I'll see what I can do about mapping the break..grumd wrote:
Hi :3
Insane
— Overall
This mapset is insanely well made, stuff is polished and neat, so just some suggestions.
— Mapping
- 00:03:685 (1) - Probably just use a repeat instead of a circle? Looks much more symmetric. not really aiming for symmetry here
- 00:13:885 (4) - Move this ~2 grids down. This will provide better flow with (1,2,3) and some place for (5). okay
- 00:14:485 (5) - Since we have that place now, I suggest to move it at least to 48;8. You can lower everything even more (for example, pick all notes until this note and move them ~3 grids down) to make this flow perfect. okay
- 00:19:685 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 could been replaced by two mirrored sliders, I think that fits the vocal a bit more :v
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391830 like this could be good, dunno nice, changed- 00:22:085 (4,5,1) - Hm, the triangle could be better. 00:22:885 (1) - place this on 84;96, will work. too close to previous note :~
- 00:23:485 (2) - If you apply prev. one, just move this circle 1 grid right. ^
- 00:37:285 (6,7,8) - I think you can place here two 1/2 sliders and that will fit better. I mean, emphasizing "takeyou" and "roundthe" with the sliders will look good. Think how can you do that. I really don't have a place to do so where it doesn't break the flow, either that or I'll have to rearrange the entire map later..
- 00:40:285 (5) - Place this on 40;384. It will make a straight line with (4)'s end and (1)'s start. And still in the borders of the test window. done
- 00:45:885 (6,1) - IMO, the better position for these two is 160;268 for circle (to flow the prev. slider) and 104;328 for the slider (to match distance spacing) the jump is waaaaaaaaay too harsh ;x
Hard
— MappingNormal
- 00:03:685 (1) - Probably too curvy for me. Something like this looks better. nah, I like it this way :v
- 00:08:485 (5) - Hm, I don't think that so close spacing is good here, but you can do nothing (due to straight lines and shit :c). Anyway, suggesting the same as above. i like curvy short sliders >:
- 00:10:085 (1) - Suggestion as before, AND also move the next slider one grid up and try to encircle it with this one. ^
- 00:11:285 (3) - I guess, if you move the prev. slider 1 grid up, this must be moved too? ^
- 00:11:285 (3,4,5) - Okay, that shit I'm suggestion ruins everything, so two choices: or you don't fix anything, or you work hard on moving everything 1 grid up. But well, you could try to pick these all 00:10:685 (2,3,4,5) and move them together. i like that pattern as it is ):
- 00:18:085 (1) - Move the slider endpoint to 484;228 and replace the next one with it's mirrored copy done
- 00:26:485 (1) - First jump in the map? Hm. I find it fitting with the flow >:
- 00:28:285 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391843 Make this? Don't want to explain what is here, you'll understand nice, done
- 00:40:285 - Ok I think you need a note here, so my suggestion how to make it:
00:40:085 (3) at 284;104, at the 00:38:685 (8)'s body;
new note at 00:40:285 on 180;168 (not on grid I suppose) eh... I don't think I have understood this right, but I changed it a bit.- 00:42:285 (1) - This plays weird, please choose: or delete this note, or add another one on 00:42:685. This all is for consistancy. spacing, and also follows the "i" in "i think"
— MappingEasy
- 00:04:485 (2) - You'd better curve this down a bit so it will not barely touch the next note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391847 nah.. somehow I like the straight thing I have now :v
- 00:08:085 (2) - This must be placed on 00:07:885. Also my way to fix that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391848 it's unexpected for a newbie to play an 1/2 note right at the start D:
- 00:13:685 (4,5,6) - Can be pretty confusing for new players. Try to make a slider with (5) and (6) or something else, I dunno, just increase readability of this pattern. fixed
- 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Replace with the slider with repeat, will be better for a Normal diff. I don't think it's that hard. D:
- 00:27:685 (4) - I think the rhythm here doesn't fit, you'd better make something like that, usual 1/2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391852 creating some variation in the song besides the 1/1 madness, but without trying to be hard to follow for newbies here
- 00:42:885 (2,3,4) - Oh nono, stacking under the slider is so confusing in easier diffs imo.. Do something else please. ewww ok
- 00:48:485 (4) - Move it to 00:48:285 and stack under (3) done
— MappingThe most clean Easy ever :C
- The only thing I can find is that I want to press a button when he says "lick" on 00:07:485. Not sure how to do that. me neither