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Assertive Fluttershy - Boooring!

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Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 พฤษภาคม 2556 at 17:52:00

Artist: Assertive Fluttershy
Title: Boooring!
Tags: Dubstep Balloon Party P_A_N PAN Instrumental 100% No Feeble Cheering My Little Pony Friendship is Magic mlp
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5592kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Booo~ Party! (5 stars, 911 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 539 notes)
  3. Normal (4.13 stars, 307 notes)
  4. P A N's Easy (1.73 stars, 180 notes)
Download: Assertive Fluttershy - Boooring!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My First Map :'D
My second Favorite Instrumental
And my first Instrumental map 'w')b
Awesome music with Nightcore mod (:3)/
[Mapset]
P A N's Easy - Done
Nomal - Done
Hard - Done
Booo~ Party! - Done
Last edited by Natsuki Nanaka , edited 60 times in total.
TheAussie
128 posts
Joined January 2011
TheAussie
This is a nice beatmap.

i had fun playing it.
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Hard

00:07:873 (1) - ขยับไปที่ x:196 y:238 จะได้เป็นสี่เหลี่ยมสวยๆ
00:59:932 (2) - ขยับไปที่ x:256 y:218 จะได้ทับหาง slide สวยๆ
01:43:873 (3) - slide นี้วางไม่ค่อยสวย ?
01:49:520 (3) - ^ ?
03:38:050 (2) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slide ไปทางซ้าย 2 ช่อง ดูสวยกว่าไหม
03:38:579 (3) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slide ไปทางขวา 3 ช่่องเเล้วขึ้นบน 1 ช่อง ดูสวยกว่าไหม

ผมม้อดได้เเค่นี้หละเเมพมันเจ๋งอยูเเล้ว ดิฟยากสุดไม่มีไรให้ม้อด 55 ส่วน normal ยังไม่เสดรอเสดเเล้วม้อดให้

Edit: เออ Normal ทำให้ distance โน็ตเท่ากันด้วยนะเพราะมันคือดิฟง่ายสุด ตอนนี้รู้สึกจะไม่เท่ากัน
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka
SPOILER

P A N wrote:

Hard

00:07:873 (1) - ขยับไปที่ x:196 y:238 จะได้เป็นสี่เหลี่ยมสวยๆ
00:59:932 (2) - ขยับไปที่ x:256 y:218 จะได้ทับหาง slide สวยๆ
01:43:873 (3) - slide นี้วางไม่ค่อยสวย ?
01:49:520 (3) - ^ ?
03:38:050 (2) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slide ไปทางซ้าย 2 ช่อง ดูสวยกว่าไหม
03:38:579 (3) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slide ไปทางขวา 3 ช่่องเเล้วขึ้นบน 1 ช่อง ดูสวยกว่าไหม

ผมม้อดได้เเค่นี้หละเเมพมันเจ๋งอยูเเล้ว ดิฟยากสุดไม่มีไรให้ม้อด 55 ส่วน normal ยังไม่เสดรอเสดเเล้วม้อดให้

Edit: เออ Normal ทำให้ distance โน็ตเท่ากันด้วยนะเพราะมันคือดิฟง่ายสุด ตอนนี้รู้สึกจะไม่เท่ากัน

All fix. Thank :3
Foreverends
992 posts
Joined July 2011
Foreverends
Really great map 8-)
awesome
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hi ^^ M4M from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
Combo 3 and 4 looks exactly the same. If you want, delete one of them or make one of them darker

Your easiest diff (normal diff) has 4.13 stars, it's unrankable. Easiest diff in a mapset must be below 2.5 stars or between 2.5~3 stars. Consider making the normal diff easier (i notice the pattern in your normal diff, especially the chorus part, is a little bit difficult for your easiest diff) or ask someone to make you a guest diff

Booo~ Party!
AR-1 (to make it more fun to play)

00:02:756 (6) - place this circle in this beginning slider point 00:01:167 (5) -
00:10:697 (1,2,3) - why not mirror 00:10:167 (1,2,3) - ?
00:17:579 (2) - (merely suggestion) x:116 y: 224 so it will be the opposite of the previous slider
if you don't follow the suggestion above, 00:18:108 (3) - this slider should mirror the previous slider
00:24:285 (1,2,3, 4) - 4 grids to the left
00:24:285 (1,2,3) - x:112 y:275
00:50:226 (4) - how about making it like this, since the previous one is kinda hidden

01:21:109 (1) - remove nc
02:40:167 (1) - ^
02:42:991 (1) - ^
02:45:814 (1) - ^
03:27:814 (1) - ^
02:40:344 (3) - add nc (big white line)
02:43:167 (3) - ^
02:45:285 (5) - ^
03:27:638 (5) - ^
01:32:579 (6,7) - separate them a little bit
01:36:814 (3) - lower one grid
01:39:814 (6) - x:144 y:100
01:45:638 (4,5,6) - make them a little bit farther than this 01:45:285 (3) -
01:48:461 (4) - why not making it straight like this slider 01:47:403 (1) -
01:53:050 (1,1,1,1) - make them a little bit closer
02:05:050 (1) - x:124 y:252
02:05:403 (2) - x:256 y:136
02:18:814 (3,4) - don't make them touch each other
02:53:932 (6) - make it straight
03:01:520 (3,4) - stack them properly. 03:01:873 (4) - should be x: 256 y: 326
03:45:991 - to 04:02:844 - the distance should be a little bit closer

Hard
AR-2 or AR-3
HP+1

00:14:226 (1) - merely suggestion, make it a bit more curvy
00:19:167 (2,3) - stack them more properly. 00:19:520 (3) - should be x: 427 y:192
00:29:932 (1) - remove nc
00:32:756 (1) - ^
00:35:579 (1) - ^
00:55:344 (1) - ^
01:06:638 (1) - ^
02:36:991 (1) - ^
00:29:756 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:32:579 (5) - ^
00:35:403 (5) - ^
00:55:167 (5) - ^
01:06:461 (6) - ^
02:36:814 (6) - ^
00:47:403 (3) - a bit nazi, x: 354 y: 322
00:51:991 (4) - x:307 y:362
01:29:050 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other
03:43:167 (1,2) - ^
01:51:638 (1,2) - make them a little bit close to each other
02:19:873 (1,2) - ^
02:31:167 (1,2) - ^
03:05:050 (1,2) - ^
03:16:344 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:991 (1,2) - ^
02:54:991 (4) - x:200 y:152
03:07:167 (3,4) - move 4 grids to the left, so it will be adjacent with this circle 03:06:991 (2) -
03:10:697 (1,2) - separate them a bit
03:31:873 (1,2) - not symmetry

Normal
AR-1
if you want, decrease the slider velocity a bit (preferrably 1,10 or 1,00)

00:04:520 (1) - remove nc
00:04:520 (1) - ^
00:07:344 (1) - ^
00:10:167 (1) - ^
00:13:520 (1) - ^
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:19:167 (1) - ^
00:35:756 (1) - ^
00:38:579 (1) - ^
02:25:873 (1,1) - ^
03:27:991 (1) - ^
03:30:814 (1) - ^
03:39:285 (1) - ^
03:42:108 (1) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:05:756 (3) - ^
00:08:579 (3) - ^
00:14:226 (2) - ^
00:17:050 (3) - ^
00:19:873 (2) - ^
00:25:520 (4) - ^
00:36:814 (3) - ^
03:29:050 (3) - ^
03:31:873 (4) - ^
03:40:344 (2) - ^
03:43:167 (4) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - rotate by -4
00:18:108 (5) - this slider is touching the HP bar. lower it
00:30:108 (1,2) - this is a bit difficult for your easiest diff
00:48:108 (1,3) - overlay
01:30:461 (1) - separate this and these 01:31:168 (2,3,4) - a little

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song

Anyway, the song is nice ^^ and your mapping is great, so kudosu star~
Good luck for your ranking

useless bonus

my hand slipped i'm an idiot
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi ^^ M4M from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
Combo 3 and 4 looks exactly the same. If you want, delete one of them or make one of them darker Fix

Your easiest diff (normal diff) has 4.13 stars, it's unrankable. Easiest diff in a mapset must be below 2.5 stars or between 2.5~3 stars. Consider making the normal diff easier (i notice the pattern in your normal diff, especially the chorus part, is a little bit difficult for your easiest diff) or ask someone to make you a guest diff okay i'll find some guest diff

Booo~ Party!
AR-1 (to make it more fun to play) I think AR 9 is funner than 8

00:02:756 (6) - place this circle in this beginning slider point 00:01:167 (5) -
00:10:697 (1,2,3) - why not mirror 00:10:167 (1,2,3) - ?
00:17:579 (2) - (merely suggestion) x:116 y: 224 so it will be the opposite of the previous slider
if you don't follow the suggestion above, 00:18:108 (3) - this slider should mirror the previous slider
00:24:285 (1,2,3, 4) - 4 grids to the left
00:24:285 (1,2,3) - x:112 y:275
00:50:226 (4) - how about making it like this, since the previous one is kinda hidden

