1. Collab (4,86 stars, 439 notes)
2. Easy (1,97 stars, 169 notes)
3. Hard (4,61 stars, 335 notes)
4. Pie's Extra (4,99 stars, 538 notes)
5. Pie's Normal (4,19 stars, 278 notes)

96,208,22603,2,0,B|32:224|36:300,1,99.9999999999999
116,288,23344,1,0

112,176,75203,1,0
188,156,75573,2,0,B|172:100|112:96,2,99.9999999999999

Chewin wrote:

Hi, requested via game by katty pie o: <---
[Pie's Extra Jumps]
02:55:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Played and missed here if you remember. This is a very huge jump lol .w.<--- hm i'm not what change it bcz it unique difficult moment шт map, and i think it's ok :3[/color]
That's all, I test played it and it was awesome :3 <--- yeah thx ^.^

Frostmourne wrote:

Pie's Extra Jumps
oh jump <3
fine~ <--- thank you ^.^

On Normal correct some places ^^ thx for mod

1. At least you have to warn players about mature SB.
   [quote="osu! wiki":980e3]Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.
2. Related forum : t/55177
   'black.png' isn't necessary at all. You can reduce SB load by this code.
   

   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0

   Add a single line of SB code under the "//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)" heading of your .osb
   And make some codes for fading BG.jpg
   
   
3. 02:45:214 -
   02:45:584 -
   02:45:954 -
   02:46:325 -
   
   02:51:511 -
   02:51:881 -
   02:52:252 -
   
   Those quadruple and triple kiai fountains really bother me, which mean unrankable.
   [quote="osu! wiki":980e3]Do not overuse kiai time (the general guideline is one toggle per minute of playtime). Kiai is meant to accent chorus sections, so don't use it just for fountains unless you're doing this extremely rarely. You can toggle kiai off and back on halfway through the chorus if it fits, but using it constantly every few beats/measures is just ridiculous and can distract players.

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
00:49:829 (1) - Start from next white tick No
01:01:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Why streams? There is no reason in music to make streams, which means overmapping. >.<
01:44:651 (1) - Start from next white tick No
02:33:731 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Mentioned above
02:34:657 (2,3) - That stack looks really weird :d

This diff has too many unnecessary triple circles.


[Hard]
00:33:531 (6,8) - Unrankable. Hitburst can't cover completely reverse arrow. Reverse arrow must be visible.
Fixed
00:49:829 (1) - Start from next white tick No
00:56:497 (4,2) - Similar with 00:33:531 (6,8) Fixed
01:01:682 (1) - Start from next white tick No
01:44:651 (1) - ^ No
01:51:318 (4,2) - Similar with 00:33:531 (6,8) Fixed
02:17:247 (6,8) - Unrankable Fixed
02:33:546 (1) - Start from next white tick No
02:35:953 (2) - Why half spaced? It's awkward for me Fixed


[Easy]
02:22:989 (1) - Too soon after spinner for beginner. Fixed
02:28:545 (1,2) - Stack correctly Fixed
02:45:584 (1,2,3) - Refrain from making jumps in Easy diff. Fixed
03:06:698 (5) - Stacking under slider's end is hard to read for beginner imo. Fixed

Sorry, I don't like copypasta.

ykcarrot wrote:

[Pie's Extra Jumps]
00:50:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - There is no reason in music to make streams. <--- not think. Stream sound not bad here
01:44:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ <--- ^
02:33:546 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ <--- ^
02:57:623 (2) - Add clap to reverse arrow <--- fixed


[Pie's Normal]
AR+1 <--- no
01:42:243 (8) - Add clap to head <--- fixed
00:50:755 (1) - Add finish to head <--- fixed
01:45:577 (1) - ^ <--- fixed

