This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月20日 at 18:45:38

Artist: +Plus
Title: Fiesta
Source: Fairy Tail
Tags: opening 6 Hanjamon TV Size
BPM: 140
Filesize: 16381kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.02 stars, 82 notes)
2. Hanjamon's Muzukashii (4.7 stars, 340 notes)
3. Hanjamon's Oni (4.83 stars, 417 notes)
4. Hard (4.84 stars, 206 notes)
5. Insane (5 stars, 280 notes)
6. Normal (3.16 stars, 110 notes)

Download: +Plus - Fiesta
Download: +Plus - Fiesta (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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這是我的第一張圖
This is my 1st map.
初めて
Easy - Done By Me
Normal - Done By Me
Hard - Done By Me
Insane - Done By Me
Hanjamon's Muzukashii - Done By Hanjamon
Hanjamon's Oni - Done By Hanjamon

I change the photo.

From my queue

都是一些个人意见，希望有用


加油吧 mapper路还很长 我们都还有很多东西要学

我想問更改滑條速度後
所有滑條都移位了
有沒有快的方法修正?

快速啊。。没有耶，只能单个单个，重新拉一下滑条（就是滑条最后的那个点移动就能修正），不一定死要按照那个，只是做参考，具体看个人喜好

頭3個難道都改好了
更新好了
另外我把insane重新再做~~

Chinese eh... I can speak but can't mod in chinese so 对不起 ^^")7 P.S. I love this OP Fiesta should've been ranked so long ago I'll work real hard on this mod! (skipping easy...) And btw ur gonna hate me for every shit I tell you. XP PS if you don't know whats X and Y axis PM me. And sry if the mods overlap.

Normal
00:00:846 (1,1,1) - Yes u snapped the distance but make the ends and start on the same x axis. 00:01:703 (1) will be moved to x 240 y 184 so the head is directly below 00:00:846 (1). and 00:02:560 (1) will go to x 360 y 304

See the diff? (ok actually you can hardly see it)
Before:

After:


00:05:131 (3) - Move to x 116 y 84 (same X axis as 00:04:274 (1) and y axis as 00:05:560 (4) but there will be changes to 00:05:560 (4) later anyways)

00:05:560 (4, 1) I would switch these two around rhythm wise. Sounds nicer eh? If not then just resnap 00:05:560 (4) since you moved 00:05:131 (3)

00:07:703 (4) - This should be a NC instead of 00:08:560 (1)

00:08:560 (1) - Hey, this is easy diff. No jumps. Bring it closer to 4. =.=

00:09:846 - Add note.

00:11:131 (3) - Why did you put it here? (Arrangement) Maybe hide it behind 00:10:274 (1)

00:24:846 (2) - Why didn't you add symbol to this if you added it to 00:26:560 (1) ?

00:28:274 (3) - Resnap

00:50:560 - Kiai should start here instead. Oh, and you kinda overused the finish hitsound hear the start of chorus. Take out a few

00:49:703 (1,2) - I don't think you should have these. This is normal diff so Noobs need time to find their cursors. Make it empty for two beats and add a note on 00:50:131 (the actual kiai time starting point)

01:19:274 (1,2,3) - Why they all one grid square to the right of the previous combo note above it? Just let it overlap nicely.


Sorry, I will not mod hard because of your distance spacing. Snap everything please. That's all sry I'll wait to see this ranked ^^ 加油！

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram

thank very much

Hello there.

[General]

1. The Artist name is not Plus but+Plus. Rename the Beatmap to +Plus - Fiesta
2. There are three OSB files in your folder. The song folder must have only 1. Delete the other two.
3. Your beatmaps doesn't have a preview time. You can set a preview time from the tool bar on the top of your editor(File, Edit, ... , Help). Click the Timing and then Set current position as preview time.
4. You requested a SB Mod but there's no SB to mod. If you gonna add a Video then don't bother to make a SB.

[Easy]

1. I cannot mod this difficulty. I can't understand any pattern :/ I suggest you to remap it and make more shapes with sliders and also placement shapes with the hit circles and stuff. The symmetry in beatmaps is a very urgent issue, especially in Easy and Normal difficulties where the detail is very obvious.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:703 (1,1) - The New Combo is not needed here. The New combo is meant to show where the rhythm or the lyrics are changing, therefore, overuse of New combo looks bad and it can be unrankable - There are exceptions depends on how you use it.
2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3) - Copy paste those circles to 00:06:417 - and then press CTRL+H and CTRL+G to move them exactly in the other side of the game area(Mirror) and also change their order for the distance spacing. After you do that, you can use this shape: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682502
3. 00:07:703 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - What you've tried to do here wont work. The distance spacing and the place you chose will not let you place them propetly, use a different pattern to suit the song and also feel comfortable when playing.
4. 00:19:274 (1,2) - The sliders here are not symmetrical. You can copy-paste the first slider(but not on the same time line) and then click CTRL+H and CTRL+G and then move it closer in accordance with the distance spacing.
5. 01:17:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not stacked properly.
6. Generally this difficulty is not as random as the Easy one but still needs a lot of work.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:703 (1,1) - New combo is not needed here. Explain why in the Normal difficulty.
2. 00:11:988 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:17:774 (4,5,6) - The spacing is wrong, the spacing should be same between the notes. Read this for more information: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Spacing
   And that's the main issue of the beatmap, the spacing. Fix the spacing and then call me back for a remod if you want

[Insane]

1. The main problem here is Spacing as well and some bad placings. Please fix the distance spacing according to the link I gave you above in Hard and then call me back for a recheck to find and tell you the placing errors you may have later on.

If you want to "cheat" the distance spacing in special parts, make sure they are playable and fit the song, this should be done in Hard(But not too much) and Insane. When I say "cheat" I mean jumps and stuff which skips the distance snapping.

Farewell and good luck

A side note here
remove "op6" from source
add "opening" in tags
add "(TV Size)" to the song name , so it will be:

+Plus - Fiesta (TV Size)

mod queueからです～

Normal
・00:11:131 (5,6) -　ここを00:12:846 (1,2) - と同じにしてみては？
・00:16:274 (5,1) -　このようにしてみては？
・00:19:274 (1,1) -　それぞれ00:19:060と00:19:917からスタートさせるといいです。（リターンスライダーにするとよりいいです。）
・00:19:917 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:20:988 (x) -　note追加。
・00:29:131 (4,5) -　この部分をリターンスライダーにしては？
・00:33:417 (6,1) -　このようにしてみては？
・00:38:131 (x) -　note追加？
・ 気合タイム00:50:560をスタート。01:02:988を終わりにするといいと思います。
・00:59:131 (4,5,6) -　リズムの順番を６、４、５にして置いてみては？
・２つ目の気合タイムのスタートを01:04:274にするといいです。

