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+Plus - Fiesta [Osu|Taiko]

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wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月20日 at 18:45:38

Artist: +Plus
Title: Fiesta
Source: Fairy Tail
Tags: opening 6 Hanjamon TV Size
BPM: 140
Filesize: 16381kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.02 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hanjamon's Muzukashii (4.7 stars, 340 notes)
  3. Hanjamon's Oni (4.83 stars, 417 notes)
  4. Hard (4.84 stars, 206 notes)
  5. Insane (5 stars, 280 notes)
  6. Normal (3.16 stars, 110 notes)
Download: +Plus - Fiesta
Download: +Plus - Fiesta (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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這是我的第一張圖
This is my 1st map.
初めて :)
Easy - Done By Me
Normal - Done By Me
Hard - Done By Me
Insane - Done By Me
Hanjamon's Muzukashii - Done By Hanjamon
Hanjamon's Oni - Done By Hanjamon
Last edited by wmtokok , edited 101 times in total.
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
I change the photo. ;)
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
From my queue

都是一些个人意见，希望有用

general
用格子3吧 ctrl+3

全模式 滑条速度1.2x 滑条点数2 ...

仅供参考:
对于140BPM的来说
Easy 0.8-1.0x点数？
Normal 1.1-1.2x 点数？
Hard 1.5-1.7 点数1-2
Insane 1.8-1.9 或者更高 点数为1
最后转盘结束在01:28:060

视频可以考虑最后图做的差不多了再加了传上去(这样方便以后改

了图更新上传快一点，省去传视频的时间)

PS: t/109978这里有很多东西可以学
Easy
00:53:131(1)(2) 之间太空，诡异

01:16:716(4)和3的距离 3放上面点，太下了
Normal
00:02:560(1) 折返

00:08:560(1)(2)(3)(1) 都移到 x:212

00:14:988和00:15:846 加note ？

00:28:274(3)(4)交换位置

00:43:703(3)(4) 参考 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/677117

01:17:988(1)(2)(3)(1)(2)(3)后面3个不建议放在前面3个原来的位置，即使要放 都没对齐(2)和(2),(3)和(3)→ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/677130
Hard
AR-1

00:13:703(3)(4) 删 2放到1上

00:14:560(1)(2)(3) 摆放不平衡
1)x:92 y:140
2)x:212 y:260
3)x:332 y:140

00:28:703(4)删 改note到00:28:917 放5上面

00:33:203加note

00:40:060 ^

00:44:988 ^

01:10:917 可加可不加note

01:20:560(1)删
insane
不能多说，新人的话，建议先把前3个难度做好吧，这个可以考虑删掉

加油吧 mapper路还很长 我们都还有很多东西要学
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
我想問更改滑條速度後
所有滑條都移位了
有沒有快的方法修正?
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
快速啊。。没有耶，只能单个单个，重新拉一下滑条（就是滑条最后的那个点移动就能修正），不一定死要按照那个，只是做参考，具体看个人喜好
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
頭3個難道都改好了
更新好了
另外我把insane重新再做~~
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Chinese eh... I can speak but can't mod in chinese so 对不起 ^^")7 P.S. I love this OP :D Fiesta should've been ranked so long ago I'll work real hard on this mod! (skipping easy...) And btw ur gonna hate me for every shit I tell you. XP PS if you don't know whats X and Y axis PM me. And sry if the mods overlap.

Normal
00:00:846 (1,1,1) - Yes u snapped the distance but make the ends and start on the same x axis. 00:01:703 (1) will be moved to x 240 y 184 so the head is directly below 00:00:846 (1). and 00:02:560 (1) will go to x 360 y 304

See the diff? (ok actually you can hardly see it)
Before:

After:


00:05:131 (3) - Move to x 116 y 84 (same X axis as 00:04:274 (1) and y axis as 00:05:560 (4) but there will be changes to 00:05:560 (4) later anyways)

00:05:560 (4, 1) I would switch these two around rhythm wise. Sounds nicer eh? If not then just resnap 00:05:560 (4) since you moved 00:05:131 (3)

00:07:703 (4) - This should be a NC instead of 00:08:560 (1)

00:08:560 (1) - Hey, this is easy diff. No jumps. Bring it closer to 4. =.=

00:09:846 - Add note.

00:11:131 (3) - Why did you put it here? (Arrangement) Maybe hide it behind 00:10:274 (1)

00:24:846 (2) - Why didn't you add symbol to this if you added it to 00:26:560 (1) ?

00:28:274 (3) - Resnap

00:50:560 - Kiai should start here instead. Oh, and you kinda overused the finish hitsound hear the start of chorus. Take out a few

00:49:703 (1,2) - I don't think you should have these. This is normal diff so Noobs need time to find their cursors. Make it empty for two beats and add a note on 00:50:131 (the actual kiai time starting point)

01:19:274 (1,2,3) - Why they all one grid square to the right of the previous combo note above it? Just let it overlap nicely.


Sorry, I will not mod hard because of your distance spacing. Snap everything please. That's all sry I'll wait to see this ranked ^^ 加油！

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
thank very much ;)
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hello there.

[General]
  1. The Artist name is not Plus but+Plus. Rename the Beatmap to +Plus - Fiesta
  2. There are three OSB files in your folder. The song folder must have only 1. Delete the other two.
  3. Your beatmaps doesn't have a preview time. You can set a preview time from the tool bar on the top of your editor(File, Edit, ... , Help). Click the Timing and then Set current position as preview time.
  4. You requested a SB Mod but there's no SB to mod. If you gonna add a Video then don't bother to make a SB.
[Easy]
  1. I cannot mod this difficulty. I can't understand any pattern :/ I suggest you to remap it and make more shapes with sliders and also placement shapes with the hit circles and stuff. The symmetry in beatmaps is a very urgent issue, especially in Easy and Normal difficulties where the detail is very obvious.
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:703 (1,1) - The New Combo is not needed here. The New combo is meant to show where the rhythm or the lyrics are changing, therefore, overuse of New combo looks bad and it can be unrankable - There are exceptions depends on how you use it.
  2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3) - Copy paste those circles to 00:06:417 - and then press CTRL+H and CTRL+G to move them exactly in the other side of the game area(Mirror) and also change their order for the distance spacing. After you do that, you can use this shape: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682502
  3. 00:07:703 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - What you've tried to do here wont work. The distance spacing and the place you chose will not let you place them propetly, use a different pattern to suit the song and also feel comfortable when playing.
  4. 00:19:274 (1,2) - The sliders here are not symmetrical. You can copy-paste the first slider(but not on the same time line) and then click CTRL+H and CTRL+G and then move it closer in accordance with the distance spacing.
  5. 01:17:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not stacked properly.
  6. Generally this difficulty is not as random as the Easy one but still needs a lot of work.
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:703 (1,1) - New combo is not needed here. Explain why in the Normal difficulty.
  2. 00:11:988 (1,1) - ^
  3. 00:17:774 (4,5,6) - The spacing is wrong, the spacing should be same between the notes. Read this for more information: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Spacing
    And that's the main issue of the beatmap, the spacing. Fix the spacing and then call me back for a remod if you want :)
[Insane]
  1. The main problem here is Spacing as well and some bad placings. Please fix the distance spacing according to the link I gave you above in Hard and then call me back for a recheck to find and tell you the placing errors you may have later on.
If you want to "cheat" the distance spacing in special parts, make sure they are playable and fit the song, this should be done in Hard(But not too much) and Insane. When I say "cheat" I mean jumps and stuff which skips the distance snapping.

Farewell and good luck :)
kelvinli
160 posts
Joined April 2011
kelvinli
A side note here
remove "op6" from source
add "opening" in tags
add "(TV Size)" to the song name , so it will be:
+Plus - Fiesta (TV Size)
-RIKKA-_old
63 posts
Joined October 2012
-RIKKA-_old
mod queueからです～ :)

Normal
・00:11:131 (5,6) -　ここを00:12:846 (1,2) - と同じにしてみては？
・00:16:274 (5,1) -　このようにしてみては？
・00:19:274 (1,1) -　それぞれ00:19:060と00:19:917からスタートさせるといいです。（リターンスライダーにするとよりいいです。）
・00:19:917 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:20:988 (x) -　note追加。
・00:29:131 (4,5) -　この部分をリターンスライダーにしては？
・00:33:417 (6,1) -　このようにしてみては？
・00:38:131 (x) -　note追加？
・ 気合タイム00:50:560をスタート。01:02:988を終わりにするといいと思います。
・00:59:131 (4,5,6) -　リズムの順番を６、４、５にして置いてみては？
・２つ目の気合タイムのスタートを01:04:274にするといいです。

Hard
・00:11:131 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:11:988 (1) -　＾
・00:12:846 (1,2,3) -　このようにしては？
・00:14:131 (x) -　note追加。
・ 00:22:274 (5,6) -　リズムの順番を６、５にして置いてみては？
・00:30:631 (2) -　スライダーを白線まで伸ばしてください。
・00:36:631 (7) -　note追加。
・00:36:846 (1,2) -　このようにしては？
・00:37:703 (1) -　note追加。
・00:39:417 (2) -　スライダーを赤線まで伸ばしてください。
・00:41:988 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:42:846 (1) -　＾
・00:43:703 (1) -　＾
・00:43:703 (1,2) -　このようにしては？
・00:45:417 (1,2,3,4,5) -　このようにしては？
・気合タイムはNormalと同様でいいと思います。
・スピンを00:49:703で終わらせ、00:50:560からnoteを置いていくとより良くなると思います。
・00:50:560 (3,4,5) -　このようにしては？
・01:00:417 (x) -　note追加？
・ 01:12:631 (x) -　＾
・ 01:12:846 (1) -　このようにしては？
・01:24:631 (x) -　note追加。
・01:25:274 (1) -　スピンを01:25:060からスタート。01:28:060を終わりにするといいと思います。


頑張ってください！
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
ありがとう
-RIKKA-
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hey there!

Recheck as promised!

[General]
I believe the Kiai time would be better to start from 01:04:274 instead of 01:03:417
The finish hitsound makes it sound more nice when entering the Kiai mode.

[Easy]
00:57:417 (1,2,3,4) - Make the corner better here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684990 :3
01:04:703 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Check those pictures: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684995 & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684997
This way you fix the symmetry in those notes and also stay on Distance snap :3 If you like it, you're free to use it :D
01:08:988 (5,6) - The overlap doesn't look good in Easy difficulties, always do the best you can to avoid them if the Distance is allowing you: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684999
Just put the reverse a bit lower like this :3
01:17:131 (8) - Add circle at x:280 y:220 to follow the vocal~

[Normal]
00:08:988 (3) - Why this slider is going downwards? Make it straight :P If the distance is x0.98 is not really a problem so don't worry :P
00:09:846 (4) - Make the curve of this slider same with the approach circle of the next one, it will look much better.
00:15:417 (3,4,5,6) - Look this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/685010 and this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/685011
It looks better right?
00:18:631 (3) - 1 Grid down
00:35:131 (2) - 1 Grid up~
00:42:417 (2) - Move the last point of the slider(the reverse) 2 grids up
00:44:131 (4) - Move the last point of the slider(the reverse) 2 grids down
00:50:560 (1,3) - You can stack those two if you want instead of a half-note-overlap

[Hard]
00:24:846 (2,4) - Make those two symmetrical o.o
Thats all XD

[Insane]
00:01:988 (3) - 1 grid to left o.o Stream looks weird :D
00:04:488 (2) - 2 Grid down
00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a Star shape here o.o
00:15:203 (1,1) - Meaningless new combo ;w;
00:22:274 (4,5,6,7) - You can make those look better imo.
00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - This makes a weird shape, fix it - It would be good straight or with a better curve.
01:18:417 (1,1) - Meaningless New combo ;w;

The Insane needs more work but the Easy and Normal are really much better :)

Good luck :3
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
KiyoshiX101
Your mod is very good :D
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
[general]
00:50:560 - move the start of kiai time here and add preview point here and do it for all difficulties

[Easy]
00:31:703 (1) - add finish at start of slider and add clap at the end of the slider
00:32:988 (2) - remove note?
00:33:417 (3) - do the same as 00:31:703 (1)
00:38:560 (1) - ^
00:39:846 (2) - remove finish
00:40:274 (3) - do the same as 00:31:703 (1)

[hard]
00:00:846 (1,2,3) - make these sliders 1/3
or copythis code even hitsounds will be changed 
88,32,846,2,4,L|144:32,3,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,1703,2,4,L|144:192,3,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,352,2560,2,4,L|152:352,6,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
general:
source: fairy tail, 去掉那个opening
tags: 不需要复读

看了下insane, 感觉都是二分拍放满在加点串什么的
有些歌可以这么放, 不过这个曲子有不少天然的二连节奏

比如00:21:738 - 这里, 这样摆节奏就可以配合歌词 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688939
后面还有00:38:881 - 00:40:060 - 00:42:310 - 00:43:167之类, 自己找找..
01:16:596 - 这样的节奏可以放3/4, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688944

关于音效, 建议就是一般情况下别连续放同种音效
比如00:02:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种连着的finish, 听上去就很重口
一般的方法是隔一拍放, 如著名的24clap法, 这个曲子感觉用clap+whistle组合着放比较好
选中滑条之后再点一下一个圈变红, 可以单独放音效下去0,0

然后还有就是把design里面多出来的背景图片删掉0,0

别的难度的话
hard 00:00:846 (1,2) - 三分拍 (上面那个挑过了233
感觉hard,normal节奏还可以呢, 音效的话和insane差不多的问题
BusterBeachside
112 posts
Joined October 2009
BusterBeachside
Hi! From my queue.

EASY:
00:50:560 (1,2) - Placed too soon after the spinner for an Easy diff. I'd suggest getting rid of them and changing the next part around a bit or maybe removing the spinner altogether and adding a new section where it was. Or, you could add a Break Time. Personally, I would just remove the two hits in question.

The rest of this diff. seems okay to me! ^_^

NORMAL:
00:24:417 (1) - Move this one down a bit so that it lines up with 00:24:846 (2)?
00:27:846 (2) - Same thing, move to the right so that it lines up with 00:26:560 (1).
00:50:560 (1) - Same thing as Easy diff., it's still a bit too early after the spinner for newer players. See my Easy suggestions! ^_^
00:59:131 (4) - Remove claps?

HARD:
This one actually looks pretty good, I have a few opinionated complaints, but nothing I could see preventing it from being ranked, as far as I can tell. Good job!

INSANE:
00:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn up the hitsound volume for this part. I couldn't hear any feedback telling me whether or not I had hit the object.
01:20:131 (1) - Turn up the volume in this timing section, too. The rest of the hitsounds in the song from here out is WAY too quiet.
00:38:560 (3,4,5,6) - I find these to be REALLY hard to read. I think you should change it to mirror the hit objects at 00:40:274 (5,6,7).

