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TAMUSIC - Akai Kage

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eikkaleyd
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eikkaleyd
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月20日 at 20:23:02

Artist: TAMUSIC
Title: Akai Kage
Source: Touhou
Tags: Ciel remilia flandre embodiment of scarlet devil koumakyou th06 tam Eastern Dream HEXAGRAM red shadow
BPM: 113
Filesize: 14286kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.22 stars, 154 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 485 notes)
  3. Normal (2.5 stars, 216 notes)
Download: TAMUSIC - Akai Kage
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Still making Easy diff now
Toto and Yuki is remapping now

Skin By rayerleyd and me
If you find something in skin is from yours, please tell me and I'll remove it.I'm not sure about them.
update in 2012
06.07 Easy and Hard finished except hitsounds
06.08 sirjuyt had modded.
06.17 Scorpiour had modded, SB fixed.
06.23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice had modded.
07.03 Leorda had modded, SB and some files fixed.
07.12 LunarSakuya and Athena Tennos had modded, BG fixed.
07.14 Flask and x847606653 had modded.
07.16 Combo numbers changed.
update in 2013
06.13 Did revive from eternal slumber, do some change in Hard.
06.14 Finished Normal diff (from Easy) and remapping Easy diff.
Last edited by eikkaleyd , edited 30 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
传了啊。
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

传了啊。
/_\ 又不用来rank你给星很浪费啊……只是为了方便下载【喂
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
0.0
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd

OSUtoto wrote:

0.0
现在gd给kd有危险……你写个颜文字没法给……/_\
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
潇子又鬼畜了
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd

raririn wrote:

潇子又鬼畜了

尼玛OAQ
rayerleyd
14 posts
Joined December 2010
rayerleyd
哎 越听越好听
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
来咯~ ;)
本来是想做个I的 但是做着做着就变H了....orz
总之是个听歌向的难度 ;)

我把GD和hitsound一起打包了....
hitsound如果自上次和你谈话之后没有新增的话可以直接覆盖(你原来的音效没在里面,这里面都是我另外加的一些)....
如果有新增的话先别覆盖进去 下次上线时再说....

ps.好久没作图都生疏了..

Download: GD&hitsound.rar
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

来咯~ ;)
本来是想做个I的 但是做着做着就变H了....orz
总之是个听歌向的难度 ;)
既然是HARD我改动了AR和OD，KIAI段比前面难，所以不是很简单啊……lol
还有有些地方果然大家做的节奏都一样，你和toto开头节奏有点…toto说你加的那个hitsound会毁掉他的图- -

3个HARD总感觉很奇怪，我们三个还是再讨论下o.o先传上去了。
如果用你的的话note要再减一些，break段太长了，最好补一点o.o

KD for hitsounds
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
刚才整体看了一下....
对于toto这个难度的话好像就是和我用的soft-hitnormal不一样吧....他用的是original而我用的是和声的...
这个我感觉只会对他的diff有帮助啊= =
毕竟像soft-hitfinish和whistle这种的音效就是和声音效要一起搭配使用才能把效果表达的更明显(这个自己听一下就知道了)
3个Hard完全没问题啊 也没有difficulty spread
只要再加个N的话就ok了....
至于break太长的话我会加一点进去的...当时懒了orz

ps.论坛怎么又更新了lol
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
不知你是看我做的初版还是eikka的改版，音效不是塞得越满越好听的

http://puu.sh/zibj 这才是我的图，可以把soft-hitnormal2删前和删后对比下

（本来把几段kiai排版得更文艺了一下，但竟然停电了，没保存就算了，还连续停电2次，看来我还是适合2B排版

至于collab合并，随便吧
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
大家辛苦了，COLLAB弄好，我和迪西的NM做好音效就可以PENDING了~

Move to pending XD
sirjuyt
172 posts
Joined October 2010
sirjuyt
yay~感覺略久沒mod 試試看了 ;)

