1. Burning Trance (5 stars, 946 notes)

1. 00:00:073 (1) - Add a Whistle
2. 00:00:587 (4) - ^
3. 00:00:930 (6) - Add a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
4. 00:01:444 (1) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider
5. 00:02:130 (2) - ^
6. 00:03:500 (5) - Add a Whistle
7. 00:04:530 (3) - ^
8. 00:04:873 (4) - Add a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
9. 00:06:073 (2) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider
10. 00:06:930 (1) - ^
11. 00:07:615 (2) - ^
12. 00:08:301 (1) - Add a Whistle
13. 00:08:644 (3) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider

1. 00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move this pattern to x:72|y:56 [Grid lvl: 4]. This is for make a symmetry with the note (6) & (2). After of this move the note 00:00:758 (5) to x:256|y:272 [Grid lvl: 3]
2. 00:02:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern Nº1 [00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5)] And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J - Don't forget add the NC And erase the Whistle from the note 00:03:329 (4).
3. 00:05:730 (1,2,3) - This Pattern is B.A.D. Try This

   00:05:730 (1) - x:204|y:268 / 00:06:073 (2) - x:128|y:208 / 00:06:415 (3) - x:96|y:120 [All in Grid lvl: 3]

4. 00:06:415 (3) - Add a Repeat - If you will add It. put a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
5. 00:09:158 (1) - Remove NC
6. 00:10:015 (3) - Add NC
7. 00:10:358 (4) - Move this note to x:256|y:328 [Grid lvl: 3]
8. 00:10:701 (5) - Put a Copy-pasta with the note 00:10:015 (3) And make a Ctrl+H
9. 00:11:044 (1,2) - Move this Notes to x:90|y:128 [Grid lvl: OFF] Is for make a Symmetry with the end of the Slider 00:09:330 (5). Look This
10. 00:11:558 (x) - Add a note in x:256|y:136
11. 00:11:730 (4,5,6,7,8) - If you make the Symmetry of the Previous-Previous Advice [00:11:044 (1,2)] Move this Pattern to x:345|y:68 [Grid lvl: OFF] After of have the pattern moved. put the notes in a Vertical row.. Like This But Don't use the Distance Snap. Because the first note are Unsgridded.
12. 00:12:330 (9,10,1) - This is so Confused. Please try make This

    00:12:330 (1,2) - x:448|y:280 / 00:12:587 (3) - x:344|y:248 [All in Grid lvl: 3]

13. 00:13:101 (4,5,6,7,8) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:11:730 (4,5,6,7,8) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J
14. 00:13:701 (9) - Move this note to x:168|y:64 [Grid lvl: 3]
15. 00:13:958 (1) - Move this note to x:296|y:48 [Grid lvl: 3]
16. 00:14:473 (2) - Move this note to x:456|y:304 [Grid lvl: 3]
17. 00:14:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this Pattern to x:332|y:148 [Grid lvl: 3] And move the note 00:15:501 (3) To the center (x:256|y:192 [Grid lvl: 3])
18. 00:16:530 (1) - Move this note to x:128|y:316 [Grid lvl: OFF] Is for make a Symmetry if you move the note 00:14:473 (2)
19. 00:17:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make This
20. 00:18:587 (2,3,4,5,6) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:17:215 (2,3,4,5,6) And put a Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R
21. 00:20:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:14:987 (1,2,3,4,5) [Only if you changed to my Last Suggestion] And move the pattern to x:333|y:306
22. 00:22:015 (x) - Add a note in the same place of the Last note. Put a NC and a Finish.
23. 00:43:273 (10) - Erase this Slider And make a Copy-pasta with the Slider 00:42:587 (8) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R
24. 00:44:644 (2) - Erase this Slider And make a Copy-pasta with the Slider 00:43:958 (1) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J
25. 00:57:673 (1) - Move this note to x:360|y:64 [Grid lvl: 3]
26. 00:58:016 (3) - Move this note to x:332|y:244 [Grid lvl: 4]
27. 00:58:187 (4) - Move this note to The same place of the object 00:57:330 (6)
28. 00:58:358 (5,6,7,8) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:57:673 (1,2,3,4) And put a Ctrl+H
29. 01:01:444 (3) - Move this note to x:256|y:276 [Grid lvl: 4]
30. 01:01:787 (4) - Move this note to x:176|y:192 [Grid lvl: 4]
31. 01:02:473 (5) - Move this note to The same place of the object 01:01:444 (3)
32. 01:37:958 (7) - lol, I think this note is Out the Stream. Move this more close from the previous note.
33. 01:51:844 (3,4,2) - Dude' Why you never Centrate this.
34. 02:20:644 (5,6) - Nope.