Needs some more work I think, but it's getting there! I like the flow of your hit objects. Great song choice, too! Hope it gets ranked~
Norman
Norman
From Korean Modding Team

[Easy]

  1. 00:04:274 (1,3,2) - Slider something like this picture?
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    80,100,4274,6,0,P|256:20|436:100,1,400
    472,192,6417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    434,285,6846,2,0,P|256:364|80:284,1,400
  1. 00:12:846 (1) - ^
    SPOILER
  1. 01:08:988 (6) - ^
    SPOILER

[Normal]

  1. 00:08:988 (3) - 2 Grid Up
  1. 00:09:846 (5,4) - Slider something like this picture?, That looks good very much!
    SPOILER
  1. 00:31:274 (4) - ^
    SPOILER

[Hard]

  1. 00:04:274 (1,5,2,3,4) - please arrange in this way.
    SPOILER
  1. 00:54:631 (1) - How is it to put this on 00:53:774 (4) ?

[Insane]

  1. 00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:09:631 (2) is X:90 Y:240
    - 00:09:846 (3) is X:288 Y:171
    - 00:10:060 (4) is X:86 Y:146
    - 00:10:060 (5) is X:184 Y:257
  1. 00:12:631 (5) - X:168 Y:228
  1. 00:47:131 (1) - The spinner end to 00:48:846 and add a circle 00:49:274
  1. 01:14:346 (4) - 2 Gird up
  1. 01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:23:774 (2) is X:340 Y:288
    - 01:23:989 (3) is X:464 Y:196
    - 01:24:203 (4) is X:316 Y:196
    - 01:24:417 (5) is X:436 Y:288
Foxxer_old
Foxxer_old
General

You should put the Slider Tick Rate of Hard on 2.

Hard

00:05:988 (6) - Add a new combo here
00:18:846 (6) - ^
00:29:988 (1) - You should approach this slider to the end of the previous slider.
00:30:631 (2) - This need to end on the white line.
01:17:988 (3,5) - I think its better these sliders end on the blue line.

Good Luck~
- Tu -
132 posts
Joined September 2012
- Tu -
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On IRC
17:07 wmtokok: 有興趣m4m嗎0.0?
17:07 oscartutu: m4m?
17:08 oscartutu: KOREA？？
17:08 wmtokok: - -?
17:08 wmtokok: 互相改圖...
17:08 oscartutu: dling
17:09 oscartutu: 我的沒有完成
17:09 oscartutu: 先不用
17:09 wmtokok: 我在找人幫我mod
17:10 oscartutu: 16：917
17:10 oscartutu: 人聲入了但沒有cirlce
17:10 oscartutu: insane
17:13 oscartutu: 我個人覺得就太多circle ，不過map得都唔錯
17:13 wmtokok: @@
17:13 oscartutu: BPM offset check好了？
17:13 wmtokok: 嗯.
17:15 oscartutu: 00:34:274 (1) -
17:15 oscartutu: delete
17:16 wmtokok: 這個在造星型...
17:17 oscartutu: 但是我覺得，不跟拍子和人聲
17:19 oscartutu: 00:33:417 (1) -
17:19 oscartutu: 改做打4次？
17:20 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLxN
17:20 oscartutu: 00:38:560 (3) -
17:21 wmtokok: 這個有什麼問題@@?
17:22 oscartutu: 個人感覺
17:22 oscartutu: 更好聽
17:22 oscartutu: 01:12:203 加D circle
17:23 oscartutu: 01:15:631 (1) -
17:23 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLAl
17:27 oscartutu: 01:24:846 (1) -
17:27 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLDA
17:27 wmtokok: 最後加note?
17:27 oscartutu: 55
17:28 oscartutu: 跟番個2下
17:29 oscartutu: 01:12:417 (3) -
17:29 oscartutu: 連
17:29 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLFD
17:29 oscartutu: 晒佢try try
17:33 oscartutu: easy 轉左ar3先
17:34 oscartutu: normal ar4or5
17:34 oscartutu: HP都係
17:35 wmtokok: easy唔係ar3咩@@
17:35 oscartutu: 55
17:36 oscartutu: noraml 改HP同AR
17:36 oscartutu: 4-5都ok
17:36 oscartutu: noramal個setting太似east
17:36 oscartutu: y
17:41 oscartutu: easy 見唔到有野mod
17:42 oscartutu: normal都冇
17:44 wmtokok: 改左ar d位洗唔洗重新汁過
17:44 oscartutu: 唔洗
17:44 oscartutu: 00:02:560 (3) -
17:44 oscartutu: hard
17:44 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLSW
17:44 oscartutu: with green line
17:46 oscartutu: http://puu.sh/2wLUh 00:11:131 (1) -
17:48 oscartutu: 果埋最尾果個spinner可以考慮加一個note
17:48 oscartutu: 全diff都係
17:48 wmtokok: 唔太想0.0
17:48 wmtokok: 因為...
17:48 oscartutu: 你話事
17:48 oscartutu: 我渣mod
17:49 wmtokok: 感覺好似係到fake人咁._.
17:49 oscartutu: 竟然lol
17:49 wmtokok: 因為我平時轉完就算...
17:49 wmtokok: XD
17:49 oscartutu: 嗯
17:50 wmtokok: 2:560(3) 改得好好@@我自己都冇流意
17:50 oscartutu: 你加油啦
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Cobra
352 posts
Joined June 2012
Cobra
Hi, M4M
I'll give you a short mod since you gave me a short mod (That's the way it works for me :P)

General

No preview point. Set one by doing Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point
I recommend setting it at 00:49:703
01:20:131 - i wouldnt turn down the volume here, the music doesnt die down that much

Easy

00:12:846 (1) - shape it like this? http://puu.sh/2xtAB
01:09:417 (6) - make a better blanket around (5)

Normal

00:14:560 (1) - remove NC
00:16:274 (7) - NC
00:17:560 (1) - remove NC
00:41:131 (3) - have this slider go left instead of right

Hard

00:29:988 (1) - move so it isnt touching previous slider
thats all

Insane

00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - for things like this use ctrl+shift+D
00:42:631 (5) - move on top of (3)?
00:44:346 (3) - move on top of (1)?
01:03:417 (1) - you can make a curved slider and then use "Convert slider to stream" under Compose tab, to make things like this in your map look a lot better.
Try to make all your streams look better using that feature in this difficult

That's all, good luck, thanks for M4M!
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
Easy

00:00:826 offset should be 832.

because this note has a little delay changing the offset should fix this to make it on time so when clicked it will be 300, because when I just now played it i hit 100.
00:01:703 2
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[Easy]
00:09:417 (1,2) - 这俩可以尾部加clap
00:11:131 (3) - 建议这里加NC
00:12:846 (1) - ^然后这个NC去掉
00:14:560 (3) - ^接着才在这里加nc
00:17:988 (1) - finish
00:21:417 (8) - nc从这里开始
00:30:846 (5) - 在尾部加whistle
00:39:846 (2) - +whistle
00:41:988 (1) - 头部finish
00:43:703 (1) - 尾部的finish去掉
00:45:417 (1) - 头部finish
00:47:131 (3) - ^
00:48:417 (1) - 用note和slider把这个替换掉，这个spinner在easy难度里有点太难了
00:50:560 (1) - 头部finish
01:14:560 (6) - +nc
01:21:417 (2) - finish
01:22:274 (4) - 尾部whistle
01:23:560 (6) - 头部和尾部whistle，中间不要

[Normal]
00:04:274 (1) - finish
00:07:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 按照2,4拍放whistle
00:24:846 (2,3) - 这种摆放在normal里面有点坑
01:14:560 (6) - nc从这边开始
01:24:846 (1) - finish

[Hard]
00:00:846 (1,2) - 这俩都应该是白线结尾
00:02:560 (3) - 往上移一点，放出框了
00:11:131 (1,2) - 这段还是按照和前面一样1/2拍，要不然感觉有点偷懒，因为这边的节奏没那么密的
00:24:417 (1) - 这个NC去掉，然后 00:24:846 (2) - NC 放在这里
00:39:203 - +note

[Insane]
我只能说照我的感觉来说节奏处理的很奇怪，上面也有人说了1/2加1/4各种连击是不能描述清楚这首歌的节奏的
这首歌里面有很多是半拍，也就是要是拿slider来搞的话有些slider会从蓝线结束或者蓝线开始
花点时间多听听这首歌，然后尽量把你听到的节奏先拿slider和note排列出来
而不是直接拿1/2note和1/4note盖过去
假如你真的对这个Insane的节奏觉得非常棘手的话
我建议是先去找别的比较老手的mapper来给你做GD
慢慢的等你大概了解Insane的节奏形式和排版形式后才开始自己做Insane
新手嘛，第一张图Insane做的不怎么样是很正常的

歌不错
我觉得70%突然降到40%音效降得有点多，建议改成70%降到50%或是60%
有些finish有点....太突兀了...可能跟我自己的习惯有关，你有些地方放了3到4个finish然后接下来的20秒你都没用到finish
这就让我觉得很别扭...............
嘛可能是我的习惯........
自己做完后记得打打，碰到HP条的物件都要往下移一点，因为基本是不怎么建议物件碰到hp条的
加油吧
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my queue
[easy]
00:02:560 (3,4) - 换成一个slider更好 和前面1 2的音乐有区别
00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 中间插个NC 长白的4 或着 3
00:26:560 (3) - NC
00:45:417 (1,2,3) - 调整下位子 全部选中 让2落在中线上就好
SPOILER
01:01:274 (1) - 去了whistle
[Normal]
00:19:060 +1 note?
00:33:417 (6,1,2) - 节奏太密了 对于nor
01:17:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 两个一组的NC 12 12 12这样
01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - ^太密了 对于nor
[Hard]
00:15:417 (4) - 上移一格 末尾叠在前面00:14:131 (2) -
00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - 整理下 弄成正三角形的摆法
SPOILER
00:38:131 (1) - 00:38:560有个明显的重音 在这里结束加finish 00:38:131这个位子加个note
01:11:131 (1) - 去了NC
[Insane]
节奏不太对头
大多数连打起始点在红线会更好
像00:16:917
00:40:810 (6) - 这里离5远点 00:40:917这个位子开始

就这些 goodluck
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
hi, from my modding queue
Sorry but In all diff, Hitsound is quite unsensible and untidy. So, I won't mod hitsound. Let you fix hitsound by yourself
<EASY>
00:21:417 (8) - NC (newcombo). Erase NC of 00:21:846 (1)
00:32:988 - Add circle
00:38:131 (1) - NC. 00:38:560 (2) - Erase NC
00:41:560 - Add circle (I see this diff usually empty but the vocal also songs ^^)
01:04:703 (2) - NC.01:07:703 (3) - NC
01:14:560 (6) - NC
00:21:417 (8) - NC. 00:21:846 (1) - Erase NC
=> You are false quite alot of NC
<Normal>
00:04:488 - Add circle
00:14:881 (2,4) - Change the place of them into the blue tick (because so, it will sensible with instrument) and afterward change the distance of them
00:26:131 (3) - Stack in the normal diff looks unsensible. Fix it
00:31:703 (4) - NC
00:44:988 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Can you change it as :
01:04:703 (2) - NC
01:06:417 (6) - Ugly form. Change it
<Hard>
Sorry. I don't like this Hard diff. I won't mod. Sorry very much
This map has too much mods. I think you should need more mods than you think.
Good ranked~ one day
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
Fix got it.

Thank very much :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 860 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
from PM request :D

[General]
  1. 歌名同(TV Size)之間應該有空格 姐系甘
    Fiesta (TV Size)
  2. 請delete .osb file 因為呢個map無storyboard
  3. 有無192 kbps既歌? 128比較多雜音
  4. 吾系每個diff既Preview time都一樣 汁汁佢
    SPOILER
    Easy: 49703
    Normal: 49703
    Hard: -1
    Insane: -1
  5. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterbox during breaks 全部diff都可以吾剔 因為無SB
  6. hitsound方面比較雜亂無章 所以我略過hitsound了 但我可以給予一個建議: 通常我們會在第二以及第四個white tick放hitsound
  7. Slider tick rate 我覺得無必要系2 我覺得用返普通1就OK.
  8. 有一個好大既問題 就系工整性 呢個map既slider花款吾多 大多都系直線slider 所以我會覺得你排位會好跟X,Y coordinates 而吾系1個circle之後 是但擺另外一個circle既位 甘樣比人印象好吾工整
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:988 - +1個circle凸顯個重音
  2. 00:14:131 (3) - remove whistle
  3. 00:16:274 (3) - 尾巴remove whistle --> 跟00:15:417 (2) 的hitsound一樣吧
  4. 00:20:989 (7) - easy的combo數目很少超過6 00:19:274 (4) 這個可以NC
  5. 00:29:131 (1) - 為啥這裡NC呢? 大white tick是慣常的做法 所以應該是00:29:988 (3) NC
  6. 00:36:417 (7) - NC過大 00:34:703 (4) 這裡NC吧
  7. 00:41:560 - circle如何? 空了感覺比無空更難打
  8. 00:47:131 (3,4) - 這兩個的flow不太好 這樣會更好
    SPOILER
  9. 00:50:131 (3) - Y的coordinate應該跟00:48:846 (1) 的尾一樣
  10. 01:04:703 (2,4) - 不是完美對稱 你可以CTRL+H嘗試一下
  11. 01:08:131 (4) - 移上一格 01:07:274 (2,3,4) 就會系直線
  12. 01:13:274 (4) - Y=88
[Normal]
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:05:560 (4) - remove whistle 很嘈耶D:
  3. 00:18:631 (4) - 這個感覺非常奇怪 00:18:631 這裡根本沒有重音 00:19:060 (4) 也建議刪除 我的建議:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:703 (4,6) - 不是對稱
  5. 00:34:488 (1) - 跟00:33:417 (6) 重疊了
  6. 00:44:131 (4,5) - 呢個排位吾太靚
    SPOILER
  7. 00:57:417 (1) - um..同00:59:131 (4) 一樣就ok了
  8. 00:58:703 (3,4) - Y coordinates 吾同
  9. 01:01:274 (2,3) - x-coordinates 吾同
  10. 01:06:417 (6,1) - 重疊
  11. 01:20:774 - 吾岩音既 ;w;
    SPOILER
  12. 01:23:131 (3) - NC
  13. 01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - 呢到感覺吾跟音樂 建議
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:846 - +circle 好明顯有個音系果到 同埋呢個系hard 無必要留白
  2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘗試花少少心機整d pattern 出黎 現在比我感覺系亂放
    SPOILER
  3. 00:08:346 (2,4) - 重疊了..
    SPOILER
  4. 00:12:203 (2,3) - 不如整成橫線
  5. 00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得呢到浪費左d音樂 可以放triplet都得 同埋兩段其實一樣 可以做下對稱
    SPOILER
  6. 00:29:346 (7,1) - 重疊
  7. 00:31:060 (3,4,5) - 能擺放得更整齊嗎?
  8. 00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 00:36:846 (1,2) - 直線先岩flow 順住去
  10. 00:50:346 (2,3,4) - Y-coordinates 36 :arrow: 40 :arrow: 36 ..
  11. 00:51:417 (5,6) - X-coordinates 不同 00:50:774 (4,5) - 兩個重疊了
  12. 00:55:703 (4) - 中間空了 感覺比較奇怪 可以用reverse slider取代
    SPOILER
  13. 01:00:417 - +circle 因為downbeat同埋過度去第二個combo
  14. 01:00:631 (1) - 移動到01:00:846 第一個circle系white tick比較好 同埋重音系白線 hitsound可以加finish
  15. 01:06:203 - +circle kiai time 中間無啦啦停頓吾系太好
  16. 01:09:417 (4) - x=388 y=288
  17. 01:10:703 (6) - remove NC
  18. 01:17:988 (3,5) - 延長去白線 音樂系去到白線
  19. 01:25:060 (1) - 可以縮短至01:27:417 然後系01:27:846 同01:28:060 加circles 提升難度 8-)
[Insane]
  1. 難度可以再作提升
  2. 00:06:846 - +circle
  3. 00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用心排列下 例如八角形
  4. 00:18:631 (2,4) - 請重疊它們
  5. 00:26:346 (3,5) - ^
  6. 00:28:917 (3,4) - D: 重疊
  7. 00:31:488 (5) - 112,164
  8. 00:40:810 (6) - 移動到00:40:917 還有我不太喜歡這種短小精幹的slider D:
  9. 00:41:774 (3,5) - 請重疊它們
  10. 00:43:488 (1,3) - ^
  11. 00:49:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 請排成直線
  12. 00:56:560 (3,2) - 重疊得吾靚
  13. 00:57:203 (3,2,4) - ^ 請重疊它們
  14. 01:07:488 (3,5,7) - ^
  15. 01:20:774 (1,2,3,4) - 點解淨系得01:21:203 (3) 個Y-coordinates系352 其他都系348
  16. 01:22:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 得01:23:346 (4) 零零捨捨上左去Y=48
  17. 01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呢個pentagon夠正 用CTRL+SHIFT+D 整一個regular pentagon出黎 ;)
  18. 01:24:846 (1) - 同hard一樣
GOOD LUCK :D
有咩問題IN-GAME問/PM都得 :D
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wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 860 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^
Offset: 860 fix thank :D
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
[quote="IamKwaN"]from PM request :D