01:21:109 (1) - remove nc
02:40:167 (1) - ^
02:42:991 (1) - ^
02:45:814 (1) - ^
03:27:814 (1) - ^
02:40:344 (3) - add nc (big white line)
02:43:167 (3) - ^
02:45:285 (5) - ^
03:27:638 (5) - ^
01:32:579 (6,7) - separate them a little bit
01:36:814 (3) - lower one grid
01:39:814 (6) - x:144 y:100
01:45:638 (4,5,6) - make them a little bit farther than this 01:45:285 (3) -
01:48:461 (4) - why not making it straight like this slider 01:47:403 (1) -
01:53:050 (1,1,1,1) - make them a little bit closer
02:05:050 (1) - x:124 y:252
02:05:403 (2) - x:256 y:136
02:18:814 (3,4) - don't make them touch each other
02:53:932 (6) - make it straight
03:01:520 (3,4) - stack them properly. 03:01:873 (4) - should be x: 256 y: 326
03:45:991 - to 04:02:844 - the distance should be a little bit closer

Hard
AR-2 or AR-3
HP+1

00:14:226 (1) - merely suggestion, make it a bit more curvy
00:19:167 (2,3) - stack them more properly. 00:19:520 (3) - should be x: 427 y:192
00:29:932 (1) - remove nc
00:32:756 (1) - ^
00:35:579 (1) - ^
00:55:344 (1) - ^
01:06:638 (1) - ^
02:36:991 (1) - ^
00:29:756 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:32:579 (5) - ^
00:35:403 (5) - ^
00:55:167 (5) - ^
01:06:461 (6) - ^
02:36:814 (6) - ^
00:47:403 (3) - a bit nazi, x: 354 y: 322
00:51:991 (4) - x:307 y:362
01:29:050 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other
03:43:167 (1,2) - ^
01:51:638 (1,2) - make them a little bit close to each other
02:19:873 (1,2) - ^
02:31:167 (1,2) - ^
03:05:050 (1,2) - ^
03:16:344 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:991 (1,2) - ^
02:54:991 (4) - x:200 y:152
03:07:167 (3,4) - move 4 grids to the left, so it will be adjacent with this circle 03:06:991 (2) -
03:10:697 (1,2) - separate them a bit
03:31:873 (1,2) - not symmetry

Normal
AR-1
if you want, decrease the slider velocity a bit (preferrably 1,10 or 1,00)

00:04:520 (1) - remove nc
00:04:520 (1) - ^
00:07:344 (1) - ^
00:10:167 (1) - ^
00:13:520 (1) - ^
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:19:167 (1) - ^
00:35:756 (1) - ^
00:38:579 (1) - ^
02:25:873 (1,1) - ^
03:27:991 (1) - ^
03:30:814 (1) - ^
03:39:285 (1) - ^
03:42:108 (1) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - add nc (big white line)
00:05:756 (3) - ^
00:08:579 (3) - ^
00:14:226 (2) - ^
00:17:050 (3) - ^
00:19:873 (2) - ^
00:25:520 (4) - ^
00:36:814 (3) - ^
03:29:050 (3) - ^
03:31:873 (4) - ^
03:40:344 (2) - ^
03:43:167 (4) - ^
00:02:932 (4) - rotate by -4
00:18:108 (5) - this slider is touching the HP bar. lower it
00:30:108 (1,2) - this is a bit difficult for your easiest diff
00:48:108 (1,3) - overlay
01:30:461 (1) - separate this and these 01:31:168 (2,3,4) - a little

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song

Anyway, the song is nice ^^ and your mapping is great, so kudosu star~ Thanks >w>)/
Good luck for your ranking Thanks ^w^
useless bonus

my hand slipped i'm an idiot XD
Fix a lot Thanks :3
Betsuto
395 posts
Joined August 2011
Betsuto
Friend IRC mod #