1. 00:03:844 (1) - I'd like to add a slider following , heard better
   
2. 00:09:158 (4) - consider to remove it?
3. 00:09:844 - and then add a note here?
4. 00:32:301 (6) - add a nc here because of the change of rhythm ?
5. 00:37:101 (5,6,7) - the beats here is weird because 00:37:787 - should be a note or start a slider, but now ur slider is cut by that.suggest to make a little change:
   
6. 00:38:987 (4,5,1) - here's also the same problem that u beats is against the music. Pay attention to the downbeat at 00:39:844 (2) - , here should be a start but not middle of a combo, and listen to the main melody from 00:38:987, i suppose it's better to change the beat like:
   
7. All right.. the following parts still has similar issues that i really don't recommend to overuse 1/2 beats, despite they're easy to put, that's not very suit for the music. Now when i mod through ur map, the sense u make me felt is " i wanna make a map hard enough, jumps and streams and blabla so on", but not "i wanna make a map which can express the feeling of music". Anyway, till here, it's a good map that if u wanna a rank that's really enough, even better than many others. However, imo, for app means make a map inspired but not only longer and harder than normal ranked map. Shiirn's solar is a great map not due to the difficulty but the sense he expressed. i'm not ask u to follow his beats or patterns but i think u can learn something from that.
8. 00:48:587 - i'd like to add a note here, and also 00:49:273 -
9. 01:00:930 - here're some blanks but no change in music, so maybe u'd better consider here again. Compared with, 01:05:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is really a good use of blanks.
10. 01:21:501 - still suggest to add note and some other similar place, won't mention it again
11. 01:37:273 - add a note?
12. 02:09:673 (3) - i'd like to reduce 2 repeats and add note at 02:10:015 - & 02:10:187 -
13. 02:35:730 (5,6) - imo, this stack may break ur flow so consider to make them like this?
    
14. 02:41:215 (5,6,7,8) - two sliders is better than notes here imo.
15. 03:05:558 (5,1) - omg this jmp is....it must be madness....
16. 04:10:873 - add a note here?
17. 04:54:758 - ^

1. 00:47:901 (X) - Add a note?
2. 01:12:244 (5,6) - Ctrl + R?
3. 01:52:701 (1,2) - Ctrl + R?
4. 02:01:958 (4,5) - Changing this to
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   ?
5. 02:03:330 (4,5) - Change it like in 02:01:958 (4,5)
6. 02:09:673 (3) - I think it would be better if it is like this:
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   http://puu.sh/q3u6
7. 02:22:015 (9) - New combo?
8. 03:00:758 (X) - Add a note?
9. 03:01:101 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not identical, I think it is better to rotate the first slider to make the other three, i.e. copy the first slider and rotate it for 30 degree to get the second slider and so on
10. 03:05:558 (5) - I think it plays better to stack it to 03:05:473 (4) -
11. 03:05:901 (1,2,3,4) - replace it with exactly the same pattern in 03:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5) and reflect along y-axis?
12. 03:24:073 (4) - right 1 grid
13. 04:02:815 (1,2,3,4) - Making these sliders parallel? They are not parallel now.
14. 04:29:730 (5,6) - Ctrl + R?

1. It is very clear that you're attempting to mimic Shiirn's map and make it longer. Unfortunately, the map both strays too far away and much too close to the original, creating sections that play terribly and sections that are borderline plagiarism. Streams in the map are randomly placed at times. Spacing is all over the place, and not in a good way. Huge sections are copy pasted making the map look lazily constructed. Clear beats are often skipped in favor of the more obscure. Remember, for an approval map, undermapping is unnecessary.
2. The background isn't centered at all. This is extremely ugly and easy to fix.