＝

  1. BG是1023x767，不知道要不要改1024x768 XD
  2. 難度名可以改成全都自創的或常見的ENHI，半混著有點亂
  • [Scarlet]
  1. 00:30:813 (1,2,3,4) - 擺成曲線? 梯形感覺有點奇妙
  2. 01:42:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 試試用(6)為中心做個正5角?
  3. 01:50:724 (6) - 錨點動一下，和(5)沒對好:3
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:06:919 (1,2) - 這個會被前面的節奏引導成跳了，要不要改成這樣? →http://puu.sh/zxvC
  2. 00:15:415 (1,2,3) - 同上→http://puu.sh/zxwK
  3. 00:23:910 (1) - ^，不然前面也試著用Slider替代? 這個節奏還是不錯的:3
  4. 01:17:804 (7) - 感覺Slider扭的不是時候，改成一般的Slider?
  5. 01:42:494 (1) - ^，或許可以往上延伸一點?
  6. 01:46:477 (6) - 放(5)下面比較好看?
  7. 01:54:972 (6) - ^ (也許我比較喜歡這樣擺，所以之後同樣地方亦是這種mod，就不一一提了)
  8. 02:13:822 (2,3) - 兩個Whistle去掉之後 比較合這段?
  9. 02:20:194 (5,1,2,3) - 跟之前的節奏，02:21:255 加一個?
  10. 03:27:362 (7) - 改成Circle，Spinner提前到03:27:627開始，比較有結束感?
  • [deepsea's Normal]
  1. 這個難度的Finish用C1的? 統一一下
  2. Kiai Time也統一一下?
  3. 00:21:786 (4) - 試試看能不能不要和(3)擦到?
  4. 00:32:406 (6) - 這裡血條會越扣越少啊0 0，要不要換成Spinner；不然左1上1一格後加個NC?
  5. 01:25:503附近加一點東西，這裡應該會有節奏可以打的
  6. 01:26:565 (T) - (1.05x1.5=1.575 ，SV直逼Hard了 XD)
  7. 01:52:052 (9,1) - NC互換?
  8. 01:56:300 (9,1) - ^
  9. 02:00:548 (6) - 這裡突然慢下來會看不出來啊，換成Spinner?
  10. 02:14:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - 其實感覺4個1/2就有點難度了XD，不過這裡有5個o o，還是換一下好吧?
  11. 03:07:981 (8) - 弄彎一點，鑲到(9)的旁邊?
  12. 03:09:840 (1) - 看起來像1/4折返，可能會誤讀，就用原速1.5x?
  13. 03:22:317 (8,1) - NC互換?
  14. 03:27:096 (x) - 補一個節奏在這?
  • [Shadow]
  1. 00:17:539 (5) - 看Ctrl+H之後再擺有沒有比較好:3 → http://puu.sh/zx2K
  2. 00:27:096 (1,2) - NC互換?
  3. 02:10:105 (1,2) - 感覺尾巴再加Whistle會比較好聽
  4. 02:15:415 (2,3) - 承上，(2)的頭和(3)的尾
  5. 02:30:813 (4,1) - 照之前NC擺法，應該要互換?
  6. 03:05:326 (2) - 感覺clap有點突兀，不過不加又好像少點什麼0 0
＝

Great map~ StoryBoard和Skin也真的都好漂亮的 > <

支持~ Star！ :)
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
先把自己的难度都改了<3


sirjuyt wrote:

yay~感覺略久沒mod 試試看了 ;)

＝

  1. BG是1023x767，不知道要不要改1024x768 XD :arrow: 我开PS容易卡lol晚点有空改
  2. 難度名可以改成全都自創的或常見的ENHI，半混著有點亂 :arrow: 低难度改了，Scarlet有点介于H和I之间所以自创名字了……【和那个万华镜的Phantasy一样
  • [Scarlet]
  1. 00:30:813 (1,2,3,4) - 擺成曲線? 梯形感覺有點奇妙 :arrow: 其实是为了最后一个note在中央，改好了~
  2. 01:42:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 試試用(6)為中心做個正5角?
  3. 01:50:724 (6) - 錨點動一下，和(5)沒對好:3 :arrow: 算是故意的，不是做和5平行，而是尾部都往中央凑拢的感觉，而且456的尾部也是三角形~
  • [Shadow]
  1. 00:17:539 (5) - 看Ctrl+H之後再擺有沒有比較好:3 → http://puu.sh/zx2K
  2. 00:27:096 (1,2) - NC互換?
  3. 02:10:105 (1,2) - 感覺尾巴再加Whistle會比較好聽
  4. 02:15:415 (2,3) - 承上，(2)的頭和(3)的尾
  5. 02:30:813 (4,1) - 照之前NC擺法，應該要互換?
  6. 03:05:326 (2) - 感覺clap有點突兀，不過不加又好像少點什麼0 0 :arrow: 0 0耳朵真好，缺了Soft-hitclap.wav那个声音，不过我有点听不出是哪些地方该加，加了也觉得不好，就没加，这个clap是实验的残留物- -忘记删了
＝