Hard
・00:11:131 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:11:988 (1) -　＾
・00:12:846 (1,2,3) -　このようにしては？
・00:14:131 (x) -　note追加。
・ 00:22:274 (5,6) -　リズムの順番を６、５にして置いてみては？
・00:30:631 (2) -　スライダーを白線まで伸ばしてください。
・00:36:631 (7) -　note追加。
・00:36:846 (1,2) -　このようにしては？
・00:37:703 (1) -　note追加。
・00:39:417 (2) -　スライダーを赤線まで伸ばしてください。
・00:41:988 (1) -　NC削除。
・00:42:846 (1) -　＾
・00:43:703 (1) -　＾
・00:43:703 (1,2) -　このようにしては？
・00:45:417 (1,2,3,4,5) -　このようにしては？
・気合タイムはNormalと同様でいいと思います。
・スピンを00:49:703で終わらせ、00:50:560からnoteを置いていくとより良くなると思います。
・00:50:560 (3,4,5) -　このようにしては？
・01:00:417 (x) -　note追加？
・ 01:12:631 (x) -　＾
・ 01:12:846 (1) -　このようにしては？
・01:24:631 (x) -　note追加。
・01:25:274 (1) -　スピンを01:25:060からスタート。01:28:060を終わりにするといいと思います。


頑張ってください！

ありがとう
-RIKKA-

Hey there!

Recheck as promised!

[General]
I believe the Kiai time would be better to start from 01:04:274 instead of 01:03:417
The finish hitsound makes it sound more nice when entering the Kiai mode.

[Easy]
00:57:417 (1,2,3,4) - Make the corner better here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684990 :3
01:04:703 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Check those pictures: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684995 & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684997
This way you fix the symmetry in those notes and also stay on Distance snap :3 If you like it, you're free to use it
01:08:988 (5,6) - The overlap doesn't look good in Easy difficulties, always do the best you can to avoid them if the Distance is allowing you: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684999
Just put the reverse a bit lower like this :3
01:17:131 (8) - Add circle at x:280 y:220 to follow the vocal~

[Normal]
00:08:988 (3) - Why this slider is going downwards? Make it straight If the distance is x0.98 is not really a problem so don't worry
00:09:846 (4) - Make the curve of this slider same with the approach circle of the next one, it will look much better.
00:15:417 (3,4,5,6) - Look this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/685010 and this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/685011
It looks better right?
00:18:631 (3) - 1 Grid down
00:35:131 (2) - 1 Grid up~
00:42:417 (2) - Move the last point of the slider(the reverse) 2 grids up
00:44:131 (4) - Move the last point of the slider(the reverse) 2 grids down
00:50:560 (1,3) - You can stack those two if you want instead of a half-note-overlap

[Hard]
00:24:846 (2,4) - Make those two symmetrical o.o
Thats all XD

[Insane]
00:01:988 (3) - 1 grid to left o.o Stream looks weird
00:04:488 (2) - 2 Grid down
00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a Star shape here o.o
00:15:203 (1,1) - Meaningless new combo ;w;
00:22:274 (4,5,6,7) - You can make those look better imo.
00:27:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - This makes a weird shape, fix it - It would be good straight or with a better curve.
01:18:417 (1,1) - Meaningless New combo ;w;

The Insane needs more work but the Easy and Normal are really much better

Good luck :3

KiyoshiX101
Your mod is very good

[general]
00:50:560 - move the start of kiai time here and add preview point here and do it for all difficulties

[Easy]
00:31:703 (1) - add finish at start of slider and add clap at the end of the slider
00:32:988 (2) - remove note?
00:33:417 (3) - do the same as 00:31:703 (1)
00:38:560 (1) - ^
00:39:846 (2) - remove finish
00:40:274 (3) - do the same as 00:31:703 (1)

[hard]
00:00:846 (1,2,3) - make these sliders 1/3
or copythis code even hitsounds will be changed

88,32,846,2,4,L|144:32,3,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,1703,2,4,L|144:192,3,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,352,2560,2,4,L|152:352,6,53.3333333333333,0|0|0|8|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

general:
source: fairy tail, 去掉那个opening
tags: 不需要复读

看了下insane, 感觉都是二分拍放满在加点串什么的
有些歌可以这么放, 不过这个曲子有不少天然的二连节奏

比如00:21:738 - 这里, 这样摆节奏就可以配合歌词 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688939
后面还有00:38:881 - 00:40:060 - 00:42:310 - 00:43:167之类, 自己找找..
01:16:596 - 这样的节奏可以放3/4, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/688944

关于音效, 建议就是一般情况下别连续放同种音效
比如00:02:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种连着的finish, 听上去就很重口
一般的方法是隔一拍放, 如著名的24clap法, 这个曲子感觉用clap+whistle组合着放比较好
选中滑条之后再点一下一个圈变红, 可以单独放音效下去0,0

然后还有就是把design里面多出来的背景图片删掉0,0

别的难度的话
hard 00:00:846 (1,2) - 三分拍 (上面那个挑过了233
感觉hard,normal节奏还可以呢, 音效的话和insane差不多的问题

Hi! From my queue.

EASY:
00:50:560 (1,2) - Placed too soon after the spinner for an Easy diff. I'd suggest getting rid of them and changing the next part around a bit or maybe removing the spinner altogether and adding a new section where it was. Or, you could add a Break Time. Personally, I would just remove the two hits in question.

The rest of this diff. seems okay to me! ^_^

NORMAL:
00:24:417 (1) - Move this one down a bit so that it lines up with 00:24:846 (2)?
00:27:846 (2) - Same thing, move to the right so that it lines up with 00:26:560 (1).
00:50:560 (1) - Same thing as Easy diff., it's still a bit too early after the spinner for newer players. See my Easy suggestions! ^_^
00:59:131 (4) - Remove claps?

HARD:
This one actually looks pretty good, I have a few opinionated complaints, but nothing I could see preventing it from being ranked, as far as I can tell. Good job!

INSANE:
00:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn up the hitsound volume for this part. I couldn't hear any feedback telling me whether or not I had hit the object.
01:20:131 (1) - Turn up the volume in this timing section, too. The rest of the hitsounds in the song from here out is WAY too quiet.
00:38:560 (3,4,5,6) - I find these to be REALLY hard to read. I think you should change it to mirror the hit objects at 00:40:274 (5,6,7).

Needs some more work I think, but it's getting there! I like the flow of your hit objects. Great song choice, too! Hope it gets ranked~

From Korean Modding Team

General

You should put the Slider Tick Rate of Hard on 2.

Hard

00:05:988 (6) - Add a new combo here
00:18:846 (6) - ^
00:29:988 (1) - You should approach this slider to the end of the previous slider.
00:30:631 (2) - This need to end on the white line.
01:17:988 (3,5) - I think its better these sliders end on the blue line.

