Weebl - Amazing Horse

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Dark Fang
Hi~
sorry for very huge delay
Let's go

[General]

Clear :3

[Easy]

00:24:085 (6) - why don't you make try symmetry with 00:22:485 (4) ?
good map :D

[Normal]

00:27:285 (3) - add a Clap?
00:27:685 (4) - add a Clap at tail of slider?
good '^'d

[Hard]

00:28:285 (4) - add a Clap at tail of slider?
00:28:885 (6) - add a Clap at head of slider?
00:41:685 (7) - why don't you use a Finish instead of Clap?
00:46:085 (5) - add a Clap at tail of slider?

[Insane]

00:39:685 (4) - add a Clap at tail of slider?
00:40:485 (1) - ^
00:41:085 (2) - why don't you make try symmetry with 00:40:485 (1) ?
00:41:685 (3) - add a Clap?
00:42:085 (1) - why don't you use a Finish instead of Clap?
00:44:485 (3) - add a Clap at head of slider?
00:46:085 (1) - ^


wow good maps~
Good Luck!

Have a good time :D
Rikers
Oh I see you're using the short version


okie dokie then
[Luanny]
Gogo make a sb with a nacho
\o/
Chewin
Ohi Blue Dragon -w-/
Mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
You should remove horse from the tags because it's already in the title D:
Add woman in the tags?
OMG the lyrics ahah And I saw the video on youtube. I'm shattered now. :°D

[Easy]
00:16:485 (4) - I'd use NC here because the woman's vocal starts
00:18:085 (6) - Add NC for the same reason above removing it on 00:19:685 (1) instead
00:27:685 (5) - New combo?
00:48:485 (5) - I guess you forgot whistle here
00:46:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - What about to make this pattern instead? I think it flows better and it's more enjoyable to play :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403465
256,220,46885,5,4
196,272,47285,1,0
216,348,47685,1,2
296,348,48085,1,0
316,272,48485,1,0
[Normal]
00:09:685 (2,1) - I'd improve this blanket, something like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403477
272,200,10085,6,0,B|306:148|308:72|236:40,2,180,2|2|2
208,128,11685,2,0,B|160:184|176:260|248:288,2,180,2|2|2
[Hard]
00:04:485 (2) - What about to reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle on 00:05:085 instead? This rhythm fits much better imho:

00:04:485 (2) - Still here, what about to add finish on the head? You added it in the insane diff
00:07:285 (3) - Clap to keep consistency
00:07:485 (4) - I don't like how this finish sounds, I think it sounds too loud. Remove it or maybe decrease its volume?
00:16:485 (6) - New combo
00:48:085 (4) - Remove clap and use just finish instead?

[Insane]
00:16:885 (2) - Add a clap on the slider's end too? It sounds very well with vocal
00:18:085 (4) - New combo and finish on the head?
00:24:085 (1) - I would remove NC from this slider adding it on 00:24:685 (2) instead. In this way the jumps 00:24:685 (2,3,4,5,6) are easier to read and play
00:37:085 (5) - This circle touches the hp bar: http://puu.sh/VwBv consider to fix this :3

This song is an other drug hngggg
Awesome as always :3 Star and good luck for the rank BD >w<
Chyo-Kun
"WELL I BETTER NACHO" Must be fucking IMPOSSIBRU in every diff.
Soaprman
Nothing for me to pick at in this map. Good show!
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Chewin wrote:

Ohi Blue Dragon -w-/
Mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
You should remove horse from the tags because it's already in the title D:
Add woman in the tags?
OMG the lyrics ahah And I saw the video on youtube. I'm shattered now. :°D

[Easy]
00:16:485 (4) - I'd use NC here because the woman's vocal starts
00:18:085 (6) - Add NC for the same reason above removing it on 00:19:685 (1) instead
00:27:685 (5) - New combo?
00:48:485 (5) - I guess you forgot whistle here
00:46:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - What about to make this pattern instead? I think it flows better and it's more enjoyable to play :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403465
256,220,46885,5,4
196,272,47285,1,0
216,348,47685,1,2
296,348,48085,1,0
316,272,48485,1,0
[Normal]
00:09:685 (2,1) - I'd improve this blanket, something like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403477
272,200,10085,6,0,B|306:148|308:72|236:40,2,180,2|2|2
208,128,11685,2,0,B|160:184|176:260|248:288,2,180,2|2|2
[Hard]
00:04:485 (2) - What about to reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle on 00:05:085 instead? This rhythm fits much better imho:

00:04:485 (2) - Still here, what about to add finish on the head? You added it in the insane diff
00:07:285 (3) - Clap to keep consistency
00:07:485 (4) - I don't like how this finish sounds, I think it sounds too loud. Remove it or maybe decrease its volume?
00:16:485 (6) - New combo
00:48:085 (4) - Remove clap and use just finish instead?

[Insane]
00:16:885 (2) - Add a clap on the slider's end too? It sounds very well with vocal
00:18:085 (4) - New combo and finish on the head?
00:24:085 (1) - I would remove NC from this slider adding it on 00:24:685 (2) instead. In this way the jumps 00:24:685 (2,3,4,5,6) are easier to read and play
00:37:085 (5) - This circle touches the hp bar: http://puu.sh/VwBv consider to fix this :3

This song is an other drug hngggg
Awesome as always :3 Star and good luck for the rank BD >w<
Fixed most of these. Didn't like that rhythm on Hard diff, sounded too 'busy' for the diff. Just don't know :p
Kyshiro
Shut up woman, get on my horse

Easy:

  • 00:11:685 (3) - Putting this note at x:256 y:28 (Above (1)) would make it easier to read for beginners due to the hitburst
    00:17:685 (2) - Clap? Fits with the upcoming combo imo

    Such a perfect easy


Normal:

  • 00:19:685 (1) - Remove NC > 00:21:285 (3) - Add NC, Feels a bit awkward having only a 1 in this combo
    00:24:085 (4) - Clap for consistency of the current part
    00:47:885 - I feel like clicking a tasty circle on this spot


Hard:

  • 00:03:685 (1) - A little rotating here feels right, just rotating it by 20 degrees with the selection centre as origin would do
    00:24:885 (5,7) - The double clap here sounds awkward to me. How about removing the one on 00:24:885 (5) - this end, and adding it on the start of it(Remove the whistle)
    00:43:685 (6) - This clap fits better if there's a clap on 00:43:285 (4) - before it


Insane:

  • 00:12:885 (4,5,1,2,3) - ''And then it turns back agaaain'' <-Genius
    00:24:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - Making this combo go down slowly fits the rest of the combo I suppose: http://puu.sh/1c2E9
    00:37:685 (7) - Feels more awesome if you put this note at x:376 y:76


Awesome beatmap, not much to say about it other than it being one of the most perfect creations I've ever seen in my life. Have my star.
Brb getting nacho's.
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Kyshiro wrote:

Shut up woman, get on my horse ;)

Easy:

  • 00:11:685 (3) - Putting this note at x:256 y:28 (Above (1)) would make it easier to read for beginners due to the hitburst done
    00:17:685 (2) - Clap? Fits with the upcoming combo imo done

    Such a perfect easy


Normal:

  • 00:19:685 (1) - Remove NC > 00:21:285 (3) - Add NC, Feels a bit awkward having only a 1 in this combo done something a bit different
    00:24:085 (4) - Clap for consistency of the current part done
    00:47:885 - I feel like clicking a tasty circle on this spot can't ;_;


Hard:

  • 00:03:685 (1) - A little rotating here feels right, just rotating it by 20 degrees with the selection centre as origin would do excellent, done
    00:24:885 (5,7) - The double clap here sounds awkward to me. How about removing the one on 00:24:885 (5) - this end, and adding it on the start of it(Remove the whistle) done
    00:43:685 (6) - This clap fits better if there's a clap on 00:43:285 (4) - before it i like it this way o.o


Insane:

  • 00:12:885 (4,5,1,2,3) - ''And then it turns back agaaain'' <-Genius
    00:24:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - Making this combo go down slowly fits the rest of the combo I suppose: http://puu.sh/1c2E9 done
    00:37:685 (7) - Feels more awesome if you put this note at x:376 y:76 niiiice, done


Awesome beatmap, not much to say about it other than it being one of the most perfect creations I've ever seen in my life. Have my star.
Brb getting nacho's.
Thank you a lot for the great mod.
grumd
Ask Chewin to recheck and bubble it :v
Doodley
heyyy bd, whaaat's happenin

General Notes
No video? :C
(if it's because of TUG ON IT'S WINKY reasons there's probably a censored version somewhere)
Combo Color 1 is unnecessarily dull for a pink. Use this if you'd like:

Insane
00:05:285 (1,2,3) - You could probably move these three notes over to the left so (3) is less awkward as a long slider. Or something. Curve (3) downwards?
00:08:085 (7) - What's with this slider? Seems like you could remove it and put a note at 00:08:285 but that's with following the lyrics and all (which probably isn't the point here)
00:12:285 (3,4) - Line the slider end and (4) up because it breaks flow somewhat as it is right now and looks wweiiirrrd
00:38:085 (1) - Move new combo to 00:37:685 (7)
00:42:285 (2) - Remove note?
00:45:285 (5,6) - These aren't lined up either (honestly i'm never a bitch about this but i'm just pointing it out to you)
00:48:485 - New note with finish here (removing the finish at 00:48:285). This note is on a downbeat and sounds good to end on.