Great map~ StoryBoard和Skin也真的都好漂亮的 > <

支持~ Star！ :)
:) 谢谢，没写东西的都改了~！
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki

sirjuyt wrote:

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:06:919 (1,2) - 這個會被前面的節奏引導成跳了，要不要改成這樣? →http://puu.sh/zxvC
  2. 00:15:415 (1,2,3) - 同上→http://puu.sh/zxwK
  3. 00:23:910 (1) - ^，不然前面也試著用Slider替代? 這個節奏還是不錯的:3
  4. 01:17:804 (7) - 感覺Slider扭的不是時候，改成一般的Slider? 稍微拉了一下 感觉现在好点了
  5. 01:42:494 (1) - ^，或許可以往上延伸一點? 重新改过一种形式了
  6. 01:46:477 (6) - 放(5)下面比較好看?
  7. 01:54:972 (6) - ^ (也許我比較喜歡這樣擺，所以之後同樣地方亦是這種mod，就不一一提了)
  8. 02:13:822 (2,3) - 兩個Whistle去掉之後 比較合這段?
  9. 02:20:194 (5,1,2,3) - 跟之前的節奏，02:21:255 加一個?
  10. 03:27:362 (7) - 改成Circle，Spinner提前到03:27:627開始，比較有結束感?
thanks for mod ;)

  1. 01:08:247 (4) - 另外这个slider重新拉了一下
272,284,68247,2,0,B|324:248|380:296|432:260|432:260|404:248|372:256,1,219.999993443489,8|0

56,292,77804,2,0,B|68:312|68:312|68:272|68:272|72:304|72:304|72:280|72:280|76:292|76:292|136:292,1,192

264,344,102494,6,0,B|272:332|272:332|264:336|252:328|252:328|264:328|284:316|284:316|264:320|228:300|
228:300|264:312|300:300|300:300|264:304|264:268,1,256,2|0
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
hi there~~~mod for request~~
潇子大萌~~~~

[General]
  1. 测试的时候突然觉得似乎分数不是很好看…………有没有可能换个字体什么的？比如黑体啦之类的……
  2. Spinner的尺寸不对……background和metre的尺寸都应该是1023*692，高度这里是在768的基础上，在上面切掉46像素，下面切掉30像素，然后宽度左右随意了……
  3. 因为有自定义的hitcircleoverlay，所以你需要在osu文件的[colour]里面添加Sliderborder颜色，例如
    1. SliderBorder: 255,255,255
  4. 另外有Lead-in了就关掉countdown吧，而且lead-in的2s感觉略有点长……
[Storyboard]
  1. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\aka03.jpg",320,240
     S,0,121603,,1.03072
     M,0,121603,121609,319,385,321,363
     M,0,121609,138601,321,363,317,133
     F,0,136471,,1  <---这行多余了，删掉
     F,0,136471,138595,1,0
  2. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\aka01.jpg",320,240
     S,0,-2000,,1.04096
     M,0,-2000,27096,319,169,317,278
     M,0,27096,36654,317,278,317,317
     F,0,34524,,1  <---继续多余的code
     F,0,34524,36648,1,0
  3. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
     F,0,-2000,2665,1,0
     C,0,1603,2665,0,0,0
     F,0,2665,80990,0
     F,0,80990,120149,0   <---这行和上面那行合并成一行
     F,0,120149,121352,0,1
     C,0,120542,124789,0,0,0 <--多余的code
     F,0,121603,123196,1,0

