , this kind of slider style is not so good.
    SPOILER

    this may be better.
    SPOILER

    02:17:273 Kiai time should end here.

    02:13:099 map somthing here.

    From 03:14:664 to 03:16:490 map somthing here.

    the last break time should map something to make it an end.
[Hard]

  • There'are some part that the rhythm doesn't feel right.
    Normal diff may be a good example for rhythm.

    01:26:925 (3) - there 's a white line in the middle of the two part
    and a strong beat on it,try to add note. And so does the ohter 7 white lines.

    some break times can be changed.
    such as 03:16:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - here can be deleted,because
    the time before and the time after are all break time,it makes this part a sudden.
[Insane]

  • 00:38:664 (2,3,4) - too near from the sliders.

    00:47:273 - add note

    00:48:316 - add note.

    00:49:360 - ^

    00:51:446 - ^

    00:52:490 - ^

    00:53:533 - ^

    01:00:838 (1) - too near from the tail of 01:00:186 (6) - .

    01:26:925 - add notes. and all the same part...

    01:33:838 (6) - try to hide the head like this.
    SPOILER

    01:51:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kind of strange here.

    02:35:012 (1) - start the spinner here and ends it here 02:36:316.

    02:36:577 (1,2) - not good here.

    02:37:099 (2) - change it to a single note.
    SPOILER

    03:17:533 (1) - not like that...try some other patterns...

    03:20:925 - add 2 notes here
    SPOILER

    map the last break time.
All that were my suggestions this time ,hope it may help you. :)
Thanks N E K O!!!
lundacris
86 posts
Joined August 2010
lundacris
Yukiteru Amano [Hard]

00:53:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flip Vertically

01:02:925 (6) - Предлагаю так расположить:
SPOILER

01:15:446 (9) - Так,думаю,лучше будет выглядеть:
SPOILER

01:35:533 (1) - New combo

01:51:186 (1,2,3,4) - Так будет интуитивно проще выбивать:
SPOILER

02:02:664 (3,4,5) - Возможно будет лучше так сделать:
SPOILER

02:49:620 (1,2) - Лучше (1) перетащить поближе к (2)

02:55:620 (3) - Перетащи на четыре квадратика вниз:
SPOILER

03:33:446 - Вместо слайдера,предлагаю сделать так:
SPOILER
EneDZakura
150 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
EneDZakura

lundacris wrote:

Yukiteru Amano [Hard]

00:53:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flip Vertically

01:02:925 (6) - Предлагаю так расположить:
SPOILER

01:15:446 (9) - Так,думаю,лучше будет выглядеть:
SPOILER

01:35:533 (1) - New combo

01:51:186 (1,2,3,4) - Так будет интуитивно проще выбивать:
SPOILER

02:02:664 (3,4,5) - Возможно будет лучше так сделать:
SPOILER

02:49:620 (1,2) - Лучше (1) перетащить поближе к (2)

02:55:620 (3) - Перетащи на четыре квадратика вниз:
SPOILER

03:33:446 - Вместо слайдера,предлагаю сделать так:
SPOILER
Агась, спасяб.
Moonlit
112 posts
Joined August 2013
Moonlit
Easy

00:28:751 to 00:29:794 (1) -
Feels like too big of a gap, try putting a hitcircle at 00:29:273, halfway between the slider's end and the note at 00:29:794 (1) -

Another large gap from 00:31:881 (3) - to 00:33:968 (1) -, perhaps put a note to bridge the combos at 00:32:925? somewhere near centre screen
00:36:055 (3) - to 00:38:142 (1) - same as above, a note on the downbeat could help connect the combos.

00:42:316 (1) - to 00:44:403 (3) - something feels wrong about this part, probably because before you were following the drum but it goes to the melody and the drum is ticking halfway through each slider. May have to change up the previous combo to fix it however.

00:47:533 (2) - copy this and flip to replace the straight slider at 00:48:577 (3) - . this will make it more symmetrical and appealing.
Could use the same copied slider to replace 00:49:620 (4) - too.

The Blue combo from 00:50:664; make all the sliders copies, or take the 3rd slider and use its copy for the 4th slider. Consider making the 4th slider repeat too.

Copy 00:59:012 (1) - and flip to replace 01:00:055 (2) - ?

01:03:186 (1) - and " " " 01:04:751 (2) - ^ Symmetry and consistency is appreciated by newer players.

01:13:620 (1) - this spinner is too short, you could easily replace it with a slider or two from 1:13:099 to 1:14:142 then hitcircles at 1:14:664 and 1:15:186

01:15:707 (1) - and 01:16:751 (2) - should be made so the beginning and end are aligned with the centre, make sure they are identical copies too. Will need a bit of fine tuning to get them to fit and look proper :P
Like this:


01:34:490 (1) - ,01:36:577 (2) - ,01:36:577 (2) - again these should all be the same copies imo and have hitcircles to bridge them at 1:36:055, 1:38:142 etc.

02:00:577 (5) - this slider seems to start randomly. Instead use a hitcircle on the beat then a slider that starts at 2:01:099

Begin this spinner, 03:33:446 (1) - , on 3:32:925 to give the player more time to complete it.

Hope that helps :D
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 68