1. Booo~ Party! (5 stars, 911 notes)
2. Hard (4.88 stars, 539 notes)
3. Normal (4.13 stars, 307 notes)
4. P A N's Easy (1.73 stars, 180 notes)

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi ^^ M4M from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General

Combo 3 and 4 looks exactly the same. If you want, delete one of them or make one of them darker Fix

Your easiest diff (normal diff) has 4.13 stars, it's unrankable. Easiest diff in a mapset must be below 2.5 stars or between 2.5~3 stars. Consider making the normal diff easier (i notice the pattern in your normal diff, especially the chorus part, is a little bit difficult for your easiest diff) or ask someone to make you a guest diff okay i'll find some guest diff

Booo~ Party!

AR-1 (to make it more fun to play) I think AR 9 is funner than 8

00:02:756 (6) - place this circle in this beginning slider point 00:01:167 (5) -
00:10:697 (1,2,3) - why not mirror 00:10:167 (1,2,3) - ?
00:17:579 (2) - (merely suggestion) x:116 y: 224 so it will be the opposite of the previous slider
if you don't follow the suggestion above, 00:18:108 (3) - this slider should mirror the previous slider
00:24:285 (1,2,3, 4) - 4 grids to the left
00:24:285 (1,2,3) - x:112 y:275
00:50:226 (4) - how about making it like this, since the previous one is kinda hidden

01:21:109 (1) - remove nc
02:40:167 (1) - ^
02:42:991 (1) - ^
02:45:814 (1) - ^
03:27:814 (1) - ^
02:40:344 (3) - add nc (big white line)
02:43:167 (3) - ^
02:45:285 (5) - ^
03:27:638 (5) - ^
01:32:579 (6,7) - separate them a little bit
01:36:814 (3) - lower one grid
01:39:814 (6) - x:144 y:100
01:45:638 (4,5,6) - make them a little bit farther than this 01:45:285 (3) -
01:48:461 (4) - why not making it straight like this slider 01:47:403 (1) -
01:53:050 (1,1,1,1) - make them a little bit closer
02:05:050 (1) - x:124 y:252
02:05:403 (2) - x:256 y:136
02:18:814 (3,4) - don't make them touch each other
02:53:932 (6) - make it straight
03:01:520 (3,4) - stack them properly. 03:01:873 (4) - should be x: 256 y: 326
03:45:991 - to 04:02:844 - the distance should be a little bit closer

Hard

AR-2 or AR-3
HP+1

00:14:226 (1) - merely suggestion, make it a bit more curvy
00:19:167 (2,3) - stack them more properly. 00:19:520 (3) - should be x: 427 y:192
00:29:932 (1) - remove nc
00:32:756 (1) - ^
00:35:579 (1) - ^
00:55:344 (1) - ^
01:06:638 (1) - ^
02:36:991 (1) - ^
00:29:756 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:32:579 (5) - ^
00:35:403 (5) - ^
00:55:167 (5) - ^
01:06:461 (6) - ^
02:36:814 (6) - ^
00:47:403 (3) - a bit nazi, x: 354 y: 322
00:51:991 (4) - x:307 y:362
01:29:050 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other
03:43:167 (1,2) - ^
01:51:638 (1,2) - make them a little bit close to each other
02:19:873 (1,2) - ^
02:31:167 (1,2) - ^
03:05:050 (1,2) - ^
03:16:344 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:991 (1,2) - ^
02:54:991 (4) - x:200 y:152
03:07:167 (3,4) - move 4 grids to the left, so it will be adjacent with this circle 03:06:991 (2) -
03:10:697 (1,2) - separate them a bit
03:31:873 (1,2) - not symmetry

Normal

AR-1
if you want, decrease the slider velocity a bit (preferrably 1,10 or 1,00)

00:04:520 (1) - remove nc
00:04:520 (1) - ^
00:07:344 (1) - ^
00:10:167 (1) - ^
00:13:520 (1) - ^
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:19:167 (1) - ^
00:35:756 (1) - ^
00:38:579 (1) - ^
02:25:873 (1,1) - ^
03:27:991 (1) - ^
03:30:814 (1) - ^
03:39:285 (1) - ^
03:42:108 (1) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:05:756 (3) - ^
00:08:579 (3) - ^
00:14:226 (2) - ^
00:17:050 (3) - ^
00:19:873 (2) - ^
00:25:520 (4) - ^
00:36:814 (3) - ^
03:29:050 (3) - ^
03:31:873 (4) - ^
03:40:344 (2) - ^
03:43:167 (4) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - rotate by -4
00:18:108 (5) - this slider is touching the HP bar. lower it
00:30:108 (1,2) - this is a bit difficult for your easiest diff
00:48:108 (1,3) - overlay
01:30:461 (1) - separate this and these 01:31:168 (2,3,4) - a little

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song

Anyway, the song is nice ^^ and your mapping is great, so kudosu star~ Thanks >w>)/
Good luck for your ranking Thanks ^w^

useless bonus

my hand slipped i'm an idiot XD

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Timing looks good!
Also I love this map, good luck~

TERO wrote:

Very cool map! ^_^
Normal
00:44:226 - I think that this need circles ← nope, here not have any sound
00:44:579 - I think that this need circles ← ↑

P A N wrote:

that last note !