Good Luck~

lm

Hi, M4M
I'll give you a short mod since you gave me a short mod (That's the way it works for me )

General

No preview point. Set one by doing Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point
I recommend setting it at 00:49:703
01:20:131 - i wouldnt turn down the volume here, the music doesnt die down that much

Easy

00:12:846 (1) - shape it like this? http://puu.sh/2xtAB
01:09:417 (6) - make a better blanket around (5)

Normal

00:14:560 (1) - remove NC
00:16:274 (7) - NC
00:17:560 (1) - remove NC
00:41:131 (3) - have this slider go left instead of right

Hard

00:29:988 (1) - move so it isnt touching previous slider
thats all

Insane

00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - for things like this use ctrl+shift+D
00:42:631 (5) - move on top of (3)?
00:44:346 (3) - move on top of (1)?
01:03:417 (1) - you can make a curved slider and then use "Convert slider to stream" under Compose tab, to make things like this in your map look a lot better.
Try to make all your streams look better using that feature in this difficult

That's all, good luck, thanks for M4M!

Easy

00:00:826 offset should be 832.

because this note has a little delay changing the offset should fix this to make it on time so when clicked it will be 300, because when I just now played it i hit 100.
00:01:703 2

[Easy]
00:09:417 (1,2) - 这俩可以尾部加clap
00:11:131 (3) - 建议这里加NC
00:12:846 (1) - ^然后这个NC去掉
00:14:560 (3) - ^接着才在这里加nc
00:17:988 (1) - finish
00:21:417 (8) - nc从这里开始
00:30:846 (5) - 在尾部加whistle
00:39:846 (2) - +whistle
00:41:988 (1) - 头部finish
00:43:703 (1) - 尾部的finish去掉
00:45:417 (1) - 头部finish
00:47:131 (3) - ^
00:48:417 (1) - 用note和slider把这个替换掉，这个spinner在easy难度里有点太难了
00:50:560 (1) - 头部finish
01:14:560 (6) - +nc
01:21:417 (2) - finish
01:22:274 (4) - 尾部whistle
01:23:560 (6) - 头部和尾部whistle，中间不要

[Normal]
00:04:274 (1) - finish
00:07:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 按照2,4拍放whistle
00:24:846 (2,3) - 这种摆放在normal里面有点坑
01:14:560 (6) - nc从这边开始
01:24:846 (1) - finish

[Hard]
00:00:846 (1,2) - 这俩都应该是白线结尾
00:02:560 (3) - 往上移一点，放出框了
00:11:131 (1,2) - 这段还是按照和前面一样1/2拍，要不然感觉有点偷懒，因为这边的节奏没那么密的
00:24:417 (1) - 这个NC去掉，然后 00:24:846 (2) - NC 放在这里
00:39:203 - +note

[Insane]
我只能说照我的感觉来说节奏处理的很奇怪，上面也有人说了1/2加1/4各种连击是不能描述清楚这首歌的节奏的
这首歌里面有很多是半拍，也就是要是拿slider来搞的话有些slider会从蓝线结束或者蓝线开始
花点时间多听听这首歌，然后尽量把你听到的节奏先拿slider和note排列出来
而不是直接拿1/2note和1/4note盖过去
假如你真的对这个Insane的节奏觉得非常棘手的话
我建议是先去找别的比较老手的mapper来给你做GD
慢慢的等你大概了解Insane的节奏形式和排版形式后才开始自己做Insane
新手嘛，第一张图Insane做的不怎么样是很正常的

歌不错
我觉得70%突然降到40%音效降得有点多，建议改成70%降到50%或是60%
有些finish有点....太突兀了...可能跟我自己的习惯有关，你有些地方放了3到4个finish然后接下来的20秒你都没用到finish
这就让我觉得很别扭...............
嘛可能是我的习惯........
自己做完后记得打打，碰到HP条的物件都要往下移一点，因为基本是不怎么建议物件碰到hp条的
加油吧

from my queue
[easy]
00:02:560 (3,4) - 换成一个slider更好 和前面1 2的音乐有区别
00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 中间插个NC 长白的4 或着 3
00:26:560 (3) - NC
00:45:417 (1,2,3) - 调整下位子 全部选中 让2落在中线上就好
01:01:274 (1) - 去了whistle
[Normal]
00:19:060 +1 note?
00:33:417 (6,1,2) - 节奏太密了 对于nor
01:17:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 两个一组的NC 12 12 12这样
01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - ^太密了 对于nor
[Hard]
00:15:417 (4) - 上移一格 末尾叠在前面00:14:131 (2) -
00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - 整理下 弄成正三角形的摆法
00:38:131 (1) - 00:38:560有个明显的重音 在这里结束加finish 00:38:131这个位子加个note
01:11:131 (1) - 去了NC
[Insane]
节奏不太对头
大多数连打起始点在红线会更好
像00:16:917
00:40:810 (6) - 这里离5远点 00:40:917这个位子开始

就这些 goodluck

hi, from my modding queue
Sorry but In all diff, Hitsound is quite unsensible and untidy. So, I won't mod hitsound. Let you fix hitsound by yourself
This map has too much mods. I think you should need more mods than you think.
Good ranked~ one day

Fix got it.

Thank very much

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 860 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^

from PM request

[General]

1. 歌名同(TV Size)之間應該有空格 姐系甘
   

   Fiesta (TV Size)

2. 請delete .osb file 因為呢個map無storyboard
3. 有無192 kbps既歌? 128比較多雜音
4. 吾系每個diff既Preview time都一樣 汁汁佢
   
   SPOILER

   Easy: 49703
   Normal: 49703
   Hard: -1
   Insane: -1
5. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterbox during breaks 全部diff都可以吾剔 因為無SB
6. hitsound方面比較雜亂無章 所以我略過hitsound了 但我可以給予一個建議: 通常我們會在第二以及第四個white tick放hitsound
   
7. Slider tick rate 我覺得無必要系2 我覺得用返普通1就OK.
8. 有一個好大既問題 就系工整性 呢個map既slider花款吾多 大多都系直線slider 所以我會覺得你排位會好跟X,Y coordinates 而吾系1個circle之後 是但擺另外一個circle既位 甘樣比人印象好吾工整

[Easy]

1. 00:02:988 - +1個circle凸顯個重音
2. 00:14:131 (3) - remove whistle
3. 00:16:274 (3) - 尾巴remove whistle --> 跟00:15:417 (2) 的hitsound一樣吧
4. 00:20:989 (7) - easy的combo數目很少超過6 00:19:274 (4) 這個可以NC
5. 00:29:131 (1) - 為啥這裡NC呢? 大white tick是慣常的做法 所以應該是00:29:988 (3) NC
6. 00:36:417 (7) - NC過大 00:34:703 (4) 這裡NC吧
7. 00:41:560 - circle如何? 空了感覺比無空更難打
8. 00:47:131 (3,4) - 這兩個的flow不太好 這樣會更好
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:131 (3) - Y的coordinate應該跟00:48:846 (1) 的尾一樣
10. 01:04:703 (2,4) - 不是完美對稱 你可以CTRL+H嘗試一下
11. 01:08:131 (4) - 移上一格 01:07:274 (2,3,4) 就會系直線
12. 01:13:274 (4) - Y=88