1. 00:11:558 - A clear drumroll starts here yet nothing is there.
2. 00:12:930 - Again, emptiness where beats could be. The spacing here is horrible as well (the next object appears to come 1/2 later, but it is actually 1/1
3. 00:13:615 (7,8) - This stack does not play well as it requires the player to press then press and hold. This would be better as either three presses or one press and hold.
4. 00:14:301 - Emptiness.
5. 00:14:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - This does not follow the beat intuitively. The (1,2) should be duplicated for (3,4), leaving the (5) a repeat slider. http://puu.sh/q9aq Also, these objects are not symmetrical.
6. 00:16:358 (5,1,2) - This is a great example of how the spacing hurts the map. The distance from 5 to 1 makes 1 to 2 an antijump.
7. 00:17:044 - Emptiness.
8. 00:18:415 - Emptiness.
9. 00:19:787 - Emptiness again. This happens a lot.
10. 00:20:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, doesn't follow the beat intuitively and isn't symmetrical.
11. 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a time where irregular spacing is more frustrating than beneficial.
12. 00:32:987 - This particular section's spacing is a very small 0.8x. This map is made for experienced players - this spacing will bore them. Turn it up a bit. This goes for the rest of the map as well.
13. 00:38:987 (4,5) - These sliders are remarkably ugly.
14. 00:51:673 (6,1,2) - Observe how these contrast with 00:45:330 (3,4,5,6). Beats are nearly identical yet shifted 1/2 for seemingly no reason. Doesn't feel right like this. Having the sliders start on the white ticks feels better during gameplay.
15. 00:54:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire section is virtually identical to Shiirn's. The beat and hitsounds are nearly the same. The funny part is this section is actually quite nice, besides (1,2) and (4,5) not being properly symmetrical.
16. 01:00:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section is filled with nasty antijumps and undermapping.
17. 01:03:501 (3,4,5) - This flows terribly. The 3 slider requires the player to not move to the left, making 3 to 4 a large jump with a sharp change in direction. Then, the player has to turn around AGAIN at 4 to 5. Frustrating, doesn't play well, and the rectangular nature of the objects is bland.
18. 01:07:273 (6) - Ugly slider. Make it curve better.
19. 01:11:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Antijumps that look like streams. At least have them not overlapping each other.
20. 01:13:958 (1,2,3,4) - Antijumps that are better off not overlapping.
21. 01:22:187 - Emptiness.
22. 01:23:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These look and play awkwardly.
23. 01:26:987 - Emptiness.
24. 01:27:673 - Emptiness.
25. 01:28:358 - Emptiness.
26. 01:29:044 - Emptiness.
27. 01:30:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sure looks familiar... oh wait, this is what Shiirn does at 00:57:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
28. 01:33:158 - Emptiness.
29. 01:37:273 - Emptiness.
30. 01:37:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream needs reworking. The sliders are not placed in intuitive locations.
31. 01:51:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Again, these antijumps would be better not there.
32. 01:53:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this pattern could follow the beat better.
33. 01:59:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same pattern, should follow the beat better.
34. 02:01:443 (2,3) - No need for antijump.
35. 02:02:815 (2,3) - Antijump not needed.
36. 02:04:701 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - Again, same pattern that Shiirn used before.
37. 02:05:901 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - Awkward/Bad spacing
38. 02:08:301 (3,4,5) - Then suddenly a stream? In the midst of all these antijumps?
39. 02:09:673 (3) - This having more than one repeat is unexpected.
40. 02:10:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is awful. Not only are the sliders in unintuitive locations, but there is a random, ridiculous stream jump in the midst of it.
41. 02:21:930 (8,1) - These should not create a stream jump.
42. 02:23:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing on this is awkward.
43. 02:24:073 (2) - This is stuck underneath the middle of a previous slider. It'd be way better if it was either underneath the endpoint or the starting point.
44. 02:25:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pattern with frustrating spacing because of the jump.
45. 02:28:015 - Emptiness.
46. 02:32:130 - Emptiness.
47. 02:33:501 - Emptiness.
48. 02:34:187 - Emptiness.
49. 02:34:873 - Sure is empty around here.
50. 02:36:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Unnecessary antijumps, silly jump, bad section.
51. 02:38:301 - Emptiness.
52. 02:38:987 - Emptiness.
53. 02:43:101 - Emptiness.
54. 02:43:701 (8,6) - Random 1/4 sliders during a stream will make it frustrating to play.
55. 02:47:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The same Shiirn pattern with linear sliders.
56. 02:51:330 - Emptiness.
57. 02:52:701 - Emptiness.
58. 02:54:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These antijumps add nothing to the map. That jump is bad too.
59. 02:58:701 (2,3,4,5) - Better off not being antijumps.
60. 03:03:330 (6,7,1) - NASTY antijump.
61. 03:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The stream jumps shouldn't be there.
62. 03:11:901 - Emptiness.
63. 03:17:387 - Emptiness.
64. 03:22:873 - Emptiness.
65. 03:26:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Then suddenly, insanely spaced jumps for no reason! This could very well kill the map entirely. Turn down the spacing by a lot.
66. 03:49:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This is almost identical to what shiirn did. However, shiirn's version avoids the unnecessary circle to slider stream jump which is better. Regardless, you should think of something new instead.
67. 03:51:158 (3,4) - These sliders are getting covered up by the previous hitbursts. Make them easier to see.
68. 03:55:787 - Emptiness.
69. 04:01:273 - Emptiness.
70. 04:01:444 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these two.
71. 04:04:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern again?! Bad antijumps, bad jump, bad bad bad.
72. 04:06:758 - Emptiness.
73. 04:08:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This would be better without irregular spacing.
74. 04:10:530 - Emptiness.
75. 04:10:873 - Emptiness.
76. 04:11:044 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing between these is a little too big.
77. 04:11:730 (1) - Remove new combo.
78. 04:18:244 (2,3,4,5) - Better off not antijumps.
79. 04:19:615 (2,3,4,5) - Better off not antijumps.
80. 04:28:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Enough with the antijumps!
81. 04:31:444 (1,2,3,4) - No need for antijumps here.
82. 04:37:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh look it's this pattern again. We just saw this 33 seconds ago. It is still bad for the same reasons.
83. 04:39:673 - Emptiness.
84. 04:45:158 - Emptiness.
85. 04:45:501 - Empty
86. 04:45:844 - Empty Empty
87. 04:46:187 - Empty Empty Empty
88. 04:46:530 - Empty Empty Empty Empty
89. 04:55:273 (5,1) - Make it so the spacing isn't so ridiculous. (Disclaimer - I like the ending, but I know this will screw up a LOT of players. No need to have it so harsh.)
    