SPOILER
21:02 Betsuto: เอาใหม่
21:02 Betsuto: - IRC -
21:04 Betsuto: 01:23:050 (4)- เลื่อนไปทางขวา 1 ช่อง จะได้ทับกับตัวเดิม
21:05 - N a n a k a -: ตอนแรกก็ก่ะจะทำ แต่ลังเล ; w ;
21:05 Betsuto: อันไหนอยู่ใกล้ ๆ ก็ลอง ๆ เอาทับกันดู
21:05 Betsuto: มันจะงาม ' w ')b
21:06 - N a n a k a -: ที่เราดูก็มีแค่ตรงนั้นแหละ
21:06 - N a n a k a -: ที่เหลือจะให้ modder ดูให้ >_>
21:06 Betsuto: 01:53:050 (1)-
21:06 Betsuto: ตรงนี้ อะนะ
21:07 - N a n a k a -: เปล่า
21:07 Betsuto: ต้องเลือกเอาซักอย่าง
21:07 - N a n a k a -: หมายถึงพวกโน๊ตซ้อน
21:07 Betsuto: ว่าจะรัวต่อไป หรือจะทำโน๊ตแบบตรงนี้
21:07 Betsuto: 02:04:344 (1)-
21:08 Betsuto: เพราะเสียงมันก็เหมือนๆ กัน (เสียงตรื้ด ๆ ๆ ๆ ) ก็มีตั้งแต่ต้นจนจบท่อนนี้
21:08 Betsuto: ต้องเลือกเอา (แค่แนะนำ จะไม่เอาหรือยังไงก็ได้ตรงนี้)
21:08 - N a n a k a -: แยกเป็น 2 พาร์ทไม่ได้สินะ
21:09 - N a n a k a -: รัวลองรัวหมดแล้ว
21:09 - N a n a k a -: แต่แบบนี้เข้ากว่าอ่ะ
21:09 Betsuto: 02:05:403 (2)- เอาไปทับ 2 ตัวที่แล้ว
21:09 Betsuto: 02:06:108 (2)- ด้วย
21:10 - N a n a k a -: mod อีกคนบอกให้มาไว้ตรงนี้ = ="
21:10 Betsuto: แล้วปรับโน๊ต ตรงนี้ใหม่ 02:05:756 (1,2,1,2)-
21:10 Betsuto: แงะ = =
21:10 - N a n a k a -: จะวางให้สวยๆใช่มะ
21:10 Betsuto: มันจะสวยกว่าเยอะเยถ้าทำเป็นรูปสี่เหลี่ยมขนมเปียก
21:10 - N a n a k a -: จะได้ทำถูก
21:11 Betsuto: เหมือนอันเนี้ย 02:07:167 (1,2,1,2)-
21:11 - N a n a k a -: ที่จริงหมดนี่ทำรูป 6 เหลี่ยมได้นะ
21:11 - N a n a k a -: ไม่สิ
21:11 - N a n a k a -: 8 เหลี่ยม
21:12 Betsuto: 02:25:167 (4)- อักษร Reverse โดน 300 บัง
21:12 Betsuto: (300 ของ 2)
21:13 - N a n a k a -: อืม จะเอาลงหรือเอาขึ้นดี = =
21:13 Betsuto: เอาขยับไปทางซ้าย :D // โดนถีบ
21:13 - N a n a k a -: เอาขึ้นแล้วกัน
21:13 - N a n a k a -: เอาลงจะ flow กว่ามะ?
21:15 Betsuto: ตรงนั้น เอาแบบนี้ดีมะ ?
21:15 Betsuto: http://puu.sh/2eFq6
21:15 - N a n a k a -: อืมก็ดี
21:16 Betsuto: 03:01:520 (3,4)- เอาสไลด์ทั้ง 2 อัน เลื่อนลงมา 1 grid มันจะได้ไปทับโน๊ตอันเก่า (3)
21:17 Betsuto: 03:21:991 - ลองวาง ๆ ใหม่ ให้มันสวยกว่านี้
21:17 Betsuto: มันดูเอียง ๆ
21:18 - N a n a k a -: อันนั้นไม่ได้ก่ะ = =
21:18 Betsuto: 03:35:756 (5)- โดน 300 ของ (3) บัง \o/
21:19 - N a n a k a -: วางยังไงให้หมุนมากลมได้
21:19 - N a n a k a -: orz
21:19 Betsuto: จำลองก่อน
21:19 - N a n a k a -: ใช้สไลด์เป็นแนวดีดีไหมเนี่ย
21:19 Betsuto: วาดสไลด์เดอร์ให้โค้งกลม ๆ
21:19 Betsuto: แล้วค่อยวางให้มันตรงกับสไลด์เดอร์ แล้วลบสไลด์เดอร์ออก
21:20 Betsuto: เข้าใจมิ ? ' 3 '
21:20 - N a n a k a -: เข้าใจ
21:23 - N a n a k a -: osu.ppy.sh/ss/646633
21:23 - N a n a k a -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/646633
21:23 - N a n a k a -: เอียงอยู่ดี orz
21:24 Betsuto: ช่าง
21:24 Betsuto: แค่นั้นก็สวยละ
21:24 Betsuto: เริ่มขี้เกียจ
21:24 Betsuto: ' w '
21:24 Betsuto: เอาเป็นว่าจะเช็คแค่ unrankable ก็พอนะ
21:24 - N a n a k a -: อ่าฮะ
21:25 Betsuto: 00:31:697 (2)- ตรงนี้ ไม่รู้จะโดนไหม แต่กันไว้ก่อน มันโดน 300 บัง Reverse
21:25 Betsuto: ย้ายซะ
21:25 - N a n a k a -: บีงจากอันไหน
21:25 Betsuto: อันเก่า
21:26 Betsuto: (2)
21:26 Betsuto: 00:29:932 (2)-
21:26 Betsuto: ไม่รู้จะเรียกว่าบังไหม
21:26 Betsuto: แต่กันไว้ก่อน
21:27 - N a n a k a -: เราไม่เห็นโน๊ตตัวไหนมันจะบังได้เลยนะ
21:27 Betsuto: ก็ถึงบอกว่าไม่รู้ไงว่าจะเรียกว่าบังรึเปล่า = =
21:27 Betsuto: แต่มันเสี่ยงโดน unrankable อะตรงนี้
21:27 - N a n a k a -: งั้นก็ปล่อยไป
21:28 - N a n a k a -: ถ้าย้ายก็ต้องย้ายสไลด์ซ้ายด้วย
21:28 - N a n a k a -: ให้มันสมดุล ' w '
21:30 - N a n a k a -: ย้ายล่ะ
21:30 - N a n a k a -: ดึกออกมา 5 gird
21:30 Betsuto: ตรงนี้ 03:14:932 (1)- ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นประมาณนี้ดูhttp://puu.sh/2eFI1
21:30 Betsuto: มันจะงามกว่า ' w '
21:30 Betsuto: .. อันนี้ Hardนะ ลืมบอก
21:30 - N a n a k a -: เกือบงง
21:31 Betsuto: = =
21:31 Betsuto: โทษที ลืมบอก
21:31 Betsuto: (เบลอ)
21:31 Betsuto: วันนี้เอ๋อ ๆ ตั้งแต่เช้าละ
21:31 - N a n a k a -: เอ้ย
21:31 Betsuto: ไปเสิร์ฟน้ำที่โรงเรียน ล้ม .. - -
21:31 - N a n a k a -: โน๊ต 1 อยู่ห่างเลยแฮะ
21:31 - N a n a k a -: มันควรติดกับสไลด์เก่า
21:31 - N a n a k a -: = =
21:31 Betsuto: Yes
21:32 Betsuto: ดึงลงมา
21:32 Betsuto: เอาประมาณนี้
21:33 Betsuto: ฮุ ...
21:33 - N a n a k a -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/646659
21:33 Betsuto: puush ไม่ทำงาน
21:33 Betsuto: = =
21:33 - N a n a k a -: พอได้ไหม
21:33 Betsuto: ประมาณนี้
21:33 Betsuto: http://puu.sh/2eFMZ
21:34 Betsuto: ใหม่ ๆ เผื่อมองไม่ค่อยถนัด
21:34 Betsuto: http://puu.sh/2eFNa
21:34 Betsuto: ดึง (4) ลงมาแทนที่จะเอา 1 ขึ้น
21:35 Betsuto: โยะ ...
21:35 Betsuto: 03:20:579 (1)-
21:35 Betsuto: อญู่ไกลเกิน
21:35 - N a n a k a -: เห็นล่ะ
21:36 Betsuto: หมดละ Hard
21:36 Betsuto: เช็ค Unrankable
21:36 - N a n a k a -: normal นี่ถ้าจะเละ
21:36 - N a n a k a -: orz
21:37 Betsuto: 00:25:167 (3,1)-
21:37 Betsuto: เอางี้จริงงะ = =
21:37 - N a n a k a -: ดีไหม?
21:37 Betsuto: ดึงมันลงมา ช่องนึงทั้งคู่
21:37 Betsuto: ถ้าจะย้อนมาก็ทำแบบนี้
21:37 Betsuto: แต่ถ้าจะไม่ให้เหมือนกันก็ลองวางแบบอื่น
21:38 - N a n a k a -: มีที่นั้นที่เดียวแหละ
21:38 - N a n a k a -: ทั้งเพลงมีแบบนั้นอยู่อันเดียว
21:39 Betsuto: 01:29:579 (2)- ลองวางใหม่ดู เพราะพวกเล่นครั้งแรก ๆ จะนึกว่ามันจะย้อนกลับแค่ครั้งเดียวเหมือนอันที่แล้ว (แต่อันนี้มันย้อน 2 ครั้ง)
21:40 Betsuto: 01:40:344 (1,2,3)- ลองประมาณนี้ดู http://puu.sh/2eFVq
21:40 - N a n a k a -: เอาโน๊ตปกติไปซ้อน 1 จะดีไหม?
21:40 Betsuto: ลองดู
21:41 Betsuto: โฮะ ๆ แว่บ ๆ
21:41 Betsuto: 02:26:579 (6)-
21:41 Betsuto: หางสไลด์ เตลิกเส้น lol
21:41 Betsuto: เตลิด*
21:42 - N a n a k a -: lol ไม่ได้มอง
21:42 - N a n a k a -: พอดีปรับสไลด์ลงเลยต้องปรับโน๊ตใหม่หมด
21:42 - N a n a k a -: อาจมาหลุดมาบ้าง
21:42 Betsuto: 02:59:932 (2)- เหมือนกะอันก่อนหน้า
21:42 Betsuto: lol
21:43 Betsuto: 03:12:814 (2,3,4,6,7,8)- เปลี่ยนเป็น สไลด์เดอร์ แทน
21:43 Betsuto: ยากไปสำหรับ Normal
21:43 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/2eG0J
21:43 - N a n a k a -: ดีไหม?
21:44 Betsuto: ก็ดี
21:44 Betsuto: ส่วนของปังนี่ไม่น่าจะมีปัญหากะ unranked
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Timing looks good!
Also I love this map, good luck~
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Timing looks good!
Also I love this map, good luck~
Thanks >w<)/
gyuwife
19 posts
Joined October 2012
gyuwife
Random mod

P A N's Easy

New combo should start at big white line

00:02:932 (4) - add nc
00:04:520 (1) - remove nc
00:05:756 (3) - add nc
00:07:873 (1) - remove nc
00:08:579 (3) - add nc
00:08:579 (3) - this slider is kinda off with the previous circles. Align it better
00:18:638 (2) - the middle square point should be x:324 y:264
00:30:461 (1) - remove nc
00:41:050 (3) - multiple reverse like this can confuse beginners
01:19:167 - to 01:19:256 - flash kiai is unnecessary, imo
01:24:814 (4) - add nc
01:26:226 (6) - can confuse beginners
02:11:403 (3) - ^
02:20:579 (4) - up one grid
02:31:167 (1) - remove nc
02:32:579 (2) - add nc
02:33:991 (1) - remove nc
02:56:579 (3) - also can confuse beginners
03:03:638 (4) - add nc
03:04:697 (1) - remove nc
03:06:461 (4) - add nc
03:07:520 (1) - remove nc
03:11:050 (1) - ^
03:14:932 (4) - add nc
03:14:932 (4,1) - align them betterwill be more beautiful, and the rest should follow
SPOILER
03:15:285 (1) - remove nc
03:16:697 (1) - ^
03:17:756 (2) - add nc
03:19:520 (1) - remove nc
03:38:226 (1) - ^
03:40:344 (3) - add nc
03:41:756 (1) - remove nc

I'm sorry for only modding one diff i'm only good at modding easy diff
And this mapset is indeed awesome ;)
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my mod ! :D
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
okay.
-P A N's Easy -
01:29:138 - :arrow: the difficulty is the easiest of this map.
when the spinner isn't finished, the hit circle can't arrive here.
please be careful about this.
03:22:873 - ^

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
I only can find those.. sorry! >.<!
:D Good luck to you! ♥
Serafita_old
Serafita_old
Very cool map! ^_^
Normal
00:44:226 - I think that this need circles
00:44:579 - I think that this need circles
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
All fix

thanks gyuwife and - Miomio Chii -

:3
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

TERO wrote:

Very cool map! ^_^
Normal
00:44:226 - I think that this need circles ← nope, here not have any sound
00:44:579 - I think that this need circles ← ↑
Thanks for mod & star ( ' w ')
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
that last note !

