1. Easy (1.65 stars, 192 notes)
2. Insane (4.08 stars, 596 notes)
3. Normal (2.15 stars, 252 notes)
4. Rainmon's Insane (3.29 stars, 436 notes)
5. VinylDash's Hard (2.96 stars, 428 notes)

BeatofIke wrote:

Vinyl's Hard
-> Why is the drain rate higher than Normal? Increase it so it's at least higher than your Normal difficulty. It is now higher
-> Reduce Overall Difficulty -1. Got it
-> There is no hitsounds on this difficulty. You must add hitsounds so it's rankable. Hitsounds are added

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

Vinyl's Hard

General

The spacing between the half beats is really small while there is a huge jump on the very last
2 hitcircles, fix that please. The Slider Velocity shoud be higher. Finish is overused. Spacing is fixed, and I'm not sure bout velocity, will think that over.

00:54:992 (7) - new combo? New combo added
01:22:684 (2) - remove finish Removed
01:24:069 (5) - ^ ^
01:13:453 (7) - ^ ^
01:14:376 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:992 (7) - ^ ^
01:17:838 (5) - ^ ^
01:20:838 (5) - ^ ^
01:22:684 (2) - ^ ^
01:21:761 (1) - add finish on slider begin Added
01:24:069 (5) - remove finish Removed
01:30:069 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:31:915 (2) - remove whistle Removed
01:33:069 (2,3) - remove finish Removed
01:36:530 (1) - addfinish on slider begin Added
01:42:069 (4) - remove finish Removed
01:43:453 (9) - remove finish and add finish on slider end Removed and added finish on slider end
01:49:453 (2,3,4) - remove finish Removed
01:50:376 (5) - ^ ^
01:52:684 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:54:530 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
01:56:376 (4) - ^ ^
01:58:453 (10) - ^ ^
01:58:684 (1) - remove finish on slider end Removed
02:05:607 (7) - remove finish Removed
02:06:069 (9) - add finish Added
02:24:761 (2,3) - remove finish Removed
02:27:761 (9,10) - ^ ^
02:30:992 (3) - ^ ^
02:39:300 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:43:915 (3) - ^ ^
02:49:915 (8) - ^ ^
02:51:300 (4) - ^ ^
02:50:376 (1) - add finish Added
03:04:453 (9) - remove circle Removed
03:08:607 (4) - remove finish Removed
03:12:530 (1) - ^ ^
03:13:453 (2) - ^ ^
03:18:530 (2) - ^ ^
03:18:069 (1) - add finish Added
03:23:210 (5) - remove finish Removed

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

M4M :3

Fix Kiai Time! Only Insane Has Kiai!Oh derp. I forgot.

Easy

00:31:453 (2) - Move last sliderpoint 3 grid up Made uniform
00:33:761 (1) - move first sliderpoint 3 grid down and last one one grid right and one grid up ^^^
00:58:223 (3) - new combo? No. This whole section follows the same combo pattern.
01:28:684 (1) - move last sliderpoint one grid up I want to leave these alone
02:53:146 (5) - add whistle Done
(sorry for being picky on the sliders, i just think u would like to have them smetrical or more symetrical, that
would look better)

Normal

General

The Spacing is really unconsistant. There are a lot of jumps and anti-jumps which can confuse new player imo It's not inconsistent. I'm just using more than one distance snap.

00:35:607 (1,2) - this confuses a bit here with the distance Fixed
01:10:684 (7,1) - ^ Not changing
00:37:453 (1,2) - ^ + Why repeting the same thing? make something diffrent here Updated this part
01:21:761 (1,2,4,5,2,3) - Maby reduce this jump Nah. It's perfectly balanced.
01:30:992 (5,6) - ^ I would but there's no other pattern I could do. So it's going to have to stay.
01:32:838 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:49:915 (1,2) - ^ i'll think about it.
03:01:915 (2,1) - ^ Perfectly balanced spacing.
02:23:607 (4) - new combo? Done
03:23:671 add note Don't really want to
03:23:902 ^ ^