SPOILER

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi from my modding queue!

NORMAL

00:50:226 (4,1) - stack them perfectly ◄ fix
03:45:991 (1) - maybe it's a bit confusing in this position... I fail it everytime XD ◄ haha lot people fail this point, ok fix XD

nothing on easy and hard... O.o very good map! ... take this star ◄Thanks :3

Hellzero wrote:

Hi form ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Booo~ Party!]
This diff have not breaks so if it not approval it's unrankable. ◄ start to 01:08:050 - end 01:18:991 -
02:11:403 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). ◄ Fix
Nothing say about patterns only one thing
03:45:638 (1,2,3) - really strange spacing for 1/3 maybe if i don't saw it in editor I failed it ◄ Fix
[Hard]
01:04:344 (3) - to round about (2) ◄ Fix

SPOILER

01:06:991 (3,4) - It's look like stream. It maybe confused players ◄ Fix
02:29:403 (4,1) - spacing too far o.o looks like 1/2 ◄ Fix
Good diff but some patterns too hard for that. I think it's fun for play ' w ')
[Normal]
01:41:403 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ Fix
03:34:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ Fix
[Easy]
01:30:814 (1) - Add NC because this note after spinner (it's bug)
03:01:167 (1) - ^
03:24:814 (1) - ^

P A N wrote:

all fixed.

That's all. Good map. Good luck! Thanks >w<)/

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

awh why did you delete that sudden slow slider at Boo diff?

Foxxer wrote:

So perfect map *o*
Small mod~

Hard

00:15:638 (4) - I think this circle will be better if you centralize between the sliders.

Good Luck! ~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[General]
* 2nd kiai should end at 03:23:403 but. I think sound end 03:23:050 It better than? ;w;)

[Normal]
00:05:756 (1) - Move right a bit for avoiding for overlapping (nazi) ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (1) - Why new combo? ◄ Fix
00:21:991 (1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:41:050 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars ◄ Fix
01:02:226 (1) - Make a slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706316 ◄ Looks nice
02:16:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ I think all fix
02:16:697 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:167 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:520 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:873 (3,4) - Use blanket combo? ◄ yeah
03:11:403 (1) - Remove new combo ◄ Fix


[Hard]
00:48:814 (3) - Reverse this slider for better flow? ◄ Fix
00:49:167 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:54:285 (2,3,4) - These jump aren't fit to the song... make another pattern? ◄ remove 1 reverse
03:41:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern isn't perfectly star pattern, use this ◄ Fix


Good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[P A N's Easy]
01:49:520 (1,2) - Swap new combo for following stanza fixed
03:15:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too repetitive pattern for me... (dunno what I'm gonna to say o.o). Perhaps, change pattern? fixed!

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/


P A N's Easy
00:07:873 (3,4,1) - For improving flow, I suggest you to move (4) higher or lower in the grid. Here's an example: http://puu.sh/2Bk9y. ok
00:16:697 - Why no object here? kinda lazy to fix the distance after add this note D:
00:20:403 (3,1) - Feels kinda empty the space between them. I think you could have add one more object, or even changed patterns. Something like this would be great. ok
00:34:697 (6) - Consider addin new combo here because of the finish. (Which implies also deleting New Combo in 00:35:403 (1) - ) ok
01:52:697 - Why the sudden change of hitsounds here? I think adding that custom finish hitsound here like previous objects would be perfect. I also think the sudden change of volume here is unnecessary, it doesn't make sense lowering there and after a short time, in 01:53:050 - you have increased it. ok wait
02:15:638 (2) - New combo because of finish. kind of strange.. the two (1) appear the same time on easy? 0.0
03:24:108 - Highly recommend adding object here. It's pretty clear with the song that there's a drum beat here. ok
Nice Easy. thanks

thanks Leorda and Wolf for modding ^0^

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/

General
I'm not sure, but I think you should add "mlp my little pony friendship is magic" in tags.
Hitsounds in Hard and Insane (Booo~ Party!) on the beginning are quite repetitive imo. ◄ Fix

Normal
00:04:520 (2) - This slider is currently touching with 00:02:932 (1) - and 00:05:756 (1) - (fading), so I'd recommend making them more cleaner. Something like this. ◄ Fix with Leo's mod, Thanks ' w ')
00:55:167 (1) - Overlap with 00:53:756 (1,2) - Doesn't look good imo. You could give a more considerable space between them for a more cleaner playthrough. ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (2,3,4) - Would be better if you have followed the same thing you did with 01:32:579 (3,4,5) - here: http://puu.sh/2Blmn. ◄ Fix
01:35:403 (3,4,5) - ^ ◄ Fix

