Andrea wrote:

I'll recheck once you've checked the mod above my post.

1. 00:05:784 (2) - add whistle in begining & end of slider
2. 01:01:263 (1) - add whistle hitsound in end of slider
3. 01:07:428 (4) - I think you can remove this hitsound

1. 00:06:606 (6) - add whistle in begining of slider
2. 00:26:743 (4) - add whistle in end of slider
3. 00:28:387 - you can add note in there, move slider to 00:28:592 - and make slider to 1/2 (optional)
4. 00:54:894 (7) - add whistle hitsound if you want

1. 00:28:592 (6) - move whistle hitsound to 00:28:798 (6) -
2. 00:33:318 (1) - add whistle hitsound (optional)
3. 00:34:962 (1) - ^
4. 00:36:400 (4) - remove clap hitsound and add whistle
5. 00:36:811 (5) - add clap hitsound

1. 00:07:428 (1) - You can add Whistle
2. 00:47:702 (6) - add whistle in beginning of slider
   There are 2 options:
   1. if you still want to add whistle in 01:09:894 (4) - , you should add whistle too in 01:09:072 (2) -
   2. if not, you can remove whistle in 01:09:894 (4) -

1. 00:05:784 (2) - With this slider, why don't you move it like you've done with 00:02:496 (2) - ? It was looking good, to be honest c:
2. 00:21:811 - This circle should be having a clap instead of a whistle, the whistle should be placed to the end of the previous slider's end instead.
3. 01:09:894 (4) - I personally think you should be adding a new combo here, since it's a long slider with a reverse arrow, it's containing a lot of measures, and yeah, a new combo could be good in here.

1. 00:21:400 (2) - There's missing whistles on both start and end of this slider, it would be more consistent if you're adding whistles.
2. 00:27:565 (1) - The emplacement and the flow with the previous slider is.. ugly? This slider is placed behind the previous slider, and the previous slider has a curved form that goes to the left, but this slider is at the right. You should be moving this slider somewhere else to offer something that makes a better flow and more enjoyable to play. I am mostly suggesting you to stack it with your the previous circle, 00:25:921 (4) - . It should be doing something similar to this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:36:606 (4,1,2,3,4) - You could be making a better star from with these objects.. that could be nice.
4. 01:09:894 (4,1,2) - There's a little thing I want to point out here, the slider is starting a bit late, which makes this pattern sounding a bit weird. For this, I would like you to highlight both (1,2) and reverse their emplacement on the timeline by doing CTRL+G. At the same time, delete the new combo on the circle (4), it should have one since it's placed on a downbeat. It should be looking like this after the changes:
   

1. 00:38:455 (6,7) - Shouldn't these circles be looking like these 00:37:633 (3,4) - but reversed? Delete the circles (6,7); Copy/Paste the circles (3,4) and do CTRL+H. (and also do CTRL+G) It's going to reverse the emplacement of these circles at the right.
   
   Example

   

1. Looks fine!

1. Perfecto! owo

Gabe wrote:

Hinsvar's WILL
Erm, why "Hinsvar's WILL"? I would like you to change it for "Hinvar's Insane" instead. I wonder what is the "Will" related with.. "Will" is pretty much the theme of the song. I name my Insane/Extra diffs with something that matches (or is the theme of) the song most of the time.

1. Perfecto! owo \owo/

Nice map, no wonder why it was already bubbled! (:

1. 00:05:784 (2) - This is not fixed. I will give you more explanations. First, on 00:00:853 (1,2) - it's appearing like this, it makes the slider (2) looking like it was centered with the beginning/end of the previous slider. On the next combo, the slider (2) is not like the previous one, it's more placed at the left.. So, with these, I would like you to make the same thing. Indeed, you will need to make some changes on the spacing of the next objects to keep it consistent.
   
   Example

   

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Collab]
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is somewhat hard to read simply because all of your combo colors look the same. I can't see any difficulty reading them.

[Hinsvar]
00:54:688 (1) - same as 01:13 in Hard
01:13:181 (2) - ^ I can't really see why should I add timing sections there. There's nothing on the song that indicates the need of volume change.

CDFA wrote:

Oh shit nigga.

Maybe I should redownload maps before checking them again.

CXu wrote:

Just a little something: You might want to change the Xinely.png to a slightly different color, since the background you're using makes it hard to actually read it. I know there's a video here, but yeah, a lot of people don't play with video

Natsu wrote:

lol xinely stop popping your own bubble xD

arken1015 wrote:

EX-Mat says 'nice mapset hehe'

/me runs

scanter wrote:

hwehwehwehwe x_x BAT BAT BAT

Garven wrote:

Hinsvar
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not seeing why you made all of these jumps considering how calm the song is right here. Mapping to the pattern independently from the music is not good form. Remapped this part.

[Hinsvar's WILL]
00:00:647 (1,2,3) - You start this map with a fairly strong following of the vocals only, but after that first part of the phrase, you go straight into the percussive-end relentlessly. I think you should stick to that and apply it to the beginning here as well. It sticks out like a sore thumb. idk about how should I exactly fix this, but... Well.

112,268,17291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,208,17496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,17702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,100,17907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,18113,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,84,18318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,164,18524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,18729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,18935,6,0,L|216:304,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,19346,2,0,L|248:48,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,19757,5,2,3:0:0:0:
108,168,19962,2,0,L|116:216,2,37.5000014305115,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,132,20270,2,0,L|164:126,1,37.5000014305115,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Garven wrote:

Sorry, been really busy lately. Um... Nah, don't worry about that~

[WILL]
00:29:003 (8) - You should ctrl + j this. The stack feels bad for the flow after all that jumping Done.
00:34:757 (1) - This sounds and plays better if you moved it to 00:34:654 - Did stuff here.
00:41:126 (5) - Move this to 00:41:229 - Remapped this silent (but full of 1/4s) part into a kinda-long stream instead.
00:41:948 (1,2) - Really don't like this spacing Remapped this part, also.
01:06:606 (1) - Going from 1x -> .5x is really huge. I'd slow down to a more sane SV - maybe .75 or .8. Done; went with 0.75x.