[Normal]

1. AR-1
2. 00:05:560 (4) - remove whistle 很嘈耶D:
3. 00:18:631 (4) - 這個感覺非常奇怪 00:18:631 這裡根本沒有重音 00:19:060 (4) 也建議刪除 我的建議:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:31:703 (4,6) - 不是對稱
5. 00:34:488 (1) - 跟00:33:417 (6) 重疊了
6. 00:44:131 (4,5) - 呢個排位吾太靚
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:57:417 (1) - um..同00:59:131 (4) 一樣就ok了
8. 00:58:703 (3,4) - Y coordinates 吾同
9. 01:01:274 (2,3) - x-coordinates 吾同
10. 01:06:417 (6,1) - 重疊
11. 01:20:774 - 吾岩音既 ;w;
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:23:131 (3) - NC
13. 01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - 呢到感覺吾跟音樂 建議
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:03:846 - +circle 好明顯有個音系果到 同埋呢個系hard 無必要留白
2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘗試花少少心機整d pattern 出黎 現在比我感覺系亂放
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:08:346 (2,4) - 重疊了..
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:203 (2,3) - 不如整成橫線
5. 00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得呢到浪費左d音樂 可以放triplet都得 同埋兩段其實一樣 可以做下對稱
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:29:346 (7,1) - 重疊
7. 00:31:060 (3,4,5) - 能擺放得更整齊嗎?
8. 00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:36:846 (1,2) - 直線先岩flow 順住去
10. 00:50:346 (2,3,4) - Y-coordinates 36 40 36 ..
11. 00:51:417 (5,6) - X-coordinates 不同 00:50:774 (4,5) - 兩個重疊了
12. 00:55:703 (4) - 中間空了 感覺比較奇怪 可以用reverse slider取代
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:00:417 - +circle 因為downbeat同埋過度去第二個combo
14. 01:00:631 (1) - 移動到01:00:846 第一個circle系white tick比較好 同埋重音系白線 hitsound可以加finish
15. 01:06:203 - +circle kiai time 中間無啦啦停頓吾系太好
16. 01:09:417 (4) - x=388 y=288
17. 01:10:703 (6) - remove NC
18. 01:17:988 (3,5) - 延長去白線 音樂系去到白線
19. 01:25:060 (1) - 可以縮短至01:27:417 然後系01:27:846 同01:28:060 加circles 提升難度

[Insane]

1. 難度可以再作提升
2. 00:06:846 - +circle
3. 00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用心排列下 例如八角形
4. 00:18:631 (2,4) - 請重疊它們
5. 00:26:346 (3,5) - ^
6. 00:28:917 (3,4) - D: 重疊
7. 00:31:488 (5) - 112,164
8. 00:40:810 (6) - 移動到00:40:917 還有我不太喜歡這種短小精幹的slider D:
9. 00:41:774 (3,5) - 請重疊它們
10. 00:43:488 (1,3) - ^
11. 00:49:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 請排成直線
12. 00:56:560 (3,2) - 重疊得吾靚
13. 00:57:203 (3,2,4) - ^ 請重疊它們
14. 01:07:488 (3,5,7) - ^
15. 01:20:774 (1,2,3,4) - 點解淨系得01:21:203 (3) 個Y-coordinates系352 其他都系348
16. 01:22:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 得01:23:346 (4) 零零捨捨上左去Y=48
17. 01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呢個pentagon夠正 用CTRL+SHIFT+D 整一個regular pentagon出黎
18. 01:24:846 (1) - 同hard一樣

GOOD LUCK
有咩問題IN-GAME問/PM都得

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 860 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^

Offset: 860 fix thank

[quote="IamKwaN"]from PM request

[General]

1. 歌名同(TV Size)之間應該有空格 姐系甘 fix
   

   Fiesta (TV Size)

2. 請delete .osb file 因為呢個map無storyboard fix
3. 有無192 kbps既歌? 128比較多雜音 fix,雖然都係128,但係e手應該會好d
4. 吾系每個diff既Preview time都一樣 汁汁佢 fix
   
   SPOILER

   Easy: 49703
   Normal: 49703
   Hard: -1
   Insane: -1
5. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterbox during breaks 全部diff都可以吾剔 因為無SB fix
6. hitsound方面比較雜亂無章 所以我略過hitsound了 但我可以給予一個建議: 通常我們會在第二以及第四個white tick放hitsound
   
7. Slider tick rate 我覺得無必要系2 我覺得用返普通1就OK.
8. 有一個好大既問題 就系工整性 呢個map既slider花款吾多 大多都系直線slider 所以我會覺得你排位會好跟X,Y coordinates 而吾系1個circle之後 是但擺另外一個circle既位 甘樣比人印象好吾工整

[Easy]

1. 00:02:988 - +1個circle凸顯個重音 fix
2. 00:14:131 (3) - remove whistle fix
3. 00:16:274 (3) - 尾巴remove whistle --> 跟00:15:417 (2) 的hitsound一樣吧 fix
4. 00:20:989 (7) - easy的combo數目很少超過6 00:19:274 (4) 這個可以NC fix
5. 00:29:131 (1) - 為啥這裡NC呢? 大white tick是慣常的做法 所以應該是00:29:988 (3) NC fix
6. 00:36:417 (7) - NC過大 00:34:703 (4) 這裡NC吧 fix
7. 00:41:560 - circle如何? 空了感覺比無空更難打 fix
8. 00:47:131 (3,4) - 這兩個的flow不太好 這樣會更好 fix
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:131 (3) - Y的coordinate應該跟00:48:846 (1) 的尾一樣 no fix
10. 01:04:703 (2,4) - 不是完美對稱 你可以CTRL+H嘗試一下 fix
11. 01:08:131 (4) - 移上一格 01:07:274 (2,3,4) 就會系直線 fix
12. 01:13:274 (4) - Y=88fix

[Normal]