SPOILER
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

P A N wrote:

that last note !

SPOILER
LOL Hidden note
//runs
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
luxoDeh
Hi from my modding queue!

NORMAL

00:50:226 (4,1) - stack them perfectly
03:45:991 (1) - maybe it's a bit confusing in this position... I fail it everytime XD

nothing on easy and hard... O.o very good map! ... take this star
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi from my modding queue!

NORMAL

00:50:226 (4,1) - stack them perfectly ◄ fix
03:45:991 (1) - maybe it's a bit confusing in this position... I fail it everytime XD ◄ haha lot people fail this point, ok fix XD

nothing on easy and hard... O.o very good map! ... take this star ◄Thanks :3
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Hi form ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Booo~ Party!]
This diff have not breaks so if it not approval it's unrankable.
02:11:403 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Nothing say about patterns only one thing
03:45:638 (1,2,3) - really strange spacing for 1/3 maybe if i don't saw it in editor I failed it
[Hard]
01:04:344 (3) - to round about (2)
SPOILER
01:06:991 (3,4) - It's look like stream. It maybe confused players
02:29:403 (4,1) - spacing too far o.o looks like 1/2
Good diff but some patterns too hard for that.
[Normal]
01:41:403 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end)
03:34:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
[Easy]
01:30:814 (1) - Add NC because this note after spinner (it's bug)
03:01:167 (1) - ^
03:24:814 (1) - ^

That's all. Good map. Good luck!
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Hellzero wrote:

Hi form ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Booo~ Party!]
This diff have not breaks so if it not approval it's unrankable. ◄ start to 01:08:050 - end 01:18:991 -
02:11:403 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). ◄ Fix
Nothing say about patterns only one thing
03:45:638 (1,2,3) - really strange spacing for 1/3 maybe if i don't saw it in editor I failed it ◄ Fix
[Hard]
01:04:344 (3) - to round about (2) ◄ Fix
SPOILER
01:06:991 (3,4) - It's look like stream. It maybe confused players ◄ Fix
02:29:403 (4,1) - spacing too far o.o looks like 1/2 ◄ Fix
Good diff but some patterns too hard for that. I think it's fun for play ' w ')
[Normal]
01:41:403 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ Fix
03:34:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ Fix
[Easy]
01:30:814 (1) - Add NC because this note after spinner (it's bug)
03:01:167 (1) - ^
03:24:814 (1) - ^

P A N wrote:

all fixed.
That's all. Good map. Good luck! Thanks >w<)/
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
อุเฮะ
[Easy]
  1. เส้นเขียวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:197 -
  2. 01:19:167 (1) - ใช้ normal-finish ธรรมดาจฟังดูดีกว่าเยอะ
  3. 01:30:461 - แอดสไลเดอตรงนี้แทนแล้วลบ 01:30:814 (2) - จะเล่นง่ายกว่าเยอะ เพราะเว้นจังหวะนานๆจะอ่านจังหวะยาก
  4. 01:35:050 (2) - ไม่ควรอย่างยิ่ง เพราะมันคือ Easy เวลาโน๊ตทับกันมันจะยากไป + วางทับมิดแบบนี้ hit-burst ของ 01:33:638 (1) - จะมาบังอีกที
  5. 02:21:285 (1,2) - ^
  6. 02:24:108 (1,2) - ไอสองตัวนี้เหตุผลก็คล้ายๆกัน แต่มันจะทับตัวหน้า อ่านยากเหมือนกัน
  7. 03:01:167 (1) - เหตุผลเหมือนกับ kiai อันบน
  8. 03:43:167 (1,2) - FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-
[Normal]
  1. 01:41:403 (5) - ท้ายสไลเดอไม่ snap
  2. 03:34:344 (3) - ^
  3. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:285 -
  4. 00:17:579 (2,3) - ลากออกมา มันบังกัน hit-burst มองแทบไม่เห็นสไลเดอ เทคนิคแบบนี้ไปใช้ในดิฟยากกว่านี้โน่น
  5. 00:25:167 (3) - ทับกันเพื่อ ? บอกตรงๆ ทับกันแบบนี้มันยากไปสำหรับ Normal นะ
  6. 00:30:108 (1) - ^
  7. 00:39:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ปิด whistle ให้หมด ปวดตับไม่เข้าเบย
  8. 00:57:991 (3,4) - DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: ลากออกมาาาา เหตุผลเดียวกับ Easy
  9. 01:00:814 (3,4) - DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
  10. 01:33:991 (2) - ถ้าจะทับกันแบบนี้ต้อง NC
  11. 01:50:932 (2) - ^
  12. 02:12:109 (2) - ^
  13. 02:15:638 (1) - ลบ NC ไปใส่มาทำไม
  14. 02:29:050 (4) - NC
  15. 02:37:520 (2) - พี่ว่าสไลเดอมันจบตรงนี้นะ 02:37:873 -
  16. 03:01:520 (2,4) - FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUU-
  17. 03:05:756 (4) - ^
  18. 03:15:638 (2) - ^
  19. 03:17:050 (4) - ^
  20. 03:25:520 (5) - ลากลงมาไว้ข้างล่างจะดีกว่า

[Hard]
  1. ยากกว่า Insane อีก...
  2. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:197 -
  3. 00:29:756 (1) - เปลี่ยนไปทับ (2) จะดีมาก
  4. 00:33:461 (5,6,7) - ใช้ 1/4 สไลด + reverse x1 แค่ 2 ตัวจะง่ายกว่าเยอะ ไม่ก็กดค้างไปเลยคล้ายๆตัวนี้ 00:46:697 (1) - or 02:31:167 (1,2) -
  5. 00:56:050 (4,5,6) - ^
  6. 02:13:520 (1) - spacing
  7. 02:26:403 (4,5,6) - ow
  8. 03:20:314 (4,5,6) -
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 02:11:403 (1) - ท้ายสไลเดอไม่ snap
  2. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:197 -
  3. 00:33:461 (5) - NC
  4. 00:44:226 (1) - เปลี่ยนเป็น spinner มันส์กว่าเยอะ
  5. 00:50:226 (4) - แนวนี้คุ้นๆ
  6. 00:56:050 (5) - NC
  7. 01:18:638 (6) - ^
  8. 01:39:461 (4) - ^
  9. 02:14:579 (1) - spin
  10. 02:23:756 (7) - NC
  11. 02:26:403 (5) - ^
  12. 02:48:991 (6) - ^
  13. 03:27:814 (2,4,8) - NC
  14. 03:34:167 (6) - ^
  15. 03:45:638 (1,2,3) - eh....reverse slider ดีกว่ามั้ง
  16. 04:02:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Weeeeee
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka
SPOILER

Fumika wrote:

อุเฮะ
[Normal]
  1. 01:41:403 (5) - ท้ายสไลเดอไม่ snap ◄ Fix
  2. 03:34:344 (3) - ^
  3. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:285 - ◄ Fix
  4. 00:17:579 (2,3) - ลากออกมา มันบังกัน hit-burst มองแทบไม่เห็นสไลเดอ เทคนิคแบบนี้ไปใช้ในดิฟยากกว่านี้โน่น ◄ Fix
  5. 00:25:167 (3) - ทับกันเพื่อ ? บอกตรงๆ ทับกันแบบนี้มันยากไปสำหรับ Normal นะ ◄ Fix
  6. 00:30:108 (1) - ^ ◄ ↑
  7. 00:39:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ปิด whistle ให้หมด ปวดตับไม่เข้าเบย ◄ Fix
  8. 00:57:991 (3,4) - DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: ลากออกมาาาา เหตุผลเดียวกับ Easy ◄ Fix
  9. 01:00:814 (3,4) - DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: ◄ XDDDD
  10. 01:33:991 (2) - ถ้าจะทับกันแบบนี้ต้อง NC ◄ Fix
  11. 01:50:932 (2) - ^ ◄ ↑
  12. 02:12:109 (2) - ^ ◄ ↑
  13. 02:15:638 (1) - ลบ NC ไปใส่มาทำไม ◄ Fix
  14. 02:29:050 (4) - NC ◄ Fix
  15. 02:37:520 (2) - พี่ว่าสไลเดอมันจบตรงนี้นะ 02:37:873 - ◄ Fix
  16. 03:01:520 (2,4) - FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUU- ◄ Fix
  17. 03:05:756 (4) - ^ ◄ ↑
  18. 03:15:638 (2) - ^ ◄ ↑
  19. 03:17:050 (4) - ^ ◄ ↑
  20. 03:25:520 (5) - ลากลงมาไว้ข้างล่างจะดีกว่า ◄ Fix