Good luck~

1. mmmh The Hitsounds don't fit in my opionion especially the clap sound

1. 00:35:607 (3) - new combo
2. 00:55:453 (4) - this one feels a bit weird, because it seems a bit obvious that it is a mirrored version of (2)
3. 00:58:223 (3) - not sure about this jump, because it is a Easy after all. Maybe move 00:58:223 (3,4,5) - so that (5) is in the middle of the grid. It would still be a "jump" but much easier
4. 01:34:684 (2) - Flow feels better with ctrl + j
5. 01:52:223 (1,2) - Why such a huge spacing suddenly? I think it were better to just have mirrored version of each other (mirrored on X- Axis)
6. 02:05:146 - I miss a Hitcircle
7. 02:22:684 (1) - ending of the slider sounds weird. Make the slider 1/2 longer or shorter.
8. 02:25:453 (3) - ^
9. 02:52:223 (3) - new combo
10. 03:12:069 (2) - stack it with 03:09:761 (4) -

1. Why does circle size 4 feel to small and 3 to big? I guess you can stay with 4.
2. 00:20:838 (4) - I can't describe why but it feels a bit to close to the slider (3)
3. 00:28:223 (1) - New combo
4. 00:54:300 - add note
5. 00:57:992 - ^
6. 01:10:684 (7) - new combo here instead of 01:12:069 (1) -
7. 01:35:838 (1) - spinner is "almost" to short for a normal D:
8. 01:40:684 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't feel good. I don't know maybe the flow isn't nice or I miss hitsounds ... rythm itself is okay
9. 01:45:761 (4,5) - either one of them new combo
10. 02:25:915 (4) - overlap with previous slider isn't that nice, could be better. Maye stack slider end of (4) with slider end of (3)
11. 02:49:915 (1,2) - jump feels to hard for a Normal
12. 03:01:915 (2,1) - this jump is seriously to far for a normal
13. 03:04:223 (3,4,5) - here too. This is a normal difficulty not a hard o.o

1. sliderwhistle sounds annoying
2. 00:59:607 (1) - slider looks kind of bad
3. 01:42:530 (5) - new combo
4. 02:48:530 (5) - slider would be better if it was less "compressed"

1. 00:18:992 (1,3) - thse long sliders don't fit
2. 00:41:146 (3,4) - this jump is so far that the flow and rythm feel choppy
3. 00:42:992 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:55:915 (6) - feels weird that it isn't stacked to (3). Even though i would stack (3) over (6)
5. 01:12:530 (4,5,6) - the angle between (3) and (4) feels bad. Put these 3 more to the right
6. 01:24:530 (11) - Flow feels better if you put this one on the Y-Axis of the grid
7. 01:27:300 (8,9,10) - map the gaps between them ... feels empty for no reason
8. 02:55:223 (5) - why isn't this one a mirrored version of (3)
9. 02:56:376 (4) - stack it under 02:55:223 (5) -
10. 03:12:069 (5) - dunno slider feels to slow

bomber34 wrote:

[Hard]

1. sliderwhistle sounds annoying
2. 00:59:607 (1) - slider looks kind of bad Slider fixed
3. 01:42:530 (5) - new combo New Combo added
4. 02:48:530 (5) - slider would be better if it was less "compressed" Alrighty

Not hat just to complain about but i have to say this diff feels easier than the Normal ...Yeah, I would say, this would probably be more of a Normal+ than a Hard.

bomber34 wrote:

orz I wanted to mod this earlier but i forgot it D: sry

[General]

1. mmmh The Hitsounds don't fit in my opionion especially the clap sound

[Easy]

1. 00:35:607 (3) - new combo I guess.
2. 00:55:453 (4) - this one feels a bit weird, because it seems a bit obvious that it is a mirrored version of (2) It's a transitional note.
3. 00:58:223 (3) - not sure about this jump, because it is a Easy after all. Maybe move 00:58:223 (3,4,5) - so that (5) is in the middle of the grid. It would still be a "jump" but much easier i'm maintaing distance snap after it. It shouldn't be an issue considering the gap. This part i'm bound to get upset about if i change.
4. 01:34:684 (2) - Flow feels better with ctrl + j It doesn't look as good though.
5. 01:52:223 (1,2) - Why such a huge spacing suddenly? I think it were better to just have mirrored version of each other (mirrored on X- Axis) This doesn't fit my patterns though, which is why I didn't have it mirroring the x-axis to begin with. Although I might consider it at a later time.
6. 02:05:146 - I miss a Hitcircle I left it out for a better effect.
7. 02:22:684 (1) - ending of the slider sounds weird. Make the slider 1/2 longer or shorter. I don't agree. I feel that the appropriate beat is on red tick, it's just not as well defined.
8. 02:25:453 (3) - ^ ^
9. 02:52:223 (3) - new combo No. I'd rather not.
10. 03:12:069 (2) - stack it with 03:09:761 (4) - Done