1. AR-1 fix
2. 00:05:560 (4) - remove whistle 很嘈耶D: fix
3. 00:18:631 (4) - 這個感覺非常奇怪 00:18:631 這裡根本沒有重音 00:19:060 (4) 也建議刪除 我的建議: 重音fix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:31:703 (4,6) - 不是對稱 fix
5. 00:34:488 (1) - 跟00:33:417 (6) 重疊了 fix
6. 00:44:131 (4,5) - 呢個排位吾太靚 no fix
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:57:417 (1) - um..同00:59:131 (4) 一樣就ok了 fix
8. 00:58:703 (3,4) - Y coordinates 吾同 no fix
9. 01:01:274 (2,3) - x-coordinates 吾同 no fix
10. 01:06:417 (6,1) - 重疊
11. 01:20:774 - 吾岩音既 ;w; fix
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:23:131 (3) - NC fix
13. 01:23:131 (3,4,5,6) - 呢到感覺吾跟音樂 建議 fix
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:03:846 - +circle 好明顯有個音系果到 同埋呢個系hard 無必要留白 fix
2. 00:04:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘗試花少少心機整d pattern 出黎 現在比我感覺系亂放 部分fix,因為唔係跟你張圖
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:08:346 (2,4) - 重疊了.. fix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:203 (2,3) - 不如整成橫線 fix
5. 00:11:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得呢到浪費左d音樂 可以放triplet都得 同埋兩段其實一樣 可以做下對稱 fix
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:29:346 (7,1) - 重疊 fix
7. 00:31:060 (3,4,5) - 能擺放得更整齊嗎? fix
8. 00:34:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fix
9. 00:36:846 (1,2) - 直線先岩flow 順住去 fix
10. 00:50:346 (2,3,4) - Y-coordinates 36 40 36 .. fix
11. 00:51:417 (5,6) - X-coordinates 不同 00:50:774 (4,5) - 兩個重疊了 fix
12. 00:55:703 (4) - 中間空了 感覺比較奇怪 可以用reverse slider取代 fix
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:00:417 - +circle 因為downbeat同埋過度去第二個combo fix
14. 01:00:631 (1) - 移動到01:00:846 第一個circle系white tick比較好 同埋重音系白線 hitsound可以加finish fix
15. 01:06:203 - +circle kiai time 中間無啦啦停頓吾系太好 fix
16. 01:09:417 (4) - x=388 y=288 fix
17. 01:10:703 (6) - remove NC 半fix remove NC改左去01:11:145 (3)
18. 01:17:988 (3,5) - 延長去白線 音樂系去到白線 no fix 我放果到係因為歌詞
19. 01:25:060 (1) - 可以縮短至01:27:417 然後系01:27:846 同01:28:060 加circles 提升難度 因為前面d人話01:27:417比較好,另外我唔太中意係最後放circle sorry><

[Insane]

1. 難度可以再作提升
2. 00:06:846 - +circle fix
3. 00:09:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用心排列下 例如八角形 fix
4. 00:18:631 (2,4) - 請重疊它們 fix
5. 00:26:346 (3,5) - ^ fix
6. 00:28:917 (3,4) - D: 重疊 fix
7. 00:31:488 (5) - 112,164 fix
8. 00:40:810 (6) - 移動到00:40:917 還有我不太喜歡這種短小精幹的slider D: fix
9. 00:41:774 (3,5) - 請重疊它們 fix
10. 00:43:488 (1,3) - ^ fix
11. 00:49:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 請排成直線 fix
12. 00:56:560 (3,2) - 重疊得吾靚 fix
13. 00:57:203 (3,2,4) - ^ 請重疊它們 fix
14. 01:07:488 (3,5,7) - ^ fix
15. 01:20:774 (1,2,3,4) - 點解淨系得01:21:203 (3) 個Y-coordinates系352 其他都系348 fix 應該係我手震XD
16. 01:22:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 得01:23:346 (4) 零零捨捨上左去Y=48 fix 同樣手震XD
17. 01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呢個pentagon夠正 用CTRL+SHIFT+D 整一個regular pentagon出黎 fix 唔係幾識用
18. 01:24:846 (1) - 同hard一樣 no fix,同上

thank very much
fix

Hi. how can i get here D:?





Good Luck

[quote="P A N"]Hi. how can i get here D:?







thank!

update:
1.more sampleset
2.more distance snap

from #modreq

英文mod写了几句 还是用中文吧
毕竟是专门儿过来帮助新人的 你要是看不懂就囧了

General
文件尺寸什么的都还好
可以找个合适的custom hitclap来用
所有diff： 00:06:002 - 降音量莫名

Insane
00:03:002 (4,7) - 可考虑+finish 觉得声音太大可以降那个finish音的音量
00:03:860 - 这里的节奏 你用kick slider起拍是很好的思路 不过用法有点不太对 这图应该会更好
00:07:502 (6) - whstle用得好蛮不错的 不过一般来说如果不是因为音乐中有和whistle相似的音 而是你想另外用whistle构成一个旋律的话 最好配套用 不要突然只冒出一个 比如00:09:002 (5) - 就也可以加 其他的怎么加就看你自己的思路了
00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的伴奏旋律是渐强 比起这个梗 更推荐间距增大梗 反正Insane么 不会觉得太难的
00:11:788 (2,3) - 这里的节奏明显也不对 长音错位了 试试这样
00:14:359 (4) - 建议去掉finish
00:17:574 (7) - +finish的话可以和00:17:038 (2) - 以及00:18:002 (1) - 的头结合起来
00:18:645 (2,4) - nazi 叠好
00:28:288 (1,3) - body上的whistle音你确定想要？
00:32:360 (2,3) - 节奏错位吧 要跟vocal的话 就改成类似这样 (3)也换成一个二分拍滑条也可以
00:38:574 (3,4,5) - 如果你想跟vocal 那么这个节奏也错位了 想用1/4滑条的话就这样 当然你也可以选用上一条里我提到的节奏型
00:40:288 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:217 - 建议加note 这里是节奏逐渐密集的段落 突然空一下=。=
00:50:574 (1) - 这里加个finish太适合了好么！
01:09:431 (1,2,3) - 重音 建议2种选择 一是原地【或者微小间距】 二是放跳 你现在这个spacing 误导性太强了
01:12:860 (4) - 节奏变化 建议NC
01:16:288 (5) - ^
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个地方……嘛 怎么说呢 再想想吧 不要懒 这绝对不是最好的表现形式 反正我打到这里的时候真的很无语
01:21:431 (4,1) - 交换NC
01:24:859 (1) - soft finish

Hard
00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6) - AR7的Hard 这种梗 反人类
00:14:574 (7) - NC
00:20:574 (1) - 去掉NC 然后00:21:002 (2,1) - 交换NC
00:45:431 (1) - 头上的finish呢
00:46:288 (3) - ^
00:50:574 (3) - soft finish
00:58:502 (5) - 这么近 坑人么
01:11:788 (4,5,6) - 01:13:931 (2,3,4) - 这么多clap 耳朵要炸了
01:17:788 (2) - spacing 我求求你和00:12:431 (4,5,6) - 比一下可以么
01:19:717 (7) - 头尾全加soft finish都不错
最后spinner 加soft finish 后面2个diff不说了

Normal
00:02:574 (3) - 可以加finish 降音量
00:11:145 (5) - spacing 容许误差+_0.04
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - 直线？
00:39:860 (4) - 歪了 应该上1grid 嘛 或者你让(1)往下也行 省的还有调后面的
01:07:717 (1) - 一定是我打开的方式不对 趁我揉眼睛的时候快改
01:22:717 (1) - spacing啊

Easy
Easy要缩短combo长度
00:02:574 (3) - NC
00:45:431 (1) - 头尾都加soft finish
01:03:431 (1) - 头上的finish让人有一种重音错位感 嘛 随便吧 删不删都可以
01:07:717 (3) - NC
01:12:859 (3) - NC
01:21:002 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:23:145 (5) - NC