[General]
  1. 歌名同(TV Size)之間應該有空格 姐系甘 fix
    Fiesta (TV Size)
  2. 請delete .osb file 因為呢個map無storyboard fix
  3. 有無192 kbps既歌? 128比較多雜音 fix,雖然都係128,但係e手應該會好d
  4. 吾系每個diff既Preview time都一樣 汁汁佢 fix
    SPOILER
    Easy: 49703
    Normal: 49703
    Hard: -1
    Insane: -1
  5. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterbox during breaks 全部diff都可以吾剔 因為無SB fix
  6. hitsound方面比較雜亂無章 所以我略過hitsound了 但我可以給予一個建議: 通常我們會在第二以及第四個white tick放hitsound
  7. Slider tick rate 我覺得無必要系2 我覺得用返普通1就OK.
  8. 有一個好大既問題 就系工整性 呢個map既slider花款吾多 大多都系直線slider 所以我會覺得你排位會好跟X,Y coordinates 而吾系1個circle之後 是但擺另外一個circle既位 甘樣比人印象好吾工整
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:988 - +1個circle凸顯個重音 fix
  2. 00:14:131 (3) - remove whistle fix
  3. 00:16:274 (3) - 尾巴remove whistle --> 跟00:15:417 (2) 的hitsound一樣吧 fix
  4. 00:20:989 (7) - easy的combo數目很少超過6 00:19:274 (4) 這個可以NC fix
  5. 00:29:131 (1) - 為啥這裡NC呢? 大white tick是慣常的做法 所以應該是00:29:988 (3) NC fix
  6. 00:36:417 (7) - NC過大 00:34:703 (4) 這裡NC吧 fix
  7. 00:41:560 - circle如何? 空了感覺比無空更難打 fix
  8. 00:47:131 (3,4) - 這兩個的flow不太好 這樣會更好 fix
    SPOILER
  9. 00:50:131 (3) - Y的coordinate應該跟00:48:846 (1) 的尾一樣 no fix
  10. 01:04:703 (2,4) - 不是完美對稱 你可以CTRL+H嘗試一下 fix
  11. 01:08:131 (4) - 移上一格 01:07:274 (2,3,4) 就會系直線 fix
  12. 01:13:274 (4) - Y=88fix


[Normal]
  1. AR-1 fix
  2. 00:05:560 (4) - remove whistle 很嘈耶D: fix
  3. 00:18:631 (4) - 這個感覺非常奇怪 00:18:631 這裡根本沒有重音 00:19:060 (4) 也建議刪除 我的建議: 重音fix
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:703 (4,6) - 不是對稱 fix
  5. 00:34:488 (1) - 跟00:33:417 (6) 重疊了 fix
  6. 00:44:131 (4,5) - 呢個排位吾太靚 no fix
    SPOILER
  7. 00:57:417 (1) - um..同00:59:131 (4) 一樣就ok了 fix
  8. 00:58:703 (3,4) - Y coordinates 吾同 no fix
  9. 01:01:274 (2,3) - x-coordinates 吾同 no fix
  10. 01:06:417 (6,1) - 重疊
  11. 01:20:774 - 吾岩音既 ;w; fix
    SPOILER
  12. 01:23:131 (3) - NC fix
  13. 01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - 呢到感覺吾跟音樂 建議 fix
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:846 - +circle 好明顯有個音系果到 同埋呢個系hard 無必要留白 fix
  2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘗試花少少心機整d pattern 出黎 現在比我感覺系亂放 部分fix,因為唔係跟你張圖
    SPOILER
  3. 00:08:346 (2,4) - 重疊了.. fix
    SPOILER
  4. 00:12:203 (2,3) - 不如整成橫線 fix
  5. 00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得呢到浪費左d音樂 可以放triplet都得 同埋兩段其實一樣 可以做下對稱 fix
    SPOILER
  6. 00:29:346 (7,1) - 重疊 fix
  7. 00:31:060 (3,4,5) - 能擺放得更整齊嗎? fix
  8. 00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fix
  9. 00:36:846 (1,2) - 直線先岩flow 順住去 fix
  10. 00:50:346 (2,3,4) - Y-coordinates 36 :arrow: 40 :arrow: 36 .. fix
  11. 00:51:417 (5,6) - X-coordinates 不同 00:50:774 (4,5) - 兩個重疊了 fix
  12. 00:55:703 (4) - 中間空了 感覺比較奇怪 可以用reverse slider取代 fix
    SPOILER
  13. 01:00:417 - +circle 因為downbeat同埋過度去第二個combo fix
  14. 01:00:631 (1) - 移動到01:00:846 第一個circle系white tick比較好 同埋重音系白線 hitsound可以加finish fix
  15. 01:06:203 - +circle kiai time 中間無啦啦停頓吾系太好 fix
  16. 01:09:417 (4) - x=388 y=288 fix
  17. 01:10:703 (6) - remove NC 半fix remove NC改左去01:11:145 (3)
  18. 01:17:988 (3,5) - 延長去白線 音樂系去到白線 no fix 我放果到係因為歌詞
  19. 01:25:060 (1) - 可以縮短至01:27:417 然後系01:27:846 同01:28:060 加circles 提升難度 8-) 因為前面d人話01:27:417比較好,另外我唔太中意係最後放circle sorry><
[Insane]
  1. 難度可以再作提升
  2. 00:06:846 - +circle fix
  3. 00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用心排列下 例如八角形 fix
  4. 00:18:631 (2,4) - 請重疊它們 fix
  5. 00:26:346 (3,5) - ^ fix
  6. 00:28:917 (3,4) - D: 重疊 fix
  7. 00:31:488 (5) - 112,164 fix
  8. 00:40:810 (6) - 移動到00:40:917 還有我不太喜歡這種短小精幹的slider D: fix
  9. 00:41:774 (3,5) - 請重疊它們 fix
  10. 00:43:488 (1,3) - ^ fix
  11. 00:49:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 請排成直線 fix
  12. 00:56:560 (3,2) - 重疊得吾靚 fix
  13. 00:57:203 (3,2,4) - ^ 請重疊它們 fix
  14. 01:07:488 (3,5,7) - ^ fix
  15. 01:20:774 (1,2,3,4) - 點解淨系得01:21:203 (3) 個Y-coordinates系352 其他都系348 fix 應該係我手震XD
  16. 01:22:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 得01:23:346 (4) 零零捨捨上左去Y=48 fix 同樣手震XD
  17. 01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呢個pentagon夠正 用CTRL+SHIFT+D 整一個regular pentagon出黎 ;) fix 唔係幾識用
  18. 01:24:846 (1) - 同hard一樣 no fix,同上



thank very much :)
fix :)
P A N
2,353 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Hi. how can i get here D:?

[Easy]

00:01:717 (2) - down 1 grid
00:23:145 (3) - up 1 grid OR move to 268|320 and move (4) to 268|320
00:33:431 (3) - move to 368|88
01:03:002 (3) - up 1 grid
01:09:431 (6) - move tail up 2 grid
01:23:574 (6) - move tail up 2 grid

[Normal]

00:09:859 (4) - first. move to 448|132. then move center to 467|78 and move tail to 448|16
00:34:502 (1) - confusing. fix spacing here XD.
01:24:860 (1) - confusing. use the normal-spacing here is better

[Hard]

00:07:288 (5) - I think 232|284 is better OR stack with (4)
00:09:217 (6) - move to 328|92 please
00:17:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/2IdQg.jpg I think it's better. follow the flow
00:20:360 - add note u can try 25% play rate
00:20:467 - add note ^
00:21:324 - add note?
00:23:145 (1) - wtf here.. :OOO
00:25:717 (3) - move to 316|316
00:38:895 - add note?
00:42:860 (5) - move tail down 1 grid pleaseeee
00:46:288 (3) - move to 456|256
00:59:360 (1) - up 1 grid
00:59:574 (2) - up 3 grid
00:59:788 (3) - move to 340|304
01:01:288 (3) - move to 408|68 is better
01:04:288 (3) - move tail right 1 grid pleaseeeee
01:06:217 (8,1,2,3) - fix spacing here
01:16:074 (7) - 304|312
01:16:288 (8) - 376|348
01:17:574 (1,2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/2IemV.jpg ti's a triangle and (3) blanket (1). look good
what about end the last spinner at 01:27:860 and add note at 01:28:074

[Insane]

I don't know should you resnap some note. but it's ok
00:01:288 (4) - fix spacing
00:02:002 (3) - fix spacing
00:12:645 (4) - 168|228
00:13:288 (2) - up 1 grid
00:18:860 (3) - 236|224
00:19:931 (2) - 52|148
00:37:502 (2) - 140|156
00:50:038 (5) - 392|208
00:50:145 (6) - 392|255
01:09:431 (1) - 212|148
01:23:574 (5) - 308|184
01:24:002 (7) - 272|256
01:24:431 (9) - 328|320

Good Luck :D
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
[quote="P A N"]Hi. how can i get here D:?

[Easy]

00:01:717 (2) - down 1 grid fix
00:23:145 (3) - up 1 grid OR move to 268|320 and move (4) to 268|320 fix
00:33:431 (3) - move to 368|88 fix
01:03:002 (3) - up 1 grid fix
01:09:431 (6) - move tail up 2 grid fix
01:23:574 (6) - move tail up 2 grid fix

[Normal]

00:09:859 (4) - first. move to 448|132. then move center to 467|78 and move tail to 448|16 fix
00:34:502 (1) - confusing. fix spacing here XD. confusing. use the normal-spacing here is better fix
01:24:860 (1) - confusing. use the normal-spacing here is better no fix


[Hard]

00:07:288 (5) - I think 232|284 is better OR stack with (4) fix
00:09:217 (6) - move to 328|92 please fix
00:17:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/2IdQg.jpg I think it's better. follow the flow fix
00:20:360 - add note u can try 25% play rate fix
00:20:467 - add note ^ no fix
00:21:324 - add note? fix
00:23:145 (1) - wtf here.. :OOO fix,I don't know why this slider in here= =,maybe last mod i forget change
00:25:717 (3) - move to 316|316 fix
00:38:895 - add note? no fix
00:42:860 (5) - move tail down 1 grid pleaseeee fix
00:46:288 (3) - move to 456|256 no fix
00:59:360 (1) - up 1 grid fix
00:59:574 (2) - up 3 grid fix
00:59:788 (3) - move to 340|304 fix
01:01:288 (3) - move to 408|68 is better fix
01:04:288 (3) - move tail right 1 grid pleaseeeee fix
01:06:217 (8,1,2,3) - fix spacing here no fix,i thank this is ok
01:16:074 (7) - 304|312 fix
01:16:288 (8) - 376|348 fix
01:17:574 (1,2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/2IemV.jpg ti's a triangle and (3) blanket (1). look good
what about end the last spinner at 01:27:860 and add note at 01:28:074 some fix

[Insane]

I don't know should you resnap some note. but it's ok
00:01:288 (4) - fix spacing fix
00:02:002 (3) - fix spacing fix
00:12:645 (4) - 168|228 fix
00:13:288 (2) - up 1 grid fix
00:18:860 (3) - 236|224 fix
00:19:931 (2) - 52|148 fix
00:37:502 (2) - 140|156 fix
00:50:038 (5) - 392|208 fix
00:50:145 (6) - 392|255 fix
01:09:431 (1) - 212|148 fix
01:23:574 (5) - 308|184 fix
01:24:002 (7) - 272|256 fix
01:24:431 (9) - 328|320 fix


thank! :)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
update:
1.more sampleset
2.more distance snap
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
from #modreq

