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Marina & the Diamonds - Bubblegum Bitch

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 02, 2012 at 11:12:33 AM

Artist: Marina & the Diamonds
Title: Bubblegum Bitch
Tags: Electra Heart
BPM: 158
Filesize: 3871kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.95 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Normal (2.82 stars, 146 notes)
Download: Marina & the Diamonds - Bubblegum Bitch
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm gonna pop your bubblegum heaaaart
Last edited by Low , edited 41 times in total.
Aurele
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Aurele
/First. o/

Lemme see what I can do with it.

Edit:

[Hard]

[General]
Nice sliders, srsly.♥
The Circle size are so big... I'm suggesting you to put it @4.
Delete the .osb if you're not planning to make a Storyboard.

[Hitsounds]
  1. 00:16:632 - a Whistle here to keep the consistency.
  2. 00:17:391 & 00:17:771 - Whistle, to fits the vocals.

well, I guess it's all I can find, good luck.
Low
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Gabe wrote:

/First. o/

Lemme see what I can do with it.

Edit:

[Hard]

[General]
Nice sliders, srsly.♥ Thanks!
The Circle size are so big... I'm suggesting you to put it @4. Big circles forever.
Delete the .osb if you're not planning to make a Storyboard. This is not required. This is discouraged to point out in a mod, just so you know.

[Hitsounds]
  1. 00:16:632 - a Whistle here to keep the consistency. Wrong - listen carefully.
  2. 00:17:391 & 00:17:771 - Whistle, to fits the vocals. Both would make a hitsound inconsistency.

well, I guess it's all I can find, good luck.
Thanks for at least checking the map out. :D
Aurele
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Aurele

Jacob wrote:

Gabe wrote:

/First. o/

Lemme see what I can do with it.

Edit:

[Hard]

[notice]
Delete the .osb if you're not planning to make a Storyboard. This is not required. This is discouraged to point out in a mod, just so you know.
Thanks for at least checking the map out. :D
Oh, okay. For that, I saw tons of MATs & BATs to do it, so I wrote it on my mod.
Here's my , good luck Jacob. (:
Aurele
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Aurele
Remod.

[Normal]

[Hitsounds]
  1. 00:47:011 - Replace the Whistle by a Clap.
  2. 01:26:505 - ^
  3. 01:32:581 - ^
  4. 02:05:999 - ^
  5. 02:12:075 - ^
  6. 02:21:189 - ^
  7. 02:27:265 - ^
  8. 02:31:442 - Add a Whistle here, because first; it ends the song & second; you did it on [Hard]. So why not on [Normal]?


[Hard]

[Hitsounds]
  1. 00:36:758 - A whistle fits pretty well here.
  2. 00:39:416 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency with 00:43:214(YES, THE CONSISTENCY.)
  3. 00:42:834 - Whistle.
  4. 00:45:492 - Same as 00:39:416
  5. 01:22:328 - Whistle.
  6. 01:24:986 - Clap.
  7. 01:28:404 - Whistle
  8. 01:31:062 - Clap
  9. 02:01:821 - Whistle
  10. 02:04:480 - Clap
  11. 02:07:897 - Whistle
  12. 02:08:277 - Clap
  13. 02:10:556 - Clap
  14. 02:17:011 - Whistle
  15. 02:19:670 - Clap
  16. 02:23:087 - Whistle
  17. 02:25:746 - Clap
  18. 02:30:303 - Replace the Whistle by a clap.
[Circle emplacement]
  1. 00:38:847 (8,9) - - These two notes are not Aligned with the other objects (00:38:277 (5,6,7) - ) The object (8) should be @ ; And the object (9) should be @ so it will do that. Do the same for 00:44:353 , 01:29:923, 01:29:923, 02:03:340 & 02:09:416.
[New combos]
Nothing to say.
Low
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Only two things changed. I like my hitsounds the way they are. Thanks again!
jossieP
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jossieP
hello

[Hard]

  1. 00:09:416 - well you can start a spinner from here to 00:11:695 or earlier, why? the unusual start of vocals is a bit annoying with all those circles, plus you haven't activated the coundown, so the spinner will highlight the start of the map, plus if you add this to [Normal] difficulty your 2 diffs can start on the same point
  2. 00:15:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the space between them is not symmetrical as all, screen and code suggest
    SPOILER
    232,48,15492,5,4
    192,128,15682,1,0
    320,48,15872,1,4
    280,128,16062,1,0
    408,48,16252,1,4
    368,128,16442,1,0
    select (2) and (4) you would see that the spacing is the same between them, also (3) and (5)
  3. 00:16:632 (7) - maybe change the shape blanketing with 00:17:201 (1), is not so good currently
    SPOILER
    472,136,16632,2,0,B|440:152|440:192|464:216|464:216|496:240|504:328|464:352,1,240,8|2
  4. 00:26:885 (4) - place it moar down? is so close to hp bar, maybe horizontal fliped with 00:26:315 (1)
    SPOILER

    but I still thinking that is pretty up
  5. 00:29:923 (4) - other not so good blanket, lets try to improve
    SPOILER
    48,72,29923,2,0,B|64:40|160:16|160:65|208:96|237:101|272:56,1,240,2|8
  6. 00:40:556 (5) - ↑
    SPOILER
    48,344,40556,2,0,B|8:304|8:240|40:224|56:208|77:155|32:120,1,240,2|2
  7. 00:46:632 (4) - ↑
    SPOILER
    48,344,46632,2,0,B|12:316|4:244|36:224|56:192|77:155|32:120,1,240,2|2
  8. 01:02:201 (6) - move the control point of end of slider 1 or 2 tiny grids to make a better blanket with previous slider
  9. 01:03:340 (5) - maybe a whistle, to emphase the sucess of vocal section
  10. 01:12:455 (4) - same suggestt as simmilar slider from up
  11. 01:15:493 (4) - unsnaped, also improve shape
    SPOILER
    464,72,75492,2,0,B|428:30|358:36|352:65|346:95|275:101|240:56,1,240,2|8
    snaped corretcly (just 1 ms)
  12. 01:32:202 (4) - wow, maybe check the snapping, this also has 1 ms snap difference, maybe is the new bug of our editor I saw something like this on a map that I moded earlier and also on one of my maps
    SPOILER
    464,344,92201,2,0,B|506:308|500:238|471:232|441:226|435:155|480:120,1,240,2|2
  13. 01:39:796 (4) - check the sound/snaping that this slider have at 25% playback please, the repeat has a weird sound
  14. 02:11:695 (4) - slider blanket, ah
    many copy paste >_<

[Normal]

  1. 00:09:416 - as [Hard] maybe a spinner to highlight the start of your map and a simple chance to start 2 maps on the same point
  2. 00:43:973 (2,3) - place this just in the middle of 00:42:834 (1) please
  3. 01:29:543 (2,3) - same for copy paste incoming

well, is not bad, you have hice rhythms here and there, but is just too much copy paste :( and that is not so funny for me, using the same rhythm is ok, but make more variated and funny patternt/formations/sliders
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Copy paste is fine since the song is extremely repetitive. It fits many maps. Thanks you for modding!
Frostmourne
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Hi , From my queue

Normal
00:44:353 (3) - sorry but this slider is not perfect linear
01:29:923 (3) - ^
02:24:606 (3) - ^
don't know you were intent or not but it looks not neat for me

Hard
00:20:809 (5) - clap at the end slider ? , it sounds good for me , the current is a bit empty
02:13:973 (1) - emm , I don't think whistle will work well at this point (it almost ends the song , should be more intensive imo) then adding finish instead is better
02:30:682 (5) - nazi , move right 1 grid for complete stacking with 02:29:163 (1) -

copying note fits with the song imo
star and good luck for ranking ~
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Nothing changed. The suggestions in normal are completely nazi and make no difference. Hitsounds were not changed due creating inconsistencies and not sounding good to me. The last suggestion on hard was totally un-needed.

Thanks for checking!
Ayu
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Ayu
hi der~

Normal

  • 01:04:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe put this a little higher, close to the bottom
    01:30:683 (4) - same as above.
Hard

  • 00:26:885 (4) - Touches the HP bar.
    01:12:455 (4) - Same as above.
    01:30:683 (9) - Close call, almost touching the HP bar. Doesn't really needs to get lowered, but I guess it would be better~
    01:46:632 - Isn't there supposed to be a note here, or am I wrong?
Nice map. I couldn't find anything else. Things as 01:30:683 (9) and 00:26:885 (4) might occur more times, but I didn't really look for them all since the patterns are repeating, hence it fits the song good.

Good luck with your map~
Low
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Ayu wrote:

hi der~

Normal

  • 01:04:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe put this a little higher, close to the bottom It's fine if it's on the screen.
    01:30:683 (4) - same as above. ^
Hard

  • 00:26:885 (4) - Touches the HP bar. Meant to do so, as it's blanketing the previous note.
    01:12:455 (4) - Same as above. ^
    01:30:683 (9) - Close call, almost touching the HP bar. Doesn't really needs to get lowered, but I guess it would be better~ It's not touching, so why move it?
    01:46:632 - Isn't there supposed to be a note here, or am I wrong? Nope. No vocals here.
Nice map. I couldn't find anything else. Things as 01:30:683 (9) and 00:26:885 (4) might occur more times, but I didn't really look for them all since the patterns are repeating, hence it fits the song good.