    其实这段代码我更倾向于写成这样：
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
     F,0,-2000,2665,1,0
     C,0,1603,2665,0,0,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
     F,0,120149,121352,0,1
     C,0,120149,123196,0,0,0
     F,0,121603,123196,1,0
    另外你这个变色效果看起来没产生效果，拉到代码最下层试试看。
  4. Lyrics的代码部分，比如
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics\02.png",320,240
     S,0,5320,,0.4880003
     F,0,5320,6913,0,1
     M,0,5320,10630,524,231,525,277
     F,0,9037,10630,1,0.15008
    最后一行的F看起来你是想做成完全消失，估计在拖鼠标的时候没能拖到底，所以最好手动把结束值改成0
  5. 最下面的部分以及其他white的部分，举个例子
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
     F,0,172450,172583,0,1
     F,0,172583,172981,1,0
     F,0,180946,181078,0,1
     F,0,181078,181477,1,0
     F,0,190503,190636,0,1
     F,0,190636,191034,1,0
     F,0,198999,199132,0.002512574,1 <---这里改成从0到1否则产生冗余的SB load了
     F,0,199132,199530,1,0.002512574

    检查一下Fade的值是否是按照自己预想的走，看到的有些地方有类似的问题也就是1和0并没有完全到位。
  6. 还有这里也是没fade到位
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\warning.png",320,240
     F,0,-2000,1078,0,1
     F,0,1078,3202,1,0.0138104  <---应该是0
  7. 最后给一个制作的建议：像white这种全程都在用而且一定是在屏幕最前端的元件建议把代码写在一起，然后统一放到最下面。其他部分的代码尽量按照时间顺序来排这样会清晰很多。
嘛，初次制作SB整体质量还是okay的啦～～具体的代码等你放假了我详细给你讲解XD

[Easy]
  1. 00:57:893 (3) - 建议这组NC从这里开始
  2. 01:02:140 (2) - 同上
  3. 01:05:857 - 考虑加个note？
  4. 01:16:211 - 这里的空拍有一点点别扭…………考虑这个节奏？
  5. 01:33:468 - 继续建议加note
  6. 01:39:840 - ^
  7. 02:27:096 (2) - NC建议
  8. 02:31:344 (2) - ^
  9. 02:41:432 - 加note建议
  10. 02:52:583 (3) - NC建议配合Kiai开始喷泉效果
  11. 02:58:955 (4) - 折返点上的节奏不是很舒服，考虑拆成2个1/1的slider？
  12. 03:05:326 (2) - 同上，这里的节奏建议：
  13. 03:19:132 (2) - NC ....
[deepsea's Normal]
  1. 00:06:388 (2) - 这个折返听着好奇怪啊……没必要把……
  2. 00:11:167 (3) - NC建议……我比较倾向在有finish的地方下NC，如果歌词前后分界不是很鲜明的话。
  3. 02:23:910 (4) - 考虑删掉……？
  4. 02:35:592 (3,4) - 唔。。这里的遮挡不是很好看…………
  5. 02:41:432 (5) - 同上…………而且追加建议ctrl+r……后面类似的这种直线slider的遮挡也尽量避免把……
  6. 02:57:362 (5) - 继续感觉没必要的遮挡……
  7. 03:03:202 (8) - 考虑从前面红线开始这个slider?(结束时间点不变）
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:893 - 考虑加个note？
  2. 01:32:671 (2,4,5,6) - 这里堆在一起的总感觉怪怪的…………感觉可以调整一下节奏？
  3. 01:42:494 (1) - 呃。。这形状………………
  4. 02:20:724 (1,2,3) - 这里应该是4个音而不是3个…………
[Scarlet]
  1. 00:57:096 (1,2) - 感觉可以用一个折返来处理会更好一点？anyway，这种就随意啦
这个diff真的没啥好挑的…………好图～～再给个星～～加油的说～～
Last edited by Scorpiour , edited 1 time in total.
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hm, I dl'ed it and got an unsubmitted diff [Toto's Hard]. perhaps full-submit it?

no kd :P
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

神SB 233

Scarlet

  1. 00:02:671 (1) - 感觉长slider带入比较好, 这样slider+circle的话中间的音不舒服 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346073
  2. 00:10:105 (3,4,5) - 这个地方 (3) clap, (4)和(5) whistle这样?
  3. 00:13:025 (4,1) - 和前面slider拉开点 这样显得太紧凑了
  4. 00:32:539 (1) - 转盘尾的音消掉好点
  5. 01:01:344 (1) - 好像没摆好 往左一格吧
  6. 01:45:547 (4) - ^
  7. 01:42:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉不是很合适哎/.\ ...
  8. 01:47:008 (2) - clap?
  9. 01:50:724 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346113 注意一下两边...
  10. 01:51:654 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - 中间音量可以小点。。。 http://up.ppy.sh/files/xzy001.jpg 像这样
  11. 02:20:724 (3) - 少finish了
  12. 02:34:530 (5) - 尾上也加个whistle?
  13. 02:54:707 (5) - 尾上clap?
Toto

  1. 怎么改成collab了233
Hard

  1. 00:27:096 (4) - 头上那个whistle去掉, 换clap? 感觉三连不是很好...
  2. 00:30:282 (1) - 尾上whistle?
  3. 01:17:804 (7) - 这形状容易引起误解, 改掉比较好
  4. 01:24:441 (4) - 中间加whistle?
  5. 01:34:530 (7) - 头上clap?
  6. 01:40:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 大回环自重啊 还不对称什么心态
  7. 01:42:494 (1) - 同01:17:804 (7) ...
  8. 01:46:477 (6,1) - slider从(6)的地方拉开比较好
  9. 02:20:724 (1) - ...这个我觉得是个重音啊为什么减小音量
  10. 02:26:565 (7) - whistle?
  11. 02:46:211 (5) - 自重啊
  12. 03:20:990 (6,7) - slider从(6)的地方拉开比较好
Deepsea's Normal

  1. 00:15:946 (8) - 这off大丈夫?
  2. 00:11:167 (3) - 出去了._.
  3. slider方面还需要加强一下._. whistle可以多加点
Easy

  1. 00:45:149 (1,2) - 形状做一样吧._.
  2. nice
that's all

Good luck~
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
自从昨天中午一次性射掉32个星之后我就对“给东西”产生抵触心理了……

还在想能不能一次性给32kd呢，果然失败了._.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

eikkaleyd wrote:

自从昨天中午一次性射掉32个星之后我就对“给东西”产生抵触心理了……

还在想能不能一次性给32kd呢，果然失败了._.
._.刚刚好像是BUG, p/1616382

话说更新了说是Mod posts也能增加star priority了, 然后改成12star一个泡 lol http://osu.ppy.sh/p/changelog
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
t/83578

虽然不明白你在说啥，你看看这儿吧【哭瞎了】
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

eikkaleyd wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/83578

虽然不明白你在说啥，你看看这儿吧【哭瞎了】
/.\ 昨天就看到了啊... 算了再mod几张图不就有星星了(?
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
我在意的不是自己的kd，而会吓到人啊……/_\瞬间被误会“hinacle的狂热粉丝”了怎么破……话说别版聊了……你再回一我上课去了
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
http://puu.sh/Czkm
看看這樣有沒有好些吧 有些地方因為牽扯到pattern所以我就不能調的比較平滑~
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
嗯，改好了（其实就改了个slider233

http://puu.sh/Dulg

嗯，以后你帮我改吧，沉迷老滚中233
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there


[General]
* default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png are not needed for this mapset, remove them
*normal-sliderslide2.wav, soft-sliderslide.wav, and soft-sliderslide2.wav are only 0 bytes large. Recommended using 44 bytes large from blank.wav
* Thumbs.db is in your SB folder and Lyric subfolder, you should remove it
* hitcircleselect.png aren't needed


[Storyboarding]
* It is just me or white.png is place at wrong place... It happen later.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352648


[deepsea's Normal]
00:32:406 (6) - New combo for 0,5x slider
02:15:415 (5) - Move 1 grid down? (Nazi)
02:55:769 - Add note here?
03:10:636 (2) - New combo for emphasis song?
03:27:362 (1) - Silence this spinner?


[Hard]
00:09:043 (1) - Snap the tail slider at blue tick, add 1 repeating slider, add finish for this slider, and remove the next note. You should end up like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352626
00:17:539 (1) - ^
00:26:432 (2) - Move to next blue tick?
00:59:751 (3) - I think it'sbetter if this slider has a same shape as 00:58:955 (2) and reverse it
01:08:247 (4) - I heard that tail slider that overlap the sliderpath is unrankable, maybe you should change this slider....
02:23:645 (2) - ^
02:29:486 (3) - ^
02:37:716 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern


Good luck
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
Thanks leo~Fix most!

