1. 249's Easy (2,56 stars, 94 notes)
2. Fiya's Taiko Oni (4,89 stars, 496 notes)
3. Milksane (5 stars, 282 notes)
4. Normal (4,18 stars, 127 notes)
5. pali's Hard (4,87 stars, 170 notes)

CXu wrote:

ok.jpg

Hanyuu-chan wrote:

SPOILER

16:00 Gyuunyu: : Hanyuu ~ testa min map
16:00 : *Gyuunyu is listening to (LiSA - ~Sword art online~ Crossing field (TV size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55138]
16:00 Hanyuu-chan: : ok
16:04 Gyuunyu: : vad tyckte du ?
16:04 Hanyuu-chan: : 00:20:091 (1,2,3,4,5) -
16:05 Hanyuu-chan: : svårt o läsa på första
16:05 Hanyuu-chan: : fast det kanske bara är jag
16:05 Gyuunyu: : hmm
16:05 Gyuunyu: : jo det är rätt svårt
16:05 Hanyuu-chan: : tycker det skulle vara bättre o flytta den
16:06 Hanyuu-chan: : lite längre ner
16:06 Hanyuu-chan: : under slidern
16:06 Gyuunyu: : mm
16:07 Gyuunyu: : fixad ~
16:07 Hanyuu-chan: : updata !
16:07 Gyuunyu: : ah måste man upload igen ?
16:07 Hanyuu-chan: : aaaa
16:09 Gyuunyu: : posta nåt :> helped me
16:09 Hanyuu-chan: : mkt bättre
16:12 Hanyuu-chan: : hmm annars ser den bra ut

rickyboi wrote:

Good map. Good luck on this one!

irc mod

22:01 Gyuunyu: : Rickyboi could you look at my map ? :3
22:02 Gyuunyu: : np y u no work :l
22:03 : *Gyuunyu is watching (LiSA - ~Sword art online~ Crossing field (TV size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55138] [Milksane]
22:03 rickyboi: : ohh
22:03 rickyboi: : later
22:04 rickyboi: : I will look
22:08 rickyboi: : downloading
22:08 Gyuunyu: :
22:13 rickyboi: : hmm
22:13 rickyboi: : it's pretty good
22:13 Gyuunyu: :
22:13 rickyboi: : put some hitsounds
22:13 rickyboi: : so it won't sound dull
22:13 Gyuunyu: : yes where going to do that
22:13 rickyboi: : ok
22:14 rickyboi: : also
22:14 rickyboi: : You need to resnap
22:14 rickyboi: : all your notes
22:14 Gyuunyu: : o: really ?
22:14 rickyboi: : yes
22:14 rickyboi: : they're all unsnapped
22:14 rickyboi: : to the ticks
22:14 Gyuunyu: : how do i resnap ? heh
22:15 rickyboi: : go to timing
22:15 rickyboi: : besides Design
22:15 rickyboi: : and Web
22:15 rickyboi: : then push the "resnap all notes" button
22:15 Gyuunyu: : web ?
22:16 rickyboi: : http://puu.sh/JzVK
22:16 rickyboi: : it's located above
22:16 Gyuunyu: : oh
22:16 Gyuunyu: : but i don't have a '' resnap all notes'' button at Timing
22:17 rickyboi: : http://puu.sh/JzWv
22:17 Gyuunyu: : oh nvm found it :X
22:17 rickyboi: : lol
22:17 Gyuunyu: : what does it do ?
22:18 rickyboi: : it matches your notes onto the white/red/blue lines on the timeline
22:18 rickyboi: : so it's sycnhed to your offset.
22:18 rickyboi: : synched*
22:18 Gyuunyu: : ah i see, thanks ~
22:18 rickyboi: : you probably changed your offset after doing the whole map
22:19 Gyuunyu: : i did change when i made 30%
22:19 Gyuunyu: : off the map
22:19 rickyboi: : oh
22:19 rickyboi: : ok
22:19 rickyboi: : hmm
22:19 rickyboi: : I noticed something
22:19 rickyboi: : 00:40:217 (1,2) -
22:19 rickyboi: : this is bad
22:20 Gyuunyu: : yeah
22:20 rickyboi: : since you turned off the volume
22:20 rickyboi: : you should delete (2)
22:20 rickyboi: : would go better like this
22:20 rickyboi: : http://puu.sh/JzYQ
22:21 Gyuunyu: : yes i was much better
22:21 Gyuunyu: :
22:21 rickyboi: : heh
22:22 rickyboi: : 01:00:161 (1,2) -
22:22 rickyboi: : bad pattern imo
22:22 rickyboi: : mappers rarely use those
22:23 rickyboi: : it would be good if 1 and 2 had different colors.
22:23 rickyboi: : I suggest you move (1) to the center though
22:23 Gyuunyu: : yeah o:
22:24 Gyuunyu: : http://puu.sh/JA1f like this
22:24 Gyuunyu: : ?
22:24 rickyboi: : hmm
22:24 rickyboi: : move it a little above
22:25 rickyboi: : it centers through both of the sliders
22:25 Gyuunyu: : ah yes :>
22:26 rickyboi: : 01:01:334 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
22:26 rickyboi: : this is kinda hard to follow
22:26 rickyboi: : since (5) was being overlapped by the previous slider.
22:26 Gyuunyu: : 01:01:669 (5) - this ?
22:26 rickyboi: : yes that
22:27 rickyboi: : you might want to make a better pattern out of those.
22:27 rickyboi: : also (10) should have the new combo because it has the white tick in it.
22:27 rickyboi: : so you'll have to remove (10) insane the pattern you're going to make.
22:27 rickyboi: : inside the pattern*
22:28 Gyuunyu: : ah okies
22:29 rickyboi: : 01:06:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - might be better if it was a curve
22:30 Gyuunyu: : http://puu.sh/JA4R new patern how does it look ?
22:30 rickyboi: : 01:16:250 (1,2) - this is really a far jump. I think you should rework on that.
22:30 rickyboi: : so you can make a better pattern on 01:16:250 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:30 Gyuunyu: : okies
22:31 rickyboi: : 00:17:591 (1) - bad slider
22:31 rickyboi: : make it better?
22:32 Gyuunyu: : btw post something in the forums this is really good mod :3
22:32 rickyboi: : ok
22:32 Gyuunyu: : will make it better
22:32 rickyboi: : 00:23:289 (5) - this one also bad :<
22:34 Gyuunyu: : would this make for 00:17:591 (1) - http://puu.sh/JA7h
22:34 rickyboi: : looks good
22:35 rickyboi: : 00:30:161 (6) - put it somewhere.
22:35 rickyboi: : kinda confusing to play
22:36 Gyuunyu: : above 7 ?
22:36 Gyuunyu: : would it work ?
22:36 rickyboi: : yea
22:36 Gyuunyu: : okies
22:36 Gyuunyu: : this part 00:23:289 (5) - http://puu.sh/JA97 ?
22:36 rickyboi: : 01:17:256 (1) - delete this, it's starting on the red-tick
22:37 rickyboi: : pretty awkward
22:37 Gyuunyu: : will think about that slider
22:37 rickyboi: : ok
22:37 Gyuunyu: : new one *
22:37 Gyuunyu: : ah it sounds better when i deleted the (1)
22:37 Gyuunyu: : :>
22:37 rickyboi: : yes
22:38 rickyboi: : add a note at 01:17:423 -
22:39 rickyboi: : something like this? http://puu.sh/JAb9
22:39 Gyuunyu: : oo looks nice
22:40 rickyboi: : well so far that's the only thing I can give you right now.
22:40 rickyboi: : some tips
22:40 Gyuunyu: : i was very help full !
22:41 Gyuunyu: : :>
22:41 rickyboi: : http://puu.sh/JAck - sliders that short
22:41 rickyboi: : are placed better on white ticks
22:42 rickyboi: : 01:14:239 (1) - this one
22:42 Gyuunyu: : o okies
22:43 rickyboi: : might be better if this http://puu.sh/JAdj
22:44 rickyboi: : Well that's it for now. Good luck! I might recheck if you made more progress