[Normal]

1. Why does circle size 4 feel to small and 3 to big? I guess you can stay with 4. It's fine to me.
2. 00:20:838 (4) - I can't describe why but it feels a bit to close to the slider (3) It is close, but I don't like what the proper spacing looks like so I'm keeping it.
3. 00:28:223 (1) - New combo Added to 30 seconds instead.
4. 00:54:300 - add note I'd rather not. Gap is for effect.
5. 00:57:992 - ^ ^
6. 01:10:684 (7) - new combo here instead of 01:12:069 (1) - i'll add a new combo on 5 instead and i'll keep the next combo where it is.
7. 01:35:838 (1) - spinner is "almost" to short for a normal D: Noted.
8. 01:40:684 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't feel good. I don't know maybe the flow isn't nice or I miss hitsounds ... rythm itself is okay It's staying until I can think of a better way to design it.
9. 01:45:761 (4,5) - either one of them new combo Done
10. 02:25:915 (4) - overlap with previous slider isn't that nice, could be better. Maye stack slider end of (4) with slider end of (3) I planned it that way.
11. 02:49:915 (1,2) - jump feels to hard for a Normal Lowered it by a unit.
12. 03:01:915 (2,1) - this jump is seriously to far for a normal It's actually quite comfortable to me. I'm reflecting a particular mapping style with this song. This song supports nice smooth jumps and i'm going to take advantage!
13. 03:04:223 (3,4,5) - here too. This is a normal difficulty not a hard o.o It felt fitting. I don't really want to change it.

This diff feels more like a mix between hard and normal I might have been going for that. Overall I have done nothing a Normal player cannot do. Just because the jump seems fast, it's not faster than some high BPM song's Normal difficulties. It's just low BPM, so the pace is just jumping around where I felt it was necessary.

[Insane]

1. 00:18:992 (1,3) - thse long sliders don't fit Broken up
2. 00:41:146 (3,4) - this jump is so far that the flow and rythm feel choppy No it doesn't read the jump and its fine
3. 00:42:992 (3,4) - ^ I was meaning to change this
4. 00:55:915 (6) - feels weird that it isn't stacked to (3). Even though i would stack (3) over (6) I'll put this change on hold. I'm not exactly sure how I want to fix
5. 01:12:530 (4,5,6) - the angle between (3) and (4) feels bad. Put these 3 more to the right Tweaked this
6. 01:24:530 (11) - Flow feels better if you put this one on the Y-Axis of the grid I'd rather not
7. 01:27:300 (8,9,10) - map the gaps between them ... feels empty for no reason I rather like the simplified beat. That emptiness kind of focuses on the beat. I might change it if I find it no longer relevant to the map, but I want to keep it right now.
8. 02:55:223 (5) - why isn't this one a mirrored version of (3) idk didn't think of it I made it a bit cleaner through here but its still not a mirror
9. 02:56:376 (4) - stack it under 02:55:223 (5) - That misaligns the next pattern
10. 03:12:069 (5) - dunno slider feels to slow I don't think so

Except of some slow sliders it is a nice Insane

Behonkiss wrote:

General:
Maybe consider changing the combo colors to match the 6 pony colors? That's an interesting concept. I'll experiment

Easy:
00:59:607: Consider adding a new combo circle here. I'm not ready to add one there yet. I rather like how it plays currently.
01:00:530: New circle here too.I'm not going to make the rhythm boring.
01:03:299: And here...
01:04:222: ...here... ^
01:32:838: And here. Added
02:04:222 (5): Move 1 square to the right (Nazi). Done
02:20:838 (1): Consider adding a finish here. Yes
02:21:992 (4): Get rid of this circle, it's a bit tricky for Easy. I agree, It's unnecessary.
02:28:222 (1): Consider a finish here, too. Sure
02:30:761 (2): Move to 02:30:992. I don't like it.
02:43:453 (3): Change to new combo. okay
02:43:915 (1): Get rid of new combo.^
02:50:376 (1): Consider adding a finish to the start of this slider. Okay
02:57:761 (1): Consider a finish here as well. okay
03:08:607 (2): Move to 03:08:838.I'd rather not