Some of problems (like Thumbs.db) didn't appear here, so I just checked and do a full-submit.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Your map and storyboard is really good.
STAR~

EDIT: To be honest, I might not find any suggestions if I try to mod this map.
As requested in game, I'll try to mod this map.
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
最近没怎么关注论坛~~没想到堆积了那么多lol

Scorpiour wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:27:893 - 考虑加个note？
  2. 01:32:671 (2,4,5,6) - 这里堆在一起的总感觉怪怪的…………感觉可以调整一下节奏？ k
  3. 01:42:494 (1) - 呃。。这形状……………… changed
  4. 02:20:724 (1,2,3) - 这里应该是4个音而不是3个………… 01:12:760 (5) - 与这里照应吧

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

  1. 00:27:096 (4) - 头上那个whistle去掉, 换clap? 感觉三连不是很好...
  2. 00:30:282 (1) - 尾上whistle?
  3. 01:17:804 (7) - 这形状容易引起误解, 改掉比较好 还好啦 大丈夫..
  4. 01:24:441 (4) - 中间加whistle? 有点违和..
  5. 01:34:530 (7) - 头上clap? k
  6. 01:40:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 大回环自重啊 还不对称什么心态
  7. 01:42:494 (1) - 同01:17:804 (7) ... 已经修改了
  8. 01:46:477 (6,1) - slider从(6)的地方拉开比较好
  9. 02:20:724 (1) - ...这个我觉得是个重音啊为什么减小音量 k,fixed
  10. 02:26:565 (7) - whistle? 感觉不是很好呢..
  11. 02:46:211 (5) - 自重啊 fixed
  12. 03:20:990 (6,7) - slider从(6)的地方拉开比较好

Leorda wrote:

[Hard]
00:09:043 (1) - Snap the tail slider at blue tick, add 1 repeating slider, add finish for this slider, and remove the next note. You should end up like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352626
00:17:539 (1) - ^
00:26:432 (2) - Move to next blue tick?
00:59:751 (3) - I think it'sbetter if this slider has a same shape as 00:58:955 (2) and reverse it k
01:08:247 (4) - I heard that tail slider that overlap the sliderpath is unrankable, maybe you should change this slider....
02:23:645 (2) - ^
02:29:486 (3) - ^
02:37:716 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern
@Leorda
about overlap the sliderpath, those tail sliders were not overlap the sliderpath completely, so I will keep it first, if it's really unrankable then I will change it

thanks for mod

http://puu.sh/Hkh2
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hi

General
Delete "Thumbs.db"

Easy
00:15:415 (3) - Use finish instead of clap, like 00:06:919 (2)
01:40:371 (1) - Delete reverse? Flows with vocals more imo http://puu.sh/HpWD
03:05:326 (2) - Clap at slidertick if you have one
03:23:379 (2) - ^?

deepsea's Normal
00:19:663 (2) - Finish at beginning
00:23:910 (6) - NC, some long combos in this diff
00:32:406 (6) - NC to indicate SV change
00:45:149 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:08:247 (8) - Slider ticks are kinda loud imo
02:20:194 (1) - Delete NC
02:39:840 (2) - Ctrl + H http://puu.sh/HqeU, looks better with 02:38:247 (9)
02:52:583 (4) - NC?
03:10:636 (2) - ^

Hard
00:16:477 (4) - Loud sliderslide
00:18:601 (3) - ^
01:08:247 (4) - is this allowed? i forget lol
01:43:822 (10) - NC
01:57:627 (5) - Clap
02:25:769 (6) - Curve downwards maybe http://puu.sh/Hqn0
02:56:831 (3) - Clap at end, there's a lot like this, on purpose?