Nidert wrote:

SPOILER

SPOILER

16:37 Gyuunyu: : nidert !
16:38 : *Gyuunyu is editing (SWORD ART ONLINE LiSA - Crossing field (TV size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55138]
16:38 Gyuunyu: :
16:38 Nidert: : xd ändra Geuss diff till Guest
16:38 Gyuunyu: : skrev jag geuss ?
16:38 Gyuunyu: : xD
16:39 Nidert: : Guess
16:39 Nidert: : aa
16:39 Nidert: : xD
16:39 Gyuunyu: : lolol
16:48 Nidert: : ok
16:48 Nidert: : ta ned
16:48 Nidert: : AR
16:48 Nidert: : till 8
16:48 Nidert: : 00:31:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
16:48 Nidert: : den här streamen
16:48 Nidert: : ta bort 1 och 2
16:48 Nidert: : den ska börja
16:48 Nidert: : 00:31:501 -
16:49 Gyuunyu: : okies
16:58 Gyuunyu: : ar 8 ska jag tänka på också
16:58 Gyuunyu: : tyckte det var för segt
16:59 Nidert: : men mapen ska vara AR 8
17:03 Nidert: : 01:02:507 (1,2) -
17:03 Nidert: : de här två
17:03 Nidert: : kan du lika gärna
17:03 Nidert: : lägga under
17:03 Nidert: : 7
17:04 Gyuunyu: : okies :>
17:08 Nidert: : 01:11:725 (7,1) -
17:08 Nidert: : dis jump
17:08 Nidert: : för stor
17:08 Gyuunyu: : o:
17:08 Gyuunyu: : okies ska gör den närmare
17:09 Nidert: : ey
17:09 Gyuunyu: : mm ?
17:10 Nidert: : streamsen
17:10 Nidert: : låter mkt bättre
17:10 Nidert: : om du
17:10 Nidert: : börjar
17:10 Nidert: : den neda
17:10 Nidert: : ena
17:10 Nidert: : w8
17:10 Nidert: : ska ta pic
17:10 Nidert: : 01:10:217 (1,2,3,4,5) -
17:10 Nidert: : den första börjar där
17:10 Nidert: : 01:10:887 (6) -
17:10 Nidert: : oj
17:11 Nidert: : 01:10:887 (6,7,8,9,10) -
17:11 Nidert: : den andra där
17:11 Nidert: : 01:11:557 (11,12,13,14,15) -
17:11 Nidert: : den tredje här
17:11 Nidert: : men då kommer den där jumpen försvinna
17:11 Nidert: : testa så
17:12 Gyuunyu: : ta bild förstår inte riktigt
17:13 Nidert: : http://puu.sh/JAyK
17:13 Nidert: : de är lika stora
17:14 Gyuunyu: : ah
17:15 Gyuunyu: : låter bättre med lika stora :>
17:15 Nidert: : aa
17:17 Nidert: : 00:39:881 (8,1) -
17:17 Nidert: : låter fett konstigt
17:18 Gyuunyu: : ah hade en annan patern där förut
17:18 Gyuunyu: : så fick muta en viss del
17:18 Nidert: : testa
17:18 Nidert: : och ha
17:18 Nidert: : det såhär
17:19 Nidert: : http://puu.sh/JAEl så istället
17:20 Nidert: : http://puu.sh/JAEU
17:20 Nidert: : lr såhär låter det bäst
17:20 Nidert: : men då måste du ändra grejen
17:20 Nidert: : efter
17:21 Gyuunyu: : ah låter bättre
17:23 Gyuunyu: : fixa det
17:23 Gyuunyu: : mycket bättre
17:23 Nidert: : ^^

1. Tags have to be fixed:
   
   - Add Fiya & palinus in tags on all diff. (Maybe add "opening" too)
   - TV Size doesn't have to be added in the tags, because it's already in the title of the beatmap. Remove the tag in all diff.
   - Same with this one, LiSA is already added in as the artist, therefore you don't have to add it as a tag. Remove from all diff.
   - Again, you put Sword Art Online in the tags too. It's already in the title of the beatmap and the source, so remove it from all diff.
   - Misspelled: SOA. Change it to SAO = Sword Art Online
   
   *Add same tags and missing tags in all diffs. Fiya's Taiko is missing few tags from other diffs, so add from others in here too.

1. Title, Preview Point & Others:
   
   - Disable "Letterbox during breaks" in Insane and other diffs. if there aren't going to be any breaks. Good job to Fiya.
   - Set a preview point at 00:45:580() - on all diffs. (Go to that point, Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point)
   - Fix the title: "Crossing field (TV size)" to "crossing field (TV Size)" / small captial at "crossing" due to opening video shows it.
   (Talking about opening video, why not add the opening video?)

KinomiCandy wrote:

[Fiya's Taiko Oni]

I'll be picking out the only things that should be fixed in this taiko.
(First time me modding a taiko, don't be harsh if it's not that well.)

I personally don't really have so much problem with it, but:

00:32:088(25) - No drum support here, please remove this don. It's to be consistant with the previous repitition of that pattern.
00:46:250() - You put a x1.20 here... rest in peace, hard rock players. I don't care about the score modifiers, and I'm not going to change my map just to make it easier for a score mod. I know it's harder for newer players though, thinking of making a muzu too. Even though that would mean I'm making 3 diffs for this Orz.

That's it. That's all I know that you should fix. Although, this taiko needs more work and I bet there's plenty of things
that needs to be fixed. I'm just afraid that I'm going to break this taiko somehow since it's my first mod and I don't
quite know how to fix it myself, lol. But nice one. I am going to be asking a couple friends to IRC mod this, and don't worry about breaking the diff or whatever. Just point out things that in your opinion should be changed and give suggestions on ways you might change them. It's all opinionated anyway orz

Good luck on getting ranked

KinomiCandy wrote:

Thanks for the star at CXu's SAO, Gyuunyu!

Well, I don't know how to mod standard. But let's take a look at general and taiko.

[General]

1. Tags have to be fixed:
   
   - Add Fiya & palinus in tags on all diff. (Maybe add "opening" too) Done
   - TV Size doesn't have to be added in the tags, because it's already in the title of the beatmap. Remove the tag in all diff. Done
   - Same with this one, LiSA is already added in as the artist, therefore you don't have to add it as a tag. Remove from all diff. Done
   - Again, you put Sword Art Online in the tags too. It's already in the title of the beatmap and the source, so remove it from all diff. Done
   - Misspelled: SOA. Change it to SAO = Sword Art Online Done
   
   *Add same tags and missing tags in all diffs. Fiya's Taiko is missing few tags from other diffs, so add from others in here too.

1. Title, Preview Point & Others:
   
   - Disable "Letterbox during breaks" in Insane and other diffs. if there aren't going to be any breaks. Good job to Fiya. Done
   - Set a preview point at 00:45:580() - on all diffs. (Go to that point, Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point) Done
   - Fix the title: "Crossing field (TV size)" to "crossing field (TV Size)" / small captial at "crossing" due to opening video shows it. Done
   (Talking about opening video, why not add the opening video?)

Will have a video just need to compress it !

[Fiya's Taiko Oni]

I'll be picking out the only things that should be fixed in this taiko.
(First time me modding a taiko, don't be harsh if it's not that well.)

I personally don't really have so much problem with it, but:

00:32:088(25) - No drum support here, please remove this don.
00:46:250() - You put a x1.20 here... rest in peace, hard rock players.

That's it. That's all I know that you should fix. Although, this taiko needs more work and I bet there's plenty of things
that needs to be fixed. I'm just afraid that I'm going to break this taiko somehow since it's my first mod and I don't
quite know how to fix it myself, lol. But nice one.

Good luck on getting ranked

Xgor wrote:

IRC stuff about new combos, why jumps is bad on Normal, hitsounds, why to not use constant 1/1 or 1/2 in a difficulity and that forced jumps are baaad.

Byakugan249 wrote:

hehe easier said than done . i just lol'd at the star rating also use this hitsound for my diff.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - crossing field ~TV size~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45580
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:crossing field (TV Size)
Artist:LiSA
Creator:Gyuunyu
Version:249's Easy
Source:SWORD ART ONLINE
Tags:SAO Fiya Palinus opening

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sword_art_online_34.jpg"
Video,0,"Sword Art Online OP (TV Size) - YouTube.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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45915,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
46250,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
46334,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56976,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
57060,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
67703,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
67786,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
88150,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,128,78
Combo2 : 255,36,74
Combo3 : 196,196,255

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Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[249's Easy]
00:52:116 - Add note
00:52:786 - ^
00:53:457 - ^
00:54:127 - ^
00:54:630 - ^ all ignored because the rhythm would be too hard for beginners to hit. i did this because it's close to following the vocals, and it's easier.
01:18:429 (1) - Remove NC? no this is following the instrumental. the previous combo is following the instrumental and a bit of the vocals, and the next combo is following the vocals. i did this because there was a change in the instrumental, also if i remove the NC here, i'm gonna have to do the same thing at 00:46:250 since it's following the vocals.


Good luck with your map.

Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
You have an .osb which is not used, maybe you can delete it then full submit Done
Your MP3 file is 320kbps, maximum rankable is 192kbps. Woah didn't know that! Done

[249's Easy]
00:52:116 - Add note
00:52:786 - ^
00:53:457 - ^
00:54:127 - ^
00:54:630 - ^
01:18:429 (1) - Remove NC?

[Normal]
00:50:943 (3) - The reverse arrow is not visible when you start this slider, Change it's position so we can see it. (Keep it like this is unrankable I think Done
00:51:948 (4) - Move to 00:52:116 - Sorry but really doesn't need to !
00:52:619 (6) - Move to 00:52:786 - ^
00:53:289 (1) - Move to 00:53:457 - ^
00:53:960 (3) - Move to 00:54:127 - ^
01:16:753 (1) - Remove new combo Done
01:17:423 (2) - Add new Combo Done

[pali's Hard]
00:55:133 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:468 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:513 (4) - New combo
01:03:680 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:853 (5) - New combo
01:05:021 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:524 (1) - Remove new combo

[Milksane]
Found nothing sorry (it's realy hard ^^)

Good luck with your map.

• unify the timing section.
  BPM : 179.000
  Offset : 848
  BPM is wrong in Milksane. you should fix all of inheriting sections and Kiai Time too.
  the offset of video is wrong imo. try offset : +300
  remove the countdown? I don't like that. but if you want to add countdown, that's alright.
  the tag in Hard, "Byakugan249" and "Palinus" are upside down.

• 00:15:253 - add note? because you put note at 00:12:571, and here is enough accent to put circle.
  00:26:314 (3) - rotate to clockwise and it will be connected to the next note well.
  00:56:482 - I want here some note. how about remove 00:56:817 (3) and put 1/1 slider here?
  01:07:208 - ^

• the whistle sounds are attached whole of the sliders and usually it don't work, only sounds noisy.
  remove them and add whistle the head or end of slider.
  and in these diff that is made for newbie player, you should use distance snap at the same level through the diff and shouldn't change it.
  to keep a certain distance makes newbie player easy to read the rhythm in visual.
  first of all, please review the distance whole of the diff.
  then, you should be careful of stacking. it doesn't mean that you shouldn't use stacking, but consider the covering by hitburst.
  if the circle is behind the hitburst, newbie player sometimes won't be able to find it.
  00:32:013 (6) - reverse arrow

• 00:13:912 (5,1) - too close
  00:15:421 (4,5) - you should stack. because previous section, you stacked them(00:14:247 (1,2)).
  then it will be easy to read rhythm in visual
  00:19:443 (6,1) - I don't like this overlap.
  00:19:610 (1,2) - too close
  00:22:460 (1) - covered with the previous slider, I couldn't see this circle well.
  00:22:460 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm you use here is completely different to the rhythm you use in previous similar section(00:11:566 (1,2,3)). why?
  00:43:745 (1) - lengthen to 00:46:091 ? it follows the song well imo.
  00:48:437 (3,4,5) - too close. it seems like stream.
  00:56:314 (1) - just cause mistake. replace with some notes.
  01:07:711 (1) - too short spinner.

• 00:07:877 (6,7) - too close
  00:14:578 (3,4) - I don't like this flow. because (3) faces up, so we expect that the next note will come the upside of (3).
  00:21:280 (3) - the reverse arrow is covered with previous slider and hitburst.
  00:34:014 (5,6) - this jump seems strange. the melody become quiet, so large jump doesn't match with the song.
  also, the flow of AIM if bad. put (6) on the right side of (5) is better.
  00:37:030 (5,6) - same as above.
  00:39:040 (3,4,5) - it seems that you made these rhythm with drum, that's alright.
  but I think the accent of drum is at 00:41:051 (2,3,4,6). then, here you made the rhythm with vocal. why?
  00:50:434 (3) - reverse arrow.
  00:51:942 (4,5,6,7) - the jump of here and the pair of these notes don't match with the song at all.
  if you want to make the pairs of sliders, you should put 1/2 slider at 00:51:606 and make the pair between this slider and 00:51:942 (4), 00:52:277 (5) and 00:52:612 (6), and...
  00:57:136 (2,3,4) - I don't like this arrangement because the end of both sliders can't be seen.
  00:58:811 (6,7) - I can't understand this rhythm. because there is no melody like this in the melody.
  01:02:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - same as 00:51:942. please consider what is better in yourself.
  01:10:372 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:58:811

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• unify the timing section.
  BPM : 179.000
  Offset : 848
  BPM is wrong in Milksane. you should fix all of inheriting sections and Kiai Time too. Done
  the offset of video is wrong imo. try offset : +300 Done
  remove the countdown? I don't like that. but if you want to add countdown, that's alright. Done
  the tag in Hard, "Byakugan249" and "Palinus" are upside down. Done

[249's Easy]

• 00:15:253 - add note? because you put note at 00:12:571, and here is enough accent to put circle.
  00:26:314 (3) - rotate to clockwise and it will be connected to the next note well.
  00:56:482 - I want here some note. how about remove 00:56:817 (3) and put 1/1 slider here?
  01:07:208 - ^

nothing to say


[Normal]

• the whistle sounds are attached whole of the sliders and usually it don't work, only sounds noisy. Like i said i'm not done with the Hitsounds for Normal
  remove them and add whistle the head or end of slider.
  and in these diff that is made for newbie player, you should use distance snap at the same level through the diff and shouldn't change it.
  to keep a certain distance makes newbie player easy to read the rhythm in visual.
  first of all, please review the distance whole of the diff.
  then, you should be careful of stacking. it doesn't mean that you shouldn't use stacking, but consider the covering by hitburst.
  if the circle is behind the hitburst, newbie player sometimes won't be able to find it. Ah i see nice tip!
  00:32:013 (6) - reverse arrow

Done

[pali's Hard]

• 00:13:912 (5,1) - too close
  00:15:421 (4,5) - you should stack. because previous section, you stacked them(00:14:247 (1,2)).
  then it will be easy to read rhythm in visual
  00:19:443 (6,1) - I don't like this overlap.
  00:19:610 (1,2) - too close
  00:22:460 (1) - covered with the previous slider, I couldn't see this circle well.
  00:22:460 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm you use here is completely different to the rhythm you use in previous similar section(00:11:566 (1,2,3)). why?
  00:43:745 (1) - lengthen to 00:46:091 ? it follows the song well imo.
  00:48:437 (3,4,5) - too close. it seems like stream.
  00:56:314 (1) - just cause mistake. replace with some notes.
  01:07:711 (1) - too short spinner.

the pattern of clap sound so strange.

[Milksane]

• 00:07:877 (6,7) - too close Done
  00:14:578 (3,4) - I don't like this flow. because (3) faces up, so we expect that the next note will come the upside of (3). Done
  00:21:280 (3) - the reverse arrow is covered with previous slider and hitburst. Just lower every revers i hope it's better!
  00:34:014 (5,6) - this jump seems strange. the melody become quiet, so large jump doesn't match with the song.
  also, the flow of AIM if bad. put (6) on the right side of (5) is better. Done
  00:37:030 (5,6) - same as above. Done
  00:39:040 (3,4,5) - it seems that you made these rhythm with drum, that's alright.
  but I think the accent of drum is at 00:41:051 (2,3,4,6). then, here you made the rhythm with vocal. why? Done
  00:50:434 (3) - reverse arrow. Done
  00:51:942 (4,5,6,7) - the jump of here and the pair of these notes don't match with the song at all. Actually i will keep these but if any other moders does comment on it i will change... because it would be weird deleting/changing those
  if you want to make the pairs of sliders, you should put 1/2 slider at 00:51:606 and make the pair between this slider and 00:51:942 (4), 00:52:277 (5) and 00:52:612 (6), and...
  00:57:136 (2,3,4) - I don't like this arrangement because the end of both sliders can't be seen. Done
  00:58:811 (6,7) - I can't understand this rhythm. because there is no melody like this in the melody. Done
  01:02:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - same as 00:51:942. please consider what is better in yourself. like i said for 00:51:942 (4,5,6,7) -
  01:10:372 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:58:811 ^

overall, it's too great map for the 1st map.
but one thing I want to say is that, please consider the rhythm of the song.
good luck

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[249's Easy]
[list]00:15:253 - add note? because you put note at 00:12:571, and here is enough accent to put circle. alright then. i was thinking about this so i wanna see if a modder mentions this.
00:26:314 (3) - rotate to clockwise and it will be connected to the next note well. no then the blanket for (4) will be gone.
00:56:482 - I want here some note. how about remove 00:56:817 (3) and put 1/1 slider here? no because since i have (1) at the red ticks, the rhythm would feel odd and i think beginners will miss this kind of pattern if they're not careful.
01:07:208 - ^ ^
nothing to say

good luck

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - crossing field ~TV size~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45580
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:crossing field (TV Size)
Artist:LiSA
Creator:Gyuunyu
Version:249's Easy
Source:SWORD ART ONLINE
Tags:SAO Fiya Palinus Byakugan249 opening

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[pali's Hard]

• 00:13:912 (5,1) - too close
  00:15:421 (4,5) - you should stack. because previous section, you stacked them(00:14:247 (1,2)).
  then it will be easy to read rhythm in visual
  00:19:443 (6,1) - I don't like this overlap.
  00:19:610 (1,2) - too close
  00:22:460 (1) - covered with the previous slider, I couldn't see this circle well.
  00:22:460 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm you use here is completely different to the rhythm you use in previous similar section(00:11:566 (1,2,3)). why?
  00:43:745 (1) - lengthen to 00:46:091 ? it follows the song well imo.
  00:48:437 (3,4,5) - too close. it seems like stream.
  00:56:314 (1) - just cause mistake. replace with some notes.
  01:07:711 (1) - too short spinner.

the pattern of clap sound so strange.

ZLOdeuka wrote:

hello , Gyuunyu.

I wrote that I'm taking Japanese songs only mod4mod... but I look your map. I hope the next time you consider what I write.
I apologise... i misunderstood what you wrote, But thanks that you actually took your time to mod this!

Kiai time - do the same on all difficulties

249's Easy

long Distance snap. this difficulty Distans Snap should be no more than 1.0

00:48:437 (1,2) - spacing.

[Normal]

00:13:912 (4) - remove finish Not done with Hitsounds but i will change them for now.
00:16:929 - finish ^
00:22:292 (9) - ^ ^
00:32:013 (6,1) - spacing.bad jump... do not jump It's not a jump there?
00:43:745 (6) - new combo Nope not needed!
00:52:124 (4,5,6,7) - spacing, do not jump I hope it's better!
00:54:471 (4,5) - ^ Done
00:57:152 (7) - new combo Not looking good!
00:59:499 (1) - remove new combo Ok!
01:01:175 (3) - new combo Ok!
01:04:862 (1) - remove new combo Nope doesn't look good!
01:05:197 (2) - new combo ^
01:13:577 (7) - new combo ^
01:19:610 (5,6) - do not jump! Done
01:21:119 (8,1) - ^ Done
01:22:292 (2,3) - ^ Done

[pali's Hard]

00:43:745 (1) - bad idea....replace it to circle and slider http://puu.sh/KpWx
00:56:314 (1) - ^ a spinner is not possible. He must score at least 2000 when the machine - auto mod. and indeed it is not appropriate here.
01:07:711 (1) - ^
01:05:700 (1,1) - remove new combo

Kiai time :

00:46:412 start
00:57:052 - end
00:57:136 -start
01:15:901 - end
01:18:582 start
01:18:665 end
Ignored all these because the kiai right now is already ok!

fixed...more fixed...Good luck.

-Bakari- wrote:

hi!

as requested

[General]
make same tagsfor all diffs :3 Every diff have the same tags o:
and diable letterbox during breaks (Hard diff) Done

[249's Easy]
whoops~ looks like you should re-snap all objects http://puu.sh/KWxV
00:06:203 (1,1) - don't really like to point out thing like this one. but stack them, please. now it looks a bit awkward.
00:50:448 (1) - whistle for slider's head? sounds good

[Normal]
spacing feels inconsistent. please re-check your map to make sure that spacing here is fine or fix it. Did fix most of then but keept some in the kiai
why don't you use more new combos? for wxample every second big white line More combos ! ~
maybe use more hitsounds? :3 Yes still working on that
00:31:685 (5,6) - unreadable/unrankable. so fix it maybe? ah done!

[Hard]
maybe add some more hitsounds? it'lll make map a bit more interesting for example 01:17:599 (1) - finish?
whoops~ re-snap all notes, please :3

well mapped

[Insane]
01:00:512 (1) - remove new combo? Ok!
01:22:300 (5) - reverse-arrow here is kinda hidden, make it more readable, please Done

~~~~~~~~~~~~

nice map :3 gl~

• 00:10:233 - add stream here :
  00:10:233 - add note
  00:10:317 - ^
  00:10:401 - ^
  00:10:484 - ^
  00:10:568 - ^
  Now better. 'cause before there was a strange break and it sounds bad.
  
  00:38:389 (7) - NC
  00:45:931 (8) - ^
  01:00:512 (1) - old combo.
  
  Unsnapped inherited sections at:
  
  SPOILER

  00:33:009
  00:38:538
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

• 
  00:51:789 (1) - old combo.
  00:53:130 (1) - ^
  
  00:52:962 (4) - NC
  00:52:292 (1) - ^
  00:53:633 (3) - ^
  00:54:303 (3) - ^
  01:03:018 (2) - ^
  01:03:689 (3) - ^
  01:04:359 (1) - ^
  01:05:029 (3) - ^
  01:05:197 (1) - old combo.
  
  Re-snapp All notes,please.
  Unsnapped inherited sections at:
  
  SPOILER

  00:32:851
  00:38:191
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  00:46:426
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

• 00:14:591 - clap.
  00:22:635 (1,2,3) - try this
  00:40:401 (4,5) - i think, will be good if you change this, 'cause "hidden" notes is bad for Easy/Normal diffs.
  01:10:903 (3,4) - change this, including distance snap.
  
  Unsnapped inherited sections at:
  
  SPOILER

  00:33:018
  00:38:191
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

• AR -1?
  
  Re-snapp All notes,please.
  
  Nice.

Yoru-SAN wrote:

HI! from my mode queue~

[Milksane]

• 00:10:233 - add stream here :
  00:10:233 - add note
  00:10:317 - ^
  00:10:401 - ^
  00:10:484 - ^
  00:10:568 - ^
  Now better. 'cause before there was a strange break and it sounds bad. Will think about this...
  
  00:38:389 (7) - NC Done
  00:45:931 (8) - ^ Done
  01:00:512 (1) - old combo. Dont understand sorry >.<
  
  Unsnapped inherited sections at: Just resnapped all
  
  SPOILER

  00:33:009
  00:38:538
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

[pali's Hard]

• 
  00:51:789 (1) - old combo.
  00:53:130 (1) - ^
  
  00:52:962 (4) - NC
  00:52:292 (1) - ^
  00:53:633 (3) - ^
  00:54:303 (3) - ^
  01:03:018 (2) - ^
  01:03:689 (3) - ^
  01:04:359 (1) - ^
  01:05:029 (3) - ^
  01:05:197 (1) - old combo.
  
  Re-snapp All notes,please.
  Unsnapped inherited sections at:
  
  SPOILER

  00:32:851
  00:38:191
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  00:46:426
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

[Normal]

• 00:14:591 - clap. how ?
  00:22:635 (1,2,3) - try this Okay but i made it a little different
  00:40:401 (4,5) - i think, will be good if you change this, 'cause "hidden" notes is bad for Easy/Normal diffs. Done
  01:10:903 (3,4) - change this, including distance snap. Done
  
  Unsnapped inherited sections at: Just resnapped all
  
  SPOILER

  00:33:018
  00:38:191
  00:40:203
  00:40:370
  01:18:605
  01:26:474

[249's Easy]

• AR -1?
  
  Re-snapp All notes,please.
  
  Nice.

Good Luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

hi!

as requested


[249's Easy]
whoops~ looks like you should re-snap all objects http://puu.sh/KWxV oh umm i didnt know nyu changed the offset. fixed >.<
00:06:203 (1,1) - don't really like to point out thing like this one. but stack them, please. now it looks a bit awkward. i thought i did that. D:. fixed
00:50:448 (1) - whistle for slider's head? sounds good no the consistency would be gone since i'm focusing on the claps for this part.


~~~~~~~~~~~~

nice map :3 gl~

Yoru-SAN wrote:

HI! from my mode queue~



[249's Easy]

• AR -1? no then there would be no flow to the map.
  
  Re-snapp All notes,please.
  
  Nice.

Good Luck!

Saten wrote:

[General]

[249]
01:12:244 - would be nice if you added something here no i'm following the vocals, not the instrumental.
01:18:613 (1,1) - why NC? Remove the second one because the 2nd (1) is where the vocals start. the 1st (1) is following the instrumental.
01:23:808 - silence it from here instead hmm alright fixed.