[Hard]
  1. ยากกว่า Insane อีก... น่าจะง่ายขึ้นแล้วนะ
  2. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:197 - ◄ Fix
  3. 00:29:756 (1) - เปลี่ยนไปทับ (2) จะดีมาก ◄ Fix
  4. 00:33:461 (5,6,7) - ใช้ 1/4 สไลด + reverse x1 แค่ 2 ตัวจะง่ายกว่าเยอะ ไม่ก็กดค้างไปเลยคล้ายๆตัวนี้ 00:46:697 (1) - or 02:31:167 (1,2) - ◄ Fix
  5. 00:56:050 (4,5,6) - ^ ◄ ↑
  6. 02:13:520 (1) - spacing ◄ Fix
  7. 02:26:403 (4,5,6) - ow ◄ ' w '
  8. 03:20:314 (4,5,6) - ◄ = w =)[spoilerbox]
↑ Truestory
[Insane]
  1. 02:11:403 (1) - ท้ายสไลเดอไม่ snap ◄ Fix
  2. เส้นเขี้ยวเบี้ยว 01:36:208 - snap to 01:36:197 - ◄ Fix
  3. 00:33:461 (5) - NC ◄ Fix
  4. 00:44:226 (1) - เปลี่ยนเป็น spinner มันส์กว่าเยอะ ◄ Fix
  5. 00:50:226 (4) - แนวนี้คุ้นๆ ◄ \o\
  6. 00:56:050 (5) - NC ◄ Fix
  7. 01:18:638 (6) - ^ ◄ ↑
  8. 01:39:461 (4) - ^ ◄ ↑
  9. 02:14:579 (1) - spin ◄ Fix
  10. 02:23:756 (7) - NC ◄ Fix
  11. 02:26:403 (5) - ^ ◄ ↑
  12. 02:48:991 (6) - ^ ◄ ↑
  13. 03:27:814 (2,4,8) - NC ◄ Fix
  14. 03:34:167 (6) - ^ ◄ ↑
  15. 03:45:638 (1,2,3) - eh....reverse slider ดีกว่ามั้ง ◄ Fix
  16. 04:02:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Weeeeee ◄ wwwwww~
Thanks for mod fumibaka XD //got slaps
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
All fixed in Easy XD thanks fu------
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

P A N's Easy
Good diff, very solid.
I like how you changed the pacing in the different parts.
the song is a bit repetitive but you managed to make an interesting diff pretty well.
my only complaint would be the spinners at 01:27:638 (1) - and 02:57:991 (1) - maybe make the hitsounds of them soft.

Normal
The rhythm is pretty good but the spacing is very dense.
many patterns are clustered up which causes ugly overlaps. There are also a few overlaps that could be easily avoided.
the distance snap is too low imo

overlaps such as 00:05:050 (2) - and 00:47:403 (5,1) - shouldn't happen

Hard
The flow is good, but the same problem occurs here too. I think you used too many unnecessary overlaps which makes the map look a bit messy for me.
the sliderspeed and distance snap is okay here, because I like the flow of the map.

Booo~ Party!
Nice use of whistle spam here :D
personally I don't really like streams that start with a 1/4 repeat slider, it's kinda hard to pick up the circles after it
the map was pretty nice but the end is weird, the 1/4 repeat slider spam feels a bit overmapped and it's very hard to keep up the stream after them because you can't hear it well in the song.. if this makes sense ._.
KantoKun
1,114 posts
Joined December 2011
KantoKun
IRC mods lol
Mods
10:23 - N a n a k a -: เราย่อ = ="
10:23 kantokun: อ่อๆ
10:23 - N a n a k a -: ตรง In gane chat
10:23 kantokun: ไพรเวทแมชเสชป้ะ?
10:23 - N a n a k a -: อือ
10:26 kantokun: 02:06:461 (2) - ทำไมเป็นเสียงนี้ ~
10:26 kantokun: Easy
10:26 - N a n a k a -: ดิฟหนายยยย
10:27 - N a n a k a -: ถูกแล้วนา
10:27 kantokun: น่าจะเป็น hitfinish มากกว่า เพราะถึงจังหวะเพลงจะซอฟลงแต่ใส่ clap แบบนี่แหละแปลกๆ
10:27 kantokun: 02:09:285 (4) -
10:28 kantokun: นี่ด้วย =A=
10:28 - N a n a k a -: แบบนั้นก็ต้องเปลี่ยนทุกดิฟนะเอ้อ
10:28 kantokun: Fsp 'yhow,j9hv'dHwfh
10:28 - N a n a k a -: ช่วงนี้เพลงมันเบานะ
10:28 - N a n a k a -: ไม่มี finish
10:29 - N a n a k a -: ลองฟังแต่เพลงดูสิ
10:29 - N a n a k a -: ไม่น่าจะใช้ finish ได้เลย
10:29 kantokun: 02:50:932 (2) - สลับหัวกับท้ายสไลด๋มั้ย?
10:30 kantokun: แบบนั้นน่าจะยากไปสำหรับ Easy
10:30 - N a n a k a -: อันนี้ต้องถามปัง
10:31 - N a n a k a -: ถ้ากลับหัวก็ต้องดึงสไลด์ลงมาอ่ะ
10:31 kantokun: มมีแค่นี้แล Easy
10:32 - N a n a k a -: อ่า
10:32 kantokun: normal
10:32 - N a n a k a -: facepalm ใช่ไหมล่ะ
10:33 - N a n a k a -: lol
10:33 kantokun: 00:20:932 (3) - ตัวนี้เสียงสไลด์เป็น whistle แล้วแสบหูดีจับ =...=
10:33 - N a n a k a -: ต้องแก้หมดอ่ะสิ = ="
10:34 kantokun: ไม่รู้สิ แต่มันแสบหู
10:34 kantokun: 00:38:579 (3) - x:172 y:212
10:34 - N a n a k a -: อ้อ
10:34 - N a n a k a -: เสียงสไลด์
10:34 - N a n a k a -: = ="
10:34 - N a n a k a -: เอาออกล่ะ
10:35 kantokun: 00:38:932 (4) - x:108 y:128
10:35 - N a n a k a -: fix :3
10:35 kantokun: 00:39:285 (5) - x:44 y:212
10:37 kantokun: 01:38:226 (4,5) - เอา 4 ออกจะ 5
10:37 - N a n a k a -: ดึงยังไงให้ได้ 108 128 น่ะ
10:38 - N a n a k a -: เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลด์
10:38 - N a n a k a -: กลับ
10:38 kantokun: ได้ๆ
10:38 kantokun: ใช้ GS เป็น Tiny ป่าว่ะ
10:38 - N a n a k a -: ใช่
10:39 kantokun: งั้นก็ทำได้ 108 128
10:39 kantokun: เครื่องผมยังได้เลย
10:39 - N a n a k a -: เอิ่ม
10:39 - N a n a k a -: ใช่ distance เท่าไร
10:40 kantokun: ดูค่า distance ตรงไหนอ่ะ -...- ไม่เคยเปิด
10:40 - N a n a k a -: Alt = ="
10:40 - N a n a k a -: เราใช้ 1.0 นะ
10:40 - N a n a k a -: ใช้ทั้งแมพอ่ะ
10:40 kantokun: 1.0
10:41 - N a n a k a -: ลากเป็น 108 136 แทนแล้วกัน
10:42 - N a n a k a -: กับ 40 212
10:42 kantokun: อ่าๆ
10:42 kantokun: เอาให้ตรง
10:42 kantokun: ตังแต่ kiai แรก คิดว่า ยากมากสำหรับ normal อ่ะนะ
10:42 - N a n a k a -: นั่นแหละว่าจะทำใหม่
10:43 kantokun: 01:53:050 (1) - เอาออกมาที่อื่น เดี๋ยวคนเล่นมองมะเห็น
10:43 - N a n a k a -: okay
10:43 - N a n a k a -: ACTION < เล่นเองโดนเอง
10:44 kantokun: เล่นเสียง สไลเดอร์ทริกเป็นมะ
10:44 - N a n a k a -: เป็น
10:45 - N a n a k a -: แต่ขี้เกียจทำ
10:45 - N a n a k a -: orz
10:45 kantokun: จริงๆ เพลงแบบเนี่ย ควรจะใช่ slider trick สำหรับ Easy แล้วก็นอลมอล =...
10:45 kantokun: เพราะถ้าเอาโน็ตละเสียงยากเกินไป
10:46 kantokun: หมดและ normal
10:46 - N a n a k a -: ถ้าให้ทำก็ได้อยู่
10:47 kantokun: Hard
10:47 kantokun: 00:06:814 (3,1) - ไกลเกิน
10:48 - N a n a k a -: fix
10:48 kantokun: whistle = w normal = n 00:07:344 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - น่าจะเป็น w n n w n n w มากกว่านะ แทบทุกอันเบย
10:50 - N a n a k a -: แก้เป็น w n n w n w w
10:51 kantokun: อ่าได้ๆ
10:53 kantokun: 03:09:020 (4,5,6) - เรียงดีๆ สิ -3-
10:53 - N a n a k a -: นั่นดีนะ
10:53 - N a n a k a -: ดูดีๆเราเรียงยังไง
10:54 kantokun: อ่าเห็นและๆ
10:54 kantokun: หมดแบ้ว Hard
10:55 kantokun: ต่อไปก็ Boooring! Orz
10:56 - N a n a k a -: ดิฟนี้ไม่ค่อยมีใครม็อดไม่รู้ทำไม lol
10:57 kantokun: Boooring ไม่มีไรให้ม้อแบ้ว >3< มีแค่ถ้าเป็นอินเซนเวลารัวนานะไม่ต้องใช้สไลด์กลับ
10:57 kantokun: น่าจะรัวไปเลยมากกว่า =s=
10:57 kantokun: เสร็จแบ้ววว
10:57 - N a n a k a -: โพสเบย :3
Hope you beatmap rank in soon!!~~~
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Hi from my queue! You posted there 13 days ago, sorry for the delay but I had to study a lot :cry:

General

You have a lot of unused green sections in easy, normal and hard, maybe remove some of them

P A N's Easy

01:04:344 (2) - This slider isn't blanketted with the prrevious one, check it and try to arrange it a bit better
01:27:638 (1) - I'd end this in 01:29:756
01:31:520 (2) - Final sliderpoint 1 grid up for perfect symmetry
02:15:285 - I'd add a note with finish in 391|247 since there is a sound here
02:21:285 (1) - Move final sliderpoint in 188|306 for perfect symmetry
02:57:991 (1) - Again, end this in 03:00:108
03:20:932 (1) - Move this to 320|354 and put it symmetric to the center
03:24:108 - Add a note?
03:44:579 (2) - Move to 186|125 for perfect symmetry

Normal

00:45:285 (1) - I'd put a NC here
00:50:932 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern. (1) and (2) aren't well blanketted. Also, (1) and (3) are overlapped and this is horrible to see...
00:57:638 (2) - Move to 180|234 because actually it's too near to the slider
01:04:697 (4,1) - Improve this blanket a bit
01:27:638 (1,2,3) - They are a bit weird, you should replace them with two slider with two repeats, they sound better imo, and they are easier to read
01:29:050 (1,2,3) - The same. Replace the first two slider with a slider with two repeats, then start a slider in 01:29:756 and end it in 01:30:108
01:50:932 (1) - Why this NC?
02:29:756 (1,2) - They are too near...
02:57:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think you know what I'm going to say for this part
03:05:756 (1) - Why this NC?
03:06:461 (1,2) - I don't like this overlap
03:27:991 (3) - Move to 172|312 because it's too near to the slider

There are a lot of non-perfect blankets. I didn't point out everyone of them but please check and fix them, this diff can be better in my opinion :P

Hard

00:04:873 (2,5) - Ugly to see... They are too near. Also, try a ctrl+g on 00:04:873 (2) for a better flow
00:09:108 (2,3) - Blanket! The second slider also overlaps with the following note
00:48:814 (3,4) - Move (3) 1 grid down and 1 grid right and move (4) 1 grid up and 1 grid left
01:06:638 (2,3) - Improve this blanket
01:29:050 (1,2) - Overlap...
02:21:814 (2,3) - Blanket

I like this diff a lot, but please, fix the bad overlaps and the blankets

Boooo etc. (lol)

00:19:697 (5) - I think this is supposed to be in 268|236
01:01:873 (7,2) - Stack them properly
01:29:403 (3) - I think that you should start here that 1/4 stream since 1/4 sounds start here
01:38:226 (4,5) - Here too. Stack these sliders properly!
01:40:873 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this spacing...
02:03:991 (3,4) - Select these two notes and do ctrl+g. In my opinion it flows better but I'm not sure
02:59:756 (3) - The same of before, start here the 1/4 stream
___________________________________________________

Well, your map is epic. But Normal and Hard can be muuuch better if you fix all bad blankets, overlaps etc.
The final stream in Insane is epic.
Star :)
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
all fixed except this:

03:24:108 - Add a note? it's hard to get 300
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka
SPOILER

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Normal
The rhythm is pretty good but the spacing is very dense.
many patterns are clustered up which causes ugly overlaps. There are also a few overlaps that could be easily avoided.
the distance snap is too low imo

overlaps such as 00:05:050 (2) - and 00:47:403 (5,1) - shouldn't happen ◄ I'm going to remake ._.

Hard
The flow is good, but the same problem occurs here too. I think you used too many unnecessary overlaps which makes the map look a bit messy for me.
the sliderspeed and distance snap is okay here, because I like the flow of the map.

Booo~ Party!
Nice use of whistle spam here :D
personally I don't really like streams that start with a 1/4 repeat slider, it's kinda hard to pick up the circles after it
the map was pretty nice but the end is weird, the 1/4 repeat slider spam feels a bit overmapped and it's very hard to keep up the stream after them because you can't hear it well in the song.. if this makes sense ._. ◄ I just try volume up
Thanks for testplay happy30 >w<)//

SPOILER

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue! You posted there 13 days ago, sorry for the delay but I had to study a lot :cry:

General

You have a lot of unused green sections in easy, normal and hard, maybe remove some of them ◄ Fix

Normal

00:45:285 (1) - I'd put a NC here
00:50:932 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern. (1) and (2) aren't well blanketted. Also, (1) and (3) are overlapped and this is horrible to see...
00:57:638 (2) - Move to 180|234 because actually it's too near to the slider
01:04:697 (4,1) - Improve this blanket a bit
01:27:638 (1,2,3) - They are a bit weird, you should replace them with two slider with two repeats, they sound better imo, and they are easier to read
01:29:050 (1,2,3) - The same. Replace the first two slider with a slider with two repeats, then start a slider in 01:29:756 and end it in 01:30:108
01:50:932 (1) - Why this NC?
02:29:756 (1,2) - They are too near...
02:57:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think you know what I'm going to say for this part
03:05:756 (1) - Why this NC?
03:06:461 (1,2) - I don't like this overlap
03:27:991 (3) - Move to 172|312 because it's too near to the slider

There are a lot of non-perfect blankets. I didn't point out everyone of them but please check and fix them, this diff can be better in my opinion :P ◄ I'll Remap this XP

Hard

00:04:873 (2,5) - Ugly to see... They are too near. Also, try a ctrl+g on 00:04:873 (2) for a better flow ◄ Fix
00:09:108 (2,3) - Blanket! The second slider also overlaps with the following note ◄ Fix
00:48:814 (3,4) - Move (3) 1 grid down and 1 grid right and move (4) 1 grid up and 1 grid left ◄ Fix
01:06:638 (2,3) - Improve this blanket ◄ Fix
01:29:050 (1,2) - Overlap... ◄ moved.
02:21:814 (2,3) - Blanket ◄ Fix

I like this diff a lot, but please, fix the bad overlaps and the blankets ◄ Okay :D

Boooo etc. (lol)

00:19:697 (5) - I think this is supposed to be in 268|236 ◄ Fix
01:01:873 (7,2) - Stack them properly ◄ Fix
01:29:403 (3) - I think that you should start here that 1/4 stream since 1/4 sounds start here ◄ Nope.
01:38:226 (4,5) - Here too. Stack these sliders properly! ◄ Fix
01:40:873 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this spacing... ◄ Fix
02:03:991 (3,4) - Select these two notes and do ctrl+g. In my opinion it flows better but I'm not sure ◄ Fix
02:59:756 (3) - The same of before, start here the 1/4 stream ◄ Nope.
___________________________________________________

Well, your map is epic. But Normal and Hard can be muuuch better if you fix all bad blankets, overlaps etc.
The final stream in Insane is epic. ◄ wwwwwwww~
Star :) ◄ Thanks :3
will upload again :3
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
hitsound irc mod via skype