    Oh, and when designing a map for osu! and CTB, try not to make the CTB parts so obvious.
90. 00:35:044 (3,4,5,6) - Obvious CTB manipulation.
91. 00:50:644 (1,2,3,4) - Obvious CTB manipulation.
92. 01:22:358 (1,2,3,4) - Obvious CTB manipulation.
93. 04:41:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Extremely obvious CT manipulation. This doesn't play well in standard.

1. 00:06:073 (2) - Ctrl + R.
2. 00:06:415 (3) - same as ^
3. 00:11:730 ~ 00:20:301 - Arrange these streams instead of an arc.
4. 00:10:015 (1) - Add a whistle?
5. 00:20:987 (3,4,5) - Create jump here? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296576 (if you like it, u can jump 00:15:501 (3,4,5) too)
6. 00:27:501 ~ - Should use normal hitsound.
7. 00:38:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhytm does not fit well. Try 4 Circles and 2 Sliders pattern like 00:39:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
8. 00:45:673 (4,5,6) - jump here?
9. 00:47:901 - Add a note?
10. 00:49:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:38:473 (1,2,3,4,5).
11. 00:54:930 (1) - Add a clap at end of slider.
12. 00:56:301 (4) - ^
13. 01:04:530 (1) - ^
14. 01:08:644 (2) - start new combo here.
15. 01:12:244 (5,6) - Ctrl + R.
16. 01:14:130 (2) - start new combo here.
17. 01:35:387 (3,4) - jump more? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296587
18. 01:37:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Impossible to read. Add a note instead of repeat slider.
19. 02:17:215 ~ - normal hitsound please.
20. 02:28:530 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + R (2,4) and jump here?
21. 02:32:130 (4) - Add a note.
22. 02:38:301 (2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296598
23. 02:44:644 (1) - Add a clap at end of slider.
24. 02:46:015 (1) - ^
25. 02:50:130 (1) -
26. 02:51:501 (1) -
27. 02:57:330 (5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296601 it will fit better.
28. 03:00:758 - Add a note here. The beat you're skipping here is very distinctive.
29. 03:15:158 (2,3,4) - jump!
30. 03:28:530 - I strongly suggest to add a note here with finish and new combo.
31. 03:40:873 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) or Copy n Paste 03:39:501 (1,2) then Ctrl + H, J.
32. 03:43:615 (1) - Remove new combo.
33. 04:05:558 (1) - too close to previous circle.
34. 04:26:130 (2) - start new combo here.
35. 04:28:873 (2) - should stack to (1) imo.
36. 04:29:387 (4,5) - ^
37. 04:31:616 (2,4) - Need to stack.
38. 04:33:673 (1) - Remove new combo.
39. 04:36:415 (3) - Crtl + R.
40. 04:36:758 (4) - ^

