14:54 Strawberry: hey chewin~
14:54 Chewin: yo straww
14:54 Strawberry: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59049 finally rebubed ;w;/
14:55 Chewin: well
14:55 Chewin: I will recheck it wait
14:55 Strawberry: yeaa.~ ty :>
15:01 Chewin: [normal]
15:01 Strawberry: yea
15:01 Chewin: 02:23:817 (1) - what about to move this slider 1/1 later so you can add a circle on the downbeat? I mean on 02:23:967
15:01 Chewin: it seems there is a missed sound there
15:02 Chewin: maybe circle with finish would sound nice :3
15:02 Strawberry: sounds good. added~ :p
15:02 Chewin: http://puu.sh/1TVlK
15:02 Chewin: oki
15:04 Chewin: 02:43:017 (1) - soft default finish (50% volume) on this slider tail to match that clash in the cymbals
15:04 Strawberry: changed :3
15:06 Chewin: 04:05:517 (1) - this spinner should start 1/2 earlier, the flute sound starts there
15:06 Chewin: and I'd say to end it on 04:07:467
15:07 Strawberry: yep
15:07 Strawberry: fixed
15:07 Chewin: 04:10:167 (1) - I highly suggest you to reduce it till the previous red line because 04:13:596 (1) - is placed too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff.. :\
15:08 Chewin: checking A32's diff now
15:08 Strawberry: ok, changed to end at 04:12:867 -
15:12 Chewin: 01:10:767 (2,3) - I'd stack them with 01:09:267 (4) - because it's bad to see in testmode
15:13 Chewin: 01:15:567 (2) - add finish to emphasize those cymbals
15:13 Strawberry: done~
15:14 Chewin: 01:15:567 (2) - this isn't easy to read and play to be honest with this low ar
15:14 Chewin: I just would place the 02:12:567 (3) - under the slider (2) to blanket it
15:16 Chewin: 02:23:967 (1) - what about to add 3 finished here, because of those cymbals
15:16 Strawberry: all fixed :3
15:16 Chewin: 02:44:367 (2) - what is this clap on the slider tail D: remove it, it sounds bad IMO
15:17 Strawberry: and also ctrl+g this slider 02:13:167 (1) for balance spacing
15:17 Chewin: drum sound should start from 02:45:567 (1) -
15:17 Chewin: nice
15:17 Chewin: it's better :4
15:17 Chewin: :3
15:19 Chewin: 03:29:967 (5) - new combo? :s squares are easier to play with new combo on each one
15:19 Strawberry: ok. added~
15:19 Chewin: 03:53:817 (5) - i'd set new combo here as well
15:20 Chewin: because of slowdown
15:20 Strawberry: done.~ :3
15:21 Chewin: 04:19:357 (1) - 5% volume on the end pls
15:21 Chewin: passing on the hard diff
15:22 Strawberry: x3
15:22 Chewin: 00:14:988 (5) - new combo to keep consistency with 4 elements
15:22 Strawberry: fixed~
15:23 Chewin: 00:56:217 (1) - whistle?
15:23 Strawberry: sounds good. added~
15:24 Chewin: 01:10:767 (5) - I was thinking that this slider had only 1 repeat.. what about to remove 1 repeat and add circle on 01:11:667?
15:25 Chewin: like you did for 01:13:167 (5) - for example
15:26 Chewin: 01:20:217 (6) - new combo? because of new flute sound, also I would remove it from 01:21:117 (1) - since the spacing is still the same ;3
15:26 Strawberry: yea.~ fixed
15:28 Chewin: 01:37:017 (7) - this circle with the next "small" break doesn't convince me to be honest.. I wanted to suggest you something like:puu.sh/1TVMo
15:28 Chewin: http://puu.sh/1TVMo
15:30 Chewin: 01:50:217 (6) - there is a sound on the downbeat you didn't map, mh.. I would make this rhythm in this other way: http://puu.sh/1TVOt
15:32 Chewin: 02:44:367 (5) - new combo removing it from 02:44:967 (1) -
15:32 Strawberry: all done~
15:33 Chewin: 03:46:467 (9) - x196 y84?
15:34 Strawberry: yea~ changed :3
15:34 Chewin: naisu, passing on lunatic diff
15:35 Chewin: 00:14:988 (6) - new combo?
15:36 Strawberry: added.
15:37 Chewin: 01:13:167 (7,1) - improve this stack?
15:38 Strawberry: oh, fixed xp
15:39 Chewin: a bit hard for a lunatic diff lol ;P
15:40 Strawberry: i think the hard diff can be a transition. x3
15:43 Chewin: 03:07:467 (1) - I'd avoid the stack with 03:07:167 (5) - because the 03:07:167 (5,1) - are snapped 1/1 while 03:07:017 (4,5) - are snapped 1/2 and you are using the same spacing even if it must be different
15:43 Chewin: 03:07:467 (1) - I'd avoid the stack with 03:07:167 (5) - because the 03:07:167 (5,1) - are snapped 1/1 while 03:07:017 (4,5) - are snapped 1/2 and you are using the same spacing even if it must be different
15:43 Chewin: I highly suggest yo to change it D:, at least moving the (1) some grid up don't staking it with (5)
15:44 Strawberry: moved (1) to x.208 y.56
15:44 Strawberry: i think it's much better now :p
15:47 Chewin: 01:15:567 (1,2) - orz o3o
15:47 Strawberry: ><
15:51 Chewin: my ears
15:51 Chewin: submit I will recheck and rank