Normal:
00:27:299 (3): Either move this right below the 2 circle or to the right a bit more. Moved right 1 unit
02:47:146 (2): Either move directly to the left of 1 or up/down a bit more. I'm happy where it is
02:48:530 (5): Put this on the same horizontal line as 4. Nah
03:23:671 & 03:23:902: Put some circles here! All the harder difficulties have them, and Easy has one too. I would if I knew how to place them.


Both Insane diffs seem fine.

Rainmon wrote:

Just a Quick mod on Vinyl's new hard

Wow now this map is a LOT better than the last one :3 Still not perfect, but the map can become perfect, right? ;3
There where some misplaced hitsounds but it did not bother me soo much. Now Tell me why did you always use soft soundstamples? o.o
00:17:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you want to play with finish this much then I recommend a constant rythm~ http://puu.sh/1ryej (highlited notes have finish on, others dont.) Alright
00:18:992 (1) - sliderbegin gets finish because the song starts here. Added
00:22:915 (2,4) - no whistle, whistle is overused on this part so remove them. Removed
00:24:069 (6) - hm naw just one gets whistle, end or begin of slider, you decide. Imo both works well. Kay
00:25:453 (5,6) - No whistle on both ends, sounds to overused. Alright
00:30:299 (2,4,6) - whistle spam~ Remove them. Done
00:33:299 (5,6) - I don't see why finish would make sense here, instead put one on slider begin 00:33:761 (1) Removed it at 5, but I'm not sure if it sounds alright to me imo on the next combo.
00:35:838 add note? the flow suffers because of this. Alright
00:39:069 Important vocal part imo so add note here. Doesn't sound right, so no.
00:40:453 (4) - remove whistle~ Removed
00:42:992 (1) - Naw whistles used in this way don't sound good and rarely fit well. I would only put whistle
on slider begin. No whistle sounds better
01:00:530 (2) - hm, a whistle instead of finish sounds better to me. Follows a flow with a finish, so no.
01:22:453 to keep flow add note here~ Yup
01:24:299 same here Not going to
01:30:992 (1) - why finish? no need for finish here so remove. k
01:34:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Whistle spam, rework this please. (I'm sure you can figure out yourself what has to be done, if not, then ask me in-game) Reworked
01:39:530 (2,4) - remove whistles~ K
01:44:838 huge gap, add note here and here 01:45:069 Nah
01:51:299 (1) - finish on sliderbegin~ Also the Kiai time sounds better if you use Normal soundstamples. IMO it sounds all soft to me :/
01:58:222 (4) - remove finish~ kay
02:05:838 (6) - hm double finish rarely work good so remove it please. Removed
02:23:376 add note to keep the flow~ Added
02:24:069 (7) - finish dose not make sense and sounds awkward :/ instead put finish here 02:24:530 (1) Done
02:35:376 (5) - remove finish and add it on 02:35:607 (1) slider begin~ ^
02:38:146 (7) - Remove whistle, you know why. Alright..
02:44:607 (3) - clap is not needed, remove please. It sounds strange if single clapsounds are used this way. I seriously hear the claps in the background.
02:45:299 (5) - same here. ^
02:49:453 (6,7,8) - remove finish, istead add it here 02:50:376 (1) I don't like it here, theres a flow after that.
02:50:838 (3) - why finish? T___T It sounds better with the flow
02:51:299 (4) - same ^
02:53:607 (9) - ..^ ^
03:04:222 (1,2,3,4) - two sliders would work as well Done

03:09:069 (2) - clap sounds awkward here :/ Removed
03:23:210 (6) - no finish.. kk
03:23:671 (1,2) - normal stamples would sound good >: I'll leave it like that, but if others complain, then I'll add normal samples


If you have questions just ask~

Here

Rainmon wrote:

A little Mod~ :3

[Easy]