Hard
The whistles kinda bothers me on this diff. Mostly in the beginning because it's pretty much almost the same pattern (which implies more objects) plus considering the intro is quite long. I'll give you some examples of other patterns you could try:
00:02:403 (3,4) - Delete the whistles on them. ◄ Fix
00:05:226 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:08:050 (2,3) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:51:638 (3) - I must say the overlap here is really unnecessary. The way you've placed it under 00:50:932 (1) - is not recommended. I wonder why no one else showed this up to you yet. ◄ Fix
01:03:991 (2,3) - Consider giving a bit more space between them to improve visuals. ◄ Fix
01:48:109 (3) - Same as 00:51:638 (3) -. ◄ Fix

Booo~ Party!
Looks pretty good. Nice job. ◄ Thanks ' w ')

I'll drop my star here, it's quite a good job so far you've been doing:
Good luck! :3

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi random mod

P A N's Easy

00:05:756 (1) - it would be better if this slider blanket previous circle no, lazy to fix distance after this note
00:20:403 (3) - nc ok
00:30:461 (4) - ^ ok
00:46:697 (3,4,1) - the flow is not good. How about this?

SPOILER

ok
03:09:638 (4) - nc ok

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi random mod

Normal
OD+1 ◄ +1
HD+1?

00:02:932 (1,2,3,4) - imo, their position is too dense, 00:02:932 (1,2,1) - they touched a little bit and it's slightly not neat. Suggestion : 00:04:520 (2) - position x:244|y:96 ◄ I'm make 00:02:932 (1) - mirror 00:05:756 (1) - Not fix yet

SPOILER

00:08:579 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other ◄ Fix
00:13:520 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:26:579 (2) - x:356|y:228 is better so it will align with 00:27:991 (4) - ◄ Lazy distance
00:30:814 (5,1) - put a little bit more distance between them ◄ I use 1.0x distance on map ;w;
00:36:814 (1) - http://puu.sh/2EhIj.jpg http://puu.sh/2EhLb.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
01:04:344 (4) - why not mirror previous slider? ◄ Fix in my style

SPOILER

01:37:167 (3) - nc, to match previous pattern ◄ Fix
02:52:344 (1,2) - how about this? ◄ Fix in my style

SPOILER

03:05:403 (4) - should be nc because your previous pattern is 03:00:814 (1,2,1,2,3) - ◄ Fix
03:08:226 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:13:520 (3) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:21:991 (6) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:22:344 (7,1) - put a little more distance between them ◄ too lazy if i more distance
03:27:285 (2,3) - ^ ↑


Hard

HD+1~2 ◄ Hard not Insane
OD+1

00:05:579 (5) - remove whistle? ◄ Nope.
00:08:403 (4) - ^ ◄ Nope.
00:31:167 (1,2,3,4) - make a little bit more space between them by dragging 00:31:697 (2,3,4,1) - down one grid ◄ 00:31:697 (2) is overlab 00:29:756 (1,2) - Not fix yet
00:50:932 (1,2,3,4) - the formation is too dense, make more space between them http://puu.sh/2EiDf.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
00:57:285 (3,4) - don't make them touch ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (3,4) - put a little bit more space between them ◄ Fix
02:33:285 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:26:226 (1,2) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:30:109 (4,1,2) - ^ ◄ Nope.


Booo~ Party!

00:44:226 (1) - how about the spinner starts from 00:44:050 - ? ◄ Okay
i think that's all x.x

Good luck ◄ Thanks

orioncomet wrote:

[P A N's Easy]
- Make sure tags is same as other diffs.

[Normal]
01:41:403 (4) - A bit confusing, imo. maybe make them to a longer slider or something.

[Hard]
- Suggestion, some of 1/4 notes (or streams) may be a bit hard for a Hard diff here, maybe make them to some short of long silder would be nice. [Like 01:52:344 (3,4,5,6,7) and some kick sliders, and there's more on the last kiai]
00:19:873 (1) - Hidden silder for a Hard diff is kinda hard, imo. may you fix this please.
02:16:344 (3,4) - Not sure if these are hidden slider, do you mind change them a bit?
03:20:932 (2) - Really hard to see slider.

[Booo~ Party!]
01:18:285 (3,4,5) - Is this intend? It's on wrong spacing, imo. A bit too far from 01:18:109 (2), maybe make its spacing like this



Fine mapset!

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

P A N wrote:

gratz for your first bubble nanaka-chan

CrystilonZ wrote:

congrats for first bubble
ดีใจล่วงหน้า สำหรับการแร้ง

TechnoMaster wrote:

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

Best map Ever. Would Love To Be Approved.

kantokun wrote:

Bubblee!!~~ lol

(ノ・ω・)ノ

SPOILER

424,284,86226,6,0,L|424:188,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,86579,2,0,L|96:183,1,95,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,86932,2,0,L|217:140,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,340,87285,2,0,L|279:340,1,95,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER