Hi from my mod queue :3

• OMG my eyes ;w; Combo colors very very bright. http://puu.sh/1YNbT what you think abut this variant? I think it's good for this background

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,111,255
Combo2 : 128,255,0
Combo3 : 89,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,0

Easy

00:11:948 - here you can add note, it sounds more rhythmically
00:26:332(4,1) - hm if you make blanket here it will be looks better http://puu.sh/1YMM3
00:40:305 - better end spin here better follow for music
00:48:935 - replace on slider 1/1 http://puu.sh/1YMSL
00:55:921(1) - NC bug~ add nc here
01:00:031(3) - put this slider down for symmetry with slider 1 and better flow http://puu.sh/1YMUl
01:01:263 - hm not good idea use slider 1/2 on easy~ Better replace on 2 notes or slider 1/1
01:07:017 6,7) - make blanket here http://puu.sh/1YMVm

Normal

00:21:400(2) - make this slider more symmetry http://puu.sh/1YMWt
01:00:442(7,1) - http://puu.sh/1YMXV try so, it will be more interesting

Hard

00:34:346(2) - make this slider double, it's better follow for vokal
00:40:716(4) - put this slider y256 x216, bcz overlap with slider reverse not good
00:52:222(3,4,5)- make this pattern so http://puu.sh/1YN1Y looks more beautiful
00:54:380(5,6,7,1) - http://puu.sh/1YN2Y

Collab

00:34:243 - ohhh I think better remove this note and make slider 4 double, it will be more playable
01:03:935(5) - 2 grids down for better flow
01:07:325(2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this stream more roundish http://puu.sh/1YN8b looks better for me
01:11:537(7) - wrong spacing~ plz fix it and add nc here and remove with next note

It's all for me~ To be honest normal and hard looks so ugly and randomly~ Need more work on this difficulties~ Good luck)

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod queue :3

• OMG my eyes ;w; Combo colors very very bright. http://puu.sh/1YNbT what you think abut this variant? I think it's good for this background

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,111,255
Combo2 : 128,255,0
Combo3 : 89,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,0

okay

Easy

00:11:948 - here you can add note, it sounds more rhythmically
00:26:332(4,1) - hm if you make blanket here it will be looks better http://puu.sh/1YMM3
00:40:305 - better end spin here better follow for music
00:48:935 - replace on slider 1/1 http://puu.sh/1YMSL
00:55:921(1) - NC bug~ add nc here
01:00:031(3) - put this slider down for symmetry with slider 1 and better flow http://puu.sh/1YMUl
01:01:263 - hm not good idea use slider 1/2 on easy~ Better replace on 2 notes or slider 1/1
01:07:017 6,7) - make blanket here http://puu.sh/1YMVm i think it's good for now
fix all expect red o3o
Normal

00:21:400(2) - make this slider more symmetry http://puu.sh/1YMWt
01:00:442(7,1) - http://puu.sh/1YMXV try so, it will be more interesting
Done all

Hard

00:34:346(2) - make this slider double, it's better follow for vokal keep this now
00:40:716(4) - put this slider y256 x216, bcz overlap with slider reverse not good
00:52:222(3,4,5)- make this pattern so http://puu.sh/1YN1Y looks more beautiful
00:54:380(5,6,7,1) - http://puu.sh/1YN2Y
Fix all

Collab

00:34:243 - ohhh I think better remove this note and make slider 4 double, it will be more playable keep this now
01:03:935(5) - 2 grids down for better flow
01:07:325(2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this stream more roundish http://puu.sh/1YN8b looks better for me i think it's okay for now
01:11:537(7) - wrong spacing~ plz fix it and add nc here and remove with next note

It's all for me~ To be honest normal and hard looks so ugly and randomly~ Need more work on this difficulties~ Good luck)

Thanks 4 mod and little remap hard

Hi !

as I promised for a new mapper

General
the way you use normal whistle is a bit repetitive. It's not bad at all but I find it a bit noisy , maybe can you add just only "accents?"
or some points that you think the music sounds obviously louder than other points ?
I suggest you add follow to the vocal in the music, I believe it will go along really well !
some sliders' shape can be fixed for consistency and you could try to avoid the overlapping, which caused by slider and slider

Easy
00:07:839 (1) - this overlapping with this slider 00:05:784 (2) - doesn't look good at all , could you change it ?
00:25:099 (2) - use tiny grid and move left 1 grid to balance it (x:260 y:152) so it will look really much better
00:33:318 (1) - nazi, move to x:432 y:116 to make it look balance

Normal
00:13:592 (3) - spacing error , should be 1.0 both next and prev
00:16:880 (1) - this overlapping with 00:15:647 (3) - slider doesn't look good , try changing it ?
00:19:757 (5) - I would do something for this one like this because the hitburst from the slider will appear on both 00:20:579 (1,2) - which I think you can avoid it easily
00:26:332 (1) - new combo should start on the next note(00:27:565 (2) - ) according to the new phrase so you have to remove new combo here too
00:29:620 (1) - if you chose to do ^ , you have to do the same idea on this note too , remove new combo and add at the next note instead
00:33:318 (1) - remove new combo and add at 00:34:140 (2) - instead if you did ^
also it would be nice if you can change the slider to this way , the way you did looks a bit messy from 00:31:674 (3) - ,00:32:907 (4) -
they have the perfect spacing but they don't look good as they are while playing
00:37:017 (1) - remove new combo and add at 00:37:428 (2) - ^
00:39:483 (1) - if this slider is meant to express the "stream in the song" it should just end at 00:40:305
but if you did it , it would be just a too short spinner and turn out badly so I recommend you map through this part instead of adding this spinner
another reason is , this spinner ends at the point(00:41:126) which sounds quite strange (it doesn't fit with the music imo)
00:44:825 (6) - New combo here instead of 00:45:236 (1) - as it will fit the song better
00:59:620 (5) - NC here
00:59:620 (5) - ^

Hard
00:19:757 (7,1) - this overlap on the 00:20:579 (1) - 's tail with the 00:19:757 (7) - doesn't look good imo
I think you can move the tail up a bit to avoid this
00:25:510 (1,2) - as you see, 00:24:277 (3) - and 00:24:072 (2) - still shows (even it's almost transparent) and they stack 00:25:510 (1,2) -
try to avoid this and the map will look much better , it will be more clean and easier to read while playing
00:34:346 (2) - as you did here , the rhythm comes quite suddenly with (1/4 slider) so players might remember this and expect to see this rhythm on 00:35:989 (2) - too
so I think you may add a slider at 00:35:989 (2) - and end at 00:36:092 (3) - to make it consistent
for this slider 00:36:195 (3) - , you move to 00:36:400 and end this slider at 00:36:606 (4) - so sound will be much better here
00:39:483 (2) - how about this rhythm ? , as it follows the vocal precisely

Hinsvar's WILL
00:04:962 (3) - feel strange about this slider repeat , it will be just fine if you choose to end the tail at 00:05:168 (still with this repeat)
00:05:784 (4) - but this slider is fine , it isn't strange like that one above
00:08:558 (4) - distance quite too short from the previous note , I would converse the direction of this mini 00:08:147 (3) - so it will look more comfortable to play
00:26:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it will sound better if you use normal sample hitsound (with lower volume than the rest , 30% is ok imo)
since it actually gives players better feeling
01:06:606 (1) - this slider is extremely unexpected , I would use slower velocity , but wouldn't use different speed like this
maybe(1.25 to 1.0) would be perfect
01:13:181 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - soft hitsound instead of normal ?

Collab
00:28:592 (6) - a slider instead of a note will be nice , as you can hear the vocal
it goes more smoothly than a note one
01:02:496 (4,1) - try ctrl+g these 2 notes , I think it sounds much better as the vocal accent on 01:02:907 (1) -
some triplets (stream 3 notes) sound strange
I would like to point out some of these
00:05:373 (4,5,6) -
00:51:400 (5,6,1) -
00:56:948 (1,2,3) -
01:08:455 (2,3,4) -
01:13:181 (6) - it sounds quite vaguely , I think it may fit better if you use 1/8 repeat slider instead of 1/4 stream here

I'm sorry that I can't bubble it right now.
This is a great map for the new mapper! right now.
just I think you still can improve it better and better. Good luck !

done it all
thanks frost~

Frostmourne wrote:

Hinsvar's WILL
00:04:962 (3) - feel strange about this slider repeat , it will be just fine if you choose to end the tail at 00:05:168 (still with this repeat) Did something different.
00:05:784 (4) - but this slider is fine , it isn't strange like that one above Okay then, I'll pass that.
00:08:558 (4) - distance quite too short from the previous note , I would converse the direction of this mini 00:08:147 (3) - so it will look more comfortable to play Don't think there's any better spot to place that, so I'll keep it for now.
00:26:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it will sound better if you use normal sample hitsound (with lower volume than the rest , 30% is ok imo)
since it actually gives players better feeling Done.
01:06:606 (1) - this slider is extremely unexpected , I would use slower velocity , but wouldn't use different speed like this
maybe(1.25 to 1.0) would be perfect I think this is already okay, though...
01:13:181 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - soft hitsound instead of normal ? ^

Collab
I would like to point out some of these
00:05:373 (4,5,6) -
00:51:400 (5,6,1) -
00:56:948 (1,2,3) -
01:08:455 (2,3,4) -
01:13:181 (6) - it sounds quite vaguely , I think it may fit better if you use 1/8 repeat slider instead of 1/4 stream here Umm, for my parts, I don't think they sound like 1/8s, so I'll keep it as is.

Thanks for modding~

Easy
00:00:853 (1) - remove whistle? weird to hear because the whistle sounded with finish
00:04:140 (1) - move this 3 grid up for make the tail blanket with (2). after this you should set the spacing for other notes
00:07:017 (3) - remove whistle in the tail. let the finish sound more audible for cymbal sound in music. also add new combo for this slider to make 00:04:140 (1,2) - same comboset with 00:00:853 (1,2) -
00:07:839 (1) - if you follow the suggestion in above, remove nc in here
00:12:359 (3) - this slider shape seems weird because (2) shape was straight. maybe like this more better imo. here the code, then fix the spacing for next note

96,200,12359,2,0,B|120:88|244:72,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:20:579 (1,2) - I think should be slider (2) first then (1) after. slider (2) for following the vocal more accurate. I mean like this
00:40:305 - add a timing point in here and change the audio volume into 30%?
01:01:263 (1) - add finish in the tail since you add in the other notes?
01:09:894 (4) - in the reverse, try to change whistle with finish instead? i think finish sound more suitable with the cymbal in music

Normal
00:00:853 (1) - same as easy
00:07:428 (1) - remove whistle in here, the reason same as in easy
00:15:647 (3) - move this 2 grid right for make more symmetry with (1)
00:16:880 (1) - this slider shape was too sharp and a bit broke the flow. try to the curve more soft. example like this
00:23:044 (4) - make this soft curve like this? just make the flow more better..
00:23:866 (1) - in here too, try to remove the whistle?
00:26:332 (5) - the new combo should start in here, not in the next note i guess
00:33:318 (4) - this too, the sharp curve in here was make the flow a bit broke, try to soft the curve
00:37:839 (3) - add finish in the slider's head
00:41:126 - add a timing point with 30% volume in here
00:49:757 (3) - this too.. try to soft the curve
01:00:442 (3) - move the 2nd point 2 grid down for make the slider symmetry with 01:01:263 (1) -
01:10:305 (1,2,3) - the rhythm in here was a bit weird to me.. maybe, try this one? here the code if you want change it

192,152,70305,5,4,0:0:0
264,72,70716,2,0,P|408:72|472:144,2,240,8|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,152,72770,2,0,B|188:212|160:268,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Hard
00:00:647 (1) - well, honestly I don't like if the note start before timing point. but this just my opinion :b
00:00:853 (1) - same as other diff, remove the whistle in slider's head
00:02:291 (1) - the new combo should in the next note not in here because the vocal increasing in downbeat
00:07:222 (7,8) - I think more be good if remove circle (7) then add a reverse for 00:06:606 (6) - like this
fix the spacing for other notes after this
00:11:126 (4) - if you want follow the music, then should be remove this circle and add two 1/4 slider at 00:10:921 and 00:11:229 like this
00:13:387 (x) - add a circle in here for follow the vocal more properly
00:25:099 (4,5,6,1) - I felt weird when these notes comes. I think this rhythm more good instead.
00:40:305 - add a timing point in here with 30% volume. too loud orz
00:38:250 (7) - add whistle in both part (head and tail) for follow the vocal?
00:54:380 (5) - move this 1 grid up
01:02:085 (4,1) - since slider (4) straight and the slider (1) curve, these sliders was really weird to see. consider to change the pattern..
01:05:168 (2,3) - in here should be 1/4 imo.. try to delete them and make this 1/4 slider at 01:05:168 until 01:05:270
01:13:181 (1) - to follow the music, this should be 1/8 not 1/4 :v

Insane
00:03:524 (4) - this to the next note was 1/4 beat. consider to use smaller spacing between (4) and (5) to make the player easier read it
00:13:695 (2,3) - move this 2 grid down for make the streams more curve?
00:19:962 (2,3,4) - similar with 00:03:524 (4) -
00:27:154 (1) - move this 2 grid up for make symmetry with 00:26:743 (1,3) - ?
00:28:592 (6) - I think the whistle sound more better if in here not in 00:28:798 (7) - make the consistent with 00:27:976 (3) -
00:29:003 (8) - then, add whistle in slider's reverse
00:55:099 (1) - move this 2 grid up
01:13:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - in here should be 1/8, so make the 1/8 slider?

sorry, i don't want mod collab because i'm lazy now orz
Good luck btw

Yasora wrote:

Yasora-san >////<
Easy
00:00:853 (1) - remove whistle? weird to hear because the whistle sounded with finish
00:04:140 (1) - move this 3 grid up for make the tail blanket with (2). after this you should set the spacing for other notes
00:07:017 (3) - remove whistle in the tail. let the finish sound more audible for cymbal sound in music. also add new combo for this slider to make 00:04:140 (1,2) - same comboset with 00:00:853 (1,2) -
00:07:839 (1) - if you follow the suggestion in above, remove nc in here
00:12:359 (3) - this slider shape seems weird because (2) shape was straight. maybe like this more better imo. here the code, then fix the spacing for next note

96,200,12359,2,0,B|120:88|244:72,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:20:579 (1,2) - I think should be slider (2) first then (1) after. slider (2) for following the vocal more accurate. I mean like this
00:40:305 - add a timing point in here and change the audio volume into 30%?
01:01:263 (1) - add finish in the tail since you add in the other notes?
01:09:894 (4) - in the reverse, try to change whistle with finish instead? i think finish sound more suitable with the cymbal in music
Fix All~

Normal
00:00:853 (1) - same as easy
00:07:428 (1) - remove whistle in here, the reason same as in easy
00:15:647 (3) - move this 2 grid right for make more symmetry with (1)
00:16:880 (1) - this slider shape was too sharp and a bit broke the flow. try to the curve more soft. example like this
00:23:044 (4) - make this soft curve like this? just make the flow more better..
00:23:866 (1) - in here too, try to remove the whistle?
00:26:332 (5) - the new combo should start in here, not in the next note i guess
00:33:318 (4) - this too, the sharp curve in here was make the flow a bit broke, try to soft the curve
00:37:839 (3) - add finish in the slider's head
00:41:126 - add a timing point with 30% volume in here
00:49:757 (3) - this too.. try to soft the curve
01:00:442 (3) - move the 2nd point 2 grid down for make the slider symmetry with 01:01:263 (1) -
01:10:305 (1,2,3) - the rhythm in here was a bit weird to me.. maybe, try this one? here the code if you want change it

192,152,70305,5,4,0:0:0
264,72,70716,2,0,P|408:72|472:144,2,240,8|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,152,72770,2,0,B|188:212|160:268,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Hard
00:00:647 (1) - well, honestly I don't like if the note start before timing point. but this just my opinion :b
00:00:853 (1) - same as other diff, remove the whistle in slider's head
00:02:291 (1) - the new combo should in the next note not in here because the vocal increasing in downbeat
00:07:222 (7,8) - I think more be good if remove circle (7) then add a reverse for 00:06:606 (6) - like this
fix the spacing for other notes after this
00:11:126 (4) - if you want follow the music, then should be remove this circle and add two 1/4 slider at 00:10:921 and 00:11:229 like this
00:13:387 (x) - add a circle in here for follow the vocal more properly
00:25:099 (4,5,6,1) - I felt weird when these notes comes. I think this rhythm more good instead.
00:40:305 - add a timing point in here with 30% volume. too loud orz
00:38:250 (7) - add whistle in both part (head and tail) for follow the vocal?
00:54:380 (5) - move this 1 grid up
01:02:085 (4,1) - since slider (4) straight and the slider (1) curve, these sliders was really weird to see. consider to change the pattern..
01:05:168 (2,3) - in here should be 1/4 imo.. try to delete them and make this 1/4 slider at 01:05:168 until 01:05:270
01:13:181 (1) - to follow the music, this should be 1/8 not 1/4 :v

sorry, i don't want mod collab because i'm lazy now orz
Good luck btw

Fix all~
Thank you so much yasora

Eh, Yasora nongol o.o

Yasora wrote:

Insane
00:03:524 (4) - this to the next note was 1/4 beat. consider to use smaller spacing between (4) and (5) to make the player easier read it Actually, I've tested it many times and can't see any problem reading it. Heck, I actually think making these two sliders spaced so far like that is the best way to map this spot.
00:13:695 (2,3) - move this 2 grid down for make the streams more curve? Done.
00:19:962 (2,3,4) - similar with 00:03:524 (4) - Same as 00:03:524 (4), also.
00:27:154 (1) - move this 2 grid up for make symmetry with 00:26:743 (1,3) - ? Uhm, this is intentional; I want this slider to be centered on the x axis.
00:28:592 (6) - I think the whistle sound more better if in here not in 00:28:798 (7) - make the consistent with 00:27:976 (3) - Nope; (3) has a whistle because the vocal is strong, but (6)'s vocal isn't, and I can't see any other reason to swap the whistle.
00:29:003 (8) - then, add whistle in slider's reverse Since I didn't follow the suggestion above, I guess no.
00:55:099 (1) - move this 2 grid up I want this to be in line with 00:54:277 (1,3,5,7), so no.
01:13:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - in here should be 1/8, so make the 1/8 slider? Done.

sorry, i don't want mod collab because i'm lazy now orz
Good luck btw

Thanks for the mod Yasora \:D/

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
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General

• • 01:13:592 (1) - You want to decrease the volume slowly here, right? Try to add these green timing sections, this spinner sounds way better.
  
  SPOILER

  

Easy

• • 00:05:784 (2,1) - Delete (1) and add a repeat on (2).
  • 00:14:003 (1) - End this slider at 00:14:825 and add a circle at 00:15:236.
  • 00:46:469 (3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:52:633 (2) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:52:633.
  • 00:57:976 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:00:031 (3,4,1) - Same as 00:46:469.
  • 01:07:017 (4) - Add a repeat.
  • 01:09:483 (3) - Delete this circle.

Normal

• • 00:16:880 (1,2) - Move the slider 1/1 later and move the circle where the slider was. (00:16:880)
  • 00:39:483 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:37:017 like you did on Easy and end it at 00:40:305, then start a slider at 00:41:126 and end it at 00:41:537.
  • 01:09:894 (3,1,2,3) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • 00:03:935 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:05:373 (3,4,5) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:11:537 (1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:14:620 (2) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:14:825.
  • 00:19:757 (7) - End this slider at 00:20:065 and add a repeat.
  • 00:35:989 (2) - End this slider at 00:36:092.
  • 00:38:044 (5,6) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:41:332 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:13:798 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier.

Hinsvar's WILL

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • Approach Rate: 8
  • 00:01:983 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:05:065 (3,4) - End (3) at 00:05:270, move (4) 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 00:05:579.
  • 00:10:099 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:10:202.
  • 00:35:989 (2) - Remove the repeat.

Collab

• • 00:24:894 (3,4) - Keep the spacing consistent here, move (4) at x:216 y:64.
  • 00:34:243 (3) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:35:887 (3) - ^
  • 00:36:811 (8,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 00:36:811. Start the next spinner 1/2 earlier and end it at 00:40:305.
  • 01:08:250 (1) - Move this circle at x:352 y:332.

xxheroxx wrote:

Hinsvar's WILL

• • HP Drain Rate: 8 Umm, I think HP9 is the most fitting drain setting for this map; it's still kinda forgiving at 8.
  • Approach Rate: 8 Nope; this map definitely needs a high AR considering its intensity.
  • 00:01:983 (x) - Add a circle. I can't see anything the circle could follow there, so no.
  • 00:05:065 (3,4) - End (3) at 00:05:270, move (4) 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 00:05:579. The rhythm is... really weird, so no.
  • 00:10:099 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:10:202. Done.
  • 00:35:989 (2) - Remove the repeat. ^

Collab

• • 00:24:894 (3,4) - Keep the spacing consistent here, move (4) at x:216 y:64. Done.

Thanks for the mod~

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • 01:13:592 (1) - You want to decrease the volume slowly here, right? Try to add these green timing sections, this spinner sounds way better.
  
  SPOILER

  
  done it >w<

Easy

• • 00:05:784 (2,1) - Delete (1) and add a repeat on (2).
  • 00:14:003 (1) - End this slider at 00:14:825 and add a circle at 00:15:236.
  • 00:46:469 (3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:52:633 (2) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:52:633.
  • 00:57:976 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:00:031 (3,4,1) - Same as 00:46:469.
  • 01:07:017 (4) - Add a repeat.
  • 01:09:483 (3) - Delete this circle. fix all

Normal

• • 00:16:880 (1,2) - Move the slider 1/1 later and move the circle where the slider was. (00:16:880) done
  • 00:39:483 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:37:017 like you did on Easy and end it at 00:40:305, then start a slider at 00:41:126 and end it at 00:41:537. i think it's okay now
  • 01:09:894 (3,1,2,3) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  same as 00:39:483

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 6 done
  • 00:03:935 (x) - Add a circle. no
  • 00:05:373 (3,4,5) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  i want keep this pattern
  • 00:11:537 (1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  done
  • 00:14:620 (2) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:14:825. no i think
  • 00:19:757 (7) - End this slider at 00:20:065 and add a repeat. done
  • 00:35:989 (2) - End this slider at 00:36:092. ^
  • 00:38:044 (5,6) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  nice! done
  • 00:41:332 (x) - Add a circle. no i think
  • 01:13:798 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier it's okay i think.

