1. Easy (0,75 stars, 177 notes)
2. Hard (4,76 stars, 547 notes)
3. Moka's Candy (4,94 stars, 181 notes)
4. Normal (3,86 stars, 328 notes)

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from popner's special mod queue
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[General]
Sotryboard-I can see the background(altough just a line) at the beginning, consider fixing this - fixed
Hitsounds - It's a little too loud don't you think? Decrease it a little. And I think you should use soft hitsounds from the beginning until 00:14:976 , it suits the music more - I changed beginning to soft hitsounds but I'll keep hitsound volume. However if someone else will say about it then I'll change it
Timings - somehow I think the offset is a little too late, how about 2029? and I suggest you putting the timing points on the white ticks- I really dont know ^^ I don't really see the difference so I changed the offset to one you suggested. I hope someone experienced in future will help me with offset

Vistritium wrote:

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from popner's special mod queue
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[General]
Sotryboard-I can see the background(altough just a line) at the beginning, consider fixing this - fixed
Hitsounds - It's a little too loud don't you think? Decrease it a little. And I think you should use soft hitsounds from the beginning until 00:14:976 , it suits the music more - I changed beginning to soft hitsounds but I'll keep hitsound volume. However if someone else will say about it then I'll change it
Timings - somehow I think the offset is a little too late, how about 2029? and I suggest you putting the timing points on the white ticks- I really dont know ^^ I don't really see the difference so I changed the offset to one you suggested. I hope someone experienced in future will help me with offset

Thank you for mod

Aunxfb wrote:

Thanks for the kudos then
Sorry it took so long...
anyway, here's the rest of the mod, and sorry that I skipped a difficulty(because the offset is not fixed)

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[General]
Sotryboard - The same problem, I can still see the line for some reason - I cant fix it, its some weird bug. I can make this line to appear on left side though when I change:

//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",1,1

to this:

//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg"

My black is png and is 800x600
and it looks like that in osb:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Storyboard\Black.png",320,240
 M,0,0,2052,320,240
 F,0,2053,3552,1,0

Also notice that you dont see line in design mode...
I hope someone will help me out with this

Offset - Moka's Candy difficulty is still using the 225x offset, which seemed off to me, so I'll not be modding that, sorry - baka moka
Timing - timing sections should be put on the white ticks, not that it'll create a very big problem, but please fix these- Whats the difference really? I have read http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping and http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Timing and there is nothing mentioned about it. Give proper reason (refuses)

Let's start with Hard , shall we

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:06:414 (4) - Please fix the placement and spacing, and the angle of the slider doesn't seem right too- hmm..ok
00:08:260 (3) - ^ok
00:09:183 (6) - change the hitsound of second circle to "drum"-changed
00:09:875 (2) - change the hitsound to "drum"-changed
00:10:106 (3) - change the hitsound of second circle to "drum"-changed
00:10:798 (5) - change the hitsound of first circle to "drum"-changed
00:11:260 (1) - change the hitsound to "drum"-changed
00:11:721 (3) - ^-changed
00:11:952 (4) - change the hitsound of second circle to "drum"-changed
00:12:644 (6) - change the hitsound to "drum"-changed
00:13:106 (1,2,3,4) - change the hitsound of first circle to "drum" and add whistle-changed
00:14:952 (1) - consider reshaping this, even though the current one was fine, and add clap to the second circleClap added, didnt change shape, I think its fine and I like it.
00:16:106 - add circle with clap-changed
00:16:337 - add circle with clap+finish-changed
00:17:260 (3) - add clap on first circle-changed
00:18:183 (5) - add clap-changed
00:18:876 (3) - add clap on second circle-changed
00:20:029 (6) - add clap-changed
00:20:721 (2) - add clap on second circle-changed
00:21:644 (5) - ^-changed
00:21:644 (5) - add a circle- wut? invalid time I suppose
00:22:798 (5) - add clap on first circle-changed
00:23:721 - add circle or lengthen slider in timeline, add clap-added note
00:24:644 (4) - add clap on first circle-changed
00:25:567 - add circle or lengthen slider in timeline, add clap-added note
00:26:490 (4) - add clap on first circle-changed
00:27:414 (6) - add clap-changed
00:28:337 (3) - add clap-changed
00:29:260 (6) - add clap-changed
00:29:606 - add circle maybe?-note added
00:30:183 (4) - add clap on first circle-changed
00:30:644 (1,2,3) - change to three circles(1- 00:30:644 - , 2-00:30:875 - ,3-00:31:106 - ), add clap and fninish on the last circle-changed

00:31:567 - From here on out the hitsounds are very out of place, and as it will be a pain in the butt to point out every single one of them, so I'll just tell you how it should be done(IMO)
The claps should follow the beats instead of the vocals, listen carefully for snares/claps in the music, and assign claps to the appropriate beat. For example, 00:32:029 (3) - should have a clap wheres 00:31:567 (1),00:32:260 (4,5) - shouldn't have clap as the next clap should be on 00:32:952 (7) , you get the point (If you still don't get it use the first part as reference)(P.S also, restraint yourself form placing hitsound randomly/because you felt like it)- Uh, I can't really hear anything in the background that would indicate clap. I tried to follow vocal with claps and I was editing this a lot thats why this was like this. Its hard also to use ur earlier suggestions as reference because claps are not symmetrical to time, as I said I cant hear it in bg too >.> However ur claps are fine as I listen to them, they just fit.