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. Nothing~
   　
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5. 01:04:530 (1) - clap end sounds better xDD
6. 01:37:873 (6,7) - Spcing is too far , This may be a unrankble stuff
7. 01:38:559 (5,6) - Same as above
8. 02:10:615 (4,5) - ^
9. 02:11:301 (4,5) - ^
10. 02:43:873 (8,1) - ^
11. 03:05:473 (4,5) - ^
12. 03:06:073 (3,4) - ^
13. 03:49:701 (8,1,2) - ^
    　
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ikari_kyon wrote:

y bueno, me dijiste: DAME MI MOD!
aca ↓

- Agrega Shiirn a los tag? ok no te voy a joder con eso xD ni vi bien el map de sh**rn Qué rompe bolas son todos.

[Burning Trance]

1. 00:00:073 (1) - finish en lugar de whistle y ↓
2. 00:00:587 (4) - no whistle Meh
3. 00:00:930 (6) - move los whistle del repeat y del final al cuerpo del slider, da un efecto bastante interesante, aunque me gustaria que esta parte tenga unos sliders largos como muchos que pusiste mas adelante Meh
4. 00:02:815 (1) - no whistle, dejame explicarte, los whistle al final de 00:01:444 (1,2) - estan siguiendo ese sonido de la cancion, aca lo rompes Meh
5. 00:03:158 (3) - whistle, ver explicacion de arriba ↑ Meh
6. 00:03:501 (5) - no whistle Meh
7. 00:03:844 (1) - whistle Meh
8. 00:06:930 (1,2) - se me olvidaba, podrias hacer este slider que has usado mucho con un solo punto blanco?, se siente mejor al jugarlo, ademas no esta del todo simetrico Meh
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   y no no baje el map de vuelta xD
9. 00:08:301 (1) - no whistle Meh
10. 00:08:644 (3) - whistle al inicio del slider, no al final Meh
11. 00:08:644 (3,4) - oportunidad de blankear Dejé solamente un slider y coloqué un circle en el principio del slider, solamente para joder.
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    ves como el slider apenas roza el aproach circle? esa es la tecnica basica para blankear
12. 00:09:330 (5) - whistle al inicio del slider Meh
13. 00:10:015 (1,3) - aca te sugeriria colocar claps para ir rompiendo el whislteing, pero si prefieres usa whistle en estos dos Meh
14. 00:11:044 (1) - me harias un favor? agrega un normal soundset al 100% de volumen, agrega un gran finish a este circle, luego vuelve al soft 60% en el siguiente slider Suena medio mal, pero después veo qué hago.
15. 00:12:244 (9,10) - en serio proba cambiar el soundset al normal, a un 60% aca Meh
16. 00:13:615 (9,11) - ↑ nueve y once ojo, el 10 debe ser en soft soundset Meh
17. 00:16:015 (5) - los 2 anteriores sliders comenzaban desde arriba, que tal un ctrl+r? Meh
18. 00:16:530 (1) - al principio del slider proba el normal soundset tambien, creo que te das cuenta adonde quiero llegar No, la verdad que ni idea.
19. 00:20:044 (5) - muevelo abajo de todo? se ve mas malo xD Meh
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20. 00:21:501 (5) - lo mismo de 3 sugerencias arriba Meh
21. 00:22:015 - un circle al medio del playfield con nuevo combo, finish y en normal soundset al 100%? pruebalo porfa D; Meh
22. 00:27:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - deja el normal soundset hasta el inicio de 00:31:615 (1) - (o bajale al 60% como prefieras) cambia a soft en los repeat Meh
23. 00:31:958 (2) - normal soundset Meh
24. 00:32:301 (1) - normal soundset al inicio de este, los clap al inicio de los demas sliders no me suenan bien Meh
25. 00:32:473 (2,4) - ctrl+r por favor, esto me hace perder el combo y no se entiende nada, me gustaria que me muestres un test-play tuyo de esto pero no en ctb que supongo que sera "divertido" pero como no juego eso... mi deber es ver que es interesante en el modo para el que fue hecho el map Meh
26. 00:32:987 (1) - un gran finish normal soundset Meh
27. 00:45:330 (1,2,3,4) - nazi? literalmente
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    Lo dejé como estaba, mayormente no sigo los "NAZI" mods, además, me gusta así como está, no reason.
28. 00:46:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+h y ctrl+j por favor, (1) esta demasiado cerca del anterior combo Meh
29. 00:54:930 (1) - finish al inicio del slider Meh
30. 01:00:073 (4) - clap al finak de este slider, para no dejar tan roto el doble clap que tenias antes Meh
31. 01:04:530 (1,2) - clap al final de estos dos, luego de (2) queda un triple clap interesante Meh
32. 01:05:901 ~ y no hay mas claps >: Meh
33. 01:11:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - checa el orden de los numeros:
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    Meh
34. 01:20:815 (8) - colocalo mejor entre (1) y (4)
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    Meh
35. 01:23:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - la formacion hasta (3) esta bien, forma un buen triangulo, pero luego el spacing queda demasiado diferente, es bastante confuso, unos combos tal vez ayudaria a leer este combo algo mejor, agrega combo en (4) y en (6), de esta manera tendras primero de (1) a (3) una formacion triangular, despues 2 circles simetricos de un lado a otro y de nuevo una formacion triangular, sera mas leible si tienen diferente color, en lugar uno solo, se que siempre digo a la mierda los new combo, pero me gustaria que este patron tenga diferentes colores, ya sabes para poder leerlo mas facilmente. Meh
36. 01:26:473 (1,2) - un circle al centro del playfield en 01:26:987, ctrl+h y ctrl+j para (2), quedando algo asi
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    Meh
    
37. 01:36:073 (1) - mejora el blanket con el anterior (4)?
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    Meh
38. 01:37:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ok voy a ser serio aca, =_= que es esto, cada vez que juego esta parte pierdo el combo, no se quien puede sentir jugable dar 6 hits y luego parar en un slider a x1.75 en 1/4 se que no es overmaped pero ese maldito (6) es simplemente jodido, jugue esta parte como 5 veces y lo mismo siempre D; preferiria que borraras (6) y empezaras el slider aca, o tal vez hacer algo asi
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    Meh
    ah y un finish al final de 01:38:644 (6) Meh
39. 02:10:358 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - otra vez T_T Meh
40. 02:17:215 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal soundset? Meh
41. 02:22:015 (1,2,3,4) - se ve maz razonable que en el patron anterior que tenias, tal vez algo asi en el patron anterior seria genial Gracias.
42. 02:49:958 (4) - clap? Meh
43. 03:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 4 circles y termina en slider, mejor pero el espacio es demasiado a mi gusto, parece un 1/2 en lugar de 1/4
44. 03:26:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
    1.- x3,23 de spacing es tremendamente exagerado
    2.- no creo que podas darle a todo el combo, sin ofender (en modo standard claro)
    3.- el spacing varia demasiado entre cada nota
    4.- el volumen de la musica esta aumentando cada vez, tal vez un patron mas o menos asi quedaria mejor con el cambio de volumen
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    o tal vez volteado verticalmente para que no quede cubierto por el anterior slider
    aunque mi sugerencia tiende tambien a tener un espaciado mas alto cada vez, la simetria deja a la imaginacion del player como va la cosa Lo dejaré tal cual está, el hecho de que YO no pueda hacerle FC, no quiere decir que otra persona tampoco pueda, los mapas se crean para ser divertidos y difíciles, no fáciles y aburridos, por ende, se queda así, con respecto al sonido, meh, si hay más mods sobre eso, lo voy a pensar.
45. 03:39:501 (1,2,1,2) - bien aunque me entretendria algo mas lejos ambos patrones (1,2), tal vez de un lado a otro de la pantalla, luego mover (2) al inicio del slider (1) (en cada combo), screen
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    algo asi dejaria el clickar (2) un salto mas genial al siguiente slider (1) Meh. algo así.
46. 03:42:244 (1,2,1,2) - ctrl+h para que no quede muy cerca del anterior circle si es que aceptaste lo anterior Nope, se ve bien así.
47. 03:58:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - demasiado exagerado de nuevo, ademas que el espaciado no es constante, la distancia no deja ver la simetria que existe entre ellos ademas, sugerencia screen:
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    el espaciado es x2,0 mucho mas razonable que x3,0 Hice algo así como vos querías, pero con más spacing.
48. 04:31:444 (1,2) - si dejas un espaciado mayor con el anterior combo el antijump seria mas divertido, ahora solo es molesto Meh
    