Scarlet
00:18:601 (5) - NC? like 00:23:910 (1)
00:50:194 (3,4) - Stack on (2) with this rhythm: http://puu.sh/Hqs0, fits bg music
03:05:857 (4,1,2) - Align these to center if you want http://puu.sh/Hqvs
03:10:636 (4) - NC, delete NC on 03:11:166 (1) -

Beautiful SB! <3
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
BG...大小。。。你懂得。。。

[Easy]
02:29:220 (2,3) - 额~距离~？~
。。。。。orz~

[deepsea's Normal]
01:29:220 (5,6) - 拉开点？~
01:45:680 (1,2,3,4) - 这里改成原来的DS？~然后01:48:070 (1,2,3) - 这里改成和之前（01:43:822 (1,2,3,4) - ）一样的DS？~
01:50:459 (6,7) - 拉开点？~怎么突然0.9x。。。
01:57:096 (3,1) - 感觉不太好~试试这样？~
SPOILER
336,48,118424,6,0,B|432:48,1,78.7499976530672
464,112,118955,1,8
460,192,119220,2,0,B|444:280|352:288,1,157.499995306134
272,288,120017,1,8
200,256,120282,1,0
152,192,120548,6,0,B|132:104|156:36,1,157.499995306134

02:35:592 (3,4,5) - 好挤感觉~
SPOILER
02:40:901 (4,5) - ^~

03:02:671 (7,8) - 这个。。故意的？~。。。03:02:937 - add note？~。。。

[Hard]
00:09:043 (1) - 延长一拍？~与之前的节奏。。。。对齐？~。。我词穷了。。。orz
如果上面那条采纳了~00:11:432 (2) - 把这个delete 然后把00:11:698 (2) - 移动到00:11:565 - 并延长一拍试试？~
00:13:556 (2,3) - ^~
00:19:663 (1) - 延长一拍~~~~如果上面的都采纳的话~orz~
00:21:786 (1) - ^
00:26:300 (2) - 移动到00:26:432 - ~
00:28:158 (1) - 减少一拍~。。。。
----------------------------------------------阿卡里♪☆~----------------------------------------------
01:08:247 (4) - 果断改掉！？~。。。。。这个。。。。orz。感觉蛮危险的。。。
01:32:671 (2,4) - 对齐？~slider的结尾和2~
01:38:247 (7) - 。。。好多奇葩的slider。。。这个感觉有点挤。。。orz

[Insane]
第一次打下来觉得比Hard还简单。。。跪。。。Hard的鬼畜slider太多了。。orz
01:25:503 (1) - Ctrl+R？~感觉更顺畅~
01:31:211 - add note?~.....感觉和之前的3连打会~~~~如果这里+了01:33:335 - 也+一个把？~顺便01:33:866 - delete~。
01:52:185 - delete！？~。。。。感觉一连串打下来。。。。www。我又词穷了。。。
02:27:229 - 。。delete？~。。。
02:29:353 - ^~
00:48:070 (4,5) - 间距好突然。。。orz后面的都不觉得。。。就这个觉得突然。。。跪。。不知道为什么。。。移动的问题0.0？~。。

that's all~
Star！~☆♪~瞎。。。。没KDs。。。。又忘了。。。
Good Luck~
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
Blue words are fixed, purple words are kept for some reasons.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi

General
Delete "Thumbs.db" :arrow: I didn't find that, also someone told me that it's not necessary to delete it

Easy
00:15:415 (3) - Use finish instead of clap, like 00:06:919 (2) :arrow: Fixed!
01:40:371 (1) - Delete reverse? Flows with vocals more imo http://puu.sh/HpWD :arrow: Follow the instrumental, something like piano
03:05:326 (2) - Clap at slidertick if you have one :arrow: I'll consider, but in fact clap is on red line XD
03:23:379 (2) - ^? :arrow: ^

Hard
00:16:477 (4) - Loud sliderslide :arrow: I don't know how to deal with it..Now just keep it
00:18:601 (3) - ^ :arrow: ^
01:57:627 (5) - Clap :arrow: Done
02:56:831 (3) - Clap at end, there's a lot like this, on purpose? :arrow: Done this one, I may check them

Scarlet
00:18:601 (5) - NC? like 00:23:910 (1) :arrow: Done
00:50:194 (3,4) - Stack on (2) with this rhythm: http://puu.sh/Hqs0, fits bg music :arrow: Oh, done <3
03:05:857 (4,1,2) - Align these to center if you want http://puu.sh/Hqvs :arrow: Hmm, since I put 4 just under (3)...
03:10:636 (4) - NC, delete NC on 03:11:166 (1) - :arrow: Fixed!