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Pie's Normal

1. 00:14:084 (1) - Remove NC, i think 00:13:713 (2) its too soon to start a NC
2. 00:44:828 (1) - I think adding a finish at the begin sounds good, and feels good whit the SB
3. 00:56:682 (1) - Add Finish, same reason ^
4. 00:58:904 (6) - While you press shift in this slider move it down, it will get fixed <---nope
5. 01:39:650 (1) - Add a finish at the begin, sounds good whit the music
6. 01:41:132 (5) - Add NC, i think that 01:42:243 (8) its a high combo for a Normal
7. 01:51:503 (1) - Add finish, it sounds good whit the music and the hitsounds
8. 02:28:545 (1) - Add a finish at the begin, sounds good whit the music
9. 02:40:398 (1) - Add finish, it sounds good whit the music and the hitsounds
10. 02:52:252 (6) - Add a finish at the begin, sounds good whit the music
11. 02:58:178 (1) - ^

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi KersiTyan Nightcore mod ♥! Hi~~


Easy

1. 00:36:309 (1) - I think this slider its to short for an Easy diff, maybe extend it until 00:38:161 (x) Ok
2. 00:40:013 (2) - Move it 3 grids to the right and 2 grids down (to keep consistency in spacing) Ok
3. 01:32:242 (3) - I think its better to remove that note and begin the next spinner(01:32:612 (x)) there, end it in the same place Nope
4. 01:35:205 (2) - Inconsistent spacing, too far from 01:34:464 (1) Ok
5. 02:45:584 (1) - Add NC so the previous spinner ends properly

Ok

Hard

1. 01:55:763 (x) - Usseles inherited section ? Yea deleted :3
2. 02:58:363 (2) - Remove this note, its a little bit confusing, and sounds without rhythm Ok
3. 03:06:327 (9) - I think its sounds better without the whistle at the begin, don't know why D:

Ok

Love this song, and Hard its very fun to play ♥! Thanks~

Good Luck ! And Star !

[Te][Amo] wrote:

♥♥♥♥♥!

Insane

1. 00:14:084 (x) - Add a Note, to follow the vocals of the girl Ok
2. 00:19:640 (3) - Change the shape of that slider for something like this http://puu.sh/G5aF to add some creative shapes and symmetrical slidersSure~
3. 00:31:123 (5) - Move this slider 1 grid up, like that it looks better Ok
4. 00:57:423 (4) - While you press shift (whit distance snap activated) move it a little bit down Oh, i forgot this moment :c
5. 01:03:349 (x) - I think that this break looks better in 01:02:608 (x) Nope :3
6. 01:14:091 (4,5,6) - Select all these 3 notes and while you press shift move them to the left Nope
7. 01:15:388 (2) - Move it 1 grid to the left if you do this ^ ^
8. 01:52:245 (4) - While you press shift move it a little bit up Ok
9. 02:14:839 (5) - Move it 1 grid down, to be symmetricals whit 02:14:469 (3)

Good Luck !

frans_niko wrote:

o.O hi there
StoryBoard=finish at the last note (easy) but its ok
Easy~
AR5 so fast for newbie maybe -1? Ok~
the kiai time not same with pie's diff @.@
just that

FoxShift wrote:

А вот и я, с моим бесполезным модом!

Easy:
03:06:698 (5) - может лучше поставить её под слайдер? Нет, говорят не читаемо будет т.т

Hard:
00:01:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Всё из серединки, как-то скучновато... Фантазия кончилась :С
00:17:603 - определённо нехватает ноты Ок
00:23:530 - ^ Ок
01:15:388 - ^ Нет
02:01:319 - ^ Ок
02:07:246 - ^ Ок
02:51:603 (2,3,4,5,6) - два трипла подряд? для харда это сложновато. можешь заменить один коротким слайдером, с одним возвратом Поставила
02:57:808 (5,6,7,1) - это уже инсейн какойто... можно оставить тот же ритм, но сделать это легче для игрока. Ок D:

Insane:
00:23:530 - определённо нехватает ноты Ок
01:55:948 (1) - я бы поставил новое комбо тут Ок
01:56:318 (1) - а тут бы убрал. и вообще может быть стоит тут расставить новые комбо по большим белым тикам? =) Это же все переделывать надо Т__Т я попробую чуть позже)
02:06:876 (4) - кажется есть смысл нажать ctrl+R тут. а чтобы не возникло проблем со спейсингом, 02:06:505 (3) - эту ноту можно опустить пониже Ок
02:36:879 (3) - добавь возврат Ок)
02:47:066 (1) - опусти на пару клеток вниз Ой, забыла, оке

Это всё. Надеюсь было, хоть что-нибудь полезное. =) Удачи. Спасибки \^^/

kusano wrote:

hi there :3 M4M requested by Katty Pie~

[Easy]
OD+1 it's better imo Oh..ok

01:59:652 (1,3) - switch NC Ok

[Hard]
OD+1 Оk

00:04:823 (3) - add NC Оk
00:10:750 (3) - ^ Оk
01:26:685 (4) - hidden arrowpoints (unrankable). >< fixed
02:40:769 (2) - ^ >.<

[Insane]

00:16:492 (3) - put at x:168 y:160, in this way the blanket are good for each slider Wops D: Fixed
00:27:234 (5) - add NC? Оk
00:42:791 (3) - hidden arrowpoints (unrankable). ↓ like this? Fixed

SPOILER

01:37:612 (3) - ^ Fixed

good luck~ Thaanks ~ :3

Xavier18488 wrote:

Hello! Little check... Please delete SB it's 18+ and 18- pleople have the same entitlement to play it... Byee!

-Bakari- wrote:

@ TVO
you're awesome as always. yea. good mod.

1. 00:18:903 (1) - You could put this at x:196 y:220 to make the whole pattern symmetric? If you do this,put 00:19:644 (2) - at x:256 y:168
2. 00:47:055 (3,1) - What do you think on making a blanket here? It would pretty much fit in this zone! Here's an example of a blanket you could do
3. 00:56:686 (1,3) - Move these 1 grid down to fix the blanket with 00:57:056 (2,4) -
4. 01:10:762 (3) - You should add a new combo here to keep the consistency.
5. 01:26:689 (1) - 1 grid down to allign this with 01:24:837 (3) - ?
6. 01:41:877 (3,1) - See 00:47:055 (3,1) -
7. 02:07:065 (2) - Add a New combo again for the consistency with 02:04:101 (1,2,1) -
8. 02:08:546 (4) - Hmm... Not too sure of this note's placement. It is located in the repeat of 02:09:658 (2) -,and this could cause some reading errors,since the hitburst covers partially the repeat of this slider (it's still visible,but I think the beginners would have some trouble here). If you want,you could simply change the note's position!
9. 02:13:362 (3,1) - Imho,after a normal flow with normal spacing,this would be really surprising and difficult for the beginners. I suggest you to lower this "jump".
10. 02:46:329 (3) - Move this 1 grid left and up and move 02:46:699 (1) - 2 grids up,so that 02:45:588 (1,2,3,1) - becomes a completely symmetric pattern
11. 02:57:441 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:58:553 (2) -,it follows the singer's voice better

1. 00:27:793 (2) - Whoops, this is not alligned with 00:27:052 (1) - ! Move it at y:318 to allign them
2. 01:22:615 (2) - Again not alligned with 01:21:874 (1) -
3. 02:13:732 (3) - Move this at x:124 y:100? It will look better with 02:13:362 (2,4) - and it will make too a linear flow with 02:14:473 (4,1) - !
4. 02:49:663 (1) - Guess what? Move this 1 grid up to allign this with 02:48:922 (4,5) -

