Kotek- wrote:

SPOILER

Pagliaccio wrote:

Кажется, у кого-то подгорает :peka:
Научись адекватно воспринимать критику, а не только жополизов.
И да, тебе никто не хамил - так что будь добра, следи за речью.

-Bakari- wrote:

I had to try everything. And you still don't have enough motivation.
Даже если я перегнул палку, то только ради убеждения. Если я знаю, что ты и твоя не столь опытная компания не научат тебя ничему хорошему, я должен это объяснить.
Да, перегнул палку с оскорблениями. :/ Но глупо, сдаваться даже не получив первый МАТ-мод. Дело твое, но лично я предлогал тебе научить тебя маппингу, но кажется кто-то начал огрызаться на правду.

Same but in english: I tried to help you, but you were too...hm..too selfish. I told you to learn how to map, i didn't insult you first. You started insulting me, that's the reason.
it's not we, it's you (and Pie)
i were friendly as long, as possibie.

Lizellota wrote:

Thanks to all..who modded this map and who supported me really much..I deleted osu because i HATE, REALLY HATE -Bakari- and жополиз бакари Pagliaccio и когда ты им стал, haha..so..i give up.
Also, thank you.. Katty Pie, Ryu, hichman, StApLeS, Nagisawa and all my friends, i love you~really much~♥. Goodbye.

iroseka wrote:

Mods.

No rhythm problem generally. good mapping and sb, star~

[easy,normal,hard]
OK.

[Collab]
00:20:941 (8) - offscreen
00:50:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not audible? try to use soft whistles to strengthen the beats.
01:42:617 - remove break. Move the spinner to 01:42:988 - 01:45:581
02:33:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not audible

[Extra]
can't deal with this difficulty. skip XD

1. The kiai time is inconsistent in Pie's Extra. Please fix it because you isn't end the kiai at the same time in normal diff.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:36:313 (1) - How about shortening the spinner to 00:37:424 - and then add a normal hitsound at the end of the spinner to follow the drum sound?
   2. 02:09:287 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing between these notes which may affect the feeling during gameplay, so please use the distance snap and snap it again.
   3. 02:25:956 (1) - hum, I think you could make this slider more prettier, probably try something like this, use the code if you like it.
      
      ~

      
      

      270,182,145956,6,0,B|314:152|364:154|364:154|347:108|380:44,2,200,8|8|8

   4. 02:52:626 (2) - I would make this slider to 2/1 if I were you which means you could end the slider at 02:53:367. I suggest this because it breaks your hitsound pattern and you don't use such long slider in overall so this sounds weird and feel inconsistent to me.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:34:461 (3) - Change this back to normal hitsound at the beginning and the end of the slider to follow your hitsound pattern because a soft finish breaks the flow and sounds weird.
   2. 02:18:177 (1) - ^ at the beginning of the slider
   3. 02:18:918 (2) - ^at the end of the slider.
   4. 02:30:771 (3) - I would add a finish at the end of the slider is due to strong accent and it sounds nice with instruments.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:11:317 (x) - I think you should add a note here to follow the vocal since you did this in previous part. So please do it here for consistency.
   2. 01:35:209 (3) - I think you should add a new combo here to follow your combo pattern at 01:41:136 (1) - . Or in either way, you can remove the new combo at 01:41:136 (1) - .
   3. 02:43:736 (x) - Would you add a spinner here and end it at 02:44:847 - because this place is quite empty compare to the whole difficulty.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - I have a hitsound idea here, try it if you want. I would put the whistle on red tick on these notes if I were you, it fits the music quite well.
   2. 02:31:883 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider and than change it to normal hitsound to fit the whistle sound from background music. You don't need to adjust the volume though.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. How about OD +1 to fit the whole difficulty setting?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:940 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, please remove the grid snap here and then snap it again, this is not a severe problem though but it will look prettier if you can fix it.
   2. 00:38:721 (1,2,3) - hum, sorry but this is a meaningless triplet because it doesn't fit the music at all, there are no corresponding drum sounds/music/vocal/instrment to support it, so it seems superfluous imo. I would suggest removing it.
   3. 00:47:796 (x) - I would like to ask what's the meaning of putting a break here? No point to add a break there and seems really unnecessary. One of the solution is to put 00:49:277 (1) - at 00:47:796 - and end at the same point.
   4. 01:10:762 (1,2) - I think simple 1/2 is good enough here.
   5. 01:33:542 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:38:721-. This really needs to be considered.
   6. 01:42:617 (x) - Same as 00:47:796 (x) -
   7. 02:31:512 (x) - ^
   8. 02:43:366 (1) - How about removing the new combo here? It seems really unnecessary here.
   9. 02:46:329 (1) - I have a thought here, you can use it if you like. I would like to make the slider to a 'wave' shape and let the end of the slider stack at the end of the 02:45:958 (3) - to fit with whole pattern but you need to remove the reverse of the slider since it maybe coverd by slider (3)'s hitburst. After it, add a note at 02:47:070 - . Or if you like, add a note at 02:46:885 - after change.
      