Beautiful SB! <3 Thanks~!<333

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
BG...大小。。。你懂得。。。 :arrow: 囧

[Easy]
02:29:220 (2,3) - 额~距离~？~ :arrow: 噗
。。。。。orz~

[Hard]
00:09:043 (1) - 延长一拍？~与之前的节奏。。。。对齐？~。。我词穷了。。。orz
如果上面那条采纳了~00:11:432 (2) - 把这个delete 然后把00:11:698 (2) - 移动到00:11:565 - 并延长一拍试试？~
00:13:556 (2,3) - ^~
00:19:663 (1) - 延长一拍~~~~如果上面的都采纳的话~orz~
00:21:786 (1) - ^
00:26:300 (2) - 移动到00:26:432 - ~
00:28:158 (1) - 减少一拍~。。。。 :arrow: 以上全改了，和leo有几个地方说的一样嗯

[Insane]
第一次打下来觉得比Hard还简单。。。跪。。。Hard的鬼畜slider太多了。。orz 因为我善良
01:25:503 (1) - Ctrl+R？~感觉更顺畅~ :arrow: 咚
01:31:211 - add note?~.....感觉和之前的3连打会~~~~如果这里+了01:33:335 - 也+一个把？~顺便01:33:866 - delete~。 :arrow: 嘤嘤嘤加不进啊QAQ位置要重排了
01:52:185 - delete！？~。。。。感觉一连串打下来。。。。www。我又词穷了。。。 :arrow: o.o
02:27:229 - 。。delete？~。。。 :arrow: 应该木有关系o.o
02:29:353 - ^~ :arrow: ^
00:48:070 (4,5) - 间距好突然。。。orz后面的都不觉得。。。就这个觉得突然。。。跪。。不知道为什么。。。移动的问题0.0？~。。 :arrow: 音跳了下嗯嗯

that's all~
Star！~☆♪~瞎。。。。没KDs。。。。又忘了。。。
Good Luck~
 你卖萌！！！！
Thank you for mods!
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Request From Game-PM
債債債還光還光還光

[General]
Skin的數字跟Combo Colour其中一個顏色很像 整個看不清了>_>
Tags要不要考慮+上 "Flandre" BG有他
03:10:636 - 感覺要加一條紅線
Offset : 190636
BPM : 113.00

[SB]
隨便吐槽一下

00:41:963 - 這字幕能跑到BG 空白的地方嗎
03:36:122 - 可以打上mapper : eikkaleyd (每個diff不同)

[Scarlet]
我比較喜歡Insane當diff name , 突然出現Scarlet有點說不出的怪 (雖然這一點都沒差)
說起來 kiai time那邊比較偏好於242424這樣下節奏

00:19:663 (2) - 可以nc嗎 前面有變速
00:24:707 (2) - ^
01:41:432 (4) - nc?
02:18:601 (2,3,4) - 注意spacing
03:27:627 (1) - 考慮上finish 或 whistle 感覺不錯

沒什麼好吐槽的 QAQ

[Hard]
00:15:415 (1,2,3) - 突然來個跳 你認真的嗎
01:08:247 (4) - 這個rankable嗎 ._.????
01:40:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這種繞圈圈好容易斷 ,,,
03:07:981 - 補顆note吧
03:14:087 (1,2,3) - spacing能統一嗎
03:22:317 (10) - spacing

[deepsea]
00:12:760 (4) - 啊 被(3)壓到一點點了
00:21:255 (3) - 這邊有點醜 放252,144如何
00:32:406 (6) - 變速 nc吧
01:50:459 (6) - 啊 壓到7了好醜- -

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.959999999999999 > SliderMultiplier:0.96
01:36:123 (2) - 可以包住(1)嗎
02:51:521 (1) - delete這個


總算看完了~~可以睡了
好圖 大媽GL !!
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
eikkaleyd
tag我加过了在remilia后面……
那个第二条红线lks也说没必要似乎，另一个人告诉我也没必要，所以先不加了
SB颜色我再看看……mapper这个，图片量会增大三张所以再说吧
早上起床用电脑了再改其他的
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