英文mod写了几句 还是用中文吧
毕竟是专门儿过来帮助新人的 你要是看不懂就囧了

General
文件尺寸什么的都还好
可以找个合适的custom hitclap来用
所有diff： 00:06:002 - 降音量莫名

Insane
00:03:002 (4,7) - 可考虑+finish 觉得声音太大可以降那个finish音的音量
00:03:860 - 这里的节奏 你用kick slider起拍是很好的思路 不过用法有点不太对 这图应该会更好
00:07:502 (6) - whstle用得好蛮不错的 不过一般来说如果不是因为音乐中有和whistle相似的音 而是你想另外用whistle构成一个旋律的话 最好配套用 不要突然只冒出一个 比如00:09:002 (5) - 就也可以加 其他的怎么加就看你自己的思路了
00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的伴奏旋律是渐强 比起这个梗 更推荐间距增大梗 反正Insane么 不会觉得太难的
00:11:788 (2,3) - 这里的节奏明显也不对 长音错位了 试试这样
00:14:359 (4) - 建议去掉finish
00:17:574 (7) - +finish的话可以和00:17:038 (2) - 以及00:18:002 (1) - 的头结合起来
00:18:645 (2,4) - nazi 叠好
00:28:288 (1,3) - body上的whistle音你确定想要？
00:32:360 (2,3) - 节奏错位吧 要跟vocal的话 就改成类似这样 (3)也换成一个二分拍滑条也可以
00:38:574 (3,4,5) - 如果你想跟vocal 那么这个节奏也错位了 想用1/4滑条的话就这样 当然你也可以选用上一条里我提到的节奏型
00:40:288 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:217 - 建议加note 这里是节奏逐渐密集的段落 突然空一下=。=
00:50:574 (1) - 这里加个finish太适合了好么！
01:09:431 (1,2,3) - 重音 建议2种选择 一是原地【或者微小间距】 二是放跳 你现在这个spacing 误导性太强了
01:12:860 (4) - 节奏变化 建议NC
01:16:288 (5) - ^
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个地方……嘛 怎么说呢 再想想吧 不要懒 这绝对不是最好的表现形式 反正我打到这里的时候真的很无语
01:21:431 (4,1) - 交换NC
01:24:859 (1) - soft finish

Hard
00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6) - AR7的Hard 这种梗 反人类
00:14:574 (7) - NC
00:20:574 (1) - 去掉NC 然后00:21:002 (2,1) - 交换NC
00:45:431 (1) - 头上的finish呢
00:46:288 (3) - ^
00:50:574 (3) - soft finish
00:58:502 (5) - 这么近 坑人么
01:11:788 (4,5,6) - 01:13:931 (2,3,4) - 这么多clap 耳朵要炸了
01:17:788 (2) - spacing 我求求你和00:12:431 (4,5,6) - 比一下可以么
01:19:717 (7) - 头尾全加soft finish都不错
最后spinner 加soft finish 后面2个diff不说了

Normal
00:02:574 (3) - 可以加finish 降音量
00:11:145 (5) - spacing 容许误差+_0.04
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - 直线？
00:39:860 (4) - 歪了 应该上1grid 嘛 或者你让(1)往下也行 省的还有调后面的
01:07:717 (1) - 一定是我打开的方式不对 趁我揉眼睛的时候快改
01:22:717 (1) - spacing啊

Easy
Easy要缩短combo长度
00:02:574 (3) - NC
00:45:431 (1) - 头尾都加soft finish
01:03:431 (1) - 头上的finish让人有一种重音错位感 嘛 随便吧 删不删都可以
01:07:717 (3) - NC
01:12:859 (3) - NC
01:21:002 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:23:145 (5) - NC

低难度比高难度做得好 除了Normal里有些莫名间距
这个质量找BAT还太早了=。=真的
多打打图 从别人那里学 怎么才能把高难度做得有趣
你PC数太少了 所以能做成现在这样我觉得已经不错了
加油
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Zero__wind wrote:

from #modreq

英文mod写了几句 还是用中文吧
毕竟是专门儿过来帮助新人的 你要是看不懂就囧了

General
文件尺寸什么的都还好
可以找个合适的custom hitclap来用
所有diff： 00:06:002 - 降音量莫名

Insane
00:03:002 (4,7) - 可考虑+finish 觉得声音太大可以降那个finish音的音量 fix
00:03:860 - 这里的节奏 你用kick slider起拍是很好的思路 不过用法有点不太对 这图应该会更好 fix
00:07:502 (6) - whstle用得好蛮不错的 不过一般来说如果不是因为音乐中有和whistle相似的音 而是你想另外用whistle构成一个旋律的话 最好配套用 不要突然只冒出一个 比如00:09:002 (5) - 就也可以加 其他的怎么加就看你自己的思路了 no fix 不知道如果修改
00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的伴奏旋律是渐强 比起这个梗 更推荐间距增大梗 反正Insane么 不会觉得太难的 fix 我最愛這個修改
00:11:788 (2,3) - 这里的节奏明显也不对 长音错位了 试试这样 fix
00:14:359 (4) - 建议去掉finish fix
00:17:574 (7) - +finish的话可以和00:17:038 (2) - 以及00:18:002 (1) - 的头结合起来 fix
00:18:645 (2,4) - nazi 叠好 fix
00:28:288 (1,3) - body上的whistle音你确定想要？ 小部分fix
00:32:360 (2,3) - 节奏错位吧 要跟vocal的话 就改成类似这样 (3)也换成一个二分拍滑条也可以 fix 感覺很好
00:38:574 (3,4,5) - 如果你想跟vocal 那么这个节奏也错位了 想用1/4滑条的话就这样 当然你也可以选用上一条里我提到的节奏型 fix
00:40:288 (4,5,6) - ^ fix
00:45:217 - 建议加note 这里是节奏逐渐密集的段落 突然空一下=。= fix
00:50:574 (1) - 这里加个finish太适合了好么！ fix
01:09:431 (1,2,3) - 重音 建议2种选择 一是原地【或者微小间距】 二是放跳 你现在这个spacing 误导性太强了 fix,這個可能修改得有點坑
01:12:860 (4) - 节奏变化 建议NC fix
01:16:288 (5) - ^ fix
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个地方……嘛 怎么说呢 再想想吧 不要懒 这绝对不是最好的表现形式 反正我打到这里的时候真的很无语 fix
01:21:431 (4,1) - 交换NC fix
01:24:859 (1) - soft finish fix

Hard
00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6) - AR7的Hard 这种梗 反人类 fix
00:14:574 (7) - NC fix
00:20:574 (1) - 去掉NC 然后00:21:002 (2,1) - 交换NC fix
00:45:431 (1) - 头上的finish呢 fix
00:46:288 (3) - ^ fix
00:50:574 (3) - soft finish fix
00:58:502 (5) - 这么近 坑人么 fix
01:11:788 (4,5,6) - 01:13:931 (2,3,4) - 这么多clap 耳朵要炸了 部分fix
01:17:788 (2) - spacing 我求求你和00:12:431 (4,5,6) - 比一下可以么 fix 我之前忘記了修改
01:19:717 (7) - 头尾全加soft finish都不错 fix
最后spinner 加soft finish 后面2个diff不说了 fix

Normal
00:02:574 (3) - 可以加finish 降音量 fix
00:11:145 (5) - spacing 容许误差+_0.04 fix
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - 直线？ 改直了點 :)
00:39:860 (4) - 歪了 应该上1grid 嘛 或者你让(1)往下也行 省的还有调后面的 fix
01:07:717 (1) - 一定是我打开的方式不对 趁我揉眼睛的时候快改 fix
01:22:717 (1) - spacing啊 fix

Easy
Easy要缩短combo长度
00:02:574 (3) - NC fix
00:45:431 (1) - 头尾都加soft finish fix
01:03:431 (1) - 头上的finish让人有一种重音错位感 嘛 随便吧 删不删都可以 no fix
01:07:717 (3) - NC fix
01:12:859 (3) - NC fix
01:21:002 (1,2) - 交换NC fix
01:23:145 (5) - NC fix

低难度比高难度做得好 除了Normal里有些莫名间距
这个质量找BAT还太早了=。=真的
多打打图 从别人那里学 怎么才能把高难度做得有趣
你PC数太少了 所以能做成现在这样我觉得已经不错了
加油
你的mod 很讚 :D
可能我還是新手...感謝你 :)
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D

Some suggestions

[Overal]
Audio preview must be same at all difficulties

[Easy]
STR 1 instead of 2?
00:21:431 (1) - align w/ (4)?
00:50:574 (1) - align w/ (3)?

[Normal]
00:34:502 (1) - consider to space it away from the end of (6)
01:20:788 (1,2) - that overlap didn't looks good imo
01:24:860 (1) - I'd suggest to delete circle and start spinner here

[Hard]
00:29:360 (7,1) - not so good looking overlap again
01:24:860 (7) - same as 01:24:860 (1) in [Normal]

[Insane]
01:10:931 (2,3,4) - align w/ 1?


Rest seems fine
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Thunderstorm wrote:

[Normal]
00:34:502 (1) - consider to space it away from the end of (6)fix
01:20:788 (1,2) - that overlap didn't looks good imo fix
thank very much :)
Melan Blue
321 posts
Joined October 2009
Melan Blue
Hey! From #modreq.

[General]
  1. Resnap all timing sections. Or at least only kiai sections.
  2. Audio preview is different in all diffs.
[Easy]
  • 00:00:859 (1,2,1,2,3) - Select all of them at once and move them to x:156 y:88 http://puu.sh/2VML2.png
    00:30:860 (3) - Replace clap at the beginning with whistle and finish at the end with clap.
    00:34:717 (1) - Replace finish at the beginning with whistle.
    00:36:860 (1) - ^
    00:48:431 (4) - Add clap.
    01:03:431 (1) - Replace whistle at the end with finish.
[Normal]
  • 00:06:859 (2) - Add whistle.
    00:11:145 (5) - Add NC.
    00:12:859 (1) - Remove NC.
[Hard]
  • 00:44:574 (2,3,4,5) - Whoa, what happened there? o.o Don't place them randomly like that. Use the same distance for these notes.
[Insane]
  • 00:04:288 (2) - Remove clap from the end.
    00:04:717 (3) - Add clap.
    00:31:717 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
    00:59:467 (2) - Place it on the blue tick. http://puu.sh/2VN2u.png
    01:09:431 (1,2,3) - Add clap.
    01:11:145 (3) - Replace whistle at the beginning with finish.
That's all I got. Good luck! =w=
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Leyko wrote:

Hey! From #modreq.

[General]
  1. Resnap all timing sections. Or at least only kiai sections.
  2. Audio preview is different in all diffs. fix
[Easy]
  • 00:00:859 (1,2,1,2,3) - Select all of them at once and move them to x:156 y:88 http://puu.sh/2VML2.png fix
    00:30:860 (3) - Replace clap at the beginning with whistle and finish at the end with clap. fix
    00:34:717 (1) - Replace finish at the beginning with whistle. fix
    00:36:860 (1) - ^ fix
    00:48:431 (4) - Add clap. fix
    01:03:431 (1) - Replace whistle at the end with finish. fix
[Normal]
  • 00:06:859 (2) - Add whistle. fix
    00:11:145 (5) - Add NC. fix
    00:12:859 (1) - Remove NC. fix


[Hard]
  • 00:44:574 (2,3,4,5) - Whoa, what happened there? o.o Don't place them randomly like that. Use the same distance for these notes. fix
[Insane]
  • 00:04:288 (2) - Remove clap from the end. fix
    00:04:717 (3) - Add clap. fix
    00:31:717 (1) - Add finish at the beginning. fix
    00:59:467 (2) - Place it on the blue tick. http://puu.sh/2VN2u.png fix
    01:09:431 (1,2,3) - Add clap. fix
    01:11:145 (3) - Replace whistle at the beginning with finish. fix
That's all I got. Good luck! =w=
thank very much! :)
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
HI~ from my queue. I am sorry it took so long, I had a lot of work to do.

[General]
I definitely recommend checking AIMod. I didn't check what it really wanted to tell me but... I would like you to look at it.

[Easy]
00:03:002 (2) - I would move this note up by 2 grids, just to bring in some variety.
00:23:574 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat and then add a circle at 00:24:431 to emphasize the rhythm of the singer a little more.
00:54:002 (1) - Swap hitsounds, use the whistle on the end of this slider, not on slider start.
01:04:717 (2) - You should really add a NC here, since the "climax" of this song begins here.

Quite a sweet diff. It could use some polishing here and there, but all in all it's quite a beauty.

[Normal]
Just one or two imperfect sliders, for example:
00:31:717 (4,6) - The circular parts of these sliders should be made.... a little more.... yeah, circular.
Objectively pretty nice mapping here, again, sometimes the flow isn't perfectly right, but that can be polished up.

[Hard]
Very pesky spacing issues here and there, please fix them by yourself (examples: 00:20:360 (6,7) - 00:38:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DS is changing among pattern)
00:00:859 (1,2) - These don't follow any sound in the background, why not adjusting it to the rhythm?
SPOILER
00:02:574 (3) - :!: As for this slider, definitely use 1/3 repeats.
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty original. I like it.
00:46:931 (4) - Really unnecessary jump. Nothing in the music is really allowing this to be here, such as a certain sound or dunnowhat.
01:10:717 (1,2) - For example, one more really unnecessary jump.
01:17:574 (1,3) - Don't let (3)'s end overlap (1).

This diff was quite nice. I liked it.

[Insane]
00:14:574 (1,3) - These don't follow any sound or anything in the song, so erase them or replace them with something else.
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G would improve flow IMO.

This diff is really overmapped at some parts, which bothers me a lot, but otherwise, it's ok.

Good luck with this!
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Quiz-chan wrote:

HI~ from my queue. I am sorry it took so long, I had a lot of work to do.

[General]
I definitely recommend checking AIMod. I didn't check what it really wanted to tell me but... I would like you to look at it.

[Easy]
00:23:574 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat and then add a circle at 00:24:431 to emphasize the rhythm of the singer a little more. fix
00:54:002 (1) - Swap hitsounds, use the whistle on the end of this slider, not on slider start. fix
01:04:717 (2) - You should really add a NC here, since the "climax" of this song begins here. fix

[Hard]
Very pesky spacing issues here and there, please fix them by yourself (examples: 00:20:360 (6,7) - 00:38:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DS is changing among pattern) fix
00:00:859 (1,2) - These don't follow any sound in the background, why not adjusting it to the rhythm? fix
SPOILER
00:02:574 (3) - :!: As for this slider, definitely use 1/3 repeats. fix
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty original. I like it. thank
00:46:931 (4) - Really unnecessary jump. Nothing in the music is really allowing this to be here, such as a certain sound or dunnowhat. fix
01:10:717 (1,2) - For example, one more really unnecessary jump. fix
01:17:574 (1,3) - Don't let (3)'s end overlap (1). fix


[Insane]
00:14:574 (1,3) - These don't follow any sound or anything in the song, so erase them or replace them with something else. fix
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G would improve flow IMO. fix
Thank very much! :)
akebono
615 posts
Joined August 2012
akebono
I'm sorry for poor mod :(
I Hardly fine any mistake for this beatmap..
This is are Sugestion, All of it :)

[Insane]
00:12:538 Why not add one note again? like this
00:58:824 Add some note?
01:00:324 Add some note?
01:00:538 Add some note?
01:10:610 Add some note?
01:10:824 Add some note?
01:11:038 Add some note?
01:14:467 Add some note?
01:23:466 Add some note?
01:24:324 Add some note?
01:24:645 Add some note?

