Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[General]
* 2nd kiai should end at 03:23:403 but. I think sound end 03:23:050 It better than? ;w;)

[Normal]
00:05:756 (1) - Move right a bit for avoiding for overlapping (nazi) ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (1) - Why new combo? ◄ Fix
00:21:991 (1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:41:050 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars ◄ Fix
01:02:226 (1) - Make a slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706316 ◄ Looks nice
02:16:344 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ◄ I think all fix
02:16:697 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:167 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:520 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end) ↑
02:19:873 (3,4) - Use blanket combo? ◄ yeah
03:11:403 (1) - Remove new combo ◄ Fix


[Hard]
00:48:814 (3) - Reverse this slider for better flow? ◄ Fix
00:49:167 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:54:285 (2,3,4) - These jump aren't fit to the song... make another pattern? ◄ remove 1 reverse
03:41:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern isn't perfectly star pattern, use this ◄ Fix


Good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~

[P A N's Easy]
01:49:520 (1,2) - Swap new combo for following stanza fixed
03:15:285 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too repetitive pattern for me... (dunno what I'm gonna to say o.o). Perhaps, change pattern? fixed!

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/


P A N's Easy
00:07:873 (3,4,1) - For improving flow, I suggest you to move (4) higher or lower in the grid. Here's an example: http://puu.sh/2Bk9y. ok
00:16:697 - Why no object here? kinda lazy to fix the distance after add this note D:
00:20:403 (3,1) - Feels kinda empty the space between them. I think you could have add one more object, or even changed patterns. Something like this would be great. ok
00:34:697 (6) - Consider addin new combo here because of the finish. (Which implies also deleting New Combo in 00:35:403 (1) - ) ok
01:52:697 - Why the sudden change of hitsounds here? I think adding that custom finish hitsound here like previous objects would be perfect. I also think the sudden change of volume here is unnecessary, it doesn't make sense lowering there and after a short time, in 01:53:050 - you have increased it. ok wait
02:15:638 (2) - New combo because of finish. kind of strange.. the two (1) appear the same time on easy? 0.0
03:24:108 - Highly recommend adding object here. It's pretty clear with the song that there's a drum beat here. ok
Nice Easy. thanks

thanks Leorda and Wolf for modding ^0^

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue. Ponies \o/

General
I'm not sure, but I think you should add "mlp my little pony friendship is magic" in tags.
Hitsounds in Hard and Insane (Booo~ Party!) on the beginning are quite repetitive imo. ◄ Fix

Normal
00:04:520 (2) - This slider is currently touching with 00:02:932 (1) - and 00:05:756 (1) - (fading), so I'd recommend making them more cleaner. Something like this. ◄ Fix with Leo's mod, Thanks ' w ')
00:55:167 (1) - Overlap with 00:53:756 (1,2) - Doesn't look good imo. You could give a more considerable space between them for a more cleaner playthrough. ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (2,3,4) - Would be better if you have followed the same thing you did with 01:32:579 (3,4,5) - here: http://puu.sh/2Blmn. ◄ Fix
01:35:403 (3,4,5) - ^ ◄ Fix

Hard
The whistles kinda bothers me on this diff. Mostly in the beginning because it's pretty much almost the same pattern (which implies more objects) plus considering the intro is quite long. I'll give you some examples of other patterns you could try:
00:02:403 (3,4) - Delete the whistles on them. ◄ Fix
00:05:226 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:08:050 (2,3) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:51:638 (3) - I must say the overlap here is really unnecessary. The way you've placed it under 00:50:932 (1) - is not recommended. I wonder why no one else showed this up to you yet. ◄ Fix
01:03:991 (2,3) - Consider giving a bit more space between them to improve visuals. ◄ Fix
01:48:109 (3) - Same as 00:51:638 (3) -. ◄ Fix

Booo~ Party!
Looks pretty good. Nice job. ◄ Thanks ' w ')

I'll drop my star here, it's quite a good job so far you've been doing:
Good luck! :3

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi random mod

P A N's Easy

00:05:756 (1) - it would be better if this slider blanket previous circle no, lazy to fix distance after this note
00:20:403 (3) - nc ok
00:30:461 (4) - ^ ok
00:46:697 (3,4,1) - the flow is not good. How about this?

SPOILER

ok
03:09:638 (4) - nc ok

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Hi random mod

Normal
OD+1 ◄ +1
HD+1?

00:02:932 (1,2,3,4) - imo, their position is too dense, 00:02:932 (1,2,1) - they touched a little bit and it's slightly not neat. Suggestion : 00:04:520 (2) - position x:244|y:96 ◄ I'm make 00:02:932 (1) - mirror 00:05:756 (1) - Not fix yet

SPOILER

00:08:579 (1,2) - don't make them touch each other ◄ Fix
00:13:520 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:16:344 (4,1) - ^ ◄ Fix
00:26:579 (2) - x:356|y:228 is better so it will align with 00:27:991 (4) - ◄ Lazy distance
00:30:814 (5,1) - put a little bit more distance between them ◄ I use 1.0x distance on map ;w;
00:36:814 (1) - http://puu.sh/2EhIj.jpg http://puu.sh/2EhLb.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
01:04:344 (4) - why not mirror previous slider? ◄ Fix in my style

SPOILER

01:37:167 (3) - nc, to match previous pattern ◄ Fix
02:52:344 (1,2) - how about this? ◄ Fix in my style