低难度比高难度做得好 除了Normal里有些莫名间距
这个质量找BAT还太早了=。=真的
多打打图 从别人那里学 怎么才能把高难度做得有趣
你PC数太少了 所以能做成现在这样我觉得已经不错了
加油

Zero__wind wrote:

from #modreq

英文mod写了几句 还是用中文吧
毕竟是专门儿过来帮助新人的 你要是看不懂就囧了

General
文件尺寸什么的都还好
可以找个合适的custom hitclap来用
所有diff： 00:06:002 - 降音量莫名

Insane
00:03:002 (4,7) - 可考虑+finish 觉得声音太大可以降那个finish音的音量 fix
00:03:860 - 这里的节奏 你用kick slider起拍是很好的思路 不过用法有点不太对 这图应该会更好 fix
00:07:502 (6) - whstle用得好蛮不错的 不过一般来说如果不是因为音乐中有和whistle相似的音 而是你想另外用whistle构成一个旋律的话 最好配套用 不要突然只冒出一个 比如00:09:002 (5) - 就也可以加 其他的怎么加就看你自己的思路了 no fix 不知道如果修改
00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的伴奏旋律是渐强 比起这个梗 更推荐间距增大梗 反正Insane么 不会觉得太难的 fix 我最愛這個修改
00:11:788 (2,3) - 这里的节奏明显也不对 长音错位了 试试这样 fix
00:14:359 (4) - 建议去掉finish fix
00:17:574 (7) - +finish的话可以和00:17:038 (2) - 以及00:18:002 (1) - 的头结合起来 fix
00:18:645 (2,4) - nazi 叠好 fix
00:28:288 (1,3) - body上的whistle音你确定想要？ 小部分fix
00:32:360 (2,3) - 节奏错位吧 要跟vocal的话 就改成类似这样 (3)也换成一个二分拍滑条也可以 fix 感覺很好
00:38:574 (3,4,5) - 如果你想跟vocal 那么这个节奏也错位了 想用1/4滑条的话就这样 当然你也可以选用上一条里我提到的节奏型 fix
00:40:288 (4,5,6) - ^ fix
00:45:217 - 建议加note 这里是节奏逐渐密集的段落 突然空一下=。= fix
00:50:574 (1) - 这里加个finish太适合了好么！ fix
01:09:431 (1,2,3) - 重音 建议2种选择 一是原地【或者微小间距】 二是放跳 你现在这个spacing 误导性太强了 fix,這個可能修改得有點坑
01:12:860 (4) - 节奏变化 建议NC fix
01:16:288 (5) - ^ fix
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这个地方……嘛 怎么说呢 再想想吧 不要懒 这绝对不是最好的表现形式 反正我打到这里的时候真的很无语 fix
01:21:431 (4,1) - 交换NC fix
01:24:859 (1) - soft finish fix

Hard
00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6) - AR7的Hard 这种梗 反人类 fix
00:14:574 (7) - NC fix
00:20:574 (1) - 去掉NC 然后00:21:002 (2,1) - 交换NC fix
00:45:431 (1) - 头上的finish呢 fix
00:46:288 (3) - ^ fix
00:50:574 (3) - soft finish fix
00:58:502 (5) - 这么近 坑人么 fix
01:11:788 (4,5,6) - 01:13:931 (2,3,4) - 这么多clap 耳朵要炸了 部分fix
01:17:788 (2) - spacing 我求求你和00:12:431 (4,5,6) - 比一下可以么 fix 我之前忘記了修改
01:19:717 (7) - 头尾全加soft finish都不错 fix
最后spinner 加soft finish 后面2个diff不说了 fix

Normal
00:02:574 (3) - 可以加finish 降音量 fix
00:11:145 (5) - spacing 容许误差+_0.04 fix
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - 直线？ 改直了點
00:39:860 (4) - 歪了 应该上1grid 嘛 或者你让(1)往下也行 省的还有调后面的 fix
01:07:717 (1) - 一定是我打开的方式不对 趁我揉眼睛的时候快改 fix
01:22:717 (1) - spacing啊 fix

Easy
Easy要缩短combo长度
00:02:574 (3) - NC fix
00:45:431 (1) - 头尾都加soft finish fix
01:03:431 (1) - 头上的finish让人有一种重音错位感 嘛 随便吧 删不删都可以 no fix
01:07:717 (3) - NC fix
01:12:859 (3) - NC fix
01:21:002 (1,2) - 交换NC fix
01:23:145 (5) - NC fix

低难度比高难度做得好 除了Normal里有些莫名间距
这个质量找BAT还太早了=。=真的
多打打图 从别人那里学 怎么才能把高难度做得有趣
你PC数太少了 所以能做成现在这样我觉得已经不错了
加油

你的mod 很讚
可能我還是新手...感謝你

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2!

Some suggestions

[Overal]
Audio preview must be same at all difficulties

[Easy]
STR 1 instead of 2?
00:21:431 (1) - align w/ (4)?
00:50:574 (1) - align w/ (3)?

[Normal]
00:34:502 (1) - consider to space it away from the end of (6)
01:20:788 (1,2) - that overlap didn't looks good imo
01:24:860 (1) - I'd suggest to delete circle and start spinner here

[Hard]
00:29:360 (7,1) - not so good looking overlap again
01:24:860 (7) - same as 01:24:860 (1) in [Normal]

[Insane]
01:10:931 (2,3,4) - align w/ 1?


Rest seems fine

Thunderstorm wrote:

[Normal]
00:34:502 (1) - consider to space it away from the end of (6)fix
01:20:788 (1,2) - that overlap didn't looks good imo fix

thank very much

Hey! From #modreq.

[General]

1. Resnap all timing sections. Or at least only kiai sections.
2. Audio preview is different in all diffs.

[Easy]

• 00:00:859 (1,2,1,2,3) - Select all of them at once and move them to x:156 y:88 http://puu.sh/2VML2.png
  00:30:860 (3) - Replace clap at the beginning with whistle and finish at the end with clap.
  00:34:717 (1) - Replace finish at the beginning with whistle.
  00:36:860 (1) - ^
  00:48:431 (4) - Add clap.
  01:03:431 (1) - Replace whistle at the end with finish.

[Normal]

• 00:06:859 (2) - Add whistle.
  00:11:145 (5) - Add NC.
  00:12:859 (1) - Remove NC.

[Hard]

• 00:44:574 (2,3,4,5) - Whoa, what happened there? o.o Don't place them randomly like that. Use the same distance for these notes.

[Insane]

• 00:04:288 (2) - Remove clap from the end.
  00:04:717 (3) - Add clap.
  00:31:717 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
  00:59:467 (2) - Place it on the blue tick. http://puu.sh/2VN2u.png
  01:09:431 (1,2,3) - Add clap.
  01:11:145 (3) - Replace whistle at the beginning with finish.

That's all I got. Good luck! =w=

Leyko wrote:

Hey! From #modreq.