      example

      
   10. 02:53:367 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing here, try to close the grid snap and then snap it again?
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:34:090 (1) - Change this back to normal hitsound at the reverse of the slider to follow your hitsound pattern because a soft finish breaks the flow and sounds weird.
   2. 00:35:942 (1) - ^ the beginning of the slider.
   3. 00:37:054 (3) - ^ the end of the slider.
   4. 02:17:807 (1) - , 02:19:659 (1) - ,02:20:771 (3) - ^
   5. 02:58:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The consecutive finish there is really annoying imo, they don't fit the music that much, I recommend removing the finish at the 3rd white tick such as 02:58:923 - ,03:00:405 - etc.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I would say OD+1 and HP-1.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:38:721 (1,2,3) - Same as Hard.
   2. 01:42:062 (4,5,6,7) - I think it would be nice if you can use the same spacing within this jump for perfect shape and smooth gameplay.
   3. 02:04:472 (2) - A bit nazi here but could you stack the end of the slider to the end of slider (1)- perfectly for aesthetic reason.
   4. 02:45:218 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think spamming new combo there is necessary, I prefer two in a group, so you could add the new combo at 02:45:218 (1) - and 02:45:958 (1) - instead of adding nc on all sliders.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:34:461 (1) - Change this back to normal hitsound at the beginning of the slider to follow your hitsound pattern because a soft finish breaks the flow and sounds weird.
   2. 00:35:942 (7) - ^
   3. 02:18:177 (1) - ^
   4. 02:19:659 (5) - ^

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:35:757 (x) - How about adding a note here to fit the vocal? Just put it on 00:35:572 (1) - .
   2. 01:30:764 (1) - Sorry but I can't find a reason that x0.5 speed is needed. The main problem is you have used a high SV and you drop it to x0.5 suddenly will cause a miss to player, so this is strongly suggested.
   3. I'm afraid about the irregular jump in this diff.....anyway, I'm not gonna to do any 'jump style' modding.

496,24,48166,6,0,B|528:100|472:168|392:136,1,200,8|0
256,232,48722,1,0
116,137,48907,2,0,B|40:164|-20:96|16:24,1,200,8|0

LKs wrote:

hi holy virgin Hi~ lol

[General]

there are 2 .osb files in your folder. remove the useless one deleted

make kiai time end on 03:04:109 in pie's extra fixed

00:59:464 (4,1,2,3) - it's not hard to get a traditional Don sound from japanese style maps. and you could then don't keep these places blank which diff? o.o

BPM 162 fixed

[Pie's Extra]

00:30:016 (4,5) - I'd like to rotate these two clockwise a bit like this http://puu.sh/15YvS
00:48:166 (1,2,3) -

496,24,48166,6,0,B|528:100|472:168|392:136,1,200,8|0
256,232,48722,1,0
116,137,48907,2,0,B|40:164|-20:96|16:24,1,200,8|0

codes i think can make things better
02:53:916 (4) - NC. maybe

this is typical nightcore style but it feels a bit overdone ~.~ ryhthm could have been done more creatively and the flow doesn't feel very well

[Collab]

00:07:050 (1) - what is this? if you wanted to make it this way http://puu.sh/15YDF No~
00:14:088 (3,5) - I'd first take care of the encircle http://puu.sh/15YEr fixed
00:35:942 (7) - soft-finish doesn't fit perfectly. as i said you may need a custom hitsound I like it >.>
02:19:659 (5) - ^
01:11:502 (3,4,5,6,7) - I personally..dislike the curve you made. 01:12:058 (4,6) - these two are bended too hard thereby slider edge ain't "parallel"
01:35:209 (3) - x204 y152
02:59:108 (3) - x256y124

[Hard]

01:28:171 (3) - intentional spacing change? fixed ><
01:37:617 (3) - http://puu.sh/15YKD better imo TwT
01:41:136 (3) - poor blanket

LKs wrote:

make kiai time end on 03:04:109 in pie's extra <--- fixed

[Pie's Extra]

00:30:016 (4,5) - I'd like to rotate these two clockwise a bit like this http://puu.sh/15YvS <--- No~ I don't like this~ I like my variant, and this more playable
00:48:166 (1,2,3) -

496,24,48166,6,0,B|528:100|472:168|392:136,1,200,8|0
256,232,48722,1,0
116,137,48907,2,0,B|40:164|-20:96|16:24,1,200,8|0

codes i think can make things better <--- fixed
02:53:916 (4) - NC. maybe <--- fixed

this is typical nightcore style but it feels a bit overdone ~.~ ryhthm could have been done more creatively and the flow doesn't feel very well