SPOILER
2556-03-26 16:56 0OoMickeyoO0: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/219315 Assertive Fluttershy - Boooring!]
2556-03-26 16:56 0OoMickeyoO0: ให้ม็อดได้ยังนิ
2556-03-26 16:56 - N a n a k a -: แปบงิ
2556-03-26 16:56 0OoMickeyoO0: เดี๋ยวลืม
2556-03-26 16:57 - N a n a k a -: เหลือ normal
2556-03-26 16:57 - N a n a k a -: เสร๊จมืดๆอ่ะ
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: นานจัง
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: ตั้งแต่กลางวันละ
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: อ่อ remap
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: นึกว่าแก้ม็อด
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: แก้อะไรครึ่งวัน
2556-03-26 16:57 - N a n a k a -: ก็บอกไปแล้วรีแมพ = ="
2556-03-26 16:57 0OoMickeyoO0: ไม่เห็นงะ
2556-03-26 16:58 - N a n a k a -: งืม ไม่เป็นไร เสร๊จแล้วเดี๋ยวเรียก
2556-03-26 21:08 0OoMickeyoO0: เสร็จยัง จะไปนอนละ
2556-03-26 21:14 - N a n a k a -: แล้ว
2556-03-26 21:14 - N a n a k a -: เกือบจะหลับไปรอบล่ะ orz
2556-03-26 21:14 0OoMickeyoO0: รถถังรอบนึงแปป
2556-03-26 21:14 0OoMickeyoO0: คอลอยู่ จอยมาก็ได้
2556-03-26 21:26 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:10:167 (2) - whistle tail
2556-03-26 21:27 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:53:756 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:28 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:45:285 (1) - clap head
2556-03-26 21:29 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:48:108 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:50:932 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:56:579 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:59:403 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:02:226 (1) - ^
2556-03-26 21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:31:167 (2,3) -
2556-03-26 21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:31:167 (2) -
2556-03-26 21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:32:579 (3) -
2556-03-26 21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: remove clap
2556-03-26 21:32 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:34:167 (2) - ^
2556-03-26 21:33 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:19:873 (3) -
2556-03-26 21:34 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:24:461 (2) - whistle
2556-03-26 21:34 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:23:403 (4) - whistle tail
2556-03-26 21:35 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:34:697 (4) - whistle tail
2556-03-26 21:35 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:35:403 (1) - remove whistle
2556-03-26 21:35 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:35:756 (2) - add whistle
2556-03-26 21:37 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:35:403 (1,2) -
2556-03-26 21:40 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:25:167 (3) - whistle
2556-03-26 21:41 0OoMickeyoO0: 304,240,33461,2,0,L|292:208,5,35,14|14|6|8|6|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2556-03-26 21:42 0OoMickeyoO0: /savelog
2556-03-26 21:46 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:27:638 (1,2,1,2) -
2556-03-26 21:49 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:26:403 (4) -
2556-03-26 21:52 0OoMickeyoO0: 02:57:991 (1,2,1,2) -
2556-03-26 21:52 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:27:638 (1,2,1,2) -
2556-03-26 21:54 0OoMickeyoO0: 03:34:167 (4,5) -
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
awh why did you delete that sudden slow slider at Boo diff? :(
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

awh why did you delete that sudden slow slider at Boo diff? :(
My Friend said Spin is funner than ;w;
And i like this too
Foxxer_old
Foxxer_old
So perfect map *o*
Small mod~

Hard

00:15:638 (4) - I think this circle will be better if you centralize between the sliders.

Good Luck! ~
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Foxxer wrote:

So perfect map *o*
Small mod~

Hard

00:15:638 (4) - I think this circle will be better if you centralize between the sliders.

Good Luck! ~
Fix!
Thanks :3
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there~

[General]
* 2nd kiai should end at 03:23:403


[P A N's Easy]
01:49:520 (1,2) - Swap new combo for following stanza
03:15:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too repetitive pattern for me... (dunno what I'm gonna to say o.o). Perhaps, change pattern?


[Normal]
00:05:756 (1) - Move right a bit for avoiding for overlapping (nazi)
00:16:344 (1) - Why new combo?
00:21:991 (1) - ^
00:41:050 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars
01:02:226 (1) - Make a slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706316
02:16:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
02:16:697 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end)
02:19:167 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
02:19:520 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end)
02:19:873 (3,4) - Use blanket combo?
03:11:403 (1) - Remove new combo


[Hard]
00:48:814 (3) - Reverse this slider for better flow?
00:49:167 (4) - ^
00:54:285 (2,3,4) - These jump aren't fit to the song... make another pattern?
03:41:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern isn't perfectly star pattern, use this


Good luck
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[General]
* 2nd kiai should end at 03:23:403 but. I think sound end 03:23:050 It better than? ;w;)

[Normal]
00:05:756 (1) - Move right a bit for avoiding for overlapping (nazi) ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (1) - Why new combo? ◄ Fix
00:21:991 (1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:41:050 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars ◄ Fix
01:02:226 (1) - Make a slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706316 ◄ Looks nice
02:16:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ I think all fix
02:16:697 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:167 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:520 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:873 (3,4) - Use blanket combo? ◄ yeah
03:11:403 (1) - Remove new combo ◄ Fix


[Hard]
00:48:814 (3) - Reverse this slider for better flow? ◄ Fix
00:49:167 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:54:285 (2,3,4) - These jump aren't fit to the song... make another pattern? ◄ remove 1 reverse
03:41:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern isn't perfectly star pattern, use this ◄ Fix


Good luck
Thanks for modding ( ' w ')
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
787B
Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/

General
I'm not sure, but I think you should add "mlp my little pony friendship is magic" in tags.
Hitsounds in Hard and Insane (Booo~ Party!) on the beginning are quite repetitive imo.

P A N's Easy
00:07:873 (3,4,1) - For improving flow, I suggest you to move (4) higher or lower in the grid. Here's an example: http://puu.sh/2Bk9y.
00:16:697 - Why no object here?
00:20:403 (3,1) - Feels kinda empty the space between them. I think you could have add one more object, or even changed patterns. Something like this would be great.
00:34:697 (6) - Consider addin new combo here because of the finish. (Which implies also deleting New Combo in 00:35:403 (1) - )
01:52:697 - Why the sudden change of hitsounds here? I think adding that custom finish hitsound here like previous objects would be perfect. I also think the sudden change of volume here is unnecessary, it doesn't make sense lowering there and after a short time, in 01:53:050 - you have increased it.
02:15:638 (2) - New combo because of finish.
03:24:108 - Highly recommend adding object here. It's pretty clear with the song that there's a drum beat here.
Nice Easy.

Normal
00:04:520 (2) - This slider is currently touching with 00:02:932 (1) - and 00:05:756 (1) - (fading), so I'd recommend making them more cleaner. Something like this.
00:55:167 (1) - Overlap with 00:53:756 (1,2) - Doesn't look good imo. You could give a more considerable space between them for a more cleaner playthrough.
01:31:167 (2,3,4) - Would be better if you have followed the same thing you did with 01:32:579 (3,4,5) - here: http://puu.sh/2Blmn.
01:35:403 (3,4,5) - ^

Hard
The whistles kinda bothers me on this diff. Mostly in the beginning because it's pretty much almost the same pattern (which implies more objects) plus considering the intro is quite long. I'll give you some examples of other patterns you could try:
00:02:403 (3,4) - Delete the whistles on them.
00:05:226 (3,4) - ^
00:08:050 (2,3) - ^
00:51:638 (3) - I must say the overlap here is really unnecessary. The way you've placed it under 00:50:932 (1) - is not recommended. I wonder why no one else showed this up to you yet.
01:03:991 (2,3) - Consider giving a bit more space between them to improve visuals.
01:48:109 (3) - Same as 00:51:638 (3) -.

Booo~ Party!
Looks pretty good. Nice job.

I'll drop my star here, it's quite a good job so far you've been doing:
Good luck!
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[P A N's Easy]
01:49:520 (1,2) - Swap new combo for following stanza fixed
03:15:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too repetitive pattern for me... (dunno what I'm gonna to say o.o). Perhaps, change pattern? fixed!