[General]

1. Resnap all timing sections. Or at least only kiai sections.
2. Audio preview is different in all diffs. fix

[Easy]

• 00:00:859 (1,2,1,2,3) - Select all of them at once and move them to x:156 y:88 http://puu.sh/2VML2.png fix
  00:30:860 (3) - Replace clap at the beginning with whistle and finish at the end with clap. fix
  00:34:717 (1) - Replace finish at the beginning with whistle. fix
  00:36:860 (1) - ^ fix
  00:48:431 (4) - Add clap. fix
  01:03:431 (1) - Replace whistle at the end with finish. fix

[Normal]

• 00:06:859 (2) - Add whistle. fix
  00:11:145 (5) - Add NC. fix
  00:12:859 (1) - Remove NC. fix

[Hard]

• 00:44:574 (2,3,4,5) - Whoa, what happened there? o.o Don't place them randomly like that. Use the same distance for these notes. fix

[Insane]

• 00:04:288 (2) - Remove clap from the end. fix
  00:04:717 (3) - Add clap. fix
  00:31:717 (1) - Add finish at the beginning. fix
  00:59:467 (2) - Place it on the blue tick. http://puu.sh/2VN2u.png fix
  01:09:431 (1,2,3) - Add clap. fix
  01:11:145 (3) - Replace whistle at the beginning with finish. fix

That's all I got. Good luck! =w=

thank very much!

HI~ from my queue. I am sorry it took so long, I had a lot of work to do.

[General]
I definitely recommend checking AIMod. I didn't check what it really wanted to tell me but... I would like you to look at it.

[Easy]
00:03:002 (2) - I would move this note up by 2 grids, just to bring in some variety.
00:23:574 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat and then add a circle at 00:24:431 to emphasize the rhythm of the singer a little more.
00:54:002 (1) - Swap hitsounds, use the whistle on the end of this slider, not on slider start.
01:04:717 (2) - You should really add a NC here, since the "climax" of this song begins here.

Quite a sweet diff. It could use some polishing here and there, but all in all it's quite a beauty.

[Normal]
Just one or two imperfect sliders, for example:
00:31:717 (4,6) - The circular parts of these sliders should be made.... a little more.... yeah, circular.
Objectively pretty nice mapping here, again, sometimes the flow isn't perfectly right, but that can be polished up.

[Hard]
Very pesky spacing issues here and there, please fix them by yourself (examples: 00:20:360 (6,7) - 00:38:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DS is changing among pattern)
00:00:859 (1,2) - These don't follow any sound in the background, why not adjusting it to the rhythm?
00:02:574 (3) - As for this slider, definitely use 1/3 repeats.
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty original. I like it.
00:46:931 (4) - Really unnecessary jump. Nothing in the music is really allowing this to be here, such as a certain sound or dunnowhat.
01:10:717 (1,2) - For example, one more really unnecessary jump.
01:17:574 (1,3) - Don't let (3)'s end overlap (1).

This diff was quite nice. I liked it.

[Insane]
00:14:574 (1,3) - These don't follow any sound or anything in the song, so erase them or replace them with something else.
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G would improve flow IMO.

This diff is really overmapped at some parts, which bothers me a lot, but otherwise, it's ok.

Good luck with this!

Quiz-chan wrote:

HI~ from my queue. I am sorry it took so long, I had a lot of work to do.

[General]
I definitely recommend checking AIMod. I didn't check what it really wanted to tell me but... I would like you to look at it.

[Easy]
00:23:574 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat and then add a circle at 00:24:431 to emphasize the rhythm of the singer a little more. fix
00:54:002 (1) - Swap hitsounds, use the whistle on the end of this slider, not on slider start. fix
01:04:717 (2) - You should really add a NC here, since the "climax" of this song begins here. fix

[Hard]
Very pesky spacing issues here and there, please fix them by yourself (examples: 00:20:360 (6,7) - 00:38:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DS is changing among pattern) fix
00:00:859 (1,2) - These don't follow any sound in the background, why not adjusting it to the rhythm? fix

SPOILER

00:02:574 (3) - As for this slider, definitely use 1/3 repeats. fix
00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty original. I like it. thank
00:46:931 (4) - Really unnecessary jump. Nothing in the music is really allowing this to be here, such as a certain sound or dunnowhat. fix
01:10:717 (1,2) - For example, one more really unnecessary jump. fix
01:17:574 (1,3) - Don't let (3)'s end overlap (1). fix


[Insane]
00:14:574 (1,3) - These don't follow any sound or anything in the song, so erase them or replace them with something else. fix
00:20:360 (3) - Ctrl+G would improve flow IMO. fix

Thank very much!

I'm sorry for poor mod
I Hardly fine any mistake for this beatmap..
This is are Sugestion, All of it

[Insane]
00:12:538 Why not add one note again? like this
00:58:824 Add some note?
01:00:324 Add some note?
01:00:538 Add some note?
01:10:610 Add some note?
01:10:824 Add some note?
01:11:038 Add some note?
01:14:467 Add some note?
01:23:466 Add some note?
01:24:324 Add some note?
01:24:645 Add some note?

Wait ... This is all abaout "Add some note?" ...

Um.. I Wish this will help ...

egas00 wrote:

I'm sorry for poor mod
I Hardly fine any mistake for this beatmap..
This is are Sugestion, All of it

[Insane]
00:12:538 Why not add one note again? like this fix
00:58:824 Add some note? fix
01:00:324 Add some note? fix
01:10:610 Add some note? fix
01:11:038 Add some note? fix

Um.. I Wish this will help ...

thank very much!

General:
01:28:074 - add a kiai blast here and end 1/4 next

Insane:
00:01:288 (4,4,7) - Add a clap for this
00:31:717 (1,2) - extend up to 1/4 right

支持

好想快d ranked...

vahn10 wrote:

Insane:
00:01:288 (4,4,7) - Add a clap for this fix
00:31:717 (1,2) - extend up to 1/4 rightfix

thank!

Hi; modding for M4M here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset..

>General

1. The timing points for kiai aren't snapped. Snap them please.
2. The preview point between diffs are different. Make them all have the same preview point.

>Easy

1. Uhm, your combo pattern looks random. Sometimes an NC is added every one stanza, but the other time it goes to two. Make them consistent please.
2. 00:06:859 (3) - NC since a new stanza begins in the middle of the slider.
3. 00:09:431 - Add whistle so it will be consistent with 00:06:002?
4. 00:18:431 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Change claps to whistles, and whistles to claps? Sounds better IMO.
5. 00:23:145 (3) - Change clap to whistle?
6. 00:27:431 (1,2) - Swap NC? It's (2) that is on a new stanza, not (1).
7. 00:34:717 (1) - Change the whistle to clap, and clap to whistle?
8. 00:37:288 - Change whistle to clap?
9. 00:38:145 (3) - ^
10. 00:50:145 (3) - ^
11. 00:52:288 (3) - Add whistle? You seem to forget it.
12. 01:02:145 - ^
13. 01:09:431 - ^
14. 01:09:431 (4) - Move to (172,304)? Looks far better, IMO. Also remember to fix the spacing.