Wait ... This is all abaout "Add some note?" ...

Um.. I Wish this will help ...
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

egas00 wrote:

I'm sorry for poor mod :(
I Hardly fine any mistake for this beatmap..
This is are Sugestion, All of it :)

[Insane]
00:12:538 Why not add one note again? like this fix
00:58:824 Add some note? fix
01:00:324 Add some note? fix
01:10:610 Add some note? fix
01:11:038 Add some note? fix

Um.. I Wish this will help ...
thank very much! :)
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
General:
01:28:074 - add a kiai blast here and end 1/4 next

Insane:
00:01:288 (4,4,7) - Add a clap for this :arrow:
00:31:717 (1,2) - extend up to 1/4 right
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
支持 :)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
好想快d ranked... :)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

vahn10 wrote:

Insane:
00:01:288 (4,4,7) - Add a clap for this :arrow: fix
00:31:717 (1,2) - extend up to 1/4 rightfix
thank! :)
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; modding for M4M here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset..

>General
  1. The timing points for kiai aren't snapped. Snap them please.
  2. The preview point between diffs are different. Make them all have the same preview point.
>Easy
  1. Uhm, your combo pattern looks random. Sometimes an NC is added every one stanza, but the other time it goes to two. Make them consistent please.
  2. 00:06:859 (3) - NC since a new stanza begins in the middle of the slider.
  3. 00:09:431 - Add whistle so it will be consistent with 00:06:002?
  4. 00:18:431 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Change claps to whistles, and whistles to claps? Sounds better IMO.
  5. 00:23:145 (3) - Change clap to whistle?
  6. 00:27:431 (1,2) - Swap NC? It's (2) that is on a new stanza, not (1).
  7. 00:34:717 (1) - Change the whistle to clap, and clap to whistle?
  8. 00:37:288 - Change whistle to clap?
  9. 00:38:145 (3) - ^
  10. 00:50:145 (3) - ^
  11. 00:52:288 (3) - Add whistle? You seem to forget it.
  12. 01:02:145 - ^
  13. 01:09:431 - ^
  14. 01:09:431 (4) - Move to (172,304)? Looks far better, IMO. Also remember to fix the spacing.
>Normal
  1. 00:06:431 (1) - Remove the NC because it's not two stanzas yet after the previous NC, so the combo pattern will be consistent?
  2. 00:17:145 (1,3) - Swap NC for combo pattern consistency?
  3. 00:53:145 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:55:717 (1) - Remove NC?
  5. 01:01:288 (2,3) - Change whistles to claps, and the clap to whistle?
  6. 01:18:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern looks messy for me. Try to make them look neater? At least don't make the third (1) touch the first (1,2). Also, remove the NCs? They are unnecessary.
>Hard
  1. The combo pattern also looks inconsistent here. Make the NCs consistent please, whether it's every one or two stanzas, and use them at the beginning of a stanza. This applies to all diffs.
  2. The hitsound also has a weird pattern... When you're not using finishes, use whistles every first and third white tick of a stanza and claps on the second and fourth. This also applies to all diffs.
  3. 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - Just snap them to 1/3 like what you did in Insane. It should be fine. It's really bad to use the wrong snapping in a song if it's noticeably different anyway.
  4. 00:05:145 (5) - Move to (388,68)?
  5. 00:08:360 (2,4) - Try to not make them touch 00:07:717 (1)? Looks bad currently...
  6. 00:18:002 (5,1) - Swap NC. I'm sure enough it's already obvious why.
  7. 00:36:002 (6,1,2) - What's with the sudden spacing change? It's just unexpected.
  8. 00:38:574 (4,1) - Swap NC?
>Insane
  1. 00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern isn't symmetrical. Just copy-paste (1,2), choose the new circles, and rotate them by 45 degrees counter-clockwise. Choose those new circles again, copy-paste again, and rotate by 45 degrees again. Do it once again and you should be done with it.
  2. 00:20:360 (3) - Uh, just use 00:19:931 (2) and rotate it by 180 degrees?
  3. 00:37:502 (2,3,1) - Spacing changes like this can be confusing.
  4. 00:49:824 (3,5) - This is an example of bad overmapping. Remove?
  5. 01:15:217 (7) - Change clap to whistle?
Okay, that's it I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M here.

>General
  1. The preview point between diffs are different. Make them all have the same preview point. fix
>Easy
  1. Uhm, your combo pattern looks random. Sometimes an NC is added every one stanza, but the other time it goes to two. Make them consistent please. fix
  2. 00:06:859 (3) - NC since a new stanza begins in the middle of the slider. fix
  3. 00:09:431 - Add whistle so it will be consistent with 00:06:002? fix
  4. 00:18:431 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Change claps to whistles, and whistles to claps? Sounds better IMO. fix
  5. 00:27:431 (1,2) - Swap NC? It's (2) that is on a new stanza, not (1). fix
  6. 00:34:717 (1) - Change the whistle to clap, and clap to whistle? fix
  7. 00:37:288 - Change whistle to clap? fix
  8. 00:38:145 (3) - ^ fix
  9. 00:50:145 (3) - ^ fix
  10. 00:52:288 (3) - Add whistle? You seem to forget it. fix
  11. 01:02:145 - ^ fix
  12. 01:09:431 - ^
  13. 01:09:431 (4) - Move to (172,304)? Looks far better, IMO. Also remember to fix the spacing. fix
>Normal
  1. 00:06:431 (1) - Remove the NC because it's not two stanzas yet after the previous NC, so the combo pattern will be consistent? fix
  2. 00:17:145 (1,3) - Swap NC for combo pattern consistency? fix
  3. 00:53:145 (1,2) - ^ fix
  4. 00:55:717 (1) - Remove NC? fix
  5. 01:01:288 (2,3) - Change whistles to claps, and the clap to whistle? fix
  6. 01:18:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern looks messy for me. Try to make them look neater? At least don't make the third (1) touch the first (1,2). Also, remove the NCs? They are unnecessary.fix
>Hard
  1. 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - Just snap them to 1/3 like what you did in Insane. It should be fine. It's really bad to use the wrong snapping in a song if it's noticeably different anyway. fix
  2. 00:05:145 (5) - Move to (388,68)? fix
  3. 00:08:360 (2,4) - Try to not make them touch 00:07:717 (1)? Looks bad currently... fix
  4. 00:18:002 (5,1) - Swap NC. I'm sure enough it's already obvious why. fix
  5. 00:36:002 (6,1,2) - What's with the sudden spacing change? It's just unexpected. fix
  6. 00:38:574 (4,1) - Swap NC? fix
>Insane
  1. 00:20:360 (3) - Uh, just use 00:19:931 (2) and rotate it by 180 degrees? fix
  2. 00:49:824 (3,5) - This is an example of bad overmapping. Remove? fix
  3. 01:15:217 (7) - Change clap to whistle? fix
thank very much :)
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hi M4M
From #modreqs

[Easy]
CS 3
HP 1
AR 2
OD 2
00:02:574 (3) - Un-NC
00:06:859 (3) - Un-NC
00:09:002 (1) - NC
00:09:431 (2) - Un-NC
00:24:431 (1) - NC
00:24:860 (1) - Un-NC
00:26:574 (4) - NC
00:27:860 (4) - Un-NC
00:29:145 (1) - NC
00:30:002 (3) - Un-NC
00:30:431 (1) - NC
00:31:717 (1) - Un-NC
01:12:859 (1) - Un-NC
01:21:002 (1) - NC
01:21:431 (1) - Un-NC
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Normal]
CS 3
HP 3
AR 4
OD 4
00:17:145 (6) - NC
00:18:002 (1) - Un-NC
00:33:002 (1) - NC
00:34:502 (1) - Un-NC
00:35:574 (5) - NC
00:38:145 - Add a circle? and NC
00:38:574 (1) - Un-NC
00:52:717 Add a circle? and NC
00:53:145 (2) - Un-NC
01:10:931 (1) - Add a circle? and NC
01:11:145 (2) - Un-NC
01:22:717 (3) - Un-NC
00:31:717 (4) - How about this kind of slider?
SPOILER
or something else that more symetrical
00:34:502 (1,2) - Un-stack? It's Confusing imo
00:38:145 Add a circle?
01:25:074 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Hard]
CS 4
HP 5
AR 6
OD 6
00:06:645 (2,3,4) - Un-stack? It's Confusing imo
00:20:574 (7) - Delete circle? and add a circle on 00:20:788
00:24:217 (1) - Add a circle?
00:28:931 (6) - Add a circle?
00:36:645 (7) - Add a circle?
00:42:002 How about this kind of pattern? It sounds good
01:17:360 Add a circle?
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Insane]
CS 4
HP 7
AR 8
OD 8
00:38:788 (4,5) - and 00:40:502 (5,6) - can you make that one more symetrical?
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

All my mods are suggestion you can reject it though
Good luck, go for ranked XD
--
Here my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87594
Thanks before :)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M
From #modreqs



[Normal]
00:17:145 (6) - NC fix
00:18:002 (1) - Un-NC fix
00:38:145 - Add a circle? and NC fix
00:38:574 (1) - Un-NC fix
00:34:502 (1,2) - Un-stack? It's Confusing imo i change other

[Hard]
00:20:574 (7) - Delete circle? and add a circle on 00:20:788 fix
00:36:645 (7) - Add a circle? fix
00:42:002 How about this kind of pattern? It sounds good fix
01:17:360 Add a circle? fix


[Insane]
00:38:788 (4,5) - and 00:40:502 (5,6) - can you make that one more symetrical? fix

All my mods are suggestion you can reject it though
Good luck, go for ranked XD
thank :)
Smoothie
569 posts
Joined August 2011
Smoothie
Heya~
From #modreqs

Black = Suggestion
Bold = Recommended
Red = You need to fix it. (probably unrankable)

[General]
Seems fine


[Insane]
00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about arranging them to a circle? Like this:
SPOILER
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow?
00:21:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Place them to a triangle. It plays better that way.
SPOILER
00:33:431 (1) - This reverse slider doesn't fit so well. How about this?:
SPOILER
00:38:574 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit...weird. Try this, it plays and flows way better:
SPOILER
01:06:431 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same as i mentioned above, how about arranging them to a more circleish-shape?
01:10:610 (4,1) - Stack them?
01:23:574 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make that star shape a bit nicer~
SPOILER
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point
00:56:560 - ^
01:04:274 - ^
01:20:131 - ^


[Hard]
00:04:288 (1) - Place at x:456 y:172
00:04:717 (3) - Place at x:452 y:96
00:05:145 (5) - Place at x:384 y:64
00:06:645 (2) - That note isn't stacked properly.
00:20:788 (7,8) - Place them at x:304 y:148
00:21:217 (1,2,3) - Stack them and place them at x:380 y:192
00:23:788 (2) - Not stacked properly.
00:45:431 (1,2,3,4) - Like this?
SPOILER
00:47:145 (1) - End the spinner at 00:48:860 and add a finish to it.
00:49:717 (1) - Remove the finish on the slider start and add a whistle.
01:23:788 (4) - Not stacked properly.
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point
00:56:560 - ^
01:04:274 - ^
01:20:131 - ^

[Normal]
00:31:717 (4) - 00:31:717 (4,6) - These slidershapes look a bit random compared to the other ones. Can you change them?
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point
00:56:560 - ^
01:04:274 - ^
01:20:131 - ^


[Easy]
00:10:288 (2) - Add a whislte on the slider start?
00:23:145 (3) - Remove this note and start the slider 00:23:360 (3) at 00:23:145 instead. if you did that extend it to 00:23:788.
00:47:145 (3) - Place a finish on the start, reverse and end of the slider?
00:48:431 (4) - Add finish
01:00:860 - Add note.
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point
00:56:560 - ^
01:04:274 - ^
01:20:131 - ^

Thats all~
Good luck!
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~
From #modreqs

Black = Suggestion
Bold = Recommended
Red = You need to fix it. (probably unrankable)

[General]
Seems fine


[Insane]
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow? fix
00:21:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Place them to a triangle. It plays better that way. fix
SPOILER
00:33:431 (1) - This reverse slider doesn't fit so well. How about this?: fix
SPOILER
01:10:610 (4,1) - Stack them? fix
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point fix
00:56:560 - ^ fix
01:04:274 - ^ fix
01:20:131 - ^ fix


[Hard]
00:04:288 (1) - Place at x:456 y:172 fix
00:04:717 (3) - Place at x:452 y:96 fix
00:05:145 (5) - Place at x:384 y:64 fix
00:06:645 (2) - That note isn't stacked properly. fix
00:20:788 (7,8) - Place them at x:304 y:148 fix
00:23:788 (2) - Not stacked properly. fix
00:45:431 (1,2,3,4) - Like this? fix
SPOILER
00:47:145 (1) - End the spinner at 00:48:860 and add a finish to it. fix
00:49:717 (1) - Remove the finish on the slider start and add a whistle. fix
01:23:788 (4) - Not stacked properly. fix
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point fix
00:56:560 - ^ fix
01:04:274 - ^ fix
01:20:131 - ^ fix

[Normal]
00:31:717 (4) - 00:31:717 (4,6) - These slidershapes look a bit random compared to the other ones. Can you change them? fix
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point fix
00:56:560 - ^ fix
01:04:274 - ^ fix
01:20:131 - ^ fix


[Easy]
00:10:288 (2) - Add a whislte on the slider start? fix
00:23:145 (3) - Remove this note and start the slider 00:23:360 (3) at 00:23:145 instead. if you did that extend it to 00:23:788. fix
00:47:145 (3) - Place a finish on the start, reverse and end of the slider? fix
00:48:431 (4) - Add finish fix
01:00:860 - Add note. fix
00:50:560 - Unsnapped Inherited Point fix
00:56:560 - ^ fix
01:04:274 - ^ fix
01:20:131 - ^ fix
Thats all~
Good luck!
thank very much :)
putigame
25 posts
Joined March 2012
putigame
譜面のmodding