SPOILER

00:31:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider changing this kind of pattern, it's not very confusing but it's not very obvious either, anyway I don't really like it-changed
00:33:183 (8) - NC-added
00:36:875 (8) - NC-added
00:40:798 (7) - NC-added
00:44:260 (8) - NC-added
00:48:644 -(10) NC-hmm...no, but added on 00:47:952 instead
00:51:875 (8) - NC-added
00:55:567 (9) - NC-added
00:56:375 (11) - this one is misplaced on the timeline, I believe it should start at 00:57:183 (13) - -hmm..looks like I fixed it before, therefore fixed
00:57:414 (1,2,3,4) - change the spacings to match the tempo(1.0 is a good estimate)-changed to 0.9 spacing
01:00:414 (10,11,12) - add three circles which are 1/4beats apart, clap+finish on third circle-nice, added
01:21:414 (4,5,6,7) - change these into 1/2beat sliders
01:25:106 (5) - NC-added
01:45:875 (1) - remove NC
01:47:029 (6) - NC-added
01:50:721 (8) - NC-added
01:53:260 (1) - remove NC
01:54:644 (7) - NC-added
01:58:106 (8) - NC-added
01:58:106 (8,9) - shorten these into half-beat slider-changed
02:01:798 (8) - NC-added
02:05:721 (8) - NC-added
02:09:414 (7) - NC-added
02:14:952 (1) - end slider at 02:14:952 (1) - -??, those times are same
02:15:644 - add a circle here if you followed the previous one-added anyway, it sounds good
02:35:260 (5,6,7,8) - change these into 1/2beat sliders -changed into notes instead
02:38:952 (5) - NC-added
03:19:567 (1,2,3,4) - change these into 1/2beat sliders-changed
03:34:337 (1,2,3,4) - ^

The beats placement are fine, but it still needs some improvements. For example, some of the beats (eg:00:47:490 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) can be changed into various sliders.
And spacing shouldn't be ignored completely, for example:00:57:414 (1,2,3,4) - should have at least 1.0 spacing since the speed is decreased suddenly,and should definitely be further away form each other than 00:59:029 (5,6,7,8) - ,if not it'll confuse the players.
Combos should not be too long,and have to follow the beats/pattern change.
Most of the beats added/altered is because I think it suits the songs more
And as I said, hitsounds should be added based on the beats and not the vocals/randomly. It'll have some sort of rythm when done right.

[Normal]
For hitsounds please refer to the Hard difficulty, they should be the same.

SPOILER

00:25:567 - add circle-added
00:45:182 (7) - either replace the circle+slider or delete this circle-changed
02:12:644 (3,4,5) - a little too hard for normal(just a little)-hmm..no, I like them. I dont think they will make players fail, eventually I'll reduce hp drain or something
02:27:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
03:26:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

^


Sliders like 02:20:952 (4) - arent really necassary, they don't look very nice and may confuse some players, suggesting to change these.
And please use distance snap to make your beatmap, the current beat spacings are too small(and a little inconsistent), which cause the beats to be too close together. Using 1.0 Spacing might be a good Idea-I like them and I think they are easy to do. They will also distinguish may map from others, I want to keep them.

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:30:183 (1) - ya'know what, the '3x reverse' din really help much(I think) , consider using circles on white ticks-it did >.< When I was newb those sliders were problem for me, I didnt expect them. I believe sb warning will solve the problem.
00:37:106 (1) - this doesn't really needs fixing because the next beat is two beat away from it which allows enough time for some players to react-great
00:50:606 (5) - slider should start at 00:50:721 - and end at 00:50:952 - changed
00:55:452 (3) - slider start at 00:55:567 - ^Changed
01:15:875 - add circleNo, I want to give extra time for newbie
02:29:721 - add circle^
02:51:990 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Nudge foward

Adjusted

It ain't bad,it's just that the beats are missing all the 'claps' which doesn't seemed really right for me
P.S: please bare with me as I'm bad with Easy ><


[Overall]
It's not that bad for your first beatmap , but you should really watch out about the beat spacing and patterns in some case.Will try
And try to create more variety instead of just using the same patterns all over again, so ppl don't get bored playing your map Same pattern only some times


Good luck for ranking~

Vistritium wrote:

[General]
Timing - timing sections should be put on the white ticks, not that it'll create a very big problem, but please fix these- Whats the difference really? I have read http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping and http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Timing and there is nothing mentioned about it. Give proper reason (refuses)

Vistritium wrote:

- Uh, I can't really hear anything in the background that would indicate clap. I tried to follow vocal with claps and I was editing this a lot thats why this was like this. Its hard also to use ur earlier suggestions as reference because claps are not symmetrical to time, as I said I cant hear it in bg too >.> However ur claps are fine as I listen to them, they just fit.

Kiai should start on a white tick (or more commonly, the big white tick called the downbeat) of a measure. Generally, the main part of the chorus will start at this point.