Good luck with your map~
Thanks for looking!
Weez
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Weez
General
- Bit rate for the mp3 file is 320, should be between 128 and 196.
- BG should have a 4:3 ratio.
- Capitalize "the" in "the Diamonds"

Normal
Nice diff ._.
02:30:682 (3) - Suggestion: End it with a finish?

Hard
- Increase the circle size by one. Weird having both normal and hard the same. Also the AR should be increased to 8 since the SV is pretty high.
01:39:796 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/4 so it actually follows the lyrics when she says "American."
02:20:049 (1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these just like in all the other kiai times. Stay consistent and just go with that line pattern, it really works. If you are really wanna keep the stack then at least stack 4 with the slider ,5.
02:26:505 (2,3,4) - Better if you stack them all together, like at the end.
02:31:442 (7) - Same as Normal, end it with a finish

Thats all nice map here!!
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Weezy wrote:

General
- Bit rate for the mp3 file is 320, should be between 128 and 196. I'm already working on this.
- BG should have a 4:3 ratio. It's fine. Do you know how hard it is to find a 4:3 Marina BG? :<
- Capitalize "the" in "the Diamonds" Incorrect grammar.

Normal
Nice diff ._.
02:30:682 (3) - Suggestion: End it with a finish? Nope. The music doesn't call for a finish, it's very short.

Hard
- Increase the circle size by one. Weird having both normal and hard the same. Also the AR should be increased to 8 since the SV is pretty high. Circle size is fine. :> Also, AR 8 doesn't feel right to me. I'll try to get more opinions.
01:39:796 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/4 so it actually follows the lyrics when she says "American." Uh.. this doesn't follow "American" at all.
02:20:049 (1,2,3,4) - Don't stack these just like in all the other kiai times. Stay consistent and just go with that line pattern, it really works. If you are really wanna keep the stack then at least stack 4 with the slider ,5. No consistency is needed. This is a raised distance snap and slider velocity section. Also, I'd rather not stack the slider. I feel as if it would flow more without 3 notes stacked in a row.
02:26:505 (2,3,4) - Better if you stack them all together, like at the end. Same as above.
02:31:442 (7) - Same as Normal, end it with a finish Same as normal.

Thats all nice map here!!
Thanks for modding!
Miya
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Miya
From > t/86241/start=0

http://puu.sh/z3Bl
This is the best i can do. I can't change the bitrate without changing the offset.
I have try that, and you must change the offset by +50ms if you want to use this mp3.

Good luck >.<
Shohei Ohtani
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Nah. Kudosu to CDFA for helpful suggestions (including resnapping timing sections, hitsounds modifications, etc)
MoodyRPG
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MoodyRPG
This is for Larto

General
  • • You background is currently 853x640, so you have to fix that and change it to 1024x768 or 800x600
Normal
  • - 02:24:666 (3) - More straight?
Hard
  • -- In my opinion you should to increase one tick in Circle Size
    - 02:30:742 (5) - If you follow the rhythm, add a new combo here
Useless mod in my opinion,no kudos for this please and good luck

BITCH (8)
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MoodyRPG wrote:

This is for Larto

General
• You background is currently 853x640, so you have to fix that and change it to 1024x768 or 800x600 Doesn't have to be. I explained why the BG isn't 1024 x 768 before :o

Normal
  • - 02:24:666 (3) - More straight? Nazi... I don't see how it makes much of a difference. :s
Hard
  • -- In my opinion you should to increase one tick in Circle Size
    - 02:30:742 (5) - If you follow the rhythm, add a new combo here I don't get how this fits the rhythm. It would created a combo inconsistency, too.
Useless mod in my opinion,no kudos for this please and good luck

BITCH (8)
Thanks you for modding!
Lizzehb
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Lizzehb
I'd love to see this have an easy or an insane. A small mapspread is a lazy mapspread. (Find someone to do a guest?. JARBY? SG?)

EDIT AFTER MODDING:

[Normal]
02:01:881 (1) - I've seen this slider to much, repace it.
02:15:552 (3) - ^
02:20:109 (1) - ^
02:30:742 (3) - ^

[Hard]
Okay honestly just from watching the first 10 seconds, I can tell you that the hard is to hard! Sliders are way to fast and the AR is way to high. If you want I would love to make a hard for you that would be easyier and make this an insane.
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