00:20:376 (3,4) - Eh, this could be too hard too play on Easy, A slider instead would fit as well and is easier to play. This pattern would
Look good~ http://puu.sh/1rcqX It lines perfectly up with (1) I'm not sure i like another straight slider. I just moved the note to the white tick and fixed spacing.
00:21:300 (1,2) - Ugly Overlap, place (2) somewhere else plz I'd rather not.
00:47:607 (2,3) - Hm I think a slider would fit better but that's just my personal preference so you may ignore this. Made into one long slider instead.
00:56:838 (2) - I would place it like this so It lines up with (1)~ http://puu.sh/1rcwL Also the player will know in which direction he has to go next ;3 I'm content with this part. Don't really want to change.
00:59:607 Ah add a circle here or make a slider so the "winter wrapup" is not so lonely~
01:00:530 ^
01:03:299 ^
01:04:222 ^ No. I'd wish people would stop suggesting it. I don't want to crowd this part with notes and clicking.
01:09:300 (3,1) - Overlap, I would place sliderpath diffrently I wouldn't. I spent long enough trying to find a symmetry pattern with that timeline. I'm happy with this.
01:32:838 To keep the flow, add a circle or slider i'm not sure how to fix. If I add a note and fix spacing, it pushes my patterns too far to the right, and they feel too close to the right wall. I don't know how to fix this. If you have any ideas be sure to post with screenshots.

01:34:223 (1) - move one grid up, this looks better and more uniform with 01:33:300 (2,3,2) Doesn't to me. Following distance snap makes it feel too close for some reason.
01:36:992 - 01:40:222 Use claps constantly so It fits with the rest of the Double rainbow song Vocals here are different than the rest of the rainbow song. I'm happy with how it sounds regardless of consistency anyways. Not changing.
01:46:684 (4) - hm A whistle or ust nothing sound better imo I will keep for now.
01:52:223 (1,2) - Spacing? theres a big Jump, reduce it so new players don't get confused. I don't want the spinner hitburst to overlap. >.<
02:05:607 (6,7) - A slider instead is easier to hit correct than 2 single circles after a small pause. I prefer circles- not changing
02:21:761 (3,4,5) - This is a bit Hard to hit, A slider with one repeat instead? Fixed in previous mod
02:25:453 (3) - extend to 02:26:376 so It sounds better. Lowered volume
02:27:300 (2) - remove clap No. I'll keep
02:31:915 (1,2) - this sounds awekward to me, Id change this pattern. I would delete (2) and make (1) a reverse slider instead. This works better
than the current pattern and is easier to play. Ew. I don't want a large repeat slider that isn't centered. It's fine.
02:43:453 (3) - There was no clap in the previous section, add claps from 02:36:530 to 02:42:992 . This would add to the hitsound "flow". Already fixed
02:52:223 (3) - add whistle to keep the rythm. Done
02:57:761 (1) - add finish? added, but i really don't like it and may remove it in the near future.
03:07:915 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really hard to hit, I even combobroke on it. move 03:08:607 (2) to 03:08:838 . It sounds better where it is, and I probably will not change it. I don't need this song ranked that bad.
03:16:223 (1,2,3) - a slider with repeat on (2) is easiert to hit, but this is my personal preference so ignore this if you want. Easier but sounds terrible.
03:21:761 (1,2) - hm, I would make this symmetrical http://puu.sh/1rcZw looks better to me. Maybe. i'll consider it, but really that doesn't match the rest of the styling of the map

[Normal]

hm Some of the spacing is really weird. There are 1/2 beats that are spaced pretty far apart and later there are 1/2 beats that are mor compressed.

