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[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
[Easy]
00:55:921 (1) - You need more recovery time after spinners for Easy difficulties. It might be best to map through the spinner to maintain rhythmic integrity.
[Normal]
00:37:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part was a little boring against all the triplet rhythms going on. Maybe use something like this to mix it up a bit?
[Hard]
00:24:894 (4) - Having a stack here wasn't anticipated at all. It went against your general flow of constant motion - especially when you have such a rising tension here in the song.
00:43:592 (4,5) - There as well. Why are these stacked? I'm not seeing any sort of pattern or musical emphasis for them.
00:45:647 (2) - If you stack here, it would be more fitting if you stacked with each of these rising phrases, but you don't. It just feels randomly placed and unfitting.
In general the patterns used so far feel random at best, with very little going on in terms of flow.
I'll finish this later.
Edit:
Continuing from hard:
01:02:085 (4,1) - Overlap is kinda ugly
[Collab]
Hinsvar
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not seeing why you made all of these jumps considering how calm the song is right here. Mapping to the pattern independently from the music is not good form.
Xinely
00:29:620 (1,2) - Not sure why you used a stack here. It's a moving part, and your patterns suggest moving, but you stack instead. They make more sense when you used them at 00:33:318 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
[Hinsvar's WILL]
00:00:647 (1,2,3) - You start this map with a fairly strong following of the vocals only, but after that first part of the phrase, you go straight into the percussive-end relentlessly. I think you should stick to that and apply it to the beginning here as well. It sticks out like a sore thumb.
I'll edit in the rest later.
Edit:
Sorry, been really busy lately. Um...
[WILL]
00:29:003 (8) - You should ctrl + j this. The stack feels bad for the flow after all that jumping
00:34:757 (1) - This sounds and plays better if you moved it to 00:34:654 -
00:41:126 (5) - Move this to 00:41:229 -
00:41:948 (1,2) - Really don't like this spacing
01:06:606 (1) - Going from 1x -> .5x is really huge. I'd slow down to a more sane SV - maybe .75 or .8.
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
[Easy]
00:55:921 (1) - You need more recovery time after spinners for Easy difficulties. It might be best to map through the spinner to maintain rhythmic integrity.
[Normal]
00:37:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part was a little boring against all the triplet rhythms going on. Maybe use something like this to mix it up a bit?
[Hard]
00:24:894 (4) - Having a stack here wasn't anticipated at all. It went against your general flow of constant motion - especially when you have such a rising tension here in the song.
00:43:592 (4,5) - There as well. Why are these stacked? I'm not seeing any sort of pattern or musical emphasis for them.
00:45:647 (2) - If you stack here, it would be more fitting if you stacked with each of these rising phrases, but you don't. It just feels randomly placed and unfitting.
In general the patterns used so far feel random at best, with very little going on in terms of flow.
I'll finish this later.
Edit:
Continuing from hard:
01:02:085 (4,1) - Overlap is kinda ugly
[Collab]
Hinsvar
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not seeing why you made all of these jumps considering how calm the song is right here. Mapping to the pattern independently from the music is not good form.
Xinely
00:29:620 (1,2) - Not sure why you used a stack here. It's a moving part, and your patterns suggest moving, but you stack instead. They make more sense when you used them at 00:33:318 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
[Hinsvar's WILL]
00:00:647 (1,2,3) - You start this map with a fairly strong following of the vocals only, but after that first part of the phrase, you go straight into the percussive-end relentlessly. I think you should stick to that and apply it to the beginning here as well. It sticks out like a sore thumb.
I'll edit in the rest later.
Edit:
Sorry, been really busy lately. Um...
[WILL]
00:29:003 (8) - You should ctrl + j this. The stack feels bad for the flow after all that jumping
00:34:757 (1) - This sounds and plays better if you moved it to 00:34:654 -
00:41:126 (5) - Move this to 00:41:229 -
00:41:948 (1,2) - Really don't like this spacing
01:06:606 (1) - Going from 1x -> .5x is really huge. I'd slow down to a more sane SV - maybe .75 or .8.
Topic Starter
Fix all~
thanks Garven..will upload when finish modded
Updated
waiting for Garven-san ><
thanks Garven..
Updated
waiting for Garven-san ><
Thanks for moddingGarven wrote:
Hinsvar
00:17:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not seeing why you made all of these jumps considering how calm the song is right here. Mapping to the pattern independently from the music is not good form. Remapped this part.
[Hinsvar's WILL]
00:00:647 (1,2,3) - You start this map with a fairly strong following of the vocals only, but after that first part of the phrase, you go straight into the percussive-end relentlessly. I think you should stick to that and apply it to the beginning here as well. It sticks out like a sore thumb. idk about how should I exactly fix this, but... Well.
@Xinely: Mel, gantiin part-ku di collab plz~ *runs*
Collab:
112,268,17291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,208,17496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,17702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,100,17907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,18113,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,84,18318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,164,18524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,18729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,18935,6,0,L|216:304,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,19346,2,0,L|248:48,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,19757,5,2,3:0:0:0:
108,168,19962,2,0,L|116:216,2,37.5000014305115,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,132,20270,2,0,L|164:126,1,37.5000014305115,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Also, it seems you're still going to continue modding WILL, so... I'll wait.
Mod done, Hins. Check it out and see what you think. I rechecked all the other fixes and they're okay. Let me know when this is ready again.
Thanks for moddingGarven wrote:
Sorry, been really busy lately. Um... Nah, don't worry about that~
[WILL]
00:29:003 (8) - You should ctrl + j this. The stack feels bad for the flow after all that jumping Done.
00:34:757 (1) - This sounds and plays better if you moved it to 00:34:654 - Did stuff here.
00:41:126 (5) - Move this to 00:41:229 - Remapped this silent (but full of 1/4s) part into a kinda-long stream instead.
00:41:948 (1,2) - Really don't like this spacing Remapped this part, also.
01:06:606 (1) - Going from 1x -> .5x is really huge. I'd slow down to a more sane SV - maybe .75 or .8. Done; went with 0.75x.
http://puu.sh/2vixD
Topic Starter
Thanks Garven 
Updated ~
Updated ~
go rank hue
Ah whoops, 00:05:784 (2) - is unsnapped in easy.
Topic Starter
Fixed and updated ~
EDIT : lazy add post count
Thank you so much Garven >////////<
EDIT : lazy add post count
Thank you so much Garven >////////<
And rebubbled
[General]
- Combo colors 1 and 4 really look alike in play given your custom hitcircle. I would suggested changing them to a different hue.
- syaoran bg.jpg is unneeded. Please remove it.
[Normal]
- 00:38:866 (3) - The slider here doesn't look so good aesthetically. May I suggest something like this? Code: http://puu.sh/2w8CU
[Hinsvar's WILL]
- 01:03:935 (2) - Consider placing it like this for better circular flow.
[Collab]
- 00:37:017 (1) - I really think this is an unfitting place for a spinner. Map this part with notes and sliders instead.
- Combo colors 1 and 4 really look alike in play given your custom hitcircle. I would suggested changing them to a different hue.
- syaoran bg.jpg is unneeded. Please remove it.
[Normal]
- 00:38:866 (3) - The slider here doesn't look so good aesthetically. May I suggest something like this? Code: http://puu.sh/2w8CU
[Hinsvar's WILL]
- 01:03:935 (2) - Consider placing it like this for better circular flow.
[Collab]
- 00:37:017 (1) - I really think this is an unfitting place for a spinner. Map this part with notes and sliders instead.
Topic Starter
thanks 4 mod NoHitter XDNoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Combo colors 1 and 4 really look alike in play given your custom hitcircle. I would suggested changing them to a different hue. changed ><
- syaoran bg.jpg is unneeded. Please remove it. i try redownload my map and there is no syaoran bg in my folder >_<
[Normal]
- 00:38:866 (3) - The slider here doesn't look so good aesthetically. May I suggest something like this? Code: http://puu.sh/2w8CU
fix all
[Hinsvar's WILL]
- 01:03:935 (2) - Consider placing it like this for better circular flow.
[Collab]
- 00:37:017 (1) - I really think this is an unfitting place for a spinner. Map this part with notes and sliders instead. changed
Updated~
EDIT: Thank u so much NoHitter >///<
Well that's odd: http://puu.sh/2w9Ma There's a syaoran bg.jpg in my song folder.... Well it seems to be gone after I redownloaded the beatmap, so nevermind.
Rebubbled!
Rebubbled!
The current video resolution (1280x720) is unrankable. Please make it under 854x480. Also you may take mine from my mapset if you want a low quality one :>
The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format.Call me back once that's been solved and I'll gladly rebubble.
Topic Starter
will fix tommorrow orz
Omg, reduced but same quality with melo's map
okay changed video taken from melo's map
updated ><
waiting melo for recheck >o<
Sorry for the delay o_o
Topic Starter
no problem :3
thanks 4 rebubble melo~ :3
thanks 4 rebubble melo~ :3
Wake up your burst of sensation
congratz Xinely~
oh god, finally. Congrats!
Congratz Xinely
congrats on rank ^^
Gabe wrote:
oh god, finally. Congrats!
\o/ Gratz
Topic Starter
thank you so much Garven >///<
and thanks everyone \:D/
especially for Gabe who give bubble back
and thanks everyone \:D/
especially for Gabe who give bubble back
It's ranked! Gratz!
Congrats for the second ranked map, moe girl \:D/
...Although I've said that an hour ago to her.
Also yay for more ranked guest diffs \:D/
Also yay for more ranked guest diffs \:D/
omedetou Xinely~
hinsvar
stop having ranked GDs and start having ranked beatmaps please
/runs
stop having ranked GDs and start having ranked beatmaps please
/runs
I wholeheartedly agree with this.inverness wrote:
hinsvar
stop having ranked GDs and start having ranked beatmaps please
/runs
Rank Congratulations Xinely.
also Hinsvar start to work on ranking your own map! d:
also Hinsvar start to work on ranking your own map! d:
hey! gz for this rank 
hinely~ gratz! *hagu*
grats
Akhirnya di Ranked juga. Congrats Xinely XD
I think this is gift for Xinely before doing final exam tomorrow :3
I think this is gift for Xinely before doing final exam tomorrow :3
Gratz~
congrats xinely o/
Topic Starter
thank you all
Yay. \:3/ Accel World forever. *-*
grats xinely! hinsvar is proud /runs
gratz!!!!! 
Give me a cookies *.*
Topic Starter
lol of course he proud *slappedHeatKai wrote:
grats xinely! hinsvar is proud /runs
also thanks all ><