Hard
00:03:685 (1) - Any reason this needs to be a short repeating slider? Could just be a triple note with no trouble at all
00:25:485 (6,7,8) - Move these notes around, the placement is a little weird and against flow
00:42:485 (2,3) - This feels weird. Use a slider instead (both starting and ending on (2,3)
00:39:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - This placement is ass backwards. It doesn't really make sense to go from (2) back to (3, 4). Move (3, 4) somewhere else.
00:48:485 - New note with finish (removing finish at 00:48:285)

Normal
00:27:685 (4,5) - auurggh the repeat on (4) sounds so awkward. The end of (4) and (5) sound fine but the repeat is just blbleueuahhghhh. Try this:

This pattern isn't too hard since you do the same thing at 00:22:885 (1,2,3,4)
00:48:485 - New note (yes this again)

Easy
No problems that I can point out.
Chewin

grumd wrote:

Ask Chewin to recheck and bubble it :v
°ç°

[General]

  1. Tick rate 2 is much better (Really, test it)


[Easy]

  1. 00:11:685 (3) - Are you sure to use this finish? I think it's too loud. What about to use clap instead to keep consistency?
  2. 00:12:085 (4) - There should be a whistle on the slider's head too
  3. 00:21:285 (4) - I'd use new combo here
  4. 00:26:085 (3) - This finish is really bad IMHO whistle fits much better on the slider's head
  5. 00:38:085 (5) - What about to reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle with whistle on 00:38:885 instead? ? The hitsound pattern would be more enjoyable to hear instead of a rhythm that doesn't fit the vocal as it should for a missed sound on a 1/1 tick (I mean 00:38:485). Infact the rhythm to fit the vocal should be this one http://puu.sh/1dXnC but since you are mapping this easy diff with an 1/1 rhythm the one I suggested you is much better on this part http://puu.sh/1dXkt
  6. 00:44:485 (4) - It seems there is a missed sound on this slider's tail so I'd add a whistle on it


[Normal]

  1. 00:04:485 (2) - I'd suggest you to curve this slider to make a blanket with the next circle: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459177
  2. 00:17:285 (3) - I think finish here would sound good together the one on (1)
  3. 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Uh change with an 1/2 slider and a repeat instead
  4. 00:28:485 (5,6,7) - ^
  5. 00:29:285 (8) - Maybe new combo? s:
  6. 00:43:685 (3,4) - Mh.. I think these 2 overlapped circles are awkward and maybe hard to play for a Normal since the next circles you used 00:44:485 (5,6,7,8) aren't overlapped :\


[Hard]

  1. 00:05:285 (1,2,3) - I think this hitsound pattern fits better: remove clap from the (1)'s head adding whistle instead; add whistle on (2); remove whistle on (3)'s head adding it on the reverse arrow instead


[Insane]

  1. 00:46:885 (3) - New combo according to the man's vocal
grumd
Go-go :D
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Chewin wrote:

grumd wrote:

Ask Chewin to recheck and bubble it :v
°ç°

[General]

  1. Tick rate 2 is much better (Really, test it)
good

[Easy]

  1. 00:11:685 (3) - Are you sure to use this finish? I think it's too loud. What about to use clap instead to keep consistency? using whistle
  2. 00:12:085 (4) - There should be a whistle on the slider's head too with previous suggestion, this sounds bad
  3. 00:21:285 (4) - I'd use new combo here it's to fit with the lyrics; "well I better not show you where the lemonade is made"
  4. 00:26:085 (3) - This finish is really bad IMHO whistle fits much better on the slider's head done some stuff here
  5. 00:38:085 (5) - What about to reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle with whistle on 00:38:885 instead? ? The hitsound pattern would be more enjoyable to hear instead of a rhythm that doesn't fit the vocal as it should for a missed sound on a 1/1 tick (I mean 00:38:485). Infact the rhythm to fit the vocal should be this one http://puu.sh/1dXnC but since you are mapping this easy diff with an 1/1 rhythm the one I suggested you is much better on this part http://puu.sh/1dXkt kay
  6. 00:44:485 (4) - It seems there is a missed sound on this slider's tail so I'd add a whistle on it done


[Normal]

  1. 00:04:485 (2) - I'd suggest you to curve this slider to make a blanket with the next circle: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459177 done
  2. 00:17:285 (3) - I think finish here would sound good together the one on (1) too spammy imo D:
  3. 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Uh change with an 1/2 slider and a repeat instead isn't too hard, really
  4. 00:28:485 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
  5. 00:29:285 (8) - Maybe new combo? s: kay
  6. 00:43:685 (3,4) - Mh.. I think these 2 overlapped circles are awkward and maybe hard to play for a Normal since the next circles you used 00:44:485 (5,6,7,8) aren't overlapped :\ tried to fix it in a more symmetrical way


[Hard]

  1. 00:05:285 (1,2,3) - I think this hitsound pattern fits better: remove clap from the (1)'s head adding whistle instead; add whistle on (2); remove whistle on (3)'s head adding it on the reverse arrow instead b-but I like the clap ;_;


[Insane]

  1. 00:46:885 (3) - New combo according to the man's vocal done
Thank you <3
Flanster
add banana in tags
no kd ty
Mercurial


VAMO' VAMO' LO' PIBE'!
VAMO' VAMO' LO' PIBE'! ♫
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

add banana in tags
no kd ty
tanks for moding
Chewin

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

add banana in tags
no kd ty
This killed me
Flanster
INB4 SPEEDRANK
[Luanny]

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

add banana in tags
no kd ty
HAUEAHUEHAUEAHEUAHEUAHEAUEHAU
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