00:18:069 (3,4,5) - Hmm, add a circle on 00:18:761 . This would sound way better or you could do 2 sliders http://puu.sh/1rdsJ That would follow less of the beat and wouldn't sound better.
00:19:915 (3) - not sure if multiple reverse is a good idea for normal. you could simply remove one reverse and extend it so it's a 1/1 beat slider. then remove 00:20:838 (4) obviously Complaining about double repeat sliders in a Normal? Seriously.
00:24:992 (5) - same here. ^
00:25:915 (6,4) - maybe move sliderpath so its fully stacked on (6). otherwise it's a overlap and dosn't look very good. There is no overlap.
00:35:146 (2,3,2,4) - this stack is not quiet good, I combobroke playing this part and the hitbursts hide the next circle. so please move them on diffrent posisions. It's not that hard to read. It's not like I switch beats. It's the same beat. Pay attention.
00:42:992 (3,1) - overlap, move (1) down so it dose not touch the slider. Done for now
01:06:069 (4,2) - ugly overlap, stack the end of (2) with (4). this looks better. I'm sure an entire measure is more than enough time to clear that slider and it is. There is no reason to change anything here.
01:35:838 (1) - hm, spinner should start at 01:35:146 .. Done
02:35:607 (1) - Stack slider end with 02:34:453 (2) , so theres no overlap anymore orz i'd rather not break distance snap.
02:36:761 (2,3) - the nakedness between them is confusing D: move 02:38:146 (3) to 02:37:915 No. My patterns are balanced where this slider currently is.
02:39:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well I'm not sure if this pattern is too hard for a normal.. Even if it was I'm not changing for that reason alone.
02:41:607 (5,7) - ugly overlap Fixed
03:04:223 (3,4,5) - HUGE jump compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reduce them? Well generally on the last part you got really inconsistant with the spacing. My goal was to make a fun and interesting map. I'm not lessening a proper transition for the sake of ranking guidelines.It's more enjoyable the way I have it. And it's not inconsistent, because I'm mapping to how I felt the song should play.

[Vinyl's Hard]

Generally, I would recommend to remap this diff. The rythm you mapped sounds awkward and not fiting. You use circles
where slider are obviously better and the spacing is inconsistant. Try to have at least some kind of consistancy
in the hitsounding. Some whistles where extremly out of place especially on the last part.. The slider Velo is too slow,
Velo 1.4 or 1.5 would be good.

[Insane]

Awesome Jumps but you already know that xDD

00:20:607 (1,4) - Ugly overlap :/ make (1) a curve slider~ http://puu.sh/1reIq Doesn't bother me, don't want to change.
00:25:453 (3,4,5) - The stack stops the flow imo. Maybe simply space the stream? No. I've gotten used to the stack there and don't want to ugly it up with a stream. There's a reason why I don't have very many streams in this map.
00:48:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You could just make a spinner instead but yeah, both works fine. Umm why would i do that?
01:06:761 (6,2) - stack the end of slider with (6) properly, otherwise it looks like a mess Fixed
01:07:915 (3,7) - stack properly I'd rather not. I don't see a point.
01:10:223 (1) - stack or place diffrently, looks bad imo Looks bad, flows nicely; fits my needs. It's a tradeoff.
01:12:530 (4,5,6) - hm I see no reason why a tripple should be here. A slider fits better. Personal preference?
01:13:453 (8,9) - same here Because each sound is distinct and clicking is more fun than sliding.
01:42:069 (5) - remove finish? I'll keep.
01:54:069 (3,4,5,8) - hm place (3,4,5) properly on sliderpath, this would look better. Done
03:05:146 (1) - Add finish~ Meh



:3

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi M4M

General
You have two Insane, delete one I'm allowed to have Two insanes

Easy

00:21:300 (1) - Remove NC Each combo is compartmentalized within it's own measure.
00:24:646 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:223 (1) - ^ Why?
00:39:300 (1) - ^ No sense doing so...
00:53:607 (2,3) - Spacing mistake, move them closer to each other Doesn't look that way to me...
01:26:838 (1) - Remove NC I reduced the previous combo's size to match the rest.
01:30:530 (1) - ^ No. I have a combo theme here. My combo starts on vocal starts.
01:32:376 (1) - ^ ^
01:32:838 - Add circle and add new combo here I'll add a note, but a new combo does not belong there
01:34:223 (1) - Remove NC Meh
02:30:069 (1) - ^ Doesn't fit my combos. Trying to fit each combo within it's own measure.
02:33:069 (2) - Id say remove this slider and make a reserve one with the preview one
03:08:607 (2) - Dont make this in an Easy diff, also you didnt use it so far, remove it I agree. Made into one slider.
03:16:915 (2) - This is confusing for beginners, make two circles instead between 1 and 3 on the white ticks[/color] I'm pretty sure I gave enough red tick transitions with the sliders to clue the beginners into hitting a 3/4th time transition.