    ok aca viene el extra, si estas demasiado flojo para hacer cambios de soundset tambien puedes agregar un custom soft-hitwhistle con el archivo normal-hitnormal.wav del skin default, para ahorrar algo de trabajo, yo podria hacer los cambios de soundset si estas de acuerdo tambien
    algo mas es que no me agrada mucho las zonas que usaste solo normal soundset, no son partes relativamente destacables de la cancion, aunque creo que todo el mapa sonaria mejor si solo estuviera en normal soundset o con soft y unos cuantos cambios de normal soundset como sugeri mas arriba, algunos saltos no estan del todo bien (por el espaciado inconicstente y simetria extraña, los anti-jumps pasan, pero lo que mas me molesto fueron esos streams y sliders espaciados que me hicieron perder todas las veces que jugue el mapa en esas mismas partes vi que those te dijo: what is this? pero a mi me gusta siempre dar una opinion y una pequeña sugerencia de como podria ser mejor
    me gustaria que quotees esto para ver que aceptas, que rechazas y porque lo estas rechazando, de nuevo me gustaria ayudar en lo que pueda (los cambios de soundset dejamelos D: )
    eso es todo

1. 00:22:015 (1) - make it 60% and change sampleset to soft
2. 00:27:501 (1) - -15% sounds better, I think
3. 00:32:987 (1) - add finish?
4. 00:53:558 - too loud! Also, finish to 00:54:930 (1)
5. 01:04:530 (1) - add clap to its end
6. 01:10:701 (8) - add finish (soft)
   Eh, it lacks hitsounds in some moments.
7. 01:49:787 (1) - add something like finish, and try not to skip it in future
8. 03:00:415 (8) - ^

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP +1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:00:758 (5) - I would move this 1 or 2 grid down for making 00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - more smooth.
   2. 00:32:301 (1,2,3,4) - Would you make the spacing consistent here?It is obvious that the spacing between (1.2) and (2.3)- are inconsistent.
   3. 00:57:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the arrangement of this pattern is a bit messy.I would make a symmetry here if I were you but well, up to you.
   4. 01:22:358 (1,2,3,4) - I have seen this pattern several time in this map.I highly suggest changing this pattern and then create a new pattern to make it more interesting during gameplay.
   5. 01:26:473 (1,2,3) - (Design)How about place it like this?
      
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   6. 02:00:073 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing between (5)- and (1)- .Were you make it on purpose.Please fix it for a better gameplay If you make it unintentional.
   7. 02:11:730 (5) - It should moves 2 grid left to align with the stream.
   8. 03:49:787 (1,2,1) - This 1/4 jump is too far compare to the whole difficulty.I would reduce the spacing if I were you.
   9. 03:57:673 (2) - How about increasing the spacing like 03:57:673 (2,3) - ?
   10. 04:37:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 01:22:358.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:12:244 (9,10) - Change the notes to normal hitsound and then back to soft hitsound at 00:12:501 - to fit with music.
   2. 00:13:615 (9) , 00:13:787 (11) - ^Same.Please don't change the hitsound on 00:13:701 (10) - if you do it. (I won't list this out.Please check thought the diff.)
   3. 00:27:501 (x) - change to normal hitsoounds?
   4. 01:05:901 - 01:15:501 - Why you didn't put any hitsound there.I feel really empty, at least put some clap on it.