Hard

00:14:574~00:16:717　ここのスライダーの配置ですが、１番目のスライダーはここでいいと思うんですが、２番目は真ん中に配置して、３番目は一番右に配置すればいいと思います。
00:30:002　１番目のスライダーは、７番目の往復スライダーの始点からはじめるのがいいと思います。
00:24:860~00:26:145　一番目のスライダーの終点と２番目のサークルと３番目のスライダーの始点は横にまっすぐ揃えたほうがいいと思います。
01:00:645　ここの４番目のサークルは、New Comboにしたほうがいいと思います。
01:03:431~01:04:717　ここの１番目のスライダーの終点と２番目のサークルと３番目のスライダーの始点は横にまっすぐ揃えたほうがいいと思います。
01:04:931~01:06:002　ここの４、５、６のサークル　今は斜めに倒れた三角形のようになってますが、底辺が横にまっすぐな三角形にしたらいいと思います。あと７番目のスライダーは次のNew Comboの一番目のサークルにもう少し近づけてもいいと思います。
01:14:574~01:15:431　ここの４番目のスライダー　始点と終点は線で結んだときに縦にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。
01:20:788~01:22:074　１、２、３のサークルと４番目のスライダーの始点を線で結んだときにまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。

insane
00:33:431~00:34:074　ここの部分ですが、プレイをしていて個人的にすごいやりにくかったので、00:31:717~00:32:360の部分と同じ感じで１と２のスライダーだけのほうがいいと思います。
00:54:645~00:55:502　ここの５、６、７、８、９のサークルですが、７のサークルは中心が真ん中の線の上にくるようにおき、５、７、９のサークル　６、８のサークルはそれぞれ同じ高さの位置において、きれいなＷの形になるようにすればいいと思います。
01:20:360~01:21:002　最初の２、３のサークルは中心を線で結んだときに横にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。あと、次の１、２のサークルは中心を線で結んだときに縦にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。
00:25:717~00:27:217　ここの１の往復スライダーの始点の中心　２、３のサークルの中心　４の往復スライダーの始点の中心　５のサークルの中心を線で結んだときに横にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。
01:12:217~01:12:645　ここの１、２、３のサークル　それぞれのサークルの中心を線で結んだときに底辺が横にまっすぐな三角形になるようにすればいいと思います。

modding初心者のもので、良い指摘ができたかどうかわかりませんが自分なりの意見を書いておきました。
参考にしていただければ幸いです＞＜
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

putigame wrote:

譜面のmodding

Hard

00:14:574~00:16:717　ここのスライダーの配置ですが、１番目のスライダーはここでいいと思うんですが、２番目は真ん中に配置して、３番目は一番右に配置すればいいと思います。 fix
00:30:002　１番目のスライダーは、７番目の往復スライダーの始点からはじめるのがいいと思います。 fix
00:24:860~00:26:145　一番目のスライダーの終点と２番目のサークルと３番目のスライダーの始点は横にまっすぐ揃えたほうがいいと思います。 fix
01:00:645　ここの４番目のサークルは、New Comboにしたほうがいいと思います。 fix
01:03:431~01:04:717　ここの１番目のスライダーの終点と２番目のサークルと３番目のスライダーの始点は横にまっすぐ揃えたほうがいいと思います。 fix
01:04:931~01:06:002　ここの４、５、６のサークル　今は斜めに倒れた三角形のようになってますが、底辺が横にまっすぐな三角形にしたらいいと思います。あと７番目のスライダーは次のNew Comboの一番目のサークルにもう少し近づけてもいいと思います。 fix
01:20:788~01:22:074　１、２、３のサークルと４番目のスライダーの始点を線で結んだときにまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。 fix

insane
00:33:431~00:34:074　ここの部分ですが、プレイをしていて個人的にすごいやりにくかったので、00:31:717~00:32:360の部分と同じ感じで１と２のスライダーだけのほうがいいと思います。fix
00:54:645~00:55:502　ここの５、６、７、８、９のサークルですが、７のサークルは中心が真ん中の線の上にくるようにおき、５、７、９のサークル　６、８のサークルはそれぞれ同じ高さの位置において、きれいなＷの形になるようにすればいいと思います。 fix
01:20:360~01:21:002　最初の２、３のサークルは中心を線で結んだときに横にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。あと、次の１、２のサークルは中心を線で結んだときに縦にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。 fix
00:25:717~00:27:217　ここの１の往復スライダーの始点の中心　２、３のサークルの中心　４の往復スライダーの始点の中心　５のサークルの中心を線で結んだときに横にまっすぐになるようにすればいいと思います。 fix
01:12:217~01:12:645　ここの１、２、３のサークル　それぞれのサークルの中心を線で結んだときに底辺が横にまっすぐな三角形になるようにすればいいと思います。 fix



modding初心者のもので、良い指摘ができたかどうかわかりませんが自分なりの意見を書いておきました。
参考にしていただければ幸いです＞＜

本当にありがとうございます :)
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
irc mod 8-)
irc
19:26 happy623: w
19:26 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226318 +Plus - Fiesta (TV Size) [Easy]]
19:27 happy623: irc mod ok?
20:01 wmtokok: hi
20:02 happy623: owo/
20:02 wmtokok: 中文吧..
20:02 happy623: 廣東話owo/?
20:02 wmtokok: 我英文不太好
20:02 wmtokok: 係
20:02 happy623: 噗
20:03 happy623: okay owo
20:03 wmtokok: :)
20:03 happy623: Easy
20:04 happy623: 建議扭多d slider (?
20:04 happy623: 似呢個00:34:717 (1) -
20:04 wmtokok: 太直的嗎@@?
20:04 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817790
20:05 happy623: 'w') 咁樣個flow會好d
20:05 wmtokok: 嗯..
20:05 happy623: 00:52:288 (3) -
20:05 happy623: 放上1格0 0
20:05 happy623: 同番slider2直線
20:06 happy623: 00:52:717 (4) - x92 y264
20:06 happy623: 00:53:145 (5) - 之後snap番就ok w
20:06 wmtokok: fix
20:07 happy623: 01:00:860 (5) - 試下唔好overlap?
20:07 happy623: 靚d w
20:07 wmtokok: overlap?
20:07 happy623: 01:03:431 (4) - NC
20:07 happy623: 01:04:717 (1) -
20:07 happy623: remove NC
20:07 happy623: 姐係疊住左w
20:07 happy623: 但又未到stack
20:07 wmtokok: 哦..
20:08 happy623: 01:07:717 (1) - remove NC
20:08 happy623: 01:09:431 (6) - 最尾個度漏左finish
20:09 happy623: 01:12:859 (1) - remove NC w
20:10 wmtokok: 那個我都忘了加上finish..
20:10 wmtokok: 謝._.
20:10 happy623: 00:04:288 (1,1) -
20:11 happy623: XD 算啦呢個ok
20:11 wmtokok: e個好似有d懶 XD
20:11 happy623: 諗起我自己map都有
20:11 happy623: 不過細小小w 就算ww
20:12 happy623: easy ok 0 0
20:12 happy623: normal
20:12 happy623: 00:11:145 (1) - 開首finish
20:13 happy623: 00:15:002 (2,3,4) - 試下唔好直線?
20:13 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817806
20:13 happy623: 類似咁樣w
20:14 wmtokok: 都唔錯@@
20:14 happy623: 00:35:145 (1,2) - 旋律冇大變化0 0
20:15 happy623: 考慮白線放番野?
20:15 wmtokok: 好..
20:16 happy623: 最懶就係2個都reverse w
20:16 happy623: 00:38:145 (1,2) - unsnapped
20:16 wmtokok: @@
20:17 happy623: snap好之後
20:17 happy623: 00:38:574 (2,3,4,5) - 呢4個打算正方形?0 0
20:17 wmtokok: 整做第2d都ok既..
20:17 happy623: 唔係w
20:17 happy623: 都可以
20:18 happy623: 但未排好
20:18 happy623: 試下對番齊就ok w
20:18 wmtokok: e個一開始唔識放...就咁整左正方形..
20:18 happy623: ok 0 0
20:19 happy623: 00:47:145 (4) - finish
20:20 happy623: 00:53:145 (4) - nc
20:20 happy623: 00:53:574 (1) - remove nc
20:21 happy623: 00:55:717 (3) - 最尾個錨點放係x248 y88? 可以同note4 一條線w
20:21 happy623: 01:09:431 (5) - 最尾漏finish
20:22 happy623: 00:50:574
20:22 wmtokok: ok
20:22 happy623: 呢條綠線未對齊
20:22 happy623: 01:03:431 (1) - 最尾+finish
20:23 happy623: normal ok ~
20:24 happy623: hard同insane 洗唔洗test play ;w;
20:24 wmtokok: 好@@
20:24 happy623: ok
20:25 *happy623 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226319 +Plus - Fiesta (TV Size) [Hard]]
20:26 happy623: 'w') ok叫我
20:26 happy623: me飲湯w
20:26 wmtokok: 嗯
20:27 wmtokok: 好了..
20:27 wmtokok: fix完成
20:28 happy623: ok
20:32 happy623: 00:17:145 (1,2,3,4,1) -
20:32 wmtokok: hard 1開始間距再遠d會唔會好d
20:33 happy623: 呢個ok 0 0
20:33 happy623: 唔洗
20:33 wmtokok: 好似有d近._.
20:33 happy623: 00:34:502 (1,2,3) -
20:33 happy623: 呢幾個跟番snap
20:33 happy623: 00:38:788 (2,3,4,5) - 好似有d難XD
20:34 happy623: 我既話會用係Insane度
20:34 happy623: 00:40:502 (2,3,4,5) - ^
20:34 happy623: 00:44:145 - 漏左個鼓聲
20:34 wmtokok: 應該同insane掉番轉@@
20:34 wmtokok: insane用長條._.
20:35 happy623: 00:52:931 (2,3) - 放遠少少好d w
20:36 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817832 咁樣之類?
20:36 happy623: 00:59:431 (1) - 未snap好? timeline度 http://puu.sh/3hIlx.jpg
20:39 happy623: ok叫我w
20:40 wmtokok: 整緊..
20:40 happy623: 恩
20:40 happy623: 00:59:431 (1,2,3) - 最好跟snap
20:41 happy623: 01:01:717 (5) - 低1格
20:41 happy623: 01:10:288 (5) - finish
20:42 happy623: 01:14:574 (4,5,6,7,8) - 呢幾個幾好
20:42 happy623: hard ok ~
20:42 wmtokok: @@
20:42 happy623: 您ok之後我再睇Insane owo
20:42 happy623: 食飯先w
20:43 wmtokok: e 5個仲諗住好差tim@@
20:43 wmtokok: 個長條看似好懶- -
20:43 wmtokok: 好..
20:44 happy623: 因為放得幾靚XD
20:48 wmtokok: ok
20:49 happy623: ok~
20:49 wmtokok: 00:38:788 (4,5) - 我改左2連打..
20:49 happy623: 00:03:431 (6) - 放去x60 y260? 個人覺得靚d
20:49 happy623: ok
20:50 happy623: 00:17:788 (8) - 由呢個開始d ds就變大左有d怪XD
20:51 happy623: 不過可以唔洗改, 除非有多幾個人話先
20:51 wmtokok: 嗯.
20:51 happy623: 00:32:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmap ;w;
20:52 wmtokok: 近番d?
20:52 happy623: 刪左藍線既note會好d
20:52 happy623: 因為藍線冇鼓聲呢度冇啦啦連啦唔好
20:52 wmtokok: 我唔del既員因 唔識- -
20:52 happy623: 1 3 5 note改做跳都可以
20:52 happy623: 太突然
20:53 happy623: 藍線
20:53 happy623: 冇啦啦連打太突然
20:53 wmtokok: 之前唔知做咩整左個藍線..唔識點del
20:53 happy623: 唔係;w;
20:53 happy623: I mean呢2舊 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817863
20:54 happy623: 藍線係bookmark黎, 方便用w 可以唔del
20:54 wmtokok: 哦._.
20:54 happy623: 00:37:717 (3) -
20:55 happy623: 我既話會放x375 y360 ;w;
20:55 happy623: 可以唔改w
20:55 happy623: 00:40:824 (6) - 最好跟番00:38:788 (4) -
20:55 happy623: ds差唔多會好d
20:56 happy623: 00:52:717 (2,3,4,5) - ds too large
20:56 happy623: 00:54:645 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
20:57 happy623: 01:03:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以整圓滑d (Y)
20:57 happy623: 01:02:574 (7) - NC
20:57 happy623: 01:10:288 (3) - finish
20:57 happy623: 係咁多w
20:58 wmtokok: 汁汁先..
20:58 happy623: 恩
20:58 happy623: 加油w

加油~
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok
update :)
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Hi hi, from my Queue.


[General]

  1. KIAI times are inconsistent, please check this and fix it.

[Easy]

  1. 00:11:145 (1) - Use a finish on start, it's in the music.
  2. 00:23:145 (3) - using more than one repeat in easier diffs is considered as confusing, remove one.
  3. 00:30:002 (3) - Use a clap on the end to keep consistency.
  4. 00:35:145 (2) - Finish on the start.
  5. 00:36:860 (1) - Try a finish on the start here.
  6. 00:38:574 (1) - Looks really ugly, use the same angle as the other straight Slider.
  7. 01:00:860 - Use a beat here, it's really heavy on this point.
  8. 01:03:431 (1) - Use a finish on the start here aswell.
  9. In general, use more curved Sliders, maps look really odd if they are straight the whole time. Also watch your hitsounds, they are often inconsistent.

[Normal]

  1. 00:24:860 (2) - Start NC here, seems much more reasonable.
  2. 00:30:431 (1,2,3) - Flow is really akward because this is oddly placed away from the end.
  3. 00:31:717 (4) - This shape is pretty ugly, also you could try to make a blanket with 3.
  4. 00:33:431 (6) - Same, but with 7.
  5. 00:42:431 (2) - Straighten this Slider, it looks pretty ugly like this.
  6. 00:52:288 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 2's end.
  7. 01:14:574 (1) - Remove whistle from the Sliderbody and add it to the start.
  8. Same as for Easy, most pattern are looking far too sharp and too straight, try to use more curves and work on the flow.

[Hard]

  1. 00:08:788 (4,5) - What the hell is this spacing? It plays bad and is unreasonable.
  2. 00:19:074 (3,5) - Give them the same shape.
  3. For this diff; spacing is often confusing, inconsistent and weird. I can't even tell which DS you used so yeah. The rhythm and the placement is actually fine here, but spacing is going wild and that makes it pretty bad to play.

[Insane]

  1. For this diff; spacing is weird, combos like this ( 00:29:788 - ) don't really make sense and hitsounds and placing seem a bit random. Patterns could be much better if they were polished and yeah, to get this difficulty good you'll need a lot of cleaning on patterns, spacing corrections and hitsound checking. Best would be to look at some other maps and Insane diffs and try to get some idea of placing and spacing.


Well, that's it.
Overall a pretty solid map for a newbie, but harder difficultys are still far away from being ranked :c

I wish you best of luck!
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Konei wrote:

Hi hi, from my Queue.