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - crossing field ~TV size~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:crossing field (TV Size)
Artist:LiSA
Creator:Gyuunyu
Version:249's Easy
Source:SWORD ART ONLINE
Tags:SAO Fiya Palinus Byakugan249 opening

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sword_art_online_34.jpg"
Video,320,"Sword Art Online OP (TV Size) - YouTube.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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46091,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
46426,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
46510,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57152,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
57236,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
67879,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
67962,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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Combo2 : 255,36,74
Combo3 : 196,196,255

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Nagisawa wrote:

heeey, yoou! =D Yo!
thx, from my Q)

General
Give a name like "BG" to the background? is it really needed ? o.o but did anyways
Resnap All Notes Ah you prob had the little older version that needed to snap



Normal
00:06:211 (1) - finish Don't want finish before the vocal kicks in
00:07:551 (3) - maybe ^ ^
00:17:607 (3) - clap Ok !
00:21:630 (3) - move the slider on circels Looking weird...
00:21:630 (3,2) - do so, that would not intersect Done
00:23:641 (4,4) - not cool Fix
00:30:010 (4) - ^ ^
00:49:786 (1,2,3) - do more evenly Fix
00:58:501 (4) - bad slider Fix

Easy
00:43:082 (1) - remove nc
01:18:613 (1) - remove nc
no problem

Hard
00:24:982 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - hitsounds not suitable to the rhythm of music
00:20:289 (1) - nc
00:57:160 (1) - finish

Good Luck with your map!

konakonakona wrote:

Hey, from boredom modding queue.

First of all, your map is really good.

249's Easy

can't find anything bad D: so.. good job x3

Normal

Did you use Grid level 4 and no Distance Snap? I did use didstance snap o:

Because of that, your circle spacing is chaning a lot, even if only one or two grids, but in the end, it should be perfect right? ^^

That's all I have to say to Normal.. GJ! :D

pali's Hard

00:42:244 that slider should moves a bit to the right and looks kinda ugly. please nod it properly.

While playing, the most hitobjects appear really unexpectable.. they start and end at timings it kinda doesn't feel nice to play D: maybe it's only me, so don't worry.

But there's nothing more that bothers me here.

Milksane

whoa.. that map rocks!
Can't find anything bad! Hehe ~



This map deserves a Star. Thanks O:

I'm sorry, but your map is kinda too good. that's why my mod is so small.

Byakugan249 wrote:

lol there's no need to name the BG unless you have more than 1 BG. anyways no changes on the combos. the 1st one follows the clap in the song and the 2nd one is following instrumental and instrumental only. also can you use this BG for my diff and my diff only?

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
Milksane requires me to update after downloading owo. o:
According to AIBat, there's an inconsistency in the tagging. I don't see any, but maybe take one diff, and copy-paste the tags there into the other diffs, just in case owo. ah there was a double space on pali's diff xD

Insane:
00:06:211 (1) - For this, as well as the next 3 notes, move the last sliderpoint so it is 1 above and 1 left of the center of the grid on size 4. This is to ensure that all of the sliders are going towards the center owo Done
00:09:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This star doesn't look good ;~~;. If you want to keep it the same shape, then (1) is the problem, but it's really skinny, so I'd suggest widening it out by moving (5) and (7) father away from the y-axis Made it different now o3o
00:11:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - WELL HELLO THERE RANDOM JUMPS owo. I know patterns and stuff, but yeah, the spacing difference here is weird Fix
00:17:775 (1) - Woah totally wtf jump here Fix
00:23:473 (5) - ^. If you're going to keep it, then at least add a new combo and flip it horizontally Fix
00:37:887 (6) - ^. Like, the jump on the next note is ok but this one just seems like it's to make a pretty pattern instead of playing well. Fix
01:02:188 (6,7,8) - WOOOOOAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH. Allright, so this doesn't play well at all. The jump is hard to read, the triangle doesn't look all that good, and there should be a new combo on (6) owo Isn't that hard really for me... and i don't really know how to change it so i will keep it and NC!
01:08:389 (2) - Hey you're not supposed to jump like that Fix
01:12:915 (6) - NC Ok!
01:16:937 (1,2) - Make these jumps bigger then the other ones (altough I'm not sure how well full-screen 1/2 jumps play, seeing as I'm not an avid osui! player. Get some opinions on that) Made them bigger i hope not to big xd

Hard:
Keep your claps consistently on 2 and 4 owo.
00:43:753 (1) - End this on the previous 2nd white tick with a clap hitsound to give more time between the end of the slider and the next note
00:58:166 (3) - Well this is kinda odd, using random 0.5x spacing owo
01:23:641 (5) - Remove repeat, since "have" is on the previous red tick (where the current repeat is)

Normal:
00:13:250 (3) - Would it be possible to not have these overlap? A little spacing discrepancy should be fine, as long as it isn't too big Fix
00:30:010 (4,5,6,1) - It's like the claps were like "Yup, not gonna hang here anymore." Add them here too owo ah lol forgot to add them when i changed that part xD Fix~
00:49:786 (1) - It's a nice pattern but because of where (3) starts it looks a bit weird made it diffrent now!
00:53:473 (1) - If you're going to add a jump on the previous notes, make this into a jump too~. Otherwise, it's hard to read i hope i made it right... Fix
01:07:887 (3) - WOOOOAAAHHAHAHOO this overlap doesn't look kawaii at all D:. Same with (4) and (5) Fix

Easy:
I don't like how this BG looks ;~;. It looks like it was resized via scaling to be a 4:3 aspect ratio
00:46:099 (1) - Maybe remove this? It sounds nice, but there might not be enough time between the spinner and the next note, especially for an easy
01:18:948 (1) - Remove NC

Desu but sl;kdfgjl;skd your insane is trying too hard to be an insane. You can still make an insane map while keeping regular distance spacing for the most part owo.

CDFA wrote:

Easy:
I don't like how this BG looks ;~;. It looks like it was resized via scaling to be a 4:3 aspect ratio orz you noticed o.o. sorry this is the best BG i can find...
00:46:099 (1) - Maybe remove this? It sounds nice, but there might not be enough time between the spinner and the next note, especially for an easy no because that follows the clap and the melody in the vocals change. i feel that beginners have lots of time to hit the next note since it's beside each other.
01:18:948 (1) - Remove NC no this is following the cymbals. the previous combo is following the vocals and the piano and the next combo is following the vocals.