1. 00:17:422 (5) - Add a new combo for consistency (you're using this at 01:59:286 (4,1,2,3,4) - )
2. 00:22:237 (3) - What do you think on putting this at x:40 y:121? It would be alligned with 00:22:422 (4) -, too ^^
3. 00:29:831 (3,4) - Why this change of spacing? I suggest you to fix this spacing by putting these at x:120 y:112.
4. 01:00:946 (2) - New combo here?
5. 01:15:207 (4,5,6,7,8) - I know you want to make this pattern a "complementar" of 01:14:836 (3) - ,but 01:15:947 (8) - 's position looks pretty much random. What do wou think of making instead a diamond pattern by moving 01:15:577 (6) - at x:328 y:152 and 01:15:947 (8) - at x:184 y:152? Here's an example of how it will look
6. 01:21:874 (5) - New combo here to keep the consistency with the new combo pattern of the initial part
7. 01:55:767 (2) - Same as 01:00:946 (2) -
8. 02:05:954 (3) - See 00:22:237 (3) -
9. 02:13:547 (3,4) - See 00:29:831 (3,4) -

1. 00:15:014 (5) - Put this at x:192 y:248? It makes too a nice symmetric pattern with 00:14:644 (3,4) -
2. 00:27:978 (6) - Put this 1 grid down and right and put 00:28:164 (7) - at x:120 y:296?
3. 00:33:720 (1) - It doesen't have much sense to put a New combo here,actually. What do you think of moving this New combo to 00:32:794 (4) - ? By doing so you will follow the drums,too!
4. 01:00:205 (2) - 1 grid right,just to allign this with 00:59:834 (1) - ?
5. 01:28:912 (5) - Move this 1 grid right,for pretty much the same reason
6. 01:58:730 (5) - Move this at x:320 y:136,just like 00:15:014 (5) -
7. 02:11:695 (2,3) - Pretty much the same as 00:27:978 (6) -
8. 02:16:510 (4) - Again,New combo here and remove the one at 02:17:436 (1) -

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi Hi~
[Easy]

1. 00:18:903 (1) - You could put this at x:196 y:220 to make the whole pattern symmetric? If you do this,put 00:19:644 (2) - at x:256 y:168
2. 00:47:055 (3,1) - What do you think on making a blanket here? It would pretty much fit in this zone! Here's an example of a blanket you could do
3. 00:56:686 (1,3) - Move these 1 grid down to fix the blanket with 00:57:056 (2,4) -
4. 01:10:762 (3) - You should add a new combo here to keep the consistency.
5. 01:26:689 (1) - 1 grid down to allign this with 01:24:837 (3) - ?
6. 01:41:877 (3,1) - See 00:47:055 (3,1) -
7. 02:07:065 (2) - Add a New combo again for the consistency with 02:04:101 (1,2,1) -
8. 02:08:546 (4) - Hmm... Not too sure of this note's placement. It is located in the repeat of 02:09:658 (2) -,and this could cause some reading errors,since the hitburst covers partially the repeat of this slider (it's still visible,but I think the beginners would have some trouble here). If you want,you could simply change the note's position!
9. 02:13:362 (3,1) - Imho,after a normal flow with normal spacing,this would be really surprising and difficult for the beginners. I suggest you to lower this "jump".
10. 02:46:329 (3) - Move this 1 grid left and up and move 02:46:699 (1) - 2 grids up,so that 02:45:588 (1,2,3,1) - becomes a completely symmetric pattern
11. 02:57:441 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:58:553 (2) -,it follows the singer's voice better

All fixed >.<
Sorry,but now I can't mod it all. Tomorrow I'll finish this ;D Thank~~:3

-kevincela- wrote:

[Pie's Normal]

1. 00:27:793 (2) - Whoops, this is not alligned with 00:27:052 (1) - ! Move it at y:318 to allign them <--- fixed
2. 01:22:615 (2) - Again not alligned with 01:21:874 (1) - <--- fixed
3. 02:13:732 (3) - Move this at x:124 y:100? It will look better with 02:13:362 (2,4) - and it will make too a linear flow with 02:14:473 (4,1) - ! <--- fixed
4. 02:49:663 (1) - Guess what? Move this 1 grid up to allign this with 02:48:922 (4,5) -

<--- fixed

Thx for mod ^.^