[General]

  1. KIAI times are inconsistent, please check this and fix it. fix

[Easy]

  1. 00:11:145 (1) - Use a finish on start, it's in the music. fix
  2. 00:23:145 (3) - using more than one repeat in easier diffs is considered as confusing, remove one. fix
  3. 00:30:002 (3) - Use a clap on the end to keep consistency. fix
  4. 00:35:145 (2) - Finish on the start. fix
  5. 00:36:860 (1) - Try a finish on the start here. fix
  6. 00:38:574 (1) - Looks really ugly, use the same angle as the other straight Slider. fix
  7. 01:00:860 - Use a beat here, it's really heavy on this point. fix
  8. 01:03:431 (1) - Use a finish on the start here aswell. fix
  9. In general, use more curved Sliders, maps look really odd if they are straight the whole time. Also watch your hitsounds, they are often inconsistent.

[Normal]

  1. 00:24:860 (2) - Start NC here, seems much more reasonable. fix
  2. 00:31:717 (4) - This shape is pretty ugly, also you could try to make a blanket with 3. fix
  3. 00:42:431 (2) - Straighten this Slider, it looks pretty ugly like this. fix
  4. 00:52:288 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 2's end. fix
  5. 01:14:574 (1) - Remove whistle from the Sliderbody and add it to the start. fix
  6. Same as for Easy, most pattern are looking far too sharp and too straight, try to use more curves and work on the flow.

[Hard]

  1. 00:08:788 (4,5) - What the hell is this spacing? It plays bad and is unreasonable. fix
  2. 00:19:074 (3,5) - Give them the same shape. fix
  3. For this diff; spacing is often confusing, inconsistent and weird. I can't even tell which DS you used so yeah. The rhythm and the placement is actually fine here, but spacing is going wild and that makes it pretty bad to play.

[Insane]

  1. For this diff; spacing is weird, combos like this ( 00:29:788 - ) don't really make sense and hitsounds and placing seem a bit random. Patterns could be much better if they were polished and yeah, to get this difficulty good you'll need a lot of cleaning on patterns, spacing corrections and hitsound checking. Best would be to look at some other maps and Insane diffs and try to get some idea of placing and spacing.


Well, that's it.
Overall a pretty solid map for a newbie, but harder difficultys are still far away from being ranked :c

I wish you best of luck!
thank :)
Exw
931 posts
Joined July 2012
Exw
General:
um, looks fine.

Easy:
00:16:288 (3) - make the slider look like this. http://puu.sh/3mnpu.jpg
00:31:288 (4) - add new combo here.
01:21:002 (4) - ^

Normal
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - make it look like this. http://puu.sh/3mnBZ.jpg

Hard
00:38:145 (4) - add new combo here.
01:01:288 (4) - maybe make it look like this would be better? http://puu.sh/3mo4A.jpg
01:05:359 (6) - new combo here.
01:12:431 (6) - ^

Insane
00:22:931 (8) - add new combo, maybe?
00:55:717 (1) - move the new combo to 00:56:145 (2) I think would be nice

Thanks. Good luck :D
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Subaru Takamaru wrote:

General:
um, looks fine. thank! :)

Easy:
00:16:288 (3) - make the slider look like this. http://puu.sh/3mnpu.jpg fix


Hard
01:05:359 (6) - new combo here. fix


Insane

00:55:717 (1) - move the new combo to 00:56:145 (2) I think would be nice fix

Thanks. Good luck :D
thank very much :)
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
My 4th mod :D

Easy:
~00:23:788 - The 1/2 beat circle is hard to read for beginners.
~00:31:288 - Put new combo here to emphasis rhythm change.
~00:38:145 - ^-Same thing here
~00:42:860 - Too many drags,I suggest adding a circle here.
~00:44:574 - ^-Same here.
~00:48:653 ~ 00:50:145 - Spinner request here to make play flow more ^^
~01:21:002 - Put new combo here to emphasis rhythm change.

Normal:
~00:18:645 - Put the circle just at the tip of the slider to make it easier for Normal diff.
~00:23:360 - ^-Same goes for this reverse slider.
~00:37:502 -Put the circle at the end of the slider to make this note easily read by players.
~00:37:502 -I suggest to put the same reversing slider as 00:37:502 to make play flow.
~00:37:502 -Add a circle on the 1/2 beat. <--THIS ALSO GOES FOR THE OTHER CIRCLES THAT ARE ALL ON 1/1 BEATS IN KIAI MODE.
~More 1/2 beat notes would make the beat map more fun when in Kiai mode. :D
~01:20:788 - Reverse slider here is hard to read,what about putting something else?\

Hard:
~It's a bit too hard to be hard...
~00:04:288 - These jumps are not necessary in hard diff.save them for insane ^^
~00:06:645 - Notes are hard to read here.
~Game play doesn't flow with all the 1/2 beats,try something else.
~00:17:145 - Again these jumps are not necessary for hard diff.
~00:51:431 - ^-Same problem goes here.
~01:05:360 - The 1/2 beats here don't really make game play flow,try putting a new combo for the slider and putting the circle before the slider instead.
~01:08:788 - Same problem with circle jumps.
~01:15:645 - Same goes here
~01:17:360 - The 1/2 beat is hard to read.Try using a slider instead.

Insane:
~00:19:931 - Start new combo here instead.
~00:21:002 - 1/2 beats are hard to read here.
~01:01:288 ~ 01:03:217 - Are a bit hard to read.
~01:10:610 - It's too hard to read a sudden double.
~01:21:217 - Try to keep only 2 1/1 notes on a slider's head to avoid confusion.
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

gideon5504 wrote:

My 4th mod :D

Easy:
~00:31:288 - Put new combo here to emphasis rhythm change. fix
~00:38:145 - ^-Same thing here fix
~00:42:860 - Too many drags,I suggest adding a circle here. fix
~00:44:574 - ^-Same here. fix
~00:48:653 ~ 00:50:145 - Spinner request here to make play flow more ^^ fix
~01:21:002 - Put new combo here to emphasis rhythm change. fix

Normal:
~00:18:645 - Put the circle just at the tip of the slider to make it easier for Normal diff. fix

Hard:
~00:06:645 - Notes are hard to read here. fix
~Game play doesn't flow with all the 1/2 beats,try something else.
~01:08:788 - Same problem with circle jumps. fix

Insane:
~01:21:217 - Try to keep only 2 1/1 notes on a slider's head to avoid confusion. fix
thank :)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Just a little mods XP
Im new too, trying to make the map better

You can refuse to fix / edit certain mods as your wish, but repl

[General]
Nicely mapped, got a feel that can be ranked ^_^

KIAI Time ends here 01:02:895 - or 01:03:002 - , depends on your notes

op. = optional, you can ignore if you want (cuz this mod may look stupid XP )

[Easy]
>.o )b

[Normal]
00:18:645 (4) - Suggest not to stack at tail, or if you don't wanna make it too easy
00:45:002 (5) - NC (op.)
00:46:717 (3) - NC (op.)
01:18:859 (3) - NC (op.)
01:19:717 (5) - NC (op.)

[Hard]
00:46:931 (4) - Move to X:232 Y:192 (a bit left from original place)
00:49:717 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:574 (3) - NC
00:52:288 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:931 (2) - NC
00:56:788 (1) - Remove NC
00:57:217 (2) - NC
01:00:645 (1) - Remove NC
01:01:074 (3) - NC
01:04:288 (3) - NC
01:12:860 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:574 (4) - NC
01:17:360 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:788 (3) - NC
01:22:288 (5) - NC
01:22:717 (1) - Remove NC

[Insane]
- Nothing much to change, just some combos follow hard if you think it's acceptable
00:48:002 - Suggest spinner starts here, cuz it's Insane
01:27:002 - ^
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

DEAncientNaga wrote:

Just a little mods XP
Im new too, trying to make the map better

You can refuse to fix / edit certain mods as your wish, but repl


[Normal]
00:45:002 (5) - NC fix
00:46:717 (3) - NC fix
01:18:859 (3) - NC (op.) fix
01:19:717 (5) - NC (op.) fix

[Hard]
00:46:931 (4) - Move to X:232 Y:192 (a bit left from original place) fix
00:49:717 (1) - Remove NC fix
00:52:288 (1) - Remove NC fix
00:52:931 (2) - NC fix
01:22:288 (5) - NC fix
01:22:717 (1) - Remove NC fix

[Insane]
- Nothing much to change, just some combos follow hard if you think it's acceptable
00:48:002 - Suggest spinner starts here, cuz it's Insane fix
thank! :)
Onisakura
170 posts
Joined October 2012
Onisakura
Sup :3
from my queue~


[General]

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:574, ends on 01:03:002 - in other diff first kiai ends on 01:03:431

[Easy]

Honestly, 00:17:145 - 00:24:860 - need break here

captain obvious screen

But if u think i'm wrong:

00:18:002 (1) - remove this slider and put spinner at 00:16:931 - 00:18:002 -
00:21:002 - never miss white tick in easy, because here you should follow simple rhythm, so add circle
00:23:788 (4) - remove and add short slider 1/1 with reverse 00:23:574 - 00:24:002 - and on reverse set finish
00:30:860 - circle here
00:31:717 (2,4) - don't follow vocal... put ends of this two slider in white tick
00:36:860 (5) - but here - it need this... so put eand of the slider at 00:37:717 -
00:48:645 (1) - set start here
00:48:860 (1) - circle
00:48:860 (1) - ^
00:48:860 (1) - ^
01:21:002 (1) - rhythm have pause here..so remove

Hitsounds (i show how it's look like on easy...cuz u have a lot overfinish)

00:06:859 (1) - remove finish
00:11:145 (1) - ^
00:35:145 (2) - ^
00:36:860 (5) - ^
00:45:431 (1) - ^ and on end too
00:47:145 (3) - ^
00:48:431 (4) - ^
01:00:431 (1) - ^
01:19:288 (3) - finish on reverse

[Normal]

00:14:145 (4,1,2,3,4) - need symmetry on this pattern
how it looks like
00:18:645 (4,1) - stack this (cuz circle below slider on half tick - not good idea)
00:23:360 (5) - move too 00:23:574 - (aslo u can add circle here 00:24:002 - but it will be looks collab ) i know u want follow on vocal...but it will be better if this white tick not missed 00:24:002
00:37:502 (5) - move this at 00:37:717 -
00:38:574 (2) - remove this and add reverse this slider 00:38:145 (1) -
00:48:002 (1) - or change end of the spinner at 00:50:145 - or add circle here
00:52:717 - add circle
00:57:002 - ^
01:04:717 (2,3,4,5) - symmetry this please
01:07:717 (1,3) - stack this and create one line 01:07:717 (1,2,3,4) -
01:10:717 - circle with clap
01:18:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow... create flower for example
example

[Hard]

00:12:752 - circle
00:14:467 - ^

further beatmap started played like parts...i think it should remap cuz in startup it looks nice, but in centre becomes weird.. breaks skiping tick and all this thing without distance...
remap this with distance and if u wonna jumps - set them after this...without this recomendations - it's chaos
don't think i'm judge or something like this.. but really starts this map looks nice...and kiai time mapped awesome , but overclap...
so need distance, for better readable
And why nobody say it..donno... maybe it's just me..


[Insane]
some thing like in Hard looks like randome put objects on map. imo
00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - 00:01:717 (1,2,3,4) - add circle at the end..and move all objects on tick, heres don't need 1/8
00:12:645 (5,1) - remove and continue stream at 00:12:860 then add circle 00:13:074 -
00:45:860 (2,4) - move left on red tick for rhythm
01:22:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - yep we have pattern, but it's so chaos..gosh..same like hard..awesome intro and kiai time...but other - need remap

listen one more time your beatmap. find rhythm for yourself and remap this ...
But as i sad - maybe it's just me...and this freaking weather killing me..so hot..gosh :o

but check your map on overclap/finish anyway...

So that's it...i think it helps) Good Luck
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Onisakura wrote:

Sup :3
from my queue~


[General]

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:574, ends on 01:03:002 - in other diff first kiai ends on 01:03:431 fix

[Easy]

00:18:002 (1) - remove this slider and put spinner at 00:16:931 - 00:18:002 - fix
00:21:002 - never miss white tick in easy, because here you should follow simple rhythm, so add circle fix
00:23:788 (4) - remove and add short slider 1/1 with reverse 00:23:574 - 00:24:002 - and on reverse set finish fix
00:36:860 (5) - but here - it need this... so put eand of the slider at 00:37:717 - fix
01:21:002 (1) - rhythm have pause here..so remove fix

Hitsounds (i show how it's look like on easy...cuz u have a lot overfinish)

00:06:859 (1) - remove finish fix
00:35:145 (2) - ^ fix
00:36:860 (5) - ^ fix
00:47:145 (3) - ^ fix
01:19:288 (3) - finish on reverse fix

[Normal]

00:14:145 (4,1,2,3,4) - need symmetry on this pattern fix
how it looks like
00:48:002 (1) - or change end of the spinner at 00:50:145 - or add circle here fix
00:52:717 - add circle fix
00:57:002 - ^ fix
01:04:717 (2,3,4,5) - symmetry this please fix
01:07:717 (1,3) - stack this and create one line 01:07:717 (1,2,3,4) - fix
01:10:717 - circle with clap fix
01:18:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow... create flower for example fix
example



[Insane]
01:22:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - yep we have pattern, but it's so chaos..gosh..same like hard..awesome intro and kiai time...but other - need remap fix

listen one more time your beatmap. find rhythm for yourself and remap this ...
But as i sad - maybe it's just me...and this freaking weather killing me..so hot..gosh :o

but check your map on overclap/finish anyway...

So that's it...i think it helps) Good Luck
thank! :)
but i think hard is very good...this maybe first map for me sorry.. :(
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
短Mod


嘛...第一張圖已經好好了,,真的
From #modreqs
假如mod得不好的話就不要給kds了

[Easy]
00:06:859 (1) - 可以在 00:07:717 折返
00:16:931 (1) - 刪這Spinner,然後 00:18:002加Note+Finish
00:24:431 (5) - DS
00:38:574 (2) - overlap
00:38:574 (2,4) - 可以將第3粒錨點消去
00:48:860 ~ 00:50:145 可以加Note
01:18:002 (1,2,3) - 試試擺成咁樣
01:22:288 (3,2) - 試試與 01:22:288 (3) - 對稱

[Normal]
pass

[Hard]
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這星形擺得好一點 ， 有少少不對稱
00:21:967 (5) - 向右下移少少
00:31:502 (5,1) - 最好用與00:31:074 (3,4,5) - 相同的DS
00:34:931 (3,4) - DS 1.3
00:50:574 (3) - NC
00:54:002 (5) - NC 00:54:645 (1) - Del NC
00:54:645 (1,3) - 能做個小對稱
多留意DS

[Insane]
pass
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

短Mod


嘛...第一張圖已經好好了,,真的
From #modreqs
假如mod得不好的話就不要給kds了

[Easy]
00:06:859 (1) - 可以在 00:07:717 折返 fix
00:16:931 (1) - 刪這Spinner,然後 00:18:002加Note+Finish fix
00:24:431 (5) - DS fix
01:18:002 (1,2,3) - 試試擺成咁樣 fix,,幾好睇

[Hard]
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這星形擺得好一點 ， 有少少不對稱 fix
00:21:967 (5) - 向右下移少少 fix
00:31:502 (5,1) - 最好用與00:31:074 (3,4,5) - 相同的DS fix
00:34:931 (3,4) - DS 1.3 fix
00:50:574 (3) - NC fix
00:54:002 (5) - NC 00:54:645 (1) - Del NC fix
00:54:645 (1,3) - 能做個小對稱 fix
多留意DS

[Insane]
pass

唔該哂你 :)
多謝...
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~

[General]
Maybe put the opening number in the tags

[Easy]
00:18:002 (4) - Add NC here and remove NC to 00:18:431 (1)

Sorry if it's two thing because the map is perfect. Good Luck and star!
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[General]
Maybe put the opening number in the tags

[Easy]
00:18:002 (4) - Add NC here and remove NC to 00:18:431 (1) fix

Sorry if it's two thing because the map is perfect. Good Luck and star!
thank :)
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
787B
Hi.
Mod requested from my Modding Queue.
Just a general reminder, make sure to check previous and next objects spacing when making changes.