Collab
• 00:34:243 (3) - Delete this circle. done
• 00:35:887 (3) - ^ ^
• 00:36:811 (8,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 00:36:811. Start the next spinner 1/2 earlier and end it at 00:40:305. no i think
• 01:08:250 (1) - Move this circle at x:352 y:332. done

Thanks hero!

hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥

[General]
all fine owo

[Easy]

1. 00:02:496 (2,1) - spacing
2. 00:09:483 - feels really empty here add a circle
3. 00:12:359 (3,4,1) - it would be better if you follow the curve like :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:23:455 (4) - new combo here and remove it from the next slider
5. 01:02:085 (2,3) - spacing

[Normal]

1. 00:16:880 (1) - whistle slider end
2. 00:17:702 (2) - whistle slider end
3. 00:49:757 (3,4) - spacing

[Hard]

1. 00:21:195 (2) - add a whistle at beginn of the slider
2. 01:03:524 (2,3,4,5) - what about something like:
   
   SPOILER

   

the rest is fine fine for me \o3o/ good luck

fix all
thanks moe Lally ~ :3

100 times update \o\

~Hinsvar's WILL~

HP Drain is way too high, reduce it a bit please.

00:47:805 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:010 (2) - New combo.

~Collab~

00:05:373 (4) - This slider doesn't follow anything.
00:36:400 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is boring imo, make it better.
00:49:346 (1) - You don't need this new combo here.
01:07:017 (2,3) - This stack confused me a lot.

Andrea wrote:

~Hinsvar's WILL~

HP Drain is way too high, reduce it a bit please. ...k, 8 I guess, but I notched the OD to 8, since the diff is going to be kinda easy @ HP8 (the recovery rate is kinda fast even compared to other maps that uses HP7. Don't ask me why; I don't even know).

00:47:805 (1) - Remove new combo. Okay.
00:48:010 (2) - New combo. ^

Thanks

fix all! ~
Thanks Andrea ~ :3

and updated~ <3

@iMirai: i'm sorry but i not change anyone
but thanks 4 trying modding and give support (:

Normal
00:27:134 (1,2) -
00:07:839 (2) -
and so on ---I think it will be better to make the sliders more smoothly
Hard
00:16:058 (6) - It looks weird
And GJ for 1st map:D

I'll recheck once you've checked the mod above my post.

Andrea wrote:

I'll recheck once you've checked the mod above my post.

Umm, she has stated on the post above that mod (by editing her post) that she didn't change anything, so feel free to recheck it now

Typing on a cellphone is uncomfortable. Really. And I'm supposed to sleep now...

I guess this is ready then.

Bubbled~

yay~ \:D/

thanks again for the bubble Andrea~ \:3/

eee

Some mod if u want

[Easy]

1. 00:05:784 (2) - add whistle in begining & end of slider
2. 01:01:263 (1) - add whistle hitsound in end of slider
3. 01:07:428 (4) - I think you can remove this hitsound

[Hard]

1. 00:06:606 (6) - add whistle in begining of slider
2. 00:26:743 (4) - add whistle in end of slider
3. 00:28:387 - you can add note in there, move slider to 00:28:592 - and make slider to 1/2 (optional)
4. 00:54:894 (7) - add whistle hitsound if you want

[Collab]

1. 00:28:592 (6) - move whistle hitsound to 00:28:798 (6) -
2. 00:33:318 (1) - add whistle hitsound (optional)
3. 00:34:962 (1) - ^
4. 00:36:400 (4) - remove clap hitsound and add whistle
5. 00:36:811 (5) - add clap hitsound

for Normal, i will mod soon :p

well, fixed some
thanks rey, normal fix 1 mod. will update when someone recheck

waiting someone rebubble since Andrea not BAT again ;3;

Normal now.. sorry for late

[Normal]

1. 00:07:428 (1) - You can add Whistle
2. 00:47:702 (6) - add whistle in beginning of slider
   There are 2 options:
   1. if you still want to add whistle in 01:09:894 (4) - , you should add whistle too in 01:09:072 (2) -
   2. if not, you can remove whistle in 01:09:894 (4) -

Easy

1. 00:05:784 (2) - With this slider, why don't you move it like you've done with 00:02:496 (2) - ? It was looking good, to be honest c:
2. 00:21:811 - This circle should be having a clap instead of a whistle, the whistle should be placed to the end of the previous slider's end instead.
3. 01:09:894 (4) - I personally think you should be adding a new combo here, since it's a long slider with a reverse arrow, it's containing a lot of measures, and yeah, a new combo could be good in here.