>Normal

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Remove the NC because it's not two stanzas yet after the previous NC, so the combo pattern will be consistent?
2. 00:17:145 (1,3) - Swap NC for combo pattern consistency?
3. 00:53:145 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:55:717 (1) - Remove NC?
5. 01:01:288 (2,3) - Change whistles to claps, and the clap to whistle?
6. 01:18:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern looks messy for me. Try to make them look neater? At least don't make the third (1) touch the first (1,2). Also, remove the NCs? They are unnecessary.

>Hard

1. The combo pattern also looks inconsistent here. Make the NCs consistent please, whether it's every one or two stanzas, and use them at the beginning of a stanza. This applies to all diffs.
2. The hitsound also has a weird pattern... When you're not using finishes, use whistles every first and third white tick of a stanza and claps on the second and fourth. This also applies to all diffs.
3. 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - Just snap them to 1/3 like what you did in Insane. It should be fine. It's really bad to use the wrong snapping in a song if it's noticeably different anyway.
4. 00:05:145 (5) - Move to (388,68)?
5. 00:08:360 (2,4) - Try to not make them touch 00:07:717 (1)? Looks bad currently...
6. 00:18:002 (5,1) - Swap NC. I'm sure enough it's already obvious why.
7. 00:36:002 (6,1,2) - What's with the sudden spacing change? It's just unexpected.
8. 00:38:574 (4,1) - Swap NC?

>Insane

1. 00:09:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern isn't symmetrical. Just copy-paste (1,2), choose the new circles, and rotate them by 45 degrees counter-clockwise. Choose those new circles again, copy-paste again, and rotate by 45 degrees again. Do it once again and you should be done with it.
2. 00:20:360 (3) - Uh, just use 00:19:931 (2) and rotate it by 180 degrees?
3. 00:37:502 (2,3,1) - Spacing changes like this can be confusing.
4. 00:49:824 (3,5) - This is an example of bad overmapping. Remove?
5. 01:15:217 (7) - Change clap to whistle?

Okay, that's it I guess.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M here.

>General

1. The preview point between diffs are different. Make them all have the same preview point. fix

>Easy

1. Uhm, your combo pattern looks random. Sometimes an NC is added every one stanza, but the other time it goes to two. Make them consistent please. fix
2. 00:06:859 (3) - NC since a new stanza begins in the middle of the slider. fix
3. 00:09:431 - Add whistle so it will be consistent with 00:06:002? fix
4. 00:18:431 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Change claps to whistles, and whistles to claps? Sounds better IMO. fix
5. 00:27:431 (1,2) - Swap NC? It's (2) that is on a new stanza, not (1). fix
6. 00:34:717 (1) - Change the whistle to clap, and clap to whistle? fix
7. 00:37:288 - Change whistle to clap? fix
8. 00:38:145 (3) - ^ fix
9. 00:50:145 (3) - ^ fix
10. 00:52:288 (3) - Add whistle? You seem to forget it. fix
11. 01:02:145 - ^ fix
12. 01:09:431 - ^
13. 01:09:431 (4) - Move to (172,304)? Looks far better, IMO. Also remember to fix the spacing. fix

>Normal

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Remove the NC because it's not two stanzas yet after the previous NC, so the combo pattern will be consistent? fix
2. 00:17:145 (1,3) - Swap NC for combo pattern consistency? fix
3. 00:53:145 (1,2) - ^ fix
4. 00:55:717 (1) - Remove NC? fix
5. 01:01:288 (2,3) - Change whistles to claps, and the clap to whistle? fix
6. 01:18:002 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern looks messy for me. Try to make them look neater? At least don't make the third (1) touch the first (1,2). Also, remove the NCs? They are unnecessary.fix

>Hard

1. 00:00:860 (1,2,3,4) - Just snap them to 1/3 like what you did in Insane. It should be fine. It's really bad to use the wrong snapping in a song if it's noticeably different anyway. fix
2. 00:05:145 (5) - Move to (388,68)? fix
3. 00:08:360 (2,4) - Try to not make them touch 00:07:717 (1)? Looks bad currently... fix
4. 00:18:002 (5,1) - Swap NC. I'm sure enough it's already obvious why. fix
5. 00:36:002 (6,1,2) - What's with the sudden spacing change? It's just unexpected. fix
6. 00:38:574 (4,1) - Swap NC? fix

>Insane

1. 00:20:360 (3) - Uh, just use 00:19:931 (2) and rotate it by 180 degrees? fix
2. 00:49:824 (3,5) - This is an example of bad overmapping. Remove? fix
3. 01:15:217 (7) - Change clap to whistle? fix

thank very much

Hi M4M
From #modreqs

[Easy]
CS 3
HP 1
AR 2
OD 2
00:02:574 (3) - Un-NC
00:06:859 (3) - Un-NC
00:09:002 (1) - NC
00:09:431 (2) - Un-NC
00:24:431 (1) - NC
00:24:860 (1) - Un-NC
00:26:574 (4) - NC
00:27:860 (4) - Un-NC
00:29:145 (1) - NC
00:30:002 (3) - Un-NC
00:30:431 (1) - NC
00:31:717 (1) - Un-NC
01:12:859 (1) - Un-NC
01:21:002 (1) - NC
01:21:431 (1) - Un-NC
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Normal]
CS 3
HP 3
AR 4
OD 4
00:17:145 (6) - NC
00:18:002 (1) - Un-NC
00:33:002 (1) - NC
00:34:502 (1) - Un-NC
00:35:574 (5) - NC
00:38:145 - Add a circle? and NC
00:38:574 (1) - Un-NC
00:52:717 Add a circle? and NC
00:53:145 (2) - Un-NC
01:10:931 (1) - Add a circle? and NC
01:11:145 (2) - Un-NC
01:22:717 (3) - Un-NC
00:31:717 (4) - How about this kind of slider? or something else that more symetrical
00:34:502 (1,2) - Un-stack? It's Confusing imo
00:38:145 Add a circle?
01:25:074 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Hard]
CS 4
HP 5
AR 6
OD 6
00:06:645 (2,3,4) - Un-stack? It's Confusing imo
00:20:574 (7) - Delete circle? and add a circle on 00:20:788
00:24:217 (1) - Add a circle?
00:28:931 (6) - Add a circle?
00:36:645 (7) - Add a circle?
00:42:002 How about this kind of pattern? It sounds good
01:17:360 Add a circle?
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

[Insane]
CS 4
HP 7
AR 8
OD 8
00:38:788 (4,5) - and 00:40:502 (5,6) - can you make that one more symetrical?
01:24:859 (1) - Spinner end should be on 01:27:431 and add ciclce on 01:27:860 and 01:28:074

All my mods are suggestion you can reject it though
Good luck, go for ranked XD
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