General

  • Looking good.

Easy

  1. 00:14:145 (4) - Position of this circle looks a bit random to me. You could've placed it under 00:12:431 (2) - fading position, making something a bit better to play.
    Example
  2. 00:24:860 (1) - Better move up a bit so it won't touch with 00:23:574 (4) - .
  3. 00:26:574 (3,4,5) - Try making variations of their placement, placing them on straight line kinda ruins the flow. The same applies for 01:12:431 (2,3,4) -
    Example
  4. 00:31:288 (1,2) - Could've made a better blanket. The same applies for 00:33:431 (4) - . Now about their length, I think it sounds better if they were extended to the white tick (00:31:717 (2) - to 00:32:574 - and 00:33:431 (4) - to 00:34:288 -).
    Example

  5. 00:36:860 (5,2) - Blanket here looks very weird. You should improve the shape of 00:38:574 (2) - in relation of 00:36:860 (5) - (using also three nodes should be more than enough)
    Example
    I also moved 00:38:145 (1) - down a bit to make this possible.
  6. 00:48:645 (1) - This should start at 00:48:860 - no? I wouldn't do this kind of stuff, since you need quite a good reaction to spin, and ;) considering this is an easy, would be nice to give this at least one tick free.
  7. 00:55:717 (3) - Ctrl+g and ctrl+h here would make the flow better. Make sure to fix previous and next objects spacing.
  8. 01:06:860 - I think this point is too "strong" to leave it empty. Better add a circle here somewhere.

Normal

  1. 00:18:002 (3,4) - This ruins the flow like a lot. Consider moving the circle somewhere around the end of the slider.
    Example
  2. 00:19:074 (1,2,3) - Could have made them better aligned.
    Example~
  3. 00:28:288 (4) - Move a bit down so it won't touch with 00:27:431 (2) -.
  4. 00:30:431 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer (1) was placed a bit more to the right, would be much better to play. Doing this would have to also make changes at the other two circles, so suggesting another placement for them.
    Example
  5. 00:55:717 (4) - Better move a bit up to match perfectly with 00:53:574 (2) - (x:248 y:88)

Hard

Just click on the button "New Combo" on the top right. I know it's confusing since 00:49:288 (1) - begins with (1), though you have to click on the "New Combo" button.
Nice diff.
  1. 00:08:360 (2,3) - Better move this to x:400 y:232 to make a blanket with 00:07:717 (1) - ;
  2. 00:33:431 (4) - This should be extended to 00:34:288 -, so its length would be the same as 00:31:717 (1) -, making things consistent. The song pretty much is the same on both part of the sliders, it shouldn't be a problem doing it.
  3. 00:37:502 (3,4) - Feels something empty between them. Could've added a circle at 00:37:717 -.
  4. 01:07:717 (5) - Better make this a bit less curved (move down the middle node), feels unnecessary to have it a bit off in the grid.

Insane

  • Just one thing here. Looks like you've put a lot of effort on this, nicely done.
  1. 00:02:574 (1) - I think it would be better if this section was entirely made only of circles. Or you could move the slider to the end 00:02:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (replacing (5) and (6)). So the beginning of it would look the same of 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
I think that's it.
Wishing the best for you!
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
Mod requested from my Modding Queue.
Just a general reminder, make sure to check previous and next objects spacing when making changes.

General

  • Looking good.

Easy

  1. 00:14:145 (4) - Position of this circle looks a bit random to me. You could've placed it under 00:12:431 (2) - fading position, making something a bit better to play. fix
    Example
  2. 00:24:860 (1) - Better move up a bit so it won't touch with 00:23:574 (4) - . fix
  3. 00:26:574 (3,4,5) - Try making variations of their placement, placing them on straight line kinda ruins the flow. The same applies for 01:12:431 (2,3,4) - fix
    Example
  4. 00:31:288 (1,2) - Could've made a better blanket. The same applies for 00:33:431 (4) - . Now about their length, I think it sounds better if they were extended to the white tick (00:31:717 (2) - to 00:32:574 - and 00:33:431 (4) - to 00:34:288 -). fix
    Example

  5. 00:36:860 (5,2) - Blanket here looks very weird. You should improve the shape of 00:38:574 (2) - in relation of 00:36:860 (5) - (using also three nodes should be more than enough) fix
    Example
    I also moved 00:38:145 (1) - down a bit to make this possible.
  6. 00:48:645 (1) - This should start at 00:48:860 - no? I wouldn't do this kind of stuff, since you need quite a good reaction to spin, and ;) considering this is an easy, would be nice to give this at least one tick free. fix

Normal

  1. 00:18:002 (3,4) - This ruins the flow like a lot. Consider moving the circle somewhere around the end of the slider. fix
    Example
  2. 00:19:074 (1,2,3) - Could have made them better aligned. fix
    Example~
  3. 00:28:288 (4) - Move a bit down so it won't touch with 00:27:431 (2) -. fix
  4. 00:30:431 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer (1) was placed a bit more to the right, would be much better to play. Doing this would have to also make changes at the other two circles, so suggesting another placement for them. good!fix
    Example
  5. 00:55:717 (4) - Better move a bit up to match perfectly with 00:53:574 (2) - (x:248 y:88) fix

Hard

Just click on the button "New Combo" on the top right. I know it's confusing since 00:49:288 (1) - begins with (1), though you have to click on the "New Combo" button.
Nice diff. fix
  1. 00:08:360 (2,3) - Better move this to x:400 y:232 to make a blanket with 00:07:717 (1) - ; fix
  2. 00:33:431 (4) - This should be extended to 00:34:288 -, so its length would be the same as 00:31:717 (1) -, making things consistent. The song pretty much is the same on both part of the sliders, it shouldn't be a problem doing it. fix
  3. 01:07:717 (5) - Better make this a bit less curved (move down the middle node), feels unnecessary to have it a bit off in the grid. fix


I think that's it.
Wishing the best for you!
thank very much :)
Gyoshi
5 posts
Joined March 2013
Gyoshi
Hi~
This is my first mod; I think I might be too critical in the wrong way, so don't take my suggestions too seriously. I'd love to see this map ranked. ^^

  • General
  1. The pause screen is a bit ugly, use a better quality one instead: http://sadpanda.us/images/1038409-G3FSSJ1.jpg
  2. Just a tip: I noticed a lot of the modders have problems with your unaligned hit circles and slanting sliders, so i suggest using a less precise grid normally, but switching to a more precise one temporarily when you need it.
  3. Edit: I see the genre is unspecified, please specify as "Anime"

    Easy
  4. 00:04:288 (1,1) - It probably doesn't matter, but shouldn't these sliders be centered?
  5. 00:27:860 (1) - Why is this slider two beats long? It fits the music better if it's one beat long. It also makes more sense then to add it to the previous combo, and having the next one start the NC.
  6. 00:48:860 (1) - This is an easy difficulty, so i think there shouldn't be a slider so close to the end of a spinner, make it end half a beat earlier (for a longer, easier spinner), or a whole beat earlier (to better fit the music).
  7. 01:07:288 (1) - I don't know, but this feels weird because it starts on the off-beat.
    I suggest this (notice the slider was changed to a hit circle)

    Try it out, I think it flows better with the rhythm.

    Normal
  8. 00:19:074 (1) - Here you use a hit circle on top of a slider, which fits the rhythm, but you don't do it with 00:20:145 (3) - (even though it has the same rhythm). If you are worried about too many hit circles increasing the difficulty, you can remove 00:18:645 (4) - , and make 00:18:002 (3) - a longer slider.
    Something like this
  9. 00:48:002 (1) - Same issue as in easy, try ending the spinner a beat earlier.
  10. 00:52:717 (4) - I suggest a different rhythm here, but not necessarily the spacings i used:
    More fitting rhythm
  11. 01:06:431 (6) - The combos and rhythm felt weird here, so i tried something else:
    Click to show
  12. 01:10:717 (1) - I think start the combo on the slider after this one.

    Hard
  13. 00:06:002 (1) - Combos are a bit weird
    Not a big deal
  14. 00:45:431 (1,2,3) - Starts at a weird beat, start the combo with a hit circle half a beat earlier
  15. 01:12:431 (6) - It looks like you did this to increase difficulty, but it feels awkward.
    You can always try this
  16. 01:23:788 (5) - Again, you probably did this to increase difficulty, but i feel that making something more difficult by making it counter-intuitive isn't a very good way.
    Maybe just a little jump?

    Insane
  17. 00:03:288 (5,6) - If you move the 5 a bit down and the 6 a bit up, the curve looks a lot cleaner.
  18. 00:45:431 (1,2,3,4) - These don't fit the rhythm well, try and rearrange them or add more objects.
    Or just shift the beat of 2 like this

    to
  19. 01:00:645 (7) - If you place this hit circle in the middle, the pattern makes more sense.
  20. 01:17:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is probly on purpose, but the slider-hit-slider-hit-slider doesn't fit the rhythm, I'm sure you can come up with a more fitting rhythm
I hope that helps. ^^' It seems like a very good map for it being your first (maybe it was all the modding), so if I'm being too in your face pls let me know.
I wonder if what I said was ok... Thank you for the experience of modding this anyway, Fairy Tail rocks =P
You can do it, map! Get ranked! :)
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Gyoshi wrote:

Hi~
This is my first mod; I think I might be too critical in the wrong way, so don't take my suggestions too seriously. I'd love to see this map ranked. ^^

  • General
  1. The pause screen is a bit ugly, use a better quality one instead: http://sadpanda.us/images/1038409-G3FSSJ1.jpg fix
  2. Edit: I see the genre is unspecified, please specify as "Anime"fix

    Easy
  3. 00:27:860 (1) - Why is this slider two beats long? It fits the music better if it's one beat long. It also makes more sense then to add it to the previous combo, and having the next one start the NC. fix
  4. 01:07:288 (1) - I don't know, but this feels weird because it starts on the off-beat.
    I suggest this (notice the slider was changed to a hit circle)

    Try it out, I think it flows better with the rhythm. fix

    Normal
  5. 00:19:074 (1) - Here you use a hit circle on top of a slider, which fits the rhythm, but you don't do it with 00:20:145 (3) - (even though it has the same rhythm). If you are worried about too many hit circles increasing the difficult fix
    Something like this
  6. 00:52:717 (4) - I suggest a different rhythm here, but not necessarily the spacings i used: fix
    More fitting rhythm
  7. 01:10:717 (1) - I think start the combo on the slider after this one. fix

    Hard
  8. 00:06:002 (1) - Combos are a bit weird fix
    Not a big deal
  9. 01:23:788 (5) - Again, you probably did this to increase difficulty, but i feel that making something more difficult by making it counter-intuitive isn't a very good way. fix
    Maybe just a little jump?

    Insane
  10. 00:03:288 (5,6) - If you move the 5 a bit down and the 6 a bit up, the curve looks a lot cleaner. fix
  11. 01:17:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is probly on purpose, but the slider-hit-slider-hit-slider doesn't fit the rhythm, I'm sure you can come up with a more fitting rhythm 01:18:002 (1) - fix
I hope that helps. ^^' It seems like a very good map for it being your first (maybe it was all the modding), so if I'm being too in your face pls let me know.
I wonder if what I said was ok... Thank you for the experience of modding this anyway, Fairy Tail rocks =P
You can do it, map! Get ranked! :)

thank very much! :)
Koihik
40 posts
Joined January 2013
Koihik
Hello.From #modreq.

Easy 和 Normal 看起来都还挺好

Hard

  1. 00:02:574 (5) - 这样如何?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:574 (1,2,3) - 这里是这样的节奏吧?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:431 (4) - 这个滑条感觉挪动下面比较好
Insane

  1. 感觉空拍太多了点,Insane不要有这么多空拍吧,打起来很不爽的感觉
  2. 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的节奏是这样的吧?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:01:717 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
  4. 00:02:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样看起来好点:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:48:002 (1,1) - 这段不跟节奏吗?
  6. 00:50:574 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏有点怪.感觉应该是这样的:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:52:610 - 加note?
  8. 01:03:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不跟vocal吗?白线开始的stream也有点违和.感觉类似这样的会好点:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:24:860 (1) - 在01:27:860 结尾 然后01:28:074加note怎么样?
Good Luck! :D
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Koihik wrote:

Hello.From #modreq.

Easy 和 Normal 看起来都还挺好

Insane

  1. 00:50:574 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏有点怪.感觉应该是这样的: fix
    SPOILER
  2. 01:24:860 (1) - 在01:27:860 结尾 然后01:28:074加note怎么样? 這個修改是可以的,但我比較喜歡最後轉圈就完
Good Luck! :D
感謝 :)
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Sunny Holic


http://puu.sh/3QdaJ.avi

video modding 来了 ;)
same offset
same filesize
如果你需要更高画质的file size大点没关系的话PM我吧。我重新给你压
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Sunny Holic wrote:



http://puu.sh/3QdaJ.avi

video modding 来了 ;)
same offset
same filesize
如果你需要更高画质的file size大点没关系的话PM我吧。我重新给你压
這個video比我之前那個高質素很多@@

感謝 :)
Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Papysh
Natsu \o3o/
paablooo_x
3 posts
Joined July 2012
paablooo_x
Excellent Beatmap!! ;) i want to approve
deybydkun
40 posts
Joined March 2013
deybydkun
I really liked the beatmap, I love this song.

small review, I think remain good:

Insane
00:21:217 & 00:21:324

Gyoshi
5 posts
Joined March 2013
Gyoshi
No big deal, just noticed:

00:16:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
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