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/


P A N's Easy
00:07:873 (3,4,1) - For improving flow, I suggest you to move (4) higher or lower in the grid. Here's an example: http://puu.sh/2Bk9y. ok
00:16:697 - Why no object here? kinda lazy to fix the distance after add this note D:
00:20:403 (3,1) - Feels kinda empty the space between them. I think you could have add one more object, or even changed patterns. Something like this would be great. ok
00:34:697 (6) - Consider addin new combo here because of the finish. (Which implies also deleting New Combo in 00:35:403 (1) - ) ok
01:52:697 - Why the sudden change of hitsounds here? I think adding that custom finish hitsound here like previous objects would be perfect. I also think the sudden change of volume here is unnecessary, it doesn't make sense lowering there and after a short time, in 01:53:050 - you have increased it. ok wait
02:15:638 (2) - New combo because of finish. kind of strange.. the two (1) appear the same time on easy? 0.0
03:24:108 - Highly recommend adding object here. It's pretty clear with the song that there's a drum beat here. ok
Nice Easy. thanks

thanks Leorda and Wolf for modding ^0^
@nanaka: http://puu.sh/2BuE9
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/

General
I'm not sure, but I think you should add "mlp my little pony friendship is magic" in tags.
Hitsounds in Hard and Insane (Booo~ Party!) on the beginning are quite repetitive imo. ◄ Fix

Normal
00:04:520 (2) - This slider is currently touching with 00:02:932 (1) - and 00:05:756 (1) - (fading), so I'd recommend making them more cleaner. Something like this. ◄ Fix with Leo's mod, Thanks ' w ')
00:55:167 (1) - Overlap with 00:53:756 (1,2) - Doesn't look good imo. You could give a more considerable space between them for a more cleaner playthrough. ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (2,3,4) - Would be better if you have followed the same thing you did with 01:32:579 (3,4,5) - here: http://puu.sh/2Blmn. ◄ Fix
01:35:403 (3,4,5) - ^ ◄ Fix

Hard
The whistles kinda bothers me on this diff. Mostly in the beginning because it's pretty much almost the same pattern (which implies more objects) plus considering the intro is quite long. I'll give you some examples of other patterns you could try:
00:02:403 (3,4) - Delete the whistles on them. ◄ Fix
00:05:226 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:08:050 (2,3) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:51:638 (3) - I must say the overlap here is really unnecessary. The way you've placed it under 00:50:932 (1) - is not recommended. I wonder why no one else showed this up to you yet. ◄ Fix
01:03:991 (2,3) - Consider giving a bit more space between them to improve visuals. ◄ Fix
01:48:109 (3) - Same as 00:51:638 (3) -. ◄ Fix

Booo~ Party!
Looks pretty good. Nice job. ◄ Thanks ' w ')

I'll drop my star here, it's quite a good job so far you've been doing:
Good luck! :3
Uploaded.
Elva Anjani Uchiha
143 posts
Joined February 2012
Elva Anjani Uchiha
Hi :) random mod

P A N's Easy

00:05:756 (1) - it would be better if this slider blanket previous circle
00:20:403 (3) - nc
00:30:461 (4) - ^
00:46:697 (3,4,1) - the flow is not good. How about this?
SPOILER
03:09:638 (4) - nc


Normal
OD+1
HD+1?

00:02:932 (1,2,3,4) - imo, their position is too dense, 00:02:932 (1,2,1) - they touched a little bit and it's slightly not neat. Suggestion : 00:04:520 (2) - position x:244|y:96
SPOILER

00:08:579 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other
00:13:520 (4,1) - ^
00:16:344 (4,1) - ^
00:26:579 (2) - x:356|y:228 is better so it will align with 00:27:991 (4) -
00:30:814 (5,1) - put a little bit more distance between them
00:36:814 (1) - http://puu.sh/2EhIj.jpg http://puu.sh/2EhLb.jpg
01:04:344 (4) - why not mirror previous slider?
SPOILER
01:37:167 (3) - nc, to match previous pattern
02:52:344 (1,2) - how about this?
SPOILER
03:05:403 (4) - should be nc because your previous pattern is 03:00:814 (1,2,1,2,3) -
03:08:226 (4) - ^
03:13:520 (3) - ^
03:21:991 (6) - ^
03:22:344 (7,1) - put a little more distance between them
03:27:285 (2,3) - ^


Hard

HD+1~2
OD+1

00:05:579 (5) - remove whistle?
00:08:403 (4) - ^
00:31:167 (1,2,3,4) - make a little bit more space between them by dragging 00:31:697 (2,3,4,1) - down one grid
00:50:932 (1,2,3,4) - the formation is too dense, make more space between them http://puu.sh/2EiDf.jpg
00:57:285 (3,4) - don't make them touch
01:31:167 (3,4) - put a little bit more space between them
02:33:285 (3,4) - ^
03:26:226 (1,2) - ^
03:30:109 (4,1,2) - ^


Booo~ Party!

00:44:226 (1) - how about the spinner starts from 00:44:050 - ?
i think that's all x.x

Good luck :)
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi :) random mod

P A N's Easy

00:05:756 (1) - it would be better if this slider blanket previous circle no, lazy to fix distance after this note
00:20:403 (3) - nc ok
00:30:461 (4) - ^ ok
00:46:697 (3,4,1) - the flow is not good. How about this?
SPOILER
ok
03:09:638 (4) - nc ok
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi :) random mod

Normal
OD+1 ◄ +1
HD+1?

00:02:932 (1,2,3,4) - imo, their position is too dense, 00:02:932 (1,2,1) - they touched a little bit and it's slightly not neat. Suggestion : 00:04:520 (2) - position x:244|y:96 ◄ I'm make 00:02:932 (1) - mirror 00:05:756 (1) - Not fix yet
SPOILER

00:08:579 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other ◄ Fix
00:13:520 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:26:579 (2) - x:356|y:228 is better so it will align with 00:27:991 (4) - ◄ Lazy distance
00:30:814 (5,1) - put a little bit more distance between them ◄ I use 1.0x distance on map ;w;
00:36:814 (1) - http://puu.sh/2EhIj.jpg http://puu.sh/2EhLb.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
01:04:344 (4) - why not mirror previous slider? ◄ Fix in my style
SPOILER
01:37:167 (3) - nc, to match previous pattern ◄ Fix
02:52:344 (1,2) - how about this? ◄ Fix in my style
SPOILER
03:05:403 (4) - should be nc because your previous pattern is 03:00:814 (1,2,1,2,3) - ◄ Fix
03:08:226 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:13:520 (3) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:21:991 (6) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:22:344 (7,1) - put a little more distance between them ◄ too lazy if i more distance
03:27:285 (2,3) - ^ ↑


Hard

HD+1~2 ◄ Hard not Insane :(
OD+1

00:05:579 (5) - remove whistle? ◄ Nope.
00:08:403 (4) - ^ ◄ Nope.
00:31:167 (1,2,3,4) - make a little bit more space between them by dragging 00:31:697 (2,3,4,1) - down one grid ◄ 00:31:697 (2) is overlab 00:29:756 (1,2) - Not fix yet
00:50:932 (1,2,3,4) - the formation is too dense, make more space between them http://puu.sh/2EiDf.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
00:57:285 (3,4) - don't make them touch ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (3,4) - put a little bit more space between them ◄ Fix
02:33:285 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:26:226 (1,2) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:30:109 (4,1,2) - ^ ◄ Nope.


Booo~ Party!

00:44:226 (1) - how about the spinner starts from 00:44:050 - ? ◄ Okay :D
i think that's all x.x

Good luck :) ◄ Thanks :)
CeilingPanda
148 posts
Joined June 2012
CeilingPanda
Hope I helped!
http://puu.sh/2QNFG.txt
orioncomet
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Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[P A N's Easy]
- Make sure tags is same as other diffs.

[Normal]
01:41:403 (4) - A bit confusing, imo. maybe make them to a longer slider or something.

[Hard]
- Suggestion, some of 1/4 notes (or streams) may be a bit hard for a Hard diff here, maybe make them to some short of long silder would be nice. [Like 01:52:344 (3,4,5,6,7) and some kick sliders, and there's more on the last kiai]
00:19:873 (1) - Hidden silder for a Hard diff is kinda hard, imo. may you fix this please.
02:16:344 (3,4) - Not sure if these are hidden slider, do you mind change them a bit?
03:20:932 (2) - Really hard to see slider.

[Booo~ Party!]
01:18:285 (3,4,5) - Is this intend? It's on wrong spacing, imo. A bit too far from 01:18:109 (2), maybe make its spacing like this



Fine mapset! :)
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

orioncomet wrote:

[P A N's Easy]
- Make sure tags is same as other diffs.

[Normal]
01:41:403 (4) - A bit confusing, imo. maybe make them to a longer slider or something.

[Hard]
- Suggestion, some of 1/4 notes (or streams) may be a bit hard for a Hard diff here, maybe make them to some short of long silder would be nice. [Like 01:52:344 (3,4,5,6,7) and some kick sliders, and there's more on the last kiai]
00:19:873 (1) - Hidden silder for a Hard diff is kinda hard, imo. may you fix this please.
02:16:344 (3,4) - Not sure if these are hidden slider, do you mind change them a bit?
03:20:932 (2) - Really hard to see slider.

[Booo~ Party!]
01:18:285 (3,4,5) - Is this intend? It's on wrong spacing, imo. A bit too far from 01:18:109 (2), maybe make its spacing like this



Fine mapset! :)
Fix all Thanks :D
orioncomet
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2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Natsuki Nanaka

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.
Thanks for my first bubble! :)
P A N
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Joined December 2011
P A N
gratz for your first bubble nanaka-chan :D
CrystilonZ
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CrystilonZ
congrats for first bubble :D
ดีใจล่วงหน้า สำหรับการแร้ง :)
TechnoMaster
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TechnoMaster
Bro Best BeatMap I Have Played Before
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