Normal

00:24:992 (5) - , 01:05:146 (3) - This might be unrankable on Normal, not sure, try fixiing it though!
00:46:223 (3,4) - Spacing again, too far away, make them closer Fixed
00:48:530 (1) - You need to give 1 tick space at the end to make them beginners let prepare to continue on the next elements[/color] IMO they have enough time to react. I can get a bonus without even spinner at the start. The BPM is low enough to allow this.
01:17:607 (1) - Remove NC add on next element Added new combo here 01:19:473 - instead.
01:23:146 (3,4,5,1,) - , 01:25:915 (3,4,5,6) - , 01:28:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too big antijumps, you shouldnt do this on Normal diffs, fix it by putting them closer to each other I'd rather not since its readable.
01:55:453 (6) - NC Added on 5 instead
02:25:915 (4) - Distance and overlapp, fix it by maybe Ctrl + J the preview slider and move it where it was
02:30:992 (2,3,4) - Too big antijumps, you shouldnt do this on Normal diffs, fix it by putting them closer to each other I shouldn't, but I'm mapping it the way I want it to be played.
02:36:530 (1,2,3,4) - Breaks the flow of the song and map, try something differnt, also too big jump Fixed
02:50:838 (2) - Spacing, move it closer to preview one Don't want to change. It's fits the song.
02:52:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:56:376 (7) - Move it deffinately closer to preview circle The reason I'm not changing these, is the flow allows me to do this.
02:58:223 (2,3,4) - Spacing again, move them closer to each other ^
03:00:992 (6) - Make this circle more visible by moving it further up i'll consider it.
03:01:453 (1) - Spacing is too big, reduce it Nah
03:02:838 (1) - ^ ^
03:04:684 (4,5) - ^ Seriously, this should be in a Normal Nah
03:06:530 (2,3,4) - Closer to each other Remapped this part. It's better.
03:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I'll consider it
03:22:915 (4,5) - I suggest to not overlapp them, move them away[/color] Changed how it ends a bit. It looks better.

Insane

General
Take care of spacing, avoid unnecessary anti jumps. Until 00:52:222 - you wasnt so jumpy, but then you change the style, which you should do. Fix the spacing please overall! I did change my style. I got bolder with my mapping there. However consider my intro as a warmup for the harder stuff later on.

Overall
00:18:530 (5,6) - Spacing, move them how the spacing wants it please
00:18:992 (1) - Remove NC add here 00:19:223 (2) - I see no point in doing so.
00:22:684 (1) - This doesnt fit with the song, make the preview slider longer, till it reaches the white tick i'm not making the slider longer. This is intentional.
00:25:453 (3,4,5) - Big jump, make it different I thought you said my style wasn't the same until later on. Would this be suggesting I make it further different?
00:33:992 (1,3) - Put them closer to the centre Done
00:35:376 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing overall, move the 2nd circle bit more to the last slider I don't think so. i'll wait for more opinions.
00:36:761 (5) - Wrong spacing, move it closer to preview circle[/color] This slider's been split up.
00:50:607 (7) - NC Oh fine....
01:23:607 (9) - ^ Done
01:26:838 (7) - ^ ^
02:22:915 (8) - ^ I think done
02:26:376 (7) - ^ ^
02:27:069 (1) - Remove NC ^
03:16:453 (1) - Huge spacing mistake, move them closer please I might. Once you know they are there its not terribly hard to hit them.


Thats it, good luck!

cirno- wrote:

Hard
02:57:781 (1) - I liked the finish you had around 02:50:396 through 02:53:166 - maybe do the same thing at this point? I don't think so necessary.
03:23:671 (1,2) - Consider whistle or finish Drum hitsounds sound better.
I like the soft hitsounds on this Thanks, it sounds like a soft song, so it would be soft hitsounds. Normal could be fine.



I got no problems with insane. That's all I got. GL! ~star

VinylDash14 wrote:

[Rainmon's Insane]

This map is FULL of 3/4 sliders and stuff like that. A few don't fit here, but the rest are okay.
There is an EXTRA kiai time after the break, and the others don't. Remove it.
This also has another set of colors. All diffs should have the same color set (unless it's for a specific use)[/color] Thats because I
find them much mor fitting and beautiful that way >:

01:11:050 (2) - Not a good placement in the timeline. And it doesn't fit well.True.
01:23:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make better pentagon Its a star but sure.
03:04:242 (1,2) - Doesn't look right with the way it is. Try 1/1 jump. changed
03:18:089 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here for an insane. should i put an endless slider instead?