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue!

I'm not really good at modding, so most of my mods are suggestions.

Yeah! SAO: Crossing Field! I wanted to map this so badly but I could only submit two beatmaps at a time, and I'll wait until the full ver. comes out...

[General]
BACKGROUND IMAGE - Why only easy diff has different background image? Unify them? Or make it more diverse? well that's because since i made a guest diff, i feel that i should have a personal BG in this mapset.
TITLE - Let's go for Crossing Field, not crossing field. Capital letters! actually "crossing field" is the official title of the song so there's no need for the capital letters. it says it right here.

[249's Easy]
00:25:652 (2) - This does not sound on the beat imo, how about a slider that starts at 00:25:484 and ends at 00:25:820? no then the rhythm would feel weird for me, especially beginners who would play this for the 1st time. i feel that it'll surprise them if i do that.
How about the slider that starts at 00:43:082, make one reverse arrow and make the spinner starts at 00:43:920 (1) and ends at the same place. no if i do that, then i'll give no time for beginners to recover after the spinner.
01:17:607 (2) - start the slider at 01:17:942 and end at 01:18:613 and delete the circle which was there. no i'm following the drums for the beginning. the piano follows it up as the slider reaches the end.

Love the song! Good luck!

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue!

I'm not really good at modding, so most of my mods are suggestions.

Yeah! SAO: Crossing Field! I wanted to map this so badly but I could only submit two beatmaps at a time, and I'll wait until the full ver. comes out...

[General]
BACKGROUND IMAGE - Why only easy diff has different background image? Unify them? Or make it more diverse? well i think it's fine that different diffs have other BG
MUSIC - OK
VIDEO - N/A
TITLE - Let's go for Crossing Field, not crossing field. Capital letters! Well they announced the song with no capital on the '' c '' so i think it's officially

[249's Easy]
00:25:652 (2) - This does not sound on the beat imo, how about a slider that starts at 00:25:484 and ends at 00:25:820?
How about the slider that starts at 00:43:082, make one reverse arrow and make the spinner starts at 00:43:920 (1) and ends at the same place.
01:17:607 (2) - start the slider at 01:17:942 and end at 01:18:613 and delete the circle which was there.

[Normal]
Tick rate better with 1 imo. No... more combo for Normal \o/
Don't change the slider velocity; I see the song is more quieter in that section, but it might confuse beginners trying normal diff.
Resist stacking (especially sliders) ; frequent stacking hmm o:
00:08:892 (1,3) - nazi. If possible, make them look same (or at least similar) Ok but can't make it too similar :p
00:17:272 (2) - This stacking can be too hard for normal players. Fix i hope o:
01:09:227 (5,2) - The hitburst make the reverse arrow and the slider itself not visible. Ah... changed that part now :>

[Hard/Insane]
Not modding 4.50star+
But,
[Hard]
00:20:289 (8) - NC
01:23:641 (5) - Maybe replace with a single circle at 01:23:808?

[Milksane]
Maybe little bit overmapped?
00:10:233 - This is troublesome because there is no note in this area for around 1 full second, and the HP drain rate is high, which will cost around 1/4 of a HP because of this pause. Not really that much of a trouble because after that it's not really that hard. But i lowered the HP drain by -1 because it was very hard with Hardrock
00:39:060 (4,5,6) - It does not fit with the music or vocal imo. Hmm if any other doesn't like this part i guess i will change it then...



Love the song! Good luck!

1. 00:09:898 (2) - move to x:256 y:148~then use this

   196,292,8892,6,0,B|140:164|140:164|180:120,1,200,2|0

2. 00:10:233 (3) - move to 00:10:065 - ?~
3. 00:16:266 (1) - not beautiful~
   
   SPOILER

   300,52,16266,6,0,B|364:64|372:124|364:176|304:196,1,200,4|4

4. 00:38:389 (1,2,3) - not beautiful~
   
   SPOILER

   320,292,38389,6,2,B|284:336|228:312,1,99.9999999999999,6|8
   260,240,39060,6,2,B|203:230|196:170,1,99.9999999999999,6|8[/list]
   276,160,39730,6,2,B|255:106|304:70,1,99.9999999999999,6|8
   372,36,40401,5,0
   448,64,40736,1,8

5. 00:19:283 (4) - not beautiful...u need more learn how to put beautiful slider~make it like ↓ ?~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:41:071 (3,4,5) - ^
7. 01:06:043 - add note and delete 01:06:211 (1) - then add note 01:06:378 - again...
   
   [Milksane]
   
   1. 00:14:088 (8) - delete it?~ i cant find any rhythm to this place..orz
   2. 00:17:607 (8) - ^ and move 00:17:775 (1) - to this time...then add note to 00:18:445 - ....more good listen to the rhythm.....orz
   3. ............too pro i cant read /.\!~......

General

Normal

00:08:892 (1) - I think it looks better if you move the slider like this:
00:10:233 (3) - move like this, fits better to the music
00:21:630 (3) - use two sliderpoints
00:22:300 (3) - finish
00:23:641 (4) - move like this
00:33:018 - For beginners, it is difficult to distinguish the slow parts. Better change that.
00:33:026 (1) - spacing
00:37:049 (5) - spacing
00:46:434 (1) - remove whistle and set finish
00:52:132 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:54:144 (3) - remove finish
00:54:144 (3,4) - spacing
00:55:652 (5) - spacing
00:56:825 (1) - remove NC
00:57:160 (2) - new NC
01:02:523 (3) - finish
01:06:211 (1) - move 1/2 forwards and set note on 01:06:378

example

01:09:227 (6) - move like this
01:10:233 (1,2,3) - They sound weird, try this set finish on them
01:15:931 (4) -
01:23:138 (3) - remove finish at the end

pali's Hard

Milksane