Normal

1. 00:21:400 (2) - There's missing whistles on both start and end of this slider, it would be more consistent if you're adding whistles.
2. 00:27:565 (1) - The emplacement and the flow with the previous slider is.. ugly? This slider is placed behind the previous slider, and the previous slider has a curved form that goes to the left, but this slider is at the right. You should be moving this slider somewhere else to offer something that makes a better flow and more enjoyable to play. I am mostly suggesting you to stack it with your the previous circle, 00:25:921 (4) - . It should be doing something similar to this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:36:606 (4,1,2,3,4) - You could be making a better star from with these objects.. that could be nice.
4. 01:09:894 (4,1,2) - There's a little thing I want to point out here, the slider is starting a bit late, which makes this pattern sounding a bit weird. For this, I would like you to highlight both (1,2) and reverse their emplacement on the timeline by doing CTRL+G. At the same time, delete the new combo on the circle (4), it should have one since it's placed on a downbeat. It should be looking like this after the changes:
   

Hard

1. 00:38:455 (6,7) - Shouldn't these circles be looking like these 00:37:633 (3,4) - but reversed? Delete the circles (6,7); Copy/Paste the circles (3,4) and do CTRL+H. (and also do CTRL+G) It's going to reverse the emplacement of these circles at the right.
   
   Example

   

Collab

1. Looks fine!

Hinsvar's WILL
Erm, why "Hinsvar's WILL"? I would like you to change it for "Hinvar's Insane" instead. I wonder what is the "Will" related with..

1. Perfecto! owo

Nice map, no wonder why it was already bubbled!

Gabe wrote:

Hinsvar's WILL
Erm, why "Hinsvar's WILL"? I would like you to change it for "Hinvar's Insane" instead. I wonder what is the "Will" related with.. "Will" is pretty much the theme of the song. I name my Insane/Extra diffs with something that matches (or is the theme of) the song most of the time.

1. Perfecto! owo \owo/

Nice map, no wonder why it was already bubbled! (:

Thanks for checking my diff

thanks 4 mod gabe
fix all and updated ~

You fixed all?

Easy

1. 00:05:784 (2) - This is not fixed. I will give you more explanations. First, on 00:00:853 (1,2) - it's appearing like this, it makes the slider (2) looking like it was centered with the beginning/end of the previous slider. On the next combo, the slider (2) is not like the previous one, it's more placed at the left.. So, with these, I would like you to make the same thing. Indeed, you will need to make some changes on the spacing of the next objects to keep it consistent.
   
   Example

   

Call me back to restore the bubble.

Please use original tittle : →unfinished→ (TV Size)

No kds, good luck.

fixed and change tittle as Rika's suggest
thanks :3

Let's give the bubble back.

Thank you so much Gabe

go rank ^q^

go xinely nice map x_X/

Go Go !!

[Easy]
A custom whistle for your normal samples would make this map sound a ton better

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
01:13:181 (4) - make a new timing section for this slider with volume at 60%

[Collab]
01:13:181 (6) - same as in Hard
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is somewhat hard to read simply because all of your combo colors look the same.

[Hinsvar]
00:54:688 (1) - same as 01:13 in Hard
01:13:181 (2) - ^

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Collab]
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is somewhat hard to read simply because all of your combo colors look the same. I can't see any difficulty reading them.

[Hinsvar]
00:54:688 (1) - same as 01:13 in Hard
01:13:181 (2) - ^ I can't really see why should I add timing sections there. There's nothing on the song that indicates the need of volume change.

Thanks for checking anyway (:

i'm not change as hinsvar's response too

and thanks 4 support guys ~ :3

EDIT : @ CDFA : i checking the tags and all of diff is same, i'm not put taiko guest diff name because i don't put in mapset (:

Make sure the tags of this map are the same. Collab, Normal, and Easy are all missing the taiko guest differ's names.

Sorry I didn't catch this in my last mod D:.