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What is it with the background colour? PINK?
01:11:925 - Put the timing section so that the normal sample starts when the singer sings "LAST"
03:15:800 - That timing section doesn't quite work imho. Maybe make the soft sample start at the BEGINNING of this line in the lyrics ("AND I will never end up like him...")
Put timing sections hich only change sample or volume a bit BEFORE the notes which should be changed. You know why, I explained often D:
Bad Bet:
00:05:92 (4,5,6) - 1 Level 3 grid down
00:11:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:12:42 (3) - Add New combo
00:31:92 (7) - New combo maybe?
00:38:42 (6) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
00:38:92 (7,8) - 1 Level 3 grid down and 1 to the right
00:43:67 (1) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
00:44:92 (4) - ^
01:12:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Boring, always the same pattern. I mean, of course, this is somewhat a endurance part. But what about e.g. putting triple stacks where it fits? That'll still keep it an endurance part and make it not so boring.
01:27:67 (11,12) - New combo on one of those.
01:52:42 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry would fit for that part. HURR DURR
01:54:42 (5,6) - Awkward jump is awkward.
01:56:17 (8) - New Combo
01:58:67 (1) - Remove new combo
02:05:92 (9) - 1 Level 3 grid up
02:06:67 (1) - New COmbo needed?
02:08:80 (1,2,3) - Move 1/4 later and make the slider 1/4 shorter.
02:18:42 (5,6,7) - Confusing pattern. Confusing in a bad way
02:37:42 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:59:17 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing in this part is SO INCONSISTENT.
03:01:42 (3,5) - And this slider is confusing.
03:07:92 (1) - 6 Level 3 grids to the right, so it stacks 03:06:17 (3) -
03:10:67 (1,2,3) - Ugly pattern.
02:22:67 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:23:92 (1) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right and remove new combo
03:24:42 (2) - Add new combo
03:36:17 (1,2) - Unintuitive jump.
03:38:67 (2) - 1/4 later.
03:39:92 (1) - 1/8 later
And let that spinner end on 03:44:925.
Save Bet:
00:08:42 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -1 Level 3 grid down. ALL of them
00:18:92 (1) –Repeat on this slider is pretty hard to see due to last hitcircle hiding it. Also, remove new combo.
00:20:42 (2) –Add new combo
00:31:17 (3) –New combo maybe
00:36:17 (6) –Add New Combo
00:37:42 (7) –Too close to 6
00:37:92 (1) –Remove New Combo
00:40:42 (4) –New Combo
00:41:42 (1) –Remove new combo
00:43:92 (7) -1 Level 3 grid to the left
00:47:17 (1) –Remove new combo
00:48:42 (2) –Add new combo
00:55:925 – You forgot a break.
01:24:42 (1,2,3) – Spaced uglily and weirdly.
01:38:92 (1) –Remove new combo, maybe
01:47:92 (3) –Add New Combo
02:05:92 (1) –Remove New Combo
02:22:42 (1) –Remove New Combo
02:22:92 (2) -1 Level 3 grid to the left
02:26:92 (2,4) -1 Level 3 grid to the right
02:35:42 (2) -1 Level 3 grid to the left
02:36:42 (4) –Add New Combo
02:36:92 (1) –Remove New Combo
02:40:42 (1) – ½ shorter.
02:56:92 (3) –New Combo maybe
03:17:42 (2) –Too close to 1
03:28:42 (1) –I don’t like pointless square sliders. THAT and you can’t see in which direction the slider is going without snaking sliders. Separate the start/end points.
03:39:92 (1) –Make that spinner end on 03:45:050.
Not good enough for a star, unfortunately ;x