SPOILER

03:05:403 (4) - should be nc because your previous pattern is 03:00:814 (1,2,1,2,3) - ◄ Fix
03:08:226 (4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:13:520 (3) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:21:991 (6) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:22:344 (7,1) - put a little more distance between them ◄ too lazy if i more distance
03:27:285 (2,3) - ^ ↑


Hard

HD+1~2 ◄ Hard not Insane
OD+1

00:05:579 (5) - remove whistle? ◄ Nope.
00:08:403 (4) - ^ ◄ Nope.
00:31:167 (1,2,3,4) - make a little bit more space between them by dragging 00:31:697 (2,3,4,1) - down one grid ◄ 00:31:697 (2) is overlab 00:29:756 (1,2) - Not fix yet
00:50:932 (1,2,3,4) - the formation is too dense, make more space between them http://puu.sh/2EiDf.jpg ◄ Fix in my style
00:57:285 (3,4) - don't make them touch ◄ Fix
01:31:167 (3,4) - put a little bit more space between them ◄ Fix
02:33:285 (3,4) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:26:226 (1,2) - ^ ◄ Fix
03:30:109 (4,1,2) - ^ ◄ Nope.


Booo~ Party!

00:44:226 (1) - how about the spinner starts from 00:44:050 - ? ◄ Okay
i think that's all x.x

Good luck ◄ Thanks

orioncomet wrote:

[P A N's Easy]
- Make sure tags is same as other diffs.

[Normal]
01:41:403 (4) - A bit confusing, imo. maybe make them to a longer slider or something.

[Hard]
- Suggestion, some of 1/4 notes (or streams) may be a bit hard for a Hard diff here, maybe make them to some short of long silder would be nice. [Like 01:52:344 (3,4,5,6,7) and some kick sliders, and there's more on the last kiai]
00:19:873 (1) - Hidden silder for a Hard diff is kinda hard, imo. may you fix this please.
02:16:344 (3,4) - Not sure if these are hidden slider, do you mind change them a bit?
03:20:932 (2) - Really hard to see slider.

[Booo~ Party!]
01:18:285 (3,4,5) - Is this intend? It's on wrong spacing, imo. A bit too far from 01:18:109 (2), maybe make its spacing like this



Fine mapset!

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

P A N wrote:

gratz for your first bubble nanaka-chan

CrystilonZ wrote:

congrats for first bubble
ดีใจล่วงหน้า สำหรับการแร้ง

TechnoMaster wrote:

orioncomet wrote:

IRC modded.
- Resnap all notes on every difficulties.
- Fixed unsnapped sliders tail 02:16:344 (3,4) and 02:19:167 (3,4) on Hard diff.

Bubbled! Good luck.

Best map Ever. Would Love To Be Approved.

kantokun wrote:

Bubblee!!~~ lol

(ノ・ω・)ノ

SPOILER

424,284,86226,6,0,L|424:188,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,86579,2,0,L|96:183,1,95,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,86932,2,0,L|217:140,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,340,87285,2,0,L|279:340,1,95,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

Frostmourne wrote:

General
Fine but I'm worried about settings in many diffs so I will point out in each diffs.

P A N's Easy
HP 2 (+1)
AR 3 (+1)
Because bpm 170 and touched sliders in this song aren't suitable with AR2 and you have used many NC so HP 2 won't be too hard at all

Normal
To balance with Easy diff
HP 3 (+1)
OD 4 (+1)
AR5 will be something suitable and reasonable with OD 4 and spread better with Hard.

Hard
HP 5 (+1)
AR 8 (+1)
OD 6 (+1)
Some patterns look cluttered and irritating to play, most of jumps will play better with AR8 because bpm 170 is not slow at all.
and OD6 will be not too easy for this diff since AR is increased so that you can keep accuracy up easily.
02:53:226 (3) - This spacing looks kind of weird and isn't corresponding with the rest, try moving it down 2 grid and right 2 grid to keep closer to 1.2x spacing

Booo~ Party!
HP 6 (+1)
OD 7 (+1)
OD7 will not allow players to get SS too easy, with these patterns you use, this diff is quite easy and comfortable to play even with OD8 but I believe OD7 still fits it well
01:27:285 (4,1) - This flow is really awkward, I would do something like this
The flow will be similar to 02:57:638 (8,1) - which is good I believe.

SPOILER

424,284,86226,6,0,L|424:188,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,86579,2,0,L|96:183,1,95,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,86932,2,0,L|217:140,1,95,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,340,87285,2,0,L|279:340,1,95,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:39:461 (2) - I can't feel this intuitive much as it goes straight to the repeat point which is strange o.O"
I would do something like this, just moving the tail to the left side

SPOILER

let me know after fixing these and I will rank

Frostmourne wrote:

Great map for the first map !

Ranked.

P A N wrote:

omg gratz nanaka

kantokun wrote:

Rank~~ =[]=;;!! Sukoi!!

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Again, congratz!! :'D

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

ยินดีด้วยกับแมพแรงค์แมพแรกเน่อปลั๊ก :3

indyinyou wrote:

แร้งกันใหญ่เลยวุ้ย

regenz wrote:

ฉลองกันเถอะ

-Cloudchaser wrote:

congratz o.o wow~:3

TechnoMaster wrote:

Best Song ever

HopeSuzumiya wrote:

Congratz! I love this song >-<''

Wolf wrote:

Yay!
Congratulations!

LoliFlan wrote:

excellent, congratz.

ZomBrony wrote:

This is a pretty good beatmap but I have one question: Why doesn't it have the "lyrics"?

I know the simple voice sampling can't really be called lyrics but I have this